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When we became <strong>Buckinghamshire</strong><br />

<strong>New</strong> <strong>University</strong> in October 2007, a<br />

new corporate identity was drawn up<br />

to reflect the <strong>University</strong>’s vibrancy<br />

and dynamism. This should be used<br />

consistently throughout our written<br />

and online publications and<br />

materials.<br />

Our writing <strong>style</strong> should also reflect<br />

the ethos of the <strong>University</strong>. We need<br />

to write in a way that engages the<br />

reader and gives the best<br />

impression. The reader should be<br />

able to understand a document at<br />

first reading and in the same sense<br />

that the writer meant it to be<br />

understood.<br />

introduction<br />

General writing tips<br />

Aim to be as clear and concise as possible. Using plain English does not mean<br />

you are dumbing down your text, rather that you are simply delivering your<br />

message in the clearest way possible. This will help you create the greatest<br />

impact. Remember that you are writing for a mixed audience – English may not be<br />

the first language of many of your readers.<br />

Keep it positive<br />

Our courses are definitely not traditional. They are designed to ensure that<br />

graduates hit the ground running when they embark on their working lives. Try and<br />

reflect this when writing about the <strong>University</strong> and its courses.<br />

Aim to attract your reader’s attention from the beginning. Keep sentences short.<br />

When writing for the web in particular, break your text into paragraphs two or<br />

three sentences long. Be direct, and when you need to impart more detailed<br />

information do so clearly and without using jargon.<br />

Example:<br />

Foundation degrees are exciting, vocational degrees, designed to give you a<br />

flying start towards your chosen career. If you’re already in work, they can<br />

provide you with extra skills to enhance your promotion prospects. Once you<br />

achieve the award, you’re able to add the letters FDA or FDSc after your<br />

name. You can also progress to an honours degree or to professional<br />

qualifications.<br />

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Keep it as natural as possible<br />

Writing he or she, he/she or (s)he can look clumsy. Use ‘they’ to cover both<br />

genders, just as you would if you were speaking.<br />

Example:<br />

Before a student comes to an interview, they [not he or she] may find it<br />

helpful to visit our website for directions.<br />

introduction<br />

Examples of poor written English<br />

1 "I would not ever want to say<br />

there are not people on our<br />

campus that at first in the<br />

classroom are not hard to<br />

understand, at least until<br />

students get used to them,"<br />

Watkins said.<br />

Keep it friendly<br />

It is quite acceptable to use the second person, especially when communicating<br />

with students. Call readers you, even if there are lots of them. For the <strong>University</strong> or<br />

your directorate, use we.<br />

Example:<br />

We have an exciting new portfolio of courses starting in January. You will find<br />

more details on our website.<br />

When you are writing formal reports or documents, you may need to be more<br />

formal, and use the <strong>University</strong> or the Dean, for example, rather than we.<br />

2 Operationally, teaching<br />

effectiveness is measured by<br />

assessing the levels of<br />

agreement between the<br />

perceptions of instructors and<br />

students on the rated ability of<br />

specific instructional behaviour<br />

attributes which were employed<br />

during course instruction.<br />

3 In our endeavour to ensure<br />

guest safety at all times, can<br />

visitors please note that fire bell<br />

testing is carried out every<br />

Monday at 9.30am.<br />

See page 41 for suggested<br />

improvements.<br />

<strong>Buckinghamshire</strong> <strong>New</strong> <strong>University</strong> Style Guide 3


Examples of poor written English<br />

4 Reclamation of the site will involve<br />

the identification and remediation<br />

of any pollution and contamination<br />

which may be present on the site<br />

together with the removal or<br />

treatment of hazardous features<br />

such as unstable ground and<br />

mineshafts etc.<br />

5 The department is required to<br />

make savings of £13m next year<br />

and this objective will be achieved<br />

by efficiency savings. An<br />

evaluation of cash collection<br />

methods and procedures and<br />

identification of potential savings<br />

in this area have been conducted<br />

by senior management and<br />

determined to be part of this<br />

overall process.<br />

See page 41 for suggested<br />

improvements.<br />

introduction<br />

16 tips on writing plain English<br />

1 Consider carefully your purpose and message before starting to write – clear<br />

writing and clear thinking go hand in hand.<br />

2 Wear the reader’s shoes – how would you feel in their position?<br />

3 Plan a structure that will help the reader, perhaps with headings, bullet-points,<br />

and a pithy summary of key points at the start.<br />

4 In letters and emails, tell the reader clearly, concisely and courteously what has<br />

happened, how the situation stands, and what they can expect next.<br />

5 Match your writing to the needs and knowledge of the readers – some of them<br />

may be baffled by official jargon and procedures.<br />

6 Write sentences that average 15–20 words.<br />

7 Keep the word order simple. In most sentences, put the ‘doer’ early and follow it<br />

with an active-voice verb.<br />

8 Take pride in using everyday English, correct grammar and accurate punctuation.<br />

9 Where appropriate, use I, we and you to make the writing more personal.<br />

10 Maintain the flow by starting some of your sentences with connectors like<br />

however and so.<br />

11 Use commands when writing instructions.<br />

12 Cut unnecessary words.<br />

13 Check that the facts and judgement are right. Nothing compensates for<br />

inaccuracy or illogicality.<br />

14 Ask someone else to read your documents before they are issued.<br />

15 Apply common sense to all guidance about writing.<br />

16 If you are asking someone to do something, put your request towards the start of<br />

the email or document.<br />

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Accessibility and dyslexia<br />

When preparing support material for students with accessibility issues (for<br />

example dyslexia) here are some points that you should bear in mind:<br />

• text should be left aligned<br />

• use Arial at 12 point or greater, wherever possible<br />

• keep a clear uncluttered layout<br />

• ensure words are not split between lines<br />

• avoid large blocks of capital letters<br />

• avoid italics<br />

• avoid underlining words<br />

• keep the use of punctuation such as commas, semi-colons and full stops<br />

to a minimum<br />

• make sure text is not placed over the top of an image or texture<br />

• ensure good contrast between the text and background<br />

• do not convey information solely through the use of images, diagrams or colour<br />

• maintain adequate spacing.<br />

All publications should contain the following statement:<br />

This publication is available in alternative formats if required.<br />

introduction<br />

Examples of poor written English<br />

6 LSC and HEFCE announced<br />

today that they were launching a<br />

joint FE/HE funding initiative.<br />

One of the fundamental building<br />

blocks of this scheme is a joined<br />

up approach to creating a ladder<br />

of educational opportunity for<br />

learners of all ages.<br />

7 In order to take ownership of the<br />

problem and impact the<br />

situation, going forward, I would<br />

like to encourage dialogue<br />

between all my colleagues and<br />

myself. Bring along to my office<br />

your shopping lists for action.<br />

See page 41 for suggested<br />

improvements.<br />

Don’t forget to ask whether participants have special requirements (physical or<br />

dietary) when you are organising a meeting or event.<br />

<strong>Buckinghamshire</strong> <strong>New</strong> <strong>University</strong> Style Guide 5


