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Essays<br />

A quick guide<br />

Essays are a part of almost every degree program. While<br />

you probably won’t write an <strong>essay</strong> when you become a<br />

professional, <strong>the</strong> skills needed in good <strong>essay</strong> <strong>writing</strong> are<br />

very relevant to o<strong>the</strong>r academic tasks. These skills—<br />

researching, analysing, applying, syn<strong>the</strong>sising and<br />

evaluating—can also be transferred to any professional<br />

situation which requires you to respond critically and<br />

creatively to a problem or issue.<br />

The Essay Writing Process<br />

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In this hand<strong>out</strong>…<br />

Essay <strong>writing</strong> process<br />

Task analysis<br />

Finding ‘research’<br />

Reading & taking notes<br />

Organising with Rationale®<br />

1. Analyse <strong>the</strong><br />

task/question<br />

Research<br />

Read / take<br />

notes<br />

This process shows <strong>the</strong> cyclical<br />

research/read/write/reflect process<br />

which follows question analysis.<br />

Good <strong>essay</strong> writers do more than<br />

1 session of research because<br />

when <strong>the</strong>y reflect on and analyse<br />

<strong>the</strong>ir drafts, <strong>the</strong>y find that <strong>the</strong>y<br />

need more (or different) evidence<br />

to fully support <strong>the</strong>ir arguments.<br />

Reflect on and<br />

analyse your<br />

draft<br />

Organise /<br />

write<br />

Analysing <strong>the</strong> task/question<br />

Be<strong>for</strong>e you research or write you should analyse <strong>the</strong> <strong>essay</strong> task/question. Task analysis helps us to<br />

find <strong>out</strong> exactly what <strong>the</strong> question is asking <strong>for</strong>, and ensures that we have correct focus in our<br />

answer. One strategy <strong>for</strong> question analysis is called MDUP:<br />

M<br />

Main ideas in <strong>the</strong> question or task - all <strong>the</strong> ‘content’ words and phrases in <strong>the</strong> task. These<br />

main ideas become search terms in your research.<br />

D<br />

Directive verbs - <strong>the</strong> words that tell you to do something. For example “analyse” or<br />

“evaluate”. These words tell you how to respond to <strong>the</strong> task.<br />

U<br />

P<br />

Underlying question. Often—but not always—we need to answer an unstated question<br />

be<strong>for</strong>e we can respond appropriately to <strong>the</strong> task. To find it, think deeply ab<strong>out</strong> <strong>the</strong> task<br />

and relate it to o<strong>the</strong>r ideas you have studied in your lectures. Write it down somewhere.<br />

Predictive <strong>the</strong>sis. This is your initial answer to <strong>the</strong> <strong>essay</strong> task, based on what you already<br />

know. Your predictive <strong>the</strong>sis gives you a place to start your thinking and helps direct your<br />

first research ef<strong>for</strong>ts. Often, our predictive <strong>the</strong>sis is very different to our final argument, as<br />

our research influences our ideas and our argument evolves.<br />

See over <strong>the</strong> page <strong>for</strong> an example of MDUP task analysis.<br />

Learning Skills Unit<br />

Saigon: Level 4 – In <strong>the</strong> Library / Hanoi: 1.2.010 – In <strong>the</strong> Library<br />

learningskills.sg@rmit.edu.vn / learningskills.hn@rmit.edu.vn


Main Ideas: legally binding<br />

contracts, mere agreements, legal<br />

consequences, case illustrations,<br />

distinguish (differentiate)<br />

MDUP task analysis in action…<br />

Example <strong>essay</strong> task: Using case<br />

illustrations, explain how legally binding<br />

contracts are distinguished from mere<br />

agreements which have no legal<br />

consequences.<br />

Predictive <strong>the</strong>sis: Contracts are<br />

written, agreements are spoken. To<br />

protect <strong>the</strong>mselves, businesses<br />

should use contracts.<br />

Directive Words: explain… how<br />

= describe <strong>the</strong> process; using =<br />

apply cases to description;<br />

distinguish(ed) = show <strong>the</strong><br />

difference between<br />

Underlying question: What’s <strong>the</strong><br />

difference between contracts and<br />

agreements? What are <strong>the</strong><br />

implications of this <strong>for</strong> businesses?<br />

Researching<br />

The main ideas you identify in task analysis should guide your research. Of course books in <strong>the</strong><br />

library will be useful, but academic databases (Proquest, Emerald, Eric etc.) are <strong>great</strong> <strong>for</strong> finding <strong>the</strong><br />

most up-to-date, reliable and sophisticated in<strong>for</strong>mation relevant to your <strong>essay</strong> topics. You can find<br />

