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Issue No:12<br />

The Lyric <strong>Write</strong>rs <strong>Magazine</strong><br />

Recalling ‘Last Christmas’<br />

With George Michael<br />

A Christmas<br />

Celebration<br />

Featuring<br />

All Our Regulars<br />

Plus Original<br />

Christmas Songs<br />

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In This Issue...<br />

Page 40 - 43<br />

Regulars:<br />

04 The Lyrics Doctor<br />

06 Daryn Wright<br />

08 Trevor Dimoff<br />

10 Paul Sykes<br />

12 Bill O’Halloran<br />

14 Simon Wright<br />

16 Happy Ron Hill<br />

18 Life In Lyrics<br />

Featuring:<br />

20 John Nicholson<br />

22 David Sutherland<br />

24 Stephen Kalpin<br />

26 David Michael Rose<br />

28 Augusto Flameño<br />

Monsayac<br />

30 James K Victor<br />

32 Sydney Westan<br />

34 Jason Baker<br />

36 Queen Regina Of The<br />

Gigglefits<br />

38 Bob Love<br />

40 Paul Michel<br />

42 Paul Michel<br />

44 Jimmy Travis Band<br />

46 Dave Eidson<br />

48 Nick Lawrence<br />

50 Colin B Leonard<br />

52 Sivle<br />

54 Rollin Jewett<br />

56 Bamil Gutiérrez<br />

Collado<br />

58 Don Murdock<br />

60 Mike Turner<br />

62 Jane Shields<br />

64 Richard Solleveld<br />

66 Ric Angus<br />

68 Linda Harborth<br />

70 Gary Snead<br />

72 Stanley Thompson<br />

74 Pete Marksteiner<br />

76 Ron Todd<br />

78 Paul Michel<br />

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A Word From The Editor...<br />

A very warm welcome to my Christmas issue of<br />

<strong>Write</strong> <strong>Away</strong> <strong>Magazine</strong>. It’s packed full of cheer<br />

from talented artists around the world who have<br />

kindly contributed thier own original Christmas<br />

songs/lyeics for your pleasure. Please take a<br />

moment to check out all the links provided.<br />

I’d like to take this opportunity to wish all my<br />

readers a wonderful Christmas, and ask that if you<br />

enjoy my magazine please share it on social media<br />

for all to enjoy.<br />

I’ve also released Volume Two of ‘My Life In<br />

Lyrics’, which you can now preview or download<br />

from my website. Volume One is also still<br />

available from www.writeawaymagazine.co.uk<br />

You can also submit articles for my magazine<br />

directly from my website should you so wish to.<br />

I would like to offer a huge thank you to each of my<br />

regular writers for their invaluable support over the<br />

past twelve months, and for producing such<br />

excellent content in all their articles. I would be lost<br />

without your input, and am truly grateful to you all.<br />

So, here’s wishing you all a very Merry Christmas<br />

time, and also good fortune and health for the<br />

coming New Year.<br />

Jane xxx<br />

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Finding Your Words<br />

Show what you mean - don’t tell. “I’m so sad, I just feel<br />

bad, my girlfriend left me today...”....Not the best way to<br />

express your words. This is a fast way to make your song<br />

forgettable.<br />

The best lyrics, like any good writing, get us to feel emotions<br />

because they capture that experience, not because<br />

they tell us what to feel. Try to write about what it’s like to<br />

feel something, instead of just<br />

telling your audience.<br />

A good example of an alternative to this “I’m so sad” thing<br />

is from Damien Rice’s song The Animals Were Gone: “At<br />

night I dream without you, and hope I don’t wake up;<br />

‘Cause waking up without you is like drinking from an<br />

empty cup”.<br />

Brainstorm some ideas so you can see what you have and<br />

choose or even build off of an existing idea. It is probably<br />

best if you have an inspiration.<br />

https://www.rhymezone.com/ - Check this out if you’ve<br />

never used it before. It’s a great aid to rhyme.<br />

has far more rhyming than other ge<br />

not required. It’s just stylistic.<br />

Try non-standard rhyme schemes. I<br />

your rhyming stand out a bit more a<br />

cheesy, you can experiment with diff<br />

rhyming. Did you know that there’s<br />

Explore assonance/consonance rhym<br />

alliteration, forced rhymes, etc.<br />

Assonance is the repetition of vowe<br />

create internal rhyming within phra<br />

together with alliteration and conso<br />

of the building blocks of verse. Ass<br />

to be a rhyme; the identity of which<br />

sequence of both vowel and conson<br />

Consonance refers to repetitive sou<br />

consonants within a sentence or ph<br />

often takes place in quick succession<br />

patter. It is classified as a literary ter<br />

as well as prose. For instance, the w<br />

kick are consonant with one and oth<br />

existence of common interior conso<br />

Rhyme within reason. You know when you see a song<br />

written by someone who isn’t very good and the lyrics just<br />

come off as cheesy? This is often because they rhyme too<br />

much or very badly. Aim to avoid having all of your lines<br />

rhyme, and look for rhymes that you do use that look<br />

natural. Don’t put weird phrases or words into your lyrics<br />

just to get a rhyme. Really, your lyrics don’t have to rhyme<br />

at all. Plenty of songs have non-rhyming lyrics.<br />

Good: “You make me feel real again/You just have to smile<br />

and I know/The sun’s coming out - Amen!”<br />

Bad: “I really love my cat/My cat is where it’s at/Her tail<br />

looks like a bat/She’s getting kind of fat...”<br />

Of course, there are some genre considerations. Rap often<br />

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The Lyrics Doctor<br />

nres, but even then it’s<br />

f you do want to make<br />

nd avoid sounding<br />

erent styles of<br />

more ways to rhyme?<br />

es, pararhyme,<br />

l sounds to<br />

ses or sentences, and<br />

nance serves as one<br />

onance does not have<br />

depends merely on<br />

ant sounds.<br />

nds produced by<br />

rase. This repetition<br />

such as in pitter,<br />

m used in both poetry<br />

ords chuckle, fickle, and<br />

er due to the<br />

nant sounds<br />

Another example, Macklemore’s Same Love uses many<br />

examples of assonance rhymes and other non-standard<br />

rhymes: lately/daily, anointed/poisoned, important/support<br />

it, etc<br />

Pararhyme is a half-rhyme in which there is vowel variation<br />

within the same consonant pattern.<br />

“Strange Meeting” (1918) is a poem by Wilfred Owen, a<br />

war poet who used pararhyme in his writing. Here is a part<br />

of the poem that shows pararhyme:<br />

Too fast in thought or death to be bestirred.<br />

Then, as I probed them, one sprang up, and stared<br />

With piteous recognition in fixed eyes,<br />

Lifting distressful hands, as if to bless.<br />

And by his smile, I knew that sullen hall,<br />

By his dead smile I knew we stood in Hell.<br />

Alliteration and rhyme<br />

Alliteration refers to words that share the same<br />

initial sound, like Peter Piper, Bugs Bunny, or Mickey<br />

Mouse.<br />

Rhyme refers to words that share the same final sound or<br />

sound sequence, like me and tree or tap and cap, or fun<br />

and sun. Rhyme is actually quite complex and difficult to<br />

explain precisely, so you’ll want to keep it pretty simple, at<br />

least at first. My advice: stick to one-syllable words with a<br />

simple sound structure, at least at first.<br />

Avoid cliches. You want to avoid cliches because these<br />

keep your songs from standing out and don’t show off your<br />

unique talent. If you have someone down on their knees<br />

(especially if they’re begging please), someone is walking<br />

down the street (either it’s a girl or it’s you, either way, it’s<br />

been done), or you just have to ask “why can’t you see”, you<br />

probably need to go back to the drawing board...<br />

Please email any questions for The Lyrics Doctor<br />

directly to me and I will forward to him.<br />

jane@writeawaymagazine.co.uk<br />

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V1<br />

Every morning it’s the same routine …<br />

Alarm clock is waking me at four …<br />

Hot cup of coffee stirred with a candy cane …<br />

Sugar pie then out the door<br />

Making my way through the traffic jam …<br />

With thousands of elves heading to Santa’s shop …<br />

Where we all make toys on the assembly line, …<br />

And the work it never stops<br />

CH<br />

Slap on a set of tires make the noise “vroom, vroom”<br />

… Send the car rolling across the room …<br />

Grab a hammer, whack a nail, make a tug boat …<br />

Throw it in the tub see if it floats<br />

Stand the doll, brush the hair, put it in the box …<br />

Tie a golden ribbon in a knot …<br />

Every task is different but the goal’s the same …<br />

Filling Santa’s magic bag<br />

V2<br />

Steam-whistle toot-toots for the shift change …<br />

I’ll finish this toy before I go …<br />

Then skip rope, dance a jig, sing a Christmas song …<br />

As I’m heading for the door<br />

These twelve hour shifts seven days a week …<br />

Don’t leave a lot of time for elf things …<br />

But it’s what I love and all I live for,<br />

… And the only thing I dream<br />

CH<br />

Slap on a set of tires make the noise “vroom, vroom”<br />

… Send the car rolling across the room …<br />

Grab a hammer, whack a nail, make a tug boat …<br />

Throw it in the tub see if it floats<br />

Stand the doll, brush the hair, put it in the box …<br />

Tie a golden ribbon in a knot …<br />

Every task is different but the goal’s the same …<br />

Filling Santa’s magic bag<br />

REPEAT CHORUS<br />

Filling Santa<br />

Written By D<br />

You can find Daryn’s music on Reverbnation... and follow on his Website...<br />

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Daryn Wright<br />

’s Magic Bag<br />

aryn Wright<br />

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What Are You W<br />

Want To Go Further in 2020 Than You Did in <strong>2019</strong>?<br />

Are you willing to spend 30 minutes to get started on<br />

2020 right now? Why wait for New Yearâ€s Day to<br />

start planning and working on your next year!<br />

If you’re serious about improving your lyric writing<br />

and going somewhere with it grab a pen and paper,<br />

we’ve got some writing to do:<br />

Tell Me About Your Made It Moment....<br />

What’s it feel like when time stops as you reach your<br />

dream goal?<br />

Shivers? Spotlights?<br />

Are you hearing your words on the radio? Getting<br />

your first royalty cheque?<br />

Stop and imagine it.<br />

Close your eyes and enjoy the feeling of reaching<br />

your songwriting dream!<br />

Now before you let reality crush your dreams and<br />

you start thinking but I can’t. I’ll never, that’s too big<br />

a dream.. write about it!<br />

Pretend it’s a piece of fiction if it helps. If you want to<br />

be a writer, write about it, point form is fine:<br />

What would a made it momentfeel like, look like,<br />

sound like?<br />

What knowledge, skills, connections with other<br />

people will help you get to your dream?<br />

What steps or smaller goals do you need to get there?<br />

write at least 10 before you continue.<br />

I’m Not Kidding, <strong>Write</strong> It Down!<br />

<strong>Write</strong> it down to help make it real, go get a pen and<br />

paper, I’ll wait. Seriously...<br />

Now that you’ve thought about and written about it<br />

you’ve got an impressive list, yes? There’s at least a<br />

page of dreams and ideas in front of you. So much to<br />

do, probably too much. Instead of getting<br />

overwhelmed be gentle with yourself, dial it back and<br />

find the best first step:<br />

What can you do consistently over the next year to<br />

move towards your dream?<br />

Here are some ideas to get you thinking:<br />

Knowledge<br />

You need to know what to do: how to generate<br />

interesting song ideas, how to write effective lyrics,<br />

how to structure them into a song...<br />

To learn more about lyric structure, you could<br />

analyze a song each week.<br />

You could take a lyric writing course and carve out<br />

30 minutes, 4 nights a week to work on it.<br />

What knowledge would help you achieve your<br />

songwriting dream and how will you learn it?<br />

Skills<br />

Knowledge is power, but it takes songwriting skills<br />

to create solid lyrics.. What lyric writing skills would<br />

improve your songs?<br />

For more emotional impact with your lyrics spend<br />

an hour a week building a list of awesome lines you<br />

love.<br />

To make it easier to start new songs, create a list of<br />

titles to refer to when you’re starting a new song and<br />

brainstorm new title ideas at least once a week.<br />

To practice coming up with lyric ideas quickly, for a<br />

month spend 10 minutes a day brainstorming ideas<br />

for you latest song.<br />

If you want to make more time for songwriting, you<br />

can consistently work on your songwriting a little<br />

every day.<br />

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Trevor Dimoff<br />

riting Next Year?<br />

What lyric writing skills would help you get to your<br />

dream?<br />

Connections<br />

Nobody is successful without helping and interacting<br />

with other people. Put yourself out there online and<br />

especially in person.<br />

For example, if you need to find co-writers to help<br />

you write music you can:<br />

Reach out to a new songwriter each week with a<br />

personal message.<br />

Find a songwriting group in your area and go to<br />

meetings, meet people face to face.<br />

Spend an hour a week setting up and having<br />

conversations with other songwriters.<br />

Summary:<br />

I want you to do something new or different or better<br />

so you’re moving towards you dream. Start with the<br />

little steps that set you on the path! think about what<br />

you’re writing next year.<br />

Now, tell me about your I made it moments, when<br />

your songwriting dream comes true and let me<br />

know: what’s your best first step to get to your<br />

songwriting dream?<br />

I’d love to hear from you, tell me about it:<br />

trevor@epicsongwriting.com<br />

Trevor is a songwriter and songwriting teacher at<br />

epicsongwriting.com.<br />

Click here to learn a quick method to write lyrics and<br />

music for a song chorus.<br />

What musical connections do you need and how can<br />

you develop them?<br />

Action<br />

All of the planning in the world won’t accomplish<br />

anything if you don’t follow through! results require<br />

action!<br />

Start with the end in mind, your songwriting dream.<br />

Come back to it when you feel your motivation<br />

slipping. If it no longer seems relevant, change it and<br />

focus on a new dream, a new I made it moment!<br />

Break it down into smaller more manageable steps.<br />

Perhaps one of these steps is your big goal for 2020.<br />

<strong>Dec</strong>ide what consistent action will help you learn and<br />

grow.<br />

You’ve thought and written about your<br />

songwriting dream, and worked through these<br />

questions... what’s your best first step to catch that<br />

dream?<br />

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George Mich<br />

In the coaching world, one of the primary things<br />

to get working in a voice quickly is efficiency and<br />

adduction - the proper closing of the vocal folds.<br />

So many other great things become available<br />

when we can do this. So what about all the<br />

breathy songs out there? Are they sung poorly?<br />

Are they bad? Not at all. But if you’re in<br />

training with a pro coach and the ONLY thing<br />

you can ever do after training is sing breathy,<br />

then you’d probably want to be asking some<br />

questions. A car that can go 200Km/hr can<br />

obviously travel at 60 if the driver desires, yet<br />

a car that can only go to 60 can’t go to 200. A<br />

voice that can sing powerfully can obviously pull<br />

back and sing breathy and intimately, but a voice<br />

that can only ever do that, can’t sing with power.<br />

When a singer interprets a song, there are<br />

multiple options available to them. Loud or soft?<br />

Pushing the groove or sitting back on it? Bright<br />

and twangy or dark and mellow? Perfect diction<br />

(that might make a contemporary song suck) or<br />

approximate diction (that would make<br />

traditional singing suck) and breathy or clear.<br />

The ability to instantly go from a huge belt to a<br />

seductive and breathy voice is one of the greatest<br />

hallmarks of George Michael’s sound. He was<br />

truly masterful at it. And he could do it more<br />

than once within the same vocal line.<br />

George Michael had a GREAT tone to his voice.<br />

It always sounded very open, controlled and<br />

accurate. What made his performances shine<br />

was his deliberate (or naturally intuitive)<br />

movement from breathy to belt without<br />

changing his tone. This takes skill and a deep<br />

emotional connection to his voice. Listen to his<br />

performances and you’ll notice him moving in<br />

and out seamlessly.<br />

So when you’re working on your performances<br />

this month, why not take a leaf out of his book<br />

and try singing some phrases differently to<br />

how you usually would. If you have a naturally<br />

breathy voice, try singing a few with a clear tone,<br />

and if you naturally sing very clear and<br />

efficiently, try singing a word or two with some<br />

breath for emphasis. I can’t stress enough what a<br />

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Paul Sykes<br />

ael’s Vocals<br />

difference it will make to your live or studio<br />

performances when you can step out of the<br />

dynamic comfort zone and apply dynamics and<br />

texture to your lines. At first, you may feel silly,<br />

but with practice and experience you’ll begin to<br />

develop a whole new vocal expression and<br />

professionalism.<br />

Maybe it was coincidence that one of his songs<br />

was called careless whisper… But after reading<br />

this, you may come to the same conclusion that<br />

I came to, that maybe it wasn’t so coincidental<br />

after all...<br />

You can find out more about Paul Sykes, vocal<br />

coach by visting his website.<br />

Please follow this link...<br />

Also Paul has just opened a brand new online<br />

vocal course, which you are all invited to check<br />

out on the following link.<br />

Please follow this link....<br />

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So This Is Christmas... An<br />

