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BOOK B<br />
TEACHING<br />
STRATEGIES<br />
FOR WRITING<br />
Word <strong>choices</strong><br />
Australian Primary Publisher<br />
of the Year 2015 and 2016
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book B)<br />
Published by R.I.C. Publications ® 2018<br />
Copyright © Diane Henderson and Rosemary Morris 2018<br />
<strong>RIC</strong>–<strong>20790</strong><br />
Titles in this series:<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book A)<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book B)<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book C)<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book D)<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book E)<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book F)<br />
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FOREWORD<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing is series of six books using modelling, guided and independent practice to teach<br />
students strategies they can use to improve the clarity, correctness and richness of their writing. The focus is on<br />
sentences, their structure, punctuation and <strong>word</strong> <strong>choices</strong> and on developing editing and proofreading skills and their<br />
habitual use.<br />
Titles in this series:<br />
• <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book A) • <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book D)<br />
• <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book B) • <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book E)<br />
• <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book C) • <strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing (Book F)<br />
TABLE OF CONTENTS<br />
Teacher notes ........................................................................................................................ iv–v<br />
Class recording sheets<br />
Assessment activities ..................................................................................................... vi–ix<br />
Assessment writing .......................................................................................................... x–xi<br />
Student writing checklist ........................................................................................................ xii<br />
Student self-evaluation ......................................................................................................... xiii<br />
WORD CHOICES<br />
Unit 1 Nouns, noun groups and adjectives ............................................................ 2–7<br />
Unit 2 Pronouns, confusing pronouns (me/I), which pronoun? ........................... 8–13<br />
Unit 3 Verbs and adverbials ................................................................................ 14–19<br />
Unit 4 Verbs: tense, matching verbs .................................................................. 20–25<br />
Assessment................................................................................................................... 26–29<br />
SENTENCE STRUCTURE<br />
Unit 5 Sentences, <strong>word</strong> order, questions ........................................................... 30–35<br />
Unit 6 Sentence beginnings ............................................................................... 36–41<br />
Unit 7 Conjunctions ............................................................................................ 42–47<br />
Unit 8 Paragraphs ............................................................................................... 48–53<br />
Assessment................................................................................................................... 54–57<br />
PUNCTUATION<br />
Unit 9 Using punctuation in sentences .............................................................. 58–63<br />
Unit 10 Full stops, capital letters, commas, direct speech ................................. 64–69<br />
Unit 11 Apostrophes in contractions ................................................................... 70–75<br />
Unit 12 Apostrophes <strong>for</strong> possession .................................................................... 76–81<br />
Assessment................................................................................................................... 82–85<br />
EDITING AND PROOFREADING<br />
Unit 13<br />
Unit 14<br />
Unit 15<br />
Unit 16<br />
Spelling (vowel sounds), sentence structure,<br />
punctuation, <strong>word</strong> <strong>choices</strong>, editing ........................................................ 86–91<br />
Spelling (more vowel sounds), sentence structure,<br />
punctuation, <strong>word</strong> <strong>choices</strong>, editing ......................................................... 92–97<br />
Spelling (suffixes), sentence structure,<br />
punctuation, <strong>word</strong> <strong>choices</strong>, editing ....................................................... 98–103<br />
Spelling (homophones), sentence structure,<br />
punctuation, <strong>word</strong> <strong>choices</strong>, editing ..................................................... 104–109<br />
Assessment............................................................................................................... 110–113<br />
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TEACHER NOTES<br />
ABOUT WRITING<br />
A good writer is not simply one who knows about and can<br />
use text types. A good writer is one with the capacity to<br />
produce interesting, in<strong>for</strong>mative, grammatically correct<br />
text, <strong>for</strong> a specific purpose, that achieves any writer’s<br />
intent – clear, precise communication.<br />
TEACHING WRITING<br />
Students can and should be taught strategies that will<br />
help them to write better. These include improvements<br />
in <strong>word</strong> <strong>choices</strong>, sentence structure, punctuation and<br />
editing and proofreading. <strong>Writing</strong> strategies taught<br />
should be modelled, discussed and then applied, firstly<br />
with teacher support and then independently. However,<br />
the emphasis should always be on the writing process,<br />
which requires <strong>for</strong>ethought, planning and a rational,<br />
measured approach in order to produce the desired<br />
outcome. Editing and proofreading are essential<br />
components of any writing. It is important that students<br />
edit and proofread habitually, with a specific purpose,<br />
and concentrate on the careful consideration of each<br />
sentence, one at a time. Activities provided in this series<br />
encourage students to think about appropriate aspects<br />
of their writing be<strong>for</strong>e, during and after the process.<br />
LESSON PROCEDURE<br />
Introduction<br />
Discuss the text title with students. Ask <strong>for</strong> their<br />
interpretations of what the title could mean.<br />
Discuss the text type. Why does it fit into this category?<br />
What are the specific features of this type of text?<br />
Guide the discussion to introduce the teaching points/<br />
strategies to be covered during the course of the unit.<br />
For example, check they understand terms such as noun<br />
group, adverbial, sentence, paragraph and comma.<br />
Development<br />
Read and discuss the text, either in groups or as a<br />
class. Assist students with any unfamiliar vocabulary or<br />
expressions.<br />
Differentiation<br />
Work through the introductory activities with the class<br />
as a whole, ensuring students understand what is<br />
required of them.<br />
Work with those requiring additional assistance while<br />
the remainder of the class work independently on the<br />
activities.<br />
ASSESSMENT<br />
An assessment is included <strong>for</strong> each unit in the book.<br />
Because of the way it is structured, this assessment<br />
will allow you to see individual student’s understandings<br />
as well as any common points of weakness which may<br />
require further assistance.<br />
FORMAT<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> strategies <strong>for</strong> writing is organised into four<br />
sections:<br />
Word <strong>choices</strong><br />
Punctuation<br />
Sentence structure<br />
Editing and proofreading<br />
Each section has four units of work and one assessment<br />
unit.<br />
<strong>Teaching</strong> units<br />
Each six-page unit of work has a specific focus, two<br />
