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<strong>Cover</strong> <strong>Letter</strong> <strong>and</strong> <strong>Portfolio</strong> <strong>Assignment</strong><br />

<strong>Your</strong> <strong>final</strong> <strong>assignment</strong> <strong>for</strong> <strong>the</strong> ENG 111 course is to complete <strong>and</strong> submit a portfolio containing<br />

your 1 revised major paper (poetry research paper), 4 shorter papers, <strong>and</strong> a 2-3 page single<br />

spaced portfolio cover letter <strong>for</strong> evaluation. <strong>Your</strong> portfolio should also contain all of your papers<br />

from this semester – see <strong>the</strong> portfolio checklist <strong>for</strong> exact in<strong>for</strong>mation on what your portfolio must<br />

contain. The following order should be used <strong>for</strong> submission <strong>and</strong> evaluation: (1) portfolio cover<br />

letter; (2) revised major paper in <strong>final</strong> revised version; (3) all of <strong>the</strong> drafts <strong>for</strong> this essay; (4)<br />

collection of 4 papers <strong>for</strong> evaluation, including all drafts; (5) all o<strong>the</strong>r papers.<br />

<strong>Your</strong> portfolio cover letter is itself an argument. <strong>Your</strong> claim, <strong>the</strong> basis of <strong>the</strong> argument, should<br />

involve how what you are including in your portfolio meets <strong>the</strong> learning outcomes <strong>for</strong> <strong>the</strong> class.<br />

Draw upon <strong>the</strong> Course Outcomes, your <strong>assignment</strong>s, current assessment of <strong>the</strong> work, your own<br />

self-assessments, your peer responses, <strong>and</strong> my responses by quoting from or paraphrasing <strong>the</strong>se<br />

materials. Point to specific passages in <strong>the</strong> texts of your papers, showing me <strong>the</strong>ir strengths<br />

in demonstrating <strong>the</strong> course outcomes, as well as pointing out areas <strong>for</strong> improvement.<br />

Specifically show me how <strong>the</strong> work you have selected <strong>for</strong> evaluation literally demonstrates<br />

your knowledge <strong>and</strong> ability to meet <strong>the</strong> course outcomes. Back up your claims with strong<br />

evidence from your own writing, your revisions, <strong>and</strong> <strong>the</strong> course outcomes. In addition, refer<br />

to o<strong>the</strong>r papers you did not select, explaining why you chose not to revise that paper. Basically,<br />

your cover letter should make an argument <strong>for</strong> why <strong>the</strong> pieces you have selected <strong>for</strong> evaluation<br />

represent your absolute best work.<br />

The cover letter is a very important part of your portfolio; it provides <strong>the</strong> rhetorical situation <strong>for</strong><br />

you to influence how <strong>the</strong> reader of your portfolio (that’s me) will view your work. This is a great<br />

time to influence <strong>and</strong> direct your audience. For example, if I have had difficulty locating your<br />

“so whats” you may want to make a case <strong>for</strong> how you have attempted to alleviate this problem<br />

within your cover letter. If you have spent a lot of time streng<strong>the</strong>ning your claim <strong>and</strong> making<br />

sure it progresses throughout your paper, point this out to me <strong>and</strong> prove it. This is your chance<br />

to “talk yourself up” just as you would in a resume cover letter; convince me that your revisions<br />

have drastically improved your papers.<br />

Business <strong>Letter</strong> Format:<br />

The business letter <strong>for</strong>mat has <strong>the</strong> same font <strong>and</strong> margin requirements that have been required <strong>for</strong><br />

all of your papers (Times New Roman, 12pt, 1 inch margins). However, your name <strong>and</strong><br />

header will appear differently <strong>and</strong> you will single-space. You do not need a Works Cited Page or<br />

MLA documentation <strong>for</strong> <strong>the</strong> cover letter, but if you quote, it should be clear which document you<br />

are using.<br />

The paragraphs will be in block <strong>for</strong>mat which means that <strong>the</strong>y will not be indented <strong>and</strong> will be<br />

separated by a blank line. You will be addressing your cover letter directly to me, but all of <strong>the</strong><br />

academic st<strong>and</strong>ards <strong>and</strong> rhetorical conventions that we have learned still apply. <strong>Your</strong> grade on<br />

<strong>the</strong> portfolio will depend partially on your per<strong>for</strong>mance on <strong>the</strong> cover letter itself, so dot<br />

your i’s <strong>and</strong> cross your t’s.


