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<strong>Westward</strong><br />

<strong>to</strong> <strong>Oregon</strong><br />

Written by Patricia Pfitsch<br />

Illustrated by John English<br />

Overview: This s<strong>to</strong>ry takes<br />

place about 150 years ago.<br />

Lizzie and her family are<br />

moving west in a covered<br />

wagon, but something awful<br />

happens that could end their<br />

journey.What will the family<br />

do? Read <strong>to</strong> find out.<br />

DETERMINING<br />

THE PURPOSE<br />

★ COMPREHENSION STRATEGY<br />

• forming and supporting opinions<br />

★ LITERACY SKILLS<br />

• word level: inflected endings<br />

• sentence level: figurative<br />

language<br />

• text level: type of genre<br />

(his<strong>to</strong>rical fiction)<br />

ESL•ELL<br />

• audi<strong>to</strong>ry discrimination<br />

★ WRITING CONNECTION<br />

• revising drafts <strong>to</strong> include<br />

description<br />

50 Shared Reading<br />

CENTER ACTIVITIES<br />

ACTIVITIES FOR SMALL-GROUP OR INDEPENDENT WORK<br />

Here are suggestions for center activities that complement the<br />

themes and skills featured in the whole-group lessons for<br />

<strong>Westward</strong> <strong>to</strong> <strong>Oregon</strong>. We suggest that you introduce these centers<br />

<strong>to</strong> children on Day 1 and have them available for Small-Group and<br />

Independent Work throughout the 11-day teaching sequence.<br />

Book Nook<br />

Place a small copy of<br />

<strong>Westward</strong> <strong>to</strong> <strong>Oregon</strong> in the<br />

library for children <strong>to</strong><br />

reread. Make<br />

available other<br />

his<strong>to</strong>rical fiction<br />

selections for<br />

children <strong>to</strong> read.<br />

Read the Room<br />

Encourage children <strong>to</strong> reread<br />

the Big Book <strong>Westward</strong> <strong>to</strong><br />

<strong>Oregon</strong> with a classmate.<br />

Suggest that as they read<br />

they talk about their favorite<br />

parts. Encourage children<br />

<strong>to</strong> also note the words with<br />

inflected endings. Children<br />

may want <strong>to</strong> look for these<br />

words<br />

elsewhere in<br />

the room.<br />

Word Zone<br />

Have children use magnetic<br />

letters, letter cards, or other<br />

manipulatives <strong>to</strong> make<br />

words with the endings -ed<br />

or -ing. Suggest that children<br />

look in textbooks, books in<br />

the Book Nook, or on<br />

posters and other items in<br />

the classroom <strong>to</strong> find<br />

words <strong>to</strong> make. If<br />

possible, children can<br />

first make the root<br />

word and then the<br />

word with the<br />

ending.<br />

CENTERS<br />

Artist’s Studio<br />

Provide art materials such as<br />

shoe boxes, straws,<br />

cardboard, scraps of cloth,<br />

string, craft sticks, bottle<br />

caps, scissors, and glue.<br />

Invite children <strong>to</strong> design and<br />

build a covered wagon.<br />

Encourage children <strong>to</strong> use<br />

the wagon <strong>to</strong> help<br />

them imagine what<br />

life was like in the<br />

pioneer days.<br />

Listening Post<br />

Children may listen <strong>to</strong><br />

<strong>Westward</strong> <strong>to</strong> <strong>Oregon</strong> on<br />

audiotape while following<br />

along in the small copies of<br />

the book. You may want <strong>to</strong><br />

provide other recordings of<br />

his<strong>to</strong>rical fiction s<strong>to</strong>ries,<br />

including some from<br />

The Little House<br />

on the Prairie<br />

series.<br />

Writer’s Den<br />

Invite children <strong>to</strong> write or<br />

draw in their literature<br />

response journals about<br />

Lizzie’s journey westward <strong>to</strong><br />

<strong>Oregon</strong> in a wagon train.<br />

Encourage children <strong>to</strong><br />

make a list of phrases that<br />

use sensory details.


