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<strong>LITERACY</strong> <strong>BASICS</strong>:<br />
<strong>SENTENCE</strong><br />
<strong>WORKSHEETS</strong><br />
<strong>ANAT</strong> <strong>ARKIN</strong><br />
based on an idea by<br />
STUART SILLARS<br />
ILLUSTRATED BY<br />
LUCY WATSON<br />
ISBN 1 86025 428 4
The pack<br />
Student<br />
suitability<br />
Using the pack<br />
Other linked<br />
Chalkface packs<br />
The people<br />
involved<br />
Photocopy laws<br />
How to<br />
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INTRODUCTION<br />
Literacy Basics: Sentence Worksheets provides practice in writing simple<br />
sentences and in building more complex sentences including phrases<br />
and clauses. Each sheet explains basic points, gives examples and<br />
provides exercises.The pack covers the same topics as the equivalent<br />
pages on verbs and building sentences in the pack Literacy Basics:<br />
Grammar Worksheets, but with a simpler approach and vocabulary.<br />
Some of the more complex concepts covered in Literacy Basics:<br />
Grammar Worksheets are omitted from this pack and, equally, this pack<br />
goes into more detail on some concepts than Literacy Basics: Grammar<br />
Worksheets does.<br />
The pack is aimed at KS3 and KS4 students. Because the pack is<br />
photocopiable, you can use it flexibly – with individual students, small<br />
or large groups, or across a whole year set.<br />
The pack provides a complete course in writing and building sentences<br />
but you can also use the worksheets separately. Where students have<br />
done little previous work on sentences, you may need to go over the<br />
grammatical points covered in each sheet with them. In other cases,<br />
students should be able to tackle the worksheets on their own. The eight<br />
‘check what you know’ sheets can be used either for testing purposes or<br />
for revision. If you have a query about how best to use the pack, we are<br />
happy to help; please write to us at the address below.<br />
Literacy Basics: Grammar Worksheets provides parallel coverage of<br />
many of the topics in this pack, in a format suitable for more advanced<br />
students. You may also find the following packs useful: Literacy Basics:<br />
Punctuation Worksheets, Literacy Basics: Word Worksheets, Literacy<br />
Basics: Spelling Worksheets 1, 2 and 3.<br />
Anat Arkin, the author of this pack, is a freelance journalist and former<br />
teacher of English and Communication. Stuart Sillars, the author of<br />
Literacy Basics: Grammar Worksheets, is a writer and freelance lecturer.<br />
This pack was illustrated by Lucy Watson, Rob Redfern was the editorial<br />
co-ordinator and Bridget Gibbs was the layout artist and copy editor.<br />
The text and pictures in this pack belong to The Chalkface Project Ltd.<br />
However, you may photocopy the pages, provided you do so only for<br />
use within your own institution. If you wish to photocopy them for any<br />
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Literacy Basics: Sentence Worksheets © The Chalkface Project Ltd, 1995<br />
ISBN 1 86025 428 4 LBSE Last updated: 19/10/01<br />
Previously published as Grammar Rules OK! Sentences
THE FRAMEWORK FOR TEACHING ENGLISH<br />
The topics covered in this pack come under the sentence level objectives in the Framework<br />
for teaching English: Years 7, 8 and 9.<br />
Word level<br />
· Spelling<br />
· Spelling strategies<br />
· Vocabularies<br />
Sentence level<br />
· Sentence<br />
construction &<br />
punctuation<br />
· Paragraphing &<br />
cohesion<br />
· Stylistic<br />
conventions<br />
· Standard English &<br />
language variation<br />
Text level: Reading<br />
· Research & study<br />
skills<br />
· Reading for<br />
meaning<br />
· Study of literary<br />
texts<br />
· Understanding the<br />
author’s craft<br />
Text level: Writing<br />
· Imagine, explore,<br />
entertain<br />
· Inform, explain,<br />
describe<br />
· Persuade, argue,<br />
advise<br />
· Analyse, review,<br />
comment<br />
· Plan, draft &<br />
present<br />
Text level: Speaking<br />
& Listening<br />
· Speaking<br />
· Listening<br />
· Group discussion<br />
& interaction<br />
· Drama<br />
The overall aim of the Framework is to enable all pupils to develop sophisticated literacy<br />
skills. By the end of Year 9, each pupil is expected to be:<br />
A shrewd and fluent independent reader:<br />
• orchestrating a range of strategies to get at meaning in text, including inferential and<br />
evaluative skills;<br />
• sensitive to the way meanings are made;<br />
• reading in different ways for different purposes, including skimming to quickly pick up<br />
the gist of a text, scanning to locate specific information, close reading to follow<br />
complex passages and re-reading to uncover layers of meaning;<br />
• reflective, critical and discriminating in response to a wide range of printed and visual<br />
texts.<br />
