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<strong>BRAHMS</strong><br />

Concerto in D major<br />

for Violin and Orchestra<br />

op. 77<br />

Edited by<br />

Clive Brown<br />

Critical Commentary<br />

Bärenreiter Kassel · Basel · London · New York · Praha<br />

BA 9049


ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS<br />

It is a pleasure to acknowledge the co- operation<br />

and assistance of a number of people and organisations<br />

in the preparation of this edition.<br />

My first thanks go to the staff at Bärenreiter,<br />

for their helpfulness and support. I am particularly<br />

grateful to Irene Schallhorn for painstaking<br />

efforts in obtaining material and facilitating<br />

access to collections and to Douglas<br />

Woodfull-Harris for his consistent encouragement<br />

and advice.<br />

I am indebted to the following archives for providing<br />

material and permissions: the Gesellschaft<br />

der Musikfreunde, Vienna; the Library<br />

of Congress, Washington DC; the Staatsbibliothek<br />

zu Berlin; the library of the Universität der<br />

Künste, Berlin; the Staats- und Universitätsbibliothek,<br />

Hamburg; the library of the Tonhalle,<br />

Zürich.<br />

Clive Brown<br />

4


SOURCES<br />

Lost or conjectural material is given in italics<br />

A 0<br />

Autograph sketches and drafts<br />

As<br />

Autograph draft of the solo violin part (Berlin,<br />

Staatsbibliothek zu Berlin)<br />

Six folios, -stave music paper (. × . cm),<br />

without watermark, containing the first movement<br />

(pp. –) and the beginning of the finale<br />

(pages –).<br />

Ap<br />

Brahms’s autograph full score (Washington, Library<br />

of Congress)<br />

folios of -stave music paper (. × . cm).<br />

The music begins on page ; f. v is unnumbered<br />

and blank.<br />

Ks o<br />

Solo violin part used by Joachim for the early<br />

performances<br />

Kst 0<br />

Manuscript orchestral parts<br />

Ks<br />

Copyist’s manuscript of the solo violin part<br />

(Washington, Library of Congress)<br />

folios, -stave music paper (. × . cm.)<br />

with plain paper cover. Manuscript title page<br />

(evidently added when filed in Simrock’s archive):<br />

Johannes Brahms / op. Violinconcert /<br />

Prin cipalstimme / Stichvorlage.<br />

Ak<br />

Autograph piano reduction with copied violin<br />

part (Vienna, Österreichische Nationalbibliothek)<br />

folios -stave music paper (c. . × . cm.)<br />

plus inserted folio (f. ) -stave music paper<br />

(. × . cm.); title page and pages of music;<br />

folios v and v blank; folios r, r, v,<br />

v have slips of paper, of the same type as f. ,<br />

pasted in. Manuscript title page (in the same<br />

hand as that of Ks): Johannes Brahms / op. Violin<br />

concert / Clav. Ausz. / Manuscript.<br />

Ds<br />

Published solo violin part<br />

CONCERT / für / VIOLINE. / Solo-Violine.<br />

printed pages; Pl. no. <br />

There were at least three further impressions<br />

of the original edition between and ,<br />

none of which involved any alteration to the<br />

text.<br />

In a new edition, edited by Joachim, was<br />

printed largely from the same plates with revisions<br />

(see Js below).<br />

Dk<br />

Published piano score<br />

JOSEPH JOACHIM / zugeeignet. / CONCERT /<br />

für / VIOLINE / mit Begleitung des Orchesters<br />

/ von / JOHANNES <strong>BRAHMS</strong>. / Op. . /<br />

CLAVIER – AUSZUG. / Preis M. _ / Ent. d Stat.<br />

Hall. / Verlag und Eigenthum / N. SIMROCK<br />

in BERLIN. / . / Lith Anst. v. C. G. Röder,<br />

Leipzig<br />

printed pages; Pl. no. <br />

There were a number of later impressions with<br />

variant title pages, but no changes were made<br />

to the original plates of the music.<br />

Brahms’s personal copy (Handexemplar) is in<br />

A-Wgm. It contains no corrections.<br />

Dp<br />

Published full score<br />

JOSEPH JOACHIM / zugeeignet. / CONCERT /<br />

für / VIOLINE / mit Begleitung des Orchesters<br />

/ von / JOHANNES <strong>BRAHMS</strong>. / Op. . /<br />

PARTI TUR. / Preis M. _n. / Ent. d Stat. Hall. /<br />

Verlag und Eigenthum / N. SIMROCK in BER-<br />

LIN. / . / Lith Anst. v. C. G. Röder, Leipzig<br />

printed pages; Pl. no. <br />

A number of later impressions were issued<br />

without any alteration of the musical text.<br />

Two copies that belonged to Brahms are held<br />

in A-Wgm (XI and IX ): an ordinary<br />

copy of the score (Handexemplar) and a decorated<br />

and richly-bound copy, presented to him<br />

by Simrock, which Brahms later gave to the<br />

young violinist Marie Soldat in . In both<br />

these copies Brahms made a blue crayon cor-<br />

6


ection at I – which he also indicated in<br />

the margin (see Critical Commentary); in the<br />

Handexemplar the marginal annotation has<br />

been crossed through in pencil. 1<br />

Dst<br />

Published orchestral parts<br />

parts: Fl. I, II, Ob. I, II, Clar. I, II, Fag. I, II;<br />

Cor. I–IV, Tromb. I, II, Timp.; Viol. I, II, Va., Vc.<br />

e B.<br />

No title page. Pl. no. <br />

Later impressions were issued without alteration<br />

of the musical text.<br />

1 Robert Pascall ‘Brahms and the definitive text’<br />

Brahms: biographical, documentary and analytical studies<br />

ed. R. Pascall (Cambridge, , p. ) argues that the<br />

pencil crossing out is to be seen as a restitution of the<br />

original text.<br />

Js<br />

Published solo violin part revised edition<br />

A new edition of the solo violin part was published<br />

in volume three of the Joachim and Moser<br />

Violinschule in as no XVI of the section<br />

entitled Sechzehn Meisterwerke / der Violinliteratur<br />

/ bezeichnet / und mit Kadenzen versehen<br />

/ von / JOSEPH JOACHIM / ==== / Sixteen<br />

Standard Works / for the Violin / edited<br />

with original cadenzas / and marks of expression<br />

/ by / JOSEPH JOACHIM. This contains a<br />

few small revisions to the articulation and dynamics<br />

of the original edition (most notably at<br />

I –, – and II ) as well as changes<br />

to fingering and bowing directions (see Critical<br />

Commentary). It also contains Joachim’s<br />

cadenza inserted, together with the end of the<br />

first movement, on three newly engraved plates<br />

(pl. no. – the plate number of the third<br />

volume of the Violinschule). The text of the<br />

cadenza differs slightly from that published<br />

separately by Simrock in , in respect of fingering<br />

and bowing. The revised edition was<br />

later reissued with the double plate number<br />

/, but without Joachim’s cadenza and<br />

with the final page of the first movement reinserted<br />

in its original version with the single<br />

plate number .<br />

The following stemma indicates the relationships<br />

between surviving and lost (conjectural)<br />

sources, and has been taken as a basis for the<br />

present edition.<br />

<br />

August<br />

A 0 ( st and rd movements)<br />

November<br />

A 0 ( nd movement)<br />

As<br />

October November – December<br />

Ap<br />

December<br />

Ks 0 Kst 0<br />

<br />

February<br />

Ks<br />

February – March<br />

Ak<br />

October<br />

<br />

Ds Dk Dp Dst<br />

Js<br />

7


CRITICAL COMMENTARY<br />

EDITORIAL PROCEDURES<br />

Brahms did not apparently intend the printed<br />

full score (Dp) to serve as the definitive text of<br />

the concerto as a whole. For practical reasons,<br />

especially ease of use as a conducting score, he<br />

settled upon a reduced version of the solo violin<br />

part in the full score, without ossias, fingerings<br />

or bowing marks; this part does not seem<br />

to have been revised with the care that was devoted<br />

to the revision of the separate solo part;<br />

it was never completely brought into line with<br />

the revised text in Ds.<br />

In the present edition Ds, including Joachim’s<br />

fingering and bowing marks, has been taken as<br />

the copy text for the solo violin part and the ossias<br />

are given as footnotes on the relevant pages<br />

of the full score. Where Joachim added or modified<br />

bowing and fingering in his revised edition<br />

of (Js), the additional bowing marks<br />

have been given in round brackets and the fingerings<br />

in italics; Joachim’s additional performance<br />

instructions are also enclosed in round<br />

brackets; other changes are given in footnotes.<br />

In the following commentary it is to be understood<br />

that the text in Js is identical with that in<br />

Ds, unless otherwise stated.<br />

Dp has been taken as the copy text for the orchestral<br />

parts. Discrepancies between Dp and<br />

Dst are detailed in the Critical Commentary,<br />

except where markings in Dst are deemed necessary<br />

to supplement the text of the orchestral<br />

parts in Dp; in such cases the markings from<br />

Dst are given in round brackets in the score.<br />

All editorial markings are given in square<br />

brack ets. Editorial slurs are given as dotted<br />

lines.<br />

One aspect of Brahms’s notation that is rather<br />

haphazardly represented in the original engraving<br />

is the placement of staccato marks on<br />

the final notes of slurred phrases or figures.<br />

Brahms, like many earlier composers, including<br />

Beethoven, was largely consistent in his<br />

autographs in placing these staccato marks outside<br />

the slur (i. e. making a clear distinction<br />

between a staccato and portato execution), but<br />

it increasingly became the practice in printed<br />

editions to place the staccato mark within<br />

the slur. In the present edition, Brahms’s predominant<br />

practice in his autographs has been<br />

followed.<br />

The intended placement of crescendo and diminuendo<br />

hairpins in Brahms’s autographs is<br />

often ambiguous. Where no reasonable doubt<br />

as to their intended placement exists, minor<br />

discrepancies in the autograph have been<br />

passed over in silence; more problematic cases<br />

are discussed below.<br />

Allegro non troppo<br />

16 Cor1,2: Dp, Dst (Cor2, where 16 begins<br />

a new line) < ends in 15, but<br />

clearly to end 16 in Ap, Dst (Cor1).<br />

31n.3 V1: Dp, Dst no > (present in Ap, Ak,<br />

Dk).<br />

36n.1, n.5 V1: Dst 1 (fingering) presumably<br />

added by a player in Kst.<br />

37–40 V1: In all manuscript sources the<br />

notes are written as staccato e s.<br />

Brahms changed the e s to pairs of<br />

repeated x s in the proof of Ds; in a<br />

letter to Keller (c. 23 August, 1879) he<br />

instructed him: ‘The sixteenth notes<br />

on the first page of the solo part<br />

must naturally apply also to the first<br />

violin part of the orchestra.’<br />

65 Wind: Ap dol. added by Brahms for<br />

Ob, Cor3,4, Tr only; Dp in all wind<br />

except Fg and Cor1,2; Dst in all except<br />

Ob2, Cor1,2.<br />

90n.3 Solo V: Ap, Ak, Dp, Dk no dot under<br />

slur (present in As, Ks, Ds).<br />

92n.1, 96n.1 Solo V: Ks, Ak, Ds, Dk no b♭ 1<br />

tied from previous bar, but present<br />

in As, Ap; the discrepancy may have<br />

resulted from a copyist’s error in Ks 0<br />

that went unnoticed during revision<br />

and proof reading; but the presence<br />

of ties on the lower octave in the violin<br />

part in Ak (subsequently deleted)<br />

from bars 91/95, without the b♭ 1 in<br />

92/96, makes it more likely that the<br />

lower octave had been purposely de-<br />

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leted in Ks 0 , without the ties having<br />

