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The <strong>Writing</strong> Process<br />

parents choose to be uninvolved, you may decide to let<br />

them.<br />

Another scenario is that in which parents are overly<br />

involved and untactful in their comments. The parents<br />

want to help but end up hurting their child’s writing<br />

confidence. In this case, you will need to help them<br />

understand that progress takes time and that one specific<br />

comment goes much further toward improving their<br />

child’s writing than does, “Thomas obviously doesn’t<br />

know how to write. He needs to revise his piece again.”<br />

If you find a version of this comment, the parent needs to<br />

know how hurtful it is to their child’s writing.<br />

• Prepare <strong>Student</strong>s to Give Each Other Comments<br />

Keep in mind that students will need both revision skills<br />

and tact in order to successfully peer-edit another student’s<br />

writing. As discussed earlier in the Peer Revision<br />

section of the <strong>Writing</strong> Workshop, when modeling the<br />

process, you will want to show students how to give<br />

three positive comments for every two negative ones and<br />

help authors see that “negative” is actually “constructive”—this<br />

follows the widely-used format of Praise-<br />

Question-Polish (Neubert & McNelis, 1990). While<br />

you don’t want students to come to blows or tears over<br />

another’s comments, neither do you simply want a<br />

back-patting session in which students learn little about<br />

improvement. At first, you may want to create, distribute,<br />

and use revision cover sheets, just as you do to help<br />

guide parent revisions.<br />

However, you will also want to encourage students to<br />

discuss their writing freely and to experiment with ideas<br />

to improve it. Through discussing revision options outside<br />

the framework of a guided sheet, students will have<br />

the chance to experiment with the literary vocabulary<br />

you have been teaching as well as taking ownership of<br />

their own learning.<br />

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