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<strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2<br />

Assessment Arrangements<br />

2013<br />

Guidance to <strong>Kent</strong> Schools<br />

For Year 6 and Year 7 Teachers


TABLE OF CONTENTS<br />

Purpose of this booklet 4<br />

Target Audience 4<br />

Contacts 4<br />

End of <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 Assessment 2013 5<br />

Relevant publications and websites 5<br />

Page<br />

<strong>Key</strong> Actions for Year 6 teachers from January to May 6 - 7<br />

Guidance on the Assessment of Writing 7 - 8<br />

<strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> Writing Moderation 2013 8<br />

Writing Moderation Visits 8 - 9<br />

District Moderation of Writing 9 - 12<br />

Agreement, Appeals and Quality Assurance 12 - 13<br />

Data Collection 14<br />

Criteria for writing assessment Levels 1-3 15<br />

KS2 Writing Level Descriptors 16<br />

Spelling and Handwriting Level Descriptors 17<br />

Moderation Strands 18<br />

Composition and effect Levels 2-6 19 - 20<br />

Sentence structure and punctuation Levels 2-6 21 - 22<br />

Text structure and organisation Levels 2-6 23 - 24<br />

Writing: flow chart for completing assessment guidelines using APP 25<br />

APP assessment grids Levels 2 and 3 26<br />

APP assessment grids Levels 3 and 4 27<br />

APP assessment grids Levels 4 and 5 28<br />

APP assessment grids Levels 5 and 6 29<br />

Appendix A: Forms for use at Writing Moderation 30<br />

Appendix B: Suggested tests for applying for Additional Time 31<br />

Appendix C: National Curriculum L2-6 descriptors 32 - 40<br />

Appendix D: Suggested tests for applying for Additional Time 2013 41 - 42<br />

Appendix E: Guidance for notification of a pupil unable to access KS2 tasks/tests 43 - 44<br />

Appendix E: Moderation Dates and Venues - P scale Agreement Trialling and<br />

Moderation<br />

45<br />

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PURPOSE OF THIS BOOKLET<br />

This booklet contains information and guidance on assessment for the end of <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 in<br />

2013.<br />

It does not replace the Standards and Testing Agency’s (STA’s) <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 Assessment and<br />

Reporting Arrangements 2013 (ARA), but concentrates on issues specific to the moderation<br />

process in <strong>Kent</strong> schools.<br />

Readers of this document should be familiar with, and have access to the <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 ARA<br />

2013. Maintained and Independent schools with KS2 pupils received one copy of the 2013 KS2<br />

ARA in November 2012. Additional printed copies are not available, although can be accessed<br />

online at: www.education.gov.uk/assessment<br />

Target Audience<br />

The booklet is relevant to all involved in the end of <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 assessment:<br />

• Headteachers<br />

• <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 Leaders<br />

• Assessment Co-ordinators<br />

• KS2 subject leaders<br />

• Year 5 teachers<br />

• Year 6 teachers<br />

• KS3 Head of English Department<br />

• Year 7 teachers<br />

• Administrative staff involved with inputting and submitting data<br />

The booklet or relevant sections from it may be photocopied for distribution as required within<br />

schools.<br />

<strong>Key</strong> Contacts<br />

Margo Barraclough<br />

<strong>Kent</strong> Challenge Adviser and <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2<br />

Moderation Manager<br />

01233 898700<br />

margo.barraclough@kent.gov.uk<br />

Katherine Atkinson<br />

01622 696202<br />

katherine.atkinson@kent.gov.uk<br />

Management Information: for support on KS2<br />

data collection<br />

Assessment and Moderation Support<br />

assessment@kent.gov.uk<br />

Jan Bennett<br />

01622 696001<br />

jan.bennett@kent.gov.uk<br />

Management Information: for general enquires<br />

about access arrangements and RAISEonline<br />

support<br />

Diana Robinson<br />

01622 694299<br />

diana.robinson@kent.gov.uk<br />

For guidance on disapplication from the curriculum.<br />

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END OF KEY STAGE 2 TEACHER ASSESSMENT 2013<br />

• Schools will need to report ‘informed’ Teacher Assessment results for each pupil at the end of KS2.<br />

• In English, mathematics and science, schools will need to report a Teacher Assessment level for each<br />

attainment target and an overall subject level as one of the following: W, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 6, A, D, L, F* or<br />

P**.<br />

• Regardless of whether the writing tests are marked internally or externally schools should use the<br />

results to inform a teacher assessment judgement of a pupil’s work across Year 6.<br />

• Schools selected for the writing sampling test should use the results to inform but not dictate teacher<br />

assessment levels.<br />

• Pupils’ reading test results will be combined with their writing teacher assessment to calculate the<br />

overall English level.<br />

• The Mathematics level will be calculated in the usual way by assigning different weightings to each<br />

attainment target:<br />

- (M AT1) Using and Applying Mathematics weighting = 2<br />

- (M AT2) Number and Algebra weighting = 5<br />

- (M AT3) Shape, Space and Measures weighting = 2<br />

- (M AT4) Data Handling weighting = 1<br />

• The Science level will be calculated in the usual way by assigning different weightings to each<br />

attainment target:<br />

- (Sc AT1) Scientific Enquiry weighting = 2<br />

- (Sc AT2) Living Processes and Living Things weighting = 1<br />

- (Sc AT3) Materials and their Properties weighting = 1<br />

- (Sc AT4) Physical Processes weighting = 1<br />

• The reporting of P scales is statutory. Schools will need to record the achievement of pupils with SEN<br />

using the P levels where they are working below Level 1 of the National Curriculum. The P scales are a<br />

set of optional indicators for recording the achievements of these pupils.<br />

• For more details on P scales, visit the STA website at:<br />

https://orderline.education.gov.uk/gempdf/1445950839/P_scales_level%20descriptors_2009.pdf<br />

• Schools will need to provide the LA, parents and the next school/<strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> with the consolidated<br />

Teacher Assessment data for each pupil.<br />

• * F = Pupil will reach the end of the programme of study and take the relevant key stage test in the<br />

future.<br />

• ** P = Pupil has already completed the programme of study, the relevant key stage test has been taken<br />

and a teacher assessment result has been reported in the past<br />

Relevant publications and websites<br />

• Assessment and Reporting Arrangements KS2 2013 at www.education.gov.uk/assessment<br />

• Implications for teaching and learning from the English and Mathematics tests up to 2006<br />

http://orderline.education.gov.uk/bookstore.asp?FO=1307446&action=SearchResults<br />

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KEY ACTIONS FOR YEAR 6 TEACHERS FROM JANUARY TO MAY<br />

(from the Primary Strategy)<br />

Month<br />

Action<br />

January • Set curricular targets for term 3, share with pupils and display (may need to adjust<br />

planning to address targets).<br />

• Use ‘Using curricular targets in Y6: materials for teachers’ to support planning, teaching<br />

and assessment linked to curricular targets.<br />

• Use assessment information to target children for the booster groups. Use Securing level<br />

… and Overcoming barriers materials throughout the year.<br />

• Start Booster programme (focusing on areas of need, linked where possible to the work<br />

going on in class).<br />

• Hold a meeting to discuss with parents how they can best support their children’s<br />

preparation for the Y6 national tests<br />

• Moderate teacher assessment of children’s work to ensure a shared understanding of<br />

standards.<br />

• Include in teaching sensible preparation for the tests – help children to develop<br />

confidence in their own knowledge and skills to enable them to achieve success.<br />

• Use test questions (eg: from Testbase CD Rom) in lessons.<br />

• Share mark schemes with the children to establish expectations and use to support<br />

peer and self-assessment.<br />

• Plan in order to secure children’s understanding of the mathematics Y5 <strong>Key</strong><br />

Objectives.<br />

• Provide opportunities for children to practise timed tasks e.g ensure mental<br />

mathematics questions are timed, emphasising the importance of answering in 5, 10<br />

or 15 seconds; 15 minutes reading and 45 minutes answering questions; planning<br />

and writing in timed conditions for the short and long writing tasks.<br />

Own action<br />

points<br />

February • Y6 children sit national test papers from the previous year.<br />

• Mark, then analyse data (including booster children):<br />

• What are their strengths and weaknesses, areas of misconceptions etc?<br />

• Adjust medium term planning if necessary.<br />

• Go through papers with the children, modelling and encouraging children to model<br />

how questions could be answered, and emphasising annotations in mathematics.<br />

• Provide opportunities for children to discuss with one another their own strengths and<br />

areas for development. Support individuals/groups of children in making progress in<br />

particular identified areas.<br />

• Assess children’s progress against curricular targets and the key objectives covered<br />

that term. Use this to inform planning<br />

• Set curricular targets for term 4, share with pupils and display (may need to adjust<br />

planning to address targets).<br />

Own action<br />

points<br />

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March • Prepare pack of materials for the Easter holidays (e.g. consolidation of key grammar<br />

areas, past reading questions, mathematical problems and puzzles linked to areas of<br />

development identified in the February test). Go through the pack with the children to<br />

ensure they understand its purpose and how to use it.<br />

• Plan a tight teaching schedule for the four-week run up to the national tests, focusing<br />

on key areas identified and drawing on the unit plans for mathematics and the literacy<br />

exemplification units.<br />

Own action<br />

points<br />

April/May • Go through the Easter homework with the children, showing children how questions could<br />

be answered.<br />

• Teach four week teaching schedule (see above) using day-to-day assessment to inform<br />

planning.<br />

• In the first week of May, plan experiences for children to reflect on what they have<br />

learnt (e.g. produce mind maps.) including the skills they have learnt.<br />

• Ensure there is a range of evidence across the genres for writing moderation.<br />

Own action<br />

points<br />

GUIDANCE ON THE ASSESSMENT OF WRITING<br />

Teacher Assessment of Writing<br />

There will not be an English writing test or English writing sample in 2013. Instead the English writing test<br />

will be replaced by a new statutory test of English grammar, punctuation and spelling. This change follows<br />

the Government’s acceptance of Lord Bew’s recommendation that writing composition should only be<br />

subject to teacher assessment, with the more ‘technical’ aspects of English assessed via an externally<br />

marked test.<br />

However, at least 25% of schools will receive a moderation visit and those schools not receiving a visit, will<br />

be invited to attend the County moderation of writing in May and June.<br />

To ensure accurate and consistent Teacher Assessment of Writing you are encouraged to refer to:<br />

• The performance descriptions for Writing as defined in the National Curriculum.<br />

• Assessing Pupil Progress grids.<br />

• The level descriptors in the moderation strands of:<br />

o<br />

o<br />

o<br />

Sentence structure and punctuation<br />

Text structure and organisation<br />

Composition and effect.<br />

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It is important to note that the Teacher Assessed level awarded to a pupil is based on a ‘best fit’ model that<br />

takes account of a pupil’s achievements across a broad range of work, not a single task.<br />

KEY STAGE 2 WRITING MODERATION 2013<br />

Purpose of the Moderation Process<br />

<strong>Kent</strong> has a statutory duty to ensure the end of <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> assessments take place, that the tests are<br />

correctly administered, and that judgments are fair and consistent. The purpose of the writing moderation<br />

is to ensure that teacher assessment is accurate and consistent with national standards.<br />

