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Rhythm <strong>of</strong> Memory 1<strong>The</strong> <strong>rhythm</strong> <strong>of</strong> <strong>memory</strong>: a <strong>read<strong>in</strong>g</strong> <strong>of</strong> <strong>poetic</strong> <strong>rhythm</strong> <strong>in</strong> <strong>David</strong>Jones’s In Parenthesis<strong>The</strong> <strong>memory</strong> lets escape what is over and above—as spilled bitterness, unmeasured, poured-out,and aga<strong>in</strong> drenched down — demoniac-pour<strong>in</strong>g:who gr<strong>in</strong>s who pours to fill flood and super-flow <strong>in</strong>sensately,p<strong>in</strong>t-pot — from milliard-quart measure.IP, 153<strong>The</strong>se l<strong>in</strong>es from the beg<strong>in</strong>n<strong>in</strong>g <strong>of</strong> the fifth and last part <strong>of</strong> <strong>David</strong> Jones’s In Parenthesis (a partitself entitled “<strong>The</strong> Five Unmistakable Marks”) seem to say someth<strong>in</strong>g about what the <strong>memory</strong>cannot do under certa<strong>in</strong> conditions <strong>of</strong> <strong>in</strong>tense pressure. With their obvious cumulative cadence,they provide a series <strong>of</strong> images <strong>of</strong> what the <strong>memory</strong> “lets escape” and they come to rest <strong>in</strong> atraditional metaphor <strong>of</strong> the <strong>memory</strong> as a recipient —a homely enough “p<strong>in</strong>t-pot”—, placed <strong>in</strong><strong>in</strong>congruous, grotesque proximity to the “milliard-quart measure” from which it is to beoverwhelmed.<strong>The</strong> occasion for this statement <strong>of</strong> the <strong>memory</strong>’s <strong>in</strong>capacity is the immediate run up to themurderous assault on Mametz Wood carried out as a diversion by the British Army <strong>in</strong> June 1916.<strong>The</strong> troops are <strong>in</strong>deed about to be taken “over and above” <strong>in</strong>to the open down before the wood,swept by enemy fire, walk<strong>in</strong>g and not runn<strong>in</strong>g, rifles held up <strong>in</strong> the “high port position”. Joneshimself was at Mametz Wood and received a gunshot wound <strong>in</strong> the legs very much like John Ball,the central character <strong>in</strong> In Parenthesis. He returned to the front after recover<strong>in</strong>g, and was therethrough to the end <strong>of</strong> the war. He had gone to France <strong>in</strong> 1915. In Parenthesis ends on a signaturequotationfrom the Chanson de Roland<strong>The</strong> geste says this and the man who was on the field … and who wrote the book … the man whodoes not know this has not understood anyth<strong>in</strong>g.IP, 187<strong>The</strong> writer <strong>of</strong> the text presents his credentials and with them, a challenge to the reader, who must“know” an <strong>in</strong>itial fact before he can claim understand<strong>in</strong>g <strong>of</strong> “anyth<strong>in</strong>g”.War literature produced by combatants frequently gives rise to debate about such th<strong>in</strong>gs asauthority, representivity, accuracy, scope, etc. And the horizon <strong>of</strong> expectation around such textsis also governed by similar considerations. <strong>The</strong> most widespread <strong>of</strong> these is probably the question<strong>of</strong> scope. This is commonly dealt with <strong>in</strong> terms <strong>of</strong> genre to the effect that only an epic, a text <strong>of</strong>epic dimension, can do justice to someth<strong>in</strong>g like World War 1. Much h<strong>in</strong>ges on what is meant by“epic” and because there has been much talk<strong>in</strong>g at cross purposes on precisely that po<strong>in</strong>t, thewhole question is a vexed and not always fruitful one. However, one problem always rema<strong>in</strong>s for


Rhythm <strong>of</strong> Memory 3• the dynamics <strong>of</strong> metaphor, whereby the “p<strong>in</strong>t-pot”, as already suggested, figures the<strong>memory</strong> seen as a conta<strong>in</strong>er but also the <strong>in</strong>dividual soldier as a bodily entity so immenselyvulnerable and fragile over and aga<strong>in</strong>st the massive anonymous force he is up aga<strong>in</strong>st• the dynamics <strong>of</strong> <strong>in</strong>tertextuality, a very important aspect <strong>of</strong> In Parenthesis as a whole; thehypotext <strong>in</strong> this case is Luke 6, 38 (KJV): “Give, and it shall be given unto you; goodmeasure, pressed down, and shaken together, and runn<strong>in</strong>g over, shall men give <strong>in</strong>to yourbosom. For with the same measure that ye mete withal it shall be measured to you aga<strong>in</strong>”.To quote the passage is to see how severely the co-text <strong>in</strong> In Parenthesis wrenches it out <strong>of</strong>l<strong>in</strong>e with its orig<strong>in</strong>. Where the gospel text is all about <strong>in</strong>terpersonal justice and benigndisproportion, <strong>in</strong> In Parenthesis the subject is <strong>in</strong>justice and the disproportion is malignant• the dynamics <strong>of</strong> <strong>in</strong>version which follow on from the previous po<strong>in</strong>t, s<strong>in</strong>ce the rules <strong>of</strong> thek<strong>in</strong>gdom <strong>of</strong> heaven described <strong>in</strong> the gospel are quite literally perverted so as to becomethe demoniac pour<strong>in</strong>g <strong>of</strong> all hell let loose.My repeated use <strong>of</strong> the word “dynamics” is programmatic. What