In our last episode, one of the points we touched<br />

upon was the need to tell a story that was new,<br />

or at least an emotional groove that was new…<br />

.”Love is great”, we said, was a statement that,<br />

while true, was so universal as to be the worst<br />

of all artistic sins: not interesting. And if there<br />

were a “runner-up” prize for “Most dangerous<br />

quagmire for new songwriters”, what could be a<br />

more deserving candidate than Christmas! (we<br />

note, as an aside, that topics like this are<br />

particularly perilous for new, upcoming<br />

songwriters…..songwriters with widespread,<br />

universal appeal seem to get away with<br />

generalized pap they call universal much more<br />

easily...did Paul McCartney just click to a new<br />

webpage? Well, if so, I hope he took his<br />

Christmas bells (and John Lennon’s children’s<br />

choir with him…..but I digress)<br />

Christmas! Where religion, family, food,... and<br />

toys coalesce….and don’t forget alcohol! If, as<br />

the rehab counselors say, addiction is a<br />

downward spiral of chasing a first time high over<br />

and over, but never quite as good….well that’s an<br />

apt description of what Christmas becomes for<br />

many adults. That’s a whole nother book! The<br />

problem for songwriters, however centers around<br />

the fact that so many people already have very<br />

strong emotional impressions from idealized<br />

(half remembered) childhood experiences--they<br />

already “know” more about Christmas than you<br />

could possibly tell them. But they want you to<br />

try.<br />

Sales of Christmas songs clearly holler that (or<br />

“carol” that, if you prefer). The waterfront,<br />

unfortunately, has already been well covered,<br />

which accounts for the further and further<br />

“reaches” in order to say something new….<br />

did the authors of “Grandma got run over by a<br />

reindeer” just click to a new webpage? Could<br />

they take the barking dog Jingle Bells people with<br />

them? This is kinda for songwriters, ok.<br />

Actually, though, Grandma and her reindeer are<br />

actually what you need,or so I would suggest:<br />

something outside the sappy “Love is great”<br />

song...with “love” changed out to “Christmas”.<br />

Which brings us to a personal story:<br />

In 2014, I decided to take up the challenge of<br />

a Christmas song. Hazardous, I knew….but<br />

hadn’t I already written the “Best Song in the<br />

World”? Well, I hadn’t...but I was runner-up<br />

(twice) in a contest called that. And I still had<br />

those Elixir coated guitar strings I had won as<br />

“honorable mention” in a Billboard songwriting<br />

contest….so I was clearly qualified ( I thought) to<br />

take on a challenge that had reduced so many<br />

talented writers to….dreck. But what to do….<br />

what fresh spin could I possibly…...AH HA! It<br />

came to me in a great moment of clarity (or so<br />

I thought). I scribbled a few lines, and called<br />

the band for rehearsal. I began teaching them<br />

my epic: “All I want for Christmas is...a divorce”.<br />

Suddenly, my wife Amy, who rarely takes<br />

interest in musical matters, burst into the room.<br />

“Did you write that? Is that yours?”, she asked.<br />

“Uh…..maybe”, I sheepishly replied. There<br />

was a pause that perhaps seemed longer than it<br />

was…...and she responded “That’s the best song<br />

you EVER wrote!”....I couldn’t be sure, but she<br />

SEEMED neither sarcastic nor upset…..I chalked<br />

it up to the power of ART….I think.<br />

You decide, here it is:<br />

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M-c4G-<br />

F4Rxpc<br />

www.wildcatohalloran.com<br />

And Merry Christmas….also<br />

Happy holidays, Blessed Kwanza<br />

etc<br />

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Bill O’Halloran<br />

d What Have You Done?<br />

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S tand F<br />

(Verse 1)<br />

Snow is falling on Christmas Eve<br />

Reindeer being readied<br />

Sleigh bells on the breeze,<br />

But not everybody’s tucked up in bed<br />

Or has a roof on which to land a sled<br />

Woah, Christmas Eve<br />

(Verse 2)<br />

Snow keeps falling on Christmas Eve<br />

Riley’s old blanket<br />

Guards against the freeze,<br />

The medals that he earned were sold long ago<br />

A dog-tag round his neck glinting in the snow<br />

Woah, in the snow<br />

(Pre Chorus)<br />

We all have our wars to fight<br />

Let me stand with you<br />

Deep in the dark of night<br />

I know what you would do<br />

(Chorus)<br />

You stood for me<br />

So I will stand for you<br />

If you can’t stand any more<br />

I will carry you<br />

We’ll carry you<br />

Support each other<br />

It’s what we gotta do<br />

(Bridge)<br />

I see dark clouds<br />

Cold city walls<br />

Queues for a shelter<br />

The blare of car horns<br />

Heroes in rags showing wounds in their eyes<br />

They’ve faced more than snow falling from the skies<br />

(Verse 3)<br />

Hope comes calling on Christmas Eve<br />

Stockings on the mantle<br />

Kids all believe,<br />

There is no man that will be left behind<br />

We carry our fallen, eyes for our blind<br />

Eyes for our blind<br />

(Pre Chorus)<br />

We all have our wars to fight<br />

Let me stand with you<br />

Deep in the dark of night<br />

I know what you would do<br />

(Chorus)<br />

You stood for me<br />

So I will stand for you<br />

If you can’t stand any more<br />

I will carry you<br />

We’ll carry you<br />

Support each other<br />

It’s what we gotta do<br />

Written By Simon Wright<br />

(September 2018)<br />

Click here to listen....<br />

Hope for Homeless Heroes’ Hearts II – a<br />

Christmas Charity album<br />

Christmas should be a joyous time. A time to spend<br />

with loved ones, exchange presents while enjoying<br />

good food. But Christmas is not joyous for everyone.<br />

It’s really important that we reflect on this and do our<br />

bit to help those who haven’t been as fortunate as us.<br />

One group that particularly deserves support is<br />

homeless veterans. These are people who have served<br />

their country, often putting their bodies on the line,<br />

but who then find themselves on the margins of<br />

society after returning to civilian life.<br />

American musician Stephen Kalpin decided to do<br />

something about the plight of homeless veterans by<br />

creating an album of Christmas-themed songs, with<br />

the proceeds of sales going to the National Coalition<br />

for Homeless Veterans.<br />

Bringing together a team of big-hearted<br />

heroes<br />

When Stephen came up with the idea of doing a<br />

Christmas charity album, he invited others to<br />

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Simon Wright<br />

or You<br />

collaborate through a post on a Facebook group<br />

called ‘Songwriting and Music Production’.<br />

His invitation was answered by an enthusiastic and<br />

talented bunch of musicians and songwriters. It’s a<br />

really global effort, with contributions drawn from<br />

Trinidad and Tobago, Canada, Finland, England,<br />

South Africa, United States, Scotland, Italy, and<br />

Bangladesh!<br />

The album features fresh interpretations of<br />

well-known Christmas favourites, plus original new<br />

material. The music is sumptuous and will make your<br />

foot tap, your heart smile, and hopefully also make<br />

you think about what Christmas means to you and<br />

its true spirit.<br />

Stand for you lyric<br />

My contribution to the album was to create an<br />

original lyric, called ‘Stand for you’. Riley, the veteran<br />

referenced within the song, is a fictitious<br />

character, but he represents the plight that many<br />

veterans sadly end up facing. He has had to sell the<br />

medals he earned, and has gone (in society’s eyes)<br />

from being a homecoming hero to just another<br />

homeless person sat on a street corner.<br />

I wanted to juxtaposition Riley’s plight with the<br />

joyous anticipation that kids have on Christmas Eve<br />

– being tucked up in a warm bed waiting excitedly<br />

for Santa and his reindeer to arrive. And then to have<br />

the chorus be an uplifting tale of how others will<br />

support Riley in his hour of need, just as he stood for<br />

us when serving his country.I originally thought the<br />

lyric could maybe be converted into a Bruce<br />

Springsteen-type song, but when Seth Koos started<br />

working on it he had the great idea to move it into<br />

more of a hard rock territory. And we were very<br />

lucky to enlist Bob Campbell to provide the vocal<br />

oomph that the song needed. I’m very proud of the<br />

end result and that a lyric I wrote is helping a great<br />

cause.<br />

https://www.hopeforhomelesshearoesheartsii.com/<br />

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Maybe Christmas T<br />

I don’t regret the choice to fight<br />

for what is right<br />

But every day I pray<br />

to be coming home tonight<br />

So Let us win and let peace begin<br />

I pray that soon, I’ll get back again<br />

I don’t know how I don’t know when<br />

Maybe Christmastime I’ll be home<br />

Maybe Christmastime I’ll be home<br />

I never turn around<br />

when things don’t go as planned<br />

I never once back down<br />

when I have to make a stand..<br />

REPEAT CHORUS<br />

INSTRUMENTAL CHORUS<br />

Didn’t know how much I’d miss<br />

Mom and everyone<br />

You tell her I’ll be back<br />

When the war is won.<br />

REPEAT CHORUS<br />

I always think first of the people I protect<br />

I never once thought twice<br />

about things I could not get.<br />

REPEAT CHORUS<br />

To listen click this link...<br />

ABOUT HAPPYRON<br />

HappyRon’s music has been described as<br />

“Mr. Rogers Meets South Park.”<br />

At the age of 48 he finally healed a lifelong<br />

disabilities that have prevented him from<br />

fully pursuing music and is excited to finally<br />

bring his music to the world.<br />

Firstly he is on the autistic spectrum that<br />

has always made communication difficult<br />

and music has helped him heal and move<br />

forward in life.<br />

Secondly, he was born without a left hip<br />

socket which brought tension and pain<br />

throughout his body. After having surgery<br />

he found that was able to create music<br />

much easier and has become obsessed with<br />

teaching people that anyone can make<br />

music.<br />

He is most well known for fun sing-along<br />

songs like “Terribly Happy” and “If You’re<br />

Bored In San Diego (IT’S YOUR FAULT)<br />

as well as songs in many other styles. He<br />

has been described as a cross between<br />

“punk rock and punk folk.”<br />

His music is influenced by, among others,<br />

Ringo Starr, Mr. Rogers, South Park, and<br />

Leonard Cohen.<br />

He is now an inspirational speaker with<br />

music sharing the value of positive thought<br />

and action to businesses and schools.<br />

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Happy Ron Hill<br />

ime I’ll Be Home<br />

“Dare we say HappyRon is making San Diego<br />

hipper?” - The San Diego Reader<br />

“HappyRon lives and breathes music. His<br />

dedication is an inspiration” - The San Diego<br />

Union Tribune<br />

“Every guy in the English Speaking world<br />

needs a copy of HappyRon’s Terribly Happy<br />

if only to sing along with his own life” The<br />

Expresso <strong>Magazine</strong> https://www.theespresso.<br />

com/<br />

“Masterpiece… anyone who listens will be<br />

amazed at the depth of Happy Ron Hill’s songwriting.”<br />

The San Diego Troubadour http://<br />

www.sandiegotroubadour.com November<br />

2008<br />

“Great stuff, great attitude and lyrics as well as<br />

cool songs. Not to mention brilliant titles”<br />

Dominic Pedler, author of the 800 page book<br />

Songwriting Secrets Of The Beatles<br />

Gregory Page says “ I didn’t like it, I LOVED<br />

IT!!!”<br />

HAPPYRON BIO<br />

The Happy Man has lived in San Diego all his<br />

life and his hope is to die in San Diego. He<br />

never sang a note until he was thirty and didn’t<br />

get “seriously” into music until he was forty.<br />

He was played more than 2700 shows since<br />

then bringing to the stage his unique<br />

combination of fun sing-along songs with<br />

heartfelt softer songs.<br />

To celebrate his 44rth birthday he released<br />

his first real album, backed by no less than<br />

twenty-two people, including some of the best<br />

musicians and singers in San Diego. Also<br />

featured is Paul Litteral on Trumpet, who<br />

played on the B-52s “Love Shack” and James<br />

Brown’s “Living In America. The album<br />

Produced by local music guru Sven-Erik<br />

Seaholm. The critically acclaimed album was<br />

nominated for a San Diego Music Award and<br />

was described by The San Diego Troubadour<br />

as “Masterpiece… anyone who listens will be<br />

amazed at the depth of Happy Ron Hill’s<br />

songwriting.”<br />

HappyRon was born without a socket in his<br />

left hip and that contributed to music being<br />

very difficult for him. After having surgery his<br />

life and his music changed. He is now in what<br />

he calls “HappyRon finally unleashed” mode<br />

and is finally able to create his music in full<br />

force.<br />

HappyRon has played with a thousand<br />

musicians, his current band is The Good<br />

Hearted People, featuring Stand Up Bass<br />

Player Paul Tillery and Andy Gallagher from<br />

Trains Across The Sea on keys.<br />

FACEBOOK: https://www.facebook.com/<br />

HappyRonMusic/videos/2330075183931189/<br />

SOUNDCLOUD: https://soundcloud.com/<br />

happyron10/maybe-christmas-time-ill-behome<br />

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The room is getting smaller<br />

The walls are closing in<br />

The cold bites deep inside me<br />

Where do I begin<br />

I sit here watching snow fall<br />

Remembering times past<br />

Of love and fun and Christmas cheer<br />

Times now in distant past<br />

Christma<br />

But<br />

I’ll sing you a song of those days<br />

Of family food and fun<br />

And pretend for these three minutes<br />

That they’ve only just begun<br />

The wrapping presents, the Christmas tree<br />

The anticipation on Christmas eve<br />

But now the kids are grown up<br />

You took your chance to leave<br />

You left me in the season<br />

Thats supposed to be of cheer<br />

Leaving me to the ghosts of past<br />

Alone to face my fear<br />

But<br />

I’ll sing you a song of those days<br />

Of family food and fun<br />

And pretend for these three minutes<br />

That they’ve only just begun<br />

So while you’re all celebrating<br />

Think for a second of my pain<br />

Coz there’s hundreds out there like me<br />

All feeling much the same<br />

But<br />

I’ll sing you a song of those days<br />

Of family food and fun<br />

And pretend for these three minutes<br />

That they’ve only just begun<br />

That they’ve only just begun<br />

To listen follow this link...<br />

All rights reserved @Coolparadiso<br />

Every year I write a couple of cheery Christmas<br />

songs, which my wife and I perform and send as a<br />

video to our friends, like a modern day Christmas<br />

card.<br />

I started thinking about it just the other day and I<br />

had another idea for now. Last year around<br />

November as we were digging out our Christmas<br />

songs and starting to practice, a member of our<br />

musical group stopped coming and sent me and<br />

email.<br />

He said he has no cheer for Xmas as it has too many<br />

bad memories, so he just disappears for a while. It got<br />

me thinking and I realised that it is true for many as<br />

well as isolating further some very lonely people.<br />

Now i am all in favour of Christmas cheer, but my<br />

song was written so perhaps we take a small<br />

moments reflection for the people that find<br />

Christmas a challenge.<br />

I only wrote the lyrics the day before writing this<br />

article so at present the song has no music...<br />

John (Coolparadiso) is a songwriter musician from<br />

Australia, he has had many songs recorded across 8<br />

countries and has released three of his own albums (2<br />

of which he has produced).<br />

He writes daily and posts early demos on his<br />

SoundCloud account<br />

https://soundcloud.com/user-926461130<br />

his albums can be found at Bandcamp<br />

https://johnnicholson.bandcamp.com/<br />

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First Sign O<br />

The moon rises early<br />

In a clear November sky<br />

Rests upon the brow of the hill<br />

The ponies in the meadow<br />

With their turnout rugs keep warm<br />

While the suns still shines<br />

Through the winter chill<br />

Though it’s not even <strong>Dec</strong>ember<br />

The shoppings all but done<br />

And there’s nothing left to save for anyway<br />

Bring me joy, bring me peace<br />

Bring me comfort and relief<br />

Bring me truth, bring me hope<br />

For even though I don’t believe<br />

I will join you in glad tidings<br />

And sing within your choir<br />

At the first sign of Christmas<br />

Seasons bring no comfort<br />

And little chance of peace<br />

As children play beneath Syrian skies<br />

The ever crumbling ruins<br />

Of a country on its knees<br />

Make every day a battle to survive<br />

Though it’s closer now to Christmas<br />

The fighting’s never done<br />

And what is left to pray for anyway<br />

Bring me joy, bring me peace<br />

Bring me comfort and relief<br />

Bring me truth, bring me hope<br />

For even though I don’t believe<br />

I will join you in glad tidings<br />

And sing within your choir<br />

At the first sign of Christmas<br />

And there but for the grace of god<br />

And there but for the grace of god<br />

And there but for the grace of god<br />

Bring me joy, bring me peace<br />

Bring me comfort and relief<br />

Bring me truth, bring me hope<br />

For even though I don’t believe<br />

I will join you in glad tidings<br />

And sing within your choir<br />

At the first sign of Christmas<br />

Follow this link to listen...<br />

First Sign Of Christmas<br />

The inspiration for this lyric is based around the<br />

simple principle of peace and good will, and that<br />

should be a welcome message, regardless of<br />

religion. The narrator is not religious, but<br />

appreciates the message of peace.<br />

The verses concern the difference in ‘life’,<br />

particularly at Christmas time, between the<br />

relative opulent and stable Western world and<br />

that of warn torn Middle Eastern countries.<br />

‘There but for the grace of god’ is meant as a<br />

‘cheeky’ bridge between believers and<br />

unbelievers, but is also an acknowledgment that<br />

no one chooses their destiny.<br />

David Sutherland:<br />

Is a musician and writer of songs. With<br />

unashamedly Americana influences, he weaves<br />

stories of love, loss and travel among the open<br />

landscape of the great American dream.<br />

EP: Americana is available from https://davidsutherland.bandcamp.com/album/americana<br />

SINGLE: Carnival is available from https://davidsutherland.bandcamp.com/track/carnival<br />