<strong>Kent</strong> is required by the Standards and Testing Agency (STA) to moderate a sample size of schools for<br />

writing. These visits will be carried out by experienced school-based moderators.<br />

Writing Moderation Visits<br />

LAs are required on behalf of STA to carry out a programme of moderation visits during the academic<br />

year. The purpose of these visits is to ensure that teacher judgements in Year 6 are accurate and<br />

consistent with national standards.<br />

Schools on the list from the Standards and Testing Agency (STA): will receive a writing moderation visit<br />

between 15 th April and 22 nd June. Schools will be informed of a moderation visit no more than two weeks in<br />

advance, so they can make any necessary arrangements, including ensuring the availability of staff to talk<br />

to the visiting moderator.<br />

The moderation visit will be carried out by a school-based colleague who works in a different district. This<br />

may involve:<br />

• Discussion with the Headteacher/Assessment Co-ordinator/Year 6 teacher about the process of the<br />

moderation visit.<br />

• Discussion with Year 6 teachers relating to the ways they have reached their Teacher Assessments<br />

including, where appropriate, the steps taken to ensure consistent assessments across parallel<br />

classes.<br />

• Discussion with a senior colleague with oversight of assessment within the school to gain an insight into<br />

the steps the school has taken to ensure consistency of judgement about pupils’ work from Year 5 to<br />

Year 6, and from Year 6 to Year 7.<br />

• Scrutiny of pupils’ written work from September onwards (eg: exercise books, “finished” and<br />

“rough/draft” work, writing across a range of genre and in other subjects, such as history and<br />

geography, project-based work), together with any outcomes of the tests already undertaken. See<br />

Appendix A for suggested range of writing evidence.<br />

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Schools will need to provide the moderator with the class list of Year 6 pupils and their teacher assessed<br />

levels. The moderator will then select a sample of borderline pupils and review the evidence. It would be<br />

helpful if teachers could indicate how secure pupils were working in that level. See sample size below:<br />

Cohort Size Less than 16 pupils 16 to 40 pupils More than 40 pupils<br />

Level 2<br />

writing<br />

One highest achieving<br />

(if applicable)<br />

Two highest achieving<br />

(if applicable)<br />

Three highest achieving<br />

(if applicable)<br />

Level 3<br />

writing*<br />

One highest achieving Two highest achieving Three highest achieving<br />

Level 4<br />

writing<br />

One lowest achieving Two lowest achieving Three lowest achieving<br />

One highest achieving Two highest achieving Three highest achieving<br />

Level 5<br />

writing**<br />

One lowest achieving Two lowest achieving Three lowest achieving<br />

Level 6<br />

writing<br />

All (if applicable)<br />

All (if applicable)<br />

All (if applicable)<br />

* If no Level 3s then make up the sample size with the lowest Level 4s.<br />

** If no Level 5s then make up the sample size with the highest Level 4s.<br />

NB: The pupils in the sample size should be working at borderline levels.<br />

Moderators may wish to see evidence from additional pupils if they are not satisfied that the evidence<br />

provided confirms accurate judgements.<br />

Moderators will complete a Note of Visit, which will be a summary of their visit, outlining their judgements<br />

and reasons. This will either be left with the school or sent to the school within the appropriate timescale.<br />

District Moderation of Writing 2013<br />

Moderation Meetings<br />

These will take place between 22 nd May and 14 th June 2013 at venues across the county following the<br />

District model. The meetings provide opportunities for discussions about consistency, standards and<br />

effective practice in assessment. Precise details will be provided to schools in March.<br />

Each moderation session will take half a day and will be from 1.00pm - 4.00 pm. Most <strong>Kent</strong> schools with<br />

<strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 pupils will be required to send one Year 6 teacher representative to attend the meeting. The<br />

LA feels that participation in the moderation process represents a valuable opportunity for professional<br />

development. Secondary schools will be invited to send two Year 7 English teachers to participate in the<br />

moderation process, and to bring samples of their pupils’ writing to moderate.<br />

Format of the Moderation Meetings<br />

During meetings Years 6 and 7 teachers will work in small groups scrutinising the samples of pupils’ work.<br />

If the groups agree on the assessments made by their colleagues, those assessments are confirmed.<br />

However, changes to the assessments are sometimes made by the groups and in cases where they cannot<br />

come to an agreement, the team of moderators act as in independent group to make and feed back a<br />

decision.<br />

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The Role of the Moderation Team<br />

The Moderation Team for 2013 will consist of current <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 practitioners, experienced <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2<br />

moderators, primary school Headteachers and Leading Assessment for Learning Teachers. The LA may<br />

be monitored in its duties by STA personnel.<br />

To ensure that fair and consistent assessments are made, members of the team will moderate the<br />

assessment of the lowest achieving Level 5 in Years 6 and 7 from each school – if there are no Level<br />

5s, then the highest achieving Level 4.<br />

All pieces submitted to the team will be looked at by at least two moderators to ensure a consistency of<br />

moderation within the team.<br />

The team will keep a log of all pieces of work submitted to it. The outcome is recorded as a means of<br />

quality assurance.<br />

The team may request extra samples from schools where their judgement differs. Further samples may be<br />

requested from any school where concerns are raised on the consistency of the levels awarded.<br />

The Moderation Manager (Margo Barraclough) will ensure that the Headteacher of the primary or junior<br />

school is formally notified where there are changes made to the awarded levels as part of the moderation<br />

process.<br />

Evidence to bring to the moderation<br />

For each pupil in the sample all Year 6 and Year 7 teachers must bring sufficient evidence* that best<br />

supports teacher assessments in:<br />

and<br />

and<br />

• Writing across a range of genres and curriculum areas (See Appendix A)<br />

• An annotated and highlighted copy of the guidelines or a similar resource used in the school,<br />

showing the level the pupil is working at and the extent to which the pupil was supported. The<br />

Assessing Pupil Progress grids are included in this booklet.<br />

• Writing tasks and spelling tests (end of KS2 and optional Year 7, if available) with the annotated<br />

mark schemes.<br />

Examples of evidence:<br />

• A range of pupils’ written work that shows most independence, ie. little or no adult support. It is<br />

recommended that work is briefly annotated with a code to show level of independence, eg: “I” for<br />

“independent work” and “S” for “supported work.”<br />

• Work from other lessons, such as topic work, science, RE, geography and history.<br />

• Notes on plans and evidence – annotations and jottings.<br />

• Pupils’ own reflections about their writing.<br />

• Teachers’ and additional adults’ observations.<br />

Evidence that is not helpful:<br />

• Homework tasks.<br />

• Closed tasks / photocopied worksheets (unless annotated).<br />

• Group or paired work.<br />

• Work that is not dated.<br />

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Sufficient evidence*: enough evidence by which teachers are able to make a secure<br />

judgement about a pupil.<br />

Sample sizes for moderation of writing in districts:<br />

Year 6:<br />

Cohort Size Less than 16 pupils 16 to 40 pupils More than 40 pupils<br />

Level 3<br />

writing*<br />

One highest achieving Two highest achieving Three highest achieving<br />

Level 4<br />

writing<br />

One borderline<br />

(may be lowest or highest<br />

achieving)<br />

Two borderline<br />

(may be lowest and/or<br />

highest achieving)<br />

Three borderline<br />

(may be lowest and/or highest<br />

achieving)<br />

Level 5<br />

writing**<br />

One lowest achieving Two lowest achieving Three lowest achieving<br />

Level 6<br />

writing<br />

All (if applicable)<br />

All (if applicable)<br />

All (if applicable)<br />

* If no Level 3s then make up the sample size with the lowest Level 4s.<br />

* If no Level 5s then make up the sample size with the highest Level 4s.<br />

NB: The pupils in the sample size should be working at borderline levels.<br />

Each Year 7 teacher:<br />

Levels<br />

Sample size to bring to moderation<br />

Level 3 writing*<br />

One highest achieving<br />

Level 4 writing<br />

One borderline<br />

(may be lowest or highest achieving)<br />

Level 5 writing<br />

One lowest achieving<br />

Level 6 writing<br />

One lowest achieving<br />

* If no Level 3s then make up the sample size with the lowest Level 4s.<br />

NB: The pupils in the sample size should be working at borderline levels.<br />

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Endorsement<br />

Endorsement is the formal agreement by the Moderation Manager that the pupils’ work submitted at<br />

moderation has been appropriately administered and assessed by the school. It enables schools to submit<br />

their data to the LA for the purposes of the national data collection.<br />

It is expected that the majority of schools will have their results endorsed at the end of the process. Where<br />

this is the case, the Headteacher will receive a completed form of endorsement from the moderation.<br />

The KS2 writing assessments of a school must be endorsed by the Moderation Manager before the data<br />

can be submitted to <strong>Kent</strong>’s Management Information.<br />

Where there are more significant concerns raised that cannot be addressed at the moderation meeting the<br />

manager will arrange with the Headteacher to visit the school and undertake a more detailed moderation of<br />

assessments. This is generally quite rare.<br />

Agreement, Appeals and Quality Assurance<br />

Agreement<br />

The Manager of the moderation process may request further evidence from a school before endorsing its<br />

results. This may include submitting additional evidence for individual pupils to ensure appropriate levels<br />

are awarded. The school’s Year 6 representative will be made aware at the moderation meeting if this is<br />

necessary.<br />

Appeals<br />

Schools wishing to appeal against any decision, either made at the district moderation or during a school<br />

visit, may resubmit their samples by post for the appeals meeting, which will be held on 25th June 2013,<br />

by 21 st June 2013 at the latest. They need to send the evidence in an envelope to the address below:<br />

FAO:<br />

Margo Barraclough<br />

KS2 Moderation Manager – Postal Appeals<br />

Education, Learning and Skills<br />

The Shepway Centre<br />

Maidstone<br />

<strong>Kent</strong><br />

ME15 8AW<br />

Appeals protocol<br />

The following conditions will be met as part of the appeals and postal moderation:<br />

Where schools have presented samples for reconsideration:<br />

• Any member of the Moderation Team present at the original moderation meeting (either in school or at<br />

the district meeting) will not moderate any work for that school.<br />

• The level agreed by the Moderation Team will be the final level set for that piece by the LA.<br />

• Each school will receive relevant written feedback where there is a difference between the school<br />

assessed level and the level decided by the team.<br />

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Where schools have presented additional evidence at the request of the Moderation Manager:<br />

This additional evidence will form part of the postal moderation/appeals meeting.<br />

Additional samples may be required where the sample submitted during the original process is deemed<br />

inappropriate or insufficient for assessment.<br />

• The samples will be assessed by any members of the Moderation Team, whether or not they were<br />

present when work from the school was initially considered.<br />

• Schools will receive written feedback detailing outcomes where the Team’s assessment is different<br />

from the school’s assessment.<br />

Where schools were not present at their original moderation meeting:<br />

• Samples will be moderated by the team in the same way as they would have been at any district-based<br />

moderation session.<br />

• Individual schools will receive written feedback of the outcome of the postal moderation.<br />

Quality Assurance<br />

The Moderation Manager will approach specific schools to take a selection of scripts to the South East<br />

Regional Standardisation Meeting on 26 th June 2013. This standardisation meeting includes<br />

representatives from a large number of LAs in the South East. The purpose of the meeting is to moderate<br />

each LA’s decisions and to ensure consistent standards. The meeting is also attended by representatives<br />

from STA.<br />

Data Collection<br />

Precise information relating to data collection of KS2 National Curriculum Assessment results will be<br />

provided by Management Information in May 2013. The deadline for reporting teacher assessments to<br />

