rhetorical précis writing with “the ugly truth about beauty”

British Literature and Composition
Independent Nonfiction Reading, Work Day 2 of 2
For this assignment, you are to write a rhetorical précis (pronounced PRAY-see) on your
chosen book. A précis is a kind of abstract that summarizes the main ideas of a work of
nonfiction. Your précis should consist of FOUR complex sentences rich in ideas.
Use the information on the back to learn how to write an effective précis. At the end of your
précis, write a bibliography entry for your book, using MLA style. The following example is
how to format an MLA style entry for a book.
Lastname, Firstname. Title of Book. City of Publication:
Publisher, Year of Publication.
Follow all forms of punctuation exactly as you see them.
When writing by hand, underline instead of using italics.
If you don’t know the author’s name, use Anonymous instead.
All lines you write/type below the first line are indented exactly as you see above. This is called a hanging
indent. See? I just did it right here!
To sum it all up, the following is what you need to turn in:
FIRST SENTENCE: book’s author, title, date, major claim.
SECOND SENTENCE: author’s support for claim AND how he/she develops it. USE A
DIRECT QUOTATION IN THIS SENTENCE!
THIRD SENTENCE: explain the author’s purpose using “in order to” in your sentence.
USE A DIRECT QUOTATION HERE, TOO!
FOURTH SENTENCE: explain who the audience is, the author’s relationship to it, and the
book’s tone.
Bibliography entry for your book.
Verb Bank
Here is a list of verbs you might find helpful in writing your précis. It is by no means a required or
exhaustive list. In your précis, use these words INSTEAD of “says” or “writes” when talking about
your author.
adjures advances advises asks asserts begs beseeches cajoles cheers chimes commands complains
confides conveys counsels crows declares decrees decries demands describes dictates directs discloses
divulges elucidates employs encourages entreats espouses exclaims exhorts explains gripes groans
grouses grumbles hails hints illustrates implies implores inquires insinuates instructs intimates invokes
justifies laments mandates mocks muses orders pleads ponders pontificates proclaims pronounces
proposes queries rationalizes recommends recounts relates reports requests reveals sighs sings snarls
sneers states submits suggests summons wails whimpers whines wields wonders

HOW TO WRITE A RHETORICAL PRÉCIS, USING “THE UGLY TRUTH ABOUT BEAUTY” AS AN
EXAMPLE.
A rhetorical précis invites active readers to analyze an essay’s content (the what) and delivery (the how). It
consists of four sentences that blend summary and analysis. Please be sure to quote and cite specific textual
references and to include a terminal bibliographic reference (see sample below).
*The FIRST SENTENCE identifies the essay’s author and title, provides the article’s date in parenthesis, uses
some alternative to the verb says (claims, asserts, suggests, argues) – see AP Caliber Verbs page in your
Rhetoric Packet for additional verbs) followed by a that clause containing the essay’s claim (paraphrased or
quoted).
In his column “The Ugly Truth about Beauty” (1998, Miami Herald), Dave Barry
asserts that “women generally do not think of their looks in the same way that
men do.”
*The SECOND SENTENCE describes the author’s support for the claim, the way in which the author develops
the essay
Barry illustrates this discrepancy by using logical appeals to juxtapose men’s
perceptions of their “average-looking” appearance with women’s “not good
enough” perceptions by contrasting female role models (Barbie and Cindy
Crawford) with male role models (He-man and Buzz-off), and he captures his
audience by winning them over with humorous anecdotes appealing to their
emotions and using informal language to establish a camaraderie with them.
*The THIRD SENTENCE analyzes the author’s purpose using an in order to statement.
He exaggerates the differences between men and women in order to discourage
women from eagerly accepting society’s expectations of them; in fact, Barry
claims that men who want women to “look like Cindy Crawford” are “idiots.”
*The FOURTH SENTENCE describes the essay’s target audience and characterizes the author’s relationship
with that audience – or the essay’s tone.
Although Barry seems to address men in the article, his playful ribs at men’s
perceptions of themselves highlights his humorous plea to women to stop
obsessively “trying to look like Cindy Crawford.”
BIBLIOGRAPHY
Barry, Dave. “The Ugly Truth about Beauty.” Mirror on America: Short Essays and Images from Popular
Culture. 2 nd ed. Eds. Joan T. Mims and Elizabeth M. Nollen. New York: Bedford, 2003. 109-112.

