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<strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2<br />
Assessment Arrangements<br />
2013<br />
Guidance to <strong>Kent</strong> Schools<br />
For Year 6 and Year 7 Teachers
TABLE OF CONTENTS<br />
Purpose of this booklet 4<br />
Target Audience 4<br />
Contacts 4<br />
End of <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 Assessment 2013 5<br />
Relevant publications and websites 5<br />
Page<br />
<strong>Key</strong> Actions for Year 6 teachers from January to May 6 - 7<br />
Guidance on the Assessment of Writing 7 - 8<br />
<strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> Writing Moderation 2013 8<br />
Writing Moderation Visits 8 - 9<br />
District Moderation of Writing 9 - 12<br />
Agreement, Appeals and Quality Assurance 12 - 13<br />
Data Collection 14<br />
Criteria for writing assessment Levels 1-3 15<br />
KS2 Writing Level Descriptors 16<br />
Spelling and Handwriting Level Descriptors 17<br />
Moderation Strands 18<br />
Composition and effect Levels 2-6 19 - 20<br />
Sentence structure and punctuation Levels 2-6 21 - 22<br />
Text structure and organisation Levels 2-6 23 - 24<br />
Writing: flow chart for completing assessment guidelines using APP 25<br />
APP assessment grids Levels 2 and 3 26<br />
APP assessment grids Levels 3 and 4 27<br />
APP assessment grids Levels 4 and 5 28<br />
APP assessment grids Levels 5 and 6 29<br />
Appendix A: Forms for use at Writing Moderation 30<br />
Appendix B: Suggested tests for applying for Additional Time 31<br />
Appendix C: National Curriculum L2-6 descriptors 32 - 40<br />
Appendix D: Suggested tests for applying for Additional Time 2013 41 - 42<br />
Appendix E: Guidance for notification of a pupil unable to access KS2 tasks/tests 43 - 44<br />
Appendix E: Moderation Dates and Venues - P scale Agreement Trialling and<br />
Moderation<br />
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PURPOSE OF THIS BOOKLET<br />
This booklet contains information and guidance on assessment for the end of <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 in<br />
2013.<br />
It does not replace the Standards and Testing Agency’s (STA’s) <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 Assessment and<br />
Reporting Arrangements 2013 (ARA), but concentrates on issues specific to the moderation<br />
process in <strong>Kent</strong> schools.<br />
Readers of this document should be familiar with, and have access to the <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 ARA<br />
2013. Maintained and Independent schools with KS2 pupils received one copy of the 2013 KS2<br />
ARA in November 2012. Additional printed copies are not available, although can be accessed<br />
online at: www.education.gov.uk/assessment<br />
Target Audience<br />
The booklet is relevant to all involved in the end of <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 assessment:<br />
• Headteachers<br />
• <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 Leaders<br />
• Assessment Co-ordinators<br />
• KS2 subject leaders<br />
• Year 5 teachers<br />
• Year 6 teachers<br />
• KS3 Head of English Department<br />
• Year 7 teachers<br />
• Administrative staff involved with inputting and submitting data<br />
The booklet or relevant sections from it may be photocopied for distribution as required within<br />
schools.<br />
<strong>Key</strong> Contacts<br />
Margo Barraclough<br />
<strong>Kent</strong> Challenge Adviser and <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2<br />
Moderation Manager<br />
01233 898700<br />
margo.barraclough@kent.gov.uk<br />
Katherine Atkinson<br />
01622 696202<br />
katherine.atkinson@kent.gov.uk<br />
Management Information: for support on KS2<br />
data collection<br />
Assessment and Moderation Support<br />
assessment@kent.gov.uk<br />
Jan Bennett<br />
01622 696001<br />
jan.bennett@kent.gov.uk<br />
Management Information: for general enquires<br />
about access arrangements and RAISEonline<br />
support<br />
Diana Robinson<br />
01622 694299<br />
diana.robinson@kent.gov.uk<br />
For guidance on disapplication from the curriculum.<br />
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END OF KEY STAGE 2 TEACHER ASSESSMENT 2013<br />
• Schools will need to report ‘informed’ Teacher Assessment results for each pupil at the end of KS2.<br />
• In English, mathematics and science, schools will need to report a Teacher Assessment level for each<br />
attainment target and an overall subject level as one of the following: W, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 6, A, D, L, F* or<br />
P**.<br />
• Regardless of whether the writing tests are marked internally or externally schools should use the<br />
results to inform a teacher assessment judgement of a pupil’s work across Year 6.<br />
• Schools selected for the writing sampling test should use the results to inform but not dictate teacher<br />
assessment levels.<br />
• Pupils’ reading test results will be combined with their writing teacher assessment to calculate the<br />
overall English level.<br />
• The Mathematics level will be calculated in the usual way by assigning different weightings to each<br />
attainment target:<br />
- (M AT1) Using and Applying Mathematics weighting = 2<br />
- (M AT2) Number and Algebra weighting = 5<br />
- (M AT3) Shape, Space and Measures weighting = 2<br />
- (M AT4) Data Handling weighting = 1<br />
• The Science level will be calculated in the usual way by assigning different weightings to each<br />
attainment target:<br />
- (Sc AT1) Scientific Enquiry weighting = 2<br />
- (Sc AT2) Living Processes and Living Things weighting = 1<br />
- (Sc AT3) Materials and their Properties weighting = 1<br />
- (Sc AT4) Physical Processes weighting = 1<br />
• The reporting of P scales is statutory. Schools will need to record the achievement of pupils with SEN<br />
using the P levels where they are working below Level 1 of the National Curriculum. The P scales are a<br />
set of optional indicators for recording the achievements of these pupils.<br />
• For more details on P scales, visit the STA website at:<br />
https://orderline.education.gov.uk/gempdf/1445950839/P_scales_level%20descriptors_2009.pdf<br />
• Schools will need to provide the LA, parents and the next school/<strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> with the consolidated<br />
Teacher Assessment data for each pupil.<br />
• * F = Pupil will reach the end of the programme of study and take the relevant key stage test in the<br />
future.<br />
• ** P = Pupil has already completed the programme of study, the relevant key stage test has been taken<br />
and a teacher assessment result has been reported in the past<br />
Relevant publications and websites<br />
• Assessment and Reporting Arrangements KS2 2013 at www.education.gov.uk/assessment<br />
• Implications for teaching and learning from the English and Mathematics tests up to 2006<br />
http://orderline.education.gov.uk/bookstore.asp?FO=1307446&action=SearchResults<br />
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KEY ACTIONS FOR YEAR 6 TEACHERS FROM JANUARY TO MAY<br />
(from the Primary Strategy)<br />
Month<br />
Action<br />
January • Set curricular targets for term 3, share with pupils and display (may need to adjust<br />
planning to address targets).<br />
• Use ‘Using curricular targets in Y6: materials for teachers’ to support planning, teaching<br />
and assessment linked to curricular targets.<br />
• Use assessment information to target children for the booster groups. Use Securing level<br />
… and Overcoming barriers materials throughout the year.<br />
• Start Booster programme (focusing on areas of need, linked where possible to the work<br />
going on in class).<br />
• Hold a meeting to discuss with parents how they can best support their children’s<br />
preparation for the Y6 national tests<br />
• Moderate teacher assessment of children’s work to ensure a shared understanding of<br />
standards.<br />
• Include in teaching sensible preparation for the tests – help children to develop<br />
confidence in their own knowledge and skills to enable them to achieve success.<br />
• Use test questions (eg: from Testbase CD Rom) in lessons.<br />
• Share mark schemes with the children to establish expectations and use to support<br />
peer and self-assessment.<br />
• Plan in order to secure children’s understanding of the mathematics Y5 <strong>Key</strong><br />
Objectives.<br />
• Provide opportunities for children to practise timed tasks e.g ensure mental<br />
mathematics questions are timed, emphasising the importance of answering in 5, 10<br />
or 15 seconds; 15 minutes reading and 45 minutes answering questions; planning<br />
and writing in timed conditions for the short and long writing tasks.<br />
Own action<br />
points<br />
February • Y6 children sit national test papers from the previous year.<br />
• Mark, then analyse data (including booster children):<br />
• What are their strengths and weaknesses, areas of misconceptions etc?<br />
• Adjust medium term planning if necessary.<br />
• Go through papers with the children, modelling and encouraging children to model<br />
how questions could be answered, and emphasising annotations in mathematics.<br />
• Provide opportunities for children to discuss with one another their own strengths and<br />
areas for development. Support individuals/groups of children in making progress in<br />
particular identified areas.<br />
• Assess children’s progress against curricular targets and the key objectives covered<br />
that term. Use this to inform planning<br />
• Set curricular targets for term 4, share with pupils and display (may need to adjust<br />
planning to address targets).<br />
Own action<br />
points<br />
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March • Prepare pack of materials for the Easter holidays (e.g. consolidation of key grammar<br />
areas, past reading questions, mathematical problems and puzzles linked to areas of<br />
development identified in the February test). Go through the pack with the children to<br />
ensure they understand its purpose and how to use it.<br />
• Plan a tight teaching schedule for the four-week run up to the national tests, focusing<br />
on key areas identified and drawing on the unit plans for mathematics and the literacy<br />
exemplification units.<br />
Own action<br />
points<br />
April/May • Go through the Easter homework with the children, showing children how questions could<br />
be answered.<br />
• Teach four week teaching schedule (see above) using day-to-day assessment to inform<br />
planning.<br />
• In the first week of May, plan experiences for children to reflect on what they have<br />
learnt (e.g. produce mind maps.) including the skills they have learnt.<br />
• Ensure there is a range of evidence across the genres for writing moderation.<br />
Own action<br />
points<br />
GUIDANCE ON THE ASSESSMENT OF WRITING<br />
Teacher Assessment of Writing<br />
There will not be an English writing test or English writing sample in 2013. Instead the English writing test<br />
will be replaced by a new statutory test of English grammar, punctuation and spelling. This change follows<br />
the Government’s acceptance of Lord Bew’s recommendation that writing composition should only be<br />
subject to teacher assessment, with the more ‘technical’ aspects of English assessed via an externally<br />
marked test.<br />
However, at least 25% of schools will receive a moderation visit and those schools not receiving a visit, will<br />
be invited to attend the County moderation of writing in May and June.<br />
To ensure accurate and consistent Teacher Assessment of Writing you are encouraged to refer to:<br />
• The performance descriptions for Writing as defined in the National Curriculum.<br />
• Assessing Pupil Progress grids.<br />
• The level descriptors in the moderation strands of:<br />
o<br />
o<br />
o<br />
Sentence structure and punctuation<br />
Text structure and organisation<br />
Composition and effect.<br />
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It is important to note that the Teacher Assessed level awarded to a pupil is based on a ‘best fit’ model that<br />
takes account of a pupil’s achievements across a broad range of work, not a single task.<br />
KEY STAGE 2 WRITING MODERATION 2013<br />
Purpose of the Moderation Process<br />
<strong>Kent</strong> has a statutory duty to ensure the end of <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> assessments take place, that the tests are<br />
correctly administered, and that judgments are fair and consistent. The purpose of the writing moderation<br />
is to ensure that teacher assessment is accurate and consistent with national standards.<br />
<strong>Kent</strong> is required by the Standards and Testing Agency (STA) to moderate a sample size of schools for<br />
writing. These visits will be carried out by experienced school-based moderators.<br />
Writing Moderation Visits<br />
LAs are required on behalf of STA to carry out a programme of moderation visits during the academic<br />
year. The purpose of these visits is to ensure that teacher judgements in Year 6 are accurate and<br />
consistent with national standards.<br />
Schools on the list from the Standards and Testing Agency (STA): will receive a writing moderation visit<br />
between 15 th April and 22 nd June. Schools will be informed of a moderation visit no more than two weeks in<br />
advance, so they can make any necessary arrangements, including ensuring the availability of staff to talk<br />
to the visiting moderator.<br />
The moderation visit will be carried out by a school-based colleague who works in a different district. This<br />
may involve:<br />
• Discussion with the Headteacher/Assessment Co-ordinator/Year 6 teacher about the process of the<br />
moderation visit.<br />
• Discussion with Year 6 teachers relating to the ways they have reached their Teacher Assessments<br />
including, where appropriate, the steps taken to ensure consistent assessments across parallel<br />
classes.<br />
• Discussion with a senior colleague with oversight of assessment within the school to gain an insight into<br />
the steps the school has taken to ensure consistency of judgement about pupils’ work from Year 5 to<br />
Year 6, and from Year 6 to Year 7.<br />
• Scrutiny of pupils’ written work from September onwards (eg: exercise books, “finished” and<br />
“rough/draft” work, writing across a range of genre and in other subjects, such as history and<br />
geography, project-based work), together with any outcomes of the tests already undertaken. See<br />
Appendix A for suggested range of writing evidence.<br />
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Schools will need to provide the moderator with the class list of Year 6 pupils and their teacher assessed<br />