I mean by <strong>rhythm</strong> is <strong>in</strong>separablefrom the idea <strong>of</strong> movement and the spatialisation it implies. <strong>The</strong> passage back and fro betweentext and hypotext, with the shifts this passage also <strong>in</strong>volves, apprehended spatially anddynamically, relates on the same level, to all the other figurative or logical movementsconstitut<strong>in</strong>g the space <strong>of</strong> the text. Rhythm, then, is not someth<strong>in</strong>g the text has at one po<strong>in</strong>t oranother, some localisable phenomenon, <strong>rhythm</strong> is what the text is and what it does. This is whatone might call the holistic vision <strong>of</strong> <strong>rhythm</strong> put forward by Henri Meschonnic throughout hisCritique du rythme, and <strong>in</strong> other works, such as Poétique du traduire. Meschonnic’s approach to<strong>rhythm</strong> <strong>in</strong> translation, for example, can be summed up <strong>in</strong> the axiomatic title he uses for an article<strong>of</strong> his: “translat<strong>in</strong>g is no such th<strong>in</strong>g if you don’t render the <strong>rhythm</strong> you receive” 1 (La Tribune<strong>in</strong>ternationale des langues vivantes, N° 30, novembre 2001). And because translat<strong>in</strong>g is always <strong>read<strong>in</strong>g</strong>,what applies to the former, has validity for the latter. Whereas exception might justifiably betaken to a statement which said someth<strong>in</strong>g like “<strong>read<strong>in</strong>g</strong> isn’t <strong>read<strong>in</strong>g</strong> unless you read the<strong>rhythm</strong>”, “<strong>read<strong>in</strong>g</strong> the <strong>rhythm</strong>” is certa<strong>in</strong>ly a different k<strong>in</strong>d <strong>of</strong> <strong>read<strong>in</strong>g</strong>.This conception <strong>of</strong> <strong>rhythm</strong> as what the text is and what it does, leads <strong>in</strong>to a further key concept,that <strong>of</strong> system, understood not, <strong>of</strong> course, <strong>in</strong> the restricted “mechanical” sense, <strong>of</strong>ten suggestive<strong>of</strong> fixity, that it sometimes has, but organically, as a comb<strong>in</strong><strong>in</strong>g <strong>of</strong> elements that relate to and aremodified by each other. A further critical value <strong>of</strong> envisag<strong>in</strong>g text as system lies <strong>in</strong> the perspective<strong>of</strong> the text as <strong>in</strong>clusive <strong>of</strong> the act <strong>of</strong> <strong>read<strong>in</strong>g</strong>. <strong>The</strong> reader-<strong>in</strong>-the-text – <strong>in</strong> fabula – is <strong>of</strong> course afamiliar figure <strong>of</strong> reception criticism, which shifts around the once traditionally accepted roles or


Rhythm <strong>of</strong> Memory 5how glad we thought we were to step outside its brackets at the end <strong>of</strong> ’18…” (IP, xv). Jonesdoes not develop the surpris<strong>in</strong>g suggestion <strong>of</strong> an illusion <strong>in</strong> the words “how glad we thought wewere”, so that they close the preface <strong>of</strong> the poem with a diffuse sense <strong>of</strong> critical distance. <strong>The</strong>image <strong>of</strong> “stepp<strong>in</strong>g out <strong>of</strong> the brackets” is also a spatial one, which gives more than a h<strong>in</strong>t <strong>of</strong> the<strong>rhythm</strong>ic conception beh<strong>in</strong>d the whole textual enterprise. <strong>The</strong> text emerges, it seems, not at all asa memoir but as a conflation. Memory itself has no <strong>rhythm</strong>, or rather, it is not <strong>of</strong> <strong>rhythm</strong>. It is thestuff that dreams, nightmares, obsessions are made <strong>of</strong>, and <strong>in</strong> that sense, it is reiterative andrecessive: language perhaps, but hardly discourse. Mere rehearsal <strong>of</strong> <strong>memory</strong> is equally a-<strong>rhythm</strong>ic: discourse, but hardly more. What Jones suggests, with his dual image <strong>of</strong> seduction andparadoxical time brackets, is a bluepr<strong>in</strong>t for <strong>rhythm</strong>ic <strong>in</strong>tercourse. <strong>The</strong> process <strong>of</strong> writ<strong>in</strong>g and theexperience written <strong>of</strong> are historically conflated, <strong>in</strong> that the first reiterates the second. And thisreiteration concerns the paradoxical nature <strong>of</strong> both, <strong>in</strong> as much as each moves from marg<strong>in</strong> tocentre, from the accidental to the necessary. It should be clear that whether or not Jones is“tell<strong>in</strong>g the truth” about how In Parenthesis came to be written or about how he and othersconsidered the “brackets” <strong>of</strong> the war, is irrelevant. Fiction or actual fact, it makes no difference,because the real po<strong>in</strong>t is the dynamic nature <strong>of</strong> the relationship established between text andhistory. <strong>The</strong> text functions not as a memoir might, <strong>in</strong> the a-<strong>rhythm</strong>ia <strong>of</strong> <strong>memory</strong>, but by mak<strong>in</strong>gits discourse <strong>in</strong>to <strong>rhythm</strong>.Before I attempt to show how In Parenthesis reads <strong>in</strong> terms <strong>of</strong> this “<strong>rhythm</strong>icisation” <strong>of</strong> <strong>memory</strong>,it is necessary to make some further po<strong>in</strong>ts about the structure and scope <strong>of</strong> this text. AsDilworth po<strong>in</strong>ts