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001 - The Book - Hendrik 'The Torpedo'

Chapter 001 Archie get's more than he bargained for when an old enemy comes back to the scene of a homicide.

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THE BOOK - HENDRIK 'THE TORPEDO'

Written by

T.H.Massacre

Original NFT film chapter.

Address: Hells Kitchen

Phone Number: Decentralized!


INT. ARCHIES BAR, DOWNTOWN DETROIT - DAY

A severed finger sits like a fat decapitated worm sat on top

of a billiard table. Broken bits of glass and missing teeth

are sprinkled all over the table cloth in a sopping wet pool

of sticky blood. The area has been carefully cordoned off

with police ticker tape, protecting the faux crime scene.

A trail of bullets lines the wall thats been plastered with

ripped out pages of porn magazines from the 90’s. This wall

is a shrine to Jenna Jameson who has a bullet hole right

where her butt hole would be. The place looks a fucking

disgrace and it’s just the way the punters like it.

The clack of 8 balls crackles around the room as a disheveled

man enters the bar. Hendrik is a stocky, six foot seven inch

Dutchman who has been on the run for several day’s. Most

people in the bar know him simply as ‘Dutch’ but a few savvy

yokels call him ‘Hendrik The Torpedo’. Everyone continues

about their usual business of gambling, scoring drugs and

getting blowjobs under tables as Hendrik perches himself on a

rickety bar stool.

Archie the barman leaves his conversation at the end of the

bar and swipes a bottle of whiskey as he heads over to

Hendrik. Archie is a selfish, overweight, bald headed, coke

addict with thinning hair tied back into a pathetic pony

tail.

ARCHIE

If Abe finds out you’re here, he’s

gonna be as pissed at me as he is

with you Hendrik!

Archie pours two large measures and slides one towards

Hendrik, he leans forwards and lowers his voice a fraction.

ARCHIE (CONT'D)

The cops have been down here

sniffing about, which is bad for

business.

Hendrik knocks back the drink then drags his fingernails up

and down his itchy neck stubble. Archie turns his back on

Hendrik and gets two bottles of cheap lager from a large

metal fridge.

Beer?

ARCHIE (CONT'D)

Hendrik nods and Archie reaches below the counter to get a

bottle opener, his hand passes over a 9mm Glock. As Archie

opens both bottles of beer he hopes the Dutchman leaves the

bar quickly before more blood got spilled.


2.

ARCHIE (CONT'D)

Abe had to shift everything upstate

before the police arrived.

Archie presses a button below the counter and an electronic

drawer containing a mirror with pre cut lines of cocaine pops

open, He then pulls out a note from his trouser pocket and

rolls it tightly.

ARCHIE (CONT'D)

Insurance reckon it’s about eight

thousand dollars worth of damage.

Archie places the mirror on the bar and snorts a big line, he

then offers the rolled up note to Hendrik.

ARCHIE (CONT'D)

You made a real fucking mess the

other night.

Hendrik turns on his bar stool and assesses the damage in the

corner of the bar. Blood is splattered everywhere including

all over Jenna’s many vagina’s. Wedged on a nearby coat hook

is a large chunk of human skull with clumps of blood matted

hair hanging from it.

FLASHBACK - INT. ARCHIES BAR, DOWNTOWN DETROIT - NIGHT

In the midst of a brawl Hendrik chews the tip of DIRKS nose

who he has pinned down on top of the billiards table. GORDY

comes up behind Hendrik and smashes a bottle over Hendrik’s

head. Hendrik turns and grabs Gordy by the throat and moves

him back towards the wall. Hendrik lifts him off the ground

and with his right hand he slams Gordy’s head onto the coat

hook. Gordy’s left eye bulges as his brain begins to shut

down. Hendrik looks back at Dirk to make sure he see’s what

is about to happen. Hendrik yanks Gordy to the floor so the

metal hook breaks through his skull. Gordy’s body flops to

the ground and a huge puddle of blood forms around his head.