A confident writer:<br />
• able to write for a variety of purposes and audiences, knowing the conventions and<br />
beginning to adapt and develop them;<br />
• able to write imaginatively, effectively and correctly;<br />
• able to shape, express, experiment with and manipulate sentences;<br />
• able to organise, develop, spell and punctuate writing accurately.<br />
An effective speaker and listener:<br />
• with the clarity and confidence to convey a point of view or information;<br />
• using talk to explore, create, question and revise ideas, recognising language as a tool<br />
for learning;<br />
• able to work effectively with others in a range of roles;<br />
• having a varied repertoire of styles, which are used appropriately.<br />
The following lesson structure is highly recommended to teachers using the Framework:<br />
1 Short lesson starter activity (e.g. spelling, vocabulary) lasting 10–15 minutes<br />
2 Introduce the main teaching points (e.g. teacher exposition or questioning)<br />
3 Develop the main teaching points (e.g. through group activity)<br />
4 Plenary to draw out the learning (e.g. through feedback and presentation), lasting 5–10<br />
minutes
.CONTENTS.<br />
1 WHAT ARE <strong>SENTENCE</strong>S?<br />
2 WHO DID IT?<br />
3 CHECK WHAT YOU KNOW: 1<br />
4 VERBS<br />
5 LIVING VERBS<br />
6 MORE ABOUT VERBS<br />
7 CHECK WHAT YOU KNOW: 2<br />
8 LONGER <strong>SENTENCE</strong>S<br />
9 ACTION PHRASES<br />
10 ACTION CLAUSES<br />
11 CHECK WHAT YOU KNOW: 3<br />
12 DESCRIBING DO-ERS<br />
13 PHRASES FOR DO-ERS<br />
14 CLAUSES FOR DO-ERS<br />
15 CHECK WHAT YOU KNOW: 4<br />
16 PHRASES WITH -ING<br />
17 WHO DOES WHAT?<br />
18 CHECK WHAT YOU KNOW: 5<br />
19 ONE THING AFTER ANOTHER<br />
20 IF AND UNLESS<br />
21 CHECK WHAT YOU KNOW: 6<br />
22 SO, AS AND BECAUSE<br />
23 BUILDING <strong>SENTENCE</strong>S<br />
24 MORE <strong>SENTENCE</strong> BUILDING<br />
25 CHECK WHAT YOU KNOW: 7<br />
26 ENDING <strong>SENTENCE</strong>S<br />
27 CHECK WHAT YOU KNOW: 8<br />
28 SPOT THE <strong>SENTENCE</strong>
.WHAT ARE <strong>SENTENCE</strong>S?.<br />
Every piece of writing is made up of<br />
sentences. A sentence is a complete<br />
idea. Here are some examples.<br />
Fred won the lottery.<br />
Sharon smiled.<br />
I caught the bus.<br />
A sentence always has a verb in it. Verbs<br />
are ‘doing’ words. They tell you about<br />
the action in a sentence. In the<br />
sentences above, won, smiled and<br />
caught are all verbs.<br />
Try filling in the gaps in the following<br />
sentences with verbs from this list:<br />
laughed, cried, wrote, drove, danced.<br />
1 John ________ a long letter.<br />
2 Mrs Swift ________ too fast.<br />
3 They ______ by the light of the moon.<br />
4 I ________ till I ________.<br />
1<br />
Now think of some more verbs and use<br />
them to complete these sentences.<br />
1 The parrot _________ off its perch.<br />
2 The robot __________ the house.<br />
3 Mavis _________ a song.<br />
4 I __________ some new trainers.
.WHO DID IT?.<br />
2<br />
Every sentence must have a verb in it.<br />
Run, shout, eat and read are all verbs.<br />
But on their own, verbs don’t tell you a<br />
lot. They don’t tell you who is running,<br />
shouting, eating or reading. So when<br />
you write a sentence, you must say who<br />
is doing something.<br />
In the following examples, the words<br />
showing who (or what) has done<br />
something are shown in dark type.<br />
She ran.<br />
They are shouting.<br />
The dog ate my dinner.<br />
Wayne read the comic.<br />
See if you can spot who or what has<br />
done something in each of the following<br />
sentences. Put a line under the right word.<br />
1 Marmeduke finished his homework.<br />
2 She yawned.<br />
3 Thieves stole our TV.<br />
4 The spider crawled up my leg.<br />
Now fill in the gaps with words of your<br />
own to show who has done something<br />
in these sentences.<br />
1 ____ jumped.<br />
2 The ___ roared.<br />
3 ___ had her tea.<br />
4 ____ waited.
.CHECK WHAT YOU KNOW: 1.<br />
See if you can spot which of the<br />
following examples is not a sentence –<br />
because it doesn’t tell you who has<br />
done something.<br />
I hurried home.<br />
Went to the disco.<br />
Sue lost her purse.<br />
The old lady.<br />
Now fill in the gaps with words of your<br />
own to show who or what has done<br />
something in each of these sentences.<br />
1 _____ went out.<br />
2 _____ laughed.<br />
3 The ______ wagged its tail.<br />
4 ____ woke up.<br />
3<br />
Do the same with the gaps in these<br />
sentences.<br />
1 _______ sat down.<br />
2 The _______ purred.<br />
3 ______ all shouted at once.<br />
4 ______ and ______ are going out with<br />
each other.<br />
Finally, fill in the gaps in the following<br />
passage with verbs of your own.<br />
The monster ____ out of the lake.<br />
It ____ hungry. Its big stomach ____ as it<br />
____ to the shore. ‘I ____ some fish and<br />
chips,’ ____ the monster.
