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BOOK E<br />
TEACHING<br />
STRATEGIES<br />
FOR WRITING<br />
Sentence <strong>structure</strong><br />
Australian Primary Publisher<br />
of the Year 2015 and 2016
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book E)<br />
Published by R.I.C. Publications ® 2018<br />
Copyright © Diane Henderson and Bruce Tuffin 2018<br />
<strong>RIC</strong>–<strong>20803</strong><br />
Titles in this series:<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book A)<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book B)<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book C)<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book D)<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book E)<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book F)<br />
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FOREWORD<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing is series of six books using modelling, guided and independent practice to teach<br />
students strategies they can use to improve the clarity, correctness and richness of their writing. The focus is on<br />
<strong>sentence</strong>s, their <strong>structure</strong>, punctuation and word choices and on developing editing and proofreading skills and their<br />
habitual use.<br />
Titles in this series:<br />
• <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book A) • <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book D)<br />
• <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book B) • <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book E)<br />
• <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book C) • <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book F)<br />
TABLE OF CONTENTS<br />
Teacher notes ........................................................................................................................ iv–v<br />
Class recording sheets<br />
Assessment activities ..................................................................................................... vi–ix<br />
Assessment writing tasks ................................................................................................ x–xi<br />
Student writing checklist ........................................................................................................ xii<br />
Student writing task – self-evaluation .................................................................................. xiii<br />
WORD CHOICES<br />
Unit 1 Nouns, noun groups and adjectives ............................................................ 2–7<br />
Unit 2 Pronouns, confusing pronouns (me/I), which pronoun? ........................... 8–13<br />
Unit 3 Verbs, descriptive and overused verbs, adverbials ................................. 14–19<br />
Unit 4 Choosing correct verbs: tense, consistency,<br />
subject, regular, irregular ......................................................................... 20–25<br />
Assessment................................................................................................................... 26–29<br />
SENTENCE STRUCTURE<br />
Unit 5 Sentences, word order, statements, questions ....................................... 30–35<br />
Unit 6 Sentence beginnings ............................................................................... 36–41<br />
Unit 7 Conjunctions ............................................................................................ 42–47<br />
Unit 8 Paragraphs ............................................................................................... 48–53<br />
Assessment................................................................................................................... 54–57<br />
PUNCTUATION<br />
Unit 9 Using punctuation in <strong>sentence</strong>s .............................................................. 58–63<br />
Unit 10 Full stops, capital letters, commas, direct speech ................................. 64–69<br />
Unit 11 Apostrophes in contractions ................................................................... 70–75<br />
Unit 12 Apostrophes <strong>for</strong> possession .................................................................... 76–81<br />
Assessment................................................................................................................... 82–85<br />
EDITING AND PROOFREADING<br />
Unit 13<br />
Unit 14<br />
Unit 15<br />
Unit 16<br />
Spelling (vowel sounds), <strong>sentence</strong> <strong>structure</strong>,<br />
punctuation, word choices, editing ........................................................ 86–91<br />
Spelling (more vowel sounds), <strong>sentence</strong> <strong>structure</strong>,<br />
punctuation, word choices, editing ......................................................... 92–97<br />
Spelling (suffixes) <strong>sentence</strong> <strong>structure</strong>,<br />
punctuation, word choices, editing ....................................................... 98–103<br />
Spelling (homophones), <strong>sentence</strong> <strong>structure</strong>,<br />
punctuation, word choices, editing ..................................................... 104–109<br />
Assessment............................................................................................................... 110–113<br />
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TEACHER NOTES<br />
ABOUT WRITING<br />
A good writer is not simply one who knows about and can<br />
use text types. A good writer is one with the capacity to<br />
produce interesting, in<strong>for</strong>mative, grammatically correct<br />
text, <strong>for</strong> a specific purpose, that achieves any writer’s<br />
intent – clear, precise communication.<br />
TEACHING WRITING<br />
Students can and should be taught strategies that will<br />
help them to write better. These include improvements<br />
in word choices, <strong>sentence</strong> <strong>structure</strong>, punctuation and<br />
editing and proofreading. <strong>Writing</strong> strategies taught<br />
should be modelled, discussed and then applied, firstly<br />
with teacher support and then independently. However,<br />
the emphasis always should be on the writing process,<br />
which requires <strong>for</strong>ethought, planning and a rational,<br />
measured approach in order to produce the desired<br />
outcome. Editing and proofreading are essential<br />
components of any writing. It is important that students<br />
edit and proofread habitually, with a specific purpose,<br />
and concentrate on the careful consideration of each<br />
<strong>sentence</strong>, one at a time. Activities provided in this series<br />
encourage students to think about appropriate aspects<br />
of their writing be<strong>for</strong>e, during and after the process.<br />
LESSON PROCEDURE<br />
Introduction<br />
Discuss the text title with the students. Ask <strong>for</strong> their<br />
interpretations of what the title could mean.<br />
Discuss the text type. Why does it fit into this category?<br />
What are the specific features of this type of text?<br />
Guide the discussion to introduce the teaching points/<br />
strategies to be covered during the course of the unit.<br />
For example, check they understand terms such as noun<br />
group, adverbial, <strong>sentence</strong>, paragraph and comma.<br />
Development<br />
Read and discuss the text, either in groups or as a<br />
class. Assist students with any unfamiliar vocabulary or<br />
expressions.<br />
Differentiation<br />
Work through the introductory activities with the class<br />
as a whole, ensuring students understand what is<br />
required of them.<br />
Work with those requiring additional assistance while<br />
the remainder of the class work independently on the<br />
activities.<br />
ASSESSMENT<br />
An assessment is included <strong>for</strong> each unit in the book.<br />
Because of the way it is <strong>structure</strong>d, this assessment<br />
will allow you to see individual student’s understandings<br />
as well as any common points of weakness which may<br />
require further assistance.<br />
FORMAT<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing is organised into four<br />
sections:<br />
Word choices<br />
Punctuation<br />
Sentence <strong>structure</strong><br />
Editing and proofreading<br />
Each section has four units of work and one assessment<br />
