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BOOK E<br />
TEACHING<br />
STRATEGIES<br />
FOR WRITING<br />
Punctuation<br />
Australian Primary Publisher<br />
of the Year 2015 and 2016
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book E)<br />
Published by R.I.C. Publications ® 2018<br />
Copyright © Diane Henderson and Bruce Tuffin 2018<br />
<strong>RIC</strong>–<strong>20804</strong><br />
Titles in this series:<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book A)<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book B)<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book C)<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book D)<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book E)<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book F)<br />
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FOREWORD<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing is series of six books using modelling, guided and independent practice to teach<br />
students strategies they can use to improve the clarity, correctness and richness of their writing. The focus is on<br />
sentences, their structure, <strong>punctuation</strong> and word choices and on developing editing and proofreading skills and their<br />
habitual use.<br />
Titles in this series:<br />
• <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book A) • <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book D)<br />
• <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book B) • <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book E)<br />
• <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book C) • <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book F)<br />
TABLE OF CONTENTS<br />
Teacher notes ........................................................................................................................ iv–v<br />
Class recording sheets<br />
Assessment activities ..................................................................................................... vi–ix<br />
Assessment writing tasks ................................................................................................ x–xi<br />
Student writing checklist ........................................................................................................ xii<br />
Student writing task – self-evaluation .................................................................................. xiii<br />
WORD CHOICES<br />
Unit 1 Nouns, noun groups and adjectives ............................................................ 2–7<br />
Unit 2 Pronouns, confusing pronouns (me/I), which pronoun? ........................... 8–13<br />
Unit 3 Verbs, descriptive and overused verbs, adverbials ................................. 14–19<br />
Unit 4 Choosing correct verbs: tense, consistency,<br />
subject, regular, irregular ......................................................................... 20–25<br />
Assessment................................................................................................................... 26–29<br />
SENTENCE STRUCTURE<br />
Unit 5 Sentences, word order, statements, questions ....................................... 30–35<br />
Unit 6 Sentence beginnings ............................................................................... 36–41<br />
Unit 7 Conjunctions ............................................................................................ 42–47<br />
Unit 8 Paragraphs ............................................................................................... 48–53<br />
Assessment................................................................................................................... 54–57<br />
PUNCTUATION<br />
Unit 9 Using <strong>punctuation</strong> in sentences .............................................................. 58–63<br />
Unit 10 Full stops, capital letters, commas, direct speech ................................. 64–69<br />
Unit 11 Apostrophes in contractions ................................................................... 70–75<br />
Unit 12 Apostrophes <strong>for</strong> possession .................................................................... 76–81<br />
Assessment................................................................................................................... 82–85<br />
EDITING AND PROOFREADING<br />
Unit 13<br />
Unit 14<br />
Unit 15<br />
Unit 16<br />
Spelling (vowel sounds), sentence structure,<br />
<strong>punctuation</strong>, word choices, editing ........................................................ 86–91<br />
Spelling (more vowel sounds), sentence structure,<br />
<strong>punctuation</strong>, word choices, editing ......................................................... 92–97<br />
Spelling (suffixes) sentence structure,<br />
<strong>punctuation</strong>, word choices, editing ....................................................... 98–103<br />
Spelling (homophones), sentence structure,<br />
<strong>punctuation</strong>, word choices, editing ..................................................... 104–109<br />
Assessment............................................................................................................... 110–113<br />
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TEACHER NOTES<br />
ABOUT WRITING<br />
A good writer is not simply one who knows about and can<br />
use text types. A good writer is one with the capacity to<br />
produce interesting, in<strong>for</strong>mative, grammatically correct<br />
text, <strong>for</strong> a specific purpose, that achieves any writer’s<br />
intent – clear, precise communication.<br />
TEACHING WRITING<br />
Students can and should be taught strategies that will<br />
help them to write better. These include improvements<br />
in word choices, sentence structure, <strong>punctuation</strong> and<br />
editing and proofreading. <strong>Writing</strong> strategies taught<br />
should be modelled, discussed and then applied, firstly<br />
with teacher support and then independently. However,<br />
the emphasis always should be on the writing process,<br />
which requires <strong>for</strong>ethought, planning and a rational,<br />
measured approach in order to produce the desired<br />
outcome. Editing and proofreading are essential<br />
components of any writing. It is important that students<br />
edit and proofread habitually, with a specific purpose,<br />
and concentrate on the careful consideration of each<br />
sentence, one at a time. Activities provided in this series<br />
encourage students to think about appropriate aspects<br />
of their writing be<strong>for</strong>e, during and after the process.<br />
LESSON PROCEDURE<br />
Introduction<br />
Discuss the text title with the students. Ask <strong>for</strong> their<br />
interpretations of what the title could mean.<br />
Discuss the text type. Why does it fit into this category?<br />
What are the specific features of this type of text?<br />
Guide the discussion to introduce the teaching points/<br />
strategies to be covered during the course of the unit.<br />
For example, check they understand terms such as noun<br />
group, adverbial, sentence, paragraph and comma.<br />
Development<br />
Read and discuss the text, either in groups or as a<br />
class. Assist students with any unfamiliar vocabulary or<br />
expressions.<br />
Differentiation<br />
Work through the introductory activities with the class<br />
as a whole, ensuring students understand what is<br />
required of them.<br />
Work with those requiring additional assistance while<br />
the remainder of the class work independently on the<br />
activities.<br />
ASSESSMENT<br />
An assessment is included <strong>for</strong> each unit in the book.<br />
Because of the way it is structured, this assessment<br />
will allow you to see individual student’s understandings<br />
as well as any common points of weakness which may<br />
require further assistance.<br />
FORMAT<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing is organised into four<br />
sections:<br />
Word choices<br />
Punctuation<br />
Sentence structure<br />
Editing and proofreading<br />
Each section has four units of work and one assessment<br />