<strong>Portfolio</strong> Reminders<br />

1. Even if you did well on <strong>the</strong> initial draft of your chosen <strong>assignment</strong>s, you MUST<br />

SIGNIFICANTLY REVISE each paper you include in <strong>the</strong> portfolio. Remember, fulfilling<br />

Outcomes 4a <strong>and</strong> 4b depends on this. Significant revision means substantial changes to <strong>the</strong><br />

structure of your paper, <strong>the</strong> evidence used in your argument, <strong>and</strong>/or <strong>the</strong> claims or sub-claims that<br />

have been made. You are also welcome to bring in additional sources if you feel it streng<strong>the</strong>ns<br />

your argument (tell me how in <strong>the</strong> cover letter). Editing <strong>and</strong> proofreading <strong>for</strong> grammar,<br />

mechanics, <strong>and</strong> word choice does not equal significant revision, though it is a part of Outcome 4c.<br />

I guarantee that none of your papers has been so perfect that it cannot benefit from significant<br />

revision. My comments may only indicate starting points <strong>for</strong> this <strong>and</strong> revising purely in terms of<br />

<strong>the</strong>m will not guarantee an “A” so it is essential that you confront every paper in terms of your<br />

underst<strong>and</strong>ing of <strong>the</strong> Outcomes. Of course, you can conference with me about any ideas you<br />

have <strong>for</strong> revision.<br />

2. Keep an eye on length requirements, particularly <strong>the</strong> minimums. Length requirements will be<br />

an important part of future classes, so this is good practice.<br />

3. Make sure you have followed <strong>the</strong> <strong>for</strong>mat requirements, especially MLA citation, which<br />

includes paren<strong>the</strong>tical citations <strong>and</strong> a properly <strong>for</strong>matted Works Cited Page.<br />

4. Go back <strong>and</strong> review your notes, all comments <strong>and</strong> <strong>the</strong> various h<strong>and</strong>outs that I have given you.<br />

These can be useful in helping you to look at your work in new ways.<br />

Exactly How to Organize <strong>Your</strong> <strong>Portfolio</strong><br />

Turn your portfolio in to me with <strong>the</strong> <strong>assignment</strong>s included in <strong>the</strong> following order. Each <strong>assignment</strong> (<strong>and</strong><br />

its revised edition if applicable) MUST be stapled individually. NO exceptions!<br />

Create your portfolio with all documents in <strong>the</strong> following order:<br />

<strong>Assignment</strong>s to be evaluated<br />

____ <strong>Cover</strong> letter<br />

____ 1 Major paper <strong>for</strong> evaluation (Place <strong>the</strong> revised edition directly on top of your original copy. Place<br />

your peer review sheets (2) behind <strong>the</strong> original copy)<br />

____ 4 Shorter papers <strong>for</strong> evaluation (Place <strong>the</strong> revised edition directly on top of your original copy).<br />

All o<strong>the</strong>r <strong>assignment</strong>s<br />

____ O<strong>the</strong>r smaller papers (organize <strong>the</strong>se in date order).<br />

____ O<strong>the</strong>r major take-home paper<br />

General <strong>Portfolio</strong> Requirements<br />

• Place your completed portfolio in a manila envelope.<br />

• Make sure your name is clearly visible on <strong>the</strong> outside of <strong>the</strong> manila envelope.<br />

• All portfolios must be delivered to me IN PERSON.<br />

• <strong>Portfolio</strong>s are due Wednesday, May 30 th by 1:55 pm, NO exceptions.


<strong>Portfolio</strong> Must Haves - Checklist<br />

A complete portfolio absolutely must contain <strong>the</strong> following elements:<br />

For Evaluation<br />

N.B. The evaluated portion of <strong>the</strong> portfolio will be graded as a whole. This means that every<br />

<strong>assignment</strong> need not fulfill every outcome. Ra<strong>the</strong>r, your must demonstrate your proficiency in<br />

fulfilling every outcome somewhere within your 4 smaller papers <strong>and</strong> 1 large paper. For<br />

example, you may want to use one small <strong>assignment</strong> simply to demonstrate your mastery of<br />

outcome three. This is fine, <strong>and</strong> you would want to alert me to this fact in your cover letter.<br />