unit.<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> units<br />
Each six-page unit of work has a specific focus, two<br />
teacher pages and four activity pages.<br />
Assessment units<br />
• Following each section is a four-page unit of<br />
assessment activities–one page <strong>for</strong> each unit.<br />
• Answers are provided in the teachers pages <strong>for</strong> that<br />
unit.<br />
• Teacher record sheets – see pages vi–ix.<br />
Assessment writing tasks<br />
• A suggested paragraph writing topic <strong>for</strong> each unit is<br />
provided on the teachers pages.<br />
• Teacher recording sheet – see pages x–xi.<br />
• Student writing checklist – see page xii.<br />
• Student self-evaluation – see page xiii.<br />
Review<br />
In pairs or small groups, students review their answers,<br />
giving their reasoning where required and critiquing the<br />
longer <strong>sentence</strong> or paragraph responses.<br />
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Sample open pages<br />
Teacher page 1 Teacher page 2<br />
Activity page 1 Activity page 2<br />
Activity page 3 Activity page 4<br />
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ASSESSMENT ACTIVITIES<br />
CLASS RECORD<br />
Date:<br />
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ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />
CLASS RECORD<br />
Unit: Focus: Date:<br />
Paragraph topic:<br />
Name<br />
Comment<br />
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STUDENT WRITING CHECKLIST<br />
Name:<br />
Date:<br />
Assessment writing topic:<br />
Paragraph<br />
I have read the paragraph and it makes sense. ..........................................................<br />
I have read it to check <strong>for</strong> spelling errors. ..................................................................<br />
I have made corrections. ............................................................................................<br />
Punctuation<br />
I have checked the <strong>sentence</strong>s one at a time <strong>for</strong>:<br />
• capital letters to start <strong>sentence</strong>s and proper nouns. ...........................................<br />
• full stops, question marks, exclamation marks. .................................................<br />
• commas. ................................................................................................................<br />
• apostrophes <strong>for</strong> contractions and ownership. ......................................................<br />
• speech marks. .......................................................................................................<br />
I have made corrections. ............................................................................................<br />
Sentences<br />
I have checked the <strong>sentence</strong>s one at a time <strong>for</strong>:<br />
• sense – Does each <strong>sentence</strong> make sense by itself? ............................................<br />
• length – Are any <strong>sentence</strong>s too long? ...................................................................<br />
Should they be separated? .....................................................................<br />
Should some be joined? ..........................................................................<br />
• beginnings – Have I used interesting beginnings? ...............................................<br />
Word choices<br />
I have made changes. ......................................................................<br />
verbs – Are they in<strong>for</strong>mative and different? ...............................................................<br />
Have I used the correct verb tense? ...............................................................<br />
Are there too many boring verbs? ..................................................................<br />
adverbials – Do some verbs need adverbials to tell how,<br />
when or where something happened? ...................................................<br />
noun groups – Are the noun groups descriptive? ......................................................<br />
Can I add some descriptive adjectives to tell<br />
more about nouns and pronouns? ......................................................<br />
pronouns – Have I used the correct pronouns? .........................................................<br />
I have made changes and corrections. ....................................................<br />
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STUDENT SELF-EVALUATION<br />
Name: Unit: Date:<br />
I wrote a paragraph about:<br />
My goal was to focus on:<br />
How well did I achieve my goal?<br />
Three things I did well in my writing were:<br />
•<br />
•<br />
•<br />
Next time I write a paragraph I will try to:<br />
STUDENT SELF-EVALUATION<br />
Name: Unit: Date:<br />
I wrote a paragraph about:<br />
My goal was to focus on:<br />
How well did I achieve my goal?<br />
Three things I did well in my writing were:<br />
•<br />
•<br />
•<br />
Next time I write a paragraph I will try to:<br />
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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />
SENTENCES, WORD ORDER,<br />
STATEMENTS, QUESTIONS<br />
UNIT 5<br />
Focus<br />
Sentence <strong>structure</strong> – <strong>sentence</strong>s, word order, statements to<br />
questions<br />
Progression<br />
Recognise<br />
Students will recognise a <strong>sentence</strong> from modelled examples.<br />
Choose<br />
Students will choose a variety of <strong>sentence</strong>s from given examples,<br />
with teacher support.<br />
Use<br />
Students will use <strong>sentence</strong>s in self-written <strong>sentence</strong>s and<br />
paragraphs.<br />
Definition of terms<br />
A <strong>sentence</strong> is a set of words that makes sense by itself. It may be<br />
a statement, a question, an exclamation or a command.<br />
Nouns are words used to name people, things and feelings.<br />
An antonym is a word which has the opposite meaning to another<br />
word.<br />
A rhetorical question is one which is making a point rather than<br />
seeking an answer.<br />
Introduction<br />
Good writers improve their writing by planning <strong>sentence</strong>s and<br />
paragraphs.<br />
LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />
Introduction<br />
• Discuss the text title with the class.<br />
• What do they think the text is about?<br />
• What do they know about mobile phones?<br />
• Identify the number of paragraphs and discuss why they are not very<br />
long.<br />
• Explain that a new line and paragraph is required <strong>for</strong> each new<br />
action/event.<br />
• Discuss why organising text in this way is important. (It helps the<br />
reader to understand the sequence of events.)<br />
• Read the text with the class.<br />
Sentences, changing <strong>sentence</strong>s – Page 33<br />
• Read and discuss the definitions at the top of the page.<br />
• Explain that <strong>sentence</strong>s can be either long or short and that the<br />
number of words in a set of words is unrelated to whether or not it<br />
qualifies as a <strong>sentence</strong>.<br />
• Discuss different types of <strong>sentence</strong>s—statements, questions,<br />
commands and exclamations—and how each is punctuated.<br />
• Explain that a small change in a <strong>sentence</strong> can make a big difference<br />
to its meaning or give the opposite meaning; <strong>for</strong> example, adding<br />
suffixes, the word ‘not’ or by writing an antonym.<br />
• Explain the terms ‘positive’ and ‘negative’.<br />
• Work through the activities with the class as a whole, ensuring they<br />
understand what is required of them.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
Word order – Page 34<br />
• Explain that word order can make a difference.<br />
• Discuss some of the reasons students gave to Question 2(a) (sounds<br />
better, traditional, easier to say etc.)<br />
• Work through the activities with the class as a whole, ensuring they<br />
understand what is required of them.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
Questions – Page 35<br />
• Discuss with students the definition at the top of the page. (Ignore<br />
rhetorical questions.)<br />
• Work with the class as a whole, demonstrating methods of changing<br />
statements to questions. Ensure students are com<strong>for</strong>table with this<br />