teacher pages and four activity pages.<br />
Assessment units<br />
• Following each section is a four-page unit of<br />
assessment activities–one page <strong>for</strong> each unit.<br />
• Answers are provided in the teacher pages <strong>for</strong> that<br />
unit.<br />
• Teacher record sheets – see pages vi–ix.<br />
Assessment writing tasks<br />
• A suggested paragraph writing topic <strong>for</strong> each unit is<br />
provided on the teacher pages.<br />
• Teacher recording sheet – see pages x–xi.<br />
• Student writing checklist – see page xii.<br />
• Student self-evaluation – see page xiii.<br />
Review<br />
In pairs or small groups, students review their answers,<br />
giving their reasoning where required and critiquing the<br />
longer sentence or paragraph responses.<br />
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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />
TEACHER INFORMATION<br />
UNIT 1<br />
NOUNS, NOUN GROUPS<br />
AND ADJECTIVES<br />
UNIT 1<br />
NOUNS, NOUN GROUPS<br />
AND ADJECTIVES<br />
Focus<br />
Word <strong>choices</strong> – nouns, noun groups and adjectives<br />
Progression<br />
Recognise<br />
Students will recognise a noun/noun group/adjective from<br />
modelled examples.<br />
Choose<br />
Students will choose in<strong>for</strong>mative nouns/noun groups/adjectives<br />
from given examples, with teacher support.<br />
Use<br />
Students will choose and use appropriate, in<strong>for</strong>mative nouns/noun<br />
groups/adjectives in supplied and self-written sentences.<br />
Definition of terms<br />
Nouns are <strong>word</strong>s used to name people, places, things, feelings and<br />
ideas.<br />
A noun group is a noun with other <strong>word</strong>s used to name people,<br />
places, things, feelings and ideas.<br />
Adjectives are describing <strong>word</strong>s adding to or changing the<br />
meaning of a noun or pronoun.<br />
Introduction<br />
Good writers improve their writing by their choice of <strong>word</strong>s used<br />
to correctly name people, places, things, feelings and ideas. They<br />
can choose <strong>word</strong>s to add in<strong>for</strong>mation to nouns to make a more<br />
precise noun group. Noun groups have a noun, plus:<br />
• a determiner; e.g. the fish, many chips<br />
• a possessive; e.g. the boy’s pasta, Dad’s food<br />
• an adjective; e.g. tasty meal, sun-dried tomatoes<br />
LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />
Introduction<br />
• Discuss the text title and layout with students.<br />
• Do they think the text will be an imaginative story or will it be giving<br />
them in<strong>for</strong>mation?<br />
• Why do they think this? What are some of the features of in<strong>for</strong>mative<br />
text?<br />
• What is the purpose of the illustrations?<br />
• List foods they like to eat. Do they know which country their favourite<br />
food is from?<br />
• Introduce the term ‘noun’ and explain that the <strong>word</strong>s naming different<br />
foods are nouns.<br />
• Read the text with or to the class.<br />
• Identify some of the nouns used in the text to name foods.<br />
• Identify nouns used to name people places and things.<br />
• Identify nouns with capital letters. What do these nouns name? Why<br />
do these nouns have capital letters?<br />
Nouns – Page 5<br />
• Read and discuss the definition at the top of the page.<br />
• Explain that the text is divided into paragraphs with subheadings<br />
which have been numbered so it will be easier to find <strong>word</strong>s.<br />
• Discuss why nouns are an important part of every sentence and why<br />
it is important <strong>for</strong> writers to think about nouns and to choose good,<br />
interesting and in<strong>for</strong>mative nouns.<br />
• Explain that good writers think about different <strong>word</strong>s to name the<br />
same thing (synonyms) be<strong>for</strong>e choosing the best one.<br />
• Work through the activities with the class as a whole, ensuring they<br />
understand what is required of them.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
Noun groups – Page 6<br />
ANSWERS<br />
Nouns – Page 5<br />
1. (a) people<br />
(b) honey<br />
(c) drink<br />
(d) Aztecs<br />
2. (a) damper<br />
(b) sandwich<br />
(c) chocolate<br />
(d) pasta<br />
3. Teacher check<br />
Noun groups – Page 6<br />
1. (a) thick dough<br />
(b) most popular food<br />
(c) more than a thousand years<br />
2.–3. Teacher check<br />
4. Answers may include:<br />
sun-dried tomatoes, Australian bread, a heavy iron camp oven<br />
5. Teacher check<br />
Adjectives – Page 7<br />
1. Teacher check<br />
2. (a) solid<br />
(b) ancient<br />
(c) Swiss<br />
3.–5. Teacher check<br />
ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />
Assessment activity – Page 26<br />
1. (a) sandwich<br />
(b) Chocolate<br />
(c) flour<br />
(d) pasta<br />
2. Teacher check<br />
3. their most popular food<br />
4.–6. Teacher check<br />
Class record sheet – Page vi<br />
ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />
• Paragraph topic – My country’s most popular food<br />
• Focus: Word <strong>choices</strong> – nouns, noun groups and adjectives<br />
Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />
• nouns; e.g. kitchen benches, camp oven<br />
• Read and discuss the definition at the top of the page.<br />
• a number; e.g. five tomatoes<br />
• Explain that often instead of using one <strong>word</strong> to name something,<br />
good writers add more in<strong>for</strong>mation by writing a group of <strong>word</strong>s.<br />
• Provide examples of noun groups including the <strong>word</strong> ‘book’ plus<br />
a determiner—e.g. my book, this book, some books—and with<br />
adjectives; e.g. a scary book.<br />
• Show by example how careful choice of noun groups can lead to a<br />
clearer understanding by the reader. (For example, The boy ran home<br />
vs The small, terrified boy ran home.)<br />
Adjectives – Page 7<br />
• Read and discuss the definition at the top of the page.<br />
• Brainstorm adjectives to describe food using their sense of<br />
taste, smell, hearing and touch. This will assist them to complete<br />
Question 5.<br />
• Provide opportunities to share their answers to Question 5.<br />
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UNIT 1<br />
WORLD FOODS<br />
Chocolate<br />
1. Chocolate came from ancient Central America. The<br />
Aztecs there made a drink from cocoa beans. But<br />
it tasted very bitter and was frothy. When chocolate<br />
was taken to Europe, people added sugar and honey.<br />
This made it sweeter to drink. It wasn’t until the 1800s<br />
that solid chocolate appeared. Now Swiss people eat<br />
chocolate more than any other people in the whole of<br />
Europe and the world.<br />
Sandwiches<br />
2. The sandwich gets its name from a British earl. Once, back in the 1700s,<br />
the Earl of Sandwich, who was busy playing cards, didn’t want to leave the<br />
table to eat. So he ordered a servant to put some meat<br />
between two slices of bread—and the sandwich was<br />
named. Although people had eaten food between<br />
bread, it didn’t have a name be<strong>for</strong>e this happened.<br />
Damper<br />
3. Damper is an Australian bread. It was made by stockmen or drovers<br />
using just flour, salt and water. It was easy to make and very filling. The<br />
ingredients they needed kept <strong>for</strong> a long time without<br />
spoiling. Today, campers still make damper, usually<br />
in a heavy iron camp oven. They also can add more<br />
ingredients to make it tastier, like cheese, chives,<br />
butter, milk and sun-dried tomatoes.<br />
Pasta<br />
4. Pasta, the most popular food in Italy today, was probably invented in a<br />
part of Italy called Sicily more than a thousand years ago! This popular<br />
food is easy to cook and is very filling. Pasta is made<br />
from flour and water, mixed into a thick dough. It is<br />
shaped into different types of pasta and dried. Today,<br />
there are about 350 different types of pasta, all with<br />
different names. For example, ‘spaghetti’ means ‘little<br />
strings’, while ‘orecchiette’ means ‘little ears’ and<br />
‘linguini’ means ‘little tongues’.<br />
UNIT 1<br />
NOUNS<br />
Nouns are naming <strong>word</strong>s <strong>for</strong> people, places and things.<br />
For example: servants, Italy, chocolate<br />
Good writers choose their nouns carefully.<br />
1. Which noun in Paragraph 1 means:<br />
(a) men, women and children<br />
