OPINIONS & NOTESelse" ? You say that you're the last personto believe that anyone can be objective,and yet if you're not call<strong>in</strong>g for objectivity,what are you call<strong>in</strong>g for other than thesort <strong>of</strong> (self) consciousness that permitsone to place one's literary judgement <strong>in</strong>a personal (affective) context? This issometh<strong>in</strong>g like the dist<strong>in</strong>ction betweencant and honesty. The affective fallacywould seem to be a fallacy if it is <strong>in</strong>deedfallacious, i.e., "cant." The term seemsrather like "murder," def<strong>in</strong>ed as "wrongfulkill<strong>in</strong>g." To equate kill<strong>in</strong>g with murderis, at best, <strong>in</strong>accurate. It all dependson how one def<strong>in</strong>es "wrongful." Toequate the affective with fallacy either dependson how one def<strong>in</strong>es "fallacy," orit's an error <strong>in</strong> logic.. . . So to representations <strong>of</strong> sex ... ifthis is everybody's closet, Bill, then I verymuch th<strong>in</strong>k everybody should look <strong>in</strong> it.... I do not <strong>of</strong>fer "directness" or "honestopenness" as a defence. I don't reallyth<strong>in</strong>k a defence is necessary. But somesemblance <strong>of</strong> understand<strong>in</strong>g is. I am suspicious<strong>of</strong> <strong>in</strong>direction <strong>in</strong> sexual matters,artistically, for the same reason that I refusedto present Sam from the "outside".... I am no more will<strong>in</strong>g to trust the audiencean <strong>in</strong>ch <strong>in</strong> this regard that I am <strong>in</strong>assum<strong>in</strong>g that their view <strong>of</strong> Sam will beperceptive <strong>of</strong> the real character ratherthan their preconceptions about veterans.Both <strong>in</strong> the sex scenes and <strong>in</strong> my representation<strong>of</strong> Sam from the <strong>in</strong>side, I tookthe risk <strong>of</strong> putt<strong>in</strong>g people <strong>of</strong>f, but I farpreferred that to putt<strong>in</strong>g them on, or allow<strong>in</strong>gthem to put Sam on as a k<strong>in</strong>d<strong>of</strong> debased icon to place comfortablyamongst their exist<strong>in</strong>g shibboleths. . . .This is perhaps a confrontational attitude,but it is not f<strong>in</strong>ally an ungentle orunk<strong>in</strong>d one. I simply believe, artistically,that one must have the th<strong>in</strong>g itself. That'snot the same as argu<strong>in</strong>g "directness" as ak<strong>in</strong>d <strong>of</strong> socioethical imperative transplanted<strong>in</strong>to art. In fact, a lot <strong>of</strong> what I'vedone is so bloody <strong>in</strong>direct that hardly anybody'sseen it yet, much less grappled withit. What I'm say<strong>in</strong>g is based <strong>in</strong> Stevens,noted as an aridly <strong>in</strong>tellectual poet, whichI th<strong>in</strong>k is another major misread<strong>in</strong>g <strong>of</strong>th<strong>in</strong>gs. I do not believe that see<strong>in</strong>g or feel<strong>in</strong>gis believ<strong>in</strong>g. But I do believe that believ<strong>in</strong>gwithout see<strong>in</strong>g and feel<strong>in</strong>g is abstractand dangerous. That is not so mucha notion <strong>of</strong> "felt thought" as it is a fairlymystical notion that "thought" is physical,and it's not unrelated to E<strong>in</strong>ste<strong>in</strong>'s famousequation. . . .KEITH то PAYERLE, ι November 1989... In us<strong>in</strong>g the phrases "<strong>in</strong>tentionalfallacy" and "affective fallacy," I wasn'tunderwrit<strong>in</strong>g them, as it were, but us<strong>in</strong>gthem as ways to def<strong>in</strong>e a problem. Personally,I don't th<strong>in</strong>k one can be rigid <strong>in</strong>these matters. . . . Ultimately, one canonly (legitimately) judge what is there,but to explore an author's <strong>in</strong>tention is, forme, thoroughly legitimate as an <strong>in</strong>itial criticalprocedure: it can help one to understanda work <strong>of</strong> art, though one's evaluationshould not be dependent upon it. Asfor "affective fallacy," it can be a fallacy,as <strong>in</strong> the case <strong>of</strong> a radio station be<strong>in</strong>gflooded with wreaths when a characterdies <strong>in</strong> a soap opera. . . . On the otherhand, as Thomas Hardy saw, the deathbed<strong>of</strong> anyone is the fifth act <strong>of</strong> a tragedy.Of course we are affected by the stories<strong>of</strong> Lear, Tess, etc., and our "literaryjudgment" cannot but conta<strong>in</strong> this response.But I am rem<strong>in</strong>ded at this po<strong>in</strong>t<strong>of</strong> how mov<strong>in</strong>g Death <strong>of</strong> a Salesmanseemed when I first saw it, but how disillusionedI felt recently when I saw aseem<strong>in</strong>gly competent performance — becausethe whole construction and writ<strong>in</strong>gseemed so tawdry.. . . The matter <strong>of</strong> monotony <strong>in</strong> art isa very complicated one. (I would preferto say "monotonous" rather than "bor<strong>in</strong>g,"and should have made the dist<strong>in</strong>ction<strong>in</strong> my previous letter.) Polonius is a222
