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BOOK E<br />

TEACHING<br />

STRATEGIES<br />

FOR WRITING<br />

Sentence <strong>structure</strong><br />

Australian Primary Publisher<br />

of the Year 2015 and 2016


<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book E)<br />

Published by R.I.C. Publications ® 2018<br />

Copyright © Diane Henderson and Bruce Tuffin 2018<br />

<strong>RIC</strong>–<strong>20803</strong><br />

Titles in this series:<br />

<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book A)<br />

<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book B)<br />

<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book C)<br />

<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book D)<br />

<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book E)<br />

<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book F)<br />

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FOREWORD<br />

<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing is series of six books using modelling, guided and independent practice to teach<br />

students strategies they can use to improve the clarity, correctness and richness of their writing. The focus is on<br />

<strong>sentence</strong>s, their <strong>structure</strong>, punctuation and word choices and on developing editing and proofreading skills and their<br />

habitual use.<br />

Titles in this series:<br />

• <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book A) • <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book D)<br />

• <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book B) • <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book E)<br />

• <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book C) • <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book F)<br />

TABLE OF CONTENTS<br />

Teacher notes ........................................................................................................................ iv–v<br />

Class recording sheets<br />

Assessment activities ..................................................................................................... vi–ix<br />

Assessment writing tasks ................................................................................................ x–xi<br />

Student writing checklist ........................................................................................................ xii<br />

Student writing task – self-evaluation .................................................................................. xiii<br />

WORD CHOICES<br />

Unit 1 Nouns, noun groups and adjectives ............................................................ 2–7<br />

Unit 2 Pronouns, confusing pronouns (me/I), which pronoun? ........................... 8–13<br />

Unit 3 Verbs, descriptive and overused verbs, adverbials ................................. 14–19<br />

Unit 4 Choosing correct verbs: tense, consistency,<br />

subject, regular, irregular ......................................................................... 20–25<br />

Assessment................................................................................................................... 26–29<br />

SENTENCE STRUCTURE<br />

Unit 5 Sentences, word order, statements, questions ....................................... 30–35<br />

Unit 6 Sentence beginnings ............................................................................... 36–41<br />

Unit 7 Conjunctions ............................................................................................ 42–47<br />

Unit 8 Paragraphs ............................................................................................... 48–53<br />

Assessment................................................................................................................... 54–57<br />

PUNCTUATION<br />

Unit 9 Using punctuation in <strong>sentence</strong>s .............................................................. 58–63<br />

Unit 10 Full stops, capital letters, commas, direct speech ................................. 64–69<br />

Unit 11 Apostrophes in contractions ................................................................... 70–75<br />

Unit 12 Apostrophes <strong>for</strong> possession .................................................................... 76–81<br />

Assessment................................................................................................................... 82–85<br />

EDITING AND PROOFREADING<br />

Unit 13<br />

Unit 14<br />

Unit 15<br />

Unit 16<br />

Spelling (vowel sounds), <strong>sentence</strong> <strong>structure</strong>,<br />

punctuation, word choices, editing ........................................................ 86–91<br />

Spelling (more vowel sounds), <strong>sentence</strong> <strong>structure</strong>,<br />

punctuation, word choices, editing ......................................................... 92–97<br />

Spelling (suffixes) <strong>sentence</strong> <strong>structure</strong>,<br />

punctuation, word choices, editing ....................................................... 98–103<br />

Spelling (homophones), <strong>sentence</strong> <strong>structure</strong>,<br />

punctuation, word choices, editing ..................................................... 104–109<br />

Assessment............................................................................................................... 110–113<br />

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TEACHER NOTES<br />

ABOUT WRITING<br />

A good writer is not simply one who knows about and can<br />

use text types. A good writer is one with the capacity to<br />

produce interesting, in<strong>for</strong>mative, grammatically correct<br />

text, <strong>for</strong> a specific purpose, that achieves any writer’s<br />

intent – clear, precise communication.<br />

TEACHING WRITING<br />

Students can and should be taught strategies that will<br />

help them to write better. These include improvements<br />

in word choices, <strong>sentence</strong> <strong>structure</strong>, punctuation and<br />

editing and proofreading. <strong>Writing</strong> strategies taught<br />

should be modelled, discussed and then applied, firstly<br />

with teacher support and then independently. However,<br />

the emphasis always should be on the writing process,<br />

which requires <strong>for</strong>ethought, planning and a rational,<br />

measured approach in order to produce the desired<br />

outcome. Editing and proofreading are essential<br />

components of any writing. It is important that students<br />

edit and proofread habitually, with a specific purpose,<br />

and concentrate on the careful consideration of each<br />

<strong>sentence</strong>, one at a time. Activities provided in this series<br />

encourage students to think about appropriate aspects<br />

of their writing be<strong>for</strong>e, during and after the process.<br />

LESSON PROCEDURE<br />

Introduction<br />

Discuss the text title with the students. Ask <strong>for</strong> their<br />

interpretations of what the title could mean.<br />

Discuss the text type. Why does it fit into this category?<br />

What are the specific features of this type of text?<br />

Guide the discussion to introduce the teaching points/<br />

strategies to be covered during the course of the unit.<br />

For example, check they understand terms such as noun<br />

group, adverbial, <strong>sentence</strong>, paragraph and comma.<br />

Development<br />

Read and discuss the text, either in groups or as a<br />

class. Assist students with any unfamiliar vocabulary or<br />

expressions.<br />

Differentiation<br />

Work through the introductory activities with the class<br />

as a whole, ensuring students understand what is<br />

required of them.<br />

Work with those requiring additional assistance while<br />

the remainder of the class work independently on the<br />

activities.<br />

ASSESSMENT<br />

An assessment is included <strong>for</strong> each unit in the book.<br />

Because of the way it is <strong>structure</strong>d, this assessment<br />

will allow you to see individual student’s understandings<br />

as well as any common points of weakness which may<br />

require further assistance.<br />

FORMAT<br />

<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing is organised into four<br />

sections:<br />

Word choices<br />

Punctuation<br />

Sentence <strong>structure</strong><br />

Editing and proofreading<br />

Each section has four units of work and one assessment<br />

unit.<br />

<strong>Teaching</strong> units<br />

Each six-page unit of work has a specific focus, two<br />

teacher pages and four activity pages.<br />

Assessment units<br />

• Following each section is a four-page unit of<br />

assessment activities–one page <strong>for</strong> each unit.<br />

• Answers are provided in the teachers pages <strong>for</strong> that<br />

unit.<br />

• Teacher record sheets – see pages vi–ix.<br />

Assessment writing tasks<br />

• A suggested paragraph writing topic <strong>for</strong> each unit is<br />

provided on the teachers pages.<br />

• Teacher recording sheet – see pages x–xi.<br />

• Student writing checklist – see page xii.<br />

• Student self-evaluation – see page xiii.<br />

Review<br />

In pairs or small groups, students review their answers,<br />

giving their reasoning where required and critiquing the<br />

longer <strong>sentence</strong> or paragraph responses.<br />

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TEACHER NOTES<br />

Sample open pages<br />

Teacher page 1 Teacher page 2<br />

Activity page 1 Activity page 2<br />

Activity page 3 Activity page 4<br />

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ASSESSMENT ACTIVITIES<br />

CLASS RECORD<br />

Date:<br />

Name Unit 5 Unit 6 Unit 7 Unit 8<br />

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ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />

CLASS RECORD<br />

Unit: Focus: Date:<br />

Paragraph topic:<br />

Name<br />

Comment<br />

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STUDENT WRITING CHECKLIST<br />

Name:<br />

Date:<br />

Assessment writing topic:<br />

Paragraph<br />

I have read the paragraph and it makes sense. ..........................................................<br />

