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BOOK B<br />

TEACHING<br />

STRATEGIES<br />

FOR WRITING<br />

Punctuation<br />

Australian Primary Publisher<br />

of the Year 2015 and 2016


<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book B)<br />

Published by R.I.C. Publications ® 2018<br />

Copyright © Diane Henderson and Rosemary Morris 2018<br />

<strong>RIC</strong>–<strong>20792</strong><br />

Titles in this series:<br />

<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book A)<br />

<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book B)<br />

<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book C)<br />

<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book D)<br />

<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book E)<br />

<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book F)<br />

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FOREWORD<br />

<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing is series of six books using modelling, guided and independent practice to teach<br />

students strategies they can use to improve the clarity, correctness and richness of their writing. The focus is on<br />

sentences, their structure, <strong>punctuation</strong> and word choices and on developing editing and proofreading skills and their<br />

habitual use.<br />

Titles in this series:<br />

• <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book A) • <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book D)<br />

• <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book B) • <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book E)<br />

• <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book C) • <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book F)<br />

TABLE OF CONTENTS<br />

Teacher notes ........................................................................................................................ iv–v<br />

Class recording sheets<br />

Assessment activities ..................................................................................................... vi–ix<br />

Assessment writing .......................................................................................................... x–xi<br />

Student writing checklist ........................................................................................................ xii<br />

Student self-evaluation ......................................................................................................... xiii<br />

WORD CHOICES<br />

Unit 1 Nouns, noun groups and adjectives ............................................................ 2–7<br />

Unit 2 Pronouns, confusing pronouns (me/I), which pronoun? ........................... 8–13<br />

Unit 3 Verbs and adverbials ................................................................................ 14–19<br />

Unit 4 Verbs: tense, matching verbs .................................................................. 20–25<br />

Assessment................................................................................................................... 26–29<br />

SENTENCE STRUCTURE<br />

Unit 5 Sentences, word order, questions ........................................................... 30–35<br />

Unit 6 Sentence beginnings ............................................................................... 36–41<br />

Unit 7 Conjunctions ............................................................................................ 42–47<br />

Unit 8 Paragraphs ............................................................................................... 48–53<br />

Assessment................................................................................................................... 54–57<br />

PUNCTUATION<br />

Unit 9 Using <strong>punctuation</strong> in sentences .............................................................. 58–63<br />

Unit 10 Full stops, capital letters, commas, direct speech ................................. 64–69<br />

Unit 11 Apostrophes in contractions ................................................................... 70–75<br />

Unit 12 Apostrophes <strong>for</strong> possession .................................................................... 76–81<br />

Assessment................................................................................................................... 82–85<br />

EDITING AND PROOFREADING<br />

Unit 13<br />

Unit 14<br />

Unit 15<br />

Unit 16<br />

Spelling (vowel sounds), sentence structure,<br />

<strong>punctuation</strong>, word choices, editing ........................................................ 86–91<br />

Spelling (more vowel sounds), sentence structure,<br />

<strong>punctuation</strong>, word choices, editing ......................................................... 92–97<br />

Spelling (suffixes), sentence structure,<br />

<strong>punctuation</strong>, word choices, editing ....................................................... 98–103<br />

Spelling (homophones), sentence structure,<br />

<strong>punctuation</strong>, word choices, editing ..................................................... 104–109<br />

Assessment............................................................................................................... 110–113<br />

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TEACHER NOTES<br />

ABOUT WRITING<br />

A good writer is not simply one who knows about and can<br />

use text types. A good writer is one with the capacity to<br />

produce interesting, in<strong>for</strong>mative, grammatically correct<br />

text, <strong>for</strong> a specific purpose, that achieves any writer’s<br />

intent – clear, precise communication.<br />

TEACHING WRITING<br />

Students can and should be taught strategies that will<br />

help them to write better. These include improvements<br />

in word choices, sentence structure, <strong>punctuation</strong> and<br />

editing and proofreading. <strong>Writing</strong> strategies taught<br />

should be modelled, discussed and then applied, firstly<br />

with teacher support and then independently. However,<br />

the emphasis should always be on the writing process,<br />

which requires <strong>for</strong>ethought, planning and a rational,<br />

measured approach in order to produce the desired<br />

outcome. Editing and proofreading are essential<br />

components of any writing. It is important that students<br />

edit and proofread habitually, with a specific purpose,<br />

and concentrate on the careful consideration of each<br />

sentence, one at a time. Activities provided in this series<br />

encourage students to think about appropriate aspects<br />

of their writing be<strong>for</strong>e, during and after the process.<br />

LESSON PROCEDURE<br />

Introduction<br />

Discuss the text title with students. Ask <strong>for</strong> their<br />

interpretations of what the title could mean.<br />

Discuss the text type. Why does it fit into this category?<br />

What are the specific features of this type of text?<br />

Guide the discussion to introduce the teaching points/<br />

strategies to be covered during the course of the unit.<br />

For example, check they understand terms such as noun<br />

group, adverbial, sentence, paragraph and comma.<br />

Development<br />

Read and discuss the text, either in groups or as a<br />

class. Assist students with any unfamiliar vocabulary or<br />

expressions.<br />

Differentiation<br />

Work through the introductory activities with the class<br />

as a whole, ensuring students understand what is<br />

required of them.<br />

Work with those requiring additional assistance while<br />

the remainder of the class work independently on the<br />

activities.<br />

ASSESSMENT<br />

An assessment is included <strong>for</strong> each unit in the book.<br />

Because of the way it is structured, this assessment<br />

will allow you to see individual student’s understandings<br />

as well as any common points of weakness which may<br />

require further assistance.<br />

FORMAT<br />

<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing is organised into four<br />

sections:<br />

Word choices<br />

Punctuation<br />

Sentence structure<br />

Editing and proofreading<br />

Each section has four units of work and one assessment<br />

unit.<br />

<strong>Teaching</strong> units<br />

Each six-page unit of work has a specific focus, two<br />

teacher pages and four activity pages.<br />

Assessment units<br />

• Following each section is a four-page unit of<br />

assessment activities–one page <strong>for</strong> each unit.<br />

• Answers are provided in the teacher pages <strong>for</strong> that<br />

unit.<br />

• Teacher record sheets – see pages vi–ix.<br />

Assessment writing tasks<br />

• A suggested paragraph writing topic <strong>for</strong> each unit is<br />

provided on the teacher pages.<br />

• Teacher recording sheet – see pages x–xi.<br />

• Student writing checklist – see page xii.<br />

• Student self-evaluation – see page xiii.<br />

Review<br />

In pairs or small groups, students review their answers,<br />

giving their reasoning where required and critiquing the<br />

longer sentence or paragraph responses.<br />

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TEACHER NOTES<br />

Sample open pages<br />

TEACHER INFORMATION<br />

TEACHER INFORMATION<br />

UNIT 1<br />

NOUNS, NOUN GROUPS<br />

AND ADJECTIVES<br />

UNIT 1<br />

NOUNS, NOUN GROUPS<br />

AND ADJECTIVES<br />

Focus<br />

Word choices – nouns, noun groups and adjectives<br />

Progression<br />

Recognise<br />

Students will recognise a noun/noun group/adjective from<br />

modelled examples.<br />

Choose<br />

Students will choose in<strong>for</strong>mative nouns/noun groups/adjectives<br />

from given examples, with teacher support.<br />

Use<br />

Students will choose and use appropriate, in<strong>for</strong>mative nouns/noun<br />

groups/adjectives in supplied and self-written sentences.<br />

Definition of terms<br />

Nouns are words used to name people, places, things, feelings and<br />

ideas.<br />

A noun group is a noun with other words used to name people,<br />

places, things, feelings and ideas.<br />

Adjectives are describing words adding to or changing the<br />

meaning of a noun or pronoun.<br />

Introduction<br />

Good writers improve their writing by their choice of words used<br />

to correctly name people, places, things, feelings and ideas. They<br />

can choose words to add in<strong>for</strong>mation to nouns to make a more<br />

