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BOOK B<br />
TEACHING<br />
STRATEGIES<br />
FOR WRITING<br />
Punctuation<br />
Australian Primary Publisher<br />
of the Year 2015 and 2016
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book B)<br />
Published by R.I.C. Publications ® 2018<br />
Copyright © Diane Henderson and Rosemary Morris 2018<br />
<strong>RIC</strong>–<strong>20792</strong><br />
Titles in this series:<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book A)<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book B)<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book C)<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book D)<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book E)<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book F)<br />
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FOREWORD<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing is series of six books using modelling, guided and independent practice to teach<br />
students strategies they can use to improve the clarity, correctness and richness of their writing. The focus is on<br />
sentences, their structure, <strong>punctuation</strong> and word choices and on developing editing and proofreading skills and their<br />
habitual use.<br />
Titles in this series:<br />
• <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book A) • <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book D)<br />
• <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book B) • <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book E)<br />
• <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book C) • <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book F)<br />
TABLE OF CONTENTS<br />
Teacher notes ........................................................................................................................ iv–v<br />
Class recording sheets<br />
Assessment activities ..................................................................................................... vi–ix<br />
Assessment writing .......................................................................................................... x–xi<br />
Student writing checklist ........................................................................................................ xii<br />
Student self-evaluation ......................................................................................................... xiii<br />
WORD CHOICES<br />
Unit 1 Nouns, noun groups and adjectives ............................................................ 2–7<br />
Unit 2 Pronouns, confusing pronouns (me/I), which pronoun? ........................... 8–13<br />
Unit 3 Verbs and adverbials ................................................................................ 14–19<br />
Unit 4 Verbs: tense, matching verbs .................................................................. 20–25<br />
Assessment................................................................................................................... 26–29<br />
SENTENCE STRUCTURE<br />
Unit 5 Sentences, word order, questions ........................................................... 30–35<br />
Unit 6 Sentence beginnings ............................................................................... 36–41<br />
Unit 7 Conjunctions ............................................................................................ 42–47<br />
Unit 8 Paragraphs ............................................................................................... 48–53<br />
Assessment................................................................................................................... 54–57<br />
PUNCTUATION<br />
Unit 9 Using <strong>punctuation</strong> in sentences .............................................................. 58–63<br />
Unit 10 Full stops, capital letters, commas, direct speech ................................. 64–69<br />
Unit 11 Apostrophes in contractions ................................................................... 70–75<br />
Unit 12 Apostrophes <strong>for</strong> possession .................................................................... 76–81<br />
Assessment................................................................................................................... 82–85<br />
EDITING AND PROOFREADING<br />
Unit 13<br />
Unit 14<br />
Unit 15<br />
Unit 16<br />
Spelling (vowel sounds), sentence structure,<br />
<strong>punctuation</strong>, word choices, editing ........................................................ 86–91<br />
Spelling (more vowel sounds), sentence structure,<br />
<strong>punctuation</strong>, word choices, editing ......................................................... 92–97<br />
Spelling (suffixes), sentence structure,<br />
<strong>punctuation</strong>, word choices, editing ....................................................... 98–103<br />
Spelling (homophones), sentence structure,<br />
<strong>punctuation</strong>, word choices, editing ..................................................... 104–109<br />
Assessment............................................................................................................... 110–113<br />
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TEACHER NOTES<br />
ABOUT WRITING<br />
A good writer is not simply one who knows about and can<br />
use text types. A good writer is one with the capacity to<br />
produce interesting, in<strong>for</strong>mative, grammatically correct<br />
text, <strong>for</strong> a specific purpose, that achieves any writer’s<br />
intent – clear, precise communication.<br />
TEACHING WRITING<br />
Students can and should be taught strategies that will<br />
help them to write better. These include improvements<br />
in word choices, sentence structure, <strong>punctuation</strong> and<br />
editing and proofreading. <strong>Writing</strong> strategies taught<br />
should be modelled, discussed and then applied, firstly<br />
with teacher support and then independently. However,<br />
the emphasis should always be on the writing process,<br />
which requires <strong>for</strong>ethought, planning and a rational,<br />
measured approach in order to produce the desired<br />
outcome. Editing and proofreading are essential<br />
components of any writing. It is important that students<br />
edit and proofread habitually, with a specific purpose,<br />
and concentrate on the careful consideration of each<br />
sentence, one at a time. Activities provided in this series<br />
encourage students to think about appropriate aspects<br />
of their writing be<strong>for</strong>e, during and after the process.<br />
LESSON PROCEDURE<br />
Introduction<br />
Discuss the text title with students. Ask <strong>for</strong> their<br />
interpretations of what the title could mean.<br />
Discuss the text type. Why does it fit into this category?<br />
What are the specific features of this type of text?<br />
Guide the discussion to introduce the teaching points/<br />
strategies to be covered during the course of the unit.<br />
For example, check they understand terms such as noun<br />
group, adverbial, sentence, paragraph and comma.<br />
Development<br />
Read and discuss the text, either in groups or as a<br />
class. Assist students with any unfamiliar vocabulary or<br />
expressions.<br />
Differentiation<br />
Work through the introductory activities with the class<br />
as a whole, ensuring students understand what is<br />
required of them.<br />
Work with those requiring additional assistance while<br />
the remainder of the class work independently on the<br />
activities.<br />
ASSESSMENT<br />
An assessment is included <strong>for</strong> each unit in the book.<br />
Because of the way it is structured, this assessment<br />
will allow you to see individual student’s understandings<br />
as well as any common points of weakness which may<br />
require further assistance.<br />
FORMAT<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing is organised into four<br />
sections:<br />
Word choices<br />
Punctuation<br />
Sentence structure<br />
Editing and proofreading<br />
Each section has four units of work and one assessment<br />