levels. The moderator will then select a sample of borderline pupils and review the evidence. It would be<br />
helpful if teachers could indicate how secure pupils were working in that level. See sample size below:<br />
Cohort Size Less than 16 pupils 16 to 40 pupils More than 40 pupils<br />
Level 2<br />
writing<br />
One highest achieving<br />
(if applicable)<br />
Two highest achieving<br />
(if applicable)<br />
Three highest achieving<br />
(if applicable)<br />
Level 3<br />
writing*<br />
One highest achieving Two highest achieving Three highest achieving<br />
Level 4<br />
writing<br />
One lowest achieving Two lowest achieving Three lowest achieving<br />
One highest achieving Two highest achieving Three highest achieving<br />
Level 5<br />
writing**<br />
One lowest achieving Two lowest achieving Three lowest achieving<br />
Level 6<br />
writing<br />
All (if applicable)<br />
All (if applicable)<br />
All (if applicable)<br />
* If no Level 3s then make up the sample size with the lowest Level 4s.<br />
** If no Level 5s then make up the sample size with the highest Level 4s.<br />
NB: The pupils in the sample size should be working at borderline levels.<br />
Moderators may wish to see evidence from additional pupils if they are not satisfied that the evidence<br />
provided confirms accurate judgements.<br />
Moderators will complete a Note of Visit, which will be a summary of their visit, outlining their judgements<br />
and reasons. This will either be left with the school or sent to the school within the appropriate timescale.<br />
District Moderation of Writing 2013<br />
Moderation Meetings<br />
These will take place between 22 nd May and 14 th June 2013 at venues across the county following the<br />
District model. The meetings provide opportunities for discussions about consistency, standards and<br />
effective practice in assessment. Precise details will be provided to schools in March.<br />
Each moderation session will take half a day and will be from 1.00pm - 4.00 pm. Most <strong>Kent</strong> schools with<br />
<strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 pupils will be required to send one Year 6 teacher representative to attend the meeting. The<br />
LA feels that participation in the moderation process represents a valuable opportunity for professional<br />
development. Secondary schools will be invited to send two Year 7 English teachers to participate in the<br />
moderation process, and to bring samples of their pupils’ writing to moderate.<br />
Format of the Moderation Meetings<br />
During meetings Years 6 and 7 teachers will work in small groups scrutinising the samples of pupils’ work.<br />
If the groups agree on the assessments made by their colleagues, those assessments are confirmed.<br />
However, changes to the assessments are sometimes made by the groups and in cases where they cannot<br />
come to an agreement, the team of moderators act as in independent group to make and feed back a<br />
decision.<br />
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The Role of the Moderation Team<br />
The Moderation Team for 2013 will consist of current <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 practitioners, experienced <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2<br />
moderators, primary school Headteachers and Leading Assessment for Learning Teachers. The LA may<br />
be monitored in its duties by STA personnel.<br />
To ensure that fair and consistent assessments are made, members of the team will moderate the<br />
assessment of the lowest achieving Level 5 in Years 6 and 7 from each school – if there are no Level<br />
5s, then the highest achieving Level 4.<br />
All pieces submitted to the team will be looked at by at least two moderators to ensure a consistency of<br />
moderation within the team.<br />
The team will keep a log of all pieces of work submitted to it. The outcome is recorded as a means of<br />
quality assurance.<br />
The team may request extra samples from schools where their judgement differs. Further samples may be<br />
requested from any school where concerns are raised on the consistency of the levels awarded.<br />
The Moderation Manager (Margo Barraclough) will ensure that the Headteacher of the primary or junior<br />
school is formally notified where there are changes made to the awarded levels as part of the moderation<br />
process.<br />
Evidence to bring to the moderation<br />
For each pupil in the sample all Year 6 and Year 7 teachers must bring sufficient evidence* that best<br />
supports teacher assessments in:<br />
and<br />
and<br />
• Writing across a range of genres and curriculum areas (See Appendix A)<br />
• An annotated and highlighted copy of the guidelines or a similar resource used in the school,<br />
showing the level the pupil is working at and the extent to which the pupil was supported. The<br />
Assessing Pupil Progress grids are included in this booklet.<br />
• Writing tasks and spelling tests (end of KS2 and optional Year 7, if available) with the annotated<br />
mark schemes.<br />
Examples of evidence:<br />
• A range of pupils’ written work that shows most independence, ie. little or no adult support. It is<br />
recommended that work is briefly annotated with a code to show level of independence, eg: “I” for<br />
“independent work” and “S” for “supported work.”<br />
• Work from other lessons, such as topic work, science, RE, geography and history.<br />
• Notes on plans and evidence – annotations and jottings.<br />
• Pupils’ own reflections about their writing.<br />
• Teachers’ and additional adults’ observations.<br />
Evidence that is not helpful:<br />
• Homework tasks.<br />
• Closed tasks / photocopied worksheets (unless annotated).<br />
• Group or paired work.<br />
• Work that is not dated.<br />
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Sufficient evidence*: enough evidence by which teachers are able to make a secure<br />
judgement about a pupil.<br />
Sample sizes for moderation of writing in districts:<br />
Year 6:<br />
Cohort Size Less than 16 pupils 16 to 40 pupils More than 40 pupils<br />
Level 3<br />
writing*<br />
One highest achieving Two highest achieving Three highest achieving<br />
Level 4<br />
writing<br />
One borderline<br />
(may be lowest or highest<br />
achieving)<br />
Two borderline<br />
(may be lowest and/or<br />
highest achieving)<br />
Three borderline<br />
(may be lowest and/or highest<br />
achieving)<br />
Level 5<br />
writing**<br />
One lowest achieving Two lowest achieving Three lowest achieving<br />
Level 6<br />
writing<br />
All (if applicable)<br />
All (if applicable)<br />
All (if applicable)<br />
* If no Level 3s then make up the sample size with the lowest Level 4s.<br />
* If no Level 5s then make up the sample size with the highest Level 4s.<br />
NB: The pupils in the sample size should be working at borderline levels.<br />
Each Year 7 teacher:<br />
Levels<br />
Sample size to bring to moderation<br />
Level 3 writing*<br />
One highest achieving<br />
Level 4 writing<br />
One borderline<br />
(may be lowest or highest achieving)<br />
Level 5 writing<br />
One lowest achieving<br />
Level 6 writing<br />
One lowest achieving<br />
* If no Level 3s then make up the sample size with the lowest Level 4s.<br />
NB: The pupils in the sample size should be working at borderline levels.<br />
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Endorsement<br />
Endorsement is the formal agreement by the Moderation Manager that the pupils’ work submitted at<br />
moderation has been appropriately administered and assessed by the school. It enables schools to submit<br />
their data to the LA for the purposes of the national data collection.<br />
It is expected that the majority of schools will have their results endorsed at the end of the process. Where<br />
this is the case, the Headteacher will receive a completed form of endorsement from the moderation.<br />
The KS2 writing assessments of a school must be endorsed by the Moderation Manager before the data<br />
can be submitted to <strong>Kent</strong>’s Management Information.<br />
Where there are more significant concerns raised that cannot be addressed at the moderation meeting the<br />
manager will arrange with the Headteacher to visit the school and undertake a more detailed moderation of<br />
assessments. This is generally quite rare.<br />
Agreement, Appeals and Quality Assurance<br />
Agreement<br />
The Manager of the moderation process may request further evidence from a school before endorsing its<br />
results. This may include submitting additional evidence for individual pupils to ensure appropriate levels<br />
are awarded. The school’s Year 6 representative will be made aware at the moderation meeting if this is<br />
necessary.<br />
Appeals<br />
Schools wishing to appeal against any decision, either made at the district moderation or during a school<br />
visit, may resubmit their samples by post for the appeals meeting, which will be held on 25th June 2013,<br />
by 21 st June 2013 at the latest. They need to send the evidence in an envelope to the address below:<br />
FAO:<br />
Margo Barraclough<br />
KS2 Moderation Manager – Postal Appeals<br />
Education, Learning and Skills<br />
The Shepway Centre<br />
Maidstone<br />
<strong>Kent</strong><br />
ME15 8AW<br />
Appeals protocol<br />
The following conditions will be met as part of the appeals and postal moderation:<br />
Where schools have presented samples for reconsideration:<br />
• Any member of the Moderation Team present at the original moderation meeting (either in school or at<br />
the district meeting) will not moderate any work for that school.<br />
• The level agreed by the Moderation Team will be the final level set for that piece by the LA.<br />
• Each school will receive relevant written feedback where there is a difference between the school<br />
assessed level and the level decided by the team.<br />
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Where schools have presented additional evidence at the request of the Moderation Manager:<br />
This additional evidence will form part of the postal moderation/appeals meeting.<br />
Additional samples may be required where the sample submitted during the original process is deemed<br />
inappropriate or insufficient for assessment.<br />
• The samples will be assessed by any members of the Moderation Team, whether or not they were<br />
present when work from the school was initially considered.<br />
• Schools will receive written feedback detailing outcomes where the Team’s assessment is different<br />
from the school’s assessment.<br />
Where schools were not present at their original moderation meeting:<br />
• Samples will be moderated by the team in the same way as they would have been at any district-based<br />
moderation session.<br />
• Individual schools will receive written feedback of the outcome of the postal moderation.<br />
Quality Assurance<br />
The Moderation Manager will approach specific schools to take a selection of scripts to the South East<br />
Regional Standardisation Meeting on 26 th June 2013. This standardisation meeting includes<br />
representatives from a large number of LAs in the South East. The purpose of the meeting is to moderate<br />
each LA’s decisions and to ensure consistent standards. The meeting is also attended by representatives<br />
from STA.<br />
Data Collection<br />
Precise information relating to data collection of KS2 National Curriculum Assessment results will be<br />
provided by Management Information in May 2013. The deadline for reporting teacher assessments to<br />
Management Information is Tuesday, 25 th June 2013.<br />
The results can only be submitted when the school's results have been formally endorsed by the<br />
Moderation Manager. As last year, at the request of STA, the LA will undertake a random sample of<br />
submitted assessments to Management Information, to ensure that the levels agreed at Moderation are<br />
reported correctly.<br />
Management Information will process endorsed pupils’ results on behalf of all schools and submit them to<br />
the DfE as part of the national data collection.<br />
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Check for<br />
Writing<br />
Moderation<br />
Planning<br />
Structuring opportunities<br />
for pupils write across a<br />
range of genres<br />
Learning<br />
Build skills, curiosity,<br />
confidence and<br />
independence<br />
Managing ongoing<br />
evidence<br />
Quality, not quantity<br />
Preparing for the<br />
moderation<br />
Know the pupils and help<br />
others know them<br />
Plan regular opportunities<br />
for writing, including guided<br />
writing opportunities<br />
Give opportunities to write in<br />
different genres and allow<br />
choice and independence,<br />
especially in independent<br />
writing<br />
Make sure all work is dated<br />
Annotating work with a<br />
pupil’s quote helps to clarify<br />
his/her understanding<br />
Collect all the writing<br />
evidence from chosen<br />
pupils- if advice has been<br />
followed, this will show<br />
variety and independence<br />
Give pupils opportunities to<br />
plan and draft their writing<br />
Ensure the learning intention<br />
is clear and understood by<br />
all pupils (and written by<br />
adults for slow writers!)<br />
Share examples of good<br />
questioning/ verbal evidence<br />
with TAs so they can<br />
support evidence gathering<br />
Moderators will look for a<br />
range of independent work.<br />
Post-Its will help flag it up if<br />
the pupil’s handwriting is not<br />
clear<br />
Be aware of Level 4 and<br />
Level 5 expectations in<br />
every genre and offer<br />
experiences to appropriate<br />
pupils.<br />
Plan ahead for focussed<br />
use of observations/quotes<br />
to show practical application<br />
of learning by guided groups<br />
Use plain books for planning,<br />
as these allow for expansion<br />
of ideas and show<br />
development of writing<br />
Use the writing tasks and<br />
spelling test for further<br />
evidence.<br />
Plan opportunities for Level<br />
5 learning in all parts of the<br />
lesson, not just as an extra,<br />
for appropriate pupils<br />
Mark to the learning<br />
intention- how has progress<br />
been demonstrated? Have<br />
pupils responded to<br />
teachers’ feedback?<br />
Keep manageable evidenceannotations<br />
on planning,<br />
observations on post its,<br />
quotes, TAs’ comments,<br />
cross curricular writing<br />
Use examples in the<br />
standards files for in-school<br />
moderation, to ensure<br />
consistent judgements. Be<br />
prepared to justify them<br />
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**NB: The Year 6 Teacher representing the school at moderation needs to know about all the pupils in the sample.
