Grade 4 – Personal and Fictional Narrative Rubric

Soccer
Fourth Grade
My brother plays soccer at Amy Blank, and
at a reall soccer feild.
At the soccer feild there is a plase near the
end. It is behind a bliding, it is like a dich.
Micky,s brother play soccer so I see Micky.
We look for lisrds. We haven’t found any
but at Falls School Micky cout one.
My brother also plays soccer at Amy Blank.
Micky and I find a spot and pract’s king
sometimes I play in the playground. wile
Micky waches the soccer game.
these arethe best
weekends!
Rubric Score 1:
The writer includes a vague
central idea (brother plays
soccer…the field…catching
lizards…playing on the
playground), but does not
establish a real idea/plot.
The details are not
organized in a paragraphing
structure causing the
sequence of events to be
confusing.
The writer attempts to
describe “a place near the
end of the soccer field that
“is like a ditch”; but both the
place and purpose for
describing it are unclear.
Conventions are sometimes
incorrectly used, and many
high frequency words and
word parts are incorrectly
spelled (plase, dich, wile,
waches).
The misspellings do not
interfere with
comprehension, but do cause
the reader to slow down to
decode it.
This paper compares to a 1
on a 4 point rubric.