unit.<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> units<br />
Each six-page unit of work has a specific focus, two<br />
teacher pages and four activity pages.<br />
Assessment units<br />
• Following each section is a four-page unit of<br />
assessment activities–one page <strong>for</strong> each unit.<br />
• Answers are provided in the teacher pages <strong>for</strong> that<br />
unit.<br />
• Teacher record sheets – see pages vi–ix.<br />
Assessment writing tasks<br />
• A suggested paragraph writing topic <strong>for</strong> each unit is<br />
provided on the teacher pages.<br />
• Teacher recording sheet – see pages x–xi.<br />
• Student writing checklist – see page xii.<br />
• Student self-evaluation – see page xiii.<br />
Review<br />
In pairs or small groups, students review their answers,<br />
giving their reasoning where required and critiquing the<br />
longer sentence or paragraph responses.<br />
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TEACHER NOTES<br />
Sample open pages<br />
TEACHER INFORMATION<br />
TEACHER INFORMATION<br />
UNIT 1<br />
NOUNS, NOUN GROUPS<br />
AND ADJECTIVES<br />
UNIT 1<br />
NOUNS, NOUN GROUPS<br />
AND ADJECTIVES<br />
Focus<br />
Word choices – nouns, noun groups and adjectives<br />
Progression<br />
Recognise<br />
Students will recognise a noun/noun group/adjective from<br />
modelled examples.<br />
Choose<br />
Students will choose in<strong>for</strong>mative nouns/noun groups/adjectives<br />
from given examples, with teacher support.<br />
Use<br />
Students will choose and use appropriate, in<strong>for</strong>mative nouns/noun<br />
groups/adjectives in supplied and self-written sentences.<br />
Definition of terms<br />
Nouns are words used to name people, places, things, feelings and<br />
ideas.<br />
A noun group is a noun with other words used to name people,<br />
places, things, feelings and ideas.<br />
Adjectives are describing words adding to or changing the<br />
meaning of a noun or pronoun.<br />
Introduction<br />
Good writers improve their writing by their choice of words used<br />
to correctly name people, places, things, feelings and ideas. They<br />
can choose words to add in<strong>for</strong>mation to nouns to make a more<br />
precise noun group. Noun groups have a noun, plus:<br />
• a determiner; e.g. the fish, many chips<br />
• a possessive; e.g. the boy’s pasta, Dad’s food<br />
• an adjective; e.g. tasty meal, sun-dried tomatoes<br />
LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />
Introduction<br />
• Discuss the text title and layout with students.<br />
• Do they think the text will be an imaginative story or will it be giving<br />
them in<strong>for</strong>mation?<br />
• Why do they think this? What are some of the features of in<strong>for</strong>mative<br />
text?<br />
• What is the purpose of the illustrations?<br />
• List foods they like to eat. Do they know which country their favourite<br />
food is from?<br />
• Introduce the term ‘noun’ and explain that the words naming different<br />
foods are nouns.<br />
• Read the text with or to the class.<br />
• Identify some of the nouns used in the text to name foods.<br />
• Identify nouns used to name people places and things.<br />
• Identify nouns with capital letters. What do these nouns name? Why<br />
do these nouns have capital letters?<br />
Nouns – Page 5<br />
• Read and discuss the definition at the top of the page.<br />
• Explain that the text is divided into paragraphs with subheadings<br />
which have been numbered so it will be easier to find words.<br />
• Discuss why nouns are an important part of every sentence and why<br />
it is important <strong>for</strong> writers to think about nouns and to choose good,<br />
interesting and in<strong>for</strong>mative nouns.<br />
• Explain that good writers think about different words to name the<br />
same thing (synonyms) be<strong>for</strong>e choosing the best one.<br />
• Work through the activities with the class as a whole, ensuring they<br />
understand what is required of them.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
Noun groups – Page 6<br />
ANSWERS<br />
Nouns – Page 5<br />
1. (a) people<br />
(b) honey<br />
(c) drink<br />
(d) Aztecs<br />
2. (a) damper<br />
(b) sandwich<br />
(c) chocolate<br />
(d) pasta<br />
3. Teacher check<br />
Noun groups – Page 6<br />
1. (a) thick dough<br />
(b) most popular food<br />
(c) more than a thousand years<br />
2.–3. Teacher check<br />
4. Answers may include:<br />
sun-dried tomatoes, Australian bread, a heavy iron camp oven<br />
5. Teacher check<br />
Adjectives – Page 7<br />
1. Teacher check<br />
2. (a) solid<br />
(b) ancient<br />
(c) Swiss<br />
3.–5. Teacher check<br />
ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />
Assessment activity – Page 26<br />
1. (a) sandwich<br />
(b) Chocolate<br />
(c) flour<br />
(d) pasta<br />
2. Teacher check<br />
3. their most popular food<br />
4.–6. Teacher check<br />
Class record sheet – Page vi<br />
ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />
• Paragraph topic – My country’s most popular food<br />
• Focus: Word choices – nouns, noun groups and adjectives<br />
Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />
• nouns; e.g. kitchen benches, camp oven<br />
• Read and discuss the definition at the top of the page.<br />
• a number; e.g. five tomatoes<br />
• Explain that often instead of using one word to name something,<br />
good writers add more in<strong>for</strong>mation by writing a group of words.<br />
• Provide examples of noun groups including the word ‘book’ plus<br />
a determiner—e.g. my book, this book, some books—and with<br />
adjectives; e.g. a scary book.<br />
• Show by example how careful choice of noun groups can lead to a<br />
clearer understanding by the reader. (For example, The boy ran home<br />
vs The small, terrified boy ran home.)<br />
Adjectives – Page 7<br />
• Read and discuss the definition at the top of the page.<br />
• Brainstorm adjectives to describe food using their sense of<br />
taste, smell, hearing and touch. This will assist them to complete<br />
Question 5.<br />
• Provide opportunities to share their answers to Question 5.<br />
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UNIT 1<br />
WORLD FOODS<br />
Chocolate<br />
1. Chocolate came from ancient Central America. The<br />
Aztecs there made a drink from cocoa beans. But<br />
it tasted very bitter and was frothy. When chocolate<br />
was taken to Europe, people added sugar and honey.<br />
This made it sweeter to drink. It wasn’t until the 1800s<br />
that solid chocolate appeared. Now Swiss people eat<br />
chocolate more than any other people in the whole of<br />
Europe and the world.<br />
Sandwiches<br />
2. The sandwich gets its name from a British earl. Once, back in the 1700s,<br />
the Earl of Sandwich, who was busy playing cards, didn’t want to leave the<br />
table to eat. So he ordered a servant to put some meat<br />
between two slices of bread—and the sandwich was<br />
named. Although people had eaten food between<br />
bread, it didn’t have a name be<strong>for</strong>e this happened.<br />
Damper<br />
3. Damper is an Australian bread. It was made by stockmen or drovers<br />
using just flour, salt and water. It was easy to make and very filling. The<br />
ingredients they needed kept <strong>for</strong> a long time without<br />
spoiling. Today, campers still make damper, usually<br />
in a heavy iron camp oven. They also can add more<br />
ingredients to make it tastier, like cheese, chives,<br />
butter, milk and sun-dried tomatoes.<br />
Pasta<br />
4. Pasta, the most popular food in Italy today, was probably invented in a<br />
part of Italy called Sicily more than a thousand years ago! This popular<br />
food is easy to cook and is very filling. Pasta is made<br />
from flour and water, mixed into a thick dough. It is<br />
shaped into different types of pasta and dried. Today,<br />
there are about 350 different types of pasta, all with<br />
different names. For example, ‘spaghetti’ means ‘little<br />
strings’, while ‘orecchiette’ means ‘little ears’ and<br />
‘linguini’ means ‘little tongues’.<br />