Criteria for writing assessment (levels 1 – 3) for teacher assessment purposes only<br />
Content<br />
(Narrative Writing)<br />
Content<br />
(Non Narrative Writing)<br />
Sentences<br />
Level 1 Level 2C Level 2B Level 2A Level 3<br />
• Communicates meaning beyond a<br />
simple statement some<br />
characteristics of narrative writing,<br />
which may not be sustained<br />
• Communicates meaning<br />
through simple words and<br />
phrases<br />
• Writing is comprehensible<br />
without the need for a<br />
transcript<br />
• Communicates meaning<br />
through simple words and<br />
phrases<br />
• Writing is comprehensible<br />
without the need for a<br />
transcript<br />
• Communicates meaning beyond a<br />
simple statement<br />
• Some characteristics of non<br />
narrative writing, which may not be<br />
sustained<br />
• Simple words and phrases • Individual ideas developed in short<br />
sections<br />
• Communicates meaning<br />
• Narrative used with some consistency<br />
(tense, person, story-line<br />
• Some awareness of reader and<br />
purpose of narrative writing<br />
• Communicates meaning<br />
• Non-narrative used with some<br />
consistency<br />
• Some awareness of reader and<br />
purpose of non-narrative writing<br />
• May lack organisation of subject<br />
matter<br />
• Sufficient detail given to engage the<br />
reader<br />
• Effective variation in sentence<br />
structure<br />
• Communicates meaning in lively<br />
way generally holding the<br />
reader’s interest<br />
• Main characteristics of narrative<br />
writing are evident<br />
• Communicates meaning in lively<br />
way generally holding the<br />
reader’s interest<br />
• Main characteristics of nonnarrative<br />
writing are evident<br />
• Simple organisational features<br />
present e.g. (headings, sections)<br />
• Links between ideas/events<br />
mainly clear<br />
• Correctly structured sentences<br />
• Organised imaginative, clear<br />
• Main features of narrative writing<br />
used appropriately<br />
• Fluent writing style appropriate to<br />
intended reader<br />
• Technical aspects effective<br />
(index, headings, diagrams,<br />
captions)<br />
• Fluent writing style appropriate to<br />
intended reader, subject and<br />
purpose (recount, persuasion,<br />
non-chronological report,<br />
explanation, discussion,<br />
instruction)<br />
• Ideas extended logically in<br />
sequence of sentences<br />
Vocabulary<br />
• Simple words and phrases • Vocabulary appropriate to subject<br />
matter some words used effectively<br />
• Variation in choice of words<br />
• Ambitious words sometimes used<br />
• Some descriptive phrases add<br />
detail/emphasis<br />
• Words chosen for variety,<br />
interest and effect<br />
Grammar and<br />
Punctuation<br />
Spelling<br />
• Begin to show awareness of<br />
how full stops are used<br />
• Some recognisable<br />
representation of phonemes<br />
• More characteristics of spoken than<br />
written language<br />
• Some punctuation conventions<br />
used to demarcate units of meaning<br />
• Some common words spelt<br />
correctly<br />
• Alternative words reliant on phonics<br />
• Some recall of visual patterns (e.g.<br />
oa, ea)<br />
• Organisation reflects purpose of<br />
writing<br />
• Some sentences extended/linked<br />
through connectives other than<br />
‘and’<br />
• Some sentence punctuation<br />
• Phonetically plausible<br />
• Growing knowledge of whole word<br />
structure<br />
• Awareness of visible patterns<br />
• Recall of letter strings (e.g. --ing, -ed)<br />
• Growing understanding of use of<br />
capital letters and full stops to<br />
mark correctly structured<br />
sentenced<br />
• Accurate spelling of many<br />
common monosyllabic words<br />
• Phonetically plausible attempts at<br />
longer polysyllabic words<br />
• Basic grammatical<br />
structure correct<br />
• Accurate use of full stops, capital<br />
letters and question marks<br />
• Mostly accurate (including<br />
common polysyllabic words)<br />
Handwriting<br />
• Most letters clearly shaped<br />
• Most letters correctly<br />
orientated<br />
• Legible<br />
• Some inconsistencies in letter size<br />
and orientation<br />
• Some inconsistencies in use of<br />
upper /and lower case letters.<br />
• Clear ascenders/descenders<br />
distinguishable<br />
• Upper/lower case letters not generally<br />
mixed within words<br />
• Letters accurately formed<br />
• Letters consistent in size<br />
• Joined and legible<br />
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The Moderation Process<br />
Writing: making a level judgement<br />
Use these steps to formalise your assessment of pupils’ writing: You will need:<br />
• Evidence of pupil’s writing that shows most independence, including work in other subjects.<br />
• Other evidence about the pupil as a writer, e.g. notes on plans, pupil’s own reflections, your own<br />
recollections of classroom activities and questions.<br />
• A copy of the assessment guidelines for the level borderline that is your starting point.<br />
Step 1: Making assessment focus judgements<br />
For each AF, starting with AF5:<br />
- look at the evidence in relation to all the criteria for both the higher and lower levels at this<br />
borderline and highlight those that have been met.<br />
- make a best-fit judgement whether the higher or lower level has been achieved and tick the<br />
appropriate level-related box.<br />
- if there is some evidence for an AF but not enough to make a judgement at the lower level, tick<br />
the BL (Below Level) box.<br />
- if there is no evidence for a particular AF, tick the IE (Insufficient Evidence) box.<br />
If you ticked BL for more than one AF out of AFs 1 to 6, check whether you should be using the assessment<br />
guidelines for the level borderline below.<br />
If you have ticked all, or almost all, the criteria for the higher level, check whether you should be using the<br />
assessment guidelines for the level borderline above.<br />
Step 2: Making an overall level judgement<br />
Check your AF judgements against the requirements for each level:<br />
For level 2: ticks at level 2 for three out of AF5, AF6, AF1 and AF” and either AF7 or AF8.<br />
For all other levels: ticks at the level for any four AFs out of AFs 1 to 6.<br />
If you have ticked IE for more than two AFs, there may be insufficient evidence to make an overall level<br />
judgement, in which case IE should be awarded.<br />
Now finalise the overall level judgement by deciding whether the level is low, secure or high.<br />
Low – meets the minimum requirements for the level.<br />
Secure – meets the minimum requirements for the level with some additional highlighting of criteria at the level in<br />
most other AFs.<br />
High: the criteria for the level are highlighted across all, or almost all, the AFs, with some criteria in the level above<br />
likely to be highlighted as well.<br />
Your decision should take account of how fully and consistently the criteria have been met and how far the pupil<br />
demonstrates independence and choice across a range of evidence. Where evidence for AF7 and AF8 is<br />
significantly better/worse than the evidence for other AFs, it is likely to influence your judgement of low, secure or<br />
high.<br />
Step 3: Checking the overall level judgement<br />
Finally, check the overall judgement by comparing the evidence with the relevant standard files.<br />
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Writing assessment guidelines: levels 2 and 3<br />
Pupil name Class / Group Date<br />
AF5 - vary sentences<br />
for clarity, purpose and<br />
effect<br />
AF6 - write with<br />
technical accuracy of<br />
syntax and<br />
punctuation in<br />
phrases, clauses and<br />
sentences<br />
AF3 - organise and<br />
present whole texts<br />
effectively, sequencing<br />
and structuring<br />
information, ideas and<br />
events<br />
AF4 - construct<br />
paragraphs and use<br />
cohesion within and<br />
between paragraphs<br />
AF1 - write<br />
imaginative,<br />
interesting and<br />
thoughtful texts<br />
AF2 - produce texts<br />
which are<br />
appropriate to task,<br />
reader and purpose<br />
AF7 - select<br />
appropriate and<br />
effective<br />
vocabulary<br />
AF8 - use correct spelling<br />
Handwriting and<br />
presentation<br />
Level 3<br />
In most writing<br />
• reliance mainly on<br />
simply structured<br />
sentences, variation<br />
with support, eg some<br />
complex sentences<br />
• and, but, so are the<br />
most common<br />
connectives,<br />
subordination<br />
occasionally<br />
• some limited variation<br />
in use of tense and<br />
verb forms, not always<br />
secure<br />
In most writing<br />
• straightforward<br />
sentences usually<br />
demarcated<br />
accurately with full<br />
stops, capital letters,<br />
question and<br />
exclamation marks<br />
• some, limited, use of<br />
speech punctuation<br />
• comma splicing<br />
evident, particularly in<br />
narrative<br />
In most writing<br />
• some attempt to<br />
organise ideas with<br />
related points placed<br />
next to each other<br />
• openings and closings<br />
usually signalled<br />
• some attempt to<br />
sequence ideas or<br />
material logically<br />
In most writing<br />
• some internal<br />
structure within<br />
sections of text eg<br />
one-sentence<br />
paragraphs or ideas<br />
loosely organised<br />
• within paragraphs /<br />
sections, some links<br />
between sentences,<br />
eg use of pronouns<br />
or of adverbials<br />
• movement between<br />
paragraphs / sections<br />
sometimes abrupt or<br />
disjointed<br />
In most writing<br />
• some appropriate<br />
ideas and content<br />
included<br />
• some attempt to<br />
elaborate on basic<br />
information or events,<br />
eg nouns expanded<br />
by simple adjectives<br />
• attempt to adopt<br />
viewpoint, though<br />
often not maintained<br />
or inconsistent, eg<br />
attitude expressed,<br />
but with little<br />
elaboration<br />
In most writing<br />
• purpose established<br />
at a general level<br />
• main features of<br />
selected form<br />
sometimes signalled<br />
to the reader<br />
• some attempts at<br />
appropriate style,<br />
with attention to<br />
reader<br />
In most writing<br />
• simple, generally<br />
appropriate<br />
vocabulary used,<br />
limited in range<br />
• some words<br />
selected for effect<br />
or occasion<br />
In most writing<br />
• correct spelling of<br />
o some common<br />
grammatical function<br />
words<br />
o common content/lexical<br />
words with more than<br />
one morpheme,<br />
including compound<br />
words<br />
• likely errors<br />
o some inflected endings,<br />
eg past tense,<br />
comparatives, adverbs<br />
o some phonetically<br />
plausible attempts at<br />
content/lexical words<br />
In most writing<br />
• legible style,<br />
shows<br />
accurate and<br />
consistent<br />
letter<br />
formation,<br />
sometimes<br />
joined<br />
Level 2<br />
In some forms of<br />
writing<br />
• some variation in<br />
sentence openings, eg<br />
not always starting with<br />
name or pronoun<br />
• mainly simple<br />
sentences with and<br />
used to connect<br />
clauses<br />
• past and present tense<br />
generally consistent<br />
In some forms of<br />
writing<br />
• clause structure<br />
mostly grammatically<br />
correct<br />
• sentence<br />
demarcation with<br />
capital letters and full<br />
stops usually<br />
accurate<br />
• some accurate use of<br />
question and<br />
exclamation marks,<br />
and commas in lists<br />
In some forms of<br />
writing<br />
• some basic<br />
sequencing of ideas or<br />
material, eg timerelated<br />
words or<br />
phrases, line breaks,<br />
headings, numbers<br />
• openings and/or<br />
closings sometimes<br />
signalled<br />
In some forms of<br />
writing<br />
• ideas in sections<br />
grouped by content,<br />
some linking by<br />
simple pronouns<br />
In some forms of<br />
writing<br />
• mostly relevant ideas<br />
and content,<br />
sometimes repetitive<br />
or sparse<br />
• some apt word<br />
choices create<br />
interest<br />
• brief comments,<br />
questions about<br />
events or actions<br />
suggest viewpoint<br />
In some forms of<br />
writing<br />
• some basic purpose<br />
established, eg main<br />
features of story,<br />
report<br />
