R J Hembree - Writers' Village University
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are important. You’ve only got to watch Billy Mays, advertising spokesperson<br />
extraordinaire, to understand how important presentation is. Billy Mays<br />
successfully persuades people like you and me that we can’t do without a certain<br />
product - brush, cloth or tool. However, even the great Billy Mays needs good copy<br />
to sell successfully. The next time he interrupts your television viewing, listen to<br />
the words he uses rather than his tone. You’ll catch the copywriter’s creed at work.<br />
This creed, AIDA (for Attention, Interest, Desire and Action) has been around<br />
almost as long as the opera of the same name. Hundreds of articles have been<br />
written on it. Google “AIDA copywriting” for all the information you need. Suffice it<br />
to say good copywriters know which emotional buttons to push to ensure the<br />
reader or viewer will re-act by writing a check or pulling out a credit card.<br />
Direct mail is another hugely successful form of copywriting and covers all<br />
the junk mail that hits your mailbox every day. It can be a postcard, a letter, a<br />
flyer, a catalogue or brochure. Every successful piece uses the AIDA creed.<br />
The next time you’re tempted to throw out your junk mail without reading it,<br />
don’t. Study each piece carefully to observe how the copywriter has used words to<br />
urge you to spend your money. Take note of the personal, one-on-one style of most<br />
direct mail. Sentences are short. Certain words appear over and over again. Look at<br />
how the writer grabs your attention, gains your interest, invokes desire and then<br />
encourages you to act – all with carefully chosen words that stir up emotion. Oh<br />
sure, you’re saying, I don’t fall for that. But if thousands, even millions, of people<br />
didn’t ‘fall for that’, direct mail marketing wouldn’t work. It does work. American<br />
Express, Publishers Clearing House, Book-of-the-Month Club are just three<br />
businesses that have used direct mail advertising successfully over the years – and<br />
have made a few copywriters extremely rich and given others an above average<br />
income.<br />
Now let’s look at the Internet. Each year, a growing number of people turn to<br />
the Internet for information, education, communication and shopping. In fact,<br />
more people now use the Internet as their primary area of research. This has<br />
opened a huge market for good copywriters. Why? Because just about every<br />
business, whether it’s a Fortune 500 company or the mom and pop store down the<br />
street, knows the value of a good website.<br />
Writing for the web takes a special kind of skill. The average person browsing<br />
the Internet takes less than seven seconds to judge a website. If the site doesn’t<br />
grab them immediately, they’ll hit the back button and go elsewhere. Sure, great<br />
graphics can make a website look interesting, but if someone has to plough<br />
through lengthy paragraphs and verbose sentences to find the information they’re<br />
looking for, they won’t hang around.<br />
Again, check out the websites of competing businesses and take note of<br />
those that work and those that don’t. You’ll find a pattern in the writing of the<br />
successful ones, and this pattern once again is emotion based. The writing appeals<br />
to you, the viewer, directly with short and simple words, sentences and<br />
paragraphs. It engages and involves you in the process, and it leads you to take<br />
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