Day 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11<br />

WARMING UP<br />

Begin the lesson by rereading a familiar Big Book or poetry chart.You may wish <strong>to</strong><br />

ask a volunteer <strong>to</strong> pick a favorite.<br />

SETTING THE SCENE<br />

• Tap in<strong>to</strong> children’s prior knowledge.<br />

Have you ever moved or taken a long trip with your family? What was it like? How did<br />

you feel? What do you think a long trip in a covered wagon would be like?<br />

• Introduce the book and provide children with an overview.<br />

• Make predictions about the book. Invite children <strong>to</strong> look at the cover.<br />

Tell me about what you see on the cover. Have you ever seen wagons like these? When<br />

did you see them? What might Lizzie’s family see on their journey?<br />

READING THE TEXT<br />

1. Read the title page. Prompt children <strong>to</strong> predict what will happen in this book.<br />

Tell your neighbor what kind of trouble you think the people in a wagon train might<br />

encounter on a long journey like this.<br />

2. Use a pointer as you read the Big Book.You may also want <strong>to</strong> read the words of<br />

the different characters in different voices. Allow children ample time <strong>to</strong> view the<br />

illustrations without interrupting the flow of the s<strong>to</strong>ry.<br />

3. Before turning <strong>to</strong> page 12,ask:<br />

What do you think Mama will do if Papa is not back by morning? How do you think<br />

Lizzie feels? How can you tell how she feels? How would you feel?<br />

Allow children opportunities <strong>to</strong> express their opinions and experience the<br />

suspense of the s<strong>to</strong>ry as you read the rest of the book.<br />

RETURNING TO THE TEXT<br />

1. Discuss the s<strong>to</strong>ry. Use open-ended questions.<br />

Why do you think Mama treated Lizzie differently than Papa did? Why do you think<br />

Mama decided <strong>to</strong> stay behind when the wagon train left in the morning? Were you<br />

surprised? What would you have done?<br />

2. Reread sections of the book. Invite children <strong>to</strong> read some of the dialogues.<br />

Remember,the reading should be focused on enjoyment.<br />

SMALL-GROUP/INDEPENDENT WORK<br />

Introduce children <strong>to</strong> various center activities that will accompany your class study of<br />

this book. (You may wish <strong>to</strong> delay the introduction of the Word Zone until you have<br />

introduced inflected endings on Day 4.) Each child may then choose his or her own<br />

activity,or you may wish <strong>to</strong> assign activities <strong>to</strong> each group. Use this time <strong>to</strong> meet with<br />

guided reading groups.<br />

SHARING TIME<br />

Set aside a brief amount of sharing time,five <strong>to</strong> ten minutes,at the end of the session.<br />

Invite volunteers <strong>to</strong> share with the class what they learned while participating in<br />

Small-Group/Independent Work. Invite children <strong>to</strong> tell their classmates something<br />

they had difficulty with and what they did <strong>to</strong> problem solve. ✓<br />

