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A <strong>Dirge</strong> <strong>Without</strong> <strong>Music</strong>:<strong>Death</strong> <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> <strong>Poetry</strong> <strong>of</strong> <strong>Edna</strong> <strong>St</strong>. V<strong>in</strong>cent <strong>Millay</strong>Senior PaperPresented <strong>in</strong> Partial Fulfillment <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> RequirementsFor a Degree Bachelor <strong>of</strong> Arts withA Major <strong>in</strong> Literature atThe University <strong>of</strong> North Carol<strong>in</strong>a at AshevilleFall 2009By EMILY TEAGUE____________________Thesis DirectorDr. Blake Hobby____________________Thesis AdvisorDr. Gary Ettari


Teague 2“<strong>Death</strong>” is perhaps <strong>the</strong> only word that can simultaneously strike strong emotions <strong>of</strong> fear, long<strong>in</strong>g,curiosity, sadness, and hope <strong>in</strong>to human hearts—even surpass<strong>in</strong>g love. And, along with love,death has become one <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> predom<strong>in</strong>ant <strong>the</strong>mes <strong>of</strong> human endeavors. Scientists have studiednear-death experiences and attempted to determ<strong>in</strong>e <strong>the</strong> weight <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> human soul, religiousleaders have tried to figure out how to cheat death through ga<strong>in</strong><strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong> best afterlife, and artistshave undertaken to effectively and beautifully express those complex emotions about death.<strong>Edna</strong> <strong>St</strong>. V<strong>in</strong>cent <strong>Millay</strong> was one such artist. Born <strong>in</strong> 1822 to an <strong>in</strong>dependent mo<strong>the</strong>rdevoted to provid<strong>in</strong>g artistic outlets for her daughters, <strong>Millay</strong> grew up steeped <strong>in</strong> both hardshipand poetic tradition. At a time when many poets abandoned traditional forms for modern freeverse, <strong>Millay</strong> became a master <strong>of</strong> sonnets and ballads. Deeply disturbed by <strong>the</strong> idea <strong>of</strong> death anddy<strong>in</strong>g, she used an emphasis on form and wordplay <strong>in</strong> her extremely biographical poems as amechanism for handl<strong>in</strong>g emotions she found too unsettl<strong>in</strong>g to confront directly. As AdrienneRich so eloquently expla<strong>in</strong>ed about her own work, “…formalism was part <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> strategy—likeasbestos gloves, it allowed me to handle materials I couldn’t pick up barehanded” (Rich 22).Us<strong>in</strong>g formal diction and structure, ligh<strong>the</strong>arted rhythms and rhymes, or poetic tradition mixedwith what could be called ei<strong>the</strong>r denial or pr<strong>of</strong>essional optimism, <strong>Edna</strong> <strong>St</strong>. V<strong>in</strong>cent <strong>Millay</strong>created <strong>in</strong> her poetry a safe space to explore thoughts and emotions about death. In thisexploration, she <strong>of</strong>ten divided death <strong>in</strong>to three manageable spheres—her own triumphant death,<strong>the</strong> sad but survivable death <strong>of</strong> love, or <strong>the</strong> bitter death <strong>of</strong> a loved one.In recent years, <strong>the</strong> critical response to <strong>Millay</strong>’s poetry has become <strong>in</strong>creas<strong>in</strong>gly genderbased.In “<strong>Edna</strong> <strong>St</strong>. V<strong>in</strong>cent <strong>Millay</strong> and <strong>the</strong> Language <strong>of</strong> Vulnerability,” Jane <strong>St</strong>anbrough arguesthat <strong>Millay</strong>’s famous “flippancy” and formalism work to hide <strong>the</strong> essential pa<strong>in</strong> and vulnerability


Teague 3she feels as a woman. She works through selected poems from across <strong>Millay</strong>’s career, from <strong>the</strong>second collection A Few Figs from Thistles to <strong>the</strong> posthumous M<strong>in</strong>e <strong>the</strong> Harvest. In Figs sheexpla<strong>in</strong>s <strong>the</strong> vulnerable, disappo<strong>in</strong>ted child hidden beneath <strong>the</strong> lilt<strong>in</strong>g verses <strong>of</strong> “Grown-up,” asimple and ligh<strong>the</strong>arted poem about <strong>the</strong> unexpected boredom <strong>of</strong> adult life. <strong>St</strong>anbrough showshow this ligh<strong>the</strong>artedness hides a darker mean<strong>in</strong>g: “grow<strong>in</strong>g <strong>in</strong>to adult domesticity for thiswoman has been a process <strong>of</strong> subdu<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong> will and shr<strong>in</strong>k<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong> soul…“domestic as a plate” isan image that fits woman <strong>in</strong>to her conventional place at rest on a shelf and out <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> way”(<strong>St</strong>anbrough 214). Mov<strong>in</strong>g on from Figs, <strong>St</strong>anbrough addresses <strong>the</strong> sonnet sequence FatalInterview, a series <strong>of</strong> poems about <strong>the</strong> lifespan <strong>of</strong> a torrid love affair. “Throughout <strong>the</strong> sonnets,<strong>the</strong> narrator exposes her emotional vulnerability to assault, humiliation, abuse, abandonment,annihilation” (<strong>St</strong>anbrough 226). <strong>St</strong>anbrough consistently likens <strong>the</strong> affair to sexual abuse that <strong>the</strong>speaker is <strong>in</strong>capable <strong>of</strong> escap<strong>in</strong>g on her own, and <strong>the</strong> sonnet form itself as a symbol <strong>of</strong> herconstra<strong>in</strong>t.The sonnet, her best form, is a fit vehicle to convey her deepest feel<strong>in</strong>gs <strong>of</strong>woman’s victimization. Through it, <strong>Millay</strong> imag<strong>in</strong>atively reenacts her constantstruggle aga<strong>in</strong>st boundaries. The wish for freedom is always qualified by <strong>the</strong> sense<strong>of</strong> restriction; couplets and quatra<strong>in</strong>s suit her sensibilities. (<strong>St</strong>anbrough 227)This balance between restriction and freedom, accord<strong>in</strong>g to <strong>St</strong>anbrough, is a uniquely fem<strong>in</strong><strong>in</strong>eapproach to poetry; <strong>Millay</strong>’s use <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> male form <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> sonnet is a surrender to and expression<strong>of</strong> helplessness under male-dom<strong>in</strong>ated society.On <strong>the</strong> o<strong>the</strong>r side <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> same gendered co<strong>in</strong>, Debra Fried argues aga<strong>in</strong>st <strong>St</strong>anbrough’sposition <strong>in</strong> “Andromeda Unbound: Gender and Genre <strong>in</strong> <strong>Millay</strong>'s Sonnets.” Fried claims that<strong>Millay</strong> does not choose her formal style to hide or to reenact her fem<strong>in</strong><strong>in</strong>e vulnerabilities, but to