unit.<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> units<br />
Each six-page unit of work has a specific focus, two<br />
teacher pages and four activity pages.<br />
Assessment units<br />
• Following each section is a four-page unit of<br />
assessment activities–one page <strong>for</strong> each unit.<br />
• Answers are provided in the teachers pages <strong>for</strong> that<br />
unit.<br />
• Teacher record sheets – see pages vi–ix.<br />
Assessment writing tasks<br />
• A suggested paragraph writing topic <strong>for</strong> each unit is<br />
provided on the teachers pages.<br />
• Teacher recording sheet – see pages x–xi.<br />
• Student writing checklist – see page xii.<br />
• Student self-evaluation – see page xiii.<br />
Review<br />
In pairs or small groups, students review their answers,<br />
giving their reasoning where required and critiquing the<br />
longer sentence or paragraph responses.<br />
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TEACHER NOTES<br />
Sample open pages<br />
Teacher page 1 Teacher page 2<br />
Activity page 1 Activity page 2<br />
Activity page 3 Activity page 4<br />
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ASSESSMENT ACTIVITIES<br />
CLASS RECORD<br />
Date:<br />
Name Unit 9 Unit 10 Unit 11 Unit 12<br />
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ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />
CLASS RECORD<br />
Unit: Focus: Date:<br />
Paragraph topic:<br />
Name<br />
Comment<br />
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STUDENT WRITING CHECKLIST<br />
Name:<br />
Date:<br />
Assessment writing topic:<br />
Paragraph<br />
I have read the paragraph and it makes sense. ..........................................................<br />
I have read it to check <strong>for</strong> spelling errors. ..................................................................<br />
I have made corrections. ............................................................................................<br />
Punctuation<br />
I have checked the sentences one at a time <strong>for</strong>:<br />
• capital letters to start sentences and proper nouns. ...........................................<br />
• full stops, question marks, exclamation marks. .................................................<br />
• commas. ................................................................................................................<br />
• apostrophes <strong>for</strong> contractions and ownership. ......................................................<br />
• speech marks. .......................................................................................................<br />
I have made corrections. ............................................................................................<br />
Sentences<br />
I have checked the sentences one at a time <strong>for</strong>:<br />
• sense – Does each sentence make sense by itself? ............................................<br />
• length – Are any sentences too long? ...................................................................<br />
Should they be separated? .....................................................................<br />
Should some be joined? ..........................................................................<br />
• beginnings – Have I used interesting beginnings? ...............................................<br />
Word choices<br />
I have made changes. ......................................................................<br />
verbs – Are they in<strong>for</strong>mative and different? ...............................................................<br />
Have I used the correct verb tense? ...............................................................<br />
Are there too many boring verbs? ..................................................................<br />
adverbials – Do some verbs need adverbials to tell how,<br />
when or where something happened? ...................................................<br />
noun groups – Are the noun groups descriptive? ......................................................<br />
Can I add some descriptive adjectives to tell<br />
more about nouns and pronouns? ......................................................<br />
pronouns – Have I used the correct pronouns? .........................................................<br />
I have made changes and corrections. ....................................................<br />
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STUDENT SELF-EVALUATION<br />
Name: Unit: Date:<br />
I wrote a paragraph about:<br />
My goal was to focus on:<br />
How well did I achieve my goal?<br />
Three things I did well in my writing were:<br />
•<br />
•<br />
•<br />
Next time I write a paragraph I will try to:<br />
STUDENT SELF-EVALUATION<br />
Name: Unit: Date:<br />
I wrote a paragraph about:<br />
My goal was to focus on:<br />
How well did I achieve my goal?<br />
Three things I did well in my writing were:<br />
•<br />
•<br />
•<br />
Next time I write a paragraph I will try to:<br />
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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />
USING PUNCTUATION IN<br />
SENTENCES<br />
UNIT 9<br />
Focus<br />
Punctuation – using <strong>punctuation</strong> in sentences<br />
Progression<br />
Recognise<br />
Students will recognise specified <strong>punctuation</strong> from modelled<br />
examples.<br />
Choose<br />
Students will choose appropriate <strong>punctuation</strong> <strong>for</strong> sentences with<br />
teacher support.<br />
Use<br />
Students will correctly punctuate supplied and self-written<br />
sentences.<br />
Definition of terms<br />
A sentence is a set of words that makes sense by itself. It may be<br />
a statement, a question, an exclamation or a command.<br />
Capital letters are used at the beginning of a new sentence and<br />
<strong>for</strong> proper nouns.<br />
Proper nouns are nouns used <strong>for</strong> naming a particular person,<br />
place or thing.<br />
A full stop is used at the end of a sentence.<br />
A question mark is used at the end of a question.<br />
An exclamation mark is used at the end of an exclamation.<br />
Introduction<br />
Good writers improve their writing by using correct <strong>punctuation</strong>.<br />
Teacher in<strong>for</strong>mation<br />
Punctuation enables a writer to more fully and accurately<br />
communicate with the reader by making the writing more<br />
understandable.<br />
LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />
Introduction<br />
• Read a teacher-selected short passage to the class, ignoring the<br />
<strong>punctuation</strong> and exaggerating the effects.<br />
• Ask students if they had difficulty understanding the passage.<br />
• Elicit from students the reason(s) why it was hard to understand.<br />
• Question how <strong>punctuation</strong> makes text easier to understand. List<br />
student responses and discuss.<br />
Do we need it? – Page 60<br />
• Set students to work in pairs to complete Question 1.<br />
• In small groups, discuss their answers. How similar are they? Why?<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
• Encourage students to share with the class and discuss their<br />
answers to Question 4.<br />
Understanding <strong>punctuation</strong> – Page 61<br />
• Read and discuss the text.<br />
• Ask ‘What is missing?’ and list answers.<br />
• Emphasise that a capital is needed <strong>for</strong> proper nouns; <strong>for</strong> example,<br />
Lake Como, Italian, Switzerland.<br />
• Explain that mum and dad only need a capital letter when used<br />
instead of their names; <strong>for</strong> example, My mum and dad love Italy – I<br />
asked Dad if we could drive into Switzerland.<br />
• Review any further known <strong>punctuation</strong>.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
• Encourage students in small groups or as a class to discuss their<br />
responses to Question 4 (b) and (c).<br />
Short sentences – Page 62<br />
• Read the text at the top of the page.<br />
• Ensure students are familiar with the features of a sentence, a<br />
statement, a command, an exclamation and a question, including<br />
their specific <strong>punctuation</strong>.<br />
