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statement #2 I was aware that <strong>in</strong> my old style <strong>of</strong> writ<strong>in</strong>g mighthave been, “needs to practice strategies for resolv<strong>in</strong>g conflict” oras below (an actual comment from a few years ago) a qualifierthat reports on how <strong>of</strong>ten the student is resolv<strong>in</strong>g conflict(usually).New Th<strong>in</strong>k<strong>in</strong>g: I have just realized that I am try<strong>in</strong>g to<strong>in</strong>tentionally comment on where they are <strong>in</strong> the process <strong>of</strong>reflect<strong>in</strong>g on their own practice and learn<strong>in</strong>g. I am work<strong>in</strong>gtowards my comments be<strong>in</strong>g “Liz niggles” [thought provok<strong>in</strong>gquestions that do not lead you <strong>in</strong> your th<strong>in</strong>k<strong>in</strong>g but that wigglearound your bra<strong>in</strong> until you can answer them yourself] ratherthan “thou shalts” or “you shoulds”. I want them to th<strong>in</strong>k aboutwhat they are do<strong>in</strong>g and what they might experiment withchang<strong>in</strong>g. I am not there yet. Even do<strong>in</strong>g this right now I havemade little tweaks to some <strong>of</strong> the comments to make them lessvalue laden, less judgmental on my part and put more <strong>of</strong> theresponsibility on the student for the th<strong>in</strong>k<strong>in</strong>g. I don’t want tohand them my judgment any more. I want them judgethemselves, to be responsible for themselves, to reflect.For example, here are various versions <strong>of</strong> a report card commentwith the value-laden or judgemental parts highlighted:1. NAME’s efficiency <strong>in</strong> complet<strong>in</strong>g work is commendable. Thenext step for him cont<strong>in</strong>ues to be <strong>in</strong> tak<strong>in</strong>g the <strong>in</strong>itiative andreflect<strong>in</strong>g on the question, "How might I f<strong>in</strong>d fulfilment and domy best rather than rush<strong>in</strong>g to get tasks done and then escap<strong>in</strong>g<strong>in</strong>to a book?"2. NAME’s efficiency and focus <strong>in</strong> complet<strong>in</strong>g work iscommendable. The next step for him cont<strong>in</strong>ues to be <strong>in</strong> tak<strong>in</strong>gthe <strong>in</strong>itiative and reflect<strong>in</strong>g on the question, "How might Iengage and do my best rather than rush<strong>in</strong>g to get tasks done?"3. NAME is very focused and efficient <strong>in</strong> complet<strong>in</strong>g any task oractivity. The next step for him cont<strong>in</strong>ues to be <strong>in</strong> tak<strong>in</strong>g the<strong>in</strong>itiative and reflect<strong>in</strong>g on the question, "How might I engage,do my best and f<strong>in</strong>d some enjoyment <strong>in</strong> the process?"It still isn’t right. I feel that my questions are still judgmental.OK, so what is it I want him to f<strong>in</strong>d out about himself? If he isan action <strong>research</strong>er what is he go<strong>in</strong>g to <strong>in</strong>vestigate?4. NAME is very focused and efficient <strong>in</strong> complet<strong>in</strong>g any task oractivity. The next step for him is to <strong>in</strong>vestigate, "What affects

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