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f Christmas<br />

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BEEN TO<br />

It’s been too long…, Since I saw your face…<br />

At Christmas Time.., we’ll once again embrace…<br />

Cause what I feel for you, Despite how far I roam<br />

It’s Christmas time babe, And I’m coming home…….<br />

Yes I know babe, that you’ll still be there<br />

And of course you know, Just how much I care<br />

Cause you wait for me, and your there to stay.....<br />

There’s no more agony babe, I come home today….<br />

Now I know the time is near…<br />

And I know I’m almost there…<br />

I’m so close to what is dear….<br />

Feel electric in the air…<br />

I can’t wait to see you, how’d I get this far<br />

Alone without you<br />

Walking to the door…<br />

And I see you standing there….<br />

With that smile on your face….<br />

I know you still care….<br />

Heart begins to race….<br />

There’s just no more time to spare….<br />

My spirit starts to soar….<br />

Now I feel your warm embrace…..<br />

Walking in the Door....<br />

Walking in the door….<br />

And Maybe, I’m a little more…..<br />

So unlock the door…<br />

And I’ll be there for you….<br />

Said oh,<br />

Oh this is true babe….<br />

I walked in the door….<br />

And you’re standing there,<br />

With a smile on your face….<br />

I know you still care…<br />

Feel my heart…, my heart…, begin to race…..<br />

‘Cause baby…<br />

It’s been too long, it’s been too long…..<br />

So long…..<br />

Baby, without you…..<br />

Baby, baby, baby, it’s true<br />

Now lift the weight….<br />

From your heavy heart….<br />

this is where I left you….<br />

Ah, oh, oh ……<br />

To Listen click link...<br />

This song started as a backing track, something to<br />

play along with, just guitar, bass, and drums. I was<br />

looking for something that featured an AM chord<br />

and CM Chord, but not to prominently. It ended up<br />

being 8 bars. As time went on, I added the piano and<br />

the synth. After adding the piano melody, I began<br />

to think of words for it, and wanted to do something<br />

with the theme of coming home. Much of this can be<br />

heard in the end of the song since those are the 8 bars<br />

from the original backing track.<br />

But I had no chorus, and nothing seemed to work.<br />

So I got a vision of it starting with a kind of gentle<br />

finger picked guitar that slowly progressed into what<br />

you hear in the end. So I tried a few things on my<br />

acoustic, and came up with what you hear today in<br />

the beginning of the song. From there, it was just a<br />

matter of slowly changing each instrument until it<br />

becomes what you are hearing at the end of the song.<br />

To be clear, this song is the same 8 bars from start to<br />

finish. It’s the layering of each instruments voicing<br />

that was the key.<br />

Been too long (Christmas Version) – Words<br />

This song started out as some of the words you hear<br />

towards the end of the song. The piano melody always<br />

gave me a feeling of coming home. So<br />

phrases like walking in the door, sent me down that<br />

path of a story about coming home. I had this vision<br />

in my head of a young man, nicely dressed, sitting in<br />

the back of a car, on his way home. He nervous and<br />

anxious about seeing his lover again after so long.<br />

So I put this image, a kind of video in my mind if<br />

you will, to words. This became the first verses of the<br />

song. I also had an image of him walking up to the<br />

door, filled with anxiety that slowly dissipates as he<br />

sees his lover and they exchange smiles. So I put this<br />

image to words and it became the middle of the song.<br />

The rest of the words at the end of the song, were<br />

gathered from numerous improvisations.<br />

Since this song is about coming home, and the<br />

holidays are all about coming home and seeing loved<br />

ones, I thought it would make a good Christmas<br />

song. So I changed a few words around, and made it<br />

about coming home at the holidays.<br />

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Stephen Kalpin<br />

O LONG<br />

Short Bio: Stephen Kalpin<br />

Ever since he touched his first instrument in his very<br />

early childhood, Stephen Kalpin (AKA Seth Koos<br />

and Steven Jericho), has always been keenly<br />

interested in creating original music. During visits<br />

to his grandparents’ house at a very early age he<br />

would play songs on their organ, using the numbers<br />

of course. But he was always more interested in what<br />

made that combination of notes work, and how it<br />

made him feel, than the song itself<br />

Around age 4 or 5, he began playing guitar,<br />

experimenting and looking for combinations that<br />

made him feel a certain way. At age 11, he began<br />

taking lessons and studying music theory. At age 19,<br />

after playing in a few bands, he stepped up for a bass<br />

player with an injured finger in a band, and<br />

immediately became their new bass player.<br />

Frustrated by the bands unwillingness to try<br />

original music, he would book studio time and write,<br />

and record songs. Those songs drew the interest of<br />

a smaller label. He continued to play with that band<br />

and do studio work until age 29, when a virus caused<br />

him, at first a nearly total hearing loss, and forced<br />

him to leave the band and recording. As his hearing<br />

began to return, he began to slowly play again with<br />

friends, until a relocation moved him hundreds of<br />

miles away.<br />

At that point, unsatisfied with playing acoustic<br />

guitar alone, he began recording again. After years of<br />

comments like “this is too good to keep to yourself ”,<br />

“Music is meant to be shared”, “You should be on a<br />

stage somewhere”, and “That should be published”,<br />

and because changes in technology, made it easier<br />

to record at a much higher quality, he began writing<br />

to publish. His first single “Banishing the Beast” in<br />

2016 under the name “Seth Koos”. He has since been<br />

working on an EP that will be titled “Days of Vinyl”<br />

You can find a few of these tracks on soundcloud at<br />

the link below. So come, feel the music.<br />

Listen to Been Too Long by WinRec on #Sound-<br />

Cloud<br />

https://soundcloud.com/user-265070968/been-toolong<br />

https://www.hopeforhomelesshearoesheartsii.com/<br />

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It was a silent night and I’d drifted off to sleep<br />

First day on the job<br />

Third shift watching my brother’s sheep<br />

It didn’t pay much money<br />

But it was all that I could find<br />

I was trying to keep my nose clean<br />

Tryin to toe the line<br />

Tried to fight the sleep<br />

But the job it was so boring<br />

It didn’t help for me to hear<br />

Them other fellows snoring<br />

Then somewhere near the edge<br />

Of being awake and having a dream<br />

The night sky lit up the like the noonday<br />

And I heard myself scream<br />

And the angels started dancing<br />

They started saying Noel<br />

Joy to the world born this day<br />

Is the King of Israel<br />

I thought I was seeing things<br />

Closed my eyes thinking I was dreamin<br />

But I knew that it was for real<br />

When I heard them other fellas screaming<br />

A hundred million angels<br />

They was dancing in the glory<br />

We ran for we was worth we left them sheep<br />

Cause somebody had to tell the story<br />

And the angels started dancing<br />

They started saying Noel<br />

Joy to the world born this day<br />

Is the King of Israel<br />

To this day I can still hear’em<br />

Close my eyes see the glorious fire<br />

My brother swears I’d been drinking<br />

That night when I talk about<br />

that heavenly choir<br />

You know it doesn’t matter<br />

He’s gonna feel what He wants to feel<br />

But as for me I know what I saw<br />

It ain’t no story man its real<br />

The angels started dancing<br />

They started saying noel<br />

Joy to the world is born this day’s<br />

the king of Israel<br />

To listen click this link...<br />

Outside the Box Writing<br />

I like to look at a story and pick one element<br />

and see where that tangent goes.<br />

In light of the Holidays, I decided to revisit the<br />

story of the Shepherds and the Angels from<br />

Luke Chapter 2. As the story goes they were<br />

watching their sheep at night when the angels<br />

appeared.<br />

So I took one of the Shepherds and thought<br />

about a guy who was down on his luck, maybe<br />

an ex con. His brother begrudgingly gives him<br />

a job where no one would see him. I built the<br />

lyric around him “trying to toe the line” to keep<br />

his nose clean and not screw up.<br />

Then an incredible event happens and he leaves<br />

his livestock. What was the reaction from his<br />

brother and what happened. Would you<br />

believe him? I enjoyed just taking a little twist<br />

and painting a different perspective. This takes<br />

your listener on a paradigm shift and helps<br />

them see deeper into the people involved.<br />

Thinking differently than the norm is fun to<br />

explore and can create new opportunities<br />

of discovery and innovative lyric writing.<br />

Merry Christmas! Happy writing!<br />

David Michael Rose<br />

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Christmas<br />

Is the most significant time<br />

Of the year;<br />

It’s the earth’s celebration<br />

Of the birth of our Savior<br />

Jesus Christ.<br />

It’s the best time to be with<br />

The people so dear to your heart<br />

That is why I always long to<br />

Celebrate Christmas with you.<br />

Chorus:<br />

(And/ I ) greet you,<br />

Merry, merry Christmas<br />

Merry Christmas to you;<br />

Merry, merry Christmas<br />

Merry Christmas to you;<br />

I am very joyful<br />

We’re together<br />

On this holy day<br />

That is why I<br />

Always (long, love) to<br />

Celebrate Christmas with you.<br />

Christmas<br />

Is the most eventful season<br />

Of the year<br />

It’s the world’s festivity<br />

Of the love of our Father<br />

Almighty God.<br />

It’s a season for giving, for sharing,<br />

For showing love<br />

That is why I<br />

Always love to<br />

Celebrate Christmas with you.<br />

(Repeat Chorus, 2x)<br />

I.... Always love to...<br />

Celebrate Christmas....<br />

With you.<br />

Celebrate C<br />

Even though I don’t have the talent of playing any<br />

musical instrument, I am able to write song lyrics<br />

with melody.<br />

When a song chooses me to be it’s channel, I<br />

usually write it straight away while singing it<br />

with the melody that goes with it to capture the<br />

song within me. There are songs that came to me<br />

smoothly that I finished writing them in just a few<br />

minutes or hours. When a song comes by<br />

installments or with missing lyrics or blank<br />

melodies, I sing them again and again while taking<br />

a bath until the missing lyrics/melody fill in. There<br />

are also songs that took me days, months, and<br />

sometimes years, to complete them.<br />

I composed the CELEBRATE CHRISTMAS song<br />

in <strong>Dec</strong>ember of 2012. My father died in July of the<br />

same year. The loneliness of having thoughts of<br />

celebrating Christmas without him for the very<br />

first time sparked in me the urge to write this song<br />

with sense of encouragement for us to do our best,<br />

as much as we can, to celebrate Christmas with<br />

our loved ones, especially with our family, because<br />

when they are gone, celebrating Christmas would<br />

never be the same again.<br />

It is also a product of a renewed excitement to<br />

celebrate Christmas with hope and love, despite the<br />

hurt and brokenness of losing my father, because<br />

of the woman I met when we coincidentally went<br />

to the Municipal Hall to get the death certificates<br />

of her mother and my father who died just one day<br />

apart. As we conversed, we learned that we were<br />

grade school classmates and we only saw each<br />

other again on that “destined” day, after 19 years<br />

since our graduation. My Christmas wish of<br />

celebrating Christmas with her, that I incorporated<br />

in writing the song, is always granted since 2012,<br />

especially now that we built our own family<br />

together.<br />

To hear Augusto sing his song...<br />

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Augusto Flameño Monsayac<br />