out “structure is not […] the first th<strong>in</strong>g a reader notices <strong>in</strong> a poem by <strong>David</strong>Jones” (13). This is because <strong>of</strong> the length and plethoric nature <strong>of</strong> the texts. Jones wrote <strong>of</strong> <strong>The</strong>Anathemata, quot<strong>in</strong>g the 9 th century historian Nennius, “‘I have made a heap <strong>of</strong> all I could f<strong>in</strong>d’”(Ana, 9). But despite this suggestion <strong>of</strong> uncontrolled shape, his texts tend to be super-structured,they deploy several levels <strong>of</strong> construction. <strong>The</strong> scope <strong>of</strong> this paper <strong>of</strong> course precludes anyattempt to describe such multiple level structur<strong>in</strong>g <strong>in</strong> In Parenthesis. What can be usefully said hereis that the overall narrative structure <strong>of</strong> this seven part text consists <strong>of</strong> an asymmetricalmovement <strong>of</strong> advance towards and departure from the battlefield <strong>of</strong> Mametz Wood (or simplythe Wood, s<strong>in</strong>ce the name Mametz is not actually used <strong>in</strong> the text). <strong>The</strong> other structur<strong>in</strong>gelements <strong>of</strong> the poem, that can, for convenience, be grouped together under the very generalhead<strong>in</strong>g <strong>of</strong> mythic, depend on and relate to this narrative basis.Jones’s elaborate approach to structure is a clear sign <strong>of</strong> the impetus towards mean<strong>in</strong>g that drivesthe entire project <strong>of</strong> In Parenthesis, and, as one might expect, lies at the heart <strong>of</strong> its <strong>rhythm</strong>. Most<strong>of</strong> the protagonists <strong>of</strong> In Parenthesis are either killed or wounded <strong>in</strong> the action at the Wood, and


Rhythm <strong>of</strong> Memory 6one <strong>of</strong> the f<strong>in</strong>al images <strong>of</strong> the text is the arrival <strong>of</strong> new reserve troops “younger men / youngerstripl<strong>in</strong>gs” mov<strong>in</strong>g <strong>in</strong> to “bear up the war”. (IP, 187). In this way, the text closes on thesuggestion <strong>of</strong> an accelerated reduplication, figur<strong>in</strong>g what Jones regarded as a movement towardsabsurdity. That the book’s brackets and its scope, should end here, on the threshold <strong>of</strong> the threat<strong>of</strong> mean<strong>in</strong>glessness, is symptomatic. Paul Fussell has argued <strong>in</strong> <strong>The</strong> Great War and Modern Memory,that it was only “the disappearance dur<strong>in</strong>g the sixties and seventies <strong>of</strong> the concept <strong>of</strong> prohibitiveobscenity” that gave what he calls “the ritual <strong>of</strong> military <strong>memory</strong>” a “new dimension” (334).What he means by this is that <strong>in</strong>stances <strong>of</strong> sexual behaviour such as buggery and deviancesvarious, become available as critical metaphors for the nature <strong>of</strong> warfare. Obscenity metaphorisesabsurdity. (Pat Barker explores this avenue <strong>in</strong> her World War I trilogy <strong>of</strong> novels start<strong>in</strong>g with <strong>The</strong>Ghost Road, published <strong>in</strong> 1995). As it happens, Jones deals specifically, <strong>in</strong> the preface to InParenthesis, with the question <strong>of</strong> “impolite words”, expla<strong>in</strong><strong>in</strong>g how he has been forced to“consider conventional susceptibilities” and how this hampered him “because the whole shape <strong>of</strong>our discourse was conditioned by the use <strong>of</strong> such words”. He goes on to develop an astonish<strong>in</strong>gargument to the effect that the repetition and “skilful” use <strong>of</strong> them “gave a k<strong>in</strong>d <strong>of</strong>significance[…] to our speech” and that their “juxtaposition <strong>in</strong> a sentence, and when expressedunder poignant circumstances, reached real poetry” (IP, xii). This is no less than an argument forthe production <strong>of</strong> <strong>poetic</strong> <strong>rhythm</strong>, which is seen as aris<strong>in</strong>g from the conjunction <strong>of</strong> l<strong>in</strong>guistic skill,tradition, circumstance and emotion and is productive <strong>of</strong> mean<strong>in</strong>g. Jones’s f<strong>in</strong>al po<strong>in</strong>t on thesubject is this: “I say more: the ‘Bugger! Bugger!’ <strong>of</strong> a man detailed, had <strong>of</strong>ten about it the ‘Fiat!Fiat!’ <strong>of</strong> the Sa<strong>in</strong>ts” (IP, xii). One could hardly be at a greater distance from the strategy <strong>of</strong> us<strong>in</strong>gobscenity to metaphorise absurdity: the whole impetus, so clearly described, works <strong>in</strong> theopposite direction, towards the creation <strong>of</strong> mean<strong>in</strong>g. In the text <strong>of</strong> In Parenthesis, there are, <strong>in</strong>deed,virtually no “impolite words”. If then they were, as Jones ma<strong>in</strong>ta<strong>in</strong>s, so much a part <strong>of</strong> thesoldiers’ speech, their absence constitutes so many blanks <strong>in</strong> the text, so many spaces that cry outfor what Jones calls the “efficacious formula” (IP, xii), or, elsewhere, the “efficacious word”.Now, mispronounc<strong>in</strong>g or elid<strong>in</strong>g “efficacious” <strong>in</strong> just the right way produces one <strong>of</strong> the absententities, just as verbalis<strong>in</strong>g the first syllable gives the eff <strong>of</strong> eff<strong>in</strong>g: (pace Paul Auster who used thesame trick <strong>in</strong> Moon Palace), a common euphemism <strong>of</strong> the same word. And so the trajectory <strong>of</strong> theadjective rises, as it moves from euphemism, through paronomasic parody, to l<strong>in</strong>guisticappositeness (the word as performative), and f<strong>in</strong>ally to the ultimate level <strong>of</strong> sacramentality (anextension <strong>of</strong> performativeness).<strong>The</strong> impetus <strong>of</strong> In Parenthesis towards mean<strong>in</strong>gfulness as opposed to mean<strong>in</strong>glessness <strong>in</strong>volvessee<strong>in</strong>g words themselves as texts, as <strong>rhythm</strong>. I have just referred to the trajectory <strong>of</strong> the adjective