UNIT 1<br />
NOUNS<br />
Nouns are naming words <strong>for</strong> people, places and things.<br />
For example: servants, Italy, chocolate<br />
Good writers choose their nouns carefully.<br />
1. Which noun in Paragraph 1 means:<br />
(a) men, women and children<br />
(b) something made by bees<br />
(c) a liquid<br />
(d) people from a country<br />
in Central America<br />
2. Choose the best noun <strong>for</strong> each sentence.<br />
damper pasta sandwich chocolate<br />
(a) The campers cooked some<br />
over an open fire.<br />
(b) I like to put cheese and tomato in a .<br />
(c) Ice cream tastes great with<br />
topping.<br />
(d) My favourite Italian food is .<br />
3. Write an interesting sentence <strong>for</strong> each noun.<br />
(a) drovers<br />
(b) oven<br />
(c) ingredient<br />
(d) table<br />
(e) cheese<br />
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UNIT 1<br />
NOUN GROUPS<br />
A noun group is a noun with other words which add more<br />
in<strong>for</strong>mation about the noun.<br />
For example: cold, white, frothy milk; some milk; my milk.<br />
Good writers use in<strong>for</strong>mative noun groups.<br />
1. Write the whole noun group from Paragraph 4.<br />
(a) dough<br />
(b) food<br />
(c) years<br />
2. Add some words to each noun to make an in<strong>for</strong>mative noun group.<br />
(a) butter<br />
(b) bread<br />
(c) meat<br />
(d) sandwich<br />
3. Write an interesting sentence using one of the noun groups from Question 2.<br />
UNIT 1<br />
ADJECTIVES<br />
Adjectives are describing words. They can tell more about a noun.<br />
For example: a delicious, tasty dish<br />
1. Choose one or two interesting adjectives you could use to describe each noun.<br />
(a) people<br />
(b) tables<br />
(c) spaghetti<br />
2. Write the adjective used in Paragraph 1 to describe each noun.<br />
(a)<br />
chocolate<br />
(b)<br />
Central America<br />
(c)<br />
people<br />
3. Use each adjective to describe a noun in an interesting sentence.<br />
(a) delicious<br />
(b) popular<br />
4. Find two noun groups from Paragraph 3.<br />
(a)<br />
(b)<br />
5. (a) Write a noun group using the word 'campers'.<br />
4. Add adjectives to make the sentences more descriptive.<br />
(a) The girl cooked some pasta.<br />
(b) A chef made a sandwich.<br />
5. Write a paragraph about your favourite food on the back of this page. Be<strong>for</strong>e<br />
you start, think about adjectives you could use to tell how it looks, tastes,<br />
smells, sounds and feels. Write some of these adjectives in the box below.<br />
(b) Use this noun group in an interesting sentence.<br />
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CLASS RECORD<br />
ASSESSMENT ACTIVITIES<br />
Date:<br />
Name Unit 9 Unit 10 Unit 11 Unit 12<br />
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ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />
CLASS RECORD<br />
Name: Unit: Date:<br />
Paragraph topic:<br />
Name<br />
Comment<br />
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STUDENT WRITING CHECKLIST<br />
Name:<br />
Date:<br />
Paragraph topic:<br />
Sentences<br />
• Does each sentence make sense by itself? .........................................................<br />
• Is it too long or too short? .....................................................................................<br />
• Do I need to join some sentences? .......................................................................<br />
• Are the beginnings interesting?............................................................................<br />
Punctuation<br />
Have I used:<br />
• capital letters to start sentences, and proper nouns?..........................................<br />
• full stops, question marks and exclamation marks?............................................<br />
• commas?................................................................................................................<br />
• apostrophes <strong>for</strong> contractions and possession?....................................................<br />
• speech marks? ......................................................................................................<br />
Words<br />
• Are there some boring verbs? ...............................................................................<br />
• Is the verb tense correct? .....................................................................................<br />
• Do some verbs need adverbials (how, when, where)?..........................................<br />
• Can I add adjectives to tell more about nouns and pronouns?.............................<br />
Spelling<br />
• I have checked <strong>for</strong> spelling errors.........................................................................<br />
• I have made corrections........................................................................................<br />
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STUDENT SELF-EVALUATION<br />
Name: Unit: Date:<br />
I wrote a paragraph about:<br />
My goal was to focus on:<br />
How well did I achieve my goal?<br />
Two things I did well in my writing were:<br />
Next time I write a paragraph I will try to:<br />
STUDENT SELF-EVALUATION<br />
Name: Unit: Date:<br />
I wrote a paragraph about:<br />
My goal was to focus on:<br />
How well did I achieve my goal?<br />
Two things I did well in my writing were:<br />
Next time I write a paragraph I will try to:<br />
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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />
UNIT 9<br />
USING PUNCTUATION IN<br />
SENTENCES<br />
Focus<br />
Punctuation – using <strong>punctuation</strong> in sentences<br />
Progression<br />
Recognise<br />
Students will recognise specified <strong>punctuation</strong> from modelled<br />
examples.<br />
Choose<br />
Students will choose appropriate <strong>punctuation</strong> <strong>for</strong> sentences, with<br />
teacher support.<br />
Use<br />
Students will correctly punctuate supplied and self-written<br />
sentences.<br />
Definition of terms<br />
A sentence is a set of words that makes sense by itself. It may be<br />
a statement, a question, an exclamation or a command.<br />
Capital letters are used at the beginning of a new sentence and<br />
<strong>for</strong> proper nouns.<br />
Proper nouns are nouns used <strong>for</strong> naming a particular person,<br />
place or thing.<br />
A full stop is used at the end of a sentence.<br />
A question mark is used at the end of a question.<br />
An exclamation mark is used at the end of an exclamation.<br />
Introduction<br />
Good writers improve their writing by using correct <strong>punctuation</strong>.<br />
Teacher in<strong>for</strong>mation<br />
Punctuation enables a writer to more fully and accurately<br />
communicate with the reader by making the writing more<br />
understandable.<br />
LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />
Introduction<br />
• Read a teacher-selected short passage to the class, ignoring the<br />
<strong>punctuation</strong> and exaggerating the effects.<br />
• Ask students if they had difficulty understanding the passage.<br />
• Elicit from students the reason(s) why it was hard to understand.<br />
• Question how <strong>punctuation</strong> makes text easier to understand. List<br />
student responses and discuss.<br />
Do we need <strong>punctuation</strong>? – Page 60<br />
• Set students to work in pairs to complete Questions 1 to 5.<br />
• In small groups, discuss their answers to Question 5. How similar<br />
were they? Why?<br />
Capital letters – Page 61<br />
• Read and discuss the text.<br />
• Ask ‘What is missing?’ and list answers.<br />
• Question students to obtain a clear definition of what full stops and<br />
proper nouns are.<br />
• Emphasise that a capital is needed <strong>for</strong> proper nouns; <strong>for</strong> example,<br />
South Lake, Wellstead River, Washington, DC.<br />
• Explain that mum and dad only need a capital letter when used<br />
instead of their names; <strong>for</strong> example, My mum and dad love boating<br />
— I asked Dad if we could stay longer on the river.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