Verbs tell you what is going on. They can<br />
also tell you when something is<br />
happening. Look at these examples.<br />
Laura met her boyfriend. (past)<br />
Laura is meeting her boyfriend. (now)<br />
Laura will meet her boyfriend. (future)<br />
Sometimes we use verbs with ‘to’ in front<br />
of them – to go, to sleep, to run. This way<br />
of using verbs doesn’t tell you who is<br />
doing something or when. So on its own,<br />
a verb with ‘to’ in front of it will not give<br />
you a complete sentence.<br />
A complete sentence must always answer<br />
these three questions: Who is doing<br />
something? What are they doing? When<br />
are they doing it?<br />
Here are a few sentences that show both<br />
ways of using verbs.<br />
I want to go home.<br />
They ran to catch a bus.<br />
Joe will go to meet her.<br />
See if you can spot which of the<br />
following examples is not a sentence<br />
because it doesn’t tell you who is doing<br />
something or when.<br />
Mrs Clutterbuck sneezed.<br />
To go home.<br />
The lights went out.<br />
Now fill in the gaps in these sentences<br />
with verbs that tell you when something<br />
is happening.<br />
1 They _________ a video.<br />
2 Sadia _________ the car.<br />
3 I _____ ___ my homework later.<br />
4 He _______ a mistake yesterday.<br />
5 My tortoise always _______ in winter.<br />
.VERBS.<br />
4<br />
Do the same with the gaps in this<br />
passage.<br />
In the future, people ____ ____ on<br />
different planets. They ____ ____ little<br />
spaceships instead of cars. Robots ____<br />
__ all the work. Kids ____ not ____ to go<br />
to school. I ____ I lived in the future.
.LIVING VERBS.<br />
Every sentence must have a verb in it.<br />
Walk, eat, run, drive and talk are all<br />
verbs. It’s easy to picture people doing<br />
these things. But some verbs are more<br />
tricky. They tell you what people or things<br />
are and not what they are doing. Look at<br />
the examples of these ‘living’ verbs shown<br />
in dark type in the following sentences.<br />
The books are on the desk.<br />
She was in a bad mood.<br />
I am hungry.<br />
Her mum and dad were out.<br />
Mr Singh seems happy.<br />
5<br />
See if you can fill the gaps in the<br />
following sentences with verbs that say<br />
what people or things are.<br />
1 Emma __ in Year 10.<br />
2 We ____ hungry.<br />
3 Tiddles, where ___ you?<br />
4 The dishes ____ piled up in the sink.<br />
5 You ___ cheerful today.<br />
Do the same with the gaps in this passage.<br />
The sounds ____ coming from the<br />
room upstairs. But when I got there, the<br />
room ___ empty. The window ___ open<br />
and there ____ some footprints on the<br />
window ledge. I __ sure they ____ the<br />
biggest footprints I had ever seen. ___<br />
our mysterious visitor a human, an<br />
animal – or something else?
.MORE ABOUT VERBS.<br />
Verbs that tell you when something is<br />
happening are often made up of more<br />
than one word. For example:<br />
I am going out tonight.<br />
We have finished the job.<br />
Mr Summs will be taking us for maths<br />
this year.<br />
See if you can underline the verbs in the<br />
following sentences.<br />
1 I am writing a letter.<br />
2 Mr Benson has lost his job.<br />
3 Tony is playing in today’s match.<br />
4 She felt sleepy because she had<br />
stayed out late last night.<br />
5 Where are you going?<br />
Complete the following sentences with<br />
words of your own.<br />
1 I am _____________ my friends at<br />
6 o’clock.<br />
2 Janice is __________ out with Kevin.<br />
3 Rover was ___________ Mrs Smith’s<br />
cat.<br />
4 She will _________ to go home.<br />
5 I shall __________ you some<br />
sandwiches.<br />
6<br />
Now fill the gaps in these sentences<br />
with verbs that are made up of more<br />
than one word.<br />
1 Some aliens ____ ____ in my back<br />
garden.<br />
2 He ____ _____ like a lunatic.<br />
3 Aunt Mabel was cross because I ____<br />
_____ her old clock.<br />
4 I ____ ____ you a nice cup of tea.<br />
5 They ____ _____ so loudly you could<br />
hear them for miles.
.CHECK WHAT YOU KNOW: 2.<br />
7<br />
Underline the verbs in the following<br />
sentences.<br />
1 Sandra laughed.<br />
2 Jeff worked hard.<br />
3 We missed the last train.<br />
4 Our history teacher was telling us<br />
about the Romans.<br />
5 You seem happy today.<br />
Now fill the gaps in these sentences<br />
with verbs of your own.<br />
1 They _______ up the hill.<br />
2 I _______ some lovely presents for my<br />
birthday.<br />
3 We ____ _____ shopping next week.<br />
4 Where ______ you ______?<br />
5 Jatinder _____ ________ TV when the<br />
doorbell ______.<br />
Finally, fill the gaps in this passage with<br />
‘living’ verbs that say what people or<br />
things are, rather than what they are<br />
doing.<br />
I _____ sure I put my bag on the<br />
table. Where ___ it? It ______ to have<br />
disappeared. This ___ very strange. ____<br />
you sure you haven’t taken it by mistake?