concept.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />
SENTENCES, WORD ORDER,<br />
STATEMENTS, QUESTIONS<br />
UNIT 5<br />
ANSWERS<br />
Sentences, changing <strong>sentence</strong>s – Page 33<br />
1. (c) and (d) require full stops; (e) requires a question mark;<br />
(f) requires an exclamation mark<br />
2. (a) I could not see one part that looked like it did something. /I<br />
could see one part that looked like it did nothing.<br />
(b) I could not hear a ringing sound.<br />
(c) Your father will not have words with you when you get home.<br />
3. (a) unhappy<br />
(b) no<br />
(c) many/numerous/’lots of’ – Teacher check<br />
(d) <strong>for</strong>got<br />
Word order – Page 34<br />
1. (a) fingers and toes<br />
(b) shoes and socks<br />
(c) night and day<br />
(d) black and white<br />
(e) rock and roll<br />
2. (a) Teacher check<br />
(b) possibly rock and roll<br />
(c)–(d) Teacher check<br />
3. (a) Suddenly, I caught a glimpse of my watch.<br />
(b) I found a phone half-buried in the ground.<br />
(c) I was lucky the chewing gum still had some flavour left.<br />
(d) Why were there three moons in the sky?<br />
(e) I ran home so I wouldn’t be late.<br />
(f) After I brushed off the dirt with my T-shirt, I could see it was<br />
unmarked.<br />
ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />
Assessment activity – Page 54<br />
1. (a) blank<br />
(b) blank<br />
(c) full stop<br />
(d) question mark<br />
2. Teacher check: I ran home as slowly as I could.<br />
3. (a) I threw the phone into my schoolbag.<br />
(b) My mother would be very cross if I was late home./My mother<br />
would be cross if I was very late home.<br />
4. (a) full stop<br />
(b) question mark<br />
(c) question mark<br />
(d) full stop<br />
5. Teacher check:<br />
(a) What did you do and where did you go?<br />
(b) Who was with you?<br />
6. Teacher check<br />
Class record sheet – Page vii<br />
ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />
• Paragraph topic – Flying cars<br />
• Focus: Sentence <strong>structure</strong> – <strong>sentence</strong>s, changing <strong>sentence</strong>s, word<br />
order, questions<br />
Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />
Questions – Page 35<br />
1. (a) full stop<br />
(b) question mark<br />
(c) full stop<br />
(d) question mark<br />
(e) full stop<br />
2. (a) Teacher check: Where were you and what were you doing?<br />
(b) where, what<br />
(c) was<br />
(d) ‘I’ to ‘you’<br />
3.–4. Teacher check.<br />
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UNIT 5<br />
THE NEW PHONE<br />
1. When I saw the phone, just lying in the field, I couldn’t believe my<br />
eyes! It was sitting upright, its bottom half buried in the ground,<br />
as if it was growing there. With some ef<strong>for</strong>t, I managed to wiggle<br />
it backwards and <strong>for</strong>wards until it popped free.<br />
2. I thought it would be broken, since it was obviously pushed into<br />
the earth with great <strong>for</strong>ce. But after I brushed off the dirt with my<br />
T-shirt, I could see it was unmarked—not even a single scratch.<br />
I turned it over in my hands and examined it from every angle.<br />
3. It was bigger than a normal phone and smaller than a tablet. I<br />
couldn’t see any maker’s name on it—or any other markings <strong>for</strong><br />
that matter. There was just the screen, now dark, with a single<br />
‘dimple’ below. It seemed to be made of some sort of very heavy<br />
metal—and it ‘trembled’ ever so slightly in my hands. Weird!<br />
4. Suddenly, I caught a glimpse of my watch. Oh, crumbs! I was late.<br />
If I didn’t get my skates on, Mum would skin me alive! I threw the phone into my bag and ran all the way home.<br />
5. Later that evening, I was in my room doing my homework when I remembered the phone. Closing my homework<br />
(quite happily—who likes homework anyway?), I rummaged around in the bottom of my bag. Oh, so that’s where<br />
that wad of half-eaten chewing gum went. I peeled it off my pencil case and popped it into my mouth. Yes! It<br />
still had a lot of flavour left.<br />
6. Now, where was I? Oh, yes, the phone. I laid it on my desk and pulled the lamp closer. The phone gleamed in the<br />
light. I could see only one part that looked like it did anything, so I pressed the indentation below the screen.<br />
Nothing happened. Flat battery, I thought—though I couldn’t see anywhere to plug a charger in—even if I had<br />
one!<br />
7. I was just about to drop it into a desk drawer when the screen flashed into dazzling life. There were no logos,<br />
no icons, no photos. Instead there was a single word in black, pulsating letters. HOME. Perhaps if I rang<br />
whoever HOME was, I could tell them I’d found their phone.<br />
8. I tapped the word HOME. There was a ringing tone and then a woman’s voice snapped, ‘About time too! Where<br />
have you been now?’ The voice didn’t sound very happy! I was about to explain when she went on. ‘Never mind,<br />
Just get yourself home right away! Your father will have words with you later.’<br />
9. There was a ‘click’ and then just the word HOME on the screen. She’d hung up! A bit annoyed, I pressed HOME<br />
again. I felt a wave of dizziness ... or something ... wash over me. It was like being on a roller-coaster. I closed<br />
my eyes until it passed and I didn’t feel like I was going to be sick.<br />
10. When I opened them again, I was standing on a tree-lined street. Cars whirred silently past me. They had no<br />
wheels—they floated above the ground—and no drivers! The sky was alive with small flying machines darting<br />
here and there among towering skyscrapers that reached into the clouds.<br />
11. And in the purple sky itself was not one, but three moons.<br />
12. Where on earth was I?<br />
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SENTENCES, CHANGING SENTENCES<br />
A <strong>sentence</strong> is a set of words—a statement, question, exclamation or command—that<br />
makes sense by itself.<br />
An antonym is a word which has the opposite meaning to another word.<br />
1. A <strong>sentence</strong> must make sense on its own. Put a punctuation mark in the boxes after a<br />
<strong>sentence</strong> and nothing in the other boxes.<br />
(a) Pushed into the earth with great<br />
(b) If I didn’t get my skates on<br />
(c) I caught a glimpse of my watch<br />
(d) The voice didn’t sound very happy<br />
(e) What was the tune<br />
(f) Get yourself home NOW<br />
Writers can give a new meaning to a <strong>sentence</strong> by making small changes.<br />
For example: by adding words like ‘not’ or by adding a prefix—‘likely’ to ‘unlikely’—or by<br />
writing an antonym.<br />
2. Change the <strong>sentence</strong> from a positive to a negative by adding a word.<br />
(a) I could see one part that looked as though it did something.<br />
(b) I could hear a ringing sound.<br />
(c) Your father will have words with you when you get home.<br />
3. Change the meaning by writing an antonym of the underlined word.<br />
(a) The voice sounded very happy.<br />
(b) The gum had some flavour remaining.<br />
(c) The phone had no scratches in the glass.<br />
(d) I remembered the phone when I was in my room doing my homework.<br />
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UNIT 5<br />
WORD ORDER<br />
1. Join two of the pairs of nouns using ‘and’.<br />
fingers shoes rock night black socks toes roll day white<br />
(a)<br />
(b)<br />
(c)<br />
(d)<br />
(e)<br />
2. Word order makes a difference.<br />
(a) What do you notice if you change the order of the words you put together in Question 1?<br />
(b) Which pair did you find the hardest to change?<br />
(c) Was it because the first word is the more important?<br />
(d) What other reason could there be?<br />
3. Change the order of the words so the <strong>sentence</strong> makes sense.<br />
(a) watch a glimpse of caught Suddenly, I my.<br />
(b) a the in I ground found phone half-buried.<br />
(c) gum the left some I was had still lucky chewing flavour.<br />
(d) the three Why there sky were moons in?<br />
(e) be I I home wouldn’t late ran so.<br />
(f) brushed with After the T-shirt, I my off see was dirt I it unmarked could.<br />
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QUESTIONS<br />
A question needs an answer and is followed by a question mark.<br />
1. Add question marks at the end of questions and full stops after any statements.<br />