Rhythm <strong>of</strong> Memory 7“efficacious”. What I should now like to show is that, far from be<strong>in</strong>g a metaphorical imposition<strong>of</strong> my own, the notion <strong>of</strong> trajectory and the image the word conjures up can be read as <strong>rhythm</strong>icdevices. To do this, I shall exam<strong>in</strong>e certa<strong>in</strong> aspects <strong>of</strong> narrative pattern<strong>in</strong>g that revolve around thename and “do<strong>in</strong>gs” (for want <strong>of</strong> better word) <strong>of</strong> the poem’s central character, John Ball.A loose, biographically orientated <strong>read<strong>in</strong>g</strong> <strong>of</strong> In Parenthesis would suggest that Private John Ball isthe writer <strong>in</strong> disguise, and he is certa<strong>in</strong>ly given some <strong>of</strong> the characteristics (for example, fumbl<strong>in</strong>g<strong>in</strong>competence) Jones attributes to himself; he is also wounded <strong>in</strong> the same way Jones himself was.But to read John Ball thus, or only thus, is not to read the <strong>rhythm</strong>! As might be expected <strong>in</strong> amilitary context, Ball is frequently referred to by number as “01 Ball”; his full number be<strong>in</strong>g25201. This numerical identity has an immediate, conventionally comic application, <strong>in</strong> that this isthe regiment known as the “London-Welsh”, and the duplication <strong>of</strong> Joneses and Williamsesmakes the use <strong>of</strong> numbers a necessity <strong>in</strong>dependently <strong>of</strong> army usage. But the comb<strong>in</strong>ation <strong>of</strong> nameand number, foregrounded comically, enters <strong>in</strong>to other patterns, <strong>of</strong> which more presently. JohnBall is a Londoner, which gives him capital importance, but he “shares” his central narrativeposition with two Welsh counterparts. One is Corporal Aneir<strong>in</strong> Lewis, steeped <strong>in</strong> Welsh lore: hebears the name <strong>of</strong> the 7 th century Welsh poet, Aneir<strong>in</strong>, author <strong>of</strong> the epic Y Gododd<strong>in</strong> (known tous <strong>in</strong> 13 th century MS); the other is referred to only by a nickname as Dai Greatcoat, and even, asDai de la Cote Male Taile, after the manner <strong>of</strong> Malory <strong>in</strong> Le Morte d’Arthur (an importanthypotext for In Parenthesis). Lewis is killed <strong>in</strong> the artillery bombardment preced<strong>in</strong>g the attack onthe Wood, but Dai, who <strong>in</strong> Part 4 (entitled “K<strong>in</strong>g Pellam’s Launde”) utters a mighty <strong>poetic</strong> boast,just disappears. Ball is wounded <strong>in</strong> the leg (like many heroes <strong>of</strong> myth) and is thus the only one <strong>of</strong>the three who survives, and the only one to complete, <strong>in</strong> the flesh, the full narrative movement <strong>of</strong>advance to and departure from the field.. Although the regiment’s “go<strong>in</strong>g up”, first to the frontl<strong>in</strong>e and later to battle, has several <strong>in</strong>tertextual paradigms (one ironic example be<strong>in</strong>g <strong>The</strong> Pilgrim’sProgress), Ball’s <strong>in</strong>tertextual identity, unlike that <strong>of</strong> Aneir<strong>in</strong> Lewis or Dai Greatcoat, rema<strong>in</strong>sdiffuse until the end <strong>of</strong> the poem. It is <strong>in</strong> his retreat from the field that it emerges, <strong>in</strong> a mixture <strong>of</strong>seriousness and parody that ultimately becomes an unexpected apotheosis <strong>of</strong> his name as text, as<strong>rhythm</strong>.Ball leaves the Wood crawl<strong>in</strong>g on all fours; as he “goes down”, he decides – a serious step for asoldier to take – to abandon his rifle; slung round his shoulder, it gets <strong>in</strong> his way and becomestoo heavy to bear. But the weapon is also a parodic burden (<strong>in</strong> both senses <strong>of</strong> the word); it hangsround the neck “like the Mar<strong>in</strong>er’s white oblation” and like Durendal, Roland’s sword, “It is notto be broken on the brown stone under the gracious tree” (IP, 184). <strong>The</strong> episode <strong>of</strong> hesitation iscomposed <strong>of</strong> <strong>memory</strong> snatches from tra<strong>in</strong><strong>in</strong>g sessions about the soldier’s relation to and care <strong>of</strong>


