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<strong>BRAHMS</strong><br />
Concerto in D major<br />
for Violin and Orchestra<br />
op. 77<br />
Edited by<br />
Clive Brown<br />
Critical Commentary<br />
Bärenreiter Kassel · Basel · London · New York · Praha<br />
BA 9049
ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS<br />
It is a pleasure to acknowledge the co- operation<br />
and assistance of a number of people and organisations<br />
in the preparation of this edition.<br />
My first thanks go to the staff at Bärenreiter,<br />
for their helpfulness and support. I am particularly<br />
grateful to Irene Schallhorn for painstaking<br />
efforts in obtaining material and facilitating<br />
access to collections and to Douglas<br />
Woodfull-Harris for his consistent encouragement<br />
and advice.<br />
I am indebted to the following archives for providing<br />
material and permissions: the Gesellschaft<br />
der Musikfreunde, Vienna; the Library<br />
of Congress, Washington DC; the Staatsbibliothek<br />
zu Berlin; the library of the Universität der<br />
Künste, Berlin; the Staats- und Universitätsbibliothek,<br />
Hamburg; the library of the Tonhalle,<br />
Zürich.<br />
Clive Brown<br />
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SOURCES<br />
Lost or conjectural material is given in italics<br />
A 0<br />
Autograph sketches and drafts<br />
As<br />
Autograph draft of the solo violin part (Berlin,<br />
Staatsbibliothek zu Berlin)<br />
Six folios, -stave music paper (. × . cm),<br />
without watermark, containing the first movement<br />
(pp. –) and the beginning of the finale<br />
(pages –).<br />
Ap<br />
Brahms’s autograph full score (Washington, Library<br />
of Congress)<br />
folios of -stave music paper (. × . cm).<br />
The music begins on page ; f. v is unnumbered<br />
and blank.<br />
Ks o<br />
Solo violin part used by Joachim for the early<br />
performances<br />
Kst 0<br />
Manuscript orchestral parts<br />
Ks<br />
Copyist’s manuscript of the solo violin part<br />
(Washington, Library of Congress)<br />
folios, -stave music paper (. × . cm.)<br />
with plain paper cover. Manuscript title page<br />
(evidently added when filed in Simrock’s archive):<br />
Johannes Brahms / op. Violinconcert /<br />
Prin cipalstimme / Stichvorlage.<br />
Ak<br />
Autograph piano reduction with copied violin<br />
part (Vienna, Österreichische Nationalbibliothek)<br />
folios -stave music paper (c. . × . cm.)<br />
plus inserted folio (f. ) -stave music paper<br />
(. × . cm.); title page and pages of music;<br />
folios v and v blank; folios r, r, v,<br />
v have slips of paper, of the same type as f. ,<br />
pasted in. Manuscript title page (in the same<br />
hand as that of Ks): Johannes Brahms / op. Violin<br />
concert / Clav. Ausz. / Manuscript.<br />
Ds<br />
Published solo violin part<br />
CONCERT / für / VIOLINE. / Solo-Violine.<br />
printed pages; Pl. no. <br />
There were at least three further impressions<br />
of the original edition between and ,<br />
none of which involved any alteration to the<br />
text.<br />
In a new edition, edited by Joachim, was<br />
printed largely from the same plates with revisions<br />
(see Js below).<br />
Dk<br />
Published piano score<br />
JOSEPH JOACHIM / zugeeignet. / CONCERT /<br />
für / VIOLINE / mit Begleitung des Orchesters<br />
/ von / JOHANNES <strong>BRAHMS</strong>. / Op. . /<br />
CLAVIER – AUSZUG. / Preis M. _ / Ent. d Stat.<br />
Hall. / Verlag und Eigenthum / N. SIMROCK<br />
in BERLIN. / . / Lith Anst. v. C. G. Röder,<br />
Leipzig<br />
printed pages; Pl. no. <br />
There were a number of later impressions with<br />
variant title pages, but no changes were made<br />
to the original plates of the music.<br />
Brahms’s personal copy (Handexemplar) is in<br />
A-Wgm. It contains no corrections.<br />
Dp<br />
Published full score<br />
JOSEPH JOACHIM / zugeeignet. / CONCERT /<br />
für / VIOLINE / mit Begleitung des Orchesters<br />
/ von / JOHANNES <strong>BRAHMS</strong>. / Op. . /<br />
PARTI TUR. / Preis M. _n. / Ent. d Stat. Hall. /<br />
Verlag und Eigenthum / N. SIMROCK in BER-<br />
LIN. / . / Lith Anst. v. C. G. Röder, Leipzig<br />
printed pages; Pl. no. <br />
A number of later impressions were issued<br />
without any alteration of the musical text.<br />
Two copies that belonged to Brahms are held<br />
in A-Wgm (XI and IX ): an ordinary<br />
copy of the score (Handexemplar) and a decorated<br />
and richly-bound copy, presented to him<br />
by Simrock, which Brahms later gave to the<br />
young violinist Marie Soldat in . In both<br />
these copies Brahms made a blue crayon cor-<br />
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ection at I – which he also indicated in<br />
the margin (see Critical Commentary); in the<br />
Handexemplar the marginal annotation has<br />
been crossed through in pencil. 1<br />
Dst<br />
Published orchestral parts<br />
parts: Fl. I, II, Ob. I, II, Clar. I, II, Fag. I, II;<br />
Cor. I–IV, Tromb. I, II, Timp.; Viol. I, II, Va., Vc.<br />
e B.<br />
No title page. Pl. no. <br />
Later impressions were issued without alteration<br />
of the musical text.<br />
1 Robert Pascall ‘Brahms and the definitive text’<br />
Brahms: biographical, documentary and analytical studies<br />
ed. R. Pascall (Cambridge, , p. ) argues that the<br />
pencil crossing out is to be seen as a restitution of the<br />
original text.<br />
Js<br />
Published solo violin part revised edition<br />
A new edition of the solo violin part was published<br />
in volume three of the Joachim and Moser<br />
Violinschule in as no XVI of the section<br />
entitled Sechzehn Meisterwerke / der Violinliteratur<br />
/ bezeichnet / und mit Kadenzen versehen<br />
/ von / JOSEPH JOACHIM / ==== / Sixteen<br />
Standard Works / for the Violin / edited<br />
with original cadenzas / and marks of expression<br />
/ by / JOSEPH JOACHIM. This contains a<br />
few small revisions to the articulation and dynamics<br />
of the original edition (most notably at<br />
I –, – and II ) as well as changes<br />
to fingering and bowing directions (see Critical<br />
Commentary). It also contains Joachim’s<br />
cadenza inserted, together with the end of the<br />
first movement, on three newly engraved plates<br />
(pl. no. – the plate number of the third<br />
volume of the Violinschule). The text of the<br />
cadenza differs slightly from that published<br />
separately by Simrock in , in respect of fingering<br />
and bowing. The revised edition was<br />
later reissued with the double plate number<br />
/, but without Joachim’s cadenza and<br />
with the final page of the first movement reinserted<br />
in its original version with the single<br />
plate number .<br />
The following stemma indicates the relationships<br />
between surviving and lost (conjectural)<br />
sources, and has been taken as a basis for the<br />
present edition.<br />
<br />
August<br />
A 0 ( st and rd movements)<br />
November<br />
A 0 ( nd movement)<br />
As<br />
October November – December<br />
Ap<br />
December<br />
Ks 0 Kst 0<br />
<br />
February<br />
Ks<br />
February – March<br />
Ak<br />
October<br />
<br />
Ds Dk Dp Dst<br />
Js<br />
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CRITICAL COMMENTARY<br />
EDITORIAL PROCEDURES<br />
Brahms did not apparently intend the printed<br />
full score (Dp) to serve as the definitive text of<br />
the concerto as a whole. For practical reasons,<br />
especially ease of use as a conducting score, he<br />
settled upon a reduced version of the solo violin<br />
part in the full score, without ossias, fingerings<br />
or bowing marks; this part does not seem<br />
to have been revised with the care that was devoted<br />
to the revision of the separate solo part;<br />
it was never completely brought into line with<br />
the revised text in Ds.<br />
In the present edition Ds, including Joachim’s<br />
fingering and bowing marks, has been taken as<br />
the copy text for the solo violin part and the ossias<br />
are given as footnotes on the relevant pages<br />
of the full score. Where Joachim added or modified<br />
bowing and fingering in his revised edition<br />
of (Js), the additional bowing marks<br />
have been given in round brackets and the fingerings<br />
in italics; Joachim’s additional performance<br />
instructions are also enclosed in round<br />
brackets; other changes are given in footnotes.<br />
In the following commentary it is to be understood<br />
that the text in Js is identical with that in<br />
Ds, unless otherwise stated.<br />
Dp has been taken as the copy text for the orchestral<br />
parts. Discrepancies between Dp and<br />
Dst are detailed in the Critical Commentary,<br />
except where markings in Dst are deemed necessary<br />
to supplement the text of the orchestral<br />
parts in Dp; in such cases the markings from<br />
Dst are given in round brackets in the score.<br />
All editorial markings are given in square<br />
brack ets. Editorial slurs are given as dotted<br />
lines.<br />
One aspect of Brahms’s notation that is rather<br />
haphazardly represented in the original engraving<br />
is the placement of staccato marks on<br />
the final notes of slurred phrases or figures.<br />
Brahms, like many earlier composers, including<br />
Beethoven, was largely consistent in his<br />
autographs in placing these staccato marks outside<br />
the slur (i. e. making a clear distinction<br />
between a staccato and portato execution), but<br />
it increasingly became the practice in printed<br />
editions to place the staccato mark within<br />
the slur. In the present edition, Brahms’s predominant<br />
practice in his autographs has been<br />
followed.<br />
The intended placement of crescendo and diminuendo<br />
hairpins in Brahms’s autographs is<br />
often ambiguous. Where no reasonable doubt<br />