✓<br />

Coaching Point<br />

Display a map of North America<br />

and invite volunteers <strong>to</strong> locate<br />

<strong>Oregon</strong> and where you are. Then<br />

explain that most wagon trains<br />

traveling the <strong>Oregon</strong> Trail started<br />

their journey in Missouri. Use the<br />

map’s scale <strong>to</strong> point out the<br />

distance between the two states.<br />

Coaching Point<br />

Children may have difficulty<br />

understanding who is speaking,<br />

because some of the quotations<br />

do not have dialogue tags. Point<br />

out that the author begins a<br />

new paragraph each time a<br />

different character speaks.<br />

✓Assessment<br />

These questions may be used on<br />

any day during sharing time <strong>to</strong><br />

gather information about<br />

children’s learning and interests<br />

during center time.<br />

• Describe the wagon you<br />

made in the Artist’s Studio.<br />

• Tell me about the books<br />

you read in the Book<br />

Nook. Were there any<br />

books similar <strong>to</strong> <strong>Westward</strong><br />

<strong>to</strong> <strong>Oregon</strong>?<br />

• Did you write in your<br />

journal? If so, what<br />

descriptive phrases with<br />

sensory details did you<br />

include?<br />

• Which words with -ed did<br />

you make in the Word<br />

Zone? With -ing? What are<br />

their root words?<br />

<strong>Westward</strong> <strong>to</strong> <strong>Oregon</strong> 51


✓<br />

✓Assessment<br />

Observe children as they read<br />

and form opinions on Day 2.<br />

Think about and note, mentally<br />

or in writing, the following:<br />

• Are children able <strong>to</strong> give<br />

examples from the book <strong>to</strong><br />

support their opinions?<br />

• Can children identify the ways<br />

in which characters are<br />

different?<br />

• Do children relate personal<br />

experience <strong>to</strong> support their<br />

opinions?<br />

52 Shared Reading<br />

WARMING<br />

UP<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

WARMING<br />

UP<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

Day 2<br />

WHOLE-GROUP INSTRUCTION<br />

Forming and supporting opinions<br />

1. Reread pages 2–7 of the Big Book<br />

<strong>Westward</strong> <strong>to</strong> <strong>Oregon</strong>. Introduce the<br />

comprehension strategy of forming and<br />

supporting opinions. As you read,model<br />

how the text and illustrations of the s<strong>to</strong>ry<br />

help you <strong>to</strong> form opinions about the<br />

characters and events. For example,after<br />

reading pages 4 and 5,you might say:<br />

Model As I was reading this part of the s<strong>to</strong>ry, I<br />

thought about how Mama and Papa treated<br />

Lizzie. The pictures on pages 2–7 and Papa’s<br />

words, "You’re as good at driving the team as I<br />

am," tell me that Papa lets Lizzie do things that<br />

girls don’t usually get <strong>to</strong> do. I think if I were<br />

Lizzie I would like that. I don’t think Mama feels<br />

the same as Papa though. What words or<br />

pictures in the book would support that opinion?<br />

2. Continue <strong>to</strong> read pages 8–15 with<br />

children. As you read,encourage children<br />

<strong>to</strong> tell their opinions about what is<br />

happening,as well as about how characters<br />

feel. During the discussion,invite children<br />

<strong>to</strong> relate relevant personal experiences <strong>to</strong><br />

support their opinions.<br />

3. Following the reading,list on chart paper<br />

children’s opinions and the part of the s<strong>to</strong>ry<br />

that they feel supports their opinion. ✓<br />

Day 3<br />

WHOLE-GROUP INSTRUCTION<br />

Forming and supporting opinions<br />

1. Read pages 16–24 of the Big Book<br />

<strong>Westward</strong> <strong>to</strong> <strong>Oregon</strong>. As you read,invite<br />

children <strong>to</strong> form opinions about the events<br />

and characters and <strong>to</strong> add these <strong>to</strong> the chart<br />

started on Day 2.<br />

Often when we read, we form opinions about<br />

the characters, and we decide whether we like<br />

each character or not. We form an opinion<br />

about each character by what the character<br />

says or does. As we read more, we may change<br />

our opinion. What additional information do<br />

we learn about the characters in this part of<br />

the book? How does this new information<br />

change your opinion of the characters?<br />

SMALL-GROUP/<br />

INDEPENDENT<br />

WORK<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

SMALL-GROUP/<br />

INDEPENDENT<br />

WORK<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

SHARING<br />

TIME<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

SHARING<br />

TIME<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.


