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Issue No:12<br />
The Lyric <strong>Write</strong>rs <strong>Magazine</strong><br />
Recalling ‘Last Christmas’<br />
With George Michael<br />
A Christmas<br />
Celebration<br />
Featuring<br />
All Our Regulars<br />
Plus Original<br />
Christmas Songs<br />
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In This Issue...<br />
Page 40 - 43<br />
Regulars:<br />
04 The Lyrics Doctor<br />
06 Daryn Wright<br />
08 Trevor Dimoff<br />
10 Paul Sykes<br />
12 Bill O’Halloran<br />
14 Simon Wright<br />
16 Happy Ron Hill<br />
18 Life In Lyrics<br />
Featuring:<br />
20 John Nicholson<br />
22 David Sutherland<br />
24 Stephen Kalpin<br />
26 David Michael Rose<br />
28 Augusto Flameño<br />
Monsayac<br />
30 James K Victor<br />
32 Sydney Westan<br />
34 Jason Baker<br />
36 Queen Regina Of The<br />
Gigglefits<br />
38 Bob Love<br />
40 Paul Michel<br />
42 Paul Michel<br />
44 Jimmy Travis Band<br />
46 Dave Eidson<br />
48 Nick Lawrence<br />
50 Colin B Leonard<br />
52 Sivle<br />
54 Rollin Jewett<br />
56 Bamil Gutiérrez<br />
Collado<br />
58 Don Murdock<br />
60 Mike Turner<br />
62 Jane Shields<br />
64 Richard Solleveld<br />
66 Ric Angus<br />
68 Linda Harborth<br />
70 Gary Snead<br />
72 Stanley Thompson<br />
74 Pete Marksteiner<br />
76 Ron Todd<br />
78 Paul Michel<br />
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A Word From The Editor...<br />
A very warm welcome to my Christmas issue of<br />
<strong>Write</strong> <strong>Away</strong> <strong>Magazine</strong>. It’s packed full of cheer<br />
from talented artists around the world who have<br />
kindly contributed thier own original Christmas<br />
songs/lyeics for your pleasure. Please take a<br />
moment to check out all the links provided.<br />
I’d like to take this opportunity to wish all my<br />
readers a wonderful Christmas, and ask that if you<br />
enjoy my magazine please share it on social media<br />
for all to enjoy.<br />
I’ve also released Volume Two of ‘My Life In<br />
Lyrics’, which you can now preview or download<br />
from my website. Volume One is also still<br />
available from www.writeawaymagazine.co.uk<br />
You can also submit articles for my magazine<br />
directly from my website should you so wish to.<br />
I would like to offer a huge thank you to each of my<br />
regular writers for their invaluable support over the<br />
past twelve months, and for producing such<br />
excellent content in all their articles. I would be lost<br />
without your input, and am truly grateful to you all.<br />
So, here’s wishing you all a very Merry Christmas<br />
time, and also good fortune and health for the<br />
coming New Year.<br />
Jane xxx<br />
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Finding Your Words<br />
Show what you mean - don’t tell. “I’m so sad, I just feel<br />
bad, my girlfriend left me today...”....Not the best way to<br />
express your words. This is a fast way to make your song<br />
forgettable.<br />
The best lyrics, like any good writing, get us to feel emotions<br />
because they capture that experience, not because<br />
they tell us what to feel. Try to write about what it’s like to<br />
feel something, instead of just<br />
telling your audience.<br />
A good example of an alternative to this “I’m so sad” thing<br />
is from Damien Rice’s song The Animals Were Gone: “At<br />
night I dream without you, and hope I don’t wake up;<br />
‘Cause waking up without you is like drinking from an<br />
empty cup”.<br />
Brainstorm some ideas so you can see what you have and<br />
choose or even build off of an existing idea. It is probably<br />
best if you have an inspiration.<br />
https://www.rhymezone.com/ - Check this out if you’ve<br />
never used it before. It’s a great aid to rhyme.<br />
has far more rhyming than other ge<br />
not required. It’s just stylistic.<br />
Try non-standard rhyme schemes. I<br />
your rhyming stand out a bit more a<br />
cheesy, you can experiment with diff<br />
rhyming. Did you know that there’s<br />
Explore assonance/consonance rhym<br />
alliteration, forced rhymes, etc.<br />
Assonance is the repetition of vowe<br />
create internal rhyming within phra<br />
together with alliteration and conso<br />
of the building blocks of verse. Ass<br />
to be a rhyme; the identity of which<br />
sequence of both vowel and conson<br />
Consonance refers to repetitive sou<br />
consonants within a sentence or ph<br />
often takes place in quick succession<br />
patter. It is classified as a literary ter<br />
as well as prose. For instance, the w<br />
kick are consonant with one and oth<br />
existence of common interior conso<br />
Rhyme within reason. You know when you see a song<br />
written by someone who isn’t very good and the lyrics just<br />
come off as cheesy? This is often because they rhyme too<br />
much or very badly. Aim to avoid having all of your lines<br />
rhyme, and look for rhymes that you do use that look<br />
natural. Don’t put weird phrases or words into your lyrics<br />
just to get a rhyme. Really, your lyrics don’t have to rhyme<br />
at all. Plenty of songs have non-rhyming lyrics.<br />
Good: “You make me feel real again/You just have to smile<br />
and I know/The sun’s coming out - Amen!”<br />
Bad: “I really love my cat/My cat is where it’s at/Her tail<br />
looks like a bat/She’s getting kind of fat...”<br />
Of course, there are some genre considerations. Rap often<br />
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The Lyrics Doctor<br />
nres, but even then it’s<br />
f you do want to make<br />
nd avoid sounding<br />
erent styles of<br />
more ways to rhyme?<br />
es, pararhyme,<br />
l sounds to<br />
ses or sentences, and<br />
nance serves as one<br />
onance does not have<br />
depends merely on<br />
ant sounds.<br />
nds produced by<br />
rase. This repetition<br />
such as in pitter,<br />
m used in both poetry<br />
ords chuckle, fickle, and<br />
er due to the<br />
nant sounds<br />
Another example, Macklemore’s Same Love uses many<br />
examples of assonance rhymes and other non-standard<br />
rhymes: lately/daily, anointed/poisoned, important/support<br />
it, etc<br />
Pararhyme is a half-rhyme in which there is vowel variation<br />
within the same consonant pattern.<br />
“Strange Meeting” (1918) is a poem by Wilfred Owen, a<br />
war poet who used pararhyme in his writing. Here is a part<br />
of the poem that shows pararhyme:<br />
Too fast in thought or death to be bestirred.<br />
Then, as I probed them, one sprang up, and stared<br />
With piteous recognition in fixed eyes,<br />
Lifting distressful hands, as if to bless.<br />
And by his smile, I knew that sullen hall,<br />
By his dead smile I knew we stood in Hell.<br />
Alliteration and rhyme<br />
Alliteration refers to words that share the same<br />
initial sound, like Peter Piper, Bugs Bunny, or Mickey<br />
Mouse.<br />
Rhyme refers to words that share the same final sound or<br />
sound sequence, like me and tree or tap and cap, or fun<br />
and sun. Rhyme is actually quite complex and difficult to<br />
explain precisely, so you’ll want to keep it pretty simple, at<br />
least at first. My advice: stick to one-syllable words with a<br />
simple sound structure, at least at first.<br />
Avoid cliches. You want to avoid cliches because these<br />
keep your songs from standing out and don’t show off your<br />
unique talent. If you have someone down on their knees<br />
(especially if they’re begging please), someone is walking<br />
down the street (either it’s a girl or it’s you, either way, it’s<br />
been done), or you just have to ask “why can’t you see”, you<br />
probably need to go back to the drawing board...<br />
Please email any questions for The Lyrics Doctor<br />
directly to me and I will forward to him.<br />
jane@writeawaymagazine.co.uk<br />
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V1<br />
Every morning it’s the same routine …<br />
Alarm clock is waking me at four …<br />
Hot cup of coffee stirred with a candy cane …<br />
Sugar pie then out the door<br />
Making my way through the traffic jam …<br />
With thousands of elves heading to Santa’s shop …<br />
Where we all make toys on the assembly line, …<br />
And the work it never stops<br />
CH<br />
Slap on a set of tires make the noise “vroom, vroom”<br />
… Send the car rolling across the room …<br />
Grab a hammer, whack a nail, make a tug boat …<br />
Throw it in the tub see if it floats<br />
Stand the doll, brush the hair, put it in the box …<br />
Tie a golden ribbon in a knot …<br />
Every task is different but the goal’s the same …<br />
Filling Santa’s magic bag<br />
V2<br />
Steam-whistle toot-toots for the shift change …<br />
I’ll finish this toy before I go …<br />
Then skip rope, dance a jig, sing a Christmas song …<br />
As I’m heading for the door<br />
These twelve hour shifts seven days a week …<br />
Don’t leave a lot of time for elf things …<br />
But it’s what I love and all I live for,<br />
… And the only thing I dream<br />
CH<br />
Slap on a set of tires make the noise “vroom, vroom”<br />
… Send the car rolling across the room …<br />
Grab a hammer, whack a nail, make a tug boat …<br />
Throw it in the tub see if it floats<br />
Stand the doll, brush the hair, put it in the box …<br />
Tie a golden ribbon in a knot …<br />
Every task is different but the goal’s the same …<br />
Filling Santa’s magic bag<br />
REPEAT CHORUS<br />
Filling Santa<br />
Written By D<br />
You can find Daryn’s music on Reverbnation... and follow on his Website...<br />
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Daryn Wright<br />
’s Magic Bag<br />
aryn Wright<br />
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What Are You W<br />
Want To Go Further in 2020 Than You Did in <strong>2019</strong>?<br />
Are you willing to spend 30 minutes to get started on<br />
2020 right now? Why wait for New Yearâ€s Day to<br />
start planning and working on your next year!<br />
If you’re serious about improving your lyric writing<br />
and going somewhere with it grab a pen and paper,<br />
we’ve got some writing to do:<br />
Tell Me About Your Made It Moment....<br />
What’s it feel like when time stops as you reach your<br />
dream goal?<br />
Shivers? Spotlights?<br />
Are you hearing your words on the radio? Getting<br />
your first royalty cheque?<br />
Stop and imagine it.<br />
Close your eyes and enjoy the feeling of reaching<br />
your songwriting dream!<br />
Now before you let reality crush your dreams and<br />
you start thinking but I can’t. I’ll never, that’s too big<br />
a dream.. write about it!<br />
Pretend it’s a piece of fiction if it helps. If you want to<br />
be a writer, write about it, point form is fine:<br />
What would a made it momentfeel like, look like,<br />
sound like?<br />
What knowledge, skills, connections with other<br />
people will help you get to your dream?<br />
What steps or smaller goals do you need to get there?<br />
write at least 10 before you continue.<br />
I’m Not Kidding, <strong>Write</strong> It Down!<br />
<strong>Write</strong> it down to help make it real, go get a pen and<br />
paper, I’ll wait. Seriously...<br />
Now that you’ve thought about and written about it<br />
you’ve got an impressive list, yes? There’s at least a<br />
page of dreams and ideas in front of you. So much to<br />
do, probably too much. Instead of getting<br />
overwhelmed be gentle with yourself, dial it back and<br />
find the best first step:<br />
What can you do consistently over the next year to<br />
move towards your dream?<br />
Here are some ideas to get you thinking:<br />
Knowledge<br />
You need to know what to do: how to generate<br />
interesting song ideas, how to write effective lyrics,<br />
how to structure them into a song...<br />
To learn more about lyric structure, you could<br />
analyze a song each week.<br />
You could take a lyric writing course and carve out<br />
30 minutes, 4 nights a week to work on it.<br />
What knowledge would help you achieve your<br />
songwriting dream and how will you learn it?<br />
Skills<br />
Knowledge is power, but it takes songwriting skills<br />
to create solid lyrics.. What lyric writing skills would<br />
improve your songs?<br />
For more emotional impact with your lyrics spend<br />
an hour a week building a list of awesome lines you<br />
love.<br />
To make it easier to start new songs, create a list of<br />
titles to refer to when you’re starting a new song and<br />
brainstorm new title ideas at least once a week.<br />
To practice coming up with lyric ideas quickly, for a<br />
month spend 10 minutes a day brainstorming ideas<br />
for you latest song.<br />
If you want to make more time for songwriting, you<br />
can consistently work on your songwriting a little<br />
every day.<br />
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Trevor Dimoff<br />
riting Next Year?<br />
What lyric writing skills would help you get to your<br />
dream?<br />
Connections<br />
Nobody is successful without helping and interacting<br />
with other people. Put yourself out there online and<br />
especially in person.<br />
For example, if you need to find co-writers to help<br />
you write music you can:<br />
Reach out to a new songwriter each week with a<br />
personal message.<br />
Find a songwriting group in your area and go to<br />
meetings, meet people face to face.<br />
Spend an hour a week setting up and having<br />
conversations with other songwriters.<br />
Summary:<br />
I want you to do something new or different or better<br />
so you’re moving towards you dream. Start with the<br />
little steps that set you on the path! think about what<br />
you’re writing next year.<br />
Now, tell me about your I made it moments, when<br />
your songwriting dream comes true and let me<br />
know: what’s your best first step to get to your<br />
songwriting dream?<br />
I’d love to hear from you, tell me about it:<br />
trevor@epicsongwriting.com<br />
Trevor is a songwriter and songwriting teacher at<br />
epicsongwriting.com.<br />
Click here to learn a quick method to write lyrics and<br />
music for a song chorus.<br />
What musical connections do you need and how can<br />
you develop them?<br />
Action<br />
All of the planning in the world won’t accomplish<br />
anything if you don’t follow through! results require<br />
action!<br />
Start with the end in mind, your songwriting dream.<br />
Come back to it when you feel your motivation<br />
slipping. If it no longer seems relevant, change it and<br />
focus on a new dream, a new I made it moment!<br />
Break it down into smaller more manageable steps.<br />
Perhaps one of these steps is your big goal for 2020.<br />
<strong>Dec</strong>ide what consistent action will help you learn and<br />
grow.<br />
You’ve thought and written about your<br />
songwriting dream, and worked through these<br />
questions... what’s your best first step to catch that<br />
dream?<br />
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George Mich<br />
In the coaching world, one of the primary things<br />
to get working in a voice quickly is efficiency and<br />
adduction - the proper closing of the vocal folds.<br />
So many other great things become available<br />
when we can do this. So what about all the<br />
breathy songs out there? Are they sung poorly?<br />
Are they bad? Not at all. But if you’re in<br />
training with a pro coach and the ONLY thing<br />
you can ever do after training is sing breathy,<br />
then you’d probably want to be asking some<br />
questions. A car that can go 200Km/hr can<br />
obviously travel at 60 if the driver desires, yet<br />
a car that can only go to 60 can’t go to 200. A<br />
voice that can sing powerfully can obviously pull<br />
back and sing breathy and intimately, but a voice<br />
that can only ever do that, can’t sing with power.<br />
When a singer interprets a song, there are<br />
multiple options available to them. Loud or soft?<br />
Pushing the groove or sitting back on it? Bright<br />
and twangy or dark and mellow? Perfect diction<br />
(that might make a contemporary song suck) or<br />
approximate diction (that would make<br />
traditional singing suck) and breathy or clear.<br />
The ability to instantly go from a huge belt to a<br />
seductive and breathy voice is one of the greatest<br />
hallmarks of George Michael’s sound. He was<br />
truly masterful at it. And he could do it more<br />
than once within the same vocal line.<br />
George Michael had a GREAT tone to his voice.<br />
It always sounded very open, controlled and<br />
accurate. What made his performances shine<br />
was his deliberate (or naturally intuitive)<br />
movement from breathy to belt without<br />
changing his tone. This takes skill and a deep<br />
emotional connection to his voice. Listen to his<br />
performances and you’ll notice him moving in<br />
and out seamlessly.<br />
So when you’re working on your performances<br />
this month, why not take a leaf out of his book<br />
and try singing some phrases differently to<br />
how you usually would. If you have a naturally<br />
breathy voice, try singing a few with a clear tone,<br />
and if you naturally sing very clear and<br />
efficiently, try singing a word or two with some<br />
breath for emphasis. I can’t stress enough what a<br />
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Paul Sykes<br />
ael’s Vocals<br />
difference it will make to your live or studio<br />
performances when you can step out of the<br />
dynamic comfort zone and apply dynamics and<br />
texture to your lines. At first, you may feel silly,<br />
but with practice and experience you’ll begin to<br />
develop a whole new vocal expression and<br />
professionalism.<br />
Maybe it was coincidence that one of his songs<br />
was called careless whisper… But after reading<br />
this, you may come to the same conclusion that<br />
I came to, that maybe it wasn’t so coincidental<br />
after all...<br />
You can find out more about Paul Sykes, vocal<br />
coach by visting his website.<br />
Please follow this link...<br />
Also Paul has just opened a brand new online<br />
vocal course, which you are all invited to check<br />
out on the following link.<br />
Please follow this link....<br />
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So This Is Christmas... An<br />
In our last episode, one of the points we touched<br />
upon was the need to tell a story that was new,<br />
or at least an emotional groove that was new…<br />
.”Love is great”, we said, was a statement that,<br />
while true, was so universal as to be the worst<br />
of all artistic sins: not interesting. And if there<br />
were a “runner-up” prize for “Most dangerous<br />
quagmire for new songwriters”, what could be a<br />
more deserving candidate than Christmas! (we<br />
note, as an aside, that topics like this are<br />
particularly perilous for new, upcoming<br />
songwriters…..songwriters with widespread,<br />
universal appeal seem to get away with<br />
generalized pap they call universal much more<br />
easily...did Paul McCartney just click to a new<br />
webpage? Well, if so, I hope he took his<br />
Christmas bells (and John Lennon’s children’s<br />
choir with him…..but I digress)<br />
Christmas! Where religion, family, food,... and<br />
toys coalesce….and don’t forget alcohol! If, as<br />
the rehab counselors say, addiction is a<br />
downward spiral of chasing a first time high over<br />
and over, but never quite as good….well that’s an<br />
apt description of what Christmas becomes for<br />
many adults. That’s a whole nother book! The<br />
problem for songwriters, however centers around<br />
the fact that so many people already have very<br />
strong emotional impressions from idealized<br />
(half remembered) childhood experiences--they<br />
already “know” more about Christmas than you<br />
could possibly tell them. But they want you to<br />
