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Joe T. Writer<br />

Mr. Langley<br />

<strong>English</strong> <strong>102</strong><br />

Thursday June 30, 2005<br />

Nature’s Choice<br />

Robert Frost’s poem “Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening” consists of four<br />

almost identically constructed stanzas. Each line is iambic with four stressed syllables.<br />

The first, second, and fourth lines of each stanza rhyme with each other. There is one<br />

exception in the final stanza, where the third line rhymes with the previous two and is<br />

repeated as the fourth line. This is a very relaxing poem on the surface, evidenced by a<br />

calm imagery that creates a vivid mental picture. The first stanza of this poem is rather<br />

simple and provides the basis for this imagery. The easy pace that the speaker takes is<br />

demonstrated in the last line of the first stanza, when Frost writes, “To watch his woods<br />

fill up with snow” (Frost 1070).<br />

The second stanza provides a more in-depth view of the imagery sketched out in<br />

the first. This stanza provides a more definite time and location and gives a more detailed<br />

image of the scene: “Between the woods and frozen lake / The darkest evening of the<br />

year” (Frost 1070). As James Cox notes, these lines describe a quiet, dark, and lonely<br />

setting.<br />

The poem is about the spell of the woods—the traveler’s own woods, we<br />

want to say, but they are alien enough and belong to someone else enough<br />

for him to sense the trespass of his intent gaze into them at the same time<br />

he recognizes their sway over him. His heightened awareness projects his


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concern for himself back to the representatives of civilization, the unseen<br />

owner of the woods and the horse in harness. Thus, the indifferent animal<br />

becomes, in his master’s alerted imagination, the guardian who sounds the<br />

alarm which rings above the whispered invitation. (151)<br />

The poem deals with much conflict for the speaker. As another critic says, “’Stopping by<br />

Woods on a Snowy Evening’ rejects nature’s impersonal appeal in favor of purpose, but<br />

the carefully vague last stanza refuses to indicate whether such purpose is self-generated<br />

or determined” (Nitchie 44). Cox adds, “The haunting rhythms of ‘Stopping by Woods<br />

on a Snowy Evening’ express the powerful fascination the woods have on the traveler,<br />

who—in the face of a long journey, descending night, and falling snow—pauses in the<br />

gathering gloom of the darkest evening of the year, transfixed by the compelling<br />

invitation of the forest” (150). Should he stay in the woods, where he is enjoying the<br />

peaceful serenity away from the troubles of his everyday life? Or should he leave the<br />

woods, go back into town, and face his obligations and continue to live his life? The<br />

speaker answers these questions in the last two lines: “And miles to go before I sleep /<br />

And miles to go before I sleep” (Frost 1070).<br />

Robert Frost’s poem “The Road Not Taken” consists of four stanzas with five<br />

lines in each stanza. There are four stressed syllables per line, and the rhyme scheme is<br />

five lines, with the exception of the last line “And that has made all the difference” (Frost<br />

143). Similar to “Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening,” this poem uses imagery to<br />

delineate the setting of this poem: “Two roads diverged in a yellow wood” (Frost 142)<br />

creates a vivid picture of the concrete present. This poem exemplifies the speaker’s belief<br />

that which path individuals choose in life makes them the people that they are. Nitchie


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writes, “The problem of choice is in a way even more elementary, since neither selfinterest,<br />

moral obligation, nor even curiosity provides a real basis for preferring one road<br />

to the other” (17). By choosing a certain path, “[b]ecause it was grassy and wanted wear”<br />

(Frost 143), the speaker must assume a sense of risk, especially when it is a path that has<br />

not been traveled often. This risk is made more apparent by the fact that previous people,<br />

faced with the choice of which road to take, chose the other one.<br />

We gain insight into the traveler’s personality that he is one who does not follow<br />

the crowd but assumes his own identity by taking the path to the unknown, although he<br />

does contemplate whether or not the right decision has been made. The speaker wants to<br />

travel down both paths, but he realizes that he has made a decision and cannot look back<br />

once he has made it. In this regard, Nitchie says, “For all that the act of choice is<br />

presented as whimsical and unmotivated, the speaker is aware that his choice will have<br />

consequences, though he cannot tell what those consequences will be” (160). The speaker<br />

must trust his judgment to be the correct choice for leading his course of life. In the end<br />

he is satisfied with his choice: “I took the one less traveled by, / And that has made all the<br />

difference” (Frost 143). To the speaker, what really made the difference is that he was in<br />

control of his decision and he chose to take the less traveled road; therefore, he is the man<br />

he is today because of that decision.<br />

These two poems are similar in a variety of ways. Both poems consist of four<br />

stanzas and an abundance of rhyme and imagery. These two poems are very well known<br />

for their simplicity. However, they both can be interpreted in many ways and easily<br />

misunderstood. In the poem “Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening,” the speaker<br />

takes in a lovely scene, is tempted to stay longer, but acknowledges a burden of


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obligations. This burden appears in the line, “But I have promises to keep” (Frost 1070).<br />

As one critic says, “In ‘Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening’ there is the<br />

attractiveness, the seductive and dark beauty of the woods filling up with snow. But there<br />

are also the promises to be kept. The speaker shows his humanity by his full awareness of<br />

this beauty, but he defines it finally by returning to the world of action and obligation”<br />

(Ryan 133). However, in the poem “The Road Not Taken,” the speaker must choose<br />

which path to take, even though it appears he will be faced with second-guessing himself<br />

somewhere down the line. This dilemma is apparent in the lines “I shall be telling this<br />

with a sigh / Somewhere ages and ages hence:”(Frost 143). One critic describes this sigh<br />

as follows: “The ‘sigh,’ of course helps characterize the ‘I,’ and provides the fist hint that<br />

the poem is a gentle parody of the kind of person whose life in the present is distorted by<br />

nostalgic regrets for the possibilities of the past, who is less concerned for the road taken<br />

than for ‘the road not taken’” (Barry 12).<br />

In both of these poems, the speakers face life-altering decisions. In “Stopping by<br />

Woods on a Snowy Evening,” the speaker must choose between succumbing to<br />

loneliness and depression or realizing there is much to be gained by living a happier life.<br />

In “The Road Not Taken,” the speaker must choose between two paths, not knowing<br />

what the future holds and if he will ever have the chance to find out what was passed up.<br />

In short, these two poems indicate a human being’s struggle with uncertainty and the<br />

inner turmoil that surrounds many of life’s decisions.


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Works Cited<br />

Barry, Elaine. Robert Frost. New York: Frederick Unger Publishing Co., 1973. 12.<br />

Cox, James M. “Robert Frost and the Edge of the Clearing.” The Virginia Quarterly<br />

Review. January, 1959: 144-154.<br />

Frost, Robert. “Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening.” Henry Holt & Co., 1916.<br />

Rpt. in Literature: The Human Experience. 8 th ed. Eds. Richard Abcarian and<br />

Marvin Klotz. Boston: Bedford Books, 2004. 1070.<br />

Frost, Robert. “The Road Not Taken.” Henry Holt & Co., 1916. Rpt. in Literature:<br />

The Human Experience. 8 th ed. Eds. Richard Abcarian and Marvin Klotz.<br />

Boston: Bedford Books, 2004. 142-143.<br />

Nitchie, George W. Human Values in the <strong>Poetry</strong> of Robert Frost. Durham: Duke<br />

University Press, 1960. 17, 44, 160.<br />

Ryan, Alvan S. “Frost and Emerson: Voice and Vision.” The Massachusetts Review<br />

January, 1959: 124-137.

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