I have read it to check <strong>for</strong> spelling errors. ..................................................................<br />

I have made corrections. ............................................................................................<br />

Punctuation<br />

I have checked the <strong>sentence</strong>s one at a time <strong>for</strong>:<br />

• capital letters to start <strong>sentence</strong>s and proper nouns. ...........................................<br />

• full stops, question marks, exclamation marks. .................................................<br />

• commas. ................................................................................................................<br />

• apostrophes <strong>for</strong> contractions and ownership. ......................................................<br />

• speech marks. .......................................................................................................<br />

I have made corrections. ............................................................................................<br />

Sentences<br />

I have checked the <strong>sentence</strong>s one at a time <strong>for</strong>:<br />

• sense – Does each <strong>sentence</strong> make sense by itself? ............................................<br />

• length – Are any <strong>sentence</strong>s too long? ...................................................................<br />

Should they be separated? .....................................................................<br />

Should some be joined? ..........................................................................<br />

• beginnings – Have I used interesting beginnings? ...............................................<br />

Word choices<br />

I have made changes. ......................................................................<br />

verbs – Are they in<strong>for</strong>mative and different? ...............................................................<br />

Have I used the correct verb tense? ...............................................................<br />

Are there too many boring verbs? ..................................................................<br />

adverbials – Do some verbs need adverbials to tell how,<br />

when or where something happened? ...................................................<br />

noun groups – Are the noun groups descriptive? ......................................................<br />

Can I add some descriptive adjectives to tell<br />

more about nouns and pronouns? ......................................................<br />

pronouns – Have I used the correct pronouns? .........................................................<br />

I have made changes and corrections. ....................................................<br />

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STUDENT SELF-EVALUATION<br />

Name: Unit: Date:<br />

I wrote a paragraph about:<br />

My goal was to focus on:<br />

How well did I achieve my goal?<br />

Three things I did well in my writing were:<br />

•<br />

•<br />

•<br />

Next time I write a paragraph I will try to:<br />

STUDENT SELF-EVALUATION<br />

Name: Unit: Date:<br />

I wrote a paragraph about:<br />

My goal was to focus on:<br />

How well did I achieve my goal?<br />

Three things I did well in my writing were:<br />

•<br />

•<br />

•<br />

Next time I write a paragraph I will try to:<br />

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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />

SENTENCES, WORD ORDER,<br />

STATEMENTS, QUESTIONS<br />

UNIT 5<br />

Focus<br />

Sentence <strong>structure</strong> – <strong>sentence</strong>s, word order, statements to<br />

questions<br />

Progression<br />

Recognise<br />

Students will recognise a <strong>sentence</strong> from modelled examples.<br />

Choose<br />

Students will choose a variety of <strong>sentence</strong>s from given examples,<br />

with teacher support.<br />

Use<br />

Students will use <strong>sentence</strong>s in self-written <strong>sentence</strong>s and<br />

paragraphs.<br />

Definition of terms<br />

A <strong>sentence</strong> is a set of words that makes sense by itself. It may be<br />

a statement, a question, an exclamation or a command.<br />

Nouns are words used to name people, things and feelings.<br />

An antonym is a word which has the opposite meaning to another<br />

word.<br />

A rhetorical question is one which is making a point rather than<br />

seeking an answer.<br />

Introduction<br />

Good writers improve their writing by planning <strong>sentence</strong>s and<br />

paragraphs.<br />

LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />

Introduction<br />

• Discuss the text title with the class.<br />

• What do they think the text is about?<br />

• What do they know about mobile phones?<br />

• Identify the number of paragraphs and discuss why they are not very<br />

long.<br />

• Explain that a new line and paragraph is required <strong>for</strong> each new<br />

action/event.<br />

• Discuss why organising text in this way is important. (It helps the<br />

reader to understand the sequence of events.)<br />

• Read the text with the class.<br />

Sentences, changing <strong>sentence</strong>s – Page 33<br />

• Read and discuss the definitions at the top of the page.<br />

• Explain that <strong>sentence</strong>s can be either long or short and that the<br />

number of words in a set of words is unrelated to whether or not it<br />

qualifies as a <strong>sentence</strong>.<br />

• Discuss different types of <strong>sentence</strong>s—statements, questions,<br />

commands and exclamations—and how each is punctuated.<br />

• Explain that a small change in a <strong>sentence</strong> can make a big difference<br />

to its meaning or give the opposite meaning; <strong>for</strong> example, adding<br />

suffixes, the word ‘not’ or by writing an antonym.<br />

• Explain the terms ‘positive’ and ‘negative’.<br />

• Work through the activities with the class as a whole, ensuring they<br />

understand what is required of them.<br />

• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />

of the class work independently on the activities.<br />

Word order – Page 34<br />

• Explain that word order can make a difference.<br />

• Discuss some of the reasons students gave to Question 2(a) (sounds<br />

better, traditional, easier to say etc.)<br />

• Work through the activities with the class as a whole, ensuring they<br />

understand what is required of them.<br />

• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />

of the class work independently on the activities.<br />

Questions – Page 35<br />

• Discuss with students the definition at the top of the page. (Ignore<br />

rhetorical questions.)<br />

• Work with the class as a whole, demonstrating methods of changing<br />

statements to questions. Ensure students are com<strong>for</strong>table with this<br />

concept.<br />

• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />

of the class work independently on the activities.<br />

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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />

SENTENCES, WORD ORDER,<br />

STATEMENTS, QUESTIONS<br />

UNIT 5<br />

ANSWERS<br />

Sentences, changing <strong>sentence</strong>s – Page 33<br />

1. (c) and (d) require full stops; (e) requires a question mark;<br />

(f) requires an exclamation mark<br />

2. (a) I could not see one part that looked like it did something. /I<br />

could see one part that looked like it did nothing.<br />

(b) I could not hear a ringing sound.<br />

(c) Your father will not have words with you when you get home.<br />

3. (a) unhappy<br />

(b) no<br />

(c) many/numerous/’lots of’ – Teacher check<br />

(d) <strong>for</strong>got<br />

Word order – Page 34<br />

1. (a) fingers and toes<br />

(b) shoes and socks<br />

(c) night and day<br />

(d) black and white<br />

(e) rock and roll<br />

2. (a) Teacher check<br />

(b) possibly rock and roll<br />

(c)–(d) Teacher check<br />

3. (a) Suddenly, I caught a glimpse of my watch.<br />

(b) I found a phone half-buried in the ground.<br />

(c) I was lucky the chewing gum still had some flavour left.<br />

(d) Why were there three moons in the sky?<br />

(e) I ran home so I wouldn’t be late.<br />

(f) After I brushed off the dirt with my T-shirt, I could see it was<br />

unmarked.<br />

ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />

Assessment activity – Page 54<br />

1. (a) blank<br />

(b) blank<br />

(c) full stop<br />

(d) question mark<br />

2. Teacher check: I ran home as slowly as I could.<br />

3. (a) I threw the phone into my schoolbag.<br />

(b) My mother would be very cross if I was late home./My mother<br />

would be cross if I was very late home.<br />

4. (a) full stop<br />

(b) question mark<br />

(c) question mark<br />

(d) full stop<br />

5. Teacher check:<br />

(a) What did you do and where did you go?<br />

(b) Who was with you?<br />

6. Teacher check<br />

Class record sheet – Page vii<br />

ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />

• Paragraph topic – Flying cars<br />

• Focus: Sentence <strong>structure</strong> – <strong>sentence</strong>s, changing <strong>sentence</strong>s, word<br />

order, questions<br />

Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />

Questions – Page 35<br />

1. (a) full stop<br />

(b) question mark<br />

(c) full stop<br />

(d) question mark<br />

(e) full stop<br />

2. (a) Teacher check: Where were you and what were you doing?<br />

(b) where, what<br />

(c) was<br />

(d) ‘I’ to ‘you’<br />

3.–4. Teacher check.<br />

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UNIT 5<br />

THE NEW PHONE<br />

1. When I saw the phone, just lying in the field, I couldn’t believe my<br />

eyes! It was sitting upright, its bottom half buried in the ground,<br />

as if it was growing there. With some ef<strong>for</strong>t, I managed to wiggle<br />

it backwards and <strong>for</strong>wards until it popped free.<br />

2. I thought it would be broken, since it was obviously pushed into<br />

the earth with great <strong>for</strong>ce. But after I brushed off the dirt with my<br />

