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NORTH WEST WORDS PRIMARY FICTION May 8th As I approached Sicily I smelled smoke. Not just any kind of smoke but smoke from a volcano! It was very active. Suddenly a big boulder fell into the sea. It almost hit me. Then an even bigger one almost hit me again. I swam along fast as an even bigger boulder flew towards me. It hit me! Almost! I thought the volcano was going to erupt very soon. So I swam away. June 22nd I swam to the Skeleton Coat in Namibia. I went into a shipwreck. Suddenly my stomach rumbled. I thought I should eat. Luckily there were loads of fish. So I swam around rounding up all the fish. Eventually I had eaten five butterfly fish, eleven crabs, one squid, three tortoises, and twenty jellyfish. I was stuffed. Just then came a great white shark so I swam away. July 8th I swam to Australia and saw a boat of whale watchers. I wanted them to see me so I flicked my tail up in the air. I thought I should do human watching. I saw humans surfing. I enjoyed watching them. Just then a woman fell off her board. So I went to save her. I put her on my back and put her back on her board and swam away before someone harmed me. August 4th I swam to Antarctica. I saw a ship of scientists, one looked at me. I looked at him. He said ‘there’s a whale.’ I swam away worried that he might do something to me. I thought I should have some fun so I swam with my cousin the blue whale. We popped our heads up and frightened the penguins. We swam under icebergs. Later I saw the ship of scientists stuck in the icebergs. So I popped my head up and pushed the ship out. But I swam away before the scientist from a few hours ago came back. September 16th On the way home I saw underwater volcanoes. I thought it was very odd. But then I remembered from my atlas that Hawaii is a state of America in the Pacific Ocean. It is a group of island that are the tops of underwater volcanoes. Later that day I saw giant redwood trees. They were huge, but I was even bigger! 10
NORTH WEST WORDS PRIMARY FICTION October 31st When I passed Japan I saw a big ship. Not any ship but a ghost ship! It moved slowly. It was pale green and icy colours. The pirates shrieked, ‘ahoy, matey!’ at me. They wore caps and stripy tops and had swords. I was not scared though because they were just ghosts. All the same I swam away fast. November 5th When I saw the first polar bear I knew I was home. Then I saw mum, she raced towards me and gave me a big kiss and hug. My dad came and said he was relieved I was home. He thought a human took me to Sea Life because I was gone nearly a year now. But I was back! He gave me a hug crying with happy tears. Just then I remembered I had forgotten to go to the Bahamas! December 25th It was Christmas Day. Dad made us a dinner of shark and box jellyfish. I had presents for my parents from my travels. After we had eaten I gave them their presents. Mum got a pearl necklace. Dad got a giant seashell. They both loved their presents. Lucian Brown 11
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