Teague 4subvert such traditionally mascul<strong>in</strong>e forms as <strong>the</strong> sonnet for her own purposes. Ra<strong>the</strong>r thanask<strong>in</strong>g why <strong>Millay</strong>, as a modern woman, chose to use <strong>the</strong> traditional and mascul<strong>in</strong>e form <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong>sonnet, Fried claims that critics “have tended to assume that we know just how and why a poetlike <strong>Millay</strong> must use circumscribed, traditional poetic forms: to re<strong>in</strong> <strong>in</strong> her strong, unrulyfeel<strong>in</strong>gs” (Fried 229). She takes issue with <strong>St</strong>anbrough’s assertion that such re<strong>in</strong><strong>in</strong>g <strong>in</strong> is afem<strong>in</strong><strong>in</strong>e approach to poetry: “what poetic ‘sensibility,’ we may ask, is not <strong>in</strong> some degree suitedto <strong>the</strong> strictures <strong>of</strong> poetic form?” (Fried 230). Fried constructs <strong>Millay</strong>’s use <strong>of</strong> sonnet, ra<strong>the</strong>r, as aclaim<strong>in</strong>g <strong>of</strong> a form traditionally denied to women; <strong>in</strong> an analysis <strong>of</strong> Wordsworth’s “Nuns FretNot At Their Convent’s Narrow Room,” she f<strong>in</strong>ds that <strong>the</strong> mascul<strong>in</strong>e Romantic view <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong>sonnet is one <strong>of</strong> escape from “<strong>the</strong> weight <strong>of</strong> too much liberty” <strong>in</strong> life and <strong>in</strong> creative expression.This escape is not one shared by women, who “conf<strong>in</strong>ed by <strong>the</strong>ir sex <strong>in</strong> a scanty plot…cannotenjoy quite this brand <strong>of</strong> Wordsworthian solace <strong>in</strong> putt<strong>in</strong>g on <strong>the</strong> corset <strong>of</strong> strict lyric form.” Theexcess <strong>of</strong> liberty is <strong>the</strong> liberty to write great epic works; a liberty <strong>the</strong> female poet is denied. “Thewoman may be his [<strong>the</strong> bard’s] muse, but she can never follow him up <strong>the</strong> graded ladder <strong>of</strong>poetic modes” (Fried 233-234). Fried <strong>the</strong>n connects poetic freedom with sexual freedom,ano<strong>the</strong>r liberty traditionally afforded to men but denied to women, and compares <strong>the</strong> sonnet to<strong>Millay</strong>’s famous assertion that “[her] candle burns at both ends.” The sonnet uses itself up, neatlybut forcibly spend<strong>in</strong>g all its energies—us<strong>in</strong>g its limited space to <strong>the</strong> fullest, with noth<strong>in</strong>g wasted.The sonnet form, <strong>the</strong>n, mimics <strong>Millay</strong>’s identity as a “New Woman,” free to live so that all herpassions are used to <strong>the</strong> fullest (Fried 235-236)However, <strong>the</strong>se and o<strong>the</strong>r gender-based views are, while reasonable, not <strong>the</strong> bestapproach to <strong>Millay</strong>’s work; she was, after all, a person with more <strong>in</strong>fluences on her work thanmerely her gender, and her struggle with death is one <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> largest <strong>of</strong> those <strong>in</strong>fluences. As J.D.


Teague 5McClatchy states, “The eng<strong>in</strong>e that drove her poetry--as it may have propelled her life, throughlove affairs and addictions--was death. Her fear <strong>of</strong> it haunted her desperate apostrophes to <strong>the</strong>romantic moment, and chilled her appraisals <strong>of</strong> loss” (McClatchy). From a very early age,V<strong>in</strong>cent (as she was known to close friends and family) was troubled by death. As an adult, sheremembered <strong>the</strong> moment when, as a small child, she first realized that death could claimsomeone she loved:“I laid my cheek s<strong>of</strong>tly down upon <strong>the</strong> cool [piano] keys and wept. For it hadcome <strong>in</strong>to my m<strong>in</strong>d with dreadful violence as she bent above me and placed herf<strong>in</strong>gers upon <strong>the</strong> keys…that my mo<strong>the</strong>r could die; and I wanted to save her fromthat, for I knew she would not like it; and I knew that I could not” (Milford 25).This early revelation, that death could and would take away her loved ones, rema<strong>in</strong>ed <strong>the</strong> subject<strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> bitterest <strong>of</strong> <strong>Millay</strong>’s poems on death. Her approach to her own death, however, appearsconsistently disbeliev<strong>in</strong>g, as if she was constantly search<strong>in</strong>g for a way around her own mortality,whe<strong>the</strong>r through literary immortality or some more miraculous occurrence.One <strong>of</strong> <strong>Millay</strong>’s first and best-known poems, “Renascence,” is also one <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> first toexplore her feel<strong>in</strong>gs on her own death. Probably begun <strong>in</strong> 1911 and f<strong>in</strong>ished <strong>in</strong> 1912, at a timewhen <strong>Millay</strong> had f<strong>in</strong>ished high school and had not found a job or a way to attend college, itaddressed her feel<strong>in</strong>gs <strong>of</strong> be<strong>in</strong>g bound and smo<strong>the</strong>red to death <strong>in</strong> her small Ma<strong>in</strong>e town <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong>form <strong>of</strong> a children’s simple count<strong>in</strong>g rhyme. Gorham Munson believes that she scene she setshere is <strong>the</strong> scenery <strong>of</strong> Mount Battie and Penobscot Bay (Munson 266).All I could see from where I stoodWas three long mounta<strong>in</strong>s and a wood.I turned and looked ano<strong>the</strong>r way