Rhythm <strong>of</strong> Memory 8his weapon, with Sergeant Major O’Grady shout<strong>in</strong>g out, among other th<strong>in</strong>gs, “Marry it man!Marry it!” (IP, 183) and the f<strong>in</strong>al decision itself is sealed with :But leave it—under the oak.leave it for a Cook’s tourist to the Devastated Areas and crawlas far as you can and wait for the bearers.IP, 186 [sic for the absence <strong>of</strong> capital letter at “leave”]In other words, the rifle becomes a complex written and oral text <strong>of</strong> <strong>memory</strong> and action. In thediegesis, it is deposited as an unbearable burden, but beyond this, it can <strong>in</strong>deed be seen as anoblation, a <strong>rhythm</strong>ic <strong>of</strong>fer<strong>in</strong>g for future eyes. <strong>The</strong> weapon is, by epic convention, a metonymy forthe warrior. Here, it marks the conclusion <strong>of</strong> Ball’s trajectory <strong>in</strong> the field <strong>of</strong> war and the<strong>in</strong>cipience <strong>of</strong> his textual adventure. Ball carries the rifle and leaves it, but the rifle conta<strong>in</strong>s hisname, simply because a ball is a bullet, and Ball’s bullet <strong>in</strong> the legs is self-<strong>in</strong>scription. To put itdifferently, Ball is on the receiv<strong>in</strong>g end <strong>of</strong> a trajectory that spells his name, just as the name, as weshall see, “describes” the trajectory. <strong>The</strong> episode <strong>of</strong> Ball’s wound<strong>in</strong>g reads as follows:And to Private Ball it came as if a rigid beam <strong>of</strong> great weightflailed about his calves, caught from beh<strong>in</strong>d by ballista-baulklet fly or aft-beam slewed to clout gunnel-walkerbelow below below.IP, 183<strong>The</strong> overall motif-cum-dynamic here, like that <strong>of</strong> the passage I quoted at the start, isdisproportion, a sense <strong>of</strong> which arises from the images used. But what really b<strong>in</strong>ds theseapparently disparate images together and makes them <strong>in</strong>to <strong>rhythm</strong> is the system developed fromthe name which comb<strong>in</strong>es cause and dest<strong>in</strong>ation: “Ball” is <strong>in</strong> ballista (the huge crossbow-likeweapon) and <strong>in</strong> baulk (pronounced /bawk/ or /bawlk/ and mean<strong>in</strong>g, amongst other th<strong>in</strong>gs, a largebeam), but by paronomasia, “ball” is also <strong>in</strong> “below below below”, where the huge beam knocksthe unwary walker. <strong>The</strong> double image <strong>of</strong> ballista hurl<strong>in</strong>g its huge bolt and sail beam sw<strong>in</strong>g<strong>in</strong>g hardround clearly expresses the image <strong>of</strong> a trajectory; “below” signals the fall <strong>of</strong> Ball, but <strong>of</strong> coursederives its relevance not from the diegesis itself, but only from the text <strong>of</strong> <strong>memory</strong>, from themetaphor <strong>of</strong> the ship implicit <strong>in</strong> that <strong>of</strong> the sail beam. Thus the <strong>poetic</strong> <strong>rhythm</strong> <strong>of</strong> <strong>memory</strong>!In this complex, Ball’s name marks, as I say, po<strong>in</strong>t <strong>of</strong> departure, impact and rest<strong>in</strong>g place. But <strong>in</strong>itself, it accomplishes a trajectory very close to that <strong>of</strong> the “efficacious word”. First, somenumber symbolism: Ball is ’01 Ball: this alternation <strong>of</strong> nought, or zero, and one, or <strong>in</strong>dividual, canbe understood as a cipher <strong>of</strong> his <strong>rhythm</strong>ic identity. He is no one <strong>in</strong> the sense that he is fiction, yet<strong>in</strong> the text he is an <strong>in</strong>dividual. <strong>The</strong> number play relates him to the “world”. <strong>The</strong> sum <strong>of</strong> the first,elided, part <strong>of</strong> his number, 252 is 10, which provides a mirror image <strong>of</strong> 01, but could also be seen<strong>in</strong> terms <strong>of</strong> a downward po<strong>in</strong>t<strong>in</strong>g parabola. I should add here that this figure or shape highlights


Rhythm <strong>of</strong> Memory 9Ball’s textual identity, but it also reproduces what I shall show <strong>in</strong> a moment is a key shapethroughout In Parenthesis. F<strong>in</strong>ally, the full sum <strong>of</strong> Ball’s number is <strong>of</strong> course, eleven, figur<strong>in</strong>g(literally) the last two letters <strong>of</strong> the name. In British number slang, eleven is “legs eleven”: theseare <strong>in</strong>fantry soldiers, they “go up” to the front and <strong>in</strong>to battle “on legs”, and Ball’s wound <strong>in</strong> theleg, however biographical it may be, is thus a symbolic one. But the relevance <strong>of</strong> the symbol isnot external, to symbolic mean<strong>in</strong>g <strong>in</strong> general, as it were, but <strong>in</strong>ternal and <strong>rhythm</strong>ic.It will be helpful at this po<strong>in</strong>t, to look the open<strong>in</strong>g l<strong>in</strong>es <strong>of</strong> In Parenthesis, as an illustration <strong>of</strong> howeveryth<strong>in</strong>g starts with the complex <strong>of</strong> number and name and their <strong>in</strong>terplay:’49 Wyatt, 01549 Wyatt.Com<strong>in</strong>g sergeant.Pick ’em up, pick ’em up—I’ll stalk with<strong>in</strong> yer chamber.Private Leg . . . sick.Private Ball . . . absent.’01 Ball, ’01 Ball, Ball <strong>of</strong> No.1.Where’s Ball, 25201 Ball—you corporal,Ball <strong>of</strong> your section.IP, 1 4Even the section number enters the number dance. <strong>The</strong> “’em” <strong>in</strong> “pick ’em up” is <strong>of</strong> course thelegs, but Private Leg, never aga<strong>in</strong> mentioned, is “sick”: he functions as a proleptic joke. Ball’smilitary <strong>in</strong>efficiency – he is late on parade and has his name taken – is <strong>poetic</strong> efficacy. He is bothabsent and present. <strong>The</strong> apparently realistic character anecdote start<strong>in</strong>g the text <strong>in</strong> fact charges it<strong>in</strong> a different way, by <strong>in</strong>troduc<strong>in</strong>g the dynamics <strong>of</strong> <strong>rhythm</strong> <strong>in</strong>to the name. And so it is that Ball isalso the object his name designates, the pivotal ball-bear<strong>in</strong>g on which the text turns. This imagereiterates the 10—01 comb<strong>in</strong>ation previously mentioned. <strong>The</strong>re is more, however. Ball’s firstname, John, is a double one <strong>in</strong> the sense that, like Jack, it has a generic use, applicable to any“John” whose name you don’t know, while it at the same time designat<strong>in</strong>g an <strong>in</strong>dividual. As aLondoner surrounded by Welshmen, John Ball is also, by paronomasia, a parodic, John Bull,whose name <strong>in</strong>congruously calls up a type he <strong>in</strong> no way represents. F<strong>in</strong>ally, Private Ball’s nameand rank together do the same th<strong>in</strong>g as the “efficacious word”, they euphemise another <strong>of</strong> theabsent entities, those “impolite words” the poet tells us he had to omit.I have traced the trajectory <strong>of</strong> the word “efficacious” from euphemism, through paronomasicparody to l<strong>in</strong>guistic appositeness. <strong>The</strong> trajectory <strong>of</strong> the name <strong>of</strong> Ball moves through the samestages: from euphemism (a form <strong>of</strong> disguise, <strong>of</strong> course), to the comic parody the vowels <strong>of</strong> thename suggest, and thence to the series <strong>of</strong> metaphorical manipulations that encapsulate the historyand fate <strong>of</strong> the character. Opened up and spatialised, the name is transformed <strong>in</strong>to situation andnarrative. It becomes a textual mach<strong>in</strong>e, a text <strong>in</strong> itself; it is, as we have seen the weapons –theballista-baulk– and the projectile, and, <strong>in</strong> the form <strong>of</strong> the rifle, betokens the <strong>of</strong>fer<strong>in</strong>g <strong>of</strong> the text. In


Rhythm <strong>of</strong> Memory 10as much as In Parenthesis is made <strong>of</strong> a double wealth <strong>of</strong> personal and literary <strong>memory</strong>, its <strong>rhythm</strong>can be seen as a rifl<strong>in</strong>g <strong>of</strong> the canon <strong>of</strong> <strong>memory</strong>. Which is why conclud<strong>in</strong>g remarks will be allabout trajectories and will try to show the validity <strong>of</strong> this metaphor.As might be expected from a war narrative, In Parenthesis describes several <strong>in</strong>stances <strong>of</strong> artillery orrifle fire. But not only are these strategically placed <strong>in</strong> the narrative, but they are accompanied byechoes and parody so that they become a system. I can do little more here than give a shortoutl<strong>in</strong>e.• In Part 2, occurs what Dilworth calls the “primal” (412) shell burst (IP, 23). I shall returnto this.• In Part 3, Ball observes flares mount<strong>in</strong>g from British and later from German trenches:“lights elegantly curved above his l<strong>in</strong>es” (IP, 50).• In Part 3 occurs the epitome <strong>of</strong> the mean<strong>in</strong>gless action as a nervous John Ball, on nightsentry duty, fires his rifle at noth<strong>in</strong>g but the empty darkness out over No Man’s Land (IP,53-54).• In Part 4, the whole idea <strong>of</strong> artillery is parodied as the soldiers suggest a bombardment <strong>of</strong>the Christmas Day issue <strong>of</strong> unpalatable army tobacco: “Heave that bull-shit to Jerry, t<strong>in</strong>and all, for a happy Christmas—it’ll gas the sod.” (IP, 72). A parodic parabola that<strong>in</strong>cludes the paronomasic joke on Ball’s name.• In Part 4, a number <strong>of</strong> different shell trajectories are described:: duds, shrapnel, shellsfall<strong>in</strong>g short.• In Part 7, where “muck ra<strong>in</strong>s down from heaven” (IP 164), Ball momentarily f<strong>in</strong>dshimself <strong>in</strong> the “navel” <strong>of</strong> the Wood, at a centre <strong>of</strong> calm (like Melville’s Ahab <strong>in</strong> the quietheart <strong>of</strong> the maelstrom <strong>of</strong> cachalots). This place is determ<strong>in</strong>ed by two th<strong>in</strong>gs: the dripp<strong>in</strong>gpercolation <strong>of</strong> human blood from the vegetation and, high above, “trundl<strong>in</strong>g projectiles”that “<strong>in</strong>tersect their arcs at zenith” (IP, 181). Significantly enough, this centre is reachedonly shortly before the “ballista-baulk” <strong>of</strong> Private Ball’s wound <strong>in</strong> the leg and the crawl tothe close <strong>of</strong> the narrative. <strong>The</strong> narrative centre is determ<strong>in</strong>ed not by its central place <strong>in</strong> thedisposition <strong>of</strong> the narrative but by virtue <strong>of</strong> its relationship to what might be called a<strong>rhythm</strong>ic signature, the trajectory <strong>of</strong> artillery shells pass<strong>in</strong>g and “<strong>in</strong>tersect<strong>in</strong>g” above. <strong>The</strong>centre, where blood percolates and drips down is also a place upon which John Ballstumbles and <strong>in</strong> which he stumbles when the bullet’s trajectory strikes him down.


