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22 How can Julius best revise sentence 7 for appropriate tone? F G H J The feast could easily be held on a weeknight at school. You have to let us hold the feast on a weeknight at school. It would be so awesome if we could hold the feast on a weeknight at school! What do you think about maybe holding the feast on a weeknight at school? 23 Which sentence could Julius best add after sentence 9 to support the ideas in paragraph 2? A B C D Further, supporting the band shows the members that you appreciate them. Moreover, we need to find new ways for the band to generate funds. In fact, the whole school will benefit from this sort of fundraiser. In addition, the room is available most evenings. 24 Which word would best replace gave in sentence 13 to make the meaning more precise? F G H J showed offered brought introduced 28
25 Read these sentences from Julius’s rough draft. (16)Mrs. Simms knows many of the band parents. (17)She could ask some of them to help her prepare the feast. How can Julius best combine these sentences without changing their meaning? A B C D Mrs. Simms knows many of the band parents, but she could ask some of them to help her prepare the feast. Since Mrs. Simms knows many of the band parents, she could ask some of them to help her prepare the feast. Mrs. Simms knows many of the band parents, or she could ask some of them to help her prepare the feast. Though Mrs. Simms knows many of the band parents, she could ask some of them to help her prepare the feast. 29
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