A<br />

A words<br />

accommodation<br />

advice (noun), to advise (verb)<br />

adviser (not advisor)<br />

affect (make a difference to)<br />

ageing (not aging)<br />

A-level<br />

all right (your answers are all right)<br />

alright (are you alright?)<br />

alumni (plural)<br />

alumnus/alumna (singular)<br />

alumnae (plural female)<br />

amend, amendment<br />

among, not amongst<br />

analyse<br />

AS-level<br />

audio-visual<br />

autumn, spring, summer, winter<br />

A–Z <strong>guide</strong><br />

Accents<br />

Only use accents on foreign words, and don’t do so if the word has been<br />

anglicised, eg cafe, fiance.<br />

Exceptions:<br />

Précis<br />

Exposé (to distinguish from expose)<br />

To insert accents in Word documents go to the Insert menu and choose Symbol.<br />

Acronyms and abbreviations<br />

Peppering your documents with capitals and abbreviations can be confusing to<br />

your readers. Don’t assume everyone knows what the initials stand for – unless<br />

the organisation concerned is commonly referred to in its abbreviated form, for<br />

example BBC, RAC.<br />

Write out the full name the first time you use it, followed by the shortened version<br />

in brackets. After that, just use the abbreviation. (If you only use the term once,<br />

then you don’t need to add the abbreviation in brackets unless it is a useful piece<br />

of information.)<br />

Example:<br />

The School of Design, Craft & Visual Arts (DCVA) offers a wide range of<br />

courses in the creative industries. DCVA offers an exciting range of vocational<br />

programmes.<br />

Note: When using initials, plurals do not take an apostrophe and the ‘s’ is lower<br />

case, eg LAs.<br />

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Addresses<br />

When writing addresses, avoid unnecessary punctuation. The address should not<br />

contain:<br />

• full stops at the end of addresses<br />

• a comma between the number and the street name<br />

• abbreviated forms of Road, Street or Avenue<br />

• a comma between the town/county and postcode.<br />

The postcode should appear after the town or city on the next line. Both<br />

<strong>Buckinghamshire</strong> and Bucks are acceptable.<br />

Example:<br />

Strategic Marketing & Communications Directorate<br />

<strong>Buckinghamshire</strong> <strong>New</strong> <strong>University</strong><br />

Queen Alexandra Road<br />

High Wycombe<br />

Bucks<br />

HP11 2JZ<br />

Occasional variations may be permitted, in order to comply with computer<br />

systems already in use.<br />

A–Z <strong>guide</strong><br />

Awards<br />

A-level<br />

BA (Hons)<br />

BEng (Hons)<br />

BSc (Hons)<br />

FDA<br />

FDSc<br />

GCSE<br />

MA<br />

MPhil<br />

PGCert<br />

PGCE<br />

PGDip<br />

PhD<br />

A<br />

American English<br />

Beware American usage of words and spelling, for instance, capitalizing (rather<br />

than the English capitalising), or gum (glue), trunk (boot of a car), color, favorite,<br />

theater etc. You can change the default language settings in Word to UK English.<br />

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A<br />

Abbreviations<br />

ext<br />

fax<br />

tel<br />

A–Z <strong>guide</strong><br />

Ampersand<br />

The ampersand (&) is used in our faculty, school and directorate titles.<br />

Examples:<br />

Faculty of Design, Media & Management.<br />

Welcome to the School of Advanced & Continuing Practice, which is located<br />

in the Faculty of Society & Health.<br />

Apostrophes<br />

Apostrophes have a variety of uses:<br />

• omissive - when you’re contracting two words, eg: don’t, shouldn’t, couldn’t<br />

• when you are describing a period of time, eg: two years’ experience, four<br />

months’ work, 48 hours’ training<br />

• possessive - when something belongs to somebody/thing, eg: Judith’s book,<br />

the <strong>University</strong>’s mission, the world’s resources<br />

• words and names ending in s also take a singular s eg: James’s, Bucks’s<br />

• plural nouns take a singular apostrophe, eg: children’s games, old folk’s home.<br />

Don’t use an apostrophe to form a plural with numbers and letters:<br />

• 1990s not 1990’s<br />

• three As at A-level<br />

• CDs (not CD’s)<br />

Don’t use an apostrophe in the contraction its (belonging to it) eg: Its CD drive is<br />

broken.<br />

Audience<br />

Think about who you are writing for. Most of our writing <strong>style</strong> <strong>guide</strong>lines will apply<br />

to the majority of audiences, but you may need to change the tone for different<br />

audiences and in different circumstances, for instance if you are writing a formal<br />

letter or academic paper.<br />

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Branding<br />

Our new corporate identity is designed to reflect not only our new name, but what<br />

we stand for as an institution. More information can be found in our Brand<br />

Guidelines or at bucks.ac.uk/branding. Please note that you must read the Brand<br />

Guidelines before downloading <strong>University</strong> logos, and that all usage must be<br />

approved by the Strategic Marketing & Communications Directorate. Incorrect<br />

usage will detract from the strength of the branding.<br />

<strong>Buckinghamshire</strong> <strong>New</strong> <strong>University</strong><br />

The full name should be used on formal documents, such as certificates,<br />

contracts, transcripts, letters and governing body materials. We use the shorter<br />

form Bucks <strong>New</strong> <strong>University</strong> as an alternative in some circumstances, for instance<br />

in marketing materials.<br />

A–Z <strong>guide</strong><br />

B words<br />

BA (Hons)<br />

bachelor’s degree<br />

benefit, benefited, benefiting<br />

BEng (Hons)<br />

BSc (Hons)<br />

budgeted<br />

B<br />

‘Bucks’ is used as the abbreviated form of our name provided there is no<br />

likelihood of confusion with the county name. BNU is not an acceptable<br />

abbreviation of the <strong>University</strong> name; we use bucks.ac.uk as our web address, and<br />

use bucks in our email addresses. Use the full name in the first instance, followed<br />

by a shorter form.<br />

Example:<br />

<strong>Buckinghamshire</strong> <strong>New</strong> <strong>University</strong> (Bucks) has been ranked number one in an<br />

index designed to measure the quality of life of academic staff at 121 higher<br />

education institutions in the UK.<br />

Bucks Students’ Union<br />

This is the full name of our Students’ Union.<br />

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B<br />

A–Z <strong>guide</strong><br />

Bullet points (see also lists, presentations and numbering of paragraphs)<br />

Where the list consists of single words or brief phrases that relate to the previous<br />

sentence all initial letters should be lower case. Punctuate as follows:<br />

Example:<br />

The open day programme includes:<br />

• tours of the <strong>University</strong><br />

• visits to halls of residence<br />

• talks on finance<br />

• visits to academic departments.<br />

Where the list consists of short sentences or phrases related to the previous<br />

sentence initial letters should be lower case. Punctuate as follows:<br />

Example:<br />

The course was designed to:<br />

• introduce students to basic concepts;<br />

• familiarise students with the terminology;<br />

• provide basic relevant statistics.<br />

Where the list consists of longer, complete sentences, punctuate as for normal<br />

sentences:<br />

Example:<br />

Here’s some information you may find of interest:<br />

• Bucks had nearly 7,000 students on all levels of study in 2007-08, including<br />