.LONGER <strong>SENTENCE</strong>S.<br />
Sentences can be long or short. Here are<br />
a few short ones.<br />
Winston spoke.<br />
Mrs Jones sneezed.<br />
He did his homework.<br />
These sentences tell you who did what.<br />
But they don’t tell you much else. You<br />
could add some words to make these<br />
sentences longer and more interesting.<br />
For example:<br />
Winston spoke kindly to the lost child.<br />
Mrs Jones sneezed loudly.<br />
He did his homework carelessly.<br />
Words such as kindly, loudly and<br />
carelessly tell you how somebody does<br />
something. They are called adverbs.<br />
8<br />
Fill in the gaps in the following<br />
sentences with adverbs from this list:<br />
angrily, hard, loudly, quickly, carefully.<br />
1 Faisal walked _____________.<br />
2 She worked ____________.<br />
3 The dog growled ___________.<br />
4 Beverly drove ______________.<br />
5 Dave spoke _______________.<br />
Now think of some more adverbs and<br />
use them to complete these sentences.<br />
1 Lehla ran ____________________.<br />
2 Basil ate _____________________.<br />
3 Luke and Daniel fought ___________.<br />
4 I wrote the essay _________________.<br />
5 Why did he shout so _____________?
.ACTION PHRASES.<br />
9<br />
Sometimes you can describe how<br />
somebody does something by using just<br />
one word. For example:<br />
She walked quickly.<br />
Gareth drove carelessly.<br />
The little boy smiled sweetly.<br />
There are other times when you can’t<br />
describe how something is done with<br />
just one word. You need to use a few<br />
words – a phrase – to get the meaning<br />
across. Here are some examples.<br />
He worked as hard as possible.<br />
She waved at him with a sad look on<br />
her face.<br />
The old man walked with a limp.<br />
Write out the following sentences, seeing<br />
if you can add phrases to show how<br />
things are done.<br />
1 He pushed the button _____________.<br />
2 The mouse looked at the cat _______.<br />
3 The books fell off the table ________.<br />
4 Sonia walked home ______________.<br />
5 They waited for the bus ___________.<br />
Now do the same with the following<br />
sentences.<br />
1 Yasmin sat down _________________.<br />
2 The chicken squawked ___________.<br />
3 We followed him _______________.<br />
4 Mr O’Brien wrote on the board ____.<br />
5 The car skidded _______________.
.ACTION CLAUSES.<br />
You can describe how something is<br />
done by adding a single word – an<br />
adverb – to the verb, or by adding a<br />
short phrase. For example:<br />
She spoke quietly. (adverb)<br />
She spoke in a quiet voice. (phrase)<br />
Another way to describe how or why<br />
somebody does something is to add a<br />
group of words with their own verb to<br />
the main idea in your sentence. These<br />
groups of words are called clauses. Look<br />
at the clauses shown in darker type in<br />
the following sentences.<br />
They walked to the top of the hill<br />
where they could see the view.<br />
She stayed in bed because she felt ill.<br />
I felt pleased as I had just been paid.<br />
Write out the following sentences,<br />
adding clauses to describe how or why<br />
things are done. Make sure there is a<br />
verb in each clause you add.<br />
1 Jeff hurried home because _________.<br />
2 Melissa wrote a letter after _________.<br />
3 The puppy wagged its tail when ____.<br />
4 Dinosaurs died out because ________.<br />
5 I phoned him so that ______________.<br />
10<br />
Sometimes you can add a clause to the<br />
beginning of a sentence. Look at this<br />
example.<br />
I felt better.<br />
When I had eaten I felt better.<br />
Now rewrite and add clauses to these<br />
sentences.<br />
1 He felt better when_______________.<br />
2 ______________ I had an early night.<br />
3 They walked to the station where<br />
_______________.<br />
4 I bought a lottery ticket because<br />
_______________.<br />
5 Gerry worked so hard that _________.
.CHECK WHAT YOU KNOW: 3.<br />
An adverb describes how somebody does<br />
something. Slowly, carefully, well and<br />
fast are all adverbs.<br />
Add an adverb to each of the following<br />
sentences.<br />
Example:<br />
The cat crept up to the mouse stealthily.<br />
1 Our headteacher spoke to us _______.<br />
2 Rickie worked ________________.<br />
3 He wrote ________________.<br />
4 Diane and Imran looked at each other<br />
_________________.<br />
5 The hampster nibbled some lettuce<br />
__________________.<br />
Now rewrite the following sentences,<br />
adding a short phrase to describe the<br />
action in each.<br />
Example:<br />
My mum’s best teapot fell to the floor<br />
with a loud crash.<br />
1 I woke up ___________________.<br />
2 Salma went away ________________.<br />
3 Alex swam ____________________.<br />
4 The film ended __________________.<br />
5 The new teacher walked into the<br />
classroom ___________________.<br />
11<br />
Finally, rewrite the following sentences,<br />
adding clauses to describe how or why<br />
things are done. Remember, a clause is<br />
a group of words with its own verb that<br />
you add to the main idea in a sentence.<br />
Example:<br />
Sharon ran all the way to school<br />
because she was late.<br />
1 He fell off his bike because ________.<br />
2 Carl felt better when ______________.<br />
3 I called my friend after ____________.<br />
4 We walked to the disco where _____.<br />
5 Mr Bloggs stood in the queue so that<br />
_________________.
.DESCRIBING DO-ERS.<br />
One way of making a sentence more<br />
interesting is to add a word that<br />
describes the ‘do-er’, the person or<br />