hristmas<br />

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Oh Say But<br />

INSPIRATION FOR THE LYRIC<br />

Chords and voices<br />

Silhouettes of a livin’ Prince<br />

Many hearts rejoices<br />

That unto us is born a King<br />

Excitement and noises<br />

All around the earth and heavens fill<br />

That golden star announces<br />

The birth of the prince of peace<br />

And we welcome Him with joy in our hearts<br />

With Gold, silver and myrrh in our hands<br />

We bow our heads for an heavenly regard<br />

Oh say but we’re glad<br />

Carols and praises<br />

Every livin’ soul would sing<br />

As our hearts embraces<br />

A beautiful n’ wonderful gift<br />

In chants and choruses<br />

We will let our voices ring<br />

With joy we celebrate<br />

The birth of our messiah king<br />

And we welcome Him with joy in our hearts<br />

With Gold, silver and myrrh in our hands<br />

We bow our heads for an heavenly regard<br />

Oh say but we’re glad<br />

Christmas is my favorite time of the year, it’s<br />

the time I feel true happiness. For me, writing<br />

a lyric during this period should come<br />

naturally. Christmas lyrics I believe must be as<br />

clear as possible and also very easy to relate<br />

with. In fact, any kind of lyric must be able to<br />

get to the target listeners.<br />

Before I thought of writing this, I was actually<br />

stuck with the idea of writing something<br />

related to the significant signs we see when the<br />

Christmas season sets in. I knew what I wanted<br />

to do, but I had to pend it because I myself<br />

wouldn’t be able to relate with most parts of<br />

the lyric. There’s no way we could talk about<br />

Christmas season signs without snow. So far it<br />

was a decent write and Christmas lovers in the<br />

US would easily relate with it. But then, I never<br />

felt any life in it. It took me awhile to realise<br />

what the problem was. Then I had to go back<br />

to my creative realm, tried to brainstorm ideas<br />

but I was my own critic.<br />

I said to myself, “C’mon you’re not trying to<br />

impress anyone y’know”. I got a good pointer<br />

at what I should actually be thinkin’ about. I<br />

had gone through an article “Tips for writing a<br />

Christmas song” sometime ago, and there was<br />

a point that got me out of my so-called problem.<br />

The writer said “a Christmas song must<br />

be true...” Boom! I got what I needed.<br />

All I had to do was look at my immediate<br />

environment and write a song about the things<br />

that I’ve really experienced. This inspired me<br />

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James K Victor<br />

We’re Glad<br />

to create a little piece not to quantify my joy<br />

for the season, but because it’s the only way I<br />

could express this wonderful feeling.<br />

BIO<br />

I am Kpokunu Victor, born on the 4th of July<br />

1998. I’m a student and also a teacher. I write<br />

and compose my own songs.<br />

Although, none are recorded yet.<br />

More of my lyrics at:<br />

https://m.facebook.com/VikyKpoks-Official-362315141008124<br />

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Sydney Westan<br />

er 31st<br />

The new year’s just a few days away<br />

Then the whole world gets to celebrate<br />

Out with the old, in with the new<br />

Another magic year to spend with you<br />

We will leave all our troubles behind<br />

‘n Start all over with a kiss and a smile<br />

We’ll tip a toast with midnight cheer<br />

‘n Dance away the chill in the air<br />

Make new plans, fulfill new dreams<br />

Count your blessings,<br />

your slate’ll be clean<br />

That big crystal ball will start to fall<br />

The fireworks fly, fun times for all<br />

As the midnight hour<br />

sweeps across the land<br />

Auld Lang Syne will strike up the band<br />

(Solo- 16 bars of humming the<br />

melody of Auld Lang Syne)<br />

We’ll make new plans,<br />

fulfill new dreams<br />

‘n Count our blessings, Oh!<br />

12 / ThirtyFirst is almost here<br />

The new year’s just a few days away<br />

Then the whole world gets to celebrate<br />

Out with the old, in with the new<br />

Another magic year to spend with you<br />

A Happy New Year to spend with you<br />

Now, the new year’s just a few hours away…<br />

Yeah, the new year’s just<br />

a few hours away……<br />

It’s time to start chilling…...<br />

that French champagne!!!<br />

It’s <strong>Dec</strong>ember Thirty First………………...<br />

BANG!!!<br />

To listen follow this link...<br />

I wrote this just to have some fun. There aren’t many<br />

New Years songs, mostly just Christmas songs, so<br />

we have to have a song to sing after Christmas to get<br />

ready for the remainder of the holiday season.<br />

Sydney Westan - Singer/Songwriter, aka Stan<br />

Thompson<br />

Music from the heart of our land... comin’ from a<br />

Country music man.<br />

Singer/Songwriter Sydney Westan is committed to<br />

all original works of Country, Blues, Folk,<br />

Americana and Western music. His songs are<br />

crafted into heartfelt ballads, intriguing love songs,<br />

bluesy shuffles and some ‘just for fun’ songs.<br />

Sydney has studied at Berlee College of Music in<br />

Boston, M.A., and has been writing songs, lyrics<br />

and poetry since the ‘60’s’. He has performed in the<br />

Santa Fe / Taos area for over a decade now.<br />

His shows blend dynamic acoustic/electric guitar<br />

playing with varied vocals, from a deep Country<br />

growl to smooth tenor and lively falsetto.<br />

He wears his heart on his sleeve, bears his soul in his<br />

lyrics and leaves you with a song to remember, so<br />

please ‘don’t just come to hear some music! Come<br />

and listen to the song!!’ He’s available for 2 or 3 hour<br />

shows in the Santa Fe, Taos and Albuquerque area.<br />

For info on rates and bookings or to receive a<br />

promo CD 505-699-5135<br />

AmericanSongspace.com/SydneyWestan<br />

YouTube.com/sydneywestan<br />

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Christm<br />

Christmastime blues, king of the jews<br />

If you only knew what’s gonna happen to you<br />

Nailed to the cross, by the big boss<br />

Everyone just standin’ ‘round at a complete loss<br />

The baby that’s before us will be joining in a chorus of the<br />

Christmastime Blues<br />

Bl<br />

Christmastime Blues, poor little dude<br />

A manger for a cradle-bed when you are brand new<br />

Star in the sky, shines in the eyes<br />

Of the three old wise men from the east who drop by<br />

Besides the gifts they bring these wise men gonna sing a bit of<br />

Christmastime Blues<br />

Christmastime Blues, nothin’ to lose<br />

Not a single clue about what you’re here to do<br />

Dad’s got a plan, but he’s not a man<br />

He’s an ancient idea from way out in Iran<br />

They marked you as a prophet there’s no way you can stop<br />

them ol’ Christmastime Blues<br />

Christmastime Blues, don’t get to choose<br />

Stay out of Jerusalem man you bound to lose<br />

Passover time, committin’ crimes<br />

With the 12 apostles and a bunch of red wine<br />

But you will be betrayed so there you gonna stay with the<br />

Christmastime Blues<br />

Christmastime Blues, born without shoes<br />

Dad above sure knows that you’ll be payin’ your dues<br />

Ready or not to show what you got<br />

Kill the Roman Empire from inside with slow rot<br />

You’ll know it when they gotta sing a whole cantata called the<br />

Christmastime Blues<br />

Christmastime blues, king of the jews<br />

If you only knew what’s gonna happen to you<br />

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Jason Baker<br />

astime<br />

ues<br />

While I have been a musician<br />

since age 14, songwriting is<br />

something I started in earnest<br />

in 2017. As part of learning<br />

how to write songs, I joined<br />

several songwriting communities,<br />

including local groups that<br />

hold song feedback meetings<br />

monthly. One thing that song<br />

communities provide is song<br />

prompts to help inspire songwriters<br />

get into the practice of<br />

completing songs.<br />

One of the very first prompts I<br />

used was “write a holiday song”.<br />

Most “holiday” songs are about<br />

Christmas, so I had to decide if<br />

I wanted to do that, or<br />

something “alternate”. As an<br />

atheist from an ethnically-Jewish<br />

background, I didn’t feel<br />

particularly compelled to write<br />

about Chanukah or other<br />

holiday. While many, many<br />

“Christmas” songs are in fact<br />

secular in content, while<br />

celebrating the trappings of<br />

“the season”, I didn’t feel ike<br />

I needed to add to that large<br />

body of work. I decided to<br />

write a song about Christmas,<br />

and to focus on the main character<br />

and event, Jesus and the<br />

Nativity.<br />

I thought about when I first<br />

learned about Jesus and his life<br />

as a kid, and the thoughts I had<br />

at the time, mixing Chanukah<br />

and Passover, Christmas and<br />

Easter in my young mind, and<br />

wondering… “If they knew he<br />

was a prophet, why didn’t they<br />

warn him?”. So this song is<br />

simply a sympathetic message<br />

from one Jewish kid to another.<br />

Jason Baker is a songwriter &<br />

performer from Burlington,<br />

Vermont. Jason started writing<br />

songs in 2017, and performing<br />

in 2018, releasing his debut,<br />

“America Dreams”. On his new<br />

album, “Common Man Blues”,<br />

Jason continues to write songs<br />

influenced by the deep roots of<br />

old-time & acoustic music, yet<br />

modern in lyrical perspective.<br />

<strong>2019</strong> New England Music<br />

Awards Nominee for “Best in<br />

Vermont”<br />

Nov/<strong>Dec</strong> American Songwriter<br />

<strong>Magazine</strong> Lyric Contest Runner-Up<br />

for the song “Christmastime<br />

Blues”<br />

My Website:<br />

http://jbakervt.com/<br />

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This Ch<br />

Its Christmas, dont you know<br />

This Chirstmas all I want is snow<br />

God’s already provided us everything we need<br />

in our new New Hampshire home<br />

The only thing left on my wishlist<br />

is to spent it in the glistening snow<br />

This Christian already celebrates all year long<br />

So this year all my wishes have been granted<br />

Except to spend my first northern winter<br />

In the White Mountains, high, hi<br />

I’ll be singing a happy ho ho ho<br />

to all you Southern folks<br />

We don’t see much snow in Broken Bow<br />

So This Christmas, all i want is snow<br />

Ole man winter visits<br />

for more that just a brew or two<br />

Oh yea, he wants dinner, wine,<br />

& a recliner too<br />

Settle down for a long winters nap or two<br />

I’ll watch the snow pile from my easy chair<br />

where I’m warm<br />

and Ill make snow angels<br />

I’ll take my five then come back<br />

and get warm by the fire<br />

This season all I want is snow<br />

To spend Christmas in a pretty red bow<br />

In the glistning snow<br />

This Christmas, all I wanna do<br />

is spend it with family & friends<br />

In the glistning snow<br />

Lyrics and vocals by Queen Regina Palmer<br />

Tony Carlozzi on Guitar<br />

All copyrights reserved <strong>2019</strong><br />

I’m an Oklahoma native. I’ve been a poet & lyricist<br />

my entire life. As long as I can recall back from early<br />

childhood. But from a broken family & tough childhood<br />

& adolescence, I never had much opportunity<br />

to learn music, or be around musicians. But I wrote,<br />

sang in the shower & dreamed. I couldnt play any<br />

instrument & allowed that to hold me back. Finally<br />

at 28, I moved to Nashville. Married a professional<br />

keyboardist who worked for Young Chang Piano<br />

Company. But that didnt work out in my favor like<br />

I had hoped. Moved back to Arkansas in 2003 to<br />

be with my dying father. Married again & hung up<br />

the dream. Until it nearly killed my soul. I was on<br />

the wrong path & felt disappointed in myself, as if I<br />

had missed my calling. 12 years of physical sickness,<br />

unequally yoked partnership & internally unhappy, I<br />

filed for divorce 3 years ago. Walked away with nothing<br />

just to get out.<br />

I took my briefcase down from my closet where I had<br />

aproximately 60 song lyrics written. I prayed over<br />

them. I told God, if he would give me my health &<br />

talent back I’d vow to pursue the vision he have me<br />

come what may. My miracle came in my health with<br />

hard work, a complete rebuild of the old me began<br />

to transform me & my fate. That’s when the blessings<br />

began to rain. I started writing & singing again every<br />

day. But there was still a very big mountain to crumble.<br />

I was 50, broke, & homeless.<br />

So from a borrowed broken hand me down cellphone<br />

with full Verizon service that my lifelong dear friend<br />

afforded me, I began adding my acapella songs to<br />

Reverbnation. I began to grow fans & get fantastic<br />

comments that fueled me. I felt like finally I was on<br />

the right path God chose for me. Finally after joining<br />

International Singer Songwriter Accociation, I met a<br />

Veteran Cover Tribute artist Tony Carlozzi. I was in<br />

Oklahoma, he was in Brockton, MA. We worked a<br />

plan & executed it to come together for music. Thus<br />

becoming the Gigglefits. That was in May, <strong>2019</strong>, just<br />

over 6 months ago. The growth is astounding.<br />

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Queen Regina Of The Gigglefits<br />

ristmas<br />

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Grandma’s Got A N<br />

The old tree was withered from years of use,<br />

but grandma couldn’t bear to let it go.<br />

Through 27 Christmases the tree has survived.<br />

With love and tinsel the age hardly shows.<br />

This year, as she was getting it from the box,<br />

the limbs were tattered and falling apart.<br />

First she got mad, then she was sad,<br />

as all the memories swelled in her heart.<br />

The kids suggested, it’s time to get a new tree.<br />

Grandma went to Wally’s to find one that’s just right.<br />

So easy to assemble, granny couldn’t believe,<br />

It came in three pieces, even built in lights<br />

Grandma’s got a new Christmas tree<br />

and she’s showing it off.<br />

She lights it brightly every night.<br />

She opens the curtains so everyone will see,<br />

this shiny new tree with glimmering lights.<br />

She’s as thrilled as she can be.<br />

She’s called her friends on the phone<br />

and her grand-babies too.<br />

This Christmas will be the best ever.<br />

Granny’s spreading the news.<br />

Every day of the week even before dark,<br />

granny lights the tree and it gives her a spark.<br />

Cloudy days, rainy days, it doesn’t matter to her.<br />

That tree will be glistening and she’ll get a stir.<br />

The kids all love it, especially what’s underneath.<br />

Grandma went crazy this year way beyond belief.<br />

Presents for the kids, grand-kids,<br />

neighbors and friends.<br />

Granny maxed her credit cards right to the end.<br />

Grandma’s got a new Christmas tree<br />

and she’s showing it off.<br />

She lights it brightly every night.<br />

She opens the curtains so everyone will see,<br />

this shiny new tree with glimmering lights.<br />

She’s as thrilled as she can be.<br />

She’s called her friends on the phone<br />

and her grand-babies too.<br />

This Christmas will be the best ever.<br />

Granny’s spreading the news.<br />

Oh no, it’s almost the 25th this can’t be the end.<br />

She might roll back the calendar and do it again.<br />

With all the happiness that the old gal has found,<br />

it might be the 4th of July<br />

before the tree comes down.<br />

Grandma’s got a new Christmas tree<br />

and she’s showing it off !<br />

To view this lyric on Songbay...<br />

Growing up in East Tennessee in the 1970’s I had a lot<br />

of friends in bands, probably not much different than it<br />

is today. I would work to help set up the stage and their<br />

instruments since I couldn’t play or sing myself. I did not<br />

come from a musical family. I discovered it on my own,<br />

with influence from my older brother and friends. I went<br />

to my first concert on my 13th birthday, it was Three Dog<br />

Night I listened to the radio all the time. I’d stay up most<br />

of the night. I decided at age 14 that since I couldn’t be in<br />

a band like my friends, I could at least play music on the<br />

radio. We had a career day in 8th grade and I chose DJ.<br />

I went into the U.S. Army at age 17. When I came home<br />

2 years later, I went to broadcasting school in nearby<br />

Knoxville, Tn. What followed was a 20 year career in radio<br />

broadcasting. I stayed locally instead of pursuing work<br />

outside the area. I feel that I could have made it in a bigger<br />

market. Working in mostly small town radio is tough. It’s<br />

low pay and no benefits. I worked at numerous stations in<br />

East Tennessee. Over the years, I developed an<br />

alcohol dependency. It was not uncommon, for some of<br />

my co-workers to be involved in drugs and alcohol. It was<br />

just what we did during that time.I was one of the worst. I<br />

was an alcoholic. Without going into all the details, it was<br />

bad. I lost a couple of radio jobs and burned a lot of<br />

bridges. After years of struggling, I finally got clean and<br />

sober, over 14 years now. I decided to go back to<br />

college at the age of 43. I studied Computer Networking.<br />

I earned an associates degree. Not bad for a high school<br />

drop out with a GED. I got a job at the company that I’m<br />

still employed at today, 11 years later. I currently work in<br />

Cybersecurity.<br />

I started writing lyrics when I was a teenager. Over the<br />

years I would write some from time to time. I’ve always<br />

enjoyed reading lyrics too, it was one of the cool things<br />

about record albums growing up. The albums would often<br />

have the lyrics included. I’ve always had a good<br />

imagination and that helped me in my writing. A few<br />

years back I started writing more regular. I had talked<br />

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Bob Love<br />

ew Christmas Tree<br />

with a couple of people I work with, who play music in<br />

clubs, and that inspired me.One woman co-worker,<br />

Theresa, took a few of my lyrics and wrote songs that she<br />

performed locally. She was very encouraging to me. I<br />

write all the time now and always have ideas in my head.<br />

I play some guitar. I have melodies in my mind for most<br />

of the lyrics that I write. I joined Songbay a few months<br />

back. I won their <strong>2019</strong> Lyric contest.The people at Songbay<br />

were able to use the melody I had in my mind and<br />

match it up almost perfect for, “The Dark Road Leads to<br />

Light”. The only thing that limits me is a lack of time. I’ve<br />

been taking some on line classes to help me with my I.T.<br />

career. I would like to write full time and find someone to<br />

collaborate with. I survived stage 3 throat cancer in 2011.<br />

Worth noting as encouragement to anyone. I survived<br />

alcoholism and throat cancer.<br />

For the lyric “Grandma’s Got a New Christmas Tree”. I<br />

thought of it when my wife bought a tree last year. I’m not<br />

sure how long that she had her old tree, but it took a long<br />

time to put it up, piece by piece. My wife is all about<br />

Christmas and she was very excited about the new tree<br />

and how easy that it was to put it together. I decided to<br />

write a lyric. The tree is very nice. In case you can’t tell,<br />

she likes snowmen. It’s worth noting, that where we live,<br />

especially the past few years, we have seen very little<br />

snow. Maybe once or twice a year and usually only a<br />

dusting. I hope everyone enjoys reading my little<br />

Christmas lyric.<br />

Link to twitter...<br />

Link to songbay...<br />

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Last Christmas<br />

George Michael & Wham By Paul Michel<br />

Last Christmas, I gave you my heart<br />

But the very next day you gave it away<br />

This year, to save me from tears<br />

I’ll give it to someone special (x2)<br />

Once bitten and twice shy<br />

I keep my distance<br />

But you still catch my eye<br />

Tell me, baby<br />

Do you recognize me?<br />

Well, it’s been a year<br />

It doesn’t surprise me<br />

(Merry Christmas!) I wrapped it up and sent it<br />

With a note saying, “I love you, “ I meant it<br />

Now, I know what a fool I’ve been<br />

But if you kissed me now<br />

I know you’d fool me again<br />

Last Christmas, I gave you my heart<br />

But the very next day you gave it away<br />

This year, to save me from tears<br />

I’ll give it to someone special (x2)<br />

A crowded room, friends with tired eyes<br />

I’m hiding from you, and your soul of ice<br />

My god, I thought you were someone to rely on<br />

Me? I guess I was a shoulder to cry on<br />

A face on a lover with a fire in his heart<br />

A man under cover but you tore me apart<br />

Now, I’ve found a real love you’ll never fool me again<br />

Last Christmas, I gave you my heart<br />

But the very next day you gave it away<br />

This year, to save me from tears<br />

I’ll give it to someone special<br />

A face on a lover with a fire in his heart<br />

A man under cover but you tore him apart<br />

Maybe next year I’ll give it to someone<br />

I’ll give it to someone special<br />

Christmas time wouldn’t be the same without those classic<br />

tunes that haunt our TV and Radio each year. Wow, do I sound<br />

ancient saying ‘radio’? Does anyone still use them? Well, I do<br />

so I suppose that’ll do. So are you haunted with ‘Merry Christmas<br />

Everybody’ by Slade or ‘I Wish It Could Be Christmas<br />

Everyday’? C’mon admit it, we all have our favourites.<br />

Last Christmas by Wham! is Jane’s favourite, so I<br />

thought I would jump on the chance to take a<br />

look at the origins of the song and the man<br />

behind it. To be fair, It is one of the best<br />

during the festive season. After all,<br />

the UK did vote it the eighth best<br />

Christmas song ever and us Brits<br />

do like our Chrimbo party hits.<br />

Although ‘Last Christmas’ is<br />

credited as Wham! it was totally<br />

written and produced by George<br />

Michael back in 1984 while he<br />

and Andrew Ridgley, George’s<br />

partner in the duo, were visiting<br />

his parents. He jotted the intro<br />

and chorus down while sat in<br />

his old childhood bedroom and<br />

played it to Ridgley who said that<br />

it was a moment of wonder.<br />

So in August 1984, George recorded<br />

the song in Advision Studios, London<br />

He played all of the instruments on the<br />

track, a Linn 9000 drum machine, a<br />

Roland Juno-60 synth and sleigh bells,<br />

performed and produced it.<br />

It was released in <strong>Dec</strong>ember 1984 on Epic records<br />

with ‘Everything she wants’ on the B Side (Yes, we’re<br />

still in the days of 45rpm vinyl and tape cassettes here) amist<br />

some fierce competition. Live Aids ‘Do they know it’s Christmas’<br />

was rocketing to the top (of which George Michael was a<br />

major part) and as the Christmas charts were announced ‘Last<br />

Christmas’ was, as expected, No:2.<br />

To the credit of George Michael and Andrew Ridgley, all of<br />

the royalties were donated to the Ethiopian famine. Although<br />

Wham! had already scored two No:1 hits, this was probably<br />

their most defining moment in the history of the duo.<br />

Yes, there were many ups and downs in Wham and in the personal<br />

life of George Michael which we will take a look at shortly<br />

but this Christmas classic remains today as the most memorable<br />

moment. It showed the true spirit of who Wham! really were.<br />

They were, at the time a major force in the pop world but this<br />

particular Christmas saw a side of them, and indeed so many<br />

other pop stars, that was simply impossible to ignore and not<br />

admire. For that very reason ‘Last Christmas’ will remain as<br />

one of the greatest Christmas songs ever.<br />

I suppose we can see why it is Jane’s favourite!<br />

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George Michael<br />

We’vetaken a look at the Christmas classic but there was so<br />

much more to George Michael and Wham! So let’s take a<br />

little time to discover the iconic 1980’s pop duo.<br />

George Michael and Andrew Ridgley first burst on the<br />

scene way back in 1983 with their debut single “Young<br />

guns , go for it” The first of many of what would be one of<br />

the most commercially successful pop acts of the 1980’s.<br />

Michael and Ridgley first met at Bushey Meads School<br />

in Bushey near the town of Watford in Hertfordshire.<br />

For a short time they formed a SKA band called The<br />

Executive with a few other class mates before forming<br />

Wham! in 1980.<br />

Michael took on the majority of roles and responsibilities<br />

within the band—composer,<br />

producer, lead singer, and occasional instru<br />

mentalist. Still teenagers, they promoted<br />

themselves as hedonistic youngsters,<br />

proud to live a carefree life without<br />

work or commitment. This was<br />

reflected in their earliest singles<br />

which, part-parody, part-social<br />

comment, briefly earned Wham! a<br />

reputation as a dance protest<br />

group.<br />

In order to move to a recording<br />

contract with Sony label Epic,<br />

Wham! was forced to walk away<br />

from most of the royalties from<br />

their debut album, Fantastic.<br />

None of that mattered when their<br />

1984 single, “Wake Me up Before<br />

You Go Go,” became a worldwide hit,<br />

accompanied by a video of the pair<br />

cavorting in their sportswear. Almost<br />

immediately, George Michael started thinking<br />

of a solo career, and released “Careless<br />

Whisper,” issued in the U.S. as George Michael of<br />

Wham! The duo embarked on a much-publicized trip to China<br />

and enjoyed considerable success in America.<br />

Andrew Ridgley<br />

also tried to go it solo but could<br />

not recover from the Wham! split-up. He tried<br />

his hand at Formula 3 motor racing but, again, without much<br />

success.<br />

George Michael’s popularity continued to grow despite the<br />

adverse headlines until Christmas Day 2016 when at the age of<br />

53, he died of a heart and liver condition.<br />

Owing to the delay in determining the cause of death, Michael’s<br />

funeral was held 29 March 2017. In a private ceremony, he<br />

was buried at Highgate Cemetery in north London, near his<br />

mother’s grave. That summer an informal memorial garden<br />

was created outside his former home in Highgate. The site, in a<br />

private square that Michael had owned, is tended by fans.<br />

Like us all, George Michael had his issues. But his talents<br />

coupled with his integrity, generosity+and honesty made him<br />

one of the best loved superstars of the 1980’s and 1990’s. His<br />

Christmas hit, ‘Last Christmas’ will ensure that he will live on<br />

in our hearts for many years to come. The group ‘Wham’ still<br />

remains today as an influence to any young musical act and the<br />

ultimate in the fun of music.<br />

Wham!’s end came rather suddenly, in 1985, reputedly when<br />

the group’s manager, Simon Napier-Bell (later to manage Take<br />

That), decided to sell a share of his management to a<br />

South African entertainment conglomerate.<br />

Supposedly, as part of a stand against South African<br />

politics, George Michael immediately announced<br />

Wham!’s breakup. They gave their farewell performance<br />

before a sold-out audience of 72,000 fans at London’s<br />

Wembley Stadium.<br />

George Michael embarked on a solo career which rarely<br />

saw him out of the press, not only for the amazing music<br />

he was producing but also a few embarrassing incidents in<br />

which he was involved in public sex acts and other<br />

misdemeanours involving the law.<br />

GEORGE MICHAEL<br />

1963 - 2016<br />

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Last Christmas<br />

George Michael & Wham Discography<br />

Wham! Albums<br />

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George Michael<br />

George Michael Albums<br />

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It’s Just Not Chris<br />

Years almost over<br />

Sure looks like <strong>Dec</strong>ember<br />

The snow and ice on the ground<br />

I hadn’t sent a single Christmas card<br />

The 31st is coming around<br />

It makes me remember our last <strong>Dec</strong>ember<br />

How the city looks so beautiful in white<br />

As we walked the street that day you kept me warm<br />

We couldn’t wait to get inside<br />

Now its Christmas and you’re so far away<br />

On this Christmas I just wish you had stayed<br />

And I wonder if you’re thinking of me today<br />

I don’t know what I’ll do<br />

its not Christmas without you<br />

I hear carols in the distance<br />

Don’t want to listen because every sound<br />

says your not here<br />

Just in case you change your mind<br />

I’ll leave a light over the door<br />

And hope you suddenly appear<br />

‘Cause its Christmas and you’re so far away<br />

On this Christmas I just wish you had stayed<br />

And I wonder if you’re thinking of me today<br />

I don’t know what I’ll do<br />

its not Christmas without you<br />

I’m too old too old to believe in Santa Claus<br />

What are these gifts under the tree<br />

But I did this once<br />

Or many it’s a dream,<br />

has he really brought you back to me<br />

its Christmas all I wanted is here<br />

On this Christmas was for you to be near<br />

And I wonder if you’re thinking<br />

of me ‘cause you’re here<br />

My one wish has come true,<br />

it’s not Christmas without you<br />

Click this link to play...<br />

Christmas song...’It’s just not christmas<br />

without you’...West berlin...Christmas 1985...<br />

Sitting in my plane waiting to deplane...<br />

Friends waiting to greet my visit from<br />

california...Looking forward to seeing my<br />

ex-wife here for christmas...I thought i heard<br />

horses and bells in my head to go with the<br />

latest snow flurries...Looking forward to<br />

meeting friends in a local bar called the<br />

“flying dutchman”. We are mostly american<br />

songwriters living off the rich German<br />

economy. Folks ask why we’re here. We told<br />

them “blondes”. The stewardess woke me<br />

from my christmas reverie. Took a taxi to go<br />

uptown and see my -ex. Berlin is a<br />

wonderland all covered in snow. Women in<br />

their furs stepping out of their mercedes.<br />

I took a nice cozy mercedes taxi to the<br />

“hardke” resteraunt off kudamm. We all<br />

planned a great sit down dinner including<br />

my ex, doris. I wrote the lyrics in my head<br />

spurred on by my love for her, especially at<br />

christmas. Everyone was there to greet me<br />

after my flight from california. Berlin was<br />

always our secret paradise, the only city in<br />

the world where one could write music all<br />

day and play for rent money at night. It was a<br />

privilege to be among this talented group of<br />

musicians.<br />

The Jimmy Travis Band Website Bio<br />

We began as a group of American expatriates<br />

living in Berlin, due to the fact that we<br />

discovered that there you can live from music<br />

alone. Of Music. I, Jimmy, began my public<br />

musical career in the group “Eastfield<br />

Meadows” in Hollywood. I moved to<br />

London to work on an album for Warner<br />

Brothers. John Vaughan was a U.S. Army brat<br />

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Jimmy Travis Band<br />

tmas Without You<br />

who grew up in Germany. Francis Serafini<br />

is from Rhode Island and I found him in a<br />

Berlin club playing solo gigs. Trevor Cooper<br />

is from London and he agreed to put<br />

together a duo for club dates. Hansi is our<br />

drummer and the only German member of<br />

our group.<br />

I loved playing with these guys, seeing how<br />

they were some of the best songwriters in<br />

Europe. Our life style included sleeping<br />

until 5 pm and getting coffee. Then we went<br />

to work writing songs we could play in the<br />

clubs that night. Berlin was heaven for<br />

musicians.<br />

We wrote songs and played in the clubs,<br />

usually three clubs a night. We did TV and<br />

radio. We toured<br />

Western Europe out of Berlin. But in the end<br />

I guess you could say we did it for the music<br />

and the blondes....<br />

https://www.jimmytravisband.com/<br />

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Can you hear the angels<br />

