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Day 6 - Explore the effect<br />

of patterns of<br />

language and<br />

repeated words<br />

and phrases.<br />

- Recognise the<br />

main elements that<br />

shape different<br />

texts.<br />

- I can write poetic<br />

sentences using<br />

alliteration.<br />

- I know some of<br />

the ingredients of<br />

an interesting<br />

poem.<br />

Day 7 - Explore the effect<br />

of patterns of<br />

language and<br />

repeated words<br />

and phrases.<br />

- Recognise the<br />

main elements that<br />

shape different<br />

texts.<br />

- I can write poetic<br />

sentences using<br />

similes.<br />

- I know the<br />

ingredients of an<br />

interesting poem.<br />

<strong>Written</strong> <strong>by</strong> <strong>Anthony</strong> <strong>Legon</strong><br />

Activity: We’re Going on a Monster Hunt Drama:<br />

With children dressed as Police People, take the children on<br />

a monster hunt. You may wish to begin <strong>by</strong> using the<br />

classroom monster environment and then move into the<br />

playground etc. You will need to have hidden monster<br />

props around the area, e.g. tail, monster ears, googley-eyes<br />

etc. If you have made monster-catchers, you can take them<br />

on the hunt with you. Find props to build the monster’s<br />

character, using repetitive chanted language.<br />

We’re going on a Monster Hunt, we’re going to<br />

catch a smelly one.<br />

We’re not scared, uh-oh – smelly socks!<br />

We’re going on a Monster Hunt, we’re going to<br />

catch an ugly one.<br />

We’re not scared, uh-oh – ten terrible<br />

teeth!<br />

We’re going on a Monster Hunt, we’re going to<br />

catch a huge one.<br />

We’re not scared, uh-oh – tremendous tail!<br />

In Shared Writing, teacher models writing the poem created<br />

orally.<br />

Add vocabulary and shared poem to Evidence Wall.<br />

Activity: Simile Arguments:<br />

Tell children that they are going to need to decide exactly<br />

what their monster looks like so that they can go and catch it<br />

at the end of the week.<br />

Teacher to boast:<br />

My Monster is as tall as a tree.<br />

TA to boast in return:<br />

Well, my monster is tall as a skyscraper.<br />

Teacher to boast:<br />

My Monster is as smelly as cheese.<br />

TA to boast:<br />

Well, my monster is as smelly as a sewer.<br />

Continue the argument using the following sentence<br />

openers:<br />

As tall as…<br />

As big as…<br />

As smelly as…<br />

As ugly as…<br />

As disgusting as…<br />

Write some of the similes on sugar paper and add to the<br />

Evidence Wall.<br />

Children write using writing frame.<br />

We’re going on a Monster Hunt, We’re going to<br />

catch a ______ one.<br />

We’re not scared, uh-oh –<br />

________________________<br />

We’re going on a Monster Hunt, We’re going to<br />

catch a ______ one.<br />

We’re not scared, uh-oh –<br />

________________________<br />

Independent Activity: Simile Arguments:<br />

Explain to children that they will be working in<br />

pairs to hold a simile argument.<br />

Give children time to think about what they might<br />

say, using the same sentence openers as before:<br />

My monster is as tall as…<br />

My monster is as big as…<br />

My monster is as smelly as…<br />

My monster is as ugly as…<br />

My monster is as disgusting as…<br />

Children to use sentence starter strips to write<br />

their similes.<br />

Guided Group (AA) to work with teacher to extend<br />

the similes shown.<br />

Children use<br />

differentiated<br />

writing frames to<br />

write their<br />

sentences.<br />

Children to use<br />

sentence openers,<br />

both for oral and<br />

written work.<br />

Discuss the way we have used<br />

alliteration to create our monster<br />

descriptions. Add to this to the<br />

Ingredients for an Interesting<br />

Poem.<br />

Discuss the way we have used<br />

repetition in this poem as well.<br />

Children to share their Simile<br />

Arguments in pairs.<br />

Discuss the way we have used<br />

similes to describe our Monster<br />

and add similes to our list of<br />

Ingredients for an Interesting<br />

Poem.<br />

Police Officer returns at the end<br />

of the session to find out how<br />

the children are getting on. <strong>The</strong><br />

children can share with the<br />

Police Officer the monster items<br />

they have found and their<br />

Evidence Wall so far. Police<br />

Officer to give children their next<br />

challenge: <strong>The</strong>y are getting<br />

closer to the Monster, but they<br />

are going to need to recruit help<br />

from other people <strong>by</strong> writing<br />

their own poem asking for help!<br />

End of Phase – Children have<br />

now innovated’ independently<br />

and in groups. <strong>The</strong>y have<br />

performed their ‘poems.<br />

Children understand the<br />

‘ingredients’ of an Interesting<br />

poem.

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