Teague 6And saw three islands <strong>in</strong> a bay.…Over <strong>the</strong>se th<strong>in</strong>gs I could not seeThese were <strong>the</strong> th<strong>in</strong>gs that bounded me.The problem <strong>of</strong> her conf<strong>in</strong>ement is <strong>in</strong>troduced <strong>in</strong> a simple, rigid form—rhymed couplets<strong>in</strong> iambic pentameter, a form she rarely breaks <strong>in</strong> all 214 l<strong>in</strong>es. In <strong>the</strong> course <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> poem,<strong>Millay</strong>’s speaker—a stand-<strong>in</strong> for <strong>Millay</strong> herself—is suffocated by <strong>the</strong> smallness <strong>of</strong> her immediatesurround<strong>in</strong>gs and <strong>the</strong> <strong>in</strong>f<strong>in</strong>ite size and <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> universe outside—“Immensity made manifold”—and <strong>the</strong> relentless death and pa<strong>in</strong> suffered by all <strong>of</strong> humanity. “…Hurt and pa<strong>in</strong> createcompassion, but <strong>in</strong> fact it is <strong>the</strong> blended elements <strong>of</strong> godhead, omnisentience plus love, justice,and pity…that prove too much for <strong>the</strong> ‘f<strong>in</strong>ite Me’” (Britt<strong>in</strong> 30). The torture cont<strong>in</strong>ues until shef<strong>in</strong>ds no escape but death:Into <strong>the</strong> earth I sank till IFull six feet under ground did lie,And sank no more—<strong>the</strong>re is no weightCan follow here, however great.She chooses her own death. Munson’s hik<strong>in</strong>g companions wonder at <strong>the</strong> suffocation(“you just can’t feel claustrophobic on this mounta<strong>in</strong> top,” says <strong>the</strong> poet) and <strong>the</strong> physicalpossibility <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> s<strong>in</strong>k<strong>in</strong>g (“<strong>the</strong> sp<strong>in</strong>e <strong>of</strong> this mounta<strong>in</strong> is an exceptionally hard rock…I can’t givelicense to a poet to s<strong>in</strong>k through rock as hard as this” declares <strong>the</strong> scientist). The impossibilitiesimplied by her landscape speak to <strong>the</strong> unbearableness <strong>of</strong> <strong>Millay</strong>/speaker’s situation, be<strong>in</strong>g bothbound by New England life but all too free <strong>in</strong> her <strong>in</strong>f<strong>in</strong>ite compassion. The death she f<strong>in</strong>dspleasant as a cessation <strong>of</strong> pa<strong>in</strong> does not, however, satisfy her for long: upon miss<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong> beauty <strong>of</strong>


Teague 7<strong>the</strong> natural world over her grave, breaks out <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> earth <strong>in</strong> a cathartic rush <strong>of</strong> ra<strong>in</strong>. She escapesher own death, even escap<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong> idea <strong>of</strong> death <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> last stanza, <strong>in</strong> which she asserts <strong>the</strong>supernatural power <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> soul and <strong>the</strong> heart.The world stands out on ei<strong>the</strong>r sideNo wider than <strong>the</strong> heart is wide;Above <strong>the</strong> world is stretched <strong>the</strong> sky,—No higher than <strong>the</strong> soul is high.The autobiographical nature <strong>of</strong> <strong>Millay</strong>’s work is clear <strong>in</strong> “Renascence,” and cannot beignored <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> rest <strong>of</strong> her work. “The self <strong>in</strong> her work,” Suzanne Clark expla<strong>in</strong>s, “is an actressperform<strong>in</strong>g, at once embodiment and <strong>in</strong>terpretation. There is no separation <strong>of</strong> artist and person”(Clark 5).“Renascence” was <strong>the</strong> first poem to catapult <strong>Millay</strong> to stardom, w<strong>in</strong>n<strong>in</strong>g fourth place <strong>in</strong><strong>the</strong> anthology The Lyric Year <strong>in</strong> 1912. That year, she also attracted <strong>the</strong> attention <strong>of</strong> Carol<strong>in</strong>e B.Dow, who helped raise money for her to go to school at Vassar College. <strong>Millay</strong>’s life at Vassarwas full <strong>of</strong> ups and downs, as her <strong>in</strong>solence and flirtatiousness alternately made friends andenemies with <strong>the</strong> rest <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> student body, most <strong>of</strong> whom were four years her juniors. Aftergraduation, her first collection, Renascence and O<strong>the</strong>r Poems, was published, followed by <strong>the</strong> bookthat truly secured her fame: A Few Figs from Thistles. Figs was composed <strong>of</strong> light verse, full <strong>of</strong>flippant fun and sexual freedom, culled from ano<strong>the</strong>r more serious collection to come later—Second April.<strong>Millay</strong>’s publisher shied away from publish<strong>in</strong>g Second April because <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> heavy <strong>the</strong>me <strong>of</strong>death present throughout <strong>the</strong> poems. In 1918, one <strong>of</strong> <strong>Millay</strong>’s Vassar classmates (and possiblelovers) Dorothy Coleman, had died suddenly and tragically <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> flu epidemic. Whatever


Teague 8<strong>Millay</strong>’s feel<strong>in</strong>gs had been for <strong>the</strong> girl, Coleman was among her admirers and her diaries“revealed a secret and tumultuous passion” for <strong>Millay</strong> (Epste<strong>in</strong> 96). The death <strong>of</strong> such a devotedfollower spurred <strong>Millay</strong> to write more eloquently than ever on this most dark and <strong>in</strong>terest<strong>in</strong>g <strong>of</strong><strong>the</strong>mes. Macmillan specifically asked for “Memorial to D.C.,” five poems written for Coleman,to be cut from <strong>the</strong> book, but <strong>Millay</strong> refused. “<strong>Death</strong> moved through <strong>the</strong>se poems like a morbidfever,” and <strong>the</strong> publishers reacted with a horror foreign to <strong>the</strong> Roman and Elizabethan poets <strong>in</strong>whom <strong>Millay</strong> had found <strong>in</strong>spiration (Milford 188-189). “Memorial to D.C.” is far from <strong>the</strong> onlypoem <strong>in</strong> Second April to take hold <strong>of</strong> death with its asbestos gloves—<strong>the</strong> very first poem,“Spr<strong>in</strong>g,” beg<strong>in</strong>s <strong>the</strong> book with <strong>the</strong> topic <strong>of</strong> death, set <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> season <strong>of</strong> rebirth. This poem belongs<strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> bitterest <strong>of</strong> <strong>Millay</strong>’s three categories: death <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> beloved. Clark expla<strong>in</strong>s, “death and griefis a frequent subject <strong>in</strong> <strong>Millay</strong>’s poems. But it is her own death she fears?...death is associated <strong>in</strong>her text with <strong>the</strong> pa<strong>in</strong> <strong>of</strong> los<strong>in</strong>g someone else” (Clark 9-10).“Spr<strong>in</strong>g” marks a new turn <strong>in</strong> <strong>Millay</strong>’s poetry: “[<strong>the</strong> poem] conta<strong>in</strong>s no unnecessary words,presents its images directly and visually, and is written <strong>in</strong> free verse” (Kaiser 30). The poem’seighteen l<strong>in</strong>es dim<strong>in</strong>ish on <strong>the</strong> page until <strong>the</strong> seventeenth l<strong>in</strong>e is only one word long, echo<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong>deepen<strong>in</strong>g despair <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> poem as <strong>Millay</strong>’s speaker retreats ever fur<strong>the</strong>r away from <strong>the</strong> outsideworld. <strong>Millay</strong> beg<strong>in</strong>s by directly address<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong> month: “To what purpose, April, do you returnaga<strong>in</strong>?” (“Spr<strong>in</strong>g” l<strong>in</strong>e 1) The classic apostrophe to spr<strong>in</strong>g and <strong>the</strong> formality <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> question, serveto contrast and temper its rudeness, as <strong>the</strong> question is essentially “what <strong>the</strong> hell are you do<strong>in</strong>ghere?” This first l<strong>in</strong>e alerts us that someth<strong>in</strong>g is not right <strong>in</strong> <strong>Millay</strong>’s world—<strong>of</strong> course Aprilshould come aga<strong>in</strong>. Why would she not want it to?The next statement is even blunter: “Beauty is not enough” (2). “The poem’s aes<strong>the</strong>ticrefusal to admit any <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> more traditional poetic embellishments is echoed and re<strong>in</strong>forced” by


