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2011 Biomass Program Algae Platform Peer<br />
Review: Review <strong>Comments</strong><br />
Table of Contents<br />
Algae R&D Platform Overview ................................................................................................................ 2<br />
Project: 9.5.1.1 Los Alamos National Laboratory ..................................................................................... 9<br />
Project: 9.5.1.4 Cellana ............................................................................................................................ 19<br />
Project: 9.5.1.5 Arizona State University ................................................................................................ 26<br />
Project: 9.5.1.6 CABComm ..................................................................................................................... 33<br />
Project: 7.2.1.7 University of Nebraska Lincoln ..................................................................................... 38<br />
Project: 9.6.5.3 NREL ............................................................................................................................. 44<br />
Project: 9.6.5.2 Argonne National Lab .................................................................................................... 50<br />
Project: 9.2.2.2 University of California - San Diego ............................................................................. 55<br />
Project: 9.2.1.2 University of Georgia ..................................................................................................... 65<br />
Project: 9.2.2.1 University of Maine ....................................................................................................... 71<br />
Project: 9.2.1.1 Montana State University ............................................................................................... 77<br />
Project: 9.6.1.3 Pacific Northwest National Laboratory .......................................................................... 83<br />
Project: 9.6.1.2 PNNL ............................................................................................................................. 91<br />
Project: 9.1.3.1 INL ............................................................................................................................... 100<br />
Project: 9.6.1.6 PNNL ........................................................................................................................... 109<br />
Project: 9.6.1.1 National Renewable Energy Lab .................................................................................. 117<br />
Project: 9.6.5.1 Sandia National Labs.................................................................................................... 122<br />
Project: 9.1.2.1 Brookhaven National Laboratory ................................................................................. 127<br />
Project: 9.1.3.2 INL ............................................................................................................................... 135<br />
Project: 9.2.2.3 National Renewable Energy Laboratory ...................................................................... 142<br />
Project: 9.1.2.2 Sandia National Laboratories ....................................................................................... 149<br />
Project: 9.6.1.5 SRNL ............................................................................................................................ 158<br />
Project: 9.6.1.7 Los Alamos National Laboratory ................................................................................. 167<br />
Project: 7.9.2.2 Desert Research Institute .............................................................................................. 176<br />
Project: 7.7.2.18 Brooklyn College ....................................................................................................... 185<br />
Project: 7.9.1.4 Cold Spring Harbor Laboratory ................................................................................... 193<br />
Project: 7.9.2.1 Old Dominion University ............................................................................................. 199<br />
Project: 9.6.6.3 PNNL ........................................................................................................................... 204<br />
Project: 9.6.6.2 Sandia National Labs.................................................................................................... 212<br />
Project: 9.6.6.1 NREL ........................................................................................................................... 217<br />
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2011 Algae Platform Review – <strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong> are direct transcripts of commentary and material provided by the Platform’s<br />
Review Panel. They have not been edited or altered by the Biomass Program.<br />
Algae R&D Platform Overview<br />
Title: Platform Overview - Joyce Yang<br />
Presenter: Technology Manager<br />
Presentation Date: Thursday, April 07, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg. Score Stud Deviation Count<br />
Relevance 7.67 1.60 6<br />
Approach 7.00 1.83 6<br />
Progress 6.50 2.36 6<br />
1. Relevance<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which:<br />
Platform goals, technical targets, and barriers are clearly articulated and logical<br />
Platform goals and planned activities support the goals and objectives outlined in the MYPP<br />
Achieving Platform goals will increase the commercial viability of biofuels.<br />
How could the Platform change to better support the Biomass Program goals?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The very high level OBP goals as targeted by EISA were spelled out. There has been significant<br />
investment in projects over the past two years, including one massive investment in NAABB. But it is<br />
clear from the presentation that goals are yet to be set. There is an implication from one of the slides that<br />
Sustainability and Analysis were done to an extent up front. I am not sure how apparent that is in the<br />
project selection, however. Many of the projects seem to suffer from a lack of analysis-based goal and<br />
deliverable setting. An improved delivery here might discuss some back-of-the-envelope technoeconomic<br />
assessments which allow one to key in at early stages on specific areas of the slide titled<br />
Roadmap Categories, further expounded in the next 4 slides on next steps and integration. In other words,<br />
a little deeper technical description would have helped make a better case for project selection. One could<br />
even have pasted the specific projects on the Integration diagrams. There are few enough programs that<br />
this could have been done and maybe have bolstered project selection decisions.<br />
I unfortunately came away with questions as to how certain projects were selected. Some of the projects<br />
lacked a mission-focus that I would expect for projects which are basically determining whether algae<br />
should be a feedstock or not. If FY2013 is the year of "Downselection" then each of the Projects should<br />
concretely map onto the pathway leading to that selection, and goals/deliverables should have been<br />
developed which will allow that to happen. This should have been bolstered by at least rudimentary<br />
techno-economics. Maybe the projects were selected this way. It sure was not apparent from some of the<br />
presentations.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The general platform goals involving feedstock development, cultivation, harvest, extraction and<br />
conversion, and fuel production/distribution are sound. It is keenly important to connect basic and applied<br />
scientists and to make sure each end of this equation understands the potential and limitations of the status<br />
quo across the platform.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 10<br />
Effort by the program is directly along the lines of the Algal Biomass mission<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 9<br />
Although the Algal Biofuels Roadmap was rather uncritical and did not do much to narrow down which<br />
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Review Panel. They have not been edited or altered by the Biomass Program.<br />
technologies are suitable for biofuel production, it has provided a good framework for organizing the<br />
research program. Thus, the objectives of the funded projects are in-line with what is needed to resolve<br />
the many questions on algae biofuel production.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Good presentation of Program goals and objectives.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 0<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 7<br />
It is important to recognize these research activities as a long term effort with low probability of success,<br />
with the potential for very high benefits. The focus on productivity, harvesting, de-watering, extraction<br />
and process economics is highly relevant. Algal biofuels projects for specific geographies do not support<br />
platform goals and technical targets because the geographies have not been chosen based on science.<br />
Some of the detailed work on co-products, upgrading oil to fuel, and risk assessment appears to be<br />
premature because a neither commercial strains nor commercial processes have been identified.<br />
2. Approach<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which:<br />
Platform approaches are effective, as demonstrated by the extent to which: Platform milestones and<br />
organization; project portfolio; and strategic directions facilitate reaching Program Performance Goals as<br />
outlined in the MYPP<br />
The Platform portfolio is focused and balanced to achieve Biomass Program and Platform goals, as<br />
demonstrated by: Work Breakdown Structure; unit operations; and pathway prioritization Please explain<br />
your score by commenting on the strengths and weakness evaluated<br />
What changes would increase the effectiveness of the Platform?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
There was a framework established for constructing the evaluation of algae as a potential feedstock for<br />
biofuels production in the future. As mentioned previously, there did not appear to be significant evidence<br />
of direction-setting using technoeconomic assessments. The portfolio should then be balanced with<br />
respect to the key drivers. It may be that most of the funds should be spent on biology, since without<br />
adequate productivity per organism, algae will not be a cost-viable feedstock. One would like to hit this<br />
hard so as to be able to come to a decision point in FY2013 or FY2014. Part of the OBP program should<br />
be a rapid identification of those feedstocks that are viable and those that are not, so as to be able to<br />
throttle expenditures here and spend more on the next economic bottlenecks.<br />
As a general comment, some of the programs are doing a better job at the WBS to provide useful<br />
deliverables, while others would seem to require some oversight.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The type of review meeting held here should be useful to the personnel of the projects. Some of the<br />
projects have great focus by dedicated and expert scientists/engineers. However, there are a number of<br />
weak projects in the current portfolio. It is especially important that modelling projects use realistic input<br />
data and have excellent knowledge of background literature. In some cases, the goals are appropriate to a<br />
project but the likelihood of success by that group of investigators is low due to mismatched expertise.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 10<br />
A variety of complementary approaches are being pursued, which increases chances of success.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 8<br />
The use of consortia is essential for coordinating research on the many steps in the algae biofuels<br />
production chain. This approach was a good choice, but flexibility should be maintained, allowing new<br />
participants and technologies to enter/exit existing consortia where appropriate and useful, as determined<br />
by the PIs and the DOE managers. The existing practice of at least weekly contact of DOE managers with<br />
the major consortia should be helpful in achieving good results. Although time-consuming for the<br />
managers, such coordination should facilitate the continual improvement and adjustment of the research<br />
plan. The DOE managers should assist in the rapid culling of technologies from a consortium that are not<br />
likely to meet economic, energy balance, or LCA criteria. The PIs may have difficulty severing<br />
relationships with collaborators without some outside impetus, although there is no evidence of that<br />
problem thus far. A general weakness of many of the project presentations was a lack of well-defined<br />
technology down-select criteria nor any a priori quantitative estimates of technology performance in<br />
terms of cost, energy balance, and LCA. While the national labs are generating open-source TEA and<br />
LCA software, good initial assessments should be done by the project proponents at the proposal phase,<br />
then to be updated at least annually during the project. These assessments should be gaged against<br />
performance criteria set by the OBP algae managers. If fact, these suggestions may have already been<br />
implemented at the proposal phase, but then not emphasized in the presentation template used for the<br />
review. Related to the above discussion, the algae program should fund both basic and applied research,<br />
with the majority being applied. Each project should strive to define to what extent the research is basic or<br />
applied. This would aid particular reviewers who are prone to prefer applied work to give an allowance<br />
for the apparent lack of immediate practicality of some of the projects. However, the main value in better<br />
defining basic/applied would be to prevent basic science projects being presented as applied, which<br />
comes across poorly to reviewers. Many of the individual projects, not consortia, are also valuable. Of<br />
course, independent approaches are needed, perhaps funded on a seed basis, to be incorporated into<br />
consortia as results warrant. The algae program managers should work to coordinate research funding and<br />
RFPs with ARPA-e, the Office of Science, NETL, and the USDA. The OBP algae program should be<br />
involved in all DOE algae work because the algae program managers have already become expert in the<br />
topic and duplication of expertise and uncoordinated research funding is undesirable. Of course, the rapid<br />
rise and fall of funding for the algae program is detrimental to sustaining the research groups who will<br />
bring algae biofuel to fruition over the long-run. Algae biofuel development will need to be a well-funded<br />
on-going effort even if early success is found. The implementation, maintenance, and improvement of<br />
productivity on tens of thousands of hectares of algae production will require on-going effort akin to the<br />
agricultural research funded by USDA. Inclusion of non-fuel co-products as valid research topics in the<br />
algae program should be continued. Of course, the link to biofuel production must still be present. One<br />
exception to that requirement would be if the algae technology has promise for leading to significant<br />
savings in fossil fuel consumption or greenhouse gas emissions. These two benefits should be considered<br />
nearly as valuable as actual transportation fuel production. Coming to a smaller detail, the proposal<br />
review process may need to be improved based on some of the marginal projects presenting during the<br />
review. The small pool of algae production experts to choose from could be the source of the problem.<br />
The OBP should continue to expand their list of potential reviewers. Members of the Aquatic Species<br />
Program are good candidates since they have longer experience and more expertise than many in the field<br />
today. The panel used in this program review had a good diversity of expertise and experience. Genetic<br />
engineering expertise is important to have in algae reviews.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Good presentation of Platform approaches and portfolio.<br />
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Review Panel. They have not been edited or altered by the Biomass Program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 0<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The approach of having one large, highly funded consortium working in parallel with two smaller<br />
consortia and multiple academic and private projects is likely to produce redundancies. Bringing the<br />
dispersed efforts into focus on the key technical hurdles is daunting.<br />
3. Progress<br />
Please evaluate the degree to the Platform is progressing towards achieving Biomass Program and<br />
Platform goals, specifically in reference to: meeting performance targets and likelihood of achieving the<br />
goals presented.<br />
Please provide recommendations for improvements for tracking progress.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Based on the individual presentations, it does not appear likely that the platform goals will be met. I think<br />
the OBP should be hardening these goals/milestones/deliverables for the total platform and for each of the<br />
individual pieces. I am not speaking about making the FY2013 technology selections now, I am saying<br />
that it does not appear that the component deliverables to allow the FY2013 selection have been<br />
formulated with enough clarity and detail to maximize the likelihood of selecting in FY2013. With these<br />
deliverables in hand, meet with the various projects to map their contributions onto this same deliverable<br />
timeline. Then attempt to build a fire. I presume since funds have been spent totally, and unless these<br />
timelines and deliverables were built into the contracts originally, then there is little recourse except to<br />
convince the project leaders of the value of delivering in line with the Platform. Again these need to be<br />
hard-wired and not general deliverables.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The largest project has excellent personnel and multiple scales; it is the place where there is the most<br />
promise of success. It is essential that this project doesn't get too side-tracked by "neat stuff"; basic and<br />
applied scientists and engineers in this project need to know on a monthly basis what each group has<br />
found that advances the project.<br />
Some of the "sampling from the wild" for feedstock improvement is a little too much like a fishing<br />
expedition; little hypothesis-testing was evident in sampling location selection. Many models appear<br />
completely unrealistic (poor research of input data, lack of ground-truthing and consideration of multiuses<br />
of land area, sea level rise projections affecting coastal projects, etc.). In general, too many projects<br />
exhibited a failure to know the background literature related to their project goals.<br />
The best targets are likely to be non-GMO species because open systems are too subject to bird dispersal.<br />
Thus, the "neat stuff" related to transformation should be evenly balanced by traditional strain selection.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 10<br />
Too early to judge, as this is just the beginning of this program. Nevertheless, this first-time peer review<br />
process showed a vibrant group on investigators and truly dedicated program staff.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 9<br />
The creation of the Roadmap and the MYPP early in the program was important. Most of the projects<br />
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funded recently have value and are making progress. This program review is also a sign of progress and<br />
organization.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
It is too early in the process to evaluate progress in the algal biomass program since many of the projects<br />
have just begun.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 0<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Expectations for progress need to be calibrated to the vastness of the challenges in commercializing algal<br />
biofuels. Most of the projects reviewed had less than one year of activity. Identifying technologies to<br />
evaluate and getting a techno-economic model in place to use as a tool to determine viability is good<br />
progress.<br />
4. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the platform, including strengths, weaknesses, and any gaps in the<br />
Platform portfolio.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
The view and assessment of the algae platform are very intriguing. It is like starting from preliminary<br />
data, and then trying to move to commercial reality in a fixed timeline of 10 years. If one subtracts from<br />
the 2022 target a typical and sufficient length of time for development and demonstration of all the<br />
downstream tasks leading to biofuels, one is left with the need to come to conclusions on the viability of<br />
algae as a viable feedstock possibility in a very short timeline. Some of the projects will contribute to that<br />
decision point, while others seem not likely to do so. A reformulation of platform<br />
goals/deliverables/timeframe may help the OBP personnel dialog and bring the PIs along so that the OBP<br />
may meet its 2022 goals. Overall it is easy to come to the conclusion that people (PIs, scientists, PMs,<br />
DOE, government officials) have already concluded either that 10 years is still so far away or algae is not<br />
really in the 2022 picture, so why push? If this lack of drive to meet 2022 goals is real, and algae is the<br />
advanced, advanced feedstock for 2040 fuels, then re-trenching to the really basic drivers at far less<br />
expenditure would be a better move in terms of overall OBP goals. If people think there is still plenty of<br />
time in the 2022 window to spend years on determining algae as feedstock possibility, they should also<br />
look at some realistic deliverables and experiences in the other unit operations. Overall, OBP should set<br />
tighter operating specs for results delivery and move deliberately and rapidly.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
I think stronger project selection would be particularly helpful to attaining goals. No competition should<br />
be limited to one entity (i.e., national labs vs small business vs academia). If DoE can forge strong people<br />
from business, engineering and basic science into a project, that is likely to have the most success. The<br />
largest project is an example of this, and with tight coordination and internal communication, it should<br />
succeed because of its funding level (large!) and personnel. A number of other projects are strong, and<br />
some others should be eliminated.<br />
Much stronger peer review is required at DoE before favorable funding decisions are reached. A revised<br />
peer review process might have individual reviewr comments/scores sent only to PIs, because this permits<br />
reviewers to provide detailed and constructively critical assessments of the project to help PIs. For public<br />
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distribution, a panel summary could be released. This is the closer to the NSF procedure, which has an<br />
excellent track record in terms of scientific result and taxpayer benefit.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Strengths: Enthusiasm of the program staff and team; clarity of presentation and clarity of vision for the<br />
program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
The OBP algae program team all seem very capable and dedicated to developing the sound information<br />
from the research that is needed to guide DOE decisions. All in all, I was heartened by the straightforward<br />
approach and open attitude I sensed in the program team. I am much more confident in the OBP<br />
having seen this team interact during the review process. The algae program is new but making laudable<br />
progress, especially in light of the management burden that the sudden influx of ARRA and<br />
Congressional funding must cause. I am confident that if DOE can continue to develop the expertise of<br />
the algae program managers that the research projects will reach a level of value that is exceptional<br />
among DOE programs. On the other hand, management turn-over and uncoordinated algae efforts across<br />
DOE will obvious give a poorer overall result.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
The platform approach is good, but a considerable number of the projects seemed unnecessarily weak<br />
(even at this early stage of review).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
The greatest strengths of the program are the definition of key hurdles to commericialiization, the<br />
identification and funding of individuals and institutions with the ability to address these hurdles, and the<br />
implementation of modeling tools to evaluate progress. A weakness is the ability to define specific,<br />
relevant metrics to track all of the individual projects and the overall effort, and to prevent redundant<br />
work.<br />
There is a great weakness in the projects that are forced into a specific geography. Putting challenging<br />
geographical constraints onto the extremely difficult commercialization of algal biofuels virtually ensures<br />
failure of those projects.<br />
Uneven long term funding with high spending for 3 years also creates significant program weaknesses.<br />
Initial funding should be at a level that matches the effort necessary to demonstrate feasibility with the<br />
highest existing level of talent. If key hurdles are addressed and potential pathways are defined, funding<br />
should increase over time, not drop precipitously.<br />
5. Additional Recommendations, <strong>Comments</strong>, and Observations<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
It is clear that accountability of the investigators is an issue for these projects. Either an installment<br />
contract needs to be devised with deliverable attainment a requisite for further funds, or the deliverables<br />
need hard-nosed formulation before the contract is awarded. OBP seems to have its mission firmly in<br />
front, but there is not the same devotion from all of the awardees in my perception. The appearances are<br />
that some are just in it for the funds, or to extend a research program, or to peddle a favorite piece of<br />
technology, or for the politics. A very tough management and execution challenge!<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
This is an important area for DoE; some biofuels must come from algae (due to the chemical realities of<br />
different molecules for different purposes). Also, there are additional products (plastics) that will demand<br />
algal biofuels, even when we kick the petroleum habit. If algal biomass production were coupled to<br />
watershed clean-up (e.g., the Mississippi, the amount of biomass produced could be significant and drive<br />
a much larger part of total biofuels in the future from algal sources.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
There is an absolute need of continuity in this Algal Biomass program. Three years of R&D is not<br />
sufficient to bring about a successful outcome, as the case would be with any and all new and ambitious<br />
programs. The stakes for the country and the world are enormous, and the effort ought to reflect this very<br />
fact. I should emphasize that microalgal biofuels is an area the private sector has embraced with<br />
enthusiasm, and where private industry funds have been invested. The federal government and the DOE<br />
ought to take a queue from the trail of "private sector investments" in this field and to help accelerate this<br />
line of R&D with continuous support beyond the initial three-year period of funding.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
There are no additional recommendations.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
For the large projects, it is vital that the managers pressure the investigators to objectively evaluate and<br />
integrate their individual results relative to large scale production. Otherwise, it will be too easy for<br />
individuals to focus on individual processes and be left with an array of unrelated results.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
It would be helpful to have independent experts develop the road map, as opposed to those who will<br />
shortly be applying for large expenditures of funds along the lines of the roadmap.<br />
Also, it would be helpful to permit a longer time for preperation from the time of the RFP, and to instill a<br />
more rigorous review process of the proposals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
It might be useful to require projects to establish specific, quantitative goals direclty related to algal<br />
biofuel commercial requirements.<br />
Focus on the biggest technical hurdles--growth, harvest, and extraction. Some of the risk assesment and<br />
co-product studies appear to be premature because strain and process will dramatically affect<br />
characteristics. Co-product and risk assesment work should be limited to early feasibility demonstration.<br />
The program will not fail due to lack of technology to convert lipids to fuels, so this work should be<br />
minimized.<br />
Peer Review Presentations need more structure imposed by DOE--a summary slide of specific<br />
quantitative goals, baseline, achieved, and expected results against those goals, and decision points based<br />
on resutls. Any economic projections need to be accompanied by assumptions and calculations.<br />
There are many strain screening efforts. A centralized database for the results might be valuable.<br />
Validation of screening processes against strain performance in pilot operations is needed. A<br />
standaridzied, small scale, rapid measuremetn system for strain performance validated against longe term<br />
outdoor cutlivation would be extremely valuable. A statistical analysis of algae biodiversity based on<br />
strain data already collected might be a useful tool to determine if continued bioprospecting is likley to<br />
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find a strain with traits sufficient for commericialization.<br />
Process research efforts appear to be hindered by a lack of algae supply. Considerable resources are used<br />
and time delays incurred by projects growing algae on very small scale. The DOE should consider<br />
developing algae supply agreements with facilities that can supply kg to 10's of kg dry basis quantities of<br />
custom grown algae feedstock to researchers.<br />
NREL techno economic modeling is an essential tool and should be expanded to evaluate scenarios based<br />
on pilto results and conceptual projections.<br />
Project: 9.5.1.1 Los Alamos National Laboratory<br />
Title: NAABB An Algal Biofuels Consortium<br />
Presenter: Jose Olivares<br />
Presentation Date: Thursday, April 07, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 5.71 1.28 7<br />
Progress 5.57 0.49 7<br />
Relevance 7.29 0.70 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 5.71 1.16 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which:<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 6<br />
This is an enormous project There has been significant effort at lining up the approaches on several<br />
different lines of attack.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Scaled well from lab bench to large facility at Pecos. Project participants are strong. However, all<br />
participants need to focus on the end goal of biofuel production, and it would likely be helpful for a<br />
project meeting to be held soon at Pecos, to highlight the importance (and challenges) of scale.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 8<br />
The NAABB Algal Biofuels Consortium aims to address key barriers across the entire chain of algal<br />
biofuels production. As such, it is an integrated program that aims to develop tools via which to address<br />
current issues in algal biofuels.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 4<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Very broad goals encompass almost every topic within biofuel production.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Altough the presentation was professional, and the individual topics (unit operations) discussed of<br />
obvious quality, it was very difficult to see how this approach improves upon the most recent reports of<br />
Benneman and co-authors It appears to be a strong collection of individual researchers, each with their<br />
own expertise, collected from labs around the U.S., performing their own research. Although the PI layed<br />
out a competant set of "criteria" or objectives that has to be met to achieve success (slide 2), the follow on<br />
slides simply looked like individual PI's sent along slides from their group and the PI massaged them<br />
together. This reviewer did not see a clear system of unit operations put in place up front, with specific<br />
objectives (and input and outputs for all) laid out, that the "team" had to develop. Until this is done, until<br />
the PI steps up and states "this is how we are going forward and these are the targets per unit operation"<br />
this consortium can be limited by a culture of self-preservation that undermines the down select process.<br />
The PI is strongly encouraged to read the reports of Benneman and co-authors and to understand how<br />
most of the restrictions stated in those reports will dominate, and how he will use this "experience" and<br />
"common sense" to rapidly scale this program back to a fundamental, agriculture/farmer based approach.<br />
Rapid downselection with an aggressive application of common sense should be applied rapidly before<br />
this program becomes too difficult to manage towards large scale commercial deployment.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Program has well-defined, specific, and relevant goals with quantitative values for productivity and costs.<br />
Milestones and decision points are identified on a time scale. Activities that should be done in sequence<br />
are being driven in parallel, possibly because of the short term nature of the funding.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
As the FOA for our proposal stated, the main NAABB program goals are the development of<br />
technologies for biofuels development. The FOA also required that our program add components<br />
necessary to develop all aspects of biomass generation and utilization, in order to increase the economic<br />
value of the overall biofuels development, such as would be implemented in a biorefinery system.<br />
Therefore, the bulk of our program leads to biofuels development from algal lipids and biomass, along<br />
with power generation, chemical and agricultural coproducts developed from lipid extracted biomass. We<br />
have had several face-to-face project meetings and many others, in which scale-up challenges have been a<br />
major topic. Similarly, our management team and several set of investigators have travelled and met at<br />
Pecos and other production sites to review the process and understand the challenges. We will continue to<br />
do this and will take into consideration having a future overall program meeting at one of our large-scale<br />
facilities. The NAABB program uses the knowledge gathered in the Acquatic Species Program (ASP), by<br />
John Benemann and others, as a starting point. For example, we utilize Nannochloropsis salina as one of<br />
our main production strains. Unfortunately, many of the other strains identified by the ASP have been<br />
lost. Therefore, the NAABB prospecting efforts is helping continue to identify potential useful strains for<br />
cultivation. We also realize the technological advances that have occurred since the end of the ASP, for<br />
example, genomic and transcriptome sequencing capabilities have made it much easier to identify target<br />
genes for regulation and modification. Thus, the NAABB program is utilizing new high throughput<br />
sequencing and proteomics capabilities to advance our knowledge of algae and develop successful<br />
productive strains of algae. We are examining innovative ways to increase lipid production. This includes<br />
the identification of genes via systems biology and random mutagenesis approaches and developing tools<br />
to transform likely production strains with those candidate genes that prove helpful. Crop protection also<br />
falls under this area of increased lipid production by potentially decreasing down time due to crop failure,<br />
i.e., pond crashes. The FOA for this program required the formation of a consortium with a broad<br />
representation from academia, industry and national laboratories. In forming our consortium we chose<br />
institutions that brought capabilities that were complimentary and appropriate across the developmental<br />
process for biofuels. We have assembled a team that has unique capabilities, yet is willing to work<br />
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together to develop the NAABB objectives and goals. The NAABB program has over 70 individual task<br />
and subtask areas, within a very structured work break down schedule with milestones, deliverables, and<br />
decision points. These are contained within our Statement of Project Objectives and our Project<br />
Management Plan, as submitted and negotiated with DOE. A 45 minute presentation, at such a level of<br />
detail, would not have been possible. Our program has incorporated a number of check points,<br />
assessments, and decision points for the processes and technologies being developed, the first of which<br />
are being implemented at months 12, 15, 18 and 24, in our program. These will generate a downselection,<br />
rescoping, and/or refocusing for many of our processes to achieve timely changes in R&D to<br />
achieve our goals and objectives. Our goal is to make production of microalgae a farming endeavor that<br />
is: economically feasible, energetically positive, and environmentally sound. This goal cannot happen<br />
without new scientific and technological breakthroughs. And, certainly it cannot happen without the<br />
underlying foundation and infrastructure to support such a farming endeavor, e.g., seed (algal strain)<br />
development, sound cultivation practices, economical harvesting, and process logistics. All of which are<br />
major components of the NAABB program.<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has made progress in its objectives and stated project<br />
management plan has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Progress has been made even though the project has not been in place for very long.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Development of ARID raceway, genomic information, and strain improvement work is promising.<br />
Acoustic focusing is promising in recovery. GREET analysis for life cycle analysis is important.<br />
Recycling of N and P after lipid extraction will be critical. Bioproducts of fuel include aquaculture feeds,<br />
which is very promising but what is the omega 3 FA content after lipid extraction, if any? Without this,<br />
the feed quality will be much less valuable.<br />
Concerns/monitoring of competitors and pathogens in open pond raceways is more transparent than many<br />
similar efforts; chemical and engineered disease resistance is proposed; I think it is unlikely that GMO<br />
algae will be approved in open pond raceways due to wide dispersal potential of such algae into the wild<br />
at 100s of km from sites. Strain selection needs more attention for disease resistance.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 5<br />
This is the first year of operation of the NAABB and progress is modest. However, this is to be expected<br />
as all projects have a long ramp-up time in the beginning. Question: How does NAABB plan to monitor<br />
and assess progress by individual participants? I ask them to develop a quality control mechanism that<br />
would be applied to all participants. As one criterion, I would recommend simple Gantt charts for each<br />
and every of the NAABB projects, and application of the criterion of "peer-reviewed" publications, as a<br />
benchmark.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Unfortunately, there was not enough detail for evaluation.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Score: 5<br />
It was a competant presentation of work presented, from each group, but very little of it was obviously<br />
linked to an overall goal of developing a single commercial production system. It was not clear if any<br />
single unit operation was aware of what the upstream unit operation was going to deliver and what the<br />
downstream unit operation was going to need to receive. One should be careful touting numbers like<br />
0.11$ per gallon harvested (in the extraction section). Groups are always trying to insert cost instead of<br />
energy ratios, at each unit operation. It may sound great to have 0.11$ per gallon harvested, but if one<br />
process is processing streams that are 99.9% water, this is likely not such a low number when one<br />
considers the total amount of gallons to be processed. One should show how much energy (or power) is<br />
consumed per unit of fuel (or volumetric flowrate) processed. This ratio should be less than 10% of the<br />
overall system for extraction, and 15% for dewatering and harvesting (or 25% if combined into one step).<br />
It’s important that the use of cost is replaced by energy use in systems analysis. If the amount of energy<br />
used is less than that produced, the cost balance will sort it self out. But if more energy is consumed than<br />
produced, the cost balance will not sort itself out unless free sources of energy are leveraged into the<br />
system.<br />
One should not just state low energy input for the acoustic harvester. Low relative to WHAT? One should<br />
show the power input required per volumetric flow of fuel processed (and use this to develop an energy<br />
ratio). It is conerning to see respective extraction (or harvesting) devices touted without a proper metric<br />
for the energy consumed per unit energy produced. The project should be specific about the use of energy<br />
balances that track the unit energy consumed per unit energy produced.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Progress in Algal biology and cultivation are co-dependent and are not quantifiable until cultivation data<br />
is available, but the approach and technical expertise is a positive. There appears to be good progress in<br />
identification and preliminary testing of several novel technologies for harvesting and extraction. Because<br />
biology, cultivation, harvesting, and extraction will all have significant impact on oil and coproducts,<br />
much of the work on fuel conversion and feeding studies appears to be premature.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
As presented in the Peer Review, the NAABB program for strain selection flows into a cultivation<br />
pipeline that tests these strains in outdoor environments. This will provide screening for strain robustness<br />
against environmental factors such as predation, bacterial infections, etc. Our program also incorporates<br />
the development of technologies that will help provide resistance from such infections, through the<br />
addition of bacterial controlling substances and breakdown of biofilms produced by such organisms.<br />
Disease resistance is a good parameter to test and one we certainly keep in mind. Our initial selection is<br />
on growth and lipid productivity but we intend to put the best strains into a cultivation environment.<br />
NAABB is already monitoring progress in a number of ways, including: site visits by our project<br />
management team, monthly reports, financial and fiduciary reporting, face-to-face status reviews,<br />
monthly team meetings, bi-weekly meetings with team leads, and weekly meetings our operations,<br />
executive team and DOE. As our supporting slides show, the NAABB investigators have already credited<br />
the NAABB program with over 20 manuscripts in print or under review in peer reviewed journals. We<br />
have also developed a website with regular highlights. We have an obligation to protect intellectual<br />
property, make it available first to our partners for licensing opportunities. Once this obligation is met,<br />
any IP not licensed is then made available to the general public through the innovating institution.<br />
Further, NAABB investigators have made over 100 presentations at national and international<br />
conferences. Our investigators have and are coordinating technical sessions at national conferences.<br />
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Similarly, we are chairing and organizing an international conference in St. Louis later this year, in which<br />
many NAABB investigators will be presenting their work along with peers from the international<br />
community.<br />
We are in total agreement with the reviewer comments. For all of our harvesting and extraction processes<br />
we are developing a process flow model that determines all of the inputs and outputs both for mass<br />
balance and energy consumption and/or generation. These can then be converted to a cost analysis. The<br />
preliminary cost results presented for the LANL acoustic harvester represented the results from such a<br />
detailed analysis.<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which:<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 6<br />
If the consortium can perform as a team, the relevance will be up there in scores. The potential is there.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Highly relevant and promising. Costing of all stages needs strong attention in year ahead.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Project is well aligned with the Algae Biomass MYPP and roadmap, and efforts are in direct support of<br />
this <strong>EERE</strong> program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 7<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 8<br />
The stated goals are closely aligned with the platform goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Score 7: The presentation was very good in terms of presenting its talk under the umbrella of the Biomass<br />
Program's objectives, and the Program's output.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 7<br />
NAABB activities are a close reflection of the Biomass Mulit-Year Program Plan.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
The magnitude of the NAABB program makes it very challenging to put together a presentation for this<br />
type of review process. Therefore we strived at a 45-minute presentation that provides an overview of the<br />
NAABB framework, innovation, status, results, and strategy for the future. In most cases, when we<br />
presented innovation or results, we were faced with only the time to present a bullet, if at all presented. In<br />
some cases, we chose to provide a particular highlight of the scientific innovation and results from our<br />
program.<br />
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4. Critical Success Factors<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which:<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 6<br />
These CSFs have been stated in the presentation. They also are tied to each thrust.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Genomics' concentration must be demonstrated to be worthwhile at intensity developed.<br />
Disease/competitor problems must be overcome; stochastic events that cause crashes must be modelled<br />
realistically and costed.<br />
Probiotic bacterial angle likely to be significant.<br />
The most important thing now is to show cost-effective production of algal lipids to methane to<br />
bioproducts. Scale concerns must be met.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 8<br />
The project has systematically identified all possible factors and barriers that need be addressed for a<br />
successful outcome.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 4<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Unfortunately, there was not enough detail for evaluation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which: The project has identified critical factors, (including technical,<br />
business, market, regulatory, and legal factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success<br />
of the project Other than slide 2, not much in this area. The project has presented adequate plans to<br />
recognize, address, and overcome these factors. This was a weakness to the presentation as little<br />
discussion or mechanism by which this would be approached was presented. The project has the<br />
opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial algal biomass<br />
feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following: i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex.<br />
economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
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end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption) The PI consistently<br />
showed Sustianability as a large "arrow" at the bottom of the slide that suggested it was to be the overall<br />
driver. However, the driving criteria for sustainability and how they would be imposed for the<br />
downselection was not apparant. Then again, to proper evaluate a consortium of this size, a full day<br />
should have been given to their presentation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Success factors have been clearly recognized. At the current state of technology definitive plans to<br />
overcome and address these factors can not be defined. Plans appear to be appropriately focused on<br />
determining the feasibility of potential solutions that might be contributed to a viable biofuel pathway.<br />
Successful demonstration of feasibilities will provide an opportunity to impact commmercial viability.<br />
More emphasis is needed on developing ameasurement system to quantify strain productivity which is<br />
validated against long term outdoor cultivation.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
This project will require an extraordinary level of coordination to deliver the outcomes. There are no<br />
apparent public strategies or demonstration strategies that would be valuable. The use of iPhone is open to<br />
question. There are already journal publications.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
Tech transfer of raceway design, acoustic focussing etc. is strong. Pubs and presentations look good.<br />
Critical year ahead to demonstrate cost-effectiveness of biofuel production at scale required.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Too soon to tell.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
The project appears to be highly coordinated, but the project is too large (and presentation too short) for<br />
adequate review of this topic.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
This was quite extensive but might actually be the Achilles heel of this program. The collaborations are<br />
so extensive, and the expectations of large scale microalgae production for fuels so overstated, the PI<br />
might find it difficult to down select to the final process. There is concerne that the number of<br />
collaborations is too big for a single PI to manage.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Internal sharing appears to be strong. Broad outreach in economic modeling is commendable.<br />
Development and broad sharing of an algae biology data base with key properties of various strains might<br />
have value.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Direct response to the Tech Transfer Section: As shown in the peer review presentation, our program<br />
structure provides for a thorough and very supportive management team that manages the day-to-day<br />
activities of NAABB. This includes three technical directors, 13 technical team leads, 2 operations<br />
managers, a full time project manager, an industry and intellectual property manager, and the full<br />
financial and subcontracting engine at Donald Danforth Plant Science Center. Without this structure, I<br />
would agree with the reviewer.<br />
While there are no more responses to the Tech Transfer section, with the 4,000 character limitation in<br />
each response section, there are some additional comments referring to the Overall Impressions section:<br />
We want to thank the DOE for the opportunity to respond to the Peer Review Committee comments. We<br />
found that the comments reflected some very positive views that the NAABB program is making an<br />
impact, even this early on in the performance period. The NAABB primary focus remains biofuels<br />
production. Therefore, if upstream processes extract or degrade the fatty acids left in the animal feed, this<br />
will affect its nutritional value. Thus, NAABB investigators are trying to determine the value of such<br />
feed. Obviously, there is a feedback loop, and if such high value components can be extracted and/or left<br />
in to add additional value to the feeds we will incorporate such processes. Delivering feed to an animal in<br />
a format that it will be consumed effectively is key to this industry. It increases handling characteristics.<br />
Not all potential feed materials pelletize easily (pelletizing distillers grains is currently a challenge for this<br />
industry) and in some cases additives need to be introduced in order to achieve practical formats.<br />
Achieving this can increase the value of feed by as much as $112 /ton. In the time allotted all we could<br />
present were major goals and objectives, e.g., in slide two of the presentation. Nevertheless, the NAABB<br />
program does incorporate understanding net energy production through life cycle assessments on all<br />
processes that are carried forward. A comparison of these net energy production processes can then be<br />
available to policy makers and industry for further decision making on viability of any one process.<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project approach,<br />
scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
This project hinges on many parties keeping their thrusts on target. Some of the tasks could use more<br />
injection of industrial reviews and maybe even technology contributions.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
The team is good and seems well managed. The level of funding is extremely high and thus expectations<br />
of the project managers for real biofuel scale production should be equally high. Balancing "neat"<br />
science, much of it required for success, with pragmatic advances is one of the challenges to the project.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Strengths: an impressive array of projects and expertise is brought together in this NAABB effort.<br />
Challenges: The ability to successfully oversee and coordinate all project-components. How do they plan<br />
to monitor and assess progress by individual participants? ARe there metrics and milestones for each part<br />
of the NAAB effort? How do they plan to disseminate information and the know-how resulting from this<br />
effort? I recommend the criterion of "peer-reviewed" publications and Gantt charts, as benchmarks. Does<br />
the consortium plan to hold regular meetings, where all participants would present their progress? The<br />
DNA sequencing effort of Botryococcus braunii was initiated by a group of interested (Botryococcus<br />
community) scientists and actually started by the JGI well ahead of the NAABB; it is inappropriate for<br />
the NAABB to claim this as one of their accomplishments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Overall Impression: 5<br />
The project abstract correctly identified the basic key technical challenges: "1) Algal strains that can be<br />
cultivated in real-world conditions and harvested with minimal energy; 2) Technologies that are scaleable<br />
and provide the energy return on investment; 3) Technology integration with needed nutrient, water, and<br />
other recycles; and 4) Sustainable technologies with respect to environment, cost and permitting." The<br />
presentation identified cost goals, such as $2.10/gal oil, presumably a total cost. Quantitative goals on net<br />
energy production and LCA issues were missing.<br />
A major lack in the presentation was evidence that the proponent have made quantitative projections on<br />
whether their suite of candidate technologies has the potential to meet the key technical challenges and<br />
the cost goals. Target productivities, oil contents, etc. were given, so management should demonstrate on<br />
an on-going basis that these technical targets would actually lead to the cost target. Do both the<br />
productivity and lipid content have to be near the maximum conceivably feasible to reach $2/gal? How<br />
many major breakthroughs are needed to reach this goal? Then results/progress from the technologies<br />
could be measured against the needed performance. In particular, somewhat reliable projections for some<br />
technologies (eg, ARID cultivation system, harvesting, and extraction technologies) should be possible<br />
immediately. Of course a down-select is scheduled, but the methodology of that process remained<br />
obscure.<br />
The strain selection process does not seem to be designed well. The slides state that either >300 or >500<br />
stains, mostly collected from the environment, have already been screened. Why would any of these<br />
survive under cultivation conditions? The lab culturing conditions described do not recreate the main<br />
stressors of outdoor cultivation. The current methods seem to be brute-force only, not efficient, and not<br />
well thought out.<br />
The good aspects of the management plan are the frequent PI meetings and reports to DOE, but still<br />
needed is the better defined goal-vs-performance assessment mentioned above. The outdoor productions<br />
systems are a great strength of the program for demonstrating a tangible result. It is good that production<br />
strains are currently being tested outdoors in addition to the less promising lab strain selection procedure.<br />
Other areas need strengthening: The purpose of Solix PBR effort was not explained. The wastewater and<br />
produced water efforts were not well described. The animal feeding trials will require large quantities of<br />
biomass and presumably several years of effort. The lab-based animal digestion research described is<br />
indeed needed. If any actual animal feeding trials are executed, what value can be obtained given the<br />
limited research time available?<br />
The weakness of the program are probably due to the fact that it is only one year old and due to the<br />
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perceived need to cover all bases in the proposal. Down-selects should occur as soon as possible to help<br />
focus the program and reduce management burden. The down-selection process should be based on<br />
realistic transparent projections related to the points identified by the researchers and listed in the first<br />
paragraph above.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
This project is too large and the presentation too short for an adequate review. Overall communication<br />
appeared good, but it was not clear that the many individual projects would receive timely and objective<br />
evaluation by the managers and integration with the pilot- and full-scale production pipelines. With 50M<br />
in funding, this project should produce algal biofuel. Will it be able to make timely changes in R&D so as<br />
achieve that goal?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
As stated above, the program appears to be a relatively strong collection of project investigators who<br />
bring their technology to the program without an appropriate overall view of just exactly is the overal<br />
system of unit operations that will be applied, and how their technology should fit into the system. The PI<br />
needs to set the tone and gials, and not let individuals assume their technology is the anchor around which<br />
every other unit operation should bend.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
The project is too large and diverse to review based on a 1 hour presentation. All reviewer comments<br />
should be viewed in that light. We don't have a clear picture of the overall effort and the state of progress.<br />
The project is well-structured around specific quantitative goals and decision points.<br />
It would be valuable to reveiwers and to project managers to have currently achieved results compared to<br />
the stated project goal and to the pre-project state of technology for each activity.<br />
Within the constraints of the funding structure and the interests of the participating partners, increase<br />
focus on the biggest technical hurdles,--strain, cultivation, harvest, extraction and techno-economics. The<br />
program will not fail due to lack of technology to convert lipids to fuels. Some of the co-product studies<br />
appear to be premature because strain and process will dramatically affect co-product characteristics. Coproduct<br />
work should be limited to early feasibility demonstration.<br />
Algea screening processes need to be validated against pilot results to determine if the screening<br />
processes and parameters select superior strains for end use conditions.<br />
Having the project dispersed among many institutions does not appear to be a weakness.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Yes, the consortium has already held several regular meetings during the past year, and will continue to<br />
do this in the future. We agree completely with the reviewer and stated during the presentation that the<br />
organism, Botryococcus braunii, is currently being sequenced by JGI. We did not try to infer any prior<br />
involvement in this process by NAABB until our organization was formed. The community of scientists<br />
that provided the materials for the JGI sequencing program included a team of investigators from Univ. of<br />
Arizona, Texas A&M, LANL, Northern Arizona Univ., and the Univ. of Kentucky. Except for the last<br />
two institutions, the others are part of the NAABB Botryococcus program, and these investigators are<br />
currently working with JGI to finish the genomic sequencing of one of the strains, and annotating and<br />
mining the sequence information that has already been provided by JGI. This is certainly something we<br />
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always have in mind in the Algal Biology and Algal Cultivation teams. As we identify promising genes in<br />
Algal Biology we will put them into model or production strains to test them against the baseline (parent<br />
strain). Our project on developing a pond-simulating photobioreactor that can be widely deployed across<br />
the NAABB will allow us to acquire standardized (comparable) rate and lipid productivity data from<br />
across the consortium that can be incorporated into our economic models. Within our 15 and 18 month<br />
(June and September 2011) deliverables the NAABB program is set to generate the baseline cases along<br />
with a preliminary assessment of all of the quantitative parameters for our harvesting and conversion<br />
technologies in order to determine feasibility for technical success. We recognize the need for full testing<br />
of strains under outdoor cultivation conditions. Our strain selection approach is multi-phased with a highthroughput<br />
screen that selects strains in the lab for growth and lipid productivity. Those that make it<br />
through this initial test then are taken to outdoor pond environments for further evaluation of their<br />
characteristics and robustness. Finally, we have to date isolated over 800 samples of algae, and screened<br />
over 400 in the lab for productivity. About 60 of these show excellent promise, and several of the strains<br />
are being tested in our small outdoor raceways. Stresses do need to be added to the second tier screening.<br />
We consider the efforts to be fairly efficient in using a combination of plating and FACS isolation of<br />
single algae. Selecting for ability to grow on solid and liquid media, exhibit reasonably fast growth rates<br />
in liquid culture and accumulate lipids are our first tier selections to quickly narrow down the field of<br />
candidates. The Solix Biosystems partnership is an important one for the consortium as they provide an<br />
excellent working process for commercial photobioreactors. This process will help us evaluate their<br />
feasibility in a number of applications, including the ability of PBRs to contain organisms along with<br />
issues of predatory and bacterial infections. With the recent placement of a Solix photobioreactor at<br />
NMSU, we will also be able to address a number of other issues associated with the best utilization of<br />
PBR’s in algal cultivation. Our objective for this peer review was not to describe any technology in detail<br />
but to provide an overview that would fit within the allotted time period. The wastewater and produced<br />
water efforts within NAABB have as major objectives understanding the nutrient utilization and recycle<br />
of such waters, but most importantly the contamination issues and clean-up processes that would be<br />
required to make this important source of water usable in algal cultivation. The requirement for large<br />
amounts of biomass is limiting NAABB’s ability to carry out experiments on large animals. The timing is<br />
now getting critical and major decisions will be made within the next couple of months as to what animal<br />
studies move forward based on availability of biomass.<br />
Project: 9.5.1.4 Cellana<br />
Title: Large-Scale Production of Fuels and Feed from Marine Microalgae<br />
Presenter: Jeff Obbard<br />
Presentation Date: Thursday, April 07, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 4.14 0.83 7<br />
Progress 4.29 1.39 7<br />
Relevance 5.43 1.84 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 4.14 1.46 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
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The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
What is the program? It was not clearly stated. One can look at the diagrams and still not follow exactly<br />
what the program is. There are too many disparate programs listed, but which is it that will be pursued?<br />
Alternatively, there could be more effective delivery by consolidation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Project has just started and has good targets/ goal schedule. Most data presented were based on a single<br />
diatom; screening of new strains (500) be fruitful--- but what are they? What are their tolerances? How<br />
much lipid do they produce? These aspects might be considered in future, given that the project is just<br />
starting.<br />
The productivity target may be unrealistic; productivity values that were presented were extrapolated to a<br />
large scale from a small experiment without any of the negative factors of large scale considered or<br />
explicitly identified (e.g., competitors, pathogens). Similarly, amino acid contents of several "novel"<br />
strains were presented by number alone (not algal group) and look as if they supply reasonable required<br />
amino acids but without control data from a terrestrial protein source or fish etc. were hard to evaluate.<br />
The project is promising due to integration at the Kona facility of all aspects (large scale growth to<br />
facilities for processing and biofuel separation).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The focal point of Cellana is to develop new strains of microalgae with high productivity, demonstrate<br />
sustainable production of biomass and bio-product, efficient harvesting, all based on pilot-scale, and to<br />
further demonstrate end-to-end process integration. However, there are concerns regarding the proposed<br />
approaches by Cellana: 1- Random mutagenesis to generate and isolate strains with enhanced lipid<br />
production would not work. It is the wrong biological approach, the reason being that mutagenesis tends<br />
to eliminate single enzymatic steps or processes but it is not designed to induce enhanced generation of a<br />
specific biosynthetic pathway and accumulation of product. Moreover, chemical, UV or similar<br />
mutagenesis would introduce, with certainty, multiple (dozens or hundreds) of mutations that invariably<br />
lower fitness of the organism, resulting in lower overall growth and productivity. 2- Reference was made<br />
to algal "husbandry" by which to improve microalgal productivity. Aside from the bad choice of term,<br />
husbandry entails genetic crosses, something that is not known to occur in microalgae. Cellana ought to<br />
seek help with their proposed approaches to avoid going down the wrong path(s) in their otherwise<br />
valuable effort.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Among a number of objectives, the most important is to be able to test and validate different culture and<br />
harvesting operations at production scale. Many of the approaches (such as strain selection, optimizing<br />
culture conditions, and harvesting/dewatering) seemed very conventional and unlikely to yield significant<br />
improvements in yield.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Although the basic concept is reasonable - intensive innoculum development followed by deployment<br />
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into open ponds operated on a short interval - the PI did not demonstate much data supporting sound<br />
research and deployment, other than a multitude of screening work developed. Little was said about the<br />
large scale deployment and no project management plan was identified and the PI (Huntley) did not<br />
present with the facility manager presenting instead. Milestones were absent and not well defiend.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The operation and optimization of the algae growth system appears to be technically sound, but the<br />
approach, structure, and activities of the project appear to lack critical, objective review in the context of<br />
large scale biofuel commercialization. The current effort appears to be directed at small-scale, high-value<br />
algae products, and not at large scale biofuel production.<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has made progress in its objectives and stated project<br />
management plan has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Progress appears adequate to the extent of the program thus far.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The project is just beginning and only Cellana has begun initial work.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
More than 500 strains have been isolated and screened. Some have been subjected to pilot-scale growth<br />
and production, as well as techno-economic and sustainability analysis based on (presumably) a prior<br />
3+years of Consortium result.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The project was funded in Sept 2010 and results were very preliminary. Some of the results seemed to be<br />
extrapolated from small scale experiments and assumptions were not always clear.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Other than strain isolation and screening, little progress was identified other than statements of<br />
achievements, some of which did not stand up under questioning. Milestones related to production of fuel<br />
were made (gallons per acre per year) that were misrepresented. The PI should include all steps in the<br />
growth process, including the area and time devoted to the production of the innoculum should be<br />
included in the calculation of biomass productivity. One cannot only use the time that the innoculums<br />
spend in the final grow out ponds. Finally, water use needs to be presented in terms of the amount of<br />
product used. One should not say a goal has been met by reducing water use to 10,000 m 3 . This term has<br />
to be relative to some measureble resource utilzied. 10,000 m 3 per WHAT?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The strength of the progress is the operation of an outdoor system producing 1 metric ton/month dry algae<br />
biomass, but this needs to be viewed in the context of 1000 MT/day needed for an at-scale biofuel plant.<br />
Data presented on productivity and economics lacked sufficient detail to be meaningful in the evaluation<br />
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of progress. Hidden assumptions in productivity numbers and project economics further obfuscate the<br />
state of progress.<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
It is hard to guess the relevance. If the deliverables were better defined, they may be compared with the<br />
OBP program goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 8<br />
The projects goals align with the Biomass program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 8<br />
The Cellana project addresses operational aspects of microalgal cultivation, cost of production & process<br />
sustainability<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The project is highly relevant to program goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
It's relevant to look at marine strains and Hawaii is an appropriate place. In terms of applicaitons, the use<br />
of defatted biomass as an animal feed is overlooking the reality that lipids are the desired nutrient of fish<br />
farmer. So the real value for feeds is in the lipids, specifically those with neutaceutical value. Was this<br />
considered?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Operating and optimizing a real world cultivation system is essential for the potential development of<br />
algae biofuels.<br />
Specific project work on economics and co-products are not relevant to commercial scale biofuel<br />
production.<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
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harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Goals are listed rather than CSFs.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Some factors are well-considered at this early stage (e.g., ability to return seawater without nutrient<br />
enrichment to sea due to algal N depletion to cause lipids to rise). Others need more attention. For<br />
example, more attention is needed on the effect of different strains and conficting goals of lipid extraction<br />
on byproducts (e.g., aquaculture feeds). Algal strains lacking high carotenoid levels are needed for<br />
production of fish pellets for cod to prevent them being pink, not white....a market problem. A major<br />
current deficiency in aquaculture feeds for marine fish is to supply omega 3 fatty acids---this is leading to<br />
overfishing of small fish and krill to supply protein/omega 3 fatty acids to salmon etc farms. It would be<br />
helpful for this young project to address how problems such as this can be addressed to produce valuable<br />
byproducts (e.g. aquaculture feeds) while producing biofuels in a sustainable manner.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
As with the other projects, these revolve around microalgal productivity, efficiency and cost of<br />
harvesting, downstream carbon intensity, and aquafeed product value. Cellana should talk to RAE, as<br />
they have developed an apparently efficient way of harvesting algal biomass.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Critical success factors were described but it was unclear whether the project will overcome these factors<br />
using traditional approaches.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 2<br />
The presentation of the data was "couched" in terms that were misleading.<br />
The group has no extraction technology put in place and no obvious mechanism to deal with the salt that<br />
will be most prevalent.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Critical success factors are identified, but they are defined in the context of producing a high value algae<br />
product. A limited amount of technology developed is likely to be applicable to large scale biofuel<br />
production.<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
Publications are in hand already. The project appears to be self-contained. What comparisons with other<br />
oil production rates are expressed? No simple comparisons can be found.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
This is a new project and does not yet have tech transfer.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Cellana should talk to RAE, as they have developed an apparently efficient way of harvesting algal<br />
biomass.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
The potential for technology transfer is good.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
The project seemed fine in this area.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
It would be very valuable to share the results of screening 500 strains of algae, and how the screening<br />
results compare to real world productivity. Because of the focus and reliance on high value co-products,<br />
the design report will likely have limited value for advancing large scale biofuel technology.<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project approach,<br />
scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
My overall impression is that there could be more value to this project that could be achieved. There are<br />
questions about the ways the cycle time is being calculated, and some comments about how yields are<br />
expressed that also detract from perceptions.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
This is a project with great potential; its success depends upon transparency, accurate comparisons etc.<br />
These factors are required to recognize problems and correct them.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Slide 12 on productivity claims "Sustained Productivity" of 200 MT dw per ha per year. How do they<br />
propose to achieve this, when best-case scenario on sustained productivity of microalgae is 20-30 g per<br />
square m per d (~100 MT dw per ha per y)? There are concerns regarding the proposed approaches by<br />
Cellana: 1- Random mutagenesis to generate and isolate strains with enhanced lipid production would not<br />
work. It is the wrong biological approach, the reason being that mutagenesis tends to eliminate single<br />
enzymatic steps or processes but it is not designed to induce enhanced generation of a specific<br />
biosynthetic pathway and accumulation of product. Moreover, chemical, UV or similar mutagenesis<br />
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would introduce, with certainty, multiple (dozens or hundreds) of mutations that invariably lower fitness<br />
of the organism, resulting in lower overall growth and productivity. 2- Reference was made to algal<br />
"husbandry" by which to improve microalgal productivity. Aside from the bad choice of term, husbandry<br />
entails genetic crosses, something that is not known to occur by, let alone controlled in microalgae.<br />
Cellana ought to seek help with their proposed approaches to avoid going down the wrong path(s) in their<br />
otherwise valuable effort. What is 4 in-pond harvesting processes?? 3 out-of-pond harvesting processes??<br />
These need to be explained.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Overall Impression: 3<br />
The cultivation ponds and ability to conduct aquaculture feed co-product studies are impressive. A major<br />
problem was that the presentation gave the impression that Cellana was achieving 100-150 MT/ha-yr of<br />
algae production in the ~1000-m2 ponds depicted in the aerial photo. Upon inquiry, the presenter clarified<br />
that that productivity was achieved over the short term in 200-L tanks. In addition, total dry matter was<br />
presented, not the relevant characteristic, ash free dry weight. This came across as an effort to mislead the<br />
reviewer panel and DOE. In addition, the target of ~200 MT/ha-yr was presented but without any serious<br />
discussion of how the capability to achieve that extraordinary productivity would be developed.<br />
"Hydrodynamically-induced flashing light" was listed as one of the methods to improve productivity, but<br />
this classical effect is operative only at the milli-second scale, and the energy consumption to achieve that<br />
scale through mixing would be too large for a good energy ROI.<br />
In-pond sedimentation and "sweeping" was touted as a major advance, but the equipment needs and costs<br />
to make use of this process at the 1000-acre scale need to be projected to determine if it is feasible. Other<br />
issues not addressed include:<br />
Wet extraction studies were conducted, but what was the solvent loss rate? What is the ratio of PBR<br />
ground coverage to pond area, and how does that relate to overall areal productivity and costs?<br />
The presentation stated 3 years of consortium operation, $90 million invested, 20% completion on the<br />
DOE project, but the main results seem to be construction of the facility (good). Very few data were<br />
presented for a project touting this level of maturity. How was the figure of $90 million invested arrived<br />
at?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
The presentation described a very conventional algal production process. The primary value of funding<br />
this facility is its potential to test different processes at a large scale. Although it is very early in the<br />
project, I am concerned whether the 9M in funding will yield results that will be useful to the biomass<br />
program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
The progress presented seems very small compared to the amount of money invested (over 90 million).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
This project may have great value in developing algae of aquaculture feed, but it is not on a path to<br />
commercialize large scale biofuel production.<br />
The value of the whole algae production optimized to aquaculture feed needs to be rigorously compared<br />
to the value of biofuel plus lipid extracted algae meal. It appears very likley that the economics are much<br />
better for optimized whole algae aquaculture feed than they are for biofuel production with coproducts.<br />
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Project: 9.5.1.5 Arizona State University<br />
Title: Sustainable Algal Biofuels Consortium<br />
Presenter: John McGowen<br />
Presentation Date: Thursday, April 07, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 7.43 1.18 7<br />
Progress 6.71 1.28 7<br />
Relevance 7.43 0.90 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 6.57 1.50 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 9<br />
The Approaches are well developed and firmly tied to expected outcomes and deliverables.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 8<br />
This project concentrates on feedstock development including developing a matrix of algal biomass<br />
produced under different growth/processing conditions; screening for lipases and application of<br />
commercial lipases; develop biochemical strategies for conversion of lipids to FAME etc. (the latter just<br />
starting).<br />
Excellent work to date, especially in terms of careful QC evaluation between labs of different partners<br />
and within labs, of different technicians. This is a model for all DoE funded projects, and helps to assure<br />
success of the project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
SABC will examine multiple biomass samples to explore the possibility of extracting lipid and<br />
carbohydrate-based biofuels. Theirs is essentially a compositional analysis methods development, as well<br />
as development of methods for evaluation of productivity in growing algal cultures. Pretreatment steps<br />
will be employed that may eliminate need for drying biomass and offer lower cost and lower energy route<br />
to lipid extraction and conversion. Enzyme discovery will supplement commercial enzyme evaluation to<br />
facilitate conversion with heretofore unexplored biomass. SABC ought to talk with RAE, as they have<br />
developed method for the effective harvesting of microalgal biomass.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 7<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Project approach and direction are sound and were presented well.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 8<br />
This is a precisely focussed project, with obvious data and material controls put in place. Very smart to<br />
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look at whole cell conversion (i.e. use algal biomass similar to other biomass) coupled with the immediate<br />
testing against ASTM standards. The deconstruction of biomass is usefull as well (for eventual enzymatic<br />
hydrolysis to simple sugars) and couples this work with the tremendous amount of work already done on<br />
biomass (in this area). It is rather apparrant the system rules in this program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Excellent approach to working toward standardization of algae analytical techniques.<br />
Specific quantitative goals for the conversion processes should be defined and expressed. These goals<br />
should be based on a clear definition of quantitative feasibility parameters. Criteria for milestone decision<br />
should be defined based on these quantitative commercial feasibility goals.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Thank you for the supportive comments and constructive feedback.<br />
We agree with the reviewer that establishing both goals and metrics for the conversion process will add<br />
value to the project. To compare conversion conditions that will allow down-selection to more effective<br />
conditions we’ll focus on component yield: 1. Mass of sugars released from pretreatment and enzymatic<br />
hydrolysis of algae. Treatments releasing ≥50% of the initial algal carbohydrate composition will be<br />
selected for further study. 2. Mass of lipid extracted from algal biomass either before or after pretreatment<br />
and enzymatic hydrolysis, based on a statistically relevant difference (≥20%) between treatments at 95%<br />
confidence level. These two metrics will allow for selection of conversion processes that will lead to<br />
deconstruction of algae providing both high lipid and carbohydrate removal across different growth<br />
regimes. While these criteria may identify effective pretreatment and enzymatic hydrolysis processes, it<br />
may not possible to link these targets to quantitative, commercial, feasible goals based on the lack of an<br />
industrial standard process.<br />
Additional criteria for measuring both goals and progress in the conversion task related to both enzyme<br />
discovery and enzyme efficacy in lipid/cell wall deconstruction are more difficult to quantify.<br />
Examples for a minimum benchmark for enzyme discovery: 1. Selection of 10 thermophilic fungal strains<br />
isolated from targeted screens, demonstrating enzymatic activity using processed algae (control,<br />
extracted, pretreated) for genomic sequencing. And for enzyme efficacy: 1. Demonstrate activity<br />
(protease amd or lipase) based on a statistically relevant difference (≥20%) compared to control<br />
conditions, at a 95% confidence interval.<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has made progress in its objectives and stated project<br />
management plan has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The project has not been in operation long enough to generate progress.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Good progress and milestones are carefully spelled out. Project seems well managed and coordinated.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Too early to tell.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 7<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Progress thus far was mainly on QA/QC issues between labs. Project plans were sound.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Fine for time funded.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Good progress is evident in standardized characterization of algae biomass.<br />
It appears that the basic criteria for measuring progress in pre-treatment and biomass conversion are not in<br />
place.<br />
Growing biomass appears to be a bottleneck. Partnership with facility that can supply kg quantities might<br />
be valuable.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
The primary criteria for measuring progress in pre-treatment and biomass conversion for this project will<br />
be based on the mass of both carbohydrate and lipid removed/extracted from algae grown under different<br />
growth regimes (See above section in Approach). Coupling the advanced characterization method<br />
development and leveraging the experience within the team in quantifying cellulosic biochemical<br />
conversion, along with the detailed biochemical fingerprinting (QA/QC) enables the SABC to develop<br />
and then apply critical tools to allow for quantification of the biochemical conversion process in algal<br />
biomass. Defining the criteria and developing the tools to help quantify the biochemical conversion<br />
processes are a critical early objective for the project.<br />
Biomass supply in the kg range will come from the lead institution ASU. We have devoted significant<br />
time and resources into the biomass supply pipeline to ensure adequate supply.<br />
We are confident in our ability to meet the needs of the project as defined. However, we are always<br />
actively exploring where we can expand the potential sourcing of biomass especially as we look to year<br />
two activities and or if we progress faster than expected and have the desire/need to take things to a larger<br />
scale or look at additional production strains - especially from [pre]-commercial sources (especially from<br />
any of the other DOE funded consortia).<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 8<br />
The project has the potential to be extremely relevant. Investigators have considered this aim in the<br />
program definition.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Bench-top scale is the major limitation, but project personnel indicated their hope to provide their data on<br />
best feedstock species/growth conditions and processing for biofuels to other DoE projects that could<br />
implement at larger (production-scale) facilities.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The work provides a basis for integrated algal bio-refinery operations while offering a broad biofuel<br />
portfolio.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 7<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The project goals are highly relevant to the Biomass Program plan.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 9<br />
Most relevant given that focus on whole cell use for fabrication of a range of high value fuels (not just<br />
extraction of bio-oil for biodiesel). The deconstruction of biomass fits much of the work being done in the<br />
biomass program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 6<br />
High relevance for algae characterization work. Rational design of process is contingent on having well<br />
characterized feedstock.<br />
High relevance for biochemical pre-treatment. This addresses a major hurdle in unlocking economical<br />
value of algae slurry.<br />
Work on converting FAME, FFA, and sugars to fuels is not relevant to overcoming hurdles to algal<br />
biofuel commercialization. Algal biofuels will not fail because of fuel conversion process viability.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
While we acknowledge the general sentiment questioning the relevance of the work converting FAME,<br />
FFA, and sugars into fuels as not relevant to overcoming the hurdles to algal biofuel commercialization,<br />
we feel some of the nuance of what it really takes to take a new feedstock and make fuel (new or old) may<br />
be overlooked in that sentiment. Neither the FAME, FFA, nor sugars produced from algae or any other<br />
biomass source will be 100 percent pure or reagent grade. The small portion of the project devoted to<br />
making and characterizing finished fuels will evaluate the potential for these impurities to 1) negatively<br />
affect conversion process chemistry or operability and 2) negatively affect fuel performance.<br />
Additionally, for some fuels such as biodiesel or renewable diesel, both made from lipids, the feedstock<br />
chemical structure can have a significant impact on the final fuel properties, potentially in a negative way<br />
that would create additional barriers to commercial deployment. While not the main focus of the project,<br />
knowing if these issues exist early on will be critical for more rapid commercialization of algal biofuels.<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
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The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The CSFs are enumerated more as the deliverables of the work. That is not too objectionable, given the<br />
thoughtful analysis leading to the program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Continued attention to detail and QC is important. Interaction with an appropriate DoE-funded project(s)<br />
that have production scale facilities towards end of project would be ideal. Perhaps program managers can<br />
help here.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Project aims to develop a suite of rapid, accurate, and reproducible analytical methods for determination<br />
of algal biomass composition that can be applied to whole cell biomass as well as fractions generated by<br />
processing of the biomass. Effort further aims to apply optimization of biomass pretreatment, including<br />
enzymatic hydrolysis and conversion operations of the biomass with integration into a single, efficient<br />
process. These items are a tall order to be achieved in this short period of time.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 7<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 7<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 7<br />
High marks here. In particular the use of ASTM standards from the get go. Correlating that to the profiles<br />
of the strains grown is appropriate. The program becomes even better when it considers natural wild<br />
mixed cultures instead of pure strains.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Plans for earliest possible techno-economic modeling to produce quantitative goals for feasibility<br />
demonstration is essential.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
This cannot be scored yet. For success, there must be coordination, and there will be significant use of the<br />
results.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
Good goals for this.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Too early to tell.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
The potential for technology transfer is good.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
Very well organized and appropriate, actually excellent balance between NREL, Sandia, and ASU.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Excellent cooperation with external institutions during robin development of analytical procedures.<br />
Good sharing with many results public.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project approach,<br />
scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
There is significant potential with this project. It is extremely well designed.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
If project continues with current scientific rigor and pragmatic outlook, high success is possible.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Interesting presentation. What is the rationale for the selection of Chlorella, Scenedesmus, and<br />
Nannochloropsis in this work? Definition of the species and strains is important for the proper assessment<br />
of the effort and its outcomes. Please identify the precise strains employed. Overlap with the work<br />
performed in other supported projects?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Overall Impression: 7<br />
The focus is biochemical conversion of algal biomass, but the presentation acknowledges that biomass<br />
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composition is a function of species and growth conditions. Of the limitless combinations to test, their<br />
focus on "production" strains is sensible, but still the growth conditions and any hypothesized<br />
mechanisms to control composition are not discussed. In addition, what are the backup plans in case<br />
biomass production falls short of the needs for the rest of the research?<br />
The lab QAQC and analytical methods development work will put the project on a good footing from the<br />
start. More data were presented from this young project than from more established projects. But what are<br />
the details of the plans to develop real-time high-throughput methods for compositional analysis?<br />
Projections should be prepared on the economics of using enzymes, ionic liquids, etc. to be used as a<br />
baseline to evaluate performance and long-term prospects of the processes being developed. An estimate<br />
should be made for each process and envisioned integrated processes. The initial projections will no<br />
doubt be unfavorable, but this will help in planning the course of process development. Economic<br />
performance projections should be re-evaluated periodically as the results come in.<br />
The commercial partners should be expected to allow complete review and inspection of the data they<br />
generate in order to maintain confidence in the results.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Very nice presentation of a multi-institutional project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
The best consortium presentations by far.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
The concepts of hydrolyzing and fermenting algae and lipid extracted algae are potentially enabling for<br />
algal biofuels. To determine how far the concepts are from commercialability quantitative goals for<br />
feasibility demonstration need to be defined. These should be based on preliminary techno-economic<br />
modeling and should include parameters such as yields, payloads, cycle times, enzyme costs, feedstock<br />
requirements.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
The rationale for the choice of strains for this work is based on 1) experience within the team, 2) overlap<br />
with existing programs, and 3) the fact that these strains are comparable to the best biofuel production<br />
strains in the literature (i.e. it is a combination of strain availability and experience with these strains in<br />
our indoor and outdoor production environment, growing them under different conditions, and at a scale<br />
that allows for high confidence in our ability to deliver the necessary biomass quality and quantity to the<br />
team). The strains are all maintained as part of the strain collection within the Laboratory for Algae<br />
Research and Biotechnology at Arizona State University and are all publically available. We will disclose<br />
the specific strains (and source) to the DOE and upon publication of results which will include the growth<br />
conditions utilized to achieve different biochemical compositions for a given strain. As discussed above<br />
in section 2, we are confident in our ability to supply the necessary biomass to meet the needs of the<br />
program as currently defined.<br />
As to the question around detail plans for real-time/high-throughput compositional analysis, based on<br />
encouraging preliminary results within the partner institutions, we will continue to develop, LC/MS<br />
analysis, Infrared (IR)-based spectroscopy methods and chemometric models for rapid compositional<br />
analysis with the goal to make these methods the default compositional analysis methods. Application of<br />
these methods may reduce compositional analysis time from days to less than an hour (e.g., NIR based<br />
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methods) and can also significantly reduce sample size (e.g., LC/MS). The results from these analyses can<br />
guide pretreatment and enzyme testing and development tasks and lead to a down-selection for strains<br />
best suited to fuel production (i.e. highest lipid and carbohydrate composition). These chemical<br />
compositional analysis studies will reveal to us what chemical additions to the pretreatment step (acids,<br />
bases, etc.) will be effective at recovering some of the sugars and assisting in the detailed process<br />
characterization around the different algal deconstruction, enzyme discovery and efficacy pathways we<br />
are exploring. Having an idea about the carbohydrate make-up of a cell is going to suggest potential<br />
enzyme preps that may be useful in the hydrolysis step and we feel this work will be equally applicable to<br />
whole algal biomass and to the algal biomass that remains after lipid extraction.<br />
The several constructive comments about techno-economic analysis throughout this review we<br />
acknowledge are spot on. We are focused, in a broad sense, on the ultimate goal of reducing costs to<br />
allow for economically viable and usable products, including biofuels, from algae. However, in the<br />
current funded scope we have acknowledged that we will have to leverage our technical results and make<br />
our data available to the many programs funded by the DOE that already are established in order to look<br />
at the technoeconomics of algae biofuel production - but may benefit from additional data to feed and<br />
exercise the models they are generating. The information and data we generate we will continue to<br />
actively seek to share within the community and ideally leverage, especially through the large-scale<br />
projects funded by the DOE such as the other algal consortia, the significant emphasis and defined scope<br />
of which is already established by the DOE for technoeconomics of biofuel production from algal<br />
biomass.<br />
Project: 9.5.1.6 CABComm<br />
Title: Proposed research activities for the Consortium for Algal Biofuels Commercialization<br />
Presenter: Paul Falkowski<br />
Presentation Date: Thursday, April 07, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 5.17 0.90 6<br />
Progress 5.33 0.94 6<br />
Relevance 5.50 0.76 6<br />
Critical Success Factors 5.17 1.46 6<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The approach seems reasonable for such a disparate, multi-pronged program<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Project has just started. Presentation did not outline goals and management strategies clearly. While many<br />
good people are involved, some concern was raised by the presentation, which stated that award monies<br />
would be evenly divided among PIs; some goals, especially the larger-scale ones that are so critical,<br />
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might require more funding and sub-groups that were not evident in presentation.<br />
PO4-3 is indeed important, but is only one piece of the puzzle. The presentation flashed a slide of other<br />
projects that are included in the contract, but they were not explained.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
In consultation with Commercial Partners, CAB-Comm will: Identify the most pressing research needs<br />
and assign a priority status: Identify the research group(s) with the capabilities and expertise to address<br />
each priority item: Identify milestones and deliverables for specific projects<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Not possible to adequately score this item because of inadequate detail in presentation. There were no<br />
detailed descriptions in the presentation about the role of each laboratory. In final slides, 5-6 general<br />
objectives were listed for each of the three goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
See Overall Impressions<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Milestones and deliverables were not defined. Targets of research are broad and vague.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has made progress in its objectives and stated project<br />
management plan has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
No actual progress expected because of the very recent actual award. At least plans are being formulated.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Just started.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Too early to tell, project just started (last week).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 6<br />
No progress to date--funding just begun.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Since this is a new project, the expected progress is to have defined objectives and a management plan.<br />
These were not presented.<br />
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Presenter Response<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The directions presented will be relevant if successfully addressed and completed.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Only partially explained in presentation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The three research focus areas of CAB-Comm fall within critical stages of the overall algal biofuels value<br />
chain.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Not possible to adequately score this item because of inadequate detail in presentation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
See Overall Impressions<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Crop protection, nutrient utilization and recycling, and genetic tool development are essential for algal<br />
biofuel commercialization. The project has not defined expected outputs.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Some listing of legitimate CSFs was presented.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
A strong management structure that links PI's goals and ensures a focus on end goals is critical (and was<br />
not apparent from presentation).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Critical success factors to technical and commercial viability: Integration of research projects with<br />
commercial partners. Achieve milestones and deliverable on time. Continuous review of projects to retain<br />
commercial relevance. Potential Challenges to overcome and to achieve project results: With 21 academic<br />
participants, communication between labs and commercial partners will be essential. With only two<br />
industrial partners, commercial research focus will be much easier to mamage. Demonstrate how project<br />
will advance the commercial viability of biomass: Sapphire projects are directly tied to viability of first<br />
integrated algal biorefinery - due to start operations in 2012. Life Technology projects will enter market<br />
as research tools in 2011.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Unfortunately, there were no detailed descriptions about how achievement of milestones will change or<br />
not change goals<br />
or collaborations between laboratories.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
See Overall Impressions<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
No evidence of indentification of critical factors as defined above was presented.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
Coordination will be one of the big challenges for this program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
Just starting.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
CAB-Comm works closely with Sapphire Energy in the area of Tech transfer<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Potential for technology transfer is good given that this is a multi-institutional collaboration.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
See Overall Impressions<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Within the consortium there is a broad group of academic and industrial partners. No plan for outside<br />
communications and co-operation was given.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project approach,<br />
scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
This project has potential. The investigator was not happy with the reduced scope, but it is hoped this<br />
becomes a non-issue in favor of real progress.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
Project needs integrated milestones and goals to succeed. PIs can be expected to do good basic science.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Interesting and well handled presentation. Telling it like it is without exaggeration and false promises.<br />
Impressive group of investigators in CAB-Comm, increases the credibility and likelihood of success of<br />
this effort. The planning is good, critical progress and direction control items are in place and, therefore,<br />
there is a strong likelihood of useful results emanating from this effort.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Since this project just began, it was inappropriate to evaluate progress. However, the presentation lacked<br />
descriptions about the role of each laboratory and how achievement of milestones will change or not<br />
change goals or collaborations between laboratories.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
As this was just funded it is very difficult to review. It is clear that the presenter has a good perspective on<br />
the field (he nailed the P issue on the head) but the "world is about to collapse" terminology could be<br />
avoided as a motivational tool. Also, funding each PI 100,000K equally is likely to keep this a program<br />
that only produces individual work, by each PI, and could undermine any chance of building up a true<br />
consortium that develops a process.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Although this is a new project, the presentation of scope, goals, and approach did not meet minimum<br />
expectations.<br />
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Presenter Response<br />
Project: 7.2.1.7 University of Nebraska Lincoln<br />
Title: Research for Developing Renewable Biofuels from Algae<br />
Presenter: George Oyler<br />
Presentation Date: Thursday, April 07, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 3.29 1.28 7<br />
Progress 3.86 1.46 7<br />
Relevance 3.43 1.59 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 3.43 1.59 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Some of the basic studies were desirable approaches. Some of the extensions, such as the Photobioreactor<br />
system or the nanobody approaches are far less justifiable.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Focus is on developing photobioreactor with new/improved processes for concentration of algae/lipid<br />
product. The project is developing a lipidome and transcriptome for relevant conditions (N deprivation,<br />
acetate free media etc.). Evaluation of algal viruses is being made for a processing step. Bioreactors of<br />
this type may not be efficient for scale-up and costing of processes and procedures needs more analysis.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 6<br />
[1] Project aims to increase fundamental knowledge of lipid biosynthetic pathways, lipid transport, and<br />
storage and secretion mechanisms in two important eukaryotic algal genera, Chlamydomonas and<br />
Chlorella; [2] Develop new and improved technologies for manipulating genomes and gene expression in<br />
eukaryotic green algae; and [3] Establish a state-of-the-art Photobioreactor Research Facility to develop<br />
low cost, efficient algal cells harvesting strategies and to improve current technologies by developing<br />
novel, next generation photobioreactors for algal biofuel and specialty chemicals production.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 2<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Goals are focused on lipid production, photobioreactor development, and harvesting. Novel aspects of the<br />
project include use of viral enzymes for algal lysis and nanobodies for algal harvesting. The<br />
photobioreactor research appears to ignore the results from decades of work by other groups.<br />
Unfortunately, the nanobody approach appears to be wildly unrealistic for real world conditions.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 2<br />
In addition to developing state of the art photobioreactors, the PI's suggest to tether cells to cellulose<br />
membranes. As a laboratory excercise on a nano-scale, this is most interesting, but unrealistic commercial<br />
scale production. In addition to the costs of cooling and materials, biofilms will coat the internal walls of<br />
any photobioreactor. Such films will restrict photon transfer and undermine the need to tether the cells. A<br />
simpler approach would be to innoculate with metaoblically manipulated cells that secrete oil and allow<br />
them to coat the inner walls. Still, cooling costs will likely challenge this approach. There is also the issue<br />
of CO2 delivery to tethered cells within a commercial scale photobioreactor system.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Well-defined criteria for success and milestone decision points were not presented. It did not appear that<br />
the scope was defiend by a preliminary evaluation of commercial viability.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
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2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has made progress in its objectives and stated project<br />
management plan has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
On the basis of the results in the presentation, I believe more progress on the key thrusts could be made if<br />
less attention was given to nanobodies, etc.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 3<br />
This project is 50% complete. Membrane development and antibody stages of processing development<br />
appear expensive and their effectiveness for scale-up, especially with algae growing under commercial<br />
conditions needs to be demonstrated more rigorously.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Not a whole lot of progress yet. However, the effort aims to address: 1. High resolution lipidomics<br />
analysis capacity developed, 2. Transcriptomic analysis of N deprivation underway, 3. Development of<br />
novel molecular tools for genetic manipulation of algae, 4. Advancement of molecular algae viral<br />
pathogenesis, 5. Development of nanobody tools for algae growth, harvesting and research.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 2<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The project appears to have met some of its objectives (development of molecular tools, etc).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 4<br />
A fair amount of data was presented.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Data compared against a well defiend criteria to measure progress were not presented.<br />
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Presenter Response<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
There are some good outcomes that have relevance. There are others that do not.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 3<br />
PIs should refocus on core goals/milestones and do costing/scale-up calculations to justify that this is a<br />
sustainable biofuels' production process. In the absence of this, the types of processes and materials being<br />
developed and the bioreactor system itself raises conerns about the amount of energy input required to the<br />
biofuel's derived energy that will be available.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
- Development of an understanding of TAG oil formation in lipid bodies after N deprivation of<br />
microalgae, including de novo synthesis vs. redistribution of membrane lipids. - Development of novel<br />
nanobody based membrane linkage and cell harvesting systems.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 2<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Unfortunately, the project's approach and results do not seem relevant to meeting platform goals and<br />
objectives.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 2<br />
One cannot be relevant until the work is appropriately placed in the reports by Benneman and co-authors.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The engineered nano antibody work does not appeear to have commerical potential at scale.<br />
The reasoning for pursuing PBRs was vague and non-technical and did not show a pathway to overcome<br />
cost issues for PBRs that have been shown in techno-economic modeling.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
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i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
These were not really addressed in the presentation. The project could use a review of these even at this<br />
stage of completion as part of a consideration of what the valuable deliverables should be.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Demonstration of energy efficiency and sustainability of processing technologies under development is<br />
very important.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Transition of basic molecular research to algae biofuels and bioproducts is a challenge that is being<br />
addressed by team approach involving multiple disciplines<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 2<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The presenter was not successful in convincing me that this project would advance the state of biology or<br />
technology relative to platform goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 2<br />
Most hurdles to photobioreactors were not well addressed in the data. The PI should revisit reports by<br />
Benneman and co-authors.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Project viability criteria based on commercial requirements were not presented, and no plan to overcome<br />
known barriers to commercialization of PBRs was given.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
There have been a number of publications. There had to be internal coordination during the project. It is<br />
not clear whether the plans and results have been extensively shared within the OBP program<br />
participants.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
Required additional work and documentation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
UNL directed spin off underway for algae biotechnology and biofuels (NU Green Technologies). Joint<br />
ventures with SR, CGC, NPPD resulting from this funding. Provisional patents filed for aspects of this<br />
funded research<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
No technology transfer activities were detailed.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
No comment.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Prolific publication ensures tech transfer.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project approach,<br />
scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
The investigators should close out by considering the detailed outcomes in hand and how they can<br />
advance the overall program. Starting new lines of inquiry into photobioreactors and other exploratory<br />
programs are not warranted.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
Project appears to be following potentially interesting basic science directions but without as much focus<br />
on core milestones (sustainability, practicability, scaling) as is important. This reviewer has particular<br />
concern over the use and subsequent ability to eliminate algal viruses from the process; PIs should give<br />
this more attention in terms of scale/pragmatic concerns.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
A multifaceted approach that is based on the expertise of current faculty members at the ULN, ranging<br />
from microalgae, viruses, molecular biology and photobioreactors. Strengths: the range of topic covered<br />
by the team. Challenges: integrating the currently existing expertise for the benefit of the Program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Overall Impression: 2<br />
Not enough information was provided for this reviewer to evaluate the results of -omics, virus, and<br />
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genetics aspects of the project.<br />
The nanobody research is meant to help in harvesting of algae, biofilm growth of algae, and provide a<br />
research tool. Algae can be flocculated and can grow in biofilms without nanobodies, so the importance is<br />
not clear. Nothing was said about the potential research applications of nanobodies.<br />
The slides do not provide much information about the photobioreactor research. However, PBRs were a<br />
larger component of the oral presentation. The speaker was not able to effectively defend the use of PBRs<br />
for biofuel production. The well-know problems include excessive total costs, the likelihood of negative<br />
energy ROI, and difficulty in controlling heating and gas exchange. When asked about the method of<br />
cooling, the speaker said that evaporation of the water will cool the system but that water loses would be<br />
minimal due to the double-layered design of the PBR. Of course, if the water re-condenses within the<br />
system, heat is not removed. The speaker did not appear to have the basic knowledge needed to design<br />
PBRs.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Although I agree that basic research may lead to improvements in strains and downstream processing,<br />
there was no aspect of this research that seemed likely to yield such improvements.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
Tethered microalgal cells and photobioreactors for commercial scale production of microalgae is severly<br />
challenged.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
From a process engineering perspective the project has failed to define a method for evaluating the<br />
commercial viability of concepts and has not defined criteria for success and decision points based on<br />
commerical scale processing requirements. Because proposed technologies of PBRs and nano-antibody<br />
structures have well defined techno economic hurdles, a clear pathway to overcome those hurdles is<br />
needed before meaningful research commences.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
The team at UNL, the PI, and the presenter appreciate the efforts and contributions of the review group in<br />
facilitating the achievement of the goals for the DOE algae biomass platform. While recognizing the<br />
contributions of the review team and the demands placed by the need to review a large number of projects<br />
in a short period of time, it is clear that the format of a 15-minute PowerPoint presentation followed by 5<br />
minutes of questions is apparently inadequate for the reviewers to grasp the scope and vision of the UNL<br />
programs in algae biofuels and biotechnology. First the UNL team recognizes the importance of assessing<br />
the short-term needs of open raceway production of algae biomass as an initial step toward understanding<br />
the economical growth of algae at scale and the challenges faced with scale-up. These steps towards<br />
growing algae with 30 to 60 year old technology but at a much larger scale are indeed meritorious in<br />
actually achieving experience of algae production at 10 to 1000 hectare scales. In this context the UNL<br />
team applauds the landmark works by Dr John Benneman in the Aquatic Species Program that<br />
summarized the technology of 1980 to 1996 and predicted the production of algae biofuels at $60 per<br />
barrel. We also are well aware of the recent highly detailed and very sound techno-economic analysis by<br />
Dr Benneman and one of the reviewers that suggest it is impossible to produce algae at less than<br />
$300/barrel as of the review in 2010 with current technologies of open raceway growth. We also are<br />
aware of the recent techno-economic reviews that suggest economic biofuels production with algae is<br />
nearly impossible with raceway design, hexane extraction (a well known neurotoxin), and<br />
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transesterification. The team at UNL concurs with these well founded reviews and recognizes the critical<br />
importance of basic research on lipid production in algae, the development of molecular tools for<br />
engineering algae, and the importance of low cost innovative system of growth systems utilizing highly<br />
innovative and patent pending tools such as nanobodies in order to allow algae biofuels to be a reality.<br />
We indeed accept that the substantial innovative approaches marrying world class basic algae biology<br />
research and transformative application of novel tools to growth and harvesting (nanobodies) that the<br />
UNL team is pursuing are critical to truly economical biofuels production from algae. As stated in the<br />
review oral presentation, the presenter is clearly aware of the limitations of open raceway systems with<br />
aerial productivity limited to 25 gm/m2/day which has remained constant over 40 years. The presenter<br />
indeed is aware of the severe constraints of photobioreactor designs (PBRs) as currently configured as so<br />
acridly depicted by the reviewers. The presenter is aware of the heat removal need in PBRs and correctly<br />
presented a number of means of such heat removal. The UNL team is in fact developing innovative low<br />
cost growth systems to address the limitations of current PBRs including the use of nanobodies. The<br />
transformative value of these breakthrough technologies will be apparent as the result of this well placed<br />
DOE sponsored research. Unfortunately these tangible advances were evaluated on the basis of limited<br />
information (a 22 slide PowerPoint) and through the lens current and limited raceway technology. The<br />
UNL team does hold the Benneman point of view in high regard, that maintains with current technology<br />
algae biofuels are economically unattainable. The UNL team also strongly believes in the ability of the<br />
combination of basic research and transformative technologies such as nanobodies to overcome these<br />
obstacles. The UNL team is grateful for the opportunity afforded by the DOE to play a role in this<br />
transformation of algae biofuels to become a major element in the DOE biofuels portfolio and regrets the<br />
focus of the review team on current technologies with all their limitations.<br />
Project: 9.6.5.3 NREL<br />
Title: Algal Biofuel Pathway Baseline Costs<br />
Presenter: Andy Aden<br />
Presentation Date: Thursday, April 07, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 8.14 0.64 7<br />
Progress 8.00 0.53 7<br />
Relevance 8.43 1.05 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 7.29 1.03 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 8<br />
This is a project that is producing useful results right from the start. The needs and deliverables were<br />
thought out first, and the approaches are devised to achieve them.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 9<br />
Models are being developed well for evaluation of capability of sustainable production with most key<br />
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factors incorporated into bioreactor, open pond, and heterotrophic production models. Application of such<br />
models to other DoE projects in this area offers potential for greater transparency and sensitivity analyses<br />
in other projects.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The goal of this task is to develop baseline technoeconomic analysis and user models for algal biofuels<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 8<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 9<br />
The presentation described the development of excel based program with process components identified.<br />
Very logical approach and well presented.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 8<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 8<br />
With baseline cost modeling complete, additional milestones for incorporation of processing concepts and<br />
projections of costs should be defined.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
We agree that these models will be useful to a number of stakeholders within the research and<br />
development community. We look forward to working with the other projects so that we can be mutually<br />
beneficial to one another. We agree that additional milestones for incorporation of concepts and cost<br />
projections should be defined; this is being done in conjunction with DOE and others.<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has made progress in its objectives and stated project<br />
management plan has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 8<br />
For the short time in operation, results are already forthcoming.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 9<br />
Relevant literature being used well to create models/factors included in models.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Models currently calculate high costs for algal biofuels. Submitted publication to peer reviewed journal<br />
for autotrophic pathways (Applied Energy)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 8<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Tasks appear to be completed.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 8<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Baseline modeling is already a valuable tool for guiding research.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Thank you.<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 8<br />
The relevance is right on target.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 10<br />
Models that can be used as part of reporting requirements to DoE are definitely needed and this project<br />
may supply them.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Primary cost drivers are lipid content and yield.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 8<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 8<br />
The project is highly relevant and provides very good benchmark values.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 8<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 10<br />
Baseline cost analysis and extension to conceptual process cost projection is essential to rationalizing<br />
research and development resources.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Thank you very much<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
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i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 8<br />
The CSFs and Challenges are discussed in the presentation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 8<br />
PIs should continue to monitor literature to adjust models. Add additional factors (e.g., effects of climate<br />
change on precipitation/water availability to projects, sealevel rise to coastal land availability---consult<br />
USGS personnel over this point).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Models will be useful in assisting DOE with target development and research interaction. Success<br />
Factors: Maintaining close interaction with researchers is critical, as is transparent communication of all<br />
assumptions and results to ensure proper use of data.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 8<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 8<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Modeling still too removed from actual applicaiton. Need to integrate modeling with the consortium<br />
projects.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The critical factor of access to pilot data for various process concepts is identified.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
We will continue to monitor literature to keep the models up to date and relevant. One of the first items<br />
we are working on next is syncing up with other resource assessment activities, such as the PNNL models<br />
for resource evaluation. We have already begun to work with the consortia, particularly the NAABB.<br />
NREL has had discussions with the NAABB sustainability team, primarily James Richardson, economist<br />
from Texas A&M. While the NREL models are developed from an engineer economics standpoint, the<br />
NAABB sustainability team is using exciting econometric tools that can further utilize the NREL work.<br />
While the NREL models are currently supplied by literature data, we look forward to incorporating<br />
research data from detailed bench and pilot scale experimentation.<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
Coordination with other efforts on LCAs and technoeconomic assessments should be exploited to<br />
maximize benefits.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
Little yet but project is young and shows excellent promise here.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Models will be used to assist the DOE with target development and research interactions.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
The potential for technology transfer is very good.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
Not appropriately linked to consortium projects yet.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Plans for publication and model sharing are very valuable.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Again, integration with consortia is taking place as we speak. We look forward to this expanded<br />
collaboration with other tea and lca practioners.<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project approach,<br />
scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
This seemed to be the project that was most on target with what the OBP program needs. Once again, any<br />
responsible technoeconomic modeling effort adds value.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
Strong project with good sensitivity analysis.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Rigorous algae baseline technoeconomic analysis and user models have been developed for the Biomass<br />
Program and algae community - 3 pathways examined: open pond, photobioreactor, heterotrophic. This is<br />
a nice and low-cost techno-economic analysis project. Speaker needs to point his (laser) pointer to what<br />
he is talking about on the screen. Also, for the non-economists, please explain how to read the sensitivity<br />
X-Y plots.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Overall Impression: 8<br />
Adaptable TEAs are important for assessing technological progress. However, several TEAs have been<br />
published recently and another is being developed, apparently independently, at INL (also reviewed). The<br />
major advance that must come from this project is a model that is easily used and modified by others.<br />
That should be the primary goal. "User-friendly" is mentioned in the presentation. For example, any use<br />
of dissolved air flotation and chemical coagulation is unrealistic and will need to be substituted for lowcost,<br />
low energy intensity technologies.<br />
The apparent involvement of undisclosed commercial partners raises a question about objectivity of the<br />
TEA assumptions. Presumably safeguards are in place, but these should be described. Of course, many of<br />
the OBP projects include commercial partner. The particular importance in this case is that a general<br />
decision support tool for the algae community is being developed. Transparency and ability to modify the<br />
assumptions should continue to be emphasized.<br />
For the heterotrophic model, the documentation should make clear that cellulosic sugar is not yet<br />
available. Use of cellulosic sugar is a huge assumption at this point. The projected autotrophic lipid<br />
productivity by both ponds and PBRs is reasonable for near term capabilities. The much higher<br />
evaporation and blowdown of the ponds compared to the PBRs should be substantiated--how was the<br />
evaporation of PBR cooling water estimated?<br />
The PBR sensitivity analysis is stretched beyond the conceivable, based on this calculation:<br />
The 8-cm diam. tubes contain 63 L of liquid per m2 of tube. The presentation gives 1.25 g/L-d as the base<br />
case productivity, or 63 L x 1.25 g/L-d = 78 g/m2-d. This is already a very high productivity, which is<br />
then projected in the sensitivity analysis to 3.0 g/L-d or 234 g/m2-d, which is not credible. The same<br />
comment could apply to the 60 g/m2-d projected for ponds. Sensitivity analysis might be conducted in<br />
terms of a combined modest improvement in productivity and in cost, to achieve more rational estimates.<br />
The tornado graph single factor graph is a step towards that.<br />
What if any efforts are being made to complement the apparently duplicative effort of INL (Newby<br />
presenter)?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Very relevant project, good approach, and good presentation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
Best of the modeling projects and well organized and an important effort. The PI should interact actively<br />
with the consortiums, however, to bring this model to appropriate execution. Would be very useful to use<br />
this model to "harness" the overal efforts of the consortiums, and to organize them towards a single goal<br />
of commercializing a specific pathway.<br />
Finally, be careful on the AD assumptions. An added carbon stream will be required to get the methane<br />
production if defatted algae is the principle feed.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
This project is likely the best investment made by DOE fro the algae platform. Flexibility should be<br />
incorporated into the model and the application should be be expanded and required for research efforts.<br />
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Care should be taken in presenting results as a tornado diagram (sensitivity diagram), because 1 factor at<br />
a time sensitivity analysis can be misleading.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Project: 9.6.5.2 Argonne National Lab<br />
Title: Algae Life Cycle Assessment with GREET<br />
Presenter: Ed Frank<br />
Presentation Date: Thursday, April 07, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 7.29 0.70 7<br />
Progress 6.86 0.35 7<br />
Relevance 7.29 0.88 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 6.71 0.45 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 8<br />
The Approach has been quite good, based on the earlier work with the GREET model. Each additional<br />
study improves the work.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 7<br />
This project is building an algal process model (APM) to extend GREET, which has been used for other<br />
energy sources (fossil fuels and others). Such a model is needed.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
– Using GREET ensures accurate, consistent comparison with previous and other OBP LCA assessments<br />
– Providing an algae LCA framework is an effective strategy to obtain comparable, transparent,<br />
reproducible analysis and to increase data accretion and availability. – Objectives are associated with<br />
metrics, tasks, and dates.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 8<br />
The project goal is to create an LCA tool as well as to conduct a specific LCA for current schemes of<br />
algal biofuel production. The goals are technically sound and well defined.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 7<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Consistent approach with other GREET modeling.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Thank you very much. We hope that with the GREET LCA framework, researchers and stakeholders will<br />
be able to evaluate algae pathways with other biofuel and transportation pathways consistently.<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has made progress in its objectives and stated project<br />
management plan has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Progress has been commensurate with the lifetime of the project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 7<br />
This study is 75% complete. Presentor cites difficulties with lack of validated data and the fact that some<br />
required data are "proprietary". Despite this, complete initial APM is in hand with an extended GREET.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
– The LCI inventory is diverse and open, covers many scenarios and a large fraction of the cumulative<br />
energy demand. – Early analysis results demonstrate ability to evaluate many scenarios.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The project has met its milestones. A prototype was developed and described, a sensitivity analysis is<br />
underway and on time for summer 2011 deadline.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 7<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Baseline scenarios near completion, but value of project is for evaluation of other scenarios.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
We agree that the project value will be increased by evaluating new scenarios. With completion of the<br />
technology options and scenarios currently under evaluation, we anticipate increased effort in this regard<br />
in the coming year.<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The project is clearly relevant. The model should be exercised to provide cases for validation and use.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 7<br />
This type of model is important to guide comparisons across projects.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
– The work addresses several MYPP barriers including St-D, At-A, At-C. – The project engages several<br />
national labs, OBP projects, and companies.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 9<br />
The project is broadly relevant to platform goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 7<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 8<br />
A valuable tool for down-selecting projects if data is available, if model has requried flexibility, and if the<br />
model is accompanied by techno-economic analysis.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Flexibility for GREET design in general and algae pathways in particular has been a key consideration by<br />
ANL. We will continue to pursue flexibility and seek inputs from GREET users and the algae community<br />
in this regard. The tie to techno-economic analysis is important. In the coming year, with our LCA<br />
framework for algae in place, we hope to work with the NREL TEA team to define common parameters<br />
for both TEA and LCA and to exchange data and results between the two efforts. Similarly, working<br />
closely with experimental efforts will provide cases for use.<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 7<br />
There was a good discussion of the CSFs.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Demonstration of practicability of model needs additional work, including with data coming into<br />
literature from new projects and also older literature.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
– Risk factors were identified along with mitigation strategies – The project has identified a few critical<br />
issues for algae LCA<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 7<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 7<br />
There was a lack of criteria defining success at each unit operation, as well as information on the inputs<br />
and outputs of each module. It is important to have commercially realistic inputs and outputs for each unit<br />
operation. The PI should seek out people with real hands on experience growing microalgae at large scale,<br />
including harvesting, dewatering, and drying.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Model acceptance and access to pilot data are critical. Project team is pursuing both.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
With the long history of GREET development and its large user basis, GREET is an excellent platform to<br />
develop consistent LCA and LCA comparisons. At the time of the presentation, ANL did not have<br />
definitive LCA results for algae yet, thus we did not go into detail how GREET and the APM are being<br />
used. With the completion of the APM, GREET expansion of algae pathways, and reports documenting<br />
the efforts and results over the summer 2011, practicality of the modeling capability will become<br />
apparent. We agree that use of data from processes that do not scale and that are not economically viable<br />
would not be meaningful for shedding light on future, large-scale algae operations. This is always a<br />
challenge for examining technologies that are not in commercial stage. Interactions with other analytic<br />
efforts such as those in NREL TEA team and other algae research efforts are always helpful to LCA<br />
efforts. Furthermore, with the APM, a few such processes, e.g., thermal drying, are in the inventory to<br />
allow people to quantitatively de-select them on an LCA basis and a few, e.g., centrifugation, are present<br />
because they may play a role if applied judiciously. Also, alternatives that are acceptable from an LCA<br />
perspective that are not viable economically, can suggest areas for technical development. That is, by<br />
providing a broader range of potential technology options for some critical algae stages, users of GREET,<br />
together with the APM, will be able to put their technologies in a broader perspective.<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
This aspect could be improved. There should be an attempt to integrate several of the modeling efforts,<br />
and there should be some movement towards defining best practices.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
The project personnel are working with Exxon and other algal biotech companies.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
– Algae LCA analyses will become systematic and comparable – The community will be able to address a<br />
larger number of scenarios<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
The potential for technology transfer was good. The presenter emphasized extending analysis to<br />
approaches and developments by other research groups.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
This was undeveloped. Although a good approach, much of the assumptions and process pathway is<br />
rather devoid of issues described in the reports of Benneman and co-authors. Contact with the<br />
consortiums and groups (or those elements thereof that are actually growing and harvesting mciroalgae)<br />
woud be helpful.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Publication and use with NAABB should be the first steps to broad acceptance and usage.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
We agree that defining best practices is important. Also important is developing a clear understanding of<br />
methodological uncertainties within LCA of algal fuels. Our strategy for addressing both of these is to<br />
facilitate consistent comparison amongst analyses so that analysts can identify and define best practices<br />
rather than being distracted by unintentional systematic differences in their models. ANL will make<br />
GREET and APM available in the public domain with technical publication. This plus community<br />
engagement is our vision of technology transfer.<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project approach,<br />
scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
The projects on LCA add value. Using the models in predictive mode should be a future effort.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
This model is being competently built.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Too early to tell, as this is the initial stages of this project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Overall Impression: 6<br />
LCA modeling is important and GREET is a common format. Because the algae biofuel process train is<br />
not well developed currently, not too much effort should be put into details at this point. However, the<br />
presentation did not provide much information on the scenarios that have been modeled. For example,<br />
what algae cultivation technologies have been implemented in the inventory? Is biomass transport<br />
included, etc.?<br />
The developers should strive to make the model transparent and easy to adapt/modify by outside users. It<br />
should be tied to the parallel TEA model.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Very good project and presentation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
This is a good first start, but may not produce a useful outcome unless grounded in the realities of<br />
commercial microaglae production. The PI would be well advised reading in detail the Benneman and coauthor<br />
reports, spending time at facilities that grow microaglae, and then re-reading these reports. The<br />
development of a Life Cycle Analysis after this activity would help develop better pathways and inputs<br />
and boundary conditions. Make sure all these assumptisns for each unit operation reflect the wisdom of<br />
Benneman/Oswald reports.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
The GREET modelling will help screen alternatives, but without an accompanying techno-economic<br />
model it has limited value.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
ANL learned a great deal from Benemann and other earlier work. The Benemann 1996 report was used<br />
extensively. Benemann, Weisman, Goebel, Oswald, and others developed many details, e.g., CO2<br />
transport and transfer, nitrogen recycling, and circulation velocity dependance upon algal species and size<br />
as well as economic constraints. They were helpful in establishing the structure and architecture of the<br />
APM tool. We feel that including the ability to model alternative scenarios and directly compare them<br />
unambiguously with the pragmatic earlier work is an expedient way to help the community to reach<br />
closure on some of the key issues.<br />
Project: 9.2.2.2 University of California - San Diego<br />
Title: Development of Renewable Biofuels Technology by Transcriptomic Analysis and Metabolic<br />
Engineering of Diatoms<br />
Presenter: Mark Hildebrand<br />
Presentation Date: Thursday, April 07, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 7.57 1.05 7<br />
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Progress 7.43 1.40 7<br />
Relevance 6.71 1.67 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 7.43 1.29 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The organization of the work seems to be very focused. Tasks are layed out in a very sequenced fashion.<br />
There are some questions that the investigator should address even for this exploratory project. Baseline<br />
oil production performance and how it compares to algae is one example. How does it fit with the OBP<br />
algae program and deliverables is another? Overall, this will be a contributory exploratory program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 7<br />
This project's goals are basic science aspects of the Roadmap to understand TAG production under silicon<br />
versus nitrogen limitation, understand genes involved in control points for carbon flux, and develop<br />
genetic tools (including transformation and knockdowns with RNAi, too) for manipulation in diatoms.<br />
Thalassiosira pseudonana and Cyclotella cryptica are the key targets and the PI suggests that what is<br />
learned in these systems can be transferred to most other diatom biofuels' targets.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 8<br />
By characterizing gene expression changes using transcriptomics, fundamental aspects of carbon flux and<br />
partitioning can be elucidated, providing gene targets for metabolic engineering.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 10<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The overall goal is to perform metabolic engineering of diatoms for higher TAG content. The specific<br />
goals are to compare transcriptional analyses of two diatoms, identify targets for engineering, and then<br />
engineer improved diatom strains. The science is very sound and was well presented.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 7<br />
For what it is—a largely academic approach—it's a very solid approach. It lacks a basis for supporting<br />
realistic commercial growth of microalgae, i.e wild and native mixed cultures, but will provide very good<br />
scientific knowledge and advance our general understanding of diatom metabolism with respect to lipid<br />
biosynthesis.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Although the approach is fundamental research, a baseline and commercial goals for productivity and<br />
yield would help calibrate the project.<br />
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Presenter Response<br />
The organization of the work seems to be very focused. Tasks are layed out in a very sequenced fashion.<br />
There are some questions that the investigator should address even for this exploratory project. Baseline<br />
oil production performance and how it compares to algae is one example. How does it fit with the OBP<br />
algae program is another. Overall, this will be a contributory exploratory program.<br />
Response: We are measuring increased performance based on the improvement of TAG production.<br />
Baseline data was presented in slides 9 and 11 of the presentation. The fit with OBP relates to the<br />
contribution of biomass and lipid accumulation as a component of an overall production system. Cost<br />
analyses indicate that improvement of these factors will be a major contributor to cost reduction. -----------<br />
---------------------------------------------------------------------<br />
This project's goals are basic science aspects of the Roadmap to understand TAG production under silicon<br />
versus nitrogen limitation, understand genes involved in control points for carbon flux, and develop<br />
genetic tools (including transformation and knockdowns with RNAi, too) for manipulation in diatoms.<br />
Thalassiosira pseudonana and Cyclotella cryptica are the key targets and the PI suggests that what is<br />
learned in these systems can be transferred to most other diatom biofuels' targets.<br />
No response. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------<br />
By characterizing gene expression changes using transcriptomics, fundamental aspects of carbon flux and<br />
partitioning can be elucidated, providing gene targets for metabolic engineering.<br />
No response.<br />
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See Overall Impressions text. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------<br />
The overall goal is to perform metabolic engineering of diatoms for higher TAG content. The specific<br />
goals are to compare transcriptional analyses of two diatoms, identify targets for engineering, and then<br />
