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Research Paper and rough draft

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VisualsA variety of figures, including photographs, cross-section diagrams, <strong>and</strong> graphs, are used tocreate a user-friendly article. These visuals add interest, clearly explain complex data, enhancereadability by breaking up text, <strong>and</strong> emphasize points about trilobite diversity that the authorstresses in the article.StyleFortey's style is highly readable because he adapts his material to the needs of readers who arenot professional paleontologists <strong>and</strong> ecologists. The most effective of these adaptations is aseries of analogies which compare <strong>and</strong> contrast trilobite behavior to extant species.Several other devices are used to help the non-specialist underst<strong>and</strong> the article, <strong>and</strong> should beused in your review article:1. Allusions are an indirect reference to some historical or cultural person, event, statement,or fact. These devices should be used sparingly.2. Kennings are compound phrases substituted for the usual name of a person or thing.(EX: “Windows to the Trilobite Soul” for eyes; these should be used sparingly.)3. Description is a verbal account of something or painting pictures verbally (You can findexamples th<strong>rough</strong>out Fortey’s article…)4. Comparison using similes <strong>and</strong> metaphors (large as dinner plates; like the size of modernshrimp…)5. Orienters are references back to previous parts of the article (Example:…closely relatedto particle feeders…)6. Transitions: For our purposes, it is how information overlaps in proceeding sentences tomaximize informational content <strong>and</strong> minimize confusion (Example: In trilobites…biconvex lenses separated by baffles. These lens are… multifaceted. The multifacetedstructure…)7. Examples are provided to add interest to the article (Many examples are given inFortey’s article.... )8. Questions are posed to elicit interest (Were they living in deep water?)9. Layman Terms are used instead of jargon words (head instead of cephalon; tail insteadof pygidium)2

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