as to their intended placement exists, minor<br />
discrepancies in the autograph have been<br />
passed over in silence; more problematic cases<br />
are discussed below.<br />
Allegro non troppo<br />
16 Cor1,2: Dp, Dst (Cor2, where 16 begins<br />
a new line) < ends in 15, but<br />
clearly to end 16 in Ap, Dst (Cor1).<br />
31n.3 V1: Dp, Dst no > (present in Ap, Ak,<br />
Dk).<br />
36n.1, n.5 V1: Dst 1 (fingering) presumably<br />
added by a player in Kst.<br />
37–40 V1: In all manuscript sources the<br />
notes are written as staccato e s.<br />
Brahms changed the e s to pairs of<br />
repeated x s in the proof of Ds; in a<br />
letter to Keller (c. 23 August, 1879) he<br />
instructed him: ‘The sixteenth notes<br />
on the first page of the solo part<br />
must naturally apply also to the first<br />
violin part of the orchestra.’<br />
65 Wind: Ap dol. added by Brahms for<br />
Ob, Cor3,4, Tr only; Dp in all wind<br />
except Fg and Cor1,2; Dst in all except<br />
Ob2, Cor1,2.<br />
90n.3 Solo V: Ap, Ak, Dp, Dk no dot under<br />
slur (present in As, Ks, Ds).<br />
92n.1, 96n.1 Solo V: Ks, Ak, Ds, Dk no b♭ 1<br />
tied from previous bar, but present<br />
in As, Ap; the discrepancy may have<br />
resulted from a copyist’s error in Ks 0<br />
that went unnoticed during revision<br />
and proof reading; but the presence<br />
of ties on the lower octave in the violin<br />
part in Ak (subsequently deleted)<br />
from bars 91/95, without the b♭ 1 in<br />
92/96, makes it more likely that the<br />
lower octave had been purposely de-<br />
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leted in Ks 0 , without the ties having<br />
been clearly cancelled; Ks was copied<br />
without either the lower tie from<br />
91/95 or the b♭ 1 in 92/96.<br />
95n.4 Solo V: Dp no > (present in all other<br />
sources).<br />
96n.2–9 Solo V: Ak, Dk no staccato (present<br />
in all other sources).<br />
102n.2 Solo V: As, Ks, Ds no f.<br />
103n.1–104n.12 Solo V: Ds, Dk diminuendo/<br />
dimin.; Ap, Ks, Dp > ; Ak has a<br />
partial > above the violin stave<br />
in 103 only and dimin. on the piano<br />
RH stave in 103.<br />
104n.10–12, 104n.13–105n.5 Solo V: Ap, Dp<br />
slurs; Ks, Ak, Ds slur from 104n.10–<br />
105n.5.<br />
105n.6–15 Solo V: Dk separate slurs on n.6–10<br />
and n.11–15 (all other sources single<br />
slur).<br />
128n.1 Cb: Dp no pizz (present in Ap, Dst).<br />
132n.2–3 Solo V: Dk, Dp no slur; As slur 132<br />
n.2–133n.1; Ap (added in dark red<br />
ink), Ak, Ks slur 132n.2–12; Ds slur<br />
132n.2–3; the long slur was evidently<br />
removed at proof stage, but the slur<br />
on n.2–3 was probably omitted from<br />
Dp and Dk through oversight; Joachim<br />
will have suggested the slur<br />
on n.2–3, present in Ds, to arrive at<br />
the point of the bow at the beginning<br />
of 133 and its addition was necessarily<br />
connected with the removal<br />
of the slur in 133 (see below).<br />
133n.2–3 Solo V: Ap, Ak, Ks slur, evidently removed<br />
in proofs, presumably in connection<br />
with the adjustment of bowing<br />
in 132 (see above).<br />
142 Va, Cb: Dst cautionary p perhaps<br />
added by a player in Kst.<br />
144n.1–2 Solo V: As, Ap, Dp, Ds no slur; Ks,<br />
Ak (added), Dk slur.<br />
146n.1–2 Solo V: As, Ap, Dp, no slur; Ks, Ak<br />
(added), Dk, Ds slur.<br />
151 Solo V: Dp, Ds ♮ before tr (rather than<br />
above as in Ks, Dk).<br />
152 Vc: Dst cautionary p.<br />
155–6 Solo V: In Js the original fingerings<br />
from Ds have been removed and replaced<br />
by alternative fingerings.<br />
162 Fg1,2, Cor1,2, V1,2, Va, Cb: Dst <<br />
starts at beginning of bar in all parts;<br />
Dp from third beat; Ap inconsistent<br />
(from near beginning of bar in Fg2,<br />
Cb, but later in others).<br />
170/411n.2 Solo V: The 0 (open string marking),<br />
which Brahms included in As,<br />
and which was reproduced in Ks and<br />
Ds, was removed and replaced by 4<br />
in Js; it is surprising that 0 was not<br />
changed earlier, since it involves an<br />
impractical jump across two strings<br />
between the preceding and following<br />
notes; with 4 a similar effect can<br />
be obtained by allowing the open<br />
string to resonate freely.<br />
174n.7–12 Solo V: As, Ap, Ak no
217n.2 Js no 1; Joachim’s revised fingering<br />
indicates a change of position on<br />
218n.1 rather than 2 nd position for the<br />
whole phrase.<br />
223 V1: Ap no p until 224; Dst, Dp p at<br />
223n.1.<br />
224n.1 Solo V: Ap, Ks, Ds p; Ak, Dk, Dp p<br />
on 223n.4 (this probably represents<br />
a deliberate modification in connection<br />
with the move of p from 224 to<br />
223 in V1 in Dst, Dp).<br />
224n.1 Strings: Ap p in all parts except Vc;<br />
Dst p in V2, Va, Cb; Dp p only in Va,<br />
Cb.<br />
231–2 Cl1,2, Fg1,2, Cor3,4: Ap > starts<br />
at beginning 231 and extends to 233<br />
(because of notes in 233 that were<br />
later deleted); Dst > for Fg2 begins<br />
in 230; in Dp 231 is at the end of<br />
a page and > stops in Cor3,4 at<br />
end 231 with no continuation overleaf.<br />
231n.2–232n.1 Solo V: Dp, Ds < does not<br />
cross barline (in Dp there is a page<br />
break and in Ds a line break); <<br />
to 232n.1 in Ap (Keller) following Joachim’s<br />
addition in Ks.<br />
232 Cor3,4: Dp continuation of > missing<br />
after page turn.<br />
237 Solo V: As on n.2; all other sources<br />
on n.1; in Ak it was originally written<br />
between n.1 and n.2, but changed<br />
by Brahms to n.1.<br />
238 Solo V: As on 239n.1; all other<br />
sources on 238n.2; in Ak it was originally<br />
written between n.1 and n.2,<br />
but changed by Brahms to n.2.<br />
240 Solo V: As, Ap on n.3; Ks between<br />
n.2 and n.3; Ak as Ks, but altered by<br />
Brahms to centre on n.2; all printed<br />
sources on n.2.<br />
247n.2 Solo Vl: Ks, Ak, Ds, Dk no staccato;<br />
Ap (partly obscured by ♯), Dp staccato.<br />
250 Solo V: In Js Joachim removed the<br />
4 on n.3 delaying the change of position<br />
until n.6.<br />
260n.1 Solo Vl: Dp staccato, probably added<br />
by engraver corresponding with V1,2<br />
(not in any other source).<br />
268–70 Solo V: Js slur from 268n.2 – 269n.13<br />
(thus reverting to Brahms’s original<br />
notation in Ap) and the staccato mark<br />
on 270n.1 (also absent in Ak, but apparently<br />
added to the proofs in Dk,<br />
where it occurs above the slur) removed.<br />
272n.1–6, 280n.1–6 Fg1,2, Vc/Cb: In Ap the<br />
repeated e s are indicated by abbreviations<br />
(a h . with a beam through<br />
the stem); in 272 and 280 Brahms<br />
wrote six staccato dots above the abbreviation;<br />
Dst has staccato marks in<br />
Fg1, 272, 280 and Fg2, 272–5, 280–3,<br />
but none in Vc/Cb; Dp has no staccato<br />
marks in any of these bars. It<br />
is possible, though highly unlikely,<br />
that Brahms deleted staccato marks<br />
in the proofs of Dp.<br />
288n.2 Vc: Dp no ♮ (present in Ap, Dst).<br />
300 Va: Dp centred between n.2 and<br />
n.3; Dst centred on n.2 (clearly centred<br />
on n.3 in Ap).<br />
305 Vc: Dst contains the instruction<br />
‘Vcell. solo’ as well as ‘Solo’ in 304<br />
(this was probably a misinterpretation<br />
of markings in Ap, where ‘Solo’<br />
in 304 indicated the entry of the<br />
solo violin and ‘V = Cello’ in 305 the<br />
fact that, because of an alteration,<br />
the Vc part was written on the Cb<br />
stave and the Cb part on a stave below);<br />
the instruction is not present in<br />
Dp; in the set of parts in the library<br />
of the Tonhalle Zürich, however, it<br />
is clear from a player’s manuscript<br />
mark ing that the instruction has been<br />
understood to mean that the passage<br />
should be played by a solo cello, and<br />
‘Tutti’ has been added at 332.<br />
309n.1–3, 310n.2–4 Solo V: Ak, Dk, Ds slurs;<br />
Ap slur in 309 extended to 310n.1<br />
by Keller; from 310n.2–311n.1 and 311<br />
n.2–312n.1 slurs also added by Keller;<br />
Dp follows the revised reading<br />
in Ap; the slur from 309n.1–310n.1<br />
is a matter of presentation, implying<br />
nothing different from a slur on 309<br />
n.1–3, but a slur from 310n.2–4 rather<br />
than from 310n.2–311n.1 implies a<br />
separation of the b♭-b♮; Ks has slur<br />
from 310n.2–311n.1.<br />
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312 Solo V: Ap Keller added grazioso in<br />
round brackets, following the copyist’s<br />
text in Ks, Ak (presumably reflecting<br />
an addition in Ks 0 ); it appears<br />
in round brackets in all printed<br />
sources.<br />
312n.2 Solo V: Ds no p; in Ap, Ks, Dk on n.1,<br />
in Dp on n.2 (which was evidently<br />
Brahms’s intended placement).<br />
314 Fg1: Dp no dolce (present in Ap and<br />
Dst).<br />
316n.7 Solo V: Js no 2; Joachim replaced the<br />
original change of position here with<br />
a position change on n.5.<br />
320 Solo V: Ks, Ds, Ak, Dk < starts<br />
from n.5; Ap, Dp from n.4.<br />
322 V1,2, Va, Vc/Cb: Ap > from between<br />
n.1 and n.2; Dst from n.2 in<br />
V1,2, but from n.1 in Va, Vc/Cb; Dp<br />
from n.2.<br />
Solo V: Ap, Dp > from n.2; Ak,<br />
Ks, Dk, Ds from n.1.<br />
322–3 Solo V: Ds line break between 322<br />
and 323, separate > signs from<br />
322n.1–6 and 323n.1–6.<br />
332 Solo V: Ks, Ak, Ds cresc. on n.3, Dk<br />
on 333n.1; Ap between n.2 and n.3;<br />
Dp on n.2<br />
336n.2 Solo V: Ap, Ks, Dp no ♮ above trilled<br />
note; ♮ present in Ak, Dk, Ds (where<br />
presumably added in proofs).<br />
336n.3, 337n.3 V1,2: Ap, Dp, Dst h ; altered to<br />
staccato q by Brahms, with marginal<br />
annotation in blue crayon, in his<br />
Hand exemplar and in the presentation<br />
copy of Dp given to Marie Soldat<br />
in 1885. In the Handexemplar<br />
the marginal annotation has been<br />
crossed through in pencil. It remains<br />
unclear whether Brahms intended<br />
the change to be a definitive revision<br />
of the text or whether he later<br />