Teague 9this l<strong>in</strong>e; “…no beauty, whe<strong>the</strong>r it results from <strong>the</strong> nature <strong>of</strong> spr<strong>in</strong>g itself or from <strong>the</strong> formalaes<strong>the</strong>tics <strong>of</strong> poetry,” can ease whatever pa<strong>in</strong> she is <strong>in</strong> (Kaiser 30). She cont<strong>in</strong>ues to berate <strong>the</strong>spr<strong>in</strong>g month, declar<strong>in</strong>g that it cannot “quiet” her anymore. The word “quiet” here suggests animage <strong>of</strong> a parent mollify<strong>in</strong>g a child with a distraction ra<strong>the</strong>r than direct comfort, but April is notbrib<strong>in</strong>g <strong>Millay</strong> with candy, but with “<strong>the</strong> redness <strong>of</strong> little leaves open<strong>in</strong>g stickily” (3-4). Thewords “little” and “stickily” seem <strong>in</strong>nocent and childlike <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong>ir simplicity, and <strong>the</strong> sticky leavesare rem<strong>in</strong>iscent <strong>of</strong> sticky candies, or <strong>the</strong> small sticky hands <strong>of</strong> young children.This beautiful l<strong>in</strong>e is a momentary distraction, like sticky candies, from <strong>the</strong> ris<strong>in</strong>g despair,until <strong>Millay</strong> abruptly cont<strong>in</strong>ues with “I know what I know.” (5) She does not reveal what it is sheknows for <strong>the</strong> next few l<strong>in</strong>es, as she aga<strong>in</strong> describes <strong>the</strong> spr<strong>in</strong>g growth, this time without <strong>the</strong>pleasure <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> red leaf image: “<strong>the</strong> sun is hot” and <strong>the</strong> crocuses are “spikes,” as she coldly“observes” <strong>the</strong>m, with none <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> rapturous attention she gave <strong>the</strong> little leaves (6-7). She statesthat <strong>the</strong> earth smells “good,” without detail<strong>in</strong>g how (8). Then, coldly and ironically, she says “it isapparent that <strong>the</strong>re is no death.” (9) The word “apparent” br<strong>in</strong>gs up <strong>the</strong> old say<strong>in</strong>g aboutappearances be<strong>in</strong>g deceiv<strong>in</strong>g, which she supports by ask<strong>in</strong>g, sarcastically, what this appearancesignifies (10). The first l<strong>in</strong>e may have been blunt, but through <strong>the</strong>se l<strong>in</strong>es <strong>the</strong> poem descends <strong>in</strong>togreater bitterness about <strong>the</strong> knowledge <strong>of</strong> death, and <strong>the</strong>nce <strong>in</strong>to bitterness about life. “Life <strong>in</strong>itself/ Is noth<strong>in</strong>g,” <strong>Millay</strong> declares, <strong>the</strong>n diverts this raw outcry <strong>in</strong>to metaphor: “An empty cup, aflight <strong>of</strong> uncarpeted stairs” (13-15). “It is not enough” that April, like <strong>the</strong> doomed Ophelia,“Comes like an idiot, babbl<strong>in</strong>g and strew<strong>in</strong>g flowers” (17-18).The mere knowledge <strong>of</strong> mortality is crush<strong>in</strong>gly depress<strong>in</strong>g to <strong>Millay</strong> <strong>in</strong> “Spr<strong>in</strong>g,” so muchso that even <strong>the</strong> rebirth <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> entire hemisphere cannot comfort her, but she consistently forcesthis emotion <strong>in</strong>to poetic forms that take a step back from raw bitterness. She couches her rude


Teague 13up <strong>in</strong> spr<strong>in</strong>g (49-56). Her physical death contrasts with <strong>the</strong>se images <strong>of</strong> new growth, and with<strong>the</strong> sexual imagery <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> next stanza, where she resumes begg<strong>in</strong>g “boys and girls that lie/whisper<strong>in</strong>g <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> hedges” (57-58). The proximity <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong>se images implies that just as her bodycontributes to <strong>the</strong> fertility <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> land, her poems, mixed with <strong>the</strong> pledges <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong>se lovers,contribute to <strong>the</strong> fertility <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> human race. The manner <strong>in</strong> which she implores such readers tomix her <strong>in</strong> with <strong>the</strong>ir day to day lives also suggests a desire to go on liv<strong>in</strong>g <strong>in</strong> a mundane, physicalsense after death, even if only vicariously.The f<strong>in</strong>al stanza <strong>of</strong> “The Poet and His Book” assumes <strong>the</strong> success <strong>of</strong> her pleas, as shetaunts a sexton for <strong>the</strong> impermanence <strong>of</strong> his trade compared to hers—“Many a rose shall ravel,/Many a metal wreath shall rust” while her songs abide (116-117). The proliferation <strong>of</strong>exclamation po<strong>in</strong>ts through this stanza <strong>in</strong> particular, as well as <strong>the</strong> poem throughout, suggests<strong>Millay</strong>’s enthusiastic determ<strong>in</strong>ation to make her aim <strong>of</strong> poetic immortality come true. Thisdeterm<strong>in</strong>ation is itself a protection aga<strong>in</strong>st <strong>the</strong> fear and dread associated with <strong>the</strong> anticipation <strong>of</strong>one’s own mortality. She fervently wishes to believe her own assertion that “…Only <strong>the</strong> body canbe brought to earth; but <strong>the</strong> spirit, <strong>the</strong> essential ‘I,’ will survive” (Britt<strong>in</strong> 45). Though desperate,<strong>Millay</strong> protects and distances herself from this particular anxiety, not completely through tricks<strong>of</strong> language or tone, but through determ<strong>in</strong><strong>in</strong>g to never die.Between Second April <strong>in</strong> 1921 and The Buck <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> Snow <strong>in</strong> 1928, <strong>Millay</strong> spent time <strong>in</strong>Europe, published The Harp-Weaver and O<strong>the</strong>r Poems, became <strong>the</strong> first woman to w<strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong>Pulitzer Prize, married Eugen Jan Boisseva<strong>in</strong>, and experienced <strong>the</strong> beg<strong>in</strong>n<strong>in</strong>g <strong>of</strong> her slide <strong>in</strong>tobad health. <strong>Millay</strong> and Boisseva<strong>in</strong> fell <strong>in</strong> love over a game <strong>of</strong> charades <strong>in</strong> April 1923, and weremarried <strong>in</strong> July. <strong>Millay</strong> had been ill s<strong>in</strong>ce before her return from Europe <strong>in</strong> January, and directlyafter <strong>the</strong> wedd<strong>in</strong>g Boisseva<strong>in</strong> drove her to New York Hospital to have a complicated <strong>in</strong>test<strong>in</strong>al