engineer improved diatom strains. The science is very sound and was well presented.<br />
No response --------------------------------------------------------------------------------<br />
For what it is—a largely academic approach—it's a very solid approach. It lacks a basis for supporting<br />
realistic commercial growth of microalgae, which wil be wild and native mixed cultures, but will provide<br />
very good scientific knowledge and advance our general understanding of diatom metabolism with<br />
respect to lipid biosynthesis.<br />
Response: As a first step, unialgal systems must be investigated, but knowledge could then be applied to<br />
more complex systems. The goals are to provide practical knowledge to benefit production systems – in<br />
this sense it is not strictly an academic approach. --------------------------------------------------------------------<br />
------------<br />
Although the approach is fundemental research, a baseline and commercial goals for productivity and<br />
yield would help calibrate the project.<br />
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Response: The funding amount has limited this to a laboratory-based study, but baseline productivity has<br />
been measured (slides 9 and 11 in the presentation) and provides a basis for monitoring improvement. To<br />
our knowledge, there is no existing data relating lab-based productivity to large-scale outdoor<br />
productivity in any study system (and this is likely to be highly variable depending on the species),<br />
therefore we cannot predict how our measure of improvement will translate to production. However, the<br />
only way to determine this is to generate the improved strains and test them in both scenarios. Based on<br />
first principles, it is logical to assume that at least some of the improvements generated in the lab will<br />
result in improved production.<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has made progress in its objectives and stated project<br />
management plan has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Progress appears to be acceptable at this stage.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 8<br />
The project is about 40% complete. Excellent progress on knockdown tools (antisense and RNAi) and<br />
characterization of TAG under cell arrest by Si or N or MT inhibitors is evident. Transcriptomics of<br />
Cyclotella are advanced, and key enzymes related to carbon flux are being characterized with good<br />
progress.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 8<br />
A whole-transcriptome analysis of TAG accumulation during silicon limitation in T. pseudonana is nearly<br />
complete, and samples are prepared for a similar analysis of silicon and nitrogen limitation in C. cryptica.<br />
Genetic manipulation tools have been developed. A clearer understanding of metabolic processes<br />
involved in TAG accumulation has resulted, and target genes have been identified for manipulation.<br />
Distinct stages during the TAG accumulation process have also been identified.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 10<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The project has made progress in its objectives and seems to be on the way to meeting its milestones. The<br />
timelines for different milestones were not specifically stated.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Very good work at an appropriate pace.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Strong initial progress, but it need to be calibrated to real world performance and commercial needs<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Progress appears to be acceptable at this stage. ----------------------------------------------------------------------<br />
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The project is about 40% complete. Excellent progress on knockdown tools (antisense and RNAi) and<br />
characterization of TAG under cell arrest by Si or N or MT inhibitors is evident. Transcriptomics of<br />
Cyclotella are advanced, and key enzymes related to carbon flux are being characterized with good<br />
progress.<br />
No response. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------<br />
A whole-transcriptome analysis of TAG accumulation during silicon limitation in T. pseudonana is nearly<br />
complete, and samples are prepared for a similar analysis of silicon and nitrogen limitation in C. cryptica.<br />
Genetic manipulation tools have been developed. A clearer understanding of metabolic processes<br />
involved in TAG accumulation has resulted, and target genes for manipulation. Distinct stages during the<br />
TAG accumulation process have also been identified.<br />
No response. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------<br />
See Overall Impressions text. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------<br />
The project has made progress in its objectives and seems to be on the way to meeting its milestones. The<br />
timelines for different milestones were not specifically stated.<br />
Response: Yes, timelines were inadvertently omitted in the presentation, but are included in the proposal.<br />
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No problem here. Very good work at an appropriate pace. Quite competant.<br />
No response. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------<br />
Strong intial progress, but it need to be calibrated to real world performance and comemrical needs<br />
Response: Yes, once improved strains are generated, that is the goal.<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 6<br />
One can see the relevance of microorganism production of lipid studies. The exact relevance of this to<br />
OBP program could be better delineated. What are the targets for this project?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The basic science, including genomic tools being developed, have the potential to make a strong<br />
contribution to feedstock development for biofuels.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Improving microalgal lipid accumulation characteristics will have a major impact on biofuels production.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 10<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Although the project has considered applications of its outputs, it is very unclear how relevant the results<br />
will be to large-scale applications.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The key question is relevant to what? If its commercial production of microalgae under conditions that<br />
can be supported in open pond culture, at that scale, this work is not relevant. If the relevance is to basic<br />
scientific understanding of diatom metabolism with respect to lipid biosynthesis, then this is extremely<br />
relevant.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Baseline and long term goals for strain performance would clarify and emphasize relevance. A method<br />
and partner for evaluating commercial potential needs to be identified.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
One can see the relevance of microorganism production of lipid studies. The exact relevance of this to<br />
OBP program could be better delineated. What are the targets for this project?<br />
Response: Targets are to develop procedures for improving strains (see slide 5 and 26). ----------------------<br />
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The basic science, including genomic tools being developed, have the potential to make a strong<br />
contribution to feedstock development for biofuels. No response. ------------------------------------------------<br />
--------------------------------<br />
Improving microalgal lipid accumulation characteristics will have a major impact on biofuels production.<br />
Response: This is exactly the point for questions by other reviewers related to the relevance of the<br />
research. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------<br />
See Overall Impressions text. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------<br />
Although the project has considered applications of its outputs, it is very unclear how relevant the results<br />
will be to large-scale applications. Response: We will never know the answer to that question unless we<br />
do the work and test the strains under production conditions. Cost analysis justifies the effort. --------------<br />
------------------------------------------------------------------<br />
The key question is relevant to what? If its commercial production of microalgae under conditions that<br />
can be supported in open pond culture, at that scale, the answer is that this work is not relevant. If the<br />
relevance is to basic scientific understanding of diatom metabolism with respect to lipid biosynthesis,<br />
then this is extremely relevant.<br />
Response: What is the basis for the conclusion that this will not work at scale? To our knowledge there<br />
are no studies demonstrating this. We will never know the answer to that question unless we do the work<br />
and test the strains under production conditions. That is the goal of this project.<br />
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Baseline and long term goals for strain performance would clarify and emphasize relevance. A method<br />
and partner for evaluating commercial potential needs to be identified.<br />
Response: The funding amount has limited this to a laboratory-based study, but baseline productivity has<br />
been measured (slides 9 and 11 in the presentation) and provides a basis for monitoring improvement. To<br />
our knowledge, there is no existing data relating lab-based productivity to large-scale outdoor<br />
productivity (and this is likely to be highly variable depending on the species), therefore we cannot<br />
predict how our measure of improvement will translate to production, however, the only way to determine<br />
this is to generate the improved strains and test them, and based on first principles, it is logical to assume<br />
that at least some of the improvements generated in the lab will result in improved production. If<br />
additional funding can be provided to allow us to interface with a commercial partner, we would be happy<br />
to do so.<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 6<br />
As an exploratory program, some latitude can be given in expressing these.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Demonstrating genetic manipulations and manipulations of nutrient "checkpoints" and "switches" that are<br />
persistent over many generations of diatoms is important to final success of this excellent basic scientific<br />
work to biofuels' development. Given that GMO algae may not be acceptable in commercial use in open<br />
facilities, characterizing heterotrophic growth in the context of the checkpoints/carbon flux under N and<br />
Si deprivation may be of interest----and trying to find natural switches for the cell cycle that can be<br />
applied w/o transformation.<br />
Given that diatoms reach a cardinal point where sexual reproduction is necessary to restore vegetative<br />
size, how will the genetic transformations and knockdown capability react to the diatom life history? Of<br />
course, some diatoms use vegetative processes to restore the largest cell size of the population, in the<br />
absence of sex, but as the population size decreases, sex is still critical in most species to restore cell size.<br />
Please reflect on these problems in your work.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Success relates to generating strains with improved TAG accumulation. Identifying genes that enable this<br />
without decreasing overall productivity is the challenge.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 10<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The critical success factors were focused on identifying gene targets. Within this narrow biological focus,<br />
the project presentation included adequate plans to address these factors.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 8<br />
In the context of understanding metabolic synthesis of lipids in diatoms, the PI has done an excellent job<br />
of laying out the appropriate pathways and metabolic markers. There is no doubt the data produce is and<br />
will be high quality.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Critical success factors are clear focus on lipid production and accumulation in a real world setting<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Demonstrating genetic manipulations and manipulations of nutrient "checkpoints" and "switches" that are<br />
persistant over many generations of diatoms is important to final success of this excellent basic scientific<br />
work to biofuels' development. Given that GMO algae may not be acceptable in commercial use in open<br />
facilities, characterizing heterotrophic growth in the context of the checkpoints/carbon flux under N and<br />
Si deprivation may be of interest----and trying to find natural switches for the cell cycle that can be<br />
applied w/o transformation.<br />
Response: We appreciate the concern about GMOs, but at this point in the development of algal biofuels<br />
technology, it is not clear whether or not GMOs will be allowed. If we assume the need for GMOs in a<br />
biofuels setting will be as great as is the widespread use of GMOs in food crops and approval for their use<br />
is gained, then this research could directly translate into production strains. If not, then it will still provide<br />
a fundamental basis for understanding that will inform approaches for selection of desirable traits<br />
(potentially using mutagenesis). Regarding heterotrophic growth, we are examining that aspect in another<br />
project (C. cryptica has marginal heterotrophic growth capability). Natural switches for cell cycle arrest<br />
are Si and N limitation.<br />
Given that diatoms reach a cardinal point where sexual reproduction is necessary to restore vegetative<br />
size, how will the genetic transformations and knockdown capability react to the diatom life history? Of<br />
course, some diatoms use vegetative processes to restore the largest cell size of the population, in the<br />
absence of sex, but as the population size decreases, sex is still critical in most species to restore cell size.<br />
Please reflect on these problems in your work.<br />
Response: The reduction in size phenomenon is not universal for diatoms, only those with a higher level<br />
of silicification than average in which the cell wall is highly rigid follow this life cycle process. Many<br />
species do not reduce in size with generation, and it is actually extremely difficult to induce the sexual<br />
cycle in them – they have a strong preference for vegetative reproduction. Our lab has published on the<br />
size reduction question, and provided direct proof that it need not happen (Hildebrand et al. 2007, J.<br />
Phycol. 43, 730–740), and other publications have documented the same. Of particular relevance is that<br />
the species we are focusing on do not undergo size reduction and triggering of the sexual cycle, and many<br />
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of the other species we are examining have a similar feature. The sexual cycle could potentially be taken<br />
advantage of (if it was easy to reproducibly induce) because cells would go through a haploid stage which<br />
may facilitate genetic or transgenic approaches to improve productivity.<br />
Success relates to generating strains with improved TAG accumulation. Identifying genes that enable this<br />
without decreasing overall productivity is the challenge.<br />
Response: We believe that identifying and testing multiple gene targets will facilitate achieving that goal.<br />
See Overall Impressions text. The critical success factors were focused on identifying gene targets.<br />
Within this narrow biological focus, the project presentation included adequate plans to address these<br />
factors.<br />
No response. In the context of understanding metabolic synthesis of lipids in diatoms, the PI had done an<br />
excellent job of laying out the appropriate pathways and metabolic markers. There is no doubt the data<br />
produce is and will be high quality.<br />
No response. Critical success factors are clear focus on lipid production and accumulation in a real world<br />
setting<br />
Response: That is the ultimate goal.<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
I would like to see this developed in greater detail. There is no doubt that publications will be<br />
forthcoming.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
Continued publication and presentations and interactions with more applied groups in the Biofuels'<br />
portfolio are important to transfer scientific advances made here into practical advances toward biofuel<br />
goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Future work will be to test the effect of manipulation of specific genes on TAG accumulation. When<br />
successful, the technology of these modifications can be transferred to production systems.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Technology transfer will be primarily publications and presentations.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
This is mostly a single PI project. The partner identified (Dr. Allen) is appropriate.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
It was not clear how resutls would be shared or how any potential commercial opportunity would be<br />
evaluated.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
I would like to see this developed in greater detail. There is no doubt that publications will be<br />
forthcoming. Response: In addition to publications and presentations, the research will develop our<br />
understanding of the fundamental biological control processes over lipid and biomass accumulation.<br />
Given the fundamental need for this in the context of a production system, it is likely to benefit other<br />
aspects of the Biomass Program research. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------<br />
----<br />
Continued publication and presentations and interactions with more applied groups in the Biofuels'<br />
portfolio is important to transfer scientific advances made here into practical advances toward biofuel<br />
goals.<br />
Response: Agree.<br />
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Future work will be to test the effect of manipulation of specific genes on TAG accumulation. If<br />
successful, the technology of these modifications can be transferred to production systems.<br />
No response. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------<br />
See Overall Impressions text. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------<br />
Technology transfer will be primarily publications and presentations. Response: Initially yes, but if better<br />
performing strains are produced then material for testing in large scale systems will be available. ----------<br />
----------------------------------------------------------------------<br />
This is mostly a single PI project. The partner identified (Dr. Allen) is fine. However, there is no real<br />
issue here, given the projects objectives and capacity of the PI.<br />
No response. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------<br />
It was not clear how resutls would be shared and any potential commercial opportunity would be<br />
evaluated.<br />
Response: Results would be shared via publications and presentations, and if future funding was<br />
available, or if a commercial partner became interested, large scale testing could be pursued.<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project approach,<br />
scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
As a project generating science, I like this work. It may even be a supporting project for the OBP efforts.<br />
However, it would be better to spell these expectations out to make the case. Perhaps this would have<br />
been better funded totally by NSF?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
Collaboration with Venter Institute a plus. This project is making excellent progress in the area of<br />
understanding the lipidome of diatoms and providing tools and metabolic data to manipulate it.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
PI is well-versed in the art of cell and molecular biology of Thalassiosira and Cyclotella. Useful results<br />
will emanate from this work. The only caution is that changes in transcript mRNA level often are not<br />
reflected in changes in protein amount or activity. How is the PI planning to account / check for the<br />
possibility that transcriptomics are not always the best approach to assess flux and metabolomics??<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Overall Impression: 10<br />
A model presentation of theory, hypotheses, and data. The team has significant accomplishments at 13<br />
months into the contract, while using among the most modest budgets of all projects reviewed. The means<br />
to provide affordable silica to diatom production is practical issue to address if they are to be used in<br />
biofuel production.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Within the area of fundamental research for algal biofuels, this is a very good project and was well<br />
presented.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
This work is high level academic work, with the ever constant promise that the work will support the<br />
commercial effort. That said the work is limited to themetabolic engineering of a single strain that will<br />
require conditions of sterility at large scale deployment. As such, this project may be more suited in DOE<br />
Basic Sciences or NSF.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Technically strong work, but the presentation did not address how research gains would be evaluated for<br />
commercial value, the magnitude of improvement that is required and expected, and on what time frame<br />
this might occur.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Project: 9.2.1.2 University of Georgia<br />
Title: Improving cost effectiveness of algae-lipid production through advances in nutrient delivery and<br />
processing systems<br />
Presenter: K.C. Das<br />
Presentation Date: Thursday, April 07, 2011<br />
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Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 4.29 1.83 7<br />
Progress 4.14 1.36 7<br />
Relevance 3.86 1.25 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 3.71 1.28 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 2<br />
Many different tasks have been proposed for this project. In addition, many others were added as various<br />
tasks did not work out. This is not scientifically structured work.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The focus of this project is to deliver nutrients to algae via poultry litter (feces) and to explore uses of<br />
residual biomass. It appears that initial work may have been spread over more different goals than<br />
optimal.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Project addresses key targets in Biomass Multi-year Program Plan related to cost competitiveness of<br />
biomass derived biofuels<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Approach is very multi-faceted with a wastewater utilization theme. Approach and results were all<br />
laboratory scale. Unfortunately, it was hard to understand many of the logical connections between the<br />
different project themes.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The PI is addressing a real world concern and in a manner that is keeping an eye on the realities of<br />
commercialization. The PI could focus down a bit more and aggressively pursue a few stragetic pathways.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The project goals should be defined around specific economic and productivity targets. The potential<br />
magnitude of the nutrient opportunity should be defined in terms of potential tons/year of biomass.<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has made progress in its objectives and stated project<br />
management plan has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
It is clear that results have been taken, mainly in an exploratory mode.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The project is about 85% complete and has involved many departments at UGA and one partner in<br />
Auburn. The project has been unable to use poultry litter to supply nutrients to algae (e.g. Chlorella) and<br />
produce biofuel-quality levels of lipid; this is due to the high N causing biomass growth rather than lipid<br />
accumulation (a relatively well known fact in background literature). Consequently the project has<br />
focussed on biomass production, but the nutrient solution is dark so algae have to be grown in shallow<br />
raceways and the product is smelly.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Investigators are developing sustainable, cost competitive, algae technologies to enable biofuel<br />
production and creation of a new domestic industry.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Unfortunately, it was difficult to evaluate progress, stated objectives, and milestones<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The data presented represents reasonable progress. Oveall the data lacked depth and the work seemed to<br />
move from concept to concept, with only semi-superficial depth to the data accumulated. Tone should<br />
nail down a pathway and really work to undestand it at all levels.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The dark color of the PLE, the reduced productivity of growth in raceways with PLE, the odor issue, and<br />
water recycle problems with possible concentration of color bodies indicate that this is not a viable<br />
nutrient source.<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 2<br />
The work is so scattered it is hard to credit much true relevance to the OBP program goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Nutrient supply is an important part of production of algal biofuels; however, the dark extract and<br />
odiferous product may limit applications.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Consistent with the objectives of the Algal Biomass program, although part of the emphasis is the cleanup<br />
of poultry-derived wastewater.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
It was very unclear how these results are relevant to program platform.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Although a very good project, given the objectives, these objectives are not focussed on large scale fuel<br />
production. The project does address a solid waste stream that needs to be managed, and how to do it with<br />
postiive energy economics. Microalgae a way to treat waste water is very useful.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
There appear to be many issues with PLE that make the nutrient source problematic for algal biofuel<br />
production: color, odor, reduction of productivity.<br />
The economics and application at scale of immoblized nitrogen fixation should be presented.<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 2<br />
Some set of CSFs should have been devised, even though the project was exploratory in nature. Industries<br />
are faced with this same task for their exploratory projects. Books have been written on how to control<br />
and gauge this work. Some sort of system should have been employed here.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The project is nearly complete a different approach to nutrient supply for algal biofuel's may be required<br />
based on its results to date.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Poultry litter needs to be shown as a potential low cost nutrient source for algaculture. Advanced fiber<br />
flocculation needs to be established as a promising technology for harvesting.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Unfortunately, there was not enough detail presented to adequately evaluate success factors.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The work presented addressed a waste stream, poultry litter, and a means (microalgae production) as a<br />
means (among others) to treat it. THis was useful but there appeared to lack clear and comprehensive<br />
trigger points for decision making.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The project success factors do not appear to be defined in terms of technical and economic hurdles to<br />
algal biofuel production.<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
It is unclear whether there were any outputs that could be useful.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
This project's results are somewhat cautionary and should be shared with other DoE projects.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
It was unclear whether and how the results of these disparate lines of laboratory research would benefit<br />
the Biomass Program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
This was not well developed.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
If research results and theory indicate that the use of PLE is not a viable option for algal biofuel<br />
production, valuable informatton sharing would be to reach these conclusions and explain the nutrient<br />
charactorstics that are unsuitable.<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project approach,<br />
scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
This work was too scattered, and it is unclear what the outcomes were. Maybe there are some buried<br />
nuggets but they will remain hidden I believe.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
The project investigated a number of things (including cyanobacteria) in addition to the main goals, and<br />
more focus on solving the extract's problems (coloration, odor) might have been in hindsight, better. It<br />
would be difficult to recommend that other DoE funded projects take this route to solving the critical<br />
problems of nutrients supply based on the data that were presented.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
This project has the potential of both cleaning up wastewater and generating useful algal biomass. But I<br />
would not feed such microalgal biomass back to poultry.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Overall Impression: 3<br />
Goals and research topics are too numerous and scattered, and the results are not presented on all topics<br />
mentioned:<br />
Cultivation-related: poultry waste media, N-fixers, CO2 capture<br />
Processing-related: coagulation with fibers, cell disruption, lipid extraction, residuals for feed<br />
Other activities: ponds vs PBRs, ethanol production, carpet industry wastewater media<br />
Poultry waste media were very dark with only 1% poultry waste. Growth results are difficult to judge<br />
from single data graph shown.<br />
Ponds vs. PBR: setup is not ideal because the ponds are shallow in deep tanks, causing shading. The<br />
productivity values for the PBRs are probably not corrected for lack of shading (edge effect), which is<br />
unrealistic at full scale.<br />
Carbonation column needs to be evaluated in terms of energy consumption, not only CO2 dissolution<br />
efficiency. The column energy consumption will be large.<br />
Only one graph and no conclusions provided for N-fixation experiment. Purpose not clearly stated.<br />
About seven papers are listed that appear to stem from DOE funding. Despite this nice output, the<br />
presentation lacked cohesion and few if any clear conclusions can be drawn from the result presented.<br />
The focus on wastewaters is potentially useful.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
The approach is all lab-scale based and multifaceted. It was unclear whether there was sufficient depth to<br />
the different lines of research to prove useful to the Biomass Program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
This was a good project addressing an important waste stream. Well situated within farming industry, or<br />
solid waste management.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
It appears that research results and PLE physical characteristics indicate that this in not a good nutreint<br />
source for algal biofuel production. If this conclusion is true, than the value to the algal biofuel program is<br />
an analysis of why PLE is unsuitable. The concept of immoblized nitrogen fixation need to be well<br />
defined in terms of commercial potential of algal biofuels.<br />
Project: 9.2.2.1 University of Maine<br />
Title: Production of higher alcohols liquid biofuel via acidogenic digestion and chemical upgrading of<br />
industrial biomass streams.<br />
Presenter: Peter van Walsum<br />
Presentation Date: Thursday, April 07, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 6.20 1.47 5<br />
Progress 6.20 0.98 5<br />
Relevance 5.80 1.60 5<br />
Critical Success Factors 6.40 1.36 5<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
There is not a good description of the approach. There is no rationale detailed for us to follow the plans.<br />
When chemicals are to be the products rather than fuels, some more detailed discussion of the valuable or<br />
less valuable products is expected, and strategies for maximizing higher value products should have been<br />
part of the Approach.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
No breakthroughs needed. Project is focusing on robust technology, cheap feedstock, existing industries<br />
to achieve its potential.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 8<br />
The approach was to use conventional wastes from existing local industries, evaluate three different<br />
pathways, and to develop process models. The research and approach were sound and well presented.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Good and solid approach to upgrading via three reasonable pathways. Appropriate go or no go criteria,<br />
and is an appropriate pathway from microalgae biomass to a fuel.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Good use of techno economic modeling. Project would benefit from clearer definition and<br />
communication of goals for the potential volume of fuel production and targets for capital and total fuel<br />
costs.<br />
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Presenter Response<br />
There is not a good description of the Approach. There is no rationale detailed for us to follow the plans.<br />
When chemicals are to be the products rather than fuels, some more detailed discussion of the valuable or<br />
less valuable products is expected, and strategies for maximizing higher value products should have been<br />
part of the Approach.<br />
Chemical prices are difficult to determine, and are usually quite volatile. Since this is a preliminary<br />
investigation, we are not focusing efforts on optimizing production of particular products. Generally, we<br />
have seen prices for most of the likely commodity type products (organic acids, ketones, esters) to be<br />
roughly in the same range, which is about 2-3 X the value of a chemically comparable fuel. Also, the<br />
value of any chemical will depend on its purity, and this introduces another layer of modeling and cost<br />
calculations to determine best candidates for purified chemical markets.<br />
Good use of techno economic modeling. Project would benefit from clearer definition and<br />
communication of goals for the potential volume of fuel production and targets for capital and total fuel<br />
costs.<br />
I agree that more clarity on volume of production and anticipated costs would be helpful. We will clarify<br />
these issues as we continue forward.<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has made progress in its objectives and stated project<br />
management plan has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Progress has been made as the project aims toward completion. More details and data could have been<br />
helful.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Demonstrated fermentation and downstream unit operations, still need to demonstrate integrated process<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The presentation showed accomplishment of key milestones and progress--looks very good.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Well done. Clearly a good pace of data that has been well taken, presented, and characterized.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Successful use of pilot data in techno economic modeling. Modeling results may indicate that this process<br />
is not economically viable.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Successful use of pilot data in techno-economic modeling. Modeling results may indicate that this process<br />
is not economically viable.<br />
The scale of these potential applications makes the economics challenging. However, they are<br />
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encouraging results if reasonable scale up could be accomplished, perhaps by tapping other available<br />
feedstocks available in particular locations.<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
There is moderate relevance in that data on products and productivity will be forthcoming. Some of the<br />
products are not as valuable as projected, and conclusions should be provided in a controlled manner.<br />
Several details of how the experiments were conducted, and the lack of appreciation for some of the<br />
details argue for review beforehand. One example was the specific comments on the addition of<br />
significant levels of manure which contain organic acids, and the lack of correction for them.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
This project entails efforts at demonstrating low hydrolysis and fermentation costs, as well as an<br />
integrated bio and thermochemical platform.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Excellent example of use of local resources for alcohol production, with potential use in other<br />
coastal/forested areas. However, it is unclear that this type of local resource utilization project could be<br />
scaled to meet significant transportation needs.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The final products are appropriate fuels for the DOE Program. It’s good to look at other products than just<br />
biodiesel.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
It appaears that the potential fuel volumes from this process are very small. The mixed alcohols produced<br />
may have unique charactoristics which, combined with the small volumes, make it a nuiscence for fuel<br />
production.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
There is moderate relevance in that data on products and productivity will be forthcoming. Some of the<br />
products are not as valuable as projected, and conclusions should be provided in a controlled manner.<br />
Several details of how the experiments were carried out, and the lack of appreciation for some of the<br />
details argue for review beforehand. Specific comments on the addition of significant levels of manure<br />
with organic acids, and the lack of correction for them is an example. Details on experimental methods<br />
are documented in our quarterly reports. Time constraints of the presentation precluded giving many<br />
details on procedures. I checked back with my research student and he confirmed that, indeed as shown in<br />
the fermentation time plot, the initial acid concentration in the fermentation was near zero, indicating very<br />
little initial contribution of organic acids from the manure. The manure may have been free of acids<br />
because it was dried and acids originally present may have volatilized prior to the manure addition to the<br />
fermentation.<br />
Excellent example of use of local resources for alcohol production with potential use in other<br />
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coastal/forested areas. However, it is unclear that this type of local resource utilization project could be<br />
scaled to meet significant transportation needs.<br />
The resources under investigation in this project are too limited to provide significant volume of product<br />
for transportation. Several of such biomass sources would be needed to produce even a modest amount of<br />
fuel. However, these biomass resources are available and already alkali pretreated, thus they make for a<br />
good starting place to test and demonstrate the conversion pathways.<br />
It appears that the potential fuel volumes form this process are very small. The mixed alcohols produced<br />
may have unique characteristics which, combined with the small volumes, make it a nuisance for fuel<br />
production. Certainly the volumes we are looking at are small and they have value more as demonstration<br />
feedstocks than commercial opportunities. The nuisance is important. I think that if fuels are the final<br />
target then hydrotreatment of the mixed alcohols to gasoline range hydrocarbons (which has been<br />
demonstrated) would be the most likley way to go to market. Such hydrotreatment was not within the<br />
scope of this project.<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 6<br />
There is an extensive list of CSFs and how they are addressed. Challenges are also tabulated and<br />
discussed.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Higher fermentation concentrations needed.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Demonstrated completion of critical success factors and technology transfer--seems to have addressed<br />
them well.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 8<br />
I really liked the net energy balances that were calculated. A lot of time was devoted to the factors being<br />
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evaluated, and the PI had reasonably targeted appropriate criteria, from fermentation titres and yields<br />
thorugh legal regulation. The energy balance, however, was most appreciated.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Potentially low volume of fuels combined with the end-use of mixed alcohol might be additonal success<br />
factors to be addressed.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Higher fermentation concentrations needed. Agreed.<br />
Potentially low volume of fuels combined with the end-use of mixed alcohol might be additonal success<br />
factors to be addressed. Agreed. Scale would need to be increased for commercial operation. Mixed<br />
alcohols may need to be hydrotreated to gasoline hydrocarbon.<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
It is not easily determined if the deliverables and conclusions are of value to the OBP program or not.<br />
There are many details that would need evaluating to ultimately determine the value of the outcomes. It is<br />
believed that publications will be an output.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Working closely with OTFF. FMC option looks less promising (low titer). Terrabon relationship is<br />
developing.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Collaboration and technology transfer were still in process.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
I did not get a strong feel for this.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Widespread sharing through many publications.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
It is not easily determined if the deliverables and conclusions are of value to the OBP program or not.<br />
There are many details that would need evaluating to ultimately determine the value of the outcomes. It is<br />
believed that publications will be an output. Publications (non-peer reviewed) have been produced.<br />
Manuscripts are in preparation for submission to peer reviewed publications.<br />
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6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project approach,<br />
scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
There shold be more comfort in the project and its outcomes than I register. There seem to be many<br />
details that one needs to know before one could nod in agreement. I fear that more experiments would be<br />
the more likely result. The production of light organic acids may not be a valuable outcome. However,<br />
this may just set the stage for a separate project beyond this.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
A main objective of this effort is to achieve low cost enzymatic hydrolysis and complete carbohydrate<br />
fermentation of biomass feedstock. - What are the cellular biochemical targets of the purported<br />
fermentation? - What are the products to be developed by this approach? These specifics are a must for<br />
the proper evaluation of the project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Very nice presentation of a local resource utilization project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
Overall a good project that is well done. Solid pathways considered. Looking at three pathways? What are<br />
the criteria for comparison? Seaweed digestion. Ends up a dirty liquid (pigments et al). How does one<br />
purify the fuel and how does one dispose of the fermentation media? What is the go no go criteria? How<br />
do alcohol yields compare against simple AD of chicken manure adn methane gas produciton (and on site<br />
combustion?)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
My strongest impression is that the potential fuel volumes are too low and too dispersed geographically to<br />
be a viable transporation fuel source. The capital and production cost estimates indicate that this<br />
technology has very big hurdles for economic viability.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
I think that the “comfort” issue may be that much of the project has been working to down select from<br />
three to one preferred process pathway. The initial investigations were done at a preliminary level. We are<br />
currently focusing on the ketonization pathway and I believe that the data we are generating will help to<br />
develop a higher level of comfort. Now that we have selected the ketonization route as the preferred<br />
pathway, our final product is primarily isopropyl alcohol along other secondary alcohols. Optimally we<br />
would like to see higher proportions of longer chain alcohols, as these are more compatible with gasoline<br />
infrastructure. This in turn requires fermentation s that accumulate larger quantities of butyrate and other<br />
longer chain acids.<br />
Criteria of comparison between the three pathways were yield, energy balance, cost and ease of<br />
implementation. The ketonization pathway won out on energy balance and ease of implementation. Ease<br />
of implementation was critical in order to make progress on the time line we had set for ourselves. The<br />
seaweed digestion does turn dark. So far, we have found that purifying the fermentation broths is not<br />
necessary when using the ketonization route. The other organic materials from the fermentation media<br />
that accompany the carboxylate salts into the ketonization reaction appear to contribute to the chemistry<br />
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of deoxygenation. Converting unpurified carboxylate salts does result in a much greater variety of organic<br />
compounds, but these may not be problematic if the mixture is ultimately hydrotreated and blended with<br />
petroleum-based fuels. Thus, the fermentation media is disposed of by evaporating out the water and the<br />
solids are sent to ketonization. The ash from the ketonization contains CaCO3 and other alkaline<br />
components which would be recycled back to neutralize the fermentation step. The ash recycle would<br />
eventually require purging and it may have value as an alkaline soil amendment ( this is currently how the<br />
algae sludges are disposed of—as alkaline soil conditioner) A study of comparing methanogenic and<br />
acidogenic digestion of biomass is underway. Preliminary findings (not a part of this project) appear to<br />
suggest that the higher value of liquid fuels and chemicals can more than offset the greater complexity of<br />
the processing. However, AD does benefit from much easier scale down to process small volume<br />
resources, with the small-scale resources investigated in this study, this is likely to be true. We are<br />
finding, though, that at these smaller scales, the costs appear attractive compared to other liquid biofuel<br />
technologies.<br />
Project: 9.2.1.1 Montana State University<br />
Title: Extremophilic Microalgae: Advanced Lipid and Biomass Production for Biofuels and<br />
Bioproducts<br />
Presenter: Brent Peyton<br />
Presentation Date: Thursday, April 07, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 6.00 1.07 7<br />
Progress 5.86 1.12 7<br />
Relevance 5.71 1.28 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 5.57 1.40 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The project has proceeded in a logical fashion and has therefore had a reasonable approach. The next<br />
stage is to scale-up out of the lab, and this is what is planned.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 6<br />
A major focus of this project is to screen algae that may be good lipid producers for growth at high pH,<br />
where they may be protected from competition and predators.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Effort focuses on characterizing and quantifying alkaliphilic algal growth and lipid production for scaleup<br />
to open ponds. Issues to be addressed: -Help stabilize algal pond systems without genetic modification,<br />
-Increase CO2 uptake rates -Utilize low quality water -Provide TAG production rate and extent data in<br />
outdoor systems<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 5<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The broad objectives are to develop and use high lipid producing alkaliphilic (sp?) strains from culture<br />
collections, determine kinetic parameters in lab-scale studies, and then test strains in open ponds at pilot<br />
scale at Utah State Univ. The science is sound and objectives are reasonable.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 6<br />
It is relevant to approach production in extrememe environments for all the reasons stated. And the use of<br />
high pH water is reasonable but the presentation lacked a clear demonstration of just how much of this<br />
kind of water there is. What is the resource and what is the rational amount of fuel that can be produced?<br />
Where are these waters located (i.e., in cold climates open culture or photobioreactors are severely<br />
challenged).<br />
I think overall this is an interesting project, extreme environments for high pH water) that will be stressed<br />
in terms of resource allocation and commercial application.<br />
The PI should do more than just propose extreme pH. The defense of this approach, from a resource<br />
management and commercial application point of view needs to be defended.<br />
Also, present biomass data as gdw l-1.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The project needs specifc goals for productivity and yield based on commercial algal biofuel production<br />
requirements.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
There is a significant amount of non-potable high pH and salinity water in the west, where potable water<br />
is extremely limited. Other, funded specific projects are focused on determining the water resources<br />
available across the country to determine where our work will be feasible.<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has made progress in its objectives and stated project<br />
management plan has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Progress has been good through the several years of work. Still, the large scale-up effort remains.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The project is 65% complete and is now concentrating on characterization of 4 green algae and 4 diatoms<br />
but has found 30 strains that will grow at pH greater than 9.5 despite not being able to use carbonate as a<br />
C source (at least the main targets do not).<br />
Lipid production from these is high, based on Nile red; some analytical chemistry should be used to<br />
support the Nile red results.<br />
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This project's research on feedstock appropriate to high pH waters may be particularly germane to the<br />
West where water is limiting.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
(1) Demonstrated high lipid production with alkaliphilic algae including Scenedesmus WC-1 and diatom<br />
RGd-1. (2) Significantly increased growth rates and lipid yields with different culturing conditions (pH,<br />
aeration, light:cycling, bicarbonate) (3) Filed provisional patent on bicarbonate work (jointly supported<br />
by DOD and AFOSR)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 5<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Lab scale experiments are completed, will address 50 gallon and 500 gallon outdoor open pond studies in<br />
summer of 2011.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Much of the data is focussed on calibraiton curves (or related thereof) for Nile Red and lipid density. Past<br />
that, there appears to be some shake flask work that looks at batch cell growth and some ntrate uptake, but<br />
past that this work is premature. The open pond data appeared to be one time only, over 24 days (almost a<br />
batch curve). This data was not well discussed or explained.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Conceptual definition of a high pH production system is needed to put progress into commerical context.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Open pond tests are scheduled for this summer.<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Relevance is still somewhat open to discussion. True it is algae, but the alkalophilic nature is special case<br />
until further development work is done.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 7<br />
May be particularly relevant to algal biofuels' development in the West. Central premise of study remains<br />
to be tested, however (that high pH growing conditions are protective to algae vis-a-vis competitors and<br />
predators).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Algal Biofuels have potential to produce significant amounts of biodiesel, but this is in the early stages of<br />
development.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 5<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 7<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 4<br />
There was little justification for the use of extreme cultures (to pH) in terms of the Biomass Program<br />
goals of large scale cultivation. What is the resource of this kind of water? Where is it found, and what is<br />
the opportunity to grow under these conditions? Very little data other than calibration curves for Nile Red<br />
was shown, so there is little real contribution to basic science yet. Overall, its commercial application is<br />
as of yet poorly defended.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Preliminary techno economic modeling of a conceptual alakaline cultivation and harvest system and<br />
identification of possible geographies are needed to define relevance.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
We strongly disagree with the very negative comment here. This project has so far led to a provisional<br />
patent and a peer-reviewed publication with at least two to three others in the works.<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 7<br />
I interpret the CSFs presented as reasonable assessments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
It would be good to close the loop on the contract by studying competitors and predators (including<br />
pathogens) that develop/are present under the high pH growing conditions and when algae are being<br />
grown up for biomass vs lipid accumulation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
1. High pH conditions help maintain the stability of the culture and lipid productivity. 2. Organisms<br />
adapted to low value alkaline/saline conditions. 3. Outdoor tests show competitive rates and total yields of<br />
TAG accumulation.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 5<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 7<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The open pond growth data is over 24 days. That's a long time. How does this compare to commercial<br />
standard biomass productivities, and lipid production thereof. There was little comparison of data to a<br />
baseline expectation of any production level that would support scale up.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Definition of a viable alkaline cutlivation system is critical to success.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
We will be defining a best case alkaline system based on the open pond tests in summer 2011.<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
This aspect could be improved. After the larger scale raceway experiments, there should be some<br />
exposure to the OBP group at large. Publications have been forthcoming.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
Publications and presentations are being made at good level. The work yet to be accomplished will<br />
determine how successful tech transfer can be.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
1. Signed NDA’s with a number of companies on the bicarbonate work and are in license discussions<br />
with a large company in this area. 2. Considering patenting strains 3. Peer reviewed publications 4. Task 3<br />
Outdoor open pond tests at USU<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
A patent application has been submitted applied for the bicarbonate results. However, no commercial<br />
partners have been identified.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
I did not see much other than a reference to University Partners.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
many of the listed publications in the presentation slides are not directly related to this work.<br />
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Presenter Response<br />
We are in negotiations with commercial partners on the provisional patent, but prefer not to name any at<br />
this time.<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project approach,<br />
scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
Overall, the project has been successful at the research scale. The larger scale experiments will add<br />
significantly to the weight of the results.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
This is a useful study of algal biofuels' feedstock development for high pH waters; additional<br />
characterization of growing conditions relative to competitors, predators and pathogens will be important.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
More specific information is needed from this project: What is the rate of growth of the alkaliphilic algae<br />
(pH > 9.5), compared to neutral pH algae? Goal of the project is to achieve lipid composition >15%.<br />
What is the pH optima of the strains examined? In lab experiments, buffer systems are used (expensive).<br />
How is this going to be done in scale-up?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Overall Impression: 5<br />
The Goal Statement and Project Objectives have a mismatch that should be ironed-out. The Goal<br />
Statement and Critical Success Factors give the impression that alkaliphilic culture resistance to invading<br />
algae/pests is a hypothesis needing testing. However, the Project Objectives are all focused on lipid<br />
production.<br />
Extreme alkaline conditions would presumably have a metabolic cost to the algae leading to lower<br />
productivity than neutral pH waters. (e.g., Spirulina's relatively low productivity). Although, this need not<br />
be a major point of research, including some control non-alkaliphilic cultures in the lab and field<br />
experiments would provide direct information on this concern. Slide 7 may show this kind of experiment,<br />
but it is not clear. Controls could also be an opportunity to test the invader question raised by the Goal<br />
Statement.<br />
The presentation of the data is confusing in some cases. In Slide 11, what was the pH on the unbuffered<br />
culture? Slide 12: What does this mean: "No pH induced and low nitrate depletion TAG accumulation"?<br />
The effect of bicarbonate addition on lipid content is interesting, but what are the next steps to discover<br />
the mechanisms of the bicarbonate effect? Is it a pH effect or a carbon supply effect? Were the algae Climited<br />
prior to the bicarbonate addition? Are there any practical ways to implement this effect at large<br />
scale?<br />
A great strength is the use of outdoor ponds to scale-up, but unfortunately, this work has apparently not<br />
yet begun and so will be only short-term.<br />
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What is national availability of alkaline waters for this process? Include at least a preliminary resource<br />
assessment in this research. Although not a unique problem to alkaline groundwaters, the reporting should<br />
acknowledge difficulties with disposal of blowdown potentially contaminated with natural toxicants-metals,<br />
metalloids.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Nice presentation of a nearly complete project. The impact of the project is uncertain until they have<br />
results from large-scale outdoor trials.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
Overall, this is a limited project (so far) academically and its commercial relevance is more suggestion<br />
than reality. No real case was made for the source of water (oveall amount, access, location...etc) other<br />
than to say it’s good to use unwanted water (which I agree with). Also, the point regarding a mechanism<br />
against contamination was relevant but poorly developed in the experimental approach and no data really<br />
addressed it.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
The project would benefit from development of a conceptual alkaline produciton system and definition of<br />
produdtivity and yield requirements to make the system viable for biofuel production.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
In the time allotted and the very defined format, it was difficult to present enough detail for a complete<br />
understanding of our results. These results are presented in the following publication, which is available<br />
online, and in print shortly: Gardner, R, Peters P, Peyton BM and Cooksey K. Medium pH and Nitrate<br />
Concentration Effects on Accumulation of Triacylglycerol in Two Members of the Chlorophyta. In Press.<br />
J. Appl. Phycology, 2011.<br />
Discovering the fundamental mechanisms behind the bicarbonate are not part of the proposed workscope<br />
for this much more applied project. Further, examining the susceptibility for pond contamination is part of<br />
this summer's work. We anticipate that the energy balances for our cultures/systems will not be<br />
significantly different than any other culturing systems. Detailed energy balances were not part of this<br />
organism-focused scope of work.<br />
Project: 9.6.1.3 Pacific Northwest National Laboratory<br />
Title: Macroalgae GIS Analysis<br />
Presenter: Guri Roesijadi<br />
Presentation Date: Thursday, April 07, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 3.57 1.18 7<br />
Progress 3.14 1.25 7<br />
Relevance 3.29 0.88 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 3.29 1.28 7<br />
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1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The Approach section suffers from a real baseline assessment of the logic for this tool development.<br />
There is a statement that macroalgae will be a feedstock of substance, but of course there is no back-up or<br />
consideration of the difficulty of harvest, transport and conversion of this feedstock compared to landbased<br />
feedstocks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 2<br />
This is a modeling project and the number of ciritcal variable included should be expanded. It is likely<br />
that the project would benefit from a detailed review of older and current publication on macroalgal<br />
production.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 5<br />
GIS tools will be developed to identify cultivation sites with minimal competing impacts on existing uses<br />
of marine and coastal environments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 4<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The ultimate goal is to evaluate conversion of seaweed to alcohols. As a first step, the approach of this<br />
work is to conduct strategic analysis of US macroalgae production as feedstock resource.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 2<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Inclusion of current information from the exisitng kelp industry and a sustainabilty analysis might make<br />
the production potential analysis better.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
1.1. Although the biomass potential of macroalgae as a biofuels feedstock in the United States is high, the<br />
resource is undeveloped. Whether it will be a “feedstock of substance” is not known. A national<br />
assessment of the production potential of macroalgae in U.S. waters is needed. Our year 1 deliverable, the<br />
FY10 report “Macroalgae as a Biomass Feedstock: A Preliminary Analysis” is an initial analysis of the<br />
resource, economics, and environmental impacts. This assessment was “high-level” due to the lack of an<br />
existing national macroalgae production industry. We conducted a preliminary analysis based on best<br />
available data, and, where appropriate, application of our understanding of processing other feedstocks to<br />
macroalgae. Cultivation of macroalgae as feedstock would not compete with an existing domestic supply<br />
chain or with available land, thus, avoiding conflicts faced by other feedstocks. It was beyond the scope<br />
of the program review to present the findings in detail due to time and format constraints. For the program<br />
review we presented key information from this report, meant to provide background for our resource<br />
assessment in FY11, which focuses on the question, “Where can this biomass be produced?” In the initial<br />
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analysis, we estimated a need for 32.3 million dry metric tons grown on about 11,000 km2 to meet<br />
nominal biofuels targets (i.e., a 1% gasoline replacement target). Additionally, we noted<br />
recommendations from the Pew Oceans Commission that marine aquaculture needs to move to offshore<br />
waters due to competition with existing uses or restrictions in nearshore marine environments.<br />
Developing the tool for locating production sites in U.S. waters, which do not conflict with existing uses<br />
or regulations, was considered a first-order need. Quantifying production potential and identifying<br />
potential cultivation sites are critical for our objectives and, after a baseline has been established, a<br />
comparison to other feedstocks will be useful. Other considerations related to infrastructure needs,<br />
economics, and environmental impact and life cycles analysis would be expected to be addressed in<br />
follow-on projects once siting selection questions are addressed. 1.2.1. Our study is based on having<br />
conducted thorough reviews of the relevant literature. We have conducted an extensive literature reviews<br />
on macroalgae and biofuels both prior to and during this study. These have resulted in two documents: (1)<br />
Roesijadi et al. 2008. Techno-Economic Feasibility Analysis of Offshore Seaweed Farming for Bioenergy<br />
and Biobased Products, PNWD-3931 (175 references) and (2) the FY 2010 deliverable, Roesijadi et al.<br />
2010. Macroalgae as a Biomass Feedstock: A Preliminary Analysis. Technical Report 19944 (73<br />
references). The former covered biology of seaweeds, the seaweed industry, biobased seaweed products,<br />
offshore seaweed farms, structures and technologies for offshore farms, environmental factors,<br />
environmental impacts, seaweed biotechnology, and preliminary techno-economic feasibility. The latter<br />
added preliminary resource analyses of production in the United States; the macroalgae-to-market supply<br />
chain (cultivation, harvest, preprocessing, types of biofuels, and conversion technology for macroalgae);<br />
preliminary economic assessment; and preliminary life cycle analysis. The initial steps for developing the<br />
GIS model concept involved a separate literature review of algal species and relevant production data,<br />
infrastructure needs, and competing uses based on both algal operations as well as other marine and<br />
coastal operations. Spatial analysis approaches in aquaculture and studies on macroalgal production were<br />
reviewed. This literature forms the basis of our analysis. We conduct ongoing searches routinely. 1.2.2.<br />
The conceptual macroalgae growth model includes critical variables including solar radiation<br />
(photosynthetically active radiation), turbidity/light penetration, sea surface winds, water temperature,<br />
salinity, and nutrients<br />
1.3. NC 1.4. NC 1.5. NC 1.6. NC<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has made progress in its objectives and stated project<br />
management plan has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 3<br />
No progress, even on literature assessment.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 1<br />
The presenter stated (mistakenly), that no macroalgal production now exists in the US. It is important to<br />
review the published literature on of current or recent harvesting and aquaculture projects. The project<br />
should give more attention to realistic amounts of sea surface, biomass to gasoline conversion and amount<br />
of gasoline needed. Among the critical factors not currently in the model would be the depth, storm<br />
frequency, types of algae (biomass potential) that could be grown or harvested in different areas of the US<br />
exclusion zone.<br />
The model did not appear to include any cost factors for offshore development of algae.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Provided preliminary assessment of macroalgae as biofuels feedstock for the United States. Demonstrated<br />
with selected data and test criteria that data for the bio-physical model and selection constraints for the<br />
competing use models can be mapped for the west and east coasts of the United States.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 4<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Delivered macroalgae review (preliminary analysis) in FY10; in FY11 goal is to produce specific<br />
resource assessment tool. Unfortunately, the depth of the analysis is unclear. It would have been helpful<br />
to have a better overview of historic and international activities (and previous analyses).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 2<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
It appears that the growth model needs critical review, refinement and validation prior to application.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
2.1. Our year 1 deliverable was an initial review of the literature and preliminary analysis. For<br />
development of GIS tools, a literature review was completed and initial approach identified. This is<br />
consistent with the timeline developed for this project. 2.2.1. There is currently no macroalgae cultivation<br />
industry in the U.S. for biomass production at the scale needed for biofuels. There is cultivation activity,<br />
but not at levels to constitute an industry. In the FAO Fisheries and Aquaculture Statistics 2006, the U.S.<br />
is not listed as a contributor to world production of cultivated macroalgae. With few exceptions, open<br />
water cultivation of macroalgae in the U.S. has been experimental, demonstration, or pilot-scale. The first<br />
lease for open water cultivation in the State of Maine was recently granted to grow kelp for a specialty<br />
market. Likewise, the U.S. contributes only 0.5% of the worldwide harvest of natural stands. The largest<br />
commercial wild kelp harvester ISP Alginates (formerly Kelco) discontinued its leases of kelp beds in<br />
California in the 2005-2006 timeframe and ceased operation. 2.2.2. In project year 1 and the FY10<br />
deliverable, a proof of concept calculation provided an order of magnitude estimate of the area of<br />
macroalgae cultivation for a nominal gasoline replacement of 1% of the current domestic consumption<br />
based on best available data. We estimated about 11,000 square kilometers (equivalent to the area of the<br />
Island of Hawaii) would be needed, illustrating the scale of production needed. We also reviewed<br />
literature on aquaculture projects, developed a needs matrix, and interviewed industry scientists. Based on<br />
this, we identified two groups of kelp as a focus for this year’s assessment: Macrocystis and<br />
Saccharina/Laminaria and related species. Selection was based on species distribution, growth rates, and<br />
biochemical feedstock derived from the literature and our own research. The purpose of this assessment is<br />
to provide the tools/models to generate a critical baseline for which to base future research questions.<br />
Cultivation at the scale above will need to be offshore on suspended scaffolds to avoid competition with<br />
nearshore kelp populations. Depth is not critical because the species would be suspended near the surface,<br />
but wave energy associated with storm frequencies is. In the 1970s, the demonstration project of offshore<br />
Macrocystis production off Southern California saw loss due to late fall storm events. We agree that there<br />
is a need to address storm event frequency and in particular, wave heights. Storm track frequencies, in<br />
addition to remotely-sensed wave height data are publicly available to help develop probabilities of<br />
occurrence that can help assess a prioritization score of candidate sites. This work requires the use of<br />
foundational building blocks to establish the overall assessment. If at this point there is reasonable<br />
potential, we can then work to develop and integrate additional factors providing a more rigorous<br />
assessment. 2.2.3. Our current focus is on biomass production potential and developing a GIS spatial<br />
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analysis tool to map this potential. This is expected to provide a good baseline to assess potential across<br />
U.S. waters. Differential costs of development across the landscape can be included later to calculate the<br />
net value in specified areas. 2.3. NC 2.4. NC 2.5. Our previous analyses, including international and<br />
historic activities, are documented in our FY10 report “Macroalgae as a Biomass Feedstock: A<br />
Preliminary Analysis”. 2.6. We agree that the macroalgae growth model needs critical peer-review and<br />
validation. The current model considers energy balance components including PAR and light and water<br />
quality aspects such as water temperature, salinity, and turbidity. Growth rate and other biophysical<br />
parameters for Macrocystis and Saccharina/Laminaria will be derived from peer-reviewed literature.<br />
Observation data from the literature and field sites will be used for validation.<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The project should be viewed as not relevant without the requisite preliminary analysis.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Much of the information related to this project already exists in the literature. Its assembly and modelling<br />
has merit if realistically done.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 3<br />
There is a need to evaluate macroalgae as biomass resource to enable Biomass Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 4<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The project is relevant to strategic goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 2<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Relevance of survey results is contigent on validation of growth and sustainable harvest models.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
3.1. NC 3.2. The macroalgae growth model requires critical peer-review and validation. Observation data<br />
from the literature and PNNL's own field sites will be used for model validation. 3.3. NC 3.4. NC 3.5. NC<br />
3.6. We agree that the macroalgae growth model requires critical peer-review and validation. The current<br />
model considers energy balance components including PAR and light attenuation as well as water quality<br />
aspects such as water temperature, salinity, and turbidity. Growth rate and other biophysical parameters<br />
for Macrocystis and Saccharina/Laminaria will be derived from peer-reviewed literature. Observation<br />
data from the literature and field sites will be used for model validation. Results from the macroalgae<br />
growth model can be used to guide decisions around harvest intensity<br />
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4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The possible deliverables were presented as the CSFs, instead of a real assessment of the CSFs.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 3<br />
A strong review of the relevant literature combined with realistic costing of offshore macroalgal<br />
development etc. are critical to success. Note that Chinese macroalgal industry data should not be used (I<br />
mention this because of FAO data that the PI might find and consider using); labor costs are insignificant<br />
there, but more importantly, the Chinese shelf is spatially extensive and very shallow (a few meters depth<br />