precise noun group. Noun groups have a noun, plus:<br />

• a determiner; e.g. the fish, many chips<br />

• a possessive; e.g. the boy’s pasta, Dad’s food<br />

• an adjective; e.g. tasty meal, sun-dried tomatoes<br />

LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />

Introduction<br />

• Discuss the text title and layout with students.<br />

• Do they think the text will be an imaginative story or will it be giving<br />

them in<strong>for</strong>mation?<br />

• Why do they think this? What are some of the features of in<strong>for</strong>mative<br />

text?<br />

• What is the purpose of the illustrations?<br />

• List foods they like to eat. Do they know which country their favourite<br />

food is from?<br />

• Introduce the term ‘noun’ and explain that the words naming different<br />

foods are nouns.<br />

• Read the text with or to the class.<br />

• Identify some of the nouns used in the text to name foods.<br />

• Identify nouns used to name people places and things.<br />

• Identify nouns with capital letters. What do these nouns name? Why<br />

do these nouns have capital letters?<br />

Nouns – Page 5<br />

• Read and discuss the definition at the top of the page.<br />

• Explain that the text is divided into paragraphs with subheadings<br />

which have been numbered so it will be easier to find words.<br />

• Discuss why nouns are an important part of every sentence and why<br />

it is important <strong>for</strong> writers to think about nouns and to choose good,<br />

interesting and in<strong>for</strong>mative nouns.<br />

• Explain that good writers think about different words to name the<br />

same thing (synonyms) be<strong>for</strong>e choosing the best one.<br />

• Work through the activities with the class as a whole, ensuring they<br />

understand what is required of them.<br />

• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />

of the class work independently on the activities.<br />

Noun groups – Page 6<br />

ANSWERS<br />

Nouns – Page 5<br />

1. (a) people<br />

(b) honey<br />

(c) drink<br />

(d) Aztecs<br />

2. (a) damper<br />

(b) sandwich<br />

(c) chocolate<br />

(d) pasta<br />

3. Teacher check<br />

Noun groups – Page 6<br />

1. (a) thick dough<br />

(b) most popular food<br />

(c) more than a thousand years<br />

2.–3. Teacher check<br />

4. Answers may include:<br />

sun-dried tomatoes, Australian bread, a heavy iron camp oven<br />

5. Teacher check<br />

Adjectives – Page 7<br />

1. Teacher check<br />

2. (a) solid<br />

(b) ancient<br />

(c) Swiss<br />

3.–5. Teacher check<br />

ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />

Assessment activity – Page 26<br />

1. (a) sandwich<br />

(b) Chocolate<br />

(c) flour<br />

(d) pasta<br />

2. Teacher check<br />

3. their most popular food<br />

4.–6. Teacher check<br />

Class record sheet – Page vi<br />

ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />

• Paragraph topic – My country’s most popular food<br />

• Focus: Word choices – nouns, noun groups and adjectives<br />

Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />

• nouns; e.g. kitchen benches, camp oven<br />

• Read and discuss the definition at the top of the page.<br />

• a number; e.g. five tomatoes<br />

• Explain that often instead of using one word to name something,<br />

good writers add more in<strong>for</strong>mation by writing a group of words.<br />

• Provide examples of noun groups including the word ‘book’ plus<br />

a determiner—e.g. my book, this book, some books—and with<br />

adjectives; e.g. a scary book.<br />

• Show by example how careful choice of noun groups can lead to a<br />

clearer understanding by the reader. (For example, The boy ran home<br />

vs The small, terrified boy ran home.)<br />

Adjectives – Page 7<br />

• Read and discuss the definition at the top of the page.<br />

• Brainstorm adjectives to describe food using their sense of<br />

taste, smell, hearing and touch. This will assist them to complete<br />

Question 5.<br />

• Provide opportunities to share their answers to Question 5.<br />

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UNIT 1<br />

WORLD FOODS<br />

Chocolate<br />

1. Chocolate came from ancient Central America. The<br />

Aztecs there made a drink from cocoa beans. But<br />

it tasted very bitter and was frothy. When chocolate<br />

was taken to Europe, people added sugar and honey.<br />

This made it sweeter to drink. It wasn’t until the 1800s<br />

that solid chocolate appeared. Now Swiss people eat<br />

chocolate more than any other people in the whole of<br />

Europe and the world.<br />

Sandwiches<br />

2. The sandwich gets its name from a British earl. Once, back in the 1700s,<br />

the Earl of Sandwich, who was busy playing cards, didn’t want to leave the<br />

table to eat. So he ordered a servant to put some meat<br />

between two slices of bread—and the sandwich was<br />

named. Although people had eaten food between<br />

bread, it didn’t have a name be<strong>for</strong>e this happened.<br />

Damper<br />

3. Damper is an Australian bread. It was made by stockmen or drovers<br />

using just flour, salt and water. It was easy to make and very filling. The<br />

ingredients they needed kept <strong>for</strong> a long time without<br />

spoiling. Today, campers still make damper, usually<br />

in a heavy iron camp oven. They also can add more<br />

ingredients to make it tastier, like cheese, chives,<br />

butter, milk and sun-dried tomatoes.<br />

Pasta<br />

4. Pasta, the most popular food in Italy today, was probably invented in a<br />

part of Italy called Sicily more than a thousand years ago! This popular<br />

food is easy to cook and is very filling. Pasta is made<br />

from flour and water, mixed into a thick dough. It is<br />

shaped into different types of pasta and dried. Today,<br />

there are about 350 different types of pasta, all with<br />

different names. For example, ‘spaghetti’ means ‘little<br />

strings’, while ‘orecchiette’ means ‘little ears’ and<br />

‘linguini’ means ‘little tongues’.<br />

UNIT 1<br />

NOUNS<br />

Nouns are naming words <strong>for</strong> people, places and things.<br />

For example: servants, Italy, chocolate<br />

Good writers choose their nouns carefully.<br />

1. Which noun in Paragraph 1 means:<br />

(a) men, women and children<br />

(b) something made by bees<br />

(c) a liquid<br />

(d) people from a country<br />

in Central America<br />

2. Choose the best noun <strong>for</strong> each sentence.<br />

damper pasta sandwich chocolate<br />

(a) The campers cooked some<br />

over an open fire.<br />

(b) I like to put cheese and tomato in a .<br />

(c) Ice cream tastes great with<br />

topping.<br />

(d) My favourite Italian food is .<br />

3. Write an interesting sentence <strong>for</strong> each noun.<br />

(a) drovers<br />

(b) oven<br />

(c) ingredient<br />

(d) table<br />

(e) cheese<br />

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UNIT 1<br />

NOUN GROUPS<br />

A noun group is a noun with other words which add more<br />

in<strong>for</strong>mation about the noun.<br />

For example: cold, white, frothy milk; some milk; my milk.<br />

Good writers use in<strong>for</strong>mative noun groups.<br />

1. Write the whole noun group from Paragraph 4.<br />

(a) dough<br />

(b) food<br />

(c) years<br />

2. Add some words to each noun to make an in<strong>for</strong>mative noun group.<br />

(a) butter<br />

(b) bread<br />

(c) meat<br />

(d) sandwich<br />

3. Write an interesting sentence using one of the noun groups from Question 2.<br />

UNIT 1<br />

ADJECTIVES<br />

Adjectives are describing words. They can tell more about a noun.<br />

For example: a delicious, tasty dish<br />

1. Choose one or two interesting adjectives you could use to describe each noun.<br />

(a) people<br />

(b) tables<br />

(c) spaghetti<br />

2. Write the adjective used in Paragraph 1 to describe each noun.<br />

(a)<br />

chocolate<br />

(b)<br />

Central America<br />

(c)<br />

people<br />

3. Use each adjective to describe a noun in an interesting sentence.<br />

(a) delicious<br />

(b) popular<br />

4. Find two noun groups from Paragraph 3.<br />

(a)<br />

(b)<br />

5. (a) Write a noun group using the word 'campers'.<br />

4. Add adjectives to make the sentences more descriptive.<br />

(a) The girl cooked some pasta.<br />

(b) A chef made a sandwich.<br />

5. Write a paragraph about your favourite food on the back of this page. Be<strong>for</strong>e<br />

you start, think about adjectives you could use to tell how it looks, tastes,<br />

smells, sounds and feels. Write some of these adjectives in the box below.<br />

(b) Use this noun group in an interesting sentence.<br />

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CLASS RECORD<br />

ASSESSMENT ACTIVITIES<br />

Date:<br />

Name Unit 9 Unit 10 Unit 11 Unit 12<br />

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ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />

CLASS RECORD<br />

Name: Unit: Date:<br />

Paragraph topic:<br />

Name<br />

Comment<br />

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STUDENT WRITING CHECKLIST<br />

Name:<br />

Date:<br />

Paragraph topic:<br />

Sentences<br />

• Does each sentence make sense by itself? .........................................................<br />

• Is it too long or too short? .....................................................................................<br />

• Do I need to join some sentences? .......................................................................<br />

• Are the beginnings interesting?............................................................................<br />

Punctuation<br />

Have I used:<br />

• capital letters to start sentences, and proper nouns?..........................................<br />

• full stops, question marks and exclamation marks?............................................<br />

• commas?................................................................................................................<br />

• apostrophes <strong>for</strong> contractions and possession?....................................................<br />

• speech marks? ......................................................................................................<br />

Words<br />

• Are there some boring verbs? ...............................................................................<br />

• Is the verb tense correct? .....................................................................................<br />

• Do some verbs need adverbials (how, when, where)?..........................................<br />

• Can I add adjectives to tell more about nouns and pronouns?.............................<br />

Spelling<br />

• I have checked <strong>for</strong> spelling errors.........................................................................<br />

• I have made corrections........................................................................................<br />

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STUDENT SELF-EVALUATION<br />

Name: Unit: Date:<br />

I wrote a paragraph about:<br />

My goal was to focus on:<br />

How well did I achieve my goal?<br />

Two things I did well in my writing were:<br />

Next time I write a paragraph I will try to:<br />

STUDENT SELF-EVALUATION<br />

Name: Unit: Date:<br />

I wrote a paragraph about:<br />

My goal was to focus on:<br />

How well did I achieve my goal?<br />

Two things I did well in my writing were:<br />

Next time I write a paragraph I will try to:<br />

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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />

UNIT 9<br />

USING PUNCTUATION IN<br />

SENTENCES<br />

Focus<br />

Punctuation – using <strong>punctuation</strong> in sentences<br />

Progression<br />

Recognise<br />

Students will recognise specified <strong>punctuation</strong> from modelled<br />

examples.<br />

Choose<br />

Students will choose appropriate <strong>punctuation</strong> <strong>for</strong> sentences, with<br />

teacher support.<br />

Use<br />

Students will correctly punctuate supplied and self-written<br />

sentences.<br />

Definition of terms<br />

A sentence is a set of words that makes sense by itself. It may be<br />

a statement, a question, an exclamation or a command.<br />

Capital letters are used at the beginning of a new sentence and<br />

<strong>for</strong> proper nouns.<br />

Proper nouns are nouns used <strong>for</strong> naming a particular person,<br />

place or thing.<br />

A full stop is used at the end of a sentence.<br />

A question mark is used at the end of a question.<br />

An exclamation mark is used at the end of an exclamation.<br />

Introduction<br />

Good writers improve their writing by using correct <strong>punctuation</strong>.<br />

Teacher in<strong>for</strong>mation<br />

Punctuation enables a writer to more fully and accurately<br />

communicate with the reader by making the writing more<br />

understandable.<br />

LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />

Introduction<br />

• Read a teacher-selected short passage to the class, ignoring the<br />

<strong>punctuation</strong> and exaggerating the effects.<br />

• Ask students if they had difficulty understanding the passage.<br />

• Elicit from students the reason(s) why it was hard to understand.<br />

• Question how <strong>punctuation</strong> makes text easier to understand. List<br />

student responses and discuss.<br />

Do we need <strong>punctuation</strong>? – Page 60<br />

• Set students to work in pairs to complete Questions 1 to 5.<br />

• In small groups, discuss their answers to Question 5. How similar<br />

were they? Why?<br />

Capital letters – Page 61<br />

• Read and discuss the text.<br />

• Ask ‘What is missing?’ and list answers.<br />

• Question students to obtain a clear definition of what full stops and<br />

proper nouns are.<br />

• Emphasise that a capital is needed <strong>for</strong> proper nouns; <strong>for</strong> example,<br />

South Lake, Wellstead River, Washington, DC.<br />

• Explain that mum and dad only need a capital letter when used<br />

instead of their names; <strong>for</strong> example, My mum and dad love boating<br />

— I asked Dad if we could stay longer on the river.<br />

• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />

of the class work independently on the activities.<br />

• Encourage students in small groups or as a class to discuss their<br />

responses to Question 4.<br />

Short sentences – Page 62<br />

• Read the text at the top of the page.<br />

• Ensure students are familiar with the features of a sentence, a<br />

command, an exclamation and a question, including their specific<br />

<strong>punctuation</strong>.<br />

• Brainstorm other examples with the class.<br />

• Explain that some sentences can be very short and the number of<br />

words doesn’t affect whether or not a group of words is a sentence.<br />

• Provide opportunities <strong>for</strong> students to discuss, in pairs, their answers<br />

to Question 3.<br />

Is it correct? – Page 63<br />

• Discuss the <strong>punctuation</strong> required <strong>for</strong> beginning and ending<br />

sentences, proper nouns, questions, exclamations and commands.<br />

• Provide examples.<br />

• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />

of the class work independently on the activities.<br />

• Students will benefit from the opportunity to check a partner’s<br />

<strong>punctuation</strong> in his or her answer to Question 2.<br />

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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />

UNIT 9<br />

USING PUNCTUATION IN<br />

SENTENCES<br />

ANSWERS<br />

Do we need <strong>punctuation</strong>? – Page 60<br />

1. Teacher check<br />

2. (a) 5<br />

(b) 2<br />

(c) 3<br />

3. elephants (first mention) and hide<br />

4.–5. Teacher check<br />

Capital letters – Page 61<br />

1. (a) Teacher check<br />

(b) 7<br />

(c) 3<br />

(d) Mum, Dad, Zoe, Thailand<br />

2.–4. Teacher check<br />

Short sentences – Page 62<br />

1. (a) a capital letter<br />

(b) no<br />

(c) question mark, full stop, exclamation mark<br />

2. (a) Wow, that’s really awesome!<br />

(b)–(d) Teacher check<br />

ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />

Assessment activity – Page 82<br />

1. (a) Teacher check<br />

(b) 6<br />

(c) 3<br />

(d) 3<br />

2.–3. Teacher check<br />

4. (a) ✘ (b) ✓ (c) ✘<br />

5. (a) Is Trisha happy?<br />

(b) She is huge!<br />

(c) How old is she?<br />

(d) Trisha is an elephant.<br />

6. (a) ✘ (b) ✓ (c) ✓<br />

7. We went to the zoo in London last Tuesday.<br />

Class recording sheet – Page viii<br />

ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />

• Paragraph topic – I want to ride a .<br />

• Focus: Punctuation – using <strong>punctuation</strong> in sentences<br />

Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />

3. Teacher check<br />

Is it correct? – Page 63<br />

1. (a) I want to ride an elephant.<br />

(b) We’ll go <strong>for</strong> a ride on Wednesday.<br />

(c) May I feed the elephant?<br />

(d) Look now!<br />

2. Teacher check. Full <strong>punctuation</strong>:<br />

Hold on tight when we are going down the hill. You’ll see my<br />

elephant keeping three feet on the ground at all times so he<br />

doesn’t slip. Do you think he’s clever?<br />

3. (a) true<br />

(b) false<br />

(c) true<br />

4. (a) ✓<br />

(b) ✘<br />

(c) ✘<br />

(d) ✘<br />

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UNIT 9<br />

DO WE NEED PUNCTUATION?<br />

Elephants<br />

My sister zoe loves big grey elephants if<br />

she saw a wild one coming towards her<br />

with its trunk up she would run and hide<br />

in africa the elephants are much bigger<br />

than the ones in asia.<br />

1. Read Elephants aloud to a partner.<br />

(a) Was it easy <strong>for</strong> you to read?<br />

(b) Do you think your partner understood it?<br />

(c) What was missing from the story?<br />

2. Use a red pencil to change some letter to capitals.<br />

(a) How many did you need to change?<br />

(b) How many were at the beginning of a sentence?<br />

(c) How many were names of people or places?<br />

3. Add two full stops. Which words did you put a full stop after?<br />

and<br />

4. Read Elephants to your partner again.<br />

(a) Was it easier to read this time?<br />

(b) Do you think your partner understood it better this time?<br />

5. (a) Do you think adding <strong>punctuation</strong> is a good thing to do?<br />

(b) Why do you think this?<br />

(c) Which <strong>punctuation</strong> do you think is the most important <strong>for</strong> a writer to use?<br />

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UNIT 9<br />

CAPITAL LETTERS<br />

Capital letters are used at the beginning of a new sentence and<br />

<strong>for</strong> proper nouns.<br />

Proper nouns are nouns used <strong>for</strong> the name of a person, place or<br />

thing.<br />

For example: Zoe South Africa Victoria Falls<br />

The elephant ride<br />

when mum, dad, zoe and I were in thailand we went <strong>for</strong> an<br />

elephant ride through the jungle. it was quite scary when<br />

the elephant had to go down a steep jungle path. there<br />

had been lots of rain and it was very wet and slippery.<br />

1. (a) Use a red pencil or pen to put capital letters in the text.<br />

(b) How many capital letters did you need to add?<br />

(c) How many sentences are in the text?<br />

(d) Write the proper nouns from the text.<br />

2. (a) Write two sentences about a place someone you know likes to visit. Use<br />

capital letters to name the place and the person who enjoys going there.<br />

(b) How many proper nouns did you use in your sentences?<br />

3. Write a proper noun that tells you the name of:<br />

(a) a country<br />

(c) your teacher<br />

(e) a day of the week<br />

(b) a city<br />

(d) a river<br />

(f) a shop<br />

4. Write an interesting sentence using a proper noun from Question 3.<br />

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UNIT 9<br />

SHORT SENTENCES<br />

Where is it? Wow, that’s really awesome! Let’s go!<br />

Add sugar. Jump on. Be quick! What is it?<br />

Look, no hands! Who said that? Don’t drop it! Be careful!<br />

1. Read the short sentences. They are all sentences because they make sense<br />

by themselves.<br />

(a) What do they all start with?<br />

(b) Do they all use the same <strong>punctuation</strong> mark at the end?<br />

(c) What are the three <strong>punctuation</strong>s used at the end of<br />

.<br />

these sentences?<br />

? ,<br />

2. (a) Write the longest sentence.<br />

! “<br />

(b) Write one of the exclamations.<br />

(c) Write one of the commands.<br />

(d) Write one of the questions.<br />

3. (a) Write a question with fewer than five words.<br />

(b) Write an exclamation with three words.<br />

(c) Write a command with four words.<br />

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UNIT 9<br />

IS IT CORRECT?<br />

1. Find the <strong>punctuation</strong> error in each sentence.<br />

Write the sentence correctly.<br />

(a) I want to ride an elephant?<br />

(b) We’ll go <strong>for</strong> a ride on wednesday.<br />

(c) May I feed the elephant!<br />

(d) Look now.<br />

2. Find and circle the <strong>punctuation</strong> errors. Write the paragraph correctly.<br />

hold on tight when we are going down the hill.<br />

you’ll see my Elephant keeping three feet on the<br />

ground at all times so he doesn’t slip Do you<br />

think he’s clever<br />

3. Tick ‘true’ or ‘false’.<br />

(a) Capital letters are needed <strong>for</strong> the days of the week. True False<br />

(b) The words ‘summer’ and ‘winter’ need capitals. True False<br />

(c) The name doctor smith needs two capitals. True False<br />

4. Put a tick in the box if the <strong>punctuation</strong> is correct.<br />

(a) It’s Tuesday.<br />

(c) Where is Thailand!<br />

(b) Some elephants live in asia.<br />

(d) Add water!<br />

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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />

UNIT 10<br />

FULL STOPS, CAPITAL LETTERS,<br />

COMMAS, DIRECT SPEECH<br />

Focus<br />

Punctuation – full stops, capital letters, commas, direct speech<br />

Progression<br />

Recognise<br />

Students will recognise specified <strong>punctuation</strong> from modelled<br />

examples.<br />

Choose<br />

Students will choose appropriate <strong>punctuation</strong> <strong>for</strong> sentences, with<br />

teacher support.<br />

Use<br />

Students will correctly punctuate supplied and self-written<br />

sentences.<br />

Definition of terms<br />

A sentence is a set of words that makes sense by itself. It may be a<br />

statement, a question, an exclamation or a command.<br />

A paragraph enables a writer to organise and combine ideas to<br />

aid comprehension.<br />

A topic sentence is a sentence in a paragraph that introduces the<br />

main idea of that paragraph.<br />

Introduction<br />

Good writers improve their writing by using correct <strong>punctuation</strong>.<br />

Teacher in<strong>for</strong>mation<br />

Punctuation enables a writer to more fully and accurately<br />

communicate with the reader.<br />

Note: There is more than one method of punctuating direct speech.<br />

(Two different methods are given in the Answers.) Whichever<br />

method is chosen, it must be consistently used.<br />

LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />

Introduction<br />

• Discuss the text title.<br />

• Read the text with or to the class.<br />

• Ask students to identify the text type and discuss the features of<br />

narrative text.<br />

• Discuss the <strong>punctuation</strong> used.<br />

• Discuss how difficult it would be to read without <strong>punctuation</strong>.<br />

Note that there is more than one method of punctuating direct<br />

speech. (Two different methods are given in the Answers.) Whatever<br />

method is chosen, it must be consistently used.<br />

• Explain to students that they will see a comma used be<strong>for</strong>e the<br />

coordinating conjunction (the Ox<strong>for</strong>d comma or serial comma) in<br />

some publications. It is not incorrect to use it this way, but it is more<br />

common to not include the comma.<br />

Full stops – Page 66<br />

• Read and discuss the definition of full stops.<br />

• Discuss why it is so short.<br />

• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />

of the class work independently on the activities.<br />

Capital letters – Page 67<br />

• Read and discuss the in<strong>for</strong>mation about the use of capital letters.<br />

• Revise the definition of a sentence with students.<br />

• Read with the class the statement about proper nouns. Ask <strong>for</strong><br />

further examples and list them on the board.<br />

• Emphasise that a capital is needed <strong>for</strong> names; hence ‘my uncle’ but<br />

‘Uncle Harry'.<br />

• Explain that mum and dad only need a capital letter when used<br />

instead of their names; <strong>for</strong> example, My mum and dad love animals<br />