Teague 14problem fixed and her appendix removed. Marriage was <strong>the</strong> only way <strong>the</strong>y could be sure to betoge<strong>the</strong>r while she was <strong>in</strong>capacitated. This almost mo<strong>the</strong>rly care from her husband was to berepresentative <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> rest <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong>ir life toge<strong>the</strong>r. Boisseva<strong>in</strong> managed <strong>the</strong>ir household, leav<strong>in</strong>g<strong>Millay</strong> to her poetry, because as he said “it is so obvious that V<strong>in</strong>cent is more important than Iam” (Britt<strong>in</strong> 23). Just before <strong>the</strong> appendectomy, she said to her good friend Arthur Ficke “If I dienow, I shall be immortal” (Milford 254-255).She survived <strong>the</strong> surgery, but <strong>Millay</strong>’s awareness <strong>of</strong> her own mortality grows more evident<strong>in</strong> The Buck <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> Snow; as Untermeyer put it, “never has Miss <strong>Millay</strong> plucked so <strong>in</strong>sistently on<strong>the</strong> autumnal str<strong>in</strong>g” (“Song” 57). The image <strong>of</strong> triumphal self-death most common <strong>in</strong> her earlierwork is replaced by a more thoughtful approach, occasionally reach<strong>in</strong>g an objectivity also rare <strong>in</strong>her deeply personal and emotional work. This thoughtfulness, or “presence <strong>of</strong> m<strong>in</strong>d,” caused atleast one reviewer to declare The Buck <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> Snow “<strong>the</strong> emergence <strong>of</strong> a significant poet” (Parks121). In <strong>the</strong> title poem, <strong>Millay</strong> approaches death with less formal protection; her l<strong>in</strong>es are longerand looser, “no longer conf<strong>in</strong>ed to tight couplets or casual quatra<strong>in</strong>s” (“Song” 58). But at <strong>the</strong>same time she ma<strong>in</strong>ta<strong>in</strong>s distance from her subject, even a greater distance than <strong>in</strong> o<strong>the</strong>r, moreformal poems: it is not she or a loved one, or even ano<strong>the</strong>r human be<strong>in</strong>g, who is dy<strong>in</strong>g; herspeaker/self watches from a distance as a buck deer dies. This twelve l<strong>in</strong>e poem, arranged <strong>in</strong> threeuneven stanzas <strong>of</strong> five, one, and six l<strong>in</strong>es, is marked by a sense <strong>of</strong> reflection, reserve, and wonder.She beg<strong>in</strong>s by address<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong> “white sky, over <strong>the</strong> hemlocks bowed with snow,” elegantlysett<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong> scene <strong>in</strong> shades <strong>of</strong> black and white. She cont<strong>in</strong>ues with a question for <strong>the</strong> sky, “sawyou not,” a formal <strong>in</strong>version characteristic <strong>of</strong> <strong>Millay</strong>’s deliberately poetic, distanc<strong>in</strong>g diction, andalso a quiet demand for <strong>the</strong> acknowledgement <strong>of</strong> death <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> “antlered buck.” “I saw <strong>the</strong>m,” shesays, <strong>the</strong>n repeats “I saw <strong>the</strong>m suddenly go,” assert<strong>in</strong>g her own knowledge. This is a l<strong>in</strong>k back to


Teague 15<strong>the</strong> all-compassionate <strong>Millay</strong> <strong>of</strong> “Renascence,” who knows and feels for all <strong>the</strong> world’ssuffer<strong>in</strong>g—but now, <strong>Millay</strong> demands that <strong>the</strong> rest <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> universe also feel her suffer<strong>in</strong>g andbewilderment over death. The abrupt beg<strong>in</strong>n<strong>in</strong>g <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> next l<strong>in</strong>e, “tails up,” mimics <strong>the</strong> suddenalertness <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> startled deer, while <strong>the</strong> alliteration <strong>of</strong> “long leaps lovely and slow” imitates <strong>the</strong>motion <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> runn<strong>in</strong>g deer. <strong>Millay</strong> sets <strong>the</strong> next l<strong>in</strong>e apart from <strong>the</strong> two long stanzas, mak<strong>in</strong>g itstand out sharply: “now lies he here, his wild blood scald<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong> snow.” Ano<strong>the</strong>r poetic <strong>in</strong>versionhere also slows <strong>the</strong> pace <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> poem with four stressed syllables <strong>in</strong> a row, prepar<strong>in</strong>g for <strong>the</strong>shock<strong>in</strong>g image <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> deer’s blood aga<strong>in</strong>st <strong>the</strong> white snow. The <strong>in</strong>terruption <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> s<strong>in</strong>gle l<strong>in</strong>e<strong>of</strong>fset from <strong>the</strong> two stanzas also mimics <strong>the</strong> <strong>in</strong>terruption <strong>of</strong> death onto <strong>the</strong> peaceful scene <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong>two deer leap<strong>in</strong>g through <strong>the</strong> orchard, a death likely caused by a human hunter—an <strong>in</strong>vader,<strong>in</strong>terrupt<strong>in</strong>g and end<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong> quiet, beautiful, and natural life <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> deer which <strong>Millay</strong> set up <strong>in</strong><strong>the</strong> first stanza. With such a set-up, this sudden death seems all <strong>the</strong> more unjust.Despite <strong>the</strong> shock <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> hunter’s <strong>in</strong>trusion, <strong>the</strong> narrator/<strong>Millay</strong> herself could also be seenas a human trespasser, impos<strong>in</strong>g her thoughts and feel<strong>in</strong>gs onto <strong>the</strong> deer and its death. In <strong>the</strong>very next l<strong>in</strong>e, <strong>Millay</strong> departs from pure description to say “how strange a th<strong>in</strong>g is death” withdistant wonder, as if at a phenomenon that would never affect her. Consider<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong> ever morepress<strong>in</strong>g concerns <strong>of</strong> <strong>Millay</strong>’s own mortality, this cool assessment is both remarkable and, yet,somehow unsurpris<strong>in</strong>g: we could expect a note <strong>of</strong> hysteria and fear to sound loudly <strong>in</strong> this poem,but it’s also sensible to expect a calmer approach towards someth<strong>in</strong>g she surely felt was draw<strong>in</strong>gnigh. The strangeness she draws attention to lies <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> fall <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> swift and beautiful deer—death “br<strong>in</strong>g<strong>in</strong>g to his knees, br<strong>in</strong>g<strong>in</strong>g to his antlers/ The buck <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> snow.” The mention <strong>of</strong> hisblood as “wild” <strong>in</strong> l<strong>in</strong>e seven, added to this description <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> “strangeness” <strong>of</strong> death as <strong>the</strong>cessation <strong>of</strong> movement provides an idea <strong>of</strong> death tam<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong> once-free buck. She <strong>the</strong>n ponders