WARMING<br />

UP<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

WARMING<br />

UP<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

Day 3<br />

continued<br />

WHOLE-GROUP INSTRUCTION<br />

Forming and supporting opinions<br />

2. Help children focus on the character of<br />

Mama by prompting them with questions.<br />

What did you think of Mama at the beginning<br />

of the s<strong>to</strong>ry? What words would you have<br />

used <strong>to</strong> describe her? What happened in the<br />

s<strong>to</strong>ry that made you feel this way? How did<br />

your opinion of Mama change as you read the<br />

s<strong>to</strong>ry? How did she show that she truly loved<br />

her family? Do you think her choice <strong>to</strong> stay<br />

behind showed she was brave or foolish?<br />

Why?<br />

3. Have children choose two characters from<br />

the s<strong>to</strong>ry and write a sentence or two<br />

stating their opinion of each character and<br />

why they feel this way.<br />

Day 4<br />

WHOLE-GROUP INSTRUCTION<br />

Inflected endings<br />

1. Use small self-stick notes <strong>to</strong> cover most of<br />

the inflected endings on pages 4 and 5 in<br />

the Big Book <strong>Westward</strong> <strong>to</strong> <strong>Oregon</strong>. Read<br />

aloud these pages.When you come <strong>to</strong> a<br />

word whose inflected ending is covered,say<br />

the root part of the word and have children<br />

say the ending. S<strong>to</strong>p periodically,and ask<br />

children how they knew which ending <strong>to</strong><br />

use. Lead children <strong>to</strong> understand that the<br />

ending -ed means the action happened in<br />

the past and that the ending -ing means the<br />

action continued for some time.<br />

2. Organize children in<strong>to</strong> small groups.<br />

Distribute <strong>to</strong> each group four index cards,<br />

two marked ed and two marked ing.<br />

Children can take turns selecting a card and<br />

saying a word with that ending. Children<br />

can identify the root word and then use the<br />

word with the ending in a sentence.<br />

✓<br />

• Rhyme Chart 10: Time in a Garden<br />

• Teaching Card 10B: Action Word Endings<br />

es, ing, s<br />

• Rhyme Chart 11: Joan’s Boat<br />

• Teaching Card 11B: Action Word<br />

Ending ed<br />

SMALL-GROUP/<br />

INDEPENDENT<br />

WORK<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

SMALL-GROUP/<br />

INDEPENDENT<br />

WORK<br />

Introduce<br />

the Word<br />

Zone<br />

<strong>to</strong>day.<br />

Review<br />

the other<br />

center<br />

activities.<br />

SHARING<br />

TIME<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

SHARING<br />

TIME<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

✓<br />

ESL • ELL<br />

Be aware that some children<br />

may need extra practice<br />

distinguishing the spoken root<br />

words (for example, chuckle)<br />

from the spoken words with the<br />

-ed ending (chuckled).<br />

✓Assessment<br />

Observe children as they make<br />

words with inflected endings.<br />

Think about and note, mentally<br />

or in writing, the following:<br />

• Which children can correctly<br />

add endings <strong>to</strong> root words?<br />

• Which children can use words<br />

with the endings -ed and -ing<br />

in sentences?<br />

<strong>Westward</strong> <strong>to</strong> <strong>Oregon</strong> 53


Related Trade Book Titles<br />

The following trade books are<br />

excellent examples of his<strong>to</strong>rical<br />

fiction.<br />

When Jessie Came Across the<br />

Sea, Amy Hest, Candlewick<br />

Press, 1997.<br />

This Time Tempe Wick, Patricia<br />

Lee Gauch, Coward, McCann &<br />

Geoghegan, Inc., 1974.<br />

Coaching Point<br />

You may want <strong>to</strong> provide other<br />

types of fiction, including<br />

traditional tales or science<br />

fiction so that children can<br />

compare and contrast the<br />

different genres.<br />

54 Shared Reading<br />

WARMING<br />

UP<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

WARMING<br />

UP<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

Day 5<br />

WHOLE-GROUP INSTRUCTION<br />

Type of genre: his<strong>to</strong>rical fiction<br />

1. Tell children that <strong>Westward</strong> <strong>to</strong> <strong>Oregon</strong> is<br />

about made-up events,but it tells about a<br />

specific time period in his<strong>to</strong>ry. In addition,<br />

the s<strong>to</strong>ry details and the problems the<br />

characters face are ones that really occurred<br />

at that time in our country’s his<strong>to</strong>ry.This<br />

kind of book is called his<strong>to</strong>rical fiction.<br />

2. Write on the board the column headings<br />

Characters,Plot,Setting,and Time. Have<br />

children provide information for each of<br />

these categories.You may want <strong>to</strong> page<br />

through the Big Book <strong>Westward</strong> <strong>to</strong> <strong>Oregon</strong><br />