• Encourage students in small groups or as a class to discuss their<br />
responses to Question 4.<br />
Short sentences – Page 62<br />
• Read the text at the top of the page.<br />
• Ensure students are familiar with the features of a sentence, a<br />
command, an exclamation and a question, including their specific<br />
<strong>punctuation</strong>.<br />
• Brainstorm other examples with the class.<br />
• Explain that some sentences can be very short and the number of<br />
words doesn’t affect whether or not a group of words is a sentence.<br />
• Provide opportunities <strong>for</strong> students to discuss, in pairs, their answers<br />
to Question 3.<br />
Is it correct? – Page 63<br />
• Discuss the <strong>punctuation</strong> required <strong>for</strong> beginning and ending<br />
sentences, proper nouns, questions, exclamations and commands.<br />
• Provide examples.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
• Students will benefit from the opportunity to check a partner’s<br />
<strong>punctuation</strong> in his or her answer to Question 2.<br />
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UNIT 9<br />
USING PUNCTUATION IN<br />
SENTENCES<br />
ANSWERS<br />
Do we need <strong>punctuation</strong>? – Page 60<br />
1. Teacher check<br />
2. (a) 5<br />
(b) 2<br />
(c) 3<br />
3. elephants (first mention) and hide<br />
4.–5. Teacher check<br />
Capital letters – Page 61<br />
1. (a) Teacher check<br />
(b) 7<br />
(c) 3<br />
(d) Mum, Dad, Zoe, Thailand<br />
2.–4. Teacher check<br />
Short sentences – Page 62<br />
1. (a) a capital letter<br />
(b) no<br />
(c) question mark, full stop, exclamation mark<br />
2. (a) Wow, that’s really awesome!<br />
(b)–(d) Teacher check<br />
ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />
Assessment activity – Page 82<br />
1. (a) Teacher check<br />
(b) 6<br />
(c) 3<br />
(d) 3<br />
2.–3. Teacher check<br />
4. (a) ✘ (b) ✓ (c) ✘<br />
5. (a) Is Trisha happy?<br />
(b) She is huge!<br />
(c) How old is she?<br />
(d) Trisha is an elephant.<br />
6. (a) ✘ (b) ✓ (c) ✓<br />
7. We went to the zoo in London last Tuesday.<br />
Class recording sheet – Page viii<br />
ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />
• Paragraph topic – I want to ride a .<br />
• Focus: Punctuation – using <strong>punctuation</strong> in sentences<br />
Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />
3. Teacher check<br />
Is it correct? – Page 63<br />
1. (a) I want to ride an elephant.<br />
(b) We’ll go <strong>for</strong> a ride on Wednesday.<br />
(c) May I feed the elephant?<br />
(d) Look now!<br />
2. Teacher check. Full <strong>punctuation</strong>:<br />
Hold on tight when we are going down the hill. You’ll see my<br />
elephant keeping three feet on the ground at all times so he<br />
doesn’t slip. Do you think he’s clever?<br />
3. (a) true<br />
(b) false<br />
(c) true<br />
4. (a) ✓<br />
(b) ✘<br />
(c) ✘<br />
(d) ✘<br />
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UNIT 9<br />
DO WE NEED PUNCTUATION?<br />
Elephants<br />
My sister zoe loves big grey elephants if<br />
she saw a wild one coming towards her<br />
with its trunk up she would run and hide<br />
in africa the elephants are much bigger<br />
than the ones in asia.<br />
1. Read Elephants aloud to a partner.<br />
(a) Was it easy <strong>for</strong> you to read?<br />
(b) Do you think your partner understood it?<br />
(c) What was missing from the story?<br />
2. Use a red pencil to change some letter to capitals.<br />
(a) How many did you need to change?<br />
(b) How many were at the beginning of a sentence?<br />
(c) How many were names of people or places?<br />
3. Add two full stops. Which words did you put a full stop after?<br />
and<br />
4. Read Elephants to your partner again.<br />
(a) Was it easier to read this time?<br />
(b) Do you think your partner understood it better this time?<br />
5. (a) Do you think adding <strong>punctuation</strong> is a good thing to do?<br />
(b) Why do you think this?<br />
(c) Which <strong>punctuation</strong> do you think is the most important <strong>for</strong> a writer to use?<br />
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CAPITAL LETTERS<br />
Capital letters are used at the beginning of a new sentence and<br />
<strong>for</strong> proper nouns.<br />
Proper nouns are nouns used <strong>for</strong> the name of a person, place or<br />
thing.<br />
For example: Zoe South Africa Victoria Falls<br />
The elephant ride<br />
when mum, dad, zoe and I were in thailand we went <strong>for</strong> an<br />
elephant ride through the jungle. it was quite scary when<br />
the elephant had to go down a steep jungle path. there<br />
had been lots of rain and it was very wet and slippery.<br />
1. (a) Use a red pencil or pen to put capital letters in the text.<br />
(b) How many capital letters did you need to add?<br />
(c) How many sentences are in the text?<br />
(d) Write the proper nouns from the text.<br />
2. (a) Write two sentences about a place someone you know likes to visit. Use<br />
capital letters to name the place and the person who enjoys going there.<br />
(b) How many proper nouns did you use in your sentences?<br />
3. Write a proper noun that tells you the name of:<br />
(a) a country<br />
(c) your teacher<br />
(e) a day of the week<br />
(b) a city<br />
(d) a river<br />
(f) a shop<br />
4. Write an interesting sentence using a proper noun from Question 3.<br />
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SHORT SENTENCES<br />
Where is it? Wow, that’s really awesome! Let’s go!<br />
Add sugar. Jump on. Be quick! What is it?<br />
Look, no hands! Who said that? Don’t drop it! Be careful!<br />
1. Read the short sentences. They are all sentences because they make sense<br />
by themselves.<br />
(a) What do they all start with?<br />
(b) Do they all use the same <strong>punctuation</strong> mark at the end?<br />
(c) What are the three <strong>punctuation</strong>s used at the end of<br />
.<br />
these sentences?<br />
? ,<br />
2. (a) Write the longest sentence.<br />
! “<br />
(b) Write one of the exclamations.<br />
(c) Write one of the commands.<br />
(d) Write one of the questions.<br />
3. (a) Write a question with fewer than five words.<br />
(b) Write an exclamation with three words.<br />
(c) Write a command with four words.<br />
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IS IT CORRECT?<br />
1. Find the <strong>punctuation</strong> error in each sentence.<br />
Write the sentence correctly.<br />
(a) I want to ride an elephant?<br />
(b) We’ll go <strong>for</strong> a ride on wednesday.<br />
(c) May I feed the elephant!<br />
(d) Look now.<br />
2. Find and circle the <strong>punctuation</strong> errors. Write the paragraph correctly.<br />
hold on tight when we are going down the hill.<br />
you’ll see my Elephant keeping three feet on the<br />
ground at all times so he doesn’t slip Do you<br />
think he’s clever<br />
3. Tick ‘true’ or ‘false’.<br />
(a) Capital letters are needed <strong>for</strong> the days of the week. True False<br />
(b) The words ‘summer’ and ‘winter’ need capitals. True False<br />
(c) The name doctor smith needs two capitals. True False<br />
4. Put a tick in the box if the <strong>punctuation</strong> is correct.<br />
(a) It’s Tuesday.<br />
(c) Where is Thailand!<br />
(b) Some elephants live in asia.<br />
(d) Add water!<br />
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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />
UNIT 10<br />
FULL STOPS, CAPITAL LETTERS,<br />
COMMAS, DIRECT SPEECH<br />
Focus<br />
Punctuation – full stops, capital letters, commas, direct speech<br />
Progression<br />
Recognise<br />
Students will recognise specified <strong>punctuation</strong> from modelled<br />
examples.<br />
Choose<br />
Students will choose appropriate <strong>punctuation</strong> <strong>for</strong> sentences, with<br />
teacher support.<br />
Use<br />
Students will correctly punctuate supplied and self-written<br />
sentences.<br />
Definition of terms<br />
A sentence is a set of words that makes sense by itself. It may be a<br />
statement, a question, an exclamation or a command.<br />