been clearly cancelled; Ks was copied<br />

without either the lower tie from<br />

91/95 or the b♭ 1 in 92/96.<br />

95n.4 Solo V: Dp no > (present in all other<br />

sources).<br />

96n.2–9 Solo V: Ak, Dk no staccato (present<br />

in all other sources).<br />

102n.2 Solo V: As, Ks, Ds no f.<br />

103n.1–104n.12 Solo V: Ds, Dk diminuendo/<br />

dimin.; Ap, Ks, Dp > ; Ak has a<br />

partial > above the violin stave<br />

in 103 only and dimin. on the piano<br />

RH stave in 103.<br />

104n.10–12, 104n.13–105n.5 Solo V: Ap, Dp<br />

slurs; Ks, Ak, Ds slur from 104n.10–<br />

105n.5.<br />

105n.6–15 Solo V: Dk separate slurs on n.6–10<br />

and n.11–15 (all other sources single<br />

slur).<br />

128n.1 Cb: Dp no pizz (present in Ap, Dst).<br />

132n.2–3 Solo V: Dk, Dp no slur; As slur 132<br />

n.2–133n.1; Ap (added in dark red<br />

ink), Ak, Ks slur 132n.2–12; Ds slur<br />

132n.2–3; the long slur was evidently<br />

removed at proof stage, but the slur<br />

on n.2–3 was probably omitted from<br />

Dp and Dk through oversight; Joachim<br />

will have suggested the slur<br />

on n.2–3, present in Ds, to arrive at<br />

the point of the bow at the beginning<br />

of 133 and its addition was necessarily<br />

connected with the removal<br />

of the slur in 133 (see below).<br />

133n.2–3 Solo V: Ap, Ak, Ks slur, evidently removed<br />

in proofs, presumably in connection<br />

with the adjustment of bowing<br />

in 132 (see above).<br />

142 Va, Cb: Dst cautionary p perhaps<br />

added by a player in Kst.<br />

144n.1–2 Solo V: As, Ap, Dp, Ds no slur; Ks,<br />

Ak (added), Dk slur.<br />

146n.1–2 Solo V: As, Ap, Dp, no slur; Ks, Ak<br />

(added), Dk, Ds slur.<br />

151 Solo V: Dp, Ds ♮ before tr (rather than<br />

above as in Ks, Dk).<br />

152 Vc: Dst cautionary p.<br />

155–6 Solo V: In Js the original fingerings<br />

from Ds have been removed and replaced<br />

by alternative fingerings.<br />

162 Fg1,2, Cor1,2, V1,2, Va, Cb: Dst <<br />

starts at beginning of bar in all parts;<br />

Dp from third beat; Ap inconsistent<br />

(from near beginning of bar in Fg2,<br />

Cb, but later in others).<br />

170/411n.2 Solo V: The 0 (open string marking),<br />

which Brahms included in As,<br />

and which was reproduced in Ks and<br />

Ds, was removed and replaced by 4<br />

in Js; it is surprising that 0 was not<br />

changed earlier, since it involves an<br />

impractical jump across two strings<br />

between the preceding and following<br />

notes; with 4 a similar effect can<br />

be obtained by allowing the open<br />

string to resonate freely.<br />

174n.7–12 Solo V: As, Ap, Ak no


217n.2 Js no 1; Joachim’s revised fingering<br />

indicates a change of position on<br />

218n.1 rather than 2 nd position for the<br />

whole phrase.<br />

223 V1: Ap no p until 224; Dst, Dp p at<br />

223n.1.<br />

224n.1 Solo V: Ap, Ks, Ds p; Ak, Dk, Dp p<br />

on 223n.4 (this probably represents<br />

a deliberate modification in connection<br />

with the move of p from 224 to<br />

223 in V1 in Dst, Dp).<br />

224n.1 Strings: Ap p in all parts except Vc;<br />

Dst p in V2, Va, Cb; Dp p only in Va,<br />

Cb.<br />

231–2 Cl1,2, Fg1,2, Cor3,4: Ap > starts<br />

at beginning 231 and extends to 233<br />

(because of notes in 233 that were<br />

later deleted); Dst > for Fg2 begins<br />

in 230; in Dp 231 is at the end of<br />

a page and > stops in Cor3,4 at<br />

end 231 with no continuation overleaf.<br />

231n.2–232n.1 Solo V: Dp, Ds < does not<br />

cross barline (in Dp there is a page<br />

break and in Ds a line break); <<br />

to 232n.1 in Ap (Keller) following Joachim’s<br />

addition in Ks.<br />

232 Cor3,4: Dp continuation of > missing<br />

after page turn.<br />

237 Solo V: As on n.2; all other sources<br />

on n.1; in Ak it was originally written<br />

between n.1 and n.2, but changed<br />

by Brahms to n.1.<br />

238 Solo V: As on 239n.1; all other<br />

sources on 238n.2; in Ak it was originally<br />

written between n.1 and n.2,<br />

but changed by Brahms to n.2.<br />

240 Solo V: As, Ap on n.3; Ks between<br />

n.2 and n.3; Ak as Ks, but altered by<br />

Brahms to centre on n.2; all printed<br />

sources on n.2.<br />

247n.2 Solo Vl: Ks, Ak, Ds, Dk no staccato;<br />

Ap (partly obscured by ♯), Dp staccato.<br />

250 Solo V: In Js Joachim removed the<br />

4 on n.3 delaying the change of position<br />

until n.6.<br />

260n.1 Solo Vl: Dp staccato, probably added<br />

by engraver corresponding with V1,2<br />

(not in any other source).<br />

268–70 Solo V: Js slur from 268n.2 – 269n.13<br />

(thus reverting to Brahms’s original<br />

notation in Ap) and the staccato mark<br />

on 270n.1 (also absent in Ak, but apparently<br />

added to the proofs in Dk,<br />

where it occurs above the slur) removed.<br />

272n.1–6, 280n.1–6 Fg1,2, Vc/Cb: In Ap the<br />

repeated e s are indicated by abbreviations<br />

(a h . with a beam through<br />

the stem); in 272 and 280 Brahms<br />

wrote six staccato dots above the abbreviation;<br />

Dst has staccato marks in<br />

Fg1, 272, 280 and Fg2, 272–5, 280–3,<br />

but none in Vc/Cb; Dp has no staccato<br />

marks in any of these bars. It<br />

is possible, though highly unlikely,<br />

that Brahms deleted staccato marks<br />

in the proofs of Dp.<br />

288n.2 Vc: Dp no ♮ (present in Ap, Dst).<br />

300 Va: Dp centred between n.2 and<br />

n.3; Dst centred on n.2 (clearly centred<br />

on n.3 in Ap).<br />

305 Vc: Dst contains the instruction<br />

‘Vcell. solo’ as well as ‘Solo’ in 304<br />

(this was probably a misinterpretation<br />

of markings in Ap, where ‘Solo’<br />

in 304 indicated the entry of the<br />

solo violin and ‘V = Cello’ in 305 the<br />

fact that, because of an alteration,<br />

the Vc part was written on the Cb<br />

stave and the Cb part on a stave below);<br />

the instruction is not present in<br />

Dp; in the set of parts in the library<br />

of the Tonhalle Zürich, however, it<br />

is clear from a player’s manuscript<br />

mark ing that the instruction has been<br />

understood to mean that the passage<br />

should be played by a solo cello, and<br />

‘Tutti’ has been added at 332.<br />

309n.1–3, 310n.2–4 Solo V: Ak, Dk, Ds slurs;<br />

Ap slur in 309 extended to 310n.1<br />

by Keller; from 310n.2–311n.1 and 311<br />

n.2–312n.1 slurs also added by Keller;<br />

Dp follows the revised reading<br />

in Ap; the slur from 309n.1–310n.1<br />

is a matter of presentation, implying<br />

nothing different from a slur on 309<br />

n.1–3, but a slur from 310n.2–4 rather<br />

than from 310n.2–311n.1 implies a<br />

separation of the b♭-b♮; Ks has slur<br />

from 310n.2–311n.1.<br />

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312 Solo V: Ap Keller added grazioso in<br />