rejected it. In the old Brahms Gesamtausgabe<br />
in 1926 Hans Gál included<br />
the revision in his main text,<br />
but made no mention of the pencil<br />
deletion in Brahms’s Handexemplar<br />
in his commentary. Robert Pascall<br />
(see Sources) argues persuasively that<br />
the pencil deletion indicates Brahms’s<br />
decision to revert to the original text,<br />
and this view has also been adopted<br />
by the NBA.<br />
337n.1 Solo V: Ds, Dp >; the > was erroneously<br />
inserted into Ap by Keller<br />
because of a misleadingly written<br />
accent in Ks, which actually applied<br />
to 332n.1 (on the stave immediately<br />
above); Ks, Ak, Dp, Dk separate tr<br />
sign; Ds extension of wavy line from<br />
previous bar (perhaps changed in<br />
proofs).<br />
340n.1 V1: Dp no ♮ before c 3 (pres ent in Ap).<br />
345n.1 Cl1,2: Unnecessary cautionary ♮ in<br />
Dp (not in Ap or Dst) probably added<br />
by the engraver by analogy with<br />
other woodwind.<br />
348 Vc: Dp no div. (Ap à 2, Dst div.).<br />
359n.1–3 V2: Dst staccato; Ap, Dp no staccato.<br />
365n.1 Solo V: As, Ap double stop b 3 /b 2 ;<br />
Ks, Ak b 2 deleted and 0 (harmonic)<br />
added below the note where it could<br />
easily have been overlooked by the<br />
engraver; Ds, Dk, Dp b 3 but no 0,<br />
which was almost certainly omitted<br />
in error (it is virtually inconceivable<br />
that Joachim or any other violinist<br />
of that period would not have used<br />
a harmonic here); Ak, Dk no staccato.<br />
367n.1 Timp: Dp no staccato (present in Ap,<br />
Dst).<br />
Cl1: Dst f [sic!].<br />
369n.1 Solo V: Ap, Ks, Ak, Ks, Dk, Dp no<br />
staccato; Ds staccato (presumably<br />
added in proofs).<br />
377 Solo V: Ap, Dp slur from n.1; Ak, Ks,<br />
slur beginning changed from n.1 to<br />
n.2; Ds slur from n.2; Dk slur beginning<br />
between n.1 and n.2.<br />
377n.1 Fg1,2: Dst sf; Ap no dynamic (Fg1,2<br />
originally had notes sustained<br />
through to 379 with the dynamic fp<br />
at 377n.1, but when Brahms altered<br />
the notes to the present version he<br />
deleted the dynamic and omitted to<br />
add a new one); Dp f.<br />
Timp: Dp no staccato (present in Ap,<br />
Dst).<br />
379n.4 Fl1,2: Dp cresc.; Ap cresc. above Fl<br />
stave on n.1; Dst cresc. immediately<br />
after p on n.1; the position of cresc.<br />
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in Dp appears to be a misreading of<br />
the cresc. for Ob in Ap, which is written<br />
above the Ob stave.<br />
380n.1–6 Fl1,2, Ob1, Cor1,2: Ap (Fl and Cor<br />
only), Dst < (as well as cresc. in<br />
379); Dp no < (presumably omitted<br />
from Dp as redundant).<br />
380n.1–3 Fg1: Ap, Dp no begins on n.2; Dp<br />
on n.1.<br />
441 V1: Dst dolce espress.; Ap, Dp dol.<br />
447 Va: Dp ‰ instead of Œ rest on 1 st beat.<br />
456–8 Cor1: Dp slur from 256–257n.1 and<br />
257n.1–258n.1 evidently an imperfect<br />
correction of the slurring in the<br />
proofs of Dp (perhaps because of<br />
the page break between 456 and 457),<br />
where the similar slurring pattern in<br />
Ap was corrected to the present version.<br />
461, 463 Fg, Cb: length of > in sources very<br />
variable; in Ap Cb in 463 and in Dp<br />
Vc in 461 and Fg2 in 463 extend to<br />
n.1 of following bar; others are within<br />
a single bar.<br />
464 Ob1: Dp no p (present in Ap [added<br />
in grey pencil], Dst).<br />
467n.1 Solo V: Ds p lusingando (previous<br />
> ends on 466n.4); in Ks ><br />
ends on 467n.1 and p lusingando begins<br />
between n.1–2; Ap, Dp as here.<br />
473 Solo V: Although all MS and printed<br />
sources have the < in 473 and the<br />
> in 474, there are several discrepancies;<br />
in As < begins on 473n.1,<br />
whereas in Ap it begins between n.3<br />
and n.4; the revised position in Js<br />
seems musically more plausible and<br />
accords with the parallel passage at<br />
230.<br />
474–5 Solo V: The < in 474 and the ><br />
in 475 appear only, as a correction in<br />
Js.<br />
480–3 Solo V: The positions of were probably<br />
meant to match the parallel passage<br />
at 237–40, as they do in Dp<br />
where it seems likely that Brahms<br />
adjusted them in the proofs; in 481–2<br />
Ap, Ak, Ks, Dk, Ds centred on the<br />
barline between the two bars; in 483<br />
Ap, Ks, Ds centred on n.3, Ak,<br />
Dk between n.2 and n.3.<br />
481–2 Solo V: Ds has a slur in both voices.<br />
483 Solo V: Ap slur apparently leads to<br />
484 (as in As), but there is no continuation<br />
in 484 (which begins a new<br />
page); at the parallel passage (240–41)<br />
the slur crosses the barline in As and<br />
Ap; in Ks, however, the slur is clearly<br />
to 240/483n.3, presumably reflecting<br />
a change in Ks 0 ; a slur across the<br />
barline in 483–4 would seem unlikely<br />
to have been intended, since it would<br />
end the phrase on a long up-bow.<br />
484–5 Va2: Ap, Dst slur; Dp no slur.<br />
490n.5 V2: Ap g 1 ; Dp, Dst a 1 ; presumably<br />
altered in proofs.<br />
501 Cor1,2: Ap f (probably altered to ff in<br />
proofs of Dp, Dst).<br />
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503n.1 Solo V: As, Ks, Ak, Ds, Dk no staccato;<br />
Ap, Dp staccato; f in As only.<br />
505–506 V1,2: Dst cresc. on 505n.9; Ap, Dp<br />
< from 505n.9–506n.12.<br />
509n.2–510n.5, 510n.6–10 Solo V: Ap, Dp slurs,<br />
probably arising from Keller’s misreading<br />
of Ks when entering a revision<br />
of the notes during preparation<br />
of Ap for engraving; an up-bow<br />
on 512n.1 was certainly envisaged<br />
by Jo achim.<br />
514n.2–515n.1 Fl1, Cl1: Fl1 no slur in any<br />
source; Cl1 slur in Ap, but not Dp;<br />
slur in Ob2 present in Ap, Dst, Dp.<br />
514n.2–515n.1 Fl2: Ap no tie (Brahms changed<br />
from 8va to loco at the barline); Dst<br />
and Dp tie.<br />
523n.2 Fl1: Dp upper stem missing.<br />
527 Solo V: In Js Joachim changed the instructions<br />
in Ds (tranquillo above the<br />
stave, and p dolce below the stave) to<br />
the composite direction p dolce e tranquillo<br />
below the stave, with in tempo<br />
above the stave.<br />
539 Cl1: Dp no p (present in Ap, Dst).<br />
549, 550, 556 Solo V: In Ap Brahms notated<br />
each of these bars with a single beam<br />
for all nine notes, but he later drew<br />
small pencil lines through the beams,<br />
dividing the notes into groups of<br />
three; in Ks, Ak, Dk, Ds the original<br />
notation was retained, but the revised<br />
notation appears in Dp.<br />
551 Cb: Dp no poco a poco cresc. (present<br />
in Ap, Dst).<br />
554 Solo V: Ds cresc. on n.7 although it<br />
occurs on 555n.1 in Ap, Ks, Dp (see<br />
following note).<br />
555 Tutti: Ap no stringendo; it is evident<br />
that there were adjustments here to<br />
incorporate the addition of stringendo,<br />
which does not appear in any of the<br />
MS sources (its addition was discussed<br />
in Brahms’s correspondence<br />
with Keller (Brahms – Keller, 28/32);<br />
in Dst and Dp it has been variously<br />
added: Dst is inconsistent, with cresc.<br />
e string. marked in some instruments<br />
and stringendo poco a poco in others,<br />
while Vc/Cb has string. in 556 as the<br />
final part of the instruction poco a<br />
poco cresc. e string. beginning at 551;<br />
in Dp the instruction is more consistently<br />
marked, string. occurring in<br />
all orchestral parts approx imately<br />
on beat 2, though it occurs on beat 3<br />
in the solo violin; in Ds it is placed<br />
under the second e of the bar.<br />
563–5 Solo V: Ap retains an earlier version<br />
of notes 1–2 in these bars (the lower<br />
note is d 1 instead of f♯ 2 ), although the<br />
final version, entered into Ks and<br />
Ak, is present in all printed sources.<br />
565 Cor1,2, Tr1,2, Timp: Dp, Dst (Cor2)<br />
mf on n.1.; Ap, Dst (Cor1 [ambiguous],<br />
Tr1,2, Timp) mf placed between<br />
n.1 and n.2.<br />
568–70 Fg1,2: Dp no à 2 or double stem (double<br />
stem in Ap).<br />
Adagio<br />
3 Ob1: Dst, Ks (cue) added by Brahms,<br />
Ds (cue), Ak, Dk p; but there was a<br />
well established tradition that dolce<br />
equated to a soft dynamic and<br />
Brahms, who was notably conservative<br />
in such matters, may well have<br />
considered dolce alone sufficient in<br />
the score, especially since the solo<br />
oboe would have been expected to<br />
accommodate its dynamic to the level<br />
of the accompaniment; the probability<br />
that the omission of a dynamic<br />
in the score was not merely the result<br />
of oversight is strengthened by<br />
the absence of a dynamic at b. 78 in<br />
Ap.<br />
4, 6, 10, 12, 16–18 Ob1: Brahms provided different<br />
articulation for the solo oboe<br />
part in Ap/Dp and Ak/Dk/Ds (see<br />
piano score for alternative version);<br />
Ks agrees with Ap/Dp except in b. 6,<br />
where it corresponds with Ak/Dk/<br />
Ds.<br />
7, 8 Fl1,2, Ob1, Cl1, Fg2: The intended<br />
placement of is unclear; in Ap it<br />
appears to apply to Fl1 and to be<br />
centred on the c 2 (there is no separate<br />
for Fl2), whereas in Cl1 <br />
is apparently centred both times on<br />
n.3 and in Fg2 on n.2, while in Ob1<br />
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the position of the sign is different<br />
in each bar, centring on n.2 in b. 7<br />
and between the n.4 and n.5 in b. 8;<br />
Dst is equally ambiguous, with <br />
centring after n.2 in Fl1 and before<br />
n.3 in Fl2, in Ob1 just before the final<br />
note, in Cl1 on n.3 and in Fg2<br />
between the n.2 and n.3; Dp places<br />
the sign under Fl2, apparently leaving<br />
Fl1 without a dynamic nuance;<br />
in Fl2, Ob1, Cl1, the centre of occurs<br />
on the second q beat of the bar,<br />
but in Fg2 between the second and<br />
third e s.<br />
10n.2–4, 11n.1–5 Cl2: Ap, Dp no slurs; Dst<br />
slurs.<br />
11 Fl1,2, Ob1, Cl1,2, Fg1,2: The in tended<br />
placement of is unclear; in Ap<br />