try.<br />
Sales of Christmas songs clearly holler that (or<br />
“carol” that, if you prefer). The waterfront,<br />
unfortunately, has already been well covered,<br />
which accounts for the further and further<br />
“reaches” in order to say something new….<br />
did the authors of “Grandma got run over by a<br />
reindeer” just click to a new webpage? Could<br />
they take the barking dog Jingle Bells people with<br />
them? This is kinda for songwriters, ok.<br />
Actually, though, Grandma and her reindeer are<br />
actually what you need,or so I would suggest:<br />
something outside the sappy “Love is great”<br />
song...with “love” changed out to “Christmas”.<br />
Which brings us to a personal story:<br />
In 2014, I decided to take up the challenge of<br />
a Christmas song. Hazardous, I knew….but<br />
hadn’t I already written the “Best Song in the<br />
World”? Well, I hadn’t...but I was runner-up<br />
(twice) in a contest called that. And I still had<br />
those Elixir coated guitar strings I had won as<br />
“honorable mention” in a Billboard songwriting<br />
contest….so I was clearly qualified ( I thought) to<br />
take on a challenge that had reduced so many<br />
talented writers to….dreck. But what to do….<br />
what fresh spin could I possibly…...AH HA! It<br />
came to me in a great moment of clarity (or so<br />
I thought). I scribbled a few lines, and called<br />
the band for rehearsal. I began teaching them<br />
my epic: “All I want for Christmas is...a divorce”.<br />
Suddenly, my wife Amy, who rarely takes<br />
interest in musical matters, burst into the room.<br />
“Did you write that? Is that yours?”, she asked.<br />
“Uh…..maybe”, I sheepishly replied. There<br />
was a pause that perhaps seemed longer than it<br />
was…...and she responded “That’s the best song<br />
you EVER wrote!”....I couldn’t be sure, but she<br />
SEEMED neither sarcastic nor upset…..I chalked<br />
it up to the power of ART….I think.<br />
You decide, here it is:<br />
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M-c4G-<br />
F4Rxpc<br />
www.wildcatohalloran.com<br />
And Merry Christmas….also<br />
Happy holidays, Blessed Kwanza<br />
etc<br />
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Bill O’Halloran<br />
d What Have You Done?<br />
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S tand F<br />
(Verse 1)<br />
Snow is falling on Christmas Eve<br />
Reindeer being readied<br />
Sleigh bells on the breeze,<br />
But not everybody’s tucked up in bed<br />
Or has a roof on which to land a sled<br />
Woah, Christmas Eve<br />
(Verse 2)<br />
Snow keeps falling on Christmas Eve<br />
Riley’s old blanket<br />
Guards against the freeze,<br />
The medals that he earned were sold long ago<br />
A dog-tag round his neck glinting in the snow<br />
Woah, in the snow<br />
(Pre Chorus)<br />
We all have our wars to fight<br />
Let me stand with you<br />
Deep in the dark of night<br />
I know what you would do<br />
(Chorus)<br />
You stood for me<br />
So I will stand for you<br />
If you can’t stand any more<br />
I will carry you<br />
We’ll carry you<br />
Support each other<br />
It’s what we gotta do<br />
(Bridge)<br />
I see dark clouds<br />
Cold city walls<br />
Queues for a shelter<br />
The blare of car horns<br />
Heroes in rags showing wounds in their eyes<br />
They’ve faced more than snow falling from the skies<br />
(Verse 3)<br />
Hope comes calling on Christmas Eve<br />
Stockings on the mantle<br />
Kids all believe,<br />
There is no man that will be left behind<br />
We carry our fallen, eyes for our blind<br />
Eyes for our blind<br />
(Pre Chorus)<br />
We all have our wars to fight<br />
Let me stand with you<br />
Deep in the dark of night<br />
I know what you would do<br />
(Chorus)<br />
You stood for me<br />
So I will stand for you<br />
If you can’t stand any more<br />
I will carry you<br />
We’ll carry you<br />
Support each other<br />
It’s what we gotta do<br />
Written By Simon Wright<br />
(September 2018)<br />
Click here to listen....<br />
Hope for Homeless Heroes’ Hearts II – a<br />
Christmas Charity album<br />
Christmas should be a joyous time. A time to spend<br />
with loved ones, exchange presents while enjoying<br />
good food. But Christmas is not joyous for everyone.<br />
It’s really important that we reflect on this and do our<br />
bit to help those who haven’t been as fortunate as us.<br />
One group that particularly deserves support is<br />
homeless veterans. These are people who have served<br />
their country, often putting their bodies on the line,<br />
but who then find themselves on the margins of<br />
society after returning to civilian life.<br />
American musician Stephen Kalpin decided to do<br />
something about the plight of homeless veterans by<br />
creating an album of Christmas-themed songs, with<br />
the proceeds of sales going to the National Coalition<br />
for Homeless Veterans.<br />
Bringing together a team of big-hearted<br />
heroes<br />
When Stephen came up with the idea of doing a<br />
Christmas charity album, he invited others to<br />
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Simon Wright<br />
or You<br />
collaborate through a post on a Facebook group<br />
called ‘Songwriting and Music Production’.<br />
His invitation was answered by an enthusiastic and<br />
talented bunch of musicians and songwriters. It’s a<br />
really global effort, with contributions drawn from<br />
Trinidad and Tobago, Canada, Finland, England,<br />
South Africa, United States, Scotland, Italy, and<br />
Bangladesh!<br />
The album features fresh interpretations of<br />
well-known Christmas favourites, plus original new<br />
material. The music is sumptuous and will make your<br />
foot tap, your heart smile, and hopefully also make<br />
you think about what Christmas means to you and<br />
its true spirit.<br />
Stand for you lyric<br />
My contribution to the album was to create an<br />
original lyric, called ‘Stand for you’. Riley, the veteran<br />
referenced within the song, is a fictitious<br />
character, but he represents the plight that many<br />
veterans sadly end up facing. He has had to sell the<br />
medals he earned, and has gone (in society’s eyes)<br />
from being a homecoming hero to just another<br />
homeless person sat on a street corner.<br />
I wanted to juxtaposition Riley’s plight with the<br />
joyous anticipation that kids have on Christmas Eve<br />
– being tucked up in a warm bed waiting excitedly<br />
for Santa and his reindeer to arrive. And then to have<br />
the chorus be an uplifting tale of how others will<br />
support Riley in his hour of need, just as he stood for<br />
us when serving his country.I originally thought the<br />
lyric could maybe be converted into a Bruce<br />
Springsteen-type song, but when Seth Koos started<br />
working on it he had the great idea to move it into<br />
more of a hard rock territory. And we were very<br />
lucky to enlist Bob Campbell to provide the vocal<br />
oomph that the song needed. I’m very proud of the<br />
end result and that a lyric I wrote is helping a great<br />
cause.<br />
https://www.hopeforhomelesshearoesheartsii.com/<br />
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Maybe Christmas T<br />
I don’t regret the choice to fight<br />
for what is right<br />
But every day I pray<br />
to be coming home tonight<br />
So Let us win and let peace begin<br />
I pray that soon, I’ll get back again<br />
I don’t know how I don’t know when<br />
Maybe Christmastime I’ll be home<br />
Maybe Christmastime I’ll be home<br />
I never turn around<br />
when things don’t go as planned<br />
I never once back down<br />
when I have to make a stand..<br />
REPEAT CHORUS<br />
INSTRUMENTAL CHORUS<br />
Didn’t know how much I’d miss<br />
Mom and everyone<br />
You tell her I’ll be back<br />
When the war is won.<br />
REPEAT CHORUS<br />
I always think first of the people I protect<br />
I never once thought twice<br />
about things I could not get.<br />
REPEAT CHORUS<br />
To listen click this link...<br />
ABOUT HAPPYRON<br />
HappyRon’s music has been described as<br />
“Mr. Rogers Meets South Park.”<br />
At the age of 48 he finally healed a lifelong<br />
disabilities that have prevented him from<br />
fully pursuing music and is excited to finally<br />
bring his music to the world.<br />
Firstly he is on the autistic spectrum that<br />
has always made communication difficult<br />
and music has helped him heal and move<br />
forward in life.<br />
Secondly, he was born without a left hip<br />
socket which brought tension and pain<br />
throughout his body. After having surgery<br />
he found that was able to create music<br />
much easier and has become obsessed with<br />
teaching people that anyone can make<br />
music.<br />
He is most well known for fun sing-along<br />
songs like “Terribly Happy” and “If You’re<br />
Bored In San Diego (IT’S YOUR FAULT)<br />
as well as songs in many other styles. He<br />
has been described as a cross between<br />
“punk rock and punk folk.”<br />
His music is influenced by, among others,<br />
Ringo Starr, Mr. Rogers, South Park, and<br />
Leonard Cohen.<br />
He is now an inspirational speaker with<br />
music sharing the value of positive thought<br />
and action to businesses and schools.<br />
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Happy Ron Hill<br />
ime I’ll Be Home<br />
“Dare we say HappyRon is making San Diego<br />
hipper?” - The San Diego Reader<br />
“HappyRon lives and breathes music. His<br />
dedication is an inspiration” - The San Diego<br />
Union Tribune<br />
“Every guy in the English Speaking world<br />
needs a copy of HappyRon’s Terribly Happy<br />
if only to sing along with his own life” The<br />
Expresso <strong>Magazine</strong> https://www.theespresso.<br />
com/<br />
“Masterpiece… anyone who listens will be<br />
amazed at the depth of Happy Ron Hill’s songwriting.”<br />
The San Diego Troubadour http://<br />
www.sandiegotroubadour.com November<br />
2008<br />
“Great stuff, great attitude and lyrics as well as<br />
cool songs. Not to mention brilliant titles”<br />
Dominic Pedler, author of the 800 page book<br />
Songwriting Secrets Of The Beatles<br />
Gregory Page says “ I didn’t like it, I LOVED<br />
IT!!!”<br />
HAPPYRON BIO<br />
The Happy Man has lived in San Diego all his<br />
life and his hope is to die in San Diego. He<br />
never sang a note until he was thirty and didn’t<br />
get “seriously” into music until he was forty.<br />
He was played more than 2700 shows since<br />
then bringing to the stage his unique<br />
combination of fun sing-along songs with<br />
heartfelt softer songs.<br />
To celebrate his 44rth birthday he released<br />
his first real album, backed by no less than<br />
twenty-two people, including some of the best<br />
musicians and singers in San Diego. Also<br />
featured is Paul Litteral on Trumpet, who<br />
played on the B-52s “Love Shack” and James<br />
Brown’s “Living In America. The album<br />
Produced by local music guru Sven-Erik<br />
Seaholm. The critically acclaimed album was<br />
nominated for a San Diego Music Award and<br />
was described by The San Diego Troubadour<br />
as “Masterpiece… anyone who listens will be<br />
amazed at the depth of Happy Ron Hill’s<br />
songwriting.”<br />
HappyRon was born without a socket in his<br />
left hip and that contributed to music being<br />
very difficult for him. After having surgery his<br />
life and his music changed. He is now in what<br />
he calls “HappyRon finally unleashed” mode<br />
and is finally able to create his music in full<br />
force.<br />
HappyRon has played with a thousand<br />
musicians, his current band is The Good<br />
Hearted People, featuring Stand Up Bass<br />
Player Paul Tillery and Andy Gallagher from<br />
Trains Across The Sea on keys.<br />
FACEBOOK: https://www.facebook.com/<br />
HappyRonMusic/videos/2330075183931189/<br />
SOUNDCLOUD: https://soundcloud.com/<br />
happyron10/maybe-christmas-time-ill-behome<br />
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Life In<br />
Volumes 1 & 2 are now available from my<br />
You are invited to preview for free the first 7 pages of e<br />
Each volume contains 30 original lyrics/poems of mine,<br />
There are a further 12 volumes which will be released<br />
So, for less than the cost of a cup of coffee you ca<br />
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Lyrics<br />
Life In Lyrics<br />
website - www.writeawaymagazine.co.uk<br />
ach volume, or download for only £2.00 per volume.<br />
with a brief caption on the inspiration for writing them.<br />
at 3 monthly intervals, exclusively from my website.<br />
n enjoy reading all of my lyrics/poems forever...<br />
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The room is getting smaller<br />
The walls are closing in<br />
The cold bites deep inside me<br />
Where do I begin<br />
I sit here watching snow fall<br />
Remembering times past<br />
Of love and fun and Christmas cheer<br />
Times now in distant past<br />
Christma<br />
But<br />
I’ll sing you a song of those days<br />
Of family food and fun<br />
And pretend for these three minutes<br />
That they’ve only just begun<br />
The wrapping presents, the Christmas tree<br />
The anticipation on Christmas eve<br />
But now the kids are grown up<br />
You took your chance to leave<br />
You left me in the season<br />
Thats supposed to be of cheer<br />
Leaving me to the ghosts of past<br />
Alone to face my fear<br />
But<br />
I’ll sing you a song of those days<br />
Of family food and fun<br />
And pretend for these three minutes<br />
That they’ve only just begun<br />
So while you’re all celebrating<br />
Think for a second of my pain<br />
Coz there’s hundreds out there like me<br />
All feeling much the same<br />
But<br />
I’ll sing you a song of those days<br />
Of family food and fun<br />
And pretend for these three minutes<br />
That they’ve only just begun<br />
That they’ve only just begun<br />
To listen follow this link...<br />
All rights reserved @Coolparadiso<br />
Every year I write a couple of cheery Christmas<br />
songs, which my wife and I perform and send as a<br />
video to our friends, like a modern day Christmas<br />
card.<br />
I started thinking about it just the other day and I<br />
had another idea for now. Last year around<br />
November as we were digging out our Christmas<br />
songs and starting to practice, a member of our<br />
musical group stopped coming and sent me and<br />
email.<br />
He said he has no cheer for Xmas as it has too many<br />
bad memories, so he just disappears for a while. It got<br />
me thinking and I realised that it is true for many as<br />
well as isolating further some very lonely people.<br />
Now i am all in favour of Christmas cheer, but my<br />
song was written so perhaps we take a small<br />
moments reflection for the people that find<br />
Christmas a challenge.<br />
I only wrote the lyrics the day before writing this<br />
article so at present the song has no music...<br />
John (Coolparadiso) is a songwriter musician from<br />
Australia, he has had many songs recorded across 8<br />
countries and has released three of his own albums (2<br />
of which he has produced).<br />
He writes daily and posts early demos on his<br />
SoundCloud account<br />
https://soundcloud.com/user-926461130<br />
his albums can be found at Bandcamp<br />
https://johnnicholson.bandcamp.com/<br />
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John Nicholson<br />
s Past<br />
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First Sign O<br />
The moon rises early<br />
In a clear November sky<br />
Rests upon the brow of the hill<br />
The ponies in the meadow<br />
With their turnout rugs keep warm<br />
While the suns still shines<br />
Through the winter chill<br />
Though it’s not even <strong>Dec</strong>ember<br />
The shoppings all but done<br />
And there’s nothing left to save for anyway<br />
Bring me joy, bring me peace<br />
Bring me comfort and relief<br />
Bring me truth, bring me hope<br />
For even though I don’t believe<br />
I will join you in glad tidings<br />
And sing within your choir<br />
At the first sign of Christmas<br />
Seasons bring no comfort<br />
And little chance of peace<br />
As children play beneath Syrian skies<br />
The ever crumbling ruins<br />
Of a country on its knees<br />
Make every day a battle to survive<br />
Though it’s closer now to Christmas<br />
The fighting’s never done<br />
And what is left to pray for anyway<br />
Bring me joy, bring me peace<br />
Bring me comfort and relief<br />
Bring me truth, bring me hope<br />
For even though I don’t believe<br />
I will join you in glad tidings<br />
And sing within your choir<br />
At the first sign of Christmas<br />
And there but for the grace of god<br />
And there but for the grace of god<br />
And there but for the grace of god<br />
Bring me joy, bring me peace<br />
Bring me comfort and relief<br />
Bring me truth, bring me hope<br />
For even though I don’t believe<br />
I will join you in glad tidings<br />
And sing within your choir<br />
At the first sign of Christmas<br />
Follow this link to listen...<br />
First Sign Of Christmas<br />
The inspiration for this lyric is based around the<br />
simple principle of peace and good will, and that<br />
should be a welcome message, regardless of<br />
religion. The narrator is not religious, but<br />
appreciates the message of peace.<br />
The verses concern the difference in ‘life’,<br />
particularly at Christmas time, between the<br />
relative opulent and stable Western world and<br />
that of warn torn Middle Eastern countries.<br />
‘There but for the grace of god’ is meant as a<br />
‘cheeky’ bridge between believers and<br />
unbelievers, but is also an acknowledgment that<br />
no one chooses their destiny.<br />
David Sutherland:<br />
Is a musician and writer of songs. With<br />
unashamedly Americana influences, he weaves<br />
stories of love, loss and travel among the open<br />
landscape of the great American dream.<br />
EP: Americana is available from https://davidsutherland.bandcamp.com/album/americana<br />
SINGLE: Carnival is available from https://davidsutherland.bandcamp.com/track/carnival<br />
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f Christmas<br />
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BEEN TO<br />
It’s been too long…, Since I saw your face…<br />
At Christmas Time.., we’ll once again embrace…<br />
Cause what I feel for you, Despite how far I roam<br />
It’s Christmas time babe, And I’m coming home…….<br />
Yes I know babe, that you’ll still be there<br />
And of course you know, Just how much I care<br />
Cause you wait for me, and your there to stay.....<br />
There’s no more agony babe, I come home today….<br />
Now I know the time is near…<br />
And I know I’m almost there…<br />
I’m so close to what is dear….<br />
Feel electric in the air…<br />
I can’t wait to see you, how’d I get this far<br />
Alone without you<br />
Walking to the door…<br />
And I see you standing there….<br />
With that smile on your face….<br />
I know you still care….<br />
Heart begins to race….<br />
There’s just no more time to spare….<br />
My spirit starts to soar….<br />
Now I feel your warm embrace…..<br />
Walking in the Door....<br />
Walking in the door….<br />
And Maybe, I’m a little more…..<br />
So unlock the door…<br />
And I’ll be there for you….<br />
Said oh,<br />
Oh this is true babe….<br />
I walked in the door….<br />
And you’re standing there,<br />
With a smile on your face….<br />
I know you still care…<br />
Feel my heart…, my heart…, begin to race…..<br />
‘Cause baby…<br />
It’s been too long, it’s been too long…..<br />
So long…..<br />
Baby, without you…..<br />
Baby, baby, baby, it’s true<br />
Now lift the weight….<br />
From your heavy heart….<br />
this is where I left you….<br />
