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(CASAC) Peer Review of EPA's Integrated Science Assessment

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eorganized to focus on studies using more relevant concentrations <strong>of</strong> SO 2 andsections were added to better discuss mode <strong>of</strong> action and potential particle-SO 2interactions. We are requesting <strong>CASAC</strong> review specifically on these analyses aswell as on the integration <strong>of</strong> the overall evidence from the human clinical, animaltoxicological, and epidemiological studies.Chapter 3 is vastly improved from the previous draft <strong>of</strong> the ISA. The newanalyses <strong>of</strong> human clinical studies are helpful. <strong>CASAC</strong> believes, however, that moreemphasis should be placed on effects seen at concentrations lower than 0.4 ppm. ThePanel is concerned about the potential underestimation <strong>of</strong> the proportion <strong>of</strong> asthmaticpersons affected by short-term exposure to SO 2 because only mild and moderateasthmatic adults were recruited to participate in the clinical studies. People with moresevere asthma or poor control <strong>of</strong> their symptoms may be more susceptible and mayrespond more adversely to SO 2 and discussion <strong>of</strong> this point should be expanded in thechapter. The potential influence <strong>of</strong> medication use on asthmatic responses to SO 2 shouldalso be discussed. In general, the evidence from the animal toxicological, controlledhuman exposure, and epidemiological studies has been satisfactorily integrated.However, the gap between the greater level <strong>of</strong> SO 2 used in the clinical studies and therelatively lower ambient concentrations associated with respiratory morbidity in theepidemiological studies needs to be clearly acknowledged. The relevance <strong>of</strong> the higherdose animal studies also needs to better developed. The results <strong>of</strong> the studies involvingextremely high levels <strong>of</strong> metal oxide or carbon-SO 2 mixtures suggest that SO 2 effectsmay be potentiated by co-exposure to particles, but the relevance <strong>of</strong> these results toambient exposures is unclear. Section 3.1.5 should be greatly condensed to give a morefocused discussion <strong>of</strong> the mechanistic implications <strong>of</strong> the mixture studies withoutpresentation <strong>of</strong> experimental details. While the new summary sections are a welcomeaddition to the chapter, their quality is uneven. It would be helpful if these sections werewritten in a style that applied the causal inference approach outlined in Chapter 1 in aconsistent manner.Charge Question 4: The section on concentration-response relationships in Chapter4 was reorganized and revised to include analysis <strong>of</strong> individual-level data from thehuman clinical studies and some additional discussion <strong>of</strong> the difficulties <strong>of</strong>discerning a threshold in population-level data. In addition, revisions were made tobetter characterize groups likely to be susceptible or vulnerable to SOx and thepotential size <strong>of</strong> the population at risk for SOx-related health effects. Finally,revisions were made to reduce redundancy with material presented in Chapter 3.Have the revisions made to Chapter 4 improved the characterization <strong>of</strong> the potentialpublic health impact <strong>of</strong> SOx exposure?Revisions to Chapter 4 have improved the characterization <strong>of</strong> potential healthimpacts <strong>of</strong> SOx exposure, but additional clarification, evaluation, and amplification isneeded. The Panel recommends that EPA revisit the definitions <strong>of</strong> susceptibility andvulnerability. The definition <strong>of</strong> susceptibility should consider the form <strong>of</strong> the doseresponserelationship and the magnitude <strong>of</strong> response at a given dose. Greater clarity andspecificity is needed in the definition <strong>of</strong> this concept if it is to be used without ambiguity.iv

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