(a) I didn’t know where I was<br />
(b) I couldn’t find you; where have you been<br />
(c) Please tell me where I left my phone<br />
(d) Where did the story take place<br />
(e) I was wondering where the phone came from<br />
2. I was in my room doing my homework.<br />
(a) Write the question that is answered by the statement.<br />
(b) Which two question words did you use?<br />
(c) Which verb did you need to change?<br />
(d) How did you change the pronoun ‘I’?<br />
3. Write a question about:<br />
(a) opening her eyes<br />
(b) doing her homework<br />
(c) the phone<br />
4. Complete the questions about the text.<br />
(a) Why<br />
(b) What<br />
(c) Where<br />
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SENTENCE BEGINNINGS<br />
UNIT 6<br />
Focus<br />
Sentence <strong>structure</strong> – <strong>sentence</strong> beginnings<br />
Progression<br />
Recognise<br />
Students will recognise a variety of interesting <strong>sentence</strong><br />
beginnings from modelled examples.<br />
Choose<br />
Students will choose a variety of interesting <strong>sentence</strong> beginnings<br />
from given examples, with teacher support.<br />
Use<br />
Students will use interesting <strong>sentence</strong> beginnings in self-written<br />
<strong>sentence</strong>s and paragraphs.<br />
Definition of terms<br />
Verbs or ‘doing’ words show actions or states of being or having.<br />
A verb group is a verb combined with other, auxiliary, verbs.<br />
Adverbials are words or groups of words that add in<strong>for</strong>mation,<br />
usually to a verb or verb group. They can tell how (manner), when<br />
(time) or where (place) something happens. Adverbs can modify<br />
(add in<strong>for</strong>mation to) any words that are not nouns or pronouns.<br />
(These are modified by adjectives.)<br />
Introduction<br />
Good writers improve their writing by using a variety of different,<br />
interesting <strong>sentence</strong> beginnings.<br />
LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />
Introduction<br />
• Discuss the text title with the class. Why was Ryan running?<br />
• What do students think the text could be about? (May be many and<br />
varied responses.)<br />
• Identify the number of paragraphs and discuss why they are all so<br />
short.<br />
• Explain that a new paragraph is required <strong>for</strong> each new event/action;<br />
this helps the reader to more clearly understand the sequence of<br />
events in the story.<br />
• Identify the text type and discuss the features of imaginative text.<br />
Sentence beginnings – When and where? – Page 39<br />
• Discuss as a class possible reasons why a writer tries to begin<br />
<strong>sentence</strong>s in an interesting way.<br />
• Discuss the <strong>sentence</strong> beginnings in Paragraph 1. Do students think<br />
they are good or bad examples of <strong>sentence</strong> beginnings?<br />
• Discuss the adverbials of time and place in Paragraph 1. How do<br />
they set the scene?<br />
• Work through the activities with the class as a whole, ensuring they<br />
understand what is required of them.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
Sentence beginnings – How? – Page 40<br />
• Discuss with students the way a <strong>sentence</strong> can start by telling how<br />
something is happening. Work through an example on the board. For<br />
example: With burning lungs, ...<br />
• Ask, ‘Who is likely to do something with burning lungs?’<br />
• Discuss selected possible answers with students.<br />
• Select one appropriate response — say, ‘athletes’. Discuss what<br />
athletes might be doing with burning lungs.<br />
• Revise the concept of verb groups as a combination that gives<br />
greater meaning; <strong>for</strong> example, trying to run.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
Sentence beginnings – And then ... – Page 41<br />
• Discuss with students the undesirable results of repeated use<br />
of a conjunction (‘and then’) — repetitive, overlong <strong>sentence</strong>s;<br />
uninteresting writing.<br />
• Ask how students could overcome this problem. Discuss answers.<br />
• Elicit the solution of changing the word order and using a variety of<br />
conjunctions. Discuss.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
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UNIT 6<br />
ANSWERS<br />
Sentence beginnings – When and where? – Page 39<br />
1.–3. Teacher check<br />
Sentence beginnings – How? – Page 40<br />
1.–2. Teacher check<br />
Sentence beginnings – And then ... – Page 41<br />
1. (a) Overuse of ‘and then’ as a <strong>sentence</strong> starter.<br />
(b) Teacher check<br />
2. Teacher check<br />
3. (a) Teacher check: all short/all start with ‘I’<br />
(b)–(c) Teacher check<br />
ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />
Assessment activity – Page 55<br />
1.–6. Teacher check<br />
Class record sheet – Page vii<br />
ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />
• Paragraph topic – The monster<br />
• Focus: Sentence <strong>structure</strong> – <strong>sentence</strong> beginnings<br />
Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />
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UNIT 6<br />
RUN, RYAN, RUN!<br />
1. The minute I see the monster, I realise I am in big trouble. I scurry out of the light and into the shadows, but it<br />
is too late. Out of the corner of my eye, I see the monster’s head turn my way and know I’ve been spotted.<br />
2. I should have listened to my mother. ‘Stay out of the light’, she warned us all. ‘Darkness is your friend. The<br />
monsters can’t see in the darkness as well as we can.’ Sadly, she hadn’t listened to her own advice. She’d been<br />
caught by a monster in the middle of an open area. There was nowhere <strong>for</strong> her to hide.<br />
3. But that was then and this is now. I don’t want the same sudden end to happen to me. I have to make a break<br />
<strong>for</strong> it be<strong>for</strong>e the monster has a chance to unleash the Liquid Fire at me.<br />
4. I shudder at the thought. There are very, very few survivors of a Liquid Fire attack. Those who do somehow<br />
survive are scarred and burned, never the same again.<br />
5. All right, Ryan, this is it — go! I take off running, running like the wind, running with every last bit of speed<br />
and power I can manage. I know exactly where I am heading. If I can make it to the area where the monsters<br />
keep their Metal Skins, I have a chance. There are so many strange things stacked in that area that I will have<br />
a thousand hiding places.<br />
6. What makes it even worse is that I shouldn’t have even been here <strong>for</strong> the monster to find. It isn’t a hunting<br />
expedition; the clan has enough food to last us <strong>for</strong> days. I should have been snug and warm and safe, resting<br />
with a full belly. Instead, stupid curiosity has put me in mortal danger.<br />
7. The ground beneath me trembles and I know the monster is now in pursuit. Despite their size, they are able to<br />
cover distance quickly with their long strides. Desperately, I try to squeeze out a little more speed, but already<br />
my legs feel too heavy to lift.<br />
8. But I’ve made it ... I’m here! I throw myself under one of the Metal Skins, hoping the shadows will conceal me<br />
while I catch my breath.<br />
9. The monster lumbers after me, its footsteps slowing and then stopping altogether. I almost <strong>for</strong>get to breathe.<br />
Then, to my absolute horror, the monster’s face suddenly appears! It is looking beneath the Metal Skin, staring<br />
right at me!<br />
10. I run like I’ve never run be<strong>for</strong>e. I am just seconds away from safety<br />
when it happens. I hear a hissing, spitting sound. I am suddenly<br />
bathed in Liquid Fire.<br />
11. Aaarrrgghh! It burns! I try to keep moving, but my strength is<br />
fading ... fading ... everything is turning black ... I can’t—<br />
12. Amy stands up from looking under the car and snaps the cap back<br />
on the insect spray.<br />
13. ‘One less cockroach to worry about’, she says to herself.<br />
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SENTENCE BEGINNINGS – WHEN AND WHERE?<br />
Sentence beginnings are important.<br />
Sentences should start in different, interesting ways.<br />
1. An adverbial telling when something happened is a good way to start a <strong>sentence</strong>.<br />