Management Information is Tuesday, 25 th June 2013.<br />

The results can only be submitted when the school's results have been formally endorsed by the<br />

Moderation Manager. As last year, at the request of STA, the LA will undertake a random sample of<br />

submitted assessments to Management Information, to ensure that the levels agreed at Moderation are<br />

reported correctly.<br />

Management Information will process endorsed pupils’ results on behalf of all schools and submit them to<br />

the DfE as part of the national data collection.<br />

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Check for<br />

Writing<br />

Moderation<br />

Planning<br />

Structuring opportunities<br />

for pupils write across a<br />

range of genres<br />

Learning<br />

Build skills, curiosity,<br />

confidence and<br />

independence<br />

Managing ongoing<br />

evidence<br />

Quality, not quantity<br />

Preparing for the<br />

moderation<br />

Know the pupils and help<br />

others know them<br />

Plan regular opportunities<br />

for writing, including guided<br />

writing opportunities<br />

Give opportunities to write in<br />

different genres and allow<br />

choice and independence,<br />

especially in independent<br />

writing<br />

Make sure all work is dated<br />

Annotating work with a<br />

pupil’s quote helps to clarify<br />

his/her understanding<br />

Collect all the writing<br />

evidence from chosen<br />

pupils- if advice has been<br />

followed, this will show<br />

variety and independence<br />

Give pupils opportunities to<br />

plan and draft their writing<br />

Ensure the learning intention<br />

is clear and understood by<br />

all pupils (and written by<br />

adults for slow writers!)<br />

Share examples of good<br />

questioning/ verbal evidence<br />

with TAs so they can<br />

support evidence gathering<br />

Moderators will look for a<br />

range of independent work.<br />

Post-Its will help flag it up if<br />

the pupil’s handwriting is not<br />

clear<br />

Be aware of Level 4 and<br />

Level 5 expectations in<br />

every genre and offer<br />

experiences to appropriate<br />

pupils.<br />

Plan ahead for focussed<br />

use of observations/quotes<br />

to show practical application<br />

of learning by guided groups<br />

Use plain books for planning,<br />

as these allow for expansion<br />

of ideas and show<br />

development of writing<br />

Use the writing tasks and<br />

spelling test for further<br />

evidence.<br />

Plan opportunities for Level<br />

5 learning in all parts of the<br />

lesson, not just as an extra,<br />

for appropriate pupils<br />

Mark to the learning<br />

intention- how has progress<br />

been demonstrated? Have<br />

pupils responded to<br />

teachers’ feedback?<br />

Keep manageable evidenceannotations<br />

on planning,<br />

observations on post its,<br />

quotes, TAs’ comments,<br />

cross curricular writing<br />

Use examples in the<br />

standards files for in-school<br />

moderation, to ensure<br />

consistent judgements. Be<br />

prepared to justify them<br />

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**NB: The Year 6 Teacher representing the school at moderation needs to know about all the pupils in the sample.


Criteria for writing assessment (levels 1 – 3) for teacher assessment purposes only<br />

Content<br />

(Narrative Writing)<br />

Content<br />

(Non Narrative Writing)<br />

Sentences<br />

Level 1 Level 2C Level 2B Level 2A Level 3<br />

• Communicates meaning beyond a<br />

simple statement some<br />

characteristics of narrative writing,<br />

which may not be sustained<br />

• Communicates meaning<br />

through simple words and<br />

phrases<br />

• Writing is comprehensible<br />

without the need for a<br />

transcript<br />

• Communicates meaning<br />

through simple words and<br />

phrases<br />

• Writing is comprehensible<br />

without the need for a<br />

transcript<br />

• Communicates meaning beyond a<br />

simple statement<br />

• Some characteristics of non<br />

narrative writing, which may not be<br />

sustained<br />

• Simple words and phrases • Individual ideas developed in short<br />

sections<br />

• Communicates meaning<br />

• Narrative used with some consistency<br />

(tense, person, story-line<br />

• Some awareness of reader and<br />

purpose of narrative writing<br />

• Communicates meaning<br />

• Non-narrative used with some<br />

consistency<br />

• Some awareness of reader and<br />

purpose of non-narrative writing<br />

• May lack organisation of subject<br />

matter<br />

• Sufficient detail given to engage the<br />

reader<br />

• Effective variation in sentence<br />

structure<br />

• Communicates meaning in lively<br />

way generally holding the<br />

reader’s interest<br />

• Main characteristics of narrative<br />

writing are evident<br />

• Communicates meaning in lively<br />

way generally holding the<br />

reader’s interest<br />

• Main characteristics of nonnarrative<br />

writing are evident<br />

• Simple organisational features<br />

present e.g. (headings, sections)<br />

• Links between ideas/events<br />

mainly clear<br />

• Correctly structured sentences<br />

• Organised imaginative, clear<br />

• Main features of narrative writing<br />

used appropriately<br />

• Fluent writing style appropriate to<br />

intended reader<br />

• Technical aspects effective<br />

(index, headings, diagrams,<br />

captions)<br />

• Fluent writing style appropriate to<br />

intended reader, subject and<br />

purpose (recount, persuasion,<br />

non-chronological report,<br />

explanation, discussion,<br />

instruction)<br />

• Ideas extended logically in<br />

sequence of sentences<br />

Vocabulary<br />

• Simple words and phrases • Vocabulary appropriate to subject<br />

matter some words used effectively<br />

• Variation in choice of words<br />

• Ambitious words sometimes used<br />

• Some descriptive phrases add<br />

detail/emphasis<br />

• Words chosen for variety,<br />

interest and effect<br />

Grammar and<br />

Punctuation<br />

Spelling<br />

• Begin to show awareness of<br />

how full stops are used<br />

• Some recognisable<br />

representation of phonemes<br />

• More characteristics of spoken than<br />

written language<br />

• Some punctuation conventions<br />

used to demarcate units of meaning<br />

• Some common words spelt<br />

correctly<br />

• Alternative words reliant on phonics<br />

• Some recall of visual patterns (e.g.<br />

oa, ea)<br />

• Organisation reflects purpose of<br />

writing<br />

• Some sentences extended/linked<br />

through connectives other than<br />

‘and’<br />

• Some sentence punctuation<br />

• Phonetically plausible<br />

• Growing knowledge of whole word<br />

structure<br />

• Awareness of visible patterns<br />

• Recall of letter strings (e.g. --ing, -ed)<br />

• Growing understanding of use of<br />

capital letters and full stops to<br />

mark correctly structured<br />

sentenced<br />

• Accurate spelling of many<br />

common monosyllabic words<br />

• Phonetically plausible attempts at<br />

longer polysyllabic words<br />

• Basic grammatical<br />

structure correct<br />

• Accurate use of full stops, capital<br />

letters and question marks<br />

• Mostly accurate (including<br />

common polysyllabic words)<br />

Handwriting<br />

• Most letters clearly shaped<br />

• Most letters correctly<br />

orientated<br />

• Legible<br />

• Some inconsistencies in letter size<br />

and orientation<br />

• Some inconsistencies in use of<br />

upper /and lower case letters.<br />

• Clear ascenders/descenders<br />

distinguishable<br />

• Upper/lower case letters not generally<br />

mixed within words<br />

• Letters accurately formed<br />

• Letters consistent in size<br />

• Joined and legible<br />

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The Moderation Process<br />

Writing: making a level judgement<br />

Use these steps to formalise your assessment of pupils’ writing: You will need:<br />

• Evidence of pupil’s writing that shows most independence, including work in other subjects.<br />

• Other evidence about the pupil as a writer, e.g. notes on plans, pupil’s own reflections, your own<br />

recollections of classroom activities and questions.<br />

• A copy of the assessment guidelines for the level borderline that is your starting point.<br />

Step 1: Making assessment focus judgements<br />

For each AF, starting with AF5:<br />

- look at the evidence in relation to all the criteria for both the higher and lower levels at this<br />

borderline and highlight those that have been met.<br />

- make a best-fit judgement whether the higher or lower level has been achieved and tick the<br />

appropriate level-related box.<br />

- if there is some evidence for an AF but not enough to make a judgement at the lower level, tick<br />

the BL (Below Level) box.<br />

- if there is no evidence for a particular AF, tick the IE (Insufficient Evidence) box.<br />

If you ticked BL for more than one AF out of AFs 1 to 6, check whether you should be using the assessment<br />

guidelines for the level borderline below.<br />

If you have ticked all, or almost all, the criteria for the higher level, check whether you should be using the<br />

assessment guidelines for the level borderline above.<br />

Step 2: Making an overall level judgement<br />

Check your AF judgements against the requirements for each level:<br />

For level 2: ticks at level 2 for three out of AF5, AF6, AF1 and AF” and either AF7 or AF8.<br />

For all other levels: ticks at the level for any four AFs out of AFs 1 to 6.<br />

If you have ticked IE for more than two AFs, there may be insufficient evidence to make an overall level<br />

judgement, in which case IE should be awarded.<br />

Now finalise the overall level judgement by deciding whether the level is low, secure or high.<br />

Low – meets the minimum requirements for the level.<br />

Secure – meets the minimum requirements for the level with some additional highlighting of criteria at the level in<br />

most other AFs.<br />

High: the criteria for the level are highlighted across all, or almost all, the AFs, with some criteria in the level above<br />

likely to be highlighted as well.<br />

Your decision should take account of how fully and consistently the criteria have been met and how far the pupil<br />

demonstrates independence and choice across a range of evidence. Where evidence for AF7 and AF8 is<br />

significantly better/worse than the evidence for other AFs, it is likely to influence your judgement of low, secure or<br />

high.<br />

Step 3: Checking the overall level judgement<br />

Finally, check the overall judgement by comparing the evidence with the relevant standard files.<br />

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Writing assessment guidelines: levels 2 and 3<br />