<strong>to</strong> spark ideas.<br />

3. Read each column aloud.<br />

Which of these things tell you that the s<strong>to</strong>ry<br />

happened during a specific time period?<br />

Explain your answer.<br />

Day 6<br />

WHOLE-GROUP INSTRUCTION<br />

Type of genre: his<strong>to</strong>rical fiction<br />

1. Encourage children <strong>to</strong> discuss how a s<strong>to</strong>ry<br />

like this teaches us about life in the past.<br />

Share with them some background<br />

information about the <strong>Oregon</strong> Trail.You<br />

might explain that the <strong>Oregon</strong> Trail was<br />

about 2,000 miles long and <strong>to</strong>ok about 6<br />

months <strong>to</strong> travel.There were no roads.The<br />

pioneers had <strong>to</strong> cross prairies,deserts,and<br />

mountains <strong>to</strong> get <strong>to</strong> <strong>Oregon</strong>.They had <strong>to</strong><br />

cross rivers without bridges.They needed <strong>to</strong><br />

travel close <strong>to</strong> rivers in order <strong>to</strong> have water.<br />

They usually did not have a doc<strong>to</strong>r<br />

traveling with them <strong>to</strong> care for the people<br />

who got sick or hurt.<br />

2. As you discuss what life was like for the<br />

people traveling the <strong>Oregon</strong> Trail,invite<br />

children <strong>to</strong> compare life back then with life<br />

<strong>to</strong>day. Draw a simple chart on the board or<br />

chart paper comparing such <strong>to</strong>pics as travel,<br />

food,communication,and emergency care.<br />

Invite children <strong>to</strong> list their ideas about each<br />

<strong>to</strong>pic for then and now.The completed chart<br />

might look something like the following:<br />

SMALL-GROUP/<br />

INDEPENDENT<br />

WORK<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

SMALL-GROUP/<br />

INDEPENDENT<br />

WORK<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

SHARING<br />

TIME<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

SHARING<br />

TIME<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.


WARMING<br />

UP<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

WARMING<br />

UP<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

Day 6<br />

WHOLE-GROUP INSTRUCTION<br />

Type of genre: his<strong>to</strong>rical fiction<br />

What Life Is Like Then Now<br />

Travel covered wagon, cars, trains, airplanes,<br />

horseback, no roads, highways, can travel<br />

<strong>to</strong>ok 6 months <strong>to</strong> travel same distance in a day<br />

from Missouri <strong>to</strong> <strong>Oregon</strong> on an airplane or a<br />

week in a car<br />

Food no s<strong>to</strong>res, had <strong>to</strong> bring hundreds of s<strong>to</strong>res and<br />

food for journey or restaurants, can s<strong>to</strong>p<br />

hunt for food, had <strong>to</strong> anywhere <strong>to</strong> buy food<br />

travel close <strong>to</strong> rivers for and water<br />

water<br />

Communication no phones, no mail people often travel<br />

with cell phones and<br />

can call for help<br />

Emergency care no doc<strong>to</strong>rs or hospitals, doc<strong>to</strong>rs and emergency<br />

people had <strong>to</strong> treat services available in<br />

themselves when sick nearly every <strong>to</strong>wn<br />

or injured<br />

3. After you have completed the comparison<br />

chart,encourage children <strong>to</strong> share their<br />

opinions about whether they would have<br />

liked <strong>to</strong> live back then. Have them support<br />

their opinions with details from the s<strong>to</strong>ry<br />

and the discussion.<br />

WHOLE-GROUP INSTRUCTION<br />

Figurative language<br />

Day 7<br />

1. Reread the second paragraph on page 3 of<br />

the Big Book <strong>Westward</strong> <strong>to</strong> <strong>Oregon</strong> and<br />