Singing soft and low<br />

Can you hear the angels’<br />

Song within your soul<br />

Saying we should love each other<br />

Whether friend or foe<br />

Spread peace on Earth<br />

Goodwill to men<br />

Where so e’er e go<br />

Over and over and o’er again<br />

The angel band is calling<br />

Calling to all of fallen man<br />

A new day is at hand<br />

Ever and ever and e’er again<br />

The gentle tones are falling<br />

Peace on Earth, peace on Earth<br />

Goodwill to every man<br />

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Goodwill to every man<br />

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Let only one truth remain<br />

Our God welcomes every one<br />

Who hears the angels sing<br />

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Dave Eidson<br />

I am a 63 year old man from<br />

the Lake of the Ozarks,<br />

Missouri. I graduated in 1974<br />

from Mack’s Creek, Missouri<br />

as valedictorian. I was voted<br />

most scholarly and most likely<br />

to succeed. For personal<br />

reasons, I didn’t attend<br />

college but went to work at the<br />

various industries in the area.<br />

I spent the last thirty years<br />

working at Blair Cedar until<br />

I quit to care for my invalid<br />

mom until her death. I have<br />

dabbled at writing short<br />

stories and had a story that I<br />

co-wrote with a friend<br />

published in a book called<br />

the Book of Exodi titled “The<br />

Huntress of Aveleor”. I also<br />

did digital art and had a poem<br />

in the book. Now I enjoy the<br />

hobby of playing the keyboard<br />

and writing songs.<br />

I wrote “Can You Hear the<br />

Angel’s” because I felt that the<br />

message of Christmas had<br />

been lost among some<br />

Christian churches. Peace on<br />

Earth, good will to men, for<br />

God so loved the world and<br />

not just Christians, etc. Peace<br />

had been replaced by war, love<br />

by hate. They wanted to take<br />

the name of Christ but ignore<br />

his central message. Not just<br />

message but a commandment,<br />

love not just your neighbors<br />

but also your enemies.<br />

Http://soundcloud.com/ozarkbluefox<br />

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Kisses Under The M<br />

You can spend the year in another’s arms<br />

He can have the thrill of all your charms<br />

But I hope that you will see<br />

How I’ve waited patiently<br />

For your kisses under the mistletoe for me<br />

In the Spring when the flowers are in bloom<br />

And I am all alone here in my room<br />

As the sky turns blue<br />

All I think about is you<br />

And your kisses under the mistletoe for me<br />

In the Summer you can go on holiday<br />

While I am on my own you’re far away<br />

But Now that Winter’s here<br />

All I want is to hold you near<br />

And taste your kisses under the mistletoe for<br />

me<br />

In Autumn when the leaves fall to the ground<br />

I search but you’re nowhere to be found<br />

You are warm no doubt<br />

But all I can think about<br />

Is your kisses under the mistletoe for me<br />

Its Winter time and I can hardly wait<br />

To hear your voice and to see your face<br />

My dreams have all come true<br />

Now its only me and you<br />

And your kisses under the mistletoe for me.<br />

In the future when we are old and grey<br />

And our children have all grown and flown<br />

away<br />

As we kiss goodnight and hold each other tight<br />

I feel your kisses under the mistletoe for me<br />

As we kiss goodnight and hold each other tight<br />

I feel your kisses under the mistletoe for me<br />

The song was written C.2009 and was very<br />

much inspired by Johnny Cash. I haven’t had a<br />

chance to record it professionally yet, so what<br />

you will hear is a demo, but it gives nice flavour<br />

for what the song is about. We all want to write<br />

a Christmas number 1 and this was my first<br />

attempt, and I think its a good song. I hope<br />

that someday couples will be dancing around<br />

the kitchen to this song whilst wearing paper<br />

crowns, or while they are preparing Christmas<br />

dinner.<br />

Bio:<br />

“A Very Original/Great Singer/Songwriter”<br />

Kent Folk on BBC Radio Kent<br />

Nick Lawrence is a singer and songwriter from<br />

Folkestone. His music is most strongly influenced<br />

by the work of artists such as Bob Dylan,<br />

Billy Bragg, The Beatles, The Band, Johnny<br />

Cash, Jake Thackray and The Levellers. These<br />

inspirational musicians have driven Nick to<br />

write songs encompassing numerous genres,<br />

including heartfelt ballads, social observation<br />

and cutting political commentary.<br />

I have released three EPs:<br />

Bludgeoned by the Poetry (2014)<br />

So Long, Its Been Good To KNow Ya (2015)<br />

If You Don’t Know Where You’re Going Any<br />

Road Will Take You There (<strong>2019</strong>)<br />

Spotify:<br />

https://open.spotify.com/artist/5ro8txAknGkg6R70iqvSkq<br />

Music video for “Time To Leave This Town”<br />

https://www.youtube.com/watch?<br />

www.facebook.com/NickLawrenceMusicofficial<br />

Instagram @NickLawrenceMusician<br />

To listen click this link....<br />

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Nick Lawrence<br />

istletoe For Me<br />

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<strong>Dec</strong>ember Lights<br />

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Colin B Leonard<br />

Guide Me Home<br />

Verse 1<br />

At the time of warm spirits and atmosphere<br />

The smell of pine, of Christmas cheer<br />

I listen to stories which make cruel souls fear<br />

Sing the holiday songs year after year<br />

Yet on the Eve of the day<br />

my memories come clear<br />

One the day of days my longings appear.<br />

Chorus<br />

Those <strong>Dec</strong>ember lights guide me home<br />

To childhood memories I’ve never outgrown<br />

I close my eyes in whichever city I roam<br />

And those <strong>Dec</strong>ember lights guide me home.<br />

Verse 2<br />

Cold skies above a winterland dream<br />

Welcoming smiles greet warmly this scene<br />

With childlike eyes I walk in the snow for<br />

When the lights gather in my heart, I know<br />

Great friends, great parties I’m never alone<br />

For at this time of year<br />

my heart always turns home.<br />

Chorus<br />

Those <strong>Dec</strong>ember lights guide me home<br />

To childhood memories I’ve never outgrown<br />

I close my eyes in whichever city I roam<br />

And those <strong>Dec</strong>ember lights guide me home.<br />

Bridge<br />

My own children will know this yearning<br />

Of egg nog, mince pies, of log fires burning<br />

The Christmas spirit will always be<br />

In the eyes of my children, in the eyes of me.<br />

Chorus<br />

Those <strong>Dec</strong>ember lights guide me home<br />

To childhood memories I’ve never outgrown<br />

I close my eyes in whichever city I roam<br />

And those <strong>Dec</strong>ember lights guide me home.<br />

© Colin B Leonard. The Guild of International<br />

Songwriters and Composers.<br />

I’m afraid the top-line melody for<br />

‘<strong>Dec</strong>ember Lights’ is not down in music, only<br />

in my head. If someone wishes to collaborate<br />

on ‘<strong>Dec</strong>ember Lights’ I will send to them<br />

a poorly sung version, as I have done for ‘I<br />

Love My Guitar.’<br />

I ventured into the world of song writing<br />

when my friend singer/songwriter Joe<br />

Rogerson asked me to write lyrics about the<br />

city of Liverpool. The lyrics were written and<br />

accepted within thirty minutes one workday<br />

afternoon. Since that day I have written over<br />

eighty songs.<br />

Unlike many songwriters, I don’t write<br />

constantly as, in my case, I must wait for the<br />

lyrics and melody to enter my mind. A<br />

songwriter’s retreat would be a waste of time<br />

in my case. Inspiration comes when you don’t<br />

think! (To quote myself.) Having written<br />

several novel’s, I am able to write prose and<br />

sustain a narrative. A lyricist and top-line<br />

architect I may be, a musician I am not. I hire<br />

a professional in order to create in sound<br />

what is in my mind. I mainly write in the<br />

Country genre although, as an example, my<br />

song https://soundcloud.com/user-28472269/<br />

i-love-my-guitar-master-1 could be sung in<br />

any.<br />

The song ‘<strong>Dec</strong>ember Lights Guide Me Home’<br />

I wrote sitting next to a Christmas tree at<br />

home in 2017. I once sent the lyrics to my<br />

friend Joe who commented that he wouldn’t<br />

sing it in a pub as ‘everyone would be in tears.’<br />

I suppose he’s right...<br />

Guild No: 2196687<br />

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Stack the deck and makes some calls,<br />

we’re getting ready for a party<br />

Mr. Price and his son brought ice -<br />

that was nice and naughty<br />

Run Run Ruddy do your duty<br />

and got those records spinning<br />

Shake a leg, drink rum and egg,<br />

that turkey there needs trimming<br />

The broken toys are making noise,<br />

Cause Santa’s back in town<br />

There’s mistletoe and ho ho ho<br />

Fire chestnuts roasting<br />

And Charlie brown is making rounds<br />

while Lionel does the toasting<br />

This is it the house is lit No more days are counting<br />

They’ll be no waiting just celebrating Joy<br />

on John Boy’s mountain<br />

Cause Santa’s back in town<br />

The Leaping Lords are dropping cords<br />

as Drummer Boy keeps beat<br />

Jacob Marley’s on the Barley –<br />

he Stinks of “Beef & Cheese”<br />

Some old geezer named Ebenezer --<br />

gives Sugar Plum the squeeze<br />

Broken Toys found their rhythm --<br />

there’s no Misfitting ...<br />

Ragtime Jimmy is getting tipsy --<br />

acting like a clown<br />

Frosty Jack is where it’s at when Santa’s back in town<br />

Zuzu Bailey and ol Fred Gaily dance to the VG3<br />

Leon got his revillion with Buddy Max and Yukon C<br />

Cindy Lu that Whoville girl<br />

brought the prime roast beast<br />

Cousin Eddie and Banjo Burl are carving up a feast<br />

Professor Hinkle’s got his new hat down...<br />

There’s room for more inside this door<br />

Cause Santa’s back in town<br />

I know I know its Christmas.<br />

You Know You Know It Too.<br />

I know I know its Christmas.<br />

You Know You Know It Too<br />

I know I know its Christmas.<br />

You Know You Know It Too<br />

Blue Christmas & White & Silent Night. I<br />

ts Tiny Tim ... Let Him In.<br />

Merry Christmas To All ... Good Night.<br />

Click here to listen...<br />

Lyrics by Bob & Joan Minnery. Music by Bob & Bill<br />

Minnery. Arrangement by Bob Minnery, Joan<br />

Minnery, Bill Minnery, Dan Taylor Copyright <strong>2019</strong>,<br />

Bob Minnery<br />

SIVLE<br />

Joan Minnery – Lead Vocals<br />

Bill Minnery – Lead Guitar/Backup Vocals<br />

Bob Minnery – Rhythm Guitar/Backup Vocals<br />

Dan Taylor – Drums/Backup Vocals<br />

Our Song: Christmas Gumbo<br />

Christmas has always been our family’s most favourite<br />

time of year and definitely the happiest. Christmas<br />

Gumbo is Bob’s madcap creation stemming from our<br />

Family’s long love of the Holiday season and a<br />

lifetime of watching the Classic Movies on TV while<br />

sitting eating popcorn and all hanging out in the<br />

living room. Christmas Gumbo is a cornucopia of<br />

references to some of the most well known and<br />

legendary Christmas Movies of all time. Look closely<br />

every line has one or two references to the greats such<br />

as: Rudolph the Red Nose Reindeer, Frosty the Snow<br />

Man, Santa Claus is Coming to Town, ELF, Edward<br />

Scissor hands, Little Drummer Boy, Charlie Brown<br />

Christmas, the Walton’s Homecoming, A Christmas<br />

Carol, the Grinch and a medley of Christmas song<br />

puns. See if you can catch them all...<br />

SIVLE (Elvis spelled backwards and pronounced<br />

“civil”) is a versatile Indie and Soft-Rock band from<br />

Brantford Ontario Canada, belting out original tunes<br />

and an arsenal of legendary tunes from the 50s -<br />

Today. SIVLE is a family oriented band consisting of<br />

Joan Minnery on lead vocals, her son Bill Minnery on<br />

lead guitar, her brother Bob Minnery aka<br />

bigEZbob on rhythm acoustic and Dan Taylor on bass<br />

and drums.<br />

While SIVLE is primarily a cover band; SIVLE went<br />

into the recording studio in the summer of <strong>2019</strong> and<br />

has released their own original explosive rock anthem,<br />

“Whatever It Takes” along with their<br />

Dixie-Prog single entitled “What Would Walter Do” a<br />

salute to Walter Gretzky. Both singles have garnered<br />

radio air play on Indie stations in Germany, Australia,<br />

the United States, Ireland, Scotland, Wales, England<br />

and Canada. They are distributed through CD Baby<br />

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and available on Sound Cloud, iTunes, Spotify,<br />