T-shirt, I could see it was unmarked—not even a single scratch.<br />

I turned it over in my hands and examined it from every angle.<br />

3. It was bigger than a normal phone and smaller than a tablet. I<br />

couldn’t see any maker’s name on it—or any other markings <strong>for</strong><br />

that matter. There was just the screen, now dark, with a single<br />

‘dimple’ below. It seemed to be made of some sort of very heavy<br />

metal—and it ‘trembled’ ever so slightly in my hands. Weird!<br />

4. Suddenly, I caught a glimpse of my watch. Oh, crumbs! I was late.<br />

If I didn’t get my skates on, Mum would skin me alive! I threw the phone into my bag and ran all the way home.<br />

5. Later that evening, I was in my room doing my homework when I remembered the phone. Closing my homework<br />

(quite happily—who likes homework anyway?), I rummaged around in the bottom of my bag. Oh, so that’s where<br />

that wad of half-eaten chewing gum went. I peeled it off my pencil case and popped it into my mouth. Yes! It<br />

still had a lot of flavour left.<br />

6. Now, where was I? Oh, yes, the phone. I laid it on my desk and pulled the lamp closer. The phone gleamed in the<br />

light. I could see only one part that looked like it did anything, so I pressed the indentation below the screen.<br />

Nothing happened. Flat battery, I thought—though I couldn’t see anywhere to plug a charger in—even if I had<br />

one!<br />

7. I was just about to drop it into a desk drawer when the screen flashed into dazzling life. There were no logos,<br />

no icons, no photos. Instead there was a single word in black, pulsating letters. HOME. Perhaps if I rang<br />

whoever HOME was, I could tell them I’d found their phone.<br />

8. I tapped the word HOME. There was a ringing tone and then a woman’s voice snapped, ‘About time too! Where<br />

have you been now?’ The voice didn’t sound very happy! I was about to explain when she went on. ‘Never mind,<br />

Just get yourself home right away! Your father will have words with you later.’<br />

9. There was a ‘click’ and then just the word HOME on the screen. She’d hung up! A bit annoyed, I pressed HOME<br />

again. I felt a wave of dizziness ... or something ... wash over me. It was like being on a roller-coaster. I closed<br />

my eyes until it passed and I didn’t feel like I was going to be sick.<br />

10. When I opened them again, I was standing on a tree-lined street. Cars whirred silently past me. They had no<br />

wheels—they floated above the ground—and no drivers! The sky was alive with small flying machines darting<br />

here and there among towering skyscrapers that reached into the clouds.<br />

11. And in the purple sky itself was not one, but three moons.<br />

12. Where on earth was I?<br />

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UNIT 5<br />

SENTENCES, CHANGING SENTENCES<br />

A <strong>sentence</strong> is a set of words—a statement, question, exclamation or command—that<br />

makes sense by itself.<br />

An antonym is a word which has the opposite meaning to another word.<br />

1. A <strong>sentence</strong> must make sense on its own. Put a punctuation mark in the boxes after a<br />

<strong>sentence</strong> and nothing in the other boxes.<br />

(a) Pushed into the earth with great<br />

(b) If I didn’t get my skates on<br />

(c) I caught a glimpse of my watch<br />

(d) The voice didn’t sound very happy<br />

(e) What was the tune<br />

(f) Get yourself home NOW<br />

Writers can give a new meaning to a <strong>sentence</strong> by making small changes.<br />

For example: by adding words like ‘not’ or by adding a prefix—‘likely’ to ‘unlikely’—or by<br />

writing an antonym.<br />

2. Change the <strong>sentence</strong> from a positive to a negative by adding a word.<br />

(a) I could see one part that looked as though it did something.<br />

(b) I could hear a ringing sound.<br />

(c) Your father will have words with you when you get home.<br />

3. Change the meaning by writing an antonym of the underlined word.<br />

(a) The voice sounded very happy.<br />

(b) The gum had some flavour remaining.<br />

(c) The phone had no scratches in the glass.<br />

(d) I remembered the phone when I was in my room doing my homework.<br />

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UNIT 5<br />

WORD ORDER<br />

1. Join two of the pairs of nouns using ‘and’.<br />

fingers shoes rock night black socks toes roll day white<br />

(a)<br />

(b)<br />

(c)<br />

(d)<br />

(e)<br />

2. Word order makes a difference.<br />

(a) What do you notice if you change the order of the words you put together in Question 1?<br />

(b) Which pair did you find the hardest to change?<br />

(c) Was it because the first word is the more important?<br />

(d) What other reason could there be?<br />

3. Change the order of the words so the <strong>sentence</strong> makes sense.<br />

(a) watch a glimpse of caught Suddenly, I my.<br />

(b) a the in I ground found phone half-buried.<br />

(c) gum the left some I was had still lucky chewing flavour.<br />

(d) the three Why there sky were moons in?<br />

(e) be I I home wouldn’t late ran so.<br />

(f) brushed with After the T-shirt, I my off see was dirt I it unmarked could.<br />

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UNIT 5<br />

QUESTIONS<br />

A question needs an answer and is followed by a question mark.<br />

1. Add question marks at the end of questions and full stops after any statements.<br />

(a) I didn’t know where I was<br />

(b) I couldn’t find you; where have you been<br />

(c) Please tell me where I left my phone<br />

(d) Where did the story take place<br />

(e) I was wondering where the phone came from<br />

2. I was in my room doing my homework.<br />

(a) Write the question that is answered by the statement.<br />

(b) Which two question words did you use?<br />

(c) Which verb did you need to change?<br />

(d) How did you change the pronoun ‘I’?<br />

3. Write a question about:<br />

(a) opening her eyes<br />

(b) doing her homework<br />

(c) the phone<br />

4. Complete the questions about the text.<br />

(a) Why<br />

(b) What<br />

(c) Where<br />

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SENTENCE BEGINNINGS<br />

UNIT 6<br />

Focus<br />

Sentence <strong>structure</strong> – <strong>sentence</strong> beginnings<br />

Progression<br />

Recognise<br />

Students will recognise a variety of interesting <strong>sentence</strong><br />

beginnings from modelled examples.<br />

Choose<br />

Students will choose a variety of interesting <strong>sentence</strong> beginnings<br />

from given examples, with teacher support.<br />

Use<br />

Students will use interesting <strong>sentence</strong> beginnings in self-written<br />

<strong>sentence</strong>s and paragraphs.<br />

Definition of terms<br />

Verbs or ‘doing’ words show actions or states of being or having.<br />

A verb group is a verb combined with other, auxiliary, verbs.<br />

Adverbials are words or groups of words that add in<strong>for</strong>mation,<br />

usually to a verb or verb group. They can tell how (manner), when<br />

(time) or where (place) something happens. Adverbs can modify<br />

(add in<strong>for</strong>mation to) any words that are not nouns or pronouns.<br />