thing doing something in the sentence.<br />
These describing words are called<br />
adjectives. Here are some examples.<br />
The old car was parked outside his<br />
house.<br />
The cake was delicious.<br />
The unknown band reached number<br />
one in the charts.<br />
12<br />
Add adjectives to describe the ‘do-ers’ in<br />
the following sentences. Think up<br />
adjectives of your own or pick them<br />
from this list: new, disappointing, short,<br />
horrible, famous.<br />
1 All these ________ creepy crawlies<br />
like the warm weather.<br />
2 Steve’s _______ bike can go really fast.<br />
3 The ___________ striker didn’t score a<br />
single goal all season.<br />
4 Rina bought a _______ skirt in the sales.<br />
5 My exam results were _____________.<br />
Now rewrite these sentences, adding<br />
two or more adjectives to each. Use<br />
commas between the adjectives.<br />
Example:<br />
That old, derelict and haunted house<br />
is up for sale.<br />
1 My ________________ jeans feel very<br />
comfortable.<br />
2 The _________ boxer decided to retire.<br />
3 The _______________ woman was<br />
wearing diamond earrings.<br />
4 Her _______________ brother put an<br />
ice cube down her back.<br />
5 There is our ________ English teacher.
.PHRASES FOR DO-ERS.<br />
You can use a single word – an<br />
adjective – to describe the person or<br />
thing who is doing something in a<br />
sentence. But you can give even more<br />
information by adding a short phrase.<br />
Here are some examples.<br />
I bumped into Wayne, an old friend<br />
of mine.<br />
My sister, a student nurse, is keen on<br />
drag racing.<br />
Our dog, a friendly old labrador,<br />
didn’t bother the burglar.<br />
Always use commas to separate phrases<br />
like these from the rest of the sentence.<br />
Now rewrite the following sentences,<br />
adding phrases to describe the ‘do-ers’.<br />
Remember to use the right punctuation.<br />
1 My cat _____________ went missing.<br />
2 We went to Skegness____________.<br />
3 The woman _____________ laughed<br />
nervously.<br />
4 I think that animal _____________ is a<br />
porcupine.<br />
5 The bike _____________ was lying in<br />
a ditch.<br />
13<br />
Do the same with the following<br />
sentences.<br />
1 My brother _______________ is a great<br />
dancer.<br />
2 We met Mr Andrews _____________.<br />
3 The shop ____________________ was<br />
closing down.<br />
4 The hedgehog ___________________<br />
was hibernating.<br />
5 Nikki _________ said she saw a ghost.
.CLAUSES FOR DO-ERS.<br />
As well as using adjectives and phrases<br />
to describe the person or thing doing<br />
something in a sentence, you can use<br />
clauses. A clause is a group of words<br />
with its own verb that you add to the<br />
main idea in a sentence. Look at the<br />
clauses shown in these examples.<br />
She bought the jeans which she had<br />
wanted for ages.<br />
It was the same cat he had seen the<br />
day before.<br />
The student who got the highest<br />
marks won a prize.<br />
Underline the clauses in these sentences.<br />
1 He bought the bike which had been<br />
advertised in the newspaper.<br />
2 The man who is wearing a woolly hat<br />
is our new science teacher.<br />
3 The girl who lives next door invited<br />
me to her party.<br />
Now rewrite these sentences, adding<br />
clauses that tell you more about the<br />
person or thing doing something.<br />
1 The cassette _______________ is very<br />
expensive.<br />
2 That is the teacher _______________ .<br />
3 The prisoner ________________ gave<br />
himself up.<br />
4 Sonja ________ has lost some weight.<br />
5 Fred finally got the job ____________.<br />
14<br />
Finally, rewrite and add clauses to these<br />
sentences.<br />
1 There goes the man _____________.<br />
2 The bumble bee ________________<br />
finally flew out of the window.<br />
3 The criminal ___________________<br />
escaped with the loot.<br />
4 I bought the book _______________.<br />
5 It was the same car _______________.
.CHECK WHAT YOU KNOW: 4.<br />
Use adjectives to describe the person or<br />
thing doing something in each of the<br />
following sentences.<br />
Example:<br />
This cottage pie is revolting.<br />
1 The weather is __________.<br />
2 The _________ hairdresser cut off too<br />
much of my hair.<br />
3 We rented a ________ video last night.<br />
4 The _________ bus has already left.<br />
5 The _____ ______ fox jumped over the<br />
lazy dog.<br />
Now use short phrases to describe the<br />
‘do-ers’ in the following sentences.<br />
Examples:<br />
That’s Ms Hawkeye, my form teacher.<br />
Eddie Starlight, the actor, has just got<br />
married again.<br />
1 My sister _____________________ is a<br />
keen swimmer.<br />
2 There’s Dr Johnson ______________ .<br />
3 The cat ___________________ chased<br />
the dog up the road.<br />
4 Maggie _____________________ goes<br />
to a different school.<br />
5 I rang up George ________________.<br />
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Finally, rewrite the following sentences,<br />
adding clauses to describe the ‘do-ers’.<br />
Remember, a clause is a group of words<br />
with its own verb that you add to the<br />
main idea in a sentence.<br />
Example:<br />
The man who was wearing a bow tie<br />
looked like a spy.<br />
1 The girl _______________ was waiting<br />
at the bus stop.<br />
2 He finally bought the computer game<br />
__________________.<br />
3 The car ________________ was parked<br />
outside the school gate.<br />
4 The strange sounds ________________<br />
went on all night.<br />
5 Cheryl ___________________ was late<br />
again this morning.