• Provide opportunities <strong>for</strong> students to discuss in pairs the validity of<br />
their answers to Question 3.<br />
Is it correct? – Page 63<br />
• Revise with students the <strong>punctuation</strong> required <strong>for</strong> beginning and<br />
ending a sentence, proper nouns, questions, exclamations and<br />
commands.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />
USING PUNCTUATION IN<br />
SENTENCES<br />
UNIT 9<br />
ANSWERS<br />
Do we need it? – Page 60<br />
1. (b) It has no <strong>punctuation</strong>.<br />
(c) makes it harder to read and understand<br />
(d) Answers will vary.<br />
(e) no<br />
2. (a)–(b) Finally, the holiday we'd dreamed about was here. We<br />
flew into Milan and picked up our hire car. Dad drove,<br />
remembering to keep to the right. We are heading north<br />
of Lake Como to a little village called Era. We have<br />
rented a stone cottage in a chestnut grove <strong>for</strong> a week.<br />
(c) apostrophe in we’d<br />
(d) 8; 4 x sentence beginnings and 4 x proper nouns<br />
3. Teacher check<br />
4. Teacher check. Discuss answers. Students should appreciate the<br />
need <strong>for</strong> <strong>punctuation</strong>.<br />
Understanding <strong>punctuation</strong> – Page 61<br />
1. (a) Teacher check<br />
(b) 10<br />
(c) 5<br />
(d) Era, Dad, GPS<br />
2.–3. Teacher check<br />
4. (a) Proper nouns must have capitals.<br />
(b)–(c) Teacher check<br />
Short sentences – Page 62<br />
1. (b) a capital letter<br />
(c) no<br />
(d) question mark, full stop, exclamation mark<br />
2. (a) Stand over there./Hop in./Here comes the rain/Just keep<br />
going.<br />
(b) Look at that!/Throw it!/Get behind me!/On your feet!/Watch<br />
the ball!/Turn off the light now!/Look out!<br />
(c) Teacher check<br />
(d) Teacher check – Example: Tell me who threw that.<br />
3. Teacher check<br />
2. Teacher check. Full <strong>punctuation</strong>:<br />
The next day was Sunday and we woke to the sound of church<br />
bells. Dad said, ‘In the car, we’re going to Lake Como. Do you<br />
know George Clooney has a house there? Perhaps he’ll invite us<br />
in <strong>for</strong> afternoon tea’. (or ... tea.’)<br />
3. (a) true<br />
(b) false<br />
(c) true<br />
(d) false<br />
4. (a) ✓ ✓ – Great<br />
(b) ✓ ✓ – Theatre<br />
(c) – ✓ – Street; moon<br />
(d) ✓ – – Good; Games<br />
ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />
Assessment activity – Page 82<br />
1. (a) Teacher check<br />
(b) One, Dad, Switzerland, We, Lucerne<br />
(c) sentence beginnings and proper nouns<br />
(d) 2, after ‘Switzerland’ and ‘lake’<br />
2.–5. Teacher check<br />
6. (a) What’s <strong>for</strong> lunch?<br />
(b) Are we there yet, Dad?<br />
(c) Watch out <strong>for</strong> cyclists! (accept fullstop)<br />
7. (a) Michelangelo’s statue of David<br />
(b) a Tom Cruise film,<br />
(c) ✓<br />
(d) Victoria Falls<br />
(e) Sydney Opera House<br />
(f) Sahara Desert<br />
Class recording sheet – Page viii<br />
ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />
• Paragraph topic – My special holiday place<br />
• Focus: Punctuation – using <strong>punctuation</strong> in sentences<br />
Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />
4. Teacher check – along the lines of: ‘Peter asked, “Where are<br />
you?” and all you could say was, “Here!”’<br />
Is it correct? – Page 63<br />
1. (a) Lake Como is in Italy.<br />
(b) Our holiday home is great.<br />
(c) Mum loves Italian chocolate.<br />
(d) We took a ferry on Lake Como. (Accept exclamation mark.)<br />
(e) Can you hear the bells?<br />
(f) Keep right, Dad! (Accept full stop.)<br />
(g) Have you seen the Swiss Alps?<br />
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DO WE NEED IT?<br />
Our Italian escape<br />
Finally the holiday wed dreamed about was here we<br />
flew into milan and picked up our hire car dad drove<br />
remembering to keep to the right we are heading north<br />
of lake como to a little village called era we have rented a<br />
stone cottage in a chestnut grove <strong>for</strong> a week<br />
1. (a) Read ‘Our Italian escape’ with a partner. Try to read it aloud.<br />
(b) What is different about this text?<br />
(c) What effect does that have?<br />
(d) Why?<br />
(e) Was it easy to understand?<br />
2. (a) Add the missing full stops and capital letters using a red coloured pencil or pen.<br />
(b) Add one comma in the first sentence. Add another in the third sentence.<br />
(c) What other <strong>punctuation</strong> mark did you add in the first sentence?<br />
(d) How many capital letters did you add altogether?<br />
What did you need them <strong>for</strong>?<br />
3. (a) Read the text to a partner again, after adding your <strong>punctuation</strong>.<br />
(b) Did you find it easier to read this time?<br />
(c) Explain your answer.<br />
(d) Do you think your partner found it easier to understand this time?<br />
4. Write two sentences about <strong>punctuation</strong>. Is it something we need or just old-fashioned<br />
and a waste of time and ef<strong>for</strong>t?<br />
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UNIT 9<br />
UNDERSTANDING PUNCTUATION<br />
Capital letters are used at the beginning of a new sentence and <strong>for</strong> proper nouns.<br />
Proper nouns are nouns used <strong>for</strong> naming a particular person, place or thing.<br />
For example: Doctor Robert Smith London Bridge New Year’s Eve<br />
The cottage<br />
when we finally arrived at era, dad used the gps to guide us to<br />
our cottage. it was beautiful. surrounded by chestnut trees at<br />
the base of a mountain, it was in a world of its own. the twostorey<br />
cottage was perfect. from my bedroom window, i could<br />
see across the treetops to the misty mountains beyond.<br />
1. (a) Use a red pencil or pen to put capital letters in the text.<br />
(b) How many capital letters did you need to add?<br />
(c) How many sentences are in the text?<br />
(d) Write the proper nouns from the text.<br />
2. (a) Write two sentences about a place someone you know likes to go to <strong>for</strong> holidays. Use<br />
capital letters to name the place and the person who enjoys going there.<br />
(b) How many proper nouns did you use in your sentences?<br />
3. Write a proper noun that tells you:<br />
(a) a festival<br />
(c) a queen<br />
(b) a country<br />
(d) a lake<br />
(e) a mountain (f) an organisation<br />
4. (a) What is the rule about proper nouns and capitals?<br />
(b) Do you think the rule about capitals <strong>for</strong> proper nouns is still needed?<br />
(c) Write a statement telling how you would like to treat proper nouns.<br />
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SHORT SENTENCES<br />
Look at that! Who threw that? Throw it! Here comes the rain.<br />
Get behind me! On your feet! Stand over there. Turn off the light now!<br />
Hop in. Watch the ball! Where are you?<br />
Look out!<br />
Just keep going.<br />
1. (a) Read the short sentences. They are all sentences because they make complete sense.<br />
(b) What do they all start with?<br />
(c) Do they all use the same <strong>punctuation</strong> mark at the end?<br />
(d) What are the three <strong>punctuation</strong> marks used at the end of these sentences?<br />
2. (a) Write the commands.<br />
(b) Write the exclamations.<br />
(c) Write any which could be both.<br />
(d) Change one of the questions to a statement.<br />
3. (a) Write a question of your own with fewer than six words.<br />
(b) Write an exclamation with five words.<br />
(c) Write a command with four words.<br />
4. Challenge: Write a sentence which has both a question and an exclamation in it.<br />
Hint: Direct speech—and you may like to work with a partner.<br />
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UNIT 9<br />
IS IT CORRECT?<br />
1. Find the <strong>punctuation</strong> error(s) in each sentence. Write the sentence correctly.<br />
(a) Lake como is in italy.<br />
(b) Our holiday home is great?<br />
(c) mum loves italian chocolate<br />
(d) we took a ferry on Lake Como!<br />
(e) can you hear the bells.<br />
(f) Keep right, dad?<br />
(g) have you seen the Swiss Alps.<br />
2. Read the paragraph. Find and circle the <strong>punctuation</strong> errors. Write the paragraph correctly.<br />