____ <strong>Cover</strong> <strong>Letter</strong> (2-3 pages single spaced, business letter <strong>for</strong>mat)<br />

____ 4 shorter papers that have been significantly revised (in-class essays are obviously fair<br />

game – revised papers need to be typed; must be at least two pages each)<br />

____ 1 major poetry research paper that has been significantly revised (must be at least five<br />

pages; no longer than 8 pages)<br />

All o<strong>the</strong>r papers (All original drafts with instructor/reader comments)<br />

____ Heart of Darkness Major Paper<br />

____ Hamlet Essay<br />

____ “The Flea” Poetry Analysis<br />

____ One Flew over <strong>the</strong> Cuckoo’s Nest Essay<br />

____ “The Broken Heart” Poetry Essay<br />

____ Donne/Marvell Poetry Essay<br />

____ Blake’s Chimney Sweepers Poetry Essay<br />

____ Keats/Frost Poetry Essay<br />

____ “The Birthday Party” Style Analysis Essay<br />

____ The Metamorphosis Essay<br />

____ “The Pupil” Style Analysis Essay<br />

____ “The O<strong>the</strong>r Paris” Style Analysis Essay<br />

____ Dickinson/Frost Poetry Essay<br />

____ “One Art” Poetry Essay<br />

____ Major Poetry Research Paper<br />

Any portfolio that does not include ALL of <strong>the</strong> above will be considered<br />

INCOMPLETE. Fur<strong>the</strong>rmore, any portfolio in which <strong>the</strong> <strong>assignment</strong>s fall significantly<br />

short of <strong>the</strong>ir length or content requirements will also be considered incomplete.<br />

AN INCOMPLETE PORTFOLIO GUARANTEES A FAILING GRADE IN THE CLASS!<br />

DON’T LET THIS HAPPEN TO YOU!


ENGLISH 111 COURSE OUTCOMES<br />

1. To produce complex, analytic, persuasive arguments that matter in academic contexts.<br />

• The argument is appropriately complex, based in a claim that emerges from <strong>and</strong> explores<br />

a line of inquiry.<br />

• The stakes of <strong>the</strong> argument, why what is being argued matters, are articulated <strong>and</strong><br />

persuasive.<br />

• The argument involves analysis, which is <strong>the</strong> close scrutiny <strong>and</strong> examination of evidence<br />

<strong>and</strong> assumptions in support of a larger set of ideas.<br />

• The argument is persuasive, taking into consideration counterclaims <strong>and</strong> multiple points<br />

of view as it generates its own perspective <strong>and</strong> position.<br />

• The argument utilizes a clear organizational strategy <strong>and</strong> effective transitions that<br />

develop its line of inquiry.<br />

2. To read, analyze, <strong>and</strong> syn<strong>the</strong>size complex texts purposefully in order to generate <strong>and</strong> support<br />

writing.<br />

• The writing demonstrates an underst<strong>and</strong>ing of <strong>the</strong> course texts as necessary <strong>for</strong> <strong>the</strong><br />

purpose at h<strong>and</strong>.<br />

• Course texts are used in strategic, focused ways (<strong>for</strong> example: summarized, cited,<br />

applied, challenged, re-contextualized) to support <strong>the</strong> goals of <strong>the</strong> writing.<br />

• The writing is intertextual, meaning that a "conversation" between texts <strong>and</strong> ideas is<br />

created in support of <strong>the</strong> writer's goals.<br />

• The writing demonstrates responsible use of <strong>the</strong> MLA system of documenting sources.<br />

3. To demonstrate an awareness of <strong>the</strong> strategies that writers use in different rhetorical situations.<br />

• The writing employs style, tone, <strong>and</strong> conventions appropriate to <strong>the</strong> dem<strong>and</strong>s of a<br />

particular genre, rhetorical situation or discipline.<br />

• The writing has a clear underst<strong>and</strong>ing of its audience, <strong>and</strong> various aspects of <strong>the</strong> writing<br />

(mode of inquiry, content, structure, evidence, appeals, tone, sentences, <strong>and</strong> word choice)<br />

address <strong>and</strong> are strategically pitched to that audience.<br />

• The writer recognizes <strong>and</strong> articulates <strong>the</strong> effects of his or her rhetorical choices.<br />

4. To develop flexible strategies <strong>for</strong> revising, editing, <strong>and</strong> proofreading writing.<br />

• The writing demonstrates substantial <strong>and</strong> successful revision.<br />

• The writing responds to substantive issues raised by <strong>the</strong> instructor <strong>and</strong> peers.<br />

• Errors of grammar, punctuation, <strong>and</strong> mechanics are proofread <strong>and</strong> edited so as not to<br />

interfere with reading <strong>and</strong> underst<strong>and</strong>ing <strong>the</strong> writing.