Complete the <strong>sentence</strong>s. They all start by telling when something happened.<br />
(a) As I was going out into the kitchen, I<br />
(b) After the monster saw me,<br />
(c) A few minutes later,<br />
2. Add an interesting <strong>sentence</strong> beginning telling when each thing happened.<br />
(a)<br />
(b)<br />
(c)<br />
after me.<br />
the shadows.<br />
the Liquid Fire.<br />
the monster lumbered<br />
I pressed myself back into<br />
I felt the searing sting of<br />
3. An adverbial telling where something happened is also a good way to start a <strong>sentence</strong>.<br />
Write interesting <strong>sentence</strong>s starting with phrases telling where something happened.<br />
(a) Beneath the Metal Skin,<br />
(b) All around the walls,<br />
(c) Deep in the shadows,<br />
(d) Resting snugly at home,<br />
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SENTENCE BEGINNINGS – HOW?<br />
1. Complete the <strong>sentence</strong>s which start by telling how something is happening. Be<br />
imaginative. Use descriptive verbs.<br />
(a) With great fear,<br />
(b) With a rush of heat, the<br />
(c) With every ounce of speed,<br />
(d) Without stopping, I<br />
(e) Like a machine, the monster<br />
(f) In complete despair,<br />
2. A verb or verb group can be a good <strong>sentence</strong> beginning. Complete the <strong>sentence</strong>s<br />
beginning with a verb.<br />
(a) Flinging myself beneath the Metal Skin,<br />
(b) Wishing I had listened to her,<br />
(c) Dropping to the ground, the monster<br />
(d) Struggling to breathe,<br />
(e) Gasping in horror,<br />
(f) Surging ahead,<br />
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SENTENCE BEGINNINGS – AND THEN ...<br />
1. (a) What is wrong with the <strong>sentence</strong>s about Ryan Roach?<br />
Ryan saw the monster. And then he ran away. And then the monster chased him. And<br />
then Ryan got sprayed. And then he died.<br />
(b) Rewrite it.<br />
2. Improve the <strong>sentence</strong>s by changing some of the words and using a conjunction.<br />
(a) I ran into the area. And then I threw myself beneath a Metal Skin.<br />
(b) The monster saw me try to escape. And then it sprayed me with Liquid Fire.<br />
(c) My mother warned me about the light. And then she didn't listen to her own advice.<br />
3. (a) In your own words, what is the problem with the <strong>sentence</strong>s in Paragraph 10?<br />
(b) How could these <strong>sentence</strong>s be improved?<br />
(c) Write the same in<strong>for</strong>mation in your own words.<br />
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CONJUNCTIONS<br />
UNIT 7<br />
Focus<br />
Sentence <strong>structure</strong> – conjunctions<br />
Progression<br />
Recognise<br />
Students will recognise a conjunction from modelled examples.<br />
Choose<br />
Students will choose conjunctions from given examples, with<br />
teacher support.<br />
Use<br />
Students will use appropriate conjunctions in supplied and selfwritten<br />
<strong>sentence</strong>s.<br />
Definition of terms<br />
Conjunctions are joining words which can be used to connect<br />
words, phrases and <strong>sentence</strong>s.<br />
Paragraphs are sections of writing dealing with a particular<br />
subject or point, beginning on a new line.<br />
Persuasive texts are written to put <strong>for</strong>ward a position which the<br />
writer wishes to persuade others to share.<br />
Introduction<br />
Good writers improve their writing by improving <strong>sentence</strong><br />
<strong>structure</strong> using appropriate conjunctions.<br />
Teacher in<strong>for</strong>mation<br />
Conjunctions:<br />
• enable a writer to build and combine ideas and to avoid<br />
repetition<br />
• can be placed between two clauses or at the beginning of a<br />
longer <strong>sentence</strong><br />
• can be used to create a complex <strong>sentence</strong> by joining a<br />
dependent clause with an independent clause.<br />
The position of the conjunction can help readers to know which<br />
part of the <strong>sentence</strong> is the focus.<br />
LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />
Introduction<br />
• Discuss the text title. Who could need to be told ‘Don’t stay silent’?<br />
• Have a general class discussion about cyberbullying. Ensure<br />
students are aware that even innocent ‘jokes’ may constitute<br />
cyberbullying.<br />
• Introduce the term ‘conjunctions’ and explain that they enable a<br />
writer to combine ideas and to avoid repetition. For example: I<br />
bought a computer. I bought a printer. = I bought a computer and a<br />
printer.<br />
• Brainstorm conjunctions to list on the board.<br />
• Read the text with the class.<br />
• Ask students to identify the text type and discuss the purpose and<br />
features of persuasive text.<br />
• Identify the writer’s position as stated in Paragraph 1, the arguments<br />
organised in separate paragraphs and the restating of the writer’s<br />
position in the final paragraph.<br />
• Identify some of the conjunctions used in the text.<br />
Joining <strong>sentence</strong>s – Conjunctions – Page 45<br />
• Read and discuss the definition at the top of the page.<br />
• Read Paragraph 1 and identify the different ideas that are linked or<br />
joined in the first <strong>sentence</strong>; that is:<br />
– is a great technological advance<br />
– the world is at our fingertips<br />
– family and friends are readily contacted<br />
– worldwide messaging is available instantly<br />
– there is a dark side<br />
• Work through the activities with the class as a whole, ensuring they<br />
understand what is required of them.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
Using conjunctions – Page 46<br />
• Review students’ understanding of the term ‘conjunction’ and ask<br />
them to provide examples.<br />
• Read the words in Question 1 with the class.<br />
• List other words or phrases that can be used as conjunctions.<br />
• Explain that the words in Question 1 should be used only once and<br />
not all will be needed.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
• In pairs, students can share the <strong>sentence</strong>s they wrote in Question 3.<br />
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UNIT 7<br />
Which conjunction? – Page 47<br />
• Discuss and list conjunctions of time with the class and explain that<br />
they will need to use some of them in Question 1.<br />
• Explain that conjunctions can be used to tell that one event caused<br />
the other. Conjunctions showing cause will be used in Questions 2<br />
and 3.<br />
• In Question 4, conjunctions are used to compare and contrast.<br />
• In Question 5, independent clauses (main ideas—make sense on<br />
their own) are joined to dependent clauses (supporting ideas—don’t<br />
make sense on their own) with a beginning conjunction.<br />
• Brainstorm and make three lists of adverbials that could tell how,<br />
when and where.<br />
ANSWERS<br />
Joining <strong>sentence</strong>s – Conjunctions – Page 45<br />
1. (a) and<br />
(b) Yes<br />
(c) Teacher check<br />
(d) Bullying causes grief. We must work together to stamp it out.<br />
2. (a) 5<br />
(b) Report it!<br />
(c) Teacher check: By doing nothing, you are supporting it,<br />
so report it./Report it, because by doing nothing you are<br />
supporting it.<br />
(d) Teacher check<br />
3. (a) but<br />
(b) Teacher check: ‘because’ is possible.<br />
(c) There is a dark side and we must stand against it.<br />
4. (a) but<br />
(b) Teacher check: Possible — Although it’s a huge concern, as<br />
a society we can and must defeat it.<br />
Which conjunction? – Page 47<br />
1. (a) I went online be<strong>for</strong>e/then I went to sleep.<br />
(b) Be<strong>for</strong>e/When turning off the computer, save your work.<br />
(c) Be<strong>for</strong>e/Unless I eat dinner I will be hungry.<br />
2.–4. Teacher check<br />
ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />
Assessment activity – Page 56<br />
1. (a) but<br />
(b) I tried to eat my soup. It was far too hot.<br />
2. (a) Teacher check: Possible – Don’t be a cyberbully because it<br />
causes people too much pain.<br />
(b) Teacher check: Possible – It will be too late once/when/after<br />
the damage is done.<br />
(c) Teacher check: Possible – Cyberbullying can be deadly even<br />
though/although you might not think so.<br />
3. Teacher check<br />