the next day was sunday and we woke. to the sound of Church bells? dad said, ‘In<br />
the car, we’re going to lake Como do you know george clooney has a house there!<br />
perhaps he’ll invite us in <strong>for</strong> afternoon tea’<br />
3. Write ‘true’ or ‘false’ after each statement.<br />
(a) Capital letters are needed <strong>for</strong> months of the year.<br />
(b) The word ‘dinosaur’ needs a capital letter.<br />
(c) The word ‘king’ when in a title needs a capital letter.<br />
(d) The words ‘mum’ and ‘dad’ always need a capital letter.<br />
4. Put a tick in the box if the <strong>punctuation</strong> is correct. Use a red pen to correct it if it's wrong.<br />
(a) Mars Mount Vesuvius great Barrier Reef<br />
(b) our supermarket Cafe de Wheels Her Majesty’s theatre<br />
(c) William street Prince of Wales a full Moon<br />
(d) Killarney Castle good Friday Olympic games<br />
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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />
FULL STOPS, CAPITAL LETTERS,<br />
COMMAS, DIRECT SPEECH<br />
UNIT 10<br />
Focus<br />
Punctuation – full stops, capitals, commas, direct speech<br />
Progression<br />
Recognise<br />
Students will recognise specified <strong>punctuation</strong> from modelled<br />
examples.<br />
Choose<br />
Students will choose appropriate <strong>punctuation</strong> <strong>for</strong> sentences with<br />
teacher support.<br />
Use<br />
Students will correctly punctuate supplied and self-written<br />
sentences.<br />
Definition of terms<br />
A sentence is a set of words that makes sense by itself. It may be a<br />
statement, a question, an exclamation or a command.<br />
Quotation marks are used to set off the actual words said or<br />
thought.<br />
A clause is a group of words that contains a verb and a subject;<br />
e.g. He (subject) walks (verb).<br />
A main clause is one which stands as a simple sentence in its own<br />
right; e.g. If it rains, you will get soaking wet.<br />
Introduction<br />
Good writers improve their writing by using correct <strong>punctuation</strong>.<br />
Teacher in<strong>for</strong>mation<br />
Punctuation enables a writer to more fully and accurately<br />
communicate with the reader.<br />
Note: There is more than one method of punctuating direct speech.<br />
(Two different methods are given in the Answers.) Whichever<br />
method is chosen, it must be consistently used.<br />
A comma is used be<strong>for</strong>e the coordinating conjunction (the Ox<strong>for</strong>d<br />
comma or serial comma) in some publications. It is not incorrect<br />
to use it this way, but it is more common to not include the comma;<br />
e.g. I bought potatoes, tomatoes, beans and sprouts, rather than<br />
I bought potatoes, tomatoes, beans, and sprouts. However, it is<br />
acceptable in cases where there may be ambiguity or a need <strong>for</strong><br />
clarification; e.g. I dedicate this book to Mum and Dad, Kate Mara<br />
and Iron Man. Since it is unlikely the writer really means ‘Mum and<br />
Dad’ are Kate Mara and Iron Man, it can be rewritten as I dedicate<br />
this book to Mum and Dad, Kate Mara, and Iron Man.<br />
LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />
Introduction<br />
• Discuss the text title.<br />
• Discuss with students who might use the phrase ‘Pay attention!’. Ask<br />
why it has an exclamation mark.<br />
Full stops – Page 66<br />
• Read the text with the class.<br />
• Ask students to identify the text type and discuss the features of<br />
narrative text.<br />
• Discuss the <strong>punctuation</strong> used.<br />
• Discuss how difficult it would be to read without <strong>punctuation</strong>.<br />
• Read and discuss the definition of full stops.<br />
• Discuss why the definition is so short.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
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• Read and discuss the in<strong>for</strong>mation about the use of capital letters.<br />
• Revise the definition of a sentence with students.<br />
• Read with the class the statement about proper nouns. Ask <strong>for</strong><br />
further examples and list them on the board.<br />
• Emphasise that a capital is needed <strong>for</strong> names; hence ‘my uncle’ but<br />
‘Uncle Harry’.<br />
• Explain that mum and dad only need a capital letter when used<br />
instead of their names; <strong>for</strong> example, My mum and dad love travelling<br />
– I asked Mum and Dad if we could go to France.<br />
• Encourage students to write and share Mum and Dad’s response to<br />
Question 2(f).<br />
Commas – Page 68<br />
• Read the in<strong>for</strong>mation at the top of the page.<br />
• Provide opportunities <strong>for</strong> students to read aloud and discuss in pairs<br />
the sentences in Question 2. Reading aloud will provide the natural<br />
pauses indicating the need <strong>for</strong> a comma.<br />
• In pairs, students read and discuss their answers to Question 3.<br />
Direct speech – Page 69<br />
• Discuss the in<strong>for</strong>mation given about direct speech.<br />
• Emphasise that it is the actual words used. Elicit further examples.<br />
• Discuss with the class the placement of <strong>punctuation</strong> in the example<br />
given. Ask why the <strong>punctuation</strong> is placed where it is.<br />
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COMMAS, DIRECT SPEECH<br />
UNIT 10<br />
ANSWERS<br />
Full stops – Page 66<br />
1. (a) and (d) need full stops<br />
2. (a) Some teachers drone on and on. It can be hard to pay<br />
attention.<br />
(b) Caleb was drawing pictures. He was not paying attention. The<br />
teacher saw him.<br />
3. (a) No, no, that’s incorrect. You are just guessing, Caleb. Please<br />
try again.<br />
(b) Mr MacRae liked surprises. Caleb didn’t. He thought they<br />
were unfair.<br />
Capital letters – Page 67<br />
1. (a) No<br />
(b) Yes<br />
(c) Yes<br />
2. (a) On her holiday in America, Kate visited the Grand Canyon.<br />
(b) If ever I go to France I want to see the Louvre and the Eiffel<br />
Tower.<br />
(c) In March we are taking a cruise from Singapore to the Arctic<br />
Circle.<br />
(d) From the tour bus we saw Trafalgar Square and Piccadilly<br />
Circus in London.<br />
(e) Dr Henry Jones is better known by his nickname—Indiana<br />
Jones.<br />
(f) Chloe asked Mum and Dad if they could go <strong>for</strong> a cruise on<br />
board the Queen Elizabeth.<br />
Commas – Page 68<br />
1. (a) Jon likes watching football, hockey, cricket and tennis on<br />
television.<br />
(b) My favourite breakfast is sausages, eggs, toast and orange<br />
juice.<br />
(c) I don’t like broccoli, turnips, liver, kidneys or tripe.<br />
2. (a) Gasping <strong>for</strong> air, Tommy raced <strong>for</strong> the bus.<br />
(b) Caleb, looking startled, tried to answer Mr MacRae’s<br />
question.<br />
(c) If you go shopping later, we need some more bread, milk and<br />
marmalade.<br />
2. (a) ‘I wonder if Caleb’s paying attention or drawing again’, Mr<br />
MacRae thought./‘I wonder if Caleb’s paying attention or<br />
drawing again,’ Mr MacRae thought.<br />
(b) Mr MacRae asked, ‘Anika, can you please tell me where you<br />
use quotation marks?’<br />
(c) In a daydream, Caleb thought, ‘Please, please let it be home<br />
time soon’./ In a daydream, Caleb thought, ‘Please, please let<br />
it be home time soon.’<br />
(d) ‘Caleb!’ Mr MacRae snapped. ‘What are you daydreaming<br />
about this time?’<br />
3. Teacher check. Answers will vary.<br />
ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />
Assessment activity – Page 83<br />
1. (b) and (d) need a full stop<br />
2. The road to Lucerne is very twisty. It climbs through the Swiss<br />
Alps. Dad had to drive carefully.<br />
3. If I go back to Switzerland, I want to visit Zurich and St Moritz<br />
and I definitely want to see the Matterhorn.<br />
4. (a) Switzerland is famous <strong>for</strong> chocolate, cuckoo clocks, lace and<br />
mountains.<br />
(b) Because the road was twisty, Dad drove carefully, slowing<br />
down on the bends.<br />
5. (a) No<br />
(b) Yes – ‘Could you get me some too, please?’ Dad asked.<br />
(c) Yes – 'Hey! How about me?' I thought.<br />