(These are modified by adjectives.)<br />

Introduction<br />

Good writers improve their writing by using a variety of different,<br />

interesting <strong>sentence</strong> beginnings.<br />

LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />

Introduction<br />

• Discuss the text title with the class. Why was Ryan running?<br />

• What do students think the text could be about? (May be many and<br />

varied responses.)<br />

• Identify the number of paragraphs and discuss why they are all so<br />

short.<br />

• Explain that a new paragraph is required <strong>for</strong> each new event/action;<br />

this helps the reader to more clearly understand the sequence of<br />

events in the story.<br />

• Identify the text type and discuss the features of imaginative text.<br />

Sentence beginnings – When and where? – Page 39<br />

• Discuss as a class possible reasons why a writer tries to begin<br />

<strong>sentence</strong>s in an interesting way.<br />

• Discuss the <strong>sentence</strong> beginnings in Paragraph 1. Do students think<br />

they are good or bad examples of <strong>sentence</strong> beginnings?<br />

• Discuss the adverbials of time and place in Paragraph 1. How do<br />

they set the scene?<br />

• Work through the activities with the class as a whole, ensuring they<br />

understand what is required of them.<br />

• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />

of the class work independently on the activities.<br />

Sentence beginnings – How? – Page 40<br />

• Discuss with students the way a <strong>sentence</strong> can start by telling how<br />

something is happening. Work through an example on the board. For<br />

example: With burning lungs, ...<br />

• Ask, ‘Who is likely to do something with burning lungs?’<br />

• Discuss selected possible answers with students.<br />

• Select one appropriate response — say, ‘athletes’. Discuss what<br />

athletes might be doing with burning lungs.<br />

• Revise the concept of verb groups as a combination that gives<br />

greater meaning; <strong>for</strong> example, trying to run.<br />

• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />

of the class work independently on the activities.<br />

Sentence beginnings – And then ... – Page 41<br />

• Discuss with students the undesirable results of repeated use<br />

of a conjunction (‘and then’) — repetitive, overlong <strong>sentence</strong>s;<br />

uninteresting writing.<br />

• Ask how students could overcome this problem. Discuss answers.<br />

• Elicit the solution of changing the word order and using a variety of<br />

conjunctions. Discuss.<br />

• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />

of the class work independently on the activities.<br />

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SENTENCE BEGINNINGS<br />

UNIT 6<br />

ANSWERS<br />

Sentence beginnings – When and where? – Page 39<br />

1.–3. Teacher check<br />

Sentence beginnings – How? – Page 40<br />

1.–2. Teacher check<br />

Sentence beginnings – And then ... – Page 41<br />

1. (a) Overuse of ‘and then’ as a <strong>sentence</strong> starter.<br />

(b) Teacher check<br />

2. Teacher check<br />

3. (a) Teacher check: all short/all start with ‘I’<br />

(b)–(c) Teacher check<br />

ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />

Assessment activity – Page 55<br />

1.–6. Teacher check<br />

Class record sheet – Page vii<br />

ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />

• Paragraph topic – The monster<br />

• Focus: Sentence <strong>structure</strong> – <strong>sentence</strong> beginnings<br />

Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />

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UNIT 6<br />

RUN, RYAN, RUN!<br />

1. The minute I see the monster, I realise I am in big trouble. I scurry out of the light and into the shadows, but it<br />

is too late. Out of the corner of my eye, I see the monster’s head turn my way and know I’ve been spotted.<br />

2. I should have listened to my mother. ‘Stay out of the light’, she warned us all. ‘Darkness is your friend. The<br />

monsters can’t see in the darkness as well as we can.’ Sadly, she hadn’t listened to her own advice. She’d been<br />

caught by a monster in the middle of an open area. There was nowhere <strong>for</strong> her to hide.<br />

3. But that was then and this is now. I don’t want the same sudden end to happen to me. I have to make a break<br />

<strong>for</strong> it be<strong>for</strong>e the monster has a chance to unleash the Liquid Fire at me.<br />

4. I shudder at the thought. There are very, very few survivors of a Liquid Fire attack. Those who do somehow<br />

survive are scarred and burned, never the same again.<br />

5. All right, Ryan, this is it — go! I take off running, running like the wind, running with every last bit of speed<br />

and power I can manage. I know exactly where I am heading. If I can make it to the area where the monsters<br />

keep their Metal Skins, I have a chance. There are so many strange things stacked in that area that I will have<br />

a thousand hiding places.<br />

6. What makes it even worse is that I shouldn’t have even been here <strong>for</strong> the monster to find. It isn’t a hunting<br />

expedition; the clan has enough food to last us <strong>for</strong> days. I should have been snug and warm and safe, resting<br />

with a full belly. Instead, stupid curiosity has put me in mortal danger.<br />

7. The ground beneath me trembles and I know the monster is now in pursuit. Despite their size, they are able to<br />

cover distance quickly with their long strides. Desperately, I try to squeeze out a little more speed, but already<br />

my legs feel too heavy to lift.<br />

8. But I’ve made it ... I’m here! I throw myself under one of the Metal Skins, hoping the shadows will conceal me<br />

while I catch my breath.<br />

9. The monster lumbers after me, its footsteps slowing and then stopping altogether. I almost <strong>for</strong>get to breathe.<br />

Then, to my absolute horror, the monster’s face suddenly appears! It is looking beneath the Metal Skin, staring<br />

right at me!<br />

10. I run like I’ve never run be<strong>for</strong>e. I am just seconds away from safety<br />

when it happens. I hear a hissing, spitting sound. I am suddenly<br />

bathed in Liquid Fire.<br />

11. Aaarrrgghh! It burns! I try to keep moving, but my strength is<br />

fading ... fading ... everything is turning black ... I can’t—<br />

12. Amy stands up from looking under the car and snaps the cap back<br />

on the insect spray.<br />

13. ‘One less cockroach to worry about’, she says to herself.<br />

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SENTENCE BEGINNINGS – WHEN AND WHERE?<br />

Sentence beginnings are important.<br />

Sentences should start in different, interesting ways.<br />

1. An adverbial telling when something happened is a good way to start a <strong>sentence</strong>.<br />

Complete the <strong>sentence</strong>s. They all start by telling when something happened.<br />

(a) As I was going out into the kitchen, I<br />

(b) After the monster saw me,<br />

(c) A few minutes later,<br />

2. Add an interesting <strong>sentence</strong> beginning telling when each thing happened.<br />

(a)<br />

(b)<br />

(c)<br />

after me.<br />

the shadows.<br />

the Liquid Fire.<br />

the monster lumbered<br />

I pressed myself back into<br />

I felt the searing sting of<br />

3. An adverbial telling where something happened is also a good way to start a <strong>sentence</strong>.<br />

Write interesting <strong>sentence</strong>s starting with phrases telling where something happened.<br />

(a) Beneath the Metal Skin,<br />

(b) All around the walls,<br />

(c) Deep in the shadows,<br />

(d) Resting snugly at home,<br />

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SENTENCE BEGINNINGS – HOW?<br />

1. Complete the <strong>sentence</strong>s which start by telling how something is happening. Be<br />

imaginative. Use descriptive verbs.<br />

(a) With great fear,<br />

(b) With a rush of heat, the<br />

(c) With every ounce of speed,<br />

(d) Without stopping, I<br />

(e) Like a machine, the monster<br />

(f) In complete despair,<br />

2. A verb or verb group can be a good <strong>sentence</strong> beginning. Complete the <strong>sentence</strong>s<br />

beginning with a verb.<br />

(a) Flinging myself beneath the Metal Skin,<br />

(b) Wishing I had listened to her,<br />

(c) Dropping to the ground, the monster<br />

(d) Struggling to breathe,<br />

(e) Gasping in horror,<br />

(f) Surging ahead,<br />

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SENTENCE BEGINNINGS – AND THEN ...<br />