Ah, oh, oh ……<br />
To Listen click link...<br />
This song started as a backing track, something to<br />
play along with, just guitar, bass, and drums. I was<br />
looking for something that featured an AM chord<br />
and CM Chord, but not to prominently. It ended up<br />
being 8 bars. As time went on, I added the piano and<br />
the synth. After adding the piano melody, I began<br />
to think of words for it, and wanted to do something<br />
with the theme of coming home. Much of this can be<br />
heard in the end of the song since those are the 8 bars<br />
from the original backing track.<br />
But I had no chorus, and nothing seemed to work.<br />
So I got a vision of it starting with a kind of gentle<br />
finger picked guitar that slowly progressed into what<br />
you hear in the end. So I tried a few things on my<br />
acoustic, and came up with what you hear today in<br />
the beginning of the song. From there, it was just a<br />
matter of slowly changing each instrument until it<br />
becomes what you are hearing at the end of the song.<br />
To be clear, this song is the same 8 bars from start to<br />
finish. It’s the layering of each instruments voicing<br />
that was the key.<br />
Been too long (Christmas Version) – Words<br />
This song started out as some of the words you hear<br />
towards the end of the song. The piano melody always<br />
gave me a feeling of coming home. So<br />
phrases like walking in the door, sent me down that<br />
path of a story about coming home. I had this vision<br />
in my head of a young man, nicely dressed, sitting in<br />
the back of a car, on his way home. He nervous and<br />
anxious about seeing his lover again after so long.<br />
So I put this image, a kind of video in my mind if<br />
you will, to words. This became the first verses of the<br />
song. I also had an image of him walking up to the<br />
door, filled with anxiety that slowly dissipates as he<br />
sees his lover and they exchange smiles. So I put this<br />
image to words and it became the middle of the song.<br />
The rest of the words at the end of the song, were<br />
gathered from numerous improvisations.<br />
Since this song is about coming home, and the<br />
holidays are all about coming home and seeing loved<br />
ones, I thought it would make a good Christmas<br />
song. So I changed a few words around, and made it<br />
about coming home at the holidays.<br />
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Stephen Kalpin<br />
O LONG<br />
Short Bio: Stephen Kalpin<br />
Ever since he touched his first instrument in his very<br />
early childhood, Stephen Kalpin (AKA Seth Koos<br />
and Steven Jericho), has always been keenly<br />
interested in creating original music. During visits<br />
to his grandparents’ house at a very early age he<br />
would play songs on their organ, using the numbers<br />
of course. But he was always more interested in what<br />
made that combination of notes work, and how it<br />
made him feel, than the song itself<br />
Around age 4 or 5, he began playing guitar,<br />
experimenting and looking for combinations that<br />
made him feel a certain way. At age 11, he began<br />
taking lessons and studying music theory. At age 19,<br />
after playing in a few bands, he stepped up for a bass<br />
player with an injured finger in a band, and<br />
immediately became their new bass player.<br />
Frustrated by the bands unwillingness to try<br />
original music, he would book studio time and write,<br />
and record songs. Those songs drew the interest of<br />
a smaller label. He continued to play with that band<br />
and do studio work until age 29, when a virus caused<br />
him, at first a nearly total hearing loss, and forced<br />
him to leave the band and recording. As his hearing<br />
began to return, he began to slowly play again with<br />
friends, until a relocation moved him hundreds of<br />
miles away.<br />
At that point, unsatisfied with playing acoustic<br />
guitar alone, he began recording again. After years of<br />
comments like “this is too good to keep to yourself ”,<br />
“Music is meant to be shared”, “You should be on a<br />
stage somewhere”, and “That should be published”,<br />
and because changes in technology, made it easier<br />
to record at a much higher quality, he began writing<br />
to publish. His first single “Banishing the Beast” in<br />
2016 under the name “Seth Koos”. He has since been<br />
working on an EP that will be titled “Days of Vinyl”<br />
You can find a few of these tracks on soundcloud at<br />
the link below. So come, feel the music.<br />
Listen to Been Too Long by WinRec on #Sound-<br />
Cloud<br />
https://soundcloud.com/user-265070968/been-toolong<br />
https://www.hopeforhomelesshearoesheartsii.com/<br />
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It was a silent night and I’d drifted off to sleep<br />
First day on the job<br />
Third shift watching my brother’s sheep<br />
It didn’t pay much money<br />
But it was all that I could find<br />
I was trying to keep my nose clean<br />
Tryin to toe the line<br />
Tried to fight the sleep<br />
But the job it was so boring<br />
It didn’t help for me to hear<br />
Them other fellows snoring<br />
Then somewhere near the edge<br />
Of being awake and having a dream<br />
The night sky lit up the like the noonday<br />
And I heard myself scream<br />
And the angels started dancing<br />
They started saying Noel<br />
Joy to the world born this day<br />
Is the King of Israel<br />
I thought I was seeing things<br />
Closed my eyes thinking I was dreamin<br />
But I knew that it was for real<br />
When I heard them other fellas screaming<br />
A hundred million angels<br />
They was dancing in the glory<br />
We ran for we was worth we left them sheep<br />
Cause somebody had to tell the story<br />
And the angels started dancing<br />
They started saying Noel<br />
Joy to the world born this day<br />
Is the King of Israel<br />
To this day I can still hear’em<br />
Close my eyes see the glorious fire<br />
My brother swears I’d been drinking<br />
That night when I talk about<br />
that heavenly choir<br />
You know it doesn’t matter<br />
He’s gonna feel what He wants to feel<br />
But as for me I know what I saw<br />
It ain’t no story man its real<br />
The angels started dancing<br />
They started saying noel<br />
Joy to the world is born this day’s<br />
the king of Israel<br />
To listen click this link...<br />
Outside the Box Writing<br />
I like to look at a story and pick one element<br />
and see where that tangent goes.<br />
In light of the Holidays, I decided to revisit the<br />
story of the Shepherds and the Angels from<br />
Luke Chapter 2. As the story goes they were<br />
watching their sheep at night when the angels<br />
appeared.<br />
So I took one of the Shepherds and thought<br />
about a guy who was down on his luck, maybe<br />
an ex con. His brother begrudgingly gives him<br />
a job where no one would see him. I built the<br />
lyric around him “trying to toe the line” to keep<br />
his nose clean and not screw up.<br />
Then an incredible event happens and he leaves<br />
his livestock. What was the reaction from his<br />
brother and what happened. Would you<br />
believe him? I enjoyed just taking a little twist<br />
and painting a different perspective. This takes<br />
your listener on a paradigm shift and helps<br />
them see deeper into the people involved.<br />
Thinking differently than the norm is fun to<br />
explore and can create new opportunities<br />
of discovery and innovative lyric writing.<br />
Merry Christmas! Happy writing!<br />
David Michael Rose<br />
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Christmas<br />
Is the most significant time<br />
Of the year;<br />
It’s the earth’s celebration<br />
Of the birth of our Savior<br />
Jesus Christ.<br />
It’s the best time to be with<br />
The people so dear to your heart<br />
That is why I always long to<br />
Celebrate Christmas with you.<br />
Chorus:<br />
(And/ I ) greet you,<br />
Merry, merry Christmas<br />
Merry Christmas to you;<br />
Merry, merry Christmas<br />
Merry Christmas to you;<br />
I am very joyful<br />
We’re together<br />
On this holy day<br />
That is why I<br />
Always (long, love) to<br />
Celebrate Christmas with you.<br />
Christmas<br />
Is the most eventful season<br />
Of the year<br />
It’s the world’s festivity<br />
Of the love of our Father<br />
Almighty God.<br />
It’s a season for giving, for sharing,<br />
For showing love<br />
That is why I<br />
Always love to<br />
Celebrate Christmas with you.<br />
(Repeat Chorus, 2x)<br />
I.... Always love to...<br />
Celebrate Christmas....<br />
With you.<br />
Celebrate C<br />
Even though I don’t have the talent of playing any<br />
musical instrument, I am able to write song lyrics<br />
with melody.<br />
When a song chooses me to be it’s channel, I<br />
usually write it straight away while singing it<br />
with the melody that goes with it to capture the<br />
song within me. There are songs that came to me<br />
smoothly that I finished writing them in just a few<br />
minutes or hours. When a song comes by<br />
installments or with missing lyrics or blank<br />
melodies, I sing them again and again while taking<br />
a bath until the missing lyrics/melody fill in. There<br />
are also songs that took me days, months, and<br />
sometimes years, to complete them.<br />
I composed the CELEBRATE CHRISTMAS song<br />
in <strong>Dec</strong>ember of 2012. My father died in July of the<br />
same year. The loneliness of having thoughts of<br />
celebrating Christmas without him for the very<br />
first time sparked in me the urge to write this song<br />
with sense of encouragement for us to do our best,<br />
as much as we can, to celebrate Christmas with<br />
our loved ones, especially with our family, because<br />
when they are gone, celebrating Christmas would<br />
never be the same again.<br />
It is also a product of a renewed excitement to<br />
celebrate Christmas with hope and love, despite the<br />
hurt and brokenness of losing my father, because<br />
of the woman I met when we coincidentally went<br />
to the Municipal Hall to get the death certificates<br />
of her mother and my father who died just one day<br />
apart. As we conversed, we learned that we were<br />
grade school classmates and we only saw each<br />
other again on that “destined” day, after 19 years<br />
since our graduation. My Christmas wish of<br />
celebrating Christmas with her, that I incorporated<br />
in writing the song, is always granted since 2012,<br />
especially now that we built our own family<br />
together.<br />
To hear Augusto sing his song...<br />
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Augusto Flameño Monsayac<br />
hristmas<br />
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Oh Say But<br />
INSPIRATION FOR THE LYRIC<br />
Chords and voices<br />
Silhouettes of a livin’ Prince<br />
Many hearts rejoices<br />
That unto us is born a King<br />
Excitement and noises<br />
All around the earth and heavens fill<br />
That golden star announces<br />
The birth of the prince of peace<br />
And we welcome Him with joy in our hearts<br />
With Gold, silver and myrrh in our hands<br />
We bow our heads for an heavenly regard<br />
Oh say but we’re glad<br />
Carols and praises<br />
Every livin’ soul would sing<br />
As our hearts embraces<br />
A beautiful n’ wonderful gift<br />
In chants and choruses<br />
We will let our voices ring<br />
With joy we celebrate<br />
The birth of our messiah king<br />
And we welcome Him with joy in our hearts<br />
With Gold, silver and myrrh in our hands<br />
We bow our heads for an heavenly regard<br />
Oh say but we’re glad<br />
Christmas is my favorite time of the year, it’s<br />
the time I feel true happiness. For me, writing<br />
a lyric during this period should come<br />
naturally. Christmas lyrics I believe must be as<br />
clear as possible and also very easy to relate<br />
with. In fact, any kind of lyric must be able to<br />
get to the target listeners.<br />
Before I thought of writing this, I was actually<br />
stuck with the idea of writing something<br />
related to the significant signs we see when the<br />
Christmas season sets in. I knew what I wanted<br />
to do, but I had to pend it because I myself<br />
wouldn’t be able to relate with most parts of<br />
the lyric. There’s no way we could talk about<br />
Christmas season signs without snow. So far it<br />
was a decent write and Christmas lovers in the<br />
US would easily relate with it. But then, I never<br />
felt any life in it. It took me awhile to realise<br />
what the problem was. Then I had to go back<br />
to my creative realm, tried to brainstorm ideas<br />
but I was my own critic.<br />
I said to myself, “C’mon you’re not trying to<br />
impress anyone y’know”. I got a good pointer<br />
at what I should actually be thinkin’ about. I<br />
had gone through an article “Tips for writing a<br />
Christmas song” sometime ago, and there was<br />
a point that got me out of my so-called problem.<br />
The writer said “a Christmas song must<br />
be true...” Boom! I got what I needed.<br />
All I had to do was look at my immediate<br />
environment and write a song about the things<br />
that I’ve really experienced. This inspired me<br />
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We’re Glad<br />
to create a little piece not to quantify my joy<br />
for the season, but because it’s the only way I<br />
could express this wonderful feeling.<br />
BIO<br />
I am Kpokunu Victor, born on the 4th of July<br />
1998. I’m a student and also a teacher. I write<br />
and compose my own songs.<br />
Although, none are recorded yet.<br />
More of my lyrics at:<br />
https://m.facebook.com/VikyKpoks-Official-362315141008124<br />
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<strong>Dec</strong>emb<br />
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Sydney Westan<br />
er 31st<br />
The new year’s just a few days away<br />
Then the whole world gets to celebrate<br />
Out with the old, in with the new<br />
Another magic year to spend with you<br />
We will leave all our troubles behind<br />
‘n Start all over with a kiss and a smile<br />
We’ll tip a toast with midnight cheer<br />
‘n Dance away the chill in the air<br />
Make new plans, fulfill new dreams<br />
Count your blessings,<br />
your slate’ll be clean<br />
That big crystal ball will start to fall<br />
The fireworks fly, fun times for all<br />
As the midnight hour<br />
sweeps across the land<br />
Auld Lang Syne will strike up the band<br />
(Solo- 16 bars of humming the<br />
melody of Auld Lang Syne)<br />
We’ll make new plans,<br />
fulfill new dreams<br />
‘n Count our blessings, Oh!<br />
12 / ThirtyFirst is almost here<br />
The new year’s just a few days away<br />
Then the whole world gets to celebrate<br />
Out with the old, in with the new<br />
Another magic year to spend with you<br />
A Happy New Year to spend with you<br />
Now, the new year’s just a few hours away…<br />
Yeah, the new year’s just<br />
a few hours away……<br />
It’s time to start chilling…...<br />
that French champagne!!!<br />
It’s <strong>Dec</strong>ember Thirty First………………...<br />
BANG!!!<br />
To listen follow this link...<br />
I wrote this just to have some fun. There aren’t many<br />
New Years songs, mostly just Christmas songs, so<br />
we have to have a song to sing after Christmas to get<br />
ready for the remainder of the holiday season.<br />
Sydney Westan - Singer/Songwriter, aka Stan<br />
Thompson<br />
Music from the heart of our land... comin’ from a<br />
Country music man.<br />
Singer/Songwriter Sydney Westan is committed to<br />
all original works of Country, Blues, Folk,<br />
Americana and Western music. His songs are<br />
crafted into heartfelt ballads, intriguing love songs,<br />
bluesy shuffles and some ‘just for fun’ songs.<br />
Sydney has studied at Berlee College of Music in<br />
Boston, M.A., and has been writing songs, lyrics<br />
and poetry since the ‘60’s’. He has performed in the<br />
Santa Fe / Taos area for over a decade now.<br />
His shows blend dynamic acoustic/electric guitar<br />
playing with varied vocals, from a deep Country<br />
growl to smooth tenor and lively falsetto.<br />
He wears his heart on his sleeve, bears his soul in his<br />
lyrics and leaves you with a song to remember, so<br />
please ‘don’t just come to hear some music! Come<br />
and listen to the song!!’ He’s available for 2 or 3 hour<br />
shows in the Santa Fe, Taos and Albuquerque area.<br />
For info on rates and bookings or to receive a<br />
promo CD 505-699-5135<br />
AmericanSongspace.com/SydneyWestan<br />
YouTube.com/sydneywestan<br />
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Christm<br />
Christmastime blues, king of the jews<br />
If you only knew what’s gonna happen to you<br />
Nailed to the cross, by the big boss<br />
Everyone just standin’ ‘round at a complete loss<br />
The baby that’s before us will be joining in a chorus of the<br />
Christmastime Blues<br />
Bl<br />
Christmastime Blues, poor little dude<br />
A manger for a cradle-bed when you are brand new<br />
Star in the sky, shines in the eyes<br />
Of the three old wise men from the east who drop by<br />
Besides the gifts they bring these wise men gonna sing a bit of<br />
Christmastime Blues<br />
Christmastime Blues, nothin’ to lose<br />
Not a single clue about what you’re here to do<br />
Dad’s got a plan, but he’s not a man<br />
He’s an ancient idea from way out in Iran<br />
They marked you as a prophet there’s no way you can stop<br />
them ol’ Christmastime Blues<br />
Christmastime Blues, don’t get to choose<br />
Stay out of Jerusalem man you bound to lose<br />
Passover time, committin’ crimes<br />
With the 12 apostles and a bunch of red wine<br />
But you will be betrayed so there you gonna stay with the<br />
Christmastime Blues<br />
Christmastime Blues, born without shoes<br />
Dad above sure knows that you’ll be payin’ your dues<br />
Ready or not to show what you got<br />
Kill the Roman Empire from inside with slow rot<br />
You’ll know it when they gotta sing a whole cantata called the<br />
Christmastime Blues<br />
Christmastime blues, king of the jews<br />
If you only knew what’s gonna happen to you<br />
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Jason Baker<br />
astime<br />
ues<br />
While I have been a musician<br />
since age 14, songwriting is<br />
something I started in earnest<br />
in 2017. As part of learning<br />
how to write songs, I joined<br />
several songwriting communities,<br />
including local groups that<br />
hold song feedback meetings<br />
monthly. One thing that song<br />
communities provide is song<br />
prompts to help inspire songwriters<br />
get into the practice of<br />
completing songs.<br />
One of the very first prompts I<br />
used was “write a holiday song”.<br />
Most “holiday” songs are about<br />
Christmas, so I had to decide if<br />
I wanted to do that, or<br />
something “alternate”. As an<br />
atheist from an ethnically-Jewish<br />
background, I didn’t feel<br />
particularly compelled to write<br />
about Chanukah or other<br />
holiday. While many, many<br />
“Christmas” songs are in fact<br />
secular in content, while<br />
celebrating the trappings of<br />
“the season”, I didn’t feel ike<br />
I needed to add to that large<br />
body of work. I decided to<br />
write a song about Christmas,<br />
and to focus on the main character<br />
and event, Jesus and the<br />
Nativity.<br />
I thought about when I first<br />
learned about Jesus and his life<br />
as a kid, and the thoughts I had<br />
at the time, mixing Chanukah<br />
and Passover, Christmas and<br />
Easter in my young mind, and<br />
wondering… “If they knew he<br />
was a prophet, why didn’t they<br />