6. (a) ‘There’s still snow on the mountains. Look!’ my sister said.<br />
(b) ‘Can you see anyone skiing?’ Dad wanted to know.<br />
Class record sheet – Page viii<br />
ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />
• Paragraph topic – The best part of school<br />
• Focus: Punctuation – full stops, capital letters, commas, direct<br />
speech<br />
Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />
3. Teacher check<br />
Direct speech – Page 69<br />
1. (a) ✓<br />
(b) ✘ – ‘Why one earth not?’ her mother asked.<br />
(c) ✓<br />
(d) ✘ – ‘Because the children are so mean to me, that’s why’,<br />
she replied./‘Because the children are so mean to me, that’s<br />
why,’ she replied.<br />
(e) ✘ – ‘But, dear,’ Mum said, ‘you have to go to school. You’re<br />
the teacher!’<br />
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USING PUNCTUATION IN SENTENCES – FULL STOPS<br />
UNIT 10<br />
Pay attention!<br />
Mr MacRae is teaching when he notices Caleb up the back, drawing<br />
pictures in his workbook.<br />
‘Caleb!’ he calls. ‘Have you been paying attention? Give me two pronouns,<br />
right now!’<br />
Startled, Caleb looks up. ‘Who? Me?’ he asks.<br />
‘You were just plain lucky there, Caleb’, Mr MacRae grumbles. ‘Now give<br />
me a sentence staring with “I”.’<br />
‘I is ...’<br />
‘No, no, no!’ Mr MacRae interrupts. ‘“I” is always followed by “am”. Try<br />
again.’<br />
‘OK, sir, if you say so’, says Caleb, shaking his head. ‘I am the ninth letter<br />
of the alphabet.’<br />
A full stop (.) is used to show the end of a sentence.<br />
1. Put a full stop in the box after a complete sentence. Leave it blank if it is not.<br />
(a) Caleb wasn’t paying attention<br />
(c) Caleb says, startled<br />
(b) The ninth letter of the alphabet<br />
(d) Put the book away, please<br />
2. Rewrite the sentences. Put full stops and capital letters where needed.<br />
(a) Some teachers drone on and on it can be hard to pay attention<br />
(b) Caleb was drawing pictures he was not paying attention the teacher saw him<br />
3. Rewrite the sentence. Put full stops, capital letters and commas where needed.<br />
(a) no no that’s incorrect you are just guessing caleb please try again<br />
(b) mr macRae liked surprises caleb didn’t he thought they were unfair<br />
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CAPITAL LETTERS<br />
A capital letter is used to start a sentence.<br />
1. Does the statement need to start with a capital letter?<br />
(a) drawing pictures Yes No<br />
(b) have you been drawing pictures in your workbook? Yes No<br />
(c) everyone has been doing it Yes No<br />
Proper nouns are names <strong>for</strong> particular people, places or things. They need a capital letter.<br />
For example: Liam, Antarctica, United Nations, Tower Bridge.<br />
2. Rewrite the sentence using capital letters where needed.<br />
(a) on her holiday in america, kate visited the grand canyon.<br />
(b) if ever i go to france i want to see the louvre and the eiffel tower.<br />
(c) in march we are taking a cruise from singapore to the arctic circle.<br />
(d) from the tour bus we saw trafalgar square and piccadilly circus in london.<br />
(e) dr henry jones is better known by his nickname—indiana jones.<br />
(f) chloe asked mum and dad if they could go <strong>for</strong> a cruise on board the queen elizabeth.<br />
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UNIT 10<br />
COMMAS<br />
A comma is used to separate items in a list.<br />
For example: ‘The shopping list had eggs, bread, bacon and milk on it’. There is no comma<br />
needed be<strong>for</strong>e the conjunction (‘and/or’) in a list.<br />
1. Rewrite the sentence, putting in commas where needed.<br />
(a) Jon likes watching football hockey cricket and tennis on television.<br />
(b) My favourite breakfast is sausages eggs toast and orange juice.<br />
(c) I don’t like broccoli turnips liver kidneys or tripe.<br />
A comma is used to separate the main clause in a sentence from a helper clause. The<br />
main clause makes sense on its own.<br />
For example: When you go <strong>for</strong> a walk later (helper clause), don’t <strong>for</strong>get your umbrella (main<br />
clause): The boy, feeling very tired, flopped on the bed.<br />
2. Add commas to the sentences.<br />
(a) Gasping <strong>for</strong> air Tommy raced <strong>for</strong> the bus.<br />
(b) Caleb looking startled tried to answer Mr MacRae’s question.<br />
(c) If you go shopping later we need some more bread milk and marmalade.<br />
3. Write a sentence of your own, using a comma to separate the main and helper clauses.<br />
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DIRECT SPEECH<br />
Direct speech is the actual words or thoughts used by people. Direct speech must be<br />
enclosed with quotation marks.<br />
For example: ‘What is the matter?’ asked Maureen. ‘You’re very grumpy.’<br />
1. Read the sentence. If it is correct as written, put a tick in the box. If it’s incorrect, put a<br />
cross in the box and make the corrections.<br />
(a) Sarah said she really didn’t want to go to school.<br />
(b) Why on earth not? her mother asked.<br />
(c) Sarah stamped her foot angrily.<br />
(d) Because the children are so mean to me, that’s why, she replied.<br />
(e) But, dear, Mum said, you have to go to school. You’re the teacher!<br />
2. Rewrite the sentence, adding quotation marks where needed.<br />
(a) I wonder if Caleb’s paying attention or drawing again, Mr MacRae thought.<br />
(b) Mr MacRae asked, Anika, can you please tell me where you use quotation marks?<br />
(c) In a daydream, Caleb thought, Please, please let it be home time soon.<br />
(d) Caleb! Mr MacRae snapped. What are you daydreaming about this time?<br />
3. Write what Caleb says to answer Mr MacRae and what the teacher replies. Use direct<br />
speech.<br />
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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />
APOSTROPHES IN CONTRACTIONS<br />
UNIT 11<br />
Focus<br />
Punctuation – apostrophes in contractions<br />
Progression<br />
Recognise<br />
Students will recognise apostrophes in contractions in modelled<br />
examples.<br />
Choose<br />
Students will write contractions correctly with teacher support.<br />
Use<br />
Students will write contractions correctly in supplied and selfwritten<br />
sentences.<br />
Definition of terms<br />
Contractions are new words made by joining two (or more) words<br />
and leaving out some letters.<br />
Apostrophes are <strong>punctuation</strong> marks used to show where letters<br />
are missing in contractions. (They are also used to show<br />
possession.)<br />
Introduction<br />
Good writers improve their writing by using apostrophes correctly.<br />
Teacher in<strong>for</strong>mation<br />
Punctuation enables a writer to more fully and accurately<br />
communicate with the reader.<br />
Contractions in most cases only present difficulty in writing,<br />
the exception being could’ve, would’ve and should’ve which are<br />
often pronounced as though followed by ‘of’ instead of ‘have’ and<br />
subsequently written that way.<br />
LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />
Introduction<br />
• Discuss apostrophes—what they are, where they are placed and why<br />
they are used; i.e. in contractions (and to indicate possession).<br />
• Explain that the focus in this section will be on apostrophes in<br />
contractions and give some examples.<br />
• Explain that contractions are quicker and easier to say, and discuss<br />
and model a variety of examples.<br />
Apostrophes in contractions – Page 72<br />
• Read and discuss the definitions at the top of the page.<br />
• Read the phrases and ask the class to expand each contraction.<br />
• Work through the activities with the class, ensuring they understand<br />
what is required of them.<br />
• Ask students to explain their answers to Question 3.<br />
Using contractions – Page 73<br />
• Explain that answers to Question 1 may not all be the same, but that<br />
they must fit in the sentence.<br />
• Explain that some words used in contractions are shortened in the<br />
same way; <strong>for</strong> example, It is (it’s) a pleasure — It has (it’s) been a<br />
pleasure.<br />