5,224 students on undergraduate courses.<br />

• We welcome significant numbers of mature students, with more than a third<br />

of the population being over the age of 25.<br />

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Bullet points (continued)<br />

Bullet points can help to break up text and make it easier to read and digest.<br />

Solid round bullet points should be used. If you need to use secondary bullet<br />

points, you should use open round bullet points.<br />

When using bullet points in presentations, remember:<br />

• the bullet point should be a short summary of a key point, not an entire<br />

sentence;<br />

• bullet points should follow a consistent <strong>style</strong>;<br />

• as a <strong>guide</strong>line, slides should not have more than six bullet points and each<br />

bullet should be no more than six words;<br />

• bullet points alone can be boring – add pictures, diagrams, audio clips or videos.<br />

Campuses<br />

From September 2009, we have two distinct campuses:<br />

• High Wycombe Campus is a short walk from the bus and train stations in High<br />

Wycombe on Queen Alexandra Road.<br />

• Our Uxbridge Campus allows Nursing students to be close to the clinical areas<br />

where they undertake their placements.<br />

Example:<br />

There will be a shuttle bus service from our High Wycombe Campus to the<br />

student accommodation in Hughenden.<br />

A–Z <strong>guide</strong><br />

C words<br />

cafe<br />

capitalise, capitalising<br />

CD-ROM<br />

childcare<br />

competence, competences<br />

(National Vocational<br />

Qualifications; functional skills)<br />

competency, competencies<br />

(behavioural trait; functional and<br />

behavioural skills combined)<br />

complement (that which<br />

completes or fills up)<br />

compliment (expression of<br />

admiration)<br />

B-C<br />

computer-aided design<br />

continuous (without interruption)<br />

continual (happening frequently)<br />

cooperate, cooperation,<br />

cooperative<br />

coordinate, coordinator<br />

council (an administrative or<br />

advisory body)<br />

counsel (advise/guidance)<br />

coursework<br />

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C<br />

A–Z <strong>guide</strong><br />

Capitals<br />

Keep your use of capitals to a minimum. Capital letters interrupt the flow of the<br />

eye across the page. Think about why you use them. Would you leave your House<br />

in the morning to go to your Job? No. So why should a student leave their Hall of<br />

Residence to meet a Tutor? You don’t need to capitalise when referring to<br />

something in general.<br />

Example:<br />

The <strong>University</strong>’s academic structure is now built around two faculties, which<br />

are sub-divided into schools.<br />

Subject disciplines should not be capitalised, but course titles should:<br />

• MEng Mechanical Engineering Design<br />

• the programme includes lectures in history of art, computing and geography.<br />

But, if you are using official titles, use capitals.<br />

Examples:<br />

The School of Design, Craft & Visual Arts in the Faculty of Design, Media &<br />

Management can provide you with an awareness of cultural issues, as well as<br />

a strong grasp of marketing and communication principles.<br />

The School of Applied Management & Law has an excellent reputation.<br />

Don’t use capital letters in headings, except at the beginning and for proper<br />

nouns.<br />

Examples:<br />

Sports students stage tag rugby festival<br />

Sports Management and Rugby Studies students from <strong>Buckinghamshire</strong> <strong>New</strong><br />

<strong>University</strong> staged a tag rugby festival at the home of London Wasps.<br />

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Capitalising job titles (see job titles)<br />

Capitalising historical periods and events<br />

Capitalise names of widely recognised epochs in anthropology, archaeology,<br />

geology and history, for example the Bronze Age, the Dark Ages, the Middle Ages,<br />

the Renaissance, the Victorian era, the Enlightenment, the Third Reich. Also<br />

capitalise periods named after specific dynasties or people, for example the<br />

Tudors, Elizabethan. Use lower case for medieval, baroque.<br />

A–Z <strong>guide</strong><br />

C<br />

Art movements:<br />

Art Deco, Art Nouveau, Cubism, Dadaism, Gothic, Impressionism, Pop Art,<br />

Rococo, Surrealism, Arts and Crafts movement etc.<br />

War:<br />

First World War, Second World War; Crimean/Boer/Vietnam/Gulf War; Hundred<br />

Years War.<br />

Capitalising proper nouns<br />

Names of people, places, countries and organisations should take capital letters.<br />

Examples:<br />

John Smith, High Wycombe, Missenden Abbey Conference Centre<br />

Commas<br />

It is acceptable to put a comma before and, particularly in longer sentences or<br />

lists.<br />

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C<br />

Copyright<br />

Creative work such as books,<br />

poems, pictures, drawings, music,<br />

and films, may be protected by<br />

copyright. If you are uncertain about<br />

whether you are able to use a piece<br />

of writing, diagram or picture, you<br />

should seek the express permission<br />

of the originator. If you don't have<br />

permission, then you shouldn't use<br />

that piece of work.<br />

For further information, and guidance<br />

on copyright relating to your own<br />

work, read the IPR and Copyright<br />

Policy which can be found on the<br />

Bucks website at bucks.ac.uk.<br />

A–Z <strong>guide</strong><br />

Committees<br />

Committee minutes and associated papers are a record of the business and<br />

academic decision-making of the <strong>University</strong>, and are written in a formal <strong>style</strong>.<br />

The Quality Unit in the Student & Academic Services Directorate is responsible for<br />

many <strong>University</strong> committees and is able to give advice and training. If you are<br />

writing a paper for the <strong>University</strong> Council, you may also wish to seek guidance<br />

from the Senior Registrar (Governance) in the <strong>University</strong> Secretary's Office.<br />

The <strong>University</strong> provides training in minute-writing and servicing committees.<br />

Standard templates for committees are available on our website. Further advice<br />

for both officers and members of committees can be found in the formal<br />

documents section of the Bucks website.<br />

Course<br />

A course is a programme of study.<br />

Course titles<br />

Write BA (Honours) Human Resources Management or BSc (Hons) Police Studies.<br />

Note that there is a space between BA/BSc and (Honours).<br />

Capitalise course titles, but don’t capitalise academic terminology.<br />

Below are some examples of the usage of Degree/degree:<br />

Examples:<br />

A programme of studies leading to a degree in Police Studies gives you the<br />

opportunity to find out what contemporary policing is all about, and the tools<br />

to investigate its complex nature.<br />

<strong>Buckinghamshire</strong> <strong>New</strong> <strong>University</strong>'s Foundation Degree Retail Management<br />