there is a single marking for each<br />
pair of instruments, the majority centring<br />
between the second and third<br />
e s, but in Cl1,2 the centre occurs with<br />
Cl1n.2 and between Cl2n.3 and n.4;<br />
in Dst Ob1, Cl2 the centre is clearly<br />
on n.3, while for Fl1, Fg1,2 it is between<br />
n.2 and n.3, Fl2, Cl2 between<br />
n.1 and n.2; Dp Fl1, Ob1, Fg1,2 centre<br />
between n.2 and n.3, Fl2 between n.1<br />
and n.2, Cl1 no , Cl2 centred on<br />
n.3.<br />
Ob1: Dp no dol. presumably engravers<br />
oversight (present in Ap, Ak, Ks<br />
(added by Brahms), Dst, Dk, Ds).<br />
17–18 Wind: Ap and Dp are broadly in<br />
agreement about the placing of <<br />
and > (only Fl1 differs, with ><br />
starting at the beginning of the note<br />
in 18 in Ap, although < crosses<br />
the barline between 17 and 18); in<br />
Dst < stops short of the barline<br />
in Fl, Cl2.<br />
22 Fg2: Dst no p.<br />
24 Fg2: Dst p.<br />
27n.1–4 Cl1: Dp, Dst no slur (present in Ap,<br />
Ak, Dk).<br />
29n.1–2 Cl2: Dp no slur (present in Ap, Dst).<br />
32 Cb: Dp, Dst no p (present in Ap).<br />
33n.2, n.5 Solo V: Fingering in Js, also in Ds at<br />
the parallel passage (81).<br />
35n.1–2 Solo V: Ap, Ak, Ks, Dp, Dk no slur<br />
(presumably added in proofs of Ds).<br />
35 Cor1: Dst espress. (presumably added<br />
in Kst).<br />
42 Cor1: Dp no ≈ before n.1 (pres ent in<br />
Ap).<br />
43 Fl1,2: Dst p< on n.1 in Fl2; Dp,<br />
Ap no dynamic; in Ap this passage<br />
is much altered, the last phase of<br />
corrections being in grey pencil; a<br />
< under the Fl2 entry and a ><br />
after the barline in 44 were added<br />
in grey pencil, but < was then<br />
deleted in the same pencil; above<br />
the stave, where Fl2 enters, Brahms<br />
wrote rf before the barline and ><br />
after it in grey pencil; these entries<br />
in grey pencil were clearly made<br />
before Brahms deleted the notes at<br />
the beginning of 44 in red ink and<br />
rewrote them immediately afterwards<br />
in the same ink together with<br />
a new > under the rewritten<br />
notes; Brahms seems to have been<br />
wrestling with the problem of satisfactorily<br />
indi cating the dynamics<br />
for both instruments; he possibly<br />
used rf in the old fashioned sense of<br />
a swelling accent (instead of to n.6; Ap, Ak,<br />
Dp, Dk to n.8.<br />
45 Solo V: Dp, Dk > from n.2; Ds<br />
from n.3 (in Ap the sign begins ambiguously<br />
between n.2 and 3)<br />
45n.4–5 Solo V: Brahms seems to have been<br />
uncertain how the grace notes should<br />
be played; in Ap they had both dots<br />
and a slur (portato?) but these were<br />
later deleted; in Ak they were (and<br />
remained) slurred; in Ks they had a<br />
slur which was deleted; the removal<br />
of the slur (and the original portato<br />
notation in Ap) may suggest that con-<br />
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trary to normal practice they were<br />
envisaged to be played with separate<br />
bows, though it is also possible<br />
that they were intended, according<br />
to convention, to be slurred in with<br />
the preceding note.<br />
49n.6–7 Solo V: Dp no slur (obviously engraving<br />
error).<br />
53n.9–14 Solo V: Ds > deriving from carelessly<br />
added > in Ks, where it<br />
extends from n.9–16; the positioning<br />
of Brahms’s added > in Ap (from<br />
n.11–17) is clear; Dp n.10–17.<br />
54 Ob1,2: Ap mf cresc. written above Fl<br />
stave, but evidently intended to apply<br />
also to Ob; Dst mf cresc.; Dp cresc.<br />
54n.1 Va: Dp no p (present in Ap).<br />
54–5 Ds has ritard. instead of poco a poco<br />
for the orchestral cue just before the<br />
largamente in 56; the change was evidently<br />
made in the proofs. This indicates<br />
clearly that Brahms envisaged<br />
a broadening of the tempo here, not<br />
merely a change of mood (in Ks he<br />
had added then deleted più sostenuto<br />
at 56).<br />
60 Solo V: Ks, Ak, Ds, Dk, Dp from<br />
n.5–7; Ap < from n.4–7.<br />
61 Solo V: Ds < from n.2–6; Ks, Ak<br />
from n.3–6; Dp from n.5–7; Ap from<br />
between n.3 and 4–n.7.<br />
64n.1 Vc: Dp no p (present in Ap).<br />
66n.1–3 Solo V: Ds slur from n.2–3; Ap, Ak,<br />
Ks, Dp, Dk from n.1–3; the slurring<br />
in Ds is possibly an engraver’s error<br />
overlooked during proof reading<br />
rather than a deliberate change in<br />
the proofs, since, assuming the downbow<br />
start after the fermata in 63,<br />
which Joachim marked in Js, this<br />
pattern of slurring would lead to an<br />
improbably sequence of bowstrokes<br />
in the following bars; in Js, rather<br />
than restoring the phrasing in Dp,<br />
Joachim added a slur over 66n.7–9<br />
with a dot on n.9 (i. e. to make the<br />
beginning of 67 a down bow, which<br />
it would have been if n.1–3 had been<br />
slurred).<br />
67n.4–10, 68n.4–10 Solo V: Dk, Dp slur; Ak,<br />
from between n.4 and n.5 in 67, but<br />
clearly from n.5 in 68; Ap, Ks, Ds,<br />
from n.5–10 in both bars.<br />
69n.7–12 Solo V: Ks, Ds, Ak, Dk beamed as<br />
two triplets; changed by Brahms to a<br />
sextuplet in Ap.<br />
71 Solo V: Ks cresc., squeezed in under<br />
slur, begins on n.4; Ak no cresc.; Dk,<br />
Ds cresc. on n.6; Dp cresc. on n.2; Ap<br />
cresc. on n. 3.<br />
72n.5–6 Cb: Dp slur; Ap, Dst no slur; the absence<br />
of slurs in any source in the<br />
equivalent figure in 71, together with<br />
the fact that without slurs Cb corresponds<br />
more closely with Vc, suggests<br />
that the inclusion of a slur in<br />
Dp was an engraver’s error rather<br />
than a deliberate revision by Brahms.<br />
73 Solo V: In Js Joachim replaced the<br />
slur from n.4–9 with a slur from<br />
n.2–9 and added a down bow sign<br />
on n.2.<br />
74n.1–2 Fg2: Dst no slur (present in Ap, Dp).<br />
74n.1 Cor1,2: Ap >, Dst (Cor1) dim calando<br />
above note and > below;<br />
Dst Cor2 > only; Dp dim. only.<br />
76 Solo V: Ap dolce directly after and<br />
still under n.1; Dp under n.2; Ks, Ds<br />
dolce under n.1, directly below .<br />
76n.2–3 Solo V: Dp no slur; Ap, Ak, Ks, slur<br />
added; Dk, Ds slur.<br />
77n.1 Solo V: In Js Joachim removed the 1<br />
although it is clearly still intended to<br />
be played with a first finger.<br />
79n.11–12 In Js Joachim added the slur, which<br />
he enclosed in brackets, presumably<br />
as an alternative, without altering<br />
the original slurring.<br />
82n.1–2 Solo V: Joachim removed the original<br />
4 4 fingering, replacing it with<br />
3 3.<br />
83n.1 Solo V: Ap, Dp no dol.; present in Ks,<br />
Ds, Dk (where presumably added in<br />
proofs).<br />
85 Solo V: Ak, Ks, Dk, Ds < from<br />
n.7–12; Ap, Dp from n.1–12.<br />
86 Solo V: Ak, Ks, Dk, Ds > from<br />
n.1–6; Ap, Dp from n.1–12.<br />
89–90 Cor1,2: Brahms’s intentions for dynamics<br />
in these bars are obscured by<br />
discrepancies between the sources;<br />
Dp no < in 89, no in 90; Dst<br />
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in 89 and > in 90 in both parts<br />
(despite the shortness of the note for<br />
Cor2 in 90); Ap originally had <<br />
throughout 89 and > throughout<br />
90, but Brahms later deleted > in 90<br />
and replaced it with , crushed into<br />
the available space after the sec -<br />
ond Cor2 rest and centring on n.4<br />
(this change was evidently made after<br />
Kst had been copied); it is probable<br />
that the omission in Dp of any<br />
dynamic signs for Cor in these bars<br />
was an oversight, although it is conceivable<br />
that they were removed in<br />
the proofs; Brahms’s placement of<br />
crescendo and decrescendo signs is<br />
often somewhat haphazard, and it<br />
seems probable from the context that<br />
the in Ap was meant to centre on<br />
n.3 rather than n.4.<br />
95 Fl2: Dst (Fl2) cresc.; Ap has cresc.<br />
above the Ob1 entry (it appears in<br />
the same position in Dp), which may<br />
have been taken by the copyist of<br />
the parts as an instruction for Fl2;<br />
the instruction is, however, clearly<br />
necessary for the individual player.<br />
96 Solo V: Ds slur from n.1 ends ambiguously<br />
between n.5 and 6; Ks, Ak,<br />
Ap, Dp, Dk clearly to n.6.<br />
97n.4 Cor1: Dst p (probably a player’s marking<br />
in Kst).<br />
97–9 Solo V: From 95–9 Joachim added<br />
slurs in Ks, which were later copied<br />
into Ap by Keller; in the proofs of<br />
Ds (corrections to the plates are apparent),<br />
Dk and Dp some of these<br />
were removed, probably to aid the<br />
crescendo; in Js Joachim reinstated<br />
slurs on 97n.8–9 and 99n.1–2.<br />
98n.1 Solo V: All sources except Ap no<br />
dim.; probably copyist’s and engraver’s<br />
oversight (the dim is written<br />
above the part with espress. dolce<br />
added below by Keller).<br />
114 Cl1: Dp no pp (although pp for Fl1<br />
present); Ap, Dst pp.<br />
Allegro giocoso, ma non troppo vivace<br />
1 V2, Va: Ap, Dp poco forte abbrevi ated<br />
as pf (although written out in full in<br />
V1, Vc, Cb); Dst poco forte.<br />
9, 10, 12–14 Fl2: Dst staccato dot on n.2 (perhaps<br />
a player’s marking in Kst).<br />
25n.5, 26n.1, n.5 Solo V: In the final version<br />
of this passage, written by Brahms<br />
on the cover of Ak (see letter to Keller<br />
of August 1879), he wrote sf on<br />
25n.5 then deleted it, and omitted sf<br />
on 26n.1 and n.5; Dp, Dk, Ks sf ; Ds<br />
no sf; in Ap sfs were written in connection<br />
with the ossia version, but<br />
never applied to the original version<br />
that was later reinstated.<br />
25–6 Solo V, Fl1,2, Cl1, Fg1,2, Strings: Dst,<br />
Ds reflect Ap, Ak, Ks in including<br />
< after cresc., or, in the case of<br />
V1,2, having < instead of cresc.;<br />
as in several similar occurrences the<br />
signs have been omitted in Dp.<br />
27n.1 Fl1, Ob1, Cl2, Fg1: Dp ♮ before tr; Ap<br />
(where Ob marked col Flauti) after<br />
tr.<br />
Va : Ap à 2, Dp a 2; Dst div.<br />