(b) something made by bees<br />
(c) a liquid<br />
(d) people from a country<br />
in Central America<br />
2. Choose the best noun <strong>for</strong> each sentence.<br />
damper pasta sandwich chocolate<br />
(a) The campers cooked some<br />
over an open fire.<br />
(b) I like to put cheese and tomato in a .<br />
(c) Ice cream tastes great with<br />
topping.<br />
(d) My favourite Italian food is .<br />
3. Write an interesting sentence <strong>for</strong> each noun.<br />
(a) drovers<br />
(b) oven<br />
(c) ingredient<br />
(d) table<br />
(e) cheese<br />
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UNIT 1<br />
NOUN GROUPS<br />
A noun group is a noun with other <strong>word</strong>s which add more<br />
in<strong>for</strong>mation about the noun.<br />
For example: cold, white, frothy milk; some milk; my milk.<br />
Good writers use in<strong>for</strong>mative noun groups.<br />
1. Write the whole noun group from Paragraph 4.<br />
(a) dough<br />
(b) food<br />
(c) years<br />
2. Add some <strong>word</strong>s to each noun to make an in<strong>for</strong>mative noun group.<br />
(a) butter<br />
(b) bread<br />
(c) meat<br />
(d) sandwich<br />
3. Write an interesting sentence using one of the noun groups from Question 2.<br />
UNIT 1<br />
ADJECTIVES<br />
Adjectives are describing <strong>word</strong>s. They can tell more about a noun.<br />
For example: a delicious, tasty dish<br />
1. Choose one or two interesting adjectives you could use to describe each noun.<br />
(a) people<br />
(b) tables<br />
(c) spaghetti<br />
2. Write the adjective used in Paragraph 1 to describe each noun.<br />
(a)<br />
chocolate<br />
(b)<br />
Central America<br />
(c)<br />
people<br />
3. Use each adjective to describe a noun in an interesting sentence.<br />
(a) delicious<br />
(b) popular<br />
4. Find two noun groups from Paragraph 3.<br />
(a)<br />
(b)<br />
5. (a) Write a noun group using the <strong>word</strong> 'campers'.<br />
4. Add adjectives to make the sentences more descriptive.<br />
(a) The girl cooked some pasta.<br />
(b) A chef made a sandwich.<br />
5. Write a paragraph about your favourite food on the back of this page. Be<strong>for</strong>e<br />
you start, think about adjectives you could use to tell how it looks, tastes,<br />
smells, sounds and feels. Write some of these adjectives in the box below.<br />
(b) Use this noun group in an interesting sentence.<br />
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CLASS RECORD<br />
ASSESSMENT ACTIVITIES<br />
Date:<br />
Name Unit 1 Unit 2 Unit 3 Unit 4<br />
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CLASS RECORD<br />
Name: Unit: Date:<br />
Paragraph topic:<br />
Name<br />
Comment<br />
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STUDENT WRITING CHECKLIST<br />
Name:<br />
Date:<br />
Paragraph topic:<br />
Sentences<br />
• Does each sentence make sense by itself? .........................................................<br />
• Is it too long or too short? .....................................................................................<br />
• Do I need to join some sentences? .......................................................................<br />
• Are the beginnings interesting?............................................................................<br />
Punctuation<br />
Have I used:<br />
• capital letters to start sentences, and proper nouns?..........................................<br />
• full stops, question marks and exclamation marks?............................................<br />
• commas?................................................................................................................<br />
• apostrophes <strong>for</strong> contractions and possession?....................................................<br />
• speech marks? ......................................................................................................<br />
Words<br />
• Are there some boring verbs? ...............................................................................<br />
• Is the verb tense correct? .....................................................................................<br />
• Do some verbs need adverbials (how, when, where)?..........................................<br />
• Can I add adjectives to tell more about nouns and pronouns?.............................<br />
Spelling<br />
• I have checked <strong>for</strong> spelling errors.........................................................................<br />
• I have made corrections........................................................................................<br />
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STUDENT SELF-EVALUATION<br />
Name: Unit: Date:<br />
I wrote a paragraph about:<br />
My goal was to focus on:<br />
How well did I achieve my goal?<br />
Two things I did well in my writing were:<br />
Next time I write a paragraph I will try to:<br />
STUDENT SELF-EVALUATION<br />
Name: Unit: Date:<br />
I wrote a paragraph about:<br />
My goal was to focus on:<br />
How well did I achieve my goal?<br />
Two things I did well in my writing were:<br />
Next time I write a paragraph I will try to:<br />
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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />
UNIT 1<br />
NOUNS, NOUN GROUPS<br />
AND ADJECTIVES<br />
Focus<br />
Word <strong>choices</strong> – nouns, noun groups and adjectives<br />
Progression<br />
Recognise<br />
Students will recognise a noun/noun group/adjective from<br />
modelled examples.<br />
Choose<br />
Students will choose in<strong>for</strong>mative nouns/noun groups/adjectives<br />
from given examples, with teacher support.<br />
Use<br />
Students will choose and use appropriate, in<strong>for</strong>mative nouns/noun<br />
groups/adjectives in supplied and self-written sentences.<br />
Definition of terms<br />
Nouns are <strong>word</strong>s used to name people, places, things, feelings and<br />
ideas.<br />
A noun group is a noun with other <strong>word</strong>s used to name people,<br />
places, things, feelings and ideas.<br />
Adjectives are describing <strong>word</strong>s adding to or changing the<br />
meaning of a noun or pronoun.<br />
Introduction<br />
Good writers improve their writing by their choice of <strong>word</strong>s used<br />
to correctly name people, places, things, feelings and ideas. They<br />
can choose <strong>word</strong>s to add in<strong>for</strong>mation to nouns to make a more<br />
precise noun group. Noun groups have a noun, plus:<br />
• a determiner; e.g. the fish, many chips<br />
• a possessive; e.g. the boy’s pasta, Dad’s food<br />
• an adjective; e.g. tasty meal, sun-dried tomatoes<br />
• nouns; e.g. kitchen benches, camp oven<br />
• a number; e.g. five tomatoes<br />
LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />
Introduction<br />
• Discuss the text title and layout with students.<br />
• Do they think the text will be an imaginative story or will it be giving<br />
them in<strong>for</strong>mation?<br />
• Why do they think this? What are some of the features of in<strong>for</strong>mative<br />
text?<br />
• What is the purpose of the illustrations?<br />
• List foods they like to eat. Do they know which country their favourite<br />
food is from?<br />
• Introduce the term ‘noun’ and explain that the <strong>word</strong>s naming different<br />
foods are nouns.<br />
• Read the text with or to the class.<br />
• Identify some of the nouns used in the text to name foods.<br />
• Identify nouns used to name people places and things.<br />
• Identify nouns with capital letters. What do these nouns name? Why<br />
do these nouns have capital letters?<br />
Nouns – Page 5<br />
• Read and discuss the definition at the top of the page.<br />
• Explain that the text is divided into paragraphs with subheadings<br />
which have been numbered so it will be easier to find <strong>word</strong>s.<br />
• Discuss why nouns are an important part of every sentence and why<br />
it is important <strong>for</strong> writers to think about nouns and to choose good,<br />
interesting and in<strong>for</strong>mative nouns.<br />
• Explain that good writers think about different <strong>word</strong>s to name the<br />
same thing (synonyms) be<strong>for</strong>e choosing the best one.<br />
• Work through the activities with the class as a whole, ensuring they<br />
understand what is required of them.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