warn him?”. So this song is<br />
simply a sympathetic message<br />
from one Jewish kid to another.<br />
Jason Baker is a songwriter &<br />
performer from Burlington,<br />
Vermont. Jason started writing<br />
songs in 2017, and performing<br />
in 2018, releasing his debut,<br />
“America Dreams”. On his new<br />
album, “Common Man Blues”,<br />
Jason continues to write songs<br />
influenced by the deep roots of<br />
old-time & acoustic music, yet<br />
modern in lyrical perspective.<br />
<strong>2019</strong> New England Music<br />
Awards Nominee for “Best in<br />
Vermont”<br />
Nov/<strong>Dec</strong> American Songwriter<br />
<strong>Magazine</strong> Lyric Contest Runner-Up<br />
for the song “Christmastime<br />
Blues”<br />
My Website:<br />
http://jbakervt.com/<br />
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This Ch<br />
Its Christmas, dont you know<br />
This Chirstmas all I want is snow<br />
God’s already provided us everything we need<br />
in our new New Hampshire home<br />
The only thing left on my wishlist<br />
is to spent it in the glistening snow<br />
This Christian already celebrates all year long<br />
So this year all my wishes have been granted<br />
Except to spend my first northern winter<br />
In the White Mountains, high, hi<br />
I’ll be singing a happy ho ho ho<br />
to all you Southern folks<br />
We don’t see much snow in Broken Bow<br />
So This Christmas, all i want is snow<br />
Ole man winter visits<br />
for more that just a brew or two<br />
Oh yea, he wants dinner, wine,<br />
& a recliner too<br />
Settle down for a long winters nap or two<br />
I’ll watch the snow pile from my easy chair<br />
where I’m warm<br />
and Ill make snow angels<br />
I’ll take my five then come back<br />
and get warm by the fire<br />
This season all I want is snow<br />
To spend Christmas in a pretty red bow<br />
In the glistning snow<br />
This Christmas, all I wanna do<br />
is spend it with family & friends<br />
In the glistning snow<br />
Lyrics and vocals by Queen Regina Palmer<br />
Tony Carlozzi on Guitar<br />
All copyrights reserved <strong>2019</strong><br />
I’m an Oklahoma native. I’ve been a poet & lyricist<br />
my entire life. As long as I can recall back from early<br />
childhood. But from a broken family & tough childhood<br />
& adolescence, I never had much opportunity<br />
to learn music, or be around musicians. But I wrote,<br />
sang in the shower & dreamed. I couldnt play any<br />
instrument & allowed that to hold me back. Finally<br />
at 28, I moved to Nashville. Married a professional<br />
keyboardist who worked for Young Chang Piano<br />
Company. But that didnt work out in my favor like<br />
I had hoped. Moved back to Arkansas in 2003 to<br />
be with my dying father. Married again & hung up<br />
the dream. Until it nearly killed my soul. I was on<br />
the wrong path & felt disappointed in myself, as if I<br />
had missed my calling. 12 years of physical sickness,<br />
unequally yoked partnership & internally unhappy, I<br />
filed for divorce 3 years ago. Walked away with nothing<br />
just to get out.<br />
I took my briefcase down from my closet where I had<br />
aproximately 60 song lyrics written. I prayed over<br />
them. I told God, if he would give me my health &<br />
talent back I’d vow to pursue the vision he have me<br />
come what may. My miracle came in my health with<br />
hard work, a complete rebuild of the old me began<br />
to transform me & my fate. That’s when the blessings<br />
began to rain. I started writing & singing again every<br />
day. But there was still a very big mountain to crumble.<br />
I was 50, broke, & homeless.<br />
So from a borrowed broken hand me down cellphone<br />
with full Verizon service that my lifelong dear friend<br />
afforded me, I began adding my acapella songs to<br />
Reverbnation. I began to grow fans & get fantastic<br />
comments that fueled me. I felt like finally I was on<br />
the right path God chose for me. Finally after joining<br />
International Singer Songwriter Accociation, I met a<br />
Veteran Cover Tribute artist Tony Carlozzi. I was in<br />
Oklahoma, he was in Brockton, MA. We worked a<br />
plan & executed it to come together for music. Thus<br />
becoming the Gigglefits. That was in May, <strong>2019</strong>, just<br />
over 6 months ago. The growth is astounding.<br />
Click this link to listen...<br />
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Queen Regina Of The Gigglefits<br />
ristmas<br />
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Grandma’s Got A N<br />
The old tree was withered from years of use,<br />
but grandma couldn’t bear to let it go.<br />
Through 27 Christmases the tree has survived.<br />
With love and tinsel the age hardly shows.<br />
This year, as she was getting it from the box,<br />
the limbs were tattered and falling apart.<br />
First she got mad, then she was sad,<br />
as all the memories swelled in her heart.<br />
The kids suggested, it’s time to get a new tree.<br />
Grandma went to Wally’s to find one that’s just right.<br />
So easy to assemble, granny couldn’t believe,<br />
It came in three pieces, even built in lights<br />
Grandma’s got a new Christmas tree<br />
and she’s showing it off.<br />
She lights it brightly every night.<br />
She opens the curtains so everyone will see,<br />
this shiny new tree with glimmering lights.<br />
She’s as thrilled as she can be.<br />
She’s called her friends on the phone<br />
and her grand-babies too.<br />
This Christmas will be the best ever.<br />
Granny’s spreading the news.<br />
Every day of the week even before dark,<br />
granny lights the tree and it gives her a spark.<br />
Cloudy days, rainy days, it doesn’t matter to her.<br />
That tree will be glistening and she’ll get a stir.<br />
The kids all love it, especially what’s underneath.<br />
Grandma went crazy this year way beyond belief.<br />
Presents for the kids, grand-kids,<br />
neighbors and friends.<br />
Granny maxed her credit cards right to the end.<br />
Grandma’s got a new Christmas tree<br />
and she’s showing it off.<br />
She lights it brightly every night.<br />
She opens the curtains so everyone will see,<br />
this shiny new tree with glimmering lights.<br />
She’s as thrilled as she can be.<br />
She’s called her friends on the phone<br />
and her grand-babies too.<br />
This Christmas will be the best ever.<br />
Granny’s spreading the news.<br />
Oh no, it’s almost the 25th this can’t be the end.<br />
She might roll back the calendar and do it again.<br />
With all the happiness that the old gal has found,<br />
it might be the 4th of July<br />
before the tree comes down.<br />
Grandma’s got a new Christmas tree<br />
and she’s showing it off !<br />
To view this lyric on Songbay...<br />
Growing up in East Tennessee in the 1970’s I had a lot<br />
of friends in bands, probably not much different than it<br />
is today. I would work to help set up the stage and their<br />
instruments since I couldn’t play or sing myself. I did not<br />
come from a musical family. I discovered it on my own,<br />
with influence from my older brother and friends. I went<br />
to my first concert on my 13th birthday, it was Three Dog<br />
Night I listened to the radio all the time. I’d stay up most<br />
of the night. I decided at age 14 that since I couldn’t be in<br />
a band like my friends, I could at least play music on the<br />
radio. We had a career day in 8th grade and I chose DJ.<br />
I went into the U.S. Army at age 17. When I came home<br />
2 years later, I went to broadcasting school in nearby<br />
Knoxville, Tn. What followed was a 20 year career in radio<br />
broadcasting. I stayed locally instead of pursuing work<br />
outside the area. I feel that I could have made it in a bigger<br />
market. Working in mostly small town radio is tough. It’s<br />
low pay and no benefits. I worked at numerous stations in<br />
East Tennessee. Over the years, I developed an<br />
alcohol dependency. It was not uncommon, for some of<br />
my co-workers to be involved in drugs and alcohol. It was<br />
just what we did during that time.I was one of the worst. I<br />
was an alcoholic. Without going into all the details, it was<br />
bad. I lost a couple of radio jobs and burned a lot of<br />
bridges. After years of struggling, I finally got clean and<br />
sober, over 14 years now. I decided to go back to<br />
college at the age of 43. I studied Computer Networking.<br />
I earned an associates degree. Not bad for a high school<br />
drop out with a GED. I got a job at the company that I’m<br />
still employed at today, 11 years later. I currently work in<br />
Cybersecurity.<br />
I started writing lyrics when I was a teenager. Over the<br />
years I would write some from time to time. I’ve always<br />
enjoyed reading lyrics too, it was one of the cool things<br />
about record albums growing up. The albums would often<br />
have the lyrics included. I’ve always had a good<br />
imagination and that helped me in my writing. A few<br />
years back I started writing more regular. I had talked<br />
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Bob Love<br />
ew Christmas Tree<br />
with a couple of people I work with, who play music in<br />
clubs, and that inspired me.One woman co-worker,<br />
Theresa, took a few of my lyrics and wrote songs that she<br />
performed locally. She was very encouraging to me. I<br />
write all the time now and always have ideas in my head.<br />
I play some guitar. I have melodies in my mind for most<br />
of the lyrics that I write. I joined Songbay a few months<br />
back. I won their <strong>2019</strong> Lyric contest.The people at Songbay<br />
were able to use the melody I had in my mind and<br />
match it up almost perfect for, “The Dark Road Leads to<br />
Light”. The only thing that limits me is a lack of time. I’ve<br />
been taking some on line classes to help me with my I.T.<br />
career. I would like to write full time and find someone to<br />
collaborate with. I survived stage 3 throat cancer in 2011.<br />
Worth noting as encouragement to anyone. I survived<br />
alcoholism and throat cancer.<br />
For the lyric “Grandma’s Got a New Christmas Tree”. I<br />
thought of it when my wife bought a tree last year. I’m not<br />
sure how long that she had her old tree, but it took a long<br />
time to put it up, piece by piece. My wife is all about<br />
Christmas and she was very excited about the new tree<br />
and how easy that it was to put it together. I decided to<br />
write a lyric. The tree is very nice. In case you can’t tell,<br />
she likes snowmen. It’s worth noting, that where we live,<br />
especially the past few years, we have seen very little<br />
snow. Maybe once or twice a year and usually only a<br />
dusting. I hope everyone enjoys reading my little<br />
Christmas lyric.<br />
Link to twitter...<br />
Link to songbay...<br />
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Last Christmas<br />
George Michael & Wham By Paul Michel<br />
Last Christmas, I gave you my heart<br />
But the very next day you gave it away<br />
This year, to save me from tears<br />
I’ll give it to someone special (x2)<br />
Once bitten and twice shy<br />
I keep my distance<br />
But you still catch my eye<br />
Tell me, baby<br />
Do you recognize me?<br />
Well, it’s been a year<br />
It doesn’t surprise me<br />
(Merry Christmas!) I wrapped it up and sent it<br />
With a note saying, “I love you, “ I meant it<br />
Now, I know what a fool I’ve been<br />
But if you kissed me now<br />
I know you’d fool me again<br />
Last Christmas, I gave you my heart<br />
But the very next day you gave it away<br />
This year, to save me from tears<br />
I’ll give it to someone special (x2)<br />
A crowded room, friends with tired eyes<br />
I’m hiding from you, and your soul of ice<br />
My god, I thought you were someone to rely on<br />
Me? I guess I was a shoulder to cry on<br />
A face on a lover with a fire in his heart<br />
A man under cover but you tore me apart<br />
Now, I’ve found a real love you’ll never fool me again<br />
Last Christmas, I gave you my heart<br />
But the very next day you gave it away<br />
This year, to save me from tears<br />
I’ll give it to someone special<br />
A face on a lover with a fire in his heart<br />
A man under cover but you tore him apart<br />
Maybe next year I’ll give it to someone<br />
I’ll give it to someone special<br />
Christmas time wouldn’t be the same without those classic<br />
tunes that haunt our TV and Radio each year. Wow, do I sound<br />
ancient saying ‘radio’? Does anyone still use them? Well, I do<br />
so I suppose that’ll do. So are you haunted with ‘Merry Christmas<br />
Everybody’ by Slade or ‘I Wish It Could Be Christmas<br />
Everyday’? C’mon admit it, we all have our favourites.<br />
Last Christmas by Wham! is Jane’s favourite, so I<br />
thought I would jump on the chance to take a<br />
look at the origins of the song and the man<br />
behind it. To be fair, It is one of the best<br />
during the festive season. After all,<br />
the UK did vote it the eighth best<br />
Christmas song ever and us Brits<br />
do like our Chrimbo party hits.<br />
Although ‘Last Christmas’ is<br />
credited as Wham! it was totally<br />
written and produced by George<br />
Michael back in 1984 while he<br />
and Andrew Ridgley, George’s<br />
partner in the duo, were visiting<br />
his parents. He jotted the intro<br />
and chorus down while sat in<br />
his old childhood bedroom and<br />
played it to Ridgley who said that<br />
it was a moment of wonder.<br />
So in August 1984, George recorded<br />
the song in Advision Studios, London<br />
He played all of the instruments on the<br />
track, a Linn 9000 drum machine, a<br />
Roland Juno-60 synth and sleigh bells,<br />
performed and produced it.<br />
It was released in <strong>Dec</strong>ember 1984 on Epic records<br />
with ‘Everything she wants’ on the B Side (Yes, we’re<br />
still in the days of 45rpm vinyl and tape cassettes here) amist<br />
some fierce competition. Live Aids ‘Do they know it’s Christmas’<br />
was rocketing to the top (of which George Michael was a<br />
major part) and as the Christmas charts were announced ‘Last<br />
Christmas’ was, as expected, No:2.<br />
To the credit of George Michael and Andrew Ridgley, all of<br />
the royalties were donated to the Ethiopian famine. Although<br />
Wham! had already scored two No:1 hits, this was probably<br />
their most defining moment in the history of the duo.<br />
Yes, there were many ups and downs in Wham and in the personal<br />
life of George Michael which we will take a look at shortly<br />
but this Christmas classic remains today as the most memorable<br />
moment. It showed the true spirit of who Wham! really were.<br />
They were, at the time a major force in the pop world but this<br />
particular Christmas saw a side of them, and indeed so many<br />
other pop stars, that was simply impossible to ignore and not<br />
admire. For that very reason ‘Last Christmas’ will remain as<br />
one of the greatest Christmas songs ever.<br />
I suppose we can see why it is Jane’s favourite!<br />
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George Michael<br />
We’vetaken a look at the Christmas classic but there was so<br />
much more to George Michael and Wham! So let’s take a<br />
little time to discover the iconic 1980’s pop duo.<br />
George Michael and Andrew Ridgley first burst on the<br />
scene way back in 1983 with their debut single “Young<br />
guns , go for it” The first of many of what would be one of<br />
the most commercially successful pop acts of the 1980’s.<br />
Michael and Ridgley first met at Bushey Meads School<br />
in Bushey near the town of Watford in Hertfordshire.<br />
For a short time they formed a SKA band called The<br />
Executive with a few other class mates before forming<br />
Wham! in 1980.<br />
Michael took on the majority of roles and responsibilities<br />
within the band—composer,<br />
producer, lead singer, and occasional instru<br />
mentalist. Still teenagers, they promoted<br />
themselves as hedonistic youngsters,<br />
proud to live a carefree life without<br />
work or commitment. This was<br />
reflected in their earliest singles<br />
which, part-parody, part-social<br />
comment, briefly earned Wham! a<br />
reputation as a dance protest<br />
group.<br />
In order to move to a recording<br />
contract with Sony label Epic,<br />
Wham! was forced to walk away<br />
from most of the royalties from<br />
their debut album, Fantastic.<br />
None of that mattered when their<br />
1984 single, “Wake Me up Before<br />
You Go Go,” became a worldwide hit,<br />
accompanied by a video of the pair<br />
cavorting in their sportswear. Almost<br />
immediately, George Michael started thinking<br />
of a solo career, and released “Careless<br />
Whisper,” issued in the U.S. as George Michael of<br />
Wham! The duo embarked on a much-publicized trip to China<br />
and enjoyed considerable success in America.<br />
Andrew Ridgley<br />
also tried to go it solo but could<br />
not recover from the Wham! split-up. He tried<br />
his hand at Formula 3 motor racing but, again, without much<br />
success.<br />
George Michael’s popularity continued to grow despite the<br />
adverse headlines until Christmas Day 2016 when at the age of<br />
53, he died of a heart and liver condition.<br />
Owing to the delay in determining the cause of death, Michael’s<br />
funeral was held 29 March 2017. In a private ceremony, he<br />
was buried at Highgate Cemetery in north London, near his<br />
mother’s grave. That summer an informal memorial garden<br />
was created outside his former home in Highgate. The site, in a<br />
private square that Michael had owned, is tended by fans.<br />
Like us all, George Michael had his issues. But his talents<br />
coupled with his integrity, generosity+and honesty made him<br />
one of the best loved superstars of the 1980’s and 1990’s. His<br />
Christmas hit, ‘Last Christmas’ will ensure that he will live on<br />
in our hearts for many years to come. The group ‘Wham’ still<br />
remains today as an influence to any young musical act and the<br />
ultimate in the fun of music.<br />
Wham!’s end came rather suddenly, in 1985, reputedly when<br />
the group’s manager, Simon Napier-Bell (later to manage Take<br />
That), decided to sell a share of his management to a<br />
South African entertainment conglomerate.<br />
Supposedly, as part of a stand against South African<br />
politics, George Michael immediately announced<br />
Wham!’s breakup. They gave their farewell performance<br />
before a sold-out audience of 72,000 fans at London’s<br />
Wembley Stadium.<br />
George Michael embarked on a solo career which rarely<br />
saw him out of the press, not only for the amazing music<br />
he was producing but also a few embarrassing incidents in<br />
which he was involved in public sex acts and other<br />
misdemeanours involving the law.<br />
GEORGE MICHAEL<br />
1963 - 2016<br />
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Last Christmas<br />
George Michael & Wham Discography<br />
Wham! Albums<br />
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George Michael<br />
George Michael Albums<br />
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It’s Just Not Chris<br />
Years almost over<br />
Sure looks like <strong>Dec</strong>ember<br />
The snow and ice on the ground<br />
I hadn’t sent a single Christmas card<br />
The 31st is coming around<br />
It makes me remember our last <strong>Dec</strong>ember<br />
How the city looks so beautiful in white<br />
As we walked the street that day you kept me warm<br />
We couldn’t wait to get inside<br />
Now its Christmas and you’re so far away<br />
On this Christmas I just wish you had stayed<br />
And I wonder if you’re thinking of me today<br />
I don’t know what I’ll do<br />