A paragraph enables a writer to organise and combine ideas to<br />
aid comprehension.<br />
A topic sentence is a sentence in a paragraph that introduces the<br />
main idea of that paragraph.<br />
Introduction<br />
Good writers improve their writing by using correct <strong>punctuation</strong>.<br />
Teacher in<strong>for</strong>mation<br />
Punctuation enables a writer to more fully and accurately<br />
communicate with the reader.<br />
Note: There is more than one method of punctuating direct speech.<br />
(Two different methods are given in the Answers.) Whichever<br />
method is chosen, it must be consistently used.<br />
LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />
Introduction<br />
• Discuss the text title.<br />
• Read the text with or to the class.<br />
• Ask students to identify the text type and discuss the features of<br />
narrative text.<br />
• Discuss the <strong>punctuation</strong> used.<br />
• Discuss how difficult it would be to read without <strong>punctuation</strong>.<br />
Note that there is more than one method of punctuating direct<br />
speech. (Two different methods are given in the Answers.) Whatever<br />
method is chosen, it must be consistently used.<br />
• Explain to students that they will see a comma used be<strong>for</strong>e the<br />
coordinating conjunction (the Ox<strong>for</strong>d comma or serial comma) in<br />
some publications. It is not incorrect to use it this way, but it is more<br />
common to not include the comma.<br />
Full stops – Page 66<br />
• Read and discuss the definition of full stops.<br />
• Discuss why it is so short.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
Capital letters – Page 67<br />
• Read and discuss the in<strong>for</strong>mation about the use of capital letters.<br />
• Revise the definition of a sentence with students.<br />
• Read with the class the statement about proper nouns. Ask <strong>for</strong><br />
further examples and list them on the board.<br />
• Emphasise that a capital is needed <strong>for</strong> names; hence ‘my uncle’ but<br />
‘Uncle Harry'.<br />
• Explain that mum and dad only need a capital letter when used<br />
instead of their names; <strong>for</strong> example, My mum and dad love animals<br />
— I asked Mum and Dad if I could have a pet.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
Commas – Page 68<br />
• Read the in<strong>for</strong>mation at the top of the page.<br />
• Provide opportunities <strong>for</strong> students to read aloud and discuss in pairs<br />
their answers in Question 2. Reading aloud will provide the natural<br />
pauses indicating the need <strong>for</strong> a comma.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
Direct speech – Page 69<br />
• Discuss the in<strong>for</strong>mation given about direct speech.<br />
• Emphasise that it is the actual words used. Elicit further examples.<br />
• Examine and discuss with the class the placement of <strong>punctuation</strong> in<br />
the example given. Ask why the <strong>punctuation</strong> is placed where it is.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
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FULL STOPS, CAPITAL LETTERS,<br />
COMMAS, DIRECT SPEECH<br />
ANSWERS<br />
Full stops – Page 66<br />
1. (a)–(c) Only (b) needs a full stop<br />
2. (a) The frog jumped into the pond. He disappeared.<br />
(b) The king wanted his daughter to get married. She kept<br />
saying no.<br />
(c) Frogs live in ponds. They can also live on land.<br />
Capital letters – Page 67<br />
1. (a) ✘ ✘<br />
(b) ✓ ✓<br />
(c) ✓ ✓<br />
2. (a) Amy was a very beautiful princess who didn’t like frogs.<br />
(b) The girl who kissed the frog’s name was Princess Amy.<br />
(c) Her father was the king and he was called King Robert.<br />
(d) Princess Amy lived in a palace near London.<br />
(e) The frog told Amy that she was a silly princess.<br />
Commas – Page 68<br />
1. (a) Amy enjoys reading, sewing and looking at herself.<br />
(b) King Robert’s horses are big, strong and well looked after.<br />
(c) Amy has pet cats, dogs and rabbits, but she doesn’t have a<br />
pet frog.<br />
2. Teacher check<br />
ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />
Assessment activity – Page 83<br />
1. (a) blank<br />
(b) full stop<br />
2. The princess kissed the frog. He didn’t turn into a prince.<br />
3. Princess Amy lived with her father, King Robert, in Star Palace in<br />
London.<br />
4. (a) Princesses, princes, queens and kings all live in palaces.<br />
(b) My sister, Princess Anne, is beautiful.<br />
5. (a) No<br />
(b) Yes – 'Can you please kiss me?' asked the frog.<br />
6. ‘Jump back into the pond!’ shouted the princess to the frog.<br />
Class recording sheet – Page viii<br />
ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />
• Paragraph topic – An animal I wouldn’t like to kiss<br />
• Focus: Punctuation – full stops, capital letters, commas, direct<br />
speech<br />
Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />
Direct speech – Page 69<br />
1. (a) Yes<br />
(b) Yes<br />
(c) No<br />
(d) Yes<br />
(e) No<br />
2. (a) ✘<br />
(b) ✓<br />
(c) ✓<br />
(d) ✘<br />
3. (a) ‘Why not?’ asked the frog.<br />
(b) ‘You are too ugly’, answered the princess./‘You are too ugly,’<br />
answered the princess.<br />
(c) Then Princess Amy said, ‘Are you really a handsome prince?’<br />
(d) ‘Well, you’ll just have to kiss me and find out’, he<br />
replied./‘Well, you’ll just have to kiss me and find out,’ he<br />
replied.<br />
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UNIT 10<br />
FULL STOPS<br />
Frog prince<br />
Princess Amy was the most beautiful princess. Princes came from far away asking<br />
to marry her, but none of them was good enough <strong>for</strong> this proud princess.<br />
Every day as she sat admiring her reflection in the water of the palace pond, she<br />
asked herself, ‘I am so lovely. Will I never find a husband good enough <strong>for</strong> me?’<br />
Then one day a voice replied, ‘Kiss me and I will be the man you love’.<br />
She looked down and there on a lily pad was<br />
the ugliest frog she’d ever seen.<br />
‘I’m the most beautiful princess and I don’t<br />
kiss frogs’, she rudely replied.<br />
‘But I am the most handsome prince. I was<br />
turned into a frog by a wicked witch’, he<br />
replied. ‘Kiss me and the spell will be broken.’<br />
Should she or shouldn’t she? Finally, she took<br />
a deep breath, closed her eyes and kissed him<br />
on his cold green lips.<br />
‘Yuck!’ she said when she opened her eyes again. ‘Why, you’re not a prince. You’re<br />
just a silly frog.’<br />
‘I may be a frog, but I’m the frog who persuaded a silly princess to kiss him!’ he<br />
croaked. He dived into the pond and disappeared.<br />
A full stop (.) is used to show the end of a sentence.<br />
1. Put a full stop in the box if it’s a complete sentence. Leave it blank if it is not.<br />
(a) It didn’t matter how many princes came she always<br />
(b) The spell wasn’t broken<br />
(c) The princess couldn’t decide if she should kiss the frog or<br />
2. Put full stops where needed.<br />
(a) The frog jumped into the pond He disappeared<br />
(b) The king wanted his daughter to get married She kept saying no<br />
(c) Frogs live in ponds They can also live on land<br />
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CAPITAL LETTERS<br />
A capital letter is used to start a sentence.<br />
1. Is it a sentence? Is a capital letter needed? Put a ✓ or ✘ in the boxes.<br />
(a) sitting on a lily pad It is a sentence. It needs a capital.<br />
(b) did she kiss the frog? It is a sentence. It needs a capital.<br />
(c) she didn’t think she<br />
would ever find a husband. It is a sentence. It needs a capital.<br />
Proper nouns are the names of people, places or things. They need a capital<br />
letter.<br />
For example: Amy, Peter’s Palace, America<br />
2. Rewrite the sentence using a capital letter <strong>for</strong> proper nouns.<br />
(a) amy was a very beautiful princess who didn’t like frogs.<br />
(b) The girl who kissed the frog’s name was princess amy.<br />
(c) Her father was the king and he was called king robert.<br />