Noun groups – Page 6<br />
• Read and discuss the definition at the top of the page.<br />
• Explain that often instead of using one <strong>word</strong> to name something,<br />
good writers add more in<strong>for</strong>mation by writing a group of <strong>word</strong>s.<br />
• Provide examples of noun groups including the <strong>word</strong> ‘book’ plus<br />
a determiner—e.g. my book, this book, some books—and with<br />
adjectives; e.g. a scary book.<br />
• Show by example how careful choice of noun groups can lead to a<br />
clearer understanding by the reader. (For example, The boy ran home<br />
vs The small, terrified boy ran home.)<br />
Adjectives – Page 7<br />
• Read and discuss the definition at the top of the page.<br />
• Brainstorm adjectives to describe food using their sense of<br />
taste, smell, hearing and touch. This will assist them to complete<br />
Question 5.<br />
• Provide opportunities to share their answers to Question 5.<br />
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NOUNS, NOUN GROUPS<br />
AND ADJECTIVES<br />
ANSWERS<br />
Nouns – Page 5<br />
1. (a) people<br />
(b) honey<br />
(c) drink<br />
(d) Aztecs<br />
2. (a) damper<br />
(b) sandwich<br />
(c) chocolate<br />
(d) pasta<br />
3. Teacher check<br />
ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />
Assessment activity – Page 26<br />
1. (a) sandwich<br />
(b) Chocolate<br />
(c) flour<br />
(d) pasta<br />
2. Teacher check<br />
3. their most popular food<br />
4.–6. Teacher check<br />
Class record sheet – Page vi<br />
Noun groups – Page 6<br />
1. (a) thick dough<br />
(b) most popular food<br />
(c) more than a thousand years<br />
2.–3. Teacher check<br />
ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />
• Paragraph topic – My country’s most popular food<br />
• Focus: Word <strong>choices</strong> – nouns, noun groups and adjectives<br />
Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />
4. Answers may include:<br />
sun-dried tomatoes, Australian bread, a heavy iron camp oven<br />
5. Teacher check<br />
Adjectives – Page 7<br />
1. Teacher check<br />
2. (a) solid<br />
(b) ancient<br />
(c) Swiss<br />
3.–5. Teacher check<br />
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UNIT 1<br />
WORLD FOODS<br />
Chocolate<br />
1. Chocolate came from ancient Central America. The<br />
Aztecs there made a drink from cocoa beans. But<br />
it tasted very bitter and was frothy. When chocolate<br />
was taken to Europe, people added sugar and honey.<br />
This made it sweeter to drink. It wasn’t until the 1800s<br />
that solid chocolate appeared. Now Swiss people eat<br />
chocolate more than any other people in the whole of<br />
Europe and the world.<br />
Sandwiches<br />
2. The sandwich gets its name from a British earl. Once, back in the 1700s,<br />
the Earl of Sandwich, who was busy playing cards, didn’t want to leave the<br />
table to eat. So he ordered a servant to put some meat<br />
between two slices of bread—and the sandwich was<br />
named. Although people had eaten food between<br />
bread, it didn’t have a name be<strong>for</strong>e this happened.<br />
Damper<br />
3. Damper is an Australian bread. It was made by stockmen or drovers<br />
using just flour, salt and water. It was easy to make and very filling. The<br />
ingredients they needed kept <strong>for</strong> a long time without<br />
spoiling. Today, campers still make damper, usually<br />
in a heavy iron camp oven. They also can add more<br />
ingredients to make it tastier, like cheese, chives,<br />
butter, milk and sun-dried tomatoes.<br />
Pasta<br />
4. Pasta, the most popular food in Italy today, was probably invented in a<br />
part of Italy called Sicily more than a thousand years ago! This popular<br />
food is easy to cook and is very filling. Pasta is made<br />
from flour and water, mixed into a thick dough. It is<br />
shaped into different types of pasta and dried. Today,<br />
there are about 350 different types of pasta, all with<br />
different names. For example, ‘spaghetti’ means ‘little<br />
strings’, while ‘orecchiette’ means ‘little ears’ and<br />
‘linguini’ means ‘little tongues’.<br />
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NOUNS<br />
Nouns are naming <strong>word</strong>s <strong>for</strong> people, places and things.<br />
For example: servants, Italy, chocolate<br />
Good writers choose their nouns carefully.<br />
1. Which noun in Paragraph 1 means:<br />
(a) men, women and children<br />
(b) something made by bees<br />
(c) a liquid<br />
(d) people from a country<br />
in Central America<br />
2. Choose the best noun <strong>for</strong> each sentence.<br />
damper pasta sandwich chocolate<br />
(a) The campers cooked some<br />
over an open fire.<br />
(b) I like to put cheese and tomato in a .<br />
(c) Ice cream tastes great with<br />
topping.<br />
(d) My favourite Italian food is .<br />
3. Write an interesting sentence <strong>for</strong> each noun.<br />
(a) drovers<br />
(b) oven<br />
(c) ingredient<br />
(d) table<br />
(e) cheese<br />
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UNIT 1<br />
NOUN GROUPS<br />
A noun group is a noun with other <strong>word</strong>s which add more<br />
in<strong>for</strong>mation about the noun.<br />
For example: cold, white, frothy milk; some milk; my milk.<br />
Good writers use in<strong>for</strong>mative noun groups.<br />
1. Write the whole noun group from Paragraph 4.<br />
(a) dough<br />
(b) food<br />
(c) years<br />
2. Add some <strong>word</strong>s to each noun to make an in<strong>for</strong>mative noun group.<br />
(a) butter<br />
(b) bread<br />
(c) meat<br />
(d) sandwich<br />
3. Write an interesting sentence using one of the noun groups from Question 2.<br />
4. Find two noun groups from Paragraph 3.<br />
(a)<br />
(b)<br />
5. (a) Write a noun group using the <strong>word</strong> 'campers'.<br />
(b) Use this noun group in an interesting sentence.<br />
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ADJECTIVES<br />
Adjectives are describing <strong>word</strong>s. They can tell more about a noun.<br />
For example: a delicious, tasty dish<br />
1. Choose one or two interesting adjectives you could use to describe each noun.<br />
(a) people<br />
(b) tables<br />
(c) spaghetti<br />
2. Write the adjective used in Paragraph 1 to describe each noun.<br />
(a)<br />
(b)<br />
(c)<br />
chocolate<br />
Central America<br />
people<br />
3. Use each adjective to describe a noun in an interesting sentence.<br />
(a) delicious<br />
(b) popular<br />
4. Add adjectives to make the sentences more descriptive.<br />
(a) The girl cooked some pasta.<br />
(b) A chef made a sandwich.<br />
5. Write a paragraph about your favourite food on the back of this page. Be<strong>for</strong>e<br />
you start, think about adjectives you could use to tell how it looks, tastes,<br />
smells, sounds and feels. Write some of these adjectives in the box below.<br />
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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />
UNIT 2<br />
PRONOUNS, CONFUSING PRONOUNS<br />
(ME/I), WHICH PRONOUN?<br />
Focus<br />
Word <strong>choices</strong> – pronouns, confusing pronouns (me/I), which<br />
pronoun?<br />
Progression<br />
Recognise<br />
Students will recognise a pronoun from modelled examples.<br />
Choose<br />
Students will choose appropriate pronouns from given examples,<br />
with teacher support.<br />
Use<br />
Students will choose and use correct and appropriate pronouns in<br />
supplied and self-written sentences.<br />
Definition of terms<br />
Pronouns are <strong>word</strong>s used to replace nouns.<br />
Personal pronouns are used in place of a person or thing.<br />
A relative pronoun comes be<strong>for</strong>e the clause describing the noun<br />
or pronoun to which it refers.<br />
A possessive pronoun replaces a noun identifying ownership by<br />
the person or thing to which it refers.<br />
The subject of a verb is the person or thing ‘doing’ the action.<br />
The object of a verb is the person or thing affected by the action.<br />
Introduction<br />
Good writers improve their writing by replacing nouns with<br />
appropriate and correct pronouns. The use of pronouns prevents<br />
constant repetition of a noun, making text more manageable and<br />
fluid. It is important <strong>for</strong> students to know the correct pronouns to<br />
use in the context of a sentence.<br />
Possessive pronouns are used to replace the name of a person or<br />