Google, BandCamp, Amazon, and more.SIVLE were<br />

selected out of over 450 bands to play one of 5 spots<br />

and were the opening act for the <strong>2019</strong> WTFest Rock<br />

Festival, one of Ontario’s largest music festivals. SIVLE<br />

were the featured entertainment at the <strong>2019</strong> Mayor’s<br />

Levee at the Brantford Armouries and will be again<br />

for 20/20. They also headlined the 2018 ‘FIND YOUR<br />

SPIRIT FEST’ and the 2018 ‘Downtown Music Fest’<br />

both at Harmony Square in Brantford.<br />

SIVLE<br />

They have packed rooms at the Sanderson Centre, the<br />

Corktown Pub, Delhi Harvest Fest, Jeffery’s Lounge,<br />

Manny’s Place, Branch 90 Legion, Tansley’s, Upper<br />

Thames Brewery, the Norfolk County Fair, the<br />

Polish Hall, Frankies Hometown Tavern, the St.<br />

George Legion, the Honest Lawyer, the Dairy<br />

Capital Cheese Festival, the Norwich Museum and<br />

has a heated schedule at a variety of festivals, fairs and<br />

local establishments.<br />

SIVLE salutes the classic sing-a-long hits of the<br />

Beatles, CCR, Janis Joplin, Tina Turner, Johnny Cash<br />

and of course ELVIS. There is something for everyone<br />

as the band also covers Pop and Country tunes from<br />

50s - Today. The lads often take over and do their own<br />

original progressive rock songs and also salute Van<br />

Halen, Jimi Hendrix and other rock icons.<br />

SIVLE is a refreshingly youthful band combining two<br />

generations of musicians while bridging the age gap<br />

through likable tunes and interactive dynamic stage<br />

showmanship.<br />

Two Generations --- One Foundation.<br />

“As always -- SIVLE is a must see live! You can’t see the<br />

energy this band gives off until you see them live. They<br />

connect with their fans and our energy feeds their<br />

energy. If you only see their show once, you have to<br />

return to a number of shows to witness the change<br />

from show to show, it’s an absolute delight! While<br />

contemplating SIVLE, I couldn’t help but think of the<br />

Grateful Dead who were one of the early pioneers of<br />

direct relationships with their live show fans and renown<br />

for fusing many different styles together. SIVLE<br />

is the Grateful ALIVE.” ~ Ken Shipman, Brantford ON<br />

https://sivle.webstars.com<br />

https://www.facebook.com/117SIVLE/<br />

https://twitter.com/SIVLEization<br />

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I Aint Workin<br />

VERSE 1<br />

Ever since I can remember, the 25th of <strong>Dec</strong>ember<br />

I’d have to punch a clock and work ‘til I’m half dead<br />

SoI told my wife and children<br />

that this year’s gonna be different<br />

Instead of punchin’ that clock<br />

I’m gonna punch my boss instead<br />

CHORUS 1<br />

‘Cus I ain’t workin’ on Christmas this year<br />

No, I’d rather be with my family than here<br />

Well, I worked all day Black Friday,<br />

But this Christmas is gonna be my day<br />

No I ain’t workin’ on Christmas this year<br />

VERSE 2<br />

My boss tells me I gotta work,<br />

so I tell him he’s such a jerk<br />

Cus’ I told him months ago and I made it clear<br />

So he says “Don’t be comin’ back”,<br />

so I says “Catch you later, Jack”<br />

‘Cus I ain’t workin’ on Christmas this year<br />

CHORUS 2<br />

No I ain’t workin’ on Christmas this year<br />

‘Cus I’d rather be with my family than here<br />

So you can take this job and shove it,<br />

‘Cus I never did really love it<br />

No I ain’t workin’ on Christmas this year<br />

CHORUS 3<br />

And I ain’t workin’ on Christmas next year<br />

‘Cus I’d rather be with my family right here<br />

well, the hours and pay are crappy<br />

so I’d rather be broke and happy<br />

No, I ain’t workin’ on Christmas next year<br />

VERSE 4<br />

And all my friends and family<br />

We all stayed home so happily<br />

And no one worked on Christmas<br />

Not even store clerks worked on Christmas<br />

Not even truck drivers worked on Christmas<br />

Not even waitresses worked on Christmas<br />

No, we all stayed home on Christmas this year<br />

(Except for Santa Claus, but he only works one day a<br />

year anyway)<br />

To listen click this link...<br />

© 1/30/18<br />

Rollin Jewett<br />

BRIDGE<br />

I don’t care how much you’re gonna pay<br />

Just for one day leave it alone<br />

‘Cus Christmas don’t last but one day<br />

And it’s a day we should all be home<br />

VERSE 3<br />

Well, I lost my job but I don’t care<br />

‘Cus I never did really like it there<br />

And I know I’ll find a better job somewhere<br />

And I’ll tell my new boss right way<br />

That there’s a certain holiday<br />

that I ain’t never gonna work<br />

and that’s Christmas, so there<br />

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Rollin Jewett<br />

On Christmas<br />

There are songs I’m literally embarrassed to tell anyone how<br />

long they took me to write, lest one get the false impression<br />

that I’m a careless hack of a songwriter. But really, several<br />

of what I consider to be my best songs have been the easiest<br />

to write. So easy, in fact, that they almost write themselves<br />

because the ideas, rhymes and word flow seems to come<br />

so effortlessly. “I Ain’tWorkin’ on Christmas” is one of<br />

those songs. I wrote it barely a year ago and have almost no<br />

recollection of having written it. I know I started with the<br />

title. After that, it’s a blur.But let’s start with the title: A man<br />

proclaims he’s not working on Christmas. Easy enough. Then<br />

what happens? Those were the questions I wanted to answer.<br />

According to statistics, millions of people will work on<br />

Christmas day every year. And the numbers keep growing.<br />

Let’s consider some of the obvious folks that will have to<br />

work: doctors, nurses, policemen, firemen, caregivers, utility<br />

workers, clergy, and journalists. Beyond that, however, there<br />

are many others that, due to the profitability of remaining<br />

open when many businesses are closed, are forced to work:<br />

these are store clerks, grocery clerks, truck drivers, and<br />

restaurant workers, etc., who are not volunteering to work on<br />

Christmas, but are forced to by employers eager to make a<br />

buck on a holiday when stores are traditionally closed.<br />

Christmas used to be an untouchable holiday. Everyone other<br />

than the necessary above-mentioned workers had the day<br />

off to be with their families. In fact, so was Thanksgiving in<br />

America…until “Black Friday” came along and shook things<br />

up, breaking that traditional mold. According to Wikipedia<br />

regarding Black Friday for many years, it was common for<br />

retailers to open at 6:00 a.m.on Friday morning after<br />

Thanksgiving. But in the late 2000s many had crept to 5:00 or<br />

4:00. This was taken to a new extreme in 2011, when several<br />

retailers opened at midnight for the first time. In 2012, Walmart<br />

and several other retailers announced that they would<br />

open most of their stores at 8:00 p.m. on Thanksgiving Day,<br />

prompting calls for a walkout among some workers. In 2014,<br />

stores such as JCPenney, Best Buy, and Radio Shack opened<br />

at 5:00 PM on Thanksgiving Day while stores such as Target,<br />

Walmart, Belk, and Sears opened at 6:00 PM on Thanksgiving<br />

Day. Three states, Rhode Island, Maine, and Massachusetts,<br />

prohibit large supermarkets, big box stores, and<br />

department stores from opening on Thanksgiving.<br />

some quality time with their loved ones. My belief is that<br />

those who want to work on Christmas, due to necessity or<br />

religious beliefs, should be allowed. But those who want to<br />

stay home with their families should be allowed to do that as<br />

well -- without fear of losing their jobs (like the man in the<br />

song).<br />

Rollin Jewett bio<br />

Singer/songwriter Rollin Jewett grew up in South Florida<br />

and has lived in New York, Los Angeles and Phoenix, to<br />

name a few influences. Music has always been a priority in<br />

Rollin’s life and he’s been writing songs for as long as he can<br />

remember. In addition to singing and songwriting, Rollin<br />

has also written and acted in several films and is a published<br />

poet, playwright & short story writer. In 2016, Rollin’s outlaw<br />

rocker “Ride Tall” was a prize winner 2016 IMSTA FESTA<br />

International Songwriting Competition in Chicago. In 2015,<br />

Rollin’s heartfelt love song “Arizona Sun” was also a finalist<br />

in the same competition. Rollin has licensed several songs in<br />

top platforms and is featured on several international compilation<br />

albums. His musical influences range from rock to<br />

country to folk to alternative to pop. An avid world traveler,<br />

Rollin currently makes his home in North Carolina and is<br />

presently working on new songs for an upcoming album.<br />

For website follow this link....<br />

My thought was “What’s next?” Christmas, of course! And it<br />

seems to be happening. More and more retailers and restaurants<br />

are now open on Christmas day, forcing workers, many<br />

who would rather be home enjoying quiet time with their<br />

families, to be on duty so their employers can make a few<br />

extra holiday dollars. So…the song is a reaction against that<br />

materialistic mentality and an outspoken retort on behalf of<br />

the working men (and women) who simply want to spend<br />

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Real Chris<br />

We’ve been together for a long time<br />

We’ve spent together very good and bad times<br />

It’s time we can afford a better ride<br />

And I hope could be now<br />

We could enjoy real Christmas time<br />

Let’s set the table like we used to do<br />

Bringing the wine and set the meal too<br />

Let’s stick together and bring back the joy<br />

And spend again real Christmas time<br />

Bridge:<br />

(Ahhhhh) If we keep together with the lights<br />

on<br />

(Ahhhhh) If we hold together our love<br />

everyday strong<br />

(Ooohhhhh) If we keep the faith around our<br />

hearts<br />

Kissing each other under the mistletoe<br />

We’ll go beyond in real christmas time<br />

We’ll be together wishing for hope<br />

Finally we have the house of our dreams<br />

Now it’s time we can afford a better ride<br />

For you and me<br />

For our kids<br />

For our Moms<br />

Rejoice the love with the miracle<br />

In real Christmas time<br />

Let’s keep peace in the world and raise the<br />

love<br />

Beyond the real christmas time<br />

Let’s keep the friendship around us all<br />

Beyond the real christmas time<br />

Share compassion around the world<br />

Beyond the real Christmas time<br />

To listen click this link...<br />

Real Christmas Time<br />

(Music + Lyrics By<br />

Bamil Gutiérrez Collado<br />

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Bamil Gutiérrez Collado<br />

