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It's hard to write a good paper about a bad topic. That's why ... - English

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(Research Paper Workshop Worksheet cont.)<br />

5). As we’ve seen, successful analytic writing involves interplay of claims and evidence.<br />

In the paragraph directly following the thesis statement, go through the paragraph<br />

sentence by sentence, identifying each time you see a claim and each time you see<br />

evidence. (Write a “C” or “E” above each sentence <strong>to</strong> indicate what you see.) In this<br />

paragraph, are there areas in which claims are not adequately supported with evidence?<br />

How <strong>about</strong> evidence that is analyzed in a way that shows how the <strong>write</strong>r sees the<br />

evidence proving the claim? Are the claims and evidence strong enough <strong>to</strong> provide<br />

analytic insight? Focus on this paragraph and offer whatever suggestions or compliments<br />

you feel relevant.<br />

6). Locate other sections of the essay in which the author provides evidence without<br />

thoroughly analyzing it. In other words, places where the author seems <strong>to</strong> be using<br />

evidence <strong>to</strong> tell us <strong>about</strong> something (or report) rather than using evidence <strong>to</strong> uncover<br />

assumptions, implications, etc. in order <strong>to</strong> make his/her own argument stronger. Mark<br />

these sections in the text. (Write, maybe, “Analyze more?”) Below, offer suggestions for<br />

more effective analysis of a few of these examples.

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