(d) Princess amy lived in a palace near london.<br />
(e) The frog told amy that she was a silly princess.<br />
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COMMAS<br />
A comma is used to separate things in a list.<br />
For example: ‘I love apples, pears, strawberries and grapes.'<br />
There is no comma be<strong>for</strong>e 'and'.<br />
1. Rewrite the sentence, putting in commas where needed.<br />
(a) Amy enjoys reading sewing and looking at herself.<br />
(b) King Robert’s horses are big strong and well looked after.<br />
(c) Amy has pet cats dogs and rabbits, but she doesn’t have a pet frog.<br />
2. Write a list of:<br />
(a) children you would like to have at your party.<br />
I would like to invite<br />
to my party.<br />
(b) food you would like to eat at the party.<br />
I would like to eat<br />
at my party.<br />
(c) clothes you would like to wear.<br />
I would like to wear<br />
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DIRECT SPEECH<br />
When we write about people speaking, the words they say need speech marks.<br />
The speech marks are like two little hands around the words they say.<br />
• The frog said, ‘Give me a kiss’.<br />
• Princess Amy said, ‘I don’t kiss frogs’.<br />
1. Read the last paragraph in the text. Tick yes or no.<br />
(a) Are there any speech marks? Yes No<br />
(b) Is the frog speaking? Yes No<br />
(c) Does anyone else speak in this paragraph? Yes No<br />
(d) Is there a capital letter at the start of the speech? Yes No<br />
(e) Is there a question mark at the end of the speech? Yes No<br />
2. Put a tick in the box if the sentence needs speech marks and a cross if it<br />
doesn’t.<br />
(a) The frog asked the princess if he could have a kiss.<br />
(b) Then frog said, If you don’t kiss me, you’ll never find a husband.<br />
(c) No I won’t kiss you, the princess replied.<br />
(d) The princess said that she didn’t know what she should do.<br />
3. Put speech marks around the words they say.<br />
(a) Why not? asked the frog.<br />
(b) You are too ugly, answered the princess.<br />
(c) Then Princess Amy said, Are you really a handsome prince?<br />
(d) Well, you’ll just have to kiss me and find out, he replied.<br />
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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />
UNIT 11<br />
APOSTROPHES IN CONTRACTIONS<br />
Focus<br />
Punctuation – apostrophes in contractions<br />
Progression<br />
Recognise<br />
Students will recognise apostrophes in contractions in modelled<br />
examples.<br />
Choose<br />
Students will write contractions correctly, with teacher support.<br />
Use<br />
Students will write contractions correctly in supplied and selfwritten<br />
sentences.<br />
Definition of terms<br />
Contractions are new words made by joining two words and<br />
leaving out some letters.<br />
Apostrophes are <strong>punctuation</strong> marks used to show where letters<br />
are missing in contractions. (They are also used to show<br />
possession.)<br />
Introduction<br />
Good writers improve their writing by using apostrophes correctly.<br />
Teacher in<strong>for</strong>mation<br />
Punctuation enables a writer to more fully and accurately<br />
communicate with the reader.<br />
Contractions in most cases only present difficulty in writing, the<br />
exception being could’ve, would’ve and should’ve which are<br />
often pronounced as though followed by ‘of’ instead of ‘have’ and<br />
subsequently written that way.<br />
LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />
Introduction<br />
• Discuss apostrophes—what they are, where they are placed and why<br />
they are used; i.e. in contractions and to indicate possession.<br />
• Explain that the focus in this section will be on apostrophes in<br />
contractions and give some examples.<br />
• Explain that contractions are quicker and easier to say, and discuss<br />
and model a variety of examples.<br />
Apostrophes in contractions – Page 72<br />
• Read and discuss the definition at the top of the page.<br />
• Read the speech bubbles with the class and discuss why<br />
contractions are used in speech.<br />
• Work through the activities with the class, ensuring they understand<br />
what is required of them.<br />
Using contractions – Page 73<br />
• Students will be required to use ‘not’ in the contractions on this<br />
page.<br />
• Remind them that it is important to put an apostrophe in the correct<br />
place and ask which letters of the word ‘not’ are usually left out.<br />
• Give some examples of contractions with ‘not’ and discuss where the<br />
apostrophe is placed. (A common error is did’nt.)<br />
• Provide opportunities <strong>for</strong> students to practise pronouncing the<br />
contractions correctly.<br />
• Most students should be able to complete the page independently.<br />
Don't and won't – Page 74<br />
• Read the conversations on the page.<br />
• Discuss students’ answers to Question 1.<br />
• Students can share the sentences they wrote in Question 2.<br />
• Work through the activities with the class, ensuring they understand<br />
what is required of them.<br />
More contractions, It's or its? – Page 75<br />
• Discuss the use of 'its' and 'it’s' with students. Explain the difference<br />
and use of each.<br />
• Emphasise that it’s easy to work out which to use by asking the<br />
simple question, ‘Can I say “it is” here?’ If the answer is ‘yes’, an<br />
apostrophe is needed. Note: 'It has' is also contracted to 'it’s'.<br />
• Work through the activities with the class, ensuring they understand<br />
what is required of them.<br />
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APOSTROPHES IN CONTRACTIONS<br />
ANSWERS<br />
Apostrophes in contractions – Page 72<br />
1. (a) I am<br />
(b) I will<br />
(c) I would<br />
(d) I have<br />
2. Teacher check<br />
3. (a) she’s<br />
(b) you're<br />
(c) they’re<br />
(d) we’re<br />
Using contractions – Page 73<br />
1. (a) We’re asleep in our beds.<br />
(b) She’s broken her leg.<br />
(c) He’s getting into his car.<br />
(d) We’d like an ice cream.<br />
2. (a) was not<br />
(b) did not<br />
(c) have not<br />
(d) would not<br />
(e) had not<br />
(f) must not<br />
3. Teacher check<br />
4. (a) they’d<br />
(b) they’d<br />
(c) they’re<br />
(d) they’ll<br />
ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />
Assessment activity – Page 84<br />
1. (a) They are<br />
(b) We will/shall<br />
2. (a) I’m visiting my friend today.<br />
(b) She’s kind and caring.<br />
3. (a) she’ll<br />
(b) they’re<br />
(c) I’ve<br />
(d) we’d<br />
4. Teacher check<br />
5. (a) It’s, its<br />
(b) It’s, its<br />
6. Teacher check<br />
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ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />
• Paragraph topic – How the girl broke her leg<br />
• Focus: Punctuation – apostrophes in contractions<br />
Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />
Don't and won't – Page 74<br />
1.–2. Teacher check<br />
More contractions, It’s or its? – Page 75<br />
1. (a) (i) I’d (ii) I’ll<br />
(b) (i) we’d (ii) we’ll<br />
(c) (i) he’d (ii) he’ll<br />
(d) (i) you’d (ii) you’ll<br />
(e) (i) she’d (ii) she’ll<br />
(f) (i) they’d (ii) they’ll<br />
2. (a) it’s (b) it is/it has<br />
3. (a) it’s (b) its<br />
(c) it’s (d) it’s<br />
4. Teacher check<br />
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UNIT 11<br />
APOSTROPHES IN CONTRACTIONS<br />
I’m sleeping.<br />
I’ve broken<br />
my leg.<br />
I’ll drive.<br />
I’d like an<br />
ice cream.<br />
Contractions are new words made by joining two words and leaving out some<br />
of their letters. An apostrophe is used in a contraction to show that some<br />
letters are missing.<br />
1. Write the sentence using two words <strong>for</strong> the contraction.<br />
(a) I’m asleep.<br />
(b) I’ll drive.<br />
(c) I’d like an ice cream.<br />
(d) I’ve broken my leg.<br />
2. (a) Use the contraction I’ll in a sentence.<br />
(b) Use 'I’d' in a sentence.<br />
3. Join the two words to make a contraction. Don’t <strong>for</strong>get the apostrophe.<br />
(a) she is<br />
(c) they are<br />
(b) you are<br />
(d) we are<br />
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USING CONTRACTIONS<br />