(Dreams) was selected as one of five case studies (from 66 submissions)<br />

to be showcased at the launch of a national business engagement network,<br />

The Training Gateway.<br />

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Dash<br />

The en-dash – is longer than a hyphen, and has a different function. It is used<br />

without spaces when there is a distinction in meaning between two words, for<br />

example Conservative–Liberal Democrat alliance. It is also used to replace to in<br />

numerical phrases, such as students aged 18–60 or pages 2–12.<br />

You can use en-dashes in the same way that you’d use brackets to indicate<br />

parenthesis. When you use them in this way, leave a space either side of each<br />

dash.<br />

Examples:<br />

Our sites – High Wycombe and Uxbridge – both have their own catering<br />

facilities.<br />

A–Z <strong>guide</strong><br />

D words<br />

dependant (noun)<br />

dependent (adjective)<br />

disc (computers)<br />

dissertation<br />

dotcom<br />

driving licence<br />

D<br />

Our Senior Management Team – the Vice Chancellor, Pro Vice Chancellors,<br />

<strong>University</strong> Secretary and Clerk to the Council, and Executive Deans – meet<br />

weekly.<br />

Dates (see also time)<br />

Use numerals for numbers above ten. Use English date formations, ie day, month,<br />

year.<br />

1 January 2009<br />

1920s, 1930s (not 1920’s)<br />

The 19th century<br />

The first century<br />

Example:<br />

Our next <strong>University</strong> Open Day will be on Saturday 1 October 2011.<br />

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D<br />

Further disability guidance<br />

For further guidance, consult the<br />

Disability Service on 01494 603 098<br />

or email<br />

disabilityadvisorstaffdev@bucks.ac.uk<br />

A–Z <strong>guide</strong><br />

Degree classifications<br />

Degree classifications are: First, 2:1, 2:2 or 3rd. Never use 1st. Use a capital when<br />

referring to a First, but a lower case initial letter for first-class degree. Never use<br />

first degree, as this can be confused with an undergraduate degree. On degree<br />

certificates, and in references, the classification should be written in full, eg<br />

Second Class Honours (Lower Division).<br />

Examples:<br />

She was awarded a First in Mobile Computing<br />

He was awarded a 2:1 in Air Transport with Commercial Pilot Training.<br />

She was awarded a first-class honours degree in Audio and Music Production.<br />

Directorates<br />

The correct usage of Directorate is at the end, for example Strategic Marketing &<br />

Communications Directorate. Directorate names may be abbreviated if they are<br />

long and provided they have been mentioned in full in the first instance, for<br />

example SMC.<br />

Disability<br />

Avoid outdated terms that stereotype or stigmatise. If you need to refer to<br />

disability, try to structure sentences in a positive way.<br />

Examples:<br />

John Smith, who has muscular dystrophy, is a first year student … (not suffers<br />

from, or is a victim of)<br />

John Smith, who is a wheelchair user, studies … (not wheelchair bound, in a<br />

wheelchair)<br />

John Smith, who has a hearing impairment … (not is deaf)<br />

Refer to disabled people (not the disabled) and somebody who is visually<br />

impaired (not blind).<br />

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Dyslexia (and accessibility, see page five)


eg<br />

The abbreviation eg comes from the Latin exempli gratia, and indicates that one<br />

or more examples follow. Use a comma before eg. Don’t use a full stop<br />

afterwards. Like ie, ergo and et al, eg is rarely used outside formal academic<br />

writing. In marketing copy, eg can often be replaced by for example, or such as.<br />

Do not confuse eg with ie. You do not need to include full stops in eg.<br />

Example:<br />

We offer part-time courses in a wide range of subjects, such as upholstery<br />

and Adobe Photoshop.<br />

Ellipses<br />

If you are using an ellipsis at the end of a sentence there should be a space<br />

beforehand.<br />

Example:<br />

The Vice Chancellor, Prof Ruth Farwell, said …<br />

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E words<br />

E<br />

earth, the<br />

east<br />

e-commerce<br />

effect (a result/bring about a result)<br />

eg<br />

e-learning<br />

email<br />

euro, euros<br />

ext<br />

If you are using an ellipsis in mid sentence to signify an omission, there should be<br />

spaces before and after the ellipses.<br />

Example:<br />

The Vice Chancellor, Prof Ruth Farwell, said: “I’m delighted that … students<br />

have joined us this year.”<br />

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E<br />

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Email<br />

Emails should follow the main points in this <strong>guide</strong>. If you are writing an email to<br />

someone outside the <strong>University</strong> or to someone you don’t know, your email should<br />

be written with the formality of a letter, but should not be overly long. Your email<br />

signature should follow the format laid out in our Brand Guidelines.<br />

When writing emails, make sure that you:<br />

• are concise and to the point<br />

• use a proper structure and layout, including short paragraphs and blank lines<br />

between each paragraph<br />

• avoid long sentences<br />

• use proper spelling, grammar and punctuation<br />

• are clear about what you are asking or telling people and what you want them<br />

to do<br />

• avoid writing in CAPITALS – they imply that you are shouting<br />

• always enter a subject: and make it meaningful to the recipient<br />

• avoid using urgent or important in the subject heading, unless the message is<br />

absolutely critical<br />

• avoid abbreviations and emoticons and never use text language<br />

• answer all questions to pre-empt further emails<br />

• avoid copying emails to people who don’t really need to receive them, and<br />

only use ‘Reply to all’ if you are certain everyone needs to see the response<br />

• avoid attaching unnecessary files. Direct people to the file location, whenever<br />

possible<br />

• send plain text rather than HTML messages, unless there is a particular reason<br />

for requiring extra formatting<br />

• read the email before you send it and run the spellcheck<br />

• answer within 24 hours, if possible, but don’t let email take over your life!<br />

• set key points in the day for checking emails, for instance first thing in the<br />

morning, at midday and at the end of the day<br />

• use the ‘Out of office’ tool when you are going to be away from the office.<br />

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Email (continued)<br />

Think before you send. You should wait before sending an email, if you are angry<br />

or annoyed about something. Come back to it after a break, reread it, and<br />

reassess whether it is appropriate to send it. Remember that the tone of a<br />

message can be lost in email and the sender may not have intended the message<br />

to be interpreted in the way you read it.<br />

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E<br />

Likewise, a recipient of an email may misinterpret an email sent in haste or anger.<br />

In an extreme case, the recipient may claim harassment or libel in response to an<br />

angry or defamatory email. Drafting an email without the recipient’s address will<br />

avoid sending an email before you are certain that it is ready to be sent.<br />

Don't forward spam emails, hoaxes or chain letters.<br />

Don’t use email if you don’t need to. Using the telephone or speaking to someone<br />

face-to-face is often quicker and helps build relationships.<br />

For further guidance visit emailreplies.com and see the <strong>University</strong>’s email policy<br />

on our website.<br />

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E<br />

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Etc<br />

Try to avoid adding etc to the end of sentences. Rather than etc, try using<br />

including.<br />

Example:<br />

This course looks at the key issues facing the music industry today, including<br />

intellectual property, the digital revolution and changing business models.<br />