Rhythm <strong>of</strong> Memory 11<strong>The</strong> entire isotopy <strong>of</strong> trajectories has its orig<strong>in</strong> <strong>in</strong> the do<strong>in</strong>gs <strong>of</strong> war, and, <strong>in</strong> that sense is part <strong>of</strong><strong>memory</strong>. But what <strong>memory</strong> reta<strong>in</strong>s is essentially the po<strong>in</strong>t or the moment <strong>of</strong> impact. What thepoem does is to use the shape <strong>of</strong> the trajectory, not only to produce with it the type <strong>of</strong> variationto be found <strong>in</strong> the passages I have just glanced at, but as a shape <strong>of</strong> the narrative and a shap<strong>in</strong>g <strong>of</strong>names. Over and aga<strong>in</strong>st this shap<strong>in</strong>g, which <strong>in</strong>volves, as I have tried to show, an <strong>in</strong>volution <strong>of</strong>cause and effect, the poem produces its own text by conjugat<strong>in</strong>g material that may well be seen as<strong>memory</strong> with the <strong>memory</strong> <strong>of</strong> texts from the canon <strong>of</strong> literature. Because the text comes <strong>in</strong> thisway to be metaphorically assimilated to the abandoned, <strong>of</strong>fered rifle, it can <strong>in</strong>deed be seen as aprocess <strong>of</strong> “rifl<strong>in</strong>g”, that is <strong>of</strong> ransack<strong>in</strong>g both <strong>memory</strong> and the literary canon and as a trajectory<strong>in</strong> itself. This is the process that I th<strong>in</strong>k can justifiably be called the <strong>rhythm</strong> <strong>of</strong> <strong>memory</strong>.I shall conclude with an epilogue <strong>read<strong>in</strong>g</strong> <strong>of</strong> the “primal” shell-burst <strong>in</strong> Part 2 <strong>of</strong> the poem (IP,23-24). <strong>The</strong> passage is unfortunately far too long to quote fully. It narrates the first occasion onwhich Ball experiences artillery fire. <strong>The</strong> shell-burst itself is only a part <strong>of</strong> the picture and thoughits violence is evident and clearly chronicled, what is, perhaps, more to the po<strong>in</strong>t is that the shelllands amongst mangolds, turn<strong>in</strong>g their churned pulp <strong>in</strong>to a euphemism <strong>of</strong> the blood spilled later<strong>in</strong> the wood. <strong>The</strong> f<strong>in</strong>al image <strong>of</strong> the sequence, <strong>in</strong> which the “sap <strong>of</strong> vegetables slobbered thespotless breech-block <strong>of</strong> N°3 gun”, is not merely a proleptic detail but, more essentially, a<strong>rhythm</strong>ic statement, a metaphor <strong>of</strong> the <strong>rhythm</strong>ic association <strong>of</strong> effect and potential cause (theironically “spotless” artillery piece is capable <strong>of</strong> <strong>in</strong>flict<strong>in</strong>g exactly the same damage), and ametaphor <strong>of</strong> the trajectory / shape <strong>of</strong> the entire narrative. I have used the term shell-burst, butwhat the page and a half long text really describes is trajectory. It transforms parenthesis <strong>in</strong>toparabola; the arrival <strong>of</strong> the shell and its explosion erupt <strong>in</strong>to Ball’s existence, br<strong>in</strong>g<strong>in</strong>g at the sametime a hyper-charge <strong>of</strong> mean<strong>in</strong>g (analogous, <strong>of</strong> course, to the overloaded rifle around thewounded Ball’s neck) and at the same moment, an image <strong>of</strong> the mean<strong>in</strong>glessness <strong>of</strong> warfare.Interest<strong>in</strong>gly enough, the shell is described as hurtl<strong>in</strong>g “out <strong>of</strong> the vortex, rifl<strong>in</strong>g the air…” (myitalics); its oncom<strong>in</strong>g force is textualised by an accumulation <strong>of</strong> epithets, the hyperbole <strong>of</strong> whichis clearly mimetic :an on-rush<strong>in</strong>g pervasion, saturat<strong>in</strong>g all existence; with exactitude, logarithmic, dial-timed,millesimal—<strong>of</strong> calculated velocity, some mean chemist’s contrivance, a st<strong>in</strong>k<strong>in</strong>g physicists destroy<strong>in</strong>gtoy. (IP 24)But there is a system <strong>of</strong> balances here: to this accumulation <strong>of</strong> epithets and actions and thevariety <strong>of</strong> different fields they predicate, corresponds a list <strong>of</strong> <strong>in</strong>significant m<strong>in</strong>utiae perceived byBall <strong>in</strong> the “highly alert” state the <strong>in</strong>fluence <strong>of</strong> the shell’s approach produces <strong>in</strong> him: “the tilt <strong>of</strong> abucket, the movement <strong>of</strong> a straw, the disappear<strong>in</strong>g right boot <strong>of</strong> Sergeant Snell …”. One list