Teague 16<strong>the</strong> strangeness <strong>of</strong> life, “a mile away by now…look<strong>in</strong>g out attentive from <strong>the</strong> eyes <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> doe.” Itis strange that <strong>the</strong> buck has been tamed and stilled by death, but it is also strange that life, <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong>form <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> buck’s mate, goes on after <strong>the</strong> death <strong>of</strong> her loved one. But <strong>the</strong> life itself is not harmedby <strong>the</strong> buck’s untimely end; it merely runs to save itself, keep<strong>in</strong>g an “attentive” eye out for <strong>the</strong>threat <strong>of</strong> its own death. The doe is pure natural <strong>in</strong>st<strong>in</strong>ct, and <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> wonder <strong>Millay</strong> feels towardits cont<strong>in</strong>u<strong>in</strong>g life, we can deduce a sort <strong>of</strong> jealousy: human be<strong>in</strong>gs have to feel grief that deer canescape. The doe can cont<strong>in</strong>ue liv<strong>in</strong>g after her mate is gone, while <strong>Millay</strong> is not sure that she orher loved ones can.Four quatra<strong>in</strong>s <strong>of</strong> <strong>Millay</strong>’s bitterest thoughts on death, “<strong>Dirge</strong> without <strong>Music</strong>” beg<strong>in</strong>swith a harsh-sound<strong>in</strong>g statement: “I am not resigned to <strong>the</strong> shutt<strong>in</strong>g away <strong>of</strong> lov<strong>in</strong>g hearts <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong>hard ground.” The repeated “sh,” “r,” “d” and “g” sounds give <strong>the</strong> l<strong>in</strong>e a harsh, grat<strong>in</strong>g resonance,and <strong>the</strong> sentence is long and difficult to read quickly. This is followed by <strong>the</strong> quicker, dismissive“so it is, and so it will be,” a rem<strong>in</strong>der that death is natural and <strong>in</strong>evitable. <strong>Millay</strong> admits thateven “<strong>the</strong> wise and <strong>the</strong> lovely” go “<strong>in</strong>to <strong>the</strong> darkness,” even admitt<strong>in</strong>g, <strong>in</strong> poetic and flowery style,that “crowned with lilies and laurel <strong>the</strong>y go,” an admission filled with long, flow<strong>in</strong>g “l” sounds.But this flow is suddenly <strong>in</strong>terrupted with a clipped “but I am not resigned.” This refusal <strong>of</strong>resignation marks nearly all <strong>of</strong> <strong>Millay</strong>’s poems about <strong>the</strong> deaths <strong>of</strong> o<strong>the</strong>rs, even down to <strong>the</strong> death<strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> deer <strong>in</strong> “The Buck <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> Snow”—to one who is conscious <strong>of</strong> her own mortality and those<strong>of</strong> her beloveds, death is strange and s<strong>in</strong>ister, tak<strong>in</strong>g one and leav<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong> o<strong>the</strong>r.The next stanza beg<strong>in</strong>s with ano<strong>the</strong>r almost dismissive l<strong>in</strong>e: “lovers and th<strong>in</strong>kers, <strong>in</strong>to <strong>the</strong>earth with you,” but <strong>the</strong> description <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> dy<strong>in</strong>g as “lovers and th<strong>in</strong>kers,” such importantlyhuman attributes, refutes this flippancy. <strong>Millay</strong>’s sound and tone aga<strong>in</strong> grow bitter <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> nextl<strong>in</strong>e as well, “be one with <strong>the</strong> dull, <strong>the</strong> <strong>in</strong>discrim<strong>in</strong>ate dust,” with <strong>the</strong> abundance <strong>of</strong> sharp “d,” “s,”


Teague 17and “t” sounds. The harsh, spitt<strong>in</strong>g, bitter consonants cont<strong>in</strong>ue <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> next l<strong>in</strong>es, filled with “f”and “s” sounds: “a fragment <strong>of</strong> what you felt, <strong>of</strong> what you knew,/ a formula, a phrase rema<strong>in</strong>s,—but <strong>the</strong> best is lost.” Unlike <strong>the</strong> first stanza, <strong>Millay</strong> ends here with <strong>the</strong> less strik<strong>in</strong>g, approximaterhyme <strong>of</strong> “dust” and “lost,” leav<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong> same feel<strong>in</strong>g <strong>of</strong> unf<strong>in</strong>ished bus<strong>in</strong>ess left by death itself.She moves on to describe what <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> dy<strong>in</strong>g is “<strong>the</strong> best” that is lost: “<strong>the</strong> answers quickand keen,” short and sharp like <strong>the</strong> answers <strong>the</strong>mselves, “<strong>the</strong> honest look, <strong>the</strong> laughter, <strong>the</strong> love,”flow<strong>in</strong>g with luxurious “l” sounds. Aga<strong>in</strong>, she cuts <strong>of</strong>f <strong>the</strong> flow with a sharp statement: “<strong>the</strong>y aregone.” She ref<strong>in</strong>es this statement with a platitude <strong>of</strong> comfort, “<strong>the</strong>y are gone to feed <strong>the</strong> roses,”an image <strong>in</strong>itially beautiful with <strong>the</strong> renewal and cycle <strong>of</strong> life, and <strong>the</strong>n fa<strong>in</strong>tly horrify<strong>in</strong>g with <strong>the</strong>implication <strong>of</strong> decay and decomposition. She <strong>the</strong>n contrasts <strong>the</strong> decay with <strong>the</strong> image <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> rose,“elegant and curled” and “fragrant.” This description is aga<strong>in</strong> cut <strong>of</strong>f with <strong>the</strong> blunt “I know. ButI do not approve,” which <strong>Millay</strong> fur<strong>the</strong>rs with <strong>the</strong> desperately pitiful “more precious was <strong>the</strong> light<strong>in</strong> your eyes than all <strong>the</strong> roses <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> world.”The next stanza beg<strong>in</strong>s with <strong>the</strong> march<strong>in</strong>g repetition <strong>of</strong> “down, down, down <strong>in</strong>to <strong>the</strong>darkness <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> grave,” <strong>the</strong>n names <strong>the</strong> marchers as “<strong>the</strong> beautiful, <strong>the</strong> tender, <strong>the</strong> k<strong>in</strong>d…<strong>the</strong><strong>in</strong>telligent, <strong>the</strong> witty, <strong>the</strong> brave,” all admirable attributes <strong>Millay</strong> <strong>of</strong>ten praises. She <strong>the</strong>n cuts thislist short with ano<strong>the</strong>r repetition <strong>of</strong> “I know. But I do not approve. And I am not resigned.”The time between The Buck <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> Snow and her f<strong>in</strong>al posthumous collections marked adark time <strong>in</strong> <strong>Millay</strong>’s life. In 1930, her beloved mo<strong>the</strong>r died. She lost <strong>the</strong> entire manuscript <strong>of</strong> herplay Conversation at Midnight <strong>in</strong> a hotel fire <strong>in</strong> 1936, and severely taxed her energy <strong>in</strong> re-writ<strong>in</strong>git from memory. Before and dur<strong>in</strong>g World War II, her writ<strong>in</strong>g descended <strong>in</strong>to propaganda, firstbemoan<strong>in</strong>g mank<strong>in</strong>d’s attraction to violence <strong>in</strong> Huntsman, What Quarry? and <strong>the</strong>n urg<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong> U<strong>St</strong>o avenge wrongs done <strong>in</strong> Europe <strong>in</strong> Make Bright <strong>the</strong> Arrows and The Murder <strong>of</strong> Lidice, to