4. Teacher check: Possible – Dry yourself on the towel after you<br />
have your bath.<br />
5.–6. Teacher check<br />
Class recording sheet – Page vii<br />
ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />
• Paragraph topic – Be kind to others<br />
• Focus: Sentence <strong>structure</strong> – conjunctions<br />
Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />
Using conjunctions – Page 46<br />
1. (a) because<br />
(b) if<br />
(c) although<br />
(d) but<br />
(e) Unless<br />
(f) be<strong>for</strong>e<br />
2. (a) yes<br />
(b) Teacher check<br />
(c) full stop<br />
(d) Teacher check<br />
3. Teacher check<br />
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DON'T STAY SILENT!<br />
1. Being able to go ‘online’ is one of the great technological advances of our time. The world is at your fingertips<br />
to explore in words, images, videos and music. Your family and friends are just a few clicks or taps away.<br />
You can send messages instantly across thousands of miles. But there is a dark side, too, and I am going to<br />
convince you to take a stand against it.<br />
2. Cyberbullying. Online bullying. It doesn’t sound too bad, does it? After all, it’s not like you can be pinched or<br />
shoved over the internet. While that may be true, cyberbullying is a massive worldwide plague. It causes untold<br />
grief <strong>for</strong> millions, particularly children, and we must work together to stamp it out.<br />
3. You and one or two of your friends might think it’s a just a joke to send messages to a classmate saying things<br />
like, ‘U R fat’ or ‘The boys in the class all hate you’ or ‘You are useless at football’. Well, it’s not a joke, it’s<br />
cyberbullying and it’s a criminal offence. Those ‘innocent jokes’ can stay with the victims <strong>for</strong> the rest of their<br />
life. They can withdraw into themselves, not sleep, not eat or overeat, become bullies themselves, become very<br />
ill—or even worse. It has to stop!<br />
4. Did you take an embarrassing photo or video of someone at school, perhaps because that person is different<br />
from you, or not part of the ‘in’ group? Did you then post that image or video online—<strong>for</strong> the world to see and<br />
laugh at? Did you ever start a rumour about someone, or tell a ‘little lie’ about them? This is cyberbullying.<br />
Don’t do it!<br />
5. Some of you are thinking, ‘Well, I know it happens, but I don’t do<br />
it myself, so I’m not a bully’. You are wrong! If you see it, hear it,<br />
know about it and you don’t do anything about it, you are just as<br />
bad as the actual bullies. By doing nothing, you are supporting<br />
it. Report it!<br />
I HATE YOU!<br />
6. So then, what do I want you to do? If you are a cyberbully, or<br />
even thinking it might be funny, stop and think. Put yourself in<br />
the other person’s shoes. How would you like to feel totally alone<br />
in the world, with no friends to turn to? How would you like your<br />
personal secrets splashed all over the internet? How would you<br />
like people to judge you on lies or rumours someone else posted about you? You wouldn’t like it, would you?<br />
7. For any of you being cyberbullied, here are some things to remember:<br />
• Don’t stay silent—you are not alone. Find a trusted adult to tell what is happening.<br />
• Don’t respond to the bullying, you will just encourage it.<br />
• If you know the bully, block him or her from all your contacts.<br />
• Don’t delete the messages; show your parents or a teacher.<br />
• If necessary, go with your parents to the police. Truly, it can be that serious.<br />
8. Yes, it’s a huge concern, but as a society we can and must defeat it.<br />
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JOINING SENTENCES – CONJUNCTIONS<br />
A conjunction joins two <strong>sentence</strong>s, phrases or words. When used correctly, conjunctions<br />
link ideas, assist writing to flow better and make it more readable.<br />
For example: ‘I made a lemon drink. It was too sour. I added some honey.’<br />
‘I made a lemon drink but it was too sour, so I added some honey.’<br />
1. Read Paragraph 2.<br />
(a) What is the conjunction used in the last <strong>sentence</strong>?<br />
(b) Do you think the last <strong>sentence</strong> is well constructed? Yes No<br />
(c) Does it start in an interesting way? Yes No<br />
(d) What are the two connected ideas in the <strong>sentence</strong>?<br />
2. Read Paragraph 5.<br />
(a) How many <strong>sentence</strong>s does it contain?<br />
(b) Write the shortest <strong>sentence</strong>.<br />
(c) Use a conjunction to join this <strong>sentence</strong> to the one be<strong>for</strong>e it.<br />
(d) Which word or words did you use to join them?<br />
3. Use a conjunction to join the <strong>sentence</strong>s.<br />
(a) Cyberbullying is a major problem. It can be stopped.<br />
(b) Don’t stay silent. You are not alone.<br />
(c) There is a dark side. We must stand against it.<br />
4. Read Paragraph 8. The <strong>sentence</strong> is two ideas joined by a conjunction.<br />
(a) What is the conjunction?<br />
(b) Use a different conjunction to join the two ideas. You may change some words.<br />
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USING CONJUNCTIONS<br />
1. Join two <strong>sentence</strong>s using these conjunctions.<br />
unless after if be<strong>for</strong>e during but although because<br />
(a) We must stop cyberbullying.<br />
It ruins so many lives.<br />
(b)<br />
You don’t report bullying. You are as bad as the bully.<br />
(c) People still bully others online.<br />
(d) Starting false rumours about someone is nasty.<br />
They know it is wrong.<br />
People still do it.<br />
(e)<br />
(f) Stop and think.<br />
You report cyberbullying. It will get worse.<br />
You send a nasty message.<br />
2. (a) Did you notice that there were capitals that wouldn’t be<br />
needed if you were writing a joined <strong>sentence</strong> in Question 1?<br />
(b) Write one of the joined <strong>sentence</strong>s. Punctuate it correctly.<br />
(c) What other punctuation from the two <strong>sentence</strong>s didn’t you need?<br />
(d) Write a <strong>sentence</strong> using a conjunction you didn’t use in Question 1.<br />
3. Write an interesting <strong>sentence</strong> with two ideas using the words as a conjunctions.<br />
(a) until<br />
(b) because<br />
(c) whether<br />
(d) though<br />
(e) where<br />
(f) except<br />
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WHICH CONJUNCTION?<br />
1. Some writers use incorrect conjunctions of time. Write the <strong>sentence</strong>s so they make<br />
sense. You can change the word order and you may need to change the verbs slightly.<br />
(a) I went online after I went to sleep.<br />
(b) After turning off the computer, save your work.<br />
(c) While I eat dinner I will be hungry.<br />
2. Explain how one event is caused by another by using the conjunction in the middle of a<br />
<strong>sentence</strong> joining two ideas.<br />
(a) because<br />
(b) so that<br />
3. Start each <strong>sentence</strong> with the conjunction to show one thing caused something to happen.<br />
(a) Although<br />
(b) When<br />
4. Write a <strong>sentence</strong> using the conjunction to contrast and compare two different things.<br />
(a) instead<br />
(b) except<br />
5. Good writers use a beginning conjunction to join a main idea in a <strong>sentence</strong> with a<br />
supporting idea. The ideas are always separated by a comma; e.g. Be<strong>for</strong>e you leave<br />
(supporting), sign the guest book (main). Write endings that make sense by themselves to<br />
go with the beginning conjunctions.<br />
(a) If you don’t wear a raincoat,<br />
(b) Be<strong>for</strong>e you eat dinner,<br />
(c) As it’s the weekend,<br />
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PARAGRAPHS<br />
UNIT 8<br />
Focus<br />
Sentence <strong>structure</strong> – paragraphs<br />
Progression<br />
Recognise<br />
Students will recognise a paragraph from modelled examples.<br />
Choose<br />
Students will choose ideas and <strong>sentence</strong>s <strong>for</strong> paragraphs with<br />
teacher support.<br />
Use<br />
Students will choose in<strong>for</strong>mation <strong>for</strong> paragraphs in supplied and<br />
self-written paragraphs.<br />
Definition of terms<br />
Paragraphs are sections of writing dealing with a particular<br />
