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UNTraditional #1 — Foster R. Kupbens — v2 5PAGE THREE [5 panels]3.1 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–NightAerial view of the crowd as the boys push their way closer to the front of the crowd.Don’t focus on it, but there should be 2 cultists in cloaks staked out by the emergencyexit. Drew is bumping into people as he’s dragged by Zaac.DREWSORRY.3.2 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–NightFrom behind we see the boys push past a shirtless man (SUBJECT) who has a tattoo of agorilla on his arm.DREWOOPS. SORRY MAN.3.3 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–NightFull body shot of subject as he stares blankly at Drew. He should be almost blank eyed,like he's looking at nothing. Nothing is going on behind the eyes vibe. His tattoo nowseems to be glowing a little in the same way that Drew’s did at home.DREWUUUUUHHHH…3.4 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–NightDrew is still looking back at the man, but Zaac is pulling him into a mosh pit between afew people. Drew looks confused and a little concerned.DREWZAAC?ZAACYEA MAN?3.5 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–NightThe boys are now standing on the edge of a mosh, there are people dressed in blackband t-shirts and other punk show clothing flailing and running behind them. Zaac islooking excitedly at the pit, but Drew is still looking back to where the man justdisappeared into the crowd. There should be a smaller inset panel that shows Zaac witha “You’ve gotta be kidding me” look on his face, and his face half lit by red light.DREWI THINK I SAW A CHOSEN…ZAAC(From inset panel)SHIT. NOT THE KIND OF MOSH I WANTED.
UNTraditional #1 — Foster R. Kupbens — v2 6PAGE FOUR [3 panels]4.1 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–NightPage Width panel. Shot of the man (SUBJECT) from before as red light pulses from hiseyes, mouth, and from the ink of his tattoo. He’s in a lot of pain. His scream shouldcontinue down between panels as an onomatopoeia.SUBJECTRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAA4.2 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–NightSimilar panel to the last, but the subject’s muscles are bloating grotesquely as he morphsinto a giant gorilla. Think of this as a gross mid shot of an animorph[R10].SUBJECTAAAAAAAAAAAAAA4.3 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–NightSame style of panel, but this one is taller than the last 2. This is a show of the man in fullgorilla mode. Red energy should be crackling off of the arm that had his tattoo. The eyesshould still be glowing red. Make this one look threatening.SUBJECTAAAARRRRRGGGGG
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