1. (a) What is wrong with the <strong>sentence</strong>s about Ryan Roach?<br />

Ryan saw the monster. And then he ran away. And then the monster chased him. And<br />

then Ryan got sprayed. And then he died.<br />

(b) Rewrite it.<br />

2. Improve the <strong>sentence</strong>s by changing some of the words and using a conjunction.<br />

(a) I ran into the area. And then I threw myself beneath a Metal Skin.<br />

(b) The monster saw me try to escape. And then it sprayed me with Liquid Fire.<br />

(c) My mother warned me about the light. And then she didn't listen to her own advice.<br />

3. (a) In your own words, what is the problem with the <strong>sentence</strong>s in Paragraph 10?<br />

(b) How could these <strong>sentence</strong>s be improved?<br />

(c) Write the same in<strong>for</strong>mation in your own words.<br />

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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />

CONJUNCTIONS<br />

UNIT 7<br />

Focus<br />

Sentence <strong>structure</strong> – conjunctions<br />

Progression<br />

Recognise<br />

Students will recognise a conjunction from modelled examples.<br />

Choose<br />

Students will choose conjunctions from given examples, with<br />

teacher support.<br />

Use<br />

Students will use appropriate conjunctions in supplied and selfwritten<br />

<strong>sentence</strong>s.<br />

Definition of terms<br />

Conjunctions are joining words which can be used to connect<br />

words, phrases and <strong>sentence</strong>s.<br />

Paragraphs are sections of writing dealing with a particular<br />

subject or point, beginning on a new line.<br />

Persuasive texts are written to put <strong>for</strong>ward a position which the<br />

writer wishes to persuade others to share.<br />

Introduction<br />

Good writers improve their writing by improving <strong>sentence</strong><br />

<strong>structure</strong> using appropriate conjunctions.<br />

Teacher in<strong>for</strong>mation<br />

Conjunctions:<br />

• enable a writer to build and combine ideas and to avoid<br />

repetition<br />

• can be placed between two clauses or at the beginning of a<br />

longer <strong>sentence</strong><br />

• can be used to create a complex <strong>sentence</strong> by joining a<br />

dependent clause with an independent clause.<br />

The position of the conjunction can help readers to know which<br />

part of the <strong>sentence</strong> is the focus.<br />

LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />

Introduction<br />

• Discuss the text title. Who could need to be told ‘Don’t stay silent’?<br />

• Have a general class discussion about cyberbullying. Ensure<br />

students are aware that even innocent ‘jokes’ may constitute<br />

cyberbullying.<br />

• Introduce the term ‘conjunctions’ and explain that they enable a<br />

writer to combine ideas and to avoid repetition. For example: I<br />

bought a computer. I bought a printer. = I bought a computer and a<br />

printer.<br />

• Brainstorm conjunctions to list on the board.<br />

• Read the text with the class.<br />

• Ask students to identify the text type and discuss the purpose and<br />

features of persuasive text.<br />

• Identify the writer’s position as stated in Paragraph 1, the arguments<br />

organised in separate paragraphs and the restating of the writer’s<br />

position in the final paragraph.<br />

• Identify some of the conjunctions used in the text.<br />

Joining <strong>sentence</strong>s – Conjunctions – Page 45<br />

• Read and discuss the definition at the top of the page.<br />

• Read Paragraph 1 and identify the different ideas that are linked or<br />

joined in the first <strong>sentence</strong>; that is:<br />

– is a great technological advance<br />

– the world is at our fingertips<br />

– family and friends are readily contacted<br />

– worldwide messaging is available instantly<br />

– there is a dark side<br />

• Work through the activities with the class as a whole, ensuring they<br />

understand what is required of them.<br />

• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />

of the class work independently on the activities.<br />

Using conjunctions – Page 46<br />

• Review students’ understanding of the term ‘conjunction’ and ask<br />

them to provide examples.<br />

• Read the words in Question 1 with the class.<br />

• List other words or phrases that can be used as conjunctions.<br />

• Explain that the words in Question 1 should be used only once and<br />

not all will be needed.<br />

• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />

of the class work independently on the activities.<br />

• In pairs, students can share the <strong>sentence</strong>s they wrote in Question 3.<br />

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CONJUNCTIONS<br />

UNIT 7<br />

Which conjunction? – Page 47<br />

• Discuss and list conjunctions of time with the class and explain that<br />

they will need to use some of them in Question 1.<br />

• Explain that conjunctions can be used to tell that one event caused<br />

the other. Conjunctions showing cause will be used in Questions 2<br />

and 3.<br />

• In Question 4, conjunctions are used to compare and contrast.<br />

• In Question 5, independent clauses (main ideas—make sense on<br />

their own) are joined to dependent clauses (supporting ideas—don’t<br />

make sense on their own) with a beginning conjunction.<br />

• Brainstorm and make three lists of adverbials that could tell how,<br />

when and where.<br />

ANSWERS<br />

Joining <strong>sentence</strong>s – Conjunctions – Page 45<br />

1. (a) and<br />

(b) Yes<br />

(c) Teacher check<br />

(d) Bullying causes grief. We must work together to stamp it out.<br />

2. (a) 5<br />

(b) Report it!<br />

(c) Teacher check: By doing nothing, you are supporting it,<br />

so report it./Report it, because by doing nothing you are<br />

supporting it.<br />

(d) Teacher check<br />

3. (a) but<br />

(b) Teacher check: ‘because’ is possible.<br />

(c) There is a dark side and we must stand against it.<br />

4. (a) but<br />

(b) Teacher check: Possible — Although it’s a huge concern, as<br />

a society we can and must defeat it.<br />

Which conjunction? – Page 47<br />

1. (a) I went online be<strong>for</strong>e/then I went to sleep.<br />

(b) Be<strong>for</strong>e/When turning off the computer, save your work.<br />

(c) Be<strong>for</strong>e/Unless I eat dinner I will be hungry.<br />

2.–4. Teacher check<br />

ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />

Assessment activity – Page 56<br />

1. (a) but<br />

(b) I tried to eat my soup. It was far too hot.<br />

2. (a) Teacher check: Possible – Don’t be a cyberbully because it<br />

causes people too much pain.<br />

(b) Teacher check: Possible – It will be too late once/when/after<br />

the damage is done.<br />

(c) Teacher check: Possible – Cyberbullying can be deadly even<br />

though/although you might not think so.<br />

3. Teacher check<br />

4. Teacher check: Possible – Dry yourself on the towel after you<br />

have your bath.<br />

5.–6. Teacher check<br />

Class recording sheet – Page vii<br />

ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />

• Paragraph topic – Be kind to others<br />

• Focus: Sentence <strong>structure</strong> – conjunctions<br />

Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />

Using conjunctions – Page 46<br />

1. (a) because<br />

(b) if<br />

(c) although<br />

(d) but<br />

(e) Unless<br />

(f) be<strong>for</strong>e<br />

2. (a) yes<br />

(b) Teacher check<br />

(c) full stop<br />

(d) Teacher check<br />

3. Teacher check<br />

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DON'T STAY SILENT!<br />

1. Being able to go ‘online’ is one of the great technological advances of our time. The world is at your fingertips<br />

to explore in words, images, videos and music. Your family and friends are just a few clicks or taps away.<br />

You can send messages instantly across thousands of miles. But there is a dark side, too, and I am going to<br />

convince you to take a stand against it.<br />

2. Cyberbullying. Online bullying. It doesn’t sound too bad, does it? After all, it’s not like you can be pinched or<br />

shoved over the internet. While that may be true, cyberbullying is a massive worldwide plague. It causes untold<br />

grief <strong>for</strong> millions, particularly children, and we must work together to stamp it out.<br />