thing; e.g. That bag belongs to him (Dad), it is his.<br />
Note: The <strong>word</strong>s ‘his’ and ‘its’ can be used as a possessive<br />
determiner as well as a possessive pronoun; e.g. his bag, its tail.<br />
The following table shows subjective, objective and possessive<br />
personal pronouns.<br />
Note: Subjective and objective pronouns are required when the<br />
pronoun refers to the subject or object of the verb; <strong>for</strong> example,<br />
I (subject) boarded the ship. The crew welcomed us (object)<br />
onboard.<br />
LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />
Introduction<br />
• Discuss the text title with students.<br />
• What are some of the features of poetry?<br />
• Introduce the term ‘pronoun’ and explain that <strong>word</strong>s replacing nouns<br />
are pronouns. Use examples from the classroom; e.g. Tran = he,<br />
Mary = she, the board = it, the tallest boy in the class = he.<br />
• Read the text with or to the class.<br />
• Identify some of the pronouns used in the text to replace people,<br />
places and things.<br />
• Identify single and plural pronouns from the text.<br />
Pronouns – Page 11<br />
Personal pronouns<br />
Person Subjective Objective Emphatic/<br />
reflexive<br />
• Read and discuss the definition at the top of the page.<br />
Possessive<br />
First singular I me myself mine<br />
Second you you yourself yours<br />
Third (male) he him himself his<br />
Third (female) she her herself hers<br />
Third (neuter) it it itself its<br />
First plural we us ourselves ours<br />
Second you you yourselves yours<br />
Third they them themselves theirs<br />
The relative pronouns ‘who’, ‘which’ and ‘that’ are used to refer to<br />
nouns and pronouns; e.g., the boy who, he who, the team that, the<br />
book which.<br />
The correct use of ‘who’ <strong>for</strong> people is more critical. Although<br />
‘which’ and ‘that’ can both be used in many contexts, ‘which’ should<br />
strictly be used to refer to a particular desk (telling which one);<br />
e.g. the desk which is by the door. The relative pronoun ‘that’ has<br />
a broader reference and doesn’t refer to one desk; e.g. the desks<br />
that are by the door.<br />
• Explain that good writers use pronouns instead of repeating the<br />
same nouns.<br />
• Explain why it is important to use the correct pronoun <strong>for</strong> the noun it<br />
replaces.<br />
• Work through the activities with the class as a whole, ensuring they<br />
understand what is required of them.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
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PRONOUNS, CONFUSING PRONOUNS<br />
(ME/I), WHICH PRONOUN?<br />
Using pronouns – Page 12<br />
• Read the text with the class.<br />
• Discuss what is wrong with it.<br />
• Provide opportunities <strong>for</strong> students to share their thoughts <strong>for</strong><br />
Question 2.<br />
Which pronoun – who or that? me or I? – Page 13<br />
• Questions 1 and 2 focus on the relative pronouns ‘who’ and ‘that’ .<br />
• Explain that ‘who’ must be used <strong>for</strong> people. NOTE: ‘That’ and ‘which’<br />
refer to things, places and can both be used <strong>for</strong> groups of people;<br />
e.g. the team which, a class that, (but ‘the members of the team<br />
who’).<br />
• Encourage students to read the sentences <strong>for</strong> Questions 3 and 4<br />
aloud to help them to choose the correct pronouns. Encourage<br />
them to ask the question ‘Who did it?’; if the answer is ‘I’, then ‘I’ is<br />
correct; if not, it should be ‘me’.<br />
ANSWERS<br />
Pronouns – Page 11<br />
1. (a) It (b) They (c) I, it (d) She, them<br />
2. (a) she (b) he (c) they (d) it<br />
(e) they<br />
3. (a) her (b) them (c) us (d) me, him<br />
4. (a) she (b) he (c) they (d) You<br />
Using pronouns – Page 12<br />
ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />
Assessment activity – Page 27<br />
1. (a) she<br />
(b) they<br />
(c) them, us<br />
2. (a) it<br />
(b) she, it<br />
(c) she, them<br />
3. (a) that<br />
(b) who<br />
(c) that<br />
4. (a) me<br />
(b) I<br />
(c) I<br />
5. The children ran to the pond. They were surprised to see a big<br />
green frog. It was croaking. It jumped away when it saw them.<br />
Class record sheet – Page vi<br />
ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />
• Paragraph topic – In my garden<br />
• Focus: Word <strong>choices</strong> – pronouns, confusing pronouns (me/I), which<br />
pronouns?<br />
Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />
1. (a) The nouns are repeated and not replaced by pronouns.<br />
(b) The boy ran to the door, opened it and greeted his friend.<br />
She wanted to see his new toy. It was a yellow truck. It was<br />
shiny. The boy’s father was there. He gave them a snack.<br />
2. Teacher check<br />
Which pronoun — who or that? me or I? – Page 13<br />
1. (a) that (b) who (c) who<br />
2. Teacher check<br />
3. (a) me (b) I (c) me (d) I<br />
4. (a) ✘ (b) ✘ (c) ✓<br />
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UNIT 2<br />
IN MY GARDEN<br />
1. There’s a cat that roams through my yard<br />
Though the gates are locked and barred<br />
It scratches and digs<br />
Scattering leaves and twigs—<br />
Makes cleaning them up so hard<br />
2. There are two birds that sit in my tree<br />
They sing me concerts <strong>for</strong> free<br />
Though they’re ever so small<br />
They warble and call<br />
But when I get close, they flee<br />
3. There’s a frog that lives near the pond<br />
Of it I’m really quite fond<br />
It creaks and it croaks<br />
Saying, 'Here I am, folks'<br />
So I look, but it’s always gone<br />
4. There’s a spider among the green leaves<br />
A web of fine silk she weaves<br />
She catches big flies<br />
Nearly twice her size<br />
And eats them <strong>for</strong> tea, I believe<br />
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PRONOUNS<br />
A pronoun is used to replace a noun/noun group.<br />
For example: ‘the birds’ – they; ‘a frog’ – it<br />
1. Circle the pronouns in these sentences.<br />
(a) The cat roams in the park. It is black.<br />
(b) Two birds sit in the tree. They sing sweetly.<br />
(c) A frog lives in the pond. I am fond of it.<br />
(d) A spider catches flies. She eats them <strong>for</strong> tea.<br />
2. Circle the correct pronoun in these sentences.<br />
(a) My sister is tall and he she is kind.<br />
(b) Her dad has brown hair and he she has blue eyes.<br />
(c) All the girls swam in the pool, then he she they played.<br />
(d) The snake caught a spider, then he she it slithered away.<br />
(e) The boys watched TV. Later, he she they read books.<br />
3. Choose a pronoun to write in each space.<br />
them him her me us<br />
(a) See that girl over there? Please give this to .<br />
(b) I like frogs but my sister doesn’t like .<br />
(c) We are going swimming, so please come with .<br />
(d) My son is lost, please help find .<br />
4. Write a correct pronoun in the space.<br />
(a) Mary is my friend and<br />
(b) Bob plays cricket and<br />
(c) Dad and Mum went to the beach and<br />
is pretty.<br />
enjoys football too.<br />
had a swim.<br />
(d)<br />
are my best friend.<br />
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UNIT 2<br />
USING PRONOUNS<br />
The boy ran to the door, opened the door and<br />
greeted his friend. His friend wanted to see the<br />
boy’s new toy. The new toy was a yellow truck.<br />
The yellow truck was shiny. The boy’s father<br />
was there. The boy’s father gave the children<br />
a snack.<br />
1. Read the text.<br />
(a) What is the problem?<br />
(b) Change all the underlined nouns to pronouns and write the new text.<br />
2. Write interesting sentences using the pronouns.<br />
(a) them<br />
(b) you<br />
(c) him<br />
(d) hers<br />
(e) mine<br />
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WHICH PRONOUN —<br />
WHO OR THAT? ME OR I?<br />
Good writers use the pronoun ‘who’ <strong>for</strong> people and ‘that’ or<br />
‘which’ <strong>for</strong> everything except people.<br />
For example: The gardener who grew the flowers …<br />
The flowers that were growing in the garden …<br />
1. Add ‘who’ or ‘that’.<br />
(a) The birds<br />
were in the trees flew away.<br />
(b) They were frightened by a group of boys<br />
were fighting.<br />
(c) The people<br />
go to the park enjoy it.<br />
2. Finish the sentences using 'who' or 'that'.<br />
(a) The children, ,<br />
(b) The swings, ,<br />
Good writers use ‘me’ or’ I’ correctly.<br />