for kms of distance from shore), which is one reason why the industry is so successful.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 2<br />
There may be no successful outcome from this project, please see concerns listed under "Overall<br />
impressions"<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 4<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 6<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 2<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The criticality of model validation apears to be under-emphasized.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
4.1 NC 4.2.1. Economic analysis will be needed for a global assessment of macroalgae as a feedstock.<br />
The current project is centered on assessment for macroalgal growth conditions and competing uses.<br />
4.2.2. Direct comparisons are not a complete crosswalk. This is a new potential feedstock, and, for<br />
understanding the overall potential, we need to use comparisons and knowledge from a variety of<br />
industries ranging from algae, other forms of aquaculture, and marine energy to come up with the most<br />
reasonable assumptions. As to data from the Chinese industry, those production estimates are the basis for<br />
comparison with production from current experimental kelp cultivation efforts underway in other regions,<br />
such as in Ireland. Those production estimates compare favorably with those of the Chinese kelp industry<br />
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and, together, form a basis for comparison for production potential through cultivation. Activities in<br />
China would not provide a strong basis for economic comparison for the reasons stated by the reviewer.<br />
4.3. A study by Graham et al.( PNAS 104: 16576–16580 [2007]) demonstrated the existence of<br />
previously unknown populations of deep water tropical kelp resulting from model predictions based on<br />
ecophysiological modeling and geospatial analysis of physico-chemico data from ocean environments.<br />
This is not unlike the approach we are taking. The two demonstration areas are being used to test model<br />
parameters. Once validated for prediction of population distribution in the demonstration areas, the plan is<br />
to apply the model to broader aspects of the U.S. EEZ. Our success in developing and applying such<br />
spatial models is listed as a challenge in our presentation. However, members of our team have<br />
successfully developed parallel models for land-based resource assessment of microalgae applicable to<br />
the United States (Wigmosta et al.2011. National Microalgae Biofuel Production Potential and Resource<br />
Demand. Water Resources Research. doi: 10.1029/2010WR009966). We feel that this experience will<br />
facilitate research on the current project on macroalgae.<br />
4.4. NC 4.5. NC 4.6 The macroalgae growth model will provide information on growth rates and total<br />
biomass. Understanding how much of the resource can exist is needed for its valuation. Perhaps the<br />
reviewer is noting that other factors are needed as well to assess a realistic long-term production potential.<br />
We agree that model validation is important. This study is a first step, and the first of its kind to provide<br />
quantitative macroalgae production potential as a biofuels feedstock.<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
I did not sense the coordination with the OBP Algae program or with other investigators.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
Tech transfer not evident yet in presentation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Publish findings and disseminate new knowledge to end-users. Provide new assessment tool to end-users.<br />
Submit results to the Biomass Knowledge Discovery Framework.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
No technology transfer reported.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
See section on Overall Impressions<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Information sharing appears premature. the survey needs validation and refinement before it is useful.<br />
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Presenter Response<br />
5.1. This is one of two projects focused on macroalgae as a marine biomass in the OBP algae program.<br />
Members of our research team are the lead and participants of the “Microalgae analysis” project in the<br />
OBP algae program. The other project is the “Collaborative: PNNL -Canada Collaboration”, also being<br />
conducted at PNNL. The principle investigator of the current project is also on the research team of the<br />
collaboration with Canadian scientists. 5.2. NC 5.3. NC 5.4. NC 5.5. NC 5.6. NC 5.7 We have just started<br />
the GIS tool development and assessment. FY10 was concluded with delivery of the report “Macroalgae<br />
as a Biomass Feedstock: A Preliminary Analysis”. This report was provided to staff of the Bioenergy<br />
Knowledge Discovery Framework. The GIS development and assessment is, in effect, a separate and<br />
focused activity that builds on the preliminary analysis. The deliverable for FY11 is a project plan for<br />
research to be concluded in the following years and preliminary assessment. Data will be shared when<br />
models have been appropriately applied and reviewed.<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project<br />
approach, scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
This project seems highly unrealistic and has not had the basic analysis performed to justify the program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
Better modelling and better input data relative to macroalgae are critically needed; the current models<br />
appear to lack many relevant factors.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
This project appears to be advocating cultivation and/or harvesting of algal biomass from the coastal<br />
regions of the US. If the latter, large tracts of ocean floor would be needed for the biomass-to-biofuels<br />
conversion. Is the harvesting of the coastal kelp forests the equivalent of clear cutting in forests? Has the<br />
PI addressed ecological and environmental consequences of such a plan? This may be a good exercise on<br />
paper but a moot point in practice, as the ecological consequences of large-scale harvesting of algal<br />
biomass from coastal regions would likely be untenable in the context of viable biofuels. There is a startup<br />
company in Texas that aims to exploit Macrocystis pyrifera upon cultivation on land, in<br />
photobioreactors for biofuels generation. This may be an ecologically and environmentally more<br />
acceptable approach.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Overall Impression: 4<br />
Macroalgae for fuel has been the subject of much research in past decades. The task "Conduct a high level<br />
review of biomass feedstock and conversion potential of macroalgae for biofuels production in the United<br />
States" was completed. What were the results of this review? What are the current and projected technical<br />
and economic feasibilities of macroalgae biofuel production? That should be established before the<br />
resource assessment.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Nice presentation of a straightforward project. Given the scarcity of data on macroalgae conversion, some<br />
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of the underlying assumptions in the model seemed unlikely. It is unclear how helpful this assessment<br />
will prove to be.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
This was a terribly underassuming talk that did not articulate any compelling argument for the work. It's<br />
an interesting subject, though, and one would hope the project is better managed if continued. It is simply<br />
difficult to provide much more than that in commentary based upon what was presented.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
This appears to be an early first step in developing a meaningful macroalgae feedstock resource analysis.<br />
The incompleteness of the work needs to be emphasized to put the status of the survey in proper<br />
perspective.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
6.1. NC 6.2 This project has two primary modeling activities that are being developed in parallel: first, the<br />
macroalgae biophysical growth model and spatial assessment, and second, the competing use and<br />
infrastructure constraints model. The macroalgae growth model considers energy balance components<br />
including PAR and light attenuation as well as water quality aspects such as water temperature, salinity,<br />
and turbidity. Growth rate and other biophysical parameters for Macrocystis and Saccharina/Laminaria<br />
will be used from past and current lab and field studies conducted by team members who are experts in<br />
the field, as well as through current peer-reviewed literature. Selection of the kelp was based on growth<br />
characteristic, known biochemical feedstock constituents, and current international activities that have<br />
identified the brown macroalgae as suitable marine biomass. Observation data from the literature and<br />
PNNL's own field sites will be used for model validation. The conceptual framework for the spatial<br />
assessment has been established such that we can conduct analysis at the 1km spatial resolution for U.S.<br />
EEZ. While not a part of the formal operating plan at this point in time, additional considerations for<br />
storm track frequencies and wave heights can be factored in and used to help establish a prioritization of<br />
areas where macroalgae growth is favorable. Growth model results will be used in conjunction with<br />
spatial modeling of competing use analysis, regulatory requirements, and existing/required infrastructure<br />
to further refine the prioritization of potential sites and economic viability. The team consists of<br />
established experts in marine spatial planning and GIS modeling, mass and energy balance modeling,<br />
geoinformatics and spatial modeling, marine phycology and algal ecology, ecological risk assessment,<br />
and marine biotechnology. 6.3. We are not advocating development in coastal regions or harvest of<br />
natural populations. In fact, we are inclined to follow the recommendations of the Pew Oceans<br />
Commission that marine aquaculture for the United States should focus on offshore, rather than<br />
nearshore, waters. Our goal is to provide an unbiased national resource assessment for cultivation of<br />
macroalgae as marine biomass as a contribution to national biofuels feedstock production goals stipulated<br />
in the Energy Independence and Security Act (EISA). Environmental aspects including habitat and<br />
species are being considered under “competing uses” in our assessment. 6.4. NC 6.5. NC 6.6. NC 6.7. We<br />
discuss the relatively early stage of our GIS model development and application and provide explanatory<br />
background above. The GIS model development is a new task initiated in FY11.<br />
Project: 9.6.1.2 PNNL<br />
Title: Microalgae Analysis<br />
Presenter: Mark Wigmosta<br />
Presentation Date: Friday, April 08, 2011<br />
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Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 5.43 1.29 7<br />
Progress 5.57 1.18 7<br />
Relevance 6.00 1.41 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 5.14 1.36 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The approach is quite reasonable.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Modelling study based on production of 220 billion L/yr of algal biofuels. Designed to aid in site<br />
selection for farms.<br />
The presentation did not clarify what productivity levels (what algal species? what productivity figures?)<br />
are being input to the model. The PI notes that the water resources' database is from 1978 and presents a<br />
problem in modelling effort. The basic unit selected for model seems reasonable (100 farm ponds of 10<br />
acres each plus 200 acres for infrastructure).<br />
The model should include additional sensitivity analysis in two ways: 1) Ground-truthing of sites selected<br />
by the model as good is needed to see if the model is really performing, and 2) the model needs to<br />
incorporate sealevel rise predictions/changes in predicted precipitation patterns on a decadal level for the<br />
next 30 years, at least.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
A systematic biophysical evaluation of resource demands and constraints on microalgae biofuel<br />
production.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 7<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The objectives are to continue development of resource demands and constraints on microalgal<br />
production. The approach and targets are technically sound.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 6<br />
This is detailed but misses the crucial application of experience of application. The approach is<br />
exhaustive and pays good attention to detail, but its a bit too sanitized. If the PI's could integrate the view<br />
from the ground, i.e. the farmer, into their criteria this would become an excellent study. I encourage the<br />
PI's to include this perspective and turn this work into an excellent product for the DOE.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The project should be structured such that all major factors affecting the potential production are defined<br />
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and accounted through the Integrated Assessment framewok before specific numerical results are<br />
presented and published.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
[1.1] N/C --- [1.2a] Biomass productivity was estimated using a biophysical growth model based on<br />
incoming solar radiation and water temperature determined from local meteorology through energy<br />
balance calculations. Biological input parameters to the model were derived from current literature and<br />
are explicitly described in Wigmosta et al. (2011). As noted the last systematic national water resource<br />
assessment was conducted in 1978. Part of our current effort is to estimate water availability with the<br />
most current information at each potential pond site. [1.2b] We agree that ground-truthing is an important<br />
issue for assessments of resource use and algal biofuel production. We have approached this issue at<br />
several levels including: 1) In the early phases of our efforts in developing the Biomass Assessment Tool<br />
(BAT) we worked closely with J.R. Benemann and D.B. Anderson in developing the conceptual design,<br />
data requirements, and underlying assumptions for the algal growth model which is the foundation for the<br />
biomass production and resource use estimates produced by the BAT. 2) Simulated pond evaporation<br />
rates from our model were compared with corrected pan evaporation data over a range of climate zones.<br />
3) To the extent possible, based on limited published literature values and anecdotal information provided<br />
by J.R. Benemann derived from his direct experiences in algae cultivation, we have attempted to<br />
benchmark our analytical results. For example, our results indicate an average conversion efficiency of<br />
total solar energy to organic mass of approximately 1%. This is consistent with the published value of<br />
1%-3% for observed yields from Williams and Laurens (2010). We also found our calculated national<br />
mean annual vegetable oil production rate of 5775 L/ha/yr is conservatively well below the published<br />
value for current production of 14,000 L/ha/yr by Mascarelli (2009). We have plans, during the summer<br />
months of 2011 to visit several research sites where algal growth experiments are planned or underway<br />
including: 1) PNNL's Marine Science Laboratory where current lab experiments represent different U.S.<br />
regional climates and focus in on both fresh and saline water algal strains; 2) University of Arizona where<br />
focus is on the design and operation of raceway's in arid climates using freshwater species; 3) Texas<br />
A&M (Pecos) to evaluate large-scale pond systems and production strains for biomass and lipids; and 4)<br />
Utah State University where research is focused on cold weather cultivation and alternative nutrient<br />
addition strategies. We will also monitor algal growth experiments at New Mexico State University and<br />
Texas A&M (Corpus Christi). [1.2c] Using the GIS capabilities of BAT, it would be relatively<br />
straightforward to consider the impacts of sea level rise to evaluate the sensitivity of microalgae<br />
production potential to alternative climate change scenarios, particularly related to land availability in the<br />
coastal regions. --- [1.3] N/C --- [1.4] N/C --- [1.5] N/C --- [1.6] We agree with the invaluable need to<br />
ground-truth from the perspective of operators/farmers; please see Response [1.2b]. --- [1.7] We agree<br />
with the reviewer in that it is ideal to model the major factors in multiple stages of the lifecycle process,<br />
as is being done under the INL/PNNL Integrated Assessment Framework (IAF) project. There are<br />
however, clear benefits to the scientific research community to share periodic and logical progressions<br />
within specific lifecycle stages; the current project has benefited from such presentations and publications<br />
from others, and our assumptions, results and contributions have been peer-reviewed by experts in the<br />
field and published in Wigmosta et. al (2011). It should also be noted, that the IAF leverages major<br />
components developed under the current project allowing a model progression to include and represent<br />
the "resource to production to refinery" portion of the lifecycle.<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has<br />
made progress in its objectives and stated project management plan<br />
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has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The progress is adequate to the time spent on the project so far.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Progress in this project is satisfactory, but the things mentioned in the approach section would likely<br />
improve the project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Development of a GIS-based Biomass Assessment Tool that integrates high-resolution data with<br />
biophysical models to provide spatially/temporally explicit estimates of production potential and resource<br />
demands and constants<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 7<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Scientists have not finished different modules, but indicated that milestones will be accomplished by the<br />
project deadlines.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 7<br />
No problem - good work progress.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Progress falls significantly short of the state that should be required before specific estimates are<br />
presented and published.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
[2.1] N/C --- [2.2] See Response 1.2(a-c) --- [2.3] N/C --- [2.4] N/C --- [2.5] The project in on track to<br />
meet project milestones and deadlines. --- [2.6] N/C --- [2.7] The research, methodology, and products<br />
developed under the current project provide key building blocks to realizing the ability to represent the<br />
full lifecycle process. We feel that sufficient progress has been made to establish national baseline<br />
conditions under well-specified assumptions and limitations (Wigmosta et. al 2011). As such, there are<br />
clear benefits to the scientific research community to share periodic and logical progressions within<br />
specific lifecycle stages; the current project has benefited from such presentations and publications from<br />
others, and our assumptions, results and contributions have been peer-reviewed by experts in the field and<br />
published in Wigmosta et. al (2011).<br />
Wigmosta, M. S., A. M. Coleman, R. J. Skaggs, M. H. Huesemann, and L. J. Lane (2011), National<br />
microalgae biofuel production potential and resource demand, Water Resour. Res., 47, W00H04,<br />
doi:10.1029/2010WR009966.<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 7<br />
This project has high relevance for the OBP program<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 8<br />
This kind of model is very important to DoE efforts to reach affordable, sustainable production of algal<br />
biofuels in US.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
This study provides DOE and industry with the first spatially-explicit estimate of open pond microalgae<br />
production potential and resource demands for the conterminous United States. It realistically addresses<br />
critical questions of how much energy can be produced, where production can occur, and how much land<br />
and water resource will be required.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 7<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The project is highly relevant to platform goals. However, the ultimate utility of this tool will depend on<br />
the transparency of its assumptions (and the ability to change them).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Relevance will shoot up to 9 or 10 once they incorporate the follow-on perspective of the farmer.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
A survey that includes estimates of all major factors has great relevance. The current state of this survey<br />
has signficant omissions.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
[3.1] N/C --- [3.2] N/C --- [3.3] N/C --- [3.4] N/C --- [3.5] The Biomass Assessment Tool (BAT) webinterface<br />
allows a user to access, query, and interact with all national datasets and models produced under<br />
this project. Ultimately, the user will have control to adjust spatial filtering parameters as well as model<br />
parameters to screen existing databases for elements such as minimum suitable land area, geographic<br />
boundary, proximity to nutrient source, proximity to CO2 source, climate ranges, biomass production<br />
rates, lipid production rates, percent of national production target, and temporal ranges. The BAT is<br />
constructed such that when more current or detailed knowledge is available for particular algal strains in<br />
specific geographic domains this information can be incorporated. We have intentionally designed the<br />
BAT and the algal growth model such that we can readily incorporate more accurate information or<br />
improved models for specific algae strains, environmental conditions, and downstream lifecycle processes<br />
as they become available. For example, we are closely monitoring ongoing and planned technology<br />
development efforts by the NAABB Algal Biology and Cultivation Teams where there is a focus on<br />
increasing overall productivity of biomass accumulation and lipid/hydrocarbon content and increasing<br />
overall productivity by developing and optimizing scalable cultivation practices and growth rates under<br />
various environments. We also are interacting with PIs at PNNL, Utah State University, University of<br />
Arizona, and Texas A&M to evaluate their results, and as appropriate, incorporate them into the BAT.<br />
Finally, we are continually reviewing the algae and bioenergy literature to identify potential<br />
enhancements to BAT as appropriate. --- [3.6] We agree with the need to incorporate farmer/operator<br />
experience. This is part of current and planned future work; please see Response 1.2b. --- [3.7] The<br />
current state of our study provides a high spatial/temporal evaluation of open pond microalgae production<br />
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potential along with water and land requirements for feedstock growth when water and nutrients are not<br />
limiting. Ongoing work (WBS 9.6.1.6) is prioritizing and optimizing sites that are best suited in the<br />
"resource to feedstock to biorefinery" portion of the lifecycle by considering nutrient supply, CO2, water<br />
demand and availability, and system logistics including cost of infrastructure. Unique aspects of different<br />
algal strains will also be considered under NAABB allowing the capability to optimize strains to local site<br />
conditions, including climate, water source, nutrient requirements, and production in an open/closed<br />
system. We anticipate that the results of this study will supply valuable data for use in complete life cycle<br />
analyses.<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The CSFs and Challenges are stated reasonably well and very pertinent.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Realistic ground-truthing of model predictions (and revision of model, if needed) and incorporation of<br />
sealevel rise predictions will help to assure that the results are useful.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Integrated assessment of on-site feedstock production, integration into full lifecycle analysis<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 7<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Critical factors have been formally identified, but one factor that appears to be missing is any<br />
observational component to "ground-truth" some of the results. Without this component, this is likely to<br />
be an interesting modelling exercise with very limited practical application.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Very good attention to the resource criteria. Very good. Score will shoot up as soon as the PI's incorporate<br />
logistic criteria of on-site review.<br />
Very good assumptions made. This is a very realistic study. I have high confidence in these PI's.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Critcal success factors should include development of an accurate Integrated Assessment Framework.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
[4.1] N/C --- [4.2] We agree that ground-truthing is an important issue for assessments of resource use<br />
and algal biofuel production; this is the subject of current and planned work as detailed in Response 1.2b.<br />
Using the GIS capabilities of BAT, it would be relatively straightforward to consider the impacts of sea<br />
level rise in the coastal regions of the national assessment, thereby providing an evaluation of the<br />
sensitivity of microalgae production potential under alternative climate change scenarios. --- [4.3] The<br />
research, methodology, and products developed under the current project provide key building blocks to<br />
realizing the capability of representing the full lifecycle process. The foundation of this realization is<br />
based upon the scalability of the BAT to link lifecycle components in an integrated and flexible manner.<br />
Under WBS 9.6.1.6, this capability is being exercised to bring PNNL-developed spatial analysis and<br />
production models together with the INL-developed system logistics model enabling a "resource to<br />
production to biorefinery" representation of the lifecycle. --- [4.4] N/C --- [4.5] We agree that groundtruthing<br />
is an important issue for assessments of resource use, algal biofuel production, and observational<br />
validation of modeled results; this is the subject of current and planned work as detailed in Response 1.2b.<br />
--- [4.6a] We agree on the need for logistics criteria. Ongoing work (WBS 9.6.1.6) is prioritizing and<br />
optimizing sites that are best suited in the resource to feedstock to refinery portion of the lifecycle by<br />
considering nutrient supply, CO2, water demand and availability, and system logistics including existing<br />
and required infrastructure. [4.6b] N/C --- [4.7] The research, methodology, and products developed<br />
under the current project provide key building blocks to realizing the capability of representing the full<br />
lifecycle process. The foundation of this realization is based upon the scalability of the BAT to link<br />
lifecycle components in an integrated and flexible manner. Under Project 9.6.1.6, “Integrated Assessment<br />
Framework”, this capability is being exercised to bring PNNL-developed spatial analysis and production<br />
models together with the INL-developed system logistics model enabling an integrated "resource to<br />
production to biorefinery" capability.<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
There was proposed interaction with NAABB specifically along with some small dissemination plan for<br />
the literature. Somehow this should be made more available to the academic and investigative<br />
communities.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
Presentations of model should continue. This model should be very important to other DoE-funded<br />
projects.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Integration of web-based Biomass Assessment Tool into Bioenergy Knowledge Discovery Framework,<br />
coordination with NAABB, collaboration with INL & ANL<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Technology transfer partners (within NAABB) have been identified but there was no indication of any<br />
current interaction with them. The project would be benefit from early and frequent interactions with<br />
potential users.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
No problems here.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Tech transfer should have been limited to within the Integrated Assessment Framework team until a<br />
complete an accurate model is developed. Presentation and publication of survey results prior to<br />
validation may be counter-productive.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
[5.1] Selected results from NAABB will be integrated into the Biomass Assessment Tool (BAT) and be<br />
available to the academic and investigative communities (as well as industry and other interested parties)<br />
though its web-based interface (additional detail is provided in Response 3.5). Results of this project will<br />
also be disseminated through BAT linkage to the DOE Bioenergy Knowledge Discovery Framework<br />
(KDF), as well as, peer-reviewed papers and technical reports. --- [5.2] We will continue to disseminate<br />
project results; please see Response 5.1 for more details. --- [5.3] N/C --- [5.4] N/C --- [5.5] We are<br />
closely monitoring ongoing and planned technology development efforts by the NAABB Algal Biology<br />
and Cultivation Teams where there is a focus on increasing overall productivity of biomass accumulation<br />
and lipid/hydrocarbon content and increasing overall productivity by developing and optimizing scalable<br />
cultivation practices and growth rates under various environments. We also are interacting with PIs at<br />
PNNL, Utah State University, U of Arizona, and Texas A&M to evaluate their results, and as appropriate<br />
incorporate them into the BAT. In addition, results, methods, and models developed under this project<br />
will be distributed through the BAT and the KDF. --- [5.6] N/C --- [5.7] We feel there are clear benefits to<br />
the scientific research community to share periodic and logical progressions within specific lifecycle<br />
stages; the current project has benefited from such presentations and publications by others and our<br />
results and contributions have been peer-reviewed by experts in the field and published in Wigmosta et. al<br />
(2011).<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project<br />
approach, scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
The project has a good feel to it. Information of value to the development of algal biofuels will be an<br />
outcome.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
The project is proceeding satisfactorily.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Are there any conclusions drawn from the work so far? A tasks, milestones and timetable slide would be<br />
useful to add. Is the analysis dependent on the biological system, i.e., the species to be used? Greenhouse<br />
covered ponds, which allows controlled energy and water vapor transfer with the atmosphere, would be<br />
an untenable situation for biofuels production, as it will make the process cost prohibitive. A lot of this<br />
work has already been done ad infinitum by the "race track" and "photobioreactor" field. Thus, work in<br />
this project is redundant, as it repeats what is already in the literature.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Overall Impression: 7<br />
CO2 is probably the most limiting resource, but it seems to be near the last that is going to be<br />
implemented. Similarly, it's not clear how much has been accomplished on the Biomass Growth Model.<br />
Presumably it would show that the upper tier states cannot produced economical quantities of biomass<br />
due to a short growing season. That would eliminate the need for the detailed analysis of the other<br />
resources in these regions. Hopefully, not much effort was expended to model land and water resources in<br />
non-viable locations (i.e., no CO2, wrong climate).<br />
The land available would be expanded somewhat by considering degraded cropland rather than excluding<br />
all cropland.<br />
It was not clear if the water use considered blowdown disposal in addition to evaporation.<br />
Ground-truthing of some specific sites should be done early in the program to have an idea of how many<br />
false positives/negatives are being generated.<br />
Important project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
This is a good project, but it would be even better if potential users were consulted frequently and some<br />
sort of "ground-truthing " of the results could be incorporated. The presenter seems well aware of the<br />
model's limitations and is willing to improve the model's transparency (with respect to basic<br />
assumptions).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
A very good start to a very important study. The PI's are encouraged to incorporate the added perspective<br />
of the farmer and land developer to further down select sites that pass the resource nexus criteria. Will<br />
become a very important study once this is completed.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
The survey has very high potential value but needs further refinement and validation and integration into<br />
a broader assessment model before it is useful. Key assumptions need to be challenged and reviewed.<br />
Uncertainities need to be estimated and included when meanignful quantitative resutls are presented.<br />
Publishing that 17% of U.S. transporation fuels could be produced by algae should be discouraged when<br />
it is know that including techno economic factors makes the error range of the estimate 0% to 100%.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
[6.1] N/C --- [6.2] N/C --- [6.3] An important step to realizing the potential of algae is quantifying the<br />
demands commercial-scale algal bevel production will place on water and land resources. This study has<br />
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provided baseline estimates of land potentially suitable for open pond microalgae feedstock production<br />
along with water demand for various levels of biomass production. Initial results suggest that microalgae<br />
based biofuel has the potential to make a significant contribution to renewable fuel targets, however,<br />
water demand is likely to be high. Final results are ultimately species dependent which is represented in<br />
the growth model through input parameters that control the conversion of solar energy to biomass/lipids,<br />
in particular those associated with water temperature and light intensity. Impact of CO2 and other<br />
nutrients is the subject of current work in WBS 9.6.1.6. We chose a greenhouse configuration to represent<br />
the general features of closed systems in terms of temperature and evaporation control. The main focus of<br />
this study is a first step to identify resource demands and constraints on the production of microalgae, not<br />
the engineering details of open or closed systems. Our study presents a first of its kind high‐resolution<br />
spatiotemporal national assessment that brings to bear fundamental questions of where production can<br />
occur, how many land and water resources are required, and how much biofuel could be produced.<br />
--- [6.4a] Regarding CO2, see Response 3.7. We agree that growing season length needs to be considered<br />
and is currently being implemented under WBS 9.6.1.6. The biomass growth model provides hourly<br />
estimate of biomass production that will allow us to quantify biophysically and economically viable<br />
growing seasons. [6.4b] Our GIS-based land screening analysis is flexible and will allow inclusion of<br />
additional rulesets, including degraded agricultural land using metrics available in the USDA-NASS<br />
database. [6.4c] Our current study of saline water includes water requirements for blowdown;<br />
consideration of blowdown disposal is proposed for FY12. [6.4d] Re. the need for ground-truth data – see<br />
Response 1.2b. [6.4e] N/C --- [6.5] Re. the need for ground-truth data – see Response 1.2b. --- [6.6a] We<br />
agree with the need for ground truth data and operator perspective – see Response 1.2b. [6.6b] N/C [6.6c]<br />
See Response 1.2a for biomass productivity. Also, we are currently refining the model to account for CO2<br />
and other required nutrients. [6.6d] N/C [6.6e] N/C [6.6f] Water use was calculated from our open pond<br />
model and is roughly equal to the water required to replace evaporative loss less precipitation. Biofuel<br />
production was based on biomass calculated from our growth model with a lipid content of 20% and an<br />
extraction/conversion efficiency of 80%. [6.6g] We are currently developing an estimate of available<br />
water supply that will be compared to site-specific freshwater demand. [6.6h] Our enhanced growth<br />
model will allow consideration of atmospheric CO2. [6.6i] N/C [6.6j] See Response 6.3. --- [6.7] We<br />
agree that the BAT needs further refinement to consider additional resource constraints and additional<br />
components of the lifecycle (see Responses 3.7, 4.3, 4.6a, 4.7, and 6.4). We agree this project will benefit<br />
from ground truth data and additional input from algae farmers/operators (see Response 1.2b) as part of<br />
the model review, refinement, and validation. We also agree with the need to estimate uncertainty; this is<br />
a subject of proposed research for FY12. As noted in Response 1.7, we do feel there are clear benefits to<br />
the scientific research community to share periodic and logical progressions within specific lifecycle<br />
stages; the current project has benefited from such presentations and publications by others, and our<br />
assumptions, results and contributions have been peer-reviewed by experts in the field and also<br />
contributed back to community in Wigmosta et. al (2011).<br />
Project: 9.1.3.1 INL<br />
Title: Algae-Based Biofuels Integrated Assessment Framework: Development, Evaluation, and<br />
Demonstration<br />
Presenter: Deborah Newby<br />
Presentation Date: Friday, April 08, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 4.43 1.05 7<br />
Progress 4.57 1.29 7<br />
Relevance 4.43 1.18 7<br />
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Critical Success Factors 4.71 1.28 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The Approach builds upon previous feedstock supply modeling work which is a good starting point.<br />
Development of a model which allows for the cost productivity analyses to be performed for various<br />
operating schemes is desirable. One aspect that I may have mistaken is hardwiring in certain processing<br />
steps which are known to be too expensive. I hope that is not the case.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
This modelling project will construct an Algae Logistics Model (ALM) of an Integrated Assessment<br />
Framework (IAF). BAT is included. These model components will be put together, and require lots of<br />
careful project coordination between partners.<br />
The model used flocculation and centrifugation in the model, simply because modelling data were<br />
available; however, these processes may make the process of recovery too expensive at the scale required<br />
for real algal biofuels' production. PIs need to mine older literature (e.g., Oswald, earlier DoE reports) for<br />
data to make a realistic (and productive) model.<br />
The species of algae that are cultured will make a big difference to models; I suggest PIs try to model at<br />
least one specific model. PI had concern that relevant "proprietary data" is making modeling difficult. Try<br />
to avoid this problem by seeing if current DoE-funded projects' can share data plus use older, published<br />
literature.<br />
The scale of the pond that is modelled may be too small.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Asystematic biophysical evaluation would be provided of resource demands and constraints on<br />
microalgae biofuel production<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The goals of the project are to develop an algae logistics model and to provide baseline designs for algal<br />
systems. There seems to be considerable overlap with the NREL project "Algal biofuel pathway baseline<br />
costs."<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Models can be a waste of time if the system modeled is nonsensical. The PI has followed the Solix image<br />
of a large microalgae farm in the middle of the desert surrounding a pilot plant. The obvious problem is<br />
that such a plant will not likely be built, as power plants are not generally built in the middle of nowehere.<br />
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Is this near a coal supply...etc. And what about distribution lines for the electricity generated? What is the<br />
energy balance once all that has been factored in...etc.<br />
I would suggest that the PI's go back to the reports of Benemann et al, and Lundquist et al. Model those<br />
systems and then expand.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Much of this assesment appears to be redundant with NREL Algal Biofuel Baseline Costs and other<br />
published cost and resource analyses.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
The approach builds upon previous feedstock supply modeling work conducted at the INL and consists of<br />
essentially two main components: 1) development of an algal logistics module (ALM) that will leverage<br />
the history of supply system modeling at the INL; and 2) integration of this expanded feedstock supply<br />
model with the co-funded work being conducted at PNNL expanding their Biomass Assessment Tool<br />
(BAT) to include algae. The completed product will be the Integrated Assessment Framework that will<br />
allow us to select appropriate locations for algal farms based on specific criteria including land value,<br />
slope of land, sunlight, temperature, water availability, etc. and then to model the logistics and costs<br />
associated with the placement of a particular farm design at that site. Co-location or proximity to other<br />
resources such as waste-water treatment plants or existent coal-fired plants as a source of CO2 as well as<br />
proximity to transportation infrastructure and processing facilities are will also be considered by the IAF.<br />
There is no expectation of building plants adjacent to algal farms, but through the use of the IAF, sites<br />
with appropriate characteristics will be identified for siting of algal farms. The Solix model was not the<br />
basis for our design, which as the reviewer suggests is not economically viable. We agree that it would<br />
make sense to site algal-farms near water resources such as the Gulf Coast or wastewater treatment plants.<br />
We also agree that modeling existing algal farms is essential both from design and validation<br />
perspectives. We are working to incorporate such designs into our model databases. The algae logistics<br />
module consists of numerous data layers that can be tailored to a particular site and configuration. No<br />
aspect of the design is hardwired, allowing the model to be dynamic as new engineering solutions to the<br />
challenges in algal biofuel production are developed This logistics modeling effort does provide cost data<br />
for system design concepts in a similar fashion to previous techno-economic analysis efforts including the<br />
assessment performed by NREL. The most important products of this work are not economic analyses,<br />
but rather the establishment of an engineering decision making framework that can couple suites of<br />
models and data sets supporting the development of viable algae supply system technologies and designs.<br />
Economic evaluations of system performance are clearly a critical component of establishing viability and<br />
are one of the important assessment metrics delivered through the modeling toolkit. As noted by the<br />
reviewers, achieving cost and performance targets required to make algal biofuels a reality will require<br />
engineering advancements to existing technologies and systems. The modeling framework being built<br />
through this work is strictly focused on providing the ability to determine performance at the engineering<br />
fidelity required to support new technology and concept development.<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has<br />
made progress in its objectives and stated project management plan<br />
has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The Project has only been operational for a short time.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The partners are making progress but need to evaluate their data sources carefully and improve them, and<br />
the processes and scale used.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Development of a GIS-based Biomass Assessment Tool that integrates high-resolution data with<br />
biophysical models to provide spatially/temporally explicit estimates of production potential and resource<br />
demands and constants<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Progress is limited because the project began in the fall of 2010.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 7<br />
In terms of effort and work done, this is fine.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Preliminary model uses several technologies that have been shown to lack viablity based on technoeconomic<br />
analysis, and modeling results appear to confirm previous work.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
The modeling framework consists of numerous model and data layers that can be configured to represent<br />
a particular site and farm design. This allows the model to be dynamic as new engineering solutions to the<br />
challenges in algal biofuel production are identified. We established the baseline design presented as that,<br />
simply a baseline. We pointed out that we recognized that the scale of 1-acre farms included in the<br />
baseline has been shown to not be economically feasible. It did provide use with a starting point to begin<br />
populating our databases with equipment and energy use specs, and was also used to help us put together<br />
the linkages between the different elements of the farm, and also for the development of the hooks<br />
between the different components of the joint model for integration of the logistics analysis (ALM-INL)<br />
with the biomass resource assessment (BAT-PNNL). The initial phase is essential to the development of<br />
the model, and raceways and farms of appropriate scale and configurations will be introduced into the<br />
framework developed through this baseline effort. We agree that the baseline design lacks viability and<br />
that the modeling effort confirms previous work. Additional farm designs will be incorporated as the<br />
model is refined, and will yield an integrated assessment that extends beyond currently available models.<br />
The IAF will provide DOE with a decision support tool for robust exploration of open pond microalgae<br />
production potential and resource demands for the conterminous United States.<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Models that help perform technoeconomic reviews without costly experimentation are valuable. Who will<br />
hve access to the model? Who wll be served by its use? These questions impact the relevance. Also, the<br />
model has to fit in its framework. In this case, the model must fit feedstock supply and transportation<br />
scenarios at both ends to be valuable. This may help define the entire technology package to the refinery<br />
gate, which would be very relevant.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The project needs to demonstrate that its models are realistic (see Approach).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 3<br />
This study provides DOE and industry with the first spatially-explicit estimate of open pond microalgae<br />
production potential and resource demands for the conterminous United States. It realistically addresses<br />
critical questions of how much energy can be produced, where production can occur, and how much land<br />
and water resource will be required.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The project is highly relevant to program goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The modeling effort is fine, in terms of competence of work, but the process the PI selects should be more<br />
realistic. Instead of the model of a power plant based farm in the middle of desert-nowwhere one should<br />
focus on the pond systems in the Gulf coast states or sewage treatment plants.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The integrated assesment has great potential value. The production and harvesting model built around<br />
available data from non-viable operations compromised the relevance of the work. It is not clear how<br />
much of the framework developed will be applicable to other scenarios. Acceptance of the modeling and<br />
sharing of data and concepts from other institutions are necessary for relevance.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
We agree with the reviewer’s comment that the Solix model is not relevant (see response to Approach<br />
section). We are building a framework to explore a vast range of design concepts. Establishing this<br />
framework requires setting a baseline design case to lay the foundation for the model and data integration<br />
infrastructure. We appreciate and absolutely acknowledge the reviewers’ opinions that the baseline design<br />
case has performance flaws. The relevance of the baseline design scale of 1-acre may be applicable to<br />
inoculation pond assessments, but there are clear challenges using this scale as a replicated unit<br />
throughout a production farm. The basis for design concepts incorporated into the framework will be<br />
existent farms, as information is available, as well conceptual designs developed from the multiple<br />
integrated database layers within the dynamic model. Relationships are being developed to gain access to<br />
information from those operating both commercial and test-bed algal farms. With the completion of the<br />
modeling framework, investigation of a comprehensive set of design concepts will be facilitated,<br />
including the ability to seamlessly incorporate technologies being built across the OBP research platform<br />
and broader research community. The IAF meets many of the DOE roadmap goals for modeling<br />
including the ability to combine disparate databases, optimize facility location and supply chain logistics,<br />
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include a number of approaches, scales, and levels of detail required for a particular assessment, and to be<br />
easily modified to incorporate new technologies as they become available. In terms of access and use of<br />
the modeling framework, the primary use will be facilitated through an IAF web-based interface that will<br />
build upon the current BAT web tool housed at PNNL. The IAF interface will include dynamic access<br />
and utilization of the logistics modeling framework. The logistics toolset will also be available in a<br />
standalone version at the end of the project. The exact configuration of the user interfaces is not yet<br />
determined, as the focus has been delivering the logistics modeling capability with the IAF.<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
These appear to be adequately defined.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The project needs to have outreach to some of the other, larger DoE projects' data to make sure model<br />
variables are realistic and scaled; part of this concern can be met by better reference and use of existing<br />
data in the literature.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Integrated assessment of on-site feedstock production, integration into full lifecycle analysis<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Critical factors have been identified, but it is not clear that the project can overcome the challenge of<br />
gaining access to (and publishing) engineering systems data from successful companies and developers.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The PI has identified perhaps too many process unit operations at each critical process step (harvesting,<br />
dewatering, extraction...) with no apparent understanding of how these operate or fit together. I did not<br />
see the critical energy criteria identified in the algal biofuels roadmap. The PI would do well to read this<br />
and the reports of Benneman et al and Lundquist et al to the DOE to get a much better framework for<br />
critical criteria.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 7<br />
critical success factors are well defined. It's all about partnership and sharing to determine viablity by<br />
integrating process concepts and locations.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
As noted by both presenter and reviewer, a key critical success factor is the ability to access designs and<br />
data from established algal farms. The research team is working to develop relationships with others<br />
working in the area of algal biofuels in order to gain access to engineering systems data from successful<br />
companies, developers, and other research institutions (see response in section 5). The Algae Road Map<br />
notes that access to proprietary information associated with algae pilot and production facilities is a key<br />
challenge. The PI’s appreciate the reviewer’s concern about the complex interactions between process<br />
unit operations. Rigorous mass and energy balance constraints are being implemented for every process<br />
element within the supply system modeling framework. The PI’s will refer to the reports as suggested for<br />
further reference and cross check on critical criteria.<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
The model should link in very well with the overall process of delivering bioproducts from algae,<br />
providing the correct modeling hooks are included, and it is flexible enough in construction to allow for<br />
modifications.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
The potential of the project for useful tech transfer wouldimprove a lot with better model input data.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Integration of web-based Biomass Assessment Tool into Bioenergy Knowledge Discovery Framework,<br />
coordination with NAABB, collaboration with INL & ANL.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Technology transfer will be a major challenge for this project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
Limited but this a PhD project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Specific plans to partner with institutions developing process technology are needed.<br />
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Presenter Response<br />
The PI’s appreciate the comments about providing the correct modeling hooks, and having flexible<br />
construction. The PI’s are deeply engaged in communities developing advanced data and model<br />
integration tools for engineering decision making, and are building the algae logistics modeling<br />
framework with current state of the art concepts and tools. In fact, the tools and approaches being utilized<br />
in this modeling framework have been associated with three R&D 100 awards over the past five years.<br />
We agree that technology transfer will be a challenge for this project and the progress and<br />
accomplishments to date have not been focused on technology transfer. This is because the most<br />
important knowledge and conclusions that will be developed by this project are not yet known. The PI’s<br />
are very aware of the role and need for technology transfer, and will be continuously working with project<br />
partners and DOE to make sure the right pathways for technology transfer have been identified and are<br />
being pursued. The research team has begun working to develop relationships to gain access to<br />
engineering systems data from successful companies, developers, and other research institutions. Current<br />
partnerships with entities operating large-scale ponds or farms include those with Utah State University,<br />
Energy Dynamics Laboratory, and Pacific Northwest National Laboratory and their NAABB partners that<br />
operate ponds at University of Arizona and Texas A&M. This will give us access to a variety of scales<br />
ranging from 220L- 24,000L raceways, and a floating pond configuration at 154,310 L. Algal include<br />
strains of Chlorella, Nanochloropsis, Chaetoceros, Neochloris, and indigenous/wild fresh water strains<br />
from Utah. We are working to expand our relationships with commercial algal farms as well and<br />
appreciate the suggestion offered by one reviewer that Cyanotech Corporation would be willing to<br />
provide information.<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project<br />
approach, scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
This modeling work seems to promise a useful product when completed. One hopes all available<br />
commercial data is utilized in the model, and that some plan for testing the full scale model is part of the<br />
end deliverable.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
The project may need to use additional data and scales.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Are there overlaps between Biomass Assessment (PNNL) and Algae Logistics Model (INL)? Does the<br />
analysis depend on the species cultivated and the product derived? E.g., the species used would determine<br />
Algae harvesting processes. PI needs to bring this important aspect into the modeling. The alga biotech<br />
sector has already accomplished and currently use these criteria on a routine basis: -Raceway<br />
infrastructure -Pond configurations -Product storage and transportation are issues that have been solved.<br />
How is this theoretical analysis going to be better than what already has been accomplished by the private<br />
sector? <strong>Reviewer</strong> recommends that the PI should go to the Big Island of Hawaii (Kona) and visit<br />
Cyanotech Corporation. They would be happy to help you get a head start. Overall, this appears to be<br />
redundant work. It is reinventing the wheel.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Overall Impressions: 3<br />
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Goals listed in presentation are numerous and presented is somewhat disjointed fashion: Technology gap<br />
analysis, cost analysis (aka techno-economic analysis), resources analysis, infrastructure compatibility,<br />
algae logistics module (similar to woody biomass analysis), and baseline facility designs,<br />
Harvesting and dewatering technologies selected thus far are mostly conventional and obviously too<br />
expensive and/or energy intensive for algae biofuel. Pond sizes being assessed are 1 acres and 10 acre. 1<br />
acre is obviously too small to be economical.<br />
I don't see how this technology analysis and model designs are different from the many others in the<br />
recent literature and in Aquatic Species Program reports. Isn't this also somewhat a duplication of the<br />
technology assessment being done by NAABB/NREL?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
The apparent overlap with an NREL project was disconcerting (at the very least, they should collaborate).<br />
The challenge in gaining access to proprietary engineering information seems very problematic and there<br />
was no clear path to overcoming this obstacle.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
Overall this project needs more realism in terms of the systems it models.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
The challenge of acquiring scenarios supported by pilot data appears to be the greatest hurdle. The<br />
integrated assesment framework appears to be a valuable, or perhaps essential tool for production<br />
scenario evaluation and selection, but it is only useful if validated process data is available. building the<br />
tool around available data instead of relevant data does not appear to help advance the technology.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Many of the overall impression comments have been addressed (see respective sections above). When<br />
completed the IAF will provide DOE with the first spatially-explicit estimate of open pond microalgae<br />
production potential and resource demands for the conterminous United States. It will meet many of the<br />
DOE roadmap goals for modeling including the ability to combine disparate databases, optimize facility<br />
location and supply chain logistics, include a number of approaches, scales, and levels of detail required<br />
for a particular assessment, and to be easily modified to incorporate new technologies as they become<br />
available. Data from pilot scale and commercial algal production farms will be incorporated based on<br />
availability of data through literature, partnerships, and collaborations as described previously. As<br />
suggested by the reviewer, a full testing and verification plan will be delivered as part of the conclusion to<br />
the initial two year project. These activities will be performed to the degree that resources allow through<br />
the development process, and a comprehensive testing matrix will be established for potential continued<br />
work. We have read and continue to refer to the foundational literature indicated by the reviewers. These<br />
papers reflect the state of technology applications at the time the reports were generated. Our model is<br />
designed to encompass those technologies (and clearly it should be consistent with them) but also to<br />
expand beyond those technologies; and combine spatial resource information with production and supply<br />
chain logistics. INL and NREL have begun collaborating in this area and look to leverage unique aspects<br />
of each modeling approach. The modeling framework being developed at the INL in support of the IAF is<br />
providing a plug-and-play architecture for investigating a broad range of technologies and design<br />
concepts for algae supply systems. This approach is a natural extension of several initial techno-economic<br />
assessments that have been performed to date. Furthermore, the logistics modeling framework being<br />
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developed in this work provides an opportunity for exploring engineering research questions using model<br />
and data tools at multiple fidelities as may be required by the specific question at hand.<br />
Project: 9.6.1.6 PNNL<br />
Title: Collaborative: Algae-based Integrated Assessment Framework<br />
Presenter: Richard Skaggs<br />
Presentation Date: Friday, April 08, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 5.57 1.18 7<br />
Progress 5.86 0.99 7<br />
Relevance 5.86 1.25 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 5.71 0.88 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The Approach in this project is well reasoned.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 4<br />
This is a modelling project that incorporates features such as the cost of land. Productivity is based upon<br />
the canonical Redfield ratio, but it is now well known that different algal taxonomic groups (e.g. green<br />
algae vs diatoms) have different Redfield ratios. It would be good to try to do a general model, and then<br />
test it against a specific case, and adjust Redfield ratios appropriately for a species that is an actual<br />
biofuels' target (e.g., Nitzschia as a diatom; Chlorella as a green alga).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Effort provides integration and systematic biophysical evaluation of resource demands and constraints on<br />
microalgae biofuel production with harvesting logistics and cost analysis coupled with sound project<br />
management.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The approach is to build CO2 and nutrient source data bases for inclusion into a DOE analysis<br />
framework. The approach is sound and feasible.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The approach appears reasonable but its very difficult to differentiate if from the previous PNNL<br />
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presentation, and that from INL (Newby). It seems to duplicate that work, and its difficult to see the<br />
interconnection.<br />
That said, its an important resource model and these efforts are important. However, a much more defined<br />
relationship to the other PNNL model would be recommended.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The project management plan would benefit from some in-progress validation process, perhaps including<br />
virtual and real visits to sites deemed suitable for alagla biofuel production.<br />
Definition of goals for model accuracies might have value.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
1.1 N/C 1.2 The canonical Redfield ratio is a valuable starting point for incorporating nutrient use into our<br />
general model. As with any model, keeping the underlying assumptions in mind is necessary for<br />
interpreting the model. It will be beneficial to ensure the model is built with flexibility in regarding later<br />
adjustments in the C:N:P ratio. After completing the general model, adjusting the C:N:P ratio to reflect, in<br />
turn, a diatom and a green alga may be good next steps. The caveat to these iterations of the model would<br />
be that different strains are likely to be employed in different climates and latitudes, so we will utilize<br />
different strain-specific ratios as appropriate and as data become available. Furtrher, future algal<br />
biological and cultivation research may provide data and understanding leading to a more mechanistic,<br />
improved approach to modeling nutrient use. We are collaborating with the NAABB Algal biology and<br />
Algal Cultivation Teams as they generate new information on algal productivity as a function of nutrient<br />
sources and use and climatic conditions. 1.3 N/C; 1.4 N/C; 1.5 N/C; 1.6 Related projects are WBS<br />
.9.6.1.2, “Microalgae Analysis,” and WBS 9.1.3.1, “Algae-Based Biofuels Integrated Assessment<br />
Framework: Development, Evaluation, and Demonstration,”. WBS 9.6.1.2 is responsible for much of the<br />
original Biomass Assessment Tool (BAT) development, as well as ongoing selected enhancements<br />
including analysis of freshwater availability, saline water sources, web-based interface development and<br />
linkage to the KDF. WBS 9.1.3.1 is, by design, a collaborative project with WBS 9.6.1.6 such that the<br />
BAT’s GIS-based, high-resolution resource assessment capabilities are coupled with INL’s Algae<br />
Logistics Module (ALM) to create the Integrated Assessment Framework (IAF). In short, INL’s efforts<br />
are focused on development and delivery of the ALM, including providing pioneer supply system design<br />
for feedstock logistics encompassing algal harvesting, storage and transport, and cost and engineering<br />
performance assessment. The IAF will provide a resource assessment capability that addresses the<br />
complete feedstock supply chain. The 3 tasks within WBS 9.6.1.6 are distinct in scope from the 2 projects<br />
above. Task 1, being executed by PNNL building on the existing BAT, is focused on addition of critical<br />
data base and analytical elements to the BAT. Task 2, being executed jointly with INL, is to develop the<br />
IAF, coupling the high spatial and temporal modeling capabilities of BAT with ALM. The result will be<br />
an analysis framework encompassing the complete microalgae feedstock supply chain. Task 3, working<br />
with INL, is using the IAF to conduct selected national, regional, and site-specific analyses of microalgae<br />
production potential and tradeoffs. 1.7 Validation is an important issue for resource use and algal biofuel<br />
production assessments. For this project and the overall BAT development, we have approached this at<br />
several levels: 1) Early on we worked with J. Benemann and D. Anderson to create the conceptual design,<br />
data requirements, and underlying assumptions for the algal growth model 2) Based on limited published<br />
values and anecdotal information provided by J. Benemann, we have benchmarked our analytical results.<br />
For example, our results indicate an average conversion efficiency of total solar energy to organic mass of<br />
approximately 1%. This is consistent with the published value of 1%-3% for observed yields from<br />
Williams and Laurens (2010). 3) During 2011 the team will visit research sites where algal growth<br />
experiments are underway: a) PNNL lab experiments representing different U.S. regional climates for<br />
fresh and saline water strains; b) U. of Arizona focused on design and operation of raceway's in arid<br />
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climates using freshwater algae; c) Texas A&M to evaluate large-scale ponds and production strains; and<br />
d) Utah State University focused on cold weather cultivation and nutrient addition strategies.<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has<br />
made progress in its objectives and stated project management plan<br />
has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Progress is acceptable for the length of time thus far.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The models need to incorporate the newer data being produced (try to get input factors from several of the<br />
larger DoE projects) and use information from the published literature, including on Redfield ratios.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Progress has been achieved on growth model and data bases development, land value model, and IAF<br />
framework design.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Progress is limited because the project just started. They have accessed EPA databases for powerplants<br />
and wastewater treatment facilities; have started looking at NPDES permit sites and ag-based nutrient<br />
datasets.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Good progress and work well done.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Initial progress is good, but the scope of the model is quite daunting.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
2.1 N/C 2.2 We designed the BAT and the algal growth model such that we can readily incorporate more<br />
accurate information or improved models for specific algae strains, environmental conditions, and<br />
downstream lifecycle processes as they become available. For example, we are closely monitoring<br />
ongoing and planned technology development efforts by the NAABB Algal Biology and Cultivation<br />
Teams where there is a focus on increasing overall productivity of biomass accumulation and<br />
lipid/hydrocarbon content. The Cultivation Team is focused on increasing overall productivity by<br />
developing optimizing scalable cultivation practices and growth rates under various environments. We<br />
also are interacting with PIs at PNNL, Utah State University, U of Arizona, and Texas A&M to evaluate<br />
their results and as appropriate incorporate them into the BAT. Finally, we are continually reviewing the<br />
algae and bioenergy literature to identify potential upgrades to BAT as appropriate. 2.3 N/C 2.4 N/C 2.5<br />
The nationally available data from EPA and others are being incorporated into the IAF to better define 1)<br />
additional components in the lifecycle process, and 2) potential co-location/co-benefit opportunities to use<br />
other lifecycle waste products in the algae process stream. Spatial modeling of these entities, along with<br />
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required transport pathways and energy requirements, will provide necessary metrics for site<br />
prioritization. 2.7 The project team agrees with the reviewer's comment. However, in recognition of the<br />
DOE OBP’s challenge of establishing a credible, accurate inventory of national feedstock resource<br />
potential and assessing environmentally sustainable feedstock potential, our goal is to develop a feedstock<br />
supply assessment framework that can be readily updated and improved as new data, models and<br />
information become available. Thus, over the long-term, the expectation is that many researchers and<br />
institutions will contribute to addressing OBP’s challenge, and the IAF will provide a framework for<br />
organizing and utilizing research results, and contributing to the needed assessments.<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 7<br />
This project is extremely relevant to the OBP program on algal biofuels.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
These models will be helpful to establishment of biofuels' farms, but need careful data input and<br />
sensitivity analysis of models.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Effort further provides the DOE with analysis framework to holistically evaluate U.S. microalgae<br />
production potential and associated resource requirements and feedstock logistics<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The project is relevant to platform goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Again, the relevance is predicated on a much clearer integration or collaborative relationship with the<br />
other PNNL study (and the Idaho model).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Work is hihgly relevant because an accurate assessment to define alagal biofuel potential is necessary.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
3.1 N/C 3.2 We agree with the reviewer's comment. Please see Response 2.2. We further agree that<br />
sensitivity studies will be an important tool to understanding the various tradeoffs involved in the siting<br />
and scaling of industrial-scale feedstock supply enterprises, and the associated resource and infrastructure<br />
requirements. These sensitivity studies will be conducted under the IAF testing and demonstration efforts<br />
for this project scheduled for FY12. 3.3 N/C 3.4 N/C 3.5 N/C 3.6 We agree with the reviewer's comment.<br />
This project is by design a collaborative effort that is integrating PNNL’s BAT with INL’s ALM, and<br />
utilizes the existing capabilities at both laboratories as a point of departure. In addition, please see<br />
Response 1.6. 3.7 The overall objective of this project in collaboration with the INL project is to develop<br />
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an integrated analytical framework to conduct an accurate assessment of algal biofuel potential<br />
encompassing the "resource to production to biorefinery" portion of the feedstock lifecycle.<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The CSFs and Challenges are adequately explained.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
This model effort needs additional input data. One factor not yet included that is important is the effect of<br />
sealevel rise and predicted climate change, in general. This should be incorporated as a sensitivity<br />
analysis.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Integration of on-site feedstock production and harvesting logistics assessments into full lifecycle analysis<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Critical success factors were identified but it will be a major challenge to make the model truly useful.<br />
How to develop a model with enough depth in the different modules so that it is practical (and not just an<br />
exercise in modeling using GIS overlays)?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 7<br />
I saw no problems here.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The scope of the model is so vast that critical success factors include focusing on key leverage items<br />
where there are gaps in current knowledge and in the selection and incorporation of best available exisitng<br />
data and models. For example, it appears that the processing component of the logistic model could be<br />
improved and moved forward by using NREL modeling.<br />
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Presenter Response<br />
4.1 N/C 4.2 See Responses 2.2 and 3.2 regarding quality of input data. As to potential impacts of climate<br />
change in general and sea level rise in particular, these are not part of the current work scope of this<br />
project, however, ongoing work at PNNL (WBS 6.2.1.2 Global Change Assessment Model and WBS<br />
11.1.1.6 Biomass Production Under Climate Change) is evaluating the potential impacts of climate<br />
change on water availability on overall biomass production, and specifically water availability. Regarding<br />
sea level rise, for future efforts it would be relatively straightforward using the GIS capabilities of BAT, it<br />
would be relatively straightforward to consider the impacts of sea level rise in the coastal regions of the<br />