tmas Time<br />

Sacred Healing Songs/ASCAP©<strong>2019</strong><br />

All Rights Reserved)<br />

‘Real Christmas Time’ is a soft rock song about<br />

bringing back to present the old things, subjects that<br />

caused emotions and joy on our Holiday lives like<br />

things used to be.<br />

The expression of things that used to be the special<br />

times, memories, peace, love and kindness to all<br />

living beings. What we wish to have for our closer<br />

loved ones like our Moms, our Kids, ourselves in a<br />

relationship.<br />

Being good people to our projim and the deserve to<br />

enjoy better things and have the right moment to<br />

reach for good. When we could have all those things<br />

that fill our special moments and as we get closer to<br />

the Holiday seasons enjoy a ‘better ride’, which for me<br />

is meaning of ‘wishes for happier moment’. The gift of<br />

giving to the world softer times is part of the purpose<br />

of this song to carry a message to society and share<br />

not only love, but the spirit and the real Christmas<br />

spirit meaning that is hope.<br />

In a whole, live the moment beyond the christmas<br />

time. Was written in soft mode considering the<br />

lyrics and to give a more nostalgic ambience. This is<br />

a kind of message that catch us all in any moment of<br />

our lives bringing back the memories. Christmas is<br />

a very strange yet at the same time beautiful season<br />

where it looks like we are opening a chest of<br />

reminiscings. ‘Real Christmas Time’ the best way I<br />

felt to show how we enjoy reviving our wishes and<br />

makes them come true asking Jesus for a Holiday<br />

miracle.<br />

Happy Holidays Everyone And Lots Of Blessings!!!<br />

You can find more about BAMIL Music and Updates<br />

in:<br />

https://www.mixposure.com/bamil/audio<br />

http://www.facebook.com/groups/FANSBAMIL<br />

http://www.facebook.com/JazzElements<br />

https://twitter.com/bamilMusic<br />

http://ourstage.com/profile/Bamil<br />

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click this link...<br />

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Christma<br />

Chorus:<br />

It might be a holiday to you but it’s, Christmas to me<br />

A time filled with tradition love and family<br />

I put it on display each year for all the world to see<br />

It might be a holiday to you but it’s, Christmas to me<br />

Verse:<br />

I remember as a child every Christmas Eve<br />

We’d sing our favorite carols as we decorate the tree<br />

Mom would tell us stories; we’d bow our heads and pray<br />

Jesus our saviour was born that holy day<br />

We’d pray for peace in the world so all can enjoy<br />

The true meaning of Christmas, the birth of a baby boy<br />

Chorus:<br />

It might be a holiday to you but it’s, Christmas to me<br />

A time filled with tradition love and family<br />

I put it on display each year for all the world to see<br />

It might be a holiday to you but it’s, Christmas to me<br />

Verse:<br />

Politicians try to tell us, take Christ out of the day<br />

To hide all the symbols we use to celebrate<br />

They say it might offend those who don’t believe<br />

Let me tell you mister now you’re offending me<br />

Chorus:<br />

It might be a holiday to you but it’s, Christmas to me<br />

A time filled with tradition love and family<br />

I put it on display each year for all the world to see<br />

It might be a holiday to you but it’s, Christmas to me<br />

Bridge:<br />

Why must everything be politically correct<br />

All we need to do is treat each other....with some respect<br />

Chorus:<br />

It might be a holiday to you but it’s, Christmas to me<br />

A time filled with tradition love and family<br />

I put it on display each year for all the world to see<br />

It might be a holiday to you but it’s, Christmas to me<br />

Tag:<br />

It might be a holiday to you but it’s Christmas, Christmas<br />

to me<br />

Merry Christmas Everybody!!!<br />

To listen follow this link.<br />

Christmas To Me<br />

Words and Music by Don Murdock (SOCAN) & Brian<br />

Dolph (SOCAN)<br />

Copyright © September 02, 2013 by Don Murdock &<br />

Brian Dolph<br />

Christmas To Me – The Story<br />

Christmas To Me is a song that takes a stand on the<br />

political correctness that has now become associated with<br />

the season. Some would argue there is a “War on<br />

Christmas.” If that is the case, then Don Murdock is<br />

battling back. Christmas To Me expresses what a lot of<br />

people feel. “It might be a holiday to you, but it’s<br />

Christmas to me.”<br />

Don was raised a Catholic and as a youngster has<br />

memories of attending Midnight Mass on Christmas Eve,<br />

of carolling door to door, and of Christmas concerts at<br />

school. Like many Canadians he grew up with traditions<br />

of decorating Christmas trees and spending time with<br />

family and sharing Christmas dinner. He recalls fondly<br />

wonders and excitement of children on Christmas<br />

morning. And of course, he always remembers the true<br />

meaning of Christmas, the birth of a baby boy....<br />

Over the past few years Don has seen these beliefs, these<br />

values he holds dear chipped away at by bureaucrats and<br />

CEO’s. Bit by bit and piece by piece, traditions he grew<br />

up are being dismantled and tossed aside. Greetings like<br />

“Merry Christmas” being replaced with “Happy Holidays.”<br />

Christmas concerts and plays replaced with “Winter<br />

Solstice Celebratory Pageants.” It is his opinion that by<br />

trying NOT to offend others by using traditional greetings<br />

we have begun to offend those who celebrate Christmas.<br />

Christmas To Me is Don’s way of saying, celebrate what<br />

you want to. If you celebrate Kwanzaa, then have a Joyous<br />

Kwanzaa. If you are Jewish have a Happy Hanukkah. But<br />

don’t tell him that he cannot say Merry Christmas!! Quit<br />

telling him he is buying a holiday tree!! And stop forcing<br />

employees to greet customers with Happy Holidays rather<br />

than with Merry Christmas...<br />

Like the song says, all we need to do is treat each other<br />

with respect!<br />

• Fun Fact: 4 days before the song was to be<br />

recorded Don Murdock and Brian Dolph decided to<br />

completely rewrite the music and lyric. The pressure was<br />

on as the studio and musicians were already booked for<br />

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Don Murdock<br />

s To Me<br />

the session in Nashville.<br />

Christmas To Me – The Release & Controversy<br />

“Christmas To Me”, by Don Murdock, flew in under the<br />

musical radar and landed at #3 on the Canada Country<br />

Aircheck Top 10 list of favourite Canadian Country<br />

Christmas songs. The song was co-written by Don<br />

Murdock and Brian Dolph, who also produced the<br />

track.<br />

Released for the 2013 holiday season, “Christmas To<br />

Me” had an immediate and controversial impact. News<br />

organizations from across the country, including The<br />

National Post and CBC Radio One, featured the song in<br />

news stories and radio programs. Don also performed<br />

the song live on the prime time SUN News TV program<br />

The Source. Each time an online story featuring the<br />

song appeared the comment section filled with debate<br />

about the “War on Christmas” and the song.<br />

“Christmas To Me” has now become a regular part of<br />

the syndicated holiday program, A Country Christmas,<br />

heard annually for over 30 years across Canada, the<br />

USA and Europe. Each year the song grows in<br />

popularity here in Canada and around the world<br />

bringing Don Murdock new fans to his brand of honest<br />

country music.<br />

Don Murdock – Mini Bio<br />

Born and raised in Oshawa, Don Murdock is a former<br />

firefighter who was awarded Canada’s Medal of Bravery<br />

by Governor General Jeanne Sauvé. He also established<br />

the firefighting training program at Durham College<br />

where he was a professor. Music has always been part of<br />

Don’s life. He has been playing guitar and<br />

performing from the time he was a teenager. It is only<br />

in the past few years, however that Don began writing<br />

his own songs, eventually recording an 8 song EP. He<br />

has released a number of songs to radio and his music<br />

has appeared on thousands of radio playlists around the<br />

world.<br />

https://www.reverbnation.com/donm<br />

https://www.facebook.com/don.murdock.319<br />

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Signs Of<br />

Signs of Christmas<br />

Copyright @2017 by Mike Turner<br />

All Rights Reserved<br />

Chorus:<br />

Presents wrapped in paper<br />

Ribbons, bells and bows<br />

Stockings on the mantle<br />

Hanging mistletoe<br />

Tinseled tree in window<br />

Wreath upon the door<br />

All the signs of Christmas<br />

Here again once more<br />

Verse 1:<br />

Lights in festive colors<br />

Wink in falling snow<br />

Visions of reindeer and sleigh in flight<br />

Carolers on our doorstep<br />

Voices high and low<br />

Singing songs of peace and joy so bright<br />

[Instrumental Break]<br />

Verse 2:<br />

Snuggling by the fire<br />

Holding you so near<br />

Wrapped in a soft blanket warm and tight<br />

Words of love and caring<br />

Whispered in your ear<br />

My favorite gift is in my arms tonight<br />

Chorus:<br />

Presents wrapped in paper<br />

Ribbons, bells and bows<br />

Stockings on the mantle<br />

Hanging mistletoe<br />

Tinseled tree in window<br />

Wreath upon the door<br />

All the signs of Christmas<br />

Here again once more<br />

Tag:<br />

Yes, signs of Christmas here for us once more<br />

To listen follow this link...<br />

“Signs of Christmas”<br />

by Mike Turner<br />

My musical interests, as a songwriter, performer and<br />

listener, are to say the least eclectic, ranging from the<br />

blues to folk, country, jazz, pop and gospel. A small<br />

sub-genre of my songwriting catalog are pieces in<br />

the, “Great American Songbook,” tradition – think<br />

melodies and lyrics by such luminaries as Gershwin,<br />

Porter, Berlin (at least those are my goals – not that I<br />

have fully realized them!).<br />

So with the Christmas season closing in, I found<br />

myself wanting to write, not just a holiday song, but<br />

one in the “Great American Songbook” tradition.<br />

I was particularly drawn to the idea of a song that<br />

recalled some of the great Christmas albums and<br />

singles of the past by artists like Bing Crosby, Frank<br />

Sinatra, Ella Fitzgerald, Judy Garland.<br />

I also wanted a song rich in imagery – partly because<br />

the Christmas season, with all its decorations and<br />

colors, lent itself to such imagery; and partly because<br />

the lyrics of many of my songs tend to “tell” rather<br />

than show, and I wanted to challenge myself to<br />

produce a piece that led the listener to “see” and<br />

experience the story, not just “hear” it.<br />

In crafting the lyric, first, I went for simple scenes<br />

and symbols that many could relate to having seen,<br />

and which would readily evoke both images and<br />

pleasant memories – things like ribbons, bows,<br />

wrapped presents, wreaths. Second, I brought in<br />

some other senses – primarily, hearing, with references<br />

to carolers and their songs; and touch, with a<br />

mention of soft, warm blankets.<br />

And, third, I wanted to capture some of the romance<br />

of the season – snuggling with a partner by a fire,<br />

sharing love together – the goal, again, being to get<br />

the listener not just to “hear,” but to “feel” the warmth<br />

and joy of Christmas.<br />

The structure follows the genre, particularly in beginning<br />

and closing with the chorus. Musically, the piece<br />

is mid- to up-tempo, intended for a “crooner” style<br />

delivery.<br />

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Mike Turner<br />

Christmas<br />

I’m happy with the result – to me, the song captures<br />

the vibe of the genre and the scenes of the holiday I<br />

was aiming for. My recording of the song has<br />

garnered some radio and Internet streaming play<br />

over the past two holiday seasons – but I’d love to<br />

hear what a more accomplished vocalist, with a fuller<br />

arrangement, might bring to the piece. All you classic<br />

pop/jazz vocalists/recording artists out there, you<br />

know the present you can give me – and, Christmas<br />

is coming…<br />

Bio:<br />

Mike Turner retired to the U.S. Gulf Coast after a<br />

27-year career as a Federal law enforcement<br />

executive. While he grew up in a musical family,<br />

Mike had never pursued performing or<br />

songwriting – until an adult education class in<br />

ukulele ignited long-dormant musical yearnings, and<br />

he’s never looked back. In the past 7 years, Mike’s<br />

completed over 120 original songs, from blues to<br />

folk, country and gospel. His recordings have<br />

received radio and Internet streaming play in the<br />

U.S., UK, Europe, New Zealand and on the Armed<br />

Forces Radio Network. Mike was named 2016 Male<br />

Gospel Entertainer of the Year by the Alabama Music<br />

Association; and 2017 Male Gospel Entertainer of the<br />

Year by the North America Country Music<br />

Associations Interantional (NACMAI).<br />

You can follow Mike’s music at:<br />

www.MikeTurnerSongerwriter.com<br />

and on FaceBook @MikeTurnerSongwriter<br />

YouTube https://m.youtube.com/channel/UCEnNxm0y6KELGPo6k7oMajg<br />

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Christmas<br />

Lullaby<br />

Christmas Lullaby<br />

Close your eyes until the day breaks<br />

Rest your head upon your pillow<br />

Hear the whisper of the snow flakes<br />

Dancing soft across your window<br />

Let your dreams begin to take hold<br />

As you wander with the Sandman<br />

Through those memories of pure gold<br />

To when Christmas magic began<br />

Silent night (Peace on earth)<br />

Holy night (Harmony)<br />

All is calm (Peace on earth)<br />

All is bright (Let it be)<br />

Once in royal David’s City<br />

Stood a lowly cattle shed<br />

Where a mother laid her baby<br />

In a manger for his bed<br />

Round yon virgins (Peace on earth)<br />

Mother and child (Harmony)<br />

Holy infant so (Peace on earth)<br />

Tender and mild (Let it be)<br />

Mary was that Mother mild<br />

Jesus Christ her little child<br />

He came down to earth from Heaven<br />

Who is God and Lord and all<br />

And his shelter was a manger<br />

And his cradle was a stall<br />

Sleep (Peace on earth)<br />

In heavenly peace (Harmony)<br />

Sleep (Peace on earth)<br />

In heavenly peace (let it be)<br />

Jane Shields (C)<br />

Christmas Eve<br />

Silent Night<br />

Christmas Eve (Silent Night)<br />

It’s all so very still tonight<br />

The night air is crisp and clear<br />

Snow is laying pure and bright<br />

It’s Christmas Eve now everywhere<br />

Snuggled up safely in warm beds<br />

Children dream sugar plum dreams<br />

Fantasies run through their heads<br />

As tomorrows happiness streams<br />

On Christmas Eve (Silent night)<br />

On Christmas Eve (Holy Night)<br />

On Christmas Eve (All is calm)<br />

On Christmas Eve (All is bright)<br />

Outside the magic fills the air<br />

The atmosphere comes alive<br />

Silence strains through winters ears<br />

For Christmas day’s yet to arrive<br />

On Christmas Eve (Silent night)<br />

On Christmas Eve (Holy Night)<br />

On Christmas Eve (All is calm)<br />

On Christmas Eve (All is bright)<br />

Every child awaits their treats<br />

Toys and books and games and sweets<br />

Cinnamon and candy canes<br />

Barbie dolls, electric trains<br />

On Christmas Eve (Silent night)<br />

On Christmas Eve (Holy Night)<br />

On Christmas Eve (All is calm)<br />

On Christmas Eve (All is bright)<br />

Round yon virgin Mother and Child<br />

Holy infant so tender and mild<br />

Sleep in heavenly peace<br />

Sleep in heavenly peace<br />

Jane Shields (C)<br />

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Jane Shields<br />

Merry Christmas<br />

Merry Christmas<br />

It’s Christmas time so lets all pray for peace<br />

Families together and all wars to cease<br />

Light up your candles for loved ones above<br />

Share laughter and joy with those that you love<br />

As you sit together beneath the tree<br />

Exchanging gifts wrapped in fine frippery<br />

The Christmas cheer begins to come through<br />

Remember each moment, it’s special to you<br />

Christmas is time for families to share<br />

Drawing them closer to show that they care<br />

Bringing smiles and laughter to young and old<br />

With family traditions for you to uphold<br />

Please take a moment from your Christmas day<br />

To offer a prayer for the homeless today<br />

May they find some peace,<br />

and hope and good cheerAnd may C<br />

hristmas be special for them next year<br />

So here’s my own wish to one and to all<br />

Christmas is joy for the great and the small<br />

But for those on their own it’s a sad sad day<br />

Perhaps you can brighten it in some small way<br />

Merry Christmas everyone. x<br />

singing to her child in the bedroom on Christmas<br />

Eve, trying to get the child to sleep. I’m really not at<br />

all musically minded, but I kind of like the thought<br />

of mixing a few Christmas Carols that might<br />

compliment each other as a lullaby.<br />

Likewise, Christmas Eve (Silent Night) is also a<br />

mixture, this time four verses with the chorus<br />

constructed with the addition of the Christmas<br />

Carol Silent Night at the end of each line. In my<br />

mind I hear that part of the chorus sung by an<br />

angelic voice. After the final chorus is the<br />

remainder of the first verse of Silent Night, again I<br />

‘hear’ this sung by an angelic voice.<br />

Merry Christmas is the very first Christmas lyric I<br />

attempted to write, in late 2017. I tried to end it<br />

with a message to all, to remember those less<br />

fortunate than ourselves on Christmas Day,<br />

because there are so many people all across the<br />

world who are not and perhaps never will be as<br />

fortunate as we are. The least we can do is to look<br />

out for each other over the Christmas period, and<br />

perhaps a short visit or telephone call to someone<br />

who is spending it alone is a small way of<br />

brightening their day for them.<br />

Wherever you are in the world, I wish you all a safe<br />

and happy Christmas day. xx<br />

Jane Shields (C)<br />

Hi to all, I’m Jane Shields, and I have been<br />

writing lyrics for three years now. I thought since<br />

it’s a Christmas issue I would include three<br />

different Christmas lyrics I’ve put together over the<br />

years. None of them have, to my knowledge, yet<br />

been recorded, as I am not a musician, and my<br />

singing leaves much to be desired...<br />

My first offering, Christmas Lullaby, is a bit of a<br />

mash up of a couple of Christmas Carols, starting<br />

off with two verses in which I imagined a mother<br />

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The Biggest T<br />

I want it to surprise<br />

I need it to be spectacular<br />

Im looking for tremendous<br />

This time to be huge<br />

I want it to be massive and<br />

I need it to be strong<br />

Im looking for enormous<br />

This time in Extra large<br />

I want it to be magnificent and<br />

I need it to be grand<br />

Im looking for voluminous<br />

This time to be immense<br />

I want it to be beautiful<br />

ohhh I need significant<br />

Im looking for attractive<br />

This time to be impressive<br />

Chorus<br />

I want it, to look good on facebook<br />

To be the best on instagram<br />

Ohh yeah I want our pictures<br />

to be in magazines<br />

I only want the biggest<br />

The biggest tree of all<br />

I like it to be huge<br />

huge and really tall<br />

I bought the rings already<br />

now all I need is snow<br />

I will put them in a present<br />

and once you found them<br />

I’ll propose !<br />

Oowoohh, I bought the rings already<br />

Now all I need is snow !<br />

I want it to be greater<br />

I would like it to be stunning<br />

Im looking for the best<br />

This time to be incomparable<br />

I want it to be dominant and<br />

I need it to be capital<br />

Im searching for exellence<br />

This time to be superior<br />

I want it to be celebrated and<br />

I hope it will be famous<br />

Im looking for distinguished<br />

This time to be amazing<br />

I want it to be wonderful ohhoww<br />

and I would love supreme<br />

Im looking for superb<br />

This time to be magnificent !<br />

Chorus<br />

I want it to be marvellous and<br />

I would love incredible<br />

Im looking for sensational<br />

This time to be most exceptional<br />

I want it to be dazzling<br />

I need most beautiful<br />

Im looking for extreme<br />

This time to be unbelievable<br />

I want it to be premium<br />

and I’m dreaming of sublime<br />

Hoping for supernatural<br />

This time to be unthinkable<br />

Chorus<br />

End<br />

A short introduction.<br />

I’m a songwriter for a year n<br />

I wrote about 50 lyrics in 1 y<br />

I have had my up and down<br />

My tips when you’re stuck: B<br />

you’re stuck on a sentence: d<br />

whole verse and start over, i<br />

once got stuck for 2 hours an<br />

your really stuck you should<br />

My tips for a writersblock: I<br />

assignments like:<br />

• Has to be funny and have a<br />

• <strong>Write</strong> something where yo<br />

of four<br />

• <strong>Write</strong> using a storytelling s<br />

The Story Spine: Pixar’s 4th<br />

https://www.google.com/am<br />

com/2013/03/22/the-story-s<br />

Or use this link, this one is v<br />

https://www.aerogrammestu<br />

ars-22-rules-of-storytelling/<br />

In short a short version:<br />

1. Choose a character who’s<br />

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Richard Solleveld<br />

ree Of All<br />

ow.<br />

ear, mainly cause I’m in between jobs. So<br />

s and wanted to share it with you.<br />

elieve me, I got stuck a lot of times. When<br />

elete not just the sentence, delete the<br />

nstead of looking for a word to rhyme. I<br />

d got moody looking for a rhyme. When<br />

consider this option.<br />

work a lot with<br />

long chorus<br />

u only use three sentences in verse, instead<br />

pine, for example this one.<br />

Rule of Storytelling:<br />

p/s/www.aerogrammestudio.<br />

pine-pixars-4th-rule-of-storytelling/amp/<br />

ery helpful<br />

dio.com/2013/03/07/pixeasy<br />

to indentify with<br />

2 Descripe the current situation<br />

3. Descripe a goal<br />

4. Descripe how to accomplish this<br />

5. Create a situation which is very recognisable<br />

My results were surprising, didn’t know I had it in me. Go ahead and<br />

try it. Good luck with writing!<br />

Now on to Christmas.<br />

I wrote a Christmas song and I wanted it to be<br />

different from the rest and to be about now: <strong>2019</strong>.<br />

1. It’s about showing off, a need to have the most beautiful, expensive<br />

tree and decoration, totally<br />

forgetting what Christmasmas is all about.<br />

2. Then also, the opposite, its all because of love, in the chorus.<br />

The question for the listeners will be:<br />

1. All this showing off is crazy, waste of money. There are other ways to<br />

prove this.<br />

2. Or it’s ok, cause this persons aim is to make the other person see<br />

how big his/ her love is.<br />

Wanna read more lyrics?<br />

http://www.geencovers.nl/<br />

Then go to Lyrics-English (at the bottom)<br />

and choose a category<br />

Or follow me on facebook<br />

https://m.facebook.com/geen.covers?refid=8<br />

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Just<br />

Here it is Christmas Eve and I sit here all alone<br />

Retired from the working world<br />

senior living my new home<br />

Seeing visions of some special days<br />

of the past I still know<br />

They dance around inside my mind<br />

as I watched my children grow<br />

I remember each one had a flare<br />

trying hard to get things done<br />

So my kids have a memory each one a special one<br />

Time has a way of giving life to us to call our own<br />

When the holidays roll around<br />

don’t forget to call your Mom<br />

(chorus)<br />

Just call to say I love you just call to say you’re there<br />

And let me know that memories<br />

are more than my gray hair<br />

Just call to say I love you just call to say you care<br />

Wish your Mom a Merry Christmas<br />

and a Happy New Year<br />

Hours I spend waiting<br />

you know sometimes they seem so long<br />

Surrounded by ceramic gifts<br />

give to me from everyone<br />

The telephone hanging on the wall<br />

and the doorbell never rang<br />

Both of them alone with me<br />

where a single stocking hangs<br />

And there’s a card that came two weeks ago<br />

stands on my old tv<br />

Says mom we’ll be opening gifts<br />

serving dinner around three<br />

If you want you can come early<br />

if you need a ride it’s free<br />

Just call I’ll come and get you just call if you need me<br />

I lost my mom at an early age<br />

before a family of my own<br />

And I would give you anything<br />

to hear her called grandma<br />

Neglected I could never be too busy to call my Mom<br />

And never would that well run dry<br />

the well that I called home<br />

(chorus)<br />

Just call to say I love you just call to say you’re there<br />

And let me know that memories<br />

are more than my gray hair<br />

Just call to say I love you just call to say you care<br />

Wish your Mom a Merry Christmas<br />

and a Happy New Year<br />

Here it is Christmas Eve and I sit here all alone<br />

Words n music<br />

Nellie Zold & Ric Angus<br />

2003<br />

To listen click this link...<br />

( chorus)<br />

Just call to say I love you just call to say you’re there<br />

And let me know that memories<br />

are more than my gray hair<br />

Just call to say I love you just call to say you care<br />

Wish your Mom a Merry Christmas<br />

and a Happy New Year<br />

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Ric Angus<br />

Call<br />

This song was written one particular 2002 Christmas<br />

for my Mom. I was living in Menomonie,<br />

Wisconsin at that time about 300 miles away from<br />