English 111 <strong>Portfolio</strong> Evaluation Rubric<br />

Outst<strong>and</strong>ing <strong>Portfolio</strong> (3.7-4.0)<br />

This portfolio exhibits outst<strong>and</strong>ing proficiency in all outcomes categories – academic<br />

argumentation, purposeful use of texts, rhetorical awareness, <strong>and</strong> revision, editing, <strong>and</strong><br />

proofreading – outweighing its few weaknesses. The cover letter clearly indicates which items in<br />

<strong>the</strong> portfolio demonstrate <strong>the</strong> course outcomes, <strong>and</strong> makes a compelling argument <strong>for</strong> how <strong>the</strong>y<br />

do so. In so doing, it displays thorough <strong>and</strong> thoughtful awareness of <strong>the</strong> writer’s own writing,<br />

using evidence from <strong>the</strong> course outcomes, <strong>assignment</strong>s, self-assessments, peer responses, <strong>and</strong><br />

teacher responses by quoting or paraphrasing from <strong>the</strong>se materials in support of its argument.<br />

The selected major paper <strong>and</strong> shorter texts offer an outst<strong>and</strong>ing demonstration of all <strong>the</strong> course<br />

outcomes through a very highly proficient <strong>and</strong> skillful h<strong>and</strong>ling of <strong>the</strong> traits associated with<br />

<strong>the</strong>m. The outst<strong>and</strong>ing portfolio will likely demonstrate some appropriate risk-taking,<br />

originality, variety, <strong>and</strong>/or creativity.<br />

Strong <strong>Portfolio</strong> (3.1-3.6)<br />

The strong portfolio exhibits strengths clearly outweighing weaknesses, but may show<br />

somewhat less proficiency in one or two of <strong>the</strong> outcomes categories, perhaps strong in academic<br />

argumentation, purposeful use of texts, <strong>and</strong> rhetorical awareness, but slightly less in<br />

revision/editing/proofreading. The cover letter clearly indicates which items in <strong>the</strong> portfolio<br />

demonstrate <strong>the</strong> course outcomes, <strong>and</strong> makes an effective argument <strong>for</strong> how <strong>the</strong>y do so. It also<br />

displays thoughtful awareness of <strong>the</strong> writer’s own writing, using evidence from <strong>the</strong> course<br />

outcomes, <strong>assignment</strong>s, self-assessments, peer responses, <strong>and</strong> teacher responses by quoting or<br />

paraphrasing from <strong>the</strong>se materials in support of its argument, but may not present as clear an<br />

argument <strong>for</strong> <strong>the</strong> choices as <strong>the</strong> outst<strong>and</strong>ing portfolio. The selected major paper <strong>and</strong> shorter<br />

texts, although slightly less consistent in demonstrating <strong>the</strong> course outcomes, none<strong>the</strong>less offer a<br />

strong demonstration of effectiveness in many traits associated with <strong>the</strong> outcomes, h<strong>and</strong>ling a<br />

variety of tasks successfully. This portfolio engages <strong>the</strong> material <strong>and</strong> follows <strong>the</strong> <strong>assignment</strong>s<br />

given, but may risk less than <strong>the</strong> outst<strong>and</strong>ing portfolio.<br />

Good <strong>Portfolio</strong> (2.5-3.0)<br />

The good portfolio also exhibits strengths outweighing weaknesses, but may show less<br />

strength in two of <strong>the</strong> outcomes categories, perhaps strong in academic argumentation <strong>and</strong><br />

purposeful use of texts, but less so in revision, editing, proofreading, <strong>and</strong> rhetorical awareness.<br />

