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Improving Student Writing Skills - cse crafts

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<strong>Improving</strong> <strong>Student</strong> <strong>Writing</strong> <strong>Skills</strong><br />

Voice<br />

Voice creates the personality of a piece of writing. Is it “businesslike,” “fun,”<br />

“silly,” “educated,” or “excited”? One voice may not be right for all audiences—if<br />

you were writing a story for a kindergartner, it would have a different voice than if<br />

you were writing a research paper for your teacher. In a piece with a strong voice,<br />

you can hear the author’s excitement about and interest in the topic, and you can<br />

tell who wrote it.<br />

Directions: The example below is written for a group of business people—revise it<br />

so that its voice is appropriate for a children’s story.<br />

The cow in question, named Betsy, spent the vast majority of the day consuming<br />

roughage and then chewing said roughage while standing and considering her life<br />

choices. While she was quite enamored of roughage, she felt her life was lacking a<br />

certain element of interest. Said cow decided after much deliberation to take over<br />

the world.<br />

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