subject or point, beginning on a new line.<br />
A topic <strong>sentence</strong> is a <strong>sentence</strong> in a paragraph, usually the first,<br />
that introduces the main idea of that paragraph.<br />
Introduction<br />
Good writers improve their writing by improving <strong>sentence</strong><br />
<strong>structure</strong> in paragraphs.<br />
Teacher in<strong>for</strong>mation<br />
Paragraphs enable a writer to organise and combine ideas to<br />
aid comprehension. A topic <strong>sentence</strong> connects ideas within a<br />
paragraph.<br />
LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />
Introduction<br />
• Discuss the text title.<br />
• Brainstorm in<strong>for</strong>mation about whales.<br />
• Read the text with the class.<br />
• Ask students to identify the text type and discuss the features of<br />
in<strong>for</strong>mative text.<br />
• Discuss the paragraphs and the subheadings.<br />
• Ask if all the subheadings are in the <strong>for</strong>m of a question. Why use<br />
questions as subheadings?<br />
• What purpose do subheadings serve?<br />
Paragraphs – Page 51<br />
• Read and discuss the definition at the top of the page.<br />
• Read Paragraph 1. What is it about?<br />
• Is the subheading helpful? Why?<br />
• Work through the remainder of the activities with the class as a<br />
whole, ensuring they understand what is required of them.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
Planning paragraphs – Page 52<br />
• Read and discuss the in<strong>for</strong>mation at the top of the page.<br />
• Discuss deep-sea fishing. Write on the board any in<strong>for</strong>mation given<br />
by students. They will find this useful <strong>for</strong> Question 2(c).<br />
• Question 2 requires students to choose a question word <strong>for</strong> their<br />
first paragraph.<br />
• Explain that this is a decision each writer must make <strong>for</strong> himself/<br />
herself.<br />
• Students could share their first <strong>sentence</strong>s from Question 2(d) with a<br />
small group.<br />
<strong>Writing</strong> paragraphs – Page 53<br />
• Discuss snow and how it looks, sounds, feels and even smells.<br />
• What happens to snow at different times of the year?<br />
• Provide opportunities <strong>for</strong> students to read and discuss their<br />
paragraphs in small groups. They should decide how appropriate the<br />
in<strong>for</strong>mation is to that particular paragraph.<br />
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PARAGRAPHS<br />
UNIT 8<br />
ANSWERS<br />
Paragraphs – Page 51<br />
1. (a) Yes<br />
(b) Yes<br />
2. (a) Paragraph<br />
(b) Teacher check: Could include ‘loudest creature on earth’ or<br />
‘louder than a jet engine’.<br />
(c) Yes<br />
(d) Teacher check<br />
3. (a) True<br />
(b) False<br />
(c) False<br />
(d) False<br />
(e) True<br />
4. Teacher check: Could include ‘Harder to read/understand/gain<br />
in<strong>for</strong>mation’ etc.<br />
5. (a) In<strong>for</strong>mative<br />
(b) Teacher check: Could include ‘Use as an organisational tool,<br />
aid to comprehension’ etc.<br />
(c) Teacher check. Answers will vary.<br />
ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />
Assessment activity – Page 57<br />
1. (a) true<br />
(b) false<br />
(c) true<br />
(d) false<br />
2. Teacher check<br />
3. (a) Teacher check<br />
(b) Teacher check: Accept reasoned answers.<br />
(c) Teacher check<br />
4. Teacher check<br />
Class recording sheet – Page vii<br />
ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />
• Paragraph topic – Useful ice<br />
• Focus: Sentence <strong>structure</strong> – paragraphs<br />
Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />
6. (a) Paragraph 6<br />
(b) Paragraph 3<br />
(c) Paragraph 7<br />
(d) Paragraph 2<br />
Planning paragraphs – Page 52<br />
1. (a) 8<br />
(b) 2<br />
(c) What whale types are there? What were whales used <strong>for</strong>?<br />
(d) Teacher check<br />
2. (a) Yes<br />
(b) Teacher check<br />
(c)–(d) Answers will vary.<br />
(e) Teacher check<br />
3. Teacher check<br />
<strong>Writing</strong> paragraphs – Page 53<br />
1. (a) Answers will vary.<br />
(b) Teacher check. Accept reasoned student responses.<br />
(c) Answers will vary.<br />
2. Teacher check. Answers will vary.<br />
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UNIT 8<br />
WHALES<br />
Introduction<br />
1. Whales are the largest animals in the world today.<br />
Not only that, but it is believed they are the largest<br />
animals to ever have existed. Not even ancient<br />
dinosaurs have been found to be as large. A<br />
blue whale can weight over 130 tonnes and be<br />
30 metres long!<br />
2. Whales are mammals, even though they live in the<br />
ocean. This means they are warm-blooded and<br />
their babies—called calves—are born alive and<br />
fed with milk from the mother’s body. Since they<br />
are not fish, they breathe air and have to come up<br />
to the surface to do that. They breathe through a<br />
‘blowhole’ in the top of their head. Some whales<br />
can hold their breath <strong>for</strong> 90 minutes! The average,<br />
though, is about 35 minutes. How long can you<br />
manage?<br />
How loud are whales?<br />
3. Measured by sound levels, whales are also the<br />
loudest creatures on earth. Their calls can be<br />
louder than the sound of a jet engine at takeoff!<br />
Humpback whales also ‘sing’ in very complex<br />
patterns that remind scientists of human ‘music’.<br />
Other sounds made by whales include ‘grunts’,<br />
‘snorts’, ‘clicks’, ‘groans’ and even ‘barks’.<br />
What whale types are there?<br />
4. Baleen whales and toothed whales <strong>for</strong>m the two<br />
major groups. Baleen whales don’t have teeth.<br />
They have ‘plates’ of baleen—a hard substance—<br />
in their mouths. They draw enormous amounts of<br />
water through these plates to trap ‘krill’, small<br />
shrimp-like creatures and plankton, tiny floating<br />
plants and animals, that are their main food. They<br />
can eat tonnes of krill and plankton<br />
a day. Baleen whales include<br />
the humpback and the<br />
blue whale.<br />
5. Toothed whales on the other hand have, as their<br />
name suggests, teeth. They eat fish, such as cod or<br />
tuna, and even small seals. Toothed whales include<br />
dolphins and killer whales.<br />
What were whales used <strong>for</strong>?<br />
6. Early humans, particularly in the Arctic, hunted<br />
whales <strong>for</strong> food. Whale blubber—a thick layer<br />
of fat beneath the skin—and whale meat are<br />
extremely nutritious. Both are a rich source of<br />
vitamins, minerals and protein, which people<br />
needed to survive. Every part of the whale was<br />
used; nothing was wasted.<br />
7. That wasn’t the same story in the mid-19th century.<br />
Sadly, some species of whales were then hunted<br />
to near extinction in the 1800s <strong>for</strong> their oil <strong>for</strong><br />
use in lamps, food—even margarine—cosmetics,<br />
detergents and to lubricate machinery. Whalebone,<br />
usually baleen, was the ‘plastic’ of the 1800s. It<br />
was used to make many everyday items, including<br />
ladies’ corsets, buggy whips and even children’s<br />
toys. Even now, after commercial hunting on a large<br />
scale has ceased, recovery of whale numbers is<br />
slow and some members of the family are still in<br />
danger of becoming extinct.<br />
Whales today<br />
8. Fortunately, <strong>for</strong> them and us, whales are no longer<br />
considered a ‘resource’ to be used up. Instead, they<br />
are seen as beautiful, fascinating creatures that<br />
deserve our respect and care.<br />
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PARAGRAPHS<br />
A paragraph is one or more <strong>sentence</strong>s about a topic. Good writers often start a paragraph<br />
with a topic <strong>sentence</strong> to explain the main idea first, then they add more in<strong>for</strong>mation.<br />
1. Read Paragraph 1.<br />
(a) Does the first <strong>sentence</strong> tell what the paragraph is about? Yes No<br />
(b) Does the rest of the paragraph add further in<strong>for</strong>mation? Yes No<br />
2. (a) Which paragraph tells about the loudness of whales?<br />
(b) How loud are they?<br />
(c) Does it explain how loud they are in the first <strong>sentence</strong>?<br />
(d) Did the first <strong>sentence</strong> help you understand the paragraph?<br />
