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DOHERTY MEMORIAL HIGH SCHOOL - Worcester Public Schools

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dog, bl/t make sure to real(v lise it--in.a 'way that captures the reader's attention and shows that<br />

you are exceptional,<br />

Step One: Brainstorming<br />

You should expect to devote at least a week to brainstoffi1ing possible essay topics, To help you<br />

select a topic, you can view over 100 sample college admissions essays at EssayEdge,com or<br />

take the free essay help course, Reading successful essays and completing free brainstoffi1ing<br />

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What Are You Like<br />

• What is your strongest personality trait Does any attribute, quality, or skill distinguish <br />

you from everyone else How did you develop this attribute <br />

• How would your friends characterize you What would they say if they <br />

were writing your admissions essay for you <br />

• Consider your favorite books, movies, works of art, etc. Have these <br />

influenced your life in a meaningful way Why are they your favorites <br />

• Have you experienced a moment of epiphany, as if you suddenly realized <br />

the essence or meaning of something <br />

What Have You Done<br />

• What are your major accomplishments, and \I.-hy do you consider them accomplishments<br />

.. What have you done outside of the classroom that demonstrates qualities sought after by <br />

universities Of these, which means the most to you and \\hy <br />

• Have you ever struggled mightily for something and succeeded What made you <br />

successful Have you ever struggled mightily for sOr:1ething and failed How did you <br />

respond <br />

• What was the most difficult time in your life, and v;hy How did your perspectiye on life <br />

change as a result of the difficulty <br />

\Vhere Do You Want to Go<br />

.. Of everything in the world, what would you most like to be doing right now <br />

Where 'A'ould you most like to be Whom, of everyone living and dead, would <br />

you most like to be with <br />

• What are your dreams of the future When you look back on your life in thirty <br />

years, what would it take for you to consider your life successful <br />

.. How does this particular university fit into your plans for the future Why do you <br />

want to spend two to six years of your life at this particular school <br />

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