3. You and one or two of your friends might think it’s a just a joke to send messages to a classmate saying things<br />

like, ‘U R fat’ or ‘The boys in the class all hate you’ or ‘You are useless at football’. Well, it’s not a joke, it’s<br />

cyberbullying and it’s a criminal offence. Those ‘innocent jokes’ can stay with the victims <strong>for</strong> the rest of their<br />

life. They can withdraw into themselves, not sleep, not eat or overeat, become bullies themselves, become very<br />

ill—or even worse. It has to stop!<br />

4. Did you take an embarrassing photo or video of someone at school, perhaps because that person is different<br />

from you, or not part of the ‘in’ group? Did you then post that image or video online—<strong>for</strong> the world to see and<br />

laugh at? Did you ever start a rumour about someone, or tell a ‘little lie’ about them? This is cyberbullying.<br />

Don’t do it!<br />

5. Some of you are thinking, ‘Well, I know it happens, but I don’t do<br />

it myself, so I’m not a bully’. You are wrong! If you see it, hear it,<br />

know about it and you don’t do anything about it, you are just as<br />

bad as the actual bullies. By doing nothing, you are supporting<br />

it. Report it!<br />

I HATE YOU!<br />

6. So then, what do I want you to do? If you are a cyberbully, or<br />

even thinking it might be funny, stop and think. Put yourself in<br />

the other person’s shoes. How would you like to feel totally alone<br />

in the world, with no friends to turn to? How would you like your<br />

personal secrets splashed all over the internet? How would you<br />

like people to judge you on lies or rumours someone else posted about you? You wouldn’t like it, would you?<br />

7. For any of you being cyberbullied, here are some things to remember:<br />

• Don’t stay silent—you are not alone. Find a trusted adult to tell what is happening.<br />

• Don’t respond to the bullying, you will just encourage it.<br />

• If you know the bully, block him or her from all your contacts.<br />

• Don’t delete the messages; show your parents or a teacher.<br />

• If necessary, go with your parents to the police. Truly, it can be that serious.<br />

8. Yes, it’s a huge concern, but as a society we can and must defeat it.<br />

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JOINING SENTENCES – CONJUNCTIONS<br />

A conjunction joins two <strong>sentence</strong>s, phrases or words. When used correctly, conjunctions<br />

link ideas, assist writing to flow better and make it more readable.<br />

For example: ‘I made a lemon drink. It was too sour. I added some honey.’<br />

‘I made a lemon drink but it was too sour, so I added some honey.’<br />

1. Read Paragraph 2.<br />

(a) What is the conjunction used in the last <strong>sentence</strong>?<br />

(b) Do you think the last <strong>sentence</strong> is well constructed? Yes No<br />

(c) Does it start in an interesting way? Yes No<br />

(d) What are the two connected ideas in the <strong>sentence</strong>?<br />

2. Read Paragraph 5.<br />

(a) How many <strong>sentence</strong>s does it contain?<br />

(b) Write the shortest <strong>sentence</strong>.<br />

(c) Use a conjunction to join this <strong>sentence</strong> to the one be<strong>for</strong>e it.<br />

(d) Which word or words did you use to join them?<br />

3. Use a conjunction to join the <strong>sentence</strong>s.<br />

(a) Cyberbullying is a major problem. It can be stopped.<br />

(b) Don’t stay silent. You are not alone.<br />

(c) There is a dark side. We must stand against it.<br />

4. Read Paragraph 8. The <strong>sentence</strong> is two ideas joined by a conjunction.<br />

(a) What is the conjunction?<br />

(b) Use a different conjunction to join the two ideas. You may change some words.<br />

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UNIT 7<br />

USING CONJUNCTIONS<br />

1. Join two <strong>sentence</strong>s using these conjunctions.<br />

unless after if be<strong>for</strong>e during but although because<br />

(a) We must stop cyberbullying.<br />

It ruins so many lives.<br />

(b)<br />

You don’t report bullying. You are as bad as the bully.<br />

(c) People still bully others online.<br />

(d) Starting false rumours about someone is nasty.<br />

They know it is wrong.<br />

People still do it.<br />

(e)<br />

(f) Stop and think.<br />

You report cyberbullying. It will get worse.<br />

You send a nasty message.<br />

2. (a) Did you notice that there were capitals that wouldn’t be<br />

needed if you were writing a joined <strong>sentence</strong> in Question 1?<br />

(b) Write one of the joined <strong>sentence</strong>s. Punctuate it correctly.<br />

(c) What other punctuation from the two <strong>sentence</strong>s didn’t you need?<br />

(d) Write a <strong>sentence</strong> using a conjunction you didn’t use in Question 1.<br />

3. Write an interesting <strong>sentence</strong> with two ideas using the words as a conjunctions.<br />

(a) until<br />

(b) because<br />

(c) whether<br />

(d) though<br />

(e) where<br />

(f) except<br />

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WHICH CONJUNCTION?<br />

1. Some writers use incorrect conjunctions of time. Write the <strong>sentence</strong>s so they make<br />

sense. You can change the word order and you may need to change the verbs slightly.<br />

(a) I went online after I went to sleep.<br />

(b) After turning off the computer, save your work.<br />

(c) While I eat dinner I will be hungry.<br />

2. Explain how one event is caused by another by using the conjunction in the middle of a<br />

<strong>sentence</strong> joining two ideas.<br />

(a) because<br />

(b) so that<br />

3. Start each <strong>sentence</strong> with the conjunction to show one thing caused something to happen.<br />

(a) Although<br />

(b) When<br />

4. Write a <strong>sentence</strong> using the conjunction to contrast and compare two different things.<br />

(a) instead<br />

(b) except<br />

5. Good writers use a beginning conjunction to join a main idea in a <strong>sentence</strong> with a<br />

supporting idea. The ideas are always separated by a comma; e.g. Be<strong>for</strong>e you leave<br />

(supporting), sign the guest book (main). Write endings that make sense by themselves to<br />

go with the beginning conjunctions.<br />

(a) If you don’t wear a raincoat,<br />

(b) Be<strong>for</strong>e you eat dinner,<br />

(c) As it’s the weekend,<br />

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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />

PARAGRAPHS<br />

UNIT 8<br />

Focus<br />

Sentence <strong>structure</strong> – paragraphs<br />

Progression<br />

Recognise<br />

Students will recognise a paragraph from modelled examples.<br />

Choose<br />

Students will choose ideas and <strong>sentence</strong>s <strong>for</strong> paragraphs with<br />

teacher support.<br />

Use<br />

Students will choose in<strong>for</strong>mation <strong>for</strong> paragraphs in supplied and<br />

self-written paragraphs.<br />

Definition of terms<br />

Paragraphs are sections of writing dealing with a particular<br />

subject or point, beginning on a new line.<br />

A topic <strong>sentence</strong> is a <strong>sentence</strong> in a paragraph, usually the first,<br />

that introduces the main idea of that paragraph.<br />

Introduction<br />

Good writers improve their writing by improving <strong>sentence</strong><br />

<strong>structure</strong> in paragraphs.<br />

Teacher in<strong>for</strong>mation<br />

Paragraphs enable a writer to organise and combine ideas to<br />

aid comprehension. A topic <strong>sentence</strong> connects ideas within a<br />

paragraph.<br />

LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />

Introduction<br />

• Discuss the text title.<br />

• Brainstorm in<strong>for</strong>mation about whales.<br />

• Read the text with the class.<br />

• Ask students to identify the text type and discuss the features of<br />

in<strong>for</strong>mative text.<br />

• Discuss the paragraphs and the subheadings.<br />

• Ask if all the subheadings are in the <strong>for</strong>m of a question. Why use<br />

questions as subheadings?<br />

• What purpose do subheadings serve?<br />

Paragraphs – Page 51<br />

• Read and discuss the definition at the top of the page.<br />

• Read Paragraph 1. What is it about?<br />

• Is the subheading helpful? Why?<br />

• Work through the remainder of the activities with the class as a<br />

whole, ensuring they understand what is required of them.<br />

• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />

of the class work independently on the activities.<br />

Planning paragraphs – Page 52<br />

• Read and discuss the in<strong>for</strong>mation at the top of the page.<br />