national assessment, thereby providing an evaluation of the sensitivity of microalgae production potential<br />
under alternative climate change scenarios. 4.3 N/C 4.4 N/C 4.5 The models and analysis capabilities<br />
housed under the BAT are designed for flexibility and usability in terms of adding additional/updated data<br />
sets and linking additional models, such as is being done under the current project. This is accomplished<br />
in the BAT design for two fundamental modes of operation. First, the 'workstation' version of the BAT<br />
enables full access to the data, models, configuration, and parameter files allowing a researcher to adjust<br />
and tune the various models and data at will. Second, the web-based BAT is intended to provide a userfriendly<br />
interface to interact with, analyze, and configure and execute the included biophysical and spatial<br />
models. Our intent with the web-based BAT is to get beyond the complexities of the 'workstation' BAT<br />
and allow a tool that is easily used and readily available for private industry and others. The project team<br />
consists of several Geographic Information Science professionals bringing to bear state-of-the-science<br />
spatial models and analysis. Several ongoing projects are supporting the BAT development process to<br />
achieve the goal of having a single analysis portal that is benefited by the work of the many ongoing<br />
collaborations. 4.6 N/C 4.7 N/C<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
There is good coordination for the project and within the project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
This project has potential for good technical transfer.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Web-based Integration Assessment Framework into BioenergyKnowledge Discovery Framework and<br />
collaboration with INLand NAABB<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Technology transfer partners have been identified but it is too early to evaluate progress.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
Same comment on interaction with other PNNL study. That is needed to improve tech transfer value.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Strategic partnersip with industry and NAABB should be developed to the fullest extent possible.<br />
Premature publication of estimates should be avoided. Any estimates that are eventually reported should<br />
include error estimates and uncertainties.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
5.1 N/C 5.2 We agree with the reviewers’ comment. An explicit element of our approach is to make the<br />
IAF both accessible and generally useable through a web-based user interface and by direct linkage to the<br />
KDF. Also see Response 4.5. 5.3 N/C 5.4 N/C 5.5 See Response 5.7 below. 5.6 N/C 5.7 The project team<br />
agrees with the reviewers’ comments. Team members are directly involved with the NAABB and<br />
associated industrial partners. We are diligently identifying areas for synergy, collaboration, and<br />
data/information/model exchange.<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project<br />
approach, scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
This project has value for the Program as a whole.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
This modelling approach needs to be more realistic to be useful, but has the potential to be an excellent<br />
effort.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Are there overlaps between the two Biomass Assessment efforts at PNNL? and also with the Algae<br />
Logistics Model effort at INL? Such analyses (including the previous two presentations) are premature<br />
given the uncertainties that surround strains, products, processes, all of which do not enter into the<br />
"Assessment". It is better to invest the funds in the biology of "Algae Biomass", where our collective<br />
knowledge and expertise are severely lacking. The concern here is that by the time a microalgae process<br />
can be scaled up, "models and associated spatial and temporal information for improved understanding of<br />
geographic location, relative cost, and sustainability of potential microalgae biofuel production" may be<br />
obsolete.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Overall Impressions: 6<br />
This project is another adder to the GIS-ALM project. This project adds the crucial CO2 and nutrient<br />
resource data, with the CO2 being the most limiting resource that probably should have been the starting<br />
point of the three projects. Why are these three separate projects, each with their own budget?<br />
Skaggs: 2 years $700k<br />
Newby: 2 years $700k<br />
Wigmosta: 1 years, $365k<br />
The Redfield Ratio does not apply to algae cultivation, only to observations of marine algae. How does<br />
this project (and the Wigmosta project) build on the Sandia resource assessment? For this and the Newby<br />
project, what references are going to be the basis for your facility designs and resource uses? The PIs<br />
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should consult extensively with experts and not rely on the highly variable quality of published literature.<br />
As with the Newby project, I suggest some ground-truth designs be prepared early in the project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Good project but its practicality is likely to be limited by the depth of its individual modules.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
See above.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
The assesssment is valuable but challenging. Modelling must have flexibility to incorporate rapidly<br />
changing technology. Key leverage items should be indentified early in the modelling effort so resources<br />
can be focused. Model validation strategy needs to be developed. premature dsitriburtion and use of<br />
modelling or resutls is a significant risk.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
6.1 N/C 6.2 See Response 1.7. 6.3 As described in Response 1.6, there are three principle tasks within<br />
WBS 9.6.1.6 that are distinct in scope from the other projects. Task 1, is adding critical data base and<br />
analytical elements to the BAT, namely: ▪ CO2 and nutrient source data bases ▪ Enhanced algal growth<br />
model to estimate nutrient and CO2 requirements, and ▪ Land value and availability model and data base<br />
Task 2, coupling the BAT with ALM consists of two primary elements: 1) develop the IAF design<br />
specifications and enabling architecture requirements, and 2) integrate the software and data base<br />
components of the BAT and ALM, develop necessary new components (e.g., proximity/cost model,<br />
feedstock supply tradeoff model, etc.), and web-based IAF user interface. Task 3, joint (w/INL)<br />
application and demonstration of the IAF will evaluate at regional/national scales: optimal<br />
feedstock/harvest enterprise locations and scales infrastructure requirements and identification<br />
regional/national production performance and feasibility 6.4a WBS 9.6.1.2, “Microalgae Analysis is an<br />
ongoing effort, including the initial development of the BAT that originated in FY 2008. This project and<br />
WBS 9.1.3.1 are new projects initiated in September FY10 with distinct scopes of work to build on and<br />
extend the BAT capabilities as described in Response 1.6 and 6.3. Thus, DOE OBP has funded them as<br />
separate projects. 6.4b See Response 1.2. 6.4c The teams for this project and WBS 9.6.1.2 have consulted<br />
with with Ron Pate from the early stages in the development of the BAT to ensure this project builds on,<br />
without replicating the work of Ron Pate and others at Sandia National Laboratory. As part of his March<br />
17, 2011 presentation to the NRC Study on Algae Biofuels Sustainability, Ron provided a comprehensive<br />
side-by-side comparison of the Sandia and PNNL algae biofuels resource analyses. For example, he<br />
characterized the PNNL assessment as “high resolution/granularity at National level w/ 30-m resolution”<br />
based on “approximate physics-based growth modeling based on conditions” and the SNL assessment as<br />
low resolution/granularity at State level, multi-state regions” and “no detailed physics-based modeling.”<br />
6.4d As discussed in Response 1.7, we are making every effort to ground our work based on first hand,<br />
real work experience in microalgae production with a particular emphasis on current and planned<br />
laboratory and pilot scale efforts. 6.5 We agree with the reviewers’ comments. Therefore, we have<br />
designed the BAT in general such that we can readily incorporate more accurate information or improved<br />
models for specific algae strains, environmental conditions, and downstream lifecycle processes as they<br />
become available. It is also our expectation that by designing the IAF to enable broad accessibility, over<br />
the long-term many researchers and institutions will contribute to the depth and breadth of the individual<br />
IAF modules. 6.6a See Responses 1.6 and 6.3. 6.6b See Response 6.4c. 6.7 See Response 1.7.<br />
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Project: 9.6.1.1 National Renewable Energy Lab<br />
Title: US-Israel Algal Biofuels (NREL)<br />
Presenter: Robert Baldwin<br />
Presentation Date: Friday, April 08, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 5.29 1.67 7<br />
Progress 5.14 1.55 7<br />
Relevance 5.29 1.67 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 5.00 1.51 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The project is basically about evealuating whether microwaves can be used in algal conversion to some<br />
advantage. I would prefer the approach be focused. The attempts to deal with the<br />
development/demonstration/commercial problems are premature in my view.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 7<br />
This project aims to demonstrate cost-effective extraction of lipids from algae, and has tried pyrolysis,<br />
novel extraction methods, gasification etc. The feedstock types being evaluated are Nannochloropsis and<br />
Coccomyxa, with microreactors to scale models.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Interesting and potentially useful approach at extracting oils from algal biomass via pyrolysis.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The project's goal is to characterize a specific set of extraction and conversion methods in collorabation<br />
with a commercial source in Israel (Seambiotic). Methods include microwave extraction, gasification, and<br />
pyrolysis. It seems appropriate to characterize these methods, but this seems like an academic exercise<br />
(i.e. no breakthroughs expected).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Microwave assisted extraction is a challenge for large scale commercial extraction.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
A preliminary techno economic analysis may have eliminated certain process options such as microwave<br />
heating, allowing resources to be focues on potentially viable options.<br />
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Presenter Response<br />
The objective of the project is to evaluate methods other than the traditionally-used solvent extraction to<br />
see if they can be applied to selectively release desired components from algal biomass. The original<br />
experimental plan was to proceed with a few targeted experiments, then down-select based on technical<br />
results. This plan was followed for all 3 technologies being researched: 1) solvent extraction -<br />
hydrothermal; 2) pyrolysis; 3) gasification. A considerable amount of data has been collected for all three<br />
strategies but could not be adequately presented in the less than 10 minute timeframe that the presenter<br />
was allowed.<br />
A persistent criticism of the work is that it is not supported by technoeconomic analysis (TEA). We wish<br />
to point out that the research was exploratory in nature and was designed to develop information (e.g.<br />
process conditions, product yields, etc.) that can now be used to develop a TEA. Our primary goal was to<br />
compare several low-severity processes based on technical merit, and eliminate from consideration<br />
processes that were found to be technically infeasible (such as gasification due to high tar loadings); the<br />
project is only now at a maturity level where valid economics can start to be developed. To label as 'bad<br />
science' exploratory research that may be later found to be economically challenged is unfair. On the<br />
other hand, to use pre-conceived notions of economics to do process downselect before any data has been<br />
collected is simply misguided.<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has<br />
made progress in its objectives and stated project management plan<br />
has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Progress is perhaps behind schedule, based on the extent presented.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The project began in March 2009, and has completed work that shows that nitrogen contamination of<br />
some lipids is a problem requiring solution in their extraction techniques.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Some promising results were presented for both hydrothermal and pyrolysis; gas cleaning for syngas<br />
product may be problematic.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The project appears to be on target with its stated goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Not a lot of data - appears to be one-off experiments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Progress might have been compromised by lack of concept screening using preliminary techno economic<br />
analysis.<br />
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Presenter Response<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
If the project were focused to deliver conclusive information on the pluses and minuses to using<br />
microwaves as source of power or directed energy input, this would be highly relevant. The longer it<br />
takes to come to conclusions, the less relevant he overall project is.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Efficient extraction of lipids from good feedstock is very important.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 8<br />
A mixture of long and short-chain hydrocarbons that would be extracted by pyrolysis might fit the need<br />
for renewable biofuels from algal biomass. This effort supports DOE objectives for HC transportation<br />
fuels from biomass<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The project is relevant to platform goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 4<br />
There was an apparent lack of hypothesis driven work that justified the choices made.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
There appears to be a high level of uncertainty if some the process options are viable even if the bench<br />
scale chemistry is successful.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
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ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Critical success factors were not enumerated. It sounded like investigators were looking for them. I think<br />
they have not evaluated what are the real key deliverables, and what it would take to achieve them.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Procedures need to be refined to produce "clean" lipids.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Success factors: Low severity processing has opportunity to provide low cost pathway for extraction of<br />
high value fuels precursors Challenges: separations and gas cleaning<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Among the critical success factors is "cost effective methods for production of fuel precursors."<br />
Overcoming this obstacle seems unlikely (even at the outset) using these technologies.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 4<br />
From a scale up perspective, this approach is extremely challenged from an energy balance or process<br />
control point of view.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
A critical success factor is techno economic screencing of process concepts prior to initiation of lab work.<br />
This was not evident in the presentation.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
A criticism was leveled concerning the economic viability of using microwaves. We agree that if<br />
microwaves are used simply to heat the water in the algae/water slurry that this is an inefficient and<br />
(likely) uneconomical prospect. The reviewers failed to grasp that our hypothesis is that microwaves can<br />
be used selectively to effect cell wall rupture by hydrothermal degradation, thus liberating lipids which<br />
will spontaneously separate from the water phase and spent algal bodies (solids). Further, we have found<br />
that the aqueous phase contains most of the protein material from the cell walls. Thus, the microwaveassisted<br />
process is a way of effecting simultaneous extraction and separation of lipid materials from algae<br />
- this is the hypothesis being tested. This is being accomplished at very low severity conditions compared<br />
to other hydrothermal processes which operate at pressures of about 150 atm and temperatures around<br />
350°C. Our work on pyrolysis is similarly providing evidence that fuels precursors can be effectively<br />
liberated from algae under low severity conditions. Gasification was found to produce a syngas with high<br />
tar loadings, so this pathway has been de-emphasized in the research program.<br />
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5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
The project is a collaboration, and coordination seemed to be adequate. The results need to be shared with<br />
the other OBP programs.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
There is a high potential for effective tech transfer from this project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Too early to tell.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Technology transfer potential is very good because of the commercial collaboration.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
I did not see much in this regard.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
The presentaition lacks evidence of colaberation in indentifying viable opportunities for thermochemcial<br />
options.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project<br />
approach, scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
I believe with focus, this project would have real value. This is true no matter the outcome. If welldesigned,<br />
even negative results allow decisions to be made in the overall process.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
The chemical extraction procedures being devised and tested are important and the project personnel are<br />
making good progress. The feedstock targets being analyzed are appropriate.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Interesting and worthwhile approach. I recommend support and continuation, as pyrolysis appears to<br />
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provide promising results. Could you elaborate on the conditions employed in pyrolysis? (How do you<br />
disperse the biomass? Is it wet or dry? Under ambient or other pressure?)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Overall Impression: 6<br />
Of course, economics and environmental considerations are the mostly likely "show-stoppers" and much<br />
should be known about these considerations based on past research and experience. In this project, early<br />
efforts should be made to evaluate the prospects for safe economical processes and then track the<br />
development progress against the needed results. Are the needed levels of improvement conceivable?<br />
Novel extraction methods are mentioned several times but no details are given.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
The project is technically sound but it was very unclear why the investigators expected to end up with a<br />
commercially viable technology.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
I note a lack of energy balances in the future work.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
The project appears to have moved to laboratory work before a rigorous screening of concepts was<br />
completed. The risk of laboratory success delivering dead on arrival technology because of techno<br />
economic considerations appears to be very high.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
In response to <strong>Reviewer</strong> 3, we have considerable micro-scale data on dried material. We will perform<br />
some gram-scale tests in order to obtain enough liquid product to do a more thorough analysis. Benchscale<br />
fluid-bed pyrolysis with pneumatic feeding will be performed if resources allow.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> 6 appears to be concerned about the energy balance of microwave extraction. We are<br />
performing a series of tests to compare the energy-efficiency of various liquid extraction procedures<br />
including microwave extraction.<br />
Project: 9.6.5.1 Sandia National Labs<br />
Title: Pond to Wheels Algae Biodiesel Life Cycle Assessment<br />
Presenter: Howard Passell<br />
Presentation Date: Friday, April 08, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 4.71 1.16 7<br />
Progress 4.57 1.29 7<br />
Relevance 4.86 1.73 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 4.86 1.25 7<br />
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1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The approach is described. One might argue with some of the choices, but there is at least reasonable<br />
disclosure.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The goal of the project is life cycle assessment for Dunaliella production, with evaluation also of<br />
Nannochloris and Nannochloropsis. Some model parameters come from GREET with cultivation and<br />
harvesting from Seambiotic. The consumption of electricity for algal cultivation and harvesting is<br />
demonstrated by the model to be highest impact cost and by their assumptions a 100,000 m2 facility is<br />
optimal. The model needs to include other factors (e.g., construction costs, provision of power plant).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 6<br />
•Pond-to-wheels life cycle assessment of CO2, N2O and CH4 emissions for light and heavy duty vehicles<br />
across cultivation, harvesting, extraction, separation, conversion and combustion. •Provide a model that<br />
can be shared with other institutions.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Goals included development of an LCA and a pond flow optimization model using information from a<br />
commercial process. The approach is sound.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 6<br />
A solid approach that looks at appropriate process indicators (including energy). It is clear the approach<br />
was solid as their analysis led to the conclusion that improvements should be reached in<br />
extraction/dewatering/harvesting. Most LCA are too complicated to relevant to the majority but this<br />
presentation seemed to be just contained enough that the majority could follow it. I think this approach,<br />
particularly applied to open ponds has great merit. I also appreciated the fact the LCA was set out outdoor<br />
ponds which is the likely path forward.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
It appears that the LCA was performed without first completing a thorough review and analysis of<br />
published LCA's and without selection of relevant scenarios.<br />
The presentation did not put the pond flow optimization work in context of previous art.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has<br />
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made progress in its objectives and stated project management plan<br />
has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The project is closing in on completion.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Work is 80% complete. Size of optimal facility should be reconsidered in time remaining with additional<br />
costs added in.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Milestones completed: Physics model development Physics model validation<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
According to the presenter, targeted milestones will be met by the end of FY11.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Good progress made.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
This project does not advance the state of LCA analysis.<br />
The presentation did not elucidate advances were in pond modeling.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 6<br />
It is my view that any number of LCAs and cases and sensitivities are of value to the program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 6<br />
These algae are good biofuels' targets so specific models related to data from scaling up facilities fits<br />
Roadmap. However, failure to consider all costs will limit relevance if not corrected.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Provides analytical structure for understanding how to reduce energy requirements while increasing<br />
productivity in algae cultivation. Provides potential improvement to LCA and sustainability indicators,<br />
and so assists in overcoming barriers identified in LCA<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Project goals are relevant to platform goals but were limited by the scales considered.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 8<br />
I found the application of a competent LCA applied to open raceway ponds that incorporate results with<br />
real energy balances (among other outputs) to be quite relevant.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Previously published LCA's for algae biofuels are more relevant and complete.<br />
Pond modeling work should be compared to current state-of-art to illustrate advancemetns being made.<br />
Specific opportunites for modeling to improve pond design for biofuel scale facilites should be defined.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Delineation is adequate. One might question whether some alternative choices might have been selected.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Costs of production may still be too high, even though not all costs are included. If so, consider different<br />
scales of pond culture.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Model provides a structure for Seambiotic pond optimization. Seambiotic Model can be useful for all<br />
algae producers<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Critical success factors were not included in the presentation.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Appropriate success factors selected.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
A critical success factor is both pond modelling and LCA is to define the current state of the art and<br />
ensure that new research advances the technology towards algla biofuel production at scale.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
I believe this result should be a point of discussion with other projects and should also make it into the<br />
literature.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
Presentations etc. appearing. Model may be useful to other projects if costing factors can be better<br />
incorporated.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Plan is acceptable.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
The potential for technology transfer is good.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
Quite good.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
It is not clear if pond modeling is an advance, and it is not evident how widely the model will be shared.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project<br />
approach, scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
The project is useful. It could have perhaps been improved by a review of some of the assumptions and<br />
boundaries selected. Nonetheless, it is a valuable contribution.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
This model shows the challenges still ahead for economic production of algal biofuels. Project should try<br />
to incorporate full costs and do better sensitivity analysis on size of pond and productivity of algae.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Much of this analysis is available in the photobioreactors literature.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
LCA Overall Impression: 2<br />
Hydrodynamic Model Overall Impression: 6<br />
How is this LCA project being coordinated with the Argonne LCA? This project seems to focus on the<br />
existing Seabiotic plant, which is 1000x smaller than any feasible biofuel plant. In addition, 1000-m2<br />
individual ponds are modeled, which are about 40x smaller than the size generally considered feasible for<br />
biofuel feedstock production. The "Future Projection" system is better, but still too small. Use of<br />
centrifugation for biofuel production is inappropriate on its face. The base-case should be abandoned as<br />
irrelevant, and the Future Projection should be greatly adjusted. Collaboration with the Argonne LCA<br />
project may be advisable, not to say that they are using appropriate assumptions either. Any feasible algae<br />
biofuel process will use only the most simple, low-energy, and largest-scale processes conceivable, as<br />
outlined in the Aquatic Species Program reports.<br />
The hydrodynamic-biological model may be valuable for design details on very large raceway ponds. It<br />
will be good to validate with the small-scale Seambiotic data or other >1000 m2 ponds.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
This seemed to be a reasonable (but predictable) project. It was not clear that this project represents a<br />
significant advance compared to existing LCAs.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
Quite favorable for the reasons identified above.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Previous LCA work appears to be more thoroguh and relevant. It is not clear what advances in pond flow<br />
modeling have been made compared to previous work, and how those modeling advances can improve<br />
pond design.<br />
Project: 9.1.2.1 Brookhaven National Laboratory<br />
Title: New technology: Improving Microalgal Oil Production Based on Quantitative Analysis of<br />
Metabolism<br />
Presenter: Jorg Schwender<br />
Presentation Date: Friday, April 08, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
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Approach 4.43 2.13 7<br />
Progress 4.86 1.46 7<br />
Relevance 3.86 1.88 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 3.86 2.29 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The first step lacking in the approach is a discussion of why this organism is chosen for these detailed<br />
studies. After all, if this is not likely to be a viable lipid-generating organism, why do the work.<br />
Investigators suggest it is not in their slide titled Critical Succes Factors.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 6<br />
This project's goal is to determine how to maximize TAG production from Chlamydomonas. The<br />
approach includes metabolic studies (e.g. evaluation of acetate enrichment of basic medium vs N<br />
deprivation) and transformation to add a glucose transporter.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 8<br />
To address carbon allocation and partitioning in green algae we use: Biochemical analysis Modeling of<br />
metabolism Metabolic engineering (genetic transformation<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 5<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The goal is to identify metabolic targets for increasing lipid production using a model strain of Chlamy.<br />
The goal and approach seem to have very limited relevance to platform goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 1<br />
This approach (MFA) is far more applicable to the fermentation industry that has the ability to grow pure<br />
cultures under highly controlled conditions. To apply the MFA analysis of a lab rat strain as a means to<br />
suggest pond conditions is highly challenged if one agrees open ponds of local cultures is the likely path<br />
forward. If the work was applied to strains isolated from real ponds, and if the model applied conditions<br />
that exist in ponds, it might be able to explain why certain productivities are achieved and thus be more<br />
applicable.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 5<br />
It is difficult to evaluate if the approach of using Chalmydomonas in acetate media will apply to<br />
phototrophic growth of other species.<br />
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Presenter Response<br />
All reviewers except reviewer 3 clearly put strongly in doubt the choice of Chlamydomonas as the<br />
organism to be used in the project. Yet, we believe we can clearly document the relevance of the project.<br />
First of all, in the algal biofuels roadmap<br />
(http://www1.eere.energy.gov/biomass/pdfs/algal_biofuels_roadmap.pdf), p. 10, under “Selecting Algal<br />
Model Systems for Study”, it is outlined that “Species with sequenced genomes and transgenic<br />
capabilities are the most amenable to investigating cellular processes since the basic tools are in place.”.<br />
Further relevant document citations see below. In the following the decisive arguments to use<br />
Chlamydomonas that also have been given in the presentation. We decided to use Chlamydomonas<br />
reinhardtii (strain cw15) since for this strain we have available well established techniques, mutants,<br />
knowledge and preliminary results that make the pursued goals attainable: 1) Efficient transformation of<br />
green algae is not trivial and transformation protocols for Chlamydomonas are already in practice in C.<br />
Xu’s lab. 2) Chlamydomonas was also chosen because a highly detailed metabolic models have been<br />
published for this organism (see slide 14, Boyle and Morgan (2009) BMC Systems Biology 3:4;<br />
Manichaikul et al., Nature Methods 6, 589 - 592 (2009)). A validated metabolic network is basis for flux<br />
analysis. Although the genomes of other green alga have been sequenced, producing a good metabolic<br />
network requires a very well annotated genome and would take a considerable amount of time. In<br />
addition to Chlamy there appear to be genomes of Chlorella sp. NC64A, Chlorella vulgaris C-169<br />
(Coccomyxa sp. C-169), Volvox carteri, and two marine Micromonas strains available. Yet we could not<br />
identify any one of these strains to be known as a production strain. 3) The proposal is based on<br />
preliminary experimental results, such as the accumulation of oil under continuous growth and high<br />
concentration of the carbon source (acetate). We expect that these findings are transferable to other green<br />
alga such as Chlorella, Dunaliella or Scenedesmus, but we don’t know for sure until we experimentally<br />
verify this. We also base the proposal on a starchless Chlamydomonas mutant, which has been<br />
characterized before in detail by other groups. 4) In the lab of C. Xu intensive Chlamydomonas mutant<br />
screen efforts are under way that might contribute to our effort. 5) please consider also Morowvata MH,<br />
Rasoul-Aminia S, Ghasemi Y (2010) Chlamydomonas as a “new” organism for biodiesel production.<br />
Bioresource Technology 101: 2059-2062 Siaut et al., BMC Biotechnol. 11:7(2011). PMID: 21255402 At<br />
least we expect that the results and methods generated in these studies with Chlamydomonas will have a<br />
transformational effect on our ability to optimize oil accumulation in commercial production strains.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> 5, claiming that our goals do not identify with the goals of the <strong>EERE</strong> Algae-to-biofuels<br />
platform: we disagree. See Algal biofuels roadmap, p. 11, paragraph “Carbon Partitioning and<br />
Metabolism”. On p. 6 under “OVERCOMING BARRIERS TO ALGAL BIOFUELS: TECHNOLOGY<br />
GOALS”, the document states as a goal: “Investigate genetics and biochemical pathways for production<br />
of fuel precursors” See also p. 10 the paragraph under “Selecting Algal Model Systems for Study” Also<br />
see Multi-Year Program Plan (MYPP):<br />
http://www1.eere.energy.gov/biomass/pdfs/biomass_mypp_november2010.pdf Taken from p. 2-10/2-11<br />
of this document, on slide 3 we state that we address the barrier: Ft-C. Feedstock Genetics and<br />
Development: The productivity and robustness of algae and other feedstocks used for biofuel production<br />
could be improved by selection, screening, breeding and/or genetic engineering. This will require<br />
extensive ecological, genetic, and biochemical information, which is currently lacking for most algal<br />
species. The barrier description mentions the requirement of biochemical information on algae<br />
productivity.<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has<br />
made progress in its objectives and stated project management plan<br />
has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Given the duration of efforts, I would have hoped for more progress.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The project began recently (October 2010); consequently, few data are available.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
PI utilizes quantitative analysis of flux prior to applying directed manipulation of metabolism<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 5<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Limited progress because project began in October, 2010.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 2<br />
Not a lot of data but the project may have just started.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Progress needs to be defined agaisnt some specific goals.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> 7: “Progress needs to be defined against some specific goals”. We did define specific goals on<br />
slide 11. See e.g.: 1.1 Establish growth conditions to perform 13C-MFA 90% 1.2 Set up Chlamydomonas<br />
metabolic model. 90% 1.3 13C-MFA: experimental design (substrate label) 50%<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 2<br />
The relevance is open to question in the investigators own analysis. The slide in the presentation labelled<br />
Critical Success Factors is not that, but it is a depressing assessment of the relevance and approach.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The PI suggested that Chlamydomonas might not be the best biofuels' target but that use of it in this<br />
project would allow techniques to be developed that could then be applied to other algae. I agree that this<br />
is an excellent model system, but it might be helpful to expand the studies to include a species that can<br />
both be transformed and is a good biofuels' target.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
•Since the goal is to increase oil yield, research improves the economics of biofuel production (feedstock<br />
supply). •High oil yields achieved under continuous growth allow for a continuous production process,<br />
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i.e. simplify the process of feedstock production. •The tools that would be developed (MFA, MCA of<br />
microalgae) can be further used for directed strain improvement.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 5<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
There was no compelling explanation of how the results of this research would be relevant to DOE goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 1<br />
MFA applied to a lab strain and identifying factors (for lipid biosynthesis) will not be particularly helpful<br />
to open pond production.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Project should strive to demonstrate early evidence of relevance<br />
Presenter Response<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> 1: The reviewer was asked here to comment about project relevance: Slide 17 discusses the<br />
relevance of the project. Instead reviewer 1 refers here to slide 18 “4 - critical success factors” and calls it<br />
“depressing”. We assumed that slide 18 basically was intended to answer the question: What are possible<br />
reasons why the project could fail? What can be done in each case? For example we describe what could<br />
be done if Chlamydomonas was successfully engineered but turns out not to be suitable for mass<br />
production. <strong>Reviewer</strong> 5: “No compelling argument”. We disagree. The anticipated results are relevant to<br />
DOE goals. On slide 17 we state: “Since the goal is to increase oil yield, our research improves the<br />
economics of biofuel production” (feedstock supply). Feedstock supply relates to the MYPP document,<br />
FT-C. In similar, the algal biofuels roadmap states on p. 6 under “OVERCOMING BARRIERS TO<br />
ALGAL BIOFUELS: TECHNOLOGY GOALS” as a goal: “Investigate genetics and biochemical<br />
pathways for production of fuel precursors”. On slide 17 we state: 2) High oil yields achieved under<br />
continuous growth allows for a continuous production process, i.e. simplify the process of feedstock<br />
production. Furthermore, the tools we develop (MFA, MCA of microalgae) can be further used for<br />
directed strain improvement of commercial strains. Related to this, p. 6 of the roadmap document states<br />
under “OVERCOMING BARRIERS TO ALGAL BIOFUELS: TECHNOLOGY GOALS”: “Achieve<br />
robust and stable cultures at a commercial scale” <strong>Reviewer</strong> 6: Our goals are relevant for the algae-tobiofuels<br />
program. That our results cannot be applied to open ponds is an opinion of the reviewer.<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
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end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 1<br />
These were not enumerated.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Demonstration of the application of the work proposed to practical algal biofuels' production is important.<br />
In the future, please report oil concentrations of algae on the basis of algal dry mass, as part of<br />
presentations (again, important for effective tech transfer) and consider expanding studies to other algae.<br />
The transformation studies on Chlamydomonas may not be easily transferable to other organisms.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 8<br />
PI predicts that 13C-Metabolic Flux Analysis might not work well with the two-carbon source acetate. To<br />
allow Chlamydomonas to grow on glucose, he will transform it with a glucose transporter. While analysis<br />
is performed with algae growing on acetate, the results of the analysis are to be applied to algae growing<br />
autotrophically (on atmospheric CO2). Manipulation of the targets revealed by analysis therefore might<br />
be less relevant for autotrophically grown alga. This issue can be theoretically explored by the use of Flux<br />
Balance Analysis. Chlamydomonas might not be the most suitable species for mass oil production. A<br />
succesful engineering approach might have to be applied to another algal strain like Chlorella or<br />
Nannochloropsis.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 5<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
This project is unlikely to have a near-term significant impact since Chlamy is not a relevant organism.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 1<br />
"If we are successful, Chlamydomonas might not be the most suitable species for mass oil production."<br />
How is success defined by identifying a strain as not being the most suitable - ignoring the fact this is not<br />
an industrial strain anyway.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Applying learnings to potential commerical systems is critical.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>1: We disagree. We enumerated critical success factors on slide 18. <strong>Reviewer</strong> 5: “Chlamy is not<br />
a relevant organism”: We disagree. See Algal biofuels roadmap, p. 10, under “Selecting Algal Model<br />
Systems for Study”. This paragraph makes clear that algal model species are not out of the question.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> 6: asks “How is success defined by identifying a strain as not being the most suitable - ignoring<br />
the fact this is not an industrial strain anyway”. We disagree. Again, the algal biofuels roadmap does not<br />
exclude the use of model species. It says e.g. on p. 10 “Species with sequenced genomes and transgenic<br />
capabilities are the most amenable to investigating cellular processes since the basic tools are in place.” –<br />
this clearly refers to our project.<br />
please consider also Morowvata MH, Rasoul-Aminia S, Ghasemi Y (2010) Chlamydomonas as a “new”<br />
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organism for biodiesel production. Bioresource Technology 101: 2059-2062 Siaut et al., BMC<br />
Biotechnol. 11:7(2011). PMID: 21255402<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
I see little evidence that this is an integrated project, nor did it seem this was a large concern for the<br />
investigator.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
The project is in its early stages.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Transformation of non-Chlamydomonas species<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Potential for technology transfer to producers is extremely unlikely.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
No comment.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Plan for tech transfer needs to be developed.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> 1: We ask DOE management to disregard this very unspecific comment that the PI “seemed not<br />
to be concerned” about project integration.<br />
With regards to what was asked of the reviewers to comment about: our project was about 1/2 year old<br />
when it was reviewed by this panel. There was no chance to get any collaborations or co-publications<br />
going within that time.<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project<br />
approach, scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
I appreciate the science that is incorporated in the project. However, this should be work focused on the<br />
problem of optimized algal biofuel production. The investigators appear to want to do their project<br />
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whether relevant or not. How this work can then be tied to full scale production has not been developed in<br />
the plans.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
The project is at an early stage.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Overall, this is a worthwhile project that should be pursued. Quantitative analysis needs to include<br />
measurement of the oil content on a per cell or dry biomass basis. Also, information is needed on how<br />
much oil accumulates in relation to other cellular parameters? Specifically starch and chlorophyll. Slide<br />
13: TAG/lipid content? How is lipid defined in the context of this work?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Overall Impression: 5<br />
While the technical approach seems reasonable, the use of Chlamydomonas was not defended well. Other<br />
algae more likely to be suitable for biofuel production have also been sequenced. Why could the studies<br />
not be done on them? Similarly, the use of acetate and the plan to modify Chlamy to use glucose may<br />
have scientific value, but the case for eventual value to autotrophic cultivation was not made.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Although improved basic knowledge of lipid metabolism in algal strains is important, the impact of this<br />
particular project is unnecessarily limited by the focus on Chlamydomonas.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
The PI has a skill in MFA and an affinity for a given microalgal strain. Thereafter the PI has cranked out<br />
a classic MFA analysis that does not really relate to the conditions of apparrent absence of what will<br />
dominate commercial production.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
A clear path from fundemental resutls in a model organism to relevant commercial technology needs to<br />
be defined.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Overall: Hard to explain is that none of the reviewer really assessed or criticized the control analysis<br />
approach (Metabolic Control Analysis, MCA). Yet this was shown in the presentation as a large part of<br />
the proposal. This effort is complementary to MFA.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> 1: “Not relevant for full scale production”: The Algal biofuels roadmap has a wide spectrum of<br />
barriers and goals defined (p.6). Our project fits “Investigate genetics and biochemical pathways for<br />
production of fuel precursors”. We see the potential of transformational discoveries that allows to<br />
overcome the long known principle limitation, that algae typically produce high amounts of lipid<br />
exclusively under nutrient stress. We have a good chance to address a major problem that already has<br />
been identified in the Aquatic Species Program. R2: see comments above. R3: In our experiments we<br />
generally analyze algal cell material by determining major biomass compounds (protein, lipid, starch, cell<br />
wall material, free metabolites) on a dry weight bases. This may not have been explicit in the<br />
presentation, but is a basic part of MFA.<br />
R4: see remarks under “1 Appraoch”. R5: The idea is to gain insights about the role of central metabolism<br />
in carbon partitioning with the model organism Chlamydomonas, which allows to transfer the resulting<br />
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insights subsequently to other green algal species. We see the potential of transformational discoveries<br />
that allows to overcome the long known principle limitation, that algae typically produce high amounts of<br />
lipid exclusively under nutrient stress.<br />
R6: The reviewer expresses here his negative view on the value of using model organisms. Also a<br />
negative view on Metabolic Flux Analysis (MFA), a method usually applied under well controlled<br />
laboratory conditions.<br />
Our proposal has a focus on the role of carbon partitioning, i.e. central metabolism in oil accumulation.<br />
Please note that in the <strong>EERE</strong> algal biofuels roadmap the goal to understand carbon partitioning was<br />
emphasized in a paragraph on p. 11.<br />
We disagree with the view that knowledge gained by MFA with the model species Chlamydomonas is<br />
irrelevant for commercial production in ponds. Calvin and coworkers dissected the reaction scheme of<br />
carbon fixation in photosynthesis using green algae under strictly controlled laboratory conditions. Their<br />
findings are the foundation to understand photosynthesis and biomass production in general as well as for<br />
green alga in ponds. In addition to the classical Calvin cycle, some years ago the presenting PI could<br />
describe an important novel functional mode in carbon fixation and oil synthesis (Schwender et al.,<br />
Nature 432: 779–782, 2004). This work was done by the use of MFA and underscores the value of this<br />
approach for improvement of oil production.<br />
Please see citations under “1 Approach”.<br />
Project: 9.1.3.2 INL<br />
Title: Microalgae Harvesting/Dewatering and Drying<br />
Presenter: Deborah Newby<br />
Presentation Date: Friday, April 08, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 4.29 0.70 7<br />
Progress 5.00 0.76 7<br />
Relevance 5.00 1.31 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 4.29 1.67 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The program approach is reasonable with one big question mark. Did anyone perform a simple energy<br />
and cost analysis for this particular filtration technology? The technology must have a chance of<br />
competing with other technologies. The presentation left me with the perception that the technique was<br />
chosen for other reasons, and no simple assessment was done.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The project aims to lower the cost of harvesting and collecting algae and to recycle the water used by<br />
biomass facilities with new/improved processes. Several problems are apparent, but the project only<br />
began in October 2010, so there is opportunity to improve the project. One problem is that the filter<br />
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development described is unlikely to fit the scale of pond/raceways required for economical biofuels'<br />
development. Secondly, the PI is approaching the filtration problem as if unialgal and axenic cultures<br />
would be filtered; this is unlikely to be true, so "messier" cultures should be used in the work than pure<br />
Chaetoceros, Cyclotella, Chlorella etc. The PI and team have several scales of raceways built into project,<br />
which is good, and have previous experiences with filtration problems (nuclear waste to beet processing).<br />
The algal biofuels' projects have their own distinctive filtration problems, and the PIs need to give<br />
attention to background knowledge acquisition.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The work aims to use high face velocity filtration to effect harvesting of microalgae from a culture and<br />
water recycling/conservation<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 4<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The project goal is to characterize and improve on dewatering processes. The specific<br />
approach is to develop and test different filtration (membrane) technologies. The approach is sound but<br />
appears limited to one technology.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 4<br />
This is a technical assessment of a particular type of harvesting dewatering unit operation. In that context<br />
the approach is fine EXCEPT for lack of energy balances. The PI should present the power consumed per<br />
unit volume of water consumed from the manufacturer. The PI could have then estimated a typical<br />
starting concentration of algae in water harvested (about 0.3 gdw l-1) and a typical bio-oil content (about<br />
20%). From those numbers the PI could point out, right from the start, if this device has a chance to meet<br />
the target energy load of no more than 10% of the energy (per unit volume processed) as per the Algal<br />
Biofuels Roadmap.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
A clear definition of project scope and goals in terms of input stream characteristics, output stream<br />
characteristics, energy consumption, yield, scale, and capital cost target is needed. The goal of cost<br />
reduction compared to centrifugation is not sufficient. Dewatering economics must enable commercial<br />
scale algal biofuel production.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
We agree with the reviewer’s comment that the ultimate goal of this technology is to provide a costeffective<br />
method for dewatering. The selection of the cross-flow technology for application to the<br />
dewatering issue was based on past work in this area where success was achieved from starting materials<br />
of similar characteristics to the algae cultures. The presenters also wish to point out that engineering<br />
solutions, such as development and application of embedded membranes, can significantly improve the<br />
efficiency and feasibility of using cross-flow membrane technology. This project was funded to look at<br />
the possibility making these advancements, and we agree an energy calculation is valuable and ultimately<br />
necessary while noting that the laboratory scale units being used for the development efforts do not<br />
necessary represent the potential for the technology at scale.. Please see the overall impressions section<br />
for an energy calculation. As the reviewer points out, the initial parametric testing is being done using<br />
unialgal and axenic cultures. The basis for this approach is to understand how the different types of algae<br />
interact with the membrane, so that appropriate membranes may be selected and/or developed for further<br />
analyses. The initial cultures include 3 green algae, and 2 diatoms, allowing us to assess the membranes<br />
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with different biochemical and physical properties, including, size, shape, EPS, silica framework, etc. All<br />
strains selected are known for their lipid production potential. We fully agree the technology needs to be<br />
assessed using “messier” cultures since that is the reality of what will be harvested from paddle-wheel<br />
grown outdoor pond algae. We included the variety of scales of raceways in our proposal for this very<br />
reason. As we develop our membrane dewatering technology our intention has always been to apply it to<br />
more complex populations. We are currently working with several entities operating large-scale ponds or<br />
farms include those with Utah State University, Energy Dynamics Laboratory, and Pacific Northwest<br />
National Laboratory and their NAABB partners that operate ponds at University of Arizona and Texas<br />
A&M. This will give us access to a variety of scales ranging from 220L- 24,000L raceways, and a<br />
floating pond configuration at 154,310 L. Algal include strains of Chlorella, Nanochloropsis,<br />
Chaetoceros, Neochloris, and indigenous/wild fresh water lipid producing strains from Utah. Biomass<br />
from the variety of ponds grown at Utah State University and the Energy Dynamics Lab, will serve as our<br />
feedstocks for testing at larger-scale on “messier” cultures. Our hope is that the technology will prove<br />
useful and we will be able to apply it for dewatering at other production facilities as well.<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has<br />
made progress in its objectives and stated project management plan<br />
has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
It appears a reasonable amount of progress has been made for the project duration.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
This project began very recently.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Scale and diversity of algal cultures was expanded GC-FID and Nile Red lipid analysis methods were<br />
applied to expanded algae library Procurement of STC - delivered and initial testing<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 4<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Progress is limited since it just began in October 2010.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Identification of novel technology and intitiation of testing is good progress. Progress on developing<br />
specific commercial goals and clearly defined harvesting or dewatering concepts is lagging.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
We agree with the reviewer’s comments regarding progress on this new start project. The development of<br />
specific commercial goals will be addressed as we develop and refine the technology.<br />
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3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
This project has high relevance if there is likelihood that filtration will be included in the best, most<br />
effective, lowest cost process scheme.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Harvesting technologies are critical to success of algal biofuels' projects, but the practicality of the current<br />
approach will need to be demonstrated.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Effort aims to improve commercial-scale capabilities in the harvesting and dewatering on microalgal<br />
biomass<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 4<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Project goals are relevant to the Biomass Program Plan but the results may be limited by the choice of<br />
influent used. Will the results be relevant to paddle-wheel grown outdoor pond algae?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Unless a quality energy balance is done properly up front this work has little relevance.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Technological breakthroughs in harvesting and dewatering are needed for algal biofuels to be viable.<br />
Technologies must be evaluated against commercial scale cost and performance requirements to be<br />
relevant.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Please refer the overall impressions section for the energy analysis and to the approach section for<br />
clarification on strain selection and relevance to populations harvested from outdoor ponds.<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
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iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
CSFs have been provided. However, some of them should have been considered to some extent before<br />
starting the project. For example, to question (as part of the CSFs!) whether there are other economic<br />
(read more economic) approaches, is a fine example of the analysis that should have been checked before<br />
start.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 4<br />
One of the most critical factors to success is starting with a realistic feedstock culture for filtration. The<br />
project needs to collaborate with biologists who can provide better insight to how these problems will<br />
affect the goals of the filtration research.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Critical success factors: Technical – can high shear filtration be performed at an industrial scale for algae<br />
(1,000’s of liters per hour)? Market – If high shear filtration can be performed is it economic for<br />
dewatering of algae? Are there other economically feasible drying approaches? Business – Are there<br />
commercial filtration processes that are economic (with minor modification) for algae and, if so, at what<br />
$$ per volume? Top technical challenges: Reduction/elimination of membrane fouling (High Shear,<br />
embedded membranes, and surface charge of membranes) Capture of “phantom” oils (secondary nanofiltration);<br />
Cost reduction when compared to competition (centrifugation)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 4<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Critical success factors were identified, but it is not clear that they can be satisfactorily addressed unless<br />
effluents from full-scale raceways are used at the outset.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 1<br />
Energy balances are needed for realistic conditions of operations.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The project should address the potential hurdle of having an adequate supply of algae of various species,<br />
strains, and growth conditions. Capital and operating costs hurdles for commercial viability need to be<br />
specified..<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Please refer the overall impressions section for the energy analysis and to the approach section for<br />
clarification on strain selection and relevance to populations harvested from outdoor ponds.<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
There is direct coordination if the operation fits into the overall process. Publications will result.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
The project began very recently.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Early-stage relationship development with RAE (Jeff Kanel) for collaborative work on pre-concentration<br />
and filtration processes; Collaboration with SpinTek on embedded membranes for algal filtration.<br />
Collaboration with SpinTek and others on “Phantom” oil collection with nanofiltration; Development of<br />
additional partners (Graber, Koch, Pall, etc. as needed).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Technology partners have been identified.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Commercial interests of equipment manufacturers might drive tech transfer. The project can serve a<br />
watchdog function on claims.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
As pointed out, was have a number of partnerships and interactions with commercial entities that could<br />
help carry this forward. We have relationships with the major filtration manufacturers for food and<br />
beverage, mining, industrial fiber, and ink industries – each of which has a unique approach their specific<br />
industry’s needs. INL has relationships with companies that manufacture filtration systems such as<br />
Graber, Pall, Filtron, Parker, and SpinTek, and will utilize these resources as deemed appropriate.<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project<br />
approach, scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
I believe this is a useful project. Confidence level would be higher if there was some support for this<br />
approach as a viable one in terms of the cost effectiveness. Something about the presentation left a strong<br />
impession of a machine looking for a problem, and here comes a problem with funding attached.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
The PIs may not be using realistic feedstock or suitable recovery targets in their harvesting/filtration<br />
research plans, but the project is in its early stages so these concerns should be correctable.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Is there a preliminary estimate of the cost per unit biomass undergoing this harvesting, dewatering, and<br />
drying process? The concern here is that the proposed process would prove to be utterly uneconomical.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Overall Impression: 4<br />
The researchers should begin by projecting the cost and energy consumption of these devices based on<br />
other applications. Then estimate the needed decrease in cost/energy to make algae biofuels feasible. How<br />
does that estimate compare with the best conceivable outcome from the research? This is an obvious<br />
starting point for any applied research. Presumably this exercise was done at the proposal stage, but it still<br />
needs to be shown to project reviewers. As it stands, these interesting technologies and the planned<br />
research could make progress for various industrial and water treatment applications. It is unlikely they<br />
will have a place in affordable algae biofuels production. Discuss this with one of the TEA teams and<br />
look in the TEA literature.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
My impression is that the presenter had a technology that "he can make work"for this particular<br />
application. Will this be an objective analysis? However, it appeared that some critical homework on<br />
energy estimates on spin-tech units had not been performed at the outset. Results will be of very limited<br />
applicability unless most of the tests use actual effluents from full-scale raceways.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
It appears to be a technology worth having a look at provided energy balances are executed.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
The project could benefit from definition of commercial performance criteria for various harvesting and<br />
dewatering scenarios. Process specifications should include feed stream characteristics, separation<br />
efficiency metrics, capacity requirements at scale, operating costs and capital cost. Characterization of<br />
algae slurries at various states of de-watering may be useful, especially rheological analysis. High internal<br />
moisture and high viscosities will be significant hurdles that can be partially defined by rheology.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
We appreciate the reviewer’s acknowledgement of the useful aspects of the project. We want to direct the<br />
reviewer’s attention to the statement early on in the presentation that this is an “analytic evaluation of<br />
cross flow filtration for harvesting/dewatering algae.” In that statement is the fact that there are a variety<br />
of cross flow filtration configurations each with its own inherent advantages, disadvantages, and<br />
limitations – thus the presentation of the levels of instantaneous face velocities in the presentation is an<br />
attempt to justify the fact that once we understand the mechanistic aspects of the membrane fouling<br />
caused by the presence of the algae, we will then be able to design an appropriate set of cross flow<br />
membrane unit operations to accomplish the task. Something that the literature has virtually no references<br />
that answer this basic question. At no time was it meant for the presentation to come across as a “machine<br />
looking for a job”. The spinning membrane unit is only a single component in the entire system that will<br />
be designed to dewater the algae to the economically viable level. Data for our preliminary cost estimates<br />
for processing 12 M gal water/algae were obtained through discussions with industry leaders (Millipore,<br />
Koch Membranes. Scenario 1) includes a floatation system and rotator system with 80% and 95%<br />
recovery rates, respectively and a conservative assumption that filtration membranes will be replaced<br />
every year. We anticipate an operational cost of $2.06 x 10E-5 per gallon for the filtration process or<br />
$246.90. Scenario 2) includes same assumptions as above but without the rotary membrane and assuming<br />
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conditions that prevent membrane fouling, the cost changes to $2.03 x 10E-5 per gallon for the filtration<br />
process or $243.80. No CapX were included in any of these estimates. We recognize that these<br />
preliminary calculations need significant refinement, but they provide an initial basis to warrant further<br />
investigation both from cost and experimental perspectives. Due to the combined complexity of the<br />
estimation and space limitations, we are open to discuss this further with reviewer. We do not fully agree<br />
with this comment that the presenter had a technology that “he can make work” for this particular<br />
application. Once again we apologize for any misperception that this is a technology in search of an<br />
application. We carefully evaluated costs for different filtration methods and came down with the two<br />
scenarios and further we provide the costs per gallon in the above examples which are surprisingly<br />
insensitive to method, but the level of solids (%solids) varies vastly ( Scenario 1 = 50 – 60%, Scenario 2<br />
= 15 – 20%) . We hope to consume much less than 15% of total energy, but need to optimize the<br />
debottlenecking separation of water and algae, thus the focused effort. Basically, it is not economic to<br />
filter all of the water in the raceway so a pre-concentration must be performed. There are three main<br />
approaches to pre-concentration: 1) full volume evaporation (used as a pre-concentration step much as<br />
does the salt industry, but the algae will probably eat up their stored oils to survive these types of<br />
scenarios thus rendering them nearly useless to us for oil production), 2) gravity assisted<br />
flocculation/settling, and 3) air (or other gas) assisted floatation. All of these methods are commonly<br />
utilized in industry (food processing, mining, etc.). We have selected gas assisted flotation due to its<br />
consistent results, speed, high concentration ratios, and energy efficiency. We are pursuing very smallscale<br />
studies with several varieties of algae to understand how the systems will perform before going to<br />
the expense of purchasing a full scale rotary membrane unit. We have read a number or TEA articles and<br />
will continue to consider the techno-economic feasibility of the cross-flow membrane technology.<br />
Project: 9.2.2.3 National Renewable Energy Laboratory<br />
Title: Efficient use of algal biomass residues for biopower production with nutrient recycle<br />
Presenter: Eric Jarvis<br />
Presentation Date: Friday, April 08, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 5.43 1.18 7<br />
Progress 4.57 1.92 7<br />
Relevance 5.43 1.40 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 5.43 1.40 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The Problem is worthy of study. The approach is worth evaluating. Do not culture your own algal<br />
biomass! Partner with someone or get big quantities from actual industrial concerns. Improve the<br />
effectiveness of the approaches. Decide what the deliverables will be and design the program to deliver.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 7<br />
This project is considering the process of anaerobic digestion to change residual biomass to biogass<br />
(methane and carbon dioxide) and to recycle CO2 to cultures. Three species (Nannochloropsis, Chlorella,<br />
Phaeodactylum) are being used. This is good, because these algae are different biochemically while being<br />
good biofuels' targets. The PI promised to share data and the project's overall approach seems sound.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Biogas production will be optimized for three algal species, best conditions will be scaled up, nutrient<br />
recycle will be explored, and results will inform TE and LCA models<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The goal is to characterize the digestion potential of extracted algal biomass and the nutrient value of the<br />
digested effluent. Unfortunately, the approach is includes the use of lab-grown algal cultures rather than<br />
biomass grown in pilot- or full scale systems. This seems both unnecessarily slow and potentially<br />
irrelevant (if the experiments need to be repeated to test biomass from full-scale systems).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
They are doing the "right" thing in terms of the subject area, and simply address each unit operation<br />
(growth, harvesting, dewatering, extraction....) but without new hypothesis to be tested, in the context of<br />
the long literature history out there. Also, AD of defatted microalgae biomass will not produce much<br />
methane (relative to CO2) unless one has added in carbon.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 5<br />
It is highly desirable to define some specific quantitative goals based on economic and process<br />
perfromance criteria. Sourcing of biomass from a partner is a strong positive.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
We have chosen the three strains of microalgae for our studies (Nannochloropsis sp., Chlorella vulgaris<br />
UTEX395, and Phaeodactylum tricornutum) based on careful consideration. These strains sample the<br />
extremes of genetic diversity among eukaryotic microalgae being utilized for algal biofuels development.<br />
They are industrially relevant, but are also some of the best understood biochemically and<br />
physiologically. This provides several advantages; for example, our own work on the analysis of the cell<br />
wall composition of UTEX395 will be useful in designing enzymatic approaches to pretreatment. We<br />
have obtained Nannochloropsis from a commercial source (Seambiotic). Unfortunately, we are currently<br />
unaware of industrial sources for the other two strains. In-house cultivation allows us more control over<br />
growth conditions and will generate sufficient biomass for the studies. Of course, we would be very<br />
interested to hear of possible commercial sources for large quantities of biomass from these or related<br />
species. The criticism regarding a lack of hypothesis and context is noted, and perhaps this was a failure<br />
of the presentation. A number of technoeconomic (TE) modeling efforts, including NREL’s, have made<br />
assumptions about the efficiency of anaerobic digestion on oil-extracted algae. Essentially, the hypothesis<br />
that we are testing is whether those assumptions are reasonable. Andy Aden’s presentation, which<br />
preceded this one, covered analysis of the cost of algal lipids based on scenarios that include anaerobic<br />
digestion of algal residues after oil extraction. Inputs to the model (with current base case assumptions in<br />
parentheses) include efficiency of carbon conversion to biogas (65%), methane content of the biogas<br />
(40%), digester retention time (10 days), nitrogen recycle fraction (75%) and phosphorous recycle<br />
fraction (50%). Base case assumptions are based primarily on Weissman and Goebel (1996), and are just<br />
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that – assumptions. It is critical to establish whether these targets can be achieved, or possibly exceeded.<br />
Elimination of the entire anaerobic digestion component of NREL’s TE model (i.e., simply discarding the<br />
algal residue) results in a per gallon triglyceride cost increase of $2.22 for the base case pond conditions,<br />
or about a 25% increase in cost. Clearly, then, being able to meet these anaerobic digestion metrics is very<br />
important to achieving a cost-competitive process. The C/N ratio of the feed is one of the experimental<br />
variables we will be testing. As the reviewer points out, the methane content of biogas from de-fatted<br />
algae could be an issue, and one that we will be addressing. If carbon supplementation is required, it is<br />
critical that we establish that fact, as co-feed sourcing will have a significant impact on the economics,<br />
siting, etc.<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has<br />
made progress in its objectives and stated project management plan<br />
