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Ellipsis - Roland Stroud

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Good form:<br />

HANK<br />

You look strange today ... What’s<br />

wrong?... Please, just ... tell me.<br />

JIM<br />

Is this what you call ... friendly<br />

... or are you kidding?<br />

Poor form:<br />

HANK<br />

You look strange today...What’s<br />

wrong?...Please, just...tell me.<br />

JIM<br />

Is this what you<br />

call...friendly...or are you<br />

kidding?<br />

1.1.14 Dialogue that trails off. Sometimes a writer will use a series of dots at the very end of a speech<br />

to indicate that the words trail off or that a pause ensues. The speaker seems to have said all<br />

that he intends to at the moment. To convey this, the writer will preferably use the four-dot<br />

form (or ‘?’ or ‘!’, plus three dots) if the statement is grammatically complete. However, the<br />

three-dot form is an acceptable alternative in this situation. In the event that the statement is not<br />

grammatically complete, the three-dot ellipsis is the proper form:<br />

Preferable:<br />

Acceptable:<br />

I guess this is my friend....<br />

With all his money, still ...<br />

Is this my friend?...<br />

You’ve got to be kidding!...<br />

I guess this is my friend ...<br />

1.1.15 Interrupted speech. If a speech, instead of coming to a natural pause or stop, is interrupted, then<br />

three dots (not four) mark the break, regardless of grammatical completeness. If there is a later<br />

continuation, three dots, set off from the text, can optionally introduce the continuation.<br />

Good form:<br />

HANK<br />

I saw her just yesterday ...<br />

JIM<br />

(interrupting)<br />

Look out for that car!<br />

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