discuss how the author uses figurative<br />

language.<br />

Authors often use words that help us paint a<br />

picture in our mind. Sometimes authors also<br />

make interesting comparisons <strong>to</strong> help us<br />

visualize something. Close your eyes and I’ll<br />

read the sentence about the wagon train again.<br />

Tell me how it looks and sounds in your mind.<br />

What noises does the author compare <strong>to</strong> music?<br />

2. On chart paper write the sentence, The<br />

wagon was noisy. Ask children how this<br />

sentence is different from the author’s.<br />

What words or phrases could we use <strong>to</strong> help<br />

readers create a picture in their mind?<br />

Record several versions of the sentence and<br />

compare them. Save the chart for use on<br />

Days 9 and 10.<br />

continued<br />

SMALL-GROUP/<br />

INDEPENDENT<br />

WORK<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

SMALL-GROUP/<br />

INDEPENDENT<br />

WORK<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

SHARING<br />

TIME<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

SHARING<br />

TIME<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

Coaching Point<br />

Encourage children <strong>to</strong> think of<br />

all their senses as they<br />

participate in these language<br />

and writing activities. Use<br />

additional trade books <strong>to</strong><br />

provide children with other<br />

examples of figurative language<br />

and sensory details.<br />

Related Trade Book Titles<br />

The following trade books<br />

provide examples of figurative<br />

language.<br />

Nine for California, Sonia<br />

Levitin, Orchard Books, 1996.<br />

Dear Rebecca, Winter Is Here,<br />

Jean Craighead George,<br />

HarperCollins Publishers, 1993.<br />

The Island of the Skog, Steven<br />

Kellogg, Dial Books for Young<br />

Readers, 1973.<br />

<strong>Westward</strong> <strong>to</strong> <strong>Oregon</strong> 55


Coaching Point<br />

You may want <strong>to</strong> extend the<br />

activity by having children<br />

rewrite the following sentences<br />

<strong>to</strong> include describing words or<br />

comparisons:<br />

The dog caught the Frisbee.<br />

The girl walked home.<br />

He drove the bus.<br />

The noise was loud.<br />

She kicked the ball.<br />

Teaching s TIP<br />

Skip lines when you write so that<br />

you will have room <strong>to</strong> revise the<br />

work later. You may also want <strong>to</strong><br />

display examples of figurative<br />

writing from Days 7 and 8.<br />

56 Shared Reading<br />

WARMING<br />

UP<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

WARMING<br />

UP<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

WHOLE-GROUP INSTRUCTION<br />

Figurative language<br />

1. Discuss the comparisons (similes) in these<br />

sentences from the Big Book <strong>Westward</strong> <strong>to</strong><br />

<strong>Oregon</strong>: You’re going <strong>to</strong> grow up as wild as a<br />

coyote (page 5); Lizzie ate, but each bite felt like<br />

a bee buzzing in her s<strong>to</strong>mach (page 9); and She<br />

felt like she had swallowed a s<strong>to</strong>ne (page 17).<br />

2. Have children name objects,people,or events<br />

from the s<strong>to</strong>ry and record them on a sheet of<br />

chart paper—for example,a covered wagon,<br />

the wagon train,a whip,baby Jeremiah.<br />

Now let’s think of a comparison for one of<br />

these s<strong>to</strong>ry details. A wagon train, for<br />

instance, is long and thin like a rope or like a<br />

snake. Here are some comparisons we could<br />

make: The wagon train stretched across the<br />

land like a giant snake and The wagon train<br />

went on and on like a very long rope.<br />

3. Encourage children <strong>to</strong> think of<br />

comparisons for some or all of the s<strong>to</strong>ry<br />

details on the list. Record the comparisons<br />

and save them for use on Days 9 and 10. (It<br />

is not necessary <strong>to</strong> think of a comparison<br />

for each item on the list.)<br />

WHOLE-GROUP INSTRUCTION<br />

Revising drafts <strong>to</strong> include description<br />

1. Reread pages 18–24 of the Big Book<br />

<strong>Westward</strong> <strong>to</strong> <strong>Oregon</strong>.<br />

2. Have children brains<strong>to</strong>rm one or two<br />

possible continuations of the s<strong>to</strong>ry.<br />

What do you think happened next? How do you<br />

think Lizzie handled the horses? Do you think<br />

the family caught up with the wagon train?<br />

3. Tell children that <strong>to</strong>gether you will write a<br />

continuation for the s<strong>to</strong>ry. Encourage<br />

children <strong>to</strong> brains<strong>to</strong>rm a list of ideas. Explain<br />