has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Not enough time under award has elapsed to gauge progress.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The PI appears to be informed and reviewed appropriate background literature; this bodes well.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The project is still in its infancy --preparation of materials for AD testing is just not nearing completion<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Progress has been limited by the difficulty in culturing sufficient quantities of algal biomass within their<br />
facility.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 1<br />
Cannot judge - too little data.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Project is in a very early stage.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
As the reviewers note, the project is still at an early stage.<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
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The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
This could be a relevant project. More progress and a sharpening of the project approaches would help<br />
this.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The project is important to recycling and efficiency of energy extraction from algal biofuels.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Commercial success of algal biofuels will require co-products of sufficient value and market size --AD<br />
for biopower has significant potential, but the details are poorly understood<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The project goals are certainly relevant to platform goals, but the approach unnecessarily limits the<br />
ultimate relevance of any results.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The project proposed activities at each stage (such as enzymatic hydrolysis) without driving hypothesis<br />
anywhere or justification for a pathway that fits into the knowledge basis of the literature and reports by<br />
Benneman et al and Lundquist et al.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The relevance is high because there is no scale limit on the concept. Detailed economic goals are needed.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
These comments are addressed by the discussion above under Project Approach. The “driving<br />
hypothesis” of the project is the validation of specific assumptions being made in the technoeconomic<br />
modeling, which are described above. The current knowledge base in the literature is a good start, but<br />
overall the amount of research reported on anaerobic digestion of algal residues is miniscule compared to<br />
the work done on other aspects of the algal biofuels process.<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
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end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
There is a reasonable initial description of these.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Undefined animal waste is used as to innoculate the digester; will this pose replication problems? Will<br />
this process scale-up---and how will this be evaluated? It may be helpful to increase the AD efficiency<br />
with more initial proteases and cellulases.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Need to demonstrate sufficient biogas yields from recalcitrant algal feedstocks, moderate capital costs,<br />
and efficient nutrient recycle<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Critical success factors were identified but no novel approaches were suggested that were likely to<br />
overcome these challenges.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 3<br />
None stated to any real relevance.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 7<br />
There appears to be very significant economic hurdles of capital requirements and of the low value of<br />
biogas and nutrients compared to the co-product value that will probably be needed to make algal fuels<br />
viable.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
The addition of proteases and cellulases to the digesters is an interesting concept, and we propose to<br />
address that through enzymatic pretreatment of the algal biomass before digestion. The longevity of<br />
enzymes added to the digester would likely be an issue, so we have opted for pretreatment in a more<br />
controlled environment. As stated in the presentation, our goal in this project is not the testing of novel,<br />
high-risk approaches, but rather the testing of assumptions for a supposedly “known” process. Having<br />
said that, we will of course be open to any novel concepts that might improve the yield of the anaerobic<br />
digestion process or the efficacy of nutrient recycle. It may be true that higher value co-products will be<br />
needed. This project and the associated technoeconomics will help establish whether or not that is the<br />
case. Note that some co-product scenarios (e.g., animal feed) might completely displace the anaerobic<br />
digestion component of the process, but others (e.g., specialty fatty acids, industrial proteins, etc.) will<br />
still leave a significant residue stream suitable for anaerobic digestion.<br />
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5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
This cannot be assessed at this time.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
There is strong potential for good tech transfer from this project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Future work will generate vital data on AD of spent microalgae to gain value from both biopower<br />
production and recycling of nutrients. Data will be freely shared to benefit the entire algal biofuels<br />
community<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See Overall Impressions text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Technology transfer potential seems unlikely.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
Too early a project to comment.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
NREL work is widely shared.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
As noted, NREL work is widely shared and technology transfer will take place through publications and<br />
interactions with interested parties.<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project<br />
approach, scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
Overall, I believe with some modifications, there could be useful outcomes from this project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
Increasing the anaerobic digester's replicability with defined inputs and potentially adding additional<br />
sources of enzymes to break biomass should be considered. Recovery of energy from residual biomass<br />
after lipid extraction by anaerobic digestion is useful research. The diverse feedstock targets is a good<br />
aspect of the project.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Anaerobic Digestion : What are the anaerobic microbes involved? Please define them for the benefit of<br />
the review process. Is there progress so far in AD? The reviewer's recommendation for the PSI is to seek<br />
protein degradation (proteases) and cell wall degradation (cellulases) by which to pre-digest the biomass.<br />
Breaking up the biomass into the constituent components would substantially improve yields.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Overall Impression: 6<br />
The research goals are important and relevant, but the digestion results of future systems will depend on<br />
which algae are grown, the growth conditions, and the particular oil extraction method (current solvent<br />
extractions of all types have cost and other barriers). This project tries to cover the first two points by<br />
studying several species and growing them under conditions that might be used at full-scale. These are<br />
still somewhat speculative, but the oil recovery methods of the future are an even greater unknown. Thus,<br />
this project will be able to provide methane yield and production estimates for some speculative future<br />
conditions. However, even these preliminary results will be valuable.<br />
Presumably, the biochemical composition of the digester influent (and effluent) will be quantified and<br />
controlled, although this is not mentioned in the presentation.<br />
The emphasis on growing algae specifically for this project may consume most of the project effort. Only<br />
marginally sufficient biomass quantities might be produced using the small-scale culturing equipment<br />
implied by the presentation. Efforts should be made to identify another research group that is producing<br />
larger quantities of algae and extracting it and would be willing to share the residuals. The 2 kg from<br />
Seambiotic is a good start.<br />
Small, presumably batch, digestion experiments are planned for 12 months, prior to setup of 1-L,<br />
presumably semi-continuous-feed, digesters. Operation of only batch digesters for 12 months seems<br />
excessive because the more realistic data will come from the 1-L semi-continuous digesters, which appear<br />
to be scheduled to operate for only 4 months--a marginal amount of time to collect steady state data. The<br />
planned loading rate and C:N studies should not be the main emphasis because they are likely to give<br />
results similar to digestion of conventional wastes. Algae biochemical composition and oil extraction<br />
procedures are likely to be the dominant variables with respect to methane yield. The primary<br />
experiments should explore a range of these two variables.<br />
The algae regrowth work is valuable if light attenuation by the digester effluent is considered as one of<br />
the variables.<br />
What makes you think that the enzyme treatment will be affordable?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
The use of algal biomass from laboratory grown cultures drastically reduces the relevance of this project.<br />
Given the extensive knowledge base about anaerobic digestion, the funding level, and the two year<br />
project period, the goals appeared very modest.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
No real justification for any of the steps taken.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
The project could benefit from specific quantitative goals based on commercial requirements for the<br />
process and the economics. The extent of the technology survey that has been completed by the team is<br />
not clear.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Many of these comments are addressed above. Regarding the emphasis on batch digesters vs. larger scale<br />
semi-continuous digesters, that is a useful comment and we will do as much work at the larger scale as<br />
time and materials allow. However, our work at the smaller scale will provide much higher throughput<br />
and therefore the testing of many more variables. We believe that this approach will allow for better<br />
optimized digestions and maximize the output of useful data. The cost of enzymatic treatments, if they are<br />
shown to be effective, will be modeled. Recent advances in the production of low-cost enzymes for<br />
lignocellulosic ethanol processes suggest that such options may be affordable. We apologize if the<br />
presentation did not adequately convey the justification for this work. As noted above, when considering<br />
a process that currently is predicted to reduce algal lipid costs by $2.22 per gallon, it is important that the<br />
underlying assumptions be tested. Co-products are essential to an economically viable process, and any<br />
potential producer weighing the various options will want to make decisions based on actual data rather<br />
than assumptions.<br />
As discussed above, the possible need for co-feedstock will be an important outcome. We plan to use<br />
relatively defined co-feedstocks for initial studies (primarily cellulose), but may be able to test alternative<br />
low-cost materials. Regarding a question about recylcing of the AD sludge, we believe that sludge recycle<br />
may be problematic. Current scenarios focus on the liquid fraction of the effluent. Regarding a suggestion<br />
that algal residues simply be burned for power generation, anaerobic digestion for biogas/biopower has<br />
several advantages over a simple combustion scenario. In particular, the drying step required before<br />
combustion adds very significant costs and energy consumption to the process. Also, nutrient recycle<br />
would be more difficult; combustion of this high-protein feedstock would likely release much of the<br />
nitrogen as NOx, making recycle difficult and resulting in air pollution issues. Specific quantitative goals<br />
are discussed above under Project Approach.<br />
Project: 9.1.2.2 Sandia National Laboratories<br />
Title: Pond Crash Forensics<br />
Presenter: Todd Lane<br />
Presentation Date: Friday, April 08, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 6.00 1.41 7<br />
Progress 5.86 1.36 7<br />
Relevance 6.00 1.93 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 5.43 1.59 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The approach is reasonably good. How will multiple causes be addressed, or non-organic causes? What<br />
sort of modeling will be used. Many protocols need promulgation, i.e. sampling, storage, etc.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 8<br />
This project began in October 2010 and is 25% complete. The project partners represent broad expertise.<br />
The goal of the project is "dipstick"<br />
development of rapid detection of common algal pond pathogens and detection of "novel" problems<br />
within several days by other molecular analysis (not detailed: Hi-Seq? Cloning?). This is an important<br />
problem and the overall approach is promising, including use of biotinylated DNA and subtraction<br />
technology with microfluidics to enrich for abnormal (pathogenic) sequences.<br />
The FY11 milestones are well defined.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Develop methods to enrich for nucleic acids that are likely to derive from the etiological agent of the<br />
crash. Utilize ultra high throughput sequencing to identify agents. Create quantitative assays that facilitate<br />
the detection of agents at low concentration. Recreate the crash under laboratory conditions. Utilize<br />
advance spectroscopic methods to detect early hallmarks of algal stress.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Promising concept, but it is not clear which types of organisms the process will be able to detect--viruses,<br />
predators, and pathogens are mentioned. Apparently bacteria, fungi, and zooplankton could be identified<br />
with this method in addition to viruses. It's odd that no particular known algae pathogens are mentioned.<br />
Non-crashing ponds similar to the subject crashing ponds should be tested as controls, to estimate the<br />
false positive rate.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The objective is to identify agents responsible for pond crashes. The approach is to use high throughput<br />
sequencing to detect biological agents at low concentration. This approach seems technology driven<br />
rather than driven by the needs/experiences of managers of algal cultivation systems.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Good work except that the justification was not made as to why etiological agents are the sources of<br />
crashes. What is the evidence justifying the funds to search here for the sources of crashes relative to the<br />
disapearance, for example, if micronutrients.<br />
In terms of looking at etiological agents, though, well thought out project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
A good first step for this project would be to complete a failure mode and effects analysis (FMEA) on<br />
pond crashes to identify opportunities. If pond crashes have pathogenic causes with high impact, low<br />
detectability, and potential opportunities for mitigation, then the metagenomic analysis and development<br />
of advanced spectroscopy for pathogen detection would have clear value. leveraging previous work is<br />
highly desirable, but the opportunity needs to be better defined.<br />
It also appears that this project would be more efficient if it was initiated after the production system is<br />
better defined.<br />
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Presenter Response<br />
The proposed research has two goals. The first is the development of a system for the rapid identification<br />
of unknown agents by high throughput sequencing. The second is the development of a set of assays to<br />
detect the etiological agents, once identified, at low concentration (a "dipstick" assay for example). We do<br />
not propose to use high throughput sequencing as an everyday detection methodology as suggested a<br />
reviewer.<br />
There are several lines of evidence that implicate biological agents in pond crashes. The detrimental effect<br />
of protozoan grazers on mass algal culture has been well documented (Lincoln et al Aquaculture 1983,<br />
32:331-337 ). The role of other algal pathogens such as bacteria and viruses in production ponds has not<br />
be as well documented, likely because they are not readily detectable by microscopic analysis. However,<br />
in the study of natural blooms, there has been a number of recent reports of novel algal viruses and<br />
evidence of the important role that they play in the demise of a bloom (Lange et al FEMS Microbiol Rev,<br />
2009, 33: 295-323). In addition, bacterial (Mayali and Azam J. Eukaryot Microbiol, 2004, 51:139-144)<br />
and fungal pathogens Jia et al Ecological Engineer. 2010 36:1389-1391) have also been identified that<br />
affect algae viability and may limit or contribute to the demise of blooms . Given the fact that these<br />
agents impact algal biomass levels in natural systems it is not unreasonable to expect that they can have<br />
an affect in algal production ponds (Gachon et al Trends in Plant Science, 2010, 15: 633-640; Stephens et<br />
al Trends in Plant Science 2010, 15:554-564). The strength of the our approach is that it is not limited to<br />
detection of known agents. The methods for enrichment and characterization of nucleic acids from<br />
unknown etiological agents are applicable to the broad spectrum of potential agents (viral, bacterial,<br />
fungal, protozoan) and also to the detection and quantification of invasive or "weed" algal species.<br />
There are pond crashes that are induced strictly by the physiochemical parameters (pH, temperature,<br />
nutrient levels etc). It is also clear that there are pond crashes in which biological agents play a necessary<br />
(if not sufficient) role and that the effect of these biological agents can indeed be modulated by the<br />
physiochemical parameters. Fortunately many of the physiochemical parameters can be readily measured<br />
and it has always been the goal of this project to collect and include such data in our analyses.<br />
Unfortunately, the detection and quantification of biological agents which may play a role in pond<br />
instability is not as straightforward and this is the gap that this project intends to fill. It is our intent to<br />
study both crashed and un-crashed parallel ponds with the un-crashed ponds serving as negative controls.<br />
We will also utilize pre- and post-crash samples from the same pond as a source of controls. It is also a<br />
goal of the project to isolate, when present and possible, the etiological agent of the crash, recapitulate the<br />
crash, and to determine how physiochemical parameters modulate the ability of the agent to cause a crash.<br />
In terms of positive controls, there are several known algal pathogens (various phycoviruses, bacterial<br />
agents and predators (rotifers and other protozoa). Many of these agents are already in use in our<br />
laboratories for methods development and are intended for use as positive controls.<br />
We believe that there is insufficient data publicly available to carry out the failure mode and effects<br />
analysis, suggested by one reviewer. The current inability to detect and quantify biological agents (aside<br />
from grazers) precludes the determination of the fraction of pond crashes with pathogenic causes.<br />
Finalization of a number of protocols such as those for such as sampling and storage is an early research<br />
goal and we are converging on an appropriate solution.<br />
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2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has<br />
made progress in its objectives and stated project management plan<br />
has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Project is moving at an acceptable pace.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 8<br />
The project has good partners and practical goals that are being approached well.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 5<br />
• Developed and tested sample preparation and analysis methods • Developed host and background<br />
subtraction reagents • Developed agent isolation methods<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Some tasks have been completed.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Progress is limited because the project just began (October 2010).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
New project so difficult to judge. Much more information could have been given (and defended) as to the<br />
development of the methods applied.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 5<br />
It is early in project.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
The project team would like to have presented more technical detail but were limited by the required<br />
format and time allotted for the presentation. We have made significant progress in the development of<br />
positive controls and in house culture systems as a source of materials for analysis. We have obtained and<br />
are analyzing samples from an number of parallel pilot scale ponds. We are refining our methods to<br />
accommodate the use of frozen samples to ensure sample stability during shipment.<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The relevance is somewhat apparent if it is actually used to promote the scale-up of production. The<br />
investigators need to be sure they do not place hemselves in the position of promoting a methodology or<br />
technique and looking for a problem. Some partnering with pond operators is desirable.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 9<br />
This project has great relevance to algal biofuels' ponds at appropriate scale for commercial development.<br />
My only concern is what detection means for commercial facilities (e.g., would facilities choose to<br />
immediately harvest all algae and start over with new feedstock introduction after bleaching?) in practice,<br />
but it is unquestionably important to be able to assess pathogens quickly. This technique could also be<br />
applied to detecting other contaminants (i.e., possible pathogens or just competitive algae).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Early detection will enable the “salvage” of biomass prior to crash Will facilitate pond remediation and<br />
return to production Will enable the testing of countermeasures against crash agents. Will increase<br />
annualized pond production<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 9<br />
Important topic<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
This project seems to be driven by technology funded for bio-defense. The presenter failed to convince<br />
me how it is relevant for algal cultivation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Its fine to look at etiological sources but how is there affect going to be evaluated in terms of the other<br />
macro and micro environemental factors that could also be the cause? THis work should be put in the<br />
context of establishing controls (for one thing more information on the conditions of the ponds when the<br />
crash came....i.e. did it rain? Did the pH shoot up or down for some reason? Without this the wrong<br />
positive could be found.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 5<br />
It's not clear how frequently RapTOR would be used in the management of a algae production system.<br />
The project did not present statistics on the occurenc of pond crashes from unknown pathogens.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
The team recognizes the importance of close interaction with pond operators. In the proposal phase we<br />
obtained letters of support from Sapphire Energy Inc and Dr. Ami Ben-Amotz (NBT, Seambiotic). We<br />
will redouble our efforts to form partnerships with pond operators early in the project. As part of this<br />
effort we have developed an aggressive communication plan to facilitate the development of such<br />
interactions. We agree that our methods under development can be applied to contaminants in general and<br />
we will work with algal producers to refine the concepts of operation for the technology.<br />
The PI acknowledges that there are pond crashes that are induced strictly by the physiochemical<br />
parameters (pH, temperature, nutrient levels etc). The evidence supporting the potential role of various<br />
types of biological agents in pond crashes has been detailed above. It is evident that there are pond<br />
crashes in which biological agents play a necessary role and that the effect of these biological agents can<br />
indeed be modulated by the physiochemical parameters. Fortunately many (but obviously, not all) of the<br />
physiochemical parameters can be readily measured and it has always been the goal of this project to<br />
collect and include such data in our analyses. Unfortunately, the detection and quantification of biological<br />
agents, which may play a role in pond instability, is not as straightforward and represents a blind spot in<br />
any cause analysis.<br />
We are concerned with sample transport. The choice of appropriate field preparation and transport is<br />
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driven by both the needs of the laboratory analysis and the capabilities of the producer. Clearly the best<br />
choices for nucleic acid preservation are flash freezing harvested biomass and shipment on dry ice.<br />
Alternatively the samples can be solubilized in Trizol and shipped on dry ice which will also preserve<br />
nucleic acids. Harvesting methods may impact nucleic acid content of the samples so these need to be<br />
evaluated. Frozen shipment methods do not generally preserve cellular integrity and do not allow for<br />
down stream physical separation methods. In many cases viruses are not captured by biomass harvesting<br />
methods. Shipment of "whole water" samples on ice has the benefit of retaining cellular integrity allowing<br />
downstream physical separation methods and can contain free virus. However as the reviewer correctly<br />
point out, changes in the samples can occur. As our nucleic acid analysis methods have improved, the<br />
need for physical separation has diminished and it is now apparent that a combination of frozen harvested<br />
biomass and filtrate (for viruses) is the optimal approach.<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
These seem to be reasonably outlined.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The dipstick model is really important to practical work, so demonstration that this works against known<br />
pathogens/predators (e.g., viruses, bacteria, fungi, rotifers) is essential.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
• Efficient and quantitative nucleic acid extraction and recovery. • Effective host and background<br />
subtraction<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Still needed: Determine false positive/negative rates for various pests.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Critical success factors were identified but they seemed to focus primarily on the technical aspects of this<br />
approach rather than ultimate use of the technology. The project would be improved with additional input<br />
by those involved in large scale algal cultivation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The project largely ignores other factors that can contribute to crashes that might have occurred.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Beyond the success factors related to identifying pathogens quickly, there is the factor of defining actions<br />
that could conceivably be taken on commerical scale.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
We agree that the development of positive and negative controls and the determination of false positive<br />
and negative rates is a significant critical success factor. We are in the process of demonstrating the<br />
efficacy of our methods with known algal pathogens.<br />
We continue to develop appropriate collaborations and will focus on the development of collaborations<br />
with large scale producers. We have already interacted with and received letters supporting the<br />
importance and potential impact of our approach from Dr. Ami Ben-Amotz and from Sapphire Energy<br />
Inc, two of the leading and most respected algal biofuels developers in the world. Part of our strategy for<br />
developing these is an aggressive communications plan. We plan on presenting at national and<br />
international meetings early in the project to attract feedback from producers and to further advance the<br />
development of collaborations and other interactions.<br />
This project certainly focuses on the development of methods for the detection of biological agents to<br />
address the fact that current analytical methods are blind to broad classes of biological agents. However,<br />
this project does not, as the reviewer suggests, ignore the abiotic parameters that modulate the activity of<br />
biological agents or that are, in themselves the root causes of crashes. We will be collecting data on the<br />
physical and chemical parameters that are associated with the crash. We will use this data in addition to<br />
any putative biological agents, that may be present, to experimentally dissect and recapitulate the crash.<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
There should be a closer relationship with some pond operators.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
This project is early on but has high potential for excellent technical transfer.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
The goal of this project is to develop tools and methods that will be used to identify the etiological agents<br />
of pond crashes through the forensic analysis crash samples. Once identified, we will confirm by<br />
reproducing crashes in laboratory experiments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Collaborations planned are only related to sample provision. Can anything be gained from collaborating<br />
with others on the genetics or rapid detection methods?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Technology transfer partners were not identified.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
Too early to judge.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Presentations, posters , and being tied into other algae efforts at Sandia show strong tech transfer.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
The project team is in the process of developing stronger ties with algal pond operators. During the<br />
proposal process we obtained letters of support from Sapphire Energy inc and from Dr Ami Ben-Amotz<br />
(NBT, Seambiotic). We are seeking to build upon these initial interactions and develop others. We are<br />
also in the process of developing collaborations in the area metagenomic analysis and have partnered with<br />
a team that has submitted a letter of intent to the JGI community sequencing program on this topic.<br />
Sandia has strong internal experience and capabilities in the area of rapid detection that the project will<br />
leverage.<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project<br />
approach, scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
This is a potentially interesting project and approach. Successful implementation should be an aggressive<br />
goal for the investigators.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
This is an excellent project with important goals and well-defined milestones. Appropriate metrics (e.g.,<br />
speed of analysis, sensitivity of detection, efficiency of analysis, common pathogens being analyzed etc.)<br />
are under consideration in the development of molecular diptick technology.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Diagnosing the root causes of pond crashes at Sandia may provide some experimental results. The value<br />
of these results and conclusion would be limited by geographic and seasonal considerations. Meaning that<br />
microorganisms that feed on microalgae, the usual cause of pond crashes, would not be the same from<br />
location-to-location, season-to-season, or even year-to-year for the same location. Thus, the practical<br />
significance of the outcome from this effort would be limited. How could the PIs modify their effort to<br />
overcome this concern?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Potentially valuable project using novel methods. The growth of in-house cultures will probably be very<br />
important to making progress. Samples coming from various field sites may be too variable and<br />
infrequent to determine crash patterns.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
This appeared to be a high-tech approach with limited applicability to real-world algal production.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
I have conerns about the lack of positive controls in this project. Without those one can find exactly what<br />
he's looking for because of a lack of controls and a narrow focus on only one variable causing a crash.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
The potential value of the project is not clear due to lack of information on pond crash stastics and lack of<br />
definition of actions that can be taken on a commerical scale in response to pathogen identification.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
There are several published reports stating that predators can have severe deleterious effects on mass<br />
cultures. It has also been determined that viruses can lead to the demise of algal blooms in natural systems<br />
and that both bacterial and fungal pathogens can affect algal viability. It has also been acknowledged in<br />
the literature that, taken together, this this evidence strongly suggests that biological agents have the<br />
potential to severely impact algal production systems. It is also clear that the nature of these agents is<br />
poorly understood and there is a need for tools for the rapid identification and detection of these agents.<br />
This project will have two outcomes. The first is the development of a system for the rapid identification<br />
of unknown agents by high throughput sequencing. The second is the development of a set of assays to<br />
detect the etiological agents, once identified, at low concentration (a "dipstick" assay for example). The<br />
the proposed system for agent identification will not be affected by geography and seasonal variation. On<br />
the contrary, such an system would be universal and not dependent on any a priori knowledge of the<br />
etiological agents. Rapid agent identification will allow for the timely development of the simpler<br />
detection assays. An alternative strategy, that is under consideration, is the development of assays that<br />
detect general classes of threats.<br />
Whether an approach is high-tech or not is not relevant; a more salient question is whether the approach is<br />
cost effective. The same cost drivers that affect environmental and clinical sample analysis for biodefense<br />
are indeed relevant for algal production ponds. There is a need to minimize the cost of the initial analysis<br />
and the resultant assays. The high tech approach taken towards sample preparation and initial<br />
identification of pond crash agents will dramatically decrease analysis cost by minimizing reagent use and<br />
decreasing in the per sample costs for DNA sequence analysis. By increasing the signal content of the<br />
sample, we will decrease the amount of sequence data required to obtain a result, thus, increasing the<br />
number of samples that can be run in a lane of sequencing.<br />
It is clear to the research team that only a fraction of pond crashes will have a biological agent as a cause.<br />
It has always been the intent in the project to utilize un-crashed parallel ponds as a source of negative<br />
controls and known algal pathogens and predators as positive controls. Unfortunately the Principal<br />
Investigator did not communicate this effectively during the oral presentation. Once a putative etiological<br />
agent is identified, attempts will be made to isolate and propagate that agent and ultimately recapitulate<br />
the crash (fulfilling Koch's postulates). This process will have the effect of limiting false positives and<br />
identifying the abiotic parameters that contribute to the pond crashes. Metadata taken from the pond crash<br />
(temperature, pH, nutrient levels etc) will also be analyzed along with the biological signature to further<br />
understand the interplay between the agent and the environmental conditions. Identification and<br />
manipulation of the salient environmental parameters (with and without putative biological agents) with<br />
also facilitate the characterization of crashes that are due to solely to environmental stressors. However, it<br />
is clear that we can not, in the scope of this project, measure all environmental parameters, and the causes<br />
of some crashes will remain unknown.<br />
We agree that given the limitations in obtaining significant numbers of samples from crashed ponds, in<br />
house cultures will be important to making progress. We are modifying our approach to make more use of<br />
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this source of samples. We are also in the process of acquiring samples from closed photobioreactors and<br />
recycled ponds. We are in the process of developing collaborations with industrial partners that operate<br />
production systems.<br />
Project: 9.6.1.5 SRNL<br />
Title: Human Health Risk Assessment of Algal Production Systems: Toxins and Toxic Components,<br />
Harmful VOCs, Metal Speciation/Bioconcentration, and Pathogenic Microorganisms Associated with<br />
Large-Scale Algae Cultivation Systems<br />
Presenter: Chris Yeager<br />
Presentation Date: Friday, April 08, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 3.14 0.64 7<br />
Progress 3.43 1.05 7<br />
Relevance 3.71 0.70 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 3.14 0.64 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The Approach lacks enough definition to support the importance of this program. If the issues are fully<br />
encompassing, how does the plan address them? What are the measures that should be employed, and<br />
how does the experimental plan address them? I see Phase 1 , but how do we decide Phase 2 and<br />
especially 3? The importance of the topic demands the best in terms of justification and explanation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 2<br />
This project includes collaboration between SRNL and TAMU-CC with the goal of examining toxins and<br />
toxic algae that develop in algal biofuels' raceways and ponds. The potential for algae causing these<br />
problems to be introduced regularly with commercial-scale culture of defined feedstocks appears<br />
unrealistic. Appropriate background experience in this area and strong knowledge of the rich literature on<br />
HABs was not evident from the presentation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Multi-dimensional; complementary aspects of lab and field work would combine geochemistry and<br />
biology. Overall objective is to provide experimental data for use in a comprehensive risk assessment of<br />
algae-based biofuel production systems on human health<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See other comments<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The goal of the research is to assess health risk associated with large scale algal cultivation and the focus<br />
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is on toxin production, VOC production, and human pathogens. The approach is sound but the toxin<br />
portion appears to have broad overlap with an existing knowledge base and research conducted at CDC<br />
and Woods Hole.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 3<br />
One should start with a broad knowledge of pre-existing information. The CDC and the Centers for<br />
Oceans and Human Health have a lot of data already on this subject. This project should be linked with<br />
those groups.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Because the geography, production system, strain, and mode of operation are not identified for<br />
commerical production, it appears that field measurements are pre-mature.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
While the structure of experiments can be outlined in advance (e.g. generalized cultivation processes,<br />
analytical screening methods) the full extent of experimentation will not be clear until Phase I, is at least,<br />
underway. It is our contention that these threats do exist – as per our preliminary findings. We believe<br />
that field sampling at active sites is the best way to perform the initial scoping studies required to evaluate<br />
if toxic metals, toxins, VOC’s and pathogens are of concern in these systems, and to best design the<br />
experiments to address the objectives of Phase II and Phase III. We will develop several risk scenarios<br />
that will outline how potential toxic exposures may occur to workers or consumers. A framework for a<br />
formal risk assessment will be developed and recommendations for further work will be made. The is a<br />
four-way collaboration: SRNL, PI Chris Yeager (project management, algae growth for Phase II,<br />
pathogen and toxin gene detection), NOAA, PI Peter Moeller (toxicity testing and toxin identification),<br />
Texas A&M, PI Paul Zimba (VOC analysis and outdoor growth experiments for Phase III), LANL, PI<br />
Jeri Sullivan (metal accumulation/cycling, toxicity) and Babetta Marrone (human cell toxicity). Dr.<br />
Yeager has 15+ years of experience using molecular techniques to detect microorganisms, including<br />
pathogens, in environmental samples. The number and type of pathogens that we will target obviously<br />
depends on the sample source (marine salt water, brackish inland water, wastewater, etc.) and location.<br />
We have spent considerable time determining which pathogens may be prevalent in different water<br />
sources and in different parts of the country. The list shown at the program review was simply a “working<br />
list”; different species/genes will be targeted depending on the sample source. The pairing of biology and<br />
water chemistry is one of the underlying strengths of this project. In terms of algae production systems for<br />
biofuels, very large scale, open air culturing will enable a number of environmental factors to act as<br />
modifiers (temperature flux, sunlight, airborne particulates, bacteria, fungal contamination, etc.) of water<br />
chemistry, and thus toxin production or the survivability of pathogens. Peter Moeller is the PI for the<br />
toxin work and is a PI at one of NOAA's Centers of Excellence in Oceans and Human Health<br />
(http://oceansandhumanhealth.noaa.gov/centers/). He was NOAA's scientist of the year in 2009 with a<br />
long history of work on algal toxins. Paul Zimba, Director of the Center for Coastal Studies at Texas<br />
A&M, is the lead for VOC characterization and has studied volatile metabolites produced by algae, fungi,<br />
and bacteria in aquaculture systems (http://ddr.nal.usda.gov/bitstream/10113/17447/1/IND44081503.pdf),<br />
has extensive experience with algal toxins. See comments above for Yeager’s credentials. This is a<br />
TEAM effort and the SRNL/NOAA/Texas A&M team formed (and was pursuing funding) before the call<br />
for this DOE program was released. Yeager is the lead-PI for this particular project because it was funded<br />
through a DOE National Lab call; however, all PIs are actively involved in the project. LANL was added<br />
to the mix because of their expertise with metals and human toxicity and their involvement with the<br />
National Alliance for Advanced Biofuels and Bioproducts (NAABB). Risk identification and avoidance is<br />
best and most economically performed at the beginning of a process, rather than after the fact. Analysis of<br />
field measurements is an essential element of our proposal. It is the variable geography, production<br />
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system designs and modes of operation that propagate the effective number of environmental cues, that<br />
are so often responsible for toxin production and pathogen survivability. We intend that experiments in<br />
Phase II and III help us better define culture and environmental variables that impact toxin and VOC<br />
production, the presence of pathogens, and heavy metal accumulation<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has<br />
made progress in its objectives and stated project management plan<br />
has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The project has been operational for limited time.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 1<br />
The project started in September 2010 and is 10% complete. The lack of background knowledge of<br />
feedstock algae limits progress.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
PIs are actively conscripting sites for sampling and collecting data. Method development in the lab is<br />
progressing well, analytical data being analyzed<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 4<br />
New project; little basis for evaluation. Even weighting of scores in the average overall score require a<br />
low score here.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Progress is limited because the project began in Sept 2010.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 3<br />
But its a new project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Good progress in identifying potential risks. Getting meaningful information to quantify and mitigate<br />
these risk appears to be very problematic.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
We are fully aware of the common feedstock algae that are currently being investigated, but many<br />
companies are using variant strains, very novel organisms, or different phyla (cyanobacteria), and this<br />
information is not something that is intended for the public domain. Furthermore, it is not clear that the<br />
common feedstock strains are not capable of producing toxins. We have performed an exhaustive<br />
literature search and the team’s collective knowledge forms a very strong basis from which to proceed.<br />
It is beyond the scope of the project to completely quantify and mitigate the potential risks, but rather to<br />
provide the preliminary data required to enable assessment. This is the main thrust of our proposal. We<br />
have identified potential risks long before this project was funded, and there is a high likelihood that<br />
characterization of this risk will require novel approaches. Each problem (novel toxin isolation,<br />
purification and structural characterization; detection and quantification of pathogens in a novel<br />
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environment) has its own set of needs. We will develop analytical measuring tools such as MS, NMR,<br />
LC, DNA extraction techniques, Q-PCR, etc. to quantify these risks. Mitigation is very dependent on the<br />
threat. It is important to understand that in chemistry structure and function are intimately associated. One<br />
typically cannot mitigate toxicity until the compound responsible is characterized, detectible, and capable<br />
of being monitored. These are the products we are pursuing.<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The relevance is quite High. I believe it could be linked in somewhat better fashion to the experimental<br />
approaches and experimental outcomes.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The potential for "rogue" facilities to develop the types of problems framed in the report is high, but this<br />
seems less so for the funded DoE projects. More importantly, other DoE projects presenting at this<br />
meeting had excellent command of pathogenic problems and were developing appropriate technology to<br />
detect them. It is important to be aware of the large literature, facilities, and resources available on<br />
harmful algae and the excellent and long-standing analytical techniques for their detection.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Address questions of potential risk early rather than late; provide data for future risk assessment. This<br />
project supports the goals of the Algae Platform and OBP Program by: Addressing the social<br />
sustainability of algae biofuel production Understanding the potential negative human health impacts of<br />
algae biofuel production—from biomass production through harvesting<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
It's important to look ahead to potential problems, but the state of algae biofuels development is so<br />
preliminary at this point, not much detail is warranted on human health effects. The inorganic water<br />
contaminants issues (eg, metals) would be good to assess in order to provide constraints to the current<br />
resource assessment projects. Potential use of pesticides/herbicides, as promoted by some groups, would<br />
be another topic to investigate to provide them with guidelines.<br />
The table listing pathogens and toxin producers is very excessive. Hopefully, this is showing a list of<br />
organisms standard to the the method (standard primers). Making special effort for most of the organisms<br />
listed (Slide 6) would be wasted effort because they would be no more likely to appear in algae ponds<br />
than other water bodies.<br />
This project should be a risk assessment desk study. Follow-up lab/field studies would expand knowledge<br />
in the areas with the most risk.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Risk assessments are certainly relevant to overall program goals. However, it is unclear whether the<br />
results of this project will substantially contribute to the knowledge base.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
It is relevent but does it duplicate ongoing work in other organizations and why is the DOE funding toxin<br />
work?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
A conceptual risk survey is important, but trying to measure and mitigate risks does not appear to be<br />
possible at the current state of technology development.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
The comments above do not apply to novel toxins or to “novel toxin generation’ by previously ‘benign’<br />
species. I (Moeller) have worked in the HAB arena for over 20 years and I can assure you that there is<br />
little to no literature out there on toxins people simply do not know about. To apply current understanding<br />
of STX, PbTX, DA and/or microcystin to these systems is untenable. These projects require new<br />
approaches, must develop new detection and monitoring tools and just as importantly, but be reassessed<br />
routinely for even more “novel toxin generation”.<br />
We are attempting to obtain algae samples from a cross-cutting representation of current growers, not just<br />
DOE-funded projects.<br />
All other DOE projects investigating “pathogens” are concerned with algal pathogens (i.e. algal viruses,<br />
rotifers, etc.), not human pathogens. In light of the significant investments that DOE is making in algal<br />
biofuels R&D and commercialization, it is imperative for DOE to take a proactive approach to understand<br />
the risks. This includes the safety of products and co-products to consumers, as well as occupational<br />
hazards. If no early action is performed, responses after the fact are likely to be expensive and reflect<br />
negatively on the biofuel production community. We agree that risks associated with the application of<br />
pesticides/herbicides to algal growth systems should be assessed, but are beyond the scope of this project.<br />
We have spent considerable time determining which pathogens may be prevalent in different water<br />
sources and in different areas. The list shown at the program review was simply a “working list”;<br />
different species/genes will be targeted depending on the sample source. We are adapting pre-existing<br />
PCR methods into a PCR array to enumerate pathogens and toxin genes in algae samples. We plan to<br />
collaborate with Todd Lane, Sandia (also funded through this program) to perform deep sequence<br />
analysis on select samples. Between the team’s collective experience and an exhaustive literature search<br />
we have already conducted the “desk study”. The end result of that exercise convinced us that the<br />
potential for a human health risk is present in algae ponds. The initial scoping study (Phase I) is designed<br />
to provide the baseline data necessary to begin to carry out experiments (Phase II and Phase III) to<br />
characterize those risks. This exploratory project aims to fill in some of the baseline information needed<br />
to enable any level of risk assessment. It is our hope that the information gleaned from this project can be<br />
used by professionals from other agencies (EPA, CDC, NOAA, etc.) to perform a proper risk assessment<br />
(if warranted). Most of the toxin work will be performed at NOAA; however, this project does not an<br />
overlap with existing HAB research. An algal production pond and natural waters are VERY different<br />
systems. Nor does it overlap with work performed by the CDC. If we find strong evidence for the<br />
sustained presence of a human pathogen in any of the production system samples, we plan to contact the<br />
CDC and offer sample material for further analysis. One of the PIs (Zimba) has extensive experience<br />
working with the aquaculture industry and views this project as extremely relevant and unique. During<br />
the course of this project, we intend to collaborate closely with at least one algae production system using<br />
wastewater (we are currently talking with Patrick Hatcher, also funded through this program, of Old<br />
Dominion University). We can certainly learn much and apply existing data, techniques, etc. from the<br />
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wastewater. Yes, it is impossible to mitigate uncharacterized risks. This is the main thrust of the proposal.<br />
With new toxins/toxicity or the presence of human pathogens in novel environments, new approaches to<br />
identify the risk and detect the culprit must be carried out first. We will develop analytical measuring<br />
tools such as MS, NMR, LC, Q-PCR, etc. to achieve these goals. These tools, or adaptation of these tools,<br />
will represent a key asset to performing more formal risk assessments.<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The CSFs are the same as the other presentation on this Project. See the same comments. I do not think<br />
these adequately address the success of the project, which is of high significance overall, but requires<br />
some real assessment of what success means in the human health assessment. Input from EPA would be<br />
expected to be important.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 2<br />
The project appears unaware of the NOAA Oceans and Human Health Centers, as well as the vast<br />
experience of the FDA and CDC in the stated area of research of the project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
There is a need to establish the strains of algae to be investigated and justify the selection. Are the strains<br />
to be investigated the ones that would be used for biofuels production? If not, the work would find no<br />
application.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See other comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Critical success factors were identified but the plans to address a major obstacle (relevance of assessment<br />
results) seem inadequate.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 3<br />
No real information was given as to the pre-existing knowledge of toxins to screen for, or as to the reason<br />
behind the screens chosen. This part of lacking.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
It appears that better definiton of commercial algae biofuel produciton systems is a critical success factor<br />
that cannot be addressed in the timeframe of this project.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
As an OHH PI (Moeller), I can assure the reviewer that there is no novel toxin work being carried out in<br />
NOAA, and apart from myself I do not believe there has been within NOAA. I mentioned earlier, each<br />
new toxin/toxic threat poses its own scientific problems. Essentially they must be treated from scratch.<br />
The efforts of the FDA, CDC and NOAA have focused on 4-5 toxins and have essentially stopped there.<br />
The vast amount of literature on these toxins only highlights the paucity of understanding algal toxin<br />
production, proliferation etc. Even these toxins (STX, PbTX, DA, CTX, Microcystins) are quite different<br />
from each other and have very little cross over in terms of scientific dealings. And these are known!<br />
Unknown toxins pose all new issues that the current literature simply does not deal with. I work with<br />
EPA, FDA, and USDA and of course within NOAA. On this topic I believe I am an expert. In phase I we<br />
will be collecting samples from 8-10 algae producers currently growing strains for biofuel production. We<br />
will also be working with several of the model organisms selected for the NAABB project<br />
(Nannochloropsis salina 1776 and Chlorella vulgaris) in Phase II and III (and other strains depending on<br />
the results of Phase I). The knowledge base concerning human health risks and algae production systems<br />
is minimal. In fact, the knowledge base is almost non-existent (at least in the public realm) for the algae<br />
currently under investigation for biofuel production. Non-toxic lab strains will inevitably behave quite<br />
differently under large scale, open culture. The body of literature regarding micro-algae culture (even in<br />
the lab) will attest to this. Pathogens are well-known to inhabit cooling towers (often full of algae), why<br />
not algae production ponds? No one has looked. This exploratory project aims to fill in some of the<br />
baseline information needed to enable any level of risk assessment. It is our hope that the information<br />
gleaned from this project can be used by professionals from other agencies (EPA, CDC, NOAA, etc.) to<br />
perform a proper risk assessment (if warranted). We are screening for known toxins (e.g. STX, PbTX,<br />
DA, CTX, Microcystins) and will pick them up quickly if they exist. However, unknown toxins prescribe<br />
a whole new set of problems, requiring new scientific methodology. Major products of this research<br />
include detection and monitoring tools developed in the course of toxin characterization. It is the first step<br />
in any novel toxin research. The second point made by the reviewer is very poignant. Our cytotoxicity<br />
assays are based primarily on the N2A and GH4C1 mammalian assays. These assays have been adopted<br />
in Moeller’s lab for novel toxin screening because, to date, they provide positive assessments for all<br />
known toxins. Irrespective of mode of action (Na+ antagonism/protagonism, Ca2+ antagonism<br />
/protagonism, phosphatase inhibition, etc) all give positive responses. After saying this, this PI agrees that<br />
our work is only as good as the assays we employ. To this end, when we observe cytotoxicity (live<br />
models) that does not set off the two aforementioned assays, we pursue other assays available to us<br />
through the Medical University of SC. Information gained from this research will be used to determine<br />
the likelihood that algae biofuel production systems (as a whole) pose a risk to human health. We intend<br />
that the tools and information obtained from this project will be used (if necessary) to help evaluate risks<br />
and form the basis for formal risk assessments in the future – once commercial algae biofuel production<br />
systems are better defined.<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
This project is important yet there is little mention of how the results will be applied or shared, or what<br />
the value is. There should be interaction with EPA, but none is mentioned.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
The potential for tech transfer from this project may be weak.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Results will point to framework for formal risk assessment process, including recommendations for path<br />
forward<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Collaborators are involved which is good.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Technology transfer efforts (outside of the risk assessment itself) were not adequately addressed.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
Too early to comment but the PI should partner with major efforts and groups.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Unless or until the algae biofuel technology comes together, risk assesment will not be ready for external<br />
communication.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
It is our hope that the information gleaned from this project can be used by professionals from other<br />
agencies (EPA, CDC, NOAA, etc.) to perform a full-scale risk assessment (if warranted). Currently DOE<br />
and NOAA are directly involved in the project and CDC will be contacted if we find evidence for<br />
persistent populations of pathogens. EPA involvement is most likely to occur if significant hazards are<br />
identified, but are not likely to be adequately addressed by federal safety regulations. Beyond<br />
information, publications, and the final report that we will produce, technologies (molecular analysis,<br />
toxin screening, toxicity assays, etc.) that are developed during this project are expected to facilitate risk<br />
assessment data collection efforts at individual facilities in the future (if warranted) and to guide the<br />
development of next generation techniques. For example, techniques to extract and analyze nucleic acids<br />
from algae samples in order to analyze all members of the microbial community will be made available.<br />
Little to no toxicity data (at least in the public realm) is known for many of the algae slated for biofuel<br />
production. In addition, even where such data does exist, the situation can and likely will change in the<br />
future for the reasons stated earlier. Major products of this research will be the technology transfer. For<br />
instance, as new toxins (or known ones from new matrices) are identified, LC, LC/MS, NMR, selective<br />
bioassays etc. methodology will be developed and subsequently adapted for toxin detection, monitoring<br />
and so forth. Even preliminary mitigation efforts can be attempted by monitoring metal speciation where<br />
this issue is involved in toxin production. Potential for tech transfer is huge and a very real product of this<br />
research.<br />
We believe our team constitutes a major group in the field. We are currently collaborating with other PIs<br />
funded through this program (Todd Lane, Sandia). CDC will be contacted if we find strong evidence for<br />
the sustained presence of a human pathogen in any of the production system samples that are examined.<br />
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We will be laying the groundwork to enable a formal risk assessment, which will indeed require multiple<br />
agencies and much more work.<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project<br />
approach, scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
This Project is important, and credit should be given for addressing it earlier than later. But the<br />
importance is not supported by the approaches and plans expressed. They need to be detailed and wellthought<br />
through to deliver impactful data. Input from other agencies is highly desirable.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
The expertise of the PIs may not fit the goals of the project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
The entirety of this project appears to be the same as that by Enid (Jeri) Sullivan. Is the Algal Biomass<br />
Program funding the same project twice? Methods to be employed include DNA extraction and PCR<br />
array methodology for detection and quantification of pathogenic and toxin producing microorganisms.<br />
More information is needed to permit assessment of the applicability of this approach for the purposes of<br />
the program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See other comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
The presentation failed to convince me of the value of this project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
The project starts in the absence of proper incorporation of existing information. Without question the<br />
Centers of Oceans and Human Health have a plethora of information on this, as does the CDC.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Maybe more could be learned from surveying risks in existing systems such as wastewater treatment or<br />
aquaculture, then trying to define and measure risks for an unknown system.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
This project is of poor quality due to the mismatched expertise of the PIs … See comments under<br />
approach and progress concerning the teams expertise. This project and Jeri’s are a single collaborative<br />
project. We each (SRNL and LANL) receive ~$400,000 per year for two years, but the project is<br />
coordinated by Sullivan and Yeager as a single project. Of the amount sent to SRNL, roughly 1/3 funds<br />
the NOAA effort and 1/3 funds the Texas A&M effort. The presentation failed to convince me of the<br />
value of this project. The PI was under the impression that the reviewers had access to the project<br />
proposals. Thus, most of the presentation was aimed at providing a VERY cursory review of the project<br />
and highlighting results to date and hurdles that we have encountered. This is a new research area that<br />
covers a lot of ground; we understand that it would be difficult to evaluate without access to the proposal.<br />
We have attached project overview/justification and Project Approach Summaries to assist further review<br />
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of the project. Without question the Centers of Oceans and Human Health have a plethora of<br />
information… No they don’t. Ironically, they come to us (NOAA) for what little there is on the new toxin<br />
producers and there is precious little out there.<br />
Must coordinate with the Centers of Oceans and Human Health. Coordination is already underway.<br />
However as pointed out earlier, if the DOE is to fund biofuel research, they are also responsible for the<br />
risk assessment.<br />
Why look at microalgae samples, as opposed to the water column. Very good question. We are looking at<br />
both. Cell mass and the culture medium (water) are matched during the sampling process. Both are<br />
extracted in identical fashion and worked up extensively.<br />
Very little known? Very little is known about the potential human health risks associated with algae<br />
production systems. Apart from Moeller’s lab there is no ongoing effort within NOAA to address novel<br />
toxins or toxicity. There is virtually no information on the topic that is germane to the biofuel issues.<br />
Not OK to just operate on the possibility that its there… We believe there is good reason to perform the<br />
stated research based on the existing body of knowledge and our collective experience. But the truth of<br />
the matter is – we don’t know what we will find. Isn’t that why we perform research? One might also<br />
argue that it is critical to operate on the possibility that it is there. For example, the literature that does<br />
exist provides many examples of toxicity being turned on/off for reasons few if any understand. The body<br />
of knowledge out there is incorporated in the PI’s experience in this realm. Novel toxins have no<br />
literature on them by default. Neither does their production, why they are produced, how they operate<br />
(mode of action), production cues, stability etc. – all unknown. Maybe more could be learned from<br />
surveying risks in existing systems such as wastewater treatment or aquaculture…. Good point. Algae<br />
ponds are distinctly different from wastewater systems and aquaculture. Paul Zimba has extensive<br />
experience working with the aquaculture industry and views this project as extremely relevant and<br />
unique. During the course of this project, we intend to collaborate closely with at least one algae<br />
production system using wastewater and will engage with wastewater professionals involved (we are<br />
currently talking with Patrick Hatcher, also funded through this program, of Old Dominion University<br />
concerning a collaboration in this regard with Hopewell's Regional Wastewater Treatment Plant). We are<br />
also planning to contact the City of Sunnyvale Wastewater Treatment Plant, which uses algae in its<br />
secondary treatment stage. We can certainly learn much and apply existing data, techniques, etc. from the<br />
wastewater field. It is our hope that the information gleaned from this project can be used by<br />
professionals from other agencies (EPA, CDC, NOAA, etc.) to perform a proper risk assessment (if<br />
warranted).<br />
Project: 9.6.1.7 Los Alamos National Laboratory<br />
Title: Human Health Risk Assessment of Algal Production Systems: Toxins and Toxic Components,<br />
Harmful VOCs, Metal Speciation/Bioconcentration, and Pathogenic Microorganisms Associated with<br />
Large-Scale Algae Cultivation-LANL WBS#9.6.1.7<br />
Presenter: Enid (Jeri) Sullivan<br />
Presentation Date: Friday, April 08, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 2.71 1.03 7<br />
Progress 3.43 0.73 7<br />
Relevance 3.00 1.07 7<br />
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Critical Success Factors 2.71 1.28 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The Approach is not really well-defined. The overall OBJECTIVES are outlined, and agreeable. There<br />
are 3 Phases in the Overview, but how the first will be addressed, and how decisions are to be made as to<br />
value in Phases 2 and 3, are not established. This important project would be helped with some thoughtful<br />
experimental planning. This should also extend to the dissemination of the results and especially their<br />
meaning.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 2<br />
This project aims to look at the potential for algal biofuels feedstock in ponds to become contaminated<br />
and toxic (e.g., with heavy metals, etc.). The presenter's concerns about confidentiality related to<br />
obtaining test samples from biofuels' research projects/facilities may be higher than justified. There is<br />
some concern about the inappropriate application of over-sophisticated technology in this project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Same as the project by Yeager.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 1<br />
Slide 8 shows exposure of algae to 1-100 mg/L Cu followed by XANES analysis. What is the purpose of<br />
exposing algae to a well-known algae toxicant at extraordinarily high (1 mg/L) concentrations? I suspect<br />
these concentrations were used because XANES requires high concentrations for detection. What is the<br />
point of making measurements from single cells, rather than a bulk sample of biomass. This SSRL study<br />
does not seem to have any value. In addition, the cell toxicity work is not interesting until it is established<br />
that any important human exposure to algae toxins would occur. Of course the response is "How will we<br />
know the concentrations if we don't measure them?" However, start with the prevalence of toxinproducing<br />
species (expect trace to none based on current commercial algae production) and assess the<br />
potential routes of human exposure (workers touching culture water or blowdown water? -- risk is also<br />
minimal). Overall risk is negligible. The project proponents need to counter this type of opinion to justify<br />
the project. Study of media effects on algae, not humans, is a more pressing topic for researchers with<br />
these advanced skills and expertise.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 2<br />
The objective of the project is to perform a risk assessment for heavy metal and cell toxicity appropriate<br />
for large-scale algal ponds. The presentation completely failed to convince me that the approach was<br />
appropriate.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Very little to no justification was given as to the criteria for toxicity, nor the cells lines used. TAs the<br />
whole project hinges on these decisions why was the project started in the absence of major groups that<br />
study toxiity (CDC, Centers for Ocean and Human Health)?<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Because the geography, prodcution system, strain, and mode of operatin are not identified for commerical<br />
production, it appears that filed measurements are pre-mature.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
We appreciate the opportunity to respond to these questions. The approach was not clear partially because<br />
the project was separated into two different presentations. We have created a clarifying “Project<br />
Approach” document that is available in Yeager’s comment responses and upon request. The<br />
presentations by Sullivan and Yeager are a single project with linkages between metals, metal-containing<br />
organic toxins, human cell toxicities, and VOC production. The approach to experimental planning,<br />
which will begin with Phase II, will partially depend upon observations made in Phase I. We do not<br />
expect to find toxic concentrations of metals, but we will be looking for potential interactions between<br />
metal cofactors, algae, and pathogens that may lead to toxicity. Metals and pathogens found in field<br />
location samples will guide three types of experiments. First, the form (physical and speciation) and<br />
subsequent, cumulative uptake of metals by algae will be evaluated using the geochemical data and<br />
analysis of the algae itself. We intend to downselect metals of interest based on solution concentrations<br />
and their potential as metal cofactors in metal-containing organic toxins, as well as projected solution<br />
concentrations from systems under evaporation. Concentration, oxidation state and speciation of potential<br />
metal cofactors in toxin production will be evaluated in conjuction with Peter Moeller and his research<br />
group. Regarding human cell toxicity testing, algae is being grown in unprecedented large quantities for<br />
biofuel production. This presents several exposure unknowns for workers that are handling and<br />
processing algae on a daily basis. This project aims to address the potential occupational health hazards to<br />
workers in the algal biofuel industry. Exposure may come from direct dermal contact, or from inhalation<br />
of bioaerosols during cultivation, harvesting, or processing concentrated algae for extraction of lipids. In<br />
addition, algae are well known to accumulate metals, and may act as a vehicle for metal toxicity through<br />
these same routes. A human cell model system (HepG2 cells) was selected because it is commonly used<br />
for investigating unknown toxicity, and it is an epithelial cell type that is relevant to dermal exposure. A<br />
large panel of response end-points is being evaluated representing acute and chronic immune response,<br />
mitochondrial activity, and inflammation, among others Several of the most consistently responding endpoints<br />
will be down-selected and included in a standardized screening panel. Initially, we are testing<br />
laboratory-grown algal species that are candidates for biofuel production, beginning with<br />
Nannochloropsis salina. We will advance to samples collected at algal pond test-sites as these samples<br />
become available. In the case of the sampled sites, we will compare the responses to the responses in the<br />
“control” laboratory sites in order to distinguish responses due to the algae itself, from responses due to<br />
metal or bacterial contaminants in the industrial algal samples. With regard to the contaminants, at<br />
LANL, we are focusing primarily on identifying whether metal accumulation has a role on human cell<br />
toxicity. We are contacting as many commercial facilities as possible; however, the industry is in its<br />
infancy. We note that we rely very much on their willingness to collaborate on what can be a potentially<br />
sensitive topic. We do not believe that this is too early to assess potential hazards, particularly because<br />
growth facilities have not reached a stage of consistency of operations, nor do they exist in singular<br />
environments. The DOE has a strong obligation, as well, to support human health safety in the research<br />
operations that it has funded. Large-scale facilities that we are working with include those run by our co-<br />
PI Paul Zimba at Texas A&M, Corpus Christi, and the Texas Agrilife Station at Pecos (also a collaborator<br />
with LANL under the NAABB program).<br />