Pupil name Class / Group Date<br />

AF5 - vary sentences<br />

for clarity, purpose and<br />

effect<br />

AF6 - write with<br />

technical accuracy of<br />

syntax and<br />

punctuation in<br />

phrases, clauses and<br />

sentences<br />

AF3 - organise and<br />

present whole texts<br />

effectively, sequencing<br />

and structuring<br />

information, ideas and<br />

events<br />

AF4 - construct<br />

paragraphs and use<br />

cohesion within and<br />

between paragraphs<br />

AF1 - write<br />

imaginative,<br />

interesting and<br />

thoughtful texts<br />

AF2 - produce texts<br />

which are<br />

appropriate to task,<br />

reader and purpose<br />

AF7 - select<br />

appropriate and<br />

effective<br />

vocabulary<br />

AF8 - use correct spelling<br />

Handwriting and<br />

presentation<br />

Level 3<br />

In most writing<br />

• reliance mainly on<br />

simply structured<br />

sentences, variation<br />

with support, eg some<br />

complex sentences<br />

• and, but, so are the<br />

most common<br />

connectives,<br />

subordination<br />

occasionally<br />

• some limited variation<br />

in use of tense and<br />

verb forms, not always<br />

secure<br />

In most writing<br />

• straightforward<br />

sentences usually<br />

demarcated<br />

accurately with full<br />

stops, capital letters,<br />

question and<br />

exclamation marks<br />

• some, limited, use of<br />

speech punctuation<br />

• comma splicing<br />

evident, particularly in<br />

narrative<br />

In most writing<br />

• some attempt to<br />

organise ideas with<br />

related points placed<br />

next to each other<br />

• openings and closings<br />

usually signalled<br />

• some attempt to<br />

sequence ideas or<br />

material logically<br />

In most writing<br />

• some internal<br />

structure within<br />

sections of text eg<br />

one-sentence<br />

paragraphs or ideas<br />

loosely organised<br />

• within paragraphs /<br />

sections, some links<br />

between sentences,<br />

eg use of pronouns<br />

or of adverbials<br />

• movement between<br />

paragraphs / sections<br />

sometimes abrupt or<br />

disjointed<br />

In most writing<br />

• some appropriate<br />

ideas and content<br />

included<br />

• some attempt to<br />

elaborate on basic<br />

information or events,<br />

eg nouns expanded<br />

by simple adjectives<br />

• attempt to adopt<br />

viewpoint, though<br />

often not maintained<br />

or inconsistent, eg<br />

attitude expressed,<br />

but with little<br />

elaboration<br />

In most writing<br />

• purpose established<br />

at a general level<br />

• main features of<br />

selected form<br />

sometimes signalled<br />

to the reader<br />

• some attempts at<br />

appropriate style,<br />

with attention to<br />

reader<br />

In most writing<br />

• simple, generally<br />

appropriate<br />

vocabulary used,<br />

limited in range<br />

• some words<br />

selected for effect<br />

or occasion<br />

In most writing<br />

• correct spelling of<br />

o some common<br />

grammatical function<br />

words<br />

o common content/lexical<br />

words with more than<br />

one morpheme,<br />

including compound<br />

words<br />

• likely errors<br />

o some inflected endings,<br />

eg past tense,<br />

comparatives, adverbs<br />

o some phonetically<br />

plausible attempts at<br />

content/lexical words<br />

In most writing<br />

• legible style,<br />

shows<br />

accurate and<br />

consistent<br />

letter<br />

formation,<br />

sometimes<br />

joined<br />

Level 2<br />

In some forms of<br />

writing<br />

• some variation in<br />

sentence openings, eg<br />

not always starting with<br />

name or pronoun<br />

• mainly simple<br />

sentences with and<br />

used to connect<br />

clauses<br />

• past and present tense<br />

generally consistent<br />

In some forms of<br />

writing<br />

• clause structure<br />

mostly grammatically<br />

correct<br />

• sentence<br />

demarcation with<br />

capital letters and full<br />

stops usually<br />

accurate<br />

• some accurate use of<br />

question and<br />

exclamation marks,<br />

and commas in lists<br />

In some forms of<br />

writing<br />

• some basic<br />

sequencing of ideas or<br />

material, eg timerelated<br />

words or<br />

phrases, line breaks,<br />

headings, numbers<br />

• openings and/or<br />

closings sometimes<br />

signalled<br />

In some forms of<br />

writing<br />

• ideas in sections<br />

grouped by content,<br />

some linking by<br />

simple pronouns<br />

In some forms of<br />

writing<br />

• mostly relevant ideas<br />

and content,<br />

sometimes repetitive<br />

or sparse<br />

• some apt word<br />

choices create<br />

interest<br />

• brief comments,<br />

questions about<br />

events or actions<br />

suggest viewpoint<br />

In some forms of<br />

writing<br />

• some basic purpose<br />

established, eg main<br />

features of story,<br />

report<br />

• some appropriate<br />

features of the given<br />

form used<br />

• some attempts to<br />

adopt appropriate<br />

style<br />

In some forms of<br />

writing<br />

• simple, often<br />

speech-like<br />

vocabulary<br />

conveys relevant<br />

meanings<br />

• some<br />

adventurous word<br />

choices, eg<br />

opportune use of<br />

new vocabulary<br />

In some forms of writing<br />

• usually correct spelling of<br />

o high frequency<br />

grammatical function<br />

words<br />

o common single<br />

morpheme<br />

content/lexical words<br />

• likely errors<br />

o inflected endings, eg<br />

past tense, plurals,<br />

adverbs<br />

o phonetic attempts at<br />

vowel digraphs<br />

In some forms of<br />

writing<br />

• letters generally<br />

correctly shaped but<br />

inconsistencies in<br />

orientation, size and<br />

use of upper/lower<br />

case letters<br />

• clear letter<br />

formation, with<br />

ascenders and<br />

descenders<br />

distinguished,<br />

generally upper and<br />

lower case letters<br />

not mixed within<br />

words<br />

BL<br />

IE<br />

Overall assessment (tick one box only) Low 2 Secure 2 High 2 Low 3 Secure 3 High 3<br />

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Writing assessment guidelines: levels 3 and 4<br />

Pupil name Class / Group Date<br />

AF5 - vary sentences for<br />

clarity, purpose and<br />

effect<br />

AF6 - write with<br />

technical accuracy of<br />

syntax and<br />

punctuation in<br />

phrases, clauses and<br />

sentences<br />

AF3 - organise and<br />

present whole texts<br />

effectively, sequencing<br />

and structuring<br />

information, ideas and<br />

events<br />

AF4 - construct<br />

paragraphs and use<br />

cohesion within and<br />

between paragraphs<br />

AF1 - write<br />

imaginative,<br />

interesting and<br />

thoughtful texts<br />

AF2 - produce texts<br />

which are<br />

appropriate to task,<br />

reader and purpose<br />

AF7 - select<br />

appropriate and<br />

effective<br />

vocabulary<br />

AF8 - use correct spelling<br />

Handwriting and<br />

presentation<br />

Level 4<br />

Across a range of<br />

writing<br />

• some variety in length,<br />

structure or subject of<br />

sentences<br />

• use of some<br />

subordinating<br />

connectives, eg if,<br />

when, because<br />

throughout the text<br />

• some variation,<br />

generally accurate, in<br />

tense and verb forms.<br />

Across a range of<br />

writing<br />

• sentences<br />

demarcated<br />

accurately throughout<br />

the text, including<br />

question<br />

• speech marks to<br />

denote speech<br />

generally accurate,<br />

with some other<br />

speech punctuation<br />

• comma used in lists<br />

and occasionally to<br />

mark clauses,<br />

although not always<br />

accurately<br />

Across a range of<br />

writing<br />

• ideas organised by<br />

clustering related<br />

points or by some time<br />

sequence<br />

• ideas are organised<br />

simply with a fitting<br />

opening and closing,<br />

sometimes linked<br />

• ideas or material<br />

generally in logical<br />

sequence but overall<br />

direction of writing not<br />

always clearly<br />

signalled<br />

Across a range of<br />

writing<br />

• paragraphs/sections<br />

help to organise<br />

contact, eg main idea<br />

usually supported or<br />

elaborated by<br />

following sentences<br />

• within paragraphs /<br />

sections limited<br />

range of connections<br />

between sentences,<br />

eg over-use of ‘also’<br />

or pronouns<br />

• some attempts to<br />

establish simple links<br />

between<br />

paragraphs/sections<br />

not always<br />

maintained, eg<br />

firstly, next<br />

Across a range of<br />

writing<br />

• relevant ideas and<br />

content chosen<br />

• some ideas and<br />

material developed in<br />

detail, eg<br />

descriptions<br />

elaborated by<br />

adverbial and<br />

expanded noun<br />

phrases<br />

• straightforward<br />

viewpoint generally<br />

established and<br />

maintained, eg writing<br />

in role or maintaining<br />

a consistent stance<br />

Across a range of<br />

writing<br />

• main purpose of<br />

writing is clear but<br />

not always<br />

consistently<br />

maintained<br />

• main features of<br />

selected form are<br />

clear and<br />

appropriate to<br />

purpose<br />

• style generally<br />

appropriate to task,<br />

though awareness of<br />

reader not always<br />

sustained<br />

Across a range of<br />

writing<br />

• some evidence of<br />

deliberate<br />

vocabulary<br />

choices<br />

• some expansion<br />

of general<br />

vocabulary to<br />

match topic<br />

Across a range of writing<br />

• correct spelling of<br />

o most common<br />

grammatical function<br />

words, including adverbs<br />

with –ly formation<br />

o regularly formed<br />

context/lexical words,<br />

including those with<br />

multiple morphemes<br />

o most past and present<br />

tense inflections, plurals<br />

• likely errors<br />

o homophones of some<br />

common grammatical<br />

function words<br />

o occasional phonetically<br />

plausible spelling in<br />

content/lexical words<br />

Level 3<br />

In most writing<br />

• reliance mainly on<br />

simply structured<br />

sentences, variation<br />

with support, eg some<br />

complex sentences<br />

• and, but, so are the<br />

most common<br />

connectives,<br />

subordination<br />

occasionally<br />

• some limited variation<br />

in use of tense and verb<br />

forms, not always<br />

secure<br />

In most writing<br />

• straightforward<br />

sentences usually<br />

demarcated<br />

accurately with full<br />

stops, capital letters,<br />

question and<br />

exclamation marks<br />

• some, limited, use of<br />

speech punctuation<br />

• comma splicing<br />

evident, particularly in<br />

narrative<br />

In most writing<br />

• some attempt to<br />

organise ideas with<br />

related points placed<br />

next to each other<br />

• openings and closings<br />

usually signalled<br />

• some attempt to<br />

sequence ideas or<br />

material logically<br />

In most writing<br />

• some internal<br />

structure within<br />

sections of text eg<br />

one-sentence<br />

paragraphs or ideas<br />

loosely organised<br />

• within paragraphs /<br />

sections, some links<br />

between sentences,<br />

eg use of pronouns<br />

or of adverbials<br />

• movement between<br />

paragraphs / sections<br />

sometimes abrupt or<br />

disjointed<br />

In most writing<br />

• some appropriate<br />

ideas and content<br />

included<br />

• some attempt to<br />

elaborate on basic<br />

information or events,<br />

eg nouns expanded<br />

by simple adjectives<br />

• attempt to adopt<br />

viewpoint, though<br />

often not maintained<br />

or inconsistent, eg<br />

attitude expressed,<br />

but with little<br />

elaboration<br />

In most writing<br />

• purpose established<br />

at a general level<br />

• main features of<br />

selected form<br />

sometimes signalled<br />

to the reader<br />

• some attempts at<br />

appropriate style,<br />

with attention to<br />

reader<br />

In most writing<br />

• simple, generally<br />

appropriate<br />

vocabulary used,<br />

limited in range<br />

• some words<br />

selected for effect<br />

or occasion<br />

In most writing<br />

• correct spelling of<br />

o some common<br />

grammatical function<br />

words<br />

o common content/lexical<br />

words with more than one<br />

morpheme, including<br />

compound words<br />

• likely errors<br />

o some inflected endings,<br />

eg past tense,<br />

comparatives, adverbs<br />

o some phonetically<br />

plausible attempts at<br />

content/lexical words<br />

In most writing<br />

• legible<br />

style,<br />

shows<br />

accurate<br />

and<br />

consistent<br />

letter<br />

formation,<br />

sometimes<br />

joined<br />

BL<br />

IE<br />

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Overall assessment (tick one box only) Low 3 Secure 3 High 3 Low 4 Secure 4 High 4


