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Slammed by Hanna Telander, Glen Ellyn, IL<br />
The host’s untamed hair bent in time with his<br />
strides as he glided up to the microphone. His<br />
words seemed to drag as he spoke. Distinctly<br />
annunciating every consonant, he announced the<br />
scores of the poets prior to his entry. His free hand<br />
lingered on his waxy dreadlocks. It felt as if he were<br />
purposefully dawdling to build up my growing anxiety.<br />
I knew this was it; there was nothing more that he<br />
could possibly do to put off my moment. My name<br />
left his lips so definitely and so genuinely that it<br />
sounded as if he had known me intimately for years.<br />
His voice was a pistol at the beginning of an Olympic<br />
race; it filled me with relief, eagerness, and fear. Fear<br />
that the words that I had been analyzing so diligently<br />
for the past few months wouldn’t stream out of my<br />
mouth in a fashion identical to the host’s. Fear that<br />
this Chicago crowd wouldn’t be as open-minded as<br />
they looked. Fear that the saying “Don’t let the fear of<br />
striking out keep you from playing the game” was, in<br />
Photo by Jessica Chantler, Corvallis, OR<br />
form a huddle and link arms for<br />
the return crossing. We wade into<br />
the river but suddenly only one<br />
of us is tall enough to stand! The<br />
current pulls us downstream.<br />
Frantically, I kick as hard as I<br />
can to help propel us.<br />
I want out!<br />
* * *<br />
The ride back is<br />
four miles, and we<br />
have the luxury<br />
of vans due to an<br />
approaching thunderstorm.<br />
I’ve never experienced<br />
anything quite as wonderful as<br />
that heater.<br />
We hurry to our tents. The rain<br />
turns from a trickle to a torrent.<br />
A flash. A boom. The girls search<br />
through soaked gear scattered<br />
around our parachute shelter.<br />
The current<br />
pulls us<br />
downstream<br />
The rain is pouring down. I<br />
change into dry clothes only to<br />
be drenched again.<br />
“I CAN’T FIND MY SHOES!”<br />
And this is how I end up standing<br />
in the mud in my wool socks,<br />
with everything I am<br />
carrying scattered<br />
around me. I wonder<br />
if I will survive.<br />
Airman Heath spots<br />
me from across the<br />
Instructors’ Meadow.<br />
“WHERE’S YOUR<br />
BUDDY!” I can hear him only<br />
faintly over the tremendous storm.<br />
“I DON’T KNOW!” I bellow<br />
back, close to tears from cold and<br />
fright.<br />
He scoops up my stuff and<br />
leads me up the hill like a child. I<br />
don’t bother with my flip-flops.<br />
fact, garbage. But then again, if that phrase was<br />
garbage in this lecture hall full of authors, whose fault<br />
would that be?<br />
* * *<br />
“You look a little pale. Are you all right, Hanna?”<br />
She spoke with concern. When I couldn’t answer in a<br />
steady voice, I really started to second-guess the confidence<br />
I had gone to bed with last night. I glanced<br />
out the cab’s window at the snowflakes that resembled<br />
white satin falling from the gray sky. For so early<br />
in the afternoon, it was the darkest gray I had seen in<br />
a long time.<br />
“Yeah, I’m fine,” I said as convincingly as I could.<br />
“Well, you don’t look fine. It’s okay to be nervous,<br />
love. I would be nervous too if I was reading my poetry<br />
to a room full of college kids.” Aunt Hilary spoke<br />
softly, like she didn’t want the driver to hear. I let my<br />
attention fall on the two names that were carelessly<br />
carved into the pleather seats in a border of a lopsided<br />
heart. I smiled. A sudden jolt quickly<br />
brought me out of my reverie.<br />
“Columbia College, right? Up here on<br />
the left?” The cabbie’s thick city accent<br />
made my shoulders tense up. I got out of<br />
the cab, which drove off even before I<br />
closed the door. I watched my shoes join<br />
and part with the slush until we reached<br />
the opaque double doors.<br />
We entered in silence, but chaos met us with open<br />
arms. Clusters of students wore matching shirts with<br />
their team names, team sponsors scrambled around in<br />