round brackets, following the copyist’s<br />

text in Ks, Ak (presumably reflecting<br />

an addition in Ks 0 ); it appears<br />

in round brackets in all printed<br />

sources.<br />

312n.2 Solo V: Ds no p; in Ap, Ks, Dk on n.1,<br />

in Dp on n.2 (which was evidently<br />

Brahms’s intended placement).<br />

314 Fg1: Dp no dolce (present in Ap and<br />

Dst).<br />

316n.7 Solo V: Js no 2; Joachim replaced the<br />

original change of position here with<br />

a position change on n.5.<br />

320 Solo V: Ks, Ds, Ak, Dk < starts<br />

from n.5; Ap, Dp from n.4.<br />

322 V1,2, Va, Vc/Cb: Ap > from between<br />

n.1 and n.2; Dst from n.2 in<br />

V1,2, but from n.1 in Va, Vc/Cb; Dp<br />

from n.2.<br />

Solo V: Ap, Dp > from n.2; Ak,<br />

Ks, Dk, Ds from n.1.<br />

322–3 Solo V: Ds line break between 322<br />

and 323, separate > signs from<br />

322n.1–6 and 323n.1–6.<br />

332 Solo V: Ks, Ak, Ds cresc. on n.3, Dk<br />

on 333n.1; Ap between n.2 and n.3;<br />

Dp on n.2<br />

336n.2 Solo V: Ap, Ks, Dp no ♮ above trilled<br />

note; ♮ present in Ak, Dk, Ds (where<br />

presumably added in proofs).<br />

336n.3, 337n.3 V1,2: Ap, Dp, Dst h ; altered to<br />

staccato q by Brahms, with marginal<br />

annotation in blue crayon, in his<br />

Hand exemplar and in the presentation<br />

copy of Dp given to Marie Soldat<br />

in 1885. In the Handexemplar<br />

the marginal annotation has been<br />

crossed through in pencil. It remains<br />

unclear whether Brahms intended<br />

the change to be a definitive revision<br />

of the text or whether he later<br />

rejected it. In the old Brahms Gesamtausgabe<br />

in 1926 Hans Gál included<br />

the revision in his main text,<br />

but made no mention of the pencil<br />

deletion in Brahms’s Handexemplar<br />

in his commentary. Robert Pascall<br />

(see Sources) argues persuasively that<br />

the pencil deletion indicates Brahms’s<br />

decision to revert to the original text,<br />

and this view has also been adopted<br />

by the NBA.<br />

337n.1 Solo V: Ds, Dp >; the > was erroneously<br />

inserted into Ap by Keller<br />

because of a misleadingly written<br />

accent in Ks, which actually applied<br />

to 332n.1 (on the stave immediately<br />

above); Ks, Ak, Dp, Dk separate tr<br />

sign; Ds extension of wavy line from<br />

previous bar (perhaps changed in<br />

proofs).<br />

340n.1 V1: Dp no ♮ before c 3 (pres ent in Ap).<br />

345n.1 Cl1,2: Unnecessary cautionary ♮ in<br />

Dp (not in Ap or Dst) probably added<br />

by the engraver by analogy with<br />

other woodwind.<br />

348 Vc: Dp no div. (Ap à 2, Dst div.).<br />

359n.1–3 V2: Dst staccato; Ap, Dp no staccato.<br />

365n.1 Solo V: As, Ap double stop b 3 /b 2 ;<br />

Ks, Ak b 2 deleted and 0 (harmonic)<br />

added below the note where it could<br />

easily have been overlooked by the<br />

engraver; Ds, Dk, Dp b 3 but no 0,<br />

which was almost certainly omitted<br />

in error (it is virtually inconceivable<br />

that Joachim or any other violinist<br />

of that period would not have used<br />

a harmonic here); Ak, Dk no staccato.<br />

367n.1 Timp: Dp no staccato (present in Ap,<br />

Dst).<br />

Cl1: Dst f [sic!].<br />

369n.1 Solo V: Ap, Ks, Ak, Ks, Dk, Dp no<br />

staccato; Ds staccato (presumably<br />

added in proofs).<br />

377 Solo V: Ap, Dp slur from n.1; Ak, Ks,<br />

slur beginning changed from n.1 to<br />

n.2; Ds slur from n.2; Dk slur beginning<br />

between n.1 and n.2.<br />

377n.1 Fg1,2: Dst sf; Ap no dynamic (Fg1,2<br />

originally had notes sustained<br />

through to 379 with the dynamic fp<br />

at 377n.1, but when Brahms altered<br />

the notes to the present version he<br />

deleted the dynamic and omitted to<br />

add a new one); Dp f.<br />

Timp: Dp no staccato (present in Ap,<br />

Dst).<br />

379n.4 Fl1,2: Dp cresc.; Ap cresc. above Fl<br />

stave on n.1; Dst cresc. immediately<br />

after p on n.1; the position of cresc.<br />

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in Dp appears to be a misreading of<br />

the cresc. for Ob in Ap, which is written<br />

above the Ob stave.<br />

380n.1–6 Fl1,2, Ob1, Cor1,2: Ap (Fl and Cor<br />

only), Dst < (as well as cresc. in<br />

379); Dp no < (presumably omitted<br />

from Dp as redundant).<br />

380n.1–3 Fg1: Ap, Dp no begins on n.2; Dp<br />

on n.1.<br />

441 V1: Dst dolce espress.; Ap, Dp dol.<br />

447 Va: Dp ‰ instead of Œ rest on 1 st beat.<br />

456–8 Cor1: Dp slur from 256–257n.1 and<br />

257n.1–258n.1 evidently an imperfect<br />

correction of the slurring in the<br />

proofs of Dp (perhaps because of<br />

the page break between 456 and 457),<br />

where the similar slurring pattern in<br />

Ap was corrected to the present version.<br />

461, 463 Fg, Cb: length of > in sources very<br />

variable; in Ap Cb in 463 and in Dp<br />

Vc in 461 and Fg2 in 463 extend to<br />

n.1 of following bar; others are within<br />

a single bar.<br />

464 Ob1: Dp no p (present in Ap [added<br />

in grey pencil], Dst).<br />

467n.1 Solo V: Ds p lusingando (previous<br />

> ends on 466n.4); in Ks ><br />

ends on 467n.1 and p lusingando begins<br />

between n.1–2; Ap, Dp as here.<br />

473 Solo V: Although all MS and printed<br />

sources have the < in 473 and the<br />

> in 474, there are several discrepancies;<br />

in As < begins on 473n.1,<br />

whereas in Ap it begins between n.3<br />

and n.4; the revised position in Js<br />

seems musically more plausible and<br />

accords with the parallel passage at<br />

230.<br />

474–5 Solo V: The < in 474 and the ><br />

in 475 appear only, as a correction in<br />

Js.<br />

480–3 Solo V: The positions of were probably<br />

meant to match the parallel passage<br />

at 237–40, as they do in Dp<br />

where it seems likely that Brahms<br />

adjusted them in the proofs; in 481–2<br />

Ap, Ak, Ks, Dk, Ds centred on the<br />

barline between the two bars; in 483<br />

Ap, Ks, Ds centred on n.3, Ak,<br />

Dk between n.2 and n.3.<br />

481–2 Solo V: Ds has a slur in both voices.<br />

483 Solo V: Ap slur apparently leads to<br />

484 (as in As), but there is no continuation<br />

in 484 (which begins a new<br />

page); at the parallel passage (240–41)<br />

the slur crosses the barline in As and<br />

Ap; in Ks, however, the slur is clearly<br />

to 240/483n.3, presumably reflecting<br />

a change in Ks 0 ; a slur across the<br />

barline in 483–4 would seem unlikely<br />

to have been intended, since it would<br />

end the phrase on a long up-bow.<br />

484–5 Va2: Ap, Dst slur; Dp no slur.<br />

490n.5 V2: Ap g 1 ; Dp, Dst a 1 ; presumably<br />

altered in proofs.<br />

501 Cor1,2: Ap f (probably altered to ff in<br />

proofs of Dp, Dst).<br />

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503n.1 Solo V: As, Ks, Ak, Ds, Dk no staccato;<br />

Ap, Dp staccato; f in As only.<br />

505–506 V1,2: Dst cresc. on 505n.9; Ap, Dp<br />

< from 505n.9–506n.12.<br />

509n.2–510n.5, 510n.6–10 Solo V: Ap, Dp slurs,<br />

probably arising from Keller’s misreading<br />

of Ks when entering a revision<br />

of the notes during preparation<br />

of Ap for engraving; an up-bow<br />

on 512n.1 was certainly envisaged<br />

by Jo achim.<br />

514n.2–515n.1 Fl1, Cl1: Fl1 no slur in any<br />

source; Cl1 slur in Ap, but not Dp;<br />

slur in Ob2 present in Ap, Dst, Dp.<br />

514n.2–515n.1 Fl2: Ap no tie (Brahms changed<br />

from 8va to loco at the barline); Dst<br />

and Dp tie.<br />

523n.2 Fl1: Dp upper stem missing.<br />

527 Solo V: In Js Joachim changed the instructions<br />

in Ds (tranquillo above the<br />

stave, and p dolce below the stave) to<br />

the composite direction p dolce e tranquillo<br />

below the stave, with in tempo<br />

above the stave.<br />

539 Cl1: Dp no p (present in Ap, Dst).<br />

549, 550, 556 Solo V: In Ap Brahms notated<br />

each of these bars with a single beam<br />

for all nine notes, but he later drew<br />

small pencil lines through the beams,<br />

dividing the notes into groups of<br />

three; in Ks, Ak, Dk, Ds the original<br />

notation was retained, but the revised<br />

notation appears in Dp.<br />

551 Cb: Dp no poco a poco cresc. (present<br />

in Ap, Dst).<br />

554 Solo V: Ds cresc. on n.7 although it<br />

occurs on 555n.1 in Ap, Ks, Dp (see<br />

following note).<br />

555 Tutti: Ap no stringendo; it is evident<br />

that there were adjustments here to<br />

incorporate the addition of stringendo,<br />

which does not appear in any of the<br />

MS sources (its addition was discussed<br />

in Brahms’s correspondence<br />

with Keller (Brahms – Keller, 28/32);<br />

in Dst and Dp it has been variously<br />

added: Dst is inconsistent, with cresc.<br />

e string. marked in some instruments<br />

and stringendo poco a poco in others,<br />

while Vc/Cb has string. in 556 as the<br />

final part of the instruction poco a<br />

poco cresc. e string. beginning at 551;<br />

in Dp the instruction is more consistently<br />

marked, string. occurring in<br />

all orchestral parts approx imately<br />

on beat 2, though it occurs on beat 3<br />

in the solo violin; in Ds it is placed<br />

under the second e of the bar.<br />

563–5 Solo V: Ap retains an earlier version<br />

of notes 1–2 in these bars (the lower<br />

note is d 1 instead of f♯ 2 ), although the<br />

final version, entered into Ks and<br />

Ak, is present in all printed sources.<br />

565 Cor1,2, Tr1,2, Timp: Dp, Dst (Cor2)<br />

mf on n.1.; Ap, Dst (Cor1 [ambiguous],<br />

Tr1,2, Timp) mf placed between<br />

n.1 and n.2.<br />

568–70 Fg1,2: Dp no à 2 or double stem (double<br />

stem in Ap).<br />

Adagio<br />

3 Ob1: Dst, Ks (cue) added by Brahms,<br />

Ds (cue), Ak, Dk p; but there was a<br />

well established tradition that dolce<br />

equated to a soft dynamic and<br />

Brahms, who was notably conservative<br />

in such matters, may well have<br />

considered dolce alone sufficient in<br />

the score, especially since the solo<br />

oboe would have been expected to<br />

accommodate its dynamic to the level<br />

of the accompaniment; the probability<br />

that the omission of a dynamic<br />

in the score was not merely the result<br />

of oversight is strengthened by<br />

the absence of a dynamic at b. 78 in<br />

Ap.<br />

4, 6, 10, 12, 16–18 Ob1: Brahms provided different<br />

articulation for the solo oboe<br />

part in Ap/Dp and Ak/Dk/Ds (see<br />

piano score for alternative version);<br />

Ks agrees with Ap/Dp except in b. 6,<br />

where it corresponds with Ak/Dk/<br />

Ds.<br />

7, 8 Fl1,2, Ob1, Cl1, Fg2: The intended<br />

placement of is unclear; in Ap it<br />

appears to apply to Fl1 and to be<br />

centred on the c 2 (there is no separate<br />

for Fl2), whereas in Cl1 <br />

is apparently centred both times on<br />

n.3 and in Fg2 on n.2, while in Ob1<br />

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the position of the sign is different<br />

