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Making News Personal<br />
Case Study<br />
Here are four different first paragraphs <strong>for</strong> a story about a social issue: a<br />
refugee case in Canada complicated by the practice of female circumcision<br />
in Nigeria. Each represents a different approach to covering the story, using<br />
a different <strong>for</strong>mat.<br />
The first is a news story about an announcement:<br />
Immigration Canada announced Wednesday that a Nigerian refugee who<br />
has spent seven years in Montreal will be granted refugee status.<br />
Luzy Nasharo, 38, won her appeal to stay with her 7-year-old Canadian-born<br />
daughter, Hester, said Nancy Castillo, spokesman <strong>for</strong> Citizenship and<br />
Immigration Canada.<br />
Although Nasharo has no memory of a village elder circumcising her in her<br />
native Nigeria, she feared the same fate befalling her daughter if she were<br />
deported and returned with Hester, who is the subject of a court order<br />
allowing her to remain in Canada.<br />
This feature approach on the hard news gives the reader<br />
more of the flavor of the refugee’s story and struggle:<br />
Just a day after a Nigerian refugee and 20 members of the Montreal<br />
Coalition Against Poverty stormed two immigration offices, the appeal to halt<br />
her deportation was granted.<br />
“Thank you <strong>for</strong> the opportunity to contribute to this wonderful country,” said a<br />
teary Luzy Nasharo, 38, after hearing she had won her appeal to stay with<br />
her Canadian-born 7-year-old daughter.<br />
This version takes a profile approach, from the perspective<br />
of an interview with the refugee and her daughter, the<br />
main characters in the story:<br />
All day long at her Catholic school, 7-year-old Hester Nasharo prayed silently<br />
with one thought on her mind. “I said, ‘God please let us stay in the country’<br />
and it did work,” the girl said Wednesday.<br />
<strong>International</strong> <strong>Center</strong> <strong>for</strong> <strong>Journalists</strong>