its not Christmas without you<br />
I hear carols in the distance<br />
Don’t want to listen because every sound<br />
says your not here<br />
Just in case you change your mind<br />
I’ll leave a light over the door<br />
And hope you suddenly appear<br />
‘Cause its Christmas and you’re so far away<br />
On this Christmas I just wish you had stayed<br />
And I wonder if you’re thinking of me today<br />
I don’t know what I’ll do<br />
its not Christmas without you<br />
I’m too old too old to believe in Santa Claus<br />
What are these gifts under the tree<br />
But I did this once<br />
Or many it’s a dream,<br />
has he really brought you back to me<br />
its Christmas all I wanted is here<br />
On this Christmas was for you to be near<br />
And I wonder if you’re thinking<br />
of me ‘cause you’re here<br />
My one wish has come true,<br />
it’s not Christmas without you<br />
Click this link to play...<br />
Christmas song...’It’s just not christmas<br />
without you’...West berlin...Christmas 1985...<br />
Sitting in my plane waiting to deplane...<br />
Friends waiting to greet my visit from<br />
california...Looking forward to seeing my<br />
ex-wife here for christmas...I thought i heard<br />
horses and bells in my head to go with the<br />
latest snow flurries...Looking forward to<br />
meeting friends in a local bar called the<br />
“flying dutchman”. We are mostly american<br />
songwriters living off the rich German<br />
economy. Folks ask why we’re here. We told<br />
them “blondes”. The stewardess woke me<br />
from my christmas reverie. Took a taxi to go<br />
uptown and see my -ex. Berlin is a<br />
wonderland all covered in snow. Women in<br />
their furs stepping out of their mercedes.<br />
I took a nice cozy mercedes taxi to the<br />
“hardke” resteraunt off kudamm. We all<br />
planned a great sit down dinner including<br />
my ex, doris. I wrote the lyrics in my head<br />
spurred on by my love for her, especially at<br />
christmas. Everyone was there to greet me<br />
after my flight from california. Berlin was<br />
always our secret paradise, the only city in<br />
the world where one could write music all<br />
day and play for rent money at night. It was a<br />
privilege to be among this talented group of<br />
musicians.<br />
The Jimmy Travis Band Website Bio<br />
We began as a group of American expatriates<br />
living in Berlin, due to the fact that we<br />
discovered that there you can live from music<br />
alone. Of Music. I, Jimmy, began my public<br />
musical career in the group “Eastfield<br />
Meadows” in Hollywood. I moved to<br />
London to work on an album for Warner<br />
Brothers. John Vaughan was a U.S. Army brat<br />
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Jimmy Travis Band<br />
tmas Without You<br />
who grew up in Germany. Francis Serafini<br />
is from Rhode Island and I found him in a<br />
Berlin club playing solo gigs. Trevor Cooper<br />
is from London and he agreed to put<br />
together a duo for club dates. Hansi is our<br />
drummer and the only German member of<br />
our group.<br />
I loved playing with these guys, seeing how<br />
they were some of the best songwriters in<br />
Europe. Our life style included sleeping<br />
until 5 pm and getting coffee. Then we went<br />
to work writing songs we could play in the<br />
clubs that night. Berlin was heaven for<br />
musicians.<br />
We wrote songs and played in the clubs,<br />
usually three clubs a night. We did TV and<br />
radio. We toured<br />
Western Europe out of Berlin. But in the end<br />
I guess you could say we did it for the music<br />
and the blondes....<br />
https://www.jimmytravisband.com/<br />
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Can you hear the angels<br />
Singing soft and low<br />
Can you hear the angels’<br />
Song within your soul<br />
Saying we should love each other<br />
Whether friend or foe<br />
Spread peace on Earth<br />
Goodwill to men<br />
Where so e’er e go<br />
Over and over and o’er again<br />
The angel band is calling<br />
Calling to all of fallen man<br />
A new day is at hand<br />
Ever and ever and e’er again<br />
The gentle tones are falling<br />
Peace on Earth, peace on Earth<br />
Goodwill to every man<br />
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Goodwill to every man<br />
Peace, peace, the angels sing<br />
Let only one truth remain<br />
Our God welcomes every one<br />
Who hears the angels sing<br />
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Dave Eidson<br />
I am a 63 year old man from<br />
the Lake of the Ozarks,<br />
Missouri. I graduated in 1974<br />
from Mack’s Creek, Missouri<br />
as valedictorian. I was voted<br />
most scholarly and most likely<br />
to succeed. For personal<br />
reasons, I didn’t attend<br />
college but went to work at the<br />
various industries in the area.<br />
I spent the last thirty years<br />
working at Blair Cedar until<br />
I quit to care for my invalid<br />
mom until her death. I have<br />
dabbled at writing short<br />
stories and had a story that I<br />
co-wrote with a friend<br />
published in a book called<br />
the Book of Exodi titled “The<br />
Huntress of Aveleor”. I also<br />
did digital art and had a poem<br />
in the book. Now I enjoy the<br />
hobby of playing the keyboard<br />
and writing songs.<br />
I wrote “Can You Hear the<br />
Angel’s” because I felt that the<br />
message of Christmas had<br />
been lost among some<br />
Christian churches. Peace on<br />
Earth, good will to men, for<br />
God so loved the world and<br />
not just Christians, etc. Peace<br />
had been replaced by war, love<br />
by hate. They wanted to take<br />
the name of Christ but ignore<br />
his central message. Not just<br />
message but a commandment,<br />
love not just your neighbors<br />
but also your enemies.<br />
Http://soundcloud.com/ozarkbluefox<br />
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Kisses Under The M<br />
You can spend the year in another’s arms<br />
He can have the thrill of all your charms<br />
But I hope that you will see<br />
How I’ve waited patiently<br />
For your kisses under the mistletoe for me<br />
In the Spring when the flowers are in bloom<br />
And I am all alone here in my room<br />
As the sky turns blue<br />
All I think about is you<br />
And your kisses under the mistletoe for me<br />
In the Summer you can go on holiday<br />
While I am on my own you’re far away<br />
But Now that Winter’s here<br />
All I want is to hold you near<br />
And taste your kisses under the mistletoe for<br />
me<br />
In Autumn when the leaves fall to the ground<br />
I search but you’re nowhere to be found<br />
You are warm no doubt<br />
But all I can think about<br />
Is your kisses under the mistletoe for me<br />
Its Winter time and I can hardly wait<br />
To hear your voice and to see your face<br />
My dreams have all come true<br />
Now its only me and you<br />
And your kisses under the mistletoe for me.<br />
In the future when we are old and grey<br />
And our children have all grown and flown<br />
away<br />
As we kiss goodnight and hold each other tight<br />
I feel your kisses under the mistletoe for me<br />
As we kiss goodnight and hold each other tight<br />
I feel your kisses under the mistletoe for me<br />
The song was written C.2009 and was very<br />
much inspired by Johnny Cash. I haven’t had a<br />
chance to record it professionally yet, so what<br />
you will hear is a demo, but it gives nice flavour<br />
for what the song is about. We all want to write<br />
a Christmas number 1 and this was my first<br />
attempt, and I think its a good song. I hope<br />
that someday couples will be dancing around<br />
the kitchen to this song whilst wearing paper<br />
crowns, or while they are preparing Christmas<br />
dinner.<br />
Bio:<br />
“A Very Original/Great Singer/Songwriter”<br />
Kent Folk on BBC Radio Kent<br />
Nick Lawrence is a singer and songwriter from<br />
Folkestone. His music is most strongly influenced<br />
by the work of artists such as Bob Dylan,<br />
Billy Bragg, The Beatles, The Band, Johnny<br />
Cash, Jake Thackray and The Levellers. These<br />
inspirational musicians have driven Nick to<br />
write songs encompassing numerous genres,<br />
including heartfelt ballads, social observation<br />
and cutting political commentary.<br />
I have released three EPs:<br />
Bludgeoned by the Poetry (2014)<br />
So Long, Its Been Good To KNow Ya (2015)<br />
If You Don’t Know Where You’re Going Any<br />
Road Will Take You There (<strong>2019</strong>)<br />
Spotify:<br />
https://open.spotify.com/artist/5ro8txAknGkg6R70iqvSkq<br />
Music video for “Time To Leave This Town”<br />
https://www.youtube.com/watch?<br />
www.facebook.com/NickLawrenceMusicofficial<br />
Instagram @NickLawrenceMusician<br />
To listen click this link....<br />
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Nick Lawrence<br />
istletoe For Me<br />
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<strong>Dec</strong>ember Lights<br />
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Colin B Leonard<br />
Guide Me Home<br />
Verse 1<br />
At the time of warm spirits and atmosphere<br />
The smell of pine, of Christmas cheer<br />
I listen to stories which make cruel souls fear<br />
Sing the holiday songs year after year<br />
Yet on the Eve of the day<br />
my memories come clear<br />
One the day of days my longings appear.<br />
Chorus<br />
Those <strong>Dec</strong>ember lights guide me home<br />
To childhood memories I’ve never outgrown<br />
I close my eyes in whichever city I roam<br />
And those <strong>Dec</strong>ember lights guide me home.<br />
Verse 2<br />
Cold skies above a winterland dream<br />
Welcoming smiles greet warmly this scene<br />
With childlike eyes I walk in the snow for<br />
When the lights gather in my heart, I know<br />
Great friends, great parties I’m never alone<br />
For at this time of year<br />
my heart always turns home.<br />
Chorus<br />
Those <strong>Dec</strong>ember lights guide me home<br />
To childhood memories I’ve never outgrown<br />
I close my eyes in whichever city I roam<br />
And those <strong>Dec</strong>ember lights guide me home.<br />
Bridge<br />
My own children will know this yearning<br />
Of egg nog, mince pies, of log fires burning<br />
The Christmas spirit will always be<br />
In the eyes of my children, in the eyes of me.<br />
Chorus<br />
Those <strong>Dec</strong>ember lights guide me home<br />
To childhood memories I’ve never outgrown<br />
I close my eyes in whichever city I roam<br />
And those <strong>Dec</strong>ember lights guide me home.<br />
© Colin B Leonard. The Guild of International<br />
Songwriters and Composers.<br />
I’m afraid the top-line melody for<br />
‘<strong>Dec</strong>ember Lights’ is not down in music, only<br />
in my head. If someone wishes to collaborate<br />
on ‘<strong>Dec</strong>ember Lights’ I will send to them<br />
a poorly sung version, as I have done for ‘I<br />
Love My Guitar.’<br />
I ventured into the world of song writing<br />
when my friend singer/songwriter Joe<br />
Rogerson asked me to write lyrics about the<br />
city of Liverpool. The lyrics were written and<br />
accepted within thirty minutes one workday<br />
afternoon. Since that day I have written over<br />
eighty songs.<br />
Unlike many songwriters, I don’t write<br />
constantly as, in my case, I must wait for the<br />
lyrics and melody to enter my mind. A<br />
songwriter’s retreat would be a waste of time<br />
in my case. Inspiration comes when you don’t<br />
think! (To quote myself.) Having written<br />
several novel’s, I am able to write prose and<br />
sustain a narrative. A lyricist and top-line<br />
architect I may be, a musician I am not. I hire<br />
a professional in order to create in sound<br />
what is in my mind. I mainly write in the<br />
Country genre although, as an example, my<br />
song https://soundcloud.com/user-28472269/<br />
i-love-my-guitar-master-1 could be sung in<br />
any.<br />
The song ‘<strong>Dec</strong>ember Lights Guide Me Home’<br />
I wrote sitting next to a Christmas tree at<br />
home in 2017. I once sent the lyrics to my<br />
friend Joe who commented that he wouldn’t<br />
sing it in a pub as ‘everyone would be in tears.’<br />
I suppose he’s right...<br />
Guild No: 2196687<br />
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Stack the deck and makes some calls,<br />
we’re getting ready for a party<br />
Mr. Price and his son brought ice -<br />
that was nice and naughty<br />
Run Run Ruddy do your duty<br />
and got those records spinning<br />
Shake a leg, drink rum and egg,<br />
that turkey there needs trimming<br />
The broken toys are making noise,<br />
Cause Santa’s back in town<br />
There’s mistletoe and ho ho ho<br />
Fire chestnuts roasting<br />
And Charlie brown is making rounds<br />
while Lionel does the toasting<br />
This is it the house is lit No more days are counting<br />
They’ll be no waiting just celebrating Joy<br />
on John Boy’s mountain<br />
Cause Santa’s back in town<br />
The Leaping Lords are dropping cords<br />
as Drummer Boy keeps beat<br />
Jacob Marley’s on the Barley –<br />
he Stinks of “Beef & Cheese”<br />
Some old geezer named Ebenezer --<br />
gives Sugar Plum the squeeze<br />
Broken Toys found their rhythm --<br />
there’s no Misfitting ...<br />
Ragtime Jimmy is getting tipsy --<br />
acting like a clown<br />
Frosty Jack is where it’s at when Santa’s back in town<br />
Zuzu Bailey and ol Fred Gaily dance to the VG3<br />
Leon got his revillion with Buddy Max and Yukon C<br />
Cindy Lu that Whoville girl<br />
brought the prime roast beast<br />
Cousin Eddie and Banjo Burl are carving up a feast<br />
Professor Hinkle’s got his new hat down...<br />
There’s room for more inside this door<br />
Cause Santa’s back in town<br />
I know I know its Christmas.<br />
You Know You Know It Too.<br />
I know I know its Christmas.<br />
You Know You Know It Too<br />
I know I know its Christmas.<br />
You Know You Know It Too<br />
Blue Christmas & White & Silent Night. I<br />
ts Tiny Tim ... Let Him In.<br />
Merry Christmas To All ... Good Night.<br />
Click here to listen...<br />
Lyrics by Bob & Joan Minnery. Music by Bob & Bill<br />
Minnery. Arrangement by Bob Minnery, Joan<br />
Minnery, Bill Minnery, Dan Taylor Copyright <strong>2019</strong>,<br />
Bob Minnery<br />
SIVLE<br />
Joan Minnery – Lead Vocals<br />
Bill Minnery – Lead Guitar/Backup Vocals<br />
Bob Minnery – Rhythm Guitar/Backup Vocals<br />
Dan Taylor – Drums/Backup Vocals<br />
Our Song: Christmas Gumbo<br />
Christmas has always been our family’s most favourite<br />
time of year and definitely the happiest. Christmas<br />
Gumbo is Bob’s madcap creation stemming from our<br />
Family’s long love of the Holiday season and a<br />
lifetime of watching the Classic Movies on TV while<br />
sitting eating popcorn and all hanging out in the<br />
living room. Christmas Gumbo is a cornucopia of<br />
references to some of the most well known and<br />
legendary Christmas Movies of all time. Look closely<br />
every line has one or two references to the greats such<br />
as: Rudolph the Red Nose Reindeer, Frosty the Snow<br />
Man, Santa Claus is Coming to Town, ELF, Edward<br />
Scissor hands, Little Drummer Boy, Charlie Brown<br />
Christmas, the Walton’s Homecoming, A Christmas<br />
Carol, the Grinch and a medley of Christmas song<br />
puns. See if you can catch them all...<br />
SIVLE (Elvis spelled backwards and pronounced<br />
“civil”) is a versatile Indie and Soft-Rock band from<br />
Brantford Ontario Canada, belting out original tunes<br />
and an arsenal of legendary tunes from the 50s -<br />
Today. SIVLE is a family oriented band consisting of<br />
Joan Minnery on lead vocals, her son Bill Minnery on<br />
lead guitar, her brother Bob Minnery aka<br />
bigEZbob on rhythm acoustic and Dan Taylor on bass<br />
and drums.<br />
While SIVLE is primarily a cover band; SIVLE went<br />
into the recording studio in the summer of <strong>2019</strong> and<br />
has released their own original explosive rock anthem,<br />
“Whatever It Takes” along with their<br />
Dixie-Prog single entitled “What Would Walter Do” a<br />
salute to Walter Gretzky. Both singles have garnered<br />
radio air play on Indie stations in Germany, Australia,<br />
the United States, Ireland, Scotland, Wales, England<br />
and Canada. They are distributed through CD Baby<br />
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and available on Sound Cloud, iTunes, Spotify,<br />
Google, BandCamp, Amazon, and more.SIVLE were<br />
selected out of over 450 bands to play one of 5 spots<br />
and were the opening act for the <strong>2019</strong> WTFest Rock<br />
Festival, one of Ontario’s largest music festivals. SIVLE<br />
were the featured entertainment at the <strong>2019</strong> Mayor’s<br />
Levee at the Brantford Armouries and will be again<br />
for 20/20. They also headlined the 2018 ‘FIND YOUR<br />
SPIRIT FEST’ and the 2018 ‘Downtown Music Fest’<br />
both at Harmony Square in Brantford.<br />
SIVLE<br />
They have packed rooms at the Sanderson Centre, the<br />
Corktown Pub, Delhi Harvest Fest, Jeffery’s Lounge,<br />
Manny’s Place, Branch 90 Legion, Tansley’s, Upper<br />
Thames Brewery, the Norfolk County Fair, the<br />
Polish Hall, Frankies Hometown Tavern, the St.<br />
George Legion, the Honest Lawyer, the Dairy<br />
Capital Cheese Festival, the Norwich Museum and<br />
has a heated schedule at a variety of festivals, fairs and<br />
local establishments.<br />
SIVLE salutes the classic sing-a-long hits of the<br />
Beatles, CCR, Janis Joplin, Tina Turner, Johnny Cash<br />
and of course ELVIS. There is something for everyone<br />
as the band also covers Pop and Country tunes from<br />
50s - Today. The lads often take over and do their own<br />
original progressive rock songs and also salute Van<br />
Halen, Jimi Hendrix and other rock icons.<br />
SIVLE is a refreshingly youthful band combining two<br />
generations of musicians while bridging the age gap<br />
through likable tunes and interactive dynamic stage<br />
showmanship.<br />
Two Generations --- One Foundation.<br />
“As always -- SIVLE is a must see live! You can’t see the<br />
energy this band gives off until you see them live. They<br />
connect with their fans and our energy feeds their<br />
energy. If you only see their show once, you have to<br />
return to a number of shows to witness the change<br />
from show to show, it’s an absolute delight! While<br />
contemplating SIVLE, I couldn’t help but think of the<br />
Grateful Dead who were one of the early pioneers of<br />
direct relationships with their live show fans and renown<br />
for fusing many different styles together. SIVLE<br />
is the Grateful ALIVE.” ~ Ken Shipman, Brantford ON<br />
https://sivle.webstars.com<br />
https://www.facebook.com/117SIVLE/<br />
https://twitter.com/SIVLEization<br />
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I Aint Workin<br />
VERSE 1<br />
Ever since I can remember, the 25th of <strong>Dec</strong>ember<br />
I’d have to punch a clock and work ‘til I’m half dead<br />
SoI told my wife and children<br />
that this year’s gonna be different<br />
Instead of punchin’ that clock<br />
I’m gonna punch my boss instead<br />
CHORUS 1<br />
‘Cus I ain’t workin’ on Christmas this year<br />
No, I’d rather be with my family than here<br />
Well, I worked all day Black Friday,<br />
But this Christmas is gonna be my day<br />
No I ain’t workin’ on Christmas this year<br />
VERSE 2<br />
My boss tells me I gotta work,<br />
so I tell him he’s such a jerk<br />
Cus’ I told him months ago and I made it clear<br />
So he says “Don’t be comin’ back”,<br />
so I says “Catch you later, Jack”<br />
‘Cus I ain’t workin’ on Christmas this year<br />
CHORUS 2<br />
No I ain’t workin’ on Christmas this year<br />
‘Cus I’d rather be with my family than here<br />
