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UNTraditional #1 — Foster R. Kupbens — v2 7PAGE FIVE [X panels]5.1 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–NightPeople are scattering and running for the exits, but the Gorilla Subject is smashingthings, and throwing people around.SPECTATORAAAAHHHHH5.2 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–NightMedium shot of the boys watching the chaos. They are concerned, but not as much asyou’d expect if a giant gorilla appeared in front of you. Drew is reaching down to pull hissweatshirt off.ZAACBRO, EVERY TIME WE GO OUT!?DREWI KNOW RIGHT? LOOKS LIKE THEY CAN’T GET THEFORMULA RIGHT. THEIR TEST SUBJECTS KEEPMORPHING.5.3 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–NightSame shot as the last panel, but now Drew has his sweatshirt off, and his right arm isglowing blue around his tattoos. They’re Biomechanical tattoos [R4].ZAACDON’T GO TOO HARD. MUM’LL BE PISSED IF YOU CARKIT.DREWI KNOW, I KNOW.5.4 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–NightWide panel showing Drew’s arm extended out to his right, it is now fully metal withgears and pistons, as if his tattoos came to life and took over his arm. He looks ready tothrow down. Zaac is standing behind him looking unphased.DREWI DON’T WANT TO ACCIDENTALLY KILL HIM EITHER.
UNTraditional #1 — Foster R. Kupbens — v2 8PAGE SIX & SEVEN [1 panels]Literally, go nuts here. Just an awesome double page spread of Drew with his robot-isharm fighting a giant crazed gorilla. Maybe like one big panel of Drew punching theSubject with smaller inset panels of them grappling. Or maybe you want to set it up likeit’s a shattered mirror and each pane of broken glass is a different view of them fighting.Do whatever, just don’t let it be boring.
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