1. Write the sentence using a contraction.<br />
(a) We are asleep in our beds.<br />
(b) She has broken her leg.<br />
(c) He is getting into his car.<br />
(d) We would like an ice cream.<br />
2. Write the two words <strong>for</strong> each contraction.<br />
(a) wasn’t<br />
(c) haven’t<br />
(b) didn’t<br />
(d) wouldn’t<br />
(e) hadn’t (f) mustn’t<br />
3. Write a sentence using the contraction.<br />
(a) shouldn’t<br />
(b) mustn’t<br />
(c) wouldn’t<br />
4. Write the contractions.<br />
(a) they had<br />
(c) they are<br />
(b) they would<br />
(d) they will<br />
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UNIT 11<br />
DON’T AND WON’T<br />
Did you see the 'Do<br />
not swim' sign?<br />
Yes, I saw the sign<br />
that said 'Don’t swim'.<br />
DO NOT SWIM!<br />
I wonder why they do not want us<br />
to swim here.<br />
They don’t want us to swim here<br />
because it’s dangerous.<br />
1. (a) Write a sentence about the pond using ‘do not’.<br />
(b) Write another sentence about the pond using ‘don’t’.<br />
So, I will not go <strong>for</strong> a swim here.<br />
No, I won’t go in the pond either.<br />
Good, so we won’t get into<br />
trouble, will we?<br />
2. (a) Write a sentence about a pond using the words ‘will not’.<br />
(b) Write another sentence about the pond using ‘won’t’.<br />
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MORE CONTRACTIONS, IT’S OR ITS?<br />
1. Make some contractions. Join each frog with the two lily pads.<br />
Write the contractions.<br />
(a) (i) (ii)<br />
(b) (i) (ii)<br />
(c) (i) (ii)<br />
(d) (i) (ii)<br />
(e) (i) (ii)<br />
(f) (i) (ii)<br />
Its or it’s?<br />
These two little words cause lots of trouble. Only one of them is a contraction.<br />
2. (a) Which one is the contraction?<br />
(b) It is a contraction of and .<br />
3. Circle 'its' or 'it’s'. (HINT: Only use 'it’s' if you can say 'it is' instead of 'it’s'.)<br />
(a) I think its it's a pretty pond. (b) The frog is on its it's lily pad.<br />
(c) I wonder if its it's croaking.<br />
(d) Do you think its it's ugly?<br />
4. Write a sentence using the contraction 'it’s'.<br />
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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />
UNIT 12<br />
APOSTROPHES FOR POSSESSION<br />
Focus<br />
Punctuation – apostrophes <strong>for</strong> possession<br />
Progression<br />
Recognise<br />
Students will recognise possessive apostrophes from modelled<br />
examples.<br />
Choose<br />
Students will choose appropriate possessive apostrophes <strong>for</strong><br />
sentences, with teacher support.<br />
Use<br />
Students will correctly use possessive apostrophes in supplied<br />
and self-written sentences.<br />
Definition of terms<br />
A possessive apostrophe is a <strong>punctuation</strong> mark used to show<br />
ownership.<br />
Introduction<br />
Good writers improve their writing by using apostrophes correctly.<br />
Teacher in<strong>for</strong>mation<br />
Punctuation enables a writer to more fully and accurately<br />
communicate with the reader.<br />
Possessive apostrophes show who or what possesses the noun<br />
referred to; e.g. The man’s hand.<br />
LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />
Introduction<br />
• Discuss the different ways of saying that something belongs to<br />
someone.<br />
• Point to different objects in the classroom and ask 'Who owns this?'<br />
Encourage answers such as 'It is Kim's book'.<br />
• Write an example on the board and ask what the apostrophe is<br />
called.<br />
• Explain that the apostrophe is the quickest way of expressing<br />
ownership and that this is not possible in many other languages.<br />
Apostrophes <strong>for</strong> ownership – Page 78<br />
• Read the in<strong>for</strong>mation and the rule <strong>for</strong> using apostrophes.<br />
• Work through the page with students.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
Who owns what? – Page 79<br />
• Read the rule at the top of the page.<br />
• Revise how ownership can be deduced from the placement of the<br />
apostrophe and where its 'tail' is pointing.<br />
• Work the first question as a group, with teacher support, to ensure<br />
understanding.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
How many owners? – Page 80<br />
• Read the in<strong>for</strong>mation at the top of the page.<br />
• Work through the steps and an example with the class.<br />
• Work through Question 1 with students, providing support or<br />
additional in<strong>for</strong>mation where needed.<br />
• Continue to work with those requiring additional assistance while the<br />
remainder of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
Practise using apostrophes – Page 81<br />
• Read and discuss the rule about using 's' at the top of the page.<br />
• Work through the example with the class.<br />
• Explain that in Question 1 the owners all end with 's' so there is no<br />
need to add one.<br />
• Students can complete the activity.<br />
• In Question 2 the owners do not end with 's' so one will need to be<br />
added.<br />
• Revise the concept of ownership as a pair—e.g. Mum and Dad’s<br />
house—and the placement of the apostrophe.<br />
• Allow students to work through the exercises, assisting as required.<br />
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APOSTROPHES FOR POSSESSION<br />
ANSWERS<br />
Apostrophes <strong>for</strong> ownership – Page 78<br />
1. (a) Peter<br />
(b) Peter<br />
(c) yes<br />
2. (a) the boys<br />
(b) the boys<br />
(c) yes<br />
3. (a) the boy<br />
(b) the boy<br />
(c) yes<br />
4. It is Dad’s car.<br />
Who owns what? – Page 79<br />
1. (a) Miss Muffet<br />
(b) the spider<br />
2. (a) Cinderella ✓<br />
(b) the stepsisters ✓<br />
(c) the prince ✓<br />
(d) the coach ✓<br />
(e) the godmother ✓<br />
3. (a) Grandmother’s bed<br />
(b) the woodcutter’s axe<br />
(c) the wolf’s teeth<br />
(d) Red Riding Hood’s basket<br />
4. Teacher check<br />
ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />
Assessment activity – Page 85<br />
1. after<br />
2. (a) my sister<br />
(b) his friends<br />
(c) Dad and Mum<br />
(d) the monkeys<br />
3. (a) the player – one owner<br />
(b) their parents – more than one owner<br />
(c) Jack and Jill – more than one owner<br />
4. (a) girls’<br />
(b) birds’<br />
(c) dog’s<br />
5. Teacher check<br />
Class recording sheet – Page viii<br />
ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />
• Paragraph topic – A brave prince<br />
• Focus: Punctuation – apostrophes <strong>for</strong> possession<br />
Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />
How many owners? – Page 80<br />
1. (a) the teacher – one owner<br />
(b) the doctors – more than one owner<br />
(c) the birds – more than one owner<br />
(d) the dog – one owner<br />
(e) the cats – more than one owner<br />
Practise using apostrophes – Page 81<br />
1. (a) brothers’<br />
(b) girls’<br />
(c) birds’<br />
(d) bees’<br />
2. (a) sister’s<br />
(b) lady’s<br />
(c) hen’s<br />
(d) children’s<br />
3. (a) John and Jake’s toys<br />
(b) Oliver and Jake’s bikes<br />
(c) Chloe and Jake’s teacher<br />
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UNIT 12<br />
APOSTROPHES FOR OWNERSHIP<br />
There are lots of rules that tell drivers where to go and what to do on the road.<br />
There are some rules <strong>for</strong> writers, too.<br />
This rule tells where an apostrophe goes to show that someone owns something.<br />
RULE 1: An apostrophe is placed after the owner or the owners.<br />
1. Let’s see if this sentence follows the rule.<br />
It is Peter’s car.<br />
(a) Which word is the apostrophe after?<br />
(b) Who is the owner?<br />
(c) Does this apostrophe follow the rule? Yes No<br />
2. Check if this sentence follows the rule.<br />
The boys’ bicycles are missing.<br />
(a) Which word is the apostrophe after?<br />
(b) Who owns the bicycles?<br />
(c) Does this apostrophe follow the rule? Yes No<br />
3. Check if this sentence follows the rule.<br />
The boy’s scooter is new.<br />
(a) Which word is the apostrophe after?<br />
(b) Who owns the scooter?<br />
(c) Does this apostrophe follow the rule? Yes No<br />
