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Teaching Playwriting in Schools - Center Stage

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Problems:<br />

Common Problems <strong>in</strong> Student Plays<br />

Plots/Scenes<br />

1. More scenes needed—More scenes are needed to understand how the conflict/plot<br />

developed to this po<strong>in</strong>t, what happens <strong>in</strong> the scene, or what happens next.<br />

2. Unnecessary <strong>in</strong>formation—Information provided <strong>in</strong> the scene does not help us learn<br />

about the characters <strong>in</strong> a mean<strong>in</strong>gful way. Excessive details muddle the story and detract<br />

from the plot l<strong>in</strong>e.<br />

3. Sett<strong>in</strong>gs change too fast—There are two many m<strong>in</strong>i-scenes which might be more<br />

effective if comb<strong>in</strong>ed <strong>in</strong>to a few larger scenes <strong>in</strong> one or two locations.<br />

4. Sett<strong>in</strong>g is not specific enough—More details are needed to let the audience know the<br />

location—character reference, set dress<strong>in</strong>g, etc.<br />

5. Special effects—The scenes are more feasible for film or television (i.e. they conta<strong>in</strong> car<br />

chases, jump<strong>in</strong>g from one elaborate location to another, large explosions).<br />

Questions for the Playwright to ask:<br />

• What happened before this?<br />

• What happens next?<br />

• When does the scene take place?<br />

• What can be done <strong>in</strong> this scene to further the story/plot?<br />

• Why does this action have to happen here?<br />

• What story does the scene tell?<br />

• What <strong>in</strong>formation do we get from this scene?<br />

• How do the characters feel <strong>in</strong> this scene? How might they show it through their actions?<br />

• What is this character do<strong>in</strong>g when…?<br />

• What else could this character have been do<strong>in</strong>g?<br />

• What other th<strong>in</strong>gs could happen <strong>in</strong> this scene?<br />

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