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2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has<br />
made progress in its objectives and stated project management plan<br />
has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The project has only been operational for a short time.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 3<br />
This project began in September 2010, and the background knowledge of the PI should be<br />
strengthened(e.g., in literature review and consideration of appropriate and economical techniques for<br />
accomplishing goals).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Same as the project by Yeager.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 2<br />
New project. No need to assess.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Progress is very limited because the project began in September 2010.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Results are very preliminary with only a few animal cell culture experiments over 48 hours or so.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Good progress in identifying potential risks. Getting meaningful information to quantify and mitigate<br />
these risk appears very problematic.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
We have conducted an extensive literature review that is ongoing in the fields of biogeochemistry of<br />
algae, aqueous geochemistry in saline waters, algal metals uptake, and impacts of metals on algal toxin<br />
production. A review of the literature was not expected to be a part of this review process, however, we<br />
are happy to provide this information if requested. We also note the work of our co-PI Moeller (et al.)<br />
regarding toxicology and the interface of metals and toxin production in algae [7, 8]. We also note that<br />
the very deep cold snap in January, February, and March across all parts of the country caused many<br />
producers to temporarily suspend operations; those that continued were found to have cultures<br />
unacceptable for sampling at that time (dead algae or very low densities). We are working hard to catch<br />
up with our producers to obtain samples of algae and water now that the weather is more amenable. We<br />
appreciate the reviewer’s positive comment. We would like to note that this project is intended as an early<br />
screening of potential risks, not a full risk assessment. Please also view Yeager’s comment responses, as<br />
well. We believe that it is appropriate for DOE to initiate human health effects research aligned with its<br />
new focus on algal biofuels. This assessment is intended as an initial scoping study and, as such, would<br />
not be handled by either the CDC or Departments of Public Health at this level. If significant hazards<br />
(e.g., a significant pathogen) are found, the CDC will be notified. DOE has a long tradition of sponsoring<br />
human health effects research related to special DOE activities, such as nuclear weapons work. Babetta<br />
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Marrone (the co-investigator leading the human cell toxicity testing at LANL) conducted research on<br />
human health effects from beryllium exposure, as well as low dose radiation exposure. Both projects were<br />
funded by DOE. If our research indicates that there are health concerns, then we predict that NIH (most<br />
likely the National Institute for Environmental Health Sciences) would sponsor additional research, and<br />
that EPA would develop regulations governing worker exposure limits. The role of CDC would be to<br />
develop and disseminate health information and safety guidelines to workers in the algal industry,<br />
physicians, and the public. We believe that the DOE is performing a service to both state and federal<br />
health and regulatory agencies by being proactive in attempting to identify hazards that could be<br />
associated with their funded research projects, in collaboration with researchers who have considerable<br />
expertise in their fields. For example, Peter Moeller, our co-PI at NOAA, is an expert in algal toxicity,<br />
while many of the sites to be sampled are a part of the NAABB consortium. The deliverable of this<br />
project will be a report that describes our findings, and makes recommendations for next steps such as<br />
further research and cross-agency workshops to peer review our findings, and a possible framework for a<br />
risk assessment study of health impact from occupational exposure to algae in the context of the algal<br />
biofuels industry. Development of an actual risk assessment would most likely be a cross-agency activity,<br />
involving industrial hygienists, health professionals, industry, and scientists. (see section 6 below for<br />
references)<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The overall topic of Health Risk Assessment is highly relevant. The effects should be evaluated early on<br />
as well. The key is in selecting the right assessment techniques and criteria should be. The toxicolgy<br />
choices need to be explained as to the meanings of any outcomes. The selection of metals concentration is<br />
a good choice, but to re-study aqueous metal species chemistry is not worth doing. This information is<br />
well known already. To use XANES because there is an open available window on the beam line is<br />
unjustified. Give the slot to someone who really needs the time in the problem they are working on.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 2<br />
Much is already known about the degree to which proposed feedstock algae accumulate<br />
materials/elements that are relevant to biofuels' facilities. New knowledge that will be helpful to biofuels'<br />
development requires close work with personnel on projects that are close to or at commercial scale.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Same as the project by Yeager.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 2<br />
The project objectives are to identify potential human health risks (toxin and VOC production,<br />
human/mammalian cell toxicity, pathogens, metal accumulation/toxicity). What is the basis for thinking<br />
that any of these pose enough risk to warrant this sampling and algae production project? The study of<br />
culture media chemistry is worthwhile, but mostly from the standpoint of understanding trace nutrient<br />
availability and toxicity to algae. The level of risk to human health needs to be assessed in a desk study<br />
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(as mentioned in the companion SRNL review) before extensive sampling and culturing of algae is<br />
justified.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 2<br />
Appropriate risk assessments will certainly contribute to the platform and program goals. However, the<br />
presentation failed to explain why a heavy metal risk assessment and mammalian cell toxicity assessment<br />
(and these particular methodologies) were relevant.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 3<br />
I can see why one is worried about toxicity for operators, but why not just work through the CDC or any<br />
number of large Departments of Public Health?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 5<br />
A conceptual risk survey is important, but trying to measure and mitigate risks does not appear to be<br />
possible at the current state of technology development.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
We appreciate the reviewer’s comment on the relevancy of the topic, and the need for early evaluation.<br />
We note that the beam time was awarded specifically to our student as a result of their successful<br />
proposal, and is an important part of their scientific educational experience. XANES Spectroscopy in this<br />
phase of the project was performed as a scoping exercise to determine its suitability in studying location,<br />
oxidation state, and presence of metal complexes in NS 1776 throughout a laboratory cultivation scenario<br />
using copper as a representative metal. XANES is used in toxicology as a method of risk assessment and<br />
forensic study of heavy metal toxicity and the presence of metal co-factors in a variety of systems<br />
(aqueous, soil, plant, and atmospheric particulates) [1-7]. It is commonly used as a complementary<br />
technique to methods like UV-vis, ICP-MS and Atomic Absorption Spectroscopy, all of which require<br />
destructive preparation. Most of these methods do not distinguish between oxidation state or different<br />
complexes of the same oxidation state, both of which are integral to toxicological studies [4]. Single cells<br />
are of interest because we wish to determine the interactions of metals with algae and not contaminating<br />
species. Cu was used as a test case specifically because it can speciate depending upon uptake and<br />
sorption conditions. Cu qualities in algal systems are well studied. The .1 to 10 mg/L Cu concentrations<br />
are representative of possible concentration ranges (including daily evaporation) in waters under<br />
consideration for algae cultivation. The study focused on the spatial distribution of copper, which can be<br />
absorbed internally by algae and/or adsorbed or precipitated on the cell wall. The location, oxidation state<br />
and speciation will affect bioavailability and toxicity effects depending on the mode of uptake<br />
(absorption, ingestion, and/or inhalation). Temporal measurements (1-4 days) were used to study the<br />
evolution of metal species throughout a growth cycle. For instance, in biological systems the location,<br />
oxidation state and speciation can be altered or transformed over time; a metal that is bioavailable or toxic<br />
initially may evolve into a harmless species or vice versa [5]. This is not a new field of toxicology; the<br />
application of known assessment and toxicological methods to these systems that have yet to be<br />
investigated in this manner is appropriate. Algae are known to strongly uptake and accumulate metals.<br />
When brackish and saline waters are used for cultivation, along with uncharacterized sources of fertilizer<br />
and mixed nutrient solutions, there is a possibility that higher than expected toxic constituents may build<br />
up in the system (water, algae, or sediments). One example is the elevated presence of arsenic in various<br />
forms in western ground waters [9]. Waters that are not used for human consumption may not be<br />
adequately characterized prior to use in algal cultivation. Understanding human cell responses by both<br />
chronic and acute exposure is of interest here; the possibility of critical concentrations of a metal or<br />
metalloid triggering a toxic reaction by the algae should be assessed. Other studies (including NAABB)<br />
have allocated extensive resources to nutrient availability and toxicity to algae, including work by<br />
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Sullivan and others at LANL now underway. A proactive sampling campaign is appropriate to allay<br />
concerns that have already been raised by both growers and the public, and to allow DOE to identifying<br />
potential risks and issues that may arise during funded research projects. (see section 6 below for<br />
references)<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
I would like to see the CSFs include tthe critical planning of this key program, and the dissemination and<br />
application strategy. Where is the involvement of the EPA which will have the regulatory responsibility?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 2<br />
A better understanding of biofuels' raceways /ponds would be helpful. Technology applied must be<br />
directed at useful application (e.g., most facilities would be close enough to a university to use X-ray<br />
microanalysis at a scanning electron microscope or just simple analytical chemistry (e.g., flame<br />
spectroscopy) for questions posed here; the investigators instead have used the SLACK facilities at<br />
Stanford.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Same as the project by Yeager.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 1<br />
See other comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Critical success factors were identified.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 1<br />
The criteria for toxicity and cell lines used were very poorly defined.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
It appears that bettter definiton of commericla algae biofuel produciton systems is a critical success factor<br />
that cannot be addressed in the timeframe of this project.<br />
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Presenter Response<br />
4. Critical Success Factors Results of the study will be made public through literature publication and<br />
reporting to the DOE. We expect that any indication of relevant system risks may then be taken up in<br />
depth by interested parties such as the EPA. Please see response to comments in sections above,<br />
particularly to comments in section 3: Project Relevance, and Section 1: Approach. We fully agree with<br />
the reviewers that growers should use nearby, readily available resources whenever possible. We do not<br />
recommend that the SLAC facilities be used for everyday analysis of water chemistry; the analyses that<br />
this facility performs will be used as appropriate in this study to answer topics relevant to speciation and<br />
subsequent toxicity.<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
This program should have key interactions with others in the Biomass Program, as well as with EPA. This<br />
level of interaction is not developed in the review.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
This project would have more of a chance for useful tech transfer if the project were more sensitive to<br />
existing technologies and literature.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Same as the project by Yeager.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Nice interface with other researchers.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Technology transfer efforts were not adequately addressed.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
Not able to judge.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Unless or until the algae biofuel technology comes together, risk assesment will not be ready for external<br />
communication.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
The project has extensive interactions with other institutions working under OBP, particularly NAABB<br />
consortium institutions. Because material transfer agreements are not in place for all participants, we have<br />
not disclosed all participants at this early stage of the project. In the future this information will be made<br />
available. Transfer of specific new technologies is not a primary focus of this project. Transfer of<br />
information related to risk is our focus here. However, LANL and SRNL, in particular have strong<br />
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technology transfer support in the event that transfer is appropriate. We agree that extensive concurrence<br />
between research and commercial entities is crucial for effective risk assessment.<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project<br />
approach, scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
The Program itself is of high priority and relevance. It is a credit that it is being addressed earlier rather<br />
than later. Unfortunately the strategies and tactics are not well-developed in enough detail to allow<br />
appreciation of the importance. The gratuitous use of XANES is counter to the value of the project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
This project has potentially important goals but needs to reconsider work in the context of potential<br />
problems mentioned above.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
The entirety of this project appears to be the same as that by Chris Yeager. Is the Algal Biomass Program<br />
funding the same project twice?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See other comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
The relevance of this project was completely unconvincing. My blunt impression was that this algae<br />
project was designed to support cell toxicity and heavy metal lab groups (rather than the other way<br />
around).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
This work is much better placed with the CDC or the Centers for Ocean and Human Health.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Maybe more could be learned from surveying risks in existing systems such as wastewater treatment or<br />
aquaculture, thentyring to define and measure risks for an unknown system.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Note this section includes references for the other sections.<br />
Please see responses to comments above regarding XANES. We regard the evaluation of this technology<br />
as neither gratuitous nor inappropriate. Please also see comments regarding Approach and Background<br />
from Yeager, as well as comment responses above and comment responses by Yeager et al. The project<br />
by Yeager and Sullivan is one single project. The separation of the project into two presentations appears<br />
to have been a confusing factor for the review panel. We would request that a single presentation be “tag<br />
teamed” in the future. Please also see comment responses by Yeager and Moeller, our Co-PI who is a<br />
member of the NOAA Center for Ocean and Human Health.<br />
Most interactions with growers are expected to be publicly available. However, specific agreements can<br />
be made (e.g. PII, NDAs) to allow appropriate review of future work. The data can be sent to reviewers<br />
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who are not made aware of the PI's and the site from which the samples are taken. We understand the<br />
concern of the reviewer. We hope that most, if not all, collaborators will work with us in an open process.<br />
However, various methods, including the use of PII, may be available to allow proper review of all the<br />
data by the reviewers. We agree with the reviewer and believe that both wastewater treatment and<br />
aquaculture systems are important and should be considered. More than one of our collaborators, and one<br />
of our PIs (Zimba), work in the aquaculture field, and we have already sampled at an aquaculture facility<br />
in Texas. References 1. Bresson, C., et al., A combined spectroscopic and theoretical approach to<br />
investigate structural properties of Co(ii)/Co(iii) tris-cysteinato complexes in aqueous medium. New<br />
Journal of Chemistry, 2007. 31(10): p. 1789-1797. 2. Isaure, M.-P., et al., Localization and chemical<br />
forms of cadmium in plant samples by combining analytical electron microscopy and X-ray<br />
spectromicroscopy. Spectrochimica Acta Part B: Atomic Spectroscopy, 2006. 61(12): p. 1242-1252. 3.<br />
Lin, H., et al., Speciation and biochemical transformations of sulfur and copper in rice rhizosphere and<br />
bulk soil—XANES evidence of sulfur and copper associations. Journal of Soils and Sediments. 10(5): p.<br />
907-914. 4. Werner, M.L., et al., Use of Micro-XANES to Speciate Chromium in Airborne Fine Particles<br />
in the Sacramento Valley. Environmental Science & Technology, 2007. 41(14): p. 4919-4924. 5. Gunter,<br />
K.K., et al., XANES Spectroscopy: A Promising Tool for Toxicology:: A Tutorial. NeuroToxicology,<br />
2002. 23(2): p. 127-146. 6. Wang, H.C., et al., X-Ray Absorption Spectroscopic Studies of As-Humic<br />
Substances in the Ground Water of the Taiwan Blackfoot Disease Area. Bulletin of Environmental<br />
Contamination and Toxicology, 2003. 71(4): p. 0798-0803. 7. Moeller, P.D.R., et al., Metal Complexes<br />
and Free Radical Toxins Produced by Pfiesteria piscicida. Environmental Science & Technology, 2007.<br />
41(4): p. 1166-1172. 8. Fisher, J.M., et al., Role of Fe(III), Phosphate, Dissolved Organic Matter, and<br />
Nitrate during the Photodegradation of Domoic Acid in the Marine Environment. Environmental Science<br />
& Technology, 2006. 40(7): p. 2200-2205. 9. Camacho, L.M., et al., Occurence and treatment of Arsenic<br />
in groundwater and soil in Northern Mexico and southwestern USA. Chemosphere, 2011. In Press.<br />
Project: 7.9.2.2 Desert Research Institute<br />
Title: Algal-Based Renewable Energy for Nevada<br />
Presenter: Chris Fritsen<br />
Presentation Date: Friday, April 08, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 2.86 1.96 7<br />
Progress 3.71 2.19 7<br />
Relevance 3.14 2.03 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 3.00 1.93 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 1<br />
The approach is an unclear amalgam. Is the plan to use geothermal sources as farm ponds, or is the intent<br />
to look for algae that grows in various water sources and try and culture them for use in non-geothermal<br />
ponds? What is the intent of optimizing growth if there is no useful level of lipid content? How does one<br />
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start from zero knowledge base in terms of this problem, and the potential bioproduct spectrum and make<br />
progress worthy of the expenditure? A very poor discussion of the approaches.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 3<br />
This project's goals are to develop algal biofuel feedstocks that are appropriate for growout in geothermal<br />
waters in Nevada. DRI, AG-Energy Corp and Univ. Nevada-Reno are involved. A GIS database has been<br />
assembled and T, pH, and conductivity of geothermal ponds are being assessed while Nile Red staining of<br />
algae from geothermal ponds is beginning. The project plans to develop a raceway and look at C<br />
utilization of selected algae. It is not entirely clear why the scale of geothermal waters' characterization<br />
being undertaken is needed and how the algal strains collected from these ponds will be compared,<br />
including to non-geothermal feedstock candidates.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The project will bolster and initiate basic research regarding the development of algal growth and<br />
production systems in conjunction with geothermal resources throughout Nevada.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Project is an exploration of algae cultivation potential in Nevada, in particular using geothermal waters as<br />
media. The alternative, use of geothermal waters to warm media (as done in previous Nevada-based<br />
research), does not seem to be considered.<br />
The project lacks a vision of the design and requirements of future algae production facilities in Nevada.<br />
One of the goals is to assess the scalability. The researchers need to define an envisioned scale-up facility<br />
design in order to complete this goal. What is the fate of the geothermal water after algae has been<br />
grown? What pond temperatures will be achieved? What nutrients will have to be imported? How will<br />
these nutrients be recycled? etc. Focusing only on the biological performance of strains will not allow this<br />
task to be competed.<br />
Most algae collected from the environment will not be suitable for a cultivation environment. The<br />
planned use of outdoor ponds will be a benefit. Targeting of only a few sites may allow this project to<br />
develop methods to cultivate a few strains. This would be a good accomplishment. Any on-going search<br />
for ideal strains should be minimized and instead focus on a few strains and waters.<br />
Carbon is a major limiting factor in commercial algae production. Dissolved inorganic carbon and free<br />
CO2 availability at the sites should be evaluated along with the other chemical characteristics.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 2<br />
The project approach included traditional methods: screen strains, examine beneficial uses, and then<br />
outdoor scale up. There was no justification for why this approach would succeed in light of past failures<br />
of similar approaches to yield strains that thrive in outdoor production systems.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 1<br />
If the project is about the use of geothermal waters in Nevada, than the entire project should focus on the<br />
devleopment of that research interms of ability to create ponds and such that can cultivate wild consortia.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 2<br />
A viable process concept for using geothermal water to control the temperature of algae production<br />
sytems at meaningful scale needs to be developed.<br />
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Presenter Response<br />
We recognize that work on pond scaling and production systems has been somewhat extensive. However,<br />
attempts to achieve consistently high productivities were often hampered by low temperature conditions<br />
encountered (Roswell, NM). Thus, it was concluded that some form of temperature control may well be<br />
required (page ii, Technical Review; Sheehan et al. 1998). Prior works and analysis has shown that the<br />
Great Basin (Nevada being the major area within the greater Great Basin) could be a favorable location<br />
for systems that rely on solar radiation (http://www.nrel.gov/gis/solar.html). Therefore research on<br />
developing pond systems (with local algae that can actually grow in the water) in the region makes just as<br />
much sense as other locations that have been proposed. However, in addition, gaining temperature control<br />
of production systems in these locations and extending the growth seasons also has been recognized as a<br />
key component to allowing the viability of the pond-based production facilities (Sheehan et al. 1998 and<br />
references therein). The Great Basin has a multitude of geothermal features and resources with potential<br />
to be used to provide energy in the form of geothermal power generation. At the back end of the plants<br />
used to generate electricity, geothermal water is “wasted” at temperatures that are not conducive for<br />
electricity generation but still are well above 70 deg C (with the volume of flow and rates depending on<br />
the generation plants). However, even small-scale turbines can produce 500-900 gallons of water per<br />
minute at temperatures exceeding 70 deg C (some lines produce at temperatures at or near 100 deg C).<br />
Even at these low rates of flow- temperature control of pond systems at 30-50 deg C can be achieved<br />
either by direct addition or by a combination of direct addition or thermal insulation systems (the "waste"<br />
energy nominally represents over tens of megawatts of heating potential). In addition, there is even more<br />
untapped dry-based geothermal reserves that may be watered for energy production in the future. Most all<br />
geothermal systems have the water being re-injected after use and all notional designs for these systems<br />
would have the waters being returned. The reviews were critical of the fact that this program was not<br />
directing the resources for the design specifications of plants for the geothermal control. The private<br />
sector and other design engineers are doing some of this work and will undoubtedly do this work in<br />
earnest once it is shown that the hard work of achieving reliable biomass production at higher<br />
temperatures is completed and the other critical issues are dealt with (such as stability and nutrient supply<br />
etc...). It seems the scale of energy supply from heating should be better communicated in the future and<br />
we regret that some on the review team had not the grasp of the amount of potential energy that exists in<br />
these systems and this was not articulated well at the meeting.<br />
Efforts will take into account the well founded comments regarding C02 assessments and efforts to focus<br />
on only a few of promising strains and consortia rather than expending all the resources searching for the<br />
"ideal" strains.<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has<br />
made progress in its objectives and stated project management plan<br />
has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 2<br />
Activities are underway, but they seem disjointed and not well-rooted in an end objective.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 3<br />
This project is about 15% complete and more focus on practical targets might be helpful. The work seems<br />
too much like an ecological characterization of geothermal waters vs a focussed study of whether<br />
feedstock algae are to be found there.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The project is progressing as indicated in the project management plan. Field sampling and laboratory<br />
experimentation will continue.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Water chemistry at some sites has been characterized. Some algae samples, presumably from geothermal<br />
sites, have been characterized in lab for growth and lipid content. Amendments to geothermal waters have<br />
been developed for algae media. A needed safety plan is in place --good.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Progress is limited because the project started in September 2010.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 1<br />
Only a few microalgae reactor cultures and developed the Nile Red assay.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Technical progress is hindered by lack of conceptual temperature control ssytems supported by<br />
engineeering calculations on heat and water balance in potential algae production systems.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
We agree that temperature control can be developed more as the program progresses and the scale of<br />
water production and processing becomes known at sites. However, the general approach is such that the<br />
private sector or other RnD activities will take this and other aspects on once it can be shown that biomass<br />
can be reliably produced at desirable rates. It should also be noted that some or much of the nutrients can<br />
be gained from the geothermal waters themselves (several sources have phosphate concentrations in<br />
excess of 10 uM and nitrate and ammonium concentrations on the order of 500 to 3,000 uM) and this key<br />
aspect of development relies on gaining better and up to date water chemistry information. Moreover,<br />
much of the prior works in the field targeted developing strains in only a few types of reproducible<br />
defined media. The RnD undertaken here is site-directed work and aims to work on only a few of the<br />
waters and make growth media specific for the sites. The geochemical interactions of the water with<br />
nutrient additions is showing that seemingly simple nutrient additions or water modifications are not<br />
without issues that should be addressed.<br />
Work on bioreactors or open cultures in the lab and in greenhouses provide a means to gain results<br />
without having to expend large amount of the resources in testing strains and consortia in the field (which<br />
is much much more expensive). The scaling approach is one that has its challenges. Yet, the approach of<br />
developing consortia and or strains in the site-specific water is more likely to succeed when compared to<br />
prior works that tried to gain isolates on defined media not tailored to sites or the approach that was<br />
suggested of just building a pond and seeing what grows.<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 1<br />
There is little development of relevance of this project. Assuming some aspect of geothermal energy is<br />
the basis, what is the relevance? Is it the creation of new organisms, is it the use of geothermal waters, is<br />
it the application of extremophiles under average conditions? Other work has clearly been done on<br />
extremophiles, but what lessons were learned that drive a new project here?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
This project would be most relevant to use of raceways associated with an industrial process that<br />
produces warm waters with similar physical characteristics to geothermal waters in Nevada. Whether any<br />
strains isolated there are novel relative to lipid concentration etc. of existing feedstock targets is unclear at<br />
this point.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The project contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives through the potential identification<br />
of a sustainable, high quality feedstock supply from a geothermal source, plans for development of<br />
logistical systems to meet physical and quality specifications through analysis of lipids produced and<br />
investigates the development of a commercial-scale supply system with planned optimization of a pilotscale<br />
facility.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The project needs to use existing information to establish a preliminary resource potential for algae<br />
products in Nevada. Without an idea of how much algae could be grown in theory, the relevance is<br />
unknown.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 2<br />
The relevance of the project to program objectives is in its stated goal of utilizing local resources for<br />
bioenergy production. However, the approach and focus of the project are likely to limit its contribution<br />
to program goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 1<br />
The majority of work presented is a near duplicate of work in the other consortia and projects.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Screening and testing thermophilic algae holds little relevance if a potentially viable high temperature<br />
production system in not conceived.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Based on the general program’s targets and a number of key recommendations from the prior works of<br />
several ASP researchers (e.g. Bennemann, Cooksey, Sheehan, Pienkos etc…) and others regarding the<br />
barriers and approaches that should be addressed to get to the program’s targets- the overall approach was<br />
developed. The approach is indeed often similar to that of the much larger consortia that are funded<br />
within the DOE program (e.g. the NAABB) and includes developing research that is called for within the<br />
DOE program. Such research includes the following: providing site-specific information regarding water<br />
suitability for culturing, gaining isolates and/or consortia that can grow in site-specific waters, enhancing<br />
the quantum yields of photosynthesis and production systems (e.g. Weyer et al. 2010), gaining<br />
temperature control to sustain maximum production through cool periods (Sheehan et al. 1998), and<br />
increasing temperature tolerance (e. Sheehan et al. 1998, Weyer et al. 2010) such that algae ponds may be<br />
more cost effective. Doing such work should yield the information desired to gain production rates on the<br />
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order of 10-30 g/m^2/day throughout the year (which from a purely quantum yield theoretical calculation<br />
can be achieved in approximately 4-6 hours of daylight in the Nevada irradiance regimes given<br />
temperature is not limiting). Despite some reviewer’s comments suggesting that this work is repetitive<br />
and all of this work “has been done”, it remains that site-specific work and work relevant to production<br />
systems at enhanced temperatures has not actually been completed. There is presently little to no attention<br />
being directed at thermal systems and there remains good potential for key developments in this area. The<br />
reviewers are correct in that lipid research in hot springs has been “done” but this work has mostly<br />
targeted the cyanobacterial mats and prokaryotic components therein that do not necessarily produce<br />
energy storage compounds or lipids in amounts that are deemed desirable targets for the DOE biomass<br />
fuels program. Also- much of the work on lipids in hot springs has targeted the very warm and<br />
thermophilic cyanobacteria that grow at temperatures approaching ca. 70 deg C. Since photosynthesis is<br />
hampered at these temperatures, research and opportunities for key discoveries remain within the realm of<br />
30-70 deg C (e.g. in the area of achieving desirable quantum yields of photosynthesis for rapid biomass<br />
production at lower standing stocks). We recognize that it is surprising that there remains much work to<br />
be completed on microalgal production and bioengineering of systems in the range of 30-70 deg C. It is<br />
intriguing that several programs did pursue this research early in the ASP days. However, it appears that<br />
thermal control was not achievable at some of the test sites (freezing temperatures at night) and attention<br />
was direct to seeking cold-tolerant strains and systems (page 20, Part II: ASP Technical Review; Sheehan<br />
et al. 1998). The challenges in cultivation at higher temperatures are not trivial and it may have been that<br />
culturing at low temperatures was completed in the early phases of this program, yet we too feel this work<br />
should be progressed.<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 1<br />
The listed CSFs are not really success factors for the delivery of a valuable contribution. When asked how<br />
the presenter defines successful conclusion to the project, there was no cogent answer. Since the basis for<br />
this work was not well expounded, it is not surprising.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Milestones were not entirely clear; focus on rapid screening of new strains that may be novel relative to<br />
lipid production is important. More consideration of background literature on geothermal source algae<br />
(e.g., Italy, California, Montana....etc.) might improve this project.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Critical success factors which will define technical and commercial viability are the identification of<br />
several candidate algae (strains and/or consortia) capable of rapid growth/lipid production in conjunction<br />
with Nevada’s geothermal resources<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Inadequate as described in the presentation. See other comments on need for an initial scale-up facility<br />
design.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 2<br />
Critical success factors were identified. However, plans to address these obstacles were inadequate.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 1<br />
None were present.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
A critical success factor not identifed is definition of a process concept for keeping the water hot.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
The critical success factors outlined in the presentation which will define technical and commercial<br />
viability were presented as the identification of several candidate algae (strains and/or consortia) capable<br />
of rapid growth/lipid production in conjunction with Nevada’s geothermal resources. Though the<br />
presented success factors lack specificity and do not directly reference the productivity improvements that<br />
are anticipated to be attained through the project, success in the stated factors will provide a valuable<br />
contribution to the program. Among the R&D challenges outlined in the Technology Goals of the<br />
National Algal Biofuels Technology Roadmap (page 6) are obtaining sample strains from a wide variety<br />
of environments for maximum diversity, investigating multiple approaches to algal cultivation, and<br />
optimization of systems for algal productivity of fuel precursors (e.g. lipids). A successful project will<br />
contribute directly to these stated challenges/goals. In hindsight, we would amend the stated critical<br />
success factors to include such specific gains that we expect to achieve from the project. Some of these<br />
critical success factors for the project include: The identification of strains and/or consortia associated<br />
with geothermal waters exhibiting capacity for annual average biomass production values > 30 g/m^2/day<br />
with >30% lipid content on a dry weight basis as outlined as a target in the Roadmap (page 81) at<br />
elevated/controlled temperatures; The demonstration of the potential for scalability of at least one of these<br />
strains or consortia through production at the stated rates in an outdoor pilot scale test facility for greater<br />
than 1 month (thus addressing both the rate and stability issues); To assess the utility of and provide the<br />
opportunity for technology transfer of algal production in association with geothermal waters through the<br />
development of pilot scale test facility using geothermal waters for heating and/or growth media.<br />
The success factor, of providing the design specifications for temperature controls of these systems, was<br />
not built into the program as a desired target- mainly because there are several private-sector firms that<br />
are doing this type of work. Simple calculations outlined previously show the heating potential is on the<br />
orders of tens of megawatts even using the waste heat from the small electrical plants and demonstrates<br />
the potential viability of the resource. However, the overall viability of these notional facilities will rely<br />
more on the sustainability of biomass generation and water use and not likely temperature control given<br />
the extremely large heating capacities of these resources.<br />
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5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
There is little acknowledgment that the rest of the world has made much progress in these areas, and that<br />
the basis for judgments need reference to this other body of work. This seems a project in a vacuum, with<br />
undefined objectives. To expect to start a program which will be optimizing a pilot operation to deliver<br />
valuable (undefined) products in a few short years is not believable.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
The potential for tech transfer is unclear at this point. There is also some concern about the<br />
characterization of strains (molecular ID needed).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Unclear at this point. Needs to be clarified.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
The research team is all at UNR/DRI, plus a company. The skills of the team are not described. Seems<br />
insular.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Technology transfer efforts were not addressed. This appears to be an effort entirely focused within<br />
Nevada.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
Work is being done in an absencea of the large microalgae community.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Colaberation with engineering expertise in algae growth system design, including heat and mass balance<br />
modeling is needed.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
The work is not being done in a vacuum. Rather the work is being conducted as the scientific community<br />
has called for in several recommendations by national teams (e.g. see the National Algal Biofuels<br />
Technology Roadmap) and much of the work is synergistic with the larger consortia's aims. The work that<br />
targets technology development downstream of the production systems is being covered in other works<br />
within the DOE program (e.g. the NAABB, etc..) and throughout the nation. Thus, this particular<br />
grant/program has not targeted many of these items. Rather, the work does focus on RnD to gain<br />
production systems at relevant temperatures (ca. 30-60 deg C) that are not necessarily just relevant to<br />
Nevada- but are relevant to the Great Basin and any other area where the nexus of water, solar radiation<br />
and temperature control can be gained and the algae can be developed to grow within the site-specific<br />
waters.<br />
A small component of the program has been set aside to look at alternative uses of byproducts. The team<br />
recognizes that this work does not necessarily address one of the program's highest priority a critical<br />
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success factors and we may revisit directing resources in this direction.<br />
For information on the labs research programs, see http://www.dri.edu/chris-fritsen. In addition, Dr.<br />
Fritsen has worked in the ASP years ago in Dr. Cooksey's laboratory, has extensive culturing experience<br />
and knowledge of nutrient and photophysiological attributes of algae. He has experience in systems<br />
designs and program management through work on NASA programs as well as the polar research vessel<br />
committee service. Additionally, co-investigator's have requisite experience in analytical capacities to<br />
support the efforts (e.g. lipid analysis, water chemistry, microscopy, etc...). Additional team members<br />
from UNR and AGEnergy have expertise in private-sector partnerships and algal culturing as well.<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project<br />
approach, scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
The weaknesses have been enumerated already. The presentation did not show thoughtful objectives and<br />
scope. Nor did it show a relationship with all the other work in the algae bioproducts and even<br />
extremophile areas. Why would one consider scale up without any technoeconomic reason to do so? The<br />
questions about this project are multitudinous. The DOE officer should be demanding a well-reasoned<br />
scientific program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
This project appears to be a basic study of geothermal algae in Nevada; it may reveal something<br />
interesting about these algae, but it is important for the PI to focus on development and application of<br />
information to commercial biofuels' production needs refocus.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
This is a somewhat unique and worthwile effort seeking to apply basic research regarding the<br />
development of algal growth and production systems in conjunction with geothermal resources<br />
throughout Nevada.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See other comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
This project appears to be more focused on capacity building within Nevada than on addressing Biomass<br />
Program goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
Much of this work is being done by the consortiums and the focus should be on geothermal issues of<br />
production.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Additional concept development for high temperaure production systems is needed. With several day<br />
growth cycles and thousands of acres of growth system area, temperature control appears to be<br />
problematic.<br />
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Presenter Response<br />
In brief, we fully intend to continue to work within the national program’s framework as outlined by the<br />
2010 report, in collaboration with colleagues in large consortia and to remain synergistic with the large<br />
consortia’s and the private sector’s efforts. That said, however, we also recognize the value of the model<br />
that DOE has worked under in the past whereby independent research approaches and lines with similar<br />
desirable outcomes has the potential for independent discovery and technological breakthroughs. The<br />
work is indeed unique and being conducted in a lab and area where the resources to do so are available.<br />
The other misplaced reviewer's comments are indeed misplaced. The work is not just relevant to Nevada<br />
(see section on relevance) and the scaling for technoeconomoic analysis can and should be done.<br />
However, if it cannot be demonstrated that biomass production can nominally occur in these waters then<br />
such technoeconomic analysis will simply lack a basis for speculation or analysis. The scope of the<br />
research is seemingly wide and ALL of the potential factors that may inhibit the development of algae in<br />
these areas is understandably not addressed (e.g. harvesting, drying, transport etc...). Yet, the RnD does<br />
only target work in regards to geothermal water, consortia and strains for development. The work does<br />
not encompass the scope the NAABB encompasses. Yet understandably, the field does have standard<br />
procedures and approaches that are utilized throughout the discipline field. It should not be surprising that<br />
there are similar activities and approaches among and between labs.<br />
We will work to better provide a clearer assessment of the the overall scale for thermal-algae systems in<br />
the Great Basin. However, with over 21 operational power production facilities in Nevada alone and more<br />
in development (e.g. http://www.nvenergy.com/renewablesenvironment/renewables/geothermal.cfm), the<br />
potential marriage of the uses of the waste heat and growing algae therein is real. Additionally, waste heat<br />
from other power plants and the specific waters that accompany these plants likely should be investigated,<br />
yet lie beyond the scope of the present study.<br />
The peer review does appear to have some issues, given that during the preparation of the presentation<br />
materials we were given instructions to provide materials for "high-level" program synthesis and reduce<br />
the amount of technical details-- Yet, some/many of the reviewers comments seemingly were directed at a<br />
much more technical level.<br />
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Project: 7.7.2.18 Brooklyn College<br />
Title: Development of Pollution Prevention Technologies<br />
Presenter: Juergen Polle<br />
Presentation Date: Friday, April 08, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 4.33 0.47 6<br />
Progress 4.67 1.49 6<br />
Relevance 5.00 1.29 6<br />
Critical Success Factors 3.50 0.76 6<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
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The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The Approach has several aspects. Basically the investigators are intent on establishing reliable, analytical<br />
methodology to determine full lipid composition profiles in timely fashion (one hopes) to replace the<br />
qualitative nile red stain test. Now if that could be done it would be a useful contribution, especially if it<br />
were a short, inexpensive, low manpower analytical method. There probably needs to be a diversity of<br />
samples run through to determine the variations. Good enough. It is when the project direction indicates a<br />
prediction is to be made on the best choices of algae that I believe the approach goes astray. How do we<br />
decide good, better, best? There is a claim to evaluate 2000 strains of algae. Is this logical or desirable?<br />
First, some of this must already be done. Second, is a scientific selection a better approach?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The approach is to isolate new strains of algae that might be useful as feedstock; this goal is being met by<br />
isolation of 3000 "strains" from extensive collecting, including in Utah, of freshwater, brackish and<br />
marine strains. Analytical methods such as MS, LC are being used to define lipid concentration, which<br />
the PI considers important compared to Nile red staining. It was unclear that the collecting effort was<br />
focussed on scientific questions related to habitat that might result in the highest possibility of useful<br />
novel strains with high lipid accumulation. I do think some collecting of new strains from some habitats is<br />
likely to be fruitful to commercialization, because this may eliminate the need to pursue GMO strategies<br />
for high lipid production. However, Martek etc. have many good lipid producers; will there be any<br />
comparisons with the "best of show" to date?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 4<br />
For strains sampled from the general environment such as these, lipid content and lipid characteristics are<br />
likely a weak indicator that the strains are suitable for mass cultivation. 200 strains have been<br />
characterized; now focus on determining whether any of the leading candidates can be grown outdoors.<br />
That experience will help in the planning of any further screening. The delivery of the strains to NAABB<br />
or others with outdoor facilities should be done quickly with the outdoor results feeding back to the<br />
Brooklyn College strain work with as quick a turn around as possible.<br />
The catalyst research cannot be evaluated with the small amount of information provided.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Since the presentation only focused on the strain screening project, this review only covers that section of<br />
the project. The stated objective is high throughput screening for lipid producing strains and<br />
characterization of lipids. However, in light of the failure of previous algal screening efforts in yielding<br />
strains that successfully compete in full-scale outdoor raceways, there was no justification regarding why<br />
this particular effort would be more successful. The main purpose of the project was for capacity building<br />
for the college (purchase of equipment, hiring of personnel, training of students).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 4<br />
What is the relevance to just screening strains? There are several sites that do this, for example UTEX.<br />
Why is this needed over existing collections?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Validation of the screening system is needed.<br />
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An experimental design to determine interactions between the parameters used in the growth system and<br />
strain responses may have value.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
For clarification for the reviewers, the PI would like to mention that the strains that are being screened in<br />
this project were isolated in a previous isolation effort. No new isolation will be done for this project. The<br />
screening effort ongoing in this laboratory is not simply an isolated project. Some strains that were<br />
isolated and passed the first Nile Red screen in this laboratory in the past were already passed on to<br />
collaborating laboratories for testing in larger systems. The ongoing project is meant to replace the Nile<br />
Red screen with a more effective screen that will be faster and more accurate. Regarding comparisons to<br />
'best of show' to date, the production strains Nannochloropsis salina and Nannochloropsis OZ1 are<br />
currently being used in this laboratory as 'bench mark' strains for lipid productivity in side-by-side<br />
experiments to the novel strains identified through our screening.<br />
This PI begs to differ in opinion from the reviewer in that strains from culture collections have been<br />
successfully tested in outdoor test beds. Therefore, the statement of the reviewer is not exactly accurate.<br />
However, due to confidentiality agreements this grantee cannot disclose the nature of those tests. As an<br />
answer to the comment that validation of the screening system is needed, it can be disclosed that two<br />
candidate strains identified in the previous sampling/isolation/screening effort of this laboratory were<br />
already grown repeatedly by a collaborating laboratory in the southern United States over several months<br />
in a greenhouse at a scale of about 30 Gal. Both strain have performed well and further tests are currently<br />
ongoing. Moreover, more strains will be cultivated in testbed facilities of the NAABB very soon. In lieu<br />
of the absence of any truly large-scale raceway system within the USA, it is this PI’s opinion that at this<br />
time the results of such experiments, which are not part of this research project, may serve as ‘proof-ofconcept’<br />
for the potential of scale up for strains identified in the PI’s activities regarding strain<br />
isolation/screening in this laboratory.<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has<br />
made progress in its objectives and stated project management plan<br />
has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Progress is apparently adequate to date, given the project start date.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Most of the work to date of this project that started in September 2010 is collecting effort.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 7<br />
200 strains evaluated. Enough for now. Learn more about the best strains identified so far. This culture<br />
work can be done at Brooklyn College as well as the NAABB partners.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The project has made progress toward its stated objectives (purchase of equipment, hiring/training of<br />
technician, initial strain screening).<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 2<br />
It is a new project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Earliest possible test of the screening procedure against longer term outdoor cultivation resutls will help<br />
define progress.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Again for clarification, this project does not include any strain collection and/or isolation efforts. Strains<br />
to be screened already exist in the laboratory. At this time, the PI is ‘learning more about the best strains<br />
identified so far’. In a related project that is not part of this screening project, candidate strains are being<br />
tested in the laboratory all candidate strains that pass the screen are or will be grown in small scale 300<br />
mL bubbling columns I the lab to obtain biomass and lipid productivity data. Furthermore, two strains<br />
have already being tested by a collaborating laboratory for several months in the past year at the scale of<br />
30 Gal in the greenhouse. Both strains performed well in the testbed cultures, thus serving as proof-of<br />
concept that strains identified in our screen can be scaled up. Further, in a separate project which is part of<br />
the NAABB consortium candidate strains identified in this laboratory will be grown in testbed facilities<br />
very soon to learn more about the strains identified so far. The results will then be used to assess the<br />
progress of this project.<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The development of the methodology can be highly beneficial in many of the studies. The generation of<br />
the data library would also be of use. Prediction should become the source of hypotheses for further<br />
studies.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The projectmay not have adequately considered how to compare strains from the new collecting effort<br />
with strains that are already considered potential feedstock or known from commercial sources to<br />
accumulate lipid. I would be more comfortable with the relevance of the project if hypotheses about the<br />
habitat's type-to algal lipid production had been clearer.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Yes relevant.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Although the goal of the algal screening project is relevant to program goals, it is highly unlikely that it<br />
will contribute to meeting those goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 4<br />
As this is another culture collection that will likely not be applied in raceways or large scale commercial<br />
algae cultivation, the relevance to the Biomass Program's mission is difficult to see, but culture<br />
collections that are screened are important from an academic sense.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Strain selection is critical. The selection process needs to be proven against realistic outdoor systems. In<br />
relevant outdoor sytems Are the strains selected by this screening any better than randomly selected<br />
strains?<br />
Presenter Response<br />
The ongoing screening activities are not isolated from other activities, but rather an integral part of the<br />
research on strains within the PI’s laboratory. The sampling and isolation activities for the strains to be<br />
tested have already been completed through another project. In response to one reviewer about specific<br />
habitat selection, yes, during collection small shallow habitats that are exposed to drastic temperature and<br />
irradiance changes were sampled with the expectation that this might result in potential candidates for<br />
later use in raceway ponds. Also, yes, candidate strains that passed the first level screen are being mapped<br />
back to the habitats they originated from. Some of the candidate strains identified through our previous<br />
nile red screen mapped back to shallow habitats that were exposed to drastic daily changes in temperature<br />
and irradiance. However, that work is not part of this project. Here strains that had been isolated from<br />
habitats previously and therefore already exist in the lab are being screened. In response to the reviewer’s<br />
comment on strain selection, yes this is being considered, but also not as part of this project. Again, in<br />
another accompanying project the candidate strains identified are being tested in small-scale laboratory<br />
culture against strains such as the marine 'production strain' Nannochloropsis salina and a freshwater<br />
'production strain' Chlorella strain used by companies. However, not enough data exist yet to answer the<br />
questions if our screening effort results in strains that will be better than randomly selected strains.<br />
Currently, strains are being transferred to testbed facilities to answer the questions on performance of our<br />
novel strains in small raceway ponds.<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 2<br />
Critical Success Factors are not really considered in the framework of how this project fits in to the<br />
overall program, nor are they cast as desired. They tend to center on the laboratory experimentation itself.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Exploring growth conditions that will be economical at commercial scale for any promising targets is<br />
important. Nile red screening is useful to eliminate most new collections, whose maintenance will be<br />
expensive; after that, analytical lipid characterization may provide more useful information.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The only success factor listed on Slide 12 is that high biomass/lipid productivity strains are identified.<br />
The work plan does not show how this productivity is to be measured. Define further the methods for<br />
culturing/testing of promising strains.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Critical success factors were identified, but there is no plan how these obvious factors will be overcome.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Lipid content is the obvious factor, but there was no real correlation to the conditions one would find in a<br />
raceway.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Proof that the screening system selects superior strains is a critical success factor that does not appear to<br />
be addressed.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
In contrast to the reviewer’s comment, that ‘critical success factors…tend to center on the laboratory<br />
experimentation itself’, the ongoing project is embedded in other collaborative algae biofuels activities<br />
such as the NAABB. The methodology to be developed is supposed to replace the Nile Red screen as an<br />
analytical method that is as fast the Nile Red analysis, but providing more information on the lipid<br />
composition at the same time. Although testing of novel strains is not part of the current project, it is done<br />
in this laboratory in other projects. In response to the request to describe the productivity of strains the<br />
following is provided: Biomass productivity is measured as accumulation of biomass as Ash Free Dry<br />
Weight (AFDW) per volume per time. Algal cultures of about 0.3 Liters are grown in bubbling columns<br />
provided with 1% CO2 in air and illuminated with daylight fluorescent lamps at an intensity of about 200<br />
µE m-2 s-1. Cultures are kept in a water bath to regulate the temperature. Growth curves are based on the<br />
AFDW and lipid extractions are performed according to Bigogno [Bigogno, C., Inna Khozin, G., Sammy,<br />
B., Avigad,V., Zvi, C., 2002. Phytochemistry. 60 (5), 497-503]. From the biomass accumulation over<br />
time and the total lipid content at certain times during growth, the lipid productivities are being<br />
calculated. The PI agrees with the reviewer’s assessment that the screening, which is performed in the<br />
laboratory, does not have strong correlations to potential large-scale outdoor conditions. However,<br />
previous work of the PI on a saline water production strain has shown that the laboratory performance<br />
tests allow prediction of the strains behavior outdoors.<br />
Proof that the screening system used will select superior strains is not available yet as work on the proofof-concept<br />
relies on ongoing experiments in collaborating testbed facilities and is not part of this project.<br />
Although the proof-of-concept research is not directly part of this project, the results of that work will be<br />
the 'critical success factor'. However, the proof-of-concept work is in a stage too early to make any<br />
conclusions or predictions at this time.<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
The analytical methodology is a fine example of positive technology transfer. Data collection from a<br />
variety of samples gives some insight into the natural variations in lipid profiles that may be encountered.<br />
It may serve as a platform for further studies on improvements.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
The project began very recently (September 2010).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Partners are present. Plan for feedback of information to Brooklyn College is not described.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
No technology transfer partners were identified. No technology transfer (outside of publications) is likely.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
Why not work with UTEX or other established collections? Why reinvent the wheel?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
There are many strain screening efforts. Communication among the projects, particularly regarding<br />
validation of screening systems should be improved.<br />
Defintion of performance criteria necessary and sufficient to enable real-world cultivation is needed.<br />
Wti teh lare number of strains that have been sampeld and screened, a statisical measurement of<br />
biodiversity could be used to estimate the probablity of finding a wild type strain with necessary and<br />
sufficient traits throuigh continued bio-prospecting.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
For clarification, technology transfer has already occurred, because in the past several candidate strains<br />
were forwarded to collaborating laboratories for further testing.<br />
The new screening approach using the UHPLC-TOF-MS system and the resulting data will be shared and<br />
reported on for example at professional meetings such as the US DOE User Meeting in March 2011 in<br />
Walnut Creek, CA, USA and the 3rd Algae World Summit in May 2011 in San Diego, CA, USA. Testing<br />
of strains in larger facilities is a goal of the overall research effort of the PI regarding strain<br />
isolation/screening. Although not specifically mentioned previously and in contrast to one reviewer’s<br />
comment that ‘no technology transfer (outside of publications) is likely’, some candidate strains identified<br />
through the previous Nile Red screening process were already passed on to collaborating Air Force<br />
laboratories for further studies. The Air Force collaborators report back to the PI on the performance of<br />
the strains tested. The Material Transfer Agreements for strain transfer are already in place for Air Force<br />
facilities and are also now ready for the NAABB. Consequently, strains are already in the process to be<br />
transferred to NAABB testbed facilities. Possible NAABB testing sites are located in Texas, New<br />
Mexico, and/or Arizona. Results on testbed performance of new candidate strains will be reported back to<br />
this PI so that the isolation and screening efforts can be adjusted depending on the outcomes of the<br />
testing.<br />
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6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project<br />
approach, scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
Overall, I like the potential outcomes. I think the Investigators should concentrate on delivering the<br />
methodology, and not be concerned with attempting to identify the "best" algae.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
Assessment of new microalgal strains for feedstock potential is reasonable, but is best done with more<br />
explicit hypothesis-driven selection of habitats. It will be important to do broad screening and quickly<br />
eliminate most strains collected to date with Nile Red staining before doing analytical chemistry to<br />
precisely define lipids. Growth vs lipid accumulation conditions for new strains with promising lipid<br />
accumulations should be defined as early as possible.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See comments above.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Since the presentation only focused on the strain screening project, this review only covers that section of<br />
the project. It appears that the screen straining project was primarily focused on capacity building for the<br />
college (mainly an equipment purchase). In that regard, it is successful. However, this project's likely<br />
impact on the DOE program will be minimal.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
As yet another culture collection and screening of lipids what is the point and the contribution to the<br />
existing body of collections?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
The project would benefit from validation of the screening process. Outdoor pilot production testing of<br />
several strains rank ordered by the screening process could be used to determine if screening performance<br />
correlates to real productivity.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
The main purpose of this grant was increasing of the research/teaching capacities at Brooklyn College of<br />
CUNY. However, this particular research project is embedded into other ongoing algae biofuels activities<br />
funded by the AFOSR and the US DOE. For example, the PI of this grant is member of the National<br />
Alliance for Algae Biofuels & Bioproducts. In response to the reviewer’s comments on ‘validation of the<br />
screen’ and the ‘minimal impact’ of the project, this PI would like to point out that it is a priority of this<br />
laboratory to transfer strains that passed the screening process either with Nile Red or with the new<br />
UHPLC-TOF-MS approach as quickly as possible to testbed facilities either within or outside the<br />
NAABB. For example, some of the first strains identified as potential feedstock producers for biofuels<br />
applications have already being tested successfully in the greenhouse at a scale of about 30 Gal in the past<br />
year. Therefore, the impact of this project may not be as minimal as expected by the reviewers. Also,<br />
more candidate strains are ready for testing at a larger scale and as the screening continues, it is expected<br />
that even more strains will be identified for further testing. Although the reviewer’s have negative<br />
predictions, only the actual cultivation of candidate strains in raceway ponds or photobioreactors at<br />
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testbed facilities will provide answers to the reviewer's comments. At this time, it is this PI's opinion that<br />
it is too early to dismiss the approach taken by this laboratory.<br />
Project: 7.9.1.4 Cold Spring Harbor Laboratory<br />
Title: Exploiting aquatic flowering plants (duckweed) as a source of bioenergy<br />
Presenter: Rob Martienssen<br />
Presentation Date: Friday, April 08, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 3.83 2.11 6<br />
Progress 5.20 1.47 5<br />
Relevance 3.40 1.20 5<br />
Critical Success Factors 3.33 1.25 6<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 2<br />
This project appears to lack strong foundation, if the intent is to develop an alternative lipid source for<br />
certain situations. The highest priority as demonstrated in the presentation is obviously the genomics<br />
work. The foundation questions such as: what are the growth areas for this oil precursor crop, and is this<br />
significant; what are the lipid levels currently, and how does this compare to various feedstock<br />
alternatives; what is the composition of the lipids; should this feedstock be considered for starch and<br />
subsequent conversion rather than lipids; what is the constituent composition of duckweed; has anyone<br />
done some preliminary work in this area before? It seems that no one has presented the case for doing this<br />
work, let alone jump to the step of genomic sequencing and modification.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
This project is a sequencing /transcriptomics/stable transformation system project on duckweed with the<br />
aim of converting starch production in the turions to oil storage. Lemna is already used commercially in<br />
animal feeds and bioremediation of waster waters in some areas of the world, making duckweeds<br />
potential biofuels' targets if GMOs will be acceptable in commercial scale and if the PIs hope to transform<br />
duckweed to produce oil in turion proves possible. Some milestones did not appear to be time-defined in<br />
ways that lead to practical biofuels' advances for lipid production. For example, what will project<br />
personnel do if duckweed can not be stably transformed? Turion production (techniques other than cold)<br />
and capability to produce turions at commercially valuable time periods were not described. Is there<br />
additional background literature on this? The well-described dispersal of duckweeds by birds needs some<br />
practical consideration by the investigators.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Develop aquatic flowering plants (Lemnaceae) as alternatives to algae for biofuel feedstocks —Determine<br />
the genome sequence of several duckweed species, and screen for lipid content. —Develop genetic tools<br />
to manipulate oil content in fast growing duckweed species<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 2<br />
For lemna to be a useful biofuel crop, it must have high biomass and/or oil productivity under mass<br />
cultivation conditions. The presenter stated that his projections of high biomass productivity stem from<br />
commercial sources. These may not be reliable. For example, low productivity (~4 g/m2-d) was measured<br />
by Ryer in the 1970s. A literature review on lemna productivity should be a high priority.<br />
What is the potential to genetically manipulate lemna to have high lipid productivity if they are a<br />
naturally low productivity organism? Are the lemna production facility designs technically and<br />
economically feasible. This is presumably not the expertise of the presenter, who is a biologist, but since<br />
the stated goal of the project is to create a biofuel crop, these techno-economic matters must be addressed.<br />
The statement "Lemna spp. are already in widespread commercial use for animal feed and bioremediation<br />
of waste water" is an exaggeration. There may be a handful of sites in existence. Lemna Corp. was not<br />
very successful in commercializing lemna wastewater treatment in the 1990s.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The objective is to increase oil content of duckweed. The approach is genetic: genome sequencing of<br />
lemna, followed by development of transformation and expression system in duckweed. Although the<br />
science is sound, the presenter did not convey any understanding of the larger picture (use and value of<br />
duckweed production systems). This lack of understanding unnecessarily limits the value of this research.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Independent varification of growth rate claims should be made before research work is initiated.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
We apologize for not giving a longer introduction to the considerable research already published<br />
concerning the enormous growth and yield potential of duckweed and other aquatic plants as biofuel<br />
feedstocks. The Ryan study is generally considered an outlier in these studies. Geographic distributions of<br />
each species were determined by Elias Landolt in amassing a live culture collection of 1300 isolates. The<br />
phytochemical composition of the Lemnaoideae, including carbohydrate, lipid, and protein content, has<br />
been studied since the early 20th century. Cheng and Stomp (2009) provide a good survey of potential<br />
commercialization avenues for duckweed aquaculture, including promising data on efficient starch<br />
production. Duckweed may constitute an excellent feedstock for ethanol biofuels, yet this does not<br />
diminish the value of investigating the potential for lipid production in the plant, as the demand for lipidbased<br />
biofuels remains. Cheng and Stomp (2009):<br />
http://www.mekarn.org/MSc_CTU/literature/cheng%20et%20al%202009.pdf We recommend the<br />
following white paper as a source of reviews:<br />
http://lemna.rutgers.edu/Michael_duckweed_JGIDOE_2008_final.pdf This white paper forms the basis<br />
for the S.polyrhiza genome sequencing program at the DOE JGI genome sequencing center. As described<br />
during our presentation, our program will build on this reference genome sequence, first by sequencing<br />
