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Image Titles -<br />

The 13 th Element<br />

because the judges don’t read the titles—they only<br />

hear them. So if you are hoping your judges will<br />

understand that your fashion image of a religious<br />

subject will get that this is “Christian” Dior, rather<br />

than the work of designer Christian Dior, it may be<br />

lost on them. Likewise, an image titled “Four the<br />

Best” will likely not be understood as numeral 4 but<br />

rather the preposition “for”. There are countless<br />

examples of trying to be too clever with titles that<br />

end up being unsuccessful because the judges can’t<br />

see the title to get the play on words.<br />

Try to avoid titles that are merely descriptive or only<br />

a place name because they don’t reach out and<br />

grab the viewer. As a judge,<br />

I can see with my eyes that a<br />

subject is beautiful or blonde<br />

or has blue eyes or all of the<br />

above. Likewise, identifying a<br />

well-known landmark such as<br />

the Eiffel Tower does little to tell<br />

a story. But maybe something<br />

like “Falling in Love with Paris”<br />

takes us on a journey through<br />

the city to this little place where<br />

the maker has fallen in love—<br />

not with a person but with<br />

an entire city. A title such as<br />

“Woman on the Beach” is less<br />

compelling than “Siren on the<br />

Shore”. Using the word siren<br />

evokes a whole story of danger<br />

and beauty and mythology—<br />

that’s a lot of story packed into<br />

one little word!<br />

Another thing to consider when choosing titles<br />

is pronounce-ability. Someone has to read your<br />

title. If you choose a place name that has a quirky<br />

pronunciation (Tualatin? Willamette? Schenectady?<br />

Worster? Tigard?) or if you choose a long word<br />

that is unfamiliar (Pugilistic? Hirsute? Diaphanous?<br />

Sesquicentennial?), you risk having the title<br />

butchered during the reading or having the judges<br />

not understand the title. That goes for foreign words<br />

as well. A title such as “Pas de deux” or “Tour Jete”<br />

may be obvious to a ballet aficionado but the title<br />

reader may not read French and mispronounce the<br />

title. And even if the title is pronounced correctly, you<br />

still have the judges who may or may not understand<br />

French or ballet terms.<br />

So how long should your title be? That’s up to<br />

you, but in my experience, the strongest titles are<br />

between 2 and 5 words. Now that doesn’t mean a<br />

one-word title can’t be successful—it certainly can.<br />

But that’s a lot of pressure on one word and it has<br />

to be meticulously chosen. As for longer titles, that<br />

depends. Sometimes it can be amazing. One of my<br />

all-time favorite images is one by Kate Higdon.<br />

The title is long but it is a perfect example of a longer<br />

title working because the storytelling is so powerful.<br />

The title is “She Loved Her Roses, He Loved Her”<br />

Bam! What a punch of imagery and storytelling that<br />

is moved along so well and sucks you in so deeply<br />

because of the impact of that title. Would the image<br />

work just as well with a different title? I think it would<br />

have scored well with almost any title, but I suspect<br />

it wouldn’t have been a 100 image without such an<br />

emotive and thought-provoking title.<br />

16 • FOCUS OREGON

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