Writing assessment guidelines: levels 4 and 5<br />

Pupil name Class / Group Date<br />

Level 5<br />

AF5 - vary sentences<br />

for clarity, purpose and<br />

effect<br />

AF6 - write with<br />

technical accuracy of<br />

syntax and<br />

punctuation in<br />

phrases, clauses and<br />

sentences<br />

Across a range of<br />

writing<br />

Across a range of<br />

writing<br />

• a variety of sentence • full range of<br />

lengths, structures and punctuation used<br />

subjects provides clarity accurately to<br />

and emphasis<br />

demarcate<br />

sentences, including<br />

speech punctuation<br />

• wider range of<br />

connectives used to<br />

clarify relationship<br />

between ideas, eg<br />

although, on the other<br />

hand, meanwhile<br />

• some features of<br />

sentence structure<br />

used to build up detail<br />

or convey shades of<br />

meaning, eg variation<br />

in word order,<br />

expansions in verb<br />

phrases<br />

• syntax and<br />

punctuation within the<br />

sentence generally<br />

accurate including<br />

commas to mark<br />

clauses, though some<br />

errors occur where<br />

ambitious structures<br />

are attempted<br />

AF3 - organise and<br />

present whole texts<br />

effectively, sequencing<br />

and structuring<br />

information, ideas and<br />

events<br />

AF4 - construct<br />

paragraphs and use<br />

cohesion within and<br />

between paragraphs<br />

AF1 - write imaginative,<br />

interesting and<br />

thoughtful texts<br />

AF2 - produce texts<br />

which are<br />

appropriate to task,<br />

reader and purpose<br />

Across a range of Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of<br />

writing<br />

• paragraphs clearly • relevant ideas and writing<br />

• material is structured structure main ideas material developed with • main purpose of<br />

clearly, with sentences across text to support some imaginative detail writing is clear and<br />

organised into<br />

purpose, eg clear • development of ideas consistently<br />

appropriate paragraphs chronological or logical and material<br />

maintained<br />

• development of<br />

links between paragraphs appropriately shaped for • features of<br />

material is effectively • within paragraphs / selected from, eg<br />

selected form<br />

managed across text, sections, a range of nominalisation for clearly established<br />

eg closings refer back devices support<br />

succinctness<br />

with some<br />

to openings<br />

cohesion, eg secure use<br />

• clear viewpoint<br />

adaptation to<br />

• overall direction of the of pronouns, connectives,<br />

established generally purpose<br />

text supported by clear references back to the<br />

consistent, with some • appropriate style<br />

links between<br />

text<br />

elaboration, eg some, clearly established<br />

paragraphs<br />

• links between paragraphs<br />

uneven development of to maintain<br />

/ sections generally<br />

individual voice or reader’s interest<br />

maintained across whole<br />

characterisation in role throughout<br />

text<br />

AF7 - select appropriate<br />

and effective vocabulary<br />

AF8 - use correct spelling<br />

Across a range of writing Across a range of writing<br />

• vocabulary chosen for • correct spelling of<br />

effect<br />

o grammatical function words<br />

• reasonably wide<br />

o almost all inflected words<br />

vocabulary used, though o most derivational suffixes and<br />

not always appropriately prefixes<br />

o most common content/lexical<br />

words<br />

• likely errors<br />

o occasional phonetically<br />

plausible spelling of unstressed<br />

in content words<br />

o double consonants in prefixes<br />

Level 4<br />

Across a range of<br />

writing<br />

• some variety in length,<br />

structure or subject of<br />

sentences<br />

• use of some<br />

subordinating<br />

connectives, eg if,<br />

when, because<br />

throughout the text<br />

• some variation,<br />

generally accurate, in<br />

tense and verb forms.<br />

Across a range of<br />

writing<br />

• sentences<br />

demarcated<br />

accurately throughout<br />

the text, including<br />

question<br />

• speech marks to<br />

denote speech<br />

generally accurate,<br />

with some other<br />

speech punctuation<br />

• comma used in lists<br />

and occasionally to<br />

mark clauses,<br />

although not always<br />

accurately<br />

Across a range of<br />

writing<br />

• ideas organised by<br />

clustering related<br />

points or by some time<br />

sequence<br />

• ideas are organised<br />

simply with a fitting<br />

opening and closing,<br />

sometimes linked<br />

• ideas or material<br />

generally in logical<br />

sequence but overall<br />

direction of writing not<br />

always clearly<br />

signalled<br />

Across a range of writing<br />

• paragraphs/sections help<br />

to organise contact, eg<br />

main idea usually<br />

supported or elaborated<br />

by following sentences<br />

• within paragraphs /<br />

sections limited range of<br />

connections between<br />

sentences, eg over-use<br />

of ‘also’ or pronouns<br />

• some attempts to<br />

establish simple links<br />

between<br />

paragraphs/sections not<br />

always maintained, eg<br />

firstly, next<br />

Across a range of writing Across a range of<br />

• relevant ideas and writing<br />

content chosen • main purpose of<br />

• some ideas and material writing is clear but<br />

developed in detail, eg not always<br />

descriptions elaborated consistently<br />

by adverbial and<br />

maintained<br />

expanded noun phrases<br />

• straightforward<br />

viewpoint generally<br />

established and<br />

maintained, eg writing in<br />

role or maintaining a<br />

consistent stance<br />

• main features of<br />

selected form are<br />

clear and<br />

appropriate to<br />

purpose<br />

• style generally<br />

appropriate to task,<br />

though awareness<br />

of reader not<br />

always sustained<br />

Across a range of writing Across a range of writing<br />

• some evidence of • correct spelling of<br />

deliberate vocabulary o most common grammatical<br />

choices<br />

function words, including<br />

• some expansion of<br />

general vocabulary to<br />

match topic<br />

adverbs with –ly formation<br />

o regularly formed context/lexical<br />

words, including those with<br />

multiple morphemes<br />

o most past and present tense<br />

inflections, plurals<br />

• likely errors<br />

o homophones of some common<br />

grammatical function words<br />

o occasional phonetically<br />

plausible spelling in<br />

content/lexical words<br />

BL<br />

IE<br />

Overall assessment (tick one box only) Low 4 Secure 4 High 4 Low 5 Secure 5 High 5<br />

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Writing assessment guidelines: levels 5 and 6<br />