<strong>the</strong>se databases on <strong>the</strong> RMIT online library. Use <strong>the</strong> basic tips below to get started on <strong>the</strong>m.<br />

Reading & Taking Notes<br />

Once you have books/articles/websites related to you <strong>essay</strong> topic, <strong>the</strong> challenge is to read those<br />

sources efficiently and effectively – you should find <strong>the</strong> most useful in<strong>for</strong>mation in <strong>the</strong> least amount<br />

of time. Follow <strong>the</strong> process below (Boddington & Clanchy 1999) <strong>for</strong> each source you’ve found.<br />

•Look at <strong>the</strong> title, sub<br />

titles, headings and<br />

contents pages<br />

•Find <strong>the</strong> most relevant<br />

sections<br />

1. Search<br />

2. Skim<br />

• Choose <strong>the</strong> paragraphs<br />

•Once you've found <strong>the</strong><br />

most relevant sections,<br />

skim over <strong>the</strong>m,<br />

focussing on <strong>the</strong><br />

introduction and topic<br />

sentences of paragraphs<br />

that provide <strong>the</strong><br />

in<strong>for</strong>mation you need<br />

3. Select<br />

4. Study<br />

•Read those paragraphs<br />

carefully and critically<br />

and take notes relevant<br />

to <strong>the</strong> <strong>essay</strong> topic.<br />

• Try to paraphrase<br />

Learning Skills Unit<br />

Saigon: Level 4 – In <strong>the</strong> Library / Hanoi: 1.2.010 – In <strong>the</strong> Library<br />

learningskills.sg@rmit.edu.vn / learningskills.hn@rmit.edu.vn


Organising <strong>the</strong> <strong>essay</strong> using Rationale® software<br />

This is <strong>the</strong> most important part of <strong>the</strong> process – it’s where you combine ideas from your research<br />

into a structured, logical and persuasive response to <strong>the</strong> <strong>essay</strong> task. Because those ideas in you’re<br />

your research can be complex, it’s often a good idea to organise <strong>the</strong>m visually so that <strong>the</strong><br />

relationship between <strong>the</strong>m can be easier to find. One very powerful way of organising your ideas<br />

visually is to use <strong>the</strong> Rationale® argument mapping software, which is now available on <strong>the</strong> LSU<br />

computers. This easy-to-use software allows you to build a ‘tree’ of your answer—having a ‘picture’<br />

of <strong>the</strong> arguments and reasons can help you focus on <strong>the</strong> logic of your answer, which is <strong>the</strong> most<br />

important aspect of <strong>essay</strong> <strong>writing</strong>. The very basic argument map below gives an example of what<br />

Rationale® can do <strong>for</strong> you.<br />

‘because’ links ‘reasons’ and ‘support <strong>for</strong> reasons’,<br />

‘but’ links objections. Organisation at this level<br />

shows ideas to support or object to <strong>the</strong> <strong>the</strong>sis<br />

statement. These can be seen as ‘main points’.<br />

At <strong>the</strong> top of <strong>the</strong> map is <strong>the</strong><br />

‘contention’ – in an <strong>essay</strong>, this is<br />

called <strong>the</strong> ‘<strong>the</strong>sis statement’.<br />

Ideas at this level are more<br />

specific, and are used to support<br />

or object to <strong>the</strong> more general ideas<br />

above <strong>the</strong>m. Ideas here can be<br />

seen as ‘evidence’.<br />

Generating an argument map using Rationale® is surprisingly easy, and <strong>the</strong> Learning Skills<br />

Advisers in LSU can help you with it. Simply book a consultation and let us know that you want to<br />

map your argument with Rationale®. We’ll show how to do it, and we’ll help you reflect on <strong>the</strong> quality<br />

of your argument.<br />

Writing <strong>the</strong> <strong>essay</strong><br />

Essays have 4 essential sections: <strong>the</strong> introduction, body, conclusion and reference list. After you<br />

know what your <strong>the</strong>sis statement is, try to write <strong>the</strong> <strong>essay</strong> in this order:<br />

