UNTraditional Pitch Package

UNTraditional #1 — Foster R. Kupbens — v2 10
PAGE NINE [6 panels]
9.1 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
Drew is still battling the gorilla, but he seems to be getting tired. His arm looks like it's
becoming too heavy for him. There’s no patrons in the theater anymore.
DREW
(as onomatopoeia)
PANT PANT
GORILLA
RRRAAAAAAA
9.2 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
Zaac is bursting back in through the emergency exit behind Drew who still looks beat
and is facing the gorilla.
ZAAC
BRO! IT’S TEMPORARY!
DREW
ZAAC
DREW
WHAT’S TEMPORARY?
THE TATTOO!
OK AND?!
9.3 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
Same angle, Drew is dodging a large speaker that the gorilla has evidently thrown. Zaac
is still behind him, but now looks exasperated with Drew. He’s pointing to the ceiling
indicating the fire sprinklers.
ZAAC
GOD YOU’RE SUCH AN EGG… BREAK THE SPRINKLERS!
WATER MAKE TEMPORARY TATTOO GO BYE-BYE.
DREW
AH!
9.4 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
A full body shot of the gorilla picking up a big stack speaker to throw. He’s a little bloody
but all and all still as angry and powerful as he was at the start.
9.5 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
Shot from behind the speaker which is now midair and flying towards Drew. He’s ready
for it this time and is reaching out with his big robot arm to catch it.
DREW
HOW ABOUT I JUST--
DREW
(as onomatopoeia)
HUP