Pupil name Class / Group Date<br />

Level 6<br />

AF5 - vary sentences for<br />

clarity, purpose and effect<br />

Across a range of writing<br />

• controlled use of a variety<br />

of simple and complex<br />

sentences to achieve<br />

purpose and contribute of<br />

overall effect<br />

• confident use of a range<br />

of sentence features to<br />

clarify or emphasise<br />

meaning, eg fronted<br />

adverbials (‘Reluctantly ,<br />

he …, Five days later, it<br />

…’), complex noun or<br />

prepositional phrases<br />

AF6 - write with<br />

technical accuracy of<br />

syntax and<br />

punctuation in<br />

phrases, clauses and<br />

sentences<br />

Across a range of<br />

writing<br />

• syntax and full range<br />

of punctuation are<br />

consistently accurate<br />

in a variety of<br />

sentence structures,<br />

with occasional<br />

errors in ambitious<br />

structures , eg only<br />

occasional comma<br />

splices, some use of<br />

semi-colons, not<br />

always accurate<br />

AF3 - organise and<br />

present whole texts<br />

effectively, sequencing<br />

and structuring<br />

information, ideas and<br />

events<br />

Across a range of writing<br />

• material is clearly<br />

controlled and<br />

sequenced, taking<br />

account of the reader’s<br />

likely reaction, eg<br />

paragraphs of different<br />

lengths, use of flashback<br />

in narrative, anticipating<br />

reader’s questions<br />

• a range of features<br />

clearly signal overall<br />

direction of the text for<br />

the reader, eg opening<br />

paragraphs that introduce<br />

themes clearly,<br />

paragraph markers, links<br />

between paragraphs<br />

AF4 - construct<br />

paragraphs and use<br />

cohesion within and<br />

between paragraphs<br />

Across a range of writing<br />

• construction of<br />

paragraphs clearly<br />

supports meaning and<br />

purpose, eg paragraph<br />

topic signalled and then<br />

developed, withholding of<br />

information for effect,<br />

thematic links between<br />

paragraphs<br />

• within paragraphs,<br />

cohesive devices<br />

contribute to emphasis<br />

and effect, eg adverbials<br />

as sentence starters<br />

AF1 - write imaginative,<br />

interesting and thoughtful<br />

texts<br />

AF2 - produce texts which are<br />

appropriate to task, reader and<br />

purpose<br />

Across a range of writing<br />

• imaginative treatment of appropriate materials, familiarity with<br />

conventions of a variety of forms, adapting them when needed to<br />

suit purpose and audience, not always successfully, eg deliberate<br />

use of inappropriate register for humour, clear emphasis on<br />

narration rather than plot<br />

• convincing, individual voice or point of view established and<br />

mostly sustained throughout, eg authoritative expert view,<br />

convincing characterisation, adopting a role<br />

• level of formality used for purpose and audience generally<br />

appropriate and a range of stylistic devices used to achieve effect<br />

not always successfully, eg controlled informality, generalisations<br />

or shifts between conversational style and more literary language<br />

AF7 - select<br />

appropriate and<br />

effective<br />

vocabulary<br />

Across a range of<br />

writing<br />

• vocabulary<br />

chosen generally<br />

appropriate to<br />

purpose and<br />

audience<br />

• range of<br />

vocabulary<br />

generally varied<br />

and often<br />

ambitious, even<br />

though choices<br />

not always apt<br />

AF8 - use correct spelling<br />

Across a range of writing<br />

• generally correct spelling<br />

throughout, including<br />

some<br />

o ambitious, uncommon<br />

words<br />

o words with complex<br />

sound/symbol<br />

relationships<br />

o words with unstressed<br />

syllables<br />

o multi-letter vowel and<br />

consonant symbols<br />

• likely errors<br />

o occasionally in complex<br />

words such as<br />

outrageous,<br />

exaggerated,<br />

announcing, parallel<br />

Level 5<br />

Across a range of writing<br />

• a variety of sentence<br />

lengths, structures and<br />

subjects provides clarity<br />

and emphasis<br />

• wider range of<br />

connectives used to<br />

clarify relationship<br />

between ideas, eg<br />

although, on the other<br />

hand, meanwhile<br />

• some features of<br />

sentence structure used<br />

to build up detail or<br />

convey shades of<br />

meaning, eg variation in<br />

word order, expansions in<br />

verb phrases<br />

Across a range of<br />

writing<br />

• full range of<br />

punctuation used<br />

accurately to<br />

demarcate<br />

sentences, including<br />

speech punctuation<br />

• syntax and<br />

punctuation within<br />

the sentence<br />

generally accurate<br />

including commas to<br />

mark clauses, though<br />

some errors occur<br />

where ambitious<br />

structures are<br />

attempted<br />

Across a range of writing<br />

• material is structured<br />

clearly, with sentences<br />

organised into<br />

appropriate paragraphs<br />

• development of material<br />

is effectively managed<br />

across text, eg closings<br />

refer back to openings<br />

• overall direction of the<br />

text supported by clear<br />

links between paragraphs<br />

Across a range of writing<br />

• paragraphs clearly<br />

structure main ideas<br />

across text to support<br />

purpose, eg clear<br />

chronological or logical<br />

links between paragraphs<br />

• within paragraphs /<br />

sections, a range of<br />

devices support<br />

cohesion, eg secure use<br />

of pronouns, connectives,<br />

references back to the<br />

text<br />

• links between paragraphs<br />

/ sections generally<br />

maintained across whole<br />

text<br />

Across a range of writing<br />

• relevant ideas and material<br />

developed with some<br />

imaginative detail<br />

• development of ideas and<br />

material appropriately<br />

shaped for selected from,<br />

eg nominalisation for<br />

succinctness<br />

• clear viewpoint established<br />

generally consistent, with<br />

some elaboration, eg some,<br />

uneven development of<br />

individual voice or<br />

characterisation in role<br />

Across a range of writing<br />

• main purpose of writing is clear<br />

and consistently maintained<br />

• features of selected form clearly<br />

established with some adaptation<br />

to purpose<br />

• appropriate style clearly<br />

established to maintain reader’s<br />

interest throughout<br />

Across a range of<br />

writing<br />

• vocabulary<br />

chosen for effect<br />

• reasonably wide<br />

vocabulary used,<br />

though not<br />

always<br />

appropriately<br />

Across a range of writing<br />

• correct spelling of<br />

o grammatical function<br />

words<br />

o almost all inflected<br />

words<br />

o most derivational<br />

suffixes and prefixes<br />

o most common<br />

content/lexical words<br />

• likely errors<br />

o occasional phonetically<br />

plausible spelling of<br />

unstressed in content<br />

words<br />

o double consonants in<br />

prefixes<br />

BL<br />

IE<br />

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Overall assessment (tick one box only) Low 5<br />

Secure 5 High 5 Low 6 Secure 6 High 6


APPENDIX A<br />

Writing Text types<br />

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APPENDIX B<br />

KS2/3 Writing Moderation 2013<br />

School:<br />

Pupil:<br />

KS2/3 Writing Moderation 2013<br />

School:<br />

Pupil:<br />

APPENDIX A<br />

Test and task level<br />

Class-based evidence level<br />

Overall Level<br />

Final moderated level<br />

Moderators’ initials:<br />

Sch. Table Mod.<br />

Date:<br />

Test and task level<br />

Class-based evidence level<br />

Overall Level<br />

Final moderated level<br />

Moderators’ initials:<br />

Sch. Table Mod.<br />

Date:<br />

KS2/3 Writing Moderation 2013<br />

School:<br />

Pupil:<br />

Test and task level<br />

Class-based evidence level<br />

Overall Level<br />

Final moderated level<br />

Moderators’ initials:<br />

Sch. Table Mod.<br />

Date:<br />

KS2/3 Writing Moderation 2013<br />

School:<br />

Pupil:<br />

Test and task level<br />

Class-based evidence level<br />

Overall Level<br />

Final moderated level<br />

Moderators’ initials:<br />

Sch. Table Mod.<br />

Date:<br />

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National Curriculum L2-6 – Speaking and listening:<br />

APPENDIX C<br />

Level 2<br />

Pupils begin to show confidence in talking and listening, particularly where the topics interest them. On<br />

occasions, they show awareness of the needs of the listener by including relevant detail. In developing<br />

and explaining their ideas they speak clearly and use a growing vocabulary. They usually listen carefully<br />

and respond with increasing appropriateness to what others say. They are beginning to be aware that in<br />

some situations a more formal vocabulary and tone of voice are used.<br />

Level 3<br />

Pupils talk and listen confidently in different contexts, exploring and communicating ideas. In discussion,<br />

they show understanding of the main points. Through relevant comments and questions, they show they<br />

have listened carefully. They begin to adapt what they say to the needs of the listener, varying the use of<br />

vocabulary and the level of detail. They are beginning to be aware of standard English and when it is<br />

used.<br />

Level 4<br />

Pupils talk and listen with confidence in an increasing range of contexts. Their talk is adapted to the<br />

purpose: developing ideas thoughtfully, describing events and conveying their opinions clearly. In<br />

discussion, they listen carefully, making contributions and asking questions that are responsive to<br />

others' ideas and views. They use appropriately some of the features of standard English vocabulary<br />

and grammar.<br />

Level 5<br />

Pupils talk and listen confidently in a wide range of contexts, including some that are of a formal nature.<br />

Their talk engages the interest of the listener as they begin to vary their expression and vocabulary. In<br />

discussion, they pay close attention to what others say, ask questions to develop ideas and make<br />

contributions that take account of others' views. They begin to use standard English in formal situations.<br />

Level 6<br />

Pupils adapt their talk to the demands of different contexts with increasing confidence. Their talk<br />

engages the interest of the listener through the variety of its vocabulary and expression. Pupils take an<br />

active part in discussion, showing understanding of ideas and sensitivity to others. They are usually<br />

fluent in their use of standard English in formal situations.<br />

Reading:<br />

Level 2<br />

Pupils' reading of simple texts shows understanding and is generally accurate. They express opinions<br />

about major events or ideas in stories, poems and non-fiction. They use more than one strategy, such as<br />

phonic, graphic, syntactic and contextual, in reading unfamiliar words and establishing meaning.<br />

Level 3<br />

Pupils read a range of texts fluently and accurately. They read independently, using strategies<br />

appropriately to establish meaning. In responding to fiction and non-fiction they show understanding of<br />

the main points and express preferences. They use their knowledge of the alphabet to locate books and<br />

find information.<br />

Level 4<br />

In responding to a range of texts, pupils show understanding of significant ideas, themes, events and<br />

characters, beginning to use inference and deduction. They refer to the text when explaining their views.<br />

They locate and use ideas and information.<br />

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Level 5<br />

Pupils show understanding of a range of texts, selecting essential points and using inference and<br />

deduction where appropriate. In their responses, they identify key features, themes and characters and<br />

select sentences, phrases and relevant information to support their views. They retrieve and collate<br />

information from a range of sources.<br />

Level 6<br />

In reading and discussing a range of texts, pupils identify different layers of meaning and comment on<br />

their significance and effect. They give personal responses to literary texts, referring to aspects of<br />

language, structure and themes in justifying their views. They summarise a range of information from<br />

different sources.<br />

Writing:<br />

Level 2<br />

Pupils' writing communicates meaning in both narrative and non-narrative forms, using appropriate and<br />

interesting vocabulary, and showing some awareness of the reader. Ideas are developed in a sequence<br />

of sentences, sometimes demarcated by capital letters and full stops. Simple, monosyllabic words are<br />

usually spelt correctly, and where there are inaccuracies the alternative is phonetically plausible. In<br />

handwriting, letters are accurately formed and consistent in size.<br />

Level 3<br />

Pupils' writing is often organised, imaginative and clear. The main features of different forms of writing<br />

are used appropriately, beginning to be adapted to different readers. Sequences of sentences extend<br />

ideas logically and words are chosen for variety and interest. The basic grammatical structure of<br />

sentences is usually correct. Spelling is usually accurate, including that of common, polysyllabic words.<br />

Punctuation to mark sentences - full stops, capital letters and question marks - is used accurately.<br />

Handwriting is joined and legible.<br />

Level 4<br />

Pupils' writing in a range of forms is lively and thoughtful. Ideas are often sustained and developed in<br />

interesting ways and organised appropriately for the purpose of the reader. Vocabulary choices are often<br />

adventurous and words are used for effect. Pupils are beginning to use grammatically complex<br />

sentences, extending meaning. Spelling, including that of polysyllabic words that conform to regular<br />

patterns, is generally accurate. Full stops, capital letters and question marks are used correctly, and<br />

pupils are beginning to use punctuation within the sentence. Handwriting style is fluent, joined and<br />

legible.<br />

Level 5<br />

Pupils' writing is varied and interesting, conveying meaning clearly in a range of forms for different<br />

readers, using a more formal style where appropriate. Vocabulary choices are imaginative and words<br />

are used precisely. Simple and complex sentences are organised into paragraphs. Words with complex<br />

regular patterns are usually spelt correctly. A range of punctuation, including commas, apostrophes and<br />

inverted commas, is usually used accurately. Handwriting is joined, clear and fluent and, where<br />

appropriate, is adapted to a range of tasks.<br />

Level 6<br />

Pupils' writing often engages and sustains the reader's interest, showing some adaptation of style and<br />

register to different forms, including using an impersonal style where appropriate. Pupils use a range of<br />

sentence structures and varied vocabulary to create effects. Spelling is generally accurate, including that<br />

of irregular words. Handwriting is neat and legible. A range of punctuation is usually used correctly to<br />

clarify meaning, and ideas are organised into paragraphs.<br />

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Mathematics:<br />

Attainment target 1: Using and applying:<br />

Level 2<br />

Pupils select the mathematics they use in some classroom activities. They discuss their work using<br />

mathematical language and are beginning to represent it using symbols and simple diagrams. They<br />

explain why an answer is correct.<br />

Level 3<br />

Pupils try different approaches and find ways of overcoming difficulties that arise when they are solving<br />

problems. They are beginning to organise their work and check results. Pupils discuss their<br />

mathematical work and are beginning to explain their thinking. They use and interpret mathematical<br />

symbols and diagrams. Pupils show that they understand a general statement by finding particular<br />

examples that match it.<br />

Level 4<br />

Pupils are developing their own strategies for solving problems and are using these strategies both in<br />

working within mathematics and in applying mathematics to practical contexts. They present information<br />

and results in a clear and organised way. They search for a solution by trying out ideas of their own.<br />

Level 5<br />

In order to carry through tasks and solve mathematical problems, pupils identify and obtain necessary<br />

information. They check their results, considering whether these are sensible. Pupils show<br />

understanding of situations by describing them mathematically using symbols, words and diagrams.<br />

They draw simple conclusions of their own and give an explanation of their reasoning.<br />

Level 6<br />

Pupils carry through substantial tasks and solve quite complex problems by independently breaking<br />

them down into smaller, more manageable tasks. They interpret, discuss and synthesise information<br />

presented in a variety of mathematical forms. Pupils' writing explains and informs their use of diagrams.<br />

Pupils are beginning to give mathematical justifications.<br />

Attainment target 2: Number & Algebra:<br />

Level 2<br />

Pupils count sets of objects reliably, and use mental recall of addition and subtraction facts to 10. They<br />

begin to understand the place value of each digit in a number and use this to order numbers up to 100.<br />

They choose the appropriate operation when solving addition and subtraction problems. They use the<br />

knowledge that subtraction is the inverse of addition. They use mental calculation strategies to solve<br />

number problems involving money and measures. They recognise sequences of numbers, including odd<br />

and even numbers.<br />

Level 3<br />

Pupils show understanding of place value in numbers up to 1000 and use this to make approximations.<br />