— I asked Mum and Dad if I could have a pet.<br />

• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />

of the class work independently on the activities.<br />

Commas – Page 68<br />

• Read the in<strong>for</strong>mation at the top of the page.<br />

• Provide opportunities <strong>for</strong> students to read aloud and discuss in pairs<br />

their answers in Question 2. Reading aloud will provide the natural<br />

pauses indicating the need <strong>for</strong> a comma.<br />

• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />

of the class work independently on the activities.<br />

Direct speech – Page 69<br />

• Discuss the in<strong>for</strong>mation given about direct speech.<br />

• Emphasise that it is the actual words used. Elicit further examples.<br />

• Examine and discuss with the class the placement of <strong>punctuation</strong> in<br />

the example given. Ask why the <strong>punctuation</strong> is placed where it is.<br />

• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />

of the class work independently on the activities.<br />

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UNIT 10<br />

FULL STOPS, CAPITAL LETTERS,<br />

COMMAS, DIRECT SPEECH<br />

ANSWERS<br />

Full stops – Page 66<br />

1. (a)–(c) Only (b) needs a full stop<br />

2. (a) The frog jumped into the pond. He disappeared.<br />

(b) The king wanted his daughter to get married. She kept<br />

saying no.<br />

(c) Frogs live in ponds. They can also live on land.<br />

Capital letters – Page 67<br />

1. (a) ✘ ✘<br />

(b) ✓ ✓<br />

(c) ✓ ✓<br />

2. (a) Amy was a very beautiful princess who didn’t like frogs.<br />

(b) The girl who kissed the frog’s name was Princess Amy.<br />

(c) Her father was the king and he was called King Robert.<br />

(d) Princess Amy lived in a palace near London.<br />

(e) The frog told Amy that she was a silly princess.<br />

Commas – Page 68<br />

1. (a) Amy enjoys reading, sewing and looking at herself.<br />

(b) King Robert’s horses are big, strong and well looked after.<br />

(c) Amy has pet cats, dogs and rabbits, but she doesn’t have a<br />

pet frog.<br />

2. Teacher check<br />

ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />

Assessment activity – Page 83<br />

1. (a) blank<br />

(b) full stop<br />

2. The princess kissed the frog. He didn’t turn into a prince.<br />

3. Princess Amy lived with her father, King Robert, in Star Palace in<br />

London.<br />

4. (a) Princesses, princes, queens and kings all live in palaces.<br />

(b) My sister, Princess Anne, is beautiful.<br />

5. (a) No<br />

(b) Yes – 'Can you please kiss me?' asked the frog.<br />

6. ‘Jump back into the pond!’ shouted the princess to the frog.<br />

Class recording sheet – Page viii<br />

ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />

• Paragraph topic – An animal I wouldn’t like to kiss<br />

• Focus: Punctuation – full stops, capital letters, commas, direct<br />

speech<br />

Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />

Direct speech – Page 69<br />

1. (a) Yes<br />

(b) Yes<br />

(c) No<br />

(d) Yes<br />

(e) No<br />

2. (a) ✘<br />

(b) ✓<br />

(c) ✓<br />

(d) ✘<br />

3. (a) ‘Why not?’ asked the frog.<br />

(b) ‘You are too ugly’, answered the princess./‘You are too ugly,’<br />

answered the princess.<br />

(c) Then Princess Amy said, ‘Are you really a handsome prince?’<br />

(d) ‘Well, you’ll just have to kiss me and find out’, he<br />

replied./‘Well, you’ll just have to kiss me and find out,’ he<br />

replied.<br />

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UNIT 10<br />

FULL STOPS<br />

Frog prince<br />

Princess Amy was the most beautiful princess. Princes came from far away asking<br />

to marry her, but none of them was good enough <strong>for</strong> this proud princess.<br />

Every day as she sat admiring her reflection in the water of the palace pond, she<br />

asked herself, ‘I am so lovely. Will I never find a husband good enough <strong>for</strong> me?’<br />

Then one day a voice replied, ‘Kiss me and I will be the man you love’.<br />

She looked down and there on a lily pad was<br />

the ugliest frog she’d ever seen.<br />

‘I’m the most beautiful princess and I don’t<br />

kiss frogs’, she rudely replied.<br />

‘But I am the most handsome prince. I was<br />

turned into a frog by a wicked witch’, he<br />

replied. ‘Kiss me and the spell will be broken.’<br />

Should she or shouldn’t she? Finally, she took<br />

a deep breath, closed her eyes and kissed him<br />

on his cold green lips.<br />

‘Yuck!’ she said when she opened her eyes again. ‘Why, you’re not a prince. You’re<br />

just a silly frog.’<br />

‘I may be a frog, but I’m the frog who persuaded a silly princess to kiss him!’ he<br />

croaked. He dived into the pond and disappeared.<br />

A full stop (.) is used to show the end of a sentence.<br />

1. Put a full stop in the box if it’s a complete sentence. Leave it blank if it is not.<br />

(a) It didn’t matter how many princes came she always<br />

(b) The spell wasn’t broken<br />

(c) The princess couldn’t decide if she should kiss the frog or<br />

2. Put full stops where needed.<br />

(a) The frog jumped into the pond He disappeared<br />

(b) The king wanted his daughter to get married She kept saying no<br />

(c) Frogs live in ponds They can also live on land<br />

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UNIT 10<br />

CAPITAL LETTERS<br />

A capital letter is used to start a sentence.<br />

1. Is it a sentence? Is a capital letter needed? Put a ✓ or ✘ in the boxes.<br />

(a) sitting on a lily pad It is a sentence. It needs a capital.<br />

(b) did she kiss the frog? It is a sentence. It needs a capital.<br />

(c) she didn’t think she<br />

would ever find a husband. It is a sentence. It needs a capital.<br />

Proper nouns are the names of people, places or things. They need a capital<br />

letter.<br />

For example: Amy, Peter’s Palace, America<br />

2. Rewrite the sentence using a capital letter <strong>for</strong> proper nouns.<br />

(a) amy was a very beautiful princess who didn’t like frogs.<br />

(b) The girl who kissed the frog’s name was princess amy.<br />

(c) Her father was the king and he was called king robert.<br />

(d) Princess amy lived in a palace near london.<br />

(e) The frog told amy that she was a silly princess.<br />

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UNIT 10<br />

COMMAS<br />

A comma is used to separate things in a list.<br />

For example: ‘I love apples, pears, strawberries and grapes.'<br />

There is no comma be<strong>for</strong>e 'and'.<br />

1. Rewrite the sentence, putting in commas where needed.<br />

(a) Amy enjoys reading sewing and looking at herself.<br />

(b) King Robert’s horses are big strong and well looked after.<br />

(c) Amy has pet cats dogs and rabbits, but she doesn’t have a pet frog.<br />

2. Write a list of:<br />

(a) children you would like to have at your party.<br />

I would like to invite<br />

to my party.<br />

(b) food you would like to eat at the party.<br />

I would like to eat<br />

at my party.<br />

(c) clothes you would like to wear.<br />

I would like to wear<br />

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DIRECT SPEECH<br />

When we write about people speaking, the words they say need speech marks.<br />

The speech marks are like two little hands around the words they say.<br />

• The frog said, ‘Give me a kiss’.<br />

• Princess Amy said, ‘I don’t kiss frogs’.<br />

1. Read the last paragraph in the text. Tick yes or no.<br />

(a) Are there any speech marks? Yes No<br />

(b) Is the frog speaking? Yes No<br />

(c) Does anyone else speak in this paragraph? Yes No<br />

(d) Is there a capital letter at the start of the speech? Yes No<br />

(e) Is there a question mark at the end of the speech? Yes No<br />

2. Put a tick in the box if the sentence needs speech marks and a cross if it<br />

doesn’t.<br />

(a) The frog asked the princess if he could have a kiss.<br />

(b) Then frog said, If you don’t kiss me, you’ll never find a husband.<br />

(c) No I won’t kiss you, the princess replied.<br />

(d) The princess said that she didn’t know what she should do.<br />

3. Put speech marks around the words they say.<br />

(a) Why not? asked the frog.<br />

(b) You are too ugly, answered the princess.<br />

(c) Then Princess Amy said, Are you really a handsome prince?<br />

(d) Well, you’ll just have to kiss me and find out, he replied.<br />

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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />

UNIT 11<br />

APOSTROPHES IN CONTRACTIONS<br />

Focus<br />

Punctuation – apostrophes in contractions<br />

Progression<br />

Recognise<br />

Students will recognise apostrophes in contractions in modelled<br />

examples.<br />

Choose<br />

Students will write contractions correctly, with teacher support.<br />

Use<br />

Students will write contractions correctly in supplied and selfwritten<br />

sentences.<br />

Definition of terms<br />

Contractions are new words made by joining two words and<br />

leaving out some letters.<br />

Apostrophes are <strong>punctuation</strong> marks used to show where letters<br />

are missing in contractions. (They are also used to show<br />

possession.)<br />

Introduction<br />

Good writers improve their writing by using apostrophes correctly.<br />

Teacher in<strong>for</strong>mation<br />

Punctuation enables a writer to more fully and accurately<br />

communicate with the reader.<br />

Contractions in most cases only present difficulty in writing, the<br />

exception being could’ve, would’ve and should’ve which are<br />

often pronounced as though followed by ‘of’ instead of ‘have’ and<br />

subsequently written that way.<br />

LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />

Introduction<br />

• Discuss apostrophes—what they are, where they are placed and why<br />

they are used; i.e. in contractions and to indicate possession.<br />

• Explain that the focus in this section will be on apostrophes in<br />

contractions and give some examples.<br />

• Explain that contractions are quicker and easier to say, and discuss<br />

and model a variety of examples.<br />

Apostrophes in contractions – Page 72<br />

• Read and discuss the definition at the top of the page.<br />

• Read the speech bubbles with the class and discuss why<br />

contractions are used in speech.<br />

• Work through the activities with the class, ensuring they understand<br />

what is required of them.<br />

Using contractions – Page 73<br />

• Students will be required to use ‘not’ in the contractions on this<br />

page.<br />

• Remind them that it is important to put an apostrophe in the correct<br />

place and ask which letters of the word ‘not’ are usually left out.<br />

• Give some examples of contractions with ‘not’ and discuss where the<br />

apostrophe is placed. (A common error is did’nt.)<br />

• Provide opportunities <strong>for</strong> students to practise pronouncing the<br />

contractions correctly.<br />

• Most students should be able to complete the page independently.<br />

Don't and won't – Page 74<br />

• Read the conversations on the page.<br />

• Discuss students’ answers to Question 1.<br />

• Students can share the sentences they wrote in Question 2.<br />

• Work through the activities with the class, ensuring they understand<br />

what is required of them.<br />

More contractions, It's or its? – Page 75<br />

• Discuss the use of 'its' and 'it’s' with students. Explain the difference<br />

and use of each.<br />

• Emphasise that it’s easy to work out which to use by asking the<br />

simple question, ‘Can I say “it is” here?’ If the answer is ‘yes’, an<br />

apostrophe is needed. Note: 'It has' is also contracted to 'it’s'.<br />

• Work through the activities with the class, ensuring they understand<br />

what is required of them.<br />

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UNIT 11<br />

APOSTROPHES IN CONTRACTIONS<br />

ANSWERS<br />

Apostrophes in contractions – Page 72<br />

1. (a) I am<br />

(b) I will<br />

(c) I would<br />

(d) I have<br />

2. Teacher check<br />

3. (a) she’s<br />

(b) you're<br />

(c) they’re<br />

(d) we’re<br />

Using contractions – Page 73<br />

1. (a) We’re asleep in our beds.<br />

(b) She’s broken her leg.<br />

(c) He’s getting into his car.<br />

(d) We’d like an ice cream.<br />

2. (a) was not<br />

(b) did not<br />

(c) have not<br />

(d) would not<br />

(e) had not<br />

(f) must not<br />

3. Teacher check<br />

4. (a) they’d<br />

(b) they’d<br />

(c) they’re<br />

(d) they’ll<br />

ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />

Assessment activity – Page 84<br />

1. (a) They are<br />

(b) We will/shall<br />

2. (a) I’m visiting my friend today.<br />

(b) She’s kind and caring.<br />

3. (a) she’ll<br />

(b) they’re<br />

(c) I’ve<br />

(d) we’d<br />

4. Teacher check<br />

5. (a) It’s, its<br />

(b) It’s, its<br />

6. Teacher check<br />

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ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />

• Paragraph topic – How the girl broke her leg<br />

• Focus: Punctuation – apostrophes in contractions<br />

Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />

Don't and won't – Page 74<br />

1.–2. Teacher check<br />

More contractions, It’s or its? – Page 75<br />

1. (a) (i) I’d (ii) I’ll<br />

(b) (i) we’d (ii) we’ll<br />

(c) (i) he’d (ii) he’ll<br />

(d) (i) you’d (ii) you’ll<br />

(e) (i) she’d (ii) she’ll<br />

(f) (i) they’d (ii) they’ll<br />

2. (a) it’s (b) it is/it has<br />

3. (a) it’s (b) its<br />

(c) it’s (d) it’s<br />

4. Teacher check<br />

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UNIT 11<br />

APOSTROPHES IN CONTRACTIONS<br />

I’m sleeping.<br />

I’ve broken<br />

my leg.<br />

I’ll drive.<br />

I’d like an<br />

ice cream.<br />

Contractions are new words made by joining two words and leaving out some<br />

of their letters. An apostrophe is used in a contraction to show that some<br />

letters are missing.<br />

1. Write the sentence using two words <strong>for</strong> the contraction.<br />

(a) I’m asleep.<br />

(b) I’ll drive.<br />

(c) I’d like an ice cream.<br />

(d) I’ve broken my leg.<br />

2. (a) Use the contraction I’ll in a sentence.<br />

(b) Use 'I’d' in a sentence.<br />

3. Join the two words to make a contraction. Don’t <strong>for</strong>get the apostrophe.<br />

(a) she is<br />

(c) they are<br />

(b) you are<br />

(d) we are<br />

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USING CONTRACTIONS<br />

1. Write the sentence using a contraction.<br />

(a) We are asleep in our beds.<br />

(b) She has broken her leg.<br />

(c) He is getting into his car.<br />

(d) We would like an ice cream.<br />

2. Write the two words <strong>for</strong> each contraction.<br />

(a) wasn’t<br />

(c) haven’t<br />

(b) didn’t<br />

(d) wouldn’t<br />

(e) hadn’t (f) mustn’t<br />

3. Write a sentence using the contraction.<br />

(a) shouldn’t<br />

(b) mustn’t<br />

(c) wouldn’t<br />

4. Write the contractions.<br />

(a) they had<br />

(c) they are<br />

(b) they would<br />

(d) they will<br />

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UNIT 11<br />

DON’T AND WON’T<br />

Did you see the 'Do<br />

not swim' sign?<br />

Yes, I saw the sign<br />

that said 'Don’t swim'.<br />

DO NOT SWIM!<br />

I wonder why they do not want us<br />

to swim here.<br />

They don’t want us to swim here<br />

because it’s dangerous.<br />

1. (a) Write a sentence about the pond using ‘do not’.<br />

(b) Write another sentence about the pond using ‘don’t’.<br />

So, I will not go <strong>for</strong> a swim here.<br />

No, I won’t go in the pond either.<br />

Good, so we won’t get into<br />

trouble, will we?<br />

2. (a) Write a sentence about a pond using the words ‘will not’.<br />

(b) Write another sentence about the pond using ‘won’t’.<br />

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UNIT 11<br />

MORE CONTRACTIONS, IT’S OR ITS?<br />

1. Make some contractions. Join each frog with the two lily pads.<br />

Write the contractions.<br />

(a) (i) (ii)<br />

(b) (i) (ii)<br />

(c) (i) (ii)<br />

(d) (i) (ii)<br />

(e) (i) (ii)<br />

(f) (i) (ii)<br />

Its or it’s?<br />

These two little words cause lots of trouble. Only one of them is a contraction.<br />

