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Page 30<br />

Writing Poetry Successfully: 99 Propositions - Tom Montag by Joan T. Zeier<br />

Tom Montag advised us to pick and<br />

choose from his 99 propositions, and use<br />

those which work for us. I managed to<br />

scribble down about 96 keepers. Contemplative,<br />

witty, hard-edged, or metaphoric,<br />

they all rang true—even the ones that contradicted<br />

each other as truths sometimes<br />

do.<br />

Still, his opening proposition, repeated<br />

at least four times, is surely his central<br />

theme: Listen to the poem. What is it trying to say Let it<br />

follow its own form. It is a chrysalis—a midwife—a radio.<br />

(It’s not too hard to figure out those metaphors.). It is all<br />

about the poem, not about you. The poem knows. Listen to<br />

it, not to those around you who have their own agendas.<br />

Tom’s presentation offered several pithy quotes.<br />

•“Use a word just for its sound (as important as meaning); If<br />

sound is not as important to you as meaning, you may not<br />

be a poet.”<br />

•“Poetry is not self-expression, not therapy. Put your feelings<br />

in your diary.”<br />

•“Trim the first lines. Be ruthless. Poetry is subtraction, not<br />

addition.”<br />

•“Three essentials are measure, sound, and image.”<br />

Literary Agent, Jack Byrne by Deb Baker<br />

Milwaukee literary agent, Jack Byrne,<br />

presented a comprehensive analysis of an<br />

agent’s role in the <strong>pub</strong>lishing process,<br />

beginning with guidelines to selecting an<br />

agent. He cautioned against unscrupulous<br />

agents who charge reading fees or suggest<br />

payments to book doctors. A reputable<br />

literary agency does not expect any<br />

monetary output until the manuscript is<br />

•“If it ain’t broke, break it (use surprise and change).”<br />

Using the examples of Walt Whitman, Emily Dickinson,<br />

and Lorine Niedecker, Montag tells all writers, “Believe in<br />

yourself when no one else does. And always, listen to the<br />

poem.”<br />

[Editor’s Note: All 99 of Tom’s most excellent Propositions<br />

can be found at http://middlewesterner.typepad.com/<br />

middlewesterner/2006/09/writing_poetry_.html.] #<br />

sold.<br />

A literary agent’s help isn’t necessary for short fiction,<br />

technical writing, or poetry, but a writer should have representation<br />

for full-length fiction and non-fiction proposals. The<br />

principal reason is to protect the writer’s rights, negotiate advances<br />

and payout schedules, and to act as a buffer between<br />

the writer and editor.<br />

To stand out and improve your chances of finding an agent,<br />

write a great cover letter and submit only your best work. #<br />

Chris Roerden—Voice: Sounds from the Submission Pile by David Rank<br />

There's a reason 99 percent of manuscripts<br />

never get past the first read at a<br />

<strong>pub</strong>lisher or literary agency, Chris Roerden<br />

said in her Saturday afternoon presentation,<br />

"Voice—Sounds from the Submission<br />

Pile," at the <strong>WRWA</strong> Fall Conference:<br />

Most writers fail to polish their<br />

work from "average" or "amateur" writing<br />

to an "above average," professional<br />

level.<br />

Roerden, who has a 40-plus year background in writing,<br />

<strong>pub</strong>lishing, teaching, and editing, said slush pile screeners, the<br />

first readers of unsolicited manuscripts, have a job to do, and<br />

that "is to lower the piles as quickly as possible. They dismiss<br />

(manuscripts) very quickly. They have to, that's their job."<br />

Screeners do that by looking first for sloppy appearance—<br />

manuscripts not formatted as the <strong>pub</strong>lisher or agent requested,<br />

or the genre of the work is not clearly and precisely defined.<br />

Pass those initial tests, and the screeners will actually start<br />

reading your work, Roerden said, looking for signs of weak<br />

writing that will get the work rejected. Some signs of amateur<br />

writing include a description or back story “dump” and extraneous<br />

information told too early. "Not in the first chapter,"<br />

Reorden said.<br />

She told us to avoid chit-chat, unfocused dialog; eliminate<br />

past perfect tense; dull writing; unnecessary transition scenes.<br />

These are other "clues," that a manuscript is not professional<br />

enough to <strong>pub</strong>lish.<br />

Roerden's latest advice book for writers is Don't Murder<br />

Your Mystery: 24 Fiction-Writing Techniques to Save Your<br />

Manuscript from Turning Up DOA, in which she lists the simple<br />

mistakes that can get your work rejected. #<br />

Remember to enter the Lindemann and Nelson Contests<br />

Al P. Nelson Feature Article Contest opens January 1, closes March 15<br />

Florence Lindemann Contest opens January 15, closes March 15

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