Rhythm <strong>of</strong> Memory 12encounters and is modified by another; so that the text exists <strong>in</strong> the <strong>rhythm</strong> <strong>of</strong> these encounters,not <strong>in</strong> any abstract perception <strong>of</strong> the magnitude <strong>of</strong> the event, nor <strong>in</strong> an emotional reaction to it.<strong>The</strong> shell-burst ends <strong>in</strong> anti-climax; all it mangles is mangolds. But though anti-climax completesby a fall the trajectory <strong>of</strong> the shell, it is not an isolated shape <strong>in</strong> the trajectory <strong>of</strong> the text. <strong>The</strong>arrival <strong>of</strong> the shell is preceded by a scene <strong>in</strong> which Lieutenant Jenk<strong>in</strong>s asks Ball for a match.Search<strong>in</strong>g clumsily through his pockets, Ball scatters their contents on the ground. This gives riseto the first enumeration <strong>of</strong> the sequence, more a lost-property list than an (epic) catalogue. Thisexposure or “revelation” <strong>of</strong> the contents <strong>of</strong> Ball’s pockets constitutes a proto anti-climax, and thefeeble match flare that follows, as Jenk<strong>in</strong>s hunches his shoulders to nurture the flame, can be readas a parodic equivalent /anticipation <strong>of</strong> the shell-burst. Thus the two parts <strong>of</strong> the scene cohere <strong>in</strong>a mirror relationship, based on disproportion.Among the objects Ball drops is a “latch-key” to “Stondon Park”, his home <strong>in</strong> London. Ly<strong>in</strong>gthere <strong>in</strong>congruously <strong>in</strong> a French farmyard., it becomes,. as <strong>in</strong> the clos<strong>in</strong>g sequence <strong>of</strong> <strong>The</strong> WasteLand, the key <strong>of</strong> <strong>memory</strong>, it lets <strong>memory</strong> <strong>in</strong>to the “remembered” scene and layers it with thetopoi <strong>of</strong> the lost enclosure (Stondon Park) and the mythic, perhaps illusory, promise (or threat)<strong>of</strong> a door to be opened.It is characteristic <strong>of</strong> Jones’s deployment <strong>of</strong> <strong>rhythm</strong> that the l<strong>in</strong>k<strong>in</strong>g element between the twoparts <strong>of</strong> the scene should be language. Because he forgets to say “sir” to Lieutenant Jenk<strong>in</strong>s, Ballis subjected to Sergeant Snell’s “favourite theme” on how to address commissioned <strong>of</strong>ficers. Ballwaits patiently for Snell’s “eloquence” to “spend itself”, which makes its “flow” strictlysimultaneous with the shell’s arrival, so that the two trajectories (like the two words Snell / shell)<strong>in</strong>tersect. This <strong>of</strong> course turns the shell-burst <strong>in</strong>to another k<strong>in</strong>d <strong>of</strong> <strong>in</strong>congruous climax, set <strong>of</strong>f bythe unstated yet evident irony whereby Snell, for all his admonish<strong>in</strong>g eloquence, fails to warn Ball<strong>of</strong> the danger, and plunges for safety, leav<strong>in</strong>g him exposed to it alone. And this solitar<strong>in</strong>ess, is <strong>of</strong>course, how Ball’s trajectory <strong>in</strong> the wood ends and how the text itself beg<strong>in</strong>s to <strong>in</strong>scribe its<strong>rhythm</strong>.Michael HINCHLIFFE, Université de Provence.Works citedDILWORTH, Thomas. <strong>The</strong> Shape <strong>of</strong> Mean<strong>in</strong>g <strong>in</strong> the Poetry <strong>of</strong> <strong>David</strong> Jones. Toronto and London:University <strong>of</strong> Toronto Press, 1988.FUSSELL, Paul. <strong>The</strong> Great War and Modern Memory. New York and London: Oxford UP, 1975.JONES, <strong>David</strong>. In Parenthesis. London: Faber, 1937. (Abbr. IP)


Rhythm <strong>of</strong> Memory 13—. <strong>The</strong> Anathémata. London: Faber, 1952. (Abbr. Ana)MESCHONNIC, Henri. Critique du rythme. Anthropolgie historique du langage. Lagrasse: Verdier,1982.—. Poétique du traduire. Lagrasse: Verdier, 1999.1“Traduire n’est pas traduire si on ne rend pas le rythme qu’on a reçu”2“Mais alors que chacun n’a que son passé, le poème passe de je en je. Il est ce discours qui peut reconnaître le passédes autres. Il n’arrache pas seulement un peu de vivre à l’oubli. S’il est autre que du souvenir, c’est que le rythme estune actualisation du sujet, de sa temporalité” (87)3<strong>The</strong> text <strong>of</strong> In Parenthesis is preceded by a dedication, <strong>in</strong> the form <strong>of</strong> an <strong>in</strong>scription, to “the <strong>memory</strong> <strong>of</strong> those withme <strong>in</strong> the covert and <strong>in</strong> the open…etc.”..4Cf. the poet Thomas Wyatt (1503?-42) who wrote : “<strong>The</strong>y flee from me that sometime did me seek/ With nakedfeet stalk<strong>in</strong>g <strong>in</strong> my chamber:”

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