The cover letter indicates which items in <strong>the</strong> portfolio demonstrate <strong>the</strong> course outcomes, <strong>and</strong><br />

makes an argument <strong>for</strong> how <strong>the</strong>y do so, although <strong>the</strong> argument may display less thoughtful<br />

awareness of <strong>the</strong> writer’s own writing by using less evidence from <strong>the</strong> course outcomes,<br />

<strong>assignment</strong>s, self-assessments, peer responses, <strong>and</strong> teacher responses in support of its argument.<br />

The selected major paper <strong>and</strong> shorter texts effectively demonstrate <strong>the</strong> course outcomes, but with<br />

less proficiency <strong>and</strong> control. The portfolio usually will not display <strong>the</strong> appropriate risk-taking<br />

<strong>and</strong> creativity of <strong>the</strong> strong <strong>and</strong> outst<strong>and</strong>ing portfolios.<br />

Acceptable <strong>Portfolio</strong> (2.0-2.4)<br />

The acceptable portfolio is competent, demonstrating that <strong>the</strong> course outcomes are<br />

basically met, but <strong>the</strong> traits associated with <strong>the</strong>m are not as fully realized or controlled. The<br />

writing can succeed in <strong>the</strong> academic environment. The strengths <strong>and</strong> weaknesses are about<br />

evenly balanced, but should be slightly stronger on academic argument <strong>and</strong> purposeful use of<br />

texts, as <strong>the</strong>se represent key facets of academic writing. Some parts of <strong>the</strong> selected texts may be<br />

underdeveloped, too general, or predictable, or leave parts of <strong>the</strong> outcomes unconsidered. While


demonstrating knowledge of conventions, this portfolio typically will not display rhetorical<br />

awareness or control over revision, editing, <strong>and</strong> proofreading. The cover letter indicates which<br />

items in <strong>the</strong> portfolio demonstrate <strong>the</strong> course outcomes, but may not make as effective an<br />

argument <strong>for</strong> how <strong>the</strong>y do so, one based in evidence from <strong>the</strong> course outcomes, <strong>assignment</strong>s,<br />

self-assessments, peer responses, <strong>and</strong> teacher responses.<br />

Inadequate <strong>Portfolio</strong> (1.0-1.9)<br />

A portfolio will be inadequate when it shows serious deficiencies in three of <strong>the</strong> four<br />

course outcomes, especially in academic argument, purposeful use of texts, <strong>and</strong> revision, editing,<br />

<strong>and</strong> proofreading (<strong>for</strong> example, revision is limited to correcting grammar or to adding or deleting<br />

sentence <strong>and</strong> phrase level changes). Alternatively, this portfolio may be error free, yet does not<br />

adequately demonstrate <strong>the</strong> o<strong>the</strong>r outcomes. The portfolio cover letter will be brief <strong>and</strong> may not<br />

indicate which items in <strong>the</strong> portfolio demonstrate <strong>the</strong> course outcomes or make an effective<br />

argument <strong>for</strong> how <strong>the</strong>y do so. The portfolio indicates that <strong>the</strong> student may need more time to be<br />

able to h<strong>and</strong>le <strong>the</strong> dem<strong>and</strong>s of both academic reading <strong>and</strong> writing as characterized in <strong>the</strong> course<br />

outcomes <strong>and</strong> associated traits.<br />

Incomplete <strong>Portfolio</strong> (0.0-0.9)<br />

The incomplete portfolio covers <strong>the</strong> range from no portfolio turned in (0.0), to <strong>the</strong><br />

portfolio that includes only part of <strong>the</strong> required work <strong>for</strong> <strong>the</strong> class, a portfolio missing significant<br />

portions of <strong>the</strong> work <strong>for</strong> <strong>the</strong> course.<br />

University of Washington Grading Scale<br />

(taken from http://www.washington.edu/students/gencat/front/Grading_Sys.html)<br />

A 4.0-3.9<br />

A- 3.8-3.5<br />

B+ 3.4-3.2<br />

B 3.1-2.9<br />

B- 2.8-2.5<br />

C+ 2.4-2.2<br />

C 2.1-1.9 2.0 or above is required <strong>for</strong> <strong>the</strong> “C” credit<br />

C- 1.8-1.5<br />

D+ 1.4-1.2<br />

D 1.1-0.9<br />

D- 0.8-0.7 Lowest passing grade.<br />

E 0.0 Failure or Unofficial Withdrawal.<br />

No credit earned.

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