Ethnicity<br />

Please make sure that all written text is inclusive of all races and creeds.<br />

Exam papers<br />

There are standard templates for cover sheets which can be edited and adapted by<br />

school for both exams and time constrained assessments (TCAs). Material should<br />

be in plain English with clear, unambiguous and precise instructions. Keep<br />

formatting to a minimum. The exams team provide a proofreading service and read<br />

every exam paper in advance, so that they can advise invigilators of the exam<br />

requirements. (See dyslexia and accessibility for further guidance.)<br />

Exclamation marks<br />

The exclamation mark is used after true exclamations, which express surprise,<br />

fear, or some other emotion, eg: What a magnificent dissertation!<br />

Occasionally an exclamation mark may be enclosed in parentheses to indicate<br />

irony:<br />

After a long and careful (!) search the student found his library book.<br />

Exclamation marks should always be used with restraint, and you should never use<br />

more than one together.<br />

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Faculty<br />

The <strong>University</strong> has two faculties. Faculty only has a capital F when it is part of the<br />

faculty’s title:<br />

Example:<br />

The Faculty of Design, Media & Management is located on our High<br />

Wycombe Campus.<br />

The academic staff in the faculty are based at our High Wycombe Campus.<br />

Fewer (see also less)<br />

The basic rule of thumb is if you can count it, use fewer. Fewer means not as<br />

many, whereas less means not as much. However, use less if you are referring to<br />

a period of time.<br />

Examples:<br />

A shower uses less water than a bath, so you should take fewer baths.<br />

She will be finishing her course in less than six weeks.<br />

There are fewer people taking part this year.<br />

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F words<br />

fax<br />

FDA<br />

FDSc<br />

fiance<br />

focus, focused, focusing<br />

forum, forums<br />

formula, formulas<br />

foundation degree<br />

freephone<br />

full stop<br />

full-time<br />

F<br />

File referencing (see also headers and footers)<br />

A document should contain in the footer: the job title of the person who<br />

created the document; the date it was created; the drafting history; and<br />

the location of the file.<br />

Example:<br />

Prepared by Conferment Manager<br />

12 June 2011, First draft<br />

K:\acserv\Registry\General information\Templates\Extra <strong>style</strong> <strong>guide</strong> text.doc<br />

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F<br />

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Fonts<br />

Our Brand Guidelines show us what our documents should look like. Every<br />

newspaper and magazine uses a limited number of typefaces (fonts) in a restricted<br />

number of sizes and <strong>style</strong>s. Here at Bucks our marketing materials will always use<br />

Flux Regular for headings and Helvetica Neue for text. On the web, we use<br />

Verdana for text.<br />

Additional font <strong>style</strong>s may be used occasionally for specific purposes, at the<br />

discretion of the Strategic Marketing & Communications Directorate.<br />

For letters, documents such as reports, minutes, faxes and memos, spreadsheets<br />

and presentations, use Arial as the default font.<br />

More information can be found in our Brand Guidelines or at bucks.ac.uk/branding.<br />

Formal documents (also see committees)<br />

Formal documents should follow this <strong>guide</strong>. Templates for formal committee<br />

documents, memos and faxes can be found on our website. Formal documents will<br />

normally have forced justification (be fully justified).<br />

Full stops (full points)<br />

Leave a single space after a full stop.<br />

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Gender<br />

Use non-discriminatory language and write in a non-gender specific manner.<br />

Avoid terms which imply gender stereotyping in work, eg cleaning lady, best man<br />

for the job. Use Chair, not Chairman, Chairwoman or Chairperson.<br />

Geography<br />

Capitalise defined geographical areas, such as, the North, Black Country, East<br />

Anglia, Lake District, Midlands, Peak District or West Country. Areas referred to by<br />

compass points are written in lower case, for example, north, south-east,<br />

south-west.<br />

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G words<br />

GCSE<br />

goings-on<br />

graduand (one who is about to<br />

receive a degree)<br />

graduate (one who has been<br />

awarded a degree)<br />

G<br />

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H<br />

H words<br />

headteacher (not headmaster or<br />

headmistress)<br />

health care, health care professionals<br />

higher education<br />

honorary award<br />

honorary doctorate<br />

honorary fellow<br />

honours (lower case unless part of<br />

a specific degree)<br />

A–Z <strong>guide</strong><br />

Headers and footers in documents<br />

In most document templates the headers and footers are set up already.<br />

In multi-page documents you should always remember to:<br />

• Include the <strong>University</strong> name in the header.<br />

• Where relevant include the faculty, school or directorate name in the footer.<br />

• Use page numbering. It is useful to the reader if you select page 1 of 2, which is<br />

available through the header/footer autotext.<br />

• At the end of the document include the authors (generally job titles only), the<br />

date created, drafting history, and file location.<br />

Headings<br />

Headings should be in bold, never underlined. Underlined headings look like<br />

hyperlinks to web pages. More information on headings, subheadings and body<br />

copy can be found in the Brand Guidelines or at bucks.ac.uk/branding and<br />

templates can be found on our website.<br />

High Wycombe<br />

High Wycombe should be used in preference to Wycombe.<br />

Honours/hons<br />

If it is part of a degree title, honours should be written, in the abbreviated form eg<br />

BSc (Hons) Games Development. Include a space between the subject title and<br />

Hons. Honours should be written in the lower case if referred to within a general<br />

sentence.<br />

Example:<br />

John Smith left Bucks <strong>New</strong> <strong>University</strong> with an honours degree in Furniture:<br />

Contemporary Design.<br />

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Hyphenation (see also dash)<br />

The hyphen (-) looks like a short dash, but the hyphen and the dash are very<br />

different; whereas the hyphen unites, the dash separates (except when it is used to<br />

elide).<br />

Certain words and phrases tend to evolve from separation to linkage. The trend in<br />

English is for frequently used word combinations to grow together from two words<br />

to one, sometimes passing through a hyphenated stage, for example from<br />

electronic mail through e-mail to email.<br />

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H<br />

The following principles are useful to know:<br />

• Two or more adjectives before a noun that act as one idea (one-thought<br />

adjectives) are connected with a hyphen.<br />

Example:<br />

This is a low-budget film.<br />

• Use a hyphen in expressions where words have become linked by usage to<br />

express one idea.<br />

Examples:<br />

mother-in-law, top-notch, fine-tune, X-ray.<br />

• When written as words, fractions and cardinal numbers consisting of two words<br />

are hyphenated.<br />

Examples:<br />

one-fourth, two-thirds.<br />

• Hyphenate words prefixed by ex-, self-, or all-, and some words prefixed by<br />

cross-.<br />

Examples:<br />

ex-wife, self-evident, all-inclusive, cross-reference.<br />

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I<br />

I words<br />

ie<br />

install<br />

instalment<br />

International Baccalaureate<br />

inter-cultural<br />

internet<br />

inter-relationship<br />

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ie (see also eg)<br />

The abbreviation ie comes from the Latin id est meaning that is. As with eg, no full<br />

stop is necessary. Use a comma before ie but try to avoid using it if possible. Do<br />

not use ie when you should use eg.<br />

Initials<br />

Do not add punctuation to the initials of names, such as JK Rowling, WH Smith.<br />