Teague 19A little over one year later, <strong>in</strong> October 1950, <strong>Millay</strong> also died, fall<strong>in</strong>g down <strong>the</strong> stairs <strong>in</strong> her home<strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> middle <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> night.After her death, her sister Norma collected many <strong>of</strong> her unpublished poems for <strong>the</strong>posthumous M<strong>in</strong>e <strong>the</strong> Harvest. In <strong>the</strong> untitled poem beg<strong>in</strong>n<strong>in</strong>g with “at least, my dear,” <strong>Millay</strong>consoles herself after <strong>the</strong> loss <strong>of</strong> a beloved—one <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> many she had lost with<strong>in</strong> a short time,friends, family, lovers, and her husband—with <strong>the</strong> unselfish gratitude that, by <strong>the</strong> beloved dy<strong>in</strong>gfirst, he did not have to watch her die. This idea is bluntly stated <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> first two-l<strong>in</strong>e stanza: “Atleast, my dear,/ you did not have to live to see me die.”She cont<strong>in</strong>ues to expla<strong>in</strong> why she needs this knowledge to survive his death: it is becauseshe believes she hurt him <strong>in</strong> so many o<strong>the</strong>r ways, she is glad to have at least spared him thisparticular pa<strong>in</strong>. The memories <strong>of</strong> her wrongdo<strong>in</strong>gs have her “sweat<strong>in</strong>g” and “blush<strong>in</strong>g darkblood,” and she views <strong>the</strong>se pa<strong>in</strong>ful, uncontrollable thoughts as unruly sheep “that graze <strong>the</strong>forbidden hills, cropp<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong> m<strong>in</strong>d-bane” until she needs to cut for herself as a cane <strong>the</strong> bitterconsolation <strong>of</strong> “<strong>the</strong> one disservice/ I never did you,—you never saw me die.”In <strong>the</strong> next stanza, <strong>Millay</strong> veers <strong>of</strong>f <strong>in</strong> a different direction, much like <strong>the</strong> wayward sheepthoughts<strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> previous stanza. The first l<strong>in</strong>e here f<strong>in</strong>ds her look<strong>in</strong>g through her belong<strong>in</strong>gs: “If<strong>in</strong>d <strong>in</strong> my disorderly files among unf<strong>in</strong>ished/ poems,” <strong>the</strong> awkward l<strong>in</strong>e break imitat<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong>unf<strong>in</strong>ished work and <strong>the</strong> mess<strong>in</strong>ess <strong>of</strong> her papers. Among <strong>the</strong>se scraps, and “photographs <strong>of</strong>picnics on <strong>the</strong> rocks,” she f<strong>in</strong>ds “letters from you <strong>in</strong> your bold hand.” She does not mention <strong>the</strong>content <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> letters; what matters about <strong>the</strong>m is <strong>the</strong> writer and his handwrit<strong>in</strong>g, a sample <strong>of</strong> hispersonality left beh<strong>in</strong>d. She also f<strong>in</strong>ds, <strong>in</strong> “<strong>the</strong> pocket <strong>of</strong> a coat I could not br<strong>in</strong>g myself to giveaway,” columb<strong>in</strong>e seeds. The cycle <strong>of</strong> nature, which she so <strong>of</strong>ten celebrates <strong>in</strong> her poems about<strong>the</strong> death <strong>of</strong> love, is now thwarted <strong>in</strong> a poem on <strong>the</strong> death <strong>of</strong> a loved one: <strong>the</strong> seeds, symbols <strong>of</strong>


Teague 20new life, are never planted. She cont<strong>in</strong>ues with an expression <strong>of</strong> anguish at f<strong>in</strong>d<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong>serem<strong>in</strong>ders so unexpectedly: “a few more moments such as <strong>the</strong>se and I shall have paid all.” Thehurts she did to her beloved are revisited upon her, <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> pa<strong>in</strong> <strong>of</strong> loss.She aga<strong>in</strong> changes tack <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> next stanza, now almost resentfully prais<strong>in</strong>g her beloved’slove and forgiveness. She makes a false start <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> first l<strong>in</strong>e, “not that you ever—” cutt<strong>in</strong>g thatthought short to rephrase it or replace it with ano<strong>the</strong>r: “O, love <strong>in</strong>flexible, O militantforgiveness,” as she describes her loved one, “I know/ you kept no books aga<strong>in</strong>st me!” Theexclamation po<strong>in</strong>t overemphasizes this po<strong>in</strong>t, as if even <strong>Millay</strong> is not sure that he was truly sogenerous. She <strong>the</strong>n blames her feel<strong>in</strong>gs <strong>of</strong> <strong>in</strong>adequacy not on her lover but on herself: “In myown hand/ are written down <strong>the</strong> sum and <strong>the</strong> crude items <strong>of</strong> my <strong>in</strong>adequacy.” Aga<strong>in</strong>, we see <strong>the</strong>importance <strong>of</strong> handwrit<strong>in</strong>g—her own <strong>in</strong>nate self catalogues <strong>the</strong> blame for her wrongdo<strong>in</strong>gs,someth<strong>in</strong>g she claims her beloved never did.Aga<strong>in</strong> <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> fifth and last stanza we f<strong>in</strong>d <strong>Millay</strong>’s distracted state <strong>of</strong> m<strong>in</strong>d, as herthoughts leave <strong>the</strong> catalogue <strong>of</strong> her wrongs to circle back aga<strong>in</strong> to <strong>the</strong> ma<strong>in</strong> idea <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> poem. Sheexpla<strong>in</strong>s aga<strong>in</strong> her need for comfort, describ<strong>in</strong>g her m<strong>in</strong>d as “brawl<strong>in</strong>g” and need<strong>in</strong>g “a littlequiet,” for which she searches out, “recorded <strong>in</strong> my favour,/ one pr<strong>in</strong>cely gift.” This gift <strong>of</strong> hercont<strong>in</strong>ued existence is no longer, at <strong>the</strong> end <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> poem, “at least:” it is now a “pr<strong>in</strong>cely gift,” like<strong>the</strong> love and forgiveness <strong>the</strong> beloved gave to her. “The most I ever did for you was to outliveyou,” she claims, acknowledg<strong>in</strong>g that she could have done more, yet she claims that, even so, hergift “is much.” It was <strong>the</strong> last and best th<strong>in</strong>g she could have given, <strong>the</strong> only th<strong>in</strong>g stav<strong>in</strong>g <strong>of</strong>f <strong>the</strong>black despair over <strong>the</strong> loss <strong>of</strong> <strong>Millay</strong>’s most constant love.The <strong>the</strong>me <strong>of</strong> death can be easily traced throughout <strong>Millay</strong>’s work, from <strong>the</strong> earliest<strong>in</strong>stances <strong>of</strong> horror and long<strong>in</strong>g <strong>in</strong> “Renascence” all <strong>the</strong> way through some <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> last poems she