2. (a) Which one is the contraction?<br />

(b) It is a contraction of and .<br />

3. Circle 'its' or 'it’s'. (HINT: Only use 'it’s' if you can say 'it is' instead of 'it’s'.)<br />

(a) I think its it's a pretty pond. (b) The frog is on its it's lily pad.<br />

(c) I wonder if its it's croaking.<br />

(d) Do you think its it's ugly?<br />

4. Write a sentence using the contraction 'it’s'.<br />

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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />

UNIT 12<br />

APOSTROPHES FOR POSSESSION<br />

Focus<br />

Punctuation – apostrophes <strong>for</strong> possession<br />

Progression<br />

Recognise<br />

Students will recognise possessive apostrophes from modelled<br />

examples.<br />

Choose<br />

Students will choose appropriate possessive apostrophes <strong>for</strong><br />

sentences, with teacher support.<br />

Use<br />

Students will correctly use possessive apostrophes in supplied<br />

and self-written sentences.<br />

Definition of terms<br />

A possessive apostrophe is a <strong>punctuation</strong> mark used to show<br />

ownership.<br />

Introduction<br />

Good writers improve their writing by using apostrophes correctly.<br />

Teacher in<strong>for</strong>mation<br />

Punctuation enables a writer to more fully and accurately<br />

communicate with the reader.<br />

Possessive apostrophes show who or what possesses the noun<br />

referred to; e.g. The man’s hand.<br />

LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />

Introduction<br />

• Discuss the different ways of saying that something belongs to<br />

someone.<br />

• Point to different objects in the classroom and ask 'Who owns this?'<br />

Encourage answers such as 'It is Kim's book'.<br />

• Write an example on the board and ask what the apostrophe is<br />

called.<br />

• Explain that the apostrophe is the quickest way of expressing<br />

ownership and that this is not possible in many other languages.<br />

Apostrophes <strong>for</strong> ownership – Page 78<br />

• Read the in<strong>for</strong>mation and the rule <strong>for</strong> using apostrophes.<br />

• Work through the page with students.<br />

• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />

of the class work independently on the activities.<br />

Who owns what? – Page 79<br />

• Read the rule at the top of the page.<br />

• Revise how ownership can be deduced from the placement of the<br />

apostrophe and where its 'tail' is pointing.<br />

• Work the first question as a group, with teacher support, to ensure<br />

understanding.<br />

• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />

of the class work independently on the activities.<br />

How many owners? – Page 80<br />

• Read the in<strong>for</strong>mation at the top of the page.<br />

• Work through the steps and an example with the class.<br />

• Work through Question 1 with students, providing support or<br />

additional in<strong>for</strong>mation where needed.<br />

• Continue to work with those requiring additional assistance while the<br />

remainder of the class work independently on the activities.<br />

Practise using apostrophes – Page 81<br />

• Read and discuss the rule about using 's' at the top of the page.<br />

• Work through the example with the class.<br />

• Explain that in Question 1 the owners all end with 's' so there is no<br />

need to add one.<br />

• Students can complete the activity.<br />

• In Question 2 the owners do not end with 's' so one will need to be<br />

added.<br />

• Revise the concept of ownership as a pair—e.g. Mum and Dad’s<br />

house—and the placement of the apostrophe.<br />

• Allow students to work through the exercises, assisting as required.<br />

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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />

UNIT 12<br />

APOSTROPHES FOR POSSESSION<br />

ANSWERS<br />

Apostrophes <strong>for</strong> ownership – Page 78<br />

1. (a) Peter<br />

(b) Peter<br />

(c) yes<br />

2. (a) the boys<br />

(b) the boys<br />

(c) yes<br />

3. (a) the boy<br />

(b) the boy<br />

(c) yes<br />

4. It is Dad’s car.<br />

Who owns what? – Page 79<br />

1. (a) Miss Muffet<br />

(b) the spider<br />

2. (a) Cinderella ✓<br />

(b) the stepsisters ✓<br />

(c) the prince ✓<br />

(d) the coach ✓<br />

(e) the godmother ✓<br />

3. (a) Grandmother’s bed<br />

(b) the woodcutter’s axe<br />

(c) the wolf’s teeth<br />

(d) Red Riding Hood’s basket<br />

4. Teacher check<br />

ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />

Assessment activity – Page 85<br />

1. after<br />

2. (a) my sister<br />

(b) his friends<br />

(c) Dad and Mum<br />

(d) the monkeys<br />

3. (a) the player – one owner<br />

(b) their parents – more than one owner<br />

(c) Jack and Jill – more than one owner<br />

4. (a) girls’<br />

(b) birds’<br />

(c) dog’s<br />

5. Teacher check<br />

Class recording sheet – Page viii<br />

ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />

• Paragraph topic – A brave prince<br />

• Focus: Punctuation – apostrophes <strong>for</strong> possession<br />

Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />

How many owners? – Page 80<br />

1. (a) the teacher – one owner<br />

(b) the doctors – more than one owner<br />

(c) the birds – more than one owner<br />

(d) the dog – one owner<br />

(e) the cats – more than one owner<br />

Practise using apostrophes – Page 81<br />

1. (a) brothers’<br />

(b) girls’<br />

(c) birds’<br />

(d) bees’<br />

2. (a) sister’s<br />

(b) lady’s<br />

(c) hen’s<br />

(d) children’s<br />

3. (a) John and Jake’s toys<br />

(b) Oliver and Jake’s bikes<br />

(c) Chloe and Jake’s teacher<br />

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UNIT 12<br />

APOSTROPHES FOR OWNERSHIP<br />

There are lots of rules that tell drivers where to go and what to do on the road.<br />

There are some rules <strong>for</strong> writers, too.<br />

This rule tells where an apostrophe goes to show that someone owns something.<br />

RULE 1: An apostrophe is placed after the owner or the owners.<br />

1. Let’s see if this sentence follows the rule.<br />

It is Peter’s car.<br />

(a) Which word is the apostrophe after?<br />

(b) Who is the owner?<br />

(c) Does this apostrophe follow the rule? Yes No<br />

2. Check if this sentence follows the rule.<br />

The boys’ bicycles are missing.<br />

(a) Which word is the apostrophe after?<br />

(b) Who owns the bicycles?<br />

(c) Does this apostrophe follow the rule? Yes No<br />

3. Check if this sentence follows the rule.<br />

The boy’s scooter is new.<br />

(a) Which word is the apostrophe after?<br />

(b) Who owns the scooter?<br />

(c) Does this apostrophe follow the rule? Yes No<br />

4. Use an apostrophe to show that Dad owns the car.<br />

It is .<br />

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WHO OWNS WHAT?<br />

RULE 1: An apostrophe is placed after the owner or the owners.<br />

1. Use the rule. It will help you to find and write the name of the owner or owners.<br />

(a) Miss Muffet’s spider<br />

(b) the spider’s web<br />

2. Write the name of the owner/s. Put a tick or cross to show if it follows the<br />

rule.<br />

(a) Cinderella’s slipper<br />

(b) The stepsisters’ dresses<br />

(c) The prince’s ball<br />

(d) The coach’s wheels<br />

(e) The godmother’s wand<br />

3. Who owns what? Use ‘s’ and an apostrophe to show the owners.<br />

wolf Red Riding Hood Grandmother woodcutter<br />

(a)<br />

(b) the<br />

(c) the<br />

(d)<br />

bed<br />

axe<br />

teeth<br />

basket<br />

4. (a) Draw a picture of something you own.<br />

(b) Write your name and use an apostrophe to tell who you are and what you<br />

own.<br />

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UNIT 12<br />

HOW MANY OWNERS?<br />

It is easy to work out if there is only one single owner or if there are<br />

plural owners. Just follow the steps.<br />

Step 1 Find the apostrophe.<br />

Step 2 Find the owner. (What is written just be<strong>for</strong>e the apostrophe?)<br />