• some appropriate<br />
features of the given<br />
form used<br />
• some attempts to<br />
adopt appropriate<br />
style<br />
In some forms of<br />
writing<br />
• simple, often<br />
speech-like<br />
vocabulary<br />
conveys relevant<br />
meanings<br />
• some<br />
adventurous word<br />
choices, eg<br />
opportune use of<br />
new vocabulary<br />
In some forms of writing<br />
• usually correct spelling of<br />
o high frequency<br />
grammatical function<br />
words<br />
o common single<br />
morpheme<br />
content/lexical words<br />
• likely errors<br />
o inflected endings, eg<br />
past tense, plurals,<br />
adverbs<br />
o phonetic attempts at<br />
vowel digraphs<br />
In some forms of<br />
writing<br />
• letters generally<br />
correctly shaped but<br />
inconsistencies in<br />
orientation, size and<br />
use of upper/lower<br />
case letters<br />
• clear letter<br />
formation, with<br />
ascenders and<br />
descenders<br />
distinguished,<br />
generally upper and<br />
lower case letters<br />
not mixed within<br />
words<br />
BL<br />
IE<br />
Overall assessment (tick one box only) Low 2 Secure 2 High 2 Low 3 Secure 3 High 3<br />
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Writing assessment guidelines: levels 3 and 4<br />
Pupil name Class / Group Date<br />
AF5 - vary sentences for<br />
clarity, purpose and<br />
effect<br />
AF6 - write with<br />
technical accuracy of<br />
syntax and<br />
punctuation in<br />
phrases, clauses and<br />
sentences<br />
AF3 - organise and<br />
present whole texts<br />
effectively, sequencing<br />
and structuring<br />
information, ideas and<br />
events<br />
AF4 - construct<br />
paragraphs and use<br />
cohesion within and<br />
between paragraphs<br />
AF1 - write<br />
imaginative,<br />
interesting and<br />
thoughtful texts<br />
AF2 - produce texts<br />
which are<br />
appropriate to task,<br />
reader and purpose<br />
AF7 - select<br />
appropriate and<br />
effective<br />
vocabulary<br />
AF8 - use correct spelling<br />
Handwriting and<br />
presentation<br />
Level 4<br />
Across a range of<br />
writing<br />
• some variety in length,<br />
structure or subject of<br />
sentences<br />
• use of some<br />
subordinating<br />
connectives, eg if,<br />
when, because<br />
throughout the text<br />
• some variation,<br />
generally accurate, in<br />
tense and verb forms.<br />
Across a range of<br />
writing<br />
• sentences<br />
demarcated<br />
accurately throughout<br />
the text, including<br />
question<br />
• speech marks to<br />
denote speech<br />
generally accurate,<br />
with some other<br />
speech punctuation<br />
• comma used in lists<br />
and occasionally to<br />
mark clauses,<br />
although not always<br />
accurately<br />
Across a range of<br />
writing<br />
• ideas organised by<br />
clustering related<br />
points or by some time<br />
sequence<br />
• ideas are organised<br />
simply with a fitting<br />
opening and closing,<br />
sometimes linked<br />
• ideas or material<br />
generally in logical<br />
sequence but overall<br />
direction of writing not<br />
always clearly<br />
signalled<br />
Across a range of<br />
writing<br />
• paragraphs/sections<br />
help to organise<br />
contact, eg main idea<br />
usually supported or<br />
elaborated by<br />
following sentences<br />
• within paragraphs /<br />
sections limited<br />
range of connections<br />
between sentences,<br />
eg over-use of ‘also’<br />
or pronouns<br />
• some attempts to<br />
establish simple links<br />
between<br />
paragraphs/sections<br />
not always<br />
maintained, eg<br />
firstly, next<br />
Across a range of<br />
writing<br />
• relevant ideas and<br />
content chosen<br />
• some ideas and<br />
material developed in<br />
detail, eg<br />
descriptions<br />
elaborated by<br />
adverbial and<br />
expanded noun<br />
phrases<br />
• straightforward<br />
viewpoint generally<br />
established and<br />
maintained, eg writing<br />
in role or maintaining<br />
a consistent stance<br />
Across a range of<br />
writing<br />
• main purpose of<br />
writing is clear but<br />
not always<br />
consistently<br />
maintained<br />
• main features of<br />
selected form are<br />
clear and<br />
appropriate to<br />
purpose<br />
• style generally<br />
appropriate to task,<br />
though awareness of<br />
reader not always<br />
sustained<br />
Across a range of<br />
writing<br />
• some evidence of<br />
deliberate<br />
vocabulary<br />
choices<br />
• some expansion<br />
of general<br />
vocabulary to<br />
match topic<br />
Across a range of writing<br />
• correct spelling of<br />
o most common<br />
grammatical function<br />
words, including adverbs<br />
with –ly formation<br />
o regularly formed<br />
context/lexical words,<br />
including those with<br />
multiple morphemes<br />
o most past and present<br />
tense inflections, plurals<br />
• likely errors<br />
o homophones of some<br />
common grammatical<br />
function words<br />
o occasional phonetically<br />
plausible spelling in<br />
content/lexical words<br />
Level 3<br />
In most writing<br />
• reliance mainly on<br />
simply structured<br />
sentences, variation<br />
with support, eg some<br />
complex sentences<br />
• and, but, so are the<br />
most common<br />
connectives,<br />
subordination<br />
occasionally<br />
• some limited variation<br />
in use of tense and verb<br />
forms, not always<br />
secure<br />
In most writing<br />
• straightforward<br />
sentences usually<br />
demarcated<br />
accurately with full<br />
stops, capital letters,<br />
question and<br />
exclamation marks<br />
• some, limited, use of<br />
speech punctuation<br />
• comma splicing<br />
evident, particularly in<br />
narrative<br />
In most writing<br />
• some attempt to<br />
organise ideas with<br />
related points placed<br />
next to each other<br />
• openings and closings<br />
usually signalled<br />
• some attempt to<br />
sequence ideas or<br />
material logically<br />
In most writing<br />
• some internal<br />
structure within<br />
sections of text eg<br />
one-sentence<br />
paragraphs or ideas<br />
loosely organised<br />
• within paragraphs /<br />
sections, some links<br />
between sentences,<br />
eg use of pronouns<br />
or of adverbials<br />
• movement between<br />
paragraphs / sections<br />
sometimes abrupt or<br />
disjointed<br />
In most writing<br />
• some appropriate<br />
ideas and content<br />
included<br />
• some attempt to<br />
elaborate on basic<br />
information or events,<br />
eg nouns expanded<br />
by simple adjectives<br />
• attempt to adopt<br />
viewpoint, though<br />
often not maintained<br />
or inconsistent, eg<br />
attitude expressed,<br />
but with little<br />
elaboration<br />
In most writing<br />
• purpose established<br />
at a general level<br />
• main features of<br />
selected form<br />
sometimes signalled<br />
to the reader<br />
• some attempts at<br />
appropriate style,<br />
with attention to<br />
reader<br />
In most writing<br />
• simple, generally<br />
appropriate<br />
vocabulary used,<br />
limited in range<br />
• some words<br />
selected for effect<br />
or occasion<br />
In most writing<br />
• correct spelling of<br />
o some common<br />
grammatical function<br />
words<br />
o common content/lexical<br />
words with more than one<br />
morpheme, including<br />
compound words<br />
• likely errors<br />
o some inflected endings,<br />
eg past tense,<br />
comparatives, adverbs<br />
o some phonetically<br />
plausible attempts at<br />
content/lexical words<br />
In most writing<br />
• legible<br />
style,<br />
shows<br />
accurate<br />
and<br />
consistent<br />
letter<br />
formation,<br />
sometimes<br />
joined<br />
BL<br />
IE<br />
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Overall assessment (tick one box only) Low 3 Secure 3 High 3 Low 4 Secure 4 High 4
Writing assessment guidelines: levels 4 and 5<br />
Pupil name Class / Group Date<br />
Level 5<br />
AF5 - vary sentences<br />
for clarity, purpose and<br />
effect<br />
AF6 - write with<br />
technical accuracy of<br />
syntax and<br />
punctuation in<br />
phrases, clauses and<br />
sentences<br />
Across a range of<br />
writing<br />
Across a range of<br />
writing<br />
• a variety of sentence • full range of<br />
lengths, structures and punctuation used<br />
subjects provides clarity accurately to<br />
and emphasis<br />
demarcate<br />
sentences, including<br />
speech punctuation<br />
• wider range of<br />
connectives used to<br />
clarify relationship<br />
between ideas, eg<br />
although, on the other<br />
hand, meanwhile<br />
• some features of<br />
sentence structure<br />
used to build up detail<br />
or convey shades of<br />
meaning, eg variation<br />
in word order,<br />
expansions in verb<br />
phrases<br />
• syntax and<br />
punctuation within the<br />
sentence generally<br />
accurate including<br />
commas to mark<br />
clauses, though some<br />
errors occur where<br />
ambitious structures<br />
are attempted<br />
AF3 - organise and<br />
present whole texts<br />
effectively, sequencing<br />
and structuring<br />
information, ideas and<br />
events<br />
AF4 - construct<br />
paragraphs and use<br />
cohesion within and<br />
between paragraphs<br />
AF1 - write imaginative,<br />
interesting and<br />
thoughtful texts<br />
AF2 - produce texts<br />
which are<br />
appropriate to task,<br />
reader and purpose<br />
Across a range of Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of<br />
writing<br />
• paragraphs clearly • relevant ideas and writing<br />
• material is structured structure main ideas material developed with • main purpose of<br />
clearly, with sentences across text to support some imaginative detail writing is clear and<br />
organised into<br />
purpose, eg clear • development of ideas consistently<br />
appropriate paragraphs chronological or logical and material<br />
maintained<br />
• development of<br />
links between paragraphs appropriately shaped for • features of<br />
material is effectively • within paragraphs / selected from, eg<br />
selected form<br />
managed across text, sections, a range of nominalisation for clearly established<br />
eg closings refer back devices support<br />
succinctness<br />
with some<br />
to openings<br />
cohesion, eg secure use<br />
• clear viewpoint<br />
adaptation to<br />
• overall direction of the of pronouns, connectives,<br />
established generally purpose<br />
text supported by clear references back to the<br />
consistent, with some • appropriate style<br />
links between<br />
text<br />
elaboration, eg some, clearly established<br />
paragraphs<br />
• links between paragraphs<br />
uneven development of to maintain<br />
/ sections generally<br />
individual voice or reader’s interest<br />
maintained across whole<br />
characterisation in role throughout<br />
text<br />
AF7 - select appropriate<br />
and effective vocabulary<br />
AF8 - use correct spelling<br />
Across a range of writing Across a range of writing<br />
• vocabulary chosen for • correct spelling of<br />
effect<br />
o grammatical function words<br />
• reasonably wide<br />
o almost all inflected words<br />
vocabulary used, though o most derivational suffixes and<br />
not always appropriately prefixes<br />
o most common content/lexical<br />
words<br />
• likely errors<br />
o occasional phonetically<br />
plausible spelling of unstressed<br />
in content words<br />
o double consonants in prefixes<br />
Level 4<br />
Across a range of<br />
writing<br />
• some variety in length,<br />
structure or subject of<br />
sentences<br />
• use of some<br />
subordinating<br />
connectives, eg if,<br />
when, because<br />
throughout the text<br />
• some variation,<br />
generally accurate, in<br />
tense and verb forms.<br />
Across a range of<br />
writing<br />
• sentences<br />
demarcated<br />
accurately throughout<br />
the text, including<br />
question<br />
• speech marks to<br />
denote speech<br />
generally accurate,<br />
with some other<br />
speech punctuation<br />
• comma used in lists<br />
and occasionally to<br />
mark clauses,<br />
although not always<br />
accurately<br />
Across a range of<br />
writing<br />
• ideas organised by<br />
clustering related<br />
points or by some time<br />
sequence<br />
• ideas are organised<br />
simply with a fitting<br />