First: Write <strong>the</strong> body, focussing on one paragraph at a time<br />

Second: Write <strong>the</strong> conclusion<br />

Last: Write <strong>the</strong> introduction, complete <strong>the</strong> reference list and proofread!<br />

Importantly, you should attend very carefully to in-text referencing in <strong>the</strong> first drafts of your <strong>essay</strong>s. If<br />

you don’t, it is possible that you will <strong>for</strong>get to correctly cite some ideas, and this could lead to<br />

concerns ab<strong>out</strong> plagiarism.<br />

Learning Skills Unit<br />

Saigon: Level 4 – In <strong>the</strong> Library / Hanoi: 1.2.010 – In <strong>the</strong> Library<br />

learningskills.sg@rmit.edu.vn / learningskills.hn@rmit.edu.vn


I. INTRODUCTION<br />

Sections of an <strong>essay</strong><br />

General statements - introduce <strong>the</strong> topic, <strong>the</strong> context and <strong>the</strong><br />

question/ issue/problem that <strong>the</strong> <strong>essay</strong> addresses<br />

Thesis statement – your 1- or 2-sentence argument in response<br />

<strong>the</strong> questions/issue/problem above<br />

Signpost – briefly describe how <strong>the</strong> body of <strong>the</strong> <strong>essay</strong> is<br />

organised<br />

The introduction should be one<br />

paragraph only, approximately<br />

10% of <strong>the</strong> <strong>essay</strong>’s word limit.<br />

Avoid using expressions such<br />

as ‘nowadays’ and ‘all over <strong>the</strong><br />

world’, as <strong>the</strong>se are over used<br />

and lack sophistication.<br />

II. BODY<br />

Topic Sentence<br />

i. Support<br />

ii. Support<br />

iii. Support<br />

Link / summary sentence<br />

Topic Sentence<br />

i. Support<br />

ii. Support<br />

iii. Support<br />

Link / summary sentence<br />

Topic Sentence<br />

i. Support<br />

ii. Support<br />

iii. Support<br />

The number of body paragraphs<br />

is determined by <strong>the</strong> structure of<br />

your argument. Avoid very<br />

lengthy or very short paragraphs<br />

– try to keep each paragraph<br />

ab<strong>out</strong> <strong>the</strong> same length.<br />

The organisation of paragraphs<br />

in <strong>the</strong> body should show <strong>the</strong><br />

reader your analysis and<br />

reasoning. Your analysis breaks<br />

<strong>the</strong> main topic into smaller<br />

ideas, and your reasoning<br />

shows a logical relationship<br />

between <strong>the</strong>m.<br />

Link / summary sentence<br />

etc.<br />

III. CONCLUSION<br />

Summarise main points / restate <strong>the</strong>sis statement<br />

Final comment – relate <strong>the</strong>sis statement to <strong>the</strong> wider context<br />

The conclusion is approximately<br />

5-10% of <strong>the</strong> <strong>essay</strong>’s word limit.<br />

This is a place to restate your<br />

argument and main points. To<br />

create a good final comment,<br />

answer this question: “What are<br />

<strong>the</strong> implications of your<br />

argument being valid?”<br />

Summary<br />

Try not to think of <strong>essay</strong>s as something you simply ‘write’. Instead, try to see <strong>essay</strong>s as complex<br />

puzzles that take a lot of analysis, research, reading and thinking to respond to effectively. When<br />

generating and expressing your answer to <strong>the</strong> issue/question/problem in <strong>the</strong> <strong>essay</strong> task, always<br />

keep <strong>the</strong> audience (probably your lecturer) in my mind. If you can see your own <strong>essay</strong> from his or<br />

her perspective, you’ll be more able to meet <strong>the</strong>ir needs and expectations and more likely to do well.<br />

Learning Skills Unit<br />

Saigon: Level 4 – In <strong>the</strong> Library / Hanoi: 1.2.010 – In <strong>the</strong> Library<br />

learningskills.sg@rmit.edu.vn / learningskills.hn@rmit.edu.vn

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