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154 <strong>Vocabulary</strong> <strong>4000</strong><br />

4. Jurassic Park, written by Michael Crichton, and which was first printed in<br />

1988, is a novel about a theme park of the future in which dinosaurs roam<br />

free.<br />

(A) Jurassic Park, written by Michael Crichton, and which was first<br />

printed in 1988,<br />

(B) Jurassic Park, written by Michael Crichton and first printed in 1988,<br />

(C) Jurassic Park, which was written by Michael Crichton, and which was<br />

first printed in 1988,<br />

(D)<br />

(E)<br />

Written by Michael Crichton and first printed in 1988, Jurassic Park<br />

Jurassic Park, which was written by Michael Crichton and first printed<br />

in 1988,<br />

Choice (A) is incorrect since the verb written is not parallel to the<br />

construction which was … printed.<br />

Choice (B) is the correct answer since the sentence is concise<br />

and the verb written is parallel to the verb printed.<br />

Choice (C) does offer a parallel structure (which was<br />

written/which was printed); however, choice (B) is more concise.<br />

Choice (D) rambles. The introduction Written by … 1988 is<br />

too long.<br />

Choice (E) also offers a parallel structure (which was<br />

written/[which was] printed); however, choice (B) again is more<br />

concise. Note that which was need not be repeated for the sentence<br />

to be parallel.

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