They use I when I am the person doing something … I am reading.<br />
They use me when I am NOT the person doing something … Mum is reading<br />
to me.<br />
3. Write 'I' or 'me' in the space.<br />
.<br />
.<br />
(a) The gardener gave<br />
some flowers.<br />
(b)<br />
(c) Mum told<br />
(d)<br />
took them home.<br />
to put them in a vase.<br />
think they look beautiful.<br />
4. Is the pronoun correct? Put a tick or cross in the box.<br />
(a) My sister saw I getting some flowers.<br />
(b) She wasn’t happy with I.<br />
(c) Next time, I won’t show the flowers to her.<br />
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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />
UNIT 3<br />
VERBS AND ADVERBIALS<br />
Focus<br />
Word <strong>choices</strong> – verbs and adverbials<br />
Progression<br />
Recognise<br />
Students will recognise a verb or adverbial from modelled<br />
examples.<br />
Choose<br />
Students will choose the more or most in<strong>for</strong>mative verb or<br />
adverbial from given examples, with teacher support.<br />
Use<br />
Students will choose and use appropriate, in<strong>for</strong>mative verbs or<br />
adverbials in supplied and self-written sentences.<br />
Definition of terms<br />
Verbs or ‘doing’ <strong>word</strong>s show actions or states of being or having.<br />
Adverbials are <strong>word</strong>s or groups of <strong>word</strong>s that add in<strong>for</strong>mation,<br />
usually to a verb or verb group. They can tell how (manner), when<br />
(time) or where (place) something happens. Adverbs can modify<br />
(add in<strong>for</strong>mation to) any <strong>word</strong>s that are not nouns or pronouns.<br />
(These are modified by adjectives.)<br />
Paragraphs are sections of writing dealing with a particular<br />
subject or point, beginning on a new line.<br />
Persuasive texts are written to put <strong>for</strong>ward a position which the<br />
writer wishes to persuade others to share.<br />
Introduction<br />
Good writers improve their writing by their choice of in<strong>for</strong>mative<br />
and appropriate verbs and adverbials.<br />
LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />
Introduction<br />
• Discuss the text title with students.<br />
• What do they know about birds?<br />
• List things birds do.<br />
• Introduce the term ‘verbs’ and explain that the <strong>word</strong>s telling what<br />
birds do are verbs.<br />
• Read the text with or to the class.<br />
• Ask students to identify the text type and discuss the purpose and<br />
features of a persuasive text. Identify the writer’s position stated in<br />
Paragraph 1, the arguments organised in separate paragraphs and<br />
the restating of the writer’s position in the final paragraph.<br />
• Identify some of the action verbs used in the text.<br />
Verbs – Page 17<br />
• Read and discuss the definition at the top of the page.<br />
• Explain that the text is divided into paragraphs which have been<br />
numbered so it will be easier to find <strong>word</strong>s that will needed.<br />
• Discuss why verbs are an important part of every sentence and why<br />
it is important <strong>for</strong> writers to think about verbs and choose good,<br />
interesting and in<strong>for</strong>mative verbs.<br />
• Work through the activities with the class as a whole, ensuring they<br />
understand what is required of them.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while the remainder<br />
of the class work independently on the activities.<br />
Boring verbs – Page 18<br />
• Review students’ understanding of the term ‘verb’ and ask them to<br />
provide examples.<br />
• Discuss the overuse of boring verbs like 'saw', 'went' and 'said' and<br />
give alternatives <strong>for</strong> 'said', such as 'yelled', 'screamed', 'whispered'.<br />
• Explain that better verbs can give more in<strong>for</strong>mation about what is<br />
happening and can change the meaning of a sentence.<br />
• Brainstorm and list more in<strong>for</strong>mative verbs <strong>for</strong> got. This will assist<br />
students to complete Questions 2 and 3.<br />
Adverbials – Page 19<br />
• Read and discuss the definition of adverbials and the examples<br />
given.<br />
• Explain that good writers add adverbials to give the reader more<br />
in<strong>for</strong>mation about verbs and to make their writing more interesting.<br />
• Brainstorm and make three lists of adverbials that could tell how,<br />
when and where<br />
• In pairs or small groups, students review their answers.<br />
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VERBS AND ADVERBIALS<br />
ANSWERS<br />
Verbs – Page 17<br />
1. (a) gobbled<br />
(b) swoop<br />
(c) chased<br />
2. (a) chase, flit, perch, stalk, fly, scare, catch, swoop<br />
(b) sing, screech, squawk, tweet<br />
(c) Teacher check<br />
3. (a) Teacher check<br />
(b) Answers may include—see, notice, observe, spy, peek,<br />
glimpse<br />
4. Teacher check<br />
Boring verbs – Page 18<br />
ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />
Assessment activity – Page 28<br />
1. (a) sang<br />
(b) flew<br />
(c) scared<br />
2.–5. Teacher check<br />
Class record sheet – Page vi<br />
ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />
• Paragraph topic – My favourite pet<br />
• Focus: Word <strong>choices</strong> – verbs and adverbials<br />
Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />
1. (a)–(b) Teacher check<br />
(c) Answers may include —walked, ran, travelled, drove, cycled,<br />
flew, skipped<br />
2. (a)–(c) Teacher check<br />
(d) Answers may include—earned, received, bought, caught,<br />
obtained, found, grabbed<br />
3.–4. Teacher check<br />
Adverbials – Page 19<br />
1. (a) around<br />
(b) bravely<br />
(c) beautifully<br />
2. (a) how<br />
(b) when<br />
(c) where<br />
3.–6. Teacher check<br />
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UNIT 3<br />
THE BEST BIRDS<br />
1. Wrens are the cutest, most interesting<br />
birds. They are my favourites and I think<br />
they should be yours, too.<br />
2. I watch these beautiful little birds move<br />
around our garden. Other birds just<br />
seem to fly around in a dull and boring<br />
way, but wrens are different. They don’t<br />
just fly. They flit around from place to<br />
place at astonishing speed. Sometimes<br />
they move so fast it’s hard to keep track<br />
of them. One minute a wren sits on the<br />
back of a chair and the next it perches<br />
on a nearby bush.<br />
3. It’s amazing to watch these wonderful<br />
birds as they cleverly stalk and catch<br />
small flying insects. They never seem to get tired of chasing and eating<br />
insects. Sometimes just watching them work makes me feel tired.<br />
4. I think these tiny birds are very attractive. Although they are short and<br />
dumpy, with long legs and a thin beak, they look cute. Most wrens are<br />
brown, but there are some amazingly colourful blue wrens, found only<br />
in Australia. If they are males, these superb Australian fairy-wrens have<br />
bright blue and black feathers. Sadly, the females are mostly brown. But<br />
being colourful isn’t everything, is it?<br />
5. One of the things I like about birds is that they sing. I must admit not every<br />
bird sounds great, but wrens do sing well. Their songs are rich and bubbly<br />
and surprisingly loud <strong>for</strong> such small birds. I’m sure you enjoy listening to<br />
wrens as much as I do.<br />
6. I see these small birds bossing much bigger birds around and scaring them<br />
away. They sometimes do this with the help of a friend or two. I think they<br />
must be very brave and clever to do this.<br />
7. Some people may like other birds more than wrens, but how can they think<br />
this? Are their favourite birds as clever, cute, fast, brave and as good to<br />
listen to as my favourites? Can they see their birds almost every day?<br />
8. I love wrens. They are my favourites and I hope they’ll be your favourites<br />
too.<br />
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VERBS<br />
A verb is a doing <strong>word</strong>.<br />
For example: We write stories. This bird talks.<br />
Good writers choose their action verbs carefully.<br />
For example: Instead of writing, ‘Birds flew in trees.’, a better<br />
writer could write, ‘Birds flitted among the trees.’.<br />
1. Choose the best verb <strong>for</strong> each sentence.<br />
chased swoop gobbled<br />
(a) The hungry bird<br />
(b) I noticed an eagle<br />
(c) The wrens<br />
up the insect.<br />