in each bar, centring on n.2 in b. 7<br />

and between the n.4 and n.5 in b. 8;<br />

Dst is equally ambiguous, with <br />

centring after n.2 in Fl1 and before<br />

n.3 in Fl2, in Ob1 just before the final<br />

note, in Cl1 on n.3 and in Fg2<br />

between the n.2 and n.3; Dp places<br />

the sign under Fl2, apparently leaving<br />

Fl1 without a dynamic nuance;<br />

in Fl2, Ob1, Cl1, the centre of occurs<br />

on the second q beat of the bar,<br />

but in Fg2 between the second and<br />

third e s.<br />

10n.2–4, 11n.1–5 Cl2: Ap, Dp no slurs; Dst<br />

slurs.<br />

11 Fl1,2, Ob1, Cl1,2, Fg1,2: The in tended<br />

placement of is unclear; in Ap<br />

there is a single marking for each<br />

pair of instruments, the majority centring<br />

between the second and third<br />

e s, but in Cl1,2 the centre occurs with<br />

Cl1n.2 and between Cl2n.3 and n.4;<br />

in Dst Ob1, Cl2 the centre is clearly<br />

on n.3, while for Fl1, Fg1,2 it is between<br />

n.2 and n.3, Fl2, Cl2 between<br />

n.1 and n.2; Dp Fl1, Ob1, Fg1,2 centre<br />

between n.2 and n.3, Fl2 between n.1<br />

and n.2, Cl1 no , Cl2 centred on<br />

n.3.<br />

Ob1: Dp no dol. presumably engravers<br />

oversight (present in Ap, Ak, Ks<br />

(added by Brahms), Dst, Dk, Ds).<br />

17–18 Wind: Ap and Dp are broadly in<br />

agreement about the placing of <<br />

and > (only Fl1 differs, with ><br />

starting at the beginning of the note<br />

in 18 in Ap, although < crosses<br />

the barline between 17 and 18); in<br />

Dst < stops short of the barline<br />

in Fl, Cl2.<br />

22 Fg2: Dst no p.<br />

24 Fg2: Dst p.<br />

27n.1–4 Cl1: Dp, Dst no slur (present in Ap,<br />

Ak, Dk).<br />

29n.1–2 Cl2: Dp no slur (present in Ap, Dst).<br />

32 Cb: Dp, Dst no p (present in Ap).<br />

33n.2, n.5 Solo V: Fingering in Js, also in Ds at<br />

the parallel passage (81).<br />

35n.1–2 Solo V: Ap, Ak, Ks, Dp, Dk no slur<br />

(presumably added in proofs of Ds).<br />

35 Cor1: Dst espress. (presumably added<br />

in Kst).<br />

42 Cor1: Dp no ≈ before n.1 (pres ent in<br />

Ap).<br />

43 Fl1,2: Dst p< on n.1 in Fl2; Dp,<br />

Ap no dynamic; in Ap this passage<br />

is much altered, the last phase of<br />

corrections being in grey pencil; a<br />

< under the Fl2 entry and a ><br />

after the barline in 44 were added<br />

in grey pencil, but < was then<br />

deleted in the same pencil; above<br />

the stave, where Fl2 enters, Brahms<br />

wrote rf before the barline and ><br />

after it in grey pencil; these entries<br />

in grey pencil were clearly made<br />

before Brahms deleted the notes at<br />

the beginning of 44 in red ink and<br />

rewrote them immediately afterwards<br />

in the same ink together with<br />

a new > under the rewritten<br />

notes; Brahms seems to have been<br />

wrestling with the problem of satisfactorily<br />

indi cating the dynamics<br />

for both instruments; he possibly<br />

used rf in the old fashioned sense of<br />

a swelling accent (instead of to n.6; Ap, Ak,<br />

Dp, Dk to n.8.<br />

45 Solo V: Dp, Dk > from n.2; Ds<br />

from n.3 (in Ap the sign begins ambiguously<br />

between n.2 and 3)<br />

45n.4–5 Solo V: Brahms seems to have been<br />

uncertain how the grace notes should<br />

be played; in Ap they had both dots<br />

and a slur (portato?) but these were<br />

later deleted; in Ak they were (and<br />

remained) slurred; in Ks they had a<br />

slur which was deleted; the removal<br />

of the slur (and the original portato<br />

notation in Ap) may suggest that con-<br />

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trary to normal practice they were<br />

envisaged to be played with separate<br />

bows, though it is also possible<br />

that they were intended, according<br />

to convention, to be slurred in with<br />

the preceding note.<br />

49n.6–7 Solo V: Dp no slur (obviously engraving<br />

error).<br />

53n.9–14 Solo V: Ds > deriving from carelessly<br />

added > in Ks, where it<br />

extends from n.9–16; the positioning<br />

of Brahms’s added > in Ap (from<br />

n.11–17) is clear; Dp n.10–17.<br />

54 Ob1,2: Ap mf cresc. written above Fl<br />

stave, but evidently intended to apply<br />

also to Ob; Dst mf cresc.; Dp cresc.<br />

54n.1 Va: Dp no p (present in Ap).<br />

54–5 Ds has ritard. instead of poco a poco<br />

for the orchestral cue just before the<br />

largamente in 56; the change was evidently<br />

made in the proofs. This indicates<br />

clearly that Brahms envisaged<br />

a broadening of the tempo here, not<br />

merely a change of mood (in Ks he<br />

had added then deleted più sostenuto<br />

at 56).<br />

60 Solo V: Ks, Ak, Ds, Dk, Dp from<br />

n.5–7; Ap < from n.4–7.<br />

61 Solo V: Ds < from n.2–6; Ks, Ak<br />

from n.3–6; Dp from n.5–7; Ap from<br />

between n.3 and 4–n.7.<br />

64n.1 Vc: Dp no p (present in Ap).<br />

66n.1–3 Solo V: Ds slur from n.2–3; Ap, Ak,<br />

Ks, Dp, Dk from n.1–3; the slurring<br />

in Ds is possibly an engraver’s error<br />

overlooked during proof reading<br />

rather than a deliberate change in<br />

the proofs, since, assuming the downbow<br />

start after the fermata in 63,<br />

which Joachim marked in Js, this<br />

pattern of slurring would lead to an<br />

improbably sequence of bowstrokes<br />

in the following bars; in Js, rather<br />

than restoring the phrasing in Dp,<br />

Joachim added a slur over 66n.7–9<br />

with a dot on n.9 (i. e. to make the<br />

beginning of 67 a down bow, which<br />

it would have been if n.1–3 had been<br />

slurred).<br />

67n.4–10, 68n.4–10 Solo V: Dk, Dp slur; Ak,<br />

from between n.4 and n.5 in 67, but<br />

clearly from n.5 in 68; Ap, Ks, Ds,<br />

from n.5–10 in both bars.<br />

69n.7–12 Solo V: Ks, Ds, Ak, Dk beamed as<br />

two triplets; changed by Brahms to a<br />

sextuplet in Ap.<br />

71 Solo V: Ks cresc., squeezed in under<br />

slur, begins on n.4; Ak no cresc.; Dk,<br />

Ds cresc. on n.6; Dp cresc. on n.2; Ap<br />

cresc. on n. 3.<br />

72n.5–6 Cb: Dp slur; Ap, Dst no slur; the absence<br />

of slurs in any source in the<br />

equivalent figure in 71, together with<br />

the fact that without slurs Cb corresponds<br />

more closely with Vc, suggests<br />

that the inclusion of a slur in<br />

Dp was an engraver’s error rather<br />

than a deliberate revision by Brahms.<br />

73 Solo V: In Js Joachim replaced the<br />

slur from n.4–9 with a slur from<br />

n.2–9 and added a down bow sign<br />

on n.2.<br />

74n.1–2 Fg2: Dst no slur (present in Ap, Dp).<br />

74n.1 Cor1,2: Ap >, Dst (Cor1) dim calando<br />

above note and > below;<br />

Dst Cor2 > only; Dp dim. only.<br />

76 Solo V: Ap dolce directly after and<br />

still under n.1; Dp under n.2; Ks, Ds<br />

dolce under n.1, directly below .<br />

76n.2–3 Solo V: Dp no slur; Ap, Ak, Ks, slur<br />

added; Dk, Ds slur.<br />

77n.1 Solo V: In Js Joachim removed the 1<br />

although it is clearly still intended to<br />

be played with a first finger.<br />

79n.11–12 In Js Joachim added the slur, which<br />

he enclosed in brackets, presumably<br />

as an alternative, without altering<br />

the original slurring.<br />

82n.1–2 Solo V: Joachim removed the original<br />

4 4 fingering, replacing it with<br />

3 3.<br />

83n.1 Solo V: Ap, Dp no dol.; present in Ks,<br />

Ds, Dk (where presumably added in<br />

proofs).<br />

85 Solo V: Ak, Ks, Dk, Ds < from<br />

n.7–12; Ap, Dp from n.1–12.<br />

86 Solo V: Ak, Ks, Dk, Ds > from<br />

n.1–6; Ap, Dp from n.1–12.<br />

89–90 Cor1,2: Brahms’s intentions for dynamics<br />

in these bars are obscured by<br />

discrepancies between the sources;<br />

Dp no < in 89, no in 90; Dst<br />

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in 89 and > in 90 in both parts<br />

(despite the shortness of the note for<br />

Cor2 in 90); Ap originally had <<br />

throughout 89 and > throughout<br />

90, but Brahms later deleted > in 90<br />

and replaced it with , crushed into<br />

the available space after the sec -<br />

ond Cor2 rest and centring on n.4<br />

(this change was evidently made after<br />

Kst had been copied); it is probable<br />

that the omission in Dp of any<br />

dynamic signs for Cor in these bars<br />

was an oversight, although it is conceivable<br />

that they were removed in<br />

the proofs; Brahms’s placement of<br />

crescendo and decrescendo signs is<br />

often somewhat haphazard, and it<br />

seems probable from the context that<br />

the in Ap was meant to centre on<br />

n.3 rather than n.4.<br />

95 Fl2: Dst (Fl2) cresc.; Ap has cresc.<br />

above the Ob1 entry (it appears in<br />

the same position in Dp), which may<br />

have been taken by the copyist of<br />

the parts as an instruction for Fl2;<br />

the instruction is, however, clearly<br />

necessary for the individual player.<br />

96 Solo V: Ds slur from n.1 ends ambiguously<br />

between n.5 and 6; Ks, Ak,<br />

Ap, Dp, Dk clearly to n.6.<br />

97n.4 Cor1: Dst p (probably a player’s marking<br />

in Kst).<br />

97–9 Solo V: From 95–9 Joachim added<br />

slurs in Ks, which were later copied<br />

into Ap by Keller; in the proofs of<br />

Ds (corrections to the plates are apparent),<br />

Dk and Dp some of these<br />

were removed, probably to aid the<br />

crescendo; in Js Joachim reinstated<br />

slurs on 97n.8–9 and 99n.1–2.<br />

98n.1 Solo V: All sources except Ap no<br />

dim.; probably copyist’s and engraver’s<br />

oversight (the dim is written<br />

above the part with espress. dolce<br />

added below by Keller).<br />

114 Cl1: Dp no pp (although pp for Fl1<br />

present); Ap, Dst pp.<br />

Allegro giocoso, ma non troppo vivace<br />

1 V2, Va: Ap, Dp poco forte abbrevi ated<br />

as pf (although written out in full in<br />

V1, Vc, Cb); Dst poco forte.<br />

9, 10, 12–14 Fl2: Dst staccato dot on n.2 (perhaps<br />

a player’s marking in Kst).<br />

25n.5, 26n.1, n.5 Solo V: In the final version<br />

of this passage, written by Brahms<br />

on the cover of Ak (see letter to Keller<br />

of August 1879), he wrote sf on<br />

25n.5 then deleted it, and omitted sf<br />

on 26n.1 and n.5; Dp, Dk, Ks sf ; Ds<br />

no sf; in Ap sfs were written in connection<br />

with the ossia version, but<br />

never applied to the original version<br />

that was later reinstated.<br />

25–6 Solo V, Fl1,2, Cl1, Fg1,2, Strings: Dst,<br />

Ds reflect Ap, Ak, Ks in including<br />

< after cresc., or, in the case of<br />

V1,2, having < instead of cresc.;<br />

as in several similar occurrences the<br />

signs have been omitted in Dp.<br />

27n.1 Fl1, Ob1, Cl2, Fg1: Dp ♮ before tr; Ap<br />

(where Ob marked col Flauti) after<br />

tr.<br />

Va : Ap à 2, Dp a 2; Dst div.<br />

27n.2 Fg1, Cl1, 28n.2 Cl1: Dst staccato dot,<br />

perhaps reflecting a performance instruction<br />

added in Kst 0 .<br />

27–34 Va: Ap, Dp common stems; Dst Va1<br />

and 2 on separate staves.<br />

49n.1 Solo V: Dp staccato, probably added<br />

by Keller or engraver by analogy<br />

with strings, almost certainly without<br />

Brahms’s authorisation; although<br />

its addition by Brahms in the proof<br />

cannot be excluded.<br />

Cb: Dst, Dp staccato, presumably by<br />

analogy with upper strings, but unlikely<br />

to have been intended in pizzicato.<br />

49–51 Solo V: Ap positioning of inconsistent;<br />

Dp from 49n.2–50n.5<br />

and 50n.7–51n.6; Ks, Ak, Ds, Dk as<br />

here.<br />

51–2 Solo V: Ap, Ks, Ak < and cres at 51n.7;<br />

Ds, Dk < in 51, cresc. at 52n.4 (but<br />

surely intended for 52n.5); Dp cresc.<br />

alone at 51n.7; the version in Ds, Dk<br />

was clearly amended in the proofs,<br />

as was the version in Dp, but incon-<br />

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sistently; probably > was inadvertently<br />