opening and closing,<br />
sometimes linked<br />
• ideas or material<br />
generally in logical<br />
sequence but overall<br />
direction of writing not<br />
always clearly<br />
signalled<br />
Across a range of writing<br />
• paragraphs/sections help<br />
to organise contact, eg<br />
main idea usually<br />
supported or elaborated<br />
by following sentences<br />
• within paragraphs /<br />
sections limited range of<br />
connections between<br />
sentences, eg over-use<br />
of ‘also’ or pronouns<br />
• some attempts to<br />
establish simple links<br />
between<br />
paragraphs/sections not<br />
always maintained, eg<br />
firstly, next<br />
Across a range of writing Across a range of<br />
• relevant ideas and writing<br />
content chosen • main purpose of<br />
• some ideas and material writing is clear but<br />
developed in detail, eg not always<br />
descriptions elaborated consistently<br />
by adverbial and<br />
maintained<br />
expanded noun phrases<br />
• straightforward<br />
viewpoint generally<br />
established and<br />
maintained, eg writing in<br />
role or maintaining a<br />
consistent stance<br />
• main features of<br />
selected form are<br />
clear and<br />
appropriate to<br />
purpose<br />
• style generally<br />
appropriate to task,<br />
though awareness<br />
of reader not<br />
always sustained<br />
Across a range of writing Across a range of writing<br />
• some evidence of • correct spelling of<br />
deliberate vocabulary o most common grammatical<br />
choices<br />
function words, including<br />
• some expansion of<br />
general vocabulary to<br />
match topic<br />
adverbs with –ly formation<br />
o regularly formed context/lexical<br />
words, including those with<br />
multiple morphemes<br />
o most past and present tense<br />
inflections, plurals<br />
• likely errors<br />
o homophones of some common<br />
grammatical function words<br />
o occasional phonetically<br />
plausible spelling in<br />
content/lexical words<br />
BL<br />
IE<br />
Overall assessment (tick one box only) Low 4 Secure 4 High 4 Low 5 Secure 5 High 5<br />
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Writing assessment guidelines: levels 5 and 6<br />
Pupil name Class / Group Date<br />
Level 6<br />
AF5 - vary sentences for<br />
clarity, purpose and effect<br />
Across a range of writing<br />
• controlled use of a variety<br />
of simple and complex<br />
sentences to achieve<br />
purpose and contribute of<br />
overall effect<br />
• confident use of a range<br />
of sentence features to<br />
clarify or emphasise<br />
meaning, eg fronted<br />
adverbials (‘Reluctantly ,<br />
he …, Five days later, it<br />
…’), complex noun or<br />
prepositional phrases<br />
AF6 - write with<br />
technical accuracy of<br />
syntax and<br />
punctuation in<br />
phrases, clauses and<br />
sentences<br />
Across a range of<br />
writing<br />
• syntax and full range<br />
of punctuation are<br />
consistently accurate<br />
in a variety of<br />
sentence structures,<br />
with occasional<br />
errors in ambitious<br />
structures , eg only<br />
occasional comma<br />
splices, some use of<br />
semi-colons, not<br />
always accurate<br />
AF3 - organise and<br />
present whole texts<br />
effectively, sequencing<br />
and structuring<br />
information, ideas and<br />
events<br />
Across a range of writing<br />
• material is clearly<br />
controlled and<br />
sequenced, taking<br />
account of the reader’s<br />
likely reaction, eg<br />
paragraphs of different<br />
lengths, use of flashback<br />
in narrative, anticipating<br />
reader’s questions<br />
• a range of features<br />
clearly signal overall<br />
direction of the text for<br />
the reader, eg opening<br />
paragraphs that introduce<br />
themes clearly,<br />
paragraph markers, links<br />
between paragraphs<br />
AF4 - construct<br />
paragraphs and use<br />
cohesion within and<br />
between paragraphs<br />
Across a range of writing<br />
• construction of<br />
paragraphs clearly<br />
supports meaning and<br />
purpose, eg paragraph<br />
topic signalled and then<br />
developed, withholding of<br />
information for effect,<br />
thematic links between<br />
paragraphs<br />
• within paragraphs,<br />
cohesive devices<br />
contribute to emphasis<br />
and effect, eg adverbials<br />
as sentence starters<br />
AF1 - write imaginative,<br />
interesting and thoughtful<br />
texts<br />
AF2 - produce texts which are<br />
appropriate to task, reader and<br />
purpose<br />
Across a range of writing<br />
• imaginative treatment of appropriate materials, familiarity with<br />
conventions of a variety of forms, adapting them when needed to<br />
suit purpose and audience, not always successfully, eg deliberate<br />
use of inappropriate register for humour, clear emphasis on<br />
narration rather than plot<br />
• convincing, individual voice or point of view established and<br />
mostly sustained throughout, eg authoritative expert view,<br />
convincing characterisation, adopting a role<br />
• level of formality used for purpose and audience generally<br />
appropriate and a range of stylistic devices used to achieve effect<br />
not always successfully, eg controlled informality, generalisations<br />
or shifts between conversational style and more literary language<br />
AF7 - select<br />
appropriate and<br />
effective<br />
vocabulary<br />
Across a range of<br />
writing<br />
• vocabulary<br />
chosen generally<br />
appropriate to<br />
purpose and<br />
audience<br />
• range of<br />
vocabulary<br />
generally varied<br />
and often<br />
ambitious, even<br />
though choices<br />
not always apt<br />
AF8 - use correct spelling<br />
Across a range of writing<br />
• generally correct spelling<br />
throughout, including<br />
some<br />
o ambitious, uncommon<br />
words<br />
o words with complex<br />
sound/symbol<br />
relationships<br />
o words with unstressed<br />
syllables<br />
o multi-letter vowel and<br />
consonant symbols<br />
• likely errors<br />
o occasionally in complex<br />
words such as<br />
outrageous,<br />
exaggerated,<br />
announcing, parallel<br />
Level 5<br />
Across a range of writing<br />
• a variety of sentence<br />
lengths, structures and<br />
subjects provides clarity<br />
and emphasis<br />
• wider range of<br />
connectives used to<br />
clarify relationship<br />
between ideas, eg<br />
although, on the other<br />
hand, meanwhile<br />
• some features of<br />
sentence structure used<br />
to build up detail or<br />
convey shades of<br />
meaning, eg variation in<br />
word order, expansions in<br />
verb phrases<br />
Across a range of<br />
writing<br />
• full range of<br />
punctuation used<br />
accurately to<br />
demarcate<br />
sentences, including<br />
speech punctuation<br />
• syntax and<br />
punctuation within<br />
the sentence<br />
generally accurate<br />
including commas to<br />
mark clauses, though<br />
some errors occur<br />
where ambitious<br />
structures are<br />
attempted<br />
Across a range of writing<br />
• material is structured<br />
clearly, with sentences<br />
organised into<br />
appropriate paragraphs<br />
• development of material<br />
is effectively managed<br />
across text, eg closings<br />
refer back to openings<br />
• overall direction of the<br />
text supported by clear<br />
links between paragraphs<br />
Across a range of writing<br />
• paragraphs clearly<br />
structure main ideas<br />
across text to support<br />
purpose, eg clear<br />
chronological or logical<br />
links between paragraphs<br />
• within paragraphs /<br />
sections, a range of<br />
devices support<br />
cohesion, eg secure use<br />
of pronouns, connectives,<br />
references back to the<br />
text<br />
• links between paragraphs<br />
/ sections generally<br />
maintained across whole<br />
text<br />
Across a range of writing<br />
• relevant ideas and material<br />
developed with some<br />
imaginative detail<br />
• development of ideas and<br />
material appropriately<br />
shaped for selected from,<br />
eg nominalisation for<br />
succinctness<br />
• clear viewpoint established<br />
generally consistent, with<br />
some elaboration, eg some,<br />
uneven development of<br />
individual voice or<br />
characterisation in role<br />
Across a range of writing<br />
• main purpose of writing is clear<br />
and consistently maintained<br />
• features of selected form clearly<br />
established with some adaptation<br />
to purpose<br />
• appropriate style clearly<br />
established to maintain reader’s<br />
interest throughout<br />
Across a range of<br />
writing<br />
• vocabulary<br />
chosen for effect<br />
• reasonably wide<br />
vocabulary used,<br />
though not<br />
always<br />
appropriately<br />
Across a range of writing<br />
• correct spelling of<br />
o grammatical function<br />
words<br />
o almost all inflected<br />
words<br />
o most derivational<br />
suffixes and prefixes<br />
o most common<br />
content/lexical words<br />
• likely errors<br />
o occasional phonetically<br />
plausible spelling of<br />
unstressed in content<br />
words<br />
o double consonants in<br />
prefixes<br />
BL<br />
IE<br />
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Overall assessment (tick one box only) Low 5<br />
Secure 5 High 5 Low 6 Secure 6 High 6
APPENDIX A<br />
Writing Text types<br />
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APPENDIX B<br />
KS2/3 Writing Moderation 2013<br />
School:<br />
Pupil:<br />
KS2/3 Writing Moderation 2013<br />
School:<br />
Pupil:<br />
APPENDIX A<br />
Test and task level<br />
Class-based evidence level<br />
Overall Level<br />
Final moderated level<br />
Moderators’ initials:<br />
Sch. Table Mod.<br />
Date:<br />
Test and task level<br />
Class-based evidence level<br />
Overall Level<br />
Final moderated level<br />
Moderators’ initials:<br />
Sch. Table Mod.<br />
Date:<br />
KS2/3 Writing Moderation 2013<br />
School:<br />
Pupil:<br />
Test and task level<br />
Class-based evidence level<br />
Overall Level<br />
Final moderated level<br />
Moderators’ initials:<br />
Sch. Table Mod.<br />
Date:<br />
KS2/3 Writing Moderation 2013<br />
School:<br />
Pupil:<br />
Test and task level<br />
Class-based evidence level<br />
Overall Level<br />
Final moderated level<br />
Moderators’ initials:<br />
Sch. Table Mod.<br />
Date:<br />
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National Curriculum L2-6 – Speaking and listening:<br />
APPENDIX C<br />
Level 2<br />
Pupils begin to show confidence in talking and listening, particularly where the topics interest them. On<br />
occasions, they show awareness of the needs of the listener by including relevant detail. In developing<br />
and explaining their ideas they speak clearly and use a growing vocabulary. They usually listen carefully<br />
and respond with increasing appropriateness to what others say. They are beginning to be aware that in<br />
some situations a more formal vocabulary and tone of voice are used.<br />
Level 3<br />
Pupils talk and listen confidently in different contexts, exploring and communicating ideas. In discussion,<br />
they show understanding of the main points. Through relevant comments and questions, they show they<br />
have listened carefully. They begin to adapt what they say to the needs of the listener, varying the use of<br />
vocabulary and the level of detail. They are beginning to be aware of standard English and when it is<br />
used.<br />
Level 4<br />
Pupils talk and listen with confidence in an increasing range of contexts. Their talk is adapted to the<br />
purpose: developing ideas thoughtfully, describing events and conveying their opinions clearly. In<br />
discussion, they listen carefully, making contributions and asking questions that are responsive to<br />
others' ideas and views. They use appropriately some of the features of standard English vocabulary<br />
and grammar.<br />
Level 5<br />
Pupils talk and listen confidently in a wide range of contexts, including some that are of a formal nature.<br />
Their talk engages the interest of the listener as they begin to vary their expression and vocabulary. In<br />
discussion, they pay close attention to what others say, ask questions to develop ideas and make<br />
contributions that take account of others' views. They begin to use standard English in formal situations.<br />
Level 6<br />