27n.2 Fg1, Cl1, 28n.2 Cl1: Dst staccato dot,<br />
perhaps reflecting a performance instruction<br />
added in Kst 0 .<br />
27–34 Va: Ap, Dp common stems; Dst Va1<br />
and 2 on separate staves.<br />
49n.1 Solo V: Dp staccato, probably added<br />
by Keller or engraver by analogy<br />
with strings, almost certainly without<br />
Brahms’s authorisation; although<br />
its addition by Brahms in the proof<br />
cannot be excluded.<br />
Cb: Dst, Dp staccato, presumably by<br />
analogy with upper strings, but unlikely<br />
to have been intended in pizzicato.<br />
49–51 Solo V: Ap positioning of inconsistent;<br />
Dp from 49n.2–50n.5<br />
and 50n.7–51n.6; Ks, Ak, Ds, Dk as<br />
here.<br />
51–2 Solo V: Ap, Ks, Ak < and cres at 51n.7;<br />
Ds, Dk < in 51, cresc. at 52n.4 (but<br />
surely intended for 52n.5); Dp cresc.<br />
alone at 51n.7; the version in Ds, Dk<br />
was clearly amended in the proofs,<br />
as was the version in Dp, but incon-<br />
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sistently; probably > was inadvertently<br />
omitted in Ds, Dk at 52<br />
n.1–3.<br />
57 Solo V: Ds, Dp energicament, evidently<br />
added in proofs; not in Ap,<br />
Ks, Ak, Dk.<br />
57–60 Solo V: Ap 57n.2–3, 58n.1–4 staccato<br />
dots changed to strokes, although<br />
on 59n.1–2, 60n.2–3 Brahms wrote<br />
staccato strokes from the first; Ks,<br />
Ak 57n.2–3, 58n.1–4, 59n.1–2, 60n.2–3<br />
staccato dots changed to strokes (in<br />
Ks slurs above the articulation on 57<br />
n.1–2, 58n.1–4, 60n.2–3 were de leted,<br />
apparently at the same time the dots<br />
were changed to strokes; this presumably<br />
occurred after Brahms’s<br />
correspondence with Jo achim about<br />
this passage in May 1879); Ds slurs<br />
above the strokes in 57, 58, 60 (as<br />
bowing indications) were evidently<br />
replaced in the proofs.<br />
59–60 Fg1,2: Ap, Dst, Dp staccato dots on<br />
all notes, but the unison passage<br />
in Vc has staccato strokes on these<br />
notes in all sources; in Ak Brahms<br />
wrote dots in the piano left hand,<br />
but added the instruction marcato<br />
(which was printed in Dk); clearly<br />
Fg1,2 were not expected to articulate<br />
differently from Vc, Cb.<br />
61n.1 Cb: Dst, Dp no staccato, presumably<br />
copyist’s/engraver’s oversight (present<br />
in Ap).<br />
61–4 Fg2: Staccato marks and accents absent<br />
from Dp, but present in Dst; in<br />
Ap Brahms altered the original Fg2<br />
part, which was in octaves with Fg1<br />
and shared the same stems; in the<br />
revised version, using grey pencil,<br />
Brahms added a e stem to n.1 and<br />
n.3 in each bar and over-wrote the<br />
original n.2 and n.4 with ‰ s. Comparison<br />
with the equivalent passage<br />
at 154–7, where the passage is written<br />
without alterations, indicates that<br />
Brahms envisaged staccato, but not<br />
accent in Fg2.<br />
64n.3, 65n.1 Solo V: Staccato dots in all sources,<br />
but at the equivalent passage (157–8)<br />
the dots were changed to strokes in<br />
Ap, Ak, Ks and they appear there as<br />
strokes in all printed sources; the<br />
amendment was presumably omitted<br />
at 64–5 through oversight.<br />
73–6 Fg1,2, V1,2, Va, Vc: Although all<br />
sources have staccato dots in these<br />
bars it seems likely that Brahms envisaged<br />
the same style of performance<br />
as at 57–60; Ak, Dk have the<br />
instruction ben marcato in the piano<br />
part at 73.<br />
79, 81, 172, 174 Va, Vc: There is irreconcilable<br />
confusion in the sources about the<br />
dynamics here; in Ap p was added<br />
in dark pencil (except Va in 79 and<br />
Vc in 174) and in 172, 174 the original<br />
h notation of the Va part was changed<br />
to qq with f on the first and p on the<br />
second (presumably by Keller); Dst,<br />
Dp f in Va on 172 i, but no p in these<br />
instruments in any of these bars; in<br />
Ak Brahms ex tensively rewrote the<br />
piano part in these bars at both<br />
places (indicating that he went back<br />
and altered them after both had<br />
been written), in cluding > on the q .<br />
b 1 /a 1 with a general p at the half bar;<br />
it is conceivable that in the proofs of<br />
Dp Brahms removed the dynamic<br />
markings that had been added in<br />
Ap, thus leaving the Va/Vc notes ff/f,<br />
but if so he failed to ra tionalise the<br />
tied q s in Va in 172, 174 that had<br />
been introduced in Ap in connec -<br />
tion with the amended dynamics;<br />
the version proposed in the present<br />
edition corresponds with Brahms’s<br />
piano reduction and with the practical<br />
performance implications of the<br />
passage.<br />
85 Cor3,4: Ap, Dst no f (present in Dp).<br />
89 Vc/Cb: Ap f ; Dst, Dp no dynamic.<br />
93n.4 Vc: Ap, Dp mf; Dst mf on n.2, which<br />
was surely Brahms’s intention.<br />
99 Cb: Ap, Dst, Dp q s, but in Ak Brahms<br />
notated the passage with staccato e s<br />
as at b. 7 and it was printed thus in<br />
Dk; an exact repetition of the earlier<br />
passage in Cb was surely Brahms’s<br />
intention, the discrepancy arising in<br />
Ap from the fact that he notated<br />
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only the Cb line and solo violin in<br />
96–8, indicating the other parts with<br />
numbers referring back to 6–8; Dst<br />
no staccato (present in Ap and Dp).<br />
110–13, 115 V2: Dst staccato on n.2.<br />
117 Solo V: In Js Joachim added the 1 on<br />
n.2 and n.5 in brackets as an alternative<br />
fingering.<br />
119n.1–4 Solo V: Dp x s, presumably an unnoticed<br />
engraving error, since all other<br />
sources have three triplet x s followed<br />
by a e.<br />
122–3 Solo V: Ap (added by Keller), Ks <br />
on 122n.4, n.12 only; Dk, Ds, Dp <br />
also added on 122n.8, 123n.4.<br />
125n.6 Solo V: Dp b 2 (or c♯ 3 with missing<br />
leger line).<br />
132n.3–4 Solo V: Js Joachim removed the fingerings<br />
4 3, replacing them with 3 2.<br />
132–3 Solo V: Ap, Ak, Ks, Dk, Ds on<br />
132n.4 and 133n.4 only; Dp also<br />
added on 132n.8, 133n.8, presumably<br />
intended also on 132n.12.<br />
136n.1 Solo V: Dp espress.; in all other<br />
sources on 135n.12 (presumably displaced<br />
in Dp because 135 comes at<br />
the end of a page).<br />
Vc: Dp no p (present in Ap, Dst).<br />
138n.1–2 Vc, Cb: Dp slur but no portato dots<br />
(presumably an error overlooked in<br />
proof reading); Ap, Dst portato.<br />
141–2 Fl1,2, Fg1,2: Ap f on 141n.1; the sf s on<br />
n.1, 3, 6 were added later by Brahms<br />
in pencil; Dp, Dst no f on 141n.1.;<br />
since it is consistently absent from<br />
both these printed sources, the f was<br />
probably removed in proofs as unnecessary.<br />
143n.1 Strings: Ap no staccato; Dst all staccato<br />
except V1; Dp staccato on all.<br />
145 Solo V: Ks, Dk cresc. on n.10; Ds on<br />
n.11 (Ap, Dp as here).<br />
148n.1 Fg1,2: Dp no staccato; Ap, Dst staccato;<br />
the chord is marked staccato in<br />
Ak, Dk.<br />
150–53 Solo V: Ap 150n.2–3, 151n.1–4, 153n.2–3<br />
staccato dots changed to strokes, although<br />
on 152n.1–2 Brahms wrote<br />
staccato strokes from the first; Ks,<br />
Ak 150n.2–3, 151n.1–4, 152n.1–2, 153<br />
n.2–3 staccato dots changed to strokes<br />
(in Ks slurs above the articulation<br />
on 150n.1–2, 151n.1–4, 153n.2–3 were<br />
deleted as in 57–60, apparently at<br />
the same time the dots were changed<br />
to strokes; this presumably occurred<br />
after Brahms’s correspondence with<br />
Joachim about this passage in May<br />
1879); Ds slurs above the strokes<br />
in 150, 151, 153 (as bowing indications)<br />
were evidently replaced in the<br />
proofs.<br />
152–3 Fg1,2, Vc, Cb: Staccato dots in all<br />
sources, but perhaps intended as staccato<br />
strokes; the piano part is marcato<br />
in Ak, Dk (see note to 59–60).<br />
154n.2–158n.1 Cb: Dp staccato marks in all<br />
bars except 157 where n.1 has > and<br />
n.2 no marking; Ap, Dst no staccato;<br />
the markings in Dp are surely an error<br />
by the engraver: the > on 157n.1<br />
clearly derives from a misreading of<br />
Ap where, for this note only, Brahms<br />
wrote the Vc accent between the Vc<br />
and Cb staves, while the staccato<br />
marks were probably added by analogy<br />
with Fg2 (Brahms would not<br />
normally have added staccato marks<br />
in pizzicato).<br />
163 V2, Va : Dp redundant 6 (sextuplet<br />
indication).<br />
166–9 Cl1,2, V1,2, Va, Vc: See note to 73–6<br />
(the piano part is ben marcato at 166<br />
in Ak, Dk).<br />
172,4 Va, Vc: See note to 79, 81.<br />
175n.1 V2: Dp no > (present in Ap, Dst).<br />
179 Cor3,4: Dp no slur (present in Ap,<br />
Dst).<br />
190 Fl1, Ob1: Dp slur but no staccato; in<br />
Ap (where Fl is in 8) the slur and<br />
stac cato were added in grey pencil.<br />
192, 194 V1,2: Dp accidentals before tr.<br />
195n.2–3 Solo V: Js Joachim removed and replaced<br />
the original fingering.<br />
197–200 Solo V: Ap, Ks, Ak, Dp > on n.1<br />
in each bar; Ds, Dk no >, indicating<br />
that Brahms removed the accents<br />
in the proofs; presumably he overlooked<br />
the discrepancy when checking<br />
Dp.<br />
199 Solo V: Ap, Ks, Ak, Dp no cresc.; cresc.<br />
in Ds (at n.4), Dk (at n.3, in align-<br />
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ment with cresc. in the piano part)<br />
evidently added in proofs, presumably<br />
intended to be in alignment with<br />
the orchestral crescendo.<br />
207 Fg1,2, Cor3,4: Dp no staccato; present<br />
in Ap, Dst (Fg1, Cor4).<br />
211 Fg1,2: Dp no à 2 or double stems; à 2<br />
in Ap.<br />
Vc, Cb: Dp no staccato (present in<br />
Ap, Dst).<br />
214n.1 Solo V: Dp staccato, not in other<br />
sources or in the parallel figure at<br />
216, and presumably erroneous.<br />
222n.3 Solo V: Dp staccato, not in other<br />
sources and presumably erroneous<br />
(in the context it would, in any case,<br />