that first you will decide which events <strong>to</strong><br />

write about.Then,with children’s help,put<br />

the events in an order that makes sense.<br />

Finally,with children’s assistance write a first<br />

draft. Save the work for use on Day 10.<br />

Day 8<br />

SMALL-GROUP/<br />

INDEPENDENT<br />

WORK<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

Day 9<br />

SMALL-GROUP/<br />

INDEPENDENT<br />

WORK<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

SHARING<br />

TIME<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

SHARING<br />

TIME<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.


WARMING<br />

UP<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

Day 11<br />

WARMING<br />

UP<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

WHOLE-GROUP INSTRUCTION<br />

Revising drafts <strong>to</strong> include description<br />

1. Reread with children what you wrote on<br />

Day 9.<br />

2. Encourage children <strong>to</strong> think of suggestions<br />

that might make the writing more<br />

descriptive. Refer <strong>to</strong> the lists of figurative<br />

language children made on Days 7 and 8<br />

for ideas. Add children’s suggestions. Suggest<br />

that children also look for correct<br />

capitalization,spelling,and punctuation.<br />

3. Read through the draft again,making sure<br />

that the changes are incorporated correctly<br />

and that they make sense. Explain that it is<br />

the writer’s decision which changes <strong>to</strong><br />

include in the final draft.Then,with<br />

children’s help,write a final draft of the<br />

s<strong>to</strong>ry’s continuation.<br />

• Mini-lesson 43: Adding details<br />

• Mini-lesson 45: Adding interesting words<br />

• Strategy Card: Writers learn from other<br />

writers.<br />

WHOLE-GROUP INSTRUCTION<br />

Celebration<br />

Reread the Big Book <strong>Westward</strong><br />

<strong>to</strong> <strong>Oregon</strong>, the s<strong>to</strong>ry<br />

continuation,and any other<br />

products generated during the<br />

previous 10 sessions. Invite<br />

children <strong>to</strong> share their<br />

thoughts and questions about<br />

the various activities they were<br />

involved in. Allow time for<br />

completion of activities. ✓<br />

SMALL-GROUP/<br />

INDEPENDENT<br />

WORK<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

SMALL-GROUP/<br />

INDEPENDENT<br />

WORK<br />

Day 10<br />

SHARING<br />

TIME<br />

Refer <strong>to</strong><br />

Day 1.<br />

Review the various center activities<br />

that children may be involved in<br />

<strong>to</strong>day. On this final day,you may<br />

want <strong>to</strong> allow children <strong>to</strong> revisit a<br />

favorite center,<strong>to</strong> complete work at<br />

one of the centers,or <strong>to</strong> visit a center<br />

not yet visited while you meet with<br />

guided reading groups.<br />

✓<br />

✓Assessment<br />

• How independent and selfmotivated<br />

were children with<br />

their individual work?<br />

• To what extent were children<br />

able <strong>to</strong> correlate group lessons<br />

with their individual work?<br />

• Did children support their<br />

opinions with evidence found<br />

in text, illustrations, and<br />

personal experience?<br />

• How did children apply their<br />

knowledge and understanding<br />

of figurative language <strong>to</strong> their<br />

own writing?<br />

• Were children able <strong>to</strong><br />

compare and contrast various<br />

types of genre and articulate<br />

the characteristics of his<strong>to</strong>rical<br />

fiction?<br />

• What further instruction do I<br />

need <strong>to</strong> plan for the<br />

comprehension and literacy<br />

skills covered in this book?<br />

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