omitted in Ds, Dk at 52<br />

n.1–3.<br />

57 Solo V: Ds, Dp energicament, evidently<br />

added in proofs; not in Ap,<br />

Ks, Ak, Dk.<br />

57–60 Solo V: Ap 57n.2–3, 58n.1–4 staccato<br />

dots changed to strokes, although<br />

on 59n.1–2, 60n.2–3 Brahms wrote<br />

staccato strokes from the first; Ks,<br />

Ak 57n.2–3, 58n.1–4, 59n.1–2, 60n.2–3<br />

staccato dots changed to strokes (in<br />

Ks slurs above the articulation on 57<br />

n.1–2, 58n.1–4, 60n.2–3 were de leted,<br />

apparently at the same time the dots<br />

were changed to strokes; this presumably<br />

occurred after Brahms’s<br />

correspondence with Jo achim about<br />

this passage in May 1879); Ds slurs<br />

above the strokes in 57, 58, 60 (as<br />

bowing indications) were evidently<br />

replaced in the proofs.<br />

59–60 Fg1,2: Ap, Dst, Dp staccato dots on<br />

all notes, but the unison passage<br />

in Vc has staccato strokes on these<br />

notes in all sources; in Ak Brahms<br />

wrote dots in the piano left hand,<br />

but added the instruction marcato<br />

(which was printed in Dk); clearly<br />

Fg1,2 were not expected to articulate<br />

differently from Vc, Cb.<br />

61n.1 Cb: Dst, Dp no staccato, presumably<br />

copyist’s/engraver’s oversight (present<br />

in Ap).<br />

61–4 Fg2: Staccato marks and accents absent<br />

from Dp, but present in Dst; in<br />

Ap Brahms altered the original Fg2<br />

part, which was in octaves with Fg1<br />

and shared the same stems; in the<br />

revised version, using grey pencil,<br />

Brahms added a e stem to n.1 and<br />

n.3 in each bar and over-wrote the<br />

original n.2 and n.4 with ‰ s. Comparison<br />

with the equivalent passage<br />

at 154–7, where the passage is written<br />

without alterations, indicates that<br />

Brahms envisaged staccato, but not<br />

accent in Fg2.<br />

64n.3, 65n.1 Solo V: Staccato dots in all sources,<br />

but at the equivalent passage (157–8)<br />

the dots were changed to strokes in<br />

Ap, Ak, Ks and they appear there as<br />

strokes in all printed sources; the<br />

amendment was presumably omitted<br />

at 64–5 through oversight.<br />

73–6 Fg1,2, V1,2, Va, Vc: Although all<br />

sources have staccato dots in these<br />

bars it seems likely that Brahms envisaged<br />

the same style of performance<br />

as at 57–60; Ak, Dk have the<br />

instruction ben marcato in the piano<br />

part at 73.<br />

79, 81, 172, 174 Va, Vc: There is irreconcilable<br />

confusion in the sources about the<br />

dynamics here; in Ap p was added<br />

in dark pencil (except Va in 79 and<br />

Vc in 174) and in 172, 174 the original<br />

h notation of the Va part was changed<br />

to qq with f on the first and p on the<br />

second (presumably by Keller); Dst,<br />

Dp f in Va on 172 i, but no p in these<br />

instruments in any of these bars; in<br />

Ak Brahms ex tensively rewrote the<br />

piano part in these bars at both<br />

places (indicating that he went back<br />

and altered them after both had<br />

been written), in cluding > on the q .<br />

b 1 /a 1 with a general p at the half bar;<br />

it is conceivable that in the proofs of<br />

Dp Brahms removed the dynamic<br />

markings that had been added in<br />

Ap, thus leaving the Va/Vc notes ff/f,<br />

but if so he failed to ra tionalise the<br />

tied q s in Va in 172, 174 that had<br />

been introduced in Ap in connec -<br />

tion with the amended dynamics;<br />

the version proposed in the present<br />

edition corresponds with Brahms’s<br />

piano reduction and with the practical<br />

performance implications of the<br />

passage.<br />

85 Cor3,4: Ap, Dst no f (present in Dp).<br />

89 Vc/Cb: Ap f ; Dst, Dp no dynamic.<br />

93n.4 Vc: Ap, Dp mf; Dst mf on n.2, which<br />

was surely Brahms’s intention.<br />

99 Cb: Ap, Dst, Dp q s, but in Ak Brahms<br />

notated the passage with staccato e s<br />

as at b. 7 and it was printed thus in<br />

Dk; an exact repetition of the earlier<br />

passage in Cb was surely Brahms’s<br />

intention, the discrepancy arising in<br />

Ap from the fact that he notated<br />

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only the Cb line and solo violin in<br />

96–8, indicating the other parts with<br />

numbers referring back to 6–8; Dst<br />

no staccato (present in Ap and Dp).<br />

110–13, 115 V2: Dst staccato on n.2.<br />

117 Solo V: In Js Joachim added the 1 on<br />

n.2 and n.5 in brackets as an alternative<br />

fingering.<br />

119n.1–4 Solo V: Dp x s, presumably an unnoticed<br />

engraving error, since all other<br />

sources have three triplet x s followed<br />

by a e.<br />

122–3 Solo V: Ap (added by Keller), Ks <br />

on 122n.4, n.12 only; Dk, Ds, Dp <br />

also added on 122n.8, 123n.4.<br />

125n.6 Solo V: Dp b 2 (or c♯ 3 with missing<br />

leger line).<br />

132n.3–4 Solo V: Js Joachim removed the fingerings<br />

4 3, replacing them with 3 2.<br />

132–3 Solo V: Ap, Ak, Ks, Dk, Ds on<br />

132n.4 and 133n.4 only; Dp also<br />

added on 132n.8, 133n.8, presumably<br />

intended also on 132n.12.<br />

136n.1 Solo V: Dp espress.; in all other<br />

sources on 135n.12 (presumably displaced<br />

in Dp because 135 comes at<br />

the end of a page).<br />

Vc: Dp no p (present in Ap, Dst).<br />

138n.1–2 Vc, Cb: Dp slur but no portato dots<br />

(presumably an error overlooked in<br />

proof reading); Ap, Dst portato.<br />

141–2 Fl1,2, Fg1,2: Ap f on 141n.1; the sf s on<br />

n.1, 3, 6 were added later by Brahms<br />

in pencil; Dp, Dst no f on 141n.1.;<br />

since it is consistently absent from<br />

both these printed sources, the f was<br />

probably removed in proofs as unnecessary.<br />

143n.1 Strings: Ap no staccato; Dst all staccato<br />

except V1; Dp staccato on all.<br />

145 Solo V: Ks, Dk cresc. on n.10; Ds on<br />

n.11 (Ap, Dp as here).<br />

148n.1 Fg1,2: Dp no staccato; Ap, Dst staccato;<br />

the chord is marked staccato in<br />

Ak, Dk.<br />

150–53 Solo V: Ap 150n.2–3, 151n.1–4, 153n.2–3<br />

staccato dots changed to strokes, although<br />

on 152n.1–2 Brahms wrote<br />

staccato strokes from the first; Ks,<br />

Ak 150n.2–3, 151n.1–4, 152n.1–2, 153<br />

n.2–3 staccato dots changed to strokes<br />

(in Ks slurs above the articulation<br />

on 150n.1–2, 151n.1–4, 153n.2–3 were<br />

deleted as in 57–60, apparently at<br />

the same time the dots were changed<br />

to strokes; this presumably occurred<br />

after Brahms’s correspondence with<br />

Joachim about this passage in May<br />

1879); Ds slurs above the strokes<br />

in 150, 151, 153 (as bowing indications)<br />

were evidently replaced in the<br />

proofs.<br />

152–3 Fg1,2, Vc, Cb: Staccato dots in all<br />

sources, but perhaps intended as staccato<br />

strokes; the piano part is marcato<br />

in Ak, Dk (see note to 59–60).<br />

154n.2–158n.1 Cb: Dp staccato marks in all<br />

bars except 157 where n.1 has > and<br />

n.2 no marking; Ap, Dst no staccato;<br />

the markings in Dp are surely an error<br />

by the engraver: the > on 157n.1<br />

clearly derives from a misreading of<br />

Ap where, for this note only, Brahms<br />

wrote the Vc accent between the Vc<br />

and Cb staves, while the staccato<br />

marks were probably added by analogy<br />

with Fg2 (Brahms would not<br />

normally have added staccato marks<br />

in pizzicato).<br />

163 V2, Va : Dp redundant 6 (sextuplet<br />

indication).<br />

166–9 Cl1,2, V1,2, Va, Vc: See note to 73–6<br />

(the piano part is ben marcato at 166<br />

in Ak, Dk).<br />

172,4 Va, Vc: See note to 79, 81.<br />

175n.1 V2: Dp no > (present in Ap, Dst).<br />

179 Cor3,4: Dp no slur (present in Ap,<br />

Dst).<br />

190 Fl1, Ob1: Dp slur but no staccato; in<br />

Ap (where Fl is in 8) the slur and<br />

stac cato were added in grey pencil.<br />

192, 194 V1,2: Dp accidentals before tr.<br />

195n.2–3 Solo V: Js Joachim removed and replaced<br />

the original fingering.<br />

197–200 Solo V: Ap, Ks, Ak, Dp > on n.1<br />

in each bar; Ds, Dk no >, indicating<br />

that Brahms removed the accents<br />

in the proofs; presumably he overlooked<br />

the discrepancy when checking<br />

Dp.<br />

199 Solo V: Ap, Ks, Ak, Dp no cresc.; cresc.<br />

in Ds (at n.4), Dk (at n.3, in align-<br />

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ment with cresc. in the piano part)<br />