be superfluous, especially if Joachim’s<br />
bowing in Js, with three successive<br />
down bows in 222–3, were<br />
adopted).<br />
223n.4–224n.1 Solo V: Dp no slur, evidently<br />
omitted in error (present in all other<br />
sources).<br />
228n.1–6 Solo V: Ks, Ak, Ds, Dk < ; from<br />
227 half bar in Ap, Dp, probably<br />
shortened in Ks because of a line<br />
change between 227 and 228.<br />
233 Cb: Dst, Dp staccato, but probably<br />
added erroneously by analogy with<br />
the other strings; Ap no staccato.<br />
225n.4–226n.2 Solo V: Slur added in Js somewhat<br />
ambiguously, without dele -<br />
tion of original slurs, presumably<br />
to indicate an optional bow change<br />
on e 2 .<br />
237n.1–2 Solo V: Dp no tie, evidently omitted<br />
in error (in all other sources).<br />
237n.2 Solo V: Ks, Ds ♮ after tr.<br />
243n.1 Solo V: Ak, Dp < begins here; Ap<br />
from second half of 242; Ks, Ds from<br />
beginning 242; the present edition<br />
follows Ap.<br />
245 Solo V: Dp separate tr (after page<br />
turn).<br />
Strings: Ap no dynamic (the dynamics<br />
in Fl, Cl, Cor were added in grey<br />
pencil and it seems likely that<br />
Brahms overlooked the need to add<br />
them in the string parts); Dst, Dp p<br />
in V1.<br />
246 Solo V: Dp wavy line after trill probably<br />
engravers error (not in Ap); Ak,<br />
Ks, Ds centred on n.1; Dp centred<br />
on n.2; in Ap the intended placement<br />
is ambiguous, the being centred<br />
between n.1 and n.2, but it was probably<br />
intended to match in Fl, Cl,<br />
as it does in Dp.<br />
247n.1 Solo V: Ds no staccato, probably an<br />
engraver’s error (present in Ap, Ks,<br />
Ak, Dp).<br />
248 Solo V: Ks, Ds < only to n.4 (probably<br />
because of lack of space, caused<br />
by the following low note).<br />
260, 262 Solo V: Js Joachim added 3 on n.4<br />
and removed 1 on n.5 in both bars,<br />
thus bringing forward the position<br />
change by one note.<br />
262 Cor1,2, Timp: Dp redundant cresc.,<br />
stemming from Brahms’s abbreviated<br />
notation in Ap, indicating the<br />
repetition of 259–60 at 261–2.<br />
264 Solo V: Dp ‰ after n.1 (engraver’s error).<br />
264n.2–7(8) Solo V: Ks contains alternative<br />
versions by Joachim, one with six qj r s<br />
ending in f♮, the other, written below<br />
on a separate stave with the superscript<br />
oder (or), with seven, ending<br />
in g♯; the version with seven<br />
notes was copied into Ap and Ak by<br />
Keller and appears in Dk, Dp; the<br />
version with six was printed in Ds<br />
and is also retained in Js, presumably<br />
indicating that this was the version<br />
Joachim played; neither version<br />
appears anywhere in the sources in<br />
Brahms’s hand. If Brahms preferred<br />
the seven-note version he presumably<br />
did not notice that the solo violin<br />
part, which he and Joachim proofread<br />
together in early August 1879,<br />
contained the six note version.<br />
271 Solo V: Ks, Ak, Ds, Dk ben marcato;<br />
the ma was an addition in Ap and<br />
was included in Dp.<br />
Fl1: Ap, Dst p, but apparently arising<br />
from the fact that in Ap Brahms originally<br />
intended the flute part in 269–<br />
70 to be given to Fl2, with Fl1 taking<br />
over in 271; Dp no p.<br />
272 V1: Dp cresc., as well as in 273, evi-<br />
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dently an engraver’s error; Ap, Dst<br />
cresc. only in 273.<br />
273 Fl1, Ob1, Fg1: Dp p cresc.; Ap Fl1 part<br />
indicated by in 8 (i. e. an octave higher<br />
than Ob1), Ob1 p cresc. (where p<br />
added in grey pencil), Fg1 cresc., Dst,<br />
Fl1, Fg1 cresc. Ob1 p cresc.; the addition<br />
of the unnecessary p in Dp Fl1,<br />
Fg1 was presumably the engraver’s<br />
initiative.<br />
273n.1–3 Solo V: Ak, Ds, Dk, Dp no staccato;<br />
Ap, Ks staccato; presumably omitted<br />
erroneously from the copied solo<br />
part in Ak and from the printed material.<br />
273 Solo V: Ks, Ds no cresc., evidently<br />
copyist’s oversight (present in Ak,<br />
where the violin part was copied<br />
from Ks 0 , but later deleted, on the<br />
basis of Ks by Keller, then reinstated<br />
in Dk, but not in Ds.<br />
275 Vc, Cb: Dp no 3 (triplet indication);<br />
present in Ap, Dst.<br />
278 Cl1,2: Dp no < ; present in Ap,<br />
Dst.<br />
279 Fl1: Dp no pp; Ap Fl not written out<br />
(in 8); Dst pp.<br />
279n.2 Vc: Dp legg.; follows pp immediately<br />
in Ap and Dst.<br />
279–80 Timp: Dp no staccato; present in Ap<br />
(n.1–4), Dst (n.1–3 only)<br />
279–283, 284 Cor1,2, Vc: Dp, Dst no staccato<br />
on n.1–3 in 279–83 or 284n.2–4 (present<br />
in Ap).<br />
281n.4–6 Solo V: Ap, Ks, Ak, Ds no staccato<br />
(present in Dk (also on 282n.1–3),<br />
Dp).<br />
281n.1, n.2 Va: Dp erroneous e flags (the single<br />
‰ s are correctly positioned under<br />
the e s in V2); Ap has q s followed by<br />
a ‰ .<br />
284n.1 Vc: Dp, Dst no staccato (present in<br />
Ap).<br />
285n.2 Cb: Dp given erroneously as three<br />
triplet e s; q in Ap, Dst.<br />
284–7 Cor1,2: Ap no staccato on n.1 (present<br />
in Dst, Dp).<br />
295n.2 Ob1: Dp no staccato (present in Ap,<br />
Dst).<br />
297n.2 Ob1: Dp no staccato (present in Ap,<br />
Dst).<br />
298–99 Solo V: Ap > begins from n.3; Ks,<br />
Ds, Dk from n.1; Ak from n.2; Dp<br />
from n.5.<br />
302–3 Solo V: Ks, Ak, Ds, Dk no staccato<br />
(present in Ap, Dp).<br />
304n.1–3 Solo V: Ks, Ak, Ds, Dk no staccato<br />
(present in Ap, Dp).<br />
304 V2: Dp no pp (present in Ap, Dst).<br />
304–6 Cor1,2: Dp, Dst no staccato on n.1–3<br />
(present in Ap).<br />
304–8 Vc: Dp no staccato on n.2–4; Ap staccato<br />
on n.2–4; Dst staccato in 304, no<br />
staccato on n.2–4 in 305–8.<br />
307–8 Cor1,2: Dp, Dst no staccato on n.2–4<br />
(present in Ap).<br />
309n.1 Timp: Dp no staccato; present in Ap,<br />
Dst.<br />
310 Cor1,2: Dp no staccato; Ap, Dst (Cor1)<br />
staccato.<br />
324n.2 Solo V: Js no 2 (made redundant by<br />
added 2 on 323n.8).<br />
327, 328 Cor1,2: Dp, Dst no staccato on n.1–3<br />
(present in Ap).<br />
Tr1,2, Timp: Dp no staccato n.1–3<br />
(pres ent in Ap, Dst).<br />
327n.1 Solo V: Dk, Ds staccato; Ap, Ak, Ks<br />
staccato, but also with a slur from<br />
325, in connection with a version<br />
of 324–5 that was probably altered<br />
dur ing Brahms’s and Joachim’s proof<br />
reading of Ds in August 1879; Dp no<br />
staccato; bars 324–5 were evi dently<br />
re-engraved in Ds, yet appear to<br />
have been engraved in their revised<br />
form from the start in Dk and Dp; it<br />
is possible that Brahms removed the<br />
stac cato mark in the proofs of Dp,<br />
since the new version seems less<br />
likely to have been en visaged with a<br />
staccato final note (this is sug gested<br />
in particular by the absence of staccato<br />
on the fi nal note of the deleted<br />
antepenultimate version of bars 325–<br />
7 in Ap and Ks).<br />
328n.1 Cl2: Dst no >.<br />
329 Solo V: Ap, Ak, Ks, Dk, Ds f; Dp ff<br />
evidently changed in proofs to match<br />
preceding orchestral ff.<br />
331, 332 Tr1,2, Timp: Dp no staccato on n.1–3;<br />
Ap staccato in Timp only; Dst staccato<br />
in Tr and Timp.<br />
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333 Solo V: Ak, Ks, Dk, Ds no f (present<br />
in Ap, Dp).<br />
Tr1,2, Timp: Rest in all sources, but<br />
in Ap Brahms indicated b. 332 with<br />
repetition signs and left bb. 333–4<br />
blank (without any indication of<br />
rests); it seems highly likely that he<br />
simply forgot to write the first notes<br />
in b. 333 and that the omission remained<br />
unnoticed at later stages.<br />
335–6 Cor1–4, V1,2: Ap < variously from<br />
n.1 or n.2; Dst from n.1 (Cor3,4n.2);<br />
Dp from n.2 (Cor1,2, V1,2) and n.3<br />
(Cor3,4).<br />
Tr1,2: Dp no < ; present in Ap,<br />
Dst.<br />
337 Fl1,2: Ap indicated with the abbreviation<br />
8 (i. e. an octave above<br />
Ob1,2 which were originally in unison<br />
on a 2 ), but Brahms subsequently<br />
changed Ob2 from a 2 to a 1 and a<br />
question mark in grey pencil above<br />
the 8 indicates uncertainty here; Dst,<br />
Dp Fl1,2 on a 2 suggests Brahms’s<br />
sanction of this reading.<br />
337–8 Solo V: Dp slur ends on 337n.11; all<br />
other sources on 338n.1<br />
338 Solo V: Ds staccato dot under slur<br />
(but outside slur in Ap).<br />
339 Timp: Dst, Dp fp, but marked fpp in<br />
Ap, in the same grey pencil as the<br />
alteration of Cor1,2, V1,2, Vc from fp<br />
to fpp.<br />
339n.2, 340n.1 Solo V: Dp no staccato (present<br />
in all other sources).<br />
340n.2–4 Solo V: Ds, Dp, Dk no 3 (triplet indication)<br />
(present in Ap).<br />
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CRITICAL COMMENTARY<br />
to Johannes Brahms’s piano reduction<br />
Allegro non troppo<br />
10 Dk RH (lower part) no slur (present<br />
in Ak).<br />
11 Ak LH n.1–6 no slur (present in Dk).<br />
24 Ak n.2 no cautionary naturals on b,<br />
b 1 , b 2 (present in Dk).<br />
33 Dk RH n.5 erroneous staccato (not in<br />
Ak).<br />
36–41 None of the three versions sketched<br />
in Ak corresponds entirely with the<br />
version in Dk, which was presumably<br />
modified further in the proofs.<br />
36n.2 The accent appears in the first two<br />
versions of this passage in Ak (written<br />
in Brahms’s hand) but not in the<br />
third version, apparently written by<br />
Keller in the bottom margin.<br />
53 Viol. in Ak but not Dk.<br />
86, 87 Ak no arpeggio sign before LH n.1.<br />
87 Ak first LH x on G; Dk RH n.2 no<br />
staccato (present in Ak), probably<br />
omitted in error.<br />
104–5 Dk no tie; Ak tie, probably overlooked<br />
by the engraver.<br />
117–18 Ak. Dk slur extends well beyond<br />
last note 117 into the margin (there<br />
is a line break between 117 and 118<br />
in both sources), but new slur begins<br />
on 118n.1 in both sources.<br />
125–6 Ak LH no tie (probably because of<br />