a bigger bird.<br />
down from the sky.<br />
2. sing chase screech flit squawk tweet<br />
stalk perch scare fly catch swoop<br />
(a) Circle the verbs that can tell how birds move.<br />
(b) Cross the ones that can tell how birds sound.<br />
(c) Choose one to use in an interesting sentence.<br />
3. Read the verbs. They are from Paragraph 2.<br />
watch perches move fly<br />
(a) Write an interesting sentence using one of the verbs.<br />
(b) Write two other verbs <strong>for</strong> watch.<br />
4. (a) Write an interesting verb from Paragraph 6.<br />
(b) Write your own sentence using this verb.<br />
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UNIT 3<br />
BORING VERBS<br />
We use some verbs like went too often. A better verb would tell<br />
how something went.<br />
1. Write each sentence using a better verb.<br />
(a) The birds went to the trees.<br />
(b) We went to the park.<br />
(c) Write three more interesting verbs <strong>for</strong> went.<br />
2. Write a better <strong>word</strong> <strong>for</strong> 'got' in each sentence.<br />
(a) The children got into the bus.<br />
(b) The bus got up the hill.<br />
(c) They got out of the bus.<br />
(d) Write three more interesting verbs <strong>for</strong> 'got'.<br />
3. (a) Write a sentence using the verb 'got'.<br />
(b) Write the sentence again using a better, more descriptive verb.<br />
4. Write two sentences about watching birds. You must not use the verb 'saw'.<br />
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ADVERBIALS<br />
An adverbial can tell when, how or where the verb happens.<br />
For example: Yesterday (when) the bird flew quickly (how) into the trees. (where)<br />
1. Circle the adverbial in each sentence telling more about the verb.<br />
(a) The busy little birds flew around.<br />
(b) Some wrens bravely flew and attacked a big black bird.<br />
(c) The colourful birds sang beautifully.<br />
2. Circle the adverbial <strong>for</strong> each verb. Write how, when or where on the line.<br />
(a) Wrens sing loudly.<br />
(b) Often birds catch insects.<br />
(c) Fairy wrens live in Australia.<br />
3. Add an adverbial to tell 'how'.<br />
(a) The birds flew .<br />
(b) They moved .<br />
4. Add an adverbial to tell 'when'.<br />
(a) The birds flew .<br />
(b) They moved .<br />
5. Add an adverbial to tell 'where'.<br />
(a) The birds flew .<br />
(b) They moved .<br />
6. (a) Write a sentence about how something jumped. Make it interesting.<br />
(b) Write the adverbial from your sentence.<br />
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TEACHER INFORMATION<br />
UNIT 4<br />
VERBS: TENSE, MATCHING VERBS<br />
Focus<br />
Word <strong>choices</strong> – choosing correct verbs: tense, consistency, subject, regular,<br />
irregular<br />
Progression<br />
Recognise<br />
Students will recognise the tense of a verb; subject–verb agreement (asking<br />
‘who or what is doing the action?’); regular and irregular verbs; and auxiliary<br />
verbs, from modelled examples.<br />
Choose<br />
Students will choose the tense of a verb; subject–verb agreement; regular<br />
and irregular verbs; and auxiliary verbs, from given examples, with teacher<br />
support.<br />
Use<br />
Students will use the correct tense; subject–verb agreement; regular and<br />
irregular verbs; and auxiliary verbs in self-written sentences and paragraphs.<br />
Definition of terms<br />
Verbs or ‘doing’ <strong>word</strong>s show actions or states of being or having.<br />
Verb tense – happening now = present tense; already happened = past<br />
tense; yet to happen = future tense.<br />
Subject–verb agreement – The <strong>for</strong>m of the verb must match who or what is<br />
per<strong>for</strong>ming the action; e.g. I am reading, They are reading.<br />
The main verb describes the action.<br />
Auxiliary verbs are verbs added to the main verb which can change its<br />
tense; e.g. He swims, He is swimming. He had been swimming.<br />
Regular verbs follow a regular pattern when changing from the present to<br />
the past tense; e.g. shop – shopped, rate – rated.<br />
Irregular verbs are verbs which do not follow a regular patterns when<br />
changing from the present to the past tense; e.g. buy – bought, swim – swam,<br />
fly – flew.<br />
Note: Auxiliary verbs<br />
The verbs to be and to have are used as auxiliary or ‘helper’ verbs. They have<br />
many <strong>for</strong>ms which change with subject and the tense. See the chart below.<br />
The verb ‘to be’<br />
The verb ‘to have’<br />
Person Pronoun Present Past Present Past<br />
First I am was have had<br />
Second you are were have had<br />
third he/she/it is was has had<br />
First we are were have had<br />
Second you are were have had<br />
Third they are were have had<br />
LESSON NOTES AND PLANS<br />
Introduction<br />
• Discuss the text title with students.<br />
• What do they think the text may be about?<br />
• Ask students to identify the text type.<br />
• Revise the term ‘verbs’ and list some examples of what<br />
people do (verbs).<br />
• Read the text to or with the class.<br />
• Identify some of the action verbs used in the text.<br />
Verb tense – Page 23<br />
• Read and discuss the definition at the top of the page.<br />
• Discuss why verbs are an important part of every sentence<br />
and why it is important <strong>for</strong> writers to use the correct verb<br />
tense.<br />
• Discuss and elicit from students the tense of the story<br />
(past tense —it has happened).<br />
• Work through the activities with the class as a whole,<br />
ensuring they understand what is required of them.<br />
• Work with those requiring additional assistance while<br />
the remainder of the class work independently on the<br />
activities.<br />
Past tense verbs – Page 24<br />
• Review students’ understanding of the term ‘verb’ and ask<br />
them to provide examples.<br />
• Discuss changing verbs to past tense. Most add ‘d’ or ‘ed’.<br />
• Ask students to list some common irregular past tenses.<br />
For example; catch–caught, say–said.<br />
Matching verbs — Page 25<br />
• Discuss with students how verb <strong>for</strong>ms change, depending<br />
on who or what is doing the action. Use simple examples; I<br />
am running; we are running.<br />
• Introduce the concept of the subject; i.e. ask who or what<br />
is doing the action. For example; Mum is watching Dad. Ask<br />
‘who or what is watching’. Mum (subject) is watching.<br />
• Work through the activities with the class as a whole,<br />
ensuring they understand what is required of them.<br />
• Provide opportunities to share and discuss sentences from<br />
Question 4 with a partner.<br />
Introduction<br />
Good writers improve their writing by their choice and use of correct verb<br />
<strong>for</strong>ms <strong>for</strong> emphasis and to make meaning explicit.<br />
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UNIT 4<br />
VERBS: TENSE, MATCHING VERBS<br />
ANSWERS<br />
Verb tense – Page 23<br />
1. (a) past<br />
(b) future<br />
(c) present<br />
2. Teacher check<br />
3. (a) shook<br />
(b) will walk<br />
(c) is watching/watches<br />
(d) will start<br />
Past tense verbs – Page 24<br />
1. Teacher check<br />
2. (a) came<br />
(b) took<br />
(c) saw<br />
3. Answers will vary. Teacher check<br />
4. Teacher check<br />
Matching verbs – Page 27<br />
1. (a) Dad (was shaking)<br />
(b) Mum (called)<br />
(c) the computer (was)<br />
2. (a) ✓<br />
(b) ✘—was wondering<br />
(c) ✘—were appearing<br />
(d) ✓<br />
ASSESSMENT ANSWERS<br />
Assessment activity – Page 29<br />
1. (a) past<br />
(b) present<br />
2. (a) sucks/sucked<br />
(b) climbs/climbed<br />
(c) will cook<br />
3. (a) saw<br />
(b) said<br />
(c) caught<br />
4. Teacher check<br />
5. (a) was writing/Owen<br />
(b) was/the computer<br />
6. (a) ✓<br />
(b) ✘<br />
(c) ✓<br />
(d) ✓<br />
Class record sheet – Page vi<br />
ASSESSMENT WRITING<br />
• Paragraph topic – Talk to me!<br />
• Focus: Word <strong>choices</strong> – verbs: tense, matching verbs<br />
Self-evaluation – Page xiii<br />
3.–5. Teacher check<br />
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UNIT 4<br />
DO NOT DISTURB<br />
Mum was watching Dad type on the computer.<br />
'Hello, Owen. How are you?'<br />
The answer flashed back.<br />
'I’m good, Dad. How about you and Mum?'<br />
Dad sat with his fingers above the keyboard, thinking. Then he typed with just<br />
one finger.<br />
'We’re both fine. What are you doing?'<br />