.PHRASES WITH -ING.<br />
One way of making sentences more<br />
interesting is to add phrases which use<br />
verbs ending in ‘-ing’. These are called<br />
participle phrases. Here are some<br />
examples.<br />
walking down the road<br />
thinking about something else<br />
watching a video<br />
On their own, these phrases are not<br />
complete sentences. To turn them into<br />
sentences we have to add some words<br />
that tell us who is doing what and when.<br />
We could, for example, say:<br />
Walking down the road, he bumped<br />
into a lamp post.<br />
Thinking about something else, I<br />
suddenly realised I was lost.<br />
Watching a video, Tracy lost track of<br />
the time.<br />
See if you can turn the following<br />
participle phrases into sentences.<br />
1 Running along the High Street _____<br />
________________________.<br />
2 Thinking about her problems ______<br />
________________________.<br />
3 Leaving the classroom ____________<br />
___________________.<br />
4 Watching TV ____________________.<br />
5 Turning towards her ______________.<br />
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Now rewrite and add participle phrases<br />
to these sentences.<br />
1 _________________ he walked away.<br />
2 _____________ Donna thought about<br />
what her mum would say.<br />
3 _________________ they decided to<br />
drop the plan.<br />
4 ___________ Gary was nearly run over.<br />
5 _________________ I didn’t hear the<br />
doorbell ring.
.WHO DOES WHAT?.<br />
Participle phrases can be tricky –<br />
phrases which use the ‘-ing’ form of a<br />
verb. You have to make sure that it’s<br />
clear who is doing the walking,<br />
thinking, looking or other action in the<br />
sentence. Can you see what’s wrong<br />
with this sentence?<br />
Walking down the road, the bus<br />
nearly hit Tom.<br />
What this sentence says is that the bus<br />
was walking down the road when it<br />
nearly hit Tom! It should have said:<br />
Walking down the road, Tom was<br />
nearly hit by the bus.<br />
See if you can change the following<br />
sentences so that it’s quite clear who is<br />
doing what in each of them.<br />
1 Walking down the High Street, a car<br />
nearly ran Jenny over.<br />
2 Sleeping heavily, the loud noise did<br />
not wake him.<br />
3 Feeling very hungry, the sandwich did<br />
not satisfy her.<br />
4 Thinking about his homework, the<br />
dog greeted Tony.<br />
5 Losing our way in the town, a<br />
policeman gave us directions.<br />
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Now rewrite the following sentences,<br />
adding phrases with ‘-ing’ verbs in them.<br />
Make sure it is clear who these phrases<br />
are about.<br />
1 ________________ the car swerved to<br />
avoid Mohammed.<br />
2 ____________ the alarm clock did not<br />
wake her.<br />
3 ____________ she ate six sandwiches.<br />
4 __________ the dog bounded up to him.<br />
5 __________ I noticed the new building.
.CHECK WHAT YOU KNOW: 5.<br />
Can you tell which of the following are<br />
complete sentences and which are just<br />
phrases? Put an S next to each sentence<br />
and a P next to each phrase.<br />
1 Sitting down to lunch ____<br />
2 John yawned ____<br />
3 Abid tucked into his pudding ____<br />
4 Mr Best looked at his watch ____<br />
5 Watching an exciting film ____<br />
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Now rewrite the following phrases,<br />
turning them into sentences by saying<br />
who is doing what and when.<br />
1 Swimming five lengths a day _______<br />
___________________.<br />
2 Smiling at him ___________________.<br />
3 Walking home last night __________<br />
___________________.<br />
4 Finding a spider in the bath ________<br />
___________________.<br />
5 Looking really angry ______________.<br />
Finally, rewrite these sentences, adding<br />
phrases with ‘-ing’ in them. Make sure it<br />
is clear who the phrases are about.<br />
1 _______________ Steve saw his friends.<br />
2 ______________________ we watched<br />
the end of the film.<br />
3 _____________________ I finished my<br />
food before anyone else.<br />
4 ____________________ the cat purred<br />
contentedly.<br />
5 ________________________ he nearly<br />
bumped into the tree.
.ONE THING AFTER ANOTHER.<br />
When you are writing you often need to<br />
show that something happens before or<br />
after something else. To do this, you can<br />
start off a sentence with a clause<br />
beginning with when, before or after.<br />
Here are some examples.<br />
When he had finished his tea, Dad<br />
turned the TV on.<br />
Before they left the house, they tidied<br />
up.<br />
After I’ve watched this programme, I’ll<br />
do the washing up.<br />
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Rewrite the following sentences, adding<br />
complete clauses.<br />
1 After _________ the cat ate the budgie.<br />
2 Before ________________ he bought a<br />
return ticket.<br />
3 When _________________ she did her<br />
homework.<br />
4 After _____________ he baked a cake.<br />
5 Before ____________ my headteacher<br />
heard what I had to say.<br />
Rewrite the following sentences to<br />
include clauses beginning with when,<br />
before or after.<br />
1 __________________ Fred went off to<br />
work.<br />
2 ____________________ he made sure<br />
the lights were turned off.<br />
3 _______________ I’ll clean my room.<br />
4 _____________ we’ll go to the disco.<br />
5 ________________ they decided they<br />
could not afford a holiday.