Step 3 Ask yourself if there is one or more than one of them.<br />

The girls’ schoolbags were left on the bus.<br />

Let’s follow the steps to find out if there is one or more owners.<br />

Step 1 Read it, find the apostrophe and put a circle around it.<br />

Step 2 Find the owner or owners, underline and write on the line.<br />

The girls<br />

Step 3 Ask yourself if there is one or more owners. Tick one box.<br />

one owner more than one owner ✓<br />

1. Follow the three steps.<br />

• Circle the apostrophe.<br />

• Underline and write the owner/owners.<br />

• Tick one box.<br />

(a) the teacher’s cars<br />

owner/owners<br />

one owner<br />

more than one owner<br />

(b) the doctors’ surgery<br />

owner/owners<br />

one owner<br />

more than one owner<br />

(c) the birds’ nest<br />

owner/owners<br />

one owner<br />

more than one owner<br />

(d) the dog’s collar<br />

owner/owners<br />

one owner<br />

more than one owner<br />

(e) the cats’ food<br />

owner/owners<br />

one owner<br />

more than one owner<br />

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PRACTISE USING APOSTROPHES<br />

RULE 2: There must be an ‘s’ be<strong>for</strong>e or after the apostrophe showing<br />

ownership.<br />

If the owner or owners do not have an ‘s’ at the end, it has to be added.<br />

• The book that belongs to Jane is Jane’s book.<br />

• The book that belongs to the children is the children’s book.<br />

If the owners have an ‘s’ at the end there is no need to add one.<br />

• The book that belongs to the babies is the babies’ book.<br />

• The book that belongs to the teachers is the teachers’ book.<br />

1. Add an apostrophe to show ownership. The owners all end with ‘s’ so there<br />

is no need to add one.<br />

(a) The cat belongs to the brothers. It is the cat.<br />

(b) The hats belong to the girls. They are the hats.<br />

(c) The chicks belong to the birds. They are the chicks.<br />

(d) The honey belongs to the bees. It is the honey.<br />

2. Add an apostrophe to show ownership. The owners do not end with ‘s’ so an<br />

‘s’ needs to be added.<br />

(a) The cat belongs to my sister. It is my cat.<br />

(b) The hats belong to the lady. They are the hats.<br />

(c) The chicks belong to the hen. They are this chicks.<br />

(d) The honey belongs to the children. It is the<br />

honey.<br />

3. Change the word order so Jake’s name has an apostrophe and his friends don’t.<br />

(a) Jake and John’s toys<br />

(b) Jake and Oliver’s bikes<br />

(c) Jake and Chloe’s teacher<br />

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ASSESSMENT UNIT 9<br />

USING PUNCTUATION IN SENTENCES<br />

Name:<br />

Date:<br />

on sunday we went to the zoo while we were there we saw an<br />

elephant called trisha she is an african elephant and she is huge<br />

1. (a) Use a red pen or pencil to add the missing capital letters and full stops.<br />

(b) How many capital letters did you need?<br />

(c) How many capital letters<br />

did you need <strong>for</strong> proper nouns?<br />

(d) How many full stops did you add?<br />

2. Write a proper noun that tells you:<br />

(a) a person’s name<br />

(b) a country<br />

(c) the name of your school<br />

3. Write a sentence with a proper noun.<br />

4. Put a tick in the box if the <strong>punctuation</strong> is correct.<br />

(a) Run fast? (b) Go away! (c) Where are you.<br />

5. Write the sentence with a question mark, full stop or exclamation mark.<br />

(a) Is Trisha happy<br />

(b) She is huge<br />

(c) How old is she<br />

(d) Trisha is an elephant<br />

6. Put a tick in the box if the <strong>punctuation</strong> is correct.<br />

(a) doctor Smith (b) an adventure book (c) Globe Theatre<br />

7. Circle the errors and write the sentence correctly.<br />

we went to the zoo in london last tuesday<br />

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ASSESSMENT UNIT 10<br />

FULL STOPS, CAPITAL LETTERS, COMMAS,<br />

DIRECT SPEECH<br />

Name:<br />

Date:<br />

1. Put a full stop in the box after a complete sentence. Leave it blank otherwise.<br />

(a) admiring her reflection in the water<br />

(b) The ugly frog was sitting on a lily pad<br />

2. Rewrite the sentence. Put full stops where needed.<br />

The princess kissed the frog he didn’t turn into a prince<br />

3. Rewrite the sentence. Put capitals where needed.<br />

princess amy lived with her father, king robert, in star palace in london.<br />

4. Rewrite the sentence. Put commas where needed.<br />

(a) Princesses princes queens and kings all live in palaces.<br />

(b) My sister Princess Anne is beautiful.<br />

5. Does the sentence need quotation marks?<br />

(a) Princess Amy said she would not kiss the frog. Yes No<br />

(b) Can you please kiss me? asked the frog. Yes No<br />

6. Rewrite the sentence. Add quotation marks where needed.<br />

(a) Jump back into the pond! shouted the princess to the frog.<br />

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ASSESSMENT UNIT 11<br />

APOSTROPHES IN CONTRACTIONS<br />

Name:<br />

Date:<br />

1. Circle the contractions. Write them as two words.<br />

(a) They’re going fishing tomorrow.<br />

(b) We’ll enjoy the fish they catch.<br />

2. Rewrite the sentences using contractions.<br />

(a) I am visiting my friend today.<br />

(b) She is kind and caring.<br />

3. Join the two words to make a contraction. Don’t <strong>for</strong>get to use an apostrophe.<br />

(a) she will<br />

(c) I have<br />

(b) they are<br />

(d) we had<br />

4. (a) Write a sentence about school rules using ‘don’t’.<br />

(b) Write a sentence about your classroom using ‘won’t’.<br />

5. Circle the correct words.<br />

(a)<br />

Its It's my turn to give the cat its it's dinner.<br />

(b) Its It's fun to watch the bird feed its it's babies .<br />

6. (a) Write your own sentence using ‘it’s’.<br />

(b) Write your own sentence using ‘its’.<br />

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ASSESSMENT UNIT 12<br />

APOSTROPHES FOR POSSESSION<br />

1. Complete the rule:<br />

An apostrophe is placed<br />

the owner or owners.<br />

2. Write the name of the owner or owners.<br />

(a) my sister’s dog<br />

(b) his friends’ bags<br />

(c) Dad and Mum’s house<br />

(d) the monkeys’ cage<br />

3. Follow the three steps.<br />

• Circle the apostrophe.<br />

• Underline and write the owner/owners.<br />

• Tick one box.<br />

(a) the player’s coach<br />

owner/owners<br />

one owner<br />

more than one owner<br />

(b) their parents’ car<br />

owner/owners<br />

one owner<br />

more than one owner<br />

(c) Jack and Jill’s bucket<br />

owner/owners<br />

one owner<br />

more than one owner<br />

4. Add an apostrophe to show ownership.<br />

(a) The pet belongs to the girls. It is the pet.<br />

(b) The cages belong to the birds. They are the cages.<br />

(c) The kennel belongs to the dog. It is the kennel.<br />

5. (a) Write the name of your best friend.<br />

(b) What is something he or she owns?<br />

(c) It is .<br />

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