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CraftPlus ® Writing Pacing Chart<br />

Week One —Seventh Grade Descriptive Skills<br />

4 CraftPlus® Daily Writing Lessons<br />

Monday Tuesday Wednesday<br />

Target Skill: Composing – word choice<br />

(strong verbs)<br />

Mini-lesson: (10-15 minutes)<br />

Review the concept that strong verbs help<br />

readers visualize text. Offer examples, and have<br />

students differentiate between strong and weak<br />

verbs (ate vs. munched, nibbled, devoured). As<br />

you read aloud the first chapter of Feathers by<br />

Jacqueline Woodson, have students jot down<br />

examples of strong verbs they hear (shrugged,<br />

tapped, float). After reading, compile a master list<br />

and clarify misconceptions.<br />

Workshop: (10-15 minutes)<br />

Divide students into small groups. Give each<br />

group a few age-appropriate novels and nonfiction<br />

books. Students search through books<br />

and look for examples of strong verbs. Each<br />

group should designate a recorder to list the<br />

strong verbs.<br />

Response: (10-15 minutes)<br />

Groups read their strong verb lists. As they read,<br />

add to the class list of strong verbs.<br />

Teacher Tip<br />

Target Skill: Composing – word choice<br />

(strong verbs)<br />

Mini-lesson: (10-15 minutes)<br />

Review the concept of strong verbs. Read<br />

examples from the class list. Ask students what<br />

they picture when reading different verbs.<br />

Read from “Soaring with Books” in Listen to This<br />

by Marcia S. Freeman. Have students jot down<br />

strong verbs that help them visualize the text<br />

(pocketed, stashed, slung). After reading, have<br />

students share the verbs and visual images they<br />

prompted.<br />

Workshop: (10-15 minutes)<br />

Display a picture prompt depicting action and<br />

have students list strong verbs associated with<br />

the action in the picture. Students list at least five<br />

strong verbs, then write a descriptive paragraph<br />

about the picture using those strong verbs.<br />

Response: (10-15 minutes)<br />

Students read their pieces to the class. Repeat<br />

and identify strong verbs after they have read.<br />

Clarify misconceptions.<br />

Modeling is a key writing best practice. Thinking out loud as you create your teacher models helps students understand<br />

the thought process behind applying the skill. Remember to use student models in a positive way. When you need a<br />

“non-example,” create your own model.<br />

Target Skill: Organizational –<br />

pre-writing (list and clump details)<br />

Mini-lesson: (10-15 minutes)<br />

Have each student list details about himself<br />

or herself and link related details by pieces<br />

should be dense with details. Discuss character<br />

description and begin listing details about<br />

yourself. Have students add details. Color-code<br />

to link related details. Save for the lesson that<br />

follows.<br />

Workshop: (10-15 minutes)<br />

Offer another general topic or current topic<br />

of study. Have each student list details about<br />

himself or herself and link related details by<br />

color-coding with highlighters, markers, or color<br />

pencils. Circulate and assist as needed.<br />

Response: (10-15 minutes)<br />

Allow volunteers share their lists with the class<br />

and explain their grouping strategies.


Thursday Friday Instructional Notes<br />

Target Skill: Organizational – thesis<br />

statement (generalize with details)<br />

Mini-lesson: (10-15 minutes)<br />

Review the importance of details in the body of<br />

a writing piece. Reread the descriptions of Trevor<br />

from the last long paragraph of the first chapter<br />

of Feathers by Jacqueline Woodson. Discuss the<br />

way the last sentence of the paragraph forms a<br />

general conclusion thesis statement about Trevor<br />

(others are afraid of him). Reread each group of<br />

related details from your personal description<br />

model created during the previous lesson. Work<br />

with students to write a thesis statement that<br />

draws generalizations about each group of<br />

related details.<br />

Workshop: (10-15 minutes)<br />

Students will write a general-conclusion thesis<br />

statement about each group of details, based on<br />

the color-coded groups of related details from<br />

personal description lists created during the<br />

previous lesson.<br />

Response: (10-15 minutes)<br />

Allow volunteers to share their thesis<br />

statements with the class. Identify thorough lists<br />

and logical linking of details.<br />

Crosswalk<br />

CD: Handouts-Boring paragraph 1, Peer conferencing;<br />

High-Frequency Word List.<br />

Assessment: word choice (strong verbs),<br />

pre-writing, thesis statement<br />

Mini-lesson: (5-10 minutes)<br />

Review strong verbs and thesis statements.<br />

Review the first few steps to writing a descriptive<br />

piece about yourself (list details then clump<br />

them, form thesis statements). Verbally model<br />

how you would use your details and thesis<br />

statements to write a descriptive piece about<br />

yourself, being sure to add strong verbs.<br />

Workshop: (20-25 minutes)<br />

Students write a descriptive piece about<br />

themselves using their groups of related details<br />

and thesis statements. Students should include<br />

at least five strong verbs in their pieces.<br />

Response: (5 minutes)<br />

Collect and score pieces using a multiple-skills<br />

rubric.<br />

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Have partners interview each other, then use<br />

the information to write descriptive pieces<br />

about each other.<br />

Give students categories to use in listing<br />

details about themselves (appearance, talents,<br />

interests) and have them list details and write a<br />

thesis statement for each.<br />

Conventions<br />

Capitalization (first word in sentence, dialogue,<br />

proper noun, date, the word “I”)<br />

End marks (exclamation mark, period, question<br />

mark)<br />

Name/date on paper (continue throughout year)<br />

Noun (common, proper)<br />

Sentence structure (simple, compound,<br />

complex)<br />

Subject/predicate review<br />

• Verbs (strong; linking + strong and -ing)<br />

• Usage: it’s/its; they’re/their/there<br />

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Write complete sentences (fragment vs.<br />

sentence; run-on)<br />

Alternative literature model suggestion: Over the course of this week, read the first two<br />

chapters of The Bad Beginning by Lemony Snicket. Identify strong verbs (skip, construct,<br />

perished) and thesis statements. (Of course, it didn’t make things any easier that they had lost<br />

their home as well, and all of their possessions; Their home destroyed, the Baudelaires had to<br />

recuperate from their terrible loss in the Poe household, which was not at all agreeable.) Point<br />

out that the details following thesis statements presented at the beginnings of paragraphs<br />

support the generalization made by the thesis statements. Review the details used to<br />

describe Count Olaf and have students construct a thesis statement about this character.<br />

Seventh Grade / Week One 5

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