They begin to use decimal notation and to recognise negative numbers, in contexts such as money and<br />

temperature. Pupils use mental recall of addition and subtraction facts to 20 in solving problems<br />

involving larger numbers. They add and subtract numbers with two digits mentally and numbers with<br />

three digits using written methods. They use mental recall of the 2, 3, 4, 5 and 10 multiplication tables<br />

and derive the associated division facts. They solve whole-number problems involving multiplication or<br />

division, including those that give rise to remainders. They use simple fractions that are several parts of<br />

a whole and recognise when two simple fractions are equivalent.<br />

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Level 4<br />

Pupils use their understanding of place value to multiply and divide whole numbers by 10 or 100. In<br />

solving number problems, pupils use a range of mental methods of computation with the four operations,<br />

including mental recall of multiplication facts up to 10 x 10 and quick derivation of corresponding division<br />

facts. They use efficient written methods of addition and subtraction and of short multiplication and<br />

division. They add and subtract decimals to two places and order decimals to three places. In solving<br />

problems with or without a calculator, pupils check the reasonableness of their results by reference to<br />

their knowledge of the context or to the size of the numbers. They recognise approximate proportions of<br />

a whole and use simple fractions and percentages to describe these. Pupils recognise and describe<br />

number patterns, and relationships including multiple, factor and square. They begin to use simple<br />

formulae expressed in words. Pupils use and interpret coordinates in the first quadrant.<br />

Level 5<br />

Pupils use their understanding of place value to multiply and divide whole numbers and decimals by 10,<br />

100 and 1000. They order, add and subtract negative numbers in context. They use all four operations<br />

with decimals to two places. They reduce a fraction to its simplest form by cancelling common factors<br />

and solve simple problems involving ratio and direct proportion. They calculate fractional or percentage<br />

parts of quantities and measurements, using a calculator where appropriate. Pupils understand and use<br />

an appropriate non-calculator method for solving problems that involve multiplying and dividing any<br />

three-digit number by any two-digit number. They check their solutions by applying inverse operations or<br />

estimating using approximations. They construct, express in symbolic form, and use simple formulae<br />

involving one or two operations. They use brackets appropriately. Pupils use and interpret coordinates in<br />

all four quadrants.<br />

Level 6<br />

Pupils order and approximate decimals when solving numerical problems and equations [for example,<br />

x3 + x = 20], using trial and improvement methods. Pupils are aware of which number to consider as 100<br />

per cent, or a whole, in problems involving comparisons, and use this to evaluate one number as a<br />

fraction or percentage of another. They understand and use the equivalences between fractions,<br />

decimals and percentages, and calculate using ratios in appropriate situations. They add and subtract<br />

fractions by writing them with a common denominator. When exploring number sequences, pupils find<br />

and describe in words the rule for the next term or nth term of a sequence where the rule is linear. They<br />

formulate and solve linear equations with whole-number coefficients. They represent mappings<br />

expressed algebraically, and use Cartesian coordinates for graphical representation interpreting general<br />

features.<br />

Attainment target 3: Shape, space and measure:<br />

Level 2<br />

Pupils use mathematical names for common 3D and 2D shapes and describe their properties, including<br />

numbers of sides and corners. They distinguish between straight and turning movements, understand<br />

angle as a measurement of turn, and recognise right angles in turns. They begin to use everyday nonstandard<br />

and standard units to measure length and mass.<br />

Level 3<br />

Pupils classify 3D and 2D shapes in various ways using mathematical properties such as reflective<br />

symmetry for 2D shapes. They use non-standard units, standard metric units of length, capacity and<br />

mass, and standard units of time, in a range of contexts.<br />

Level 4<br />

Pupils make 3D mathematical models by linking given faces or edges, draw common 2D shapes in<br />

different orientations on grids. They reflect simple shapes in a mirror line. They choose and use<br />

appropriate units and instruments, interpreting, with appropriate accuracy, numbers on a range of<br />

measuring instruments. They find perimeters of simple shapes and find areas by counting squares.<br />

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Level 5<br />

When constructing models and when drawing or using shapes, pupils measure and draw angles to the<br />

nearest degree, and use language associated with angle. Pupils know the angle sum of a triangle and<br />

that of angles at a point. They identify all the symmetries of 2D shapes. They know the rough metric<br />

equivalents of imperial units still in daily use and convert one metric unit to another. They make sensible<br />

estimates of a range of measures in relation to everyday situations. Pupils understand and use the<br />

formula for the area of a rectangle.<br />

Level 6<br />

Pupils recognise and use common 2D representations of 3D objects. They know and use the properties<br />

of quadrilaterals in classifying different types of quadrilateral. They solve problems using angle and<br />

symmetry properties of polygons and angle properties of intersecting and parallel lines, and explain<br />

these properties. They devise instructions for a computer to generate and transform shapes and paths.<br />

They understand and use appropriate formulae for finding circumferences and areas of circles, areas of<br />

plane rectilinear figures and volumes of cuboids when solving problems. They enlarge shapes by a<br />

positive whole-number scale factor.<br />

Attainment target 4: Handling data:<br />

Level 2<br />

Pupils sort objects and classify them using more than one criterion. When they have gathered<br />

information, pupils record results in simple lists, tables and block graphs, in order to communicate their<br />

findings.<br />

Level 3<br />

Pupils extract and interpret information presented in simple tables and lists. They construct bar charts<br />

and pictograms, where the symbol represents a group of units, to communicate information they have<br />

gathered, and they interpret information presented to them in these forms.<br />

Level 4<br />

Pupils collect discrete data and record them using a frequency table. They understand and use the<br />

mode and range to describe sets of data. They group data, where appropriate, in equal class intervals,<br />

represent collected data in frequency diagrams and interpret such diagrams. They construct and<br />

interpret simple line graphs.<br />

Level 5<br />

Pupils understand and use the mean of discrete data. They compare two simple distributions, using the<br />

range and one of the mode, median or mean. They interpret graphs and diagrams, including pie charts,<br />

and draw conclusions. They understand and use the probability scale from 0 to 1. Pupils find and justify<br />

probabilities, and approximations to these, by selecting and using methods based on equally likely<br />

outcomes and experimental evidence, as appropriate. They understand that different outcomes may<br />

result from repeating an experiment.<br />

Level 6<br />

Pupils collect and record continuous data, choosing appropriate equal class intervals over a sensible<br />

range to create frequency tables. They construct and interpret frequency diagrams. They construct pie<br />

charts. Pupils draw conclusions from scatter diagrams, and have a basic understanding of correlation.<br />

When dealing with a combination of two experiments, pupils identify all the outcomes, using<br />

diagrammatic, tabular or other forms of communication. In solving problems, they use their knowledge<br />

that the total probability of all the mutually exclusive outcomes of an experiment is 1.<br />

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Science:<br />

Attainment target 1: Scientific enquiry:<br />

Level 2<br />

Pupils respond to suggestions about how to find things out and, with help, make their own suggestions<br />

about how to collect data to answer questions. They use simple texts, with help, to find information. They<br />

use simple equipment provided and make observations related to their task. They observe and compare<br />

objects, living things and events. They describe their observations using scientific vocabulary and record<br />

them, using simple tables when appropriate. They say whether what happened was what they expected.<br />

Level 3<br />

Pupils respond to suggestions and put forward their own ideas about how to find the answer to a<br />

question. They recognise why it is important to collect data to answer questions. They use simple texts<br />

to find information. They make relevant observations and measure quantities, such as length or mass,<br />

using a range of simple equipment. Where appropriate, they carry out a fair test with some help,<br />

recognising and explaining why it is fair. They record their observations in a variety of ways. They<br />

provide explanations for observations and for simple patterns in recorded measurements. They<br />

communicate in a scientific way what they have found out and suggest improvements in their work.<br />

Level 4<br />

Pupils recognise that scientific ideas are based on evidence. In their own investigative work, they decide<br />

on an appropriate approach [for example, using a fair test] to answer a question. Where appropriate,<br />

they describe, or show in the way they perform their task, how to vary one factor while keeping others<br />

the same. Where appropriate, they make predictions. They select information from sources provided for<br />

them. They select suitable equipment and make a series of observations and measurements that are<br />

adequate for the task. They record their observations, comparisons and measurements using tables and<br />

bar charts. They begin to plot points to form simple graphs, and use these graphs to point out and<br />

interpret patterns in their data. They begin to relate their conclusions to these patterns and to scientific<br />

knowledge and understanding, and to communicate them with appropriate scientific language. They<br />

suggest improvements in their work, giving reasons.<br />

Level 5<br />

Pupils describe how experimental evidence and creative thinking have been combined to provide a<br />

scientific explanation [for example, Jenner's work on vaccination at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2, Lavoisier's work on<br />

burning at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3]. When they try to answer a scientific question, they identify an appropriate<br />

approach. They select from a range of sources of information. When the investigation involves a fair test,<br />

they identify key factors to be considered. Where appropriate, they make predictions based on their<br />

scientific knowledge and understanding. They select apparatus for a range of tasks and plan to use it<br />

effectively. They make a series of observations, comparisons or measurements with precision<br />

appropriate to the task. They begin to repeat observations and measurements and to offer simple<br />

explanations for any differences they encounter. They record observations and measurements<br />

systematically and, where appropriate, present data as line graphs. They draw conclusions that are<br />

consistent with the evidence and begin to relate these to scientific knowledge and understanding. They<br />

make practical suggestions about how their working methods could be improved. They use appropriate<br />

scientific language and conventions to communicate quantitative and qualitative data.<br />

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Level 6<br />

Pupils describe evidence for some accepted scientific ideas and explain how the interpretation of<br />

evidence by scientists leads to the development and acceptance of new ideas. In their own investigative<br />

work, they use scientific knowledge and understanding to identify an appropriate approach. They select<br />

and use sources of information effectively. They make enough measurements, comparisons and<br />

observations for the task. They measure a variety of quantities with precision, using instruments with<br />

fine-scale divisions. They choose scales for graphs and diagrams that enable them to show data and<br />

features effectively. They identify measurements and observations that do not fit the main pattern<br />

shown. They draw conclusions that are consistent with the evidence and use scientific knowledge and<br />

understanding to explain them. They make reasoned suggestions about how their working methods<br />

could be improved. They select and use appropriate methods for communicating qualitative and<br />

quantitative data using scientific language and conventions.<br />

Attainment target 2: Life processes and living things:<br />

Level 2<br />

Pupils use their knowledge about living things to describe the basic conditions [for example, a supply of<br />

food, water, air, light] that animals and plants need in order to survive. They recognise that living things<br />

grow and reproduce. They sort living things into groups, using simple features. They describe the basis<br />

for their groupings [for example, number of legs, shape of leaf]. They recognise that different living<br />

things are found in different places [for example, ponds, woods].<br />

Level 3<br />

Pupils use their knowledge and understanding of basic life processes [for example, growth,<br />

reproduction] when they describe differences between living and nonliving things. They provide simple<br />

explanations for changes in living things [for example, diet affecting the health of humans or other<br />

animals, lack of light or water altering plant growth]. They identify ways in which an animal is suited to its<br />

environment [for example, a fish having fins to help it swim].<br />

Level 4<br />

Pupils demonstrate knowledge and understanding of life processes and living things drawn from the <strong>Key</strong><br />