.IF AND UNLESS.<br />
One useful way of building up<br />
sentences is to add clauses beginning<br />
with if or unless. You can use these<br />
clauses when you are talking about<br />
things which might happen in the future.<br />
If my toothache doesn’t go away<br />
soon, I’ll have to see the dentist.<br />
Unless you pay attention, you won’t<br />
know how to play this game.<br />
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Rewrite the following sentences, adding<br />
clauses beginning with if or unless.<br />
(Remember, a clause is a group of words<br />
with a verb that you add to the main<br />
idea of a sentence.)<br />
1 ____________________ you will have<br />
an accident.<br />
2 _______________________ I will take<br />
my noisy neighbour to court.<br />
3 ______________________ Lyn should<br />
see her doctor.<br />
4 _______________________ they will<br />
ban mountain bikes from the park.<br />
5 _______________________ I will go to<br />
the match with Jeff.<br />
Clauses with if or unless can be added to<br />
the beginning or end of a sentence.<br />
If it stops raining, I’ll go out shopping.<br />
I’ll go out shopping, if it stops raining.<br />
Now add clauses with if or unless to<br />
these sentences. Write each sentence out<br />
twice, first with the clause at the<br />
beginning and then at the end of the<br />
sentence.<br />
1 Steve will get into trouble.<br />
2 She will never come back.<br />
3 I will help you with your homework.<br />
4 They will shut the disco down.<br />
5 Michelle won’t go to his party.
.CHECK WHAT YOU KNOW: 6.<br />
Add clauses with when, before, after, if<br />
or unless to these sentences. Write each<br />
sentence out twice, first with the clause<br />
at the beginning and then at the end of<br />
the sentence.<br />
Example:<br />
He will get into trouble.<br />
Unless he stops being so rude, he will<br />
get into trouble.<br />
He will get into trouble unless he<br />
stops being so rude.<br />
1 He will have an accident.<br />
2 They put the money in a safe place.<br />
3 My mum went off to work.<br />
4 She thought carefully about going out<br />
with him.<br />
5 Mrs Smart gave him a grade A.<br />
Now rewrite this passage. Use clauses<br />
with when, before, after, if or unless to<br />
fill the gaps.<br />
Jake and Rob planned their escape.<br />
_______________, they decided to dig a<br />
tunnel. They knew the plan would only<br />
work ___________. Every day they dug a<br />
few metres ___________. They never<br />
went into the exercise yard with the<br />
other prisoners __________. __________,<br />
they finally finished the tunnel. ________,<br />
they found themselves in the middle of<br />
the prison governor’s office!<br />
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.SO, AS AND BECAUSE.<br />
Short, simple sentences tell you who has<br />
done what and when. If you want to say<br />
why something has happened, you need<br />
to write longer, more complicated<br />
sentences. One way of doing this is to<br />
use the words so, as or because to link<br />
two short sentences. Here are some<br />
examples.<br />
Kate was working in the library.<br />
She wanted some peace and quiet.<br />
Kate was working in the library<br />
because she wanted some peace and<br />
quiet.<br />
Gary sold his old skate board.<br />
He could then buy a new one.<br />
Gary sold his old skate board so he<br />
could buy a new one.<br />
You can use so, as or because at the<br />
beginning of a sentence as well as in the<br />
middle. For example:<br />
It was hot. I went swimming.<br />
As it was hot, I went swimming.<br />
Try linking each of the following pairs of<br />
sentences with the words so, as or<br />
because.<br />
1 Sadia saved up her pocket money.<br />
She wanted to go on holiday.<br />
2 Bruno barked at the new postman.<br />
He does not like strangers.<br />
3 It’s cold today.<br />
I am wearing six layers of clothes.<br />
4 Wayne overslept this morning.<br />
He was late for school.<br />
5 The teacher was angry.<br />
His pupils were making too much<br />
noise.<br />
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.BUILDING <strong>SENTENCE</strong>S.<br />
Short, simple sentences can be useful, but<br />
for more complicated ideas, you need to<br />
use longer sentences. There are lots of ways<br />
of building up a sentence. For example:<br />
Jim sold the van to Fred.<br />
This sentence gives us the bones of a story<br />
but it doesn’t tell us anything about Jim,<br />
Fred or the van. So how can we make the<br />
sentence more interesting? First, we can<br />
add a phrase about Jim:<br />
Jim, a second-hand car dealer, sold the<br />
van to Fred.<br />
Then we can say something about the van:<br />
Jim, a second-hand car dealer, sold the<br />
clapped-out old van to Fred.<br />
We still don’t know anything about Fred.<br />
An extra clause will put that right:<br />
Jim, a second-hand car dealer, sold the<br />
clapped-out old van to Fred, who<br />
thought he had bought a real bargain.<br />
Rewrite the following sentences, making<br />
them more interesting by filling the gaps<br />
with words, phrases or clauses.<br />
1 Jenny _________ sold her __________<br />
ice-skates to Dave ______________.<br />
2 Craig _______ helped Donna ________<br />
with her homework __________.<br />
3 Mr Summs ____________ wrote the<br />
answers ___________ on the board.<br />
4 Savita ____________ used to go to my<br />
old school _______________.<br />
5 The __________ guinea-pig ate all the<br />
vegetables ____________.<br />
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Do the same with these sentences.<br />
1 Kevin _________ was always playing<br />
games on his __________ computer.<br />
2 Sharon __________ is going to Spain<br />
___________.<br />
3 The tree __________ fell down in the<br />
storm __________.<br />
4 Steve _____________ borrowed some<br />
money from John _______________.<br />
5 The thief __________ was caught redhanded<br />
by the store detective _____.