Teague 21wrote. Though this <strong>the</strong>me is easily traced, <strong>the</strong> concept <strong>of</strong> “<strong>the</strong>me” is more slippery; a greatnumber <strong>of</strong> def<strong>in</strong>itions abound for a term that seems at first so self-explanatory. One, that<strong>the</strong>mes are connections between works <strong>of</strong> art and lived experience, shows that this death <strong>the</strong>me<strong>in</strong> <strong>Millay</strong>’s work can be used to connect her work to her life—“Spr<strong>in</strong>g” was written for DorothyColeman, “at least, my dear” for Eugen Boisseva<strong>in</strong>—and to <strong>the</strong> reader’s own experience <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong>bitterness <strong>of</strong> grief and <strong>the</strong> cycles <strong>of</strong> liv<strong>in</strong>g (Jost xix). Ano<strong>the</strong>r “associates <strong>the</strong>me with myths asfundamental modes <strong>of</strong> thought,” <strong>the</strong> build<strong>in</strong>g blocks <strong>of</strong> emotional and symbolic th<strong>in</strong>k<strong>in</strong>g(Daemmrich 571). By arrang<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong>se foundations, and support<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong>m with sheer craft, <strong>Millay</strong>creates a space for her ideas <strong>in</strong>side <strong>the</strong> m<strong>in</strong>ds <strong>of</strong> her readers. The image <strong>of</strong> a broken heart as adry<strong>in</strong>g tide pool can <strong>the</strong>n be pondered, and our own ideas about love and loss rearranged toadmit <strong>Millay</strong>’s. As Harold Bloom says, “<strong>the</strong>mes and metaphors,” like <strong>the</strong> metaphor <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> tidepool, “engender one ano<strong>the</strong>r <strong>in</strong> all significant literary compositions.” This idea <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong>me asfundamental also dovetails neatly with Bloom’s idea that “literary topoi,” or places, as this wordfor “<strong>the</strong>me” orig<strong>in</strong>ally meant, “can be regarded as places where we store <strong>in</strong>formation” (Bloom xi).<strong>Millay</strong>’s prom<strong>in</strong>ent <strong>the</strong>me <strong>of</strong> death thus becomes, simultaneously, a handy label on our mentalfile cab<strong>in</strong>ets <strong>of</strong> ways to th<strong>in</strong>k about death, a way to rearrange <strong>the</strong>se files to fit her own ideas, and,importantly, a connection between our experiences and her own.Throughout this rearrangement and connection, <strong>Millay</strong> never quite takes <strong>of</strong>f her“asbestos gloves” when deal<strong>in</strong>g with death. Her most emotionally raw poems—like “<strong>Dirge</strong><strong>Without</strong> <strong>Music</strong>”—are arranged <strong>in</strong> elegant and controlled form, hold<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong> subject at bay, andher most stylistically raw poems—like “Spr<strong>in</strong>g”—are couched <strong>in</strong> metaphor and <strong>in</strong>directstatement. She balances “<strong>the</strong> needs <strong>of</strong> precise rhetoric aga<strong>in</strong>st <strong>the</strong> truth <strong>of</strong> feel<strong>in</strong>gs, engender<strong>in</strong>g


Teague 22a k<strong>in</strong>d <strong>of</strong> difficult poise” ideal for explor<strong>in</strong>g <strong>the</strong> <strong>the</strong>me <strong>of</strong> death without overload<strong>in</strong>g her—orour—emotions (Johnson 117).Works CitedBloom, Harold. "Series Introduction by Harold Bloom: Themes and Metaphors." Bloom'sLiterary Themes: <strong>Death</strong> and Dy<strong>in</strong>g. Ed. Blake Hobby. New York: Bloom's LiteraryCriticism, 2009.Britt<strong>in</strong>, Norman A. <strong>Edna</strong> <strong>St</strong>. V<strong>in</strong>cent <strong>Millay</strong>. Rev. ed. Boston: Twayne Publishers, 1982.Clark, Suzanne. "Uncanny <strong>Millay</strong>." <strong>Millay</strong> at 100: A Critical Reappraisal. Ed. Diane P. Freedman.Carbondale: Sou<strong>the</strong>rn Ill<strong>in</strong>ois University Press, 1995.Epste<strong>in</strong>, Daniel Mark. What Lips My Lips Have Kissed: <strong>the</strong> Loves and Love Poems <strong>of</strong> <strong>Edna</strong> <strong>St</strong>.V<strong>in</strong>cent <strong>Millay</strong>. New York: Henry Holt and Company, 2001.Frank, Elizabeth P. “A Doll's Heart: The Girl <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> <strong>Poetry</strong> <strong>of</strong> <strong>Edna</strong> <strong>St</strong>. V<strong>in</strong>cent <strong>Millay</strong> andLouise Bogan.” Twentieth Century Literature 23.2 (1977): 157-179.Fried, Debra. “Andromeda Unbound: Gender and Genre <strong>in</strong> <strong>Millay</strong>'s Sonnets.” Critical Essays on<strong>Edna</strong> <strong>St</strong>. V<strong>in</strong>cent <strong>Millay</strong>. Ed. William B. Thes<strong>in</strong>g. New York: G. K. Hall & Co, 1993.Johnson, Robert. “A Moment’s Monument: <strong>Millay</strong>’s Sonnet and Modern Time.” <strong>Millay</strong> at 100:A Critical Reappraisal. Ed. Diane P. Freedman. Carbondale: Sou<strong>the</strong>rn Ill<strong>in</strong>ois UniversityPress, 1995.Jost, Francois. "Introduction." Dictionary <strong>of</strong> Literary Themes and Motifs. Ed. Jean-CharlesSeigneuret. Westport, CT: Greenwood Press, 1988.Kaiser, Jo Ellen Green. “Displaced Modernism: <strong>Millay</strong> and <strong>the</strong> Triumph <strong>of</strong> Sentimentality.”<strong>Millay</strong> at 100: A Critical Reappraisal. Ed. Diane P. Freedman. Carbondale: Sou<strong>the</strong>rnIll<strong>in</strong>ois University Press, 1995.


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