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Some Notes on Form and Function of the Line and Line Endings in ...

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We are not lovers.<br />

We do not even know each o<strong>the</strong>r.<br />

We look alike<br />

but we have noth<strong>in</strong>g to say.<br />

We are like pige<strong>on</strong>s . . .<br />

The man <strong>and</strong> wife speak simply, directly though <strong>in</strong> entirely un<strong>in</strong>spired end-stopped sentences or<br />

phrases which dramatize <strong>the</strong> m<strong>on</strong>ot<strong>on</strong>ous, rout<strong>in</strong>e aspects <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong>ir existence.<br />

<str<strong>on</strong>g>Some</str<strong>on</strong>g>times an end-stopped l<strong>in</strong>e is reflexive, mean<strong>in</strong>g that <strong>the</strong> l<strong>in</strong>e end<strong>in</strong>g refers to someth<strong>in</strong>g<br />

previously <strong>in</strong> <strong>the</strong> l<strong>in</strong>e <strong>and</strong> <strong>the</strong>refore forces <strong>the</strong> reader to move backward as well as forward (Myers<br />

<strong>and</strong> Simms 163-64). Here’s a l<strong>in</strong>e from a poem by Richard Hugo:<br />

My eyes were like this photo. Old.<br />

Note that <strong>the</strong> l<strong>in</strong>e has been end-stopped, <strong>and</strong> <strong>the</strong>refore closed, but reflexivity forces <strong>the</strong> reader to<br />

move <strong>in</strong> two directi<strong>on</strong>s. “Old” will <strong>on</strong>ly make sense if <strong>the</strong> reader l<strong>in</strong>ks it with <strong>in</strong>formati<strong>on</strong> that<br />

preceded it—eyes <strong>and</strong> <strong>the</strong> photo. Likewise, <strong>the</strong> eyes become old <strong>on</strong>ly when <strong>the</strong> reader has<br />

reached <strong>the</strong> end <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> l<strong>in</strong>e, <strong>the</strong>reby forc<strong>in</strong>g <strong>on</strong>e to return to <strong>the</strong> <strong>in</strong>itial reference <strong>and</strong> create a new<br />

associati<strong>on</strong>: eyes/old.<br />

In <strong>the</strong> case <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> enjambed l<strong>in</strong>e, a l<strong>in</strong>e end<strong>in</strong>g is not stopped at <strong>the</strong> end <strong>of</strong> a sentence or<br />

grammatically complete phrase. Instead, <strong>the</strong> sentence or phrase carries over <strong>in</strong>to <strong>the</strong> next l<strong>in</strong>e.<br />

Here is a group <strong>of</strong> enjambed l<strong>in</strong>es <strong>in</strong> a poem called “A Small S<strong>on</strong>g,” by A. R. Amm<strong>on</strong>s:<br />

The reeds give<br />

way to <strong>the</strong><br />

w<strong>in</strong>d <strong>and</strong> give<br />

<strong>the</strong> w<strong>in</strong>d away.<br />

All four l<strong>in</strong>es <strong>of</strong> this little poem could have been arranged <strong>on</strong> <strong>on</strong>e l<strong>in</strong>e, but <strong>the</strong> effect would have<br />

been different.<br />

The reeds give way to <strong>the</strong> w<strong>in</strong>d <strong>and</strong> give <strong>the</strong> w<strong>in</strong>d away.<br />

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