‘ise’<br />

Use ‘ise’ rather than ‘ize’ at the end of a word (except capsize and size).<br />

Italics<br />

The following are generally italicised: titles of books, periodicals, TV programmes,<br />

films, plays, operas, song titles, names of ships and aircraft. Also italicise foreign<br />

(including Latin) phrases not yet naturalised and scientific names of plants and<br />

animals.<br />

Do not use italics to add emphasis. Do not italicise titles of chapters, articles, or<br />

sections, which take single quotes. (For details of the use of italics in referencing<br />

using the Harvard System see the Guide to Referencing Using the Harvard System<br />

on the Bucks website at bucks.ac.uk/referencing).<br />

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It’s and its<br />

Be careful to check your punctuation. It's means it is. Its means belonging to it.<br />

Example:<br />

The <strong>University</strong> is located in the centre of High Wycombe; its main campus is a<br />

short walk from the railway station, but it’s also easy to catch a bus.<br />

A–Z <strong>guide</strong><br />

I<br />

IT terms<br />

Commonly used IT terms include:<br />

• CD-ROM, CD-ROMs, CDs (no apostrophes)<br />

• CD-ROM (read only), CD-RW (read and write), CD-I (interactive)<br />

• cyberspace<br />

• email (no hyphen) but e-commerce<br />

• hard disk, but compact disc or optical disc, (disc = round!)<br />

• internet (lower case initial letter)<br />

• PCs, Macs<br />

• software program.<br />

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J<br />

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Jargon (see also acronyms)<br />

If you’re writing for an external audience avoid jargon, acronyms and hyperbole.<br />

For an internal audience terms specific to the higher education sector, such as<br />

RAE or HEFCE, are hard to avoid, but should be written in full in the first instance.<br />

Job titles<br />

Use the title in full at the beginning of your document.<br />

The Vice Chancellor and Chief Executive of <strong>Buckinghamshire</strong> <strong>New</strong> <strong>University</strong>,<br />

Prof Ruth Farwell, said …<br />

The use of capital letters for job titles is largely a matter of convention – there are<br />

no hard and fast rules. However, professional editorial practice suggests that<br />

unnecessary capitalisation should be avoided – it makes the text look dated and<br />

makes it more difficult to read.<br />

Where company or brand names appear in logos in capital letters or lower case,<br />

they should be typeset to match, for example easyjet, innocent, British Airways.<br />

In general:<br />

• Jobs: all lower case: copywriter, graphic designer, editor of The Times<br />

• Titles: use upper case when the job becomes a title: Queen Elizabeth, President<br />

Bush, Professor Jones and for impersonal titles such as the Queen or the Lord<br />

Chancellor.<br />

Example:<br />

The <strong>University</strong> appointed a new vice chancellor in 2006. Vice Chancellor Prof<br />

Ruth Farwell joined us from London South Bank <strong>University</strong>.<br />

Justification (see also accessibility and dyslexia, and formal documents)<br />

Marketing materials will normally be left aligned.<br />

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Latin plurals<br />

Some Latin plurals are so common that we don’t realise they are plurals, for<br />

example alumni and data.<br />

However, many plural forms look pedantic and put the reader off, for example:<br />

• fora – use forums<br />

• formulae – use formulas<br />

• syllabi – use syllabuses.<br />

Less (see also fewer)<br />

The basic rule of thumb is if you can’t count it, use less.<br />

Levels (see also years)<br />

Avoid referring to levels in marketing materials unless directly relevant to the<br />

content of the course. Refer to the first year, second year or third year, but be<br />

careful if you are referring to part-time courses. In internal or formal documents<br />

where it is necessary to refer to levels in a general sense use lower case. When<br />

referring to specific levels use an upper case L and the relevant number, for<br />

example Level 4. However, remember that levels do not necessarily equate to<br />

years of courses. For example, the first year of a postgraduate programme will be<br />

at Level 7.<br />

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L words<br />

liaison<br />

licence (noun), to license (verb)<br />

lifelong<br />

long-standing<br />

L<br />

Examples:<br />

Students at these levels will be expected to complete an extended project.<br />

There are now 50 students studying the course at Level 4.<br />

Lists (see also bullet points)<br />

Punctuate short lists with commas, and larger lists or phrases with semi-colons.<br />

Preface the list with a colon. Put lists of names or courses in alphabetical order, in<br />

order to avoid implying a hierarchy, unless there is a particular reason for<br />

choosing a different order.<br />

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M<br />

M words<br />

MA (Master of Arts – an MA,<br />

not a MA)<br />

marketplace<br />

master’s degree(s)<br />

medieval<br />

MPhil (Master of Philosophy)<br />

MSc (Master of Sciences)<br />

multicultural<br />

multidisciplinary<br />

multimedia<br />

multinational<br />

multiprofessional<br />

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Measurements<br />

Use standard abbreviations (km, lb, etc) but whenever possible use litre, mile and<br />

million in full to avoid confusion. There is no need to add a full stop after a unit of<br />

measurement. There are no plurals and there is no gap between the numeral and<br />

the unit of measurement.<br />

Examples:<br />

£10–20, 5–6K<br />

1 mile<br />

1 metre, 1m, 2m, 3m<br />

£1 million, £1M, £2M, £3M<br />

£20,000–30,000 not £20–30,000 unless you mean £20 to £30,000<br />

Modules<br />

Module titles should be written out in full and take upper case initial letters. When<br />

writing a list of modules, divide with semi-colons.<br />

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Numbers<br />

• Thousands: 1,000, 10,000 and 1,000,000.<br />

• Spell out numbers one to ten. Use numerals for numbers over ten, and where<br />

attached to a percentage sign, a unit or sum of money.<br />

• Also apply this to cardinal numbers eg fifth century, 12 th century.<br />

• Never use numerals at the beginning of a sentence; rearrange the order of words<br />

so that the number is not at the beginning, but ensuring that the sentence still<br />

makes sense.<br />

• Fractions: three-quarters, one-third, two-and-a-half.<br />

• Do not mix decimals and fractions.<br />

• Elide as much as possible, eg 4–8, 115–116.<br />

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N words<br />

national curriculum<br />

no-one<br />

north, north-west<br />

N-0<br />

Examples:<br />

5%, 8cm, £3, $4, €6.<br />

To access a euro sign, PC users should press AltGr + 4 on the main keypad, and<br />