OPINIONS & NOTESbore, but is he bor<strong>in</strong>g <strong>in</strong> Hamlet? Obviouslynot.... At best, I suspect, monotonyis an effect to be used with caution andrestra<strong>in</strong>t. I confess I did f<strong>in</strong>d the dr<strong>in</strong>k<strong>in</strong>gand piss<strong>in</strong>g <strong>in</strong> Unknown Soldier monotonousbecause, after we'd had severalsuch scenes, I couldn't see that anyth<strong>in</strong>gadditional was be<strong>in</strong>g communicated.( Why not mention every time Sam bl<strong>in</strong>ked?). . . When I referred to "1980s fashion,"I merely meant that the so-called"age <strong>of</strong> permissiveness" allows a novelistto employ these references if he (or she)wants to, and thus does not require theexploration <strong>of</strong> possibly more subtle ways<strong>of</strong> represent<strong>in</strong>g our bodily repetitions. Myown experience <strong>in</strong> read<strong>in</strong>g is that, afterthe <strong>in</strong>itial sense <strong>of</strong> refresh<strong>in</strong>g shock hasworn <strong>of</strong>f (at least fictional characters pissjust as we all do! ), the law <strong>of</strong> dim<strong>in</strong>ish<strong>in</strong>greturns sets <strong>in</strong> with depress<strong>in</strong>g rapidity.. . . The next po<strong>in</strong>t I need to take upis what you say about my possible "classbias." In part, I'm prepared to pleadguilty here, but only <strong>in</strong> the sense that weare all <strong>in</strong>evitably affected by such matters(yourself as much as myself). But I can'tagree that I don't "wish to be identifiedwith a socially marg<strong>in</strong>al asshole like Collister";I might well not wish to be identifiedwith the asshole, but the "sociallymarg<strong>in</strong>al" is irrelevant. The reservationswould be moral ones, not social ones. But"identified with" is the wrong phrase anyway— other veterans might "identifywith" him but it would be arrogant <strong>of</strong> meeven to try, s<strong>in</strong>ce I lack the experienceyou give him. What you mean, I assume,is "empathize with" or someth<strong>in</strong>g likethat, and here I would plead not guilty.I am prepared to empathize with suchcharacters <strong>in</strong> art — I th<strong>in</strong>k <strong>of</strong> Shakespeare'sPistol, Defoe's Moll Flanders,Dickens's Magwitch, Cary's Gulley Jimson,Beckett's tramps, etc. — <strong>in</strong> vary<strong>in</strong>gdegrees depend<strong>in</strong>g on the effect aimed atand achieved by the writer. . . . With Collister,I'm split — I understand his bitterness(itself an <strong>in</strong>adequate word — "hatred,"perhaps, but that's not quite righteither), but I'm still uncerta<strong>in</strong> why hisexperience should have affected him morethan similar experiences must have affectedothers. .. . Does this sort <strong>of</strong> experienceabsolve one from the responsibilities <strong>of</strong>marriage and fatherhood? If that soundsqua<strong>in</strong>tly old-fashioned, so be it. I can onlyreport that a read<strong>in</strong>g <strong>of</strong> Unknown Soldierdidn't make me clear about these po<strong>in</strong>ts,and I feel that I need to be clear <strong>in</strong> orderto come to an adequate understand<strong>in</strong>g.In addition, I was a bit uneasy aboutwhere you (as author/narrator) stood. Igot the uneasy feel<strong>in</strong>g that I was expectedto respond more positively than, given theevidence I was confronted with, I could.(And degrees <strong>of</strong> positiveness are <strong>in</strong>volvedhere — I don't mean that I was whollynegative. ) I sensed, rightly or wrongly, anattempt to exalt this figure <strong>in</strong>to a k<strong>in</strong>d <strong>of</strong>heroic stature that I wasn't conv<strong>in</strong>ced hecould susta<strong>in</strong>.One place where we may f<strong>in</strong>d ourselvesdisagree<strong>in</strong>g on more general grounds isthe matter <strong>of</strong> "the perfectibility <strong>of</strong> a work<strong>of</strong> art." I agree that it is ultimately unatta<strong>in</strong>able(if one doesn't happen to beGod), but I do th<strong>in</strong>k that every artistshould work to that end. I don't followyou when you go on from there to say that"the version published is simply [simply?!]the version that happens to be published."Shouldn't one be able to do more than"hope" that it's "the best version possibleat that time"?. . . "F<strong>in</strong>ally (at last, he says)" — ! If<strong>in</strong>d it difficult to reconcile your statement... "I simply believe, artistically, that onemust have the th<strong>in</strong>g itself" with yourstatement... "I wasn't attempt<strong>in</strong>g 'reallife,' I was attempt<strong>in</strong>g real art." I don'tsee how you can have "the th<strong>in</strong>g itself"<strong>in</strong> art. Perhaps one <strong>of</strong> the th<strong>in</strong>gs we areargu<strong>in</strong>g about is the possible paradoxthat, the closer one gets to try<strong>in</strong>g to present"the th<strong>in</strong>g itself," the more the chasm223
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