Write Away Magazine - August Edition

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The lyric writers magazine

Bill Halloran

ances...... Right?

One could argue then

that the bard is all wet.

If we are inspired, in a

flash of insight, to innermost

thoughts and feelings

that are at once

unique and yet so brilliantly

logical that we

can’t wait to share them

with our fellow humans…

.is it REALLY going to

matter much whether our

singer finds them as

comfortable as an old

shoe? Shouldn’t our

goal be for this lightning

strike of clarity to stand

on its own, regardless of

who is singing it? Why

would we tinker with

transparency? It almost

seems like cheapening it,

like we’ve dragged in a

new, irrelevant character

just so her name will

rhyme (“little sister Nell”

in “Color Him Father” by

the Winstons...a songwriting

mess so bad that

even having someone die

in the song to drum up

sympathy can’t save it…

but I digress).

The truth is somewhere

in between. As it often

is. First of all, let’s calm

down, and consider

whether we’ve just written

“War and Peace”....

or “Wooly Bully”. Then,

while striving for this

perfect clarity, let’s also

strive for simplicity

(something this author

may occasionally forget!)

What words, sections,

notes can we trim? What

lines are least essential

to our message. If we’re

not sure our singer can

deliver this line with conviction

(warning bells

should go off, if you find

yourself wondering

“Would ANY singer feel

good with this?”) go back

and decide if that line

can come out.

Bottom line: If we can

lead them to whatever

beauty, truth and fun

without them seeing us

pulling the strings…

thinking they’ve gotten

there on their own… then

we’ve created the magic

potion! Good luck!!

Cat

www.wildcatohalloran.co

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