• Discuss deep-sea fishing. Write on the board any in<strong>for</strong>mation given<br />

by students. They will find this useful <strong>for</strong> Question 2(c).<br />

• Question 2 requires students to choose a question word <strong>for</strong> their<br />

first paragraph.<br />

• Explain that this is a decision each writer must make <strong>for</strong> himself/<br />

herself.<br />

• Students could share their first <strong>sentence</strong>s from Question 2(d) with a<br />

small group.<br />

<strong>Writing</strong> paragraphs – Page 53<br />

• Discuss snow and how it looks, sounds, feels and even smells.<br />

• What happens to snow at different times of the year?<br />

• Provide opportunities <strong>for</strong> students to read and discuss their<br />

paragraphs in small groups. They should decide how appropriate the<br />

in<strong>for</strong>mation is to that particular paragraph.<br />

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PARAGRAPHS<br />

UNIT 8<br />

ANSWERS<br />

Paragraphs – Page 51<br />

1. (a) Yes<br />

(b) Yes<br />

2. (a) Paragraph<br />

(b) Teacher check: Could include ‘loudest creature on earth’ or<br />

‘louder than a jet engine’.<br />

(c) Yes<br />

(d) Teacher check<br />

3. (a) True<br />

(b) False<br />

(c) False<br />

(d) False<br />

(e) True<br />

4. Teacher check: Could include ‘Harder to read/understand/gain<br />

in<strong>for</strong>mation’ etc.<br />

5. (a) In<strong>for</strong>mative<br />

(b) Teacher check: Could include ‘Use as an organisational tool,<br />

aid to comprehension’ etc.<br />

(c) Teacher check. Answers will vary.<br />

ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />

Assessment activity – Page 57<br />

1. (a) true<br />

(b) false<br />

(c) true<br />

(d) false<br />

2. Teacher check<br />

3. (a) Teacher check<br />

(b) Teacher check: Accept reasoned answers.<br />

(c) Teacher check<br />

4. Teacher check<br />

Class recording sheet – Page vii<br />

ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />

• Paragraph topic – Useful ice<br />

• Focus: Sentence <strong>structure</strong> – paragraphs<br />

Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />

6. (a) Paragraph 6<br />

(b) Paragraph 3<br />

(c) Paragraph 7<br />

(d) Paragraph 2<br />

Planning paragraphs – Page 52<br />

1. (a) 8<br />

(b) 2<br />

(c) What whale types are there? What were whales used <strong>for</strong>?<br />

(d) Teacher check<br />

2. (a) Yes<br />

(b) Teacher check<br />

(c)–(d) Answers will vary.<br />

(e) Teacher check<br />

3. Teacher check<br />

<strong>Writing</strong> paragraphs – Page 53<br />

1. (a) Answers will vary.<br />

(b) Teacher check. Accept reasoned student responses.<br />

(c) Answers will vary.<br />

2. Teacher check. Answers will vary.<br />

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UNIT 8<br />

WHALES<br />

Introduction<br />

1. Whales are the largest animals in the world today.<br />

Not only that, but it is believed they are the largest<br />

animals to ever have existed. Not even ancient<br />

dinosaurs have been found to be as large. A<br />

blue whale can weight over 130 tonnes and be<br />

30 metres long!<br />

2. Whales are mammals, even though they live in the<br />

ocean. This means they are warm-blooded and<br />

their babies—called calves—are born alive and<br />

fed with milk from the mother’s body. Since they<br />

are not fish, they breathe air and have to come up<br />

to the surface to do that. They breathe through a<br />

‘blowhole’ in the top of their head. Some whales<br />

can hold their breath <strong>for</strong> 90 minutes! The average,<br />

though, is about 35 minutes. How long can you<br />

manage?<br />

How loud are whales?<br />

3. Measured by sound levels, whales are also the<br />

loudest creatures on earth. Their calls can be<br />

louder than the sound of a jet engine at takeoff!<br />

Humpback whales also ‘sing’ in very complex<br />

patterns that remind scientists of human ‘music’.<br />

Other sounds made by whales include ‘grunts’,<br />

‘snorts’, ‘clicks’, ‘groans’ and even ‘barks’.<br />

What whale types are there?<br />

4. Baleen whales and toothed whales <strong>for</strong>m the two<br />

major groups. Baleen whales don’t have teeth.<br />

They have ‘plates’ of baleen—a hard substance—<br />

in their mouths. They draw enormous amounts of<br />

water through these plates to trap ‘krill’, small<br />

shrimp-like creatures and plankton, tiny floating<br />

plants and animals, that are their main food. They<br />

can eat tonnes of krill and plankton<br />

a day. Baleen whales include<br />

the humpback and the<br />

blue whale.<br />

5. Toothed whales on the other hand have, as their<br />

name suggests, teeth. They eat fish, such as cod or<br />

tuna, and even small seals. Toothed whales include<br />

dolphins and killer whales.<br />

What were whales used <strong>for</strong>?<br />

6. Early humans, particularly in the Arctic, hunted<br />

whales <strong>for</strong> food. Whale blubber—a thick layer<br />

of fat beneath the skin—and whale meat are<br />

extremely nutritious. Both are a rich source of<br />

vitamins, minerals and protein, which people<br />

needed to survive. Every part of the whale was<br />

used; nothing was wasted.<br />

7. That wasn’t the same story in the mid-19th century.<br />

Sadly, some species of whales were then hunted<br />

to near extinction in the 1800s <strong>for</strong> their oil <strong>for</strong><br />

use in lamps, food—even margarine—cosmetics,<br />

detergents and to lubricate machinery. Whalebone,<br />

usually baleen, was the ‘plastic’ of the 1800s. It<br />

was used to make many everyday items, including<br />

ladies’ corsets, buggy whips and even children’s<br />

toys. Even now, after commercial hunting on a large<br />

scale has ceased, recovery of whale numbers is<br />

slow and some members of the family are still in<br />

danger of becoming extinct.<br />

Whales today<br />

8. Fortunately, <strong>for</strong> them and us, whales are no longer<br />

considered a ‘resource’ to be used up. Instead, they<br />

are seen as beautiful, fascinating creatures that<br />

deserve our respect and care.<br />

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UNIT 8<br />

PARAGRAPHS<br />

A paragraph is one or more <strong>sentence</strong>s about a topic. Good writers often start a paragraph<br />

with a topic <strong>sentence</strong> to explain the main idea first, then they add more in<strong>for</strong>mation.<br />

1. Read Paragraph 1.<br />

(a) Does the first <strong>sentence</strong> tell what the paragraph is about? Yes No<br />

(b) Does the rest of the paragraph add further in<strong>for</strong>mation? Yes No<br />

2. (a) Which paragraph tells about the loudness of whales?<br />

(b) How loud are they?<br />

(c) Does it explain how loud they are in the first <strong>sentence</strong>?<br />

(d) Did the first <strong>sentence</strong> help you understand the paragraph?<br />

3. What do you know about paragraphs? Write ‘true’ or ‘false’ after the statement.<br />

(a) The first <strong>sentence</strong> in a paragraph must start<br />

on a new line with a capital letter.<br />

(b) A paragraph must have two or more <strong>sentence</strong>s.<br />

(c) Paragraphs on a page are separated by numbers.<br />

(d) The last <strong>sentence</strong> must always tell what the paragraph is about.<br />

(e) The <strong>sentence</strong>s in one paragraph should all be about the same topic.<br />