.MORE <strong>SENTENCE</strong> BUILDING.<br />
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Look at this short, simple sentence.<br />
Eddie was walking up the road.<br />
The sentence does not tell us anything<br />
about Eddie or why he was walking up<br />
the road. We can put that right by adding<br />
phrases and clauses to the sentence.<br />
Eddie, who should have been at<br />
school, was walking slowly up the<br />
road looking for trouble.<br />
Rewrite the following sentences, making<br />
them more interesting by filling the gaps<br />
with words, phrases or clauses.<br />
1 Ms Smith, who _______________ was<br />
walking to the station because<br />
_____________.<br />
2 The _____________ monster woke up<br />
after _________________ .<br />
3 Mike, who _________ sold his bicycle<br />
to his cousin __________.<br />
4 Lisa _______________ wants to be an<br />
engineer when _______________.<br />
5 Have the people who _____________<br />
moved out?<br />
Now do the same with the gaps in this<br />
passage.<br />
___________ Mandy saw someone<br />
in the water. _______ she realised it was<br />
a little boy _________. She ______ took<br />
her shoes off and jumped into the river.<br />
She grabbed hold of the child _________<br />
and carried him to the river bank<br />
_________. The boy __________started<br />
crying ______________.
.CHECK WHAT YOU KNOW: 7.<br />
Look at the following short sentences.<br />
They don’t give you much information.<br />
Rewrite them, adding words, phrases and<br />
clauses that say more about who or what<br />
the sentences are about, and why, how<br />
and when things are happening in them.<br />
1 Mr Wood _____________ threw down<br />
his paintbrush _____________.<br />
2 Sharon wished she had never met Bill<br />
____________.<br />
3 ______________ he decided to walk to<br />
school _____________.<br />
4 Anil ____________ was waiting for his<br />
friends _______________.<br />
5 Rupert ______________ loved honey.<br />
Now do the same with the gaps in this<br />
passage.<br />
Jim _________ sold a ________ van<br />
to Fred ________ . __________ he tried<br />
to return the van to Jim. But Jim _______<br />
had gone off to London __________ and<br />
Fred could not find him. _____________<br />
Fred had the van repaired ___________.<br />
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.ENDING <strong>SENTENCE</strong>S.<br />
How do you know when you’ve come<br />
to the end of a sentence? Ask yourself if<br />
what you have written is a complete<br />
idea that says who is doing what and<br />
when. Then put a full-stop, question<br />
mark or exclamation mark at the end of<br />
the sentence – not a comma. Look at<br />
these examples.<br />
Wrong:<br />
Gwen left the party, she had to be<br />
home by 11.<br />
Right:<br />
Gwen left the party. She had to be<br />
home by 11.<br />
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Put full stops where they are needed in<br />
these sentences.<br />
1 I saw that woman again, she was<br />
dressed like Father Christmas.<br />
2 You shouldn’t talk like that, who do<br />
you think you are?<br />
3 I bought a video yesterday, it wasn’t<br />
worth the money.<br />
4 Walking through the park, Steve<br />
found a pound coin.<br />
5 Please return trays to the counter, do<br />
not leave them on the tables.<br />
Now rewrite this passage, filling in the<br />
gaps with full stops or commas, and<br />
putting capital letters at the beginning<br />
of each sentence.<br />
Jake Warble is the lead singer of The<br />
Bluechips__ he also plays keyboards__<br />
Jake’s hobbies are skydiving and<br />
knitting__ his favourite colour is blue__<br />
being so famous__ Jake likes to relax on<br />
his secret island hideaway where none<br />
of his fans can find him__
.CHECK WHAT YOU KNOW: 8.<br />
People often get full stops and commas<br />
muddled up. Remember, you use a<br />
comma when there is a pause in a<br />
sentence but a full stop to show that the<br />
sentence has ended.<br />
Look at the sentences in this list. Put a<br />
cross next to the ones with commas<br />
where there should be full stops, and a<br />
tick next to the ones that are written<br />
correctly.<br />
1 She rushed out, she didn’t<br />
want to miss the last bus. ___<br />
2 Listening to the radio, I fell<br />
asleep. ___<br />
3 The gates opened, the fans<br />
rushed in. ___<br />
4 The door opened. The headteacher<br />
walked in. ___<br />
5 The sun shone, the birds sang,<br />
I felt happy. ___<br />
Now put commas, full stops and capital<br />
letters where they are needed in the<br />
following passage.<br />
Using a computer is easy first you<br />
have to switch it on then you have to<br />
put a program disk into your disk drive<br />
unless you have a program on your hard<br />
disk once you are into the program you<br />
can use your mouse to call up the help<br />
menu it will tell you what to do next<br />
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.SPOT THE <strong>SENTENCE</strong>.<br />
A sentence can be long or short but it is<br />
always a complete idea. Look at this<br />
group of words.<br />
Falling asleep in class.<br />
This is not a sentence because it doesn’t<br />
tell us who is or was falling asleep in<br />
class. To turn this phrase into a<br />
sentence, we have to add some words.<br />
For example:<br />
Falling asleep in class, Michelle did<br />
not hear about the school trip to<br />
France.<br />
Can you spot the sentences in the<br />
following list? Put an S next to the<br />
complete sentences and an N next to<br />
groups of words that are not sentences.<br />
1 Trying to keep from giggling ___<br />
2 With reference to your letter<br />
of 5th November ___<br />
3 I refer to your letter of<br />
5th November ___<br />
4 Waking up suddenly after a<br />
late night on the town ___<br />
5 I woke up with a start ___<br />
6 Standing on the corner,<br />
watching all the people go<br />
by carrying their shopping ___<br />
7 Gerry smiled ___<br />
8 To boldly go where no woman<br />
has gone before ___<br />
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Now rewrite all the phrases you have<br />
spotted, turning them into complete<br />
sentences.