“The Ugly Truth about Beauty” by Dave Barry
If you're a man, at some point a woman will ask you how she
looks.
"How do I look?" she'll ask.
You must be careful how you answer this question. The best
technique is to form an honest yet sensitive opinion, then collapse on the
floor with some kind of fatal seizure. Trust me, this is the easiest way out.
Because you will never come up with the right answer.
The problem is that women generally do not think of their looks
in the same way that men do. Most men form an opinion of how they
look in the seventh grade, and they stick to it for the rest of their lives.
Some men form the opinion that they are irresistible stud muffins, and
they do not change this opinion even when their faces sag and their
noses bloat to the size of eggplants and their eyebrows grow together to
form what appears to be a giant forehead-dwelling tropical caterpillar.
Most men, I believe, think of themselves as average-looking.
Men will think this even if their faces cause heart failure in cattle at a
range of 300 yards. Being average does not bother them; average is fine
for men. This is why men never ask anybody how they look. Their
primary form of beauty care is to shave themselves, which is essentially
the same form of beauty care that they give to their lawns. If, at the end
of his four-minute daily beauty regimen, a man has managed to wipe
most of the shaving cream out of his hair and is not bleeding too badly,
he feels that he has done all he can, so he stops thinking about his
appearance and devotes his mind to more critical issues, such as the
Super Bowl.
Women do not look at themselves this way. If I had to express, in
three words, what most women think about their appearance, those
words would be: "not good enough." No matter how attractive a woman
may appear to others, when she looks at herself in the mirror, she thinks,
"woof." She thinks that at any moment a municipal animal-control officer
is going to throw a net over her and haul her off to the shelter.
Why do women have such low self-esteem? There are many
complex psychological and societal reasons, by which I mean "Barbie."
Girls grow up playing with a doll proportioned such that, if it were human,
it would be seven feet tall and weigh 81 pounds, of which 53 pounds
would be bosoms. This is a difficult appearance standard to live up to,
especially when you contrast it with the standard set for little boys by
their dolls . . . excuse me, by their action figures. Most of the action
figures that my son played with when he was little were hideous looking.
For example, he was fond of an action figure (part of the He-Man series)
called "Buzz-Off," who was part human, part flying insect. Buzz-Off was
not a looker. But he was extremely self-confident. You could not imagine
Buzz-Off saying to the other action figures, "Do you think these wings
makes my hips look big?"
But women grow up thinking they need to look like Barbie, which
for most women is impossible, although there is a multibillion-dollar
beauty industry devoted to convincing women that they must try. I once
saw an Oprah show wherein supermodel Cindy Crawford dispensed
makeup tips to the studio audience. Cindy had all these middle-aged
women apply beauty products to their faces; she stressed how important
it was to apply them in a certain way, using the tips of their fingers. All
the women dutifully did this, even though it was obvious to any sane
observer that no matter how carefully they applied these products, they
would never look remotely like Cindy Crawford, who is some kind of
genetic mutation.
I'm not saying that men are superior. I'm just saying that you're
not going to get a group of middle-aged men to sit in a room and apply
cosmetics to themselves under the instruction of Brad Pitt, in hopes of
looking more like him. Men would realize that this task was pointless and
demeaning. They would find some way to bolster their self-esteem that
did not require looking like Brad Pitt. They would say to Brad, "Oh
YEAH? Well what do you know about LAWN CARE, pretty boy?"
Of course many women will argue that the reason they become
obsessed with trying to look like Cindy Crawford is that men, being as
shallow as a drop of spit, WANT women to look that way. To which I
have two responses:
1. Hey, just because WE'RE idiots, that does not mean YOU
have to be; and
2. Men don't even notice 97 percent of the beauty efforts you
make anyway. Take fingernails. The average woman spends 5,000
hours per year worrying about her fingernails; I have never once, in more
than 40 years of listening to men talk about women, heard a man say,
"She has a nice set of fingernails!" Many men would not notice if a
woman had upward of four hands.
Anyway, to get back to my original point: If you're a man, and a
woman asks you how she looks, you're in big trouble. Obviously, you
can't say she looks bad. But you also can't say that she looks great,
because she'll think you're lying, because she has spent countless
hours, with the help of the multibillion-dollar beauty industry, obsessing
about the differences between herself and Cindy Crawford. Also, she
suspects that you're not qualified to judge anybody's appearance. This is
because you have shaving cream in your hair.