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202 <strong>Useful</strong> <strong>Exercises</strong> <strong>for</strong> IELTS<br />
2.5 LINKING AND SEQUENCING WORDS: Writing Task 2:<br />
Your college tutor has asked you to write a short essay on the following topic:<br />
'Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes and suggest at least<br />
one possible solution.'<br />
para. l<br />
para. 2<br />
para. 3<br />
para.4<br />
para. 5<br />
WRITING TASK 2 - Model Answer: Add linking and sequencing words from<br />
the box below:<br />
In most countries of the world the population is increasing alarmingly. This is especially<br />
true in poor, undeveloped countries. Overpopulation causes a considerable number of<br />
problems.<br />
In poor countries it is difficult to provide enough food to feed even the present number<br />
of people. (1) , education to limit the number of children per family is not always<br />
successful. Poorer countries usually have a lot of unemployment (2) , (3) an<br />
increase in population simply makes the situation worse. The environment (4)<br />
suffers when there are too many people living on the land.<br />
In rich, industrialised and developing countries it is very difficult <strong>for</strong> governments to<br />
provide effective public services in overcrowded cities. (5) , there is usually a great<br />
deal more crime, which is often due to high rates of unemployment. Further large<br />
increases in population only cause more overcrowding, unemployment and crime.<br />
There are two main solutions to the overpopulation problem. (6) , every woman<br />
who is pregnant but who does not want to give birth should be allowed by law to have<br />
an abortion. (7) , governments must educate people to limit the size of the family.<br />
In China, couples are penalised financially if they have more than one child. This may<br />
seem cruel, (8) the "one-child policy" is beginning to have an effect in the world's<br />
most populous nation. (9) , similar policies might do) be necessary in other<br />
crowded nations, such as India (11) .<br />
(12) , if the population explosion continues, many more people will die of<br />
starvation in poor countries, (13) life in the cities, even in affluent nations, will<br />
become increasingly difficult.<br />
and (x2) too eventually<br />
in addition moreover to sum up<br />
secondly also (x2) firstly<br />
but<br />
<strong>for</strong> example<br />
2.6 ARTICLES! Next, cover the model answer above and add the missing articles<br />
where necessary to the following sentences taken from the answer:<br />
a. In most (1) countries of (2) world population is increasing<br />
alarmingly. This is especially true in (4) poor, undeveloped countries.<br />
(5) overpopulation causes (6) considerable number of (7) problems.<br />
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b. (8) poorer countries usually have a lot of (9) unemployment too, and<br />
(10) increase in (11) population simply makes (12) situation<br />
worse. (13) environment suffers when there are too many (14) people