Pupils adapt their talk to the demands of different contexts with increasing confidence. Their talk<br />
engages the interest of the listener through the variety of its vocabulary and expression. Pupils take an<br />
active part in discussion, showing understanding of ideas and sensitivity to others. They are usually<br />
fluent in their use of standard English in formal situations.<br />
Reading:<br />
Level 2<br />
Pupils' reading of simple texts shows understanding and is generally accurate. They express opinions<br />
about major events or ideas in stories, poems and non-fiction. They use more than one strategy, such as<br />
phonic, graphic, syntactic and contextual, in reading unfamiliar words and establishing meaning.<br />
Level 3<br />
Pupils read a range of texts fluently and accurately. They read independently, using strategies<br />
appropriately to establish meaning. In responding to fiction and non-fiction they show understanding of<br />
the main points and express preferences. They use their knowledge of the alphabet to locate books and<br />
find information.<br />
Level 4<br />
In responding to a range of texts, pupils show understanding of significant ideas, themes, events and<br />
characters, beginning to use inference and deduction. They refer to the text when explaining their views.<br />
They locate and use ideas and information.<br />
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Level 5<br />
Pupils show understanding of a range of texts, selecting essential points and using inference and<br />
deduction where appropriate. In their responses, they identify key features, themes and characters and<br />
select sentences, phrases and relevant information to support their views. They retrieve and collate<br />
information from a range of sources.<br />
Level 6<br />
In reading and discussing a range of texts, pupils identify different layers of meaning and comment on<br />
their significance and effect. They give personal responses to literary texts, referring to aspects of<br />
language, structure and themes in justifying their views. They summarise a range of information from<br />
different sources.<br />
Writing:<br />
Level 2<br />
Pupils' writing communicates meaning in both narrative and non-narrative forms, using appropriate and<br />
interesting vocabulary, and showing some awareness of the reader. Ideas are developed in a sequence<br />
of sentences, sometimes demarcated by capital letters and full stops. Simple, monosyllabic words are<br />
usually spelt correctly, and where there are inaccuracies the alternative is phonetically plausible. In<br />
handwriting, letters are accurately formed and consistent in size.<br />
Level 3<br />
Pupils' writing is often organised, imaginative and clear. The main features of different forms of writing<br />
are used appropriately, beginning to be adapted to different readers. Sequences of sentences extend<br />
ideas logically and words are chosen for variety and interest. The basic grammatical structure of<br />
sentences is usually correct. Spelling is usually accurate, including that of common, polysyllabic words.<br />
Punctuation to mark sentences - full stops, capital letters and question marks - is used accurately.<br />
Handwriting is joined and legible.<br />
Level 4<br />
Pupils' writing in a range of forms is lively and thoughtful. Ideas are often sustained and developed in<br />
interesting ways and organised appropriately for the purpose of the reader. Vocabulary choices are often<br />
adventurous and words are used for effect. Pupils are beginning to use grammatically complex<br />
sentences, extending meaning. Spelling, including that of polysyllabic words that conform to regular<br />
patterns, is generally accurate. Full stops, capital letters and question marks are used correctly, and<br />
pupils are beginning to use punctuation within the sentence. Handwriting style is fluent, joined and<br />
legible.<br />
Level 5<br />
Pupils' writing is varied and interesting, conveying meaning clearly in a range of forms for different<br />
readers, using a more formal style where appropriate. Vocabulary choices are imaginative and words<br />
are used precisely. Simple and complex sentences are organised into paragraphs. Words with complex<br />
regular patterns are usually spelt correctly. A range of punctuation, including commas, apostrophes and<br />
inverted commas, is usually used accurately. Handwriting is joined, clear and fluent and, where<br />
appropriate, is adapted to a range of tasks.<br />
Level 6<br />
Pupils' writing often engages and sustains the reader's interest, showing some adaptation of style and<br />
register to different forms, including using an impersonal style where appropriate. Pupils use a range of<br />
sentence structures and varied vocabulary to create effects. Spelling is generally accurate, including that<br />
of irregular words. Handwriting is neat and legible. A range of punctuation is usually used correctly to<br />
clarify meaning, and ideas are organised into paragraphs.<br />
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Mathematics:<br />
Attainment target 1: Using and applying:<br />
Level 2<br />
Pupils select the mathematics they use in some classroom activities. They discuss their work using<br />
mathematical language and are beginning to represent it using symbols and simple diagrams. They<br />
explain why an answer is correct.<br />
Level 3<br />
Pupils try different approaches and find ways of overcoming difficulties that arise when they are solving<br />
problems. They are beginning to organise their work and check results. Pupils discuss their<br />
mathematical work and are beginning to explain their thinking. They use and interpret mathematical<br />
symbols and diagrams. Pupils show that they understand a general statement by finding particular<br />
examples that match it.<br />
Level 4<br />
Pupils are developing their own strategies for solving problems and are using these strategies both in<br />
working within mathematics and in applying mathematics to practical contexts. They present information<br />
and results in a clear and organised way. They search for a solution by trying out ideas of their own.<br />
Level 5<br />
In order to carry through tasks and solve mathematical problems, pupils identify and obtain necessary<br />
information. They check their results, considering whether these are sensible. Pupils show<br />
understanding of situations by describing them mathematically using symbols, words and diagrams.<br />
They draw simple conclusions of their own and give an explanation of their reasoning.<br />
Level 6<br />
Pupils carry through substantial tasks and solve quite complex problems by independently breaking<br />
them down into smaller, more manageable tasks. They interpret, discuss and synthesise information<br />
presented in a variety of mathematical forms. Pupils' writing explains and informs their use of diagrams.<br />
Pupils are beginning to give mathematical justifications.<br />
Attainment target 2: Number & Algebra:<br />
Level 2<br />
Pupils count sets of objects reliably, and use mental recall of addition and subtraction facts to 10. They<br />
begin to understand the place value of each digit in a number and use this to order numbers up to 100.<br />
They choose the appropriate operation when solving addition and subtraction problems. They use the<br />
knowledge that subtraction is the inverse of addition. They use mental calculation strategies to solve<br />
number problems involving money and measures. They recognise sequences of numbers, including odd<br />
and even numbers.<br />
Level 3<br />
Pupils show understanding of place value in numbers up to 1000 and use this to make approximations.<br />
They begin to use decimal notation and to recognise negative numbers, in contexts such as money and<br />
temperature. Pupils use mental recall of addition and subtraction facts to 20 in solving problems<br />
involving larger numbers. They add and subtract numbers with two digits mentally and numbers with<br />
three digits using written methods. They use mental recall of the 2, 3, 4, 5 and 10 multiplication tables<br />
and derive the associated division facts. They solve whole-number problems involving multiplication or<br />
division, including those that give rise to remainders. They use simple fractions that are several parts of<br />
a whole and recognise when two simple fractions are equivalent.<br />
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Level 4<br />
Pupils use their understanding of place value to multiply and divide whole numbers by 10 or 100. In<br />
solving number problems, pupils use a range of mental methods of computation with the four operations,<br />
including mental recall of multiplication facts up to 10 x 10 and quick derivation of corresponding division<br />
facts. They use efficient written methods of addition and subtraction and of short multiplication and<br />
division. They add and subtract decimals to two places and order decimals to three places. In solving<br />
problems with or without a calculator, pupils check the reasonableness of their results by reference to<br />
their knowledge of the context or to the size of the numbers. They recognise approximate proportions of<br />
a whole and use simple fractions and percentages to describe these. Pupils recognise and describe<br />
number patterns, and relationships including multiple, factor and square. They begin to use simple<br />
formulae expressed in words. Pupils use and interpret coordinates in the first quadrant.<br />
Level 5<br />
Pupils use their understanding of place value to multiply and divide whole numbers and decimals by 10,<br />
100 and 1000. They order, add and subtract negative numbers in context. They use all four operations<br />
with decimals to two places. They reduce a fraction to its simplest form by cancelling common factors<br />
and solve simple problems involving ratio and direct proportion. They calculate fractional or percentage<br />
parts of quantities and measurements, using a calculator where appropriate. Pupils understand and use<br />
an appropriate non-calculator method for solving problems that involve multiplying and dividing any<br />
three-digit number by any two-digit number. They check their solutions by applying inverse operations or<br />
estimating using approximations. They construct, express in symbolic form, and use simple formulae<br />
involving one or two operations. They use brackets appropriately. Pupils use and interpret coordinates in<br />
all four quadrants.<br />
Level 6<br />
Pupils order and approximate decimals when solving numerical problems and equations [for example,<br />
x3 + x = 20], using trial and improvement methods. Pupils are aware of which number to consider as 100<br />
per cent, or a whole, in problems involving comparisons, and use this to evaluate one number as a<br />
fraction or percentage of another. They understand and use the equivalences between fractions,<br />
decimals and percentages, and calculate using ratios in appropriate situations. They add and subtract<br />
fractions by writing them with a common denominator. When exploring number sequences, pupils find<br />
and describe in words the rule for the next term or nth term of a sequence where the rule is linear. They<br />
formulate and solve linear equations with whole-number coefficients. They represent mappings<br />
expressed algebraically, and use Cartesian coordinates for graphical representation interpreting general<br />
features.<br />
Attainment target 3: Shape, space and measure:<br />
Level 2<br />
Pupils use mathematical names for common 3D and 2D shapes and describe their properties, including<br />
numbers of sides and corners. They distinguish between straight and turning movements, understand<br />
angle as a measurement of turn, and recognise right angles in turns. They begin to use everyday nonstandard<br />
and standard units to measure length and mass.<br />
Level 3<br />
Pupils classify 3D and 2D shapes in various ways using mathematical properties such as reflective<br />
symmetry for 2D shapes. They use non-standard units, standard metric units of length, capacity and<br />
mass, and standard units of time, in a range of contexts.<br />
Level 4<br />
Pupils make 3D mathematical models by linking given faces or edges, draw common 2D shapes in<br />