This time, the <strong>word</strong>s appeared slowly, as if Owen was thinking deeply.<br />
'<strong>Writing</strong> my blog. Oh, and "talking" to my friends.'<br />
Mum prodded Dad in the shoulder with her finger.<br />
‘Go on,’ she said, ‘ask him.’<br />
‘Not yet’, Dad hissed. ‘It’s too soon.’ He started typing again.<br />
'Did you have a good day at school, son?'<br />
'Not too bad, Dad. The teacher bellowed at Mickey ’cos he was copying my<br />
maths. But that’s all.'<br />
Mum poked Dad, harder this time, and in the ribs. He gasped and sucked<br />
in a lungful of air. He swivelled his head around to face her. She arched her<br />
eyebrows as if to say, ‘Get going!’<br />
Shaking his head, Dad typed, 'Are you<br />
doing much in about five minutes’ time,<br />
son?'<br />
'No, Dad. I should be free. Why?'<br />
'Well …' Dad paused. Then, in a great<br />
hurry, he typed, 'Well, your mother and<br />
I were wondering if perhaps you could<br />
come down from your bedroom and<br />
join us <strong>for</strong> dinner!'<br />
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VERB TENSE<br />
Verbs can tell us about what has happened in the past, what is<br />
happening now in the present and what will happen in the future.<br />
• Dad wrote the letter. (past)<br />
• Dad writes the letter. (present)<br />
• Dad will write the letter (future)<br />
1. Underline the verbs. Write ‘past’, ‘present’ or<br />
‘future’ after each sentence.<br />
(a) Mum prodded Dad.<br />
(b) Owen will answer soon.<br />
(c) He starts typing again.<br />
Think! There are little verbs that help with tense.<br />
will = future tense is/are = present tense had/were = past tense<br />
2. Write an interesting sentence about something you:<br />
(a) are doing now.<br />
(b) did yesterday.<br />
(c) will do tomorrow.<br />
3. Correct the tense of the verb and write it on the line.<br />
(a) Yesterday, he shake his head.<br />
(b) Next Monday, Owen walk to school.<br />
(c) Today, Mum watch television.<br />
(d) Tomorrow, Dad started typing again.<br />
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UNIT 4<br />
PAST TENSE VERBS<br />
Changing most verbs to the past tense is easy—we add ‘ed’ or ‘d’.<br />
For example: jump – jumped, wave – waved<br />
1. Write a short interesting sentence using the past tense of each regular verb.<br />
(a) type<br />
(b) appear<br />
(c) poke<br />
Some past tense verbs need to change more.<br />
For example: come—came, catch—caught<br />
2. Write the past tense of each verb on the line.<br />
(a) Owen comes downstairs <strong>for</strong> dinner.<br />
(b) He takes his computer to school.<br />
(c) Mum sees Dad at the keyboard.<br />
Some past tense verbs like seen and done always need a helper like has, had,<br />
have.<br />
3. Write each verb with a helper.<br />
(a) seen<br />
(c) gone<br />
(b) done<br />
(d) been<br />
4. (a) Write a sentence using 'seen' and its helper.<br />
(b) Write a sentence using 'done' and its helper.<br />
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MATCHING VERBS<br />
Verbs can also change to show who or what is doing the action<br />
and when it happened.<br />
For example: I was reading. They were reading. I am reading.<br />
She is reading.<br />
1. Circle the verb then draw a line under who or what is doing the action.<br />
(a) Dad was shaking his head.<br />
(b) Mum called them <strong>for</strong> dinner.<br />
(c) The computer was in the study.<br />
2. Put a tick or a cross after each sentence to show if the verb group is correct.<br />
(a) Dad had sucked in a lungful of air.<br />
(b) Mum was wondered about Owen.<br />
(c) The <strong>word</strong>s was appearing slowly.<br />
(d) The teacher bellowed at Mickey.<br />
3. Write a verb or verb group to match who or what is doing the action.<br />
(a) Shaking his head, Dad<br />
(b) Owen<br />
(c) Computers<br />
(d) Waiting <strong>for</strong> Owen, Mum<br />
on the computer.<br />
downstairs <strong>for</strong> his dinner.<br />
very useful.<br />
Dad.<br />
4. Write an interesting sentence about a computer. Choose your verbs<br />
carefully.<br />
5. What do you think Mum and Dad should do about Owen and his computer?<br />
Think carefully about the verbs you use and make sure they match Mum and<br />
Dad and Owen.<br />
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ASSESSMENT UNIT 1<br />
NOUNS, NOUN GROUPS, ADJECTIVES<br />
Name:<br />
Date:<br />
1. Choose the best noun <strong>for</strong> each sentence.<br />
pasta sandwich chocolate flour<br />
(a) Mum makes me a cheese<br />
<strong>for</strong> my lunch.<br />
(b)<br />
is my favourite topping <strong>for</strong> ice cream.<br />
(c) Damper is made using<br />
and water.<br />
(d) Italians love to eat .<br />
2. Write an interesting sentence using each noun.<br />
(a) honey<br />
(b) bread<br />
3. Circle the whole noun group in the sentence.<br />
This is their most popular food.<br />
4. Add some <strong>word</strong>s to make an interesting noun group.<br />
(a) oven<br />
(b) tomatoes<br />
5. Choose one or two interesting adjectives to describe each noun.<br />
(a) beans<br />
(b) cheese<br />
6. Add adjectives to make the sentences more descriptive.<br />
(a) The cook made a soup.<br />
(b) On our way home we bought some<br />
chips.<br />
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PRONOUNS, CONFUSING PRONOUNS (ME/I),<br />
WHICH PRONOUN?<br />
Name:<br />
Date:<br />
1. Circle the correct pronoun in the sentences.<br />
(a) My mum is tall and he she has brown hair.<br />
(b) The girls walked home then they he she played cricket.<br />
(c) We played against they them but they beat we us .<br />
2. Circle the pronoun in the sentences.<br />
(a) When the cat scratches and digs, it scatters leaves.<br />
(b) The spider spins a web and she catches flies in it.<br />
(c) After the spider traps the flies, she eats them.<br />
3. Add ‘who’ or ‘that’.<br />
(a) The birds<br />
(b) My friends<br />
(c) The baby birds<br />
sat in my tree flew away.<br />
saw them laughed.<br />
were in the nest squawked loudly.<br />
4. Write ‘me’ or ‘I’ in the space.<br />
(a) Dad gave<br />
(b)<br />
(c) Dad and<br />
put them in my bag.<br />
some books to carry.<br />
will read them together.<br />
5. Read the text. Change all the underlined nouns to pronouns.<br />
Write the new text.<br />
The children ran to the pond. The children were surprised to see a big green<br />
frog. The frog was croaking. The frog jumped away when it saw the children.<br />
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ASSESSMENT UNIT 3<br />
VERBS AND ADVERBIALS<br />
Name:<br />
Date:<br />
1. Choose the best verb to complete each sentence.<br />
flew scared sang<br />
(a) The birds<br />
(b) A bee<br />
(c) A large dog<br />
sweetly in the tree.<br />
around the flowers.<br />
my cat.<br />
2. Write each sentence using a more descriptive verb.<br />
(a) All the children went to the park.<br />
(b) Our family got tickets <strong>for</strong> the new show.<br />
(c) I saw my friend today.<br />
(d) My sister got onto the slide.<br />
3. Add an adverbial to tell ‘how’.<br />
(a) The large black horse galloped .<br />
(b) The schoolboys walked .<br />
4. Add an adverbial to tell ‘when’.<br />
(a) All the girls raced .<br />
(b) Small birds sing .<br />
5. Add an adverbial to tell ‘where’.<br />
(a) The children played .<br />
(b) Goldfish swam .<br />
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VERBS: TENSE, MATCHING VERBS<br />
Name:<br />
Date:<br />
1. Underline the verbs. Write ‘past’, ‘present’ or ‘future’ after each sentence.<br />
(a) Mum was watching Dad.<br />
(b) Dad is shaking his head.<br />
2. Correct the tense of the verb and write it on the line.<br />
(a) Dad suck in air.<br />
(b) Today, Owen climb the stairs.<br />
(c) Tomorrow, Mum cook dinner.<br />
3. Write the past tense of each verb on the line.<br />
(a) I see Owen on his computer.<br />
(b) Dad says to come <strong>for</strong> dinner.<br />
(c) Yesterday, we catch the bus.<br />
4. Write each verb with a helper verb.<br />
(a) come (b) gone<br />
(c) seen (d) been<br />
5. Circle the verb then draw a line under who or what is doing the action.<br />
(a) Owen was writing his blog.<br />
(b) The computer was in Owen’s bedroom.<br />
6. Put a tick or cross after each sentence to show if the verb group is correct.<br />
(a) Mum wants Owen to come <strong>for</strong> dinner.<br />
(b) Dad had shaking his head.<br />
(c) They wanted to have dinner together.<br />
(d) Owen typed on his computer.<br />
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