several other genera that have superior potential as biofuels (eg. Oil content, geographical range, genetic<br />
properties). We have begun with Lemna gibba, described in the presentation. With respect to progress in<br />
our research proposal, preliminary analysis of TAG content in several accessions of S. polyrhiza was<br />
presented in additional slides at the end of the presentation. However, new technology developed over the<br />
last decade has made genomics a powerful alternative to classical physiological analysis of lipid and other<br />
feedstock composition. As we described in the presentation, the gene catalog will form the foundation for<br />
a model of carbon paritioning that can be further tested in a more diected way. By analogy, the genome of<br />
microalgae and diatoms has proven to be an essential component of biofuel strategies seeking to increase<br />
lipid content. We learned at the review meeting that lipid content is the limiting factor in energy balance<br />
and so we have made it the focus of our project. We have already made substantial progress in stable<br />
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transformation as well as in manipulating growth conditions to induce flowers and turions, and our<br />
milestones and deliverables reflect these goals. Given the emphasis on basic biology, it is outside the<br />
scope of our project to investigate the ecology, dispersal, and regulatory issues surrounding aquatic plants<br />
as alternatives to micro- and macro-algae, though we agree that these are valid concerns for all three<br />
potential feedstocks. To address these concerns, we plan to interact with industrial partners around the<br />
world who are already developing duckweed for various purposes, including oil production, as well as<br />
ecologists, engineers and academics as described below. While it is clearly well outside the scope of our<br />
project to establish the pilot scale growing facilities required, these partners have well advanced, well<br />
funded programs in exactly this area, and we hope to establish a network of duckweed researchers<br />
worldwide through our web portal (see below).<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has<br />
made progress in its objectives and stated project management plan<br />
has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Adequate progress appears to be obtained on the plant biology aspect of the problem. No progress appears<br />
on understanding the nature of the lipids and starches and if the work is warranted.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Application of Arabidopsis data on lipid pathways and control genes (pickle) is promising. The work to<br />
date on gene silencing by P19 to maintain stable transformation in that way seems fruitful.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Have established a facile and efficient transformation protocol that does not rely on transformation of<br />
callus tissues and regeneration with high transient transformation efficiency (60%+) and significant stable<br />
transformation rate (33%) in ~4 weeks<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 0<br />
Progress has been made toward genetic manipulation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The project appears to be on track for achieving its stated objectives.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 5<br />
A strong demonstration of biotechnology, but there are many unresolved questions about the biofuel<br />
potential of duckweed.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
We thank the reviewers for their very positive response to our substantial progress in the first few months<br />
of the project.<br />
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3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 2<br />
It is difficult to judge the true relevance. Certainly alternative, high lipid feedstocks can be considered a<br />
Platform goal. It is not clear whether this duckweed is a legitimate choice for a feedstock. It grows rapidly<br />
in some places, is easier to harvest than algae probably, and there are lipids and starches produced. But<br />
there was no discussion as to why choose duckweed? Some catalog of the reasons for this organism as<br />
opposed to all others should be a basis, but is not presented. What previous work has been done? Is there<br />
some primitive technical analysis and even LCA that justifies this project?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 4<br />
There is a large degree of transcriptomics/genomics work here that appears to represent excellent basic<br />
science; its payoff for biofuels' development is hard to evaluate because applications are beyond the scope<br />
of the project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Unclear. Although potentially good science, how could this approach translate into oil accumulation in<br />
Lemna? This is not discussed.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 0<br />
Relevance has not been established. See other comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 2<br />
Duckweed is an interesting model plant system but there is no objective evidence that duckweed<br />
production systems are viable for large scale production. In the absence of such evidence, this project is<br />
not relevant to program goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
If the duckweed productivity is as high as claimed, and if harvest and dewatering is easy, then the<br />
biomass should be a good feedstock even without high oil content.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
As we described in the presentation, duckweed is the smallest flowering plant, with one of the highest<br />
increases in biomass among known species. Given the very high level of investment in microalgae to<br />
date, both in the private and public sector, a reluctance to consider alternatives such as macroalgae and<br />
aquatic flowering plants is certainly understandable. However, the very high yields and ease of harvest<br />
are very well established, and our project therefore focuses on the promise of increasing lipid content.<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
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The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 1<br />
This analysis is sorely needed for this project. The baseline estimation of 1) technical likelihood of<br />
success at creating a high lipid strain by genetic manipulation; and 2) given other attempts at creating<br />
high lipid organisms, what is the most likely level achievable with duckweed; and 3) given the best<br />
estimates, and coupling with growth rates and other feedstock generation features, what is the<br />
productivity and value as an endproduct? The question then can be addressed whether the project is worth<br />
doing under the most favorable outcomes.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 4<br />
If turions can not be turned into oil storage structures, the project will not have met its goals. What would<br />
be the PI's default strategy for making a contribution to biofuels' development?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Unclear.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See comment on approach<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The project has defined and addressed critical success factors within its narrow focus of molecular<br />
biology. However, the project is unlikely to impact the viability to biomass feedstock supply and<br />
conversion.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Success appears to be determined by the productivity of duckweed and potential use as biofuel feedstock.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
We have already accomplished two of the critical success factors - determining the gene catalog of<br />
duckweed, and developing an efficient transformation protocol, as we described in the presentation.<br />
While the typical lipid content of vegetative fronds varies from only 2-9%, concentrations of up to 26%<br />
have been observed in cultures augmented with phytohormones (Chang et al. 1978, Le Pabic 1980).<br />
Depletion of nitrogen or total minerals has been shown to induce turion formation (Czopek 1963,<br />
Henssen 1954), and indeed Cheng and Stomp (2009) found enhanced starch accumulation under a regime<br />
of 5-day post-growth transfer to water. We plan to profile this developmental shift to determine whether<br />
full turion induction is necessary for substantial accumulation of stored energy.<br />
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5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
There is little doubt that publications will result from this work. The project is in line with genomic and<br />
biology type work. Unless the fundamental questions are addressed as to outcome estimation, it is not<br />
known how this will benefit the Biomass Program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
The project is a sequencing and molecular biology project and publications in this area are good.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
There is a company in Florida (Petroalgae) that is already cultivating Lemna to large scale for biomass<br />
and fuels generation. In the context of this <strong>EERE</strong> effort, it would be an enormous plus for the PIs of this<br />
project to link with this company and to work jointly in this endeavor. Collaboration with Petroalgae<br />
would afford an applied dimension to this project, which is a mission of the <strong>EERE</strong> program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Several institutions involved. Commercial lemna technology firms were mentioned, but none are partners,<br />
which is a weakness.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Technology transfer within the basic sciences is likely. However, it is unlikely that the Biomass program<br />
will benefit.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Web portal to share data.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
We thank the reviewers for the excellent suggestion to partner with Petroalgae, which has already begun<br />
commercializing duckweed as an alternative to microalgae. The company raised significant capital<br />
through a recent IPO based on this technology. Our web portal is scheduled for release this summer and<br />
will provide an international hub for duckweed researchers world-wide. Our meeting at Cold Spring<br />
Harbor in 2009 was the first of its type for several decades, and brought together representatives from 3<br />
companies (Biolex, BASF and Lemnatec) as well as academics from Japan, Europe, China and the USA.<br />
The participants have all agreed to contribute to the design and population of the web portal and<br />
associated databases.<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project<br />
approach, scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
I would like to be happy with this project. Another high lipid biomass feedstock with highly desirable<br />
cultivation, growth and productivity would be very desirable. The basic analysis of the reasons for doing<br />
this work were lacking from the presentation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
This project is likely to be successful in adding to our knowledge of duckweeds and lipid synthesis<br />
pathway controls (e.g., transcription factors). It is harder to evaluate its potential to contribute to<br />
commercial, sustainable biofuels' production.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
This is mostly a basic research effort. Given the <strong>EERE</strong> support of this project, PIs ought to bring out and<br />
emphasize applied aspects in their work.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See other comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
This is a basic science project that should be funded by NSF. It has no relevance to the DOE biomass<br />
program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
It is not clear if oil production will make the duckweed a better feedstock than starch production would.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
We thank the reviewers for their generally favorable comments, insight and advice.<br />
Project: 7.9.2.1 Old Dominion University<br />
Title: Developing new alternative energy in Virginia: Bio-diesel algae<br />
Presenter: Patrick Hatcher<br />
Presentation Date: Friday, April 08, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 5.29 1.16 7<br />
Progress 5.43 1.50 7<br />
Relevance 5.43 1.40 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 4.14 1.25 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
This is a "demonstration" project of sorts. The chemistry is not defined. The device apparently is. Now it<br />
is up to the Investigator to demonstrate the deliverable. I hope there are firm deliverables which are<br />
framed in yields and substantiated with appropriate techno-economic analyses and LCA analysis. Merely<br />
tossing off the costs of raw materials as manageable, or by-products as useable are not adequate for the<br />
evaluation of this process concept.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The purpose of the research is to achieve one-step chemical processing of algae to biofuels. Conversion of<br />
Scenedesmus gave methylene-like components that can produce "algae-crude". Challenges include<br />
cleanly separating volatiles and maintaining catalyst. The major gap appears to be clear demonstration<br />
that this apparently energy intensive process is actually a potential source of sustainable energy. Further,<br />
purported concerns about intellectual property kept the PI from addressing a key question about N and P<br />
recovery and recycling during the discussion.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
•Establishing a commercially viable process for the conversion of algal biomass to biodiesel will go a<br />
long way towards widescale algal farming to meet alternative fuel requirements for the future The<br />
approach is to scale-up a ODU-patented process for a single-step conversion of algae to FAME biodiesel.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Goal is to develop and optimize an algae to biodiesel pilot plant. It is not clear how much biomass is<br />
needed for the testing; what biomass will be used for testing; or, if from the ODU ponds, how it will be<br />
harvested. Little detail is given on the planned testing procedures.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The project was focused on a one-step conversion process of algae to biofuel. The approach appeared<br />
sound but, due to time constraints, it was difficult to adequately evaluate this approach.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 6<br />
This is basically a pyrolysis approach that will suffer if the feedstock quality (moisture, pigments,<br />
carbohydrate/protein ratios) cannot be controlled, which is going to be difficult. The TMAH cost (or<br />
supply) is a critical factor, as well, and was mentioned but not presented.<br />
The PI claimed an energy balance being positive but showed very little data.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Specific goals for process performance and economics would be helpful.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has<br />
made progress in its objectives and stated project management plan<br />
has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The device has been obtained as in shakedown studies. The real work begins now.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The project ends in May 2011 and was considered 65% complete at the report interval. The lack of<br />
presentation of an energy budget at this stage of this energy conversion project is somewhat concerning.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 8<br />
ODU has successfully selected, designed, and constructed a pilot-scale “algaenator” built around the<br />
design of a horizontal wiped-film reactor. It is recognized that significant progress has been achieved<br />
prior to funding by this program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Tested "algenator" which didn't work or this was determined from a desk study--not clear. Switched<br />
reactors and site.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The project has made progress in achieving its intermediate goals but major components of the project<br />
(testing, optimization, and evaluation of conversion unit and characterization of products) are not<br />
complete. Unfortunately, it is likely that investigators will rush to "complete" this work by the project<br />
deadline (May 2011).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The pilot plant demonstration facility is quite good. No results past that were really given other than PID<br />
diagrams and statements of hope. At minimum a thermodynamic analysis could be been calculated and<br />
presented.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Detailed pilot data is avaiable, but were not presented.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
This may or may not turn out to be relevant. DOE should be pushing for a true determination of the value<br />
or potential for this technology by project end.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Energy conversion processes are important, but must be demonstrated to be efficient to be a contributor to<br />
platform goals.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 7<br />
Project fits the goals because the main activity has been to construct the pilot-scale reactor, called<br />
algaenator, and to eventually evaluate its performance over a wide range of operating conditions. This fits<br />
the goals of the DOE OBP Program by developing an efficient and cost-effective conversion strategy for<br />
algae to biofuels.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 8<br />
Wet processing of algae to fuel would be valuable.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The project contributes toward meeting the platform goals and objectives.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
This project might prove excellent at targeting soybeans and not microalgae. So it fits DOE's platform in<br />
that regard.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The need for feedstock drying or residual water vaporization is likely to make the overall energy balance<br />
unfavorable. The economics project a value of $0.50/kg for the fertilzer byproduct. This seems very high<br />
for a low grade fertilizer. 2/3 of projected income is from this fertilizer.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 3<br />
I do not believe these are defined well-enough for this project. There should be stricter evaluations than<br />
for a research project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 2<br />
The project must identify plans to evaluate energy sustainability of the processes described.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Aspects of the harvesting technology to be developed by ODU is already successfully applied by many<br />
commercially viable microalgal biotech companies, serving the nutraceutical industry.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
Technical and economic factors to be considered, but what are the quantitative goals?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Critical factors were identified, but the viability of the project is unclear.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 4<br />
This was not developed well and in particular, the keys to a successful energy balance were not presented.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The economics and energy balance are properly identifed as critical factors. Byproduct value drives<br />
economics and must be realistic at full scale.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
Certainly at this stage, there is little detail sharing. I do not believe there will be many publications unless<br />
highly successful.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
The project's self-described inability to answer questions about recycling of nutrients from the system etc.<br />
may limit its technical transfer, in addition to some concern about the need to adress energy costs of the<br />
process.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
ODU ought to link with many of the other "production" efforts supported by the program so that there is<br />
integration of effort.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Reactor company is a partner, but no other universities or professors seem to be involved.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Technology transfer efforts and partners were identified.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
The pilot facility is quite good and clearly of use to partners.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Publications, presentations, and commerical motivation ensure broad sharing. Critical reveiw of<br />
assumptions and projections is needed.<br />
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Presenter Response<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project<br />
approach, scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
I am leary of projects which seem to have a mystical component, and for which the science is not<br />
established and shared and discussed. Yet I believe this work should be funded because just maybe there<br />
is something there. In this case I would set very stringent criteria and deliverables and stick to them.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
The presentation made it diffifult to evaluate the practicality of the work.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
This is a worthwhile effort seeking to advance a single-step conversion of algae to biodiesel using heat,<br />
methanol, and a catalyst from a proof-of-concept (laboratory) to a pilot-scale algae-to-biodiesel reactor<br />
that will allow for testing of process commercialization potential. Given the focal point of this effort, and<br />
the fact that the facilities are in place, the Program should expect significant outcomes from this work.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
Plan looks reasonable based on limited information provided, but some preliminary economic assessment<br />
is expected at this stage of development.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
The project is relevant to program goals, but the presentation did not adequately address all of my<br />
questions.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6<br />
A good pilot facility made with little relevance to microalgae but again this system could work very well<br />
for another feedstock wherein pretreatment conditions could be controlled (likely soybeans).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
The process appears to have energy balance and economic challenges driven by the need for low moisture<br />
feedstock.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Project: 9.6.6.3 PNNL<br />
Title: Canada Algal Collaboration-PNNL<br />
Presenter: Jon Magnuson<br />
Presentation Date: Friday, April 08, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 3.33 1.37 6<br />
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Progress 3.67 1.49 6<br />
Relevance 3.50 1.38 6<br />
Critical Success Factors 3.17 1.34 6<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 3<br />
I understand some of the technical Approach, but am baffled by the rest. I understand that the kelp may be<br />
another feedstock ultimately. We should understand the composition and if it varies with the time of year<br />
or locale or other variable, this should be studied as well. Preliminary data was presented showing high<br />
carbohydrate levels. The approach at this point should be to consider the compositional analysis and then<br />
choose one or more optimal methods for recovering the energy in these components. It may be for fine<br />
chemical use, or saccharification, or other process alternative. Why immediately jump to conversion to<br />
bio-oil through hydrothermal liquefaction? What is the basis for this choice? In addition, the logistics of<br />
ultimate product production should be a factor in the design of an approach. Where is the feedstock<br />
produced, and how to transport to point of conversion is important.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 2<br />
This project considers the potential use of kelps from Canadian waters in biomass to biofuels ' conversion<br />
based upon mannitol and laminarian content. The PIs should consider the data on carbohydrate<br />
concentrations of kelps and nutrient effects on carbohydrate content of kelps exists in the literature-, for<br />
example from eastern Canada (New Brunswick, T. Chopin), France (studies at Roscoff), and<br />
Japan/China. It is of concern that data presented on kelp carbohydrate content were from a single site on<br />
each side of the Canadian coast (and even lacked characterization of water mass nutrients from that one<br />
site/coast). Unreplicated data are likely to contribute to poor sensitivity of the anlyses.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Use joint US-Canada resources and expertise to characterize macroalgae with regard to composition and<br />
conversion to bio-oil. Develop process to convert Atlantic and Pacific coastal biomass to bio-oil/biofuels.<br />
This approach is a non-starter as the ecological consequences of making biofuels from marine coastal<br />
macroalgae has many environmentally and ecological pitfalls that make it untenable.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The seasonal sampling of seaweed for compositional analysis seems like a topic that would have been<br />
covered extensively in past ecological literature. No literature is mentioned. In any case, apparently<br />
seasonal samples are needed for hydrothermal treatment. By national lab standards, the budget is modest<br />
for monthly sampling and thermal conversion. Does this presentation represent some work being<br />
supported separately by the Canadian government? Is there any preliminary economic analysis of the<br />
seaweed to fuel process? What is the expectation on cost and resource availability, even at a preliminary<br />
level? It would be good for this project and the one described by Guri Roesijadi to clearly show the level<br />
of collaboration/integration. Only the Acknowledgments slide suggests any cross-over. It seems like a<br />
reasonable project, but one that could be better represented by an integration of the two presentations.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The goals of the project are to characterize macroalgae with respect to seasonal composition and<br />
conversion to bio-oil. The approach for the seasonal composition portion of the project appears to be very<br />
limited (sampling only one site on each of the two coasts). Moreover, it appears that an extensive<br />
knowledge base about seasonal composition already exists.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 2<br />
Algal biofuel process development is a monumental challenge with a low probability of success. Adding<br />
an additonal constaint of Northern latitudes is a bad idea.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Review comment 1: These are very good questions. Currently DOE is concentrating on biofuel<br />
production processes, not fine chemicals. Hydrothermal liquefaction was chosen because freshly<br />
harvested kelp is about 10% solids so a conversion process that doesn’t require extensive energy<br />
consumption due to drying processes would seem to be a good starting point. Our expertise in this area<br />
(Doug Elliott, world expert in biomass liquefaction processes) made it a good choice for a project with a<br />
very modest budget (and level of effort) by leveraging existing projects and infrastructure/equipment.<br />
Logistics is a necessary aspect of the total process but was beyond the scope of this effort. Since there is<br />
very little work in the area of converting macroalgae to fuels and we had a modest budget, we sought to<br />
focus on assessing composition of one type of kelp and one conversion process. We felt this information<br />
would be valuable for beginning to assess the feasibility of macroalgae as a feedstock based on technical<br />
data. Review comment 2: I made a mental slip at the review in regards to Thierry Chopin. Dr. O’Leary<br />
(our Canadian collaborator) is a colleague of Dr. Chopin’s and discussed the sample collection with him<br />
at the outset of the project. Apparently, Dr. Chopin would have required funds to help in the collection<br />
and shipping etc., which is a reasonable request but this project is actually based on the two nations<br />
funding their own scientists’ efforts. I have not found a full compositional analysis of the polysaccharide<br />
(alginate, fucoidan and laminarin) and sugar/polyol (mannitol) composition of Saccharina latissima as a<br />
percentage of dry weight in the literature and would be pleased if the reviewers were able to provide a<br />
specific reference(s). We consider this analysis of relevance to biomass conversion to biofuels and<br />
bioproducts via thermochemical or biochemical conversion processes. It is important to understand the<br />
carbohydrate composition with regard to biochemical conversion processes. We did derive our extraction<br />
and fractionation procedures from work done by Rioux et al. (Carbohydrate Polymers 69 (2007) 530) so<br />
we are aware of literature in this area. Water column nutrient analyses and many other variables would be<br />
valuable to include in a larger project. For our admittedly modest project we were focusing on examining<br />
geographic and seasonal variability in carbohydrate composition since that scope fit within our budget<br />
and collaborative strengths. We believe this work is a valid addition to the sparse literature on<br />
carbohydrate composition of Saccharina spp. The scope of this project was not intended to create a model<br />
so the lack of “model sensitivity analysis” is a consequence of not having that scope (the suggestion of a<br />
preliminary model of the economics is an excellent idea and should be considered for future scope).<br />
Review comment 3: It would be useful if there was additional clarification and a literature ref. with regard<br />
to the reviewer comment that “making biofuels from…macroalgae has been shown to be untenable…”.<br />
New technologies will likely be required to support using macroalgae as a biofuels feedstock, as Dr.<br />
Roesijadi’s project on macroalgae resource analysis seems to suggest. This project is actually well linked<br />
to the other project on resource assessment, since Dr. Roesijadi is the lead on one of the two tasks in this<br />
project, as well as being the PI on the Macroalgae GIS analysis. Review comment 4: See comments above<br />
on literature Review comment 5: We respectfully disagree that “an extensive knowledge base about<br />
seasonal composition already exists”. See comments above on literature. Review comment 6: This project<br />
was funded as an outgrowth of the US-Canada Clean Energy Dialogue; hence it was conceived as a joint<br />
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US-Canada project. The location of Canada and the Washington coast in northern latitudes was part of the<br />
impetus for examining a cold water feedstock like the brown algae.<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has<br />
made progress in its objectives and stated project management plan<br />
has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
I believe it will be difficult to bring the project to a real state of completion. The objectives could be<br />
altered to cover feedstock variations, logistics options, composition drivers and conversion options. If<br />
hydrothermal liquefaction were a justifiable conversion tactic, some preliminary test could be run,<br />
without attempting to create a new upgrading chemistry. This would be a nice project, easily completed in<br />
the timeframe desired. Some analytical work has been done, and only part of the collection process has<br />
been completed. Several conversion experiments are described but lack context or justification.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 1<br />
This study is 20% complete and started in May 2010. The PIs should reconsider some aspects of the<br />
scientific design of the project and make sure that they have adequately uncovered and applied the<br />
published literature on kelp productivity and carbohydrate content.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Developed procedures for extraction and quantitation of polysaccharide and sugar alcohol components of<br />
macroalgae. Monthly collections began in Sept 2010, and are continuing through Aug 2011<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Approach comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Seasonal composition data is complete, but the progress toward hydrothermal conversion seems very<br />
limited (only two reactors tests to date).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Screening strains may have benefit in climates better suited for algae production<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Review comment 1: With the modest resources available, we concentrated on compositional analysis and<br />
a hydrothermal liquefaction process that has about a three decade track record of use for biomass<br />
conversion so this study is viewed as testing and optimization of a developed conversion technology on a<br />
new feedstock. Two tests have been run as reported in the review. Also, we have done some previous<br />
work on macroalgae (Macrocystis), which suggested that it would work (Elliott, D. C., L. J. Sealock, Jr.<br />
and R. S. Butner. 1988. "Product Analysis from Direct Liquefaction of Several High-Moisture Biomass<br />
Feedstocks." In: Pyrolysis Oils from Biomass: Producing, Analyzing and Upgrading - ACS Symposium<br />
Series 376, pp. 179-188). Converting the bio-oil to non-oxygenated biofuel by catalytic hydrotreating is a<br />
topic of significant interest in the biomass program and expertise at PNNL in this area is being leveraged.<br />
Review comment 2: The 20% completion is based on the Project Management Plan on file, in which<br />
projects have an end date of FY13 (as shown under the “Timeline” heading on the quad chart slide). This<br />
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would involve a more extensive work plan with bioconversion processes as well. Our progress has been<br />
good, under the less than optimal conditions that we have received none of our FY11 funding and<br />
subsequently were forced to trim scope, delay activities and reapportion remaining FY10 resources as a<br />
consequence. We have focused our resources on collection of the kelp samples for later compositional<br />
analysis since this is the time sensitive aspect of the proposal. Even though only two hydrothermal<br />
liquefaction tests have been run, there was demonstrable improvement from run 1 to run 2 on solids<br />
loading and conversion to bio-oil. Review comment 3: no reply needed Review comment 4: no reply<br />
needed Review comment 5: see reply to comment 2 Review comment 6: The “screening strains”<br />
comment seems to be misdirected, since we have no screening component in our project.<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 2<br />
The relevance discussion is lacking. What are the boundary conditions for kelp as a feedstock for biomass<br />
conversion? Without the knowledge of kelp yield and geographical availability, it is not known how<br />
valuable the project is. The choice to overlook optimization of the feedstock composition with respect to<br />
end bioproduct also limits understanding of the relevance.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Kelp biomass conversion is a potential source of biofuel by biomass conversion , but project needs to<br />
demonstrate the economic feasibility and sustainability of such use relative to sustainable harvesting<br />
potential of wild crop or costs of aquaculture, including site selection aspects relevant to other uses of the<br />
potential growing area (navigation, other fisheries).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Project may be relevant to the objectives of the Algae Biomass Program, but it will have catastrophic<br />
ecological consequences if implemented in a scale required for the generation of biofuels.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Approach comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The project goals are relevant to Program Plan goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 2<br />
PNNL and previous microalgea analysis conclude that cold northern latituides are not a promising<br />
location.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Review comment 1: Utilizing the guidance of the review template, we discussed where the project fit<br />
within the Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan and how it utilized relevant resources from<br />
Canada to leverage US DOE investment. Resource assessment with regard to geographically dependent<br />
yield data was not part of the scope of this project although it is an excellent suggestion. With respect to<br />
the reviewer comment: “The choice to overlook optimization of the feedstock composition with respect to<br />
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end bioproduct also limits understanding of the relevance”, the project is not proposing genetic<br />
engineering of Saccharina latissima although this fundamental suggestion would be of interest to other<br />
agencies. Our “end bioproduct” is a drop-in biofuel that would be derived via hydrothermal liquefaction<br />
and hydrotreating to make a renewable non-oxygenated liquid transportation fuel. Review comment 2:<br />
Site selection, economic analysis, aquaculture design and implementation are very worthy endeavors.<br />
However, such an expansive analysis was not within the scope of this project. I agree that this would be<br />
challenging and many factors need to be considered. Generating some (but certainly not all) of the<br />
technical data upon which to base decisions about the feasibility of macroalgae harvesting and/or<br />
aquaculture and subsequent conversion to biofuels and other bioproducts is one of the goals of this<br />
project. Review comment 3: Review comment 4: Review comment 5: Thank-you Review comment 6:<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 2<br />
A more detailed assessment of the critical success factors are highly warranted. To justify the project as<br />
beneficial to the coastal biofuels production where most of the world's population and demand exists is<br />
woefully inadequate as justification. It could be that the nature of the feedstock will require comminution,<br />
solar drying, and transport as low moisture tablets to specific, select coastal conversion centers where the<br />
polysaccharides are recovered for conversion to plastics in order to make true techno-economic sense.<br />
This sort of analysis is highly desirable, and has its own set of critical success factors.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 2<br />
The scientific data input and market/regulatory environment for siting are not well considered and plans<br />
to make adjustments to this problem were not evident in the presentation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 3<br />
PIs ought to perform an ecological and environmental impact analysis to properly assess feasibility.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Approach comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Critical success factors were identified, but there was relatively little explicit discussion about the main<br />
challenges in kelp conversion and how they would be overcome.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The climate is a critical factor to success that this project cannot address.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Review comment 1: We agree that economic analyses are highly desirable. This project had neither scope<br />
nor budget for such analyses initially, however, once technical feasibility is demonstrated and we have<br />
data a preliminary techno-economic analysis could be built. This project is more closely aligned with<br />
points ii (Feedstock Supply R&D) and iii (Downstream Refining R&D) in the review criteria. Therefore,<br />
we emphasized our critical success factors in light of those criteria, namely “biomass characteristics”<br />
from point ii and “conversion” from point iii. Review comment 2: These are very important and critical<br />
factors to consider in the context of an investigation of the broad issues surrounding the potential use of<br />
macroalgae as a feedstock. Unfortunately, this was not within the scope of our effort. Review comment 3:<br />
See responses to comments 1 and 2 Review comment 4: Review comment 5: We apologize to the<br />
reviewers, in the 10 minutes allotted for the presentation to cover the 12 mandatory slides in the template<br />
the level of detail had to be controlled within the presentation. The “challenge/solution” format was our<br />
attempt to address this in a few seconds. The solutions were presented in modest detail in the preceding<br />
“technical progress” slides. Review comment 6: We agree that the climate is a critical success factor for<br />
the growth of biomass feedstocks for conversion to biofuels. Brown algae (phaeophytes) grow best in<br />
cooler climates/waters and that was one of the reasons we chose to investigate them in the light of this<br />
US-Canadian project arising from the US-Canada Clean Energy Dialogue and the International program<br />
at DOE.<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
I believe there could be potential here for knowledge generation that would contribute to the biomass<br />
program as a whole. It is not being addressed.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
The current work may not have a high potential for tech transfer.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
This may be irrelevant for macroalgae, pending the environmental impact analysis. Alternatively, know<br />
how from this effort may be applied to cultivated macroalgae or microalgae, projects that are currently<br />
supported by the Program.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
The Canadian partners are collecting Atlantic kelp; what else? What are NREL and SNL doing?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
Discussion of technology transfer was very limited.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Broad sharing through publications and presentation.<br />
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Presenter Response<br />
General Comment by PI: This project was proposed and funded under the auspices of the DOE<br />
international program to encourage collaboration between US and Canadian scientists in areas of mutual<br />
interest under the US-Canada Clean Energy Dialogue. Review comment 1: We are generating knowledge<br />
about a biomass feedstock (kelp) common to both countries that has not been well studied in that regard,<br />
i.e., as a feedstock. Review comment 2: Review comment 3: Review comment 4: Dr. O’Leary and staff in<br />
Canada are collecting and shipping samples of kelp to the US for compositional analysis and conversion<br />
experiments. Dr. O’Leary is a source of considerable expertise in the area of macroalgae. Our Canadian<br />
colleagues are also providing expertise in DNA extraction from kelp species, primer selection and PCR<br />
amplification for genus and/or species confirmation by sequencing. This has been very helpful (efficient)<br />
since developing extraction procedures for new organisms is often rather time consuming. They are also<br />
performing these analyses on our Pacific coast samples. Unfortunately, there was limited time to go into<br />
details on everything we are doing. NREL and SNL are performing projects of mutual interest to US<br />
(DOE) and Canada (NRC) on microalgae. They were specifically scoped to be non-overlapping.<br />
However, we communicate monthly since all of the US national labs are working with the same Canadian<br />
partnering organization and it has been a very fruitful and satisfying collaboration in that regard. Review<br />
comment 5: Review comment 6:<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project<br />
approach, scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
Some true justification studies would increase the value of this work significantly. The selection of<br />
conversion to bio-oil is not justified. If one were considering floating hydrothermal conversion plants,<br />
why? Should solar collection be used to create a new conversion process that might yield products with<br />
less oxygen content? So what is the basis for the work? More could be squeezed out of this.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
This project suffers from a weak design for new data collection and inadequate review of background<br />
literature.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
There are good elements in this work, pertaining to the development of technologies for the extraction of<br />
product from biomass. I recommend the PIs focus their efforts in this area, and please properly assess the<br />
impact of harvesting the oceans' algae for biomass and biofuels.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See Approach comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
The seasonal composition portion of the project may be of very limited value because of its sampling<br />
protocol. It was difficult to evaluate how aggressively the hydrothermal conversion processing portion of<br />
the project was being pursued.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Resources could be better allocated by removing geographical constraints and focusing on regions with a<br />
scientific basis for having a higher probablity of success.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Review comment 1: The basis of the work in this modest effort was to collect some of the relevant data<br />
on S. latissima composition and one proven method of conversion that could work with wet feedstocks<br />
and utilize all the biomass (see comment 1 under section 2). Review comment 2: See comment 2 under<br />
section 1. Review comment 3: Thank you for your comments. Further resource assessment and an<br />
environmental impact study would be worthy additions to the research portfolio at DOE. Review<br />
comment 4: Review comment 5: Different variables of interest will be chosen by different investigators<br />
within the constraints of their program. Given that we needed to work with Canadian colleagues on the<br />
Atlantic coast as advocated by the Canadian Funding agency and we are located on the Pacific coast, this<br />
geographical variable was chosen. The other variable was the amount of different polysaccharides over<br />
the course of the annual growth cycle. This is of great relevance to potential biochemical conversion<br />
processes where it would be desirable to have the highest concentration (wt/wt total kelp biomass) of the<br />
more easily hydrolyzed and bio-converted laminarin (non-crystalline glucose polymer) and mannitol<br />
(directly utilizable sugar alcohol). The percentage of alginate and fucoidan would be relevant to both<br />
thermochemical and biochemical conversion processes with respect to solids loading possible with these<br />
highly viscous hydro-gel forming acidic polysaccharides. Pre-processing to address this issue was<br />
performed under the hydrothermal liquefaction task enabling solids loading of 22% after just two tests.<br />
The compositional analysis study was designed to collect data of relevance to both biochemical and<br />
thermochemical conversion processes to be of maximum relevance. The research on the hydrothermal<br />
conversion process represents approximately 20% (please check this number) of our effort to date.<br />
Review comment 6:<br />
Project: 9.6.6.2 Sandia National Labs<br />
Title: Modeling and Visualizing Algae Biofuel Production Potential in Canada<br />
Presenter: Howard Passell<br />
Presentation Date: Friday, April 08, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 4.00 0.82 6<br />
Progress 4.50 0.76 6<br />
Relevance 4.67 1.11 6<br />
Critical Success Factors 3.83 1.07 6<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
This is seemingly a viable approach. What could not be presented are the list of assumptions that are<br />
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behind this end-product. It should be a required output that these are reviewed with a panel of experts,<br />
and either accepted as logical or whetehr some several modifications should be made to increase the value<br />
of the model. I believe at this point, a techno-economic evaluation and LCA should be applied to the<br />
conclusions at this stage. If there is no hope, no further polishing of the model is required.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 4<br />
This is a modelling project with sliders for average solar irradiance, environment specific parameters etc.<br />
It examines co-location tradeoffs (e.g., biofuels' facilities and power plants etc.). A major challenge for<br />
this project is to apply the theoretical data to real future production, which the PIs appear to recognize.<br />
Among the weaknesses of the model is one Redfield ratio for all algae (different taxonomic groups have<br />
different Redfield ratios), the theoretical productivity levels used, and co-location challenges. The project<br />
personnel may want to review published literature in the areas to improve the models.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
•To build a prototype computer simulation model that will: –allow users to evaluate and visualize algae<br />
cultivation and biodiesel production capabilities at multiple sites across Canada –allow users to simulate<br />
tradeoffs associated with different resource co-location strategies (wastewater, waste CO2, waste heat) –<br />
lay groundwork for larger scale algae biodiesel productivity modeling<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See comments under Relevance.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The goal was to make a simulation model for multiple sites across Canada. The approach is technically<br />
sound but it was not clear to me whether this modelling exercise was an isolated effort or would<br />
contribute to other modelling efforts.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The modeling should be used to underscore the fundemetnal disadvantges of northern locations.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has<br />
made progress in its objectives and stated project management plan<br />
has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 5<br />
It is difficult to judge progress. While the model may be nearly complete, what are the outputs and how<br />
do they match with reason or reality? Also what were the inputs? Finally, what is the resulting case that<br />
the model delivers? Maybe a 1-day workshop/conference to cover these should be arranged before the<br />
project close, and certainly before further work is done.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 4<br />
This project is 75% complete and will end in September 2011. The project will produce a theoretical<br />
product.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 5<br />
A model was designed that calculates theoretical algae biodiesel production capabilities in northern<br />
latitudes given actual municipal effluent volumes (with nutrient concentrations), recycled CO2, land<br />
availability, and climate/solar insolation. HOWEVER, missing appears to be the solar insolation as a<br />
parameter that defines productivity.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See comments under Relevance.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The project seems to have achieved its stated milestones and is on track for completion.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The model appears to give expected results.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 6<br />
This could be highly relevant as a decision-generator if it has the acceptable assumptions and inputs. In<br />
this way it does help the BMP.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The project's relevance would increase if better input data from the literature on productivity were added.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Somewhat marginal. Not knowing the strains that would need to be cultivated undermines the effort.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
In January 2009, the British Columbia Innovation Council published a major report on the prospects for<br />
algae biofuel production in Canada. Their conclusion matched that published by others even earlier: the<br />
Canadian climate is not suitable for affordable phototrophic algae biofuel production using current<br />
technology at 7 g/m2-d annual average biomass productivity (nor reasonable projections of improved<br />
technologies 14 g/m2-d). The SNL presentation shows a figure on Slide 10 with 5.2 kg/m2-yr as a high<br />
projected productivity (in southern Ontario). This is equivalent to 14 g/m2-d, same as the previous work.<br />
The SNL team would need to acknowledge the previous work and give some reasons why the new effort<br />
would come to different conclusions.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The project is relevant to program goals.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The model can be relevant by advancing other modeling efforts.<br />
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The results of the model should be evidence of the futility of putting geographical constraints on algal<br />
biofuel technology development.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 3<br />
This tool is based on some critical factors, and could be used to generate the critical decision on algae-tobiodiesel<br />
in northern climates. As such defining success for this project is not adequately done. Future<br />
model tuning is posed already without measuring the value of the model in its first generation. How to<br />
gain acceptance is also not part of the success factors, but clearly should be.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Sites for co-location may need additional inspection relative to market and climate factors. An expert<br />
review of input data for the model relative to the productivity values used in the model would contribute<br />
to the value of the work.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The PIs, to their credit, recognized that a challenge in their project is applying theoretical data to real<br />
future production.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See comments under Relevance.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Although one of the critical success factors was whether the model would aid Canadian partners in site<br />
selection, there seemed to be no plan to address this obvious obstacle.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The critical success factor is the use of the model to make good policy decisions.<br />
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Presenter Response<br />
5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
The potential is there if brought to fruition.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
Checking the model would lead to more tech transfer (i.e check the algal physiology literature, check<br />
physical sites for co-location).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Transfer of know-how gained in this effort should be straightforward, and the PIs are commented for<br />
planning to publish their results in the peer-reviewed literature.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See comments under Relevance.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
The main technology transfer effort seems to be toward adapting the model to other countries/regions.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Publicatoins and presentations ensure good tech transfer.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project<br />
approach, scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
We may already know that algae is not viable as a feedstock for diesel in these northern climates. This<br />
tool should be used as is to bring this question to an answer. If we have to have municipal treatment<br />
plants available to provide nutrients, this certainly provides a boundary condition for biodiesel production<br />
possibility. If the question was answered, no more work on the model is warranted, and alternative<br />
solutions may be studied by scientists in both countries without polishing this work further.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
This project may have taken too theoretical an approach.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
This project entails a useful background analysis that, once performed, should be available to the field for<br />
a long time to come.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4<br />
See comments under Relevance.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
This seemed to be a reasonable modelling effort. Its impact (beyond model development) would be more<br />
significant if there was more interaction with potential industrial partners.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
Results of previous modeling clearly show that Northern lattitudes are very unlikely to be good locations<br />
for algal biofuel production. The goal should be re-directed to produce a good model that is not specific to<br />
a geography.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
Project: 9.6.6.1 NREL<br />
Title: US-Canada Algal Biofuels Partnership<br />
Presenter: Philip Pienkos<br />
Presentation Date: Friday, April 08, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 3.40 1.36 5<br />
Progress 3.80 1.17 5<br />
Relevance 3.40 1.02 5<br />
Critical Success Factors 3.40 1.50 5<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 2<br />
The approach is open to question in that is not clear why the US labs, especially NREL, are doing what<br />
they are. Why should NREL generate a culture collection of 100 strains from Canadian waters? What are<br />
the Canadians doing? What is the pertinence or significance of the experimental approach outlined in the<br />
presentation?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
This project is a microalgal strain discovery and culture collection delivery grant for strains that grow<br />
well at northern (cold) latitudes. The biofuels' industry could be seasonable in Canada, to benefit from<br />
long photoperiod and suitable temperature in late spring-early fall; however, the presentation did not<br />
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strongly demonstrate the advantages of the new strains isolated to the latitude. Six different batches of<br />
128 water samples were assayed with robust growth in flue gas enriched, well-buffered media. Over 40<br />
unique strains have been identified to date, mostly green algae. The project developed a process to deliver<br />
simulated flue gas. They hope to bring Univ. of Minnesota personnel in during last part of project to assist<br />
with studies of wastewater nutrient supply and mixotrophic algal growth.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Project Goals: •NREL: Bioprospecting for microalgal strains with suitable characteristics for cultivation<br />
in northern latitudes •SNL: Site analysis and production modeling for cultivation of microalgal strains in<br />
selected regions of Canada and northern US •PNNL: Evaluation of macroalgae species common to the US<br />
and Canada for biofuel production<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The stated objective is strain collection and screening for lipid producing strains and characterization of<br />
lipids (focusing on strains collected in Canada). However, in light of the repeated failure of previous algal<br />
screening efforts in yielding strains that successfully compete in full-scale outdoor raceways, there was no<br />
justification regarding why this particular effort would be more successful.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 2<br />
Macroalgae for biofuel feedstock has a low probablity of success in any geography. Constraints to<br />
northern lattitiudes lack scientific basis.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
1.A. The overarching goal for the microalgal aspect of the collaboration to deploy algal cultivation and<br />
processing for production of biofuels. This is a long term goal and this small project is designed to<br />
provide the basis for more extensive and expensive work in the future. It can reasonably be asked why the<br />
US would be interested in algal cultivation in northern latitudes with better locations available in the<br />
south, but Canada does not have that geographical advantage. However, successful deployment of algal<br />
cultivation in Canada will mean that much more US geography can come into play, allowing for more<br />
distributed production and greater volumes of fuels produced. The time constraints for this presentation<br />
did not allow me to provide a better description of the Canadian partner’s role. They have identified the<br />
potential sites for deployment and collected water samples from those areas. They will share in the<br />
responsibility for evaluation of the strains and further development of those strains with best production<br />
characteristics. They are also responsible for development of the cultivation process that can best be<br />
deployed in northern locations. 1.B. The point about the seasonality of cultivation and thus the biological<br />
advantages of local isolates is well taken, though strains that are better adapted to lower average<br />
temperatures could be expected to maintain productivity throughout a longer growing period than isolates<br />
from warmer climates. 1C. The reviewer presents the dilemma for all algal bioprospecting efforts. It is<br />
impossible to evaluate a priori the impact of competing strains in large scale cultivation systems that have<br />
not yet been built, but it isn’t practical to build those systems without some expectation of the strains to<br />
be deployed. The decision to isolate strains from likely sites of cultivation is expected to mitigate the<br />
competition problem somewhat. Further mitigation of this problem can be achieved through the use of<br />
PBRs either for cultivation or for production of robust and high cell density inocula. The successful<br />
cultivation of a handful of production strains by Seambiotics is a case study in which seasonal variations<br />
in culture conditions can be managed by proper strain selection and rapid turnover of the ponds can be<br />
carried out through the availability of a controlled inoculum system indicates that this problem can be<br />
solved. While the open pond cultures at Seambiotics may not be axenic or even unialgal, they consist<br />
primarily of the production strains and they are grown in a consistent, reproducible manner. 1.D.<br />
Successful deployment is an economic issue not a scientific one. While the success with any<br />
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photosynthetic algal process for biofuel production may face a number of significant hurdles, the<br />
scientific basis for success and, in fact, the technical feasibility has already been demonstrated. As noted<br />
in my presentation, the added constraints for successful deployment in northern latitudes, cannot be<br />
ignored. However, this question is not simply one of probability of success, but must also take strategic<br />
value into account.<br />
2. Technical Progress and Accomplishments<br />
Please evaluate the degree to which the project has<br />
made progress in its objectives and stated project management plan<br />
has met its objectives in achieving milestones and overcoming technical barriers<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Progress has slipped behind the original workplan.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The project is 70% complete and ends in June, 2012. The process of strain discovery and transfer to a<br />
Canadian culture collection is nearly complete. Some aspects of nutrient supply are under investigation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Strategy for water sampling developed with NRC. 128 water samples received from Canada in six<br />
separate batches. Strain isolation proceeding well. <strong>Reviewer</strong> is making a recommendation for the<br />
deposition of useful strains in recognized algal libraries (e.g. UTEX).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Given the funding level and project period, progress to date (40 strains added to the collection) is very<br />
limited.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 2<br />
More progress could have been made through literature surveys and consultation with experts.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
2.A. Deposition of strains into a recognized algal culture collections is a good idea. I will share that with<br />
the NRC. 2.B. The funding level is insufficient to support a single technician; the strain isolation progress<br />
is proceeding at a pace commensurate with resources. Much of the early work was focused on the siting<br />
analysis for water sampling and the sampling procedures, the analysis of flue gas, and the development of<br />
a system to supply simulated flue gas in a safe manner. This latter process may seem straightforward, but<br />
was actually more complicated than expected. 2.C. It would be more helpful if you could provide specific<br />
examples of publically available information that could accelerate our progress.<br />
3. Project Relevance<br />
The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />
Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />
The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 2<br />
I have difficulty following the relevance. Can we not use US samples from northern waters? Will algae<br />
culture in northern waters make any economic sense? How does flue gas factor in the relevance?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 4<br />
The relevance of the strain discovery is unclear; more nutrient demand and lipid production<br />
characterization will be needed, based upon information presented. What is the sustainability (buffering<br />
of flue gas supply of CO2 etc.)?<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The work addresses goals in the area of Feedstock Supply Ft-B. Sustainable Production: By utilizing<br />
information generated by resource assessment (SNL) culture conditions can be established to match<br />
optimal deployment area. Ft-C. Feedstock Genetics and Development: Genetic diversity in algal culture<br />
collection will provide strains with potential for commercialization of algal biofuel production in vast<br />
area of North America beyond the southeastern US and gulf states.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Although project goals are relevant to biomass program goals, there was no plausible explanation why<br />
this project would be successful in producing algal strains that would thrive in full scale production<br />
systems.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The work is very unlikely to lead to advancement in biofuel technology.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
3.A. We believe that Canadian water samples have the potential to provide strains better suited for local<br />
deployment. Although, this may only provide a slight improvement in our overall probability of success,<br />
the water sampling was a task for the NRC. Hence there was no advantage to choosing US water samples.<br />
At the moment, even optimistic estimates for algal biofuel production costs without benefit of a high<br />
value co-product indicate that this approach cannot compete with petroleum. As I noted in my<br />
presentation, productivity in northern latitudes will make it even harder to compete on a straight biofuel<br />
production basis. The challenge for all will be to identify value-added co-products that are scalable with<br />
biofuels. Meeting that challenge is even greater for areas that are less than ideal for maximum<br />
productivity. There is a great deal of information in the literature regarding the toxicity of high<br />
concentrations of CO2 as well as the contaminating gases found in flue gas. Most of this work deals with<br />
enrichment cultures or small bench scale cultures grown from dilute inocula. Careful analysis of the body<br />
of work suggests that the problem was not the toxicity of the gas components, but rather, the acidic nature<br />
of CO2, NOx and SOx, but that is an unproven hypothesis. Therefore, to be certain that the strains<br />
isolated would be able to thrive with flue gas as a CO2 source, we planned our enrichments to isolate only<br />
strains that were robust enough to survive the challenge of simulated flue gas. As I noted, the enrichment<br />
cultures in well buffered media provided robust growth. This prompted us to modify our media<br />
formulation and the results support the hypothesis that the problem with flue gas is more a pH issue than a<br />
toxicity issue. 3.B. I agree that strain characterization is essential, and that has begun at NRC with the<br />
transfer of our current culture collection. The buffering was necessary for small scale enrichments and<br />
culture growth because pH control was not practical for the number of cultures being grown. But<br />
extensive buffering is not necessary for larger scale cultures. The pH shifts caused by CO2 dissolution<br />
can be used to control CO2 feeding using pH probes to control gas addition valves. This process is used<br />
to great success by our NRC colleagues. 3.C. See response 1.C. 3.D. The DOE algal biofuels roadmap<br />
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calls out the need for additional diversity in algal strains. The strains to be isolated in this project will add<br />
incrementally to that diversity. I am forced to agree that the scope of this project is currently too small to<br />
lead to any major advance, but the development of the strains that arise from this work whether by us or<br />
by other groups could lead to the identification of a robust production strain or to novel genes or<br />
pathways that could be exploited for production of biofuels or other industrial targets.<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 1<br />
There is no significant discussion of CSFs, only a general statement about commercialization of algal<br />
biofuels.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The proposed collaboration with wastewater experts at Univ. MN seems likely to improve final product.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 5<br />
Critical success factors for commercialization of algal biofuels span the value chain and include<br />
biological productivity, cultivation, harvest, extraction and conversion to fuel. This project is currently<br />
focused on biological productivity, namely growth and lipid content.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Critical success factors were identified but there seemed to be no plan how the most predictable obstacle<br />
(failure of strains to thrive in full-scale systems) would be overcome.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Climate is a critical success factor that cannot be addressed by this project.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
4.A. Time constraints did not allow me to develop critical success factors further. 4.B. The entire<br />
partnership is in agreement that UM should be included in the collaboration. We are looking for a funding<br />
mechanism to add them to the team. 4C. This obstacle was addressed in Response 1.C. but I believe that<br />
its predictability is overstated, and the growing number of organizations scaling up cultivation of specific<br />
strains supports that belief.<br />
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5. Technology Transfer and Collaborations<br />
Please comment on the degree to which the project adequately interfaces and coordinates with other<br />
institutions and projects to provide additional benefits to the Biomass Program, such as publications,<br />
awards, or others.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
The program has not been defined adequately in ultimate objectives to suggest whether there will be tech<br />
transfer beneficial to the OBP efforts.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
The culture collection transfer to Canada is a solid achievement but its relevance to biofuels' development<br />
may require additional demonstration.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
This is primarily with Canada. PIs are urged to deposit strains in a recognized algal library in the US (e.g.<br />
UTEX) and overseas.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
The potential for significant technology transfer is very limited.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
It does not appear that the investigators did a thorough lieterature review.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
5.A. The mechanism for funding this project in very small increments and the short time allotted to the<br />
presentation led to a decision to focus on short term goals. Potential tech transfer opportunities are most<br />
like to arise from the identification of superior strains and their subsequent evaluation in productionrelevant<br />
conditions. 5.B. Demonstration of the value of the new isolates is certainly necessary for any<br />
measure of relevance. Whether that takes place within the partnership or is carried out by other<br />
investigators will depend on many factors such as future funding for follow on work or partnership<br />
discussions with other stakeholders. 5.C. See response 2.A. 5.D. See response 5.A. and 5.B.<br />
6. Overall Impressions<br />
Please provide an overall evaluation of the project, including strengths, weaknesses, the project<br />
approach, scope, and any other overall comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1<br />
The investigators failed to explain the reasons for the work, nor describe the ultimate value to be gained.<br />
If there was a political desire to work with Canada, I would think that some better projects could have<br />
been developed, or the explanation performed better.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2<br />
Characterization of the biofuels' potential of the isolated strains would make the project's outcome clearer,<br />
especially in the context of a comparison of existing biofuels' feedstock strains.<br />
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<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3<br />
Project overlaps other supported Algal Biomass projects where the emphasis is on "prospecting". The<br />
Aquatic Species Program already undertook this propecting approach some 20+ years ago.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5<br />
This appeared to be a very traditional approach to strain collection and screening (although focusing on<br />
strains collected in Canada). Given past failures by other such projects, this approach, there seems little<br />
reason to support this project.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7<br />
There are sound scientific reasons for this project to have a very low probablity of advancing biofuel<br />
technology. There is no identified sound scientific reason to pursue macroalgae biofuel production in<br />
northern climates.<br />
Presenter Response<br />
6.A. The time constraints and strict format for each presentation made it difficult to discuss the reasons<br />
for the work in any detail. The value of indigenous production strains for local deployment should have<br />
been made more explicit. 6.B. Characterization of the isolates was noted in the future work section. I<br />
agree that it would be useful to compare productivity with some benchmark strains, and we will include<br />
that in our future plan. 6.C. The trains isolated for the ASP were isolated from water samples primarily<br />
from the southwest and southeast US with some sampling done in Hawaii and the northwest. The most<br />
interesting of those strains were transferred to the University of Hawaii for curation and many if not most<br />
of those have been lost. If the hypothesis that indigenous strains can be more competitive in local<br />
cultivation systems is true, then it certainly follows that local sampling and strain isolation is a valid start<br />
to a new biofuels project. Beyond that, we are beginning to see local communities push back against scale<br />
up of non-indigenous strains (e.g. in Texas and Hawaii). The ASP demonstrated that prospecting could be<br />
successful, but did not end the need for prospecting. 6.D. Presumably the comment refers to failure to<br />
successfully deploy the strains isolated in past efforts. Again this goes back to the notion that only “weed”<br />
algae can be successfully cultivated outdoors. If that were true then only heterotrophic algae can be<br />
expected to succeed, because regular production of high lipid biomass cannot be accomplished without<br />
long term cultivation of a production strain, whether that strain is a natural isolate or an engineered strain.<br />
6.E. Nearly all worthwhile endeavors begin with a low probability of success. This project is a tiny<br />
element in a very large distributed endeavor. I would expect the scale of advance to match the resources<br />
available.<br />
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