different orientations on grids. They reflect simple shapes in a mirror line. They choose and use<br />
appropriate units and instruments, interpreting, with appropriate accuracy, numbers on a range of<br />
measuring instruments. They find perimeters of simple shapes and find areas by counting squares.<br />
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Level 5<br />
When constructing models and when drawing or using shapes, pupils measure and draw angles to the<br />
nearest degree, and use language associated with angle. Pupils know the angle sum of a triangle and<br />
that of angles at a point. They identify all the symmetries of 2D shapes. They know the rough metric<br />
equivalents of imperial units still in daily use and convert one metric unit to another. They make sensible<br />
estimates of a range of measures in relation to everyday situations. Pupils understand and use the<br />
formula for the area of a rectangle.<br />
Level 6<br />
Pupils recognise and use common 2D representations of 3D objects. They know and use the properties<br />
of quadrilaterals in classifying different types of quadrilateral. They solve problems using angle and<br />
symmetry properties of polygons and angle properties of intersecting and parallel lines, and explain<br />
these properties. They devise instructions for a computer to generate and transform shapes and paths.<br />
They understand and use appropriate formulae for finding circumferences and areas of circles, areas of<br />
plane rectilinear figures and volumes of cuboids when solving problems. They enlarge shapes by a<br />
positive whole-number scale factor.<br />
Attainment target 4: Handling data:<br />
Level 2<br />
Pupils sort objects and classify them using more than one criterion. When they have gathered<br />
information, pupils record results in simple lists, tables and block graphs, in order to communicate their<br />
findings.<br />
Level 3<br />
Pupils extract and interpret information presented in simple tables and lists. They construct bar charts<br />
and pictograms, where the symbol represents a group of units, to communicate information they have<br />
gathered, and they interpret information presented to them in these forms.<br />
Level 4<br />
Pupils collect discrete data and record them using a frequency table. They understand and use the<br />
mode and range to describe sets of data. They group data, where appropriate, in equal class intervals,<br />
represent collected data in frequency diagrams and interpret such diagrams. They construct and<br />
interpret simple line graphs.<br />
Level 5<br />
Pupils understand and use the mean of discrete data. They compare two simple distributions, using the<br />
range and one of the mode, median or mean. They interpret graphs and diagrams, including pie charts,<br />
and draw conclusions. They understand and use the probability scale from 0 to 1. Pupils find and justify<br />
probabilities, and approximations to these, by selecting and using methods based on equally likely<br />
outcomes and experimental evidence, as appropriate. They understand that different outcomes may<br />
result from repeating an experiment.<br />
Level 6<br />
Pupils collect and record continuous data, choosing appropriate equal class intervals over a sensible<br />
range to create frequency tables. They construct and interpret frequency diagrams. They construct pie<br />
charts. Pupils draw conclusions from scatter diagrams, and have a basic understanding of correlation.<br />
When dealing with a combination of two experiments, pupils identify all the outcomes, using<br />
diagrammatic, tabular or other forms of communication. In solving problems, they use their knowledge<br />
that the total probability of all the mutually exclusive outcomes of an experiment is 1.<br />
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Science:<br />
Attainment target 1: Scientific enquiry:<br />
Level 2<br />
Pupils respond to suggestions about how to find things out and, with help, make their own suggestions<br />
about how to collect data to answer questions. They use simple texts, with help, to find information. They<br />
use simple equipment provided and make observations related to their task. They observe and compare<br />
objects, living things and events. They describe their observations using scientific vocabulary and record<br />
them, using simple tables when appropriate. They say whether what happened was what they expected.<br />
Level 3<br />
Pupils respond to suggestions and put forward their own ideas about how to find the answer to a<br />
question. They recognise why it is important to collect data to answer questions. They use simple texts<br />
to find information. They make relevant observations and measure quantities, such as length or mass,<br />
using a range of simple equipment. Where appropriate, they carry out a fair test with some help,<br />
recognising and explaining why it is fair. They record their observations in a variety of ways. They<br />
provide explanations for observations and for simple patterns in recorded measurements. They<br />
communicate in a scientific way what they have found out and suggest improvements in their work.<br />
Level 4<br />
Pupils recognise that scientific ideas are based on evidence. In their own investigative work, they decide<br />
on an appropriate approach [for example, using a fair test] to answer a question. Where appropriate,<br />
they describe, or show in the way they perform their task, how to vary one factor while keeping others<br />
the same. Where appropriate, they make predictions. They select information from sources provided for<br />
them. They select suitable equipment and make a series of observations and measurements that are<br />
adequate for the task. They record their observations, comparisons and measurements using tables and<br />
bar charts. They begin to plot points to form simple graphs, and use these graphs to point out and<br />
interpret patterns in their data. They begin to relate their conclusions to these patterns and to scientific<br />
knowledge and understanding, and to communicate them with appropriate scientific language. They<br />
suggest improvements in their work, giving reasons.<br />
Level 5<br />
Pupils describe how experimental evidence and creative thinking have been combined to provide a<br />
scientific explanation [for example, Jenner's work on vaccination at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2, Lavoisier's work on<br />
burning at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3]. When they try to answer a scientific question, they identify an appropriate<br />
approach. They select from a range of sources of information. When the investigation involves a fair test,<br />
they identify key factors to be considered. Where appropriate, they make predictions based on their<br />
scientific knowledge and understanding. They select apparatus for a range of tasks and plan to use it<br />
effectively. They make a series of observations, comparisons or measurements with precision<br />
appropriate to the task. They begin to repeat observations and measurements and to offer simple<br />
explanations for any differences they encounter. They record observations and measurements<br />
systematically and, where appropriate, present data as line graphs. They draw conclusions that are<br />
consistent with the evidence and begin to relate these to scientific knowledge and understanding. They<br />
make practical suggestions about how their working methods could be improved. They use appropriate<br />
scientific language and conventions to communicate quantitative and qualitative data.<br />
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Level 6<br />
Pupils describe evidence for some accepted scientific ideas and explain how the interpretation of<br />
evidence by scientists leads to the development and acceptance of new ideas. In their own investigative<br />
work, they use scientific knowledge and understanding to identify an appropriate approach. They select<br />
and use sources of information effectively. They make enough measurements, comparisons and<br />
observations for the task. They measure a variety of quantities with precision, using instruments with<br />
fine-scale divisions. They choose scales for graphs and diagrams that enable them to show data and<br />
features effectively. They identify measurements and observations that do not fit the main pattern<br />
shown. They draw conclusions that are consistent with the evidence and use scientific knowledge and<br />
understanding to explain them. They make reasoned suggestions about how their working methods<br />
could be improved. They select and use appropriate methods for communicating qualitative and<br />
quantitative data using scientific language and conventions.<br />
Attainment target 2: Life processes and living things:<br />
Level 2<br />
Pupils use their knowledge about living things to describe the basic conditions [for example, a supply of<br />
food, water, air, light] that animals and plants need in order to survive. They recognise that living things<br />
grow and reproduce. They sort living things into groups, using simple features. They describe the basis<br />
for their groupings [for example, number of legs, shape of leaf]. They recognise that different living<br />
things are found in different places [for example, ponds, woods].<br />
Level 3<br />
Pupils use their knowledge and understanding of basic life processes [for example, growth,<br />
reproduction] when they describe differences between living and nonliving things. They provide simple<br />
explanations for changes in living things [for example, diet affecting the health of humans or other<br />
animals, lack of light or water altering plant growth]. They identify ways in which an animal is suited to its<br />
environment [for example, a fish having fins to help it swim].<br />
Level 4<br />
Pupils demonstrate knowledge and understanding of life processes and living things drawn from the <strong>Key</strong><br />
<strong>Stage</strong> 2 or <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3 programme of study. They use scientific names for some major organs of body<br />
systems [for example, the heart at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2, the stomach at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3] and identify the position of<br />
these organs in the human body. They identify organs [for example, stamen at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2, stigma, root<br />
hairs at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3] of different plants they observe. They use keys based on observable external<br />
features to help them to identify and group living things systematically. They recognise that feeding<br />
relationships exist between plants and animals in a habitat, and describe these relationships using food<br />
chains and terms [for example, predator and prey].<br />
Level 5<br />
Pupils demonstrate an increasing knowledge and understanding of life processes and living things<br />
drawn from the <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 or <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3 programme of study. They describe the main functions of<br />
organs of the human body [for example, the heart at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2, stomach at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3], and of the<br />
plant [for example, the stamen at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2, root hairs at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3]. They explain how these<br />
functions are essential to the organism. They describe the main stages of the life cycles of humans and<br />
flowering plants and point out similarities. They recognise that there is a great variety of living things and<br />
understand the importance of classification. They explain that different organisms are found in different<br />
habitats because of differences in environmental factors [for example, the availability of light or water].<br />
Level 6<br />
Pupils use knowledge and understanding drawn from the <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3 programme of study to describe<br />
and explain life processes and features of living things. They use appropriate scientific terminology when<br />
