renshaw_jason_boost_writing_4

Listen to a teacher giving a boy advice on how to improve his essay.
Edit the text based on what you hear.
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""lion.
do llnts,lhn need *o
decde lalw ll.,ey are goirE Io Lavel. Common ways of lra,el;.g indude daurg and yirg.
Fi*l o{ all, tlere s dnvirg. Ge;.g by c,ar r,an be good bec.aue * allows people lo dec;de
e,lac'lly wFere lo go and wlen *o s]op. Howerer, becar-se dnv;rg can be shw, people c,an
oflen only go places lhal are nearby,
Takirg +le lrain. TAs is a greal way *o go lo places lha! are a lo.g way away. Takir1 +le
+rain is cheaper lAan {lyng, und lakrg lle 1rc;n s /ess lnng #,an daarg- Travehrs c,an
buy g.eaf snack on lhe lrain, and 1.ley can :e.e sorne gret *.ene,y ou* o{ 14e windo,,r-
La* we have {lyrE. eeople lravel l;ke
+his i{ +l-ey reed lo go a IorE way.
Flyirg s fasl and fun. Il feels amazirg
lo 1y above lle c;bud and across
oceans lo faraway counktes.
Dnirg by c.ar, Iakirg lAe #ain are
cxtmmon ways lo lravel. which way
people c,laose deperds on wl.ere lLey
*anl lo go and whal lhey *a,* *o do.
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