So you can take this job and shove it,<br />
‘Cus I never did really love it<br />
No I ain’t workin’ on Christmas this year<br />
CHORUS 3<br />
And I ain’t workin’ on Christmas next year<br />
‘Cus I’d rather be with my family right here<br />
well, the hours and pay are crappy<br />
so I’d rather be broke and happy<br />
No, I ain’t workin’ on Christmas next year<br />
VERSE 4<br />
And all my friends and family<br />
We all stayed home so happily<br />
And no one worked on Christmas<br />
Not even store clerks worked on Christmas<br />
Not even truck drivers worked on Christmas<br />
Not even waitresses worked on Christmas<br />
No, we all stayed home on Christmas this year<br />
(Except for Santa Claus, but he only works one day a<br />
year anyway)<br />
To listen click this link...<br />
© 1/30/18<br />
Rollin Jewett<br />
BRIDGE<br />
I don’t care how much you’re gonna pay<br />
Just for one day leave it alone<br />
‘Cus Christmas don’t last but one day<br />
And it’s a day we should all be home<br />
VERSE 3<br />
Well, I lost my job but I don’t care<br />
‘Cus I never did really like it there<br />
And I know I’ll find a better job somewhere<br />
And I’ll tell my new boss right way<br />
That there’s a certain holiday<br />
that I ain’t never gonna work<br />
and that’s Christmas, so there<br />
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Rollin Jewett<br />
On Christmas<br />
There are songs I’m literally embarrassed to tell anyone how<br />
long they took me to write, lest one get the false impression<br />
that I’m a careless hack of a songwriter. But really, several<br />
of what I consider to be my best songs have been the easiest<br />
to write. So easy, in fact, that they almost write themselves<br />
because the ideas, rhymes and word flow seems to come<br />
so effortlessly. “I Ain’tWorkin’ on Christmas” is one of<br />
those songs. I wrote it barely a year ago and have almost no<br />
recollection of having written it. I know I started with the<br />
title. After that, it’s a blur.But let’s start with the title: A man<br />
proclaims he’s not working on Christmas. Easy enough. Then<br />
what happens? Those were the questions I wanted to answer.<br />
According to statistics, millions of people will work on<br />
Christmas day every year. And the numbers keep growing.<br />
Let’s consider some of the obvious folks that will have to<br />
work: doctors, nurses, policemen, firemen, caregivers, utility<br />
workers, clergy, and journalists. Beyond that, however, there<br />
are many others that, due to the profitability of remaining<br />
open when many businesses are closed, are forced to work:<br />
these are store clerks, grocery clerks, truck drivers, and<br />
restaurant workers, etc., who are not volunteering to work on<br />
Christmas, but are forced to by employers eager to make a<br />
buck on a holiday when stores are traditionally closed.<br />
Christmas used to be an untouchable holiday. Everyone other<br />
than the necessary above-mentioned workers had the day<br />
off to be with their families. In fact, so was Thanksgiving in<br />
America…until “Black Friday” came along and shook things<br />
up, breaking that traditional mold. According to Wikipedia<br />
regarding Black Friday for many years, it was common for<br />
retailers to open at 6:00 a.m.on Friday morning after<br />
Thanksgiving. But in the late 2000s many had crept to 5:00 or<br />
4:00. This was taken to a new extreme in 2011, when several<br />
retailers opened at midnight for the first time. In 2012, Walmart<br />
and several other retailers announced that they would<br />
open most of their stores at 8:00 p.m. on Thanksgiving Day,<br />
prompting calls for a walkout among some workers. In 2014,<br />
stores such as JCPenney, Best Buy, and Radio Shack opened<br />
at 5:00 PM on Thanksgiving Day while stores such as Target,<br />
Walmart, Belk, and Sears opened at 6:00 PM on Thanksgiving<br />
Day. Three states, Rhode Island, Maine, and Massachusetts,<br />
prohibit large supermarkets, big box stores, and<br />
department stores from opening on Thanksgiving.<br />
some quality time with their loved ones. My belief is that<br />
those who want to work on Christmas, due to necessity or<br />
religious beliefs, should be allowed. But those who want to<br />
stay home with their families should be allowed to do that as<br />
well -- without fear of losing their jobs (like the man in the<br />
song).<br />
Rollin Jewett bio<br />
Singer/songwriter Rollin Jewett grew up in South Florida<br />
and has lived in New York, Los Angeles and Phoenix, to<br />
name a few influences. Music has always been a priority in<br />
Rollin’s life and he’s been writing songs for as long as he can<br />
remember. In addition to singing and songwriting, Rollin<br />
has also written and acted in several films and is a published<br />
poet, playwright & short story writer. In 2016, Rollin’s outlaw<br />
rocker “Ride Tall” was a prize winner 2016 IMSTA FESTA<br />
International Songwriting Competition in Chicago. In 2015,<br />
Rollin’s heartfelt love song “Arizona Sun” was also a finalist<br />
in the same competition. Rollin has licensed several songs in<br />
top platforms and is featured on several international compilation<br />
albums. His musical influences range from rock to<br />
country to folk to alternative to pop. An avid world traveler,<br />
Rollin currently makes his home in North Carolina and is<br />
presently working on new songs for an upcoming album.<br />
For website follow this link....<br />
My thought was “What’s next?” Christmas, of course! And it<br />
seems to be happening. More and more retailers and restaurants<br />
are now open on Christmas day, forcing workers, many<br />
who would rather be home enjoying quiet time with their<br />
families, to be on duty so their employers can make a few<br />
extra holiday dollars. So…the song is a reaction against that<br />
materialistic mentality and an outspoken retort on behalf of<br />
the working men (and women) who simply want to spend<br />
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Real Chris<br />
We’ve been together for a long time<br />
We’ve spent together very good and bad times<br />
It’s time we can afford a better ride<br />
And I hope could be now<br />
We could enjoy real Christmas time<br />
Let’s set the table like we used to do<br />
Bringing the wine and set the meal too<br />
Let’s stick together and bring back the joy<br />
And spend again real Christmas time<br />
Bridge:<br />
(Ahhhhh) If we keep together with the lights<br />
on<br />
(Ahhhhh) If we hold together our love<br />
everyday strong<br />
(Ooohhhhh) If we keep the faith around our<br />
hearts<br />
Kissing each other under the mistletoe<br />
We’ll go beyond in real christmas time<br />
We’ll be together wishing for hope<br />
Finally we have the house of our dreams<br />
Now it’s time we can afford a better ride<br />
For you and me<br />
For our kids<br />
For our Moms<br />
Rejoice the love with the miracle<br />
In real Christmas time<br />
Let’s keep peace in the world and raise the<br />
love<br />
Beyond the real christmas time<br />
Let’s keep the friendship around us all<br />
Beyond the real christmas time<br />
Share compassion around the world<br />
Beyond the real Christmas time<br />
To listen click this link...<br />
Real Christmas Time<br />
(Music + Lyrics By<br />
Bamil Gutiérrez Collado<br />
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Bamil Gutiérrez Collado<br />
tmas Time<br />
Sacred Healing Songs/ASCAP©<strong>2019</strong><br />
All Rights Reserved)<br />
‘Real Christmas Time’ is a soft rock song about<br />
bringing back to present the old things, subjects that<br />
caused emotions and joy on our Holiday lives like<br />
things used to be.<br />
The expression of things that used to be the special<br />
times, memories, peace, love and kindness to all<br />
living beings. What we wish to have for our closer<br />
loved ones like our Moms, our Kids, ourselves in a<br />
relationship.<br />
Being good people to our projim and the deserve to<br />
enjoy better things and have the right moment to<br />
reach for good. When we could have all those things<br />
that fill our special moments and as we get closer to<br />
the Holiday seasons enjoy a ‘better ride’, which for me<br />
is meaning of ‘wishes for happier moment’. The gift of<br />
giving to the world softer times is part of the purpose<br />
of this song to carry a message to society and share<br />
not only love, but the spirit and the real Christmas<br />
spirit meaning that is hope.<br />
In a whole, live the moment beyond the christmas<br />
time. Was written in soft mode considering the<br />
lyrics and to give a more nostalgic ambience. This is<br />
a kind of message that catch us all in any moment of<br />
our lives bringing back the memories. Christmas is<br />
a very strange yet at the same time beautiful season<br />
where it looks like we are opening a chest of<br />
reminiscings. ‘Real Christmas Time’ the best way I<br />
felt to show how we enjoy reviving our wishes and<br />
makes them come true asking Jesus for a Holiday<br />
miracle.<br />
Happy Holidays Everyone And Lots Of Blessings!!!<br />
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in:<br />
https://www.mixposure.com/bamil/audio<br />
http://www.facebook.com/groups/FANSBAMIL<br />
http://www.facebook.com/JazzElements<br />
https://twitter.com/bamilMusic<br />
http://ourstage.com/profile/Bamil<br />
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click this link...<br />
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Christma<br />
Chorus:<br />
It might be a holiday to you but it’s, Christmas to me<br />
A time filled with tradition love and family<br />
I put it on display each year for all the world to see<br />
It might be a holiday to you but it’s, Christmas to me<br />
Verse:<br />
I remember as a child every Christmas Eve<br />
We’d sing our favorite carols as we decorate the tree<br />
Mom would tell us stories; we’d bow our heads and pray<br />
Jesus our saviour was born that holy day<br />
We’d pray for peace in the world so all can enjoy<br />
The true meaning of Christmas, the birth of a baby boy<br />
Chorus:<br />
It might be a holiday to you but it’s, Christmas to me<br />
A time filled with tradition love and family<br />
I put it on display each year for all the world to see<br />
It might be a holiday to you but it’s, Christmas to me<br />
Verse:<br />
Politicians try to tell us, take Christ out of the day<br />
To hide all the symbols we use to celebrate<br />
They say it might offend those who don’t believe<br />
Let me tell you mister now you’re offending me<br />
Chorus:<br />
It might be a holiday to you but it’s, Christmas to me<br />
A time filled with tradition love and family<br />
I put it on display each year for all the world to see<br />
It might be a holiday to you but it’s, Christmas to me<br />
Bridge:<br />
Why must everything be politically correct<br />
All we need to do is treat each other....with some respect<br />
Chorus:<br />
It might be a holiday to you but it’s, Christmas to me<br />
A time filled with tradition love and family<br />
I put it on display each year for all the world to see<br />
It might be a holiday to you but it’s, Christmas to me<br />
Tag:<br />
It might be a holiday to you but it’s Christmas, Christmas<br />
to me<br />
Merry Christmas Everybody!!!<br />
To listen follow this link.<br />
Christmas To Me<br />
Words and Music by Don Murdock (SOCAN) & Brian<br />
Dolph (SOCAN)<br />
Copyright © September 02, 2013 by Don Murdock &<br />
Brian Dolph<br />
Christmas To Me – The Story<br />
Christmas To Me is a song that takes a stand on the<br />
political correctness that has now become associated with<br />
the season. Some would argue there is a “War on<br />
Christmas.” If that is the case, then Don Murdock is<br />
battling back. Christmas To Me expresses what a lot of<br />
people feel. “It might be a holiday to you, but it’s<br />
Christmas to me.”<br />
Don was raised a Catholic and as a youngster has<br />
memories of attending Midnight Mass on Christmas Eve,<br />
of carolling door to door, and of Christmas concerts at<br />
school. Like many Canadians he grew up with traditions<br />
of decorating Christmas trees and spending time with<br />
family and sharing Christmas dinner. He recalls fondly<br />
wonders and excitement of children on Christmas<br />
morning. And of course, he always remembers the true<br />
meaning of Christmas, the birth of a baby boy....<br />
Over the past few years Don has seen these beliefs, these<br />
values he holds dear chipped away at by bureaucrats and<br />
CEO’s. Bit by bit and piece by piece, traditions he grew<br />
up are being dismantled and tossed aside. Greetings like<br />
“Merry Christmas” being replaced with “Happy Holidays.”<br />
Christmas concerts and plays replaced with “Winter<br />
Solstice Celebratory Pageants.” It is his opinion that by<br />
trying NOT to offend others by using traditional greetings<br />
we have begun to offend those who celebrate Christmas.<br />
Christmas To Me is Don’s way of saying, celebrate what<br />
you want to. If you celebrate Kwanzaa, then have a Joyous<br />
Kwanzaa. If you are Jewish have a Happy Hanukkah. But<br />
don’t tell him that he cannot say Merry Christmas!! Quit<br />
telling him he is buying a holiday tree!! And stop forcing<br />
employees to greet customers with Happy Holidays rather<br />
than with Merry Christmas...<br />
Like the song says, all we need to do is treat each other<br />
with respect!<br />
• Fun Fact: 4 days before the song was to be<br />
recorded Don Murdock and Brian Dolph decided to<br />
completely rewrite the music and lyric. The pressure was<br />
on as the studio and musicians were already booked for<br />
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Don Murdock<br />
s To Me<br />
the session in Nashville.<br />
Christmas To Me – The Release & Controversy<br />
“Christmas To Me”, by Don Murdock, flew in under the<br />
musical radar and landed at #3 on the Canada Country<br />
Aircheck Top 10 list of favourite Canadian Country<br />
Christmas songs. The song was co-written by Don<br />
Murdock and Brian Dolph, who also produced the<br />
track.<br />
Released for the 2013 holiday season, “Christmas To<br />
Me” had an immediate and controversial impact. News<br />
organizations from across the country, including The<br />
National Post and CBC Radio One, featured the song in<br />
news stories and radio programs. Don also performed<br />
the song live on the prime time SUN News TV program<br />
The Source. Each time an online story featuring the<br />
song appeared the comment section filled with debate<br />
about the “War on Christmas” and the song.<br />
“Christmas To Me” has now become a regular part of<br />
the syndicated holiday program, A Country Christmas,<br />
heard annually for over 30 years across Canada, the<br />
USA and Europe. Each year the song grows in<br />
popularity here in Canada and around the world<br />
bringing Don Murdock new fans to his brand of honest<br />
country music.<br />
Don Murdock – Mini Bio<br />
Born and raised in Oshawa, Don Murdock is a former<br />
firefighter who was awarded Canada’s Medal of Bravery<br />
by Governor General Jeanne Sauvé. He also established<br />
the firefighting training program at Durham College<br />
where he was a professor. Music has always been part of<br />
Don’s life. He has been playing guitar and<br />
performing from the time he was a teenager. It is only<br />
in the past few years, however that Don began writing<br />
his own songs, eventually recording an 8 song EP. He<br />
has released a number of songs to radio and his music<br />
has appeared on thousands of radio playlists around the<br />
world.<br />
https://www.reverbnation.com/donm<br />
https://www.facebook.com/don.murdock.319<br />
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Signs Of<br />
Signs of Christmas<br />
Copyright @2017 by Mike Turner<br />
All Rights Reserved<br />
Chorus:<br />
Presents wrapped in paper<br />
Ribbons, bells and bows<br />
Stockings on the mantle<br />
Hanging mistletoe<br />
Tinseled tree in window<br />
Wreath upon the door<br />
All the signs of Christmas<br />
Here again once more<br />
Verse 1:<br />
Lights in festive colors<br />
Wink in falling snow<br />
Visions of reindeer and sleigh in flight<br />
Carolers on our doorstep<br />
Voices high and low<br />
Singing songs of peace and joy so bright<br />
[Instrumental Break]<br />
Verse 2:<br />
Snuggling by the fire<br />
Holding you so near<br />
Wrapped in a soft blanket warm and tight<br />
Words of love and caring<br />
Whispered in your ear<br />
My favorite gift is in my arms tonight<br />
Chorus:<br />
Presents wrapped in paper<br />
Ribbons, bells and bows<br />
Stockings on the mantle<br />
Hanging mistletoe<br />
Tinseled tree in window<br />
Wreath upon the door<br />
All the signs of Christmas<br />
Here again once more<br />
Tag:<br />
Yes, signs of Christmas here for us once more<br />
To listen follow this link...<br />
“Signs of Christmas”<br />
by Mike Turner<br />
My musical interests, as a songwriter, performer and<br />
listener, are to say the least eclectic, ranging from the<br />
blues to folk, country, jazz, pop and gospel. A small<br />
sub-genre of my songwriting catalog are pieces in<br />
the, “Great American Songbook,” tradition – think<br />
melodies and lyrics by such luminaries as Gershwin,<br />
Porter, Berlin (at least those are my goals – not that I<br />
have fully realized them!).<br />
So with the Christmas season closing in, I found<br />
myself wanting to write, not just a holiday song, but<br />
one in the “Great American Songbook” tradition.<br />
I was particularly drawn to the idea of a song that<br />
recalled some of the great Christmas albums and<br />
singles of the past by artists like Bing Crosby, Frank<br />
Sinatra, Ella Fitzgerald, Judy Garland.<br />
I also wanted a song rich in imagery – partly because<br />
the Christmas season, with all its decorations and<br />
colors, lent itself to such imagery; and partly because<br />
the lyrics of many of my songs tend to “tell” rather<br />
than show, and I wanted to challenge myself to<br />
produce a piece that led the listener to “see” and<br />
experience the story, not just “hear” it.<br />
In crafting the lyric, first, I went for simple scenes<br />
and symbols that many could relate to having seen,<br />
and which would readily evoke both images and<br />
pleasant memories – things like ribbons, bows,<br />
wrapped presents, wreaths. Second, I brought in<br />
some other senses – primarily, hearing, with references<br />
to carolers and their songs; and touch, with a<br />
mention of soft, warm blankets.<br />
And, third, I wanted to capture some of the romance<br />
of the season – snuggling with a partner by a fire,<br />
sharing love together – the goal, again, being to get<br />
the listener not just to “hear,” but to “feel” the warmth<br />
and joy of Christmas.<br />
The structure follows the genre, particularly in beginning<br />
and closing with the chorus. Musically, the piece<br />
is mid- to up-tempo, intended for a “crooner” style<br />
delivery.<br />
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Mike Turner<br />
Christmas<br />
I’m happy with the result – to me, the song captures<br />
the vibe of the genre and the scenes of the holiday I<br />
was aiming for. My recording of the song has<br />
garnered some radio and Internet streaming play<br />
over the past two holiday seasons – but I’d love to<br />
hear what a more accomplished vocalist, with a fuller<br />
arrangement, might bring to the piece. All you classic<br />
pop/jazz vocalists/recording artists out there, you<br />
know the present you can give me – and, Christmas<br />
is coming…<br />
Bio:<br />