3. What do you know about paragraphs? Write ‘true’ or ‘false’ after the statement.<br />
(a) The first <strong>sentence</strong> in a paragraph must start<br />
on a new line with a capital letter.<br />
(b) A paragraph must have two or more <strong>sentence</strong>s.<br />
(c) Paragraphs on a page are separated by numbers.<br />
(d) The last <strong>sentence</strong> must always tell what the paragraph is about.<br />
(e) The <strong>sentence</strong>s in one paragraph should all be about the same topic.<br />
4. Explain what it would be like if the writer hadn’t organised ‘Whales’ into paragraphs with<br />
subheadings.<br />
5. (a) Are subheadings used more often in imaginative or in<strong>for</strong>mative text?<br />
(b) Why?<br />
(c) Is the order of the paragraphs on the page important? Explain your answer.<br />
6. Read the <strong>sentence</strong>s. Which paragraphs would you put them in?<br />
(a) Whales once were a vital food source.<br />
(b) Whale calls can be heard underwater <strong>for</strong> many kilometres.<br />
(c) Plastic replaced whalebone in the 1900s.<br />
(d) Whales can stay underwater <strong>for</strong> long periods.<br />
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UNIT 8<br />
PLANNING PARAGRAPHS<br />
Writers need to make many decisions about what they write and how they organise their<br />
writing. It is important to plan what will be in each paragraph.<br />
When writing in<strong>for</strong>mative text, the words where, when, what, why and how can be helpful.<br />
1. (a) How many paragraphs are in the text, ‘Whales’?<br />
(b) How many paragraphs answer the ‘what’ question?<br />
(c) The ‘what’ questions ask:<br />
• What<br />
• What<br />
(d) Why did they need to be separate paragraphs?<br />
2. (a) Think about deep-sea fishing. Would you start with a paragraph<br />
giving in<strong>for</strong>mation about where, when, what, why or how?<br />
(b) Explain why you chose to give this in<strong>for</strong>mation in your first paragraph.<br />
(c) Use the box to make notes about deep-sea fishing that would fit in this paragraph.<br />
(d) Write the first <strong>sentence</strong> of your paragraph.<br />
(e) Would this make a good topic <strong>sentence</strong>?<br />
3. Subheadings do not have to be questions; <strong>for</strong> example, the subheading <strong>for</strong> Paragraph 4<br />
could be ‘Whale types’.<br />
(a) Write a different subheading <strong>for</strong> Paragraph 3.<br />
(b) Write a subheading <strong>for</strong> your paragraph.<br />
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UNIT 8<br />
WRITING PARAGRAPHS<br />
1. Read the topic <strong>sentence</strong> <strong>for</strong> a new paragraph about snow skiing.<br />
As I strapped on my skis, the snow was looking crisp, clean and invitingly white.<br />
(a) What do you think this paragraph will be about?<br />
(b) Tick the <strong>sentence</strong> you think would be the best second <strong>sentence</strong> <strong>for</strong> this paragraph.<br />
• I wondered if my sunglasses would stop the glare.<br />
• I just wanted to push off and carve up the slope.<br />
• I couldn’t wait to get back inside in front of the fire.<br />
• My knees shook as I looked down the hill.<br />
(c) Think about the next two <strong>sentence</strong>s. Write two that would fit well in this paragraph.<br />
2. This story now needs the second paragraph.<br />
(a) What do you think it should be about?<br />
(b) Write this paragraph. Make sure the <strong>sentence</strong>s are all about the same thing.<br />
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SENTENCES, WORD ORDER,<br />
STATEMENTS, QUESTIONS<br />
ASSESSMENT UNIT 5<br />
Name:<br />
Date:<br />
1. Put a punctuation mark in the box after a <strong>sentence</strong>. Leave the other boxes blank.<br />
(a) Was on another planet<br />
(c) The gum was in my pencil case<br />
(b) When I was doing my homework<br />
(d) Where have you been<br />
2. Change the <strong>sentence</strong> from a positive to a negative using an antonym.<br />
I ran home as quickly as I could.<br />
3. Change the order of the words so the <strong>sentence</strong> makes sense.<br />
(a) the threw into schoolbag phone I my.<br />
(b) home very mother late would cross if I My was be.<br />
4. Add question marks at the end of questions and full stops after any statements.<br />
(a) I had no idea where I was<br />
(b) What do you mean by saying Dad’s going to have words with me<br />
(c) OK, I give up—where am I<br />
(d) It was a question I had to ask<br />
5. Write the question that is answered by the statement.<br />
(a) I just pressed the button and finished up on another planet.<br />
(b) I was by myself when I found the phone.<br />
6. Write a question about:<br />
(a) finding a phone in a field<br />
(b) finding chewing gum in your schoolbag<br />
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SENTENCE BEGINNINGS<br />
Name:<br />
Date:<br />
1. Complete the <strong>sentence</strong> which starts by telling when something happened.<br />
As the sun was setting, the<br />
2. Add an interesting <strong>sentence</strong> beginning telling when the event happened.<br />
Liquid Fire seared my body.<br />
,<br />
3. Complete the <strong>sentence</strong> which starts by telling how something is happening.<br />
With my heart hammering,<br />
4. Complete the <strong>sentence</strong> beginning with a verb.<br />
Screaming in pain and shock,<br />
5. Read the <strong>sentence</strong>s.<br />
The man saw the cockroach. And then he took the insect spray. And then he chased the<br />
cockroach. And then he sprayed it.<br />
Rewrite it.<br />
6. Improve the <strong>sentence</strong> by changing the order of the words and using another conjunction.<br />
(a) I watched until it was quiet and then I raced <strong>for</strong> the safety of darkness.<br />
(b) The monster's footsteps slowed and then its face suddenly appeared be<strong>for</strong>e me.<br />
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ASSESSMENT UNIT 7<br />
CONJUNCTIONS<br />
Name:<br />
Date:<br />
1. Read the <strong>sentence</strong>.<br />
I tried to eat my soup but it was far too hot.<br />
(a) What is the conjunction used?<br />
(b) What are the two connected ideas in the <strong>sentence</strong>?<br />
2. Use a conjunction to join the <strong>sentence</strong>s.<br />
(a) Don’t be a cyberbully. It causes people too much pain.<br />
(b) It will be too late. The damage is done.<br />
(c) Cyberbullying can be deadly. You might not think so.<br />
3. Write an interesting <strong>sentence</strong> with two ideas using the conjunctions.<br />
(a) be<strong>for</strong>e<br />
(b) unless<br />
4. Write the <strong>sentence</strong> so it makes sense.<br />
Dry yourself on the towel be<strong>for</strong>e you have your bath.<br />
5. Write endings that make sense by themselves to go with the beginning conjunctions.<br />
(a) After you’ve eaten lunch,<br />
(b) When you go shopping,<br />
(c) Even though it's raining,<br />
6. Use the conjunction after in the middle of a <strong>sentence</strong> joining two ideas.<br />
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PARAGRAPHS<br />
Name:<br />
Date:<br />
1. Write ‘true’ or ‘false’ after the statement.<br />
(a) The first <strong>sentence</strong> in a paragraph should tell what the paragraph is about.<br />
(b) A paragraph must have more than one <strong>sentence</strong>.<br />
(c) One paragraph; one idea.<br />
(d) Paragraphs must start with a noun.<br />
2. Write three <strong>sentence</strong>s <strong>for</strong> a new paragraph telling about a picnic.<br />
3. Read the topic <strong>sentence</strong> <strong>for</strong> a paragraph.<br />
With the engines screaming at full throttle, the nose leapt skywards and we were airborne.<br />
(a) What do you think this paragraph will be about?<br />
(b) Tick the <strong>sentence</strong> you think would be the best second <strong>sentence</strong> <strong>for</strong> this paragraph.<br />
• I wondered if this flight was ever going to end.<br />
• I leant back against the seat and thought of the holiday to come.<br />
• I looked to see if the hostess was bringing food yet.<br />
• My knuckles were white as I squeezed the armrest.<br />
(c) Think about the third <strong>sentence</strong>. Write one that would fit well in this paragraph.<br />
4. Finish the paragraph.<br />
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