4. Use an apostrophe to show that Dad owns the car.<br />
It is .<br />
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WHO OWNS WHAT?<br />
RULE 1: An apostrophe is placed after the owner or the owners.<br />
1. Use the rule. It will help you to find and write the name of the owner or owners.<br />
(a) Miss Muffet’s spider<br />
(b) the spider’s web<br />
2. Write the name of the owner/s. Put a tick or cross to show if it follows the<br />
rule.<br />
(a) Cinderella’s slipper<br />
(b) The stepsisters’ dresses<br />
(c) The prince’s ball<br />
(d) The coach’s wheels<br />
(e) The godmother’s wand<br />
3. Who owns what? Use ‘s’ and an apostrophe to show the owners.<br />
wolf Red Riding Hood Grandmother woodcutter<br />
(a)<br />
(b) the<br />
(c) the<br />
(d)<br />
bed<br />
axe<br />
teeth<br />
basket<br />
4. (a) Draw a picture of something you own.<br />
(b) Write your name and use an apostrophe to tell who you are and what you<br />
own.<br />
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UNIT 12<br />
HOW MANY OWNERS?<br />
It is easy to work out if there is only one single owner or if there are<br />
plural owners. Just follow the steps.<br />
Step 1 Find the apostrophe.<br />
Step 2 Find the owner. (What is written just be<strong>for</strong>e the apostrophe?)<br />
Step 3 Ask yourself if there is one or more than one of them.<br />
The girls’ schoolbags were left on the bus.<br />
Let’s follow the steps to find out if there is one or more owners.<br />
Step 1 Read it, find the apostrophe and put a circle around it.<br />
Step 2 Find the owner or owners, underline and write on the line.<br />
The girls<br />
Step 3 Ask yourself if there is one or more owners. Tick one box.<br />
one owner more than one owner ✓<br />
1. Follow the three steps.<br />
• Circle the apostrophe.<br />
• Underline and write the owner/owners.<br />
• Tick one box.<br />
(a) the teacher’s cars<br />
owner/owners<br />
one owner<br />
more than one owner<br />
(b) the doctors’ surgery<br />
owner/owners<br />
one owner<br />
more than one owner<br />
(c) the birds’ nest<br />
owner/owners<br />
one owner<br />
more than one owner<br />
(d) the dog’s collar<br />
owner/owners<br />
one owner<br />
more than one owner<br />
(e) the cats’ food<br />
owner/owners<br />
one owner<br />
more than one owner<br />
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PRACTISE USING APOSTROPHES<br />
RULE 2: There must be an ‘s’ be<strong>for</strong>e or after the apostrophe showing<br />
ownership.<br />
If the owner or owners do not have an ‘s’ at the end, it has to be added.<br />
• The book that belongs to Jane is Jane’s book.<br />
• The book that belongs to the children is the children’s book.<br />
If the owners have an ‘s’ at the end there is no need to add one.<br />
• The book that belongs to the babies is the babies’ book.<br />
• The book that belongs to the teachers is the teachers’ book.<br />
1. Add an apostrophe to show ownership. The owners all end with ‘s’ so there<br />
is no need to add one.<br />
(a) The cat belongs to the brothers. It is the cat.<br />
(b) The hats belong to the girls. They are the hats.<br />
(c) The chicks belong to the birds. They are the chicks.<br />
(d) The honey belongs to the bees. It is the honey.<br />
2. Add an apostrophe to show ownership. The owners do not end with ‘s’ so an<br />
‘s’ needs to be added.<br />
(a) The cat belongs to my sister. It is my cat.<br />
(b) The hats belong to the lady. They are the hats.<br />
(c) The chicks belong to the hen. They are this chicks.<br />
(d) The honey belongs to the children. It is the<br />
honey.<br />
3. Change the word order so Jake’s name has an apostrophe and his friends don’t.<br />
(a) Jake and John’s toys<br />
(b) Jake and Oliver’s bikes<br />
(c) Jake and Chloe’s teacher<br />
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ASSESSMENT UNIT 9<br />
USING PUNCTUATION IN SENTENCES<br />
Name:<br />
Date:<br />
on sunday we went to the zoo while we were there we saw an<br />
elephant called trisha she is an african elephant and she is huge<br />
1. (a) Use a red pen or pencil to add the missing capital letters and full stops.<br />
(b) How many capital letters did you need?<br />
(c) How many capital letters<br />
did you need <strong>for</strong> proper nouns?<br />
(d) How many full stops did you add?<br />
2. Write a proper noun that tells you:<br />
(a) a person’s name<br />
(b) a country<br />
(c) the name of your school<br />
3. Write a sentence with a proper noun.<br />
4. Put a tick in the box if the <strong>punctuation</strong> is correct.<br />
(a) Run fast? (b) Go away! (c) Where are you.<br />
5. Write the sentence with a question mark, full stop or exclamation mark.<br />
(a) Is Trisha happy<br />
(b) She is huge<br />
(c) How old is she<br />
(d) Trisha is an elephant<br />
6. Put a tick in the box if the <strong>punctuation</strong> is correct.<br />
(a) doctor Smith (b) an adventure book (c) Globe Theatre<br />
7. Circle the errors and write the sentence correctly.<br />
we went to the zoo in london last tuesday<br />
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ASSESSMENT UNIT 10<br />
FULL STOPS, CAPITAL LETTERS, COMMAS,<br />
DIRECT SPEECH<br />
Name:<br />
Date:<br />
1. Put a full stop in the box after a complete sentence. Leave it blank otherwise.<br />
(a) admiring her reflection in the water<br />
(b) The ugly frog was sitting on a lily pad<br />
2. Rewrite the sentence. Put full stops where needed.<br />
The princess kissed the frog he didn’t turn into a prince<br />
3. Rewrite the sentence. Put capitals where needed.<br />
princess amy lived with her father, king robert, in star palace in london.<br />
4. Rewrite the sentence. Put commas where needed.<br />
(a) Princesses princes queens and kings all live in palaces.<br />
(b) My sister Princess Anne is beautiful.<br />
5. Does the sentence need quotation marks?<br />
(a) Princess Amy said she would not kiss the frog. Yes No<br />
(b) Can you please kiss me? asked the frog. Yes No<br />
6. Rewrite the sentence. Add quotation marks where needed.<br />
(a) Jump back into the pond! shouted the princess to the frog.<br />
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ASSESSMENT UNIT 11<br />
APOSTROPHES IN CONTRACTIONS<br />
Name:<br />
Date:<br />
1. Circle the contractions. Write them as two words.<br />
(a) They’re going fishing tomorrow.<br />
(b) We’ll enjoy the fish they catch.<br />
2. Rewrite the sentences using contractions.<br />
(a) I am visiting my friend today.<br />
(b) She is kind and caring.<br />
3. Join the two words to make a contraction. Don’t <strong>for</strong>get to use an apostrophe.<br />
(a) she will<br />
(c) I have<br />
(b) they are<br />
(d) we had<br />
4. (a) Write a sentence about school rules using ‘don’t’.<br />
(b) Write a sentence about your classroom using ‘won’t’.<br />
5. Circle the correct words.<br />
(a)<br />
Its It's my turn to give the cat its it's dinner.<br />
(b) Its It's fun to watch the bird feed its it's babies .<br />
6. (a) Write your own sentence using ‘it’s’.<br />
(b) Write your own sentence using ‘its’.<br />
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APOSTROPHES FOR POSSESSION<br />
1. Complete the rule:<br />
An apostrophe is placed<br />
the owner or owners.<br />
2. Write the name of the owner or owners.<br />
(a) my sister’s dog<br />
(b) his friends’ bags<br />
(c) Dad and Mum’s house<br />
(d) the monkeys’ cage<br />
3. Follow the three steps.<br />
• Circle the apostrophe.<br />
• Underline and write the owner/owners.<br />
• Tick one box.<br />
(a) the player’s coach<br />
owner/owners<br />
one owner<br />
more than one owner<br />
(b) their parents’ car<br />
owner/owners<br />
one owner<br />
more than one owner<br />
(c) Jack and Jill’s bucket<br />
owner/owners<br />
one owner<br />
more than one owner<br />
4. Add an apostrophe to show ownership.<br />
(a) The pet belongs to the girls. It is the pet.<br />
(b) The cages belong to the birds. They are the cages.<br />
(c) The kennel belongs to the dog. It is the kennel.<br />
5. (a) Write the name of your best friend.<br />
(b) What is something he or she owns?<br />
(c) It is .<br />
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