evidently added in proofs, presumably<br />

intended to be in alignment with<br />

the orchestral crescendo.<br />

207 Fg1,2, Cor3,4: Dp no staccato; present<br />

in Ap, Dst (Fg1, Cor4).<br />

211 Fg1,2: Dp no à 2 or double stems; à 2<br />

in Ap.<br />

Vc, Cb: Dp no staccato (present in<br />

Ap, Dst).<br />

214n.1 Solo V: Dp staccato, not in other<br />

sources or in the parallel figure at<br />

216, and presumably erroneous.<br />

222n.3 Solo V: Dp staccato, not in other<br />

sources and presumably erroneous<br />

(in the context it would, in any case,<br />

be superfluous, especially if Joachim’s<br />

bowing in Js, with three successive<br />

down bows in 222–3, were<br />

adopted).<br />

223n.4–224n.1 Solo V: Dp no slur, evidently<br />

omitted in error (present in all other<br />

sources).<br />

228n.1–6 Solo V: Ks, Ak, Ds, Dk < ; from<br />

227 half bar in Ap, Dp, probably<br />

shortened in Ks because of a line<br />

change between 227 and 228.<br />

233 Cb: Dst, Dp staccato, but probably<br />

added erroneously by analogy with<br />

the other strings; Ap no staccato.<br />

225n.4–226n.2 Solo V: Slur added in Js somewhat<br />

ambiguously, without dele -<br />

tion of original slurs, presumably<br />

to indicate an optional bow change<br />

on e 2 .<br />

237n.1–2 Solo V: Dp no tie, evidently omitted<br />

in error (in all other sources).<br />

237n.2 Solo V: Ks, Ds ♮ after tr.<br />

243n.1 Solo V: Ak, Dp < begins here; Ap<br />

from second half of 242; Ks, Ds from<br />

beginning 242; the present edition<br />

follows Ap.<br />

245 Solo V: Dp separate tr (after page<br />

turn).<br />

Strings: Ap no dynamic (the dynamics<br />

in Fl, Cl, Cor were added in grey<br />

pencil and it seems likely that<br />

Brahms overlooked the need to add<br />

them in the string parts); Dst, Dp p<br />

in V1.<br />

246 Solo V: Dp wavy line after trill probably<br />

engravers error (not in Ap); Ak,<br />

Ks, Ds centred on n.1; Dp centred<br />

on n.2; in Ap the intended placement<br />

is ambiguous, the being centred<br />

between n.1 and n.2, but it was probably<br />

intended to match in Fl, Cl,<br />

as it does in Dp.<br />

247n.1 Solo V: Ds no staccato, probably an<br />

engraver’s error (present in Ap, Ks,<br />

Ak, Dp).<br />

248 Solo V: Ks, Ds < only to n.4 (probably<br />

because of lack of space, caused<br />

by the following low note).<br />

260, 262 Solo V: Js Joachim added 3 on n.4<br />

and removed 1 on n.5 in both bars,<br />

thus bringing forward the position<br />

change by one note.<br />

262 Cor1,2, Timp: Dp redundant cresc.,<br />

stemming from Brahms’s abbreviated<br />

notation in Ap, indicating the<br />

repetition of 259–60 at 261–2.<br />

264 Solo V: Dp ‰ after n.1 (engraver’s error).<br />

264n.2–7(8) Solo V: Ks contains alternative<br />

versions by Joachim, one with six qj r s<br />

ending in f♮, the other, written below<br />

on a separate stave with the superscript<br />

oder (or), with seven, ending<br />

in g♯; the version with seven<br />

notes was copied into Ap and Ak by<br />

Keller and appears in Dk, Dp; the<br />

version with six was printed in Ds<br />

and is also retained in Js, presumably<br />

indicating that this was the version<br />

Joachim played; neither version<br />

appears anywhere in the sources in<br />

Brahms’s hand. If Brahms preferred<br />

the seven-note version he presumably<br />

did not notice that the solo violin<br />

part, which he and Joachim proofread<br />

together in early August 1879,<br />

contained the six note version.<br />

271 Solo V: Ks, Ak, Ds, Dk ben marcato;<br />

the ma was an addition in Ap and<br />

was included in Dp.<br />

Fl1: Ap, Dst p, but apparently arising<br />

from the fact that in Ap Brahms originally<br />

intended the flute part in 269–<br />

70 to be given to Fl2, with Fl1 taking<br />

over in 271; Dp no p.<br />

272 V1: Dp cresc., as well as in 273, evi-<br />

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dently an engraver’s error; Ap, Dst<br />

cresc. only in 273.<br />

273 Fl1, Ob1, Fg1: Dp p cresc.; Ap Fl1 part<br />

indicated by in 8 (i. e. an octave higher<br />

than Ob1), Ob1 p cresc. (where p<br />

added in grey pencil), Fg1 cresc., Dst,<br />

Fl1, Fg1 cresc. Ob1 p cresc.; the addition<br />

of the unnecessary p in Dp Fl1,<br />

Fg1 was presumably the engraver’s<br />

initiative.<br />

273n.1–3 Solo V: Ak, Ds, Dk, Dp no staccato;<br />

Ap, Ks staccato; presumably omitted<br />

erroneously from the copied solo<br />

part in Ak and from the printed material.<br />

273 Solo V: Ks, Ds no cresc., evidently<br />

copyist’s oversight (present in Ak,<br />

where the violin part was copied<br />

from Ks 0 , but later deleted, on the<br />

basis of Ks by Keller, then reinstated<br />

in Dk, but not in Ds.<br />

275 Vc, Cb: Dp no 3 (triplet indication);<br />

present in Ap, Dst.<br />

278 Cl1,2: Dp no < ; present in Ap,<br />

Dst.<br />

279 Fl1: Dp no pp; Ap Fl not written out<br />

(in 8); Dst pp.<br />

279n.2 Vc: Dp legg.; follows pp immediately<br />

in Ap and Dst.<br />

279–80 Timp: Dp no staccato; present in Ap<br />

(n.1–4), Dst (n.1–3 only)<br />

279–283, 284 Cor1,2, Vc: Dp, Dst no staccato<br />

on n.1–3 in 279–83 or 284n.2–4 (present<br />

in Ap).<br />

281n.4–6 Solo V: Ap, Ks, Ak, Ds no staccato<br />

(present in Dk (also on 282n.1–3),<br />

Dp).<br />

281n.1, n.2 Va: Dp erroneous e flags (the single<br />

‰ s are correctly positioned under<br />

the e s in V2); Ap has q s followed by<br />

a ‰ .<br />

284n.1 Vc: Dp, Dst no staccato (present in<br />

Ap).<br />

285n.2 Cb: Dp given erroneously as three<br />

triplet e s; q in Ap, Dst.<br />

284–7 Cor1,2: Ap no staccato on n.1 (present<br />

in Dst, Dp).<br />

295n.2 Ob1: Dp no staccato (present in Ap,<br />

Dst).<br />

297n.2 Ob1: Dp no staccato (present in Ap,<br />

Dst).<br />

298–99 Solo V: Ap > begins from n.3; Ks,<br />

Ds, Dk from n.1; Ak from n.2; Dp<br />

from n.5.<br />

302–3 Solo V: Ks, Ak, Ds, Dk no staccato<br />

(present in Ap, Dp).<br />

304n.1–3 Solo V: Ks, Ak, Ds, Dk no staccato<br />

(present in Ap, Dp).<br />

304 V2: Dp no pp (present in Ap, Dst).<br />

304–6 Cor1,2: Dp, Dst no staccato on n.1–3<br />

(present in Ap).<br />

304–8 Vc: Dp no staccato on n.2–4; Ap staccato<br />

on n.2–4; Dst staccato in 304, no<br />

staccato on n.2–4 in 305–8.<br />

307–8 Cor1,2: Dp, Dst no staccato on n.2–4<br />

(present in Ap).<br />

309n.1 Timp: Dp no staccato; present in Ap,<br />

Dst.<br />

310 Cor1,2: Dp no staccato; Ap, Dst (Cor1)<br />

staccato.<br />

324n.2 Solo V: Js no 2 (made redundant by<br />

added 2 on 323n.8).<br />

327, 328 Cor1,2: Dp, Dst no staccato on n.1–3<br />

(present in Ap).<br />

Tr1,2, Timp: Dp no staccato n.1–3<br />

(pres ent in Ap, Dst).<br />

327n.1 Solo V: Dk, Ds staccato; Ap, Ak, Ks<br />

staccato, but also with a slur from<br />

325, in connection with a version<br />

of 324–5 that was probably altered<br />

dur ing Brahms’s and Joachim’s proof<br />

reading of Ds in August 1879; Dp no<br />

staccato; bars 324–5 were evi dently<br />

re-engraved in Ds, yet appear to<br />

have been engraved in their revised<br />

form from the start in Dk and Dp; it<br />

is possible that Brahms removed the<br />

stac cato mark in the proofs of Dp,<br />

since the new version seems less<br />

likely to have been en visaged with a<br />

staccato final note (this is sug gested<br />

in particular by the absence of staccato<br />

on the fi nal note of the deleted<br />

antepenultimate version of bars 325–<br />

7 in Ap and Ks).<br />

328n.1 Cl2: Dst no >.<br />

329 Solo V: Ap, Ak, Ks, Dk, Ds f; Dp ff<br />

evidently changed in proofs to match<br />

preceding orchestral ff.<br />

331, 332 Tr1,2, Timp: Dp no staccato on n.1–3;<br />

Ap staccato in Timp only; Dst staccato<br />

in Tr and Timp.<br />

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333 Solo V: Ak, Ks, Dk, Ds no f (present<br />