<strong>Stage</strong> 2 or <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3 programme of study. They use scientific names for some major organs of body<br />

systems [for example, the heart at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2, the stomach at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3] and identify the position of<br />

these organs in the human body. They identify organs [for example, stamen at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2, stigma, root<br />

hairs at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3] of different plants they observe. They use keys based on observable external<br />

features to help them to identify and group living things systematically. They recognise that feeding<br />

relationships exist between plants and animals in a habitat, and describe these relationships using food<br />

chains and terms [for example, predator and prey].<br />

Level 5<br />

Pupils demonstrate an increasing knowledge and understanding of life processes and living things<br />

drawn from the <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 or <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3 programme of study. They describe the main functions of<br />

organs of the human body [for example, the heart at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2, stomach at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3], and of the<br />

plant [for example, the stamen at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2, root hairs at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3]. They explain how these<br />

functions are essential to the organism. They describe the main stages of the life cycles of humans and<br />

flowering plants and point out similarities. They recognise that there is a great variety of living things and<br />

understand the importance of classification. They explain that different organisms are found in different<br />

habitats because of differences in environmental factors [for example, the availability of light or water].<br />

Level 6<br />

Pupils use knowledge and understanding drawn from the <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3 programme of study to describe<br />

and explain life processes and features of living things. They use appropriate scientific terminology when<br />

they describe life processes [for example, respiration, photosynthesis] in animals and plants. They<br />

distinguish between related processes [for example, pollination, fertilisation]. They describe simple cell<br />

structure and identify differences between simple animal and plant cells. They describe some of the<br />

causes of variation between living things. They explain that the distribution and abundance of organisms<br />

in habitats are affected by environmental factors [for example, the availability of light or water].<br />

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Attainment target 3: Materials and their properties:<br />

Level 2<br />

Pupils identify a range of common materials and know about some of their properties. They describe<br />

similarities and differences between materials. They sort materials into groups and describe the basis for<br />

their groupings in everyday terms [for example, shininess, hardness, smoothness]. They describe ways<br />

in which some materials are changed by heating or cooling or by processes such as bending or<br />

stretching.<br />

Level 3<br />

Pupils use their knowledge and understanding of materials when they describe a variety of ways of<br />

sorting them into groups according to their properties. They explain simply why some materials are<br />

particularly suitable for specific purposes [for example, glass for windows, copper for electrical cables].<br />

They recognise that some changes [for example, the freezing of water] can be reversed and some [for<br />

example, the baking of clay] cannot, and they classify changes in this way.<br />

Level 4<br />

Pupils demonstrate knowledge and understanding of materials and their properties drawn from the <strong>Key</strong><br />

<strong>Stage</strong> 2 or <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3 programme of study. They describe differences between the properties of<br />

different materials and explain how these differences are used to classify substances [for example, as<br />

solids, liquids, gases at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2, as acids, alkalis at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3]. They describe some methods [for<br />

example, filtration, distillation] that are used to separate simple mixtures. They use scientific terms [for<br />

example, evaporation, condensation] to describe changes. They use knowledge about some reversible<br />

and irreversible changes to make simple predictions about whether other changes are reversible or not.<br />

Level 5<br />

Pupils demonstrate an increasing knowledge and understanding of materials and their properties drawn<br />

from the <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 or <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3 programme of study. They describe some metallic properties [for<br />

example, good electrical conductivity] and use these properties to distinguish metals from other solids.<br />

They identify a range of contexts in which changes [for example, evaporation, condensation] take place.<br />

They use knowledge about how a specific mixture [for example, salt and water, sand and water] can be<br />

separated to suggest ways in which other similar mixtures might be separated.<br />

Level 6<br />

Pupils use knowledge and understanding of the nature and behaviour of materials drawn from the <strong>Key</strong><br />

<strong>Stage</strong> 3 programme of study to describe chemical and physical changes, and how new materials can be<br />

made. They recognise that matter is made up of particles, and describe differences between the<br />

arrangement and movement of particles in solids, liquids and gases. They identify and describe<br />

similarities between some chemical reactions [for example, the reactions of acids with metals, the<br />

reactions of a variety of substances with oxygen]. They use word equations to summarise simple<br />

reactions. They relate changes of state to energy transfers in a range of contexts [for example, the<br />

formation of igneous rocks].<br />

Attainment target 4: Physical processes:<br />

Level 2<br />

Pupils know about a range of physical phenomena and recognise and describe similarities and<br />

differences associated with them. They compare the way in which devices [for example, bulbs] work in<br />

different electrical circuits. They compare the brightness or colour of lights, and the loudness or pitch of<br />

sounds. They compare the movement of different objects in terms of speed or direction.<br />

Level 3<br />

Pupils use their knowledge and understanding of physical phenomena to link cause and effect in simple<br />

explanations [for example, a bulb failing to light because of a break in an electrical circuit, the direction<br />

or speed of movement of an object changing because of a push or a pull]. They begin to make simple<br />

generalisations about physical phenomena [for example, explaining that sounds they hear become<br />

fainter the further they are from the source].<br />

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Level 4<br />

Pupils demonstrate knowledge and understanding of physical processes drawn from the <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 or<br />

<strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3 programme of study. They describe and explain physical phenomena [for example, how a<br />

particular device may be connected to work in an electrical circuit, how the apparent position of the Sun<br />

changes over the course of a day]. They make generalisations about physical phenomena [for example,<br />

motion is affected by forces, including gravitational attraction, magnetic attraction and friction]. They use<br />

physical ideas to explain simple phenomena [for example, the formation of shadows, sounds being<br />

heard through a variety of materials].<br />

Level 5<br />

Pupils demonstrate knowledge and understanding of physical processes drawn from the <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 or<br />

<strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3 programme of study. They use ideas to explain how to make a range of changes [for<br />

example, altering the current in a circuit, altering the pitch or loudness of a sound]. They use some<br />

abstract ideas in descriptions of familiar phenomena [for example, objects are seen when light from<br />

them enters the eye at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2, forces are balanced when an object is stationary at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3].<br />

They use simple models to explain effects that are caused by the movement of the Earth [for example,<br />

the length of a day or year].<br />

Level 6<br />

Pupils use and apply knowledge and understanding of physical processes drawn from the <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3<br />

programme of study. They use abstract ideas in some descriptions and explanations [for example,<br />

electric current as a way of transferring energy, the sum of several forces determining changes in the<br />

direction or the speed of movement of an object, wind and waves as energy resources available for use].<br />

They recognise, and can give examples of, the wide application of many physical concepts [for example,<br />

the transfer of energy by light, sound or electricity, the refraction and dispersion of light]. They give<br />

explanations of phenomena in which a number of factors have to be considered [for example, the<br />

relative brightness of planets and stars].<br />

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Suggested tests for applying for Additional Time 2013<br />

APPENDIX D<br />

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APPENDIX E<br />

GUIDANCE FOR NOTIFICATION OF A PUPIL WORKING AT THE LEVEL OF THE KEY STAGE 2<br />

TASKS, OR TESTS, BUT UNABLE TO ACCESS THEM<br />

Introduction<br />

The form Notification of a pupil working at the level of the tests but unable to access them is provided to assist<br />

schools in recording details for such pupils. Schools may prefer to use their own format or one provided by their<br />

local authority (LA).<br />

Please note, in most cases where pupils are not able to access an individual task or test their teacher will still be<br />

able to make an overall teacher assessment based on the work of that pupil throughout the year. This form is for<br />

those pupils. For pupils who need to be disapplied from teacher assessment in one or more attainment targets you<br />

should use the form Notification of disapplication from teacher assessment at key stage 2.<br />

Before completing the form<br />

Please ensure that you:<br />

• refer to the appropriate section in the 2013 <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 Assessment and Reporting Arrangements booklet<br />

and Access Arrangements booklet.<br />

• discuss the arrangements with your LA assessment co-ordinator.<br />

Important note<br />

• You do NOT need to complete a form for pupils working at W. Such pupils should be recorded as W in<br />

your school’s management information system<br />

Guidance<br />

Provide a brief explanation setting out the reasons why this pupil will not be able to access some or all of the key<br />

stage tasks and/or tests in 2013. The explanation should:<br />

• include a brief description of the pupil’s present circumstances<br />

• refer to any action already taken, or special support already offered, and to any procedures the school has<br />

used to analyse and monitor the pupil’s needs, or if this information is documented elsewhere, indicate<br />

where it can be found<br />

• indicate whether these circumstances are likely to be long term or short term<br />

• refer to discussions with the pupil’s teachers and parents or carers<br />

• where appropriate, refer to any consultations with educational psychologists, medical officers or other<br />

specialist staff.<br />

Pupils who have been disapplied from teacher assessment should be recorded as D for the appropriate attainment<br />

targets in your school’s management information system.<br />

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National curriculum assessment 2013<br />

NOTIFICATION OF A PUPIL WORKING AT THE LEVEL OF THE KEY STAGE 2 TESTS, BUT UNABLE TO<br />

ACCESS THEM<br />

Please ensure that you have read the guidance before completing this form<br />

School name<br />

LA/DFE<br />

number<br />

/<br />

Pupil’s surname<br />

Pupil’s first name<br />

Reason for disapplication<br />

Headteacher’s signature:<br />

Date: / /<br />

Copy to:<br />

Pupil’s parents/carers<br />

Chair of school’s Governing Body<br />

LA Assessment Co-ordinator<br />

Pupil’s educational record<br />

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APPENDIX F<br />

Dates and Venues of Writing Moderation Meetings in 2013<br />

Date Venue District 9.00 – 12.00<br />

Y2 and Y3<br />

teachers<br />

1.00 – 4.00<br />

Y6 and Y7<br />

teachers<br />

20 May 2013 <strong>Kent</strong> Life Maidstone SCH 13/362 SCH 13/374<br />

21 May 2013 <strong>Kent</strong> Event Centre Swale SCH 13/363 SCH 13/375<br />

22 May 2013 The Hythe Imperial Shepway SCH 13/364 SCH 13/376<br />

23 May 2013 The David Lloyd Centre Dartford SCH 13/365 SCH 13/377<br />

4 June 2013 Aldingtno Eco Centre Ashford SCH 13/366 SCH 13/378<br />

5 June 2013 The Thistle Hotel, Brands<br />

Hatch<br />

Gravesham SCH 13/367 SCH 13/379<br />

6 June 2013 Hadlow Manor Sevenoaks SCH 13/368 SCH 13/380<br />

10 June 2013 <strong>Kent</strong> Life Tonbridge & Malling SCH 13/369 SCH 13/381<br />

11 June 2013 St Augustine’s Ltd. Thanet SCH 13/370 SCH 13/382<br />

12 June 2013 The Ark Christian Centre Dover SCH 13/371 SCH 13/383<br />

13 June 2013 The Mercure Hotel Tunbridge Wells SCH 13/372 SCH 13/384<br />

14 June 2013 The Woodside Centre Canterbury SCH 13/373 SCH 13/385<br />

25 June 2013 Oxford Road, Maidstone Postal / appeals moderation<br />

Dates and Venues P Scale County Moderation Meetings in 2013:<br />

Date Code Times Venue<br />

23 April 2013 SCH 13/356 2:00 – 4:30 Five Acre Wood School<br />

24 April 2013 SCH 13/357 2:00 – 4:30 Ifield Smile Centre<br />

25 April 2013 SCH 13/358 2:00 – 4:30 St Julian’s Club<br />

30 April 2013 SCH 13/359 2:00 – 4:30 Ashford Business Hub<br />

1 May 2013 SCH 13/360 2:00 – 4:30 Aspen, Dover<br />

2 May 2013 SCH 13/361 2:00 – 4:30 MIDAS Centre, Meadowfield School<br />

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