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UNTraditional #1 — Foster R. Kupbens — v2 3PAGE TWO [5 panels]2.1 - EXT. Hawthorne Theater–NightEstablishing Shot of the Hawthorne Theater in Portland [R7]. You can fill the Outdoorconcert board [R8] with whatever punk bands you like, but the last one should be ALLTIME LOW. There’s a bouncer standing by the door, and there are a couple of punklooking concert goers outside smoking. Maybe someone puking in the corner. It’s a punkshow at a very punk venue. The boys are already inside but we should see Drew’s screamas an Onomatopoeia floating through the open door.ZAAC(From the door)NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!CAPHAWTHORNE THEATERPORTLAND OR2.2 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–NightMedium shot of Drew and Zaac standing next to each other by the back of the crowd.We’re seeing their faces as they look up at the stage. Drew looks devastated, and Zaachas an “I told you so” look.DREWWE MISSED THEM!ZAACDREWZAACYUP.WE SHOULD HAVE LEFT EARLIER…YUP.2.3 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–NightView of the stage as the opening band packs up. We can see a couple of heads in theforeground as the guys look over the crowd. The panel is focussing on the bassist who ishanding his guitar to a stage hand. The Bassist is thin with mid length black hair andblack eyeliner. He’s wearing a short sleeve button up and black jeans.ZAAC(From off panel)MAYBE HE’LL COME DOWN TO WATCH THE NEXT SET.DREW(From off panel)MAYBE...
UNTraditional #1 — Foster R. Kupbens — v2 4PAGE TWO CONT.2.4 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–NightAnother shot of the stage now that the main act has taken the stage. The band is ALLTIME LOW [R9], and their beginning their set. Music noises and such.2.5 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–NightZaac is starting to pull Drew closer to the stage by the hand. There’s quite a few peoplein their way.ZAACCOME ON LOVERBOY. THERE MIGHT BE A MOSH.
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