her place. And so I called my Mom about 11:30pm<br />

and we talked into the New Year. Mom sounded at<br />

that time to be in the Christmas Spirit.<br />

I had a doctors appointment in March of 2003 close<br />

to my Mom’s so I arrived towards the evening kinna<br />

tired. So time being a little later into the evening we<br />

called it a day after a brief visit.<br />

I had sat down in her easy chair and noticed to the<br />

one side of the chair a spiral notebook. It read (Here<br />

it is Christmas Eve and I can’t believe not a one of<br />

my five kids called to wish me a Merry Christmas.<br />

I would give you anything if I could call and talk to<br />

my Mom and wish her a MerryChristmas.)<br />

You see, my Mom found her Mom on the kitchen<br />

floor with a shotgun wound to her head two months<br />

pregnant with me. It continued (Well, Rick called at<br />

11:30pm.)<br />

As I was reading this I started crying and started<br />

writing this song called ‘Just Call’.<br />

The rest of the song would be continued with<br />

collaboration from Mom. We dedicate this song<br />

every year for all Mom’s.<br />

Coincidence, I dunno, however at the release of this<br />

song Nora Jones released one of her songs and in it<br />

said ‘I don’t know why I didn’t call’.....<br />

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Christmas Whe<br />

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Linda Harborth<br />

re Did You Go<br />

Seems oh, so long ago…<br />

Memories of softly falling snow…<br />

Excitement and anticipation,<br />

Of what was to come,<br />

Danced in my mind…<br />

Guess I moved on – left Christmas behind.<br />

Where did Christmas go,<br />

Seems like a lifetime ago,<br />

Where did it run,<br />

I’ve searched high,<br />

I’ve searched low,<br />

Christmas - where did you go?<br />

Why can’t I find you…<br />

I need to start anew…<br />

Where’s the spark, the joy, the magic…<br />

I use to know…<br />

The ties that bind…<br />

Find what I’ve left behind...<br />

Where did Christmas go,<br />

Seems like a lifetime ago,<br />

Where did it run,<br />

I’ve searched high,<br />

I’ve searched low,<br />

Christmas - where did you go?<br />

<br />

Will I learn or will I fall,<br />

Life without Christmas is no life at all,<br />

Change my world one heartbeat at a time,<br />

Undo my wrongs…<br />

Run back to where I belong,<br />

Remember my Christmas song...<br />

Where did Christmas go,<br />

Seems like a lifetime ago,<br />

Where did it run,<br />

I’ve searched high,<br />

I’ve searched low,<br />

Christmas - where did you go?<br />

I wrote “Christmas Where Did You Go” during a<br />

particularly low point in my life.<br />

It seemed as though nothing mattered in my day to<br />

day life anymore. It all boiled down to a daily grind<br />

to make a buck.<br />

I had lost my emotions and humanity. My world had<br />

turned black and white. I had lost my rainbow of<br />

colors.<br />

I thought back on what where my highlights in my<br />

life were and it always came back to my childhood<br />

at Christmas time. The birth of Christ. The wonder<br />

and excitement that stirred at this time.<br />

The thoughts of what was to come. It was always a<br />

magical time.<br />

Back story:<br />

I am a songwriter only. Others re-record my work.<br />

I started writing in 2010 on a whim to see if I could<br />

do it. I recorded my songs in Nashville.<br />

My work has been used in various cable TV shows, a<br />

trailer for an award winning indie movie “Three Of A<br />

Kind”, by The Little River Band “Forever Me, Forever<br />

You” on the album “Cuts Like A Diamond” and<br />

various up and coming artists here in America and<br />

Worldwide.<br />

My publisher is Ken Barton Publishing.<br />

My work is out on SoundCloud<br />

https://soundcloud.com/goldie-locks-1<br />

Click this link to listen...<br />

Copyright 2011, Ken Barton Publishing, L.A.<br />

Harbort<br />

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Beneath Th<br />

There’s a Snowman in the front yard,<br />

The lights are all strung on the tree,<br />

The presents are wrapped and in their place,<br />

And the kid’s are being good as can be,<br />

The caroler’s winding their way<br />

down the street,<br />

Are all making a joyful noise,<br />

The smell of the coffee and the pumpkin pie,<br />

Add flavor to our holiday joys...<br />

Evergreens are bowing to pressure,<br />

From branches that are laden with snow,<br />

Smoke from the chimney’s all over town,<br />

Swirls wherever the wind does blow,<br />

Should the temperature fall<br />

a little lower tonight,<br />

By only three or four more degrees,<br />

We’ll probably get<br />

a little more snow on the ground,<br />

And the pond’s are all sure to freeze...<br />

Family gathers ‘round the fireplace,<br />

Waiting for the stockings to be hung,<br />

The feeling of Christmas is in the air,<br />

It brings excitement to the old and the young,<br />

Soon Santa will be making his visit,<br />

So off to bed all the children will go,<br />

But before we turn in for the evening,<br />

Why don’t we meet beneath the mistletoe,<br />

I want to wish you a Merry Christmas,<br />

Beneath the mistletoe<br />

Words and Music by Gary Snead<br />

Copyright © 2006<br />

To listen click this link....<br />

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Gary Snead<br />

e Mistletoe<br />

I’m a singer songwriter, living currently in<br />

Metro NYC, in the sub genre of country<br />

music known as Trop Rock. As a performer<br />

and frontman for over 20 years in the genre,<br />

it can best be described as Jimmy Buffett<br />

inspired songs about Beaches, Bars, Boats<br />

and Ballads, to steal the title of his box set!<br />

It’s fun music.<br />

This song comes from my love of all things<br />

Christmas. It truly is my favorite time of the<br />

year!<br />

To hear more of my music, please feel free to<br />

visit:<br />

https://garysnead.bandcamp.com/music<br />

I started this song on the way to a club gig<br />

in Charlottesville, Virginia, and finished it<br />

while awaiting my flight home in the<br />

Departure Terminal at JFK after a trip to<br />

Long Island. It was inspired by Nat King<br />

Cole’s version of The Christmas Song.<br />

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The Spirit O<br />

Christmas comes but once a year<br />

A day of gifts, a day of prayers<br />

We share our love with next of kin<br />

We greet our friends...the smiles begin<br />

The Spirit…...Of Christmas<br />

Colored lights adorn the trees<br />

Icicles sparkle from the eaves<br />

Dreams of palms, dreams of snow<br />

Dreams fulfilled under mistletoe<br />

The Spirit……Of Christmas<br />

We sing, we dance...we raise our glass<br />

A toast to Peace...may it ever last<br />

Then to the table for the feast<br />

For later on...we all will sleep<br />

(Short solo: humming first line of Jingle<br />

Bells)<br />

The Spirit…...Of Christmas<br />

Christmas night is cold and clear<br />

Our hearts are full of warmth and cheer<br />

Endless stars now grace the sky<br />

I make a wish...on one so bright<br />

I hope that soon...we’ll find a way<br />

Our gifts ‘n smiles...our love ‘n prayers<br />

Will be a part of every day<br />

The Spirit Of Christmas...every day<br />

The Spirit Of Christmas…every day<br />

(Hum the Jinge Bell Line again)<br />

The Spirit…...Of Christmas<br />

The Spirit…...Of Christmas<br />

To listen please click this link...<br />

“TheSpirit Of Christmas” © 2013 Stanley<br />

Thompson aka: Sydney Westan<br />

People are always saying how they wish<br />

the love of family and the joy of the<br />

season should be shared more often than<br />

just around Christmas...that was the<br />

inspiration for this song.<br />

Family, love, celebration, peace and<br />

prayers should be shared every day of the<br />

year , not just on Christmas Day.<br />

Sydney Westan - Singer/Songwriter, aka<br />

Stan Thompson<br />

Music from the heart of our land... comin’<br />

from a Country music man.<br />

Singer/Songwriter Sydney Westan is<br />

committed to all original works of<br />

Country, Blues, Folk, Americana and<br />

Western music. His songs are crafted into<br />

heartfelt ballads, intriguing love songs,<br />

bluesy shuffles and some ‘just for fun’<br />

songs.<br />

Sydney has studied at Berlee College of<br />

Music in Boston, M.A., and has been<br />

writing songs, lyrics and poetry since the<br />

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Stanley Thompson<br />

f Christmas<br />

‘60’s’. He has performed in the Santa Fe<br />

/ Taos area for over a decade now.<br />

His shows blend dynamic<br />

acoustic/electric guitar playing with<br />

varied vocals, from a deep Country<br />

growl to smooth tenor and lively<br />

falsetto.<br />

He wears his heart on his sleeve, bears<br />

his soul in his lyrics and leaves you with<br />

a song to remember, so please ‘don’t just<br />

come to hear some music! Come and<br />

listen to the song!!’ He’s available for 2<br />

or 3 hour shows in the Santa Fe, Taos<br />

and Albuquerque area. For info on rates<br />

and bookings or to receive a promo CD<br />

505-699-5135<br />

AmericanSongspace.com/SydneyWestan<br />

YouTube.com/sydneywestan<br />

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Little Pi<br />

<strong>Dec</strong>ember 23rd not too many years ago<br />

the TV weatherman was promisin snow.<br />

I was tuckin my angle in after bedtime prayers.<br />

We’d bumped into Santa just a couple days before<br />

ringin a bell outside the hardware store.<br />

He wasn’t takin orders, but little hearts don’t care.<br />

She climbed right up on old Saint Nick’s knee<br />

smiling back at her momma and me<br />

and told him the treasures<br />

she’d be lookin for Christmas morn.<br />

That night in her bed, she was goin down her list,<br />

when out popped something her mom and I missed,<br />

our baby girl’s holiday wish we hadn’t heard before.<br />

“He’s bringin me a little pink kitty<br />

and he’ll bring it right here,<br />

with pretty green eyes, and soft furry ears.<br />

I know he’ll remember me. I’ve been a very good girl.<br />

I want a little pink kitty,<br />

more than anything in the world!”<br />

O’Dark Hundred, me and Poppy had a mission.<br />

I didn’t have to work and we weren’t going fishin,<br />

just tryin to help Santa<br />

make a Christmas wish come true.<br />

We put a hundred miles on my old truck.<br />

A couple rusty elves runnin low on luck<br />

with one more chore to check off<br />

before we were through.<br />

Spent the whole day… every store in town…<br />

not a single toy aisle I didn’t walk down.<br />

I was out of options, and losing my Yule Tide cheer.<br />

With daylight fadin, Poppy said “Boy,<br />

no big deal just buy another toy.”<br />

So I shook my head and said<br />

“Maybe I haven’t been clear!<br />

I need a little pink kitty,<br />

and I need it right here<br />

to keep Santa Clause in business<br />

for just another year…<br />

keep those reindeer flyin in her pretty little world.<br />

I need a little pink kitty for my pretty little girl.”<br />

One last stop at the grocery store,<br />

I was kicking myself…<br />

thought I could have done more<br />

to fill that empty wish waitin under our tree.<br />

Then across the street, peakin through the trees<br />

twinklin lights just as pretty as you please<br />

caught my eye, and I felt my spirit soar.<br />

There in the window, starin at me,<br />

the cutest little Kitty Cat you ever did see.<br />

But the lights were going out,<br />

so I made a beeline for the door.<br />

The kind old lady, on hearing my tale,<br />

said “Son you’re in luck, that kitty’s on sale,”<br />

then hugged my neck and said<br />

“On second thought, it’s on me!”<br />

I had a little pink kitty for my girl the next morn.<br />

I thought about that little barn<br />

where Grace was born.<br />

I realized then the lesson we’re meant to share.<br />

It’s not about the toys or the things we’re given.<br />

It’s all about the stuff that makes life worth livin,<br />

If you’ve got love your rich beyond compare!<br />

A few days later, thought I’d try to repay<br />

that sweet little shop keep who saved the day<br />

and invite her to help my family ring in the new year.<br />

I went back to that very same spot.<br />

There was nothing but a “pay-to-stay” parking lot.<br />

So I asked the attendant<br />

“Man! What’s going on here?”<br />

He said “There hasn’t been a toy store here….<br />

for 20 years.”<br />

Click here to listen...<br />

This song, which still gets me all misty when I sing it, tells<br />

a story about a modern-day holiday wish that the parent of<br />

any child who celebrates Christmas has inevitably made in<br />

desperation at one time or another: A youngster asks Santa<br />

for a present, but by the time mom and dad learn about it<br />

it’s not available anywhere. They desperately want to help<br />

Santa make that eleventh-hour wish come true, and to keep<br />

the magic of Christmas alive in their little girl’s heart, but after<br />

a daylong search… no luck. Late in the day, with the sun<br />

setting, when it seems unavoidable that disappointment will<br />

be lurking among the gifts under the tree Christmas morning,<br />

dad finds it!<br />

The song, “Little Pink Kitty,” which should be available<br />

on all major retail and streaming sites on November 25, is<br />

based on a completely true story from my own life. You can<br />

read a little more about at:<br />

https://www.thisislifesong.com/little-pink-kitty<br />

Whenever I feel stress creeping into my holiday season, I<br />

think back on that story, and it reminds me that just best<br />

because you grow up doesn’t mean you have to leave behind<br />

the awe and magic of Christmas.<br />

Spotify playlist link...<br />

Our website link...<br />

You Tube Video/lyrics link.....<br />

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nk Kitty<br />

Pete Marksteiner<br />

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Christma<br />

Verse<br />

Gran and granddads<br />

on the cheese and wine,<br />

The family’s here<br />

because its Christmas time,<br />

Lights and baubles hanging from the tree,<br />

And the mistletoe’s there<br />

just for you and me<br />

Verse<br />

Santa’s been and had his sweet mince pie,<br />

He came in the night and we all know why,<br />

Down the chimney with his big red sack,<br />

Put presents by the tree and went right back<br />

Chorus<br />

So come on everybody put your blues away,<br />

That time is here it’s Christmas Day,<br />

Get the old tunes playing on the stereo,<br />

We all know the words<br />

we’ve heard them all before<br />

Verse<br />

We got Slade and Wham and Wizzard to,<br />

Grab the one you love<br />

dance the whole night through,<br />

There’s a twinkle there in your granddads<br />

eye,<br />

As the songs take him back to years gone by<br />

Bridge<br />

Ain’t about the turkey<br />

the roasties or the sprouts,<br />

Spreading love is what it’s all about,<br />

Time for family having fun with friends,<br />

Such a good time hope it never ends<br />

music interlude<br />

Chorus<br />

So come on everybody put your blues away,<br />

That time is here it’s Christmas Day,<br />

Get the old tunes playing on the stereo,<br />

We all know the words<br />

we’ve heard them all before<br />

Verse<br />

The icing on the cake<br />

is when the snow falls down,<br />

And a snowman grows<br />

right up from the ground,<br />

In your hats and coats<br />

having snowball fights,<br />

Just having fun in the winter night<br />

Chorus<br />

So come on everybody put your blues away,<br />

That time is here it’s Christmas Day,<br />

Get the old tunes playing on the stereo,<br />

We all know the words<br />

we’ve heard them all before<br />

Here is my attempt at lyrics for a Christmas song, I decid<br />

and music are added will be along the lines of classic up b<br />

the ilk.<br />

How the lyrics for my Christmas song came about is quit<br />

the No1 Christmas songs really have had nothing to do w<br />

tor so I thought it would be a good idea to write somethin<br />

important message which I hope the lyrics convey.<br />

I also write and am vocalist for the ‘4 Owld Codgers’ cou<br />

friends and known each other since school (we are now a<br />

performing for the last few years. We have had airplay wi<br />

International song writing competitions (4th and 7th). I c<br />

Susanne Waldbrunner from Germany,but also Knoll Bud<br />

Link to revernation songs...<br />

Link to Facebook page...<br />

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Ron Todd<br />

s Is Here<br />

ed to go for something which when melody<br />

eat songs like those by Slade, Wizzard and<br />

e simple. Over the last few years a number of<br />

ith the festive season mainly due to X-Facg<br />

traditional with an up beat feel but also an<br />

ntry band and all of the members have been<br />

ll over 60 years of age) but only been<br />

th stations in America and done well in<br />

ollaborate with other artists too. Mainly<br />

dy an artist in America.<br />

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THE SPIRIT OF CHRISTMAS 1940<br />

Set during the Blitz, The Spirit of Christmas 1940 is a Christmas<br />

ghost story that actually started life off as a musical drama. The<br />

inspiration for the story came from one song, ‘Echoes of Home’.<br />

Echoes of Home<br />

Got your letter yesterday<br />

Told me you were far away<br />

You said you were doing fine<br />

But I can read between the lines<br />

I hear the sounds of echoes of home<br />

Both the kids are doing fine<br />

Running round at Christmas time<br />

Mrs Brown’s still telling tales<br />

Of drunken wives and baby wails<br />

Still I hear the sounds of echoes of home<br />

Got your letter yesterday<br />

Saying you’d be home today<br />

But the station’s cold and bare<br />

Cause your still not standing here<br />

Where are the sounds of echoes of home?<br />

Got a telegram today<br />

It told me you had passed away<br />

You died quick and you died brave<br />

All the soldiers you had saved<br />

To hear the sounds of echoes of home<br />

Pictures of a distant time<br />

Reminding me when you were mine<br />

I guess that I’m now doing fine<br />

But you can read between the lines<br />

There’s no more sounds of echoes of home<br />

Lyrics & Music arrangement<br />

Paul Michel<br />

I can’t remember where the mental image actually came from<br />

for ‘Echoes of Home’. All I can say is that at the time I was<br />

writing an awful lot of war songs and poetry. I had also written<br />

two musicals, one of which was very much written about<br />

conflict. What I can remember is picturing a soldier’s wife<br />

waiting for her husband to return on a station platform. That<br />

was the basis of everything about the story.<br />

Of course, it was destined to be a ghost/ love story but in reality<br />

they were just sidelines that would carry the story of a time<br />

when a country faced its most challenging test and some of it’s<br />

darkest times. That was the main point I wanted to make.<br />

The song is just that. It tells the sacrifice, the sadness. the<br />

courage and the love of that awful time. I think so much so,<br />

that more had to be written. Song after song was written to try<br />

to capture what I was trying to say and I have to say, I came very<br />

close. But more than music and poetry, the story itself had to<br />

be told.<br />

To give a brief outline of the story, without trying to give too<br />

much away, the story centres around three main characters.<br />

Rosie, an innocent young flower seller who makes a meagre<br />

living with her stall. Jimmy, an over-confident newspaper<br />

vendor with the gift of the gab, a dodgy deal never too far away<br />

but a very large heart. Finally, Billy Snow. Billy is the ghost of<br />

a soldier who’s purpose is to comfort the heart of the bereaved<br />

on Church Street station. In doing so, he takes on the pain of<br />

those he comforts to the point that he can no longer endure the<br />

suffering.<br />

In a relatively short period of time, a love triangle forms and a<br />

powerfully emotional situation develops in which a forbidden<br />

road comes dangerously close to being travelled. How that is<br />

negotiated one way or the other, I will not tell.<br />

The story is set on a ficticious London Train Station during<br />

the Blitz as mentioned earlier. My inspirations for this station<br />

has come from a very real station today. I must give thanks to<br />

the Severn Valley Railway, Kidderminster for their very kind<br />

assistance with the development of the story and the production<br />

of my book which is the first step in telling the full story.<br />

The beautiful Kidderminster station is a period set station<br />

with every detail reflecting life during those days of the second<br />

world war. The engines that run there are beautiful vintage<br />

locamotives with carriages looking as new as the day they rolled<br />

off the lines all that time ago. How could one not be inspired.<br />

In fact, the background sketch you see is actually a photo I took<br />

of the Kidderminster Severn Valley Railway station and edited it<br />

to a sketch. A similar picture is on the cover of the book, again<br />

taken at the station.<br />

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Paul Michel<br />

It is as if everything is being provided for me to get the most<br />

from this story. My original idea of telling the story as a<br />

musical still stands. I am still writing the musical sections and<br />

ideas are still flooding in as I put the book together, in fact I’ll<br />

go as far as to say the musical aspect will add new dimensions<br />

to the story. Humour for example. Jimmy, our newspaper<br />

vendor is meant to be the cheeky cockney lad full of mischief<br />

and charm which is difficult to portay in the book although not<br />

impossible. In the musical version, the songs really bring this<br />

out in the character.<br />

The same goes for Rosie, our flowergirl. The music allows for<br />

her tenderness to come out in a way the pages don’t allow. This<br />

is something that is really important to the story in several parts<br />

especially towards the end.<br />

On the other hand, musical elements can sometimes dominate<br />

the story rather than enhance it. In the early stages of the<br />

development of the story I needed to avoid that.<br />

So what else can we expect from the book? Well, telling the<br />

story of life in London during the Blitz is, as I said earlier, the<br />

main aim. To that end I needed to bring in actual events that<br />

took place during the time period. That took some research.<br />

One of the big events I picked up on was the fact that towards<br />

the end of the year (1940) the Luftwaffe started bombing the<br />

city earlier and earlier in the evenings. I took some time to<br />

think about how it would have actually affected life especially<br />

around our station, even though it is ficticious. I imagined<br />

how the raids would have disrupted and devasted lives on a<br />

station around early evening when trains were coming and<br />

going. Hopefully you may get why I chose this time period<br />

and location.<br />

walking in somewhat of minefield in many areas. Something<br />

which has demanded respect and discipline. Hopefully I have<br />

achieved this.<br />

So there you have it, a Christmas ghost story set in war torn<br />

London on a ficticious railway station. All I can say is read the<br />

book when it is released next year and please do let me know<br />

what you think.<br />

I cannot say when the story will appear on stage but I will be<br />

looking for producers once we are in the appropriate position.<br />

Let’s see what the future brings.<br />

On a final note, I would like to thank Jane for featuring ‘The<br />

Spirit of Christmas 1940’ in <strong>Write</strong> <strong>Away</strong> magazine. The only<br />

real connection I had here was the lyrics to the song that gave<br />

birth to the idea. I hope, by the way, you liked the lyric at the<br />

start of this article. Again these are my own work.<br />

Also I would like to encourage you to visit the Severn Valley<br />

Railway Station in Kidderminster. It is a truly amazing place. It<br />

is right outside the main Kidderminster station so very easy to<br />

find. It also has an outstanding pub on the grounds with some<br />

of the best beer I have ever tasted. Well worth a visit. You can<br />

also ride the trains into Shropshire for a wonderful day out.<br />

Thank you all and have a very Merry Christmas.<br />

Another aspect of the book I feel I should try to explain is<br />

our ghost, Billy Snow. To begin with you may ask yourself<br />

why I chose this particular name. Well, William Snow was<br />

my great, great uncle who died during WW1. To all intents<br />

and purposes he is mostly forgotten through nobodys fault<br />

except time. But being an ex-military man, I searched my<br />

family tree only to find this hero who fought during the<br />

Great War. After his death at the Battle of Guillemont in<br />

1916 he was buried in La Neuville British War Cemetary,<br />

Corbie, France. His family members have all but passed<br />

on now except for a few. To my knowledge, I am the<br />

only one who keeps his memory.<br />

Although our character is not my relative, I found that<br />

using his name would immortalise his name. There<br />

will be a short paragraph on the characters inspiration<br />

that will pay tribute to the late William Snow<br />

containing all of the fact that I know about him.<br />

Using a ghost in this story was very much influenced<br />

by the musicals. Of course, the classic A Christmas<br />

Carol also influenced me for the good although I<br />

would never put myself anywhere near the great<br />

Charles Dickens. But I did feel that using the ghost<br />

of a soldier in a sensitive way would add a little<br />

magic and mystery to the story.<br />

On the subject of being sensitive, I felt like I’ve been<br />

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