• Provide opportunities <strong>for</strong> students to share their sentences from<br />
Question 4.<br />
• Be<strong>for</strong>e completing Question 5, remind the class that apostrophes<br />
can also be used to show that something is owned by someone or<br />
something.<br />
It’s or its? – Page 74<br />
• Read and revise with the class the in<strong>for</strong>mation given at the top of the<br />
page.<br />
• Emphasise that it’s easy to work out which to use by asking the<br />
simple question, ‘Can I say “it is” here?’ If the answer is ‘yes’, an<br />
apostrophe is needed. Note: It has is also contracted to it’s.<br />
• Discuss students’ answers to Question 1.<br />
• Students can share the sentences they wrote in Questions 4 and 5.<br />
Could have, would have and should have – Page 75<br />
• Discuss the illustration at the top of the page and explain that would,<br />
could and should must be followed by the verb have and must never<br />
be sunk by the iceberg (of).<br />
• Share the sentences written in Question 1. The three words are all<br />
to be followed by ‘ve’, but what word have they written next? Is it a<br />
verb?<br />
• Students should share their sentences <strong>for</strong> Question 2.<br />
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APOSTROPHES IN CONTRACTIONS<br />
UNIT 11<br />
ANSWERS<br />
Apostrophes in contractions – Page 72<br />
Contraction Two words Missing letters<br />
I’ve I have h, a<br />
I’m I am a<br />
haven’t have not o<br />
She’ll she will w, i<br />
mum’s mum is i<br />
You’re you are a<br />
couldn’t could not o<br />
1. (a)–(c) See chart<br />
2. (a) I’d appreciate some help, please.<br />
(b) We’ll be there.<br />
(c) Don’t do that again.<br />
(d) Where’ve you been?<br />
(e) I wouldn’t eat that fruit.<br />
3. (a) less <strong>for</strong>mal<br />
(b) imaginative/narrative<br />
(c) Teacher check: Hear – It’s a less <strong>for</strong>mal <strong>for</strong>mat, may contain<br />
slang, jargon, direct speech.<br />
Using contractions – Page 73<br />
1. (a) you’ve/I’ve/we’ve<br />
(b) I’d<br />
(c) you’ll<br />
(d) We’ve<br />
2. (a) has<br />
(b) has<br />
(c) is<br />
(d) is<br />
(e) has<br />
Could have, would have and should have – Page 75<br />
1.–2. Teacher check<br />
ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />
Assessment activity – Page 84<br />
1. (a) wouldn’t – would not<br />
(b) You’re – You are<br />
2. (a) Where’s your coat gone?<br />
(b) Mum said she’d bring it.<br />
3. (a) would’ve/might’ve/should’ve/could’ve<br />
(b) hasn’t<br />
4. is<br />
5. (a) It’s, its<br />
(b) it’s, its<br />
6. Teacher check<br />
7. (a) ‘would’ and ‘should’ need to be followed by a verb<br />
(b) It wouldn’t have been nice if you had fallen. You should have<br />
been more careful.<br />
8. Teacher check<br />
Class recording sheet – Page viii<br />
ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />
• Paragraph topic – I should have done better!<br />
• Focus: Punctuation – apostrophes in contractions<br />
Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />
3.–4. Teacher check<br />
5. Take your pencils back to your house. I am sure they’re yours, but<br />
your sisters might say they’re theirs once you get there.<br />
It’s or its? – Page 74<br />
1. (a) no, yes, no<br />
(b) Teacher check<br />
2. (a) It’s – it’s<br />
(b) It’s – its<br />
(c) it’s – its<br />
(d) It’s – its –its<br />
3. (a) it’s<br />
(b) it’s<br />
(c) it’s – its<br />
(d) it’s – its<br />
4.–5. Teacher check. Answers will vary.<br />
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UNIT 11<br />
APOSTROPHES IN CONTRACTIONS<br />
Contractions are new words made by joining two (or more) words and leaving out some<br />
letters.<br />
An apostrophe is used in a contraction to show that some letters are missing.<br />
Who’s ready? I’ll be back! We shouldn’t've We’re open <strong>for</strong> business<br />
She’s leaving home Don’t <strong>for</strong>get me Where’ve you been? What’d he say?<br />
Contraction Two (or more) words Missing letters<br />
I’ve I have h, a<br />
1. Circle all the contractions and add them to the chart above. An example has been given.<br />
(a) I’m sorry, but you haven’t been picked <strong>for</strong> the team.<br />
(b) She’ll be very unhappy because her mum’s going away.<br />
(c) You’re correct, I couldn’t have done it without your help.<br />
2. Rewrite the sentences using contractions.<br />
(a) I would appreciate some help, please.<br />
(b) We will be there.<br />
(c) Do not do that again.<br />
(d) Where have you been?<br />
(e) I would not eat that fruit.<br />
3. (a) Are the sentences you wrote in Question 2 more or less <strong>for</strong>mal?<br />
(b) In which text <strong>for</strong>m would you be more likely to use contractions? Why?<br />
(c) Are you more likely to read or hear contractions? Why?<br />
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USING CONTRACTIONS<br />
1. Use a suitable contraction to complete the sentence.<br />
(a) Don’t tell me<br />
(b) I was very worried<br />
<strong>for</strong>gotten your homework!<br />
do badly in my spelling test.<br />
(c) When Dad saw my test mark, he said, ‘ have to work harder!’<br />
(d)<br />
both had great fun today, thank you.<br />
2. Which verb has been used in the contraction? Write ‘is’ or ‘has’ on the line.<br />
(a) It’s been a pleasure meeting you.<br />
(b) He’s been very good at football this year.<br />
(c) That’s not a problem.<br />
(d) Mum’s on her way to the city right now.<br />
(e) She’s been waiting <strong>for</strong> the winter sales to start.<br />
3. Write a sentence using a contraction of:<br />
(a) is<br />
(b) has<br />
4. The contraction ‘what’s’ can be used <strong>for</strong> ‘what is’, ‘what has’ and ‘what does’. Write a<br />
sentence <strong>for</strong> each meaning.<br />
(a) what is<br />
(b) what has<br />
(c) what does<br />
5. Challenge: Confused contractions. ‘You’re’ (contraction) is often confused with ‘your’<br />
(possession) and ‘they’re’ (contraction) is often confused with ‘their’ (possession) and<br />
‘there’. Write the sentence correctly.<br />
Take you’re pencils back to your house. I am sure their you’res, but you’re sisters might say<br />
there theres once you get their.<br />
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UNIT 11<br />
IT'S OR ITS?<br />
The word ‘it’s’ only needs an apostrophe if it is a contraction.<br />
For example: ‘It’s warm today’ (It is warm today).<br />
1. (a) Could the words it’s or its be a problem when you are: (Tick ‘Yes’ or ‘No’)<br />
speaking? Yes No<br />
writing? Yes No<br />
doing both? Yes No<br />
(b) Explain your answer.<br />
2. Circle the correct words.<br />
(a) (It’s, Its) no fun on holidays when (it’s, its) raining.<br />
(b) (It’s, Its) always good to see the sun poke (it’s, its) face through the clouds.<br />
(c) If (it’s, its) not too much trouble, my dog would like (it’s, its) ball back, please.<br />
(d) (It’s, its) not unusual to see a cat licking (it’s, its) paws to wash (it’s, its) face.<br />
3. Add ‘it’s’ or ‘its’.<br />
(a) I hope<br />
(b)<br />
the truth!<br />
not going to rain <strong>for</strong> the football this afternoon!<br />
(c) not fair! My bike has snapped chain again.<br />
(d) a full moon tonight, so you can see entire face.<br />
4. Use ‘it’s’ in a sentence about:<br />
(a) a film<br />
(b) a party<br />
5. Use ‘its’ in a sentence about:<br />
(a) a puppy<br />
(b) a stream<br />
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COULD HAVE, WOULD HAVE, SHOULD HAVE<br />
– BEWARE! TAKE CARE!<br />
UNIT 11<br />
The words ‘would’, ‘could’ and ‘should’ can only be followed by a verb.<br />
‘Have’ is a verb; ‘of’ is NOT a verb.<br />
1. (a) Write a sentence with ‘would’ followed by the contraction of the verb in the ship’s<br />
name.<br />
(b) Use ‘could’ in a sentence followed by the contraction of the verb in the ship’s name.<br />
(c) Use ‘should’ in a sentence followed by the contraction of the verb in the ship’s name.<br />
Question: Why are so many people using would, could and should followed by the ‘of’<br />
iceberg?<br />
Answer:<br />
If you say ‘would’ve’, ‘could’ve’ and ‘should’ve’ fast, the ‘ve’ SOUNDS like ‘of’.<br />
Your ears may be fooled, but not your eyes. These words are NEVER followed by ‘of’!<br />
