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Sample 2008 PAR Report- pdf

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SECTION A - FINDINGS BY INDICATOR BY SIMULATION<br />

Overall Comments<br />

Communication<br />

Was the response well organized with a logical flow? Y<br />

You did seem to focus on one indicator at a time and have a plan for the flow of your response since<br />

you had a good progression from one discussion to the next<br />

Did the candidate understand their role? N<br />

While you did address all the indicators, you didn't discuss the tax planning, rental loss, and<br />

achievement of financial goals in enough depth for your report to be useful to the Thurolds'.<br />

Was the response easy to read and understand? Y<br />

Your response was mostly paragraphs and it may have been easier to read if it were in point form<br />

and used more bullets and headings to separate the discussions. However, if you use point form you<br />

need to make sure that you still clearly communicate your full thoughts.<br />

Prioritizing and Ranking<br />

Did the response appear appropriately focused on the primaries? (vs the secondaries) Y<br />

There were no secondary indicators for this simulation.<br />

Did the response appear balanced? N<br />

You seemed to focus more on the retirement planning than on the other indicators since most of the<br />

qualitative discussion focused on this indicator.<br />

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