they describe life processes [for example, respiration, photosynthesis] in animals and plants. They<br />
distinguish between related processes [for example, pollination, fertilisation]. They describe simple cell<br />
structure and identify differences between simple animal and plant cells. They describe some of the<br />
causes of variation between living things. They explain that the distribution and abundance of organisms<br />
in habitats are affected by environmental factors [for example, the availability of light or water].<br />
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Attainment target 3: Materials and their properties:<br />
Level 2<br />
Pupils identify a range of common materials and know about some of their properties. They describe<br />
similarities and differences between materials. They sort materials into groups and describe the basis for<br />
their groupings in everyday terms [for example, shininess, hardness, smoothness]. They describe ways<br />
in which some materials are changed by heating or cooling or by processes such as bending or<br />
stretching.<br />
Level 3<br />
Pupils use their knowledge and understanding of materials when they describe a variety of ways of<br />
sorting them into groups according to their properties. They explain simply why some materials are<br />
particularly suitable for specific purposes [for example, glass for windows, copper for electrical cables].<br />
They recognise that some changes [for example, the freezing of water] can be reversed and some [for<br />
example, the baking of clay] cannot, and they classify changes in this way.<br />
Level 4<br />
Pupils demonstrate knowledge and understanding of materials and their properties drawn from the <strong>Key</strong><br />
<strong>Stage</strong> 2 or <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3 programme of study. They describe differences between the properties of<br />
different materials and explain how these differences are used to classify substances [for example, as<br />
solids, liquids, gases at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2, as acids, alkalis at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3]. They describe some methods [for<br />
example, filtration, distillation] that are used to separate simple mixtures. They use scientific terms [for<br />
example, evaporation, condensation] to describe changes. They use knowledge about some reversible<br />
and irreversible changes to make simple predictions about whether other changes are reversible or not.<br />
Level 5<br />
Pupils demonstrate an increasing knowledge and understanding of materials and their properties drawn<br />
from the <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 or <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3 programme of study. They describe some metallic properties [for<br />
example, good electrical conductivity] and use these properties to distinguish metals from other solids.<br />
They identify a range of contexts in which changes [for example, evaporation, condensation] take place.<br />
They use knowledge about how a specific mixture [for example, salt and water, sand and water] can be<br />
separated to suggest ways in which other similar mixtures might be separated.<br />
Level 6<br />
Pupils use knowledge and understanding of the nature and behaviour of materials drawn from the <strong>Key</strong><br />
<strong>Stage</strong> 3 programme of study to describe chemical and physical changes, and how new materials can be<br />
made. They recognise that matter is made up of particles, and describe differences between the<br />
arrangement and movement of particles in solids, liquids and gases. They identify and describe<br />
similarities between some chemical reactions [for example, the reactions of acids with metals, the<br />
reactions of a variety of substances with oxygen]. They use word equations to summarise simple<br />
reactions. They relate changes of state to energy transfers in a range of contexts [for example, the<br />
formation of igneous rocks].<br />
Attainment target 4: Physical processes:<br />
Level 2<br />
Pupils know about a range of physical phenomena and recognise and describe similarities and<br />
differences associated with them. They compare the way in which devices [for example, bulbs] work in<br />
different electrical circuits. They compare the brightness or colour of lights, and the loudness or pitch of<br />
sounds. They compare the movement of different objects in terms of speed or direction.<br />
Level 3<br />
Pupils use their knowledge and understanding of physical phenomena to link cause and effect in simple<br />
explanations [for example, a bulb failing to light because of a break in an electrical circuit, the direction<br />
or speed of movement of an object changing because of a push or a pull]. They begin to make simple<br />
generalisations about physical phenomena [for example, explaining that sounds they hear become<br />
fainter the further they are from the source].<br />
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Level 4<br />
Pupils demonstrate knowledge and understanding of physical processes drawn from the <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 or<br />
<strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3 programme of study. They describe and explain physical phenomena [for example, how a<br />
particular device may be connected to work in an electrical circuit, how the apparent position of the Sun<br />
changes over the course of a day]. They make generalisations about physical phenomena [for example,<br />
motion is affected by forces, including gravitational attraction, magnetic attraction and friction]. They use<br />
physical ideas to explain simple phenomena [for example, the formation of shadows, sounds being<br />
heard through a variety of materials].<br />
Level 5<br />
Pupils demonstrate knowledge and understanding of physical processes drawn from the <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 or<br />
<strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3 programme of study. They use ideas to explain how to make a range of changes [for<br />
example, altering the current in a circuit, altering the pitch or loudness of a sound]. They use some<br />
abstract ideas in descriptions of familiar phenomena [for example, objects are seen when light from<br />
them enters the eye at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2, forces are balanced when an object is stationary at <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3].<br />
They use simple models to explain effects that are caused by the movement of the Earth [for example,<br />
the length of a day or year].<br />
Level 6<br />
Pupils use and apply knowledge and understanding of physical processes drawn from the <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 3<br />
programme of study. They use abstract ideas in some descriptions and explanations [for example,<br />
electric current as a way of transferring energy, the sum of several forces determining changes in the<br />
direction or the speed of movement of an object, wind and waves as energy resources available for use].<br />
They recognise, and can give examples of, the wide application of many physical concepts [for example,<br />
the transfer of energy by light, sound or electricity, the refraction and dispersion of light]. They give<br />
explanations of phenomena in which a number of factors have to be considered [for example, the<br />
relative brightness of planets and stars].<br />
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Suggested tests for applying for Additional Time 2013<br />
APPENDIX D<br />
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APPENDIX E<br />
GUIDANCE FOR NOTIFICATION OF A PUPIL WORKING AT THE LEVEL OF THE KEY STAGE 2<br />
TASKS, OR TESTS, BUT UNABLE TO ACCESS THEM<br />
Introduction<br />
The form Notification of a pupil working at the level of the tests but unable to access them is provided to assist<br />
schools in recording details for such pupils. Schools may prefer to use their own format or one provided by their<br />
local authority (LA).<br />
Please note, in most cases where pupils are not able to access an individual task or test their teacher will still be<br />
able to make an overall teacher assessment based on the work of that pupil throughout the year. This form is for<br />
those pupils. For pupils who need to be disapplied from teacher assessment in one or more attainment targets you<br />
should use the form Notification of disapplication from teacher assessment at key stage 2.<br />
Before completing the form<br />
Please ensure that you:<br />
• refer to the appropriate section in the 2013 <strong>Key</strong> <strong>Stage</strong> 2 Assessment and Reporting Arrangements booklet<br />
and Access Arrangements booklet.<br />
• discuss the arrangements with your LA assessment co-ordinator.<br />
Important note<br />
• You do NOT need to complete a form for pupils working at W. Such pupils should be recorded as W in<br />
your school’s management information system<br />
Guidance<br />
Provide a brief explanation setting out the reasons why this pupil will not be able to access some or all of the key<br />
stage tasks and/or tests in 2013. The explanation should:<br />
• include a brief description of the pupil’s present circumstances<br />
• refer to any action already taken, or special support already offered, and to any procedures the school has<br />
used to analyse and monitor the pupil’s needs, or if this information is documented elsewhere, indicate<br />
where it can be found<br />
• indicate whether these circumstances are likely to be long term or short term<br />
• refer to discussions with the pupil’s teachers and parents or carers<br />
• where appropriate, refer to any consultations with educational psychologists, medical officers or other<br />
specialist staff.<br />
Pupils who have been disapplied from teacher assessment should be recorded as D for the appropriate attainment<br />
targets in your school’s management information system.<br />
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National curriculum assessment 2013<br />
NOTIFICATION OF A PUPIL WORKING AT THE LEVEL OF THE KEY STAGE 2 TESTS, BUT UNABLE TO<br />
ACCESS THEM<br />
Please ensure that you have read the guidance before completing this form<br />
School name<br />
LA/DFE<br />
number<br />
/<br />
Pupil’s surname<br />
Pupil’s first name<br />
Reason for disapplication<br />
Headteacher’s signature:<br />
Date: / /<br />
Copy to:<br />
Pupil’s parents/carers<br />
Chair of school’s Governing Body<br />
LA Assessment Co-ordinator<br />
Pupil’s educational record<br />
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APPENDIX F<br />
Dates and Venues of Writing Moderation Meetings in 2013<br />
Date Venue District 9.00 – 12.00<br />
Y2 and Y3<br />
teachers<br />
1.00 – 4.00<br />
Y6 and Y7<br />
teachers<br />
20 May 2013 <strong>Kent</strong> Life Maidstone SCH 13/362 SCH 13/374<br />
21 May 2013 <strong>Kent</strong> Event Centre Swale SCH 13/363 SCH 13/375<br />
22 May 2013 The Hythe Imperial Shepway SCH 13/364 SCH 13/376<br />
23 May 2013 The David Lloyd Centre Dartford SCH 13/365 SCH 13/377<br />
4 June 2013 Aldingtno Eco Centre Ashford SCH 13/366 SCH 13/378<br />
5 June 2013 The Thistle Hotel, Brands<br />
Hatch<br />
Gravesham SCH 13/367 SCH 13/379<br />
6 June 2013 Hadlow Manor Sevenoaks SCH 13/368 SCH 13/380<br />
10 June 2013 <strong>Kent</strong> Life Tonbridge & Malling SCH 13/369 SCH 13/381<br />
11 June 2013 St Augustine’s Ltd. Thanet SCH 13/370 SCH 13/382<br />
12 June 2013 The Ark Christian Centre Dover SCH 13/371 SCH 13/383<br />
13 June 2013 The Mercure Hotel Tunbridge Wells SCH 13/372 SCH 13/384<br />
14 June 2013 The Woodside Centre Canterbury SCH 13/373 SCH 13/385<br />
25 June 2013 Oxford Road, Maidstone Postal / appeals moderation<br />
Dates and Venues P Scale County Moderation Meetings in 2013:<br />
Date Code Times Venue<br />
23 April 2013 SCH 13/356 2:00 – 4:30 Five Acre Wood School<br />
24 April 2013 SCH 13/357 2:00 – 4:30 Ifield Smile Centre<br />
25 April 2013 SCH 13/358 2:00 – 4:30 St Julian’s Club<br />
30 April 2013 SCH 13/359 2:00 – 4:30 Ashford Business Hub<br />
1 May 2013 SCH 13/360 2:00 – 4:30 Aspen, Dover<br />
2 May 2013 SCH 13/361 2:00 – 4:30 MIDAS Centre, Meadowfield School<br />
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