Mac users should press alt + 2 on the main keypad.<br />

Numbering of paragraphs<br />

You should only need to number paragraphs used in formal documents, such as<br />

reports, regulations, policy documents and minutes. Paragraphs should be<br />

numbered 1, 2, 3 and so on.<br />

Roman numerals should not be used. Avoid subsections if possible, but if you must<br />

use them, number them 1.1, 1.2, 1.3 and so on. If these sections need dividing use<br />

letters, eg:<br />

Example:<br />

1 This is an example of a paragraph.<br />

1.1 This is an example of a subsection.<br />

1.2 This is an example of the next subsection.<br />

a This is an example of a subsection division.<br />

b This is an example of the next subsection division.<br />

O words<br />

O-levels<br />

official (relating to an authority<br />

or having the approval of an<br />

authority)<br />

officious (asserting authority)<br />

online<br />

organise, organising<br />

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P<br />

P words<br />

part-time<br />

per cent, percentage<br />

PGCert<br />

PGCE<br />

PGDip<br />

PhD<br />

postcode<br />

postdoctoral<br />

postgraduate<br />

post-qualification<br />

postmodern<br />

postwar, prewar<br />

practice (noun), practise (verb)<br />

pre-qualification<br />

pre-registration<br />

prescribe (issue a prescription<br />

or recommend with authority)<br />

presentation<br />

principal (first in importance)<br />

principle (rule)<br />

proactive<br />

program (computers)<br />

programme (of study)<br />

proscribe (condemn or forbid)<br />

Pro Vice Chancellor<br />

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Percentage<br />

Write per cent out in full in general text. Use % in tables.<br />

Example:<br />

52 per cent of the student population is female and 48 per cent male, although<br />

there is wide variation between courses.<br />

Point size (see also accessibility and dyslexia)<br />

The standard size for internal use is 10 point. Documents should be produced in<br />

larger print sizes or alternative formats if requested.<br />

Presentations (see also bullet points)<br />

Programme<br />

A programme can be a brochure, prospectus or syllabus: a course is a<br />

programme of study. Capitalise programme only when it is part of a full course<br />

title. A program is a piece of software.<br />

Example:<br />

All international exchange students are enrolled on the modular scheme to<br />

follow the International Exchange Programme. This programme uses existing<br />

modules to provide an educational experience that is both relevant and<br />

stimulating.<br />

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Quotation marks<br />

Check that quotation marks are curly not straight when they are printed.<br />

Use double speech marks for reported speech.<br />

The Executive Dean of the Faculty of Society & Health said: “We welcome all new<br />

students.”<br />

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Q<br />

Quotes within quotes<br />

Try to avoid quotes within quotes, however when used, use double quote marks<br />

for the outer quote and single quote marks for the inner.<br />

The Vice Chancellor quoted Oscar Wilde in her speech: “I don’t believe that<br />

‘nothing that is worth knowing can be taught.’”<br />

If the quote is a full sentence, put the closing punctuation inside the quote marks:<br />

“I’m delighted that student numbers are up this year.”<br />

If the quote is a full sentence that falls at the end of another full sentence,<br />

introduce it with a colon:<br />

She stated: “I’m delighted that student numbers are up this year.”<br />

If the quote is a full sentence that falls at the beginning of the sentence, conclude<br />

with a comma (or, if relevant, an exclamation or question mark) inside the inverted<br />

commas:<br />

“I’m delighted that student numbers are up this year,” she stated.<br />

“I’m over the moon!” she stated.<br />

If the quote isn’t a full sentence put the punctuation outside the quote marks:<br />

She tells us that student numbers are ‘up this year’.<br />

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S<br />

S words<br />

semi-colon<br />

south, south-west<br />

state-of-the-art<br />

stationary (not moving)<br />

stationery (writing materials)<br />

Students’ Union<br />

syllabus, syllabuses<br />

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Saint<br />

For names of towns, churches etc abbreviate to St, eg St Andrew’s Church,<br />

High Wycombe.<br />

School<br />

Titles of academic schools should begin with a capital S.<br />

Examples:<br />

We would like to welcome you to the School of Design, Craft & Visual Arts<br />

and hope that the landmark programmes we offer will be useful to your<br />

decision-making..<br />

The School has developed a diverse range of exciting courses where it has<br />

been at the forefront of educational innovation.<br />

Do not use a capital S when talking about schools more generally.<br />

Example:<br />

The Faculty of Society & Health is divided into three schools.<br />

Sentence construction<br />

Construct sentences so that they say what you mean.<br />

Example:<br />

Not: Walking onto campus, a duck flew into me. (This suggests that the duck<br />

was walking onto campus.)<br />

But: A duck flew into me as I was walking onto campus.<br />

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Telephone numbers<br />

Do not include hyphens and include a space between the area codes, the main<br />

number and the third digit of the main number, eg 01494 522 141.<br />

Treat mobile phone numbers as having five-figure area codes: 07769 920 035.<br />

Use international numbers on stationery and adverts in publications that may be<br />

seen overseas, eg +44 (0) 1494 522 141, but only the national codes in other<br />

instances.<br />

Use tel, ext and fax in abbreviated form, without a full stop. Make sure you check<br />

all telephone numbers before a document is published.<br />

Templates (see also committees)<br />

A range of document templates are available on our website.<br />

A–Z <strong>guide</strong><br />

T words<br />

target<br />

targeted<br />

targeting<br />

tel<br />

T<br />

Time (see also dates)<br />

To express an academic year, or range of years, use the following format:<br />

2000–01, or 2001–2002, using an en-dash<br />

Do not use 2000-1 or 2000/1<br />

Use am and pm, not the 24-hour clock. Use full stops not colons as separators.<br />

3pm not 3.00pm<br />

9.30am not 09:30<br />

5pm<br />

11.30pm not 23:30<br />

noon (not 12 noon)<br />

midnight (not 12 midnight)<br />

Note there is no space between the number and am or pm.<br />

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T<br />

A–Z <strong>guide</strong><br />

Titles (see also job titles)<br />

Refer to a person using their first name and family name and any title. Only use<br />

Mr/Mrs/Miss/Ms in correspondence and avoid using initials.<br />

Professor Ruth Farwell, Vice Chancellor and Chief Executive<br />

Professor Trevor Nicholls, Pro Vice Chancellor and Executive Dean, Campus & Facilities<br />

Professor Derek Godfrey, Deputy Vice Chancellor<br />

Titles, newspapers and magazines (see also italics)<br />

Do not capitalise ‘the’ unless it is part of the title: the Daily Telegraph, the Mail on<br />

Sunday, the Financial Times, but The Times, The Independent, The Guardian, The<br />