4. Explain what it would be like if the writer hadn’t organised ‘Whales’ into paragraphs with<br />

subheadings.<br />

5. (a) Are subheadings used more often in imaginative or in<strong>for</strong>mative text?<br />

(b) Why?<br />

(c) Is the order of the paragraphs on the page important? Explain your answer.<br />

6. Read the <strong>sentence</strong>s. Which paragraphs would you put them in?<br />

(a) Whales once were a vital food source.<br />

(b) Whale calls can be heard underwater <strong>for</strong> many kilometres.<br />

(c) Plastic replaced whalebone in the 1900s.<br />

(d) Whales can stay underwater <strong>for</strong> long periods.<br />

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UNIT 8<br />

PLANNING PARAGRAPHS<br />

Writers need to make many decisions about what they write and how they organise their<br />

writing. It is important to plan what will be in each paragraph.<br />

When writing in<strong>for</strong>mative text, the words where, when, what, why and how can be helpful.<br />

1. (a) How many paragraphs are in the text, ‘Whales’?<br />

(b) How many paragraphs answer the ‘what’ question?<br />

(c) The ‘what’ questions ask:<br />

• What<br />

• What<br />

(d) Why did they need to be separate paragraphs?<br />

2. (a) Think about deep-sea fishing. Would you start with a paragraph<br />

giving in<strong>for</strong>mation about where, when, what, why or how?<br />

(b) Explain why you chose to give this in<strong>for</strong>mation in your first paragraph.<br />

(c) Use the box to make notes about deep-sea fishing that would fit in this paragraph.<br />

(d) Write the first <strong>sentence</strong> of your paragraph.<br />

(e) Would this make a good topic <strong>sentence</strong>?<br />

3. Subheadings do not have to be questions; <strong>for</strong> example, the subheading <strong>for</strong> Paragraph 4<br />

could be ‘Whale types’.<br />

(a) Write a different subheading <strong>for</strong> Paragraph 3.<br />

(b) Write a subheading <strong>for</strong> your paragraph.<br />

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UNIT 8<br />

WRITING PARAGRAPHS<br />

1. Read the topic <strong>sentence</strong> <strong>for</strong> a new paragraph about snow skiing.<br />

As I strapped on my skis, the snow was looking crisp, clean and invitingly white.<br />

(a) What do you think this paragraph will be about?<br />

(b) Tick the <strong>sentence</strong> you think would be the best second <strong>sentence</strong> <strong>for</strong> this paragraph.<br />

• I wondered if my sunglasses would stop the glare.<br />

• I just wanted to push off and carve up the slope.<br />

• I couldn’t wait to get back inside in front of the fire.<br />

• My knees shook as I looked down the hill.<br />

(c) Think about the next two <strong>sentence</strong>s. Write two that would fit well in this paragraph.<br />

2. This story now needs the second paragraph.<br />

(a) What do you think it should be about?<br />

(b) Write this paragraph. Make sure the <strong>sentence</strong>s are all about the same thing.<br />

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SENTENCES, WORD ORDER,<br />

STATEMENTS, QUESTIONS<br />

ASSESSMENT UNIT 5<br />

Name:<br />

Date:<br />

1. Put a punctuation mark in the box after a <strong>sentence</strong>. Leave the other boxes blank.<br />

(a) Was on another planet<br />

(c) The gum was in my pencil case<br />

(b) When I was doing my homework<br />

(d) Where have you been<br />

2. Change the <strong>sentence</strong> from a positive to a negative using an antonym.<br />

I ran home as quickly as I could.<br />

3. Change the order of the words so the <strong>sentence</strong> makes sense.<br />

(a) the threw into schoolbag phone I my.<br />

(b) home very mother late would cross if I My was be.<br />

4. Add question marks at the end of questions and full stops after any statements.<br />

(a) I had no idea where I was<br />

(b) What do you mean by saying Dad’s going to have words with me<br />

(c) OK, I give up—where am I<br />

(d) It was a question I had to ask<br />

5. Write the question that is answered by the statement.<br />

(a) I just pressed the button and finished up on another planet.<br />

(b) I was by myself when I found the phone.<br />

6. Write a question about:<br />

(a) finding a phone in a field<br />

(b) finding chewing gum in your schoolbag<br />

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ASSESSMENT UNIT 6<br />

SENTENCE BEGINNINGS<br />

Name:<br />

Date:<br />

1. Complete the <strong>sentence</strong> which starts by telling when something happened.<br />

As the sun was setting, the<br />

2. Add an interesting <strong>sentence</strong> beginning telling when the event happened.<br />

Liquid Fire seared my body.<br />

,<br />

3. Complete the <strong>sentence</strong> which starts by telling how something is happening.<br />

With my heart hammering,<br />

4. Complete the <strong>sentence</strong> beginning with a verb.<br />

Screaming in pain and shock,<br />

5. Read the <strong>sentence</strong>s.<br />

The man saw the cockroach. And then he took the insect spray. And then he chased the<br />

cockroach. And then he sprayed it.<br />

Rewrite it.<br />

6. Improve the <strong>sentence</strong> by changing the order of the words and using another conjunction.<br />

(a) I watched until it was quiet and then I raced <strong>for</strong> the safety of darkness.<br />

(b) The monster's footsteps slowed and then its face suddenly appeared be<strong>for</strong>e me.<br />

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ASSESSMENT UNIT 7<br />

CONJUNCTIONS<br />

Name:<br />

Date:<br />

1. Read the <strong>sentence</strong>.<br />

I tried to eat my soup but it was far too hot.<br />

(a) What is the conjunction used?<br />

(b) What are the two connected ideas in the <strong>sentence</strong>?<br />

2. Use a conjunction to join the <strong>sentence</strong>s.<br />

(a) Don’t be a cyberbully. It causes people too much pain.<br />

(b) It will be too late. The damage is done.<br />

(c) Cyberbullying can be deadly. You might not think so.<br />

3. Write an interesting <strong>sentence</strong> with two ideas using the conjunctions.<br />

(a) be<strong>for</strong>e<br />

(b) unless<br />

4. Write the <strong>sentence</strong> so it makes sense.<br />

Dry yourself on the towel be<strong>for</strong>e you have your bath.<br />

5. Write endings that make sense by themselves to go with the beginning conjunctions.<br />

(a) After you’ve eaten lunch,<br />

(b) When you go shopping,<br />

(c) Even though it's raining,<br />

6. Use the conjunction after in the middle of a <strong>sentence</strong> joining two ideas.<br />

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ASSESSMENT UNIT 8<br />

PARAGRAPHS<br />

Name:<br />

Date:<br />

1. Write ‘true’ or ‘false’ after the statement.<br />

(a) The first <strong>sentence</strong> in a paragraph should tell what the paragraph is about.<br />

(b) A paragraph must have more than one <strong>sentence</strong>.<br />

(c) One paragraph; one idea.<br />

(d) Paragraphs must start with a noun.<br />

2. Write three <strong>sentence</strong>s <strong>for</strong> a new paragraph telling about a picnic.<br />

3. Read the topic <strong>sentence</strong> <strong>for</strong> a paragraph.<br />

With the engines screaming at full throttle, the nose leapt skywards and we were airborne.<br />

(a) What do you think this paragraph will be about?<br />

(b) Tick the <strong>sentence</strong> you think would be the best second <strong>sentence</strong> <strong>for</strong> this paragraph.<br />

• I wondered if this flight was ever going to end.<br />

• I leant back against the seat and thought of the holiday to come.<br />

• I looked to see if the hostess was bringing food yet.<br />

• My knuckles were white as I squeezed the armrest.<br />

(c) Think about the third <strong>sentence</strong>. Write one that would fit well in this paragraph.<br />

4. Finish the paragraph.<br />

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