2. Write interesting sentences using the contractions of ‘would have’, ‘could have’ and<br />
‘should have’.<br />
(a)<br />
(b)<br />
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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />
APOSTROPHES FOR POSSESSION<br />
UNIT 12<br />
Focus<br />
Punctuation – apostrophes <strong>for</strong> possession<br />
Progression<br />
Recognise<br />
Students will recognise possessive apostrophes from modelled<br />
examples.<br />
Choose<br />
Students will choose appropriate possessive apostrophes <strong>for</strong><br />
sentences with teacher support.<br />
Use<br />
Students will correctly use possessive apostrophes in supplied<br />
and self-written sentences.<br />
Definition of terms<br />
A possessive apostrophe is a <strong>punctuation</strong> mark used to show<br />
ownership.<br />
Introduction<br />
Good writers improve their writing by using apostrophes correctly.<br />
Teacher in<strong>for</strong>mation<br />
Punctuation enables a writer to more fully and accurately<br />
communicate with the reader.<br />
Possessive apostrophes show who or what possesses the noun<br />
referred to; e.g. The man’s hand.<br />
LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />
Introduction<br />
• Discuss apostrophes—what they are, where they are placed and why<br />
they are used; i.e. in contractions and to indicate possession.<br />
• Explain that the focus in this section will be on apostrophes to show<br />
ownership and give some examples.<br />
• Explain that apostrophes to show ownership are quicker and easier<br />
to say e.g. ‘Bob’s book’ rather than ‘the book belonging to Bob’.<br />
• Discuss and model a variety of examples.<br />
Apostrophes <strong>for</strong> ownership – Page 78<br />
• Discuss the rules <strong>for</strong> ownership and apostrophe placement.<br />
• Work with the class as a whole to ensure these concepts are fully<br />
understood.<br />
• Work through the examples with the class.<br />
• Allow more capable students to work in small groups or pairs to<br />
create further examples, while directly assisting those who need<br />
greater explanation and help.<br />
Who owns what? – Page 79<br />
• Revise with the class the two rules of apostrophe placement <strong>for</strong><br />
possession.<br />
• Revise how ownership can be deduced from the placement of the<br />
apostrophe.<br />
• Work the first question as a group, with teacher support, to ensure<br />
understanding.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
How many owners? – Page 80<br />
• Read the in<strong>for</strong>mation at the top of the page.<br />
• Work through an example on the board with the class as a whole.<br />
• Work through Question 1 with students, providing support or<br />
additional in<strong>for</strong>mation where needed.<br />
• Continue to work with those requiring additional assistance while the<br />
remainder of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
Practise using apostrophes – Page 81<br />
• Read and revise with the class the two rules of apostrophe<br />
placement <strong>for</strong> possession.<br />
• Revise the concept of ownership as a pair—e.g. Jock and Donna’s<br />
homework—and the placement of the apostrophe.<br />
• Allow students to work through the exercises, assisting as required.<br />
• In pairs or small groups, encourage students to discuss their<br />
answers to Question 5, since these will vary.<br />
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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />
APOSTROPHES FOR POSSESSION<br />
UNIT 12<br />
ANSWERS<br />
Apostrophes <strong>for</strong> ownership – Page 78<br />
1. All examples should have ‘Yes’ marked.<br />
Who owns what? – Page 79<br />
1. (a) the Prime Minister<br />
(b) the soldier<br />
(c) the singers<br />
(d) the orchestra<br />
(e) the magician<br />
(f) my parents<br />
2. (a) our family ✓ ✓<br />
(b) the witches ✓ ✓<br />
(c) Grandad ✓ ✓<br />
(d) Moby Dick ✓ ✓<br />
(e) Pinocchio ✓ ✓<br />
(f) my rose ✓ ✓<br />
3. (a) the wizard’s magic wand ✓ ✓<br />
(b) the farmers’ chickens ✓ ✓<br />
(c) Mr Brown’s class ✓ ✓<br />
(d) my aunty and uncle’s house ✓ ✓<br />
(e) the twins’ toys<br />
✓ ✓<br />
How many owners? – Page 80<br />
1. (a) the garden – s<br />
(b) the cafe – s<br />
(c) the pilots – p<br />
(d) my daughters – p<br />
(e) the girl – s<br />
(f) the ladies – p<br />
(g) the dentists – p<br />
(h) turtles – p<br />
2. (a) boys’<br />
(b) <strong>for</strong>ests’<br />
(c) cats’<br />
(d) ships’<br />
(e) trees’<br />
3. (a) boy’s<br />
(b) painter’s<br />
(c) writer’s<br />
(d) car’s<br />
(e) house’s<br />
4.–5. Teacher check. Answers will vary.<br />
ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />
Assessment activity – Page 85<br />
1. Rule 1: after Rule 2: be<strong>for</strong>e/after<br />
2. (a) Yes<br />
(b) No (should be ‘brother’s’)<br />
3. (a) the rose ✓<br />
(b) the bee ✓<br />
(c) the bike – bike’s tyre<br />
(d) the boy – boy’s schoolbag<br />
(e) the bees ✓<br />
4. (a) the sun’s warmth<br />
(b) the birds’ cage<br />
(c) Ian and John’s toy<br />
(d) the lighthouse’s gleam<br />
(e) the sheep’s wool (Note: plural or singular)<br />
5. (a) birds’<br />
(b) cats’<br />
6. (a) tree’s<br />
(b) jet’s<br />
7. Teacher check<br />
Class recording sheet – Page viii<br />
ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />
• Paragraph topic – School games<br />
• Focus: Punctuation – apostrophes <strong>for</strong> possession<br />
Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />
Practise using apostrophes – Page 81<br />
1.–5. Teacher check. Answers will vary.<br />
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UNIT 12<br />
APOSTROPHES FOR OWNERSHIP<br />
Apostrophes can be used to show ownership. Some people find it difficult to know where<br />
the apostrophe should go. But, if you follow the simple rules, it’s easy!<br />
Rule 1<br />
Rule 2<br />
An apostrophe is placed after the owner or owners.<br />
There must be an ‘s’ be<strong>for</strong>e or after the apostrophe.<br />
Mrs Doyle’s class lunch list<br />
Ham and salad<br />
Ham and salad<br />
1. Check the last sentence. Does it follow<br />
Rules 1 and 2?<br />
The sandwich belongs to Simon.<br />
Simon owns the sandwich.<br />
It is Simon’s sandwich. Yes No<br />
2. Check the last sentence. Does it follow<br />
Rules 1 and 2?<br />
The apples belong to Chloe and Sarah.<br />
The girls own the apples.<br />
They are the girls’ apples. Yes No<br />
3. Check the last sentence. Does it follow<br />
Rules 1 and 2?<br />
The yoghurt belongs to Rory.<br />
Rory owns the yoghurt.<br />
It is Rory’s yoghurt. Yes No<br />
4. Check the last sentence. Does it follow<br />
Rules 1 and 2?<br />
The cheese and crackers belong to the<br />
boys.<br />
The boys own the cheese and crackers.<br />
They are the boys’ cheese<br />
and crackers. Yes No<br />
5. Check the last sentence. Does it follow<br />
Rules 1 and 2?<br />
The milk belongs to the brothers.<br />
The brothers own the milk.<br />
It is the brothers’ milk. Yes No<br />
6. Check the last sentence. Does it follow<br />
Rules 1 and 2?<br />
The rolls belong to Max and Tom.<br />
Max and Tom own the rolls.<br />
They are Max and Tom’s<br />
rolls. Yes No<br />
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UNIT 12<br />
WHO OWNS WHAT?<br />
Rule 1<br />
Rule 2<br />
An apostrophe is placed after the owner or owners.<br />
There must be an ‘s’ be<strong>for</strong>e or after the apostrophe.<br />
1. Write the name of the owner or owners.<br />
(a) the Prime Minister’s car<br />
(b) the soldier’s uni<strong>for</strong>m<br />
(c) the singers’ microphones<br />
(d) the orchestra’s violins<br />
(e) the magician’s wand<br />
(f) my parents’ car<br />
2. Write the name of the owner or owners. Put a tick or cross to show if it follows both rules.<br />
(a) our family’s home Rule 1 Rule 2<br />
(b) the witches’ cauldrons Rule 1 Rule 2<br />
(c) Grandad’s pipe Rule 1 Rule 2<br />
(d) Moby Dick’s tail Rule 1 Rule 2<br />
(e) Pinocchio’s nose Rule 1 Rule 2<br />
(f) my rose’s blossoms Rule 1 Rule 2<br />
3. Use an apostrophe to show the owners. Check and tick the rule boxes.<br />
(a) the magic wand belonging to the wizard<br />