line break between these bars).<br />
136 Ak no a tempo; bass note notated as h .<br />
with no tie to 137.<br />
141 In Dk the stem of the f♯ on the second<br />
beat is joined to that of the d 1<br />
immediately above it, but in Ak it is<br />
written as a separate q (surely an engraver’s<br />
error).<br />
161 Ak LH no slur.<br />
184 Ak RH the chord on the third beat<br />
has g 1 instead of b 1 , presumably<br />
changed in the proofs.<br />
187 Dk no arpeggio sign before RH n.1,<br />
probably omitted in error.<br />
214–17 Ak n.1–2 originally staccato, changed<br />
by Brahms to slurred; the staccato<br />
mark on n.2 remains undeleted in<br />
Ak and was probably overlooked by<br />
the engraver.<br />
216 Ak RH n.1 no (evidently added to<br />
Dk in proofs).<br />
224 Dk n.1 dim. the engraver’s misreading<br />
of Brahms’s dol. in Ak.<br />
233 Ak no pedal release sign (evidently<br />
added to Dk in proofs).<br />
243 Dk LH slur from n.1–3 evidently an<br />
engraver’s error (from n.2–3 in Ak).<br />
254 Dk RH n.2 no >; in Ak the > is partly<br />
obscured by an ink blot.<br />
256 Dk LH n.2 no > (present in Ak).<br />
260 Ak no arpeggio sign before LH n.1<br />
(evidently added to Dk in proofs).<br />
266 Dk LH n.1 no staccato (present in<br />
Ak).<br />
284 Dk LH n.1 staccato, probably added<br />
autonomously by the engraver (see<br />
RH and 276n.1 where there is no staccato<br />
in Dk or Ak); Ak no staccato<br />
(although here and at 276 the cue in<br />
the violin stave has staccato on this<br />
note as in the orchestral score).<br />
296 Dk LH n.2 no staccato (present in Ak<br />
and probably omitted erroneously<br />
by the engraver).<br />
298 Ak RH n.3 has an a in the chord,<br />
which was probably removed in the<br />
proofs.<br />
314 Dk LH n.1 staccato, probably added<br />
erroneously by the engraver; Ak<br />
no staccato, nor in the orchestral<br />
score.<br />
346 Dk RH n.1, n.7 no staccato (present<br />
in Ak).<br />
373–4 Ak Brahms indicated slurs across<br />
the bar line for all notes of the RH<br />
chords (perhaps simplified in the<br />
proofs).<br />
375–6 Ak Brahms indicated slurs across<br />
the bar line for the upper two notes<br />
of the chord (see preceding entry).<br />
408 Dk LH n.2 staccato probably added<br />
autonomously by the engraver; Ak<br />
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no staccato, nor in the corresponding<br />
passage (167) in either source.<br />
409 Dk LH n.1 no > evidently engraver’s<br />
error; Ak > as in the corresponding<br />
passage (168) in both sources.<br />
410 Dk LH n.2 no staccato (present in<br />
Ak).<br />
431 Ak no legato (evidently added in the<br />
proofs of Dk).<br />
441 Ak LH n.1 additional e C♯/G♯ (as well<br />
as h . C♯/G♯), perhaps removed in Dk<br />
for the sake of clarity, although the<br />
equivalent notation remains in 451.<br />
461 Dk no >; Ak >, probably omitted<br />
from Dk in error.<br />
457, 459 Ak LH n.1 no staccato, presumably<br />
Brahms’s oversight (present in Dk).<br />
467 Ak (pizz) immediately after dolce; Dk<br />
(pizz) erroneously placed in 468.<br />
Ak n.2 no staccato; Dk staccato, probably<br />
added in proof.<br />
468 Ak LH n.1, RH/LH n.2 no staccato;<br />
Dk staccato, probably added in proof.<br />
490 Ak RH n.4 no f 1 in chord; probably<br />
added in proofs of Dk (present in<br />
V2).<br />
508 Dk LH n.1 no arpeggio sign; Ak arpeggio<br />
(probably omitted erroneously<br />
from Dk).<br />
515 Dk RH 3 rd beat no staccato; Ak staccato.<br />
531 Dk no >, presumably engraver’s<br />
oversight (present in Ak).<br />
536 Dk pedal release placed rather earlier<br />
than in Ak (presumably the engraver’s<br />
error).<br />
542, 546, 550, 554 Ak no pedal release markings<br />
(presumably added in proofs of<br />
Dk).<br />
553–8 Ak has poco a poco cresc. in 553–4; the<br />
marking cresc. e stringendo poco a poco<br />
was added in the proofs<br />
555–8 Ak no pedal or pedal release markings<br />
(evidently added in proofs of Dk<br />
where they are crammed between<br />
the RH and LH staves).<br />
559 Ak f at top of RH stave perhaps overlooked<br />
by the engraver, but probably<br />
removed by Brahms to prevent the<br />
dynamic getting loud too soon (see f<br />
at 565).<br />
561 Dk RH n.4 no staccato (present in<br />
Ak).<br />
562 Dk RH n.3 no staccato (present in<br />
Ak).<br />
562 Ak RH n.4 no staccato (present in<br />
Dk).<br />
Adagio<br />
3–31 Ak the notes etc. on the solo violin<br />
stave are in Brahms’s hand.<br />
8 Dk centred just after n.2, but on<br />
n.3 in Ak.<br />
10 Ak RH n.2–3 no slur (evidently added<br />
in Dk).<br />
12 Ak RH n.2–4 no slur (evidently added<br />
in Dk).<br />
16 Dk RH n.3 Q downward stem on c 1 ,<br />
evidently an engraver’s error.<br />
18–19 Dk RH beams from 18n.1–3 and<br />
18n.4–19n.4; in Ak Brahms drew a<br />
beam from 18n.1–3 but a large blot<br />
obscures the final chord and any intended<br />
beam across the bar line;<br />
Brahms’s intention here remains uncertain,<br />
but, in relation to the orchestral<br />
parts and Brahms’s slurring in<br />
the piano part, any possible significance<br />
of a beam across the bar line<br />
seems obscure.<br />
20–21 Dk RH no slur (present in Ak).<br />
25 Dk RH slur from n.1–4; presumably<br />
the engraver overlooked Brahms’s<br />
rather faint pencil amendment of the<br />
slur to begin on n.2 in Ak.<br />
45 Ak LH n.1,2 on 1 st and 3 rd e s of the<br />
bar; evidently changed in proofs of<br />
Dk.<br />
54 Ak LH n.3 notated as E.<br />
59 Dk n.1–3, 5–7 no slurs; Ak slurs<br />
surely intended as such, not merely<br />
as indicators of triplets; Dk LH n.5–6<br />
(tenor) no slur (present in Ak).<br />
75 Ak dim., no calando; Ak LH n.3–4<br />
(bass) q .<br />
76 Ak LH n.1–2 (bass) q .<br />
79 Ak RH n.2–3 no portato.<br />
80 Dk no Viol. (present in Ak).<br />
86 Ak RH no e stem on 2 nd beat g 1 .<br />
93 Dk LH n.1 no staccato (present in<br />
Ak).<br />
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95 Dk LH n.3 no q stem (present in Ak).<br />
101 Ak no < .<br />
102 Ak no >.<br />
105 Ak LH 2 nd q beat no d♭ 1 in chord.<br />
106 Ak RH 4 th e beat no e 1 in chord.<br />
108 Dk RH n.1–4 slur probably an engraver’s<br />
error; from n.2–4 in Ak.<br />
109 Ak RH n.2 f 1 instead of g 1 in chord.<br />
Allegro giocoso, ma non troppo vivace<br />
8 Ak LH n.1–2 no staccato<br />
9–14 The version of the LH part in Ak<br />
(see footnote in score) was evidently<br />
simplified in the proofs; Brahms’s<br />
placement of the staccato dot on n.7<br />
is not wholly consistent, but his<br />
intention seems to have been that<br />
it occur outside the slur (in Dk the<br />
staccato is generally placed immediately<br />
after the end of the slur rather<br />
than over or under it): he may well<br />
have intended to make a distinction<br />
here between a staccato mark (as in<br />
portato) that separates the note from<br />
the one before and a staccato mark<br />
that merely shortens the note above<br />
which it is placed without interrupting<br />
the legato connection to the previous<br />
note.<br />
10 Dk RH n.2 staccato (not in Ak).<br />
20 Dk RH n.4 no staccato (present in<br />
Ak).<br />
27–30 Ak LH as in 9–12, but no Ped. marking<br />
in 27.<br />
34 Ak RH n.1 chord includes e 1 , n.3<br />
chord includes g 1 , n.4 chord includes<br />
c♯ 2 .<br />
44 Dk RH n.6 no staccato (present in<br />
Ak).<br />
45 Ak RH n.1 b♯ in place of a in the<br />
chord.<br />
46 Dk LH n.2 no ♯ (present in Ak).<br />
55 Dk no arpeggio sign, probably the<br />
engraver’s oversight, but possibly removed<br />
in the proofs.<br />
59 Ak RH slur over whole bar.<br />
64 Ak RH no slurs.<br />
65 Ak LH n.1 the upper octave e has<br />
been deleted by Brahms, but it is<br />
present in Dk (perhaps reinstated in<br />
the proofs); the equivalent note is<br />
present at the parallel passage (158)<br />
in both sources.<br />
67–8 Ak RH no slurs.<br />
71 Ak no pedal release.<br />
78 Dk RH n.2,4 no staccato (present in<br />
Ak).<br />
80 Ak LH n.2,3 staccato; probably removed<br />
in proofs, since at the parallel<br />
passage (173) Ak also has staccato<br />
that does not appear in Dk.<br />
82 Ak ff, presumably changed in proofs;<br />
at the parallel passage (175) Brahms<br />
wrote f in Ak.<br />
85–7 Dk RH n.3,4 not in Ak (presumably<br />
added in proofs).<br />
89–91 Ak LH n.3,4 full-size notes with no<br />
indication that they should be ‘kleine<br />
Noten’.<br />
91 Ak no pedal release.<br />
101–3 Ak LH as in 9–11.<br />
117 Dk no ♮ before RH n.4 c 1 (present in<br />
Ak).<br />
125, 127 Ak RH n.2 no staccato (perhaps<br />
added by Brahms in proofs, but if so<br />
it does not correspond with the full<br />
score).<br />
128, 129 Ak LH n.3 no staccato, probably<br />
added in proofs because of pizzicato<br />
in the score.<br />
131 Ak LH n.1–6 no slur (present in<br />
Dk).<br />
134–5 Dk cresc. with 134 RH n.4 and <<br />
from 135 RH n.2–4; Ak < with<br />
134 RH n.4 and < from 135 RH<br />
between n.1 and 2 to n.4; in Ak there<br />
is a page turn between 134 and 135<br />
and in Dk a line break; Brahms’s<br />
intention was clearly a continuous<br />
< from 134–5 as in the full score.<br />
136 Dk LH n.2 no Ped. (present in Ak),<br />
probably overlooked by engraver.<br />
141 Ak f before sf on n.1; perhaps removed<br />
from proofs as redundant.<br />
Dk n.3, 5 sf above RH stave and below<br />
LH stave, evidently because the<br />
proximity of the RH and LH beams<br />
prevents sf being engraved between<br />
the staves; Ak sf only below LH<br />
notes.<br />
153 Ak RH n.1–2 no slur.<br />
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155–7 Ak RH no slurs.<br />
160–1 Ak RH no slurs.<br />
162 Ak RH n.1–6 no slur.<br />
173 Ak LH n.2,3 staccato, possibly removed<br />
in proofs of Dk (see above<br />