END FLASHBACK:

INT. ARCHIES BAR, DOWNTOWN DETROIT - DAY

Hendrik couldn’t help but smirk at that particular act of

savagery which had stopped the brawl dead in it’s tracks. He

turns back towards Archie and snorts a line of coke, the

quality of the product must be from Archie’s personal stash

and not cut with the usual rat poison he sells to customers.


3.

ARCHIE

The cops know it was you.

(whispers)

Archie leans down for another line.

ARCHIE (CONT'D)

Reckon they got about ten eye

witnesses and all the forensics

they need to put you away for a

long time.

Archie snorts another big line then pinches his nostrils to

stop the flakes of cocaine from dropping out his nose.

ARCHIE (CONT'D)

It didn’t take much for people in

here to start talking to the cops.

You made a lot of enemies over the

years.

Hendrik glances around the room at the punters who are making

every effort to mind their own business.

ARCHIE (CONT'D)

Insurance reckons they won’t pay

out. They say the policy covers

damage for manslaughter but not

murder. Can you fucking believe it?

Archie shakes his head.

ARCHIE (CONT'D)

Abe wants to put as much distance

between you two as possible.

Archie places the tray back in the draw and closes the till.

ARCHIE (CONT'D)

Look I ain’t saying Abe is gonna do

anything stupid but he’s really

pissed at you Hendrik.

Archie switches to a sterner tone.

ARCHIE (CONT'D)

The heat you brought down on this

place has caused a major shit storm

amongst the majors.

Archie hovers his hand over the Glock under the counter as

Hendrik scratches his chin. Hendrik reaches inside his coat

and places a large stack of money on the counter. Archie

changes his tune.


4.

ARCHIE (CONT'D)

Wow. Abe sure will appreciate that

but if you want my advice I would

skip town and don’t come back.

Archie cocks the gun under the counter then reaches with his

left hand to pick up the wad of cash. In a split second

Hendrik slams a large hunting knife into Archie’s hand

pinning it and the money to the bar.

ARCHIE (CONT'D)

Aaaarrrgghh!

Archie snarls as pain shoots up and down his arm like

electricity.

HENDRIK

Abe is expecting every single note

of that money to be stained with

your blood Archie.

Hendrik grabs Archie by the throat and stands up.

HENDRIK (CONT'D)

You set me up Archie!

Hendrik presses a gun to Archies forehead.

ARCHIE

I’m telling the truth! You got it

all wrong.

The entire room glows bright red, Archie has the laser from

the Glock pointing right between Hendrik’s eyes. Archie is in

full survival mode as he foams at the mouth.

Hendrik removes the gun from Archies forehead. The prick has

more balls than his billiards tables. Hendrik removes the gun

from Archie’s head and points it towards a stripper pole at

the far end of the bar.

BANG!

HENDRIK

The problem isn’t your greed

Archie, it’s your inability to tell

a lie.

In slow motion a bullet blasts from the barrel of Hendricks

gun, the bullet shoots across the bar and hits the stripper

pole.

PINGGGG.


5.

The bullet makes a sharp turn and the sound reverberates

around the room as the bullet heads towards the large metal

fridge behind Archie.

DINGGGG.

The bullet bounces of the corner of the metal fridge leaving

a small dent in the steel.The bullet now makes a short

straightforward journey before it slowly pierces the back of

Archie’s head and exits his left eye socket splurging bit’s

of brain and exploding Archies eyeball out of his head.

THUMP.

Archie’s body slumps forward, blood and bits of brains spill

onto the counter, the cocaine in his system causes his heart

to pump away like a jack hammer making his body twitch.

Hendrik removes the knife from Archie’s hand, picks up the

blood stained money and places it back inside his jacket.

Hendrik picks up the beer and swigs it as he makes his way

towards the exit. Halfway to the door he stops, turns and

launches the bottle at Archie’s head. The glass bottle

explodes into a thousand tiny pieces.

EXT. ARCHIES BAR, DOWNTOWN DETROIT - DAY

As he steps out onto the sidewalk, Hendrik shields his eyes

from the brilliant sunshine . A series of gunshots go off

from inside the bar as locals fight over the unattended cash

and cocaine. Hendrik raises both arms up in the air and drops

to his knees.

He is surrounded by twenty armed police officers.

CUT TO BLACK.

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