Rule 1 Rule 2<br />
(b) the chickens belonging to two farmers<br />
Rule 1 Rule 2<br />
(c) the class belonging to Mr Brown<br />
Rule 1 Rule 2<br />
(d) the house belonging to my aunty and uncle<br />
Rule 1 Rule 2<br />
(e) the toys belonging to the twins<br />
Rule 1 Rule 2<br />
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UNIT 12<br />
HOW MANY OWNERS?<br />
It is easy to work out if there is only one single owner or if there are plural owners. Just<br />
follow the steps.<br />
Step 1 Find the apostrophe.<br />
Step 2 Find the owner. (What is written just be<strong>for</strong>e the apostrophe?)<br />
Step 3 Ask yourself if there is one or more than one of them.<br />
1. Underline the owner or owners. How many owners are there? Write ‘s’ <strong>for</strong> one and ‘p’ <strong>for</strong><br />
more than one.<br />
(a) the garden’s flowers (b) the cafe’s chairs<br />
(c) the pilots’ caps (d) my daughters’ photograph<br />
(e) the girl’s blouse (f) the ladies’ team<br />
(g) the dentists’ surgery (h) turtles’ eggs<br />
2. Change the one owner to more than one owner by moving the apostrophe.<br />
(a) one boy’s brothers many brothers<br />
(b) one <strong>for</strong>est’s trees many trees<br />
(c) one cat’s whiskers many whiskers<br />
(d) one ship’s anchor many anchors<br />
(e) one trees leaves many leaves<br />
3. Change a number of owners to one owner by moving the apostrophe.<br />
(a) the boys’ toys one toys<br />
(b) the painters’ brushes one brushes<br />
(c) the writers’ novels one novels<br />
(d) the cars’ tyres one tyres<br />
(e) the houses’ chimneys one chimneys<br />
4. Write an interesting sentence showing one owner of ‘emails’.<br />
5. Write an interesting sentence showing many owners of ‘carrots’.<br />
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UNIT 12<br />
PRACTISE USING APOSTROPHES<br />
Rule 1<br />
Rule 2<br />
An apostrophe is placed after the owner or owners.<br />
There must be an ‘s’ be<strong>for</strong>e or after the apostrophe.<br />
1. (a) Write the name of a favourite male actor. e.g. Clint Eastwood<br />
(b) What is something he owns? e.g. a cowboy hat<br />
(c) It is e.g. Clint Eastwood’s cowboy hat<br />
.<br />
2. (a) Write the names of two female singers.<br />
(b) What is something they could both own?<br />
(c) It is .<br />
3. (a) Write the names of two gardeners.<br />
(b) Write one thing they both grow.<br />
(c) It is .<br />
4. (a) Write the names of two teachers.<br />
(b) Write something the teachers both use.<br />
(c) It is .<br />
5. (a) Write the name of your best friend.<br />
(b) What is something your friend owns?<br />
(c) It is .<br />
6. (a) Write an interesting sentence telling about watching some ships owned by the navy.<br />
(b) Write an interesting sentence telling about buying some bread owned by the baker.<br />
(c) Write an interesting sentence telling about washing the<br />
car owned by Mum and Dad.<br />
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ASSESSMENT UNIT 9<br />
USING PUNCTUATION IN SENTENCES<br />
Name:<br />
Date:<br />
one day, dad drove us up through the mountains into switzerland we had lunch at a<br />
cafe in lucerne, overlooking the lake<br />
1. (a) Use a red pen or marker to add the missing capital letters and full stops.<br />
(b) Where did you place the capital letters?<br />
(c) Why did you place them there?<br />
(d) How many full stops did you need?<br />
Where?<br />
2. Write a proper noun that tells you:<br />
(a) a fictional character<br />
(b) a continent<br />
(c) a river<br />
(d) a mountain<br />
3. Write two short exclamations telling of danger.<br />
4. Write two short questions to ask an alien.<br />
5. Write two short commands a teacher might use.<br />
6. Correct the <strong>punctuation</strong> error(s).<br />
(a) what’s <strong>for</strong> lunch.<br />
(b) are we there yet, dad.<br />
(c) watch out <strong>for</strong> cyclists?<br />
7. Put a tick in the box if the <strong>punctuation</strong> is correct. If it’s wrong, correct it with a red pen.<br />
(a) michelangelo’s statue of david (b) a Tom cruise film<br />
(c) Los Angeles (d) Victoria falls<br />
(e) Sydney opera house (f) sahara desert<br />
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FULL STOPS, CAPITAL LETTERS,<br />
COMMAS, DIRECT SPEECH<br />
ASSESSMENT UNIT 10<br />
Name:<br />
Date:<br />
1. Put a full stop in the box after a complete sentence.<br />
(a) Looking at Lake Lucerne<br />
(c) Up the mountains<br />
(b) Be careful, Dad<br />
(d) There’s Lake Como<br />
2. Rewrite the sentence. Put full stops where needed.<br />
The road to Lucerne is very twisty it climbs through the Swiss Alps Dad had to drive<br />
carefully<br />
3. Rewrite the sentence. Put capitals where needed.<br />
if i go back to switzerland, i want to visit zurich and st moritz and i definitely want to see<br />
the matterhorn.<br />
4. Rewrite the sentence. Put commas where needed.<br />
(a) Switzerland is famous <strong>for</strong> chocolate cuckoo clocks lace and mountains.<br />
(b) Because the road was twisty Dad drove carefully slowing down on the bends.<br />
5. Does the sentence need quotation marks? If yes, add them in red pen.<br />
(a) Mum thought that she would like some chocolate. Yes No<br />
(b) Could you get me some too, please? Dad asked. Yes No<br />
(c) Hey! How about me? I thought. Yes No<br />
6. Rewrite the sentence. Add quotation marks where needed.<br />
(a) There’s still snow on the mountains. Look! my sister said.<br />
(b) Can you see anyone skiing? Dad wanted to know.<br />
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ASSESSMENT UNIT 11<br />
APOSTROPHES IN CONTRACTIONS<br />
Name:<br />
Date:<br />
1. Circle the contractions. Write them as two words.<br />
(a) I wouldn’t like to fall off that mountain!<br />
(b) You’re going to get cold in the snow.<br />
2. Rewrite the sentences using contractions.<br />
(a) Where has your coat gone?<br />
(b) Mum said she would bring it.<br />
3. Use a suitable contraction to complete the sentence.<br />
(a) You<br />
(b) It<br />
been warmer in your jacket.<br />
snowed <strong>for</strong> a very long time.<br />
4. Which verb has been used in the contraction? Write ‘is’ or ‘has’ on the line.<br />
It’s going to be really fun in the snow.<br />
5. Circle the correct words.<br />
(a) (It’s, Its) good to see Switzerland has protected (it’s, its) environment.<br />
(b) If (it’s, its) not snowing I’ll take the snowboard <strong>for</strong> (it’s, its) first run.<br />
6. Use both it’s and its in a sentence about a mountain.<br />
7. (a) What is wrong with the sentence?<br />
‘It wouldn’t of been nice if you had fallen. You should of been more careful.’<br />
(b) Rewrite the sentence correctly.<br />
8. Use the contractions in a short sentence.<br />
(a) would have<br />
(b) could have<br />
(c) should have<br />
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ASSESSMENT UNIT 12<br />
APOSTROPHES FOR POSSESSION<br />
Name:<br />
Date:<br />
1. Complete the rules:<br />
Rule 1: An apostrophe is placed the owner or owners.<br />
Rule 2: There must be an ‘s’ or the apostrophe.<br />
2. Tick yes or no.<br />
(a) That car belongs to Mum and Dad. (b) That bike belongs to my brother.<br />
Mum and Dad own the car.<br />
My brother owns the bike.<br />
It is Mum and Dad’s car. Yes No It is my brothers’ bike. Yes No<br />
3. Write the name of the owner or owners. Tick if it is correct. Correct it if it’s wrong.<br />
(a) The rose’s scent<br />
(b) The bee’s wings<br />
(c) The bikes’ tyre<br />
(d) The boys’ schoolbag<br />
(e) The bees’ hive<br />
4. Rewrite, using an apostrophe to show the owner(s).<br />
(a) the warmth of the sun<br />
(b) the cage belonging to the birds<br />
(c) the toy belonging to Ian and John<br />
(d) the gleam of the lighthouse<br />
(e) the wool from the sheep<br />
5. Change the one owner to more than one owner by moving the apostrophe.<br />
(a) one bird’s song many song<br />
(b) one cat’s eyes many eyes<br />
6. Change more than one owner to one owner by moving the apostrophe.<br />
(a) the trees’ leaves one leaves<br />
(b) the jets’ engines one engines<br />
7. Write a sentence telling about some cows owned by two farmers named Den and Jen.<br />
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