in Ap, Dp).<br />

Tr1,2, Timp: Rest in all sources, but<br />

in Ap Brahms indicated b. 332 with<br />

repetition signs and left bb. 333–4<br />

blank (without any indication of<br />

rests); it seems highly likely that he<br />

simply forgot to write the first notes<br />

in b. 333 and that the omission remained<br />

unnoticed at later stages.<br />

335–6 Cor1–4, V1,2: Ap < variously from<br />

n.1 or n.2; Dst from n.1 (Cor3,4n.2);<br />

Dp from n.2 (Cor1,2, V1,2) and n.3<br />

(Cor3,4).<br />

Tr1,2: Dp no < ; present in Ap,<br />

Dst.<br />

337 Fl1,2: Ap indicated with the abbreviation<br />

8 (i. e. an octave above<br />

Ob1,2 which were originally in unison<br />

on a 2 ), but Brahms subsequently<br />

changed Ob2 from a 2 to a 1 and a<br />

question mark in grey pencil above<br />

the 8 indicates uncertainty here; Dst,<br />

Dp Fl1,2 on a 2 suggests Brahms’s<br />

sanction of this reading.<br />

337–8 Solo V: Dp slur ends on 337n.11; all<br />

other sources on 338n.1<br />

338 Solo V: Ds staccato dot under slur<br />

(but outside slur in Ap).<br />

339 Timp: Dst, Dp fp, but marked fpp in<br />

Ap, in the same grey pencil as the<br />

alteration of Cor1,2, V1,2, Vc from fp<br />

to fpp.<br />

339n.2, 340n.1 Solo V: Dp no staccato (present<br />

in all other sources).<br />

340n.2–4 Solo V: Ds, Dp, Dk no 3 (triplet indication)<br />

(present in Ap).<br />

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CRITICAL COMMENTARY<br />

to Johannes Brahms’s piano reduction<br />

Allegro non troppo<br />

10 Dk RH (lower part) no slur (present<br />

in Ak).<br />

11 Ak LH n.1–6 no slur (present in Dk).<br />

24 Ak n.2 no cautionary naturals on b,<br />

b 1 , b 2 (present in Dk).<br />

33 Dk RH n.5 erroneous staccato (not in<br />

Ak).<br />

36–41 None of the three versions sketched<br />

in Ak corresponds entirely with the<br />

version in Dk, which was presumably<br />

modified further in the proofs.<br />

36n.2 The accent appears in the first two<br />

versions of this passage in Ak (written<br />

in Brahms’s hand) but not in the<br />

third version, apparently written by<br />

Keller in the bottom margin.<br />

53 Viol. in Ak but not Dk.<br />

86, 87 Ak no arpeggio sign before LH n.1.<br />

87 Ak first LH x on G; Dk RH n.2 no<br />

staccato (present in Ak), probably<br />

omitted in error.<br />

104–5 Dk no tie; Ak tie, probably overlooked<br />

by the engraver.<br />

117–18 Ak. Dk slur extends well beyond<br />

last note 117 into the margin (there<br />

is a line break between 117 and 118<br />

in both sources), but new slur begins<br />

on 118n.1 in both sources.<br />

125–6 Ak LH no tie (probably because of<br />

line break between these bars).<br />

136 Ak no a tempo; bass note notated as h .<br />

with no tie to 137.<br />

141 In Dk the stem of the f♯ on the second<br />

beat is joined to that of the d 1<br />

immediately above it, but in Ak it is<br />

written as a separate q (surely an engraver’s<br />

error).<br />

161 Ak LH no slur.<br />

184 Ak RH the chord on the third beat<br />

has g 1 instead of b 1 , presumably<br />

changed in the proofs.<br />

187 Dk no arpeggio sign before RH n.1,<br />

probably omitted in error.<br />

214–17 Ak n.1–2 originally staccato, changed<br />

by Brahms to slurred; the staccato<br />

mark on n.2 remains undeleted in<br />

Ak and was probably overlooked by<br />

the engraver.<br />

216 Ak RH n.1 no (evidently added to<br />

Dk in proofs).<br />

224 Dk n.1 dim. the engraver’s misreading<br />

of Brahms’s dol. in Ak.<br />

233 Ak no pedal release sign (evidently<br />

added to Dk in proofs).<br />

243 Dk LH slur from n.1–3 evidently an<br />

engraver’s error (from n.2–3 in Ak).<br />

254 Dk RH n.2 no >; in Ak the > is partly<br />

obscured by an ink blot.<br />

256 Dk LH n.2 no > (present in Ak).<br />

260 Ak no arpeggio sign before LH n.1<br />

(evidently added to Dk in proofs).<br />

266 Dk LH n.1 no staccato (present in<br />

Ak).<br />

284 Dk LH n.1 staccato, probably added<br />

autonomously by the engraver (see<br />

RH and 276n.1 where there is no staccato<br />

in Dk or Ak); Ak no staccato<br />

(although here and at 276 the cue in<br />

the violin stave has staccato on this<br />

note as in the orchestral score).<br />

296 Dk LH n.2 no staccato (present in Ak<br />

and probably omitted erroneously<br />

by the engraver).<br />

298 Ak RH n.3 has an a in the chord,<br />

which was probably removed in the<br />

proofs.<br />

314 Dk LH n.1 staccato, probably added<br />

erroneously by the engraver; Ak<br />

no staccato, nor in the orchestral<br />

score.<br />

346 Dk RH n.1, n.7 no staccato (present<br />

in Ak).<br />

373–4 Ak Brahms indicated slurs across<br />

the bar line for all notes of the RH<br />

chords (perhaps simplified in the<br />

proofs).<br />

375–6 Ak Brahms indicated slurs across<br />

the bar line for the upper two notes<br />

of the chord (see preceding entry).<br />

408 Dk LH n.2 staccato probably added<br />

autonomously by the engraver; Ak<br />

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no staccato, nor in the corresponding<br />

passage (167) in either source.<br />

409 Dk LH n.1 no > evidently engraver’s<br />

error; Ak > as in the corresponding<br />

passage (168) in both sources.<br />

410 Dk LH n.2 no staccato (present in<br />

Ak).<br />

431 Ak no legato (evidently added in the<br />

proofs of Dk).<br />

441 Ak LH n.1 additional e C♯/G♯ (as well<br />

as h . C♯/G♯), perhaps removed in Dk<br />

for the sake of clarity, although the<br />

equivalent notation remains in 451.<br />

461 Dk no >; Ak >, probably omitted<br />

from Dk in error.<br />

457, 459 Ak LH n.1 no staccato, presumably<br />

Brahms’s oversight (present in Dk).<br />

467 Ak (pizz) immediately after dolce; Dk<br />

(pizz) erroneously placed in 468.<br />

Ak n.2 no staccato; Dk staccato, probably<br />

added in proof.<br />

468 Ak LH n.1, RH/LH n.2 no staccato;<br />

Dk staccato, probably added in proof.<br />

490 Ak RH n.4 no f 1 in chord; probably<br />

added in proofs of Dk (present in<br />

V2).<br />

508 Dk LH n.1 no arpeggio sign; Ak arpeggio<br />

(probably omitted erroneously<br />

from Dk).<br />

515 Dk RH 3 rd beat no staccato; Ak staccato.<br />

531 Dk no >, presumably engraver’s<br />

oversight (present in Ak).<br />

536 Dk pedal release placed rather earlier<br />

than in Ak (presumably the engraver’s<br />

error).<br />

542, 546, 550, 554 Ak no pedal release markings<br />

(presumably added in proofs of<br />

Dk).<br />

553–8 Ak has poco a poco cresc. in 553–4; the<br />

marking cresc. e stringendo poco a poco<br />

was added in the proofs<br />

555–8 Ak no pedal or pedal release markings<br />

(evidently added in proofs of Dk<br />

where they are crammed between<br />

the RH and LH staves).<br />

559 Ak f at top of RH stave perhaps overlooked<br />

by the engraver, but probably<br />

removed by Brahms to prevent the<br />

dynamic getting loud too soon (see f<br />

at 565).<br />

561 Dk RH n.4 no staccato (present in<br />

Ak).<br />

562 Dk RH n.3 no staccato (present in<br />

Ak).<br />

562 Ak RH n.4 no staccato (present in<br />

Dk).<br />

Adagio<br />

3–31 Ak the notes etc. on the solo violin<br />

stave are in Brahms’s hand.<br />

8 Dk centred just after n.2, but on<br />

n.3 in Ak.<br />

10 Ak RH n.2–3 no slur (evidently added<br />

in Dk).<br />

12 Ak RH n.2–4 no slur (evidently added<br />

in Dk).<br />

16 Dk RH n.3 Q downward stem on c 1 ,<br />

evidently an engraver’s error.<br />

18–19 Dk RH beams from 18n.1–3 and<br />

18n.4–19n.4; in Ak Brahms drew a<br />

beam from 18n.1–3 but a large blot<br />

obscures the final chord and any intended<br />

beam across the bar line;<br />

Brahms’s intention here remains uncertain,<br />

but, in relation to the orchestral<br />

parts and Brahms’s slurring in<br />

the piano part, any possible significance<br />

of a beam across the bar line<br />

seems obscure.<br />

20–21 Dk RH no slur (present in Ak).<br />

25 Dk RH slur from n.1–4; presumably<br />

the engraver overlooked Brahms’s<br />

rather faint pencil amendment of the<br />

slur to begin on n.2 in Ak.<br />

45 Ak LH n.1,2 on 1 st and 3 rd e s of the<br />

bar; evidently changed in proofs of<br />

Dk.<br />

54 Ak LH n.3 notated as E.<br />

59 Dk n.1–3, 5–7 no slurs; Ak slurs<br />

surely intended as such, not merely<br />

as indicators of triplets; Dk LH n.5–6<br />

(tenor) no slur (present in Ak).<br />

75 Ak dim., no calando; Ak LH n.3–4<br />

(bass) q .<br />

76 Ak LH n.1–2 (bass) q .<br />

79 Ak RH n.2–3 no portato.<br />

80 Dk no Viol. (present in Ak).<br />

86 Ak RH no e stem on 2 nd beat g 1 .<br />

93 Dk LH n.1 no staccato (present in<br />

Ak).<br />

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95 Dk LH n.3 no q stem (present in Ak).<br />

