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“We won’t talk about it while you’re there, plus, you get to meet him, I know you want to.” Louis sing-songs the last part, shimmying closer to Niall. “If it gets awkward I’m going to be outta there so fucking fast, you got it?” Niall huffs, crossing his arms over his chest. He’s acting like it’s the worst thing in the world, but Louis knows him well enough to see the glimmer of excitement he’s trying to hide beneath his annoyance. “So, it’s settled then, you’re gonna meet Harry tonight.” Louis smiles, leaning back in his chair, loving the way Niall is now showing a small smile <strong>and</strong> this might not be so awful after all. Chapter End Notes I looked it up <strong>and</strong> apparently raccoons aren't indigenous to London, but they're there, so don't kill me, I'm only American! Blame google. so, I'm not sure if this is a good story so far or not because I haven't had a ton of feedback <strong>and</strong> the reads are pretty stationary. I need to decide if you guys want me to finish it. I'm sorry, I just feel a little discouraged.. please let me know in the comments or on Twitter @curlsbabie // tumblr @subharrybless thank you for reading!
Chapter 7 Chapter Summary Louis finds out some interesting things about Harry. (this is all my fiction, the body language interpretation is all for fictional fun, it has no scientific backup.) Chapter Notes See the end of the chapter for notes Louis' not hungry but he’s still playing with the food on his plate, biting off small chunks of lettuce every now <strong>and</strong> again <strong>and</strong> pretending to be otherwise occupied. So, yeah, he’s definitely procrastinating, but could anyone really blame him? He told his roommate he thought he was beautiful (where the fuck did that even come from, honestly?) <strong>and</strong> shit got awkward so fast its pretty much a blur. Harry’s never came off as anything other than cocky <strong>and</strong> confident, it sort of just reeks from his pores. So, compliments shouldn’t offend him so much. Maybe Louis came off as condescending, maybe Harry has this unhealthy hate for the word “beautiful.” Either way, there are ripples all over the surface of their newfound friendship, if he could even call it that. It made Louis’ stomach unsettle. On a happier note, the sun is shining at full force all over the usually bleak city <strong>and</strong> making everything look more alive. The grass is dancing happily in the rays, smiles unmistakably peaking out on the corner of everyone’s lips. The world seems to just sway gently following close to the soft breeze <strong>and</strong> Louis wants to close his eyes <strong>and</strong> get lost in the sun-saturated serenity, but an obnoxious Irish accent seems to stab his ears. Lovely. “So, any plans to get moving anytime soon? I’ve finished my food like, an hour ago.” Niall sits back, arms crossed over his chest in a huff. Impatient Niall is a replica of a grumpy child. “To say the day is pretty would be an understatement, darling, why not enjoy it a little longer?” Louis presses, letting the flutter of his lashes remain stagnant on his cheeks, trying to feel connected to the breathing of nature’s calmest state. He feels whole. It’s nicer than pretending to be interested in the soggy food that’s been ab<strong>and</strong>oned on his plate. Louis can hear Niall breathe again, an annoyed <strong>and</strong> bored kind of puff that makes Louis’ nose wrinkle up. He’ll never really underst<strong>and</strong> why Niall can’t just let himself get lost in precious moments like these. Those moments where all the stress that averages a place on tired shoulders finally seems to evaporate for just a few entrancing seconds. Where the only sound is laughter <strong>and</strong> the brisk scrape of the tree branches. Shoes seem to pad lighter on the concrete, arms seem to feel less weighted, <strong>and</strong> you remember that in the gr<strong>and</strong> scheme of life, your problems are so much smaller than they seem to be when they’re all cornering you at once. And Louis forgets that his roommate might be uncomfortable with him from now on, <strong>and</strong> he forgets that his father is forever disappointed at the man he has become. His mind is momentarily blank <strong>and</strong> it’s him <strong>and</strong> the sky. It’s rare, to say the least, that Louis can unchain himself from all the problems he drowns himself in during his day to day life. Its even more rare that he can do it while not in the comfort of his exquisitely decorated flat. He wants to capture all the traits of nature’s most tranquil qualities. The heated sun, the slow clouds that drift through the never-ending blue, no rush, no chaos.
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