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Making News Personal<br />

Case Study<br />

Here are four different first paragraphs <strong>for</strong> a story about a social issue: a<br />

refugee case in Canada complicated by the practice of female circumcision<br />

in Nigeria. Each represents a different approach to covering the story, using<br />

a different <strong>for</strong>mat.<br />

The first is a news story about an announcement:<br />

Immigration Canada announced Wednesday that a Nigerian refugee who<br />

has spent seven years in Montreal will be granted refugee status.<br />

Luzy Nasharo, 38, won her appeal to stay with her 7-year-old Canadian-born<br />

daughter, Hester, said Nancy Castillo, spokesman <strong>for</strong> Citizenship and<br />

Immigration Canada.<br />

Although Nasharo has no memory of a village elder circumcising her in her<br />

native Nigeria, she feared the same fate befalling her daughter if she were<br />

deported and returned with Hester, who is the subject of a court order<br />

allowing her to remain in Canada.<br />

This feature approach on the hard news gives the reader<br />

more of the flavor of the refugee’s story and struggle:<br />

Just a day after a Nigerian refugee and 20 members of the Montreal<br />

Coalition Against Poverty stormed two immigration offices, the appeal to halt<br />

her deportation was granted.<br />

“Thank you <strong>for</strong> the opportunity to contribute to this wonderful country,” said a<br />

teary Luzy Nasharo, 38, after hearing she had won her appeal to stay with<br />

her Canadian-born 7-year-old daughter.<br />

This version takes a profile approach, from the perspective<br />

of an interview with the refugee and her daughter, the<br />

main characters in the story:<br />

All day long at her Catholic school, 7-year-old Hester Nasharo prayed silently<br />

with one thought on her mind. “I said, ‘God please let us stay in the country’<br />

and it did work,” the girl said Wednesday.<br />

<strong>International</strong> <strong>Center</strong> <strong>for</strong> <strong>Journalists</strong>

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