80).<br />
178 Dk n.3 no ff (present in Ak), probably<br />
omitted in error.<br />
190–96 Dk places all staccato marks at the<br />
end of slurs within the slur, except<br />
on 191n.2; in Ak Brahms consistently<br />
places them outside the slur.<br />
196 Dk RH n.2–3 beamed together, n.4<br />
separate; Ak n.2–4 beamed together<br />
(the change in Dk seems unlikely to<br />
have stemmed from Brahms.<br />
201 Ak RH n.1–2 no slur.<br />
202 Dk RH n.1 >, evidently the engraver’s<br />
misinterpretation of the > in the<br />
solo violin part, which is below the<br />
violin stave.<br />
207–8, 211–12 Ak no pedal release signs.<br />
234–5 Ak LH 234n.3–235n.2 beamed together.<br />
235 Dk LH n.3 no staccato (in Ak).<br />
237–8 Ak LH 237n.3–238n.2 beamed together;<br />
RH 237n.3–238n.1 beamed<br />
together.<br />
254 Ak RH n.4 e 1 in chord, probably removed<br />
in proofs.<br />
267–73 Ak, Dk the staccato on the note following<br />
the three grace notes is consistently<br />
placed above the note; this<br />
is in accordance with Brahms’s typical<br />
practice of placing the staccato<br />
mark outside the slur when it indicated<br />
shortening without separation<br />
from the preceding note.<br />
279–288n.2 Ak RH no staccato marks.<br />
311 Dk LH n.4 no > (present in Ak).<br />
325 Dk n.1 no f; present in Ak, probably<br />
overlooked by engraver.<br />
326 Ak e chord on beat 1: A/a/c♯ 1 /g 1 /a 1 ,<br />
but in connection with the later replaced<br />
solo violin part.<br />
331, 332 Dk LH n.1–3 no staccato (present in<br />
Ak).<br />
334 Ak LH n.1 additional D and arpeggio<br />
sign before the chord, presumably<br />
removed in proofs.<br />
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CRITICAL COMMENTARY<br />
to Joseph Joachim’s Cadenza<br />
SOURCES<br />
S1 (original edition)<br />
Title page<br />
Cadenz / zum / Concert für Violine / von / Johannes<br />
Brahms / (Op. .) / von / JOSEPH JO-<br />
ACHIM / Preis Mk . / Verlag und Eigenthum<br />
für alle Länder / von / N. SIMROCK G. m. b. H.<br />
IN BERLIN / London Depôt: ALFRED LENG-<br />
NICK, Berners Street, W.<br />
First page of music<br />
CADENZ / zum / Concert für Violine / von /<br />
Johannes Brahms. [right] Joseph Joachim. /<br />
[bottom left] Copyright by N. Simrock,<br />
G. m. b. H. Berlin [centre] [or] <br />
Copies in D-Bhm, D-Hs with pl no. (the<br />
copy in D-Bhm (Signatur RB ) originates<br />
from Joachim’s personal library)<br />
Copies in CH-Zz, D-B with pl. no. <br />
Apart from the plate number these copies are<br />
identical.<br />
S2 (revised edition)<br />
Title page<br />
JOACHIM / CADENZ ZUM VIOLINCONZERT /<br />
VON JOHANNES <strong>BRAHMS</strong>, OPUS 77 / CA-<br />
DENCE POUR LE CONCERTO POUR VIO-<br />
LON / DE JOHANNES <strong>BRAHMS</strong>, OPUS 77 /<br />
CADENZA TO THE VIOLIN CONCERTO / BY<br />
JOHANNES <strong>BRAHMS</strong>, OPUS 77 / N. SIMROCK,<br />
LEIPZIG / MUSIKVERLAG / [left] Imprimé en<br />
Allemagne [right] Printed in Germany<br />
First page of music<br />
Cadenz / zum / Brahms Violin Konzert, / [right]<br />
Joseph Joachim / [bottom left] Copyright <br />
by N. Simrock, G. m. b. H. Berlin [centre] pl.<br />
no. <br />
Copy in D-Hs probably dating from the late<br />
s.<br />
V (new edition)<br />
Published as part of Joachim’s revised edition<br />
of the solo part of the Violin Concerto in Joseph<br />
Joachim and Andreas Moser Violinschule (Berlin,<br />
Simrock, ), iii, –, pl. no. <br />
K1 manuscript copy by Marie Soldat<br />
No title<br />
Copied in or shortly before (A-Wgm A<br />
a/IX ). The copy contains several<br />
sketches by Brahms, indicating possible abbreviations,<br />
and an interpretation of these by<br />
Marie Soldat. 1<br />
K2 manuscript copy by Anna Löw<br />
Title page (r) in ink<br />
J. Joachim’sche / Cadenz / zum Violin Concert / von<br />
Johannes Brahms / Wien . Mai / Anna Löw<br />
First page of music (v) in ink<br />
Cadenz / zum Violinkonzert von Johannes Brahms<br />
The copy was perhaps made from a manuscript<br />
copy of the cadenza in possession of Löw’s<br />
teacher Karl Prill, a pupil of Joachim. As argued<br />
in the Preface to the full score, 2 the close<br />
correspondence of the abbreviation with that<br />
in Soldat’s copy, suggests that the version from<br />
which Löw made her copy was, in part, derived<br />
directly or indirectly from Soldat’s copy;<br />
the differences between Löw’s and Soldat’s<br />
version, however, especially in the last bars,<br />
indicate that the abbreviated passage had been<br />
entered into a copy of the cadenza that originally<br />
reflected an earlier or later version of Joachim’s<br />
cadenza.<br />
COMMENTARY<br />
When Joachim’s cadenza was published in the<br />
spring of , a press release referred to ‘numerous<br />
[manuscript] copies, which, because<br />
they contain errors of every kind, are worthless’<br />
and added that ‘in the future these will be<br />
prosecuted and punished by the composer as<br />
pirate editions.’ 3 Some of the divergences referred<br />
to in this notice are evident in the man-<br />
1 For discussion of Brahms’s intervention in this<br />
copy see Preface. A full critical text of the original and<br />
abbreviated versions of the cadenza, together with a<br />
facsimile is given in NBA p. ff.<br />
2 See p. XI–XIII.<br />
3 Signale für die musikalische Welt lx (), .<br />
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uscript copies made by Marie Soldat and Anna<br />
Löw and these are described in the critical<br />
commentary. The version of the cadenza in the<br />
Joachim and Moser Violinschule was probably<br />
engraved either directly from an annotated<br />
copy of S1 or from a corresponding manuscript<br />
(this is indicated by the erroneous omission of<br />
a ♮ before the f 1 in bar in both S1 and V) but<br />
V also contains a number of significant differences<br />
from S1 (identified below); these will<br />
have derived directly from Joachim and must<br />
therefore be considered as authorised revisions.<br />
For that reason the Violinschule version<br />
has been taken as the copy text for the present<br />
edition. In the present state of bibliographical<br />
knowledge, it remains unclear why an otherwise<br />
identical copy of S1 was issued with a<br />
different plate number. S2 is printed from the<br />
same plates as the original edition, but with<br />
some re-engraving, including the modernisation<br />
of bowing signs from and to ≥ and ≤ ),<br />
and the addition of the missing ♮ in bar , as<br />
well as many more fingerings and bowings.<br />
The changes will perhaps have been made<br />
around , in connection with the issue of<br />
Simrock’s collection of thirteen ‘berühmten<br />
Kadenzen’, thus having no direct connection<br />
with Joachim, but it has been impossible at<br />
present to ascertain the date of the revision.<br />
A much later reissue of the Simrock edition,<br />
printed in England, with a title page that gives<br />
the publisher as ‘N. SIMROCK / London Hamburg<br />
(D-Bhm DB ), which is printed from<br />
the same plates (plate number ) without<br />
alteration to the musical text (the fingering <br />
is still wrongly placed on the second note of<br />
bar ), contains the words ‘Rev. Ossip Schnirlin’<br />
at the bottom right of the first page; Schnirlin<br />
(–) edited much violin music and<br />
was author of the book Der neue Weg zur Beherrschung<br />
der gesamten Violinliteratur (). It is<br />
noteworthy that the text of the last five bars in<br />
the revised version has not been changed from<br />
that of the original edition to incorporate the<br />
revisions in V, except for the addition of a fingering<br />
on the third note of bar .<br />
The copy text, therefore, is V, which contains<br />
Joachim’s last ascertainable revisions; additional<br />
fingering and bowing from S2, which seems<br />
entirely consonant with Joachim’s practice, is<br />
given in italics. All other differences between<br />
≥<br />
≤<br />
the printed sources are discussed below. Major<br />
differences between K1 and K2 and the printed<br />
editions are listed. 4 References below to bar<br />
numbers in K1 and K2 are to the equivalent<br />
bars in the printed edition.<br />
1n.3 S1 no 2; S2 2 incorrectly printed<br />
above n.2.<br />
5n.4–6n.1 In all printed sources the tie on a 1<br />
is present, including the copy of S1<br />
in D-B (contrary to the indication in<br />
NBA p. 300).<br />
19–20 K1, K2 no d 1 on 19n.5 and 20nn.1,<br />
4, 5.<br />
21n.2 K1 ritardando.<br />
21–2 K1 rhythm: e ≈ x q . ≈ x|q . e e e<br />
K2 rhythm: e ≈ x q . e|q . e e e<br />
29n.2 K1 riten. e dimin.<br />
31n.1 K1 ‰ U instead of e 1 .<br />
31n.2 K1 a piacere.<br />
33 K1 a tempo.<br />
53n.4 S2 ♮ before f 1 .<br />
62/63n.10 V, S1, S2 3, but surely a misprint for<br />
2, since a third finger here is highly<br />
implausible.<br />
63 K1 omitted.<br />
66n.1 K1, K2 tr.<br />
72–3 K2 notated as a single bar with three<br />
q e 3 s; the x s are given as grace notes<br />
at the same pitches as in the printed<br />
editions.<br />
72n.3 S2 no double dot of prolongation.<br />
76nn.11, 12 K2 e♯ 1 , f♯ 1 .<br />
77 K1 x s a, b, c♯ 1 d 1 followed by chromatic<br />
scale in q ë r s from d♯<br />
1<br />
to e 2 and a<br />
final q ë r f♯ 2 ; K2 x s d♯1, e 1 , f♯ 1 , g 1 , g♯ 1 ,<br />
a 1 , b 1 , c♯ 2 , d♯ 2 , e 2 , e♯ 2 , f♯ 2 .<br />
78 K1 x s g 2 , d♯ 1 , e 1 , f♯ 1 followed by q ë r s<br />
g 1 , g♯ 1 , a 1 , b 1 , c♯ 2 , d 2 , e 2 , f♯ 2 by chromatic<br />
steps to a♯ 2 .<br />
78n.2 S1, S2 3.<br />
78n.6 S1, S2, K1 d 2 (V, K2 d♯ 2 ).<br />
79n.10 S1, S2, K1 b♯ 2 (V, K2 b 2 ).<br />
80n.1 S1, S2 no fingering.<br />
81n.3 S1, S2 no fingering.<br />
82 S1, S2 slurs on n.1–4 and 5–6.<br />
4 The full texts of K1 and K2 can be seen in NBA<br />
pp. –.<br />
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