101 Ak no < .<br />

102 Ak no >.<br />

105 Ak LH 2 nd q beat no d♭ 1 in chord.<br />

106 Ak RH 4 th e beat no e 1 in chord.<br />

108 Dk RH n.1–4 slur probably an engraver’s<br />

error; from n.2–4 in Ak.<br />

109 Ak RH n.2 f 1 instead of g 1 in chord.<br />

Allegro giocoso, ma non troppo vivace<br />

8 Ak LH n.1–2 no staccato<br />

9–14 The version of the LH part in Ak<br />

(see footnote in score) was evidently<br />

simplified in the proofs; Brahms’s<br />

placement of the staccato dot on n.7<br />

is not wholly consistent, but his<br />

intention seems to have been that<br />

it occur outside the slur (in Dk the<br />

staccato is generally placed immediately<br />

after the end of the slur rather<br />

than over or under it): he may well<br />

have intended to make a distinction<br />

here between a staccato mark (as in<br />

portato) that separates the note from<br />

the one before and a staccato mark<br />

that merely shortens the note above<br />

which it is placed without interrupting<br />

the legato connection to the previous<br />

note.<br />

10 Dk RH n.2 staccato (not in Ak).<br />

20 Dk RH n.4 no staccato (present in<br />

Ak).<br />

27–30 Ak LH as in 9–12, but no Ped. marking<br />

in 27.<br />

34 Ak RH n.1 chord includes e 1 , n.3<br />

chord includes g 1 , n.4 chord includes<br />

c♯ 2 .<br />

44 Dk RH n.6 no staccato (present in<br />

Ak).<br />

45 Ak RH n.1 b♯ in place of a in the<br />

chord.<br />

46 Dk LH n.2 no ♯ (present in Ak).<br />

55 Dk no arpeggio sign, probably the<br />

engraver’s oversight, but possibly removed<br />

in the proofs.<br />

59 Ak RH slur over whole bar.<br />

64 Ak RH no slurs.<br />

65 Ak LH n.1 the upper octave e has<br />

been deleted by Brahms, but it is<br />

present in Dk (perhaps reinstated in<br />

the proofs); the equivalent note is<br />

present at the parallel passage (158)<br />

in both sources.<br />

67–8 Ak RH no slurs.<br />

71 Ak no pedal release.<br />

78 Dk RH n.2,4 no staccato (present in<br />

Ak).<br />

80 Ak LH n.2,3 staccato; probably removed<br />

in proofs, since at the parallel<br />

passage (173) Ak also has staccato<br />

that does not appear in Dk.<br />

82 Ak ff, presumably changed in proofs;<br />

at the parallel passage (175) Brahms<br />

wrote f in Ak.<br />

85–7 Dk RH n.3,4 not in Ak (presumably<br />

added in proofs).<br />

89–91 Ak LH n.3,4 full-size notes with no<br />

indication that they should be ‘kleine<br />

Noten’.<br />

91 Ak no pedal release.<br />

101–3 Ak LH as in 9–11.<br />

117 Dk no ♮ before RH n.4 c 1 (present in<br />

Ak).<br />

125, 127 Ak RH n.2 no staccato (perhaps<br />

added by Brahms in proofs, but if so<br />

it does not correspond with the full<br />

score).<br />

128, 129 Ak LH n.3 no staccato, probably<br />

added in proofs because of pizzicato<br />

in the score.<br />

131 Ak LH n.1–6 no slur (present in<br />

Dk).<br />

134–5 Dk cresc. with 134 RH n.4 and <<br />

from 135 RH n.2–4; Ak < with<br />

134 RH n.4 and < from 135 RH<br />

between n.1 and 2 to n.4; in Ak there<br />

is a page turn between 134 and 135<br />

and in Dk a line break; Brahms’s<br />

intention was clearly a continuous<br />

< from 134–5 as in the full score.<br />

136 Dk LH n.2 no Ped. (present in Ak),<br />

probably overlooked by engraver.<br />

141 Ak f before sf on n.1; perhaps removed<br />

from proofs as redundant.<br />

Dk n.3, 5 sf above RH stave and below<br />

LH stave, evidently because the<br />

proximity of the RH and LH beams<br />

prevents sf being engraved between<br />

the staves; Ak sf only below LH<br />

notes.<br />

153 Ak RH n.1–2 no slur.<br />

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155–7 Ak RH no slurs.<br />

160–1 Ak RH no slurs.<br />

162 Ak RH n.1–6 no slur.<br />

173 Ak LH n.2,3 staccato, possibly removed<br />

in proofs of Dk (see above<br />

80).<br />

178 Dk n.3 no ff (present in Ak), probably<br />

omitted in error.<br />

190–96 Dk places all staccato marks at the<br />

end of slurs within the slur, except<br />

on 191n.2; in Ak Brahms consistently<br />

places them outside the slur.<br />

196 Dk RH n.2–3 beamed together, n.4<br />

separate; Ak n.2–4 beamed together<br />

(the change in Dk seems unlikely to<br />

have stemmed from Brahms.<br />

201 Ak RH n.1–2 no slur.<br />

202 Dk RH n.1 >, evidently the engraver’s<br />

misinterpretation of the > in the<br />

solo violin part, which is below the<br />

violin stave.<br />

207–8, 211–12 Ak no pedal release signs.<br />

234–5 Ak LH 234n.3–235n.2 beamed together.<br />

235 Dk LH n.3 no staccato (in Ak).<br />

237–8 Ak LH 237n.3–238n.2 beamed together;<br />

RH 237n.3–238n.1 beamed<br />

together.<br />

254 Ak RH n.4 e 1 in chord, probably removed<br />

in proofs.<br />

267–73 Ak, Dk the staccato on the note following<br />

the three grace notes is consistently<br />

placed above the note; this<br />

is in accordance with Brahms’s typical<br />

practice of placing the staccato<br />

mark outside the slur when it indicated<br />

shortening without separation<br />

from the preceding note.<br />

279–288n.2 Ak RH no staccato marks.<br />

311 Dk LH n.4 no > (present in Ak).<br />

325 Dk n.1 no f; present in Ak, probably<br />

overlooked by engraver.<br />

326 Ak e chord on beat 1: A/a/c♯ 1 /g 1 /a 1 ,<br />

but in connection with the later replaced<br />

solo violin part.<br />

331, 332 Dk LH n.1–3 no staccato (present in<br />

Ak).<br />

334 Ak LH n.1 additional D and arpeggio<br />

sign before the chord, presumably<br />

removed in proofs.<br />

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CRITICAL COMMENTARY<br />

to Joseph Joachim’s Cadenza<br />

SOURCES<br />

S1 (original edition)<br />

Title page<br />

Cadenz / zum / Concert für Violine / von / Johannes<br />

Brahms / (Op. .) / von / JOSEPH JO-<br />

ACHIM / Preis Mk . / Verlag und Eigenthum<br />

für alle Länder / von / N. SIMROCK G. m. b. H.<br />

IN BERLIN / London Depôt: ALFRED LENG-<br />

NICK, Berners Street, W.<br />

First page of music<br />

CADENZ / zum / Concert für Violine / von /<br />

Johannes Brahms. [right] Joseph Joachim. /<br />

[bottom left] Copyright by N. Simrock,<br />

G. m. b. H. Berlin [centre] [or] <br />

Copies in D-Bhm, D-Hs with pl no. (the<br />

copy in D-Bhm (Signatur RB ) originates<br />

from Joachim’s personal library)<br />

Copies in CH-Zz, D-B with pl. no. <br />

Apart from the plate number these copies are<br />

identical.<br />

S2 (revised edition)<br />

Title page<br />

JOACHIM / CADENZ ZUM VIOLINCONZERT /<br />

VON JOHANNES <strong>BRAHMS</strong>, OPUS 77 / CA-<br />

DENCE POUR LE CONCERTO POUR VIO-<br />

LON / DE JOHANNES <strong>BRAHMS</strong>, OPUS 77 /<br />

CADENZA TO THE VIOLIN CONCERTO / BY<br />

JOHANNES <strong>BRAHMS</strong>, OPUS 77 / N. SIMROCK,<br />

LEIPZIG / MUSIKVERLAG / [left] Imprimé en<br />

Allemagne [right] Printed in Germany<br />

First page of music<br />

Cadenz / zum / Brahms Violin Konzert, / [right]<br />

Joseph Joachim / [bottom left] Copyright <br />

by N. Simrock, G. m. b. H. Berlin [centre] pl.<br />

no. <br />

Copy in D-Hs probably dating from the late<br />

s.<br />

V (new edition)<br />

Published as part of Joachim’s revised edition<br />

of the solo part of the Violin Concerto in Joseph<br />

Joachim and Andreas Moser Violinschule (Berlin,<br />

Simrock, ), iii, –, pl. no. <br />

K1 manuscript copy by Marie Soldat<br />

No title<br />

Copied in or shortly before (A-Wgm A<br />

a/IX ). The copy contains several<br />

sketches by Brahms, indicating possible abbreviations,<br />

and an interpretation of these by<br />

Marie Soldat. 1<br />

K2 manuscript copy by Anna Löw<br />

Title page (r) in ink<br />

J. Joachim’sche / Cadenz / zum Violin Concert / von<br />

Johannes Brahms / Wien . Mai / Anna Löw<br />

First page of music (v) in ink<br />

Cadenz / zum Violinkonzert von Johannes Brahms<br />

The copy was perhaps made from a manuscript<br />

copy of the cadenza in possession of Löw’s<br />

teacher Karl Prill, a pupil of Joachim. As argued<br />

in the Preface to the full score, 2 the close<br />

correspondence of the abbreviation with that<br />

in Soldat’s copy, suggests that the version from<br />

which Löw made her copy was, in part, derived<br />

directly or indirectly from Soldat’s copy;<br />

the differences between Löw’s and Soldat’s<br />

version, however, especially in the last bars,<br />

indicate that the abbreviated passage had been<br />

entered into a copy of the cadenza that originally<br />

reflected an earlier or later version of Joachim’s<br />

cadenza.<br />

COMMENTARY<br />

When Joachim’s cadenza was published in the<br />

spring of , a press release referred to ‘numerous<br />

[manuscript] copies, which, because<br />

they contain errors of every kind, are worthless’<br />

and added that ‘in the future these will be<br />

prosecuted and punished by the composer as<br />

pirate editions.’ 3 Some of the divergences referred<br />

to in this notice are evident in the man-<br />

1 For discussion of Brahms’s intervention in this<br />

copy see Preface. A full critical text of the original and<br />

abbreviated versions of the cadenza, together with a<br />

facsimile is given in NBA p. ff.<br />

2 See p. XI–XIII.<br />

3 Signale für die musikalische Welt lx (), .<br />

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uscript copies made by Marie Soldat and Anna<br />

Löw and these are described in the critical<br />

commentary. The version of the cadenza in the<br />

Joachim and Moser Violinschule was probably<br />

engraved either directly from an annotated<br />

copy of S1 or from a corresponding manuscript<br />

(this is indicated by the erroneous omission of<br />

a ♮ before the f 1 in bar in both S1 and V) but<br />

V also contains a number of significant differences<br />

from S1 (identified below); these will<br />

have derived directly from Joachim and must<br />

therefore be considered as authorised revisions.<br />

For that reason the Violinschule version<br />

has been taken as the copy text for the present<br />

edition. In the present state of bibliographical<br />

knowledge, it remains unclear why an otherwise<br />

identical copy of S1 was issued with a<br />

different plate number. S2 is printed from the<br />

same plates as the original edition, but with<br />

some re-engraving, including the modernisation<br />

of bowing signs from and to ≥ and ≤ ),<br />

and the addition of the missing ♮ in bar , as<br />

well as many more fingerings and bowings.<br />

The changes will perhaps have been made<br />

around , in connection with the issue of<br />

Simrock’s collection of thirteen ‘berühmten<br />

Kadenzen’, thus having no direct connection<br />

with Joachim, but it has been impossible at<br />

present to ascertain the date of the revision.<br />

A much later reissue of the Simrock edition,<br />

printed in England, with a title page that gives<br />

the publisher as ‘N. SIMROCK / London Hamburg<br />

(D-Bhm DB ), which is printed from<br />

the same plates (plate number ) without<br />

alteration to the musical text (the fingering <br />

is still wrongly placed on the second note of<br />

bar ), contains the words ‘Rev. Ossip Schnirlin’<br />

at the bottom right of the first page; Schnirlin<br />

(–) edited much violin music and<br />

was author of the book Der neue Weg zur Beherrschung<br />

der gesamten Violinliteratur (). It is<br />

noteworthy that the text of the last five bars in<br />

the revised version has not been changed from<br />

that of the original edition to incorporate the<br />

revisions in V, except for the addition of a fingering<br />

on the third note of bar .<br />

The copy text, therefore, is V, which contains<br />

Joachim’s last ascertainable revisions; additional<br />

fingering and bowing from S2, which seems<br />

entirely consonant with Joachim’s practice, is<br />

given in italics. All other differences between<br />

≥<br />

≤<br />

the printed sources are discussed below. Major<br />

differences between K1 and K2 and the printed<br />

editions are listed. 4 References below to bar<br />

numbers in K1 and K2 are to the equivalent<br />

bars in the printed edition.<br />

1n.3 S1 no 2; S2 2 incorrectly printed<br />

above n.2.<br />

5n.4–6n.1 In all printed sources the tie on a 1<br />

is present, including the copy of S1<br />

in D-B (contrary to the indication in<br />

NBA p. 300).<br />

19–20 K1, K2 no d 1 on 19n.5 and 20nn.1,<br />

4, 5.<br />

21n.2 K1 ritardando.<br />

21–2 K1 rhythm: e ≈ x q . ≈ x|q . e e e<br />

K2 rhythm: e ≈ x q . e|q . e e e<br />

29n.2 K1 riten. e dimin.<br />

31n.1 K1 ‰ U instead of e 1 .<br />

31n.2 K1 a piacere.<br />

33 K1 a tempo.<br />

53n.4 S2 ♮ before f 1 .<br />

62/63n.10 V, S1, S2 3, but surely a misprint for<br />

2, since a third finger here is highly<br />

implausible.<br />

63 K1 omitted.<br />

66n.1 K1, K2 tr.<br />

72–3 K2 notated as a single bar with three<br />

q e 3 s; the x s are given as grace notes<br />

at the same pitches as in the printed<br />

editions.<br />

72n.3 S2 no double dot of prolongation.<br />

76nn.11, 12 K2 e♯ 1 , f♯ 1 .<br />

77 K1 x s a, b, c♯ 1 d 1 followed by chromatic<br />

scale in q ë r s from d♯<br />

1<br />

to e 2 and a<br />

final q ë r f♯ 2 ; K2 x s d♯1, e 1 , f♯ 1 , g 1 , g♯ 1 ,<br />

a 1 , b 1 , c♯ 2 , d♯ 2 , e 2 , e♯ 2 , f♯ 2 .<br />

78 K1 x s g 2 , d♯ 1 , e 1 , f♯ 1 followed by q ë r s<br />

g 1 , g♯ 1 , a 1 , b 1 , c♯ 2 , d 2 , e 2 , f♯ 2 by chromatic<br />

steps to a♯ 2 .<br />

78n.2 S1, S2 3.<br />

78n.6 S1, S2, K1 d 2 (V, K2 d♯ 2 ).<br />

79n.10 S1, S2, K1 b♯ 2 (V, K2 b 2 ).<br />

80n.1 S1, S2 no fingering.<br />

81n.3 S1, S2 no fingering.<br />

82 S1, S2 slurs on n.1–4 and 5–6.<br />

4 The full texts of K1 and K2 can be seen in NBA<br />

pp. –.<br />

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