Mike Turner retired to the U.S. Gulf Coast after a<br />
27-year career as a Federal law enforcement<br />
executive. While he grew up in a musical family,<br />
Mike had never pursued performing or<br />
songwriting – until an adult education class in<br />
ukulele ignited long-dormant musical yearnings, and<br />
he’s never looked back. In the past 7 years, Mike’s<br />
completed over 120 original songs, from blues to<br />
folk, country and gospel. His recordings have<br />
received radio and Internet streaming play in the<br />
U.S., UK, Europe, New Zealand and on the Armed<br />
Forces Radio Network. Mike was named 2016 Male<br />
Gospel Entertainer of the Year by the Alabama Music<br />
Association; and 2017 Male Gospel Entertainer of the<br />
Year by the North America Country Music<br />
Associations Interantional (NACMAI).<br />
You can follow Mike’s music at:<br />
www.MikeTurnerSongerwriter.com<br />
and on FaceBook @MikeTurnerSongwriter<br />
YouTube https://m.youtube.com/channel/UCEnNxm0y6KELGPo6k7oMajg<br />
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Christmas<br />
Lullaby<br />
Christmas Lullaby<br />
Close your eyes until the day breaks<br />
Rest your head upon your pillow<br />
Hear the whisper of the snow flakes<br />
Dancing soft across your window<br />
Let your dreams begin to take hold<br />
As you wander with the Sandman<br />
Through those memories of pure gold<br />
To when Christmas magic began<br />
Silent night (Peace on earth)<br />
Holy night (Harmony)<br />
All is calm (Peace on earth)<br />
All is bright (Let it be)<br />
Once in royal David’s City<br />
Stood a lowly cattle shed<br />
Where a mother laid her baby<br />
In a manger for his bed<br />
Round yon virgins (Peace on earth)<br />
Mother and child (Harmony)<br />
Holy infant so (Peace on earth)<br />
Tender and mild (Let it be)<br />
Mary was that Mother mild<br />
Jesus Christ her little child<br />
He came down to earth from Heaven<br />
Who is God and Lord and all<br />
And his shelter was a manger<br />
And his cradle was a stall<br />
Sleep (Peace on earth)<br />
In heavenly peace (Harmony)<br />
Sleep (Peace on earth)<br />
In heavenly peace (let it be)<br />
Jane Shields (C)<br />
Christmas Eve<br />
Silent Night<br />
Christmas Eve (Silent Night)<br />
It’s all so very still tonight<br />
The night air is crisp and clear<br />
Snow is laying pure and bright<br />
It’s Christmas Eve now everywhere<br />
Snuggled up safely in warm beds<br />
Children dream sugar plum dreams<br />
Fantasies run through their heads<br />
As tomorrows happiness streams<br />
On Christmas Eve (Silent night)<br />
On Christmas Eve (Holy Night)<br />
On Christmas Eve (All is calm)<br />
On Christmas Eve (All is bright)<br />
Outside the magic fills the air<br />
The atmosphere comes alive<br />
Silence strains through winters ears<br />
For Christmas day’s yet to arrive<br />
On Christmas Eve (Silent night)<br />
On Christmas Eve (Holy Night)<br />
On Christmas Eve (All is calm)<br />
On Christmas Eve (All is bright)<br />
Every child awaits their treats<br />
Toys and books and games and sweets<br />
Cinnamon and candy canes<br />
Barbie dolls, electric trains<br />
On Christmas Eve (Silent night)<br />
On Christmas Eve (Holy Night)<br />
On Christmas Eve (All is calm)<br />
On Christmas Eve (All is bright)<br />
Round yon virgin Mother and Child<br />
Holy infant so tender and mild<br />
Sleep in heavenly peace<br />
Sleep in heavenly peace<br />
Jane Shields (C)<br />
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Jane Shields<br />
Merry Christmas<br />
Merry Christmas<br />
It’s Christmas time so lets all pray for peace<br />
Families together and all wars to cease<br />
Light up your candles for loved ones above<br />
Share laughter and joy with those that you love<br />
As you sit together beneath the tree<br />
Exchanging gifts wrapped in fine frippery<br />
The Christmas cheer begins to come through<br />
Remember each moment, it’s special to you<br />
Christmas is time for families to share<br />
Drawing them closer to show that they care<br />
Bringing smiles and laughter to young and old<br />
With family traditions for you to uphold<br />
Please take a moment from your Christmas day<br />
To offer a prayer for the homeless today<br />
May they find some peace,<br />
and hope and good cheerAnd may C<br />
hristmas be special for them next year<br />
So here’s my own wish to one and to all<br />
Christmas is joy for the great and the small<br />
But for those on their own it’s a sad sad day<br />
Perhaps you can brighten it in some small way<br />
Merry Christmas everyone. x<br />
singing to her child in the bedroom on Christmas<br />
Eve, trying to get the child to sleep. I’m really not at<br />
all musically minded, but I kind of like the thought<br />
of mixing a few Christmas Carols that might<br />
compliment each other as a lullaby.<br />
Likewise, Christmas Eve (Silent Night) is also a<br />
mixture, this time four verses with the chorus<br />
constructed with the addition of the Christmas<br />
Carol Silent Night at the end of each line. In my<br />
mind I hear that part of the chorus sung by an<br />
angelic voice. After the final chorus is the<br />
remainder of the first verse of Silent Night, again I<br />
‘hear’ this sung by an angelic voice.<br />
Merry Christmas is the very first Christmas lyric I<br />
attempted to write, in late 2017. I tried to end it<br />
with a message to all, to remember those less<br />
fortunate than ourselves on Christmas Day,<br />
because there are so many people all across the<br />
world who are not and perhaps never will be as<br />
fortunate as we are. The least we can do is to look<br />
out for each other over the Christmas period, and<br />
perhaps a short visit or telephone call to someone<br />
who is spending it alone is a small way of<br />
brightening their day for them.<br />
Wherever you are in the world, I wish you all a safe<br />
and happy Christmas day. xx<br />
Jane Shields (C)<br />
Hi to all, I’m Jane Shields, and I have been<br />
writing lyrics for three years now. I thought since<br />
it’s a Christmas issue I would include three<br />
different Christmas lyrics I’ve put together over the<br />
years. None of them have, to my knowledge, yet<br />
been recorded, as I am not a musician, and my<br />
singing leaves much to be desired...<br />
My first offering, Christmas Lullaby, is a bit of a<br />
mash up of a couple of Christmas Carols, starting<br />
off with two verses in which I imagined a mother<br />
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The Biggest T<br />
I want it to surprise<br />
I need it to be spectacular<br />
Im looking for tremendous<br />
This time to be huge<br />
I want it to be massive and<br />
I need it to be strong<br />
Im looking for enormous<br />
This time in Extra large<br />
I want it to be magnificent and<br />
I need it to be grand<br />
Im looking for voluminous<br />
This time to be immense<br />
I want it to be beautiful<br />
ohhh I need significant<br />
Im looking for attractive<br />
This time to be impressive<br />
Chorus<br />
I want it, to look good on facebook<br />
To be the best on instagram<br />
Ohh yeah I want our pictures<br />
to be in magazines<br />
I only want the biggest<br />
The biggest tree of all<br />
I like it to be huge<br />
huge and really tall<br />
I bought the rings already<br />
now all I need is snow<br />
I will put them in a present<br />
and once you found them<br />
I’ll propose !<br />
Oowoohh, I bought the rings already<br />
Now all I need is snow !<br />
I want it to be greater<br />
I would like it to be stunning<br />
Im looking for the best<br />
This time to be incomparable<br />
I want it to be dominant and<br />
I need it to be capital<br />
Im searching for exellence<br />
This time to be superior<br />
I want it to be celebrated and<br />
I hope it will be famous<br />
Im looking for distinguished<br />
This time to be amazing<br />
I want it to be wonderful ohhoww<br />
and I would love supreme<br />
Im looking for superb<br />
This time to be magnificent !<br />
Chorus<br />
I want it to be marvellous and<br />
I would love incredible<br />
Im looking for sensational<br />
This time to be most exceptional<br />
I want it to be dazzling<br />
I need most beautiful<br />
Im looking for extreme<br />
This time to be unbelievable<br />
I want it to be premium<br />
and I’m dreaming of sublime<br />
Hoping for supernatural<br />
This time to be unthinkable<br />
Chorus<br />
End<br />
A short introduction.<br />
I’m a songwriter for a year n<br />
I wrote about 50 lyrics in 1 y<br />
I have had my up and down<br />
My tips when you’re stuck: B<br />
you’re stuck on a sentence: d<br />
whole verse and start over, i<br />
once got stuck for 2 hours an<br />
your really stuck you should<br />
My tips for a writersblock: I<br />
assignments like:<br />
• Has to be funny and have a<br />
• <strong>Write</strong> something where yo<br />
of four<br />
• <strong>Write</strong> using a storytelling s<br />
The Story Spine: Pixar’s 4th<br />
https://www.google.com/am<br />
com/2013/03/22/the-story-s<br />
Or use this link, this one is v<br />
https://www.aerogrammestu<br />
ars-22-rules-of-storytelling/<br />
In short a short version:<br />
1. Choose a character who’s<br />
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Richard Solleveld<br />
ree Of All<br />
ow.<br />
ear, mainly cause I’m in between jobs. So<br />
s and wanted to share it with you.<br />
elieve me, I got stuck a lot of times. When<br />
elete not just the sentence, delete the<br />
nstead of looking for a word to rhyme. I<br />
d got moody looking for a rhyme. When<br />
consider this option.<br />
work a lot with<br />
long chorus<br />
u only use three sentences in verse, instead<br />
pine, for example this one.<br />
Rule of Storytelling:<br />
p/s/www.aerogrammestudio.<br />
pine-pixars-4th-rule-of-storytelling/amp/<br />
ery helpful<br />
dio.com/2013/03/07/pixeasy<br />
to indentify with<br />
2 Descripe the current situation<br />
3. Descripe a goal<br />
4. Descripe how to accomplish this<br />
5. Create a situation which is very recognisable<br />
My results were surprising, didn’t know I had it in me. Go ahead and<br />
try it. Good luck with writing!<br />
Now on to Christmas.<br />
I wrote a Christmas song and I wanted it to be<br />
different from the rest and to be about now: <strong>2019</strong>.<br />
1. It’s about showing off, a need to have the most beautiful, expensive<br />
tree and decoration, totally<br />
forgetting what Christmasmas is all about.<br />
2. Then also, the opposite, its all because of love, in the chorus.<br />
The question for the listeners will be:<br />
1. All this showing off is crazy, waste of money. There are other ways to<br />
prove this.<br />
2. Or it’s ok, cause this persons aim is to make the other person see<br />
how big his/ her love is.<br />
Wanna read more lyrics?<br />
http://www.geencovers.nl/<br />
Then go to Lyrics-English (at the bottom)<br />
and choose a category<br />
Or follow me on facebook<br />
https://m.facebook.com/geen.covers?refid=8<br />
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Just<br />
Here it is Christmas Eve and I sit here all alone<br />
Retired from the working world<br />
senior living my new home<br />
Seeing visions of some special days<br />
of the past I still know<br />
They dance around inside my mind<br />
as I watched my children grow<br />
I remember each one had a flare<br />
trying hard to get things done<br />
So my kids have a memory each one a special one<br />
Time has a way of giving life to us to call our own<br />
When the holidays roll around<br />
don’t forget to call your Mom<br />
(chorus)<br />
Just call to say I love you just call to say you’re there<br />
And let me know that memories<br />
are more than my gray hair<br />
Just call to say I love you just call to say you care<br />
Wish your Mom a Merry Christmas<br />
and a Happy New Year<br />
Hours I spend waiting<br />
you know sometimes they seem so long<br />
Surrounded by ceramic gifts<br />
give to me from everyone<br />
The telephone hanging on the wall<br />
and the doorbell never rang<br />
Both of them alone with me<br />
where a single stocking hangs<br />
And there’s a card that came two weeks ago<br />
stands on my old tv<br />
Says mom we’ll be opening gifts<br />
serving dinner around three<br />
If you want you can come early<br />
if you need a ride it’s free<br />
Just call I’ll come and get you just call if you need me<br />
I lost my mom at an early age<br />
before a family of my own<br />
And I would give you anything<br />
to hear her called grandma<br />
Neglected I could never be too busy to call my Mom<br />
And never would that well run dry<br />
the well that I called home<br />
(chorus)<br />
Just call to say I love you just call to say you’re there<br />
And let me know that memories<br />
are more than my gray hair<br />
Just call to say I love you just call to say you care<br />
Wish your Mom a Merry Christmas<br />
and a Happy New Year<br />
Here it is Christmas Eve and I sit here all alone<br />
Words n music<br />
Nellie Zold & Ric Angus<br />
2003<br />
To listen click this link...<br />
( chorus)<br />
Just call to say I love you just call to say you’re there<br />
And let me know that memories<br />
are more than my gray hair<br />
Just call to say I love you just call to say you care<br />
Wish your Mom a Merry Christmas<br />
and a Happy New Year<br />
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Ric Angus<br />
Call<br />
This song was written one particular 2002 Christmas<br />
for my Mom. I was living in Menomonie,<br />
Wisconsin at that time about 300 miles away from<br />
her place. And so I called my Mom about 11:30pm<br />
and we talked into the New Year. Mom sounded at<br />
that time to be in the Christmas Spirit.<br />
I had a doctors appointment in March of 2003 close<br />
to my Mom’s so I arrived towards the evening kinna<br />
tired. So time being a little later into the evening we<br />
called it a day after a brief visit.<br />
I had sat down in her easy chair and noticed to the<br />
one side of the chair a spiral notebook. It read (Here<br />
it is Christmas Eve and I can’t believe not a one of<br />
my five kids called to wish me a Merry Christmas.<br />
I would give you anything if I could call and talk to<br />
my Mom and wish her a MerryChristmas.)<br />
You see, my Mom found her Mom on the kitchen<br />
floor with a shotgun wound to her head two months<br />
pregnant with me. It continued (Well, Rick called at<br />
11:30pm.)<br />
As I was reading this I started crying and started<br />
writing this song called ‘Just Call’.<br />
The rest of the song would be continued with<br />
collaboration from Mom. We dedicate this song<br />
every year for all Mom’s.<br />
Coincidence, I dunno, however at the release of this<br />
song Nora Jones released one of her songs and in it<br />
said ‘I don’t know why I didn’t call’.....<br />
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Christmas Whe<br />
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Linda Harborth<br />
re Did You Go<br />
Seems oh, so long ago…<br />
Memories of softly falling snow…<br />
Excitement and anticipation,<br />
Of what was to come,<br />
Danced in my mind…<br />
Guess I moved on – left Christmas behind.<br />
Where did Christmas go,<br />
Seems like a lifetime ago,<br />
Where did it run,<br />
I’ve searched high,<br />
I’ve searched low,<br />
Christmas - where did you go?<br />
Why can’t I find you…<br />
I need to start anew…<br />
Where’s the spark, the joy, the magic…<br />
I use to know…<br />
The ties that bind…<br />
Find what I’ve left behind...<br />
Where did Christmas go,<br />
Seems like a lifetime ago,<br />
Where did it run,<br />
I’ve searched high,<br />
I’ve searched low,<br />
Christmas - where did you go?<br />
<br />
Will I learn or will I fall,<br />
Life without Christmas is no life at all,<br />
Change my world one heartbeat at a time,<br />
Undo my wrongs…<br />
Run back to where I belong,<br />
Remember my Christmas song...<br />
Where did Christmas go,<br />
Seems like a lifetime ago,<br />
Where did it run,<br />
I’ve searched high,<br />
I’ve searched low,<br />
Christmas - where did you go?<br />
I wrote “Christmas Where Did You Go” during a<br />
particularly low point in my life.<br />
It seemed as though nothing mattered in my day to<br />
day life anymore. It all boiled down to a daily grind<br />
to make a buck.<br />
I had lost my emotions and humanity. My world had<br />
turned black and white. I had lost my rainbow of<br />
colors.<br />
I thought back on what where my highlights in my<br />
life were and it always came back to my childhood<br />
at Christmas time. The birth of Christ. The wonder<br />
and excitement that stirred at this time.<br />
The thoughts of what was to come. It was always a<br />
magical time.<br />
Back story:<br />
I am a songwriter only. Others re-record my work.<br />
I started writing in 2010 on a whim to see if I could<br />
do it. I recorded my songs in Nashville.<br />
My work has been used in various cable TV shows, a<br />
trailer for an award winning indie movie “Three Of A<br />
Kind”, by The Little River Band “Forever Me, Forever<br />
You” on the album “Cuts Like A Diamond” and<br />
various up and coming artists here in America and<br />
Worldwide.<br />
My publisher is Ken Barton Publishing.<br />
My work is out on SoundCloud<br />
https://soundcloud.com/goldie-locks-1<br />
Click this link to listen...<br />
Copyright 2011, Ken Barton Publishing, L.A.<br />
Harbort<br />
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Beneath Th<br />
There’s a Snowman in the front yard,<br />
The lights are all strung on the tree,<br />
The presents are wrapped and in their place,<br />
And the kid’s are being good as can be,<br />
The caroler’s winding their way<br />
down the street,<br />
Are all making a joyful noise,<br />
The smell of the coffee and the pumpkin pie,<br />
Add flavor to our holiday joys...<br />
Evergreens are bowing to pressure,<br />
From branches that are laden with snow,<br />
Smoke from the chimney’s all over town,<br />
Swirls wherever the wind does blow,<br />
Should the temperature fall<br />
a little lower tonight,<br />
By only three or four more degrees,<br />
We’ll probably get<br />
a little more snow on the ground,<br />
And the pond’s are all sure to freeze...<br />
Family gathers ‘round the fireplace,<br />
Waiting for the stockings to be hung,<br />
The feeling of Christmas is in the air,<br />
It brings excitement to the old and the young,<br />
Soon Santa will be making his visit,<br />
So off to bed all the children will go,<br />
But before we turn in for the evening,<br />
Why don’t we meet beneath the mistletoe,<br />
I want to wish you a Merry Christmas,<br />
Beneath the mistletoe<br />
Words and Music by Gary Snead<br />
Copyright © 2006<br />
To listen click this link....<br />
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Gary Snead<br />
e Mistletoe<br />
I’m a singer songwriter, living currently in<br />
Metro NYC, in the sub genre of country<br />
music known as Trop Rock. As a performer<br />
and frontman for over 20 years in the genre,<br />
it can best be described as Jimmy Buffett<br />
inspired songs about Beaches, Bars, Boats<br />
and Ballads, to steal the title of his box set!<br />
It’s fun music.<br />
This song comes from my love of all things<br />
Christmas. It truly is my favorite time of the<br />
year!<br />
To hear more of my music, please feel free to<br />
visit:<br />
https://garysnead.bandcamp.com/music<br />
I started this song on the way to a club gig<br />
in Charlottesville, Virginia, and finished it<br />
while awaiting my flight home in the<br />
Departure Terminal at JFK after a trip to<br />
Long Island. It was inspired by Nat King<br />
Cole’s version of The Christmas Song.<br />