Economist.<br />

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Underlining<br />

Don’t underline unnecessarily. Headings should not be underlined because<br />

readers may think they are hyperlinks. Use bold for emphasis.<br />

United Kingdom<br />

The United Kingdom consists of England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland,<br />

and is synonymous with Britain. Great Britain refers only to the mainland. Beware<br />

of using England when you mean Britain, or vice versa.<br />

A–Z <strong>guide</strong><br />

U<br />

<strong>University</strong><br />

We refer to the <strong>University</strong> as:<br />

• <strong>Buckinghamshire</strong> <strong>New</strong> <strong>University</strong> (our formal name, used in contracts and on<br />

certificates, for example)<br />

• Bucks <strong>New</strong> <strong>University</strong> (used informally and in internal and external marketing<br />

materials for example)<br />

• Bucks (be aware of possible confusion with the county)<br />

• BNU is not an acceptable abbreviation of the <strong>University</strong> name.<br />

Capitalise titles, eg <strong>Buckinghamshire</strong> <strong>New</strong> <strong>University</strong>, but use lower case for<br />

general use, for example: There are two universities in <strong>Buckinghamshire</strong>.<br />

Always capitalise when talking about Bucks <strong>New</strong> <strong>University</strong>, eg the <strong>University</strong>’s<br />

football team.<br />

Do not confuse the <strong>University</strong>'s (belonging to the <strong>University</strong>) with universities<br />

(more than one university).<br />

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U-V<br />

V words<br />

Vice Chancellor (or VC)<br />

vocational A-level<br />

A–Z <strong>guide</strong><br />

Upper case<br />

Avoid putting words in upper case - it appears as if you are shouting at your<br />

readers and interrupts the flow of words.<br />

US<br />

Use US as the abbreviation for the United States, not USA. There is no need to<br />

spell out the words even at first mention. America is also acceptable (but don't<br />

use America where ambiguity could occur with Canada or Latin America).<br />

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Web addresses<br />

Only precede web addresses with ‘http://’ if the address doesn’t start with ‘www’.<br />

In printed publications to remove hyperlink underscores right click on your mouse.<br />

Always remove the ‘www’ before a web address, and if an address comes at the<br />

end of a sentence it’s fine to use a full stop.<br />

All web addresses should be checked before a document is published. When<br />

linking from one web page to another make sure the hyperlink makes sense to the<br />

reader; don’t just say ‘click here’.<br />

Example:<br />

Find out more about the <strong>University</strong>’s faculties.<br />

Work-based learning<br />

Capitalise only when referring to a specific course.<br />

Example:<br />

Certificate in Work-based Learning<br />

Foundation degrees are distinctive because they are designed by employers<br />

and lecturers together – leading to work-based skills that are really valued.<br />

They also combine work-based learning and work-related learning with<br />

traditional academic teaching.<br />

A–Z <strong>guide</strong><br />

W words<br />

website<br />

wellbeing<br />

west<br />

who’s (a contraction of who is<br />

or who has)<br />

whose (whose book is this?)<br />

workplace<br />

work-placement year<br />

world class<br />

worldwide<br />

worthwhile<br />

W<br />

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Y<br />

Y words<br />

you’re (you are)<br />

your (is this your book?)<br />

A–Z <strong>guide</strong><br />

Years (see also levels)<br />

Wherever possible, use years in place of levels; readers may not understand the<br />

levels.<br />

Example:<br />

In the final year the modules for both courses are the same.<br />

The four-year mode includes a work placement undertaken in the third year.<br />

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Examples of poor written English - possible improvements<br />

1 Watkins said: "Some employees are hard to understand, at least until the<br />

students get used to them."<br />

2 We measure the effectiveness of our teaching by comparing the views of<br />

instructors and students on the instructions given.<br />

3 We test the fire bell every Monday at 9.30am.<br />

4 In reclaiming the site, we will:<br />

• identify and clean up any pollution and contamination; and<br />

• make safe or remove hazards such as unstable ground and mineshafts.<br />

5 We must save £13m next year and will do so by improving efficiency. Senior<br />

managers have studied our cash-collection methods and found them to be a<br />

possible source of savings.<br />

6 The Learning and Skills Council, and the Higher Education Funding Council for<br />

England, will be funding a new Further/Higher Education initiative. They will work<br />

together to create opportunities for progression for learners of all ages.<br />

7 Please discuss any ideas with me so that I can resolve the problem.<br />

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notes


This <strong>guide</strong> is designed to be as comprehensive as possible, but is not exhaustive.<br />

This <strong>guide</strong> was produced by <strong>Buckinghamshire</strong> <strong>New</strong> <strong>University</strong> in 2008 and revised<br />

in 2011, and is accurate at the time of going to press. We reserve the right to<br />

amend information within this <strong>guide</strong> without prior notice.<br />

Other useful publications and websites include:<br />

• askoxford.com<br />

• Bucks <strong>New</strong> <strong>University</strong> branding (bucks.ac.uk/branding)<br />

• Bucks <strong>New</strong> <strong>University</strong> formal documents (bucks.ac.uk/formal)<br />

• Bucks <strong>New</strong> <strong>University</strong> referencing (buck.ac.uk/referencing)<br />

• British Dyslexia Association (bdadyslexia.org.uk)<br />

• Copy-editing: The Cambridge Handbook (Judith Butcher, Cambridge<br />

<strong>University</strong> Press)<br />

• The Concise Oxford English Dictionary (Oxford <strong>University</strong> Press)<br />

• emailreplies.com<br />

• The Guardian Style Guide (guardian.co.uk/<strong>style</strong><strong>guide</strong>)<br />

• The King’s English (bartelby.com)<br />

• Online dictionary (dictionary.com)<br />

• plainenglish.co.uk for very useful advice on writing simply and clearly.<br />

contact<br />

Please read the <strong>style</strong> <strong>guide</strong><br />

carefully and consult the Strategic<br />

Marketing & Communications<br />

Directorate if you have any<br />

queries.<br />

For further information contact:<br />

Strategic Marketing &<br />

Communications Directorate<br />

<strong>Buckinghamshire</strong> <strong>New</strong> <strong>University</strong><br />

High Wycombe Campus<br />

Queen Alexandra Road<br />

High Wycombe<br />

<strong>Buckinghamshire</strong><br />

HP11 2JZ<br />

Tel: 01494 522 141<br />

Fax: 01494 605 023<br />

Email: branding@bucks.ac.uk<br />

To download our logo, templates,<br />

or a copy of this <strong>guide</strong> as a pdf<br />

please go to<br />

bucks.ac.uk/branding<br />

We will consider any requests for<br />

accessible formats. Please let us<br />

know what you need.<br />

Designed and produced by<br />

JubileeGreenwood Press Ltd<br />

jubileegreenwood.co.uk<br />

© <strong>Buckinghamshire</strong> <strong>New</strong> <strong>University</strong> 2008-11.


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