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SAMPLE C Sarah has written a second draft of the first part of her essay. Draft B (1)A special person in my life is my big brother. (2)His name is Ben. (3)He has always been supportive of me. In rewriting sentence 3 of Draft A, how has Sarah improved sentence 3 of Draft B? A B C D She has created a fragment. She has changed the meaning entirely. She has expressed the idea more concisely. She has shifted the point of view. SAMPLE D Here is the next part of Sarah’s rough draft. (4)The best thing about my brother is that he helps me with my homework. (5)He’s a really good student. In sentence 4, he helps is correctly written — F G H J he were helping he help he have helped As it is 4
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