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The Spirit O<br />
Christmas comes but once a year<br />
A day of gifts, a day of prayers<br />
We share our love with next of kin<br />
We greet our friends...the smiles begin<br />
The Spirit…...Of Christmas<br />
Colored lights adorn the trees<br />
Icicles sparkle from the eaves<br />
Dreams of palms, dreams of snow<br />
Dreams fulfilled under mistletoe<br />
The Spirit……Of Christmas<br />
We sing, we dance...we raise our glass<br />
A toast to Peace...may it ever last<br />
Then to the table for the feast<br />
For later on...we all will sleep<br />
(Short solo: humming first line of Jingle<br />
Bells)<br />
The Spirit…...Of Christmas<br />
Christmas night is cold and clear<br />
Our hearts are full of warmth and cheer<br />
Endless stars now grace the sky<br />
I make a wish...on one so bright<br />
I hope that soon...we’ll find a way<br />
Our gifts ‘n smiles...our love ‘n prayers<br />
Will be a part of every day<br />
The Spirit Of Christmas...every day<br />
The Spirit Of Christmas…every day<br />
(Hum the Jinge Bell Line again)<br />
The Spirit…...Of Christmas<br />
The Spirit…...Of Christmas<br />
To listen please click this link...<br />
“TheSpirit Of Christmas” © 2013 Stanley<br />
Thompson aka: Sydney Westan<br />
People are always saying how they wish<br />
the love of family and the joy of the<br />
season should be shared more often than<br />
just around Christmas...that was the<br />
inspiration for this song.<br />
Family, love, celebration, peace and<br />
prayers should be shared every day of the<br />
year , not just on Christmas Day.<br />
Sydney Westan - Singer/Songwriter, aka<br />
Stan Thompson<br />
Music from the heart of our land... comin’<br />
from a Country music man.<br />
Singer/Songwriter Sydney Westan is<br />
committed to all original works of<br />
Country, Blues, Folk, Americana and<br />
Western music. His songs are crafted into<br />
heartfelt ballads, intriguing love songs,<br />
bluesy shuffles and some ‘just for fun’<br />
songs.<br />
Sydney has studied at Berlee College of<br />
Music in Boston, M.A., and has been<br />
writing songs, lyrics and poetry since the<br />
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Stanley Thompson<br />
f Christmas<br />
‘60’s’. He has performed in the Santa Fe<br />
/ Taos area for over a decade now.<br />
His shows blend dynamic<br />
acoustic/electric guitar playing with<br />
varied vocals, from a deep Country<br />
growl to smooth tenor and lively<br />
falsetto.<br />
He wears his heart on his sleeve, bears<br />
his soul in his lyrics and leaves you with<br />
a song to remember, so please ‘don’t just<br />
come to hear some music! Come and<br />
listen to the song!!’ He’s available for 2<br />
or 3 hour shows in the Santa Fe, Taos<br />
and Albuquerque area. For info on rates<br />
and bookings or to receive a promo CD<br />
505-699-5135<br />
AmericanSongspace.com/SydneyWestan<br />
YouTube.com/sydneywestan<br />
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Little Pi<br />
<strong>Dec</strong>ember 23rd not too many years ago<br />
the TV weatherman was promisin snow.<br />
I was tuckin my angle in after bedtime prayers.<br />
We’d bumped into Santa just a couple days before<br />
ringin a bell outside the hardware store.<br />
He wasn’t takin orders, but little hearts don’t care.<br />
She climbed right up on old Saint Nick’s knee<br />
smiling back at her momma and me<br />
and told him the treasures<br />
she’d be lookin for Christmas morn.<br />
That night in her bed, she was goin down her list,<br />
when out popped something her mom and I missed,<br />
our baby girl’s holiday wish we hadn’t heard before.<br />
“He’s bringin me a little pink kitty<br />
and he’ll bring it right here,<br />
with pretty green eyes, and soft furry ears.<br />
I know he’ll remember me. I’ve been a very good girl.<br />
I want a little pink kitty,<br />
more than anything in the world!”<br />
O’Dark Hundred, me and Poppy had a mission.<br />
I didn’t have to work and we weren’t going fishin,<br />
just tryin to help Santa<br />
make a Christmas wish come true.<br />
We put a hundred miles on my old truck.<br />
A couple rusty elves runnin low on luck<br />
with one more chore to check off<br />
before we were through.<br />
Spent the whole day… every store in town…<br />
not a single toy aisle I didn’t walk down.<br />
I was out of options, and losing my Yule Tide cheer.<br />
With daylight fadin, Poppy said “Boy,<br />
no big deal just buy another toy.”<br />
So I shook my head and said<br />
“Maybe I haven’t been clear!<br />
I need a little pink kitty,<br />
and I need it right here<br />
to keep Santa Clause in business<br />
for just another year…<br />
keep those reindeer flyin in her pretty little world.<br />
I need a little pink kitty for my pretty little girl.”<br />
One last stop at the grocery store,<br />
I was kicking myself…<br />
thought I could have done more<br />
to fill that empty wish waitin under our tree.<br />
Then across the street, peakin through the trees<br />
twinklin lights just as pretty as you please<br />
caught my eye, and I felt my spirit soar.<br />
There in the window, starin at me,<br />
the cutest little Kitty Cat you ever did see.<br />
But the lights were going out,<br />
so I made a beeline for the door.<br />
The kind old lady, on hearing my tale,<br />
said “Son you’re in luck, that kitty’s on sale,”<br />
then hugged my neck and said<br />
“On second thought, it’s on me!”<br />
I had a little pink kitty for my girl the next morn.<br />
I thought about that little barn<br />
where Grace was born.<br />
I realized then the lesson we’re meant to share.<br />
It’s not about the toys or the things we’re given.<br />
It’s all about the stuff that makes life worth livin,<br />
If you’ve got love your rich beyond compare!<br />
A few days later, thought I’d try to repay<br />
that sweet little shop keep who saved the day<br />
and invite her to help my family ring in the new year.<br />
I went back to that very same spot.<br />
There was nothing but a “pay-to-stay” parking lot.<br />
So I asked the attendant<br />
“Man! What’s going on here?”<br />
He said “There hasn’t been a toy store here….<br />
for 20 years.”<br />
Click here to listen...<br />
This song, which still gets me all misty when I sing it, tells<br />
a story about a modern-day holiday wish that the parent of<br />
any child who celebrates Christmas has inevitably made in<br />
desperation at one time or another: A youngster asks Santa<br />
for a present, but by the time mom and dad learn about it<br />
it’s not available anywhere. They desperately want to help<br />
Santa make that eleventh-hour wish come true, and to keep<br />
the magic of Christmas alive in their little girl’s heart, but after<br />
a daylong search… no luck. Late in the day, with the sun<br />
setting, when it seems unavoidable that disappointment will<br />
be lurking among the gifts under the tree Christmas morning,<br />
dad finds it!<br />
The song, “Little Pink Kitty,” which should be available<br />
on all major retail and streaming sites on November 25, is<br />
based on a completely true story from my own life. You can<br />
read a little more about at:<br />
https://www.thisislifesong.com/little-pink-kitty<br />
Whenever I feel stress creeping into my holiday season, I<br />
think back on that story, and it reminds me that just best<br />
because you grow up doesn’t mean you have to leave behind<br />
the awe and magic of Christmas.<br />
Spotify playlist link...<br />
Our website link...<br />
You Tube Video/lyrics link.....<br />
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nk Kitty<br />
Pete Marksteiner<br />
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Christma<br />
Verse<br />
Gran and granddads<br />
on the cheese and wine,<br />
The family’s here<br />
because its Christmas time,<br />
Lights and baubles hanging from the tree,<br />
And the mistletoe’s there<br />
just for you and me<br />
Verse<br />
Santa’s been and had his sweet mince pie,<br />
He came in the night and we all know why,<br />
Down the chimney with his big red sack,<br />
Put presents by the tree and went right back<br />
Chorus<br />
So come on everybody put your blues away,<br />
That time is here it’s Christmas Day,<br />
Get the old tunes playing on the stereo,<br />
We all know the words<br />
we’ve heard them all before<br />
Verse<br />
We got Slade and Wham and Wizzard to,<br />
Grab the one you love<br />
dance the whole night through,<br />
There’s a twinkle there in your granddads<br />
eye,<br />
As the songs take him back to years gone by<br />
Bridge<br />
Ain’t about the turkey<br />
the roasties or the sprouts,<br />
Spreading love is what it’s all about,<br />
Time for family having fun with friends,<br />
Such a good time hope it never ends<br />
music interlude<br />
Chorus<br />
So come on everybody put your blues away,<br />
That time is here it’s Christmas Day,<br />
Get the old tunes playing on the stereo,<br />
We all know the words<br />
we’ve heard them all before<br />
Verse<br />
The icing on the cake<br />
is when the snow falls down,<br />
And a snowman grows<br />
right up from the ground,<br />
In your hats and coats<br />
having snowball fights,<br />
Just having fun in the winter night<br />
Chorus<br />
So come on everybody put your blues away,<br />
That time is here it’s Christmas Day,<br />
Get the old tunes playing on the stereo,<br />
We all know the words<br />
we’ve heard them all before<br />
Here is my attempt at lyrics for a Christmas song, I decid<br />
and music are added will be along the lines of classic up b<br />
the ilk.<br />
How the lyrics for my Christmas song came about is quit<br />
the No1 Christmas songs really have had nothing to do w<br />
tor so I thought it would be a good idea to write somethin<br />
important message which I hope the lyrics convey.<br />
I also write and am vocalist for the ‘4 Owld Codgers’ cou<br />
friends and known each other since school (we are now a<br />
performing for the last few years. We have had airplay wi<br />
International song writing competitions (4th and 7th). I c<br />
Susanne Waldbrunner from Germany,but also Knoll Bud<br />
Link to revernation songs...<br />
Link to Facebook page...<br />
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Ron Todd<br />
s Is Here<br />
ed to go for something which when melody<br />
eat songs like those by Slade, Wizzard and<br />
e simple. Over the last few years a number of<br />
ith the festive season mainly due to X-Facg<br />
traditional with an up beat feel but also an<br />
ntry band and all of the members have been<br />
ll over 60 years of age) but only been<br />
th stations in America and done well in<br />
ollaborate with other artists too. Mainly<br />
dy an artist in America.<br />
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THE SPIRIT OF CHRISTMAS 1940<br />
Set during the Blitz, The Spirit of Christmas 1940 is a Christmas<br />
ghost story that actually started life off as a musical drama. The<br />
inspiration for the story came from one song, ‘Echoes of Home’.<br />
Echoes of Home<br />
Got your letter yesterday<br />
Told me you were far away<br />
You said you were doing fine<br />
But I can read between the lines<br />
I hear the sounds of echoes of home<br />
Both the kids are doing fine<br />
Running round at Christmas time<br />
Mrs Brown’s still telling tales<br />
Of drunken wives and baby wails<br />
Still I hear the sounds of echoes of home<br />
Got your letter yesterday<br />
Saying you’d be home today<br />
But the station’s cold and bare<br />
Cause your still not standing here<br />
Where are the sounds of echoes of home?<br />
Got a telegram today<br />
It told me you had passed away<br />
You died quick and you died brave<br />
All the soldiers you had saved<br />
To hear the sounds of echoes of home<br />
Pictures of a distant time<br />
Reminding me when you were mine<br />
I guess that I’m now doing fine<br />
But you can read between the lines<br />
There’s no more sounds of echoes of home<br />
Lyrics & Music arrangement<br />
Paul Michel<br />
I can’t remember where the mental image actually came from<br />
for ‘Echoes of Home’. All I can say is that at the time I was<br />
writing an awful lot of war songs and poetry. I had also written<br />
two musicals, one of which was very much written about<br />
conflict. What I can remember is picturing a soldier’s wife<br />
waiting for her husband to return on a station platform. That<br />
was the basis of everything about the story.<br />
Of course, it was destined to be a ghost/ love story but in reality<br />
they were just sidelines that would carry the story of a time<br />
when a country faced its most challenging test and some of it’s<br />
darkest times. That was the main point I wanted to make.<br />
The song is just that. It tells the sacrifice, the sadness. the<br />
courage and the love of that awful time. I think so much so,<br />
that more had to be written. Song after song was written to try<br />
to capture what I was trying to say and I have to say, I came very<br />
close. But more than music and poetry, the story itself had to<br />
be told.<br />
To give a brief outline of the story, without trying to give too<br />
much away, the story centres around three main characters.<br />
Rosie, an innocent young flower seller who makes a meagre<br />
living with her stall. Jimmy, an over-confident newspaper<br />
vendor with the gift of the gab, a dodgy deal never too far away<br />
but a very large heart. Finally, Billy Snow. Billy is the ghost of<br />
a soldier who’s purpose is to comfort the heart of the bereaved<br />
on Church Street station. In doing so, he takes on the pain of<br />
those he comforts to the point that he can no longer endure the<br />
suffering.<br />
In a relatively short period of time, a love triangle forms and a<br />
powerfully emotional situation develops in which a forbidden<br />
road comes dangerously close to being travelled. How that is<br />
negotiated one way or the other, I will not tell.<br />
The story is set on a ficticious London Train Station during<br />
the Blitz as mentioned earlier. My inspirations for this station<br />
has come from a very real station today. I must give thanks to<br />
the Severn Valley Railway, Kidderminster for their very kind<br />
assistance with the development of the story and the production<br />
of my book which is the first step in telling the full story.<br />
The beautiful Kidderminster station is a period set station<br />
with every detail reflecting life during those days of the second<br />
world war. The engines that run there are beautiful vintage<br />
locamotives with carriages looking as new as the day they rolled<br />
off the lines all that time ago. How could one not be inspired.<br />
In fact, the background sketch you see is actually a photo I took<br />
of the Kidderminster Severn Valley Railway station and edited it<br />
to a sketch. A similar picture is on the cover of the book, again<br />
taken at the station.<br />
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Paul Michel<br />
It is as if everything is being provided for me to get the most<br />
from this story. My original idea of telling the story as a<br />
musical still stands. I am still writing the musical sections and<br />
ideas are still flooding in as I put the book together, in fact I’ll<br />
go as far as to say the musical aspect will add new dimensions<br />
to the story. Humour for example. Jimmy, our newspaper<br />
vendor is meant to be the cheeky cockney lad full of mischief<br />
and charm which is difficult to portay in the book although not<br />
impossible. In the musical version, the songs really bring this<br />
out in the character.<br />
The same goes for Rosie, our flowergirl. The music allows for<br />
her tenderness to come out in a way the pages don’t allow. This<br />
is something that is really important to the story in several parts<br />
especially towards the end.<br />
On the other hand, musical elements can sometimes dominate<br />
the story rather than enhance it. In the early stages of the<br />
development of the story I needed to avoid that.<br />
So what else can we expect from the book? Well, telling the<br />
story of life in London during the Blitz is, as I said earlier, the<br />
main aim. To that end I needed to bring in actual events that<br />
took place during the time period. That took some research.<br />
One of the big events I picked up on was the fact that towards<br />
the end of the year (1940) the Luftwaffe started bombing the<br />
city earlier and earlier in the evenings. I took some time to<br />
think about how it would have actually affected life especially<br />
around our station, even though it is ficticious. I imagined<br />
how the raids would have disrupted and devasted lives on a<br />
station around early evening when trains were coming and<br />
going. Hopefully you may get why I chose this time period<br />
and location.<br />
walking in somewhat of minefield in many areas. Something<br />
which has demanded respect and discipline. Hopefully I have<br />
achieved this.<br />
So there you have it, a Christmas ghost story set in war torn<br />
London on a ficticious railway station. All I can say is read the<br />
book when it is released next year and please do let me know<br />
what you think.<br />
I cannot say when the story will appear on stage but I will be<br />
looking for producers once we are in the appropriate position.<br />
Let’s see what the future brings.<br />
On a final note, I would like to thank Jane for featuring ‘The<br />
Spirit of Christmas 1940’ in <strong>Write</strong> <strong>Away</strong> magazine. The only<br />
real connection I had here was the lyrics to the song that gave<br />
birth to the idea. I hope, by the way, you liked the lyric at the<br />
start of this article. Again these are my own work.<br />
Also I would like to encourage you to visit the Severn Valley<br />
Railway Station in Kidderminster. It is a truly amazing place. It<br />
is right outside the main Kidderminster station so very easy to<br />
find. It also has an outstanding pub on the grounds with some<br />
of the best beer I have ever tasted. Well worth a visit. You can<br />
also ride the trains into Shropshire for a wonderful day out.<br />
Thank you all and have a very Merry Christmas.<br />
Another aspect of the book I feel I should try to explain is<br />
our ghost, Billy Snow. To begin with you may ask yourself<br />
why I chose this particular name. Well, William Snow was<br />
my great, great uncle who died during WW1. To all intents<br />
and purposes he is mostly forgotten through nobodys fault<br />
except time. But being an ex-military man, I searched my<br />
family tree only to find this hero who fought during the<br />
Great War. After his death at the Battle of Guillemont in<br />
1916 he was buried in La Neuville British War Cemetary,<br />
Corbie, France. His family members have all but passed<br />
on now except for a few. To my knowledge, I am the<br />
only one who keeps his memory.<br />
Although our character is not my relative, I found that<br />
using his name would immortalise his name. There<br />
will be a short paragraph on the characters inspiration<br />
that will pay tribute to the late William Snow<br />
containing all of the fact that I know about him.<br />
Using a ghost in this story was very much influenced<br />
by the musicals. Of course, the classic A Christmas<br />
Carol also influenced me for the good although I<br />
would never put myself anywhere near the great<br />
Charles Dickens. But I did feel that using the ghost<br />
of a soldier in a sensitive way would add a little<br />
magic and mystery to the story.<br />
On the subject of being sensitive, I felt like I’ve been<br />
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