search of a schedule, individual poets stood in a<br />
group, yet each was staring at his or her own markedup<br />
sheet of notes.<br />
It suddenly occurred to me that that’s where I<br />
should be. I nervously stumbled to the front table and<br />
received a “Hello My Name Is” sticker; my hands<br />
trembled so that although my name is only five letters<br />
long, it was completely illegible. I dragged my reluctant<br />
feet to join the rest of the slammers.<br />
Orange plastic chairs scuffed across the linoleum as<br />
friends bunched together, leaving empty scars across<br />
the floor. The florescent lights went out, and hollers<br />
filled the lecture hall, a sign of readiness. Behind the<br />
low stage was a window that was shared with the train<br />
station next door. It allowed little light, and the exposed<br />
pipes rattled and shrieked when the train passed. The<br />
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When contemplating death, who<br />
cares about shoes?<br />
After hours, we reach the top of<br />
the hill. The boys have managed<br />
to start a fire under a parachute<br />
tarp. It is small, with no guarantee<br />
it will survive for two minutes,<br />
but it is a fire.<br />
We huddle in our group of 48,<br />
as close to the fire as we can get.<br />
I stand in the innermost ring,<br />
holding a poncho over the fire<br />
to protect it from any water that<br />
might drip through the smoke<br />
hole in the tarp.<br />
I am freezing, my sleeping bag<br />
will be soaked tonight, I can’t find<br />
my sneakers, I have smoke in my<br />
face, tears in my eyes, and snot<br />
pouring out of my nose. But I am<br />
surrounded by my team. I am<br />
okay. We’ll all be okay. ✎<br />
All that<br />
was left was<br />
me and the<br />
microphone<br />
conversations were uninterrupted by this, and I<br />
observed, as worry waved through my body, I might<br />
be the only newbie in the room.<br />
The first individual poet was introduced and<br />
stepped onto the stage, followed by two teams and<br />
another individual. Suddenly it occurred to me that I<br />
could count those before me on one hand. Just five<br />
left before I had to go up there and spill my heart out<br />
to a room of strangers and their families?<br />
Five: A boy about 17, with dark hair in an unkempt<br />
ponytail at the nape of his neck. His ashen skin awkwardly<br />
combined with a dark T-shirt that clung to his<br />
sickly ribs.<br />
Four: A young woman of 15, with tightly woven,<br />
ornate braids that accented her dark, shadowy skin.<br />
Her torn, fitted sweatshirt said “Stimax,” which I later<br />
learned was her team name. She spoke of peace and<br />
drugs in free-flowing verses that riled up the audience.<br />
Three and Two: Boys who could have passed for<br />
mid-twenties, but were 18, decked out in<br />
matching Nike Premiums splattered with<br />
vivid paint. Their jeans were loose, but<br />
their words streamed out continuously and<br />
tediously for what seemed like hours.<br />
One.<br />
One? Really?<br />
I traced a circle on my knee over and<br />
over as the host ascended the stage holding<br />
a coconut banana smoothie.<br />
The music began again and he announced my name<br />
slowly, which – in comparison with my bolt to the<br />
platform – seemed like an eternity. The music faded,<br />
and so did the crowd noise: the chairs, the train, the<br />
rattling and shrieking of the open piping. All that was<br />
left was me and the microphone.<br />
My nerves surged out along with my words; no<br />
stalls, no stumbles, no stutters. And to be honest, I<br />
had never meant anything I said prior to that moment<br />
like I meant the things on the paper crammed in my<br />
pocket that day.<br />
But I didn’t need the paper as a safety net. I didn’t<br />
need the notes on my hand (as illegible as they now<br />
were), nor did I need the applause and the congratulatory<br />
remarks I received after I descended slowly, chin<br />
up, from the platform.<br />
What I did need was that surge. And